crumpet
27-05-2005, 20:58
:wall: :wall:
ok, this is one of the many scripts i have for eastenders ok?
because this is like episode 1 then when someone responds, episode two will be typed on to the boards and will be given a name saying crumpets magic...... here is episode 1, well, just pretend all the characters are already known, ok?
it was a beautiful morning, demi woke up and started to cry, Leo had run away from his violent father and it was unlikely that she would ever see him again!
demi: i wish Leo was here it aint fair!
leo comes into the room
Leo:hi demi
Demi: Leo! i missed you loads! how did you get in?
Leo: i got through the window, any chance of anything like a blanket is there? i'm really cold.
demi: come 'ere
demi gives Leo a big hug
Leo: thanks demi listen you know you couldn't come with me when i did a runner, ? i found a friend, in a really nice place and we can take aleesha!
Demi: really? just you me and aleesha?
Leo: yeah!
Demi: well, i don't know!
Leo: i can't leave without you!
Demi:ok, give me 5 minutes to get dressed
Leo: ok, but my dad knows about me and said he'd kill me if he ever saw me or you again!
Demi: ok wait in here and don't you dare look at me while i get changed!
Leo: ok
5 minutes later demi and leo and alessha manage to get on the bus and are on their way to springfield but what they don't know is that leo's dad is staying there were leo and demi and aleesha have to get off the bus!
Leo: ok lets get off the bus then
Demi: i'm glad you came back for me,
Leo: and my Dad is here for holiday but only on that really horrid flat place so don't worry,
Demi: we can go to the park and everything when we find that place!
Leo's dad appears ( his name's ray)
Ray: Leo?
Leo: dad?
ray: i said i'd kill you next time i saw you but i'll be kind and destroy the girl instead
Demi's standing in total shock when ray shoots her with a gas gun and knocks her out. ray picks demi up and runs away
Leo:DEMI? DEMI? were are you demi??
Leo's mobile starts ringing. it's demi. she had sent Leo a text saying that she was going to be killed in 1 hour if Leo didn't give up aleesha so he could iliminate her
leo arrives in 15 minutes to were demi is being held and finds her very close to death. ray got aressted because leo had brought the police with him. aleesha got sentn home and leo and demi were able to go and make their future back in walford and were accepted as a couple by everyone.
Leo: i love you demi, i really do!
demi: me too!!!
but 1 day, a new girl came to walford and liked the look of Leo and flirted with him all day, everyday the new girl was called aby white
Aby: hey Leo, fancy comin' to mine?
Leo: erm, do i know you ??
aby: no but i'm single!
Leo: well i'm not so if you're done with wasting my time, i have a child to go and take care of!
aby: no you don't! you want me! (she has brown super short hair extremely overwieght and really ugly) i'm pretty and fashionable and you are making that up! you aren't a dad!
Demi: hi leo, what on earth are you doinhg, flirting with HER?
leo: i aint, she's trying to say i am lying taht i am a dad though!
demi goes up to aby and slaps her
leo and demi go back home and aby follows them when they go back out, aby takes aleesha away and she stabs demi in the back and she has to go to hospital
OK, PRETTY RUBBISH EH? :lol: :rotfl:
PLEASE BE FAIR ON ME , THERE IS A MUCH BETTER script following on from this, if someone will just reply to this! :)
ok, this is one of the many scripts i have for eastenders ok?
because this is like episode 1 then when someone responds, episode two will be typed on to the boards and will be given a name saying crumpets magic...... here is episode 1, well, just pretend all the characters are already known, ok?
it was a beautiful morning, demi woke up and started to cry, Leo had run away from his violent father and it was unlikely that she would ever see him again!
demi: i wish Leo was here it aint fair!
leo comes into the room
Leo:hi demi
Demi: Leo! i missed you loads! how did you get in?
Leo: i got through the window, any chance of anything like a blanket is there? i'm really cold.
demi: come 'ere
demi gives Leo a big hug
Leo: thanks demi listen you know you couldn't come with me when i did a runner, ? i found a friend, in a really nice place and we can take aleesha!
Demi: really? just you me and aleesha?
Leo: yeah!
Demi: well, i don't know!
Leo: i can't leave without you!
Demi:ok, give me 5 minutes to get dressed
Leo: ok, but my dad knows about me and said he'd kill me if he ever saw me or you again!
Demi: ok wait in here and don't you dare look at me while i get changed!
Leo: ok
5 minutes later demi and leo and alessha manage to get on the bus and are on their way to springfield but what they don't know is that leo's dad is staying there were leo and demi and aleesha have to get off the bus!
Leo: ok lets get off the bus then
Demi: i'm glad you came back for me,
Leo: and my Dad is here for holiday but only on that really horrid flat place so don't worry,
Demi: we can go to the park and everything when we find that place!
Leo's dad appears ( his name's ray)
Ray: Leo?
Leo: dad?
ray: i said i'd kill you next time i saw you but i'll be kind and destroy the girl instead
Demi's standing in total shock when ray shoots her with a gas gun and knocks her out. ray picks demi up and runs away
Leo:DEMI? DEMI? were are you demi??
Leo's mobile starts ringing. it's demi. she had sent Leo a text saying that she was going to be killed in 1 hour if Leo didn't give up aleesha so he could iliminate her
leo arrives in 15 minutes to were demi is being held and finds her very close to death. ray got aressted because leo had brought the police with him. aleesha got sentn home and leo and demi were able to go and make their future back in walford and were accepted as a couple by everyone.
Leo: i love you demi, i really do!
demi: me too!!!
but 1 day, a new girl came to walford and liked the look of Leo and flirted with him all day, everyday the new girl was called aby white
Aby: hey Leo, fancy comin' to mine?
Leo: erm, do i know you ??
aby: no but i'm single!
Leo: well i'm not so if you're done with wasting my time, i have a child to go and take care of!
aby: no you don't! you want me! (she has brown super short hair extremely overwieght and really ugly) i'm pretty and fashionable and you are making that up! you aren't a dad!
Demi: hi leo, what on earth are you doinhg, flirting with HER?
leo: i aint, she's trying to say i am lying taht i am a dad though!
demi goes up to aby and slaps her
leo and demi go back home and aby follows them when they go back out, aby takes aleesha away and she stabs demi in the back and she has to go to hospital
OK, PRETTY RUBBISH EH? :lol: :rotfl:
PLEASE BE FAIR ON ME , THERE IS A MUCH BETTER script following on from this, if someone will just reply to this! :)