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DaVeyWaVey
25-11-2007, 19:18
Posted on behalf of Bry:
INT. ANDREWS HOUSE - DAY
Val and Gavin are sat in the living room watching the Eastenders omnibus. Claire walks into the room, back from her shift at the Red Rum.
Claire: Back...
Val: Been busy?
Claire: Not really, spent most of the time cheering up Patrick.
Val: Why what's up?
Claire: Oh him and Amy have had a big falling out, she's off to Portugal...
Val: Bloody hell, I best give her a call in a bit...
Claire: I think she needs some space mom, just leave her be.
Claire sits down. Taking off her coat.
Gavin: So then, how's things with you the hunky Mr Newman?
Claire: Yeah it's going good...
Val: You want to stay well clear from him...
Claire: Oh, and why's that mom?
Val: Becuase his step-mom went right off the handle at me earlier!
Gavin: Why? What did you do to her?
Val: All I did was show some sympathy! I tell you there's something not quite right about that family...
Claire: The same could be said for us. One daughter a single mom, the other shacked up with a man 10 years older than her, and you turning this in a half way house for the gay community!
Val: Hey hang about!
Claire: No, my point is we are more than that mom! And so are they! Don't judge people on face value, you don't know anything about them!
Val: Do you!?
Claire: Not yet, but unlike you I'm not going to judge them until I do!
Claire storms out of the room. Val looks to Gavin for acceptance at what she said, but he turns away, casting her a disaproving look.
DaVeyWaVey
25-11-2007, 19:25
Posted on behalf of Bry:
INT. BAYMOORE HOLIDAY PARK - DAY
Nick walks into the office, stressed from the events at the Mansfields.
Nick: Jesus!
Rachel: What's up?
Nick: Oh it's Vicky, she's talking about scrapping the wedding!
Rachel: (Concerned) Oh god, why?
Nick: Because Daniel isn't coming...
Rachel: Daniel's her son right?
Nick: I mean is this fate trying to tell me something!? Maybe we're just not meant to get married!
Rachel: I' sure it's nothing personal Nick, it's going to be a shock to her if her son isn't going to be there.
Nick: It just seems like everything is going against us at the moment...
Rachel: You just need to relax, she's not gonna pass on a chance to marry you. You're an amazing guy. Give her time to think over things and I bet you any money the wedding will still go ahead.
She touches his arm and looks into his eyes. He pulls away.
Nick: You're right, everything will be ok. Look I just came for these (grabs files) I'll be off...
Rachel: Nick...
Nick: I'll see you tomorrow...
DaVeyWaVey
25-11-2007, 19:52
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Luke walks into the Red Rum and kisses Claire.
Luke: Are you alright?
Claire: Not really..
Luke: Why? What's wrong?
Claire: It's my mom, she's really annoyed me... she's judging you and your family, she's saying your not right and I should keep well clear!
Luke: Oh just ignore her! She's a lot like my mom, can't help spreading misery!
Claire: (jokes) She'll have to meet her sometime, swap hints!
Luke: Trust me, the further away my mom is, the better! You do look really stressed Claire, how about I take you out later to calm you down?
Claire: That would be lovely. :)
DaVeyWaVey
25-11-2007, 19:56
INT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Nick walks in through the door. Vicky rushes over to him.
Vicky: I was so worried when you left!
Nick: Yeah well, how did you expect me to react!?
Vicky: I’ve been chatting to mom and she’s made me realise that it’s not fair to take it out on you. Daniel will forgive me in his own time, but I’ll be damned if I let it ruin our special day! We’ve put it off once already, and I’m gonna make sure this time we do it whether it kills me or not! I love you babe, and I just want to marry you!
Nick: Come here.
Nick hugs Vicky.
Nick: Everything is going to be ok..
I don't get why Nick is so annoyed.. it is Vicky's son after all, course she wants him there
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Nick is in the pub with the Bachelors Boys, on his stag night.
Chris: You best be prepared my son!
Nick: (Worried) For what?
Romeo: A night of drunken antics!
Tom: We're taking to each and every club this side of Devon!
Nick: Oh I don't know, I think I'll just have a few here and then head back home...
Tom: No way man! It's your last night of freedom!
Nick: Yes, and it'd rather remember it than be chained to a lamp post!
Romeo: God, she's tamed you good and proper...
Nick: What do you mean by that!?
Romeo: Well you're pacing your drunks and aiming to be in bed before midnight. YOU my friend are under, the, thumb.
Amy walks by collecting empty glasses.
Amy: Don't let them get at you, I think it's good for a man to act responsibly...
Nick: Why aren't you at the hen night?
Amy: Oh she called saying she didn't feel too well, so she's cancelled it...
Nick: (Worried) Is she okay!?
Amy: I gave her a call, it was just a migrane...
Nick: I've gotta go back and see if she's ok...
Chris: You can't! It's your stag night!
Nick gets up and puts on his jacket.
Nick: Sorry lads, but Vicky comes first.
Nick hurries off, the lads look at one another and speak at the same time.
All: Under, the, thumb.
INT. SINGH'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Andonis is lying on the sofa, his phone in his hand. On the screen is Hannah's number, he contemplates ringing it. Marcus walks in and notices this.
Marcus: You might aswell just call her 'Don...
Andonis: There's no point, she's grounded anyways...
Marcus: You've got it bad haven't you?
Andonis: No, don't be so stupid...
Marcus: I know you too well now, you like her don't you?
Andonis: Maybe...I dunno...
Marcus: Well does she know?
Andonis: If I ever get the chance to tell her...
Marcus: Well find the chance then mate. I mean what have you got to loose?
Marcus sits down on one of the armchairs, and looses himself in the TV show. Andonis is left to chew on Marcus' advice.
DaVeyWaVey
26-11-2007, 22:25
INT. JENKINS MANOR - NIGHT
The night before the wedding. Nick comes in with a bottle of wine.
Vicky: Your back early!
Nick: I wasn’t in the mood for a night of wild partying, besides Amy was saying you didn’t feel well.
Vicky: I couldn't face a big party, not after the last one!
Nick: A right pair aren't we!?
Nick holds Vicky's hand.
Vicky: Your no fun!
Nick: Oh well, call me a boring old fart! I’m coming up to 33, I need to start settling down. Tomorrow is the beginning of a new chapter for me, a beautiful wife, a beautiful child, what more would I ask for!?
Vicky: Everything’s going to be alright isn’t it? With Katy!?
Nick: Yeah, you’ve come on leaps and bounds already babe, and come tomorrow we’ll be married!
He passionately kisses Vicky. Him, Vicky and Katy - a nice little family.
DaVeyWaVey
26-11-2007, 22:29
INT. NEWMAN'S HOUSE - NIGHT
A letter is put through the Newman's letter box. Jacqui comes out from the kitchen, and grabs the letter to open it. She opens it and reads it in horror.
Jacqui: (Shouts nervously) Oh my god! Paul! Paul!
Paul rushes out of the living room, with Hannah, Luke and Scott following.
Paul: What is it?
Jacqui: They know we are here! How the hell did they find us Paul!? How did they find us!?
The Newmans all look at each other, with panicked looks of horror.
:eek::eek: who found them, what do they know??? I now need to know.. come on guys.. give me the juice!!
DaVeyWaVey
27-11-2007, 22:43
INT. JENKINS MANOR - MORNING
Vicky is dressed in her wedding dress. Rebecca looks proud of her.
Rebecca: I never thought I'd see the day!
Vicky: No, neither did I!
Rebecca: I’m so glad the pair of you stuck together, through Kyle and everything..
Vicky: Mom! From now on Kyle is in the past, my future is Katy and Nick.
Rebecca: Of course..I'm so proud to call you my daughter!
Richard walks in.
Richard: Having a heart to heart?
Rebecca: Kind of.
Richard: Right then, are you ready?
Vicky: As ready as I'm ever gonna be! :)
They head out of the house and to the wedding.
DaVeyWaVey
27-11-2007, 22:48
INT. NEWMAN'S HOUSE - MORNING
Jacqui walks into the living room to see Paul sitting in darkness.
Jacqui: You couldn’t sleep either?
Paul: I thought this witness protection was meant to prevent this from happening!
Jacqui: These things aren’t always foolproof, given the right contacts..
Paul: I thought we’d got away from all that Jacq…but it’s just not going to happen is it!? We’re forever going to be haunted by it!
Jacqui: We all just need to forget about that letter!
Paul: And what about the next one? And the one after that!? Because they’ll come, threatening me, you, the kids!
Jacqui: It’s probably someone’s idea of a joke, don’t think anymore of it..
Paul is left on edge.
DaVeyWaVey
27-11-2007, 22:51
Posted on behalf of Bry:
INT. JENKINS MANOR – DAY
Nick, Tanya and Michelle are in Nick’s room, he is adding the finishing touches to his wedding suit, the pair of them make a fuss of him.
Michelle: Here let me straighten your tie…
Tanya: Not let me…
Nick: I’m fine, honestly, just leave me alone…
Michelle: I remember my wedding day, I was a bag of nerves…
Tanya: Yeah, same here…
Nick: Which one was that Tan? The one that went ahead of the one where you stood up Gregg?
Tanya: There’s no need for that Nick…
Nick: Sorry, it’s just…
Michelle: Look it’s ok to be nervous y’know, marriage is a big step…
Nick: But it feels like we’re already married, we’ve been through so much together, we’re as good as husband and wife…
Tanya: Then get that ring on your finger and finalise it…
Nick: But…
Michelle: There’s no point talking you way out of it now. It’s just a couple of vows and then it’s over with. So come on, shake off them nerves, you’ve got a girl to marry!
DaVeyWaVey
27-11-2007, 22:54
Posted on behalf of Bry:
INT. NEWMAN’S HOUSE – DAY
Paul and Jacqui are sat watching TV, but both obviously pre-occupied with worry, following the letter in the post.
All of a sudden there is a violently loud knock at the door. They both jump up, and look at one another – nervous.
Paul: I’ll get it…
Jacqui: Paul…
Paul leaves the room and walks towards the door, Jacqui follows him. Paul opens the door and sees that it is Doug. His first reaction is to slam the door shut, but Doug wedges his foot in the doorway.
Doug: It’s about time we had a talk, don’t you think!?
Doug pushes the door open and barges past Paul, heading into the living room. Jacqui and Paul look petrified.
INT. CHURCH - DAY
The church is filled with friends and family. Nick is stood at the front of the church with best man Tom.
Tom: You ready mate?
Nick: As ready as I'll ever be...
All of a sudden the wedding music plays, as Vicky is lead to the front by Richard. The congregation look at her in amazement, a sight of stunning beauty. Rebecca, who is holding baby Katy, looks proud as punch.
Vicky reaches Nick, the pair smile at one another and hold hands. We see a montage of the wedding vows, as the pair look longily into one another's eyes.
Vicar: I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride.
Nick leans in and gives Vicky one long and romantic kiss, as the congregation aplaud.
Nick: I love you babe...
ah yeah!!! they got married without a hitch.. nice one!!
Uh oh!! what is this CHAT doug wants???
Fabby work guys.. still loving this
INT. NEWMAN'S HOUSE - DAY
Doug marches into the living room, followed closely by a nervous Paul and Jacqui.
Paul: Look Doug, I don't know what you think you're playing at but you can get the hell out!
Doug: Shut up! And sit down!
Jacqui: Who do you think you are walking in here like this!? Get out!
Doug: You're in no bloody position to tell me what to do!
Paul: Look Doug what's happened, 's happened alright? Just leave us be!
Doug: It's going to take more than a new surname and hometown to hide your dirty little secret!
Jacqui: Don't you think we've paid the price Doug!?
Doug: No, not by a long shot! If the courts wont hand out justice then I'll have to do it my way...
Paul: What are you going to do?
Doug: I don't know yet, but it aint gonna be pretty...like it or not, I'm back in your lives, and I'm not gonna let this lye...
Jacqui and Paul look at one another, petrified.
DaVeyWaVey
28-11-2007, 21:41
EXT. JENKINS MANOR - DAY
Nick and Vicky are ready to leave for their honeymoon.
Nick: (to Rebecca) Are you sure you will be ok with Katy?
Rebecca: Of course, it’s a pleasure looking after her, besides ive got Richard at hand if I need help.
Vicky: I feel guilty going away, just am I’m trying to bond with her..
Richard: Don’t be silly! Everyone is entitled to a honeymoon, you enjoy yourself and we’ll see to everything when you get back.
Vicky: Ok..well as long as your sure..
Vicky and Nick both kiss Katy goodbye. Nick and Vicky head off to their honeymoon, clearly in love.
Rebecca: (to Katy) You're going to have fun with your nanny and grandad aren't you!?
Richard: You make it sound like we're married!
Rebecca: (jokes) Oh yeah I did, didn't I!? Silly nana!
Rebecca walks off with Katy in her arms. Richard is left contemplating..
DaVeyWaVey
28-11-2007, 22:00
INT. SPEED DATING VENUE - EVENING
Claire and Patrick are getting ready for the speed dating.
Claire: Atleast this will take your mind off Amy..
Patrick: Oh that is really highering the standard! :rolleyes:
Claire: If we can give a bit back to the community, we give them ale every day of the week, doesn’t mean we have to start playing cupid. Imagine if we get one couple together that would be amazing wouldn’t it!?
Patrick rolls his eyes.
Patrick: Seeing other people happy with each other, just reminds me what I'm missing...Amy..so how the hell is this meant to make me feel better!?
Val suddenly walks in.
Claire: Wow, your look rather glam tonight mom! Don't be nervous, just show them what your made of! :D
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Val is at the speed dating. We see a montage of three disastrous yet comical dates, to Let's Make Love by CSS.
First of all a man with thick National Health glasses and an anorac.
Val: So what you into then?
Date 1: Erm...I dont know really...
Secondly a cheesy bloke, dressed in a flowlery shirt, flares, and a medallion hanging around his neck, he gives Val a cheesy grin, she looks unimpressed.
Thirdly an old man, in his late seventies staggers into the seat and can't stop staring at her breasts, shocked she covers them away.
Val looks down at the table in despair, giving up hope of finding someone. Ron (John Bowe) sits down.
Ron: Oh god finally someone who I might actually like!
Val looks up and smiles at him, optimistically.
INT. WINEBAR - BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - DAY
Richard is in the winebar, discussing a buisness deal with a client.
Richard: So what do you say then?
Client: I must admit the plans sound promising Richard, but I don't think I can commit to the project....
Richard: Why ever not!? This will generate such a large income!
Client: I seriosuly doubt that...
Richard: Do you know something I don't?
Client: Well I've heard it on the grapevine that one of your least favourite people is running for the local elections soon...
Richard: Who?
Client: Jared Ashworth...
Richard looks as pale as a ghost at this anouncement.
Client: I can't see him taking too kindly to you opening a gold course just down the road from one of his hotels. Call me a coward but I don't like to cross a man with power...
Richard: No...I erm understand, thanks for your time...
Client: Any time Richard...
The client leaves. Richard is left annoyed and devastated by this news.
Posted On Behalf Of Dave:
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
Val and Ron are talking, clearly getting on.
Val: I've just come here to find a companion really, my husband of 20 years died a few months back..
Ron: I'm very sorry, it takes a lot to get used to being single again after so many years...my wife buggered off with my brother after 30 years of marriage..
Val: Any kids?
Ron: Just a daughter, but she’s living up north, no time for her old dad, and that brings me here..
Claire rings the bell.
Ron: Well let’s not waste time with this stupid card system! I like you, you get a cross.
Val: Yeah, so do you.
Ron gets out his business card and gives it to Val.
Ron: Give me a call some time and we’ll arrange a dinner date.
Ron kisses Val goodbye. Val is left feeling excited.
Posted On Behalf Of Dave:
INT. ASHWORTHS MANOR - DAY
Jared is being interviewed by the local paper. He hands them a cheque.
Jared: This is for your trouble, I take it your paper will be giving a positive spin on my candidacy!?
Jared and the editor shake hands before he leaves. Will enters.
Will: What's going on here?
Jared: Your old man is going for election!
Will: Come again? Since when?
Jared: I’ve been thinking about it for a while, and thought why not!
Will: But why!? You’re a businessman not a politician!
Jared: There’s nothing wrong with broadening my horizons, plus being a politician has it’s advantages..
Will: Like what!?
Jared: Oh I don’t know, greasing the right palms I can make life difficult for certain people..
Will: Like Richard Taylor?
Jared: The thought never crossed my mind!
Will: For heavens sake, you’ve always gone on about him playing dirty tricks, yet here you are doing the same!
Jared: It’s about time I fought fire with fire, and if I have my way Richard Taylor will get badly burned!
ah I am so happy for Val.. Ron sounds nice... Jared going for elections, is he going to run Richard??
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - NIGHT
The speed daters are leaving one by one. Claire and Amy are sat at the bar looking over at Val and Ron, as he leaves.
Amy: That looked promising...
Claire: Oh I hope she got on well...
Val walks over with a big grin on her face.
Amy: Well!?
Val: Did you see him!? Oh my god he's gorgeous!
Claire: What's his name?
Val: Ron...
Amy: Tell us the details!
Val: Well he's an acounant, and he's been single for a while...and he seems really nice...
Amy: You gonna go for it?
Val: Too damn right I am! I tell you girls, I've got a good feeling about this...
Claire: Did you get his number?
Val: Yeah...
Amy: Give him a call then!
Val: I don't want him to think I'm desperate!
Claire: No, he'll think you're keen.
Val: Well there's no harm in trying I suppose!
Val gets out his number and dials it. She walks off on the phone to him. Amy and Claire look at one another, overjoyed.
INT. WINEBAR - BAYMOORE LESUIRE CENTRE - NIGHT
Michelle is closing the wine bar for the evening, Will walks in.
Michelle: Oh sorry Will I was just about to shut...
Will: I wasn't here for wine...
Michelle: Oh?
Will: Just came to see how you are...
Michelle: Husband divorcing me, living with my dad, fast approaching 30...but other than that...
Will: I've been invited to a friends wedding up in Windsor this weekend, as of yet I've not found my plus one. Wondered if you wanted a week end get away?
Michelle: Me? Haven't you got any love intrests to take?
Will: I'd much rather enjoy your company than make small talk with aq girl I don't know...
Michelle: Well if you're sure. I'd love to, cabin fever is starting to hit in at the manor. But I haven't got anything to wear...
Will: Well how about we go shopping for something in a bit, I'll even treat you to a meal afterwards...
Michelle: Yeah, that would be nice...
DaVeyWaVey
30-11-2007, 22:29
INT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Paul is in the Red Rum having a drink. He walks over to Doug, looking worried.
Paul: What are you doing in here!?
Doug: Sipping a pint in my local..
Paul: Your local?
Doug: Yeah, I'm stopping at the B&B.
Paul: How long for?
Doug: Until further notice..
Paul: Look please Doug, I know why your round here..but look, what's done is done, and now me and my family are trying to move on, trying to forget about the past! Please, keep quiet, if not for me, but for the sake of my family! We're all trying to start a clean slate..
Doug: More for your own reputation and safety! If you want my silence you’re gonna have to buy it!
DaVeyWaVey
30-11-2007, 22:39
INT. TORBAY SIXTH FORM COLLEGE - DAY
Andonis is walking through the corridor, speaking to himself, trying to figure out the best way to tell Hannah that he likes her.
Andonis: Ok Hannah...this is important, I've been thinking about you a lot.. erm no...Hannah! I just wanna say your a wicked girl, your fun and your a looker, I like you!...Oh god no! I can't say that! Erm..Hannah! I find this very hard to tell you, but I like you..
As he turns the corner, he sees Hannah flirting with Kevin Mitchell. Andonis walks over to Hannah, just as Kevin leaves.
Andonis: (to Hannah) What did he want?
Hannah: He's asked me out on a date!
Andonis: And what did you say?
Hannah: I said yes! :D
His heart sinks.
Hannah: It's not like I've had any other offers! What's he like anyway?
Andonis: He's alright..
Hannah: Good! :D
Hannah heads off excited. Andonis is left heartbroken.
INT. NEWMAN'S HOUSE - DAY
Paul gets a wod of notes out of his wallet and counts them - £500.
He delibrates long and hard whether to go head with it.
He takes a deep sigh, realising that he has no choice, he puts the money in the envelope, and then picks up his phone and calls Doug.
Paul: Yeah I've got the money, where do you want to meet?
INT. BAYMOORE NATURE PARK - DAY
Hannah walks in to the park to meet Kevin. He is sat with his friends on a picnic table, necking cheap cider from a plastic bottle.
Kevin: Hannah! Lads this is the one I was on about, see what I mean, look at the rack on her...
Darren: I wouldn't mind smacking that...
Mike: Up for a threesome bitch? :p
Hannah looks at them in disgust.
Hannah: (To Kevin) Well where are you taking me then?
Kevin: Er...here?
Hannah: Is that it!?
Kevin: I'll get you a bag of chips later if you want...
Hannah: Oh god :rolleyes:
Kevin: Well what did you expect? I can't stand girls like you that think they're better than this...
Hannah: "Girls like me"?
Kevin: Dressed in your short skirts and your big breasts, easy...
Hannah slaps him hard around the face.
Hannah: I don't know why I bothered coming here!
Kevin: Yeah well you're a minger anyway!
Hannah walks off, annoyed. Kevin's friends laugh at him for getting slapped.
DaVeyWaVey
01-12-2007, 22:10
INT. HONEYSUCKLE COTTAGE - DAY
Michelle has a happy look on her face. Tanya walks over to her.
Tanya: You're looking chipper! What's put a smile on your face!?
Michelle: Oh, just a man..
Tanya: Oh come on sis, dish the gossip!
Michelle: I don’t really want to name names yet, don’t want to curse it..
Tanya: Oh come on! You can’t keep me hanging like this!
Michelle: My lips remain sealed, but he’s invited me away for the weekend to Windsor.
Tanya: Oh lovely, so are you going to make your move on him then?
Michelle: I don’t know, he’s a good friend, I don’t want to ruin things! Besides Tan, I don’t know if I’m ready for another relationship..
Tanya: If I’ve learnt one thing over the years Shell, it’s to make the most of every opportunity, go for it!
Michelle has a confident look on her face, taking in Tanya's words.
DaVeyWaVey
01-12-2007, 22:45
EXT. RED RUM PUBLIC HOUSE - DAY
Paul meets Doug outside the Red Rum to hand over the money.
Paul: (handing the money over to Doug) It's all there..
Doug: I'll want more than this Paul.. consider yourself lucky I’ve not killed you for what you did to my daughter!
Paul: And what about Lucy eh? She burned to death thanks to you!
Doug: Well if you don't cough up more money, the rest of your family will be going the same way as Lucy did, you understand me?
Paul looks terrified over Doug's chilling threat.
EXT. TORQUAY SHOPS - EVENING
Michelle and Will leave one of the expensive clothes shops.
Michelle: I hope the others aren't wearing anything too fancy, I don't want to end up sticking out as the fashion tramp...
Will: You won't, that dress is gorgeous, it really suits you...
Michelle: Look Will before we go way I want to say something...
Will: Go on...
Michelle: About what you said a couple of weeks ago...
Will: Look I heard what you said, we're going just going as freinds...
Michelle: Well maybe I don't want us to go as friends anymore...
Will: I don;t understand...
Michelle leans in and kisses him on the lips.
Will: Wow, I wasn't expecting that...but it was nice...are you sure you're ready to do this?
Michelle: I've got to move on at some point, so why not now?
Will: Exactly. Well this has certainly shone a new light on this weekend, i reckon me and you are going to have a lot of fun...
Michelle smiles at Will, a huge grin on her face.
EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Hannah is walking back from her date with Kevin. Andonis steps out of Singh & Sons and notices that she is distressed.
Andonis: Hannah! Hannah!
Hannah stops and turns around taking a few deep breaths.
Andonis: How did the date go?
Hannah: Bad! I thought you said he was nice!?
Andonis face is full of guilt at misleading her.
Hannah: You knew he wasn't didn't you!?
Andonis: I didn't want to hurt your feelings, I thought he might have been nice to you...
Hannah: Well he wasn't! He was a pig!
Kevin and his friends walk down the street on the opposite side of the road. They notice Andonis and Hannah talking, and start shouting over to them.
Kevin: No wonder she didn't fancy me. Look likes she prefers those of the Asian persuasion...
Andonis: I'm more of a man that you'll ever be!
Kevin: Ooooo has curry breath got the hots for Hannah, eh!?
Andonis shakes off this suggestion to save the embrassment from Kevin and his friends.
Andonis: No, of course not!
Kevin: Whatever! You two are welcome to each other, you pair of tramps!
Kevin and his gang move on down the road.
Hannah: "No, of course not"
Andonis: Hannah, I didn't mean...
Hannah: Save it...
Hannah barges past Andonis and storms off home, even more hurt than before.
DaVeyWaVey
02-12-2007, 23:03
EXT. TORQUAY SHOP - NIGHT
Jacqui is in Torquay, shopping. She has just come out of a clothes shop, where she sees Doug. A paniced look crosses her face, and she runs down the road to catch a taxi.
Jacqui: Taxi! Taxi!
Jacqui rushes over to the taxi and quickly gets in.
DaVeyWaVey
02-12-2007, 23:14
EXT. BAYMOORE STREETS - NIGHT
Andonis runs after Hannah.
Andonis: Hannah! Please, wait!
Hannah: What is so bad at me hey!? Do I really deserve to get treated like dirt!?
Andonis: Of course not!
Hannah: Since I've been down here, men treat me like crap!
Andonis: You just haven't met the right man.
Hannah: He’d do a runner if he knew about all my baggage..
Andonis: Do you see me running!?
Hannah: What are you saying?
Andonis: I'm saying you're as fit as and your such a great girl. :)
Andonis and Hannah get close and they kiss.
Michelle doesn't know about Will and Tanya.. I wonder if Tan would have been as happy for her if she knew who the man was???
Doug sounds nastier than Craig!!!
It is with much contemplation and deep regret that I inform you all that Devon Seas will no longer be written.
With increasing work and social pressures, It is becoming hard for me to come on to the internet every day and write episodes. Plus you also have to consider the great deal of planning that is required, of which I simply haven't got the time to do at the moment.
I also need to focus on my studies, and spend my spare time writing different things, rather than focus just on Devon Seas.
However I will never say never, it may be back in some different shape or format at some point in the future. I thank all of those who have stuck with it and supported my work, especially Siobhan.
:crying::crying::crying: Understand your reason Bry but I will sadly miss this.. I hope it does return at some stage.. It was brilliantly written and I enjoyed reading every bit of it.. You should be very very proud of yourself for writing such a wonderfully soap
Davey and Abi.. thanks for helping Bry since this started. You both wrote very well and I thank you
DaVeyWaVey
03-12-2007, 17:49
I just want to say a big thank you to Bry for letting me help you write some of this - it was a pleasure to help you write some of your Devon Seas, and you should be very pleased that you invented such a brilliant creation - I hope it's back sometime in the future! :D
Chloe O'brien
03-12-2007, 23:14
Firstly I would like to congratulate you Bryan for all the wonderful stories you have created over the last two years. You Abi and Davey have done brilliantly its such a shame that it has to end. But your education comes first. I know I'm not a constant reader like Shiv I normally find myself having to read 4 or 5 pages worth at once to keep up with the plots.
Hopefully one day DS will return but in the mean time well done again, as I'm sure it won't be long before we see one of you're real creations on the telly.
bakedbean
04-12-2007, 19:34
Oh no what a shame that such a great soap has got to come to an end.
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