Eastenders- The End To The Max/Stacey Affair Storyline

[DaVeyWaVey]

Hello all. I have made up an ending for the Max/Stacey (Stax) affair in Eastenders. I will post the script tomorrow. I hope you all read and say what you think. :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

The Slaters House- Evening

(Stacey is in the living room, all glammed up. She has a black sparkly outfit on and her face is shielded with make-up. Mo enters the room)

Mo: You off out somewhere?

Stacey: Err...no...i dunno..depends what comes up..

Mo: Well you look like your off somewhere to me! Dressed up like that...

(Stacey refuses to answer)

Mo: Well me and Charlie are off to the Vic...

Stacey: Bye then!

(Mo leaves the living room. Charlie is in the hallway)

Mo: I don't know what's wrong with that girl sometimes! She has Kat Mark 2 written all over her!

Charlie: Just leave her be...she'll come over the Vic if she wants to..

(Mo and Charlie leave. Once they're gone, Stacey gets her mobile phone and rings Max. We cut to Max who is at his house)

Stacey: Max...i need you to come over now! We've got to talk...

Max: Come on Stac....you know i'm not free on a Thursday! I'm with Tanya and the kids..now's not a good time...

Stacey: It's important Max! You need to come over now!

Max: Fine...i'll be over in about 10 minutes....

(Max hangs up the phone. He smiles. We cut back to Stacey, she looks prepared and determined...)

[Kim]

A very intriguing start, Dave. I don't want to say what I think Stacey wants Max over there for, or I'll be responsible for making everyone feel even more sick than they did when they started sleeping together on the show.

[DaVeyWaVey]

The Slaters House- Evening

(Stacey is all glammed up. The doorbell rings. Stacey rushes to answer the front door. It's Max)

Max: Can i come in?

(Max lets off a flirty smile to Stacey. Stacey looks away)

Stacey: Yeah...come on in..

(Max enters the Slaters house. Stacey shuts the front door. Max grabs Stacey's hand)

Max: Come on then! Let's get up those stairs and in that bedroom!

Stacey: Max! No!

Max: What do you mean no?! Your gagging for it, i know you are!

Stacey: I wanted you to come over here because we need to talk..a serious talk! I didn't ask you to come over here so you can rip my clothes off and be done with me!

Max: Well go on then...there is clearly something you want to say so just say it Stac! Then i can get back home to my family...

Stacey: Fine! I'll make this short and sweet....we're finished!

Max: You what?!

Stacey: I'm being serious Max! I don't want to carry on what we've got...we're finished...our affair is over!

Max: No Stac! You can't just end it like this!

Stacey: I can and I am! Now just get out Max! So you can get back home to your family!

Max: Stac! You don't mean this! I know you don't mean this...you want me! I know you want me...you just want to resist but you just can't...

(Max starts running his fingers through Stacey's hair. Stacey has a concerned look on her face)

Stacey: Get off me Max and get out!

Max: No...i know you want me to stay...i know you want me!

Stacey: No, your wrong! I don't want you.......I want Bradley!

(Max has a surprised look on his face)

Max: So your still in love with Bradley then?!

Stacey: Yeah i am...i'm not in love with you...in fact, i don't even fancy you! I used you Max! I used you to get back at Bradley!

(Max has an angered look on his face)

Max: Don't you dare say that! You know that's not true! It's not true!

Stacey: It is true...we're over Max...we're done! I'm being serious...now get back to your family!

(Max grabs Stacey and holds her against the wall and starts kissing her all over)

Max: Come on Stac....let's 'av one more go before i leave for good!

Stacey: No!! Max, get off me!!

(As Stacey cries these words, Sean bursts through the back door....)

[Jada-GDR]

ooh, looking fab so far! :thumbsup:

[DaVeyWaVey]

The Slaters House- Night

(Sean bursts through the back door)

Stacey: Max, i don't want this!! I just want you to go!

(Sean hears Stacey's words and bursts into the hallway, shouting Stacey's name)

Sean: Stacey!

Stacey: Sean! :eek:

(Sean sees Max pressing Stacey against the floor and kissing her all over. Max looks up and sees Sean)

Sean: What the hell do you think your doing with my sister?!

Max: Sean...I..

(Sean charges at Max and hits him hard in the face. Max staggers to the floor, blood dripping from his nose. Stacey screams)

Stacey: Sean! Please! He was just about to leave!

Sean: What?! So he was going to take advantage of you and then go back to his family?! You sick *******!!

(Sean punches Max hard as his head hits the floor violently. Stacey grabs Sean and restrains him)

Stacey: Sean, please! Hear me out!

Sean: How long has he been taking advantage of you Stac eh?! How long has he been using you?!

Stacey: It's not like that Sean! I wanted it as much as he did!

Sean: So why was he pressing you up against the wall and kissing you all over but you were shouting for him to get off you?!

Stacey: I was ending it with him Sean! We're history...me and Max...it was just a one-off...we both got carried away!

Sean: You mean he got carried away! He just tried to rape you for christ sake! You were telling him to stop but he wouldn't!

(Max gets up from the floor)

Max: No Sean! I wasn't trying to rape her...you've got it all wrong!

Sean: Don't try and lie your way out of it Max! Stacey, get out now...

Stacey: I'm not leaving! No way!

(Sean shouts)

Sean: GET OUT!!

Stacey: Please Sean! Don't hurt him, don't hurt Max!

Sean: Anyone who takes advantage of my sister will pay! That's how it works Stac...NOW GET OUT!!

(Scared over his behaviour, Stacey runs to the front door and leaves. Max and Sean are in the hallway. They both stand facing each other)

Sean: Time for you to pay Max! When you leave this house, you won't be looking pretty...

[*-Rooney-*]

oh its looking good up to now cant wait to see the next bit

[Pinkbanana]

excellent stuff, Davey'chav'Wavey..:bow:

Hope Sean knocks Max into next week....cant stand the man at the mo - he deserves a good beating.....the swine!

[Kim]

No change there then, he doesn't look pretty anyway :rotfl:

Well, what she wanted him over there for wasn't what I thought, I am pleased to announce. Although, at one point, one of the lines made me think it was lol!

Great parts :cheer: Look forward to reading more.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Sean: Time for you to pay Max! When you leave this house, you won't be looking pretty...

Max: Now come on Sean...please, can i just explain? Why can't we just talk like civilised adults?!

Sean: I don't do civilised!!

(Sean charges at Max and punches him across the face. Max feels dizzy but manages to keep his balance. He punches Sean back)

Max: Hear me out Sean! Look i'm sorry...one thing led to another...me and Stacey, we weren't meant to happen!

Sean: Don't try and talk your way out of it Max! You took advantage of my sister...that's all i need to know..

Max: For christ sake Sean! You don't the know the half of it...Stacey was up for it as well as i was! I wasn't taking advantage of her at all!

(Sean punches Sean twice as hard in the face. This time, Max loses his balance and collapses to the floor, his face smeared in blood)

Sean: My sister wouldn't be stupid enough too have it off with you! Look at the age difference...it's clear you led her on!

Max: No i didn't lead her on at all...she wanted it!

Sean: So you gave it her?! You had sex with my sister and then went back to Tanya and your kids and pretended everything was ok?!

Max: No i felt guilty...i really did! When you found me and Stac, we were ending our affair, we really was! You have to believe me!

Sean: I don't believe you....and i'm sure when Tanya finds out what you've been getting up to with my sister, she won't believe you either!

Max: You wouldn't tell Tan...it's not your style..

Sean: Your right...it's not my style! I like to get revenge, teach people a lesson...

(There's a pause)

Max: I'm sorry Sean! I'm sorry...

(Sean shouts in fury)

Sean: Don't you dare say it when you don't mean it!

(Max is on his knees, his face smeared in blood after Sean's series of punches. Sean kicks Max hard to the ground. Max holds his stomach and squeels in pain as he hits the floor)

Sean: How long have you and Stac been going on for?! How long?!

Max: It was a just one-off...i swear!

Sean: DON'T LIE TO ME!

(Sean kicks Max twice as hard again)

Max: (Breathing hard, desperate) Ok...ok..it went on for a few months but that's all!

Sean: Where did you have sex?! Did you do it in different places?! Monday over your house...Tuesday over this place?! Is that how it worked?! WAS IT?!

Max: No..it wasn't like that!

Sean: What was it like then?! I WANT TO KNOW!

Max: We didn't plan any of it....it just happened!

Sean: Spur of the moment was it?! How long did you do it for?! 10 minutes? 20 minutes?! Did you enjoy it?! Did you enjoy having sex with my sister?!

Max: That's the thing though ain't it Sean...you don't deserve to be Stacey's big brother! Not after you ran away and abandoned her!

Sean: Don't you dare bring me into this! This is about you...you sick, twisted bloody pervert!!

(Sean grabs Max into the kitchen by the collar)

Sean: Want a cup of tea?!

Max: What?!

Sean: I SAID WOULD YOU LIKE SOME TEA!!!

(Sean slams the kitchen door shut. Max jumps)

Max: What are you doing Sean?! Your scaring me...

Sean: You should be bloody well scared! I ain't finished with you yet Max...

(Sean fills the kettle with water and then the kettle starts to boil)

[*-Rooney-*]

oh im really enjoying this and i liked that statement from max to sean about sean not deserving to be staceys brother.

the last bit though "do you want a cup of tea" its weird i could honestly imagine sean in the mid of an argument coming away with a totally out of the blue question like that

[DaVeyWaVey]

The Slaters House- Night

(Max is in the kitchen. Sean sits down next to Max as the kettle boils)

Max: Sean...look..i should be getting back to Tanya and the kids...

(Sean laughs)

Sean: Your not going anywhere Max...your staying here! You've still got some explaining to do over why you slept with my sister!

(Sean smacks his hand against the table making Max jump)

Max: What do you want me to explain Sean?! I've told you everything...everything you need to know..

Sean: What i don't get Max is why Stacey went for you?! What she saw in you?! She doesn't seem your type at all!

Max: Well...you wouldn't know her type in men would you eh?! You ain't been around 'av you! You don't know anything about your sister! You don't know what she's been through!!

(Sean grabs Max by the neck)

Sean: What's that meant to mean?!

Max: Nothing...

Sean: TELL ME!!!!

Max: Stacey had an abortion alright?! She had an abortion...and she came to me...she came to me for help, for support...she came to me over her own brother! Shows how much trust, how much faith Stac has in you!

(Sean punches Max across the face)

Sean: And guess what...Tanya came to me for help, for support, but of course one thing led to another....and we both ended up sleeping in YOUR BED!!

(Max shouts in fury and punches Sean back. A fight breaks out. Sean and Max flying punches at each other. Max punches Sean and he hits the floor but Sean fights back by hitting him with a kitchen utensil. Max falls to the floor. The kettle boils...)

Sean: Your gonna pay Max! Your gonna pay for sleeping with my sister, did you really think you were gonna get away with sleeping with my sister?! DID YOU?!!

(Sean pours the boiling hot water from the kettle into the kitchen sink. He grabs Max, holds his head over the kitchen sink)

Max: NO! SEAN! NO! PLEASE...PLEASE...NOOO!!!!

(Sean dunks Max's head into the boiling water. Max screams in pain as the boiling water scalds Max's face. Sean looks on, clearly not bothered, he takes Max's head from the water. Max is still screaming as the boiling water burns his face)

Sean: Let's add a bit more hot water shall we?!

(Sean turns the hot water tap on, until it fills the kitchen sink. He grabs Max's head. Max screams as Sean forces Max's head into the water and holds his head into the water. Max struggles trying to get his head from the water, but Sean overpowers him and continues to hold Max's head in the water, looking on cooly. We see Sean drowning Max in the water. Max's struggles stop....Sean has drowned him. Sean forces Max's head from the water and Max's lifeless body collapses to the floor)

[Kim]

Horrah I actually like Sean in this. I was laughing my head off at the end of the last part and the beginning of that one. When he put his head in the water, I was thinking of home alone 2 and that blow torch part. :rotfl:

Certainly wasn't expecting that to happen :cheer: