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littlemo
04-01-2007, 01:20
Part 1

Max: So, you gonna say something?


(Bradley in a daze after finding out about the affair)


Bradley: How longs it been going on?! (angry)


(Max looks at him)


Bradley: With Stacey, how long's it been going on?! (angry shouting)


Max: It's not going on (quick to jump in)


(Bradley looks at him)


Not anymore.


Bradley: So what?! did you finish it?!


Max: No.


Bradley: Did she?!


Max: (looks at him) Yeah.


Bradley: When?! (sternly)


Max: Before you got back together. It was a mistake!


A stupid mistake! That got out of hand.


Bradley: (annoyed) When did it start?!


Max: Christmas.


Bradley: When?! (Max looks at him) What day?!


Max: Christmas Day.


(Bradley looks at him, shocked)


Bradley: I went to your house on Christmas Day, to apologise, for having a go at you.


Max: I know (guiltily).


Bradley: You spilled something on your shirt. You told me Stacey had done it!
Was that when you slept with her?!


Max: Bradley, it ain't...


Bradley: I poured my heart out to you. I told you I loved her (upset).


Max: Bradley.


Bradley: Provide a laugh did it! An interval entertainment, while you two lay in bed together.


Max: No! It wasn't.


Bradley: I trusted you.


Max: Look, it was Stacey that did all the running. She threw her self at me. Bradley, you know what she's like!


(Bradley looking at him in disgust)


Bradley: You know, I knew what you were like, but I didn't think you'd stoop this low. What you have done has destroyed our relationship forever. Do you realise that?!

I hope she was worth it.

CrazyLea
04-01-2007, 01:26
That's really good Little Mo!!
You know how to write these characters :) Hope to see more of your work.. or more to this :D

Joy2286
04-01-2007, 08:21
Wow! That's fab Little Mo! Is there more to come?

Jada-GDR
04-01-2007, 13:14
i love it! you write so well and stay so true to the characters. are you going to continue this one?