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DaVeyWaVey
02-09-2006, 11:48
Hi guys, Hinston High is back! After taking a summer break this month, Season 2 will finally begin today!

First of all, i would like to say a big thank you to everyone who read the first season and left their comments, i really appreciated it. Hopefully you and loads more SB members will be reading this season too. I hope many more of you read this season and leave your comments.

If you want to read the 1st season in full:
http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=55388

To check out the Hinston High Spoilers:
http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=55420

To check out the official Hinston High website:
http://www.freewebs.com/davewaveuser/

The first scene of Season 2 will be posted shortly, i hope you all enjoy this season!

DaVeyWaVey
02-09-2006, 12:07
Episode 1

Scene 1- The Nightclub- Night

Andy: You know Tan...someone's going to die in the next few minutes!

Tanya: I know...don't worry i came well prepared...i'm not scared of you Andy!

(Tanya steps up to Andy)

Andy: You wanna bet on that, bitch!

(Andy holds the knife up to Tanya's neck. Tanya grabs the knife but Andy tries to pull it away. They are soon both struggling for the knife. Andy manages to snatch it off Tanya and he is about to stab Tanya but she dives away and takes him by surprise. She snatches the knife off him and stabs him in the chest. Andy lets out a scream but the sound of the music is drowning it out. No one can hear him)

Tanya: Rot in hell Andy Connel!

(Andy is unconscious on the floor with blood draining from his body. Tanya looks on nervously)

Tanya: You deserved that Andy, after what you did to my husband! Your evil, pure evil!

(Suddenly there's a knock on the office door. It's one of the nightclub's bouncers. He begins to speak through the door)

Bouncer: Mr Connel, are you in there?! It's all starting to kick off out there now..do you think it's best if we close?

(Tanya whispers under her breath, talking to Andy's body on the floor)

Tanya: What the bloody hell am i gonna do with you now ey Andy?!

(Tanya suddenly drags Andy's body behind his desk)

Bouncer: Mr Connel, are you in there?! Look i know you don't like employees coming into your office but i'm coming in!

(The bouncer turns the door handle. Tanya suddenly shouts out)

Tanya: Close the nightclub! Don't come in! I'm not decent...

(The bouncer lets go of the door handle)

Tanya: Look Mr Connel went to get a bottle of wine from the wine shop...you can look for him there!

Bouncer: Ok thanks....

(The bouncer walks away from the door)

Bouncer: Whoever you are...

DaVeyWaVey
02-09-2006, 12:34
Scene 2- The Woods Flat- Night

(Max and Tom are both watching television. They suddenly hear a disturbance outside their front door)

Tom: What was that?

Max: Search me....look something big is going to be happening on here in a minute..so keep your eyes peeled to the tv set!

(Tom ignores Max's comment. He heads to the front door and opens it. He looks down on the doorstep and makes a shocking discovery.....)

Tom: Oh my lord!

Max: What is it Tom?! Surely can't be more exciting than watching tonight's repeat of Eastenders!

(Tom rushes into the living room)

Tom: Max, come and look at this!

Max: When Eastenders ends at 10:30 i will come and have look ok?!

Tom: You can't wait until 10:30!

(Tom drags Max off the sofa and takes him to the front door.)

Tom: Max...there's a baby on our doorstep!

Max: You what?! :eek: You have to be kidding?! Why the hell would somebody leave a baby on our doorstep?! We're both not cut out to be parents quite yet!

Tom: Well somebody obviously thinks we are...

(Tom picks up the basket with the baby inside from the doorstep. The baby is wearing a pink top and has ginger curly hair. The baby is snuggled up in a blanket and is asleep)

Tom: It looks like a girl to me!

Max: Well to be honest i don't care what sex it is because i've just missed the end of Eastenders! :rolleyes:

Tom: Do you know who this baby belongs too?

Max: I was gonna ask you the exact same question!

Tom: We should call a doctor!

Max: And the police...someone randomly decided to dump a baby on our doorstep for no apparent reason, strange huh?!

Tom: Maybe not as strange as we think...look i've found a note...

(Tom picks up the note and reads it)

Tom: Christ almighty!

Max: What is it?!

Tom: I thought you already would have known what it was!

Max: What are you talking about?!

Tom: Max, this is your baby daughter! :eek:

Max: :eek:

Jojo
02-09-2006, 12:53
This is great Dave - I must catch up on the rest before this now though, to work out the backgrounds! Great stuff though!

bakedbean
02-09-2006, 13:16
wow what an excellent way to come back

DaVeyWaVey
02-09-2006, 14:17
Scene 3- The Nightclub- Night

(The nightclub has closed. Everyone has gone home apart from the bouncer who has gone to try and find Andy)

(Tanya steps out of the club office to see the nightclub in tatters. Broken bottles all over the floor and spilt drinks everywhere)

Tanya: Christ!

(Tanya looks around and sees a fire exit. She opens it and sees a car park. Tanya talks to herself)

Tanya: Now i wonder which car is Andy's car?

(She jogs back to the office where Andy's dead body is still behind his desk. She reaches into his pocket and pulls out his car keys. She rushes back to the car park and presses the button on his car key. A car suddenly lights up- it's Andy's)

Tanya: Aha!

(Tanya goes back to the office and drags Andy's body out to the car park. She tries to be made unseen as she gets to his car and opens the boot)

Tanya: Say goodbye to your beloved nightclub Andy Connel! You will never be seeing it again!

(Tanya chuckles to herself as she puts Andy's body in the boot and shuts it. She gets into his drivers seat and drives away)

30 MINUTES LATER

(We see Tanya park up by a derelict wood. She gets out of the car and drags Andy's body out of the boot. She drags him into the wood and starts digging a hole)

Tanya: This is where you belong Andy! In a ditch! You don't deserve a proper funeral, you don't deserve anything!

(Tanya has dug a hole and she chucks Andy's body in the small ditch she has made)

Tanya: See you in hell Mr Connel....i hope you suffer!

(Tanya covers up Andy's body before leaving)


The next parts of Hinston High will be posted tomorrow. :)

Jojo
02-09-2006, 14:18
Theres bound to be some CCTV that pics her up - its not going to be that easy - surely?!

This is great stuff Dave

DaVeyWaVey
02-09-2006, 14:21
Theres bound to be some CCTV that pics her up - its not going to be that easy - surely?!

This is great stuff Dave

Tanya's in a right panic at the moment, she doesn't know what she's doing!

I am glad your liking it. :)

bakedbean
02-09-2006, 14:38
Hinston High is back and better than ever, i have to admit that Season 1 i only read the last few scenes but now im gonna read all the way through of Season 2 its great.

Jojo
02-09-2006, 14:44
Tanya's in a right panic at the moment, she doesn't know what she's doing!

I am glad your liking it. :) She seems it - she seems almost unhinged - I must read the previous season so I'm up to date with all the happenings.

*goes to look back through Season 1 to catch up on everything*

DaVeyWaVey
03-09-2006, 12:12
Scene 4- Country Lane- Night

(Greg and Chloe's car has swerved off the country lane and is now at the bottom of a small rocky cliff. Greg regains consciousness, his head and nose is bleeding and his legs are trapped in the car wreckage. He turns his head uncomfortably and yelps in pain as he twists his head to see Chloe. Greg starts to breathe heavily as he sees Chloe is still unconscious with blood all over her head and a nosebleed. He looks down to see that Chloe's legs are trapped too and they have started bleeding. Greg yelps out in pain)

Greg: Help us! Somebody help us! We're trapped!

(Greg realises that his shouts are falling on deaf ears. He turns to Chloe)

Greg: Chlo? Can you hear me?! Chlo!

(Greg has a worried look on his face. He gets his arms free and shakes Chloe to try and get her to say something)

Greg: Come on Chloe, say something! Come on!

(Greg continues to shake her but he realises she is still unconscious. Greg starts to cry)

Greg: Chloe! You've got to be still alive, you've got to be! Please just wake up Chlo and speak to me! Please!

(Greg pauses)

Greg: I knew i should have checked the car brakes before we left, it's all my fault! This whole situation is all my fault, if you die, then i am to blame!

(Greg looks out the car but ends up cutting his hand on the broken glass)

Greg: Christ!

(He turns round to Chloe while nursing his hand)

Greg: I am going to get help Chlo! I will be back soon, i know your a fighter, whatever you do just don't die on me! I love you!

(Greg kisses Chloe on the lips before trying to escape the car wreckage)

Jojo
03-09-2006, 12:17
:crying: So sad! Will Chloe surive? Post more quickly - I need to know!

Bryan
03-09-2006, 12:24
so HH is back... a big style. we finally get to find out who survives and who dies after all this amazing cliffhangers you have given us.

I hope Chloe survives, she's just got to surely...

DaVeyWaVey
03-09-2006, 12:59
Scene 5- The Butleys House- Night

(Ben leaves the living room and picks up the phone to ring the police. We cut from the Butleys house to Hinston High. Liz and Danny are both approaching the Butley household in different directions and they are both brandishing a gun....)

(Liz suddenly looks at the Butleys house and stares at it for a minute or so, she decides to reconsider, she puts the gun in her pocket and walks away back to her house on the opposite side of the road.)

(Meanwhile, Danny gets his gun out and breaks in through the back door)

Julia: What the hell was that?! Sounded like someone was breaking the door down!

(Marianne and Sally try to follow Julia to the kitchen)

Julia: Kids, stay in the living room!

(Julia enters the kitchen to see Danny in a horrible state...he is wearing a scruffy jacket, with scruffy jeans and broken trainers. He is holding a gun in his hand, his hand is shaking)

Julia: What the bloody hell?! Danny! Are you out of your mind?! What are you doing with that gun?!

Danny: This gun will give me justice!

Julia: What's happened to you?! We've been worried sick! Just put the gun down, we don't want anyone to get hurt!

Danny: Someone has already got hurt, me!

(Ben has finished ringing the police and enters the kitchen where he sees Danny pointing the gun in Julia's face)

Ben: Bloody hell!

Danny: Shut up!

Ben: Danny, where have you been?! I've just called the police, now we'll get done for wasting police time!

Danny: It's always about you dad isn't it?! If something happens, you will always think you will get the blame..you worry about the tiniest thing!

Ben: It is a criminal offence! And that is as well! Waving a gun in somebody's face and threatening to pull the trigger is also a crime!

(Danny takes the gun off Julia and aims it at Ben)

Danny: I'm sick and tired of your lectures dad!

Ben: You never liked them did you?!

Julia: Just shut up Ben, before Danny does something he will regret!

Ben: Yeah it's ok..the police will be here soon to arrest you anyway...there on there way as we speak!

Danny: Just shut up dad! Shut up!

Ben: You don't deserve to be able to be allowed to call me dad, you're an absolute disgrace! Look at you! Have me and your mum failed to teach you right from wrong?!

Julia: Just put the gun down Danny before someone gets hurt!

Danny: I'm already hurt, i'm hurt inside! You've both never loved me!

(Danny starts to cry. As he does this, Ben finds this a perfect distraction to try and tackle the gun from Danny's hand. He reaches for the gun but Danny sees him as he tries to reach for the gun. Danny panics and pulls the trigger)

(A shot is heard. Ben has been shot in the chest. Ben puts his hand to his chest before falling to the floor. Julia screams)

Julia: Nooo!

Jojo
03-09-2006, 13:03
:eek: Shot in the chest! Will be make it or will he die?! I'm totally hooked! I wonder if Liz will hear the shot...

Bryan
03-09-2006, 13:12
ben shot! omg i never saw that one coming! :eek: keep up the great writing Dave, im really enjoying hinston high at the moment

DaVeyWaVey
03-09-2006, 14:08
Scene 6- The Butleys House- Night

(A shot is heard. Ben has been shot in the chest. Ben puts his hand to his chest before falling to the floor. Julia screams)

Julia: Nooo!

(Danny drops the gun in shock as he overlooks Ben who is lying on the floor unconscious. Julia is crying and holding Ben in her arms. Sally and Marianne come rushing in after hearing the gunshot)

Marianne: Oh my god! Dad!

(Sally looks at Danny in disgust)

Sally: What the hell have you done now Danny?!

(We cut outside where we see Liz standing in the street after hearing a gunshot come from the Butley household. She watches as a police car arrives outside their door)

Liz: Christ almighty! What the hell is going on!?

(Liz watches on sneaking by the Butleys house to try and get a piece of the action)

(There is a knock on the Butleys front door)

Police: It's the police, can you open up please? We had an urgent phone call from this address!

Sally: Don't tell me you shot him Danny! Please don't say you did!

(Marianne leans by Ben and starts to cry. Julia tries to wipe away the tears from her eyes as she holds Ben's body in her arms)

Julia: Sal, open the door to the police and ring the ambulance for Ben...

Marianne: He won't die will he mum?

Julia: No sweetheart...don't be so stupid, your father is a fighter! He can get through anything!

(Sally opens up the door to the police. The police enter the kitchen to see Ben lying unconscious on the floor with Julia and Marianne by his side and Danny standing there frozen, with a gun by his feet)

Police: What's been going on here then?! We were called here because there was a report of a missing teenage boy...

Julia: That's him there! Go on, arrest him! He just shot his own father!

Police: Did you?!

(Sally comes rushing in after calling the ambulance)

Sally: I've rang the ambulance...there on there way, they'll be here in a few minutes!

Julia: Well let's hope he pulls through or otherwise, i would have given birth to a murderer!

(Julia fixes her eyes on Danny. A tear rushes down Danny's cheek)

Julia: Your not my son! Your scum!

Police: What's your name?

Julia: His name is Danny...i'm ashamed to say that he is my son!

Police: Danny, is what your mother accusing you of correct?

Danny: It is...i shot my own father!

(Danny bursts into tears)

Police: I think it's best if you come down the station don't you!?

(The police cart Danny away. As he leaves, he says something)

Danny: I love you mum, i love you Sally and Marianne!

Julia: We don't want to bloody hear it! Now just go! Take him out of my sight!

(Danny is carted away by the police through the back door. Danny is still crying)

Sally: Mum...

Julia: What is it Sal?

Sally: Dad has stopped breathing!

Jojo
03-09-2006, 16:33
:eek: Quick - someone start trying to resuscitate him!!! Don't just stand there - do something!!

Bryan
03-09-2006, 16:45
crumbs it gets better and better! harsh words from julia, but nothing more than danny deserves - how can he shoot his own father!? :eek:

great writing here dave, the characters are believable, and the plots are just shocking! keep it up!!!

DaVeyWaVey
03-09-2006, 17:04
Scene 7- The Butleys House- Night

Julia: What do you mean he's stopped breathing?! He can't have! I mean...he just can't!

(Julia tries to resuscitate Ben but she gets up in frustration and starts screaming. Sally tries to resuscitate Ben once Julia gets up)

Julia: What the bloody hell is going on!? Why ain't the ambulance here eh?! They should have arrived by now!

(Suddenly the ambulance pulls up outside the Butley household, the Butley family can hear the loud sirens)

Sally: Mum, calm down! They're here now! Dad is going to be ok....all of us have to stay positive!

(There's a knock at the door. Marianne opens the door and the paramedics rush in)

Julia: He's not breathing Sal! Are you bloody stupid or what!?

(The paramedics arrive in the kitchen with a stretcher)

Julia: He's not breathing! My husband isn't breathing! Do something, just do something!

(Julia bursts into tears and Sally comforts her. The paramedics begin to resusciate immediately with the equipment that they have)

Sally: Is everything going to be ok?

Paramedic: Ok he's breathing again...but he could stop breathing at any time, he's got a horrible gun wound on his chest...we've got to get him to hospital as soon as possible!

(The paramedics put Ben on the stretcher and into the ambulance. The one paramedic turns to Sally and Julia. Julia is still crying and Sally is comforting her)

Paramedic: Two people can get in the ambulance..would you?..

Sally: No i best stay here with Marianne, Julia you go...

(Julia gives Sally a hug)

Sally: Everything's gonna be alright mum, i'm sure of it!

(Julia gets into the ambulance and the sirens start as the ambulance drives away. Liz has looked at the whole scene from the opposite side of the road. She gets the gun at her pocket and looks at it, wondering what could have been..)

Bryan
03-09-2006, 17:51
wow! so many episodes today! and each one of them truely amazing!!! hinston high is the best soap on the boards at the moment

bakedbean
03-09-2006, 19:11
What a fantastic episode that was so many questions that need answered and soon!!!

DaVeyWaVey
04-09-2006, 10:19
Scene 8- The Pub- Early Morning

(Nina looks on as she sees Mike and Phil both unconscious on the floor. Nina cries out to Mike hoping he will wake up but he fails to respond)

Nina: Wake up Mike! Wake up! Come on your a fighter, your not dead are you?!

(Nina rushes behind the bar and reaches for the phone. She rings an ambulance)

Nina: Hi..yes an ambulance please, someone has got seriously hurt! Yep...it's the pub in Hinston High...get here as soon as possible!

(Nina hangs up the phone)

Nina: Right...time to get rid of the evidence before the ambulance gets here...

(Nina thinks for a moment)

Nina: It's bin day tomorrow...what a perfect opportunity!

(Nina smiles to herself. She goes up into the kitchen to get a binbag. Nina puts Phil's body in the binbag and throws him outside to the bins...knowing that he will go with the bins tomorrow)

bakedbean
04-09-2006, 10:51
Oh my god!!! I mean oh my god!!! what a great episode.

Bryan
04-09-2006, 11:11
a bit like bad girls isn't it? :p :rotfl:

but serioulsy dave this is great writing, keep up the good work!!!

DaVeyWaVey
04-09-2006, 11:13
a bit like bad girls isn't it? :p :rotfl:

but serioulsy dave this is great writing, keep up the good work!!!

:rotfl: I knew someone would say that! :p Thanks everyone for their comments!

DaVeyWaVey
04-09-2006, 11:52
Episode 2

Scene 1- Hinston Hospital Waiting Room- Early Morning

(Julia has been sitting in the waiting room for an hour feeling helpless as she waits for news on Ben. A nurse suddenly enters the waiting room. The nurse sits down next to Julia who's still crying)

Nurse: Are you Mrs Butley?

Julia: Yes...why? What's happened?! Is there news on my husband? Will he be ok?!

Nurse: I'm awfully sorry but your husband, Ben is dead!

Julia: Noo! Noo!

(Julia breaks down in tears before falling to the floor. She starts punching the floor as she cries and screams for her husband)

Julia: This can't happen! This can't!

Nurse: We tried the best we could to save him..but he stopped breathing, we tried resuscitating but he wouldn't respond to any treatment, i'm afraid we had to let him go! I am so so sorry!

(The nurse comforts Julia who is on the floor crying)

Julia: Just let go off me! Your trying to pretend to be sorry but your not! You have to do this to everybody every day...telling relatives that their loved ones are dead, and then you forget about them, swan off too the pub with your friends! Don't you have a heart!?

Nurse: I am genuinely sorry, but there was nothing else we could do!

Julia: Stop trying to act like your sorry, it doesn't wash!

(Julia tries to wipe the tears from her face)

Julia: I just can't believe it...he was breathing in the ambulance...he was responding to treatment! You did something wrong!

Nurse: We didn't...we tried the best we could!

Julia: Yeah..yeah..pull the other one! It's like a big speech for you ain't it eh?! When someone dies, you feed the same old lines to everyone! Pretending your sorry..when your not!

Nurse: I can assure you, it's not like that! I think it's best if i leave you alone...

(The nurse leaves the waiting room and Julia starts crying again)

DaVeyWaVey
04-09-2006, 14:26
Scene 2- Country Lane- Early Morning

(Greg has managed to escape the car wreckage. He has dragged himself up the small cliff dragging his broken leg up with him. He struggles as he reaches the top of the road. His face is smeared in blood. Greg suddenly sees a car coming and jumps into the road. The driver suddenly puts his brakes on and the car stops right by where Greg is lying. The driver gets out the car in a rage)

Driver: Hey..what the hell were you playing at?! I could have killed ya!

(The driver looks at Greg and sees his face smeared in blood.)

Driver: What the hell has happened to you!?

Greg: I have no time to answer questions...just please ring an ambulance from your mobile phone...mine is broken! The love of my life is trapped down that cliff! I had to pull myself up here with a broken leg! Just quickly do it!

Driver: Ok...ok..

(The driver gets his mobile phone out of his pocket and rings the ambulance)

Driver: Yes i need two ambulances please.....its Millhouse Lane, the country road just outside Millbridge...ok..get here as soon as possible!

(The driver hangs up)

Driver: I've called them!

Greg: I gathered...thanks mate, i owe you a pint!

Driver: Nah forget it...i will stay here until the ambulance gets here..

Greg: Thanks...i am gonna get back down there, i've gotta see that Chloe will be alright!

Driver: It's best if you stay up here until the ambulance gets here...they will do the rest...

Greg: I can't leave her down there!

Driver: There's nothing you can do...the ambulance will be here soon.

DaVeyWaVey
04-09-2006, 14:59
Scene 3- The Woods House- Early Morning

Tom: Max, this is your baby daughter! :eek:

Max: What!? This has got to be some kind of wind-up! I'm not a father, i can't be!

Tom: Well did you shag anyone approximately nine months ago?

(Max hesitates)

Tom: Look...i'm not joking with you, read the note yourself!

(Tom passes the note to Max. Tom puts the baby on the staircase who is still fast asleep in the basket. Max reads the note and tries to take everything in)

Max: I...i..can't believe this! I mean...christ! :eek:

Tom: I can't believe you were so stupid! You did shag someone nine months ago didn't you?! You have always been a bit of a womaniser Max! What do i expect! :rolleyes:

Max: Look...ok..yes i did! But it was just a drunken fling...it didn't mean anything!

Tom: Does that mean that baby doesn't mean anything?!

Max: I'm not saying that at all...your twisting things!

Tom: So let me confirm this...this is your baby daughter right?!

Max: It must be...i mean the baby has ginger hair just like me...and the baby has been dumped on our doorstep and i remember shagging someone nine months ago!

Tom: So everything fits then...your the father to a baby that you didn't even know about!

Max: Well she could have told me that she was pregnant! Atleast then i would have known that i would become a father!

Tom: Did you hang about long enough for you to give her the chance to tell you?!

(Max pauses for a second)

Tom: Nah thought you didn't...that's you all over ain't it Max!?

Max: Why are you having a go at me?! It's her fault!

Tom: And does "she" have a name?!

Max: Yeah her name is Amy...i remember her...

Tom: Wow well that's good then! You managed to remember her name! :rolleyes:

Max: Tom...please! Just don't have a go at me! This is a big surprise to me...i didn't know a baby would land on our doorstep tonight! Your having a go at me, while i am trying to take this whole situation in!

Tom: I just can't believe you were so stupid! Didn't you think to use protection?!

Max: I was drunk Tom! A condom was the last thing on my mind! Having a good time was the first thing!

Tom: I just hope you know how responsible you are for this child!

Max: I don't even know if it is my child!

Tom: Well everything points to you Max...the ginger hair, the baby arriving on our doorstep, a note saying your the father and you shagging someone nine months ago!

Max: It's not only me who has ginger hair you know?! Loads more people have ginger hair!

Tom: How do you explain away the other things though Max eh?! Your a father, get used to it!

Max: I'm going off for a walk...

Tom: Don't forget to take your daughter with you!

(Max leaves ignoring Max's comment)

Xx-Vicky-xX
04-09-2006, 17:16
Just read the entire second series so far, have never read it before so im confused but that is very good though, ill read series one sometime, look foward to reading more.

DaVeyWaVey
04-09-2006, 21:45
Scene 4- The Campbells House- Early Morning

(Lee and Tina are watching a late night quiz show on the television. Emily is asleep. Tanya suddenly rushes in through the front door with blood stains on her clothes)

Tina: Mum! Where the bloody hell have you been!? We've been waiting up for you!

Tanya: Well you didn't have to did you?!

Lee: Mum..we were getting worried about you! We were gonna call the police..we worried something might have happened to you!

Tanya: I'm a fully grown woman..nothing would have happened to me! Anyway, i thought you would be in bed, i didn't want to disturb you!

Lee: Well we're not in bed...what happened to you!? Why are you so late?!

Tanya: For christ sake...your acting like your father here! Like father, like son!

Lee: Well sorry for caring!

Tanya: I'm ok...just relax!

(Tanya rushes to the bathroom. Lee and Tina have failed to notice the bloodstains on Tanya's clothes as Tanya had her back to Lee and Tina while they were talking to her)

(Tanya enters the bathroom. She leans over and turns the bath taps on. She waits a moment as the bath starts running. She takes her bloodstained clothes off and starts washing them in the bath. She turns the sink taps on and starts washing her face with a flannel to try and forget about tonight's events)

(She washes her face and looks in the bathroom mirror where she sees Andy staring back at her. Tanya screams and falls to the floor. Lee and Tina rush up to the bathroom)

Tina: Christ mum! Are you ok?! Why did you scream...everything's ok isn't it?!

(Tanya looks at the mirror as she slowly talks back to Tina)

Tanya: Yeah everything's fine love...everything is just fine!

Tina: Are you sure your ok mum?! I mean, i know the stuff with Luke in prison is really stressing you out but your behaving strangely...just tell me if something is wrong! I am always here keeping an eye on you and Lee too!

(Tanya looks in the mirror and repeats Tina's words)

Tanya: Keeping an eye?! Keeping an eye!

(Tanya's eyes light up. She has realised something)

Tanya: Christ! The CCTV cameras!! Oh my god! :eek:

(Tanya rushes from the bathroom down the stairs)

Tina: Mum..your not making any sense! What are you on about CCTV cameras?!

Tanya: I will be back later...you and Lee go to bed! Don't bother waiting up for me, i'm not worth it!

Tina: Aren't you gonna get some clothes on?!

(Tanya ignores Tina and rushes out the door)

Jojo
05-09-2006, 00:41
Wow!! Fab, fab, fab! Excellent stuff Dave - really enjoying it (even though I still have read Season 1 yet!)

Xx-Vicky-xX
05-09-2006, 08:49
Ohhhh this is good Dave well done :)

DaVeyWaVey
05-09-2006, 18:02
The next few scenes will be posted just after 8pm tonight, i have been busy today so haven't had the opportunity to post any more scripts yet. :)

DaVeyWaVey
05-09-2006, 20:34
Scene 5- The Butleys House- Early Morning

(Liz knocks on the Butleys house door after hearing the commotion earlier. Sally answers the door and looks at Liz)

Sally: Oh...well...the last person i was expecting to hear knock on my door was you!

Liz: Yeah well...i'm concerned..i heard some commotion over your house earlier...just knocking to see if everything is ok?

Sally: Sticking your nose in was you?! Well, we don't need you putting 'ore in other people's affairs!

Liz: I am only trying to show some concern for my neighbours that's all!

Sally: Yeah..well we don't need any concern or attention on us ok!?

Liz: Alright...alright! I spose i best go!

Sally: Yeah it's best if you should!

(Sally slams the door on Liz. The phone rings. Sally rushes to answer it. It's Julia. We cut the scene between both of them as they speak on the phone)

Sally: Mum?

Julia: Sal?

Sally: Mum...it sounds like your crying...everything's ok isn't it?! Dad's ok!?

Julia: No he's not Sal...he's dead! Your brother is a murderer! My son is a murderer!

(Julia hangs up. She breaks down. She slides against the wall and starts crying her eyes out again. We cut to Sally who struggles to put the phone down. A tear runs down her eye, she looks devastated)

DaVeyWaVey
05-09-2006, 20:51
Scene 6- The Woods House- Early Morning

(Tom is watching late night tv and is watching over baby Imelda who is still in her basket, asleep. He is drinking a cup of tea. The phone rings and Tom answers it. It's Greg. The scene cuts between Tom and Greg as they speak to each other over the phone)

Tom: Greg, is that you?

Greg: Yeah it is mate.

Tom: I don't understand...why are you calling? I thought you and Chloe would have been snuggled up in bed by now!

Greg: And i thought you would be too!

Tom: Yeah....well, it's a long story! Anyway why are you calling me at this hour?

Greg: Me and Chloe have been involved in a car accident!

Tom: :eek: What?! Are you ok?! Is Chloe ok?!

Greg: I'm fine and the doctors are hoping that Chloe will pull through...the car isn't so lucky though!

Tom: It was bad...what happened then?

Greg: Yeah, i am lucky to have not been so injured badly! I just hope Chloe will be ok! :(

Tom: Stay strong for her mate, if your by her side, you will get through it! I can assure you!

Greg: Thanks mate. :)

Tom: Me and Max will come and visit you in hospital tomorrow...see how you and Chloe are doing...i just don't understand...how did it happen? Do you know how it happened?!

Greg: Well the brakes wouldn't work and that's why we crashed...the police are investigating it...they think the car brakes may have been tampered with but who would do such a thing?!

Tom: God knows! But that's awful! Me and Max will visit you and Chloe in hospital tomorrow...

Greg: Thanks mate....bye now.

Tom: See ya.

(Tom hangs up, shocked over what he has just heard)

DaVeyWaVey
05-09-2006, 21:21
Scene 7- Hinston Hospital- Morning

(Mike is still unconscious and is lying in a hospital bed with Nina by his bedside. Nina is holding Mike's hand as she sits by him. The doctor suddenly enters the room)

Nina: Oh...any news?

Doctor: We've had the results of Mike's brain scan..we can reveal that there is no permanent damage on his brain...hopefully your husband will wake up in the next few hours and he will make a full recovery..his memory may be a bit vague though, it will take a while until he can remember what happened..

Nina: Ok thanks doc. :)

Doctor: Oh the police are on there way, Mrs Dobson, they want to question you over what happened, just thought i would let you know. :)

(The doctor gives a smile before leaving the room)

Nina: Oh...ok...

(Nina looks on with a worried look on her face)

DaVeyWaVey
05-09-2006, 21:38
Scene 8- The Nightclub- Morning

(The bouncer called Eddie has been looking for Andy everywhere. He has returned to the nightclub that is still in tatters following the night before. He decides to check out the CCTV to see if he can spot Andy on there. As he finds the CCTV tape out from the night before, Tanya is rushing down Hinston High to get to the nightclub. As Eddie puts the CCTV tape in the machine, Tanya rushes to the nightclub door. It's still open. She rushes down the stairs and into the nightclub as Eddie presses play on the video player...)

Will Tanya Get Caught? Find out tomorrow...

Xx-Vicky-xX
05-09-2006, 21:54
Dave i hate you how can you do this to me, i cant wait that long :crying:

Fab stuff

Bryan
05-09-2006, 21:57
what a cliffhanger! surely she didnt leave a tape in!!! but knowing her state of mind...i hope she doesnt get caught!!!

Jojo
05-09-2006, 22:54
Great stuff again Dave - looking forward to the next parts.

bakedbean
06-09-2006, 16:08
What a fantastic cliffhanger maybe she has to kill him as well now???

DaVeyWaVey
06-09-2006, 17:53
Episode 3

Scene 1- The Nightclub- Morning

(The bouncer called Eddie has been looking for Andy everywhere. He has returned to the nightclub that is still in tatters following the night before. He decides to check out the CCTV to see if he can spot Andy on there. As he finds the CCTV tape out from the night before, Tanya is rushing down Hinston High to get to the nightclub. As Eddie puts the CCTV tape in the machine, Tanya rushes to the nightclub door. It's still open. She rushes down the stairs and into the nightclub as Eddie presses play on the video player...)

(Eddie starts viewing the CCTV tape of that night. Tanya panics. She grabs a broken bottle which is on the nightclub floor, she sneaks up to him and smashes it over his head. Eddie falls to the floor. Tanya watches herself on the tape dragging Andy out of the nightclub and into the car park before taking the tape out of the machine and putting it in her coat pocket. She gets the phone and calls the ambulance)

Tanya: Hi...i need an ambulance please...someone has got seriously hurt at Hinston High nightclub..come as soon as possible....bye..

(Tanya hangs up before leaving the nightclub)

Xx-Vicky-xX
06-09-2006, 18:04
Ohhhhh thats good Dave cant wait to read more

Bryan
06-09-2006, 18:13
:cheer: Tanya lives to fight another day! Just a pity Eddie had to get hit over the head :rotfl:

bakedbean
06-09-2006, 19:13
I am really loving Tanya but how far will she go to keep the murder a secret???

DaVeyWaVey
06-09-2006, 21:54
Scene 2- Hinston Police Station- Morning

(Danny is being interviewed by the police accompanied by his mother Julia who is sitting by his side)

Police: Ok Danny Butley.....for the final time why did you shoot your father?!

(Danny is crying as Julia is crying too)

Danny: I just can't believe he's dead...my father is dead!

Julia: You better believe he's dead! You shot him in the bloody chest, what did you expect?! He wouldn't survive, you stupid stupid boy! I wish i never gave birth to you!

Police: Ok Mrs Butley..i think you should leave...your son needs to be accompanied by an adult...we will bring your family solicitor in...

Julia: No bloody way! The family solicitor shouldn't bother protecting Danny! He did wrong! Lock him up and throw away the key!

(Julia leaves the interview room)

Danny: I want the solicitor...

Police: Interview terminated at 11:00am...

(An hour later. The police turn the interview tape back on and continue to interview Danny)

Police: Ok Danny is now joined by his solicitor who is now present in the room..alongside his mother Julia...

Danny: I am taking my solicitor's advice..i am going to tell you everything...everything that happened!

Police: Now we're getting somewhere...

Danny: I didn't mean to shoot my father....i want you to know that before i start!

Julia: You pulled the trigger!

Police: Please Mrs Butley..we need you to keep quiet throughout the duration of the interview...

(Danny starts to cry)

Julia: Oh here comes the 'ruddy waterworks! :rolleyes:

Danny: I shot my father because i was angry...he hit me..before i shot him, he said he wish i wasn't born, he wanted rid of me so he came up with the plan to put me into a boarding school...i didn't want that! I was so angry...i wanted to do something about it! :angry:

Police: So your anger got the better of you and you decided to take revenge by murdering your own father?

Julia: Your father would never hit you, never! He wasn't like that!

Danny: You didn't know what he was really like mum! He turned violent when he wanted to but you would be too busy turning the other cheek to even notice!

Police: Please continue Danny...

Danny: I didn't mean for it to go as far as it would...i just wanted to frighten my family with a gun, blackmail them into not sending me to boarding school but my father tried to take the gun off me and i freaked out and i shot him! I am not making this up! You've got to believe me! You've got too, i never meant to kill my own father, i loved him, despite what he did! :(

Police: Where did you get the gun from Danny?

Danny: The man who owns Hinston High nightclub...Andy Connel...i had to pay him money for the gun in return...

Police: Ok thanks for your cooperation...interview terminated at 12:30pm...

(The police leave the room with Danny in handcuffs. Julia leaves the interview room but Danny stops her as she is about to go)

Danny: Mum! You've got to believe me! I never meant to kill dad!

Julia: I'm not your mum! And Ben wasn't your dad!

(Julia walks away as Danny starts crying as he is being held in handcuffs)

DaVeyWaVey
06-09-2006, 22:12
Scene 3- The Hospital- Afternoon

(Greg is keeping a bedside vigil at Chloe's side. Kat enters with a bunch of flowers and some grapes. She sits by Greg)

Kat: How's she doing?

Greg: The doctor says she's stable...they're still running some tests on her though..

Kat: I hope she pulls through, i really do! She's my bestest friend and i would never want any harm to come to her!

Greg: Well let's hope together....she is the love of my life Kat, the first woman i have ever properly loved...and well this accident has helped me realise that...

Kat: Well she told me she might be in love with you too...

Greg: I hope she feels the same way as me then...

Kat: I heard that your car brakes got tampered with?

Greg: The police are checking for evidence as we speak...they should be letting me know very soon...

Kat: Well if it's true, that's awful! Who would wanna tamper your car brakes and try and split up some young lovebirds like you and Chlo!?

Greg: I really don't know...but i feel like someone might be out to get me...

Kat: Aww, i'm sure they're not and besides if Chloe don't pull through, you still got me...if anyone is out to get you, i will protect you...

(Kat gets closer to Greg and she leans in for a kiss but he rejects her)

Greg: Hey...hey! What the hell do you think your doing?! Your best friend is on death's door and your trying it on with me! Show some respect!

Kat: I'm sorry..i thought that's what you wanted...

Greg: Well you obviously misread the signals, Chloe is the girl i want!

Kat: I know that...and i'm sorry! That was just stupid of me!

Greg: Well let's just forget it yeah?

Kat: Yeah...i am going to get a coffee...you want one?

Greg: No thanks.

(Kat leaves Chloe's bedside and she leaves the room with a smug smile on her face)

DaVeyWaVey
07-09-2006, 20:48
Scene 4- The Woods House- Afternoon

(Tom suddenly enters through the front door)

Tom: Oi Max!

(Tom enters the living room and sees Max is lying on the sofa switching between channels on the tv, clearly ignoring the baby who is playing with some toys on the floor)

Tom: What do you think your doing?! I need help at the garage...and your lounging around on the sofa, i got a queue of cars waiting to be fixed!

Max: Sorry but i got to take responsibility now, i got my daughter to look after...remember! :rolleyes:

Tom: It doesn't seem like your looking after your daughter to me! Your just watching tv and pretending she's not there! :rolleyes:

Max: She's happy!

Tom: But your not showing much responsibility are you?! This is your daughter Max, she needs your love and support!

Max: That's why i am not helping out at the garage today, ok!

Tom: Your not loving or supporting your daughter though are you?!

Max: Give it a rest Tom! I don't even know if she is my daughter...i am trying to get over the shock of having a baby in my life! It's hard for me you know?!

Tom: Stop trying to get the sympathy vote! If your not gonna help me at the garage..then do something with your daughter..take her to the park or something...don't just ignore her!

Max: Well if your the expert on babies, then why don't you stay here and i will go and take over at the garage...you seem to know what you're talking about!

(Max gets up from the sofa in a rage and gets his shoes on and heads for the front door. Tom shouts to Max)

Tom: Max, wait!

(Max slams the front door and heads over to the garage leaving Tom with the baby)

Bryan
07-09-2006, 20:54
dramatic scenes we have been seeing so far Dave, a great season, keep up the great work, loving the great work!!!

Xx-Vicky-xX
07-09-2006, 21:19
Ohhh that is fab Dave cant wait to ind out if Tom will look after the baby

DaVeyWaVey
07-09-2006, 22:23
Scene 5- The Butleys House- Evening

(Marianne, Sally and Julia are all grieving following Ben's death. Marianne is crying in her room. Sally is in the bathroom washing her face trying to come to terms with what has happened. She hears Marianne crying and enters her room. She sees Marianne sitting on her bed crying into a teddybear. Sally starts crying too..she sits next to Marianne and gives her a hug)

Sally: Everything's gonna be ok Marianne, everything is going to be alright.

Marianne: Dad gave me this teddybear for my 5th birthday...i called the teddy Ben...

(Marianne cries into her teddy. Sally wipes a tear from her eye as she looks out of Marianne's bedroom window. She looks out to their back garden where she sees that Julia has lit a fire and is throwing Ben's possessions into the flames)

Sally: Jesus Christ!

(Sally rushes down the stairs and into the back garden)

Sally: Mum! What the hell do you think your playing at?!

Julia: What do you think!? Ben's gone...so his possessions are going too!

(Sally screams as Julia chucks Ben's possessions on the fire)

Sally: Nooo! Noo! No!

(Sally grabs hold of Julia and tries to wrestle Ben's possessions off Julia but Julia pushes her to the ground as she chucks the rest of Ben's possessions on the fire. Sally breaks down crying unable to control the tears)

Julia: Face it Sal! Daddy's gone...and he's not coming back...thanks to my scumbag of a son!

Sally: How could you do it?! How could you get rid of Ben's possessions like that?!

Julia: He's gone....his possessions don't mean anything!

(Julia stares at the fire as Ben's possessions burn. We see Sally crying on the ground as she stares at the fire. Marianne is still sobbing into her teddybear in her bedroom, no one can control their tears)

DaVeyWaVey
07-09-2006, 22:45
Scene 6- The Hospital- Evening

(Nina is by Mike's bedside holding his hand. Mike suddenly starts opening his eyes and coming round)

Nina: Oh my gosh! Mike...Mike?

(Mike looks at Nina and starts speaking in a weak voice)

Mike: Nin...Nina...is that you?

Nina: Oh my god, he's awake! Mike, you're awake! Yeah sweetheart it's me...you were in an accident..you hit your head badly...

Mike: I feel kinda weird...

Nina: The doctor said it might take a while for your memory to return...but i am here for you Mike...i love you...

Mike: I love you too Nina...i love you too!

(The doctor enters the room)

Doctor: The police are here to see you...they want to question you on Mike's accident...

Nina: Mike's awake now! My husband is awake!

(Nina smiles gleefully)

Doctor: Well he can answer police questions too...

Nina: Mike, you slipped over some spilt beer in the pub! Ok...you slipped over some spilt beer in the pub!

(The police enter)

Police: Mrs Dobson...Mr Dobson...i need you two to answer a few questions...

Xx-Vicky-xX
08-09-2006, 07:35
Brillant Dave, love the stuff with Julia and co, cant wait to read more.

Jojo
08-09-2006, 14:24
OMG - I can't believe she burnt everything so quickly!!!

Ooo will Mike remember what really happened, without Nina trying to coerce him.

Great stuff Dave!

DaVeyWaVey
08-09-2006, 20:54
Scene 7- The Hospital- Evening

(Nina and Mike are facing the police as they begin to question them)

Police: Mr Dobson...do you feel that you are fit enough to answer our questions?

Mike: Yes i'm perfectly able...i don't remember very much though...

Police: We feel that this accident was very suspicious and may have not been an accident....

Nina: What are you suggesting?!

Police: That this was no accident...the head wounds to Mr Dobson were very severe...

(Nina gives the police a look)

Police: What's wrong Mrs Dobson? Guilty conscience?! Hiding something we should know?...

Nina: No of course i'm not but i know what happened...we locked up the pub and started clearing the beer glasses and Mike slipped over some spilt beer...he hit his head on a pub table before hitting the floor...he fell unconscious and i called an ambulance...isn't that right Mike?

Police: I'm sure Mr Dobson can speak for himself...i don't want you planting any ideas in his head!

Mike: That's what happened!

Police: But i thought you couldn't remember anything that happened, Mr Dobson?!

Mike: Well when Nina explained what happened, all the memories came flooding back!

(Mike lets out a friendly laugh. The police mutter under their breath)

Police: Whatever you say...

Police: We will stay in touch Mr Dobson...

(The police leave the hospital room and Nina lets out a sigh of relief)

Mike: What was all that about? Why were you telling me what to say?!

Nina: I've done something Mike...i've done a terrible crime...

(Nina starts sobbing into her hands)

Mike: What? What is it?!

Nina: Mike...i've got a confession to make!

(Mike looks at Nina...intrigued over what she has to say)

Xx-Vicky-xX
08-09-2006, 21:06
Please tell me you aint stopping there tonight, great stuff cant wait to read more :)

DaVeyWaVey
08-09-2006, 22:24
Scene 8- The Hospital- Evening

(Greg is by Chloe's bedside with Kat by his side. The police suddenly walk in. Greg looks at them curiously)

Greg: What is it? What are you here for?

Police: We accessed the car you were driving that crashed...and we can reveal that the crash was no accident..someone purposely tampered with the car brakes..

Greg: Jesus Christ! This was all done on purpose..this crash was no accident!

Police: That's correct...

(Greg gets up from his chair)

Greg: Someone was trying to kill me? Someone was trying...i just...i just can't believe it!

Kat: Who would do such an awful thing?!

Police: We're not sure...

Greg: Well you should be sure! Your meant to be police officers for christ sake! You should know who did this!

Police: It's not as simple as that...there are no fingerprints on the car brakes, all we can tell is that the brakes were tampered with, they obviously used gloves!

Greg: Argh..well..well done! Even i knew that...and i'm not a bloody police officer! :rolleyes:

Kat: Just calm down Greg...

(Kat puts her hand on Greg's arm but he pulls away and he starts shouting)

Greg: Calm down? How can i calm down?! Someone tried to kill me and my girlfriend?!

(Greg points to the police officers, clearly angry)

Greg: If your not going to find out who tampered with my car brakes, i will! And i will make sure they will damn well bloody pay!

(Greg storms out in a rage as Kat looks on feeling guilty over what she's done)

DaVeyWaVey
08-09-2006, 22:45
Episode 4

Scene 1- The Cafe- Night

(Felicity is sitting down watching tv, Pat walks into the living room and puts her feet up on the sofa)

Pat: Golly gosh! We were rushed off our feet today!

Felicity: I know, talk about a busy day!

Pat: Don't worry, we will be having an extra pair of hands tomorrow!

Felicity: Oh yeah?

Pat: Yeah...she's had experience before apparently...

Felicity: You sound like you haven't even met her yet!

(Felicity giggles)

Pat: I haven't...

Felicity: You what?! You mean you employed someone without an interview?! A complete stranger who you haven't even met before!

Pat: We've gotta take a chance Flis! I mean, who else round here could i employ for the job?

Felicity: You could have atleast advertised! :rolleyes:

Pat: We don't have time for advertising! The cafe is a business and a business keeps working all the time..we didn't have time to hang about...she's had previous waitressing experience before so i trust her...

Felicity: Just like that?!

Pat: Just like that! I mean imagine if i rejected this person...we would be rushed off our feet every day...desperate to put our feet up! We needed new employees as soon as possible!

Felicity: Well i hope you made the right choice!

Pat: I'm confident i have!

(Pat smiles)

Xx-Vicky-xX
08-09-2006, 23:03
Fab stuff again Dave, I hope Greg finds out who messed with the brakes soon, cant wait to read more

Jojo
09-09-2006, 10:35
Ooo great stuff again Dave - I hope that guilty look stays on Kats face and the smug look has permanently gone. Here's hoping Chloe wakes up and is fine just to make Kat pay even more for what she did!

Tannie
09-09-2006, 12:16
i have just read that all the way through and it is brilliant i will deffinatley be reading it you are a really good writer dave wow i do hope chloe wake's up just to make Kat feel even more guilty then she is, how could she do that to her best friend when she knew she was happy? lol more soon please x

DaVeyWaVey
09-09-2006, 17:23
Scene 2- The Burdecks House- Night

(George is watching tv, Liz walks in feeling guilty for herself)

George: Mum...what's up? You've had that blank face all day!

Liz: I think something awful has happened George....over in the Butley household..i mean i don't mean to stick my nose in or anything..but i heard a gunshot last night and the police and ambulance arrived...i know something awful has happened!

George: Well if something has happened, it was probably down to Danny....he put me in this wheelchair for life...he's probably hurt somebody else now too!

Liz: Yeah that silly kid needs to be taught a lesson! And i was gonna teach the Butley family a lesson last night but someone beat me to it...

George: Don't tell me you were going to do something really stupid?

Liz: I was gonna do something that i would have regretted but it never happened so you can stay calm...

George: Oh good....i hope Sally's ok...

Liz: Sally?! She is Danny's sister...she has the scum's blood in her! Danny's behaviour runs in that family!

George: You don't even know them properly and i can assure you that Sally has a heart of gold...she's so nice and so kind...

Liz: Don't go all soft! They're all the same, the lot of 'em!

George: I might go round and see Sally in a bit...see if she's ok...

Liz: That might not be such a good idea...

George: You can't stop me trying to see her! She might need some comfort right now!

Liz: And she will get that from her family! We don't even know the full story...

George: There was a gunshot...the police and ambulance arrived...it kinda tells you something!

Liz: Just be careful yeah.....i don't want that family hurting you again!

George: Oh mum...i will be fine...i am going to bed anyway..i will go over tomorrow morning....

Liz: Ok..i guess that's the sign for me to go upstairs!..are you sure your comfortable sleeping down here on the sofa?

George: I'm fine mum...let's face it, you could never get that wheelchair upstairs with me in it..could you?!

Liz: Ok...let me help you get into bed then...

(Liz pulls George up from his wheelchair and carries him to the sofa where she lays him down on the sofa.....)

Liz: I will go and get your bedsheets now...

(Liz smiles at George as she leaves the room. George smiles back)

Xx-Vicky-xX
09-09-2006, 19:36
Fab writting ah so this is the woman who turned back the night Ben died before Danny got there, i did wonder

DaVeyWaVey
09-09-2006, 20:29
Scene 3- The Weatherbys House- Night

(Alicia, Sam and Christina are all sitting down in the living room watching tv, while Jack is reading the nightly Hinston newspaper. Jack puts the newspaper down and starts speaking to the rest of his family)

Jack: Reading the newspaper reminded me...

(Alicia, Sam and Christina look confused)

Alicia: Reminded you of what love?

Jack: Well earlier, i heard a commotion outside and you would never guess what?!

Christina: Oooh..this sounds intriguing...what was it?

Jack: I looked outside the window and i seen the Butleys back garden and i saw Julia burning Ben's stuff! Well i swear it was his stuff anyway...i noticed his favourite t shirt being chucked into the flames!

Christina: Christ! You don't think Ben left her did you?!

Alicia: No something else might have happened....last night i saw the ambulance outside and the police..something was going on! Maybe it had something to do with that?!

Christina: Maybe we should just pop next door and find out!

Sam: Christina..don't be so stupid! We can't just go round there and poke our noses in! It's their business not ours...we should respect that!

Christina: Nothing stays personal around here for long!

Sam: I did hear a commotion last night too in a matter of fact, it was like a small bang that i could just make it out...like a gunshot or something...

Alicia: I didn't hear it!

Sam: Well i must have been imagining it then...i swear i heard something!

Alicia: Ben couldn't have done the dirty on Julia though could he?! He doesn't seem the type!

Jack: God knows why she was burning his stuff!

Christina: Well there's only one way to find out...just go round and see what's happening...

Alicia: Don't be so selfish! Something serious could have happened that we don't yet know about...

Christina: But all the residents of Hinston High will be knowing about it soon!

Alicia: Maybe i should go round there anyway...not to poke my nose in or anything...just to check everything is ok...after all, Julia is my friend..

Jack: And Ben is my friend too!

Sam: Danny might have got in trouble or something with the police or he might have had an accident, we all know how bad Danny's behaviour is!

Alicia: Yeah...something has happened and i'm worried...i will go round tomorrow...check that everything is ok...

DaVeyWaVey
09-09-2006, 21:46
Scene 4- The Hospital- Morning

(Greg is still by Chloe's bedside keeping a bedside vigil, he hasn't slept all night, he has been waiting for Chloe to regain consciousness following the car crash. Kat suddenly walks in with some flowers in her hand)

Kat: Morning!

Greg: Oh morning...your looking happy with yourself...

Kat: Yeah well, these flowers are for you...

(Kat hands the flowers to Greg and kisses him on the cheek)

Greg: For me!? I thought they would be for Chloe for when she wakes up...

(Kat sits next to Greg)

Kat: Let's face it Greg...Chloe may never wake up, it's not looking good, i mean look at her...she's been lying unconscious with these machines around her for nearly 2 days now!

Greg: Kat, she's gonna be just fine! Why can't you see that?!

Kat: Calm down Greg...it's ok..i'm here for you...i gave you these flowers because it's so sweet over how brave you're being..

(Kat puts her hand on Greg's. Greg pulls his hand away. Greg loses it and starts shouting)

Greg: Just get lost will you?! I am sick of you swanning about here...having negative thoughts and sharing them with me! Chloe is gonna be just fine, she's gonna pull through this, i know it! Why can't you just realise it?!

Kat: Greg, stop shouting! Your scaring me!

Greg: Your best friend is fighting for her life and you come in here smiling to yourself...have a heart!

Kat: I've got one! I genuinely care for Chloe...i didn't want any of this to happen, i didn't want my best friend fighting for her life, this is hard for me...i've known her for years, you've known her five minutes!

Greg: You just don't act like you care that's all...

Kat: Well i do care!

(Greg suddenly looks round at Chloe. Chloe is lying in her hospital bed, she starts moving her hand and her eyes start to open. Greg's face of sadness turns to happiness)

Greg: Oh my god...Chloe! Chloe, you've come round!

(Kat forces on a smile before replying)

Kat: Yeah..great, Chloe's back with us!

Xx-Vicky-xX
10-09-2006, 07:23
:angry: i do not like Kat at all, fab writting though

Jojo
10-09-2006, 11:02
Ooo yay Chloe's waking up - lets hope shes going to make a full recovery - and lets doubly hope Kat is found out!

DaVeyWaVey
10-09-2006, 12:18
Scene 5- The Butleys House- Morning

(Alicia knocks on the front door of the Butley household. Sally answers the door, she has bags under her eyes, a dressing gown on and you can clearly see that she's been crying)

Alicia: Oh hi Sal..is your mum in?

Sally: She's asleep..what do you want?

Alicia: I was just knocking to see if everything was ok...we heard a commotion a few days ago that's all...

Sally: Why can't people just mind their own bloody business?! We're fine!

Alicia: You don't look it!

Sally: Thanks.. :rolleyes:

Alicia: Look what's wrong? I want to help...

Sally: Just get lost will you?! Just leave us alone!

(Sally pushes Alicia violently to the ground)

Sally: Now mind your own business!

Alicia: There's something up...we're meant to be neighbours...we're meant to be friends!

Sally: Well it's a family matter alright!?

Alicia: It clearly looks like you've been crying and you look like you haven't slept for days!

(Sally screams)

Sally: My father's dead! Ben's dead! Danny killed him! :crying:

(Sally breaks down into tears on the doorstep. Alicia is shocked over Sally's outburst but she sits down on the doorstep and comforts her. Marianne heard Sally's screaming and rushes down the stairs to see Alicia comforting Sally on the doorstep)

Marianne: What are you doing here?

Alicia: I...i..i'm so sorry! I can't believe it! :eek:

Marianne: Just leave now! We're coping with this as a family, we don't need your sympathy! Just go!

(Alicia gets up from the doorstep and leaves the Butleys front garden shocked and devastated over hearing the news of Ben's death. She looks back and sees Marianne comforting Sally on the doorstep. She walks away and back to her house next door)

Xx-Vicky-xX
10-09-2006, 17:05
Great stuff Dave totally believe this lot well done

DaVeyWaVey
10-09-2006, 18:43
Scene 6- The Cafe- Morning

(The cafe has opened up for the morning. There are people drinking coffees and talking to each other. We see Pat and Felicity behind the counter waiting angrily for the new waitress's arrival)

Pat: I thought she would have arrived by now...

Felicity: Are you sure she is too be trusted?!

Pat: Yeah i'm sure...i just don't expect her to be late on her first day!

Felicity: Well she obviously isn't to be trusted then! :rolleyes:

Pat: Oh Flic! Don't be so negative and uptight! You could make a new friend out of this new arrival!

Felicity: Yeah right! :rolleyes:

(Suddenly in walks a young girl in her 20s dressed in a sparkly outfit, with a short skirt on. We see that she is wearing high heels and she is carrying a very stylish but expensive handbag. She walks up to the counter and we can hear the clicking of her high heels)

Felicity: Yes what can i get you?

Megan: Oh you clearly don't understand...i start work here today..i am the new waitress here, Megan Blatchley..

Pat: Oh finally you arrived...

Felicity: We thought you wouldn't arrive until the next solar eclipse!

(Megan sneers at Felicity)

Megan: Your not funny...your clearly just another boring employee who clearly hasn't got elegance or style!

Pat: That's my daughter your talking about!

Megan: Oh...i'm sorry...i didn't know the non-elegance or style ran in the family! :rolleyes:

Felicity: You better watch your mouth!

Megan: Sorry i don't want to get off on the wrong foot or anything....you know what the traffic gets like...that's why i was late...

Felicity: Yeah...yeah...that's just a common excuse..i told you mum, this new employee wasn't to be trusted!

Megan: I've only been here 2 minutes and i have a valid reason for my lateness!

Pat: I appreciate your reason Megan.....

Megan: And i'm sorry for the outburst...i just feel that the cafe's uniform has no style..

Pat: Well you certainly didn't turn up ready to work in a cafe...i mean look at your clothes!

Megan: I only wanted to attract the customers...i thought you would like a bit of sparkle in this place...clearly not...

(Megan begins to walk away until Pat shouts)

Pat: Megan, wait!

(Megan smiles as she turns round)

Pat: Don't go! We need a new employee desperately..i will change the cafe uniform soon if your not happy with it, to something a bit more classy...

Megan: That's the spirit!..now if you would excuse me....

(Megan pushes past Felicity who clearly isn't impressed)

big bro fan
10-09-2006, 18:45
Looking good as always dave cant wait for the next bit.

Xx-Vicky-xX
10-09-2006, 19:01
Great part Dave already dislike Megan, you wasnt wrong when you said she was the bitch of your soap was you lol, great writting

DaVeyWaVey
10-09-2006, 20:56
Scene 7- Hinston Park- Noon

(Sally is swinging on a swing slowly with a tissue in her hand, wiping the tears from her eyes as she continues to cry. Suddenly we see George pushing himself in his wheelchair to the park. He stops right by Sally)

George: I thought you might be here...

Sally: How did you guess?

George: Well i knocked at your door but no one answered..so i thought you might be here...

(Sally starts crying even more)

George: Ey! Ey! What's all the crying for? What's wrong?

Sally: You really don't need to know...you've got enough troubles of your own, like coping with that wheelchair for a start!

George: I already have troubles, not just over being disabled..but over you too, i hate seeing you upset...

Sally: Oh George..you don't need to worry about me...

George: I can't help it...

Sally: Talking to you won't bring my father back!

George: Your father?! What are you talking about?!

(Sally continues to cry)

Sally: I might as well tell you...i mean the whole of Hinston High will know about it soon...my father is dead, George!

George: Jesus! What...what happened?! :eek:

Sally: My brother murdered him! Danny murdered him! He pulled the trigger on our own father...it's unforgivable!

(George puts his arm around Sally)

George: Oh my god! :eek: I can't believe it... i never knew Danny would be capable!

Sally: Well he pushed you down a waterfall and nearly killed you didn't he!

George: Yeah...well...i just can't get over it! Your father seemed such a nice man as well...do you know where Danny got the gun from?!

Sally: God knows! It made me realise how less i know of my own brother!

George: But why kill your father?! He was his own flesh and blood!

Sally: How am i meant to bloody know?! You should be asking Danny these questions, not me!

(There's an uneasy pause)

Sally: Danny's in a Offenders institute..he's been charged with murder awaiting trial...as far as i know, i haven't got a brother anymore, i will never forgive him...none of us will!

(Sally breaks down, even George starts feeling tearful)

George: I will always be here for you Sal, whenever you need to talk...you know that don't you?!

(Sally turns to George)

Sally: Oh George, your so sweet!

(George and Sally smile at each other, gazing into each other's eyes. They lean in and both share a tender kiss)

Bryan
10-09-2006, 20:59
a new romance blossoms... united in greif, wonder if its the real thing??? :hmm:

must add that I'm loving the new bitch Megan, what makes me laugh is shes working as a cafe waitress, but she thinks shes a cut above!!!

I predict a bitch fight between her and Felicity, lets hope she pours a pot of baked beans on her! Imagine that! haha!

Xx-Vicky-xX
10-09-2006, 22:11
Great dave, that was so cute, love George

DaVeyWaVey
11-09-2006, 21:26
Scene 8- The Garage- Afternoon

(Max is working on a car at the garage. Tom suddenly walks in holding baby Imelda in the basket that she arrived in. Max sees Tom)

Max: What do you want?

Tom: I want you to communicate with your child!

Max: Argh, not this again! Can't you just give me a break?!

Tom: You know we need to buy a pram for this baby...we just can't keep carrying her round in this basket like some package!

Max: I don't know why you're even bothered! I mean you should be helping me out at the garage, we've got loads of cars to work on!

Tom: Greg will be back in no time...i was wondering i could take over from here if you like, so you can take your baby daughter to the park or something....

Max: Christ Tom! I am going to lose the will to live if you don't shut up about that stupid baby! As far as i'm concerned, she's not my baby daughter!

Tom: And how would you know!?

Max: And how would we know if she is my child?! Someone could have just randomly dumped this baby on our doorstep!

Tom: And how convenient would that be! Eh?! :rolleyes: This baby needs some love Max! Some love and support...from her father!

Max: I can't be her father Tom! I don't feel anything for her, i don't feel like i love her!

Tom: Well you haven't actually tried your hardest to bond with her have you?!

Max: I haven't had time...we are really busy at the garage..you know that!

Tom: It's just an excuse Max! Your hiding away from the truth! It's about time that you took some responsibility for your own child!

Max: But she is just a baby that turned up on our doorstep one night with no explanation...why should i take any responsibility eh?!

Tom: The note left with the baby said you were the father!

Max: And you believe a note written by some stranger over your own brother do you!?

Tom: It's about time we tracked down this baby's mother...this is getting more and more complicated by the minute!

Max: If you track her down Tom, it would answer many questions that we are wondering right now! We would actually find out if i was the father of this child or not!

Tom: Your right...we've got to track down this baby's mother as soon as possible..so we can find out the truth...before this gets more complicated than it already is!

Xx-Vicky-xX
11-09-2006, 21:40
Fabulous writting again Dave keep going

DaVeyWaVey
11-09-2006, 21:49
Episode 5

Scene 1- The Pub- Afternoon

(Mike has been discharged from hospital and we see him and Nina getting out of a taxi right outside the pub. They go inside the pub and prepare to get ready to open up the pub)

Mike: Right..i spose it's gonna be business as usual again now i'm back!

(Mike laughs to himself before changing the closed sign to open)

Nina: No Mike!

Mike: What?

Nina: I've got to tell you something...something important...change the pub sign to closed...

(Mike does this before turning to Nina looking worried)

Mike: What love? What is it?!

Nina: I've done something awful...terribly awful...and i can't bear to keep it a secret for much longer!

(Nina starts crying before Mike guides her to sit down)

Mike: What are you talking about?! It can't be that bad surely?

Nina: I might as well tell you the truth before your memory does..

Mike: Nina...your really worrying me now, i hate seeing you cry! Tell me the truth!

Nina: It's surrounding the night of your accident...

Mike: Is this to do with your confession you were gonna tell me earlier at the hospital?!

Nina: Yeah..i am gonna confess now...when we first got married, we promised no secrets or lies in our marriage and i am gonna keep that promise so that's why i am telling you the truth...

Mike: Go on...

Nina: Remember Phil?!

Mike: Phil?

Nina: We took him in...we let him live here before your accident?!

(Mike thinks for a moment before looking in shock)

Mike: Oh my god! :eek: I remember him now! :eek: He didn't do anything to you did he?! If he hurt you, i would kill him!

Nina: I already did...

Mike: You what?! :eek:

Nina: It's the opposite way round Mike! Phil hurt you...and i killed him! I can't bear hiding the truth for much longer! This is eating me up inside, i had to tell you!

Mike: Jesus Christ! :eek:

(Nina starts shouting in vain)

Nina: What happened to you was no accident! He was gonna kill you Mike! Phil was going to kill you!

Mike: But you killed him?! :eek: You can't have..you can't have!

Nina: I did...i stabbed him with our kitchen knife...i paniced! You've got to understand my intentions Mike! I did it for love!

Mike: I am living with a murderer! :eek: I honestly thought i knew the woman i married! Clearly not...

(Mike stands up and looks at Nina, disgusted over her confession. He opens the pub door)

Nina: Mike, wait! I love you!

Mike: Your a killer! I can't get over that! I need time...i want to be left alone, to clear my head...

(Mike leaves the pub and slams the door behind him. Nina brushes her hands over her hair before starting to cry)

Xx-Vicky-xX
11-09-2006, 22:19
Fab Dave great stuff fab reaction from Mike

DaVeyWaVey
11-09-2006, 22:32
Scene 2- The Hospital- Evening

(Greg is by Chloe's bedside looking chirpy and happy after Chloe regained consciousness. Chloe is asleep in her hospital bed. Kat suddenly walks in)

Kat: You've got a visitor Greg!

(Tom walks in with some grapes and a bunch of flowers. Kat exits)

Tom: Hi..sorry i didn't get round to visiting you and Chloe before...

Greg: It's ok..i understand that you are busy with the garage and all...

Tom: Yeah well in fact, me and Max have a few troubles of our own at the moment...

Greg: Oh nothing too serious i hope!

Tom: No, nothing compared to what you and Chloe have been through!

Greg: I am just so glad that Chloe is alright, the doctors said she should make a full recovery..Chloe is the first woman who i have properly loved, i feel like i want to spend the rest of my lifetime with her! I love her so much!

Tom: I am sure she loves you too mate.

Greg: I hope so, i really hope she feels the same way as i do...

Tom: Do the police know why the car crash happened?

Greg: They said someone tampered with the car brakes...basically someone was out to get us, the car crash was planned to happen on purpose!

Tom: What?! No way! The police must have got it wrong! Who would want to tamper with your car brakes?! No one has a grudge against you or Chloe!

Greg: That's what i don't understand.....but i promise you..i am gonna find out who tampered with those car brakes, and once i find out who it was, they're gonna pay...big time!

Tom: Well hopefully the police will capture the culprit!

Greg: I hope so...they're still investigating...

(There's a pause)

Greg: Anyway, i have a surprise in store for Chloe when she wakes up...

Tom: Oh yeah! Something romantic i guess!?

Greg: Well you promise to keep it a secret won't you!?

Tom: Yeah i won't breathe a word! I promise!

Greg: Thanks. Well basically this car crash made me realise how much i love Chloe...and if she died, i realised i wouldn't have been able to cope without her, i want to spend the rest of my life with Chloe...i love her so much and that's why i brought an engagement ring this afternoon, i am going to ask Chloe if she will marry me!

(Greg looks delighted and so does Tom)

Xx-Vicky-xX
12-09-2006, 07:30
Thats fab Dave i hope she says yes when he asks her :wub:

Jojo
12-09-2006, 12:16
I'd love to be a fly on the wall when Kat finds out, especially when Chloe says yes (she will won't she?!).

Great stuff again - will Greg and Tom find the mum.... :hmm:

DaVeyWaVey
12-09-2006, 20:50
Scene 3- Hinston High- Night

(Julia is heading to the pub to go for a drink. Sally and Marianne are chasing behind trying to stop her)

Sally: Mum! Wait!

Julia: Sal..i am only going for a drink at the pub! There's no harm in that is there?!

Marianne: Mum! Please! Let's just go back home yeah!?

Julia: No i want a drink! I haven't been to the pub in ages...and Ben always liked the pub...it was his tradition to drink there every night...he would have wanted me to carry it on!

Marianne: Mum...you can't carry on like this! We've gotta get through this together...we've got to deal with it together...drink won't help that!

(Julia starts shouting in the street...the Hinston residents turn round and listen in on the shouting that is taking place)

Julia: Well maybe i don't want to deal with it together! Maybe i want to deal with this on my own!

Sally: You can't hide your grief behind drink mum, drink won't make you forget what has happened over the past few days! We've got to face facts, dad is dead!

(The Hinston residents have overheard and all their jaws drop in shock. Julia turns to see all the Hinston residents staring at her sympathetically. Julia starts to cry)

Julia: Yep that's right everyone! Ben is dead! And the bonus is, my own son killed him! He pulled the trigger on his own father! :crying:

(Marianne starts screaming)

Marianne: Stop it Mum! Just stop it! :crying:

(Marianne collapses in the street in tears..Sally picks her up from the ground and comforts her)

Julia: You all now know the truth! Have a nice time gossiping about it!

(Julia turns to Sally and Marianne who are both crying)

Julia: Come on, we're going home!

(Julia walks away from the pub and catches up with Sally and Marianne as they head back to their home. The residents of Hinston look. They all have a tear in their eye over the news they have just heard)

Xx-Vicky-xX
12-09-2006, 20:55
Ohhhhhh i like that i absolutely love this lot they have had so great scenes well done Dave

DaVeyWaVey
12-09-2006, 21:41
Scene 4- The Hospital- Night

(Greg is about to leave the hospital when Kat shouts his name from the hospital entrance)

Kat: Greg!

(Greg turns round to see Kat running up to him)

Kat: Where are you off too?

Greg: Home...

Kat: Your not staying here with Chlo?

Greg: She's ok now...she's woke up and the doctors say she will make a full recovery..i just want to go back to Hinston High and get a goodnight's sleep....

Kat: You don't mind if i walk with you do you?!

Greg: Why would I?...just don't go trying it on with me again alright?!

Kat: Yeah...look, i'm sorry about that! I know where i stand now..i just want to start a clean slate...

Greg: Oh good...i'm glad you understand the situation. :) Anyway, i want to tell you something, a bit of an announcement if you like...

Kat: Oh yeah?! I'm intrigued...

Greg: I brought an engagement ring...i am going to ask Chloe if she will marry me!

(Kat's smile turns to anger)

Kat: You what?! Why are you gonna ask her that for?!

Greg: I love her Kat! I've never felt this way about another woman before, i want to spend the rest of my life with her...it just feels right!

Kat: How do you know?!...one year down the line will you feel the same way?!

(Greg thinks for a moment)

Greg: I don't know....yes i suppose...i suppose i will!

Kat: You don't sound convincing...i don't want you or Chloe making the biggest mistake of your lives! I am just looking out for both of you...and how do you know if Chloe feels the same way?! She could feel differently to you...i know what she's like with other men...

Greg: What do you mean?!

Kat: Well she never clings onto one man for too long, she likes to flirt...she's bedded a club full of men i bet!

Greg: Nah...Chloe don't seem like that!

Kat: I spose she's got more mature now...she might just not be ready for the commitment to a marriage yet....

Greg: Yeah but i love her...

Kat: You've got to think of Chloe's feelings too..your going into deep, you've only been going out a few weeks! I would rethink your decision Greg...your moving things too quickly!

Greg: You know...you might be right, the relationship is moving too quickly, i might not propose to Chloe after all, it's a bit too early...

Kat: Yep i would leave it for a while...

Greg: Your right, i might just do that!

(Kat breathes a sigh of relief and lets out a smile as her and Greg continue to walk back to Hinston High)

Xx-Vicky-xX
12-09-2006, 21:47
I honestly do not like Kat in the slightest, like hell is she thinking about Greg and Chloe, great writting Dave but the sooner Greg susses her out the better

DaVeyWaVey
12-09-2006, 21:53
Scene 5- The Campbells House- Early Morning

(Tanya has woke up, she is sweating all over and is clearly hot and bothered. She gets up from her bed and heads to the bathroom. She turns the bathroom light on and she sees Andy staring right back at her in the face)

Andy: You can't get rid of me that easily, bitch!

(Tanya screams as Andy pushes her to the floor...)

Xx-Vicky-xX
12-09-2006, 22:15
Short but extremly effective, great writting

Jojo
13-09-2006, 11:14
Great stuff again Dave - I can't believe he listened to Kat! Listen to your heart Greg, not Kat!!!! Arrrgghhhh

DaVeyWaVey
13-09-2006, 21:48
Andy: You can't get rid of me that easily, bitch!

(Tanya screams as Andy pushes her to the floor...)

(Suddenly Tanya wakes up and gets up off the bed. She tries to wipe the sweat off her forehead. She looks down to see sweat marks on her bed. She realises that she has just had a nightmare over Andy. She gets up from her bed and enters the kitchen where Lee is sitting on a chair drinking a glass of milk. Tanya turns the light on and sees Lee. She jumps)

Tanya: Lee! You frightened the life out of me!

Lee: Sorry mum...

Tanya: It's ok..i'm just surprised you could drink a glass of milk in the dark!

Lee: I like the dark, the light just blinds me!

Tanya: Anyway what are you doing up? Eh? You should be asleep, you've got school if you hadn't realised! :rolleyes:

Lee: I can't sleep...i keep thinking about dad...and you...

Tanya: Why me?!

Lee: You've been acting strangely over the past few days....going out with no clothes on, jumping out of your skin everywhere you go! There's something wrong, i know there is! I'm not a kid anymore mum, you can tell me!

Tanya: There's nothing up with me Lee! Nothing for you too lose sleep over!

Lee: But mum i'm worried about you!

Tanya: I'm fine, it's dad we should be worrying about! Imagine him now, lying in his prison cell!

Lee: I know...that's why i can't sleep...i keep thinking about dad..wondering if he's coping, wondering if he is ok...and i'm worried your unable to cope without him!

Tanya: Life goes on son...i'm just fine! And well, dad's a fighter! Despite the numerous affairs, i still love him and i am gonna get him out of prison, i will do whatever it takes!

Lee: When are we visiting him again?

Tanya: This Thursday....it may sound a short time to wait to see him...but it feels like a lifetime!

Lee: I know...i just want to see dad now...but i can't! I just want to know that he is ok!

Tanya: We will see him on Thursday Lee...we're gonna get through this and get Luke out of prison..as a family!

(Lee finishes off his glass of milk and leaves the kitchen heading back to bed)

DaVeyWaVey
13-09-2006, 22:04
Scene 6- The Butleys House- Early Morning

(Sally has awoken after hearing a series of noises from the kitchen. She gets out of her bed and heads down the stairs. She enters the kitchen to see Julia with her kitchen overalls on, cleaning out the oven. Sally looks at Julia, shocked)

Sally: Mum, what are you doing?

Julia: What does it look like?! I'm cleaning out the oven...then i am moving onto the cupboards, then checking the knives and forks are in order, then checking all the cups have been cleaned properly, then cleaning out the inside of the microwave...then replacing the mat on the kitchen table....goodness gracious, i have so much to do!

Sally: Mum it's 2am! Why are you doing this now?! Can't it wait until morning!

Julia: This is morning!

Sally: I mean after sunrise!

(Julia turns round and snaps at Sally)

Julia: No! It can't wait til then! This kitchen has been longing for a spring clean! We don't want your dad moaning now do we?!

Sally: Mum, dad's dead!

(Julia ignores what Sally has said)

Julia: Goodnight then Sal..we don't want dad having a go at you tomorrow for having bags under your eyes for school!

Sally: But mum!

Julia: But go to sleep! Never mind me! I'm just doing some housework, nothing out the ordinary! Goodnight!

Sally: Night mum...

(Sally leaves the kitchen as Julia continues to clean out the oven. Sally walks back up the stairs, showing concern over her mum)

Xx-Vicky-xX
13-09-2006, 22:06
Good stuff aain Dave i totally believe Tanya aswell

Bryan
13-09-2006, 22:19
I fear that Julia may be loosing the plot, poor woman, so much has happened to her... :(

DaVeyWaVey
13-09-2006, 22:23
Scene 7- The Pub- Morning

(Nina is making a coffee in the kitchen. Mike enters with his dressing gown still on. He spent the night on the sofa)

Nina: I never heard you come in last night...

(Mike sits down by the kitchen table)

Mike: I told you, i wanted to clear my head...

Nina: You were gone a long time!

Mike: What did you expect?! I just found out my wife is a murderer!

(Nina ignores Mike)

Nina: Wanna coffee?

Mike: Why are you acting like everything is normal Nina!? You've killed someone....don't you feel ashamed?!

(Nina loses her temper and starts shouting at Mike)

Nina: Of course, i'm bloody ashamed! But i had no other choice! I couldn't just stand there...watching Phil bang your head against the ground, i couldn't watch my own husband die!

Mike: So you decided to fight back?!

Nina: Yeah that's right, i fought back...for my husband! I thought he was gonna kill you! I paniced...i did the first thing that came into my head!

Mike: And that was murder him!? Don't just attack him, take a step further...and kill him! Murder another human-being!

Nina: Your not making this easy Mike! I'm trying to explain why i did what i did!

Mike: What you did was a crime! A terrible crime!

Nina: I did it to defend you! You don't know what it was like..you were unconscious...you didn't know what was happening!

Mike: But i know the fact that your a murderer!

(Nina starts crying)

Nina: I can't bare it anymore! I thought you would understand why i did what i did! And i thought if you understood, i could get through this, get over the fact that i killed someone else in self-defence but i can't if you don't support me!

(There's a pause)

Nina: You know what?! I might just go to the police and confess what i did..after all like you said, it's a crime! Murder is a terrible crime and i don't deserve to get away with it! I deserve to be locked up!

Mike: No...wait! Don't be so bloody stupid! If you go to the police, it will be game over for you! What did you do with Phil's body?

Nina: I sent it out with the bins..his body is long gone now!

Mike: You've got rid of the evidence...that's good! Now you just have to act normally in front of the punters, don't let them think anything is wrong..so stop that crying!

Nina: Ok..ok! I thought you weren't supporting me though!

Mike: I'm not...it's gonna take me a long time for me to get over what you did!

(There's a pause)

Mike: I'm going for a shower...

(Mike leaves the kitchen. Nina gets a tissue and wipes the tears from her face, trying to disguise her crying)

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-09-2006, 20:13
Two really great scenes there Dave, poor Julia i feel really sorry for her but you have got her so right, many people act like that well done :)

DaVeyWaVey
14-09-2006, 20:30
Scene 8- The Cafe- Morning

(Megan has just got out of a taxi outside Hinston cafe. She guides the taxi driver to the boot where he assists her with her suitcase. Felicity is outside the cafe changing the closed sign to open. She sees what is happening and walks up to Megan)

Felicity: Your not late today Megan, that certainly makes a change! :rolleyes:

Megan: It's only my second day, i now know what is expected of me!

Felicity: Well you better put more effort into your work today, or you will be out of here like a shot!

Megan: I don't think so...this cafe is desperate for staff....and desperate for glam! Your mum is definetly up for it!

Felicity: My mum doesn't know what she's doing!

Megan: Your mother has a mind of her own!

Felicity: Your taking over my mum's mind! She doesn't want any glam at this cafe...she doesn't wanna change the uniform...my mum's a puppet and your pulling all the strings!

Megan: You've got it all wrong Flic! You've got it all wrong!

Felicity: What are you doing with that suitcase?

Megan: I am moving in of course, if i work at the cafe, i should live there too! You have a spare room i hear!

Felicity: Over my dead body! Your not gonna move in here! I won't let you...my mum won't let you!

Megan: If i spin a sob story though..i'm sure your mum would allow me to move in!

Felicity: No she wouldn't! If you move in, i am gonna make sure you'll move straight back out..and i will make sure you won't come back...ever!

(Megan grabs Felicity by the neck and holds her up against the wall. She takes her high heel off her foot and holds it up to Felicity. Felicity looks terrified)

Megan: You better watch your mouth Felicity or this high heel will end up up your nostril!

Felicity: Just let go of me will you!

(Megan puts her high heel back on her foot and before walking into the cafe, she turns to Felicity)

Megan: I'm glad you know where we stand.

(Megan gives Felicity a smile as she walks into the cafe with her suitcase)

DaVeyWaVey
14-09-2006, 20:53
Episode 6

Scene 1- The Park- Morning

(Sally is sitting on the park bench crying. Alicia walks past and goes up to the park bench and sits by Sally)

Alicia: You alright?

(Sally wipes the tears from her eyes to try and hide away her crying)

Sally: What do you think?!

Alicia: I know...sorry, it was a stupid question...

Sally: Anyway what are you doing here? I never knew adults liked to play at the park!

Alicia: I just wanted a walk and well walking by the park, is kinda the best place...i wanted to get out of the house and just think..without no hassle...why are you here?

Sally: Just thinking...if only things were different, if i could turn the clock back, i could have prevented my father's death!

Alicia: Oh come on, you couldn't have prevented what happened to your father!

Sally: I wish i could! He would still be here now!

(Sally cries and Alicia puts her arm round her)

Sally: I've got to stay strong, i've got to stop this crying!

Alicia: It's ok to cry Sal...you've got to let everything out, grieve for your father, you need time to grieve!

Sally: I am worried about my mum more than most! I got up at about 2am this morning...i went downstairs and i saw my mum doing the housework, she was pretending everything was normal... like dad was still alive...i was trying to make her face facts!

Alicia: You shouldn't worry about that Sal...it's your mum's way of grieving for your father, we all grieve in different ways...and now you have to grieve too!

Sally: She was in a right state though...

Alicia: Have you sorted out funeral arrangements?

Sally: The vicar is coming round tomorrow...we will discuss funeral arrangements with him...i know my dad wanted to be buried...it was one of his wishes...he told me himself!

(Sally begins to cry again)

Alicia: Oh come 'ere!

(Alicia gives Sally a big hug)

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-09-2006, 22:10
Great dave bless sally being all concerned and being all grown up and strong for her family

DaVeyWaVey
14-09-2006, 22:27
Scene 2- The Hospital- Morning

(Chloe is recovering in hospital following waking up after the car crash, Greg is by her bedside)

Greg: I'm so glad you're ok...

Chloe: So am i..

Greg: I thought i was gonna lose you...i really did! The doctor said you were lucky to get through this..

Chloe: I know..i can feel how lucky i am...

Greg: If i lost you Chlo, i realised that i wouldn't be able to cope! Seeing you unconscious with your life hanging on a thread made me realise how much you mean to me...that's why i want to ask you something...

Chloe: Ask me something?! Ask me what?!

Greg: Well i wasn't gonna ask you at first, but i slept on it and thought about it and i really do love you and nothing will change that...

Chloe: Cut the speech Greg! Just spit it out!

(Chloe laughs to herself)

Greg: Well this is the bottom line...

(Greg gets down on one knee and opens up the small box to show an engagement ring)

Greg: Chloe, i love you with all my heart....will you marry me?

(A big broad smile crosses over Chloe's face. She feels proud)

Chloe: Oh Greg..i love you too...and i will Greg! I will marry you!

(Greg jumps up in excitement and Chloe and Greg both hug each other)

Greg: We've got a long happy future ahead of us Chlo!

(Greg and Chloe both smile at each other before sharing a kiss)

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-09-2006, 22:38
Oh my god how cute was that :wub: awww im so glad he asked her and didnt listen to evil Kat, great stuff Dave!! :D

DaVeyWaVey
15-09-2006, 21:45
Scene 3- The Woods House- Noon

(Tom and Max are at home eating their lunch. They have closed the garage for an hour for their lunch break. Tom is holding the baby, feeding her with a bottle of milk. Max is eating a sandwich at the dinner table)

Tom: You know Max...we should think of a name for this baby...

Max: What does it matter?! We're going to find the baby's mother and give the baby back to her, whether she likes it or not!

Tom: Yeah but it could be a while until we find her mother..so while this little baby is with us, we should think of a name for her, to show that we care...

Max: Didn't she arrive here with a name?! :rolleyes:

Tom: No...her mother obviously didn't think of one...

Max: I think the best thing to do is call the police!

Tom: No..no way! What are the police going to do?! They're like muppets round here, they're not to be trusted! We can deal with this situation ourselves without hassle from the police...and maybe even the papers...

Max: Oh come off it...like a baby turning up on our doorstep would make front page news! :rolleyes:

Tom: Well you never know...i just think that we can deal with this situation ourselves, we're responsible adults, we can find this baby's mother ourselves!

Max: Well to be honest Tom, i just can't be bothered! I mean, i don't love this child, i don't feel anything for it, we don't even have proof that this baby is mine!

Tom: But we've discussed this, the same woman that you slept with nine months ago dumped her child on our doorstep..it's highly likely that this baby is yours...

Max: But it could just be a set-up! I can't be a father, i just can't be a father! I feel no love for this baby!

Tom: Well maybe you should show some love for this baby atleast 'til we find her mother eh?!

(Tom is holding the baby but gestures to Max to take the baby off him)

Max: No way! No way! I am not touching that baby!

Tom: But she's your daughter Max!

Max: No she's not! I don't want to be a father! Just get that baby out of my sight Tom, you better find the baby's mother fast!

Tom: Me?! We've got to do this together...we've got to find this baby's mother together!

Max: And how are we meant to find her mother?! Because i'm desperate to get rid of this baby! I can't stand the stupid crying it makes every single bloody night when i'm trying to sleep!

Tom: Where did you meet the girl you slept with?! Think about where you met her...and that's our first step..to finding this baby's mother....

(Tom puts the baby down on the sofa before entering the kitchen. Max looks at the baby horribly before leaving through the front door and slamming it shut)

Xx-Vicky-xX
15-09-2006, 21:52
Great Dave though i wish Max would stop being a whingy

DaVeyWaVey
15-09-2006, 22:26
Scene 4- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Megan is speaking to Pat behind the counter. We see Felicity in the distance picking up cups and dishes from some of the tables)

Pat: Why did you come in with that suitcase this morning may i ask?

Megan: Well...i don't mean to be cheeky or anything but...well, as i work here, i heard you had a spare room...

(Pat looks shocked)

Pat: You want to move in?!

Megan: Yeah...if you don't mind...

Pat: Well i'm not sure...tensions could be strained..i know that you and Felicity...well, don't see eye to eye...

Megan: Oh we only got off on the wrong foot that's all! It's nothing, me and Felicity had a nice chat this morning...and let's just say, we both know where we stand with each other..

(Felicity walks past)

Megan: Don't we Felicity?

(Felicity replies nervously)

Felicity: What?

Megan: We get on like a house on fire!

(Felicity replies nervously again)

Felicity: Yeah...we get along now...

Pat: Oh good, i'm really glad you've sorted out your differences. :)

Megan: So?

Pat: So i guess you can move in upstairs!

Felicity: You what?!

Megan: I'm moving in Felicity..upstairs..don't you remember our little chat earlier?! I told you my plans then...

Felicity: You can't just move into this cafe! What if Dave comes back mum?

Pat: Oh i am sure he's fine....he's probably forgotten about us and this place, he's having a wail of a time in Spain i bet!

Felicity: But...

Megan: But i may need to borrow your hair straighteners in the mornings...i was so careless and i ended up breaking mine!

(Pat leaves to serve a customer behind the counter. Megan gets up close to Felicity and whispers in Felicity's ear)

Megan: You better let me borrow your hair straighteners..or my high heel will be up your nose faster than you think!

(Megan leaves to go upstairs with her suitcase. Felicity watches on, feeling threatened by Megan's presence)

Jojo
15-09-2006, 23:31
Oh my! Megan is getting her feet under the table pretty quickly! What a cow! I can see bad things coming from her..

Xx-Vicky-xX
16-09-2006, 06:44
I said im open minded about people but i dont think i am going to like this one. She is evil, i think shes going to be one of them characters that i will be happy to see get paid back for all the misery she is causing, well written though.

DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 14:47
Scene 5- The Hospital- Afternoon

(Chloe has just been discharged from hospital following the car crash. Her and Greg have smiles on their faces as they leave the hospital. We see a glimpse of Chloe's engagement ring. They both look proud. Suddenly Kat arrives in her car. She gets out and sees Greg and Chloe kissing outside the hospital entrance. A look of disgust crosses her face. Chloe looks round to see Kat)

Chloe: Oh..Kat's here! Did she know i was being discharged?!

Greg: No i didn't think she did...must have forgotten to tell her...

(Kat walks up to them)

Kat: I seen you both get lovey dovey in the distance...

(Chloe replies embarrased)

Chloe: Yeah...:wub:

Kat: I didn't know you were getting discharged today...why didn't someone ring me?! or tell me...

Chloe: Oh what does it matter...your here now eh!

Kat: Yes...

(Kat sees the engagement ring on Chloe's finger)

Kat: What's that?!

Chloe: What does it look like? It's a ring...an engagement ring!...Oh Greg! I know we were gonna keep this to ourselves but Kat's my best friend...we've got to tell her...

Kat: Tell me what?!

Chloe: Isn't it obvious?! Greg proposed to me...and guess what? I accepted!

(Greg looks on guilty at Kat...wondering if asking Chloe was the right thing to do. Chloe has a look of joy on her face after telling Kat the news but Kat looks on in rage)

Kat: Well i'm delighted for you both!

Chloe: Oh i knew you would approve Kat!

Greg: Just don't go telling anybody else...we want to keep this wedding...well, low key...

Kat: Oh Greg...everybody deserves to know! Your getting married, this will be the happiest day of both of your lives...everyone should be there celebrating that!

Greg: Yeah but me and Chloe agreed..

(Chloe interrupts)

Chloe: Oh forget what we agreed Greg! Kat's right...we might as well tell the world about us getting married...after all, it's nothing to be ashamed about, and people will find out sooner or later...

Greg: Yeah...ok, your right...

Kat: Well that's sorted then! I'll give you two a lift back in my car...

Greg: No it's ok we will walk...

Kat: No come on! I insist...get in the car!

Greg: Ok...ok..

(Greg and Chloe follow Kat to her car. Kat has an angry look on her face)

Bryan
16-09-2006, 15:02
Kat and Megan - HH's two pychotic bitches, loving them, cant wait to see what tricks they have up their sleaves!!! Knowing you Dave you wont disapoint us, we are set to have some amazing storylines I can tell - bring on the bitchiness!!!

Xx-Vicky-xX
16-09-2006, 15:26
Good stuff Dave, i wish Kat would just see she doesnt have a chance in hell with Greg

DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 16:10
Scene 6- The Pub- Afternoon

(The pub is quiet- there are only a few punters drinking drinks at the bar. Mike and Nina haven't said a single word to each other all day after Nina's confession to murder. Nina pulls Mike to the back room)

Nina: Mike! You've been ignoring me all day...we need to talk...

Mike: Talk?! I've said all i've had to say! Now if you would excuse me, we have punters to serve!

Nina: There are hardly no punters in the pub Mike! It gives us the perfect opportunity to talk before the pub gets busy tonight...

Mike: I don't want to talk to you Nina! I need time...i need time to myself to think over what you told me!

Nina: I understand that..but i hate feeling left out, i feel unloved!

Mike: What do you expect?! You confessed to me that you killed Phil!

Nina: Sssh! Keep your voice down...i don't want everyone hearing it!

Mike: I need time on my own Nina..to think over what you told me...i might move out the pub...i might leave for a while...

Nina: Leave?! You can't just leave...we're married! We love each other!

Mike: I just need space Nina! I can't get over you killing someone in a matter of a day! You've got to understand!

Nina: But...what will people say?! It will make me look suspicious..and you said we have to act normally!

Mike: Yeah well all they will know is that we're going through a rough patch ok?

Nina: No it's not ok! I don't want you too leave! This pub is ours...we're married and we both love each other!

Mike: I will be back Nina, i won't be going forever....

Nina: This is your home Mike! Where else are you going to go?

Mike: I will stay somewhere..i will find a B+B or something..

Nina: You don't have to do this Mike! You don't have to leave....i love you!

(Nina starts to cry)

Mike: Oh stop with the pleas! You've done wrong...you commited a crime...a serious crime...what do you expect?!

Nina: But we own this pub together, you have to stay!

Mike: I am getting sick and tired of your moaning Nina! In fact, i might just pack my bags and leave now!

(Mike goes upstairs. As Mike gets upstairs, Nina starts to cry)

Jojo
16-09-2006, 16:17
Is Kat going to ruin everything between Chloe and Greg?! Will Mike and Nina be able to get through the murder of Phil?! This is great Dave :clap:

DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 19:56
Scene 7- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Julia is sitting in the cafe. People are passing and giving their sympathies following Ben's death. Megan is coming over to the table with a coffee. Megan approaches Julia but she trips over a chair leg and spills all the coffee all over Julia's lap. Julia squeals in pain)

Julia: You stupid cow!

(Felicity comes rushing over)

Felicity: Oh my gosh...Julia are you ok?

(Felicity turns to Megan)

Felicity: You should be more careful Megan! That coffee was really hot!

Megan: You don't say! :rolleyes: Just get a cloth for christ sake! :rolleyes:

Julia: You should look where you're going! You obviously haven't got the experience to work in a cafe!

Megan: Just chill out will you?! That stupid bitch is getting a cloth for you!

Julia: Don't call Felicity a stupid bitch!

Megan: Goodness gracious...why are you getting in a hissy fit for?! I only spilt coffee over you...your acting like i've just killed someone! :rolleyes:

(Julia suddenly bursts into tears from Megan's comment. Julia runs out of the cafe crying her eyes out. Felicity has overheard what Megan said to Julia)

Felicity: You've really gone and done it now! Julia's husband got killed a few days ago...be more sensitive! :rolleyes:

(Felicity walks off, Megan looks on and sees Julia crying her eyes out outside the cafe)

Megan: How was i meant to know that her bloody husband just died!?

Xx-Vicky-xX
16-09-2006, 21:08
Finally a scene where im glad to see Megan appear :lol:, fab writting Dave :)

DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 22:27
Scene 8- The Pub- Evening

(Mike has a small suitcase in his hand. He comes down the stairs and is about to leave through the back room without saying goodbye to Nina. Nina sees Mike leaving. She runs from behind the bar to outside where she sees Mike getting in a taxi)

Nina: Mike! Wait!

(Mike turns to see Nina. He tells the cab driver to wait a moment while he speaks to Nina)

Mike: Yes?

Nina: You don't have to do this you know?! You can stay here...we can sort this out together!

Mike: It won't work Nina, how many times have i told you eh?! I want to be on my own for a while! Is that too much to ask?!

(There's a pause)

Nina: There's nothing i can do to stop you is there?

Mike: No there isn't....i just want to get my head round what you told me..your confession knocked me for six! You can understand that surely?!

Nina: Yeah i understand...i just want you to know... i love you Mike!

(Nina starts to cry. She kisses Mike)

Mike: Eh! Don't get soppy on me Nina Dobson! I am not leaving forever...i will be back...i just need time on my own...

Nina: I know, but i will miss you..no matter how long you're gone!

(Mike opens the taxi door and gets in. Nina shuts it for him)

Nina: Bye Mike...i love you..

(The taxi drives away before Mike has a chance to reply back. Nina looks on and starts to cry. The camera cuts to the corner of Hinston High where we see Phil hiding behind the corner- he is still alive. He is looking from the corner at Nina- hell bent on revenge...)

Xx-Vicky-xX
17-09-2006, 07:40
Great Dave ooooh this could be interesting if the dude is still alive

DaVeyWaVey
17-09-2006, 17:49
Episode 7

Scene 1- The Pub- Night

(Greg, Chloe and Kat are all sitting down in the pub sipping at their drinks)

Kat: So come on then?! What you waiting for?!

Greg: What?

Kat: You should be telling everybody your great news! Your just sitting here drinking your drinks like normal....you should be celebrating!

Greg: I'm not so sure if we should tell everyone quite yet...

Kat: Why Greg?! Having second thoughts?! You know, marriage is a big step!

Greg: I'm not having second thoughts at all..i just wanted wedding plans to be running smoothly before we tell everybody our wonderful news!

(Greg and Chloe share a kiss. At this time, Kat stands up on a chair and knocks her glass to get everyone's attention)

Kat: Attention, please! I just want to get everybody's attention!

(Everyone hears Kat's shouting and quietens down)

Kat: Right...now, i wanted to get everybody's attention because Greg and Chloe have an announcement to make!

(All the punters look at each other, intrigued)

Kat: So Greg! Come on get up! Tell everyone your wonderful news!

(Greg gets up feeling uncomfortable. Kat sits down and starts downing her drink)

Greg: Yeah well...Kat's correct, me and Chloe do have an announcement to make!

(Chloe is sat down with an excited look on her face)

Greg: We weren't planning to tell everyone this news yet until everything was in full swing...but now well, i suppose i don't have a choice!

(There's a pause)

Greg: I love Chloe..and that's why i asked her to marry me!

(Everyone looks on in astonishment)

(Chloe gets up to speak)

Chloe: And i accepted! Me and Greg are getting married!

(Chloe and Greg look happily into each other's eyes. Everyone in the pub start cheering and clapping, with excited smiles on their faces, clearly happy for the pair. We see Kat looking, clunching her glass of gin and tonic in anger)

Xx-Vicky-xX
17-09-2006, 18:08
Fab, about time someone did something to upset Kat, great writting :)

Pinkbanana
17-09-2006, 18:12
Hey Mr Millets, Ive just been catching up with the goings on in HH and have really enjoyed reading it.

Fantastic writing, Dave! :clap:

DaVeyWaVey
18-09-2006, 18:56
Scene 2- The Pub- Night

(It's closing time at the pub. All the punters have just left to go home. Nina is clearing up the glasses. She grabs a glass and puts in some gin and tonic, before downing it in one. She turns the pub lights off, before hearing a knock at the pub door. Nina shouts at them)

Nina: We're closed!

Phil: I don't need a drink...

(Nina fails to recognise Phil's voice)

Nina: Then go home then! Did you fail to realise this pub is actually shut?! Why don't you just go to a club or something?! You will get a drink there!

Phil: No...just open the door, and everything will just become clear...

(We see Phil bracing a smile from outside the pub...Nina goes to open the door..she unlocks the bolts and opens the door. She sees Phil staring her in the face)

Phil: 'Ello Nina! You weren't expecting me now were ya?!

(Nina looks terrified and shocked at the same time)

Phil: You better realise that i am gonna make your life an absolute misery!

Xx-Vicky-xX
18-09-2006, 19:12
Fab Dave, looking forward to seeing what Phil has instore for Nina

Jojo
18-09-2006, 20:00
Uh oh Nina - you'd better watch out now Phil is back and Mike isn't!! Whats Nina going to do?!

DaVeyWaVey
18-09-2006, 20:04
Scene 3- A B+B In The Middle Of London- Morning

(Tom and Max are standing outside a B+B in the middle of London. They have been travelling most of the morning to try and find the baby's mother, Amy's whereabouts)

Tom: So is this the B+B? The one Amy was staying in?!

Max: I presume so...i mean..that's where me and Amy, well...did it together..

Tom: Ok..please spare me the details! :rolleyes:

(Tom and Max stare at the B+B)

Tom: So do you think Amy is still here?

Max: I spose we will have to go in and find out...

(Tom and Max enter the B+B. They see a man in the entrance, welcoming some new guests)

Tom: Oh..hi..

B+B Man: Hello...have you came to sign in?

Tom: No..we were in fact..wondering if there was a certain woman here, we're visitors....

(The man gets a notebook from a side table and starts looking through it)

B+B Man: What is the woman's name?

Max: Amy...

(The man looks at Max, intrigued)

B+B Man: Eh! I recognise you...your face is very familiar...

Tom: If it helps, he was here just over nine months ago screwing Amy!

(Max looks embarrased but mad at the same time. Max punches Tom in the arm, Tom laughs it off)

B+B Man: Oh...that's it! I remember i had no choice but to chuck you out!

Max: Yeah...well..it's all in the past now ain't it? We just want to see if she's still here...

B+B Man: Nope sorry, i'm afraid i had to chuck her out about a month or so ago, she was heavily pregnant and i did feel harsh but, well she wasn't paying her way...she was in a 6 month debt and refused to pay the bill...i had no other alternative. I did feel guilty though, i mean she was heavily pregnant!

Max: Do you know where she went?

B+B Man: Nope..not a clue...sorry, i can't help...

Tom: It's ok..we will leave you too it..

(Tom and Max smile at the man as they leave the B+B)

Max: Why the hell did you do that for eh?! Embarrasing me like that?!

Tom: I was just giving it too him plain and simple...you were screwing her!

Max: Yeah well...you didn't have to put it like that...

Tom: By the way, that was an awful punch you gave me!

(Tom laughs)

Max: Well what are we gonna do now? Amy has to be somewhere!

Tom: I don't know..but we might as well stay around here for a while...i mean we travelled all this way...

Max: Yeah ok...let's go...

(Tom and Max walk down the street away from the B+B)

Jojo
18-09-2006, 20:08
I wonder if they'll find her - will she be ok when/if they do find her.....

Great stuff again Dave

Jojo
18-09-2006, 20:08
I wonder if they'll find her - will she be ok when/if they do find her.....

Great stuff again Dave

DaVeyWaVey
18-09-2006, 20:51
Scene 4- The Butleys House- Morning

(The vicar from the local church has arrived on the Butleys doorstep to discuss arrangements for Ben's funeral. He rings the doorbell)

Sally: Oh...that will be him..

Marianne: Who?

Sally: The vicar...

Marianne: The vicar?! What's the vicar doing here?! We don't need visitors! Not after what's happened!

Sally: Why do you think he's here sis?! We're going to be discussing dad's funeral, you know, the arrangements...

Marianne: Have you told mum about this?!

Sally: Does it really look like i've had the chance?!

(Sally points out Julia who is in the kitchen, scrubbing the floor)

Sally: She's scrubbed that floor twice this morning..saying she needs to keep the floor clean for dad...don't you see?! I haven't had the chance to put a word in edge ways! Everytime i speak about dad, she shuts me out!

(Sally answers the door to the vicar)

Sally: Hi...come in...

(The vicar comes in and rubs his shoes on the doormat)

Sally: Come into the living room...

(Julia sees the vicar enter from the front door. She leaves the kitchen and enters the hallway)

Julia: What's the vicar doing here?!

Sally: Mum...well..

(Julia interrupts as Sally is about to explain)

Julia: Get him out now! Whatever your saying vicar...we're not interested! We're not religious!

Sally: He's not here advertising religion mum!

Julia: Sally..how could you?! Dad told you not to invite anyone in unless there is a valid reason, he's just here to talk about the bloody church!

Marianne: Mum...dad's not around anymore!

Julia: He's at work Marianne! He's not gone forever has he?!

Vicar: Mrs Butley...i am hear to organise Ben's funeral...

Julia: My husband's funeral!

(Julia's face turns to anger)

Julia: Get out! Get out now! Get out of my house! You have no right to be here!

(Julia opens the front door...and forces the vicar outside)

Julia: Don't come back!

(Julia slams the door and turns to Sally and Marianne)

Julia: Don't invite that vicar again! You know dad don't believe in religion...why did you invite him in for?!

(Julia goes back to the kitchen and continues to scrub the floor)

Julia: Now..i got get this floor shining before your dad gets back!

Xx-Vicky-xX
18-09-2006, 21:16
Ohhhhh shes losing the plot bless her, fab writting

DaVeyWaVey
19-09-2006, 21:16
Scene 5- The Pub- Morning

(Nina has been tied to a chair, bound and gagged in the middle of the pub for the whole night since Phil's arrival. Phil has slept in Mike and Nina's bed all night. He comes down to the pub where he sees Nina looking terrified, with massive bags under her eyes)

Phil: Gosh Nina! You look absolutely awful! Looks like you haven't had a wink of sleep! :rolleyes:

(Phil pours himself a drink before walking over to Nina and removing the rope tied round her mouth. Nina starts shouting)

Nina: What do you want Phil?! What the bloody hell do you want?!

Phil: I want revenge...you nearly killed me for christ sake! You stuck a knife in my back!

Nina: You nearly killed my husband!

Phil: He might not be your husband for much longer though...

Nina: What do you mean?!

Phil: Well where is he now eh?! He's certainly not coming to your rescue...he's left you! That's why he ain't here!

Nina: He hasn't left me! He will be coming back...he just needs to get away for a while!

Phil: That's just his excuse and besides, if he does come back, who knows, you might not be here!

Nina: Phil, don't try to make threats! I'm not scared of you...you will be long gone when Mike gets back..and i will still be behind the bar serving drinks!

Phil: I am gonna make your life a misery Nina...don't worry..i'm not gonna hurt you physically...i am gonna hurt you mentally! I am gonna attack the possessions and the people that are closest to you! This isn't over Nina!

(Phil unties Nina from the chair. Nina gets up. Phil grabs her by the neck. Nina is terrified)

Phil: I bet you were really scared weren't ya?! All night, i bet you were terrified...worried that i was gonna hurt you...like you hurt me, putting that knife through my back, you nearly killed me...you're gonna pay the price!

Nina: I am gonna ring the police Phil...i'm not scared of you!

Phil: If you ring the police...this glass bottle will be cutting that beautiful face of yours! And besides, what evidence do you have eh?! I am gonna be long gone...

Nina: Good...i don't wanna see you again!

(Nina spits in Phil's face. Phil wipes it off, he holds back his anger)

Phil: You will be seeing me sooner than you think, i have plans Nina, plans to make your life hell! Goodbye for now!

(Phil leaves the pub through the back room with the rope in his hand. Nina looks on terrified over Phil's threats)

DaVeyWaVey
19-09-2006, 22:04
Scene 6- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Morning

(Kat is sitting down drinking some coffee, she looks at Chloe with a concerned look on her face. Chloe is looking through some wedding brochures)

Chloe: I can't decide, if i want that one...or that one..i mean, i know the dresses are very different but i like both styles...come on Kat! You can help me out on this...what wedding dress do you prefer?

Kat: To be honest Chlo, i don't give a flying monkeys!

Chloe: Oh come on Kat! You could atleast be happy for me, i'm getting married...to the man i love!

Kat: I just don't want you to make a mistake Chlo! All of this just sounds so sudden!

Chloe: I love him and he loves me...it's that simple...no complications, no hitches, we're getting married and everything is going to be perfect!

Kat: How do you know that?! I mean, anything could happen! I don't wanna sound pessimistic but you know i'm looking out for your best interests! Let's face it, you've been on a few dates, shared a few kisses and now your suddenly in love and want to get married!

Chloe: Does that sound so abnormal?!

Kat: I'm just trying to say it like it is from my point of view, this whole wedding is too sudden, maybe you should discuss it with Greg first, before getting too hasty on decisions...

Chloe: Me and Greg have discussed it Kat! We're both happy, we know what we want! Your acting like my bloody mother, not my best friend!

Kat: Best friends are meant to care Chlo! You don't know Greg very well...he could be anyone, he could be capable of anything!

Chloe: Oh stop being so bloody ridiculous! Greg is perfect!

Kat: I'm just making sure that your making the right decision...i don't want you or Greg to get hurt...this is a very big step...

Chloe: I know that Kat! I know what i'm doing, i love Greg and he loves me. We've made our decisions, and we're getting married...and it's final!

(Chloe walks off with her wedding magazine. She enters her bedroom and shuts the door behind her. We see Kat sitting at the table, seething)

DaVeyWaVey
19-09-2006, 22:06
AN ANNOUNCEMENT:

There will be no Hinston High for 2 nights as i am away at Dorset, Hinston High will return on Friday night. :)

Jojo
20-09-2006, 10:41
:eek: Oh No! You cant leave it like that!! Have a good couple of days..

Great stuff as always!

bakedbean
20-09-2006, 16:10
God i have just caught up absolutley fantastic!!!

Xx-Vicky-xX
22-09-2006, 19:03
Just remembered to catch up with them two bits (jees its been a funny week) great writting dude, Kat should mind her own business

DaVeyWaVey
22-09-2006, 19:51
Scene 7- The Cafe- Noon

(It's lunchtime at the cafe, we see different residents of Hinston eating their lunch and drinking teas and coffee, all chatting amongst themselves. Felicity is serving coffees to a table. We see Megan slacking behind the counter, observing her long fingernails. Pat has just finished serving someone from the counter. She turns to speak to Megan)

Pat: Are you gonna be slacking all day?!

Megan: Oh please! I'm pulling my weight, what more do you want?!

Pat: Your clearly not, i've been observing you and all you've been doing is observing your fingernails and not serving customers, you will end up with no job here if your not careful!

Megan: Don't try and threaten me...it don't wash!

Pat: You've got off on the wrong foot with my daughter..you've said harsh words to a local Hinston resident...and you've been plain lazy!

Megan: Please, stop with the list of lectures! I've told you...me and Felicity know where we stand and besides, how was i meant to know that that woman's husband got shot by her own son! None of this is my fault!

Pat: Pull your weight Megan!

Megan: I will go and get the empty dishes then...i don't know why i bother though?! Seriously..your lucky you've got me...you wouldn't usually find an ex-model being a skivvy in a cafe!

Felicity: An ex-model...don't make me laugh!

Megan: Yeah...an ex-model...

Felicity: Where did it all go wrong i wonder?! I bet they dropped you...i mean i bet they finally looked in the mirror at you and seen you for what you really were!

Megan: No..in a matter of fact, i quit my job...all my modelling agents wanted me in bed..i had to give up...i couldn't just keep sleeping around!

Felicity: You really are full of yourself aren't you eh!? I bet your modelling agents wouldn't touch you with a bargepole!

Megan: And when was the last time you had all the men chasing after you?!

Felicity: Atleast i have some dignity! If you were sleeping around with a different man every night, that must make you a slapper!

(Megan has a face of fury on her face)

Pat: Stop it both of you! I don't want two of my staff causing a scene! Megan, get the dirty dishes!

(Megan walks away to get the dirty dishes. Tanya walks up to the counter to Pat)

Pat: Oh hi Tan...what can i get you?

Tanya: Well i know it's a bit short notice..but well, it's Emily's birthday tomorrow..and i was wondering if you could hold a party for her here today, later this afternoon...

Pat: Oh i would be delighted to hold a party here...this cafe hasn't done anything like that before..that would be great!

Tanya: I'm glad you approve, it's just our family has been through a rough time lately...what with Luke going to prison and facing trial for murder...i just thought it would be nice if we held something for Emily...something happy!

Pat: Have you sorted out all the arrangements? Invitations?

Tanya: Yep..everything's all sorted...just got to give them the venue...

Pat: Which will be here! We will give little Emily a birthday party that she will never forget! :)

Tanya: Thanks Pat..i will be around with balloons and decorations in a bit! :)

Pat: Ok see you later darlin'

(Megan walks over with some dirty dishes overhearing the conversation between Pat and Tanya)

Megan: Why does she want a birthday party here!? Can't she just open her eyes and realise this is a cafe and not a place where you book birthday parties?!

Pat: I want you to work Megan...not give me your opinions!

(Megan walks away in a huff)

DaVeyWaVey
22-09-2006, 21:04
Scene 8- Hinston School- Afternoon

(It's the end of the school day, George is leaving the school through disabled access. He gets outside and sees Sally sitting on the grass outside the school, crying to herself. George pushes his wheelchair towards Sally. He stops to speak to her)

George: I wanted to speak to you about the other day...i've been avoiding you and ignoring you because of it and i really don't mean too! I wanted to speak to you about the kiss we shared the other day at the park...

Sally: I have other things on my mind George...i haven't had time to think about the kiss we shared, to be honest..i couldn't care less! I have bigger worries..than worrying about our kiss and in fact, i almost forgot about it, that's how much weight i have on my mind!

George: I'm sorry...i should have known...

Sally: What do you want anyway?! Your not getting another kiss if that's what your hoping for!

(George comes across all embarrased)

George: No..no! I wanted to see if you were ok..i was wondering how things were, if you needed to talk...

Sally: What's the point in talking to you or anyone else?! You or no one else have no idea what me and my family are going through right now! Talking won't bring my father back!

George: I know..but i'm your friend Sal...i really like you..

Sally: I really like you too George..but me talking to you won't make a difference...i need to have time on my own, my dad's death is still a shock to the system!

(Sally breaks down crying. George holds his hand to Sally's face and wipes the tears from her eyes, George starts crying himself)

George: I don't want to see you cry Sal...you crying makes me cry!

Sally: Leave me George! Just leave me!

(George looks at Sally, upset. He starts pushing himself in his wheelchair away from Sally. Sally turns round, with tears in her eyes)

Sally: Thanks George...your a great friend. I hope you know that!

(George smiles at Sally and Sally smiles back at him)

Jojo
22-09-2006, 21:43
Megan needs a slap!! What more can I say about her! She definitely needs bringing down a peg or two thats for sure.

Aww Sally and George - Sally needs a friend right now. I hope she doesn't push George away too far.

DaVeyWaVey
23-09-2006, 13:56
Episode 8

Scene 1- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Everybody is preparing for Emily's 6th birthday party at the cafe. Pat has closed the cafe ready for the party. We see Tanya, Tina and Lee putting up balloons and decorations up in the cafe and Felicity sweeping down the tables ready for the party. Suddenly Megan comes down into the cafe out of cafe uniform with a dress on. Felicity turns to Megan and sees what she's wearing)

Felicity: Eh! That's my dress...what are you doing with my dress on?!

Megan: It's a free country...what's yours is mine, after all, we're living under the same roof aren't we?!

Felicity: That's no excuse to nick my best dress! I was gonna wear that for Emily's birthday party!

Megan: Well tough luck, i got to your wardrobe before you did! :p

Felicity: Mum! Tell her to take my dress off!

(Megan goes prancing around the room with Felicity's dress on, with a delightful look on her face. Pat slowly walks up to Felicity and whispers)

Pat: Flic! Just leave her will you?! I don't want you two squabbling throughout little Emily's birthday party..you'll ruin it for her!

Felicity: But mum, she's got my favourite dress on! She's gonna wreck it, i know it! She's too untrustworthy!

Pat: Don't moan Flic! I've had it up to the back teeth of you and her arguing...can't you just see eye to eye for atleast a two hour long birthday party?! I don't want things to get out of control!

Felicity: It won't mum, i promise you, i just want my dress back!

Pat: Just go and put another one on will you?!

(Felicity goes off in a huff and sees Megan walking around in her dress with a delightful look on her face)

Felicity: Your not the bloody queen you know!

Megan: Oooh...somebody's got jealous! :p We don't want to wreck little Emily's birthday party with our arguing now do we?!

(Megan laughs as Felicity heads upstairs to put a dress on for Emily's birthday party. The camera turns and we see Tanya uncovering a Balamory birthday cake)

Tanya: Oh our Emily loves Balamory don't she kids?!

Lee: Yeah certainly does...her favourite character is Edie Mcredie!

Tina: I'm glad we're making Emily happy..holding a party here...

Tanya: She's gona love it..i am going to go back and get her now..i bet Alicia is getting fed up babysitting her while we're making preparations!

(Tanya walks out of the cafe to fetch Emily)

Jojo
23-09-2006, 14:59
:eek: Why on earth is Pat sticking up for Megan!! Felicity has no right to put on Megans clothes - why on earth is she not doing something about it!!

DaVeyWaVey
23-09-2006, 15:54
Scene 2- The Woods House- Afternoon

(Tom and Max have just come back from the garage. Tom wants to speak to Max)

Max: Tom..why the hell did you have to bring me back here just to tell me something?!

Tom: It's private family business between me and you...Greg doesn't need to know and he's fine working at the garage and looking after the baby a minute...

Max: So what is this private family matter?! :rolleyes:

Tom: It's regarding the baby...

Max: For christ sake Tom! Everything we talk about is regarding the baby...i am getting sick of it! We haven't talked about anything else since that stupid baby arrived!

Tom: The baby's not stupid Max! The baby is your daughter...she's our main priority, that's why we always talk about her and you've got to accept that!

Max: Can't we talk about something else instead?! The baby is fine!

Tom: This is important...

Max: Come on then, just spit it out!

Tom: I think we should hire a nanny for the baby...

Max: A nanny!

Tom: Yeah..it makes sense, we're both juggling working at the garage and looking after the baby, we can't handle both responsibilities!

Max: And that's why we're going to track down the baby's mother...there's no point paying loads of money for a nanny when we're gonna find Amy soon and she's gonna take the baby back!

Tom: We don't know if we will ever find Amy, Max! We've tried looking for her but there's been nothing!

Max: Then we have to try harder...she's got to be somewhere!

Tom: We've tried Max! We've looked at the B+B where she used to stay and we've looked all across London, there's been no sign of her!

Max: I can't stand it anymore though Tom! I'm not cut out to be a parent...how could Amy just dump the baby on me like this?!

Tom: She was confused...she probably didn't know what to do so she thought you, the father might be interested...

Max: But i'm not interested...i'm sorry to sound harsh, but i want to get shot of this baby! I don't want it!

Tom: Just think about the nanny idea eh Max?! It'll give us both a break from the baby..

Max: I'm going back to the garage...

(Max leaves through the front door)

DaVeyWaVey
23-09-2006, 18:53
Scene 3- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Emily's 6th birthday party is in full swing. Felicity and Megan have been giving each other horrible looks throughout the whole party. Tanya gathers everyone around the birthday cake)

Tanya: Ok everyone...we are now going to sing happy birthday to Emily...can somebody get a lighter to light the candles?

Megan: Oh i'll get the lighter now!

(Megan violently pushes past Felicity to get to the lighter. Felicity loses it and starts shouting at Megan)

Felicity: Eh! Why did you push past me like that for?!

Megan: For christ sake Flic, chill out! The candles haven't been lit yet but your face is like a tomato and it looks like smoke is about to come out of your ears!

(Megan grabs the lighter and passes it to Tanya who starts lighting the candles on the birthday cake. Emily and her friends cheer happily at seeing the sight of the birthday cake)

Felicity: I seriously can't stand the sight of you!

Megan: Calm down...it's Emily's birthday party...we don't want to wreck her special day!

Felicity: Stop making excuses...i hate you and you hate me! You stole my dress for christ sake!

Megan: I borrowed it from your wardrobe..if you get so mad about that...what do you get mad over?! You need anger management! You seriously need anger management!

Felicity: You don't know right from wrong do you eh!? You stole my dress and you think that's ok!? You walk around here like Lady Muck!

Megan: You bitch!

(Megan slaps Felicity across the face)

Felicity: You cow!

(Felicity slaps Megan back, twice harder)

Pat: Pack it in both of you! Just pack it in!

(Everyone is watching the scene unfolding between Felicity and Megan. Megan holds her hand to her face to recover from Felicity's slap)

Megan: Your gonna pay for slapping me like that!

Felicity: I'm not scared of you Megan..., i'll insult you all i like, didn't you say all the men were after you?! I bet you've bedded quite a share of them, that must make you a slapper and a whore!

Megan: Atleast i have bedded more men than you have!

(Felicity spits at Megan's face. Megan pounces on Felicity. Felicity falls to the floor. Megan is on top of her pulling at her hair. Felicity yelps in pain)

Felicity: Get the mad cow of me! Get her off me!

(Pat restrains Megan from Felicity. Felicity gets up from the floor. Megan stares at her in the face)

Megan: Would you like some birthday cake Felicity!?

(Megan grabs Emily's birthday cake which has lighted candles on it and pushes it in Felicity's face. Felicity screams in pain as the lighted candles burn her face. Felicity falls to the floor with the birthday cake squashed in her face and the candles burning her. Megan looks on at her laughing)

(Pat screams at Megan)

Pat: Look what you've done Megan! Look what you've done! You pushed a birthday cake with lighted candles in my daughter's face! Get out of this cafe now! Get out!

Megan: That's what a girl gets if they insult me! Your daughter can go to hell!

(Megan spits in Pat's face)

Megan: Tell Felicity that's from me!

(Megan naturally walks out of the cafe. We hear the clicking of her high heels as she leaves, acting as if she hasn't done anything wrong. We see Tanya removing the birthday cake from Felicity's face as Felicity yells in pain)

Bryan
23-09-2006, 19:01
wow - an amazing episode!!!

megan is one hell of a bitch - fancy doing that!!! I hope Felcicity is ok.

Jojo
24-09-2006, 09:12
:eek: Bitch!!!

Finally, Pat sticks up for Felicity! About time too! Will she get her dress back though?! :D

Xx-Vicky-xX
24-09-2006, 16:01
:eek: OMG shes an evil bitch that one, i ope se never comes back, fab writting

DaVeyWaVey
24-09-2006, 16:32
Scene 4- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Evening

(Greg is at Chloe and Kat's flat. Him and Chloe are discussing wedding arrangements)

Greg: Chlo! I just want something simple...you know a registry office or something..i don't want a big over the top wedding!

Chloe: But our wedding is meant to be the happiest day of our lives..we can't just have something simple...we need to make our day special...

Greg: And it will be special if we have something simple, getting married to you anywhere wearing anything will still be special...me marrying you is all that matters!

Chloe: But i was thinking of holding our wedding at the local church, and then having a due afterwards...

Greg: And i was thinking of holding our wedding at the local registry office, and then having a due afterwards!

Chloe: But i don't want that! I want our wedding at a church!

Greg: And i want our wedding at a registry office...think about all the preparations we will have to make for a church wedding!

Chloe: Yeah but all the preparations will be worth it! We've got to put some effort into this wedding or can't you just not be bothered to put any effort into our wedding at all?!

Greg: Chlo! I never said that...i just said i wanted something simple!

Chloe: Yeah...well, we're not having anything simple...we're having it at the local church and that's that! You won't win!

(Greg laughs)

Greg: Ok..ok..you win! I surrender...let's have it at the local church!

Chloe: Thanks babe...

(Chloe kisses Greg with a smile of happiness on her face)

Chloe: I'll ask the vicar to come round...then we can set the date for our wedding...how does that sound?

Greg: Yeah that's great...whatever makes you happy...

(Kat suddenly walks into the flat after finishing her shift at the pub)

Kat: Gosh..it was a busy day today..

(Kat walks into see Greg and Chloe kissing)

Kat: Oh..i wasn't interrupting anything was i?

Chloe: No nothing at all...we were just making some wedding arrangements weren't we Greg..

Greg: Yeah that's right...

Kat: Talking about your wedding...i just wanted to apologise, you know for my weird behaviour...

Chloe: Weird behaviour?!

Kat: You know...i said you and Greg getting married was too soon and you shouldn't get married..well that was just me moaning and groaning...just don't listen to me!

Greg: What are you trying to say Kat?

Kat: I am saying that i approve of your wedding, you two should get married sooner rather than later, your both made for each other!

Chloe: Arr..thanks Kat! I knew you would come round!

(Chloe hugs Kat with happiness)

Kat: You've got to go to the pub now anyway..you got to start your shift soon..your gonna be late if your not careful!

Chloe: Oooh i completely lost track of the time!

Kat: Anyway, i'm going for a bath...

(Kat walks away to the bathroom. She enters the bathroom and tears start to roll down her eyes)

Jojo
24-09-2006, 16:37
:hmm: Whats Kat up to? Something doesn't seem right here.....

Bryan
24-09-2006, 16:43
awww is anyone else kinda feeling sorry for Kat, I think she's just a woman in love... with someone who doesnt love her, we've all been down that road at some point in our lives

Jojo
24-09-2006, 16:51
I don't! She tried killing them! Thats not the way to make friends and find love is it?!

DaVeyWaVey
24-09-2006, 17:16
Scene 5- The Cafe- Evening

(Felicity is upstairs in the bathroom. We see her examining the scars on her face after the candles off the birthday cake burnt her. Pat is downstairs taking down the remainder of the party decorations and wiping down the tables. There is a knock on the cafe door)

Pat: We're closed!

Megan: It's Megan...let me in!

Pat: Came to collect your stuff have you?! Don't worry, it's all packed for you!

(Pat opens the door to Megan. She is still wearing Felicity's dress)

Megan: No i came back here because i live here and i have a job here!

Pat: No you haven't!...what you did to my daughter was an absolute disgrace! How do you have the cheek to come back here and act like everything is normal?! Felicity has scars on her face!

Megan: Well duh! You do get scars on your face if your face gets burnt!

Pat: You really are a bitch aren't you!? My daughter was right...your not to be trusted! Your sacked!

Megan: You wouldn't sack me! I'm the only hope you've got at this cafe! Your desperate for staff!

Pat: No i'm not! I don't want the likes of you round here!

(Megan loses it. She grabs Pat by the neck and drags her against the wall)

Megan: I think you should reconsider Pat...

Pat: I'm not reconsidering! In fact, i was thinking of calling the police! You should be done for assault after what you did to my daughter!

Megan: I think we should make things clear don't you?!

Pat: What do you mean?!

(Megan has one of her hands holding Pat's throat against the wall. She uses her other hand to pull out a lighter from her pocket. She turns on the lighter and holds it to Pat's face)

Megan: Now if you sack me from the cafe...you will end up with your whole face being burnt off by this lighter...do you understand me!?

Pat: I understand you well and clear but you don't have the guts!

Megan: Oh i do..i thought you would know that by now after what i did to your "precious" daughter! :rolleyes:

(Megan laughs. She turns to Pat and with her long nails, she scrams and stabs Pat's face with her long fingernails. Pat breathes heavily in pain as blood trickles from her face. Megan laughs seeing Pat in pain)

Megan: Now am i keeping my job!? Coz that was just for starters!

Pat: Ok..ok..you can keep your job and home here! Just apologise to Felicity and give her her dress back!

Megan: Ok...fair enough...

(Megan heads upstairs and enters Felicity's bedroom. She sees Felicity sitting on her bed)

Felicity: What the hell are you doing here?!

Megan: I came to apologise Felicity...i'm sorry...i'm sorry that your whole face didn't burn off!

(Megan laughs as she leaves Felicity's bedroom. Felicity starts crying, hurt by Megan's comment)

Bryan
24-09-2006, 18:54
:eek: Megan - what bitch! And how can Pat give in so easily, I wouldnt let that woman back in my home if she'd done that to my daughter! :nono:

Xx-Vicky-xX
24-09-2006, 19:19
:eek: Pat was right with the first decision, what the hell did she do that for, fab writting

DaVeyWaVey
24-09-2006, 19:27
Scene 6- The Campbells House- Night

(Lee, Tina and Emily are all in bed asleep. Tanya is sitting down watching late night television. She hears a knock on the door. She goes to the door feeling curious, she opens the door to see the police)

Police: Mrs Campbell?

(Tanya is looking at the police nervously, remembering the night she killed Andy)

Tanya: Yeah..what is it?

Police: We want to question you over the dissapearance of nightclub owner Andy Connel..we understand your husband has been charged with his wife's murder...do you have anything to do with Andy Connel's dissapearance, Mrs Campbell?

(Tanya lets out a big nervous gulp)

Xx-Vicky-xX
24-09-2006, 19:34
Good stuff Dave though it confused me a bit

Jojo
24-09-2006, 21:01
I can't believe Pat let Megan back in again - shes going to regret that - thats for sure!

DaVeyWaVey
25-09-2006, 19:36
Police: We want to question you over the dissapearance of nightclub owner Andy Connel..we understand your husband has been charged with his wife's murder...do you have anything to do with Andy Connel's dissapearance, Mrs Campbell?

(Tanya lets out a big nervous gulp)

Tanya: What are you accusing me of officer!? :eek:

Police: We're not accusing you of anything...we just want to set the record straight, we want you to be honest with us...did you have anything to do with Andy Connel's dissapearance?

Tanya: I am being honest with you...i have nothing to do with Andy Connel's dissapearance...at the time he dissapeared, i was here watching tv...now if you don't mind, it's rather late and i was about to go to bed...

Police: Can anyone back up your story Mrs Campbell, that you were here on the night of Andy Connel's dissapearance, watching tv?

(Tanya pauses for a moment panicing, Tina has woken up and hears the commotion at the front door)

Tina: Mum? What's going on?

Tanya: Nothing love...just go back to bed...

Police: Can your daughter verify that you were here on the night of Andy's dissapearance?

(Tanya pauses for a moment, panicing)

Tanya: Yeah...yeah...my daughter was here with me on the night, we were both watching re-runs of Only Fools and Horses weren't we Tin?!

(Tina comes down the stairs after hearing her name)

Tina: What?

Police: Tina, can you verify that your mother was here on the night of the 2nd of September watching tv..reruns of Only Fools And Horses?

(Tina looks confused, Tanya worries over what Tina will answer. She is nervous and prays Tina will say the right thing)

Tina: Yeah i was here with my mum...watching reruns of Only Fools And Horses..

Police: Only Fools and Horses wasn't on that night...

(Tanya breathes heavily, panicing even more)

Tanya: It was a tape! We watched it on a tape! It was an old episode that i recorded a long time ago!

(The police stare at Tanya, trying to suss her out. Tanya looks away as she speaks to the police)

Tanya: Is that all?

Police: Yeah...for now...

Tanya: Goodbye...

(The police leave. Tanya shuts the front door)

Tina: What was all that about?

Tanya: Nothing..

Tina: It was about something...it sounded serious...

Tanya: Just go back to bed yeah....there's nothing you should worry about!

Tina: Is it about dad?! Why did you need an alibi?! Why did i have to verify it?!

Tanya: Stop with the bloody questions will you?! I'm gonna lose my top in a minute!

Tina: This family's changed! I don't know anything anymore!

(Tina marches upstairs in an angry state as Tanya looks on and breathes a sigh of relief)

DaVeyWaVey
25-09-2006, 20:45
Scene 7- Hinston High- Night

(Nina is tucked up in bed asleep at the flat above the pub. The camera suddenly turns to Hinston High where we see Phil approaching the pub wearing a hoodie and some scruffy jeans. He has returned- with a can of petrol and a lighter in his hand...)

What does Phil have planned...and what will be the consequences?

Find out tomorrow....

Bryan
25-09-2006, 22:18
what a cliffhanger! :eek:

and also I think Tanya needs to get herself sorted out before she slips up and makes a careless mistake

Xx-Vicky-xX
26-09-2006, 08:59
:eek: how could you leave it like that Dave, good stuff with Tanya

DaVeyWaVey
26-09-2006, 20:28
Scene 8- The Pub- Night

(Nina hears some breaking glass from upstairs. She rushes down the stairs and into the pub where she sees that a window has been smashed. Nina shouts to try and get some attention)

Nina: Eh! Who's out there?! Come on, show your face!

(Phil is outside. He has just poured petrol inside the pub. He lights the lighter. Phil starts shouting)

Phil: I warned you Nina! I warned you! I said i was gonna damage the possessions closest to you!

(Nina hears what Phil has said. She screams in fury)

Nina: Phil!

(Phil throws the lighted lighter inside the pub. The flame catches onto the petrol and Nina starts screaming for her life as a fire starts to engulf the whole pub)

Xx-Vicky-xX
26-09-2006, 20:31
Noooooo dont stop there im intrigued, good stuff

DaVeyWaVey
26-09-2006, 21:12
Episode 9

Scene 1- Hinston High- Early Morning

(Jenna has woken up after hearing screaming. She gets out of bed and wakes up Harry)

Jenna: Harry..wake up! Wake up Harry!

Harry: Goodness gracious! What is it?! I've got work tomorrow!

Jenna: I heard screaming...from outside!

Harry: Are you sure you weren't having a bad dream love?

Jenna: Harry...i know i heard something!

Harry: What do you want me to do about it?

Jenna: Come outside..something serious could be going on! Come on!

(Jenna forces Harry out of bed)

Harry: Whatever you heard better be worth me getting out of bed and being tired for work in the morning!

(Jenna rushes downstairs and unlocks the front door. Harry follows her. Jenna opens the door and looks outside to see the pub on fire)

Jenna: Jesus Christ! :eek:

(Harry steps outside and sees the pub burning down)

Harry: Oh my god! :eek:

(Jenna starts to panic and screams)

Jenna: Call an ambulance! Call a bloody ambulance! Nina is inside there, trapped! My friend is inside there...she could die! :crying:

(Harry rushes to the phone and rings an ambulance as the pub continues to burn down)

diamond1
26-09-2006, 21:43
Hey Millets,
FINALLY caught up with hinston high and I am very delighted with what you have came out with,Anyway wheres luke? you said he would be in it

I like Kat all round wicked character I actually want to see her get greg because greg and chloe just:sick: but Kat and greg would be hmm :cool: but supose that wont happen with greg leaving
but good stuff daveywavey really good stuff

Love the max and Tom stuff brilliant and pure genius 10/10

DaVeyWaVey
26-09-2006, 21:46
Scene 2- Hinston High- Early Morning

(The residents of Hinston High have woken up and are all outside their front doors watching the fire continuing from the pub. The pub is slowly burning down. The camera turns to each resident as they are looking on in horror worrying for Nina's life. We turn to Jenna and Harry who are watching the pub feeling helpless)

Jenna: (Panic and fright in her voice) You called the ambulance didn't you?!

Harry: (sharp) Yeah of course i bloody did!

Jenna: (Screaming) Well where the bloody hell are they then eh!? My friend could be dying in there! Dying!

(Jenna breaks into tears. Harry tries to comfort her but she rejects him)

Jenna: Get off me! Just get off me! Why did this have to happen eh?!

Harry: I'm sick of this! The firefighters aren't here...i am going in there myself, i am going to go in that pub and save Nina, i promise you! I hate seeing you so upset about this!

Jenna: No Harry! No! I will be even more upset if you leave me! Don't go in there! Don't be so bloody stupid!

Harry: I love you Jenna!

(Harry runs to the pub. Jenna screams)

Jenna: Noooo!!!!

(Jenna breaks down on the doorstep in tears)

Jenna: I love you Harry! I love you!

(Harry runs into the burning pub, determined to save Nina)

Will Harry manage to save Nina from the pub or will he not get out of the pub alive?

Find out tomorrow....

DaVeyWaVey
26-09-2006, 21:48
Hey Millets,
FINALLY caught up with hinston high and I am very delighted with what you have came out with,Anyway wheres luke? you said he would be in it

I like Kat all round wicked character I actually want to see her get greg because greg and chloe just:sick: but Kat and greg would be hmm :cool: but supose that wont happen with greg leaving
but good stuff daveywavey really good stuff

Love the max and Tom stuff brilliant and pure genius 10/10

Thanks d1...don't worry Luke's first appearance in this season will be shown tomorrow...he will be in this season, he just hasn't been shown yet. :)

diamond1
26-09-2006, 21:50
thank god for that dave,
really good so far dont let greg go hes one of the better characters....pay bepe more to stay
(also whos that chelsea girl on your HH website geustbook?)

Bryan
26-09-2006, 21:55
oh no Harry the hero! Will he survive!? Or will he be burnt to a crisp!? And what about Nina!? :eek:

Great tension built up here Dave cant wait to read next segment! :clap:

Xx-Vicky-xX
26-09-2006, 22:14
:eek: Nooooooo dont stop there its to good to stop there

Who is Harry & Jenna :confused:

DaVeyWaVey
26-09-2006, 22:26
:eek: Nooooooo dont stop there its to good to stop there

Who is Harry & Jenna :confused:

They are both married and have been in Hinston High from the start...they haven't had any storylines yet though and have been simmering in the background..this will all change this season though! :)

Xx-Vicky-xX
26-09-2006, 22:28
They are both married and have been in Hinston High from the start...they haven't had any storylines yet though and have been simmering in the background..this will all change this season though! :)

This could be why i dont know who they are, i shall have to pop on the HH website and have a look at them

DaVeyWaVey
26-09-2006, 22:35
thank god for that dave,
really good so far dont let greg go hes one of the better characters....pay bepe more to stay
(also whos that chelsea girl on your HH website geustbook?)

:rotfl: was that you by any chance d1 or pinkbanana by any chance?! :lol:

DaVeyWaVey
27-09-2006, 21:48
Scene 3- The Pub- Early Morning

(Everyone is surrounding the pub as the fire continues to rip through the pub. It's been a few minutes since Harry leapt into the flames hoping to save Nina. Jenna is crying, knowing that her husband could die in the fire)

Alicia: Everything's gonna be alright Jenna...everything is going to be ok!

(Jenna turns round to see Alicia trying to comfort her)

Jenna: Everything might not be ok Alicia! Harry could die in there!

Alicia: Eh! Eh! Come on you gotta stay positive..for your own sake!

Jenna: I can't...i just can't...where are the stupid fire brigade eh?! We called them 15 minutes ago! There's no sign of them!

Alicia: I'm sure they'll be here soon...

Jenna: But you don't know that do you!? And we don't know if Harry and Nina will get out of that fire alive!

Alicia: Your husband's tough Jenna! He'll get through that fire, save Nina and come back out again..he will be fine!

Jenna: He's not invincible Alicia!

Alicia: I'm not saying that he's invincible...i'm just trying to keep a positive light on things!

Jenna: Yeah..well..your not helping!

(We suddenly see Nina come out of the back entrance of the pub. She is coughing continuously...she is covered in smoke and is battling for breath)

Christina: Oh my god! Nina!

Alicia: See i told you that Harry would save her!

(Nina suddenly walks towards the residents of Hinston who are all standing in shock)

Chloe: Come on somebody! Do something!

(Chloe goes over to comfort Nina and sits her down on a bench. Jenna starts to panic)

Jenna: Where's Harry?

(Her panic turns to screaming)

Jenna: Where's Harry!!!??!

(Jenna walks over to Nina who is sitting down on a bench continuously coughing)

Jenna: Nina! Where's Harry?

Nina: What do you mean?! I was the only person who was in that pub!

Jenna: He went in there to try and save you!

Nina: *******! He went in there! He went in that pub!, in those flames!

(Jenna starts crying)

Jenna: Yes! Yes he did! Now where is he?!

Nina: I never seen him!

(Jenna bursts into tears as the fire engine comes speeding round the corner into Hinston High. The firefighters get their hoses out and start to try and control the situation. Jenna screams to the firefighters)

Jenna: My husband! He's in there! My husband's in there!

Firefighter: Ok...i'm gonna go in!

Firefighter 2: Don't be so bloody stupid!

Jenna: Please, help him! Please!

Firefighter: I'm going in! A man's life is at risk!

(The firefighter approaches the pub but the pub roof suddenly collapses. Jenna screams, knowing it's more likely that her husband is dead)

Xx-Vicky-xX
27-09-2006, 21:52
Do not stop there mister do you know how long ive been waiting for this :lol: good stuff

DaVeyWaVey
27-09-2006, 22:48
Scene 4- Hinston Prison- Morning

(Tanya has gone to visit Luke in prison. He has been charged with Geena's murder and is awaiting trial after being refused bail. Tanya sees Luke in the visiting room and rushes over to him. Luke has bruises all over his face. Tanya's face turns to astonishment as she hugs Luke)

Tanya: Oh my god! :eek: Are you ok?! How did you get those bruises?!

Luke: That doesn't matter....seeing my kids and you today is what matters most! Where are the kids anyway?!

Tanya: Uh..well...they didn't want to come today...

Luke: What?! But i thought they wanted to see me...i thought they were missing me not being at home!

Tanya: Yeah...well...they changed their minds at the last minute!

Luke: I thought i could trust you Tan! I thought you would let me see my kids!

Tanya: Eh! Don't start on me...it's not my fault that they didn't want to come here and see you!

Luke: I want to see them though Tan! You and them is what is keeping me sane in this place! Seeing you and the kids is the only thing i look forward too!

Tanya: You will get to see them again..and i'm here..

Luke: But i wanted the kids to be here too! I am up on a murder charge Tan! I may never see the other side of these walls again!

Tanya: Eh! Don't you dare speak like that...i'm gonna get you out of here! I'll do whatever it takes!

Luke: You said that before...and look, i'm still here! Still facing the beatings, the horrible food, the sleepless nights!

Tanya: I'm doing everything i can! I got revenge on Andy!

Luke: And how is that gonna help me Tan?! It was your revenge...it was a personal thing! Your revenge isn't gonna help me get out of this dump! The whole point of your revenge was to help you feel better about yourself!

Tanya: That isn't fair Luke! I got revenge! I got revenge for you!

Luke: What did you do Tan!? Pull out his hair?! I bet he was well scared! :rolleyes:

Tanya: How did you get all those bruises anyway?

Luke: Don't try and change the subject! What revenge did you do on Andy? What have you done to help me get out of here?!

Tanya: You will never ever be seeing Andy again...that's all you need to know!

Luke: I don't want secrets to be kept from me Tan! Just because i'm in here doesn't mean i shouldn't know about the outside!

Tanya: I made a few threats...Andy won't be coming back, i assure you!

Luke: So where does that leave me?! How is Andy never coming back gonna help me?! I bet he's abroad right now taking a holiday drinking some tequila after you carried out your "threat"..while i'm here! He's laughing at me! I bet he's laughing at me!

Tanya: He won't be laughing! He doesn't have the chance to laugh anymore...

Luke: Bye Tanya..thanks for helping me trying to get out of here, i appreciate it! :rolleyes:

Tanya: Don't be like that Luke! My first plan may have not got you out of here but my next plan will! I promise you!

Luke: Don't keep promises you can't keep...i will be getting more bruises like this tonight!

(Tanya leaves the visiting room wondering what she can try and do to get Luke out of prison)

Jojo
28-09-2006, 06:47
Just caught up again - brilliant stuff Dave - is Harry ok? Was Phil watching? Does he realise that Nina is ok?

Bryan
28-09-2006, 10:59
Welcome bakc Luke, good to see him back in HH, albeit in prison!!

What trick has Tanya got up her sleeve now? These two are my favourites so I can't wait to see how the plot unfolds...

Xx-Vicky-xX
28-09-2006, 14:09
Brilliant stuff Dave love it, though she should tell him what she did

DaVeyWaVey
28-09-2006, 21:22
Scene 5- The Pub- Morning

(The firemen and ambulance are parked in Hinston High. We see a shot of the pub which has been burnt to the floor. The fire brigade have managed to put out the fire and all that is left is wreckage of the pub on the floor. The fire brigade are searching for Harry in the wreckage. Nina is standing by Jenna, comforting her)

Nina: Eh! Come on! They'll find Harry!

Jenna: Dead or alive?!

Nina: Don't be like that Jen!

Jenna: My husband could be dead Nina! Don't start 'avin a go at me!

Nina: I'm sorry...

Jenna: Anyway can you just go away! Just go away!...i want to be left on my own!

Nina: Ok..i've gotta get checked out anyway!

Jenna: I'm sorry Nina...

Nina: It's ok..i can't imagine what your feeling like right now...your husband could be dead in that wreckage...i can't imagine how your feeling! I wouldn't have a clue!

Jenna: I wouldn't have a clue how your feeling right now either...i mean christ! Your pub's been burnt down! I can't imagine how your feeling either! But it's not just that Nin!

Nina: What is it then?! Come on...i'm your friend...you can tell me anything!

Jenna: I'm pregnant Nina! I'm pregnant with Harry's child...and this unborn child might end up with no father! :crying:

(Jenna breaks down into tears. Nina gives Jenna a comforting hug, but is obviously thinking about something else)

Jenna: Everything will be alright won't it Nina?

Nina: Yeah..

Jenna: Whoever burnt down your pub...i'll make sure they pay for what they did!

(Jenna breaks off the hug with Nina and walks away from Nina. Nina's eyes light up)

Nina: Oh my god! Phil! Phil did this! The b******! :angry:

(We suddenly cut to Jenna who is watching the pub wreckage crying. Suddenly a firefighter shouts out)

Firefighter: Eh! Over here! We've found someone in the wreckage...they're still alive!

Jojo
28-09-2006, 21:26
Is it Harry?! Is it him?!

More soon please :D

Bryan
28-09-2006, 21:38
oh lets hope Harry is still alive!!! Can't believe Phil could do this! grrr!

DaVeyWaVey
28-09-2006, 22:03
Scene 6- The Pub- Morning

(The firefighters have just found somebody in the wreckage, they're still alive. The firefighters help pull them out the wreckage- it's Harry)

Jenna: Oh my god! It's Harry! It's my Harry! He's still alive!

(The paramedics put Harry on a stretcher and put him in the ambulance. Jenna wipes the tears from her eyes as she gets into the ambulance. She sees Harry. Harry has cuts and bruises all over him. We can see that he is clearly injured. He smells of smoke, and there is dust and dirt all over him. He can't stop coughing)

Jenna: Harry! I'm here Harry! I'm here!

(Harry speaks to Jenna but he struggles to breathe)

Harry: Oh Jen! I thought...i thought i wasn't going to get out of there alive! I thought i was going to die!

(Harry cries)

Jenna: Well your not gonna die! Your not! Your here now and when you get to that hospital, there gonna make you better, i promise you!

Harry: Oh Jenna! I love you!

(Jenna's eyes well up with tears)

Jenna: Oh i love you too...

(The paramedics get in the ambulance. The sirens start as the ambulance exits Hinston High)

Xx-Vicky-xX
28-09-2006, 22:10
Good stuff Dave, i hope his alright, please dont kill him

DaVeyWaVey
29-09-2006, 21:31
Scene 7- The Woods House- Noon

(Tom and Max are on their lunch break from the garage. Tom and Max are lounging on the sofa eating a sandwich each and watching a daily quiz show. We can see Max's baby daughter happily amused with herself..playing with a doll on the floor. There is a knock on the door)

Max: I'll get it!

Tom: Your keen!

(Max opens the front door to see a scruffy young-aged woman standing on the doorstep with a handbag on her shoulders. She goes by the name of Joanna)

Joanna: Hi..i'm Joanna...

(Max looks confused)

Max: Your not by any chance my baby daughter's mother?!

Joanna: No i'm her nanny! You called me...or don't you remember?!

(Joanna pushes herself past the front door and into Tom and Max's house. She enters the living room and sits on the sofa, making herself at home. Max follows, his jaw dropped)

Max: A nanny?! But......but...we haven't hired a nanny!

Joanna: Someone rang and required my services...

(Max turns to Tom who is biting his lip)

Tom: I rang for a nanny...i hired this woman..

Max: What! How could you go behind my back like that?!

Tom: Oh chill out Max! I only hired a nanny...you getting so OTT about it!

Max: But i thought we were meant to be hiring a nanny for my baby together!

Tom: Your calling it your baby now?! That's certainly a development! :rolleyes:

Max: Yeah...she is my baby! And i wanted to find the perfect nanny for her!

(Joanna acts insulted)

Joanna: Excuse me! But i'm better than perfect!

Tom: Joanna's good...she's had previous experience...

Max: Why didn't you tell me that you rang for a nanny?! Why did you have to keep it a secret from me eh?! She's my daughter! She's my baby daughter...not yours! You had no right phoning a nanny for her without informing me!

Joanna: Have i come at a bad time?!

Max: Yes you have...get out! Get out of my house now!

(Joanna gets up and tries to leave. Tom stops her)

Tom: No wait!

Max: No she's leaving!

Tom: No she is bloody well not! I've paid for her services..... now she has to stay!

(There's an uneasy pause. Max looks at Tom angrily before turning to Joanna)

Max: You better do a bloody good job on looking after my daughter!

(Max storms off back to the garage, slamming the front door behind him)

Tom: Sorry about that...

Joanna: It's ok..no harm done...

(Joanna sits back down again and picks up the baby...teasing her)

Tom: Would you like a coffee?

Joanna: Oh thanks, that would be great! :)

(Joanna smiles at Tom. Tom smiles back before exiting to the kitchen to make a coffee. Joanna cradles the baby in her arms on the sofa)

Xx-Vicky-xX
29-09-2006, 21:37
Excellent arguing there between Tom and Max, good stuff

DaVeyWaVey
29-09-2006, 22:25
Scene 8- Hinston High- Afternoon

(Tanya is heading to Hinston town. She is in Hinston High. She is about to exit through an alleyway when Eddie (Andy's nightclub bouncer) grabs her from behind at the neck. Tanya jumps out of her skin)

Eddie: Guess who?

Tanya: Get off me...get off me...whoever you are!

Eddie: You know who i am...you bitch!

(Eddie lets go off Tanya's neck and violently pushes her to the ground)

Tanya: Christ! I am only trying to get down town...no need to get so bloody violent!

Eddie: You know what this is about...i'm not stupid!

Tanya: Just leave me alone...

Eddie: No! You hit me over the head with a broken bottle! I know it was you! You were also with Andy on the night he dissapeared!

Tanya: You've got it all wrong...i don't know who the hell your talking about!

Eddie: Don't try and worm your way out of this! You had something to do with Andy's dissapearance...i know it! Now where is he?!

Tanya: I don't know! I don't know anything!

(Eddie shouts at Tanya's face. Tanya jumps in fright)

Eddie: You do! Stop lying!

Tanya: I killed him alright! I murdered Andy Connel! But you can't prove anything! I burnt the CCTV tape...Andy is nowhere to be seen...no one is ever gonna find out the truth!

Eddie: You malicious murdering bitch!

(Eddie punches Tanya in the face)

Tanya: He was a b******! I don't regret what i did! It may have not planned to happen but i am glad it did happen!

Eddie: There may be no proof...but i am gonna make you pay for what you've done and it's gonna be the full price!

(Eddie walks away from Tanya who gets up from the floor and wipes the bleeding from her nose)

Bryan
29-09-2006, 22:29
OMG! I didnt see that coming...just when Tanya starts to forumalte a plan to get Luke out of Jail, Eddie comes back! What is Tanya going to do next!? :eek:

Xx-Vicky-xX
29-09-2006, 22:31
Ohhh thats not good brilliant bit of writting there :)

DaVeyWaVey
29-09-2006, 23:47
Episode 10

Scene 1- The Park- Afternoon

(School has just finished. Sally has been off all day, making arrangements for Ben's funeral. George comes past in his wheelchair and goes up to the park to speak to Sally)

George: Hey Sal..you ok?

Sally: Not really...

George: I was gonna call in today at your house...see how you and your family were...

Sally: Well thankgod you didn't bother! Times at home are really tough at the moment, my sister hasn't been to school in weeks and mum is still pretending that nothing out of the ordinary has happened....:(

George: Oh Sal..come here...

(Sally starts to cry. George gives her a warming hug from his wheelchair)

Sally: I'm really trying to hold it together you know...for my family's sake...but sometimes i just can't and i have to cry! I just have to cry! :crying:

George: Just let the tears out Sal...just let the tears out...

Sally: I need to be strong...for my family! :(

George: This is a tough time for all of you...you all have to grieve!

Sally: Sorry for pushing you away before!

George: It's ok..i understood, you needed time on your own...

Sally: I've had that time now and i'm glad your here for me George. :)

George: Anytime. :)

(Sally and George gaze into each other eyes and smile)

Sally: I sorted out my father's funeral today...it's gonna be in the next few days at the local church...:(

George: You did all the funeral arrangements on your own?! Someone should have helped you, i should have helped you!

Sally: It was ok! Really...it was ok! Some of my father's old friends are coming to the funeral....

George: Well that's nice..

Sally: But i am really worried George, really worried! My family might not be able to cope...anything could happen! I hear my mum and my sister crying every night, i can hear it! Every night, all the time!...they may never ever get over what happened! Never! :crying:

George: Everything's gonna be just fine Sal! The funeral is gonna run smoothly...i'm sure...

Sally: My brother has ruined your life, mine and my family's life....

George: I know...but we're united together, if i could get through what your brother did to me, you can too!

Sally: Thanks George...you try and make things sound so much better.

(There's an awkward pause)

Sally: I best go anyway...

(Sally leaves the park, wiping the tears from her eyes. George looks on with a comforting smile on his face)

Xx-Vicky-xX
29-09-2006, 23:51
Brill stuff as usual, love these two together im glad his there for her wen her family wont be

Jojo
30-09-2006, 09:24
What a touching scene!

Fab stuff Dave, as always

DaVeyWaVey
30-09-2006, 20:46
Scene 2- The Hospital- Afternoon

(Harry is in a hospital cubicle recovering from his injuries following the pub fire. Jenna suddenly enters with some flowers for her husband)

Jenna: Hi love...

Harry: Jen! I wondered where you got too...

Jenna: I just thought i would buy you these...

Harry: Oh Jenna! You really shouldn't have! I'm fine, the doctor said i can go home tomorrow...

Jenna: You nearly got killed Harry! Your lucky to be ok!

Harry: Well i'm alive and well, that's the main thing...

Jenna: You were so brave Harry...so heroic! You made me so proud when you went in that fire and tried to save Nina...you risked your own life to save somebody else's....that just reminded me how much of a good husband and a good man you are!

Harry: But i thought you didn't want me to go in there...

Jenna: That was at that time! When you went in that fire, i thought i lost the only man i loved forever but when you were found alive, i was just so proud! So proud that i have a man like you...

Harry: Where is this leading Jen?

Jenna: Nowhere..i'm just saying how brave you were and how much i love you that's all...

Harry: I've been married to you long enough to know that your leading me up somewhere where i will be told something!

Jenna: Oh Harry...you really do read my mind don't you?!

(Harry smiles at Jenna. Jenna starts crying)

Harry: Eh! What's wrong?

Jenna: I've got something to tell you...

Harry: It sounds serious...

Jenna: I'm crying because i'm happy Harry! This is the best news any married couple could get...i'm pregnant, i am having your child, your going to become a father!

(Harry's jaw drops in surprise)

Harry: Pregnant?! :eek: Well that wasn't the news i was expecting...

Jenna: But your happy though aren't you?! In nine months time, we're going to become proud parents...i'm so excited already!

(Jenna has a huge smile across her face, she is crying in happiness at the same time)

Harry: But how did this happen?!

Jenna: Do i really have to tell you the birds and the bees story?! :rolleyes:

Harry: I don't mean it like that...i mean, we haven't...you know...done it...in ages!

Jenna: We have...and this obviously resulted in me becoming pregnant!

Harry: Have you took a test?! How long have you known?! You been to the doctors?!

Jenna: Wow! What's with all the quick-fire questions! I've took a test...i've gone to the doctors...i know for sure that i'm pregnant...you are pleased aren't you?!

Harry: Yeah of course i am...i'm going to become a father...

(Jenna cracks a huge smile. She gives Harry a big hug from his hospital bed. We see Harry's face, he seems unsure over his wife's pregnancy)

Xx-Vicky-xX
30-09-2006, 20:50
Oh dear i sense something bad here, please dont let this be bad, good stuff

DaVeyWaVey
30-09-2006, 22:32
Scene 3- The Weatherbys House- Evening

(Nina is sleeping at the Weatherbys House for the night. She is looking out of their front window watching the remainder of the pub in tatters, with the wreckage and debris and ash all over the ground. Alicia enters the living room and sees Nina looking out the front window. She walks up to Nina and puts her hand on her shoulder to comfort her)

Alicia: Are you ok?

Nina: No...no..not really...

Alicia: Do you want anything? A coffee?

Nina: No i'm fine...your giving me a bed for the night...that's enough...

Alicia: We're friends Nina! It's no trouble!

Nina: I can't believe this has happened! It just happened...i was asleep and the next minute, i woke up, went downstairs and a fire started...deliberately...

Alicia: But that's what i don't understand? Who would do such a thing?! Who would want to torch your pub?! It's your pride and joy!

Nina: It happened so quickly...one minute, my pub was standing, the next, it's been burnt down!

(Nina starts crying into Alicia's arms)

Alicia: Eh! Come on!

Nina: Why can't Mike be here eh?! Why can't he just be here in my time of need?!

Alicia: He'll be here in a dash once he hears what has happened! He loves you, you know...

Nina: I know...

(There's a pause)

Nina: And i know who did this too...he really meant it didn't he?!...when he said he would destroy the possessions that were most close to me...burning down my pub!

Alicia: You know who it was?! Tell the police! Get them locked up!

(Nina suddenly looks out the front window and sees Mike getting out of a taxi. She sees him looking at the pub and him breaking down in tears in the street)

Nina: It's Mike! I've gotta let him know i'm ok!

(Nina rushes outside to Mike who is sitting in the street in tears, looking at his burnt down pub before him)

Nina: Mike...

(Mike turns round)

Mike: How did this happen?!

Nina: Mike...i can explain..

(Mike's crying turns to anger. Mike gets up from the floor and confronts Nina)

Mike: I've been gone two bleedin' minutes and this happens! Our business gets burnt to the ground! How could you let this happen...you stupid, stupid cow!

(Nina starts crying)

Nina: Mike! I'm sorry! This was done deliberately...it's not my fault!

Mike: You were left in charge of our business for 2 minutes and this happens! It's too late for any apologies!

(Mike storms off. Nina staggers to the floor crying)

diamond1
30-09-2006, 22:36
I was wondering about the weatherbys for a minute -I thought they discovered the Hollyoaks Black hole

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-10-2006, 07:34
NO NO NO!!! Dont blame her you stupid man, good stuff Dave

DaVeyWaVey
01-10-2006, 12:15
Scene 4- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Night

(Chloe and Greg are kissing each other passionately on the sofa. Kat storms into the flat, angry)

Kat: Can you two just stop kissing each other for two bloody minutes?!

Chloe: Who's rattled your cage?

Kat: I'm sorry...

Chloe: What is it? What's wrong?

Kat: What do you think is wrong? We have lost our jobs at the pub because of that stupid fire!

Chloe: Nina will probably be still paying us though...it's not our fault that the pub got burnt down! We'll get our jobs back as soon as the pub is refurbished..

Kat: That's easy for you to say! You've got Greg! He works at the garage, atleast he has some money in his pocket! I've got no one, i ain't got no man!

Chloe: Eh Kat! Cheer up! We will both be living on Greg's income from the garage while we haven't got any jobs...ain't that right babes?!

Greg: Yeah course it is...just because me and Chloe will be married soon doesn't mean you won't get any of my income!

Kat: Aww...thanks Greg..your so kind..:)

(Kat gives Greg a hug)

Greg: It's ok..really it's alright...

Chloe: Anyway moving on from money arrangements, me and Greg have an announcement to make...

Kat: Like what?

Chloe: Like we're getting married in 2 weeks at the local church!

Greg: The 15th of October in fact!

(Greg and Chloe gaze into each other's eyes delighted. They rub their two noses together before passionately kissing each other. Kat has walked over to the kitchen and pours herself a glass of wine, she downs it in one, fuming over what she has just heard)

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-10-2006, 12:20
Yay more of Kat getting wound up, thats what i like, good stuff

DaVeyWaVey
01-10-2006, 18:01
Scene 5- The Woods House- Night

(Tom and Max are watching television on the sofa. The baby is asleep upstairs in her cot. Joanna left an hour ago after her first day of looking after the baby. Max hasn't said a word to Tom since they got back from work from the garage)

Tom: So what's your first impressions on the nanny?

Max: She's ok...

Tom: Ok?!

(Max snaps)

Max: What else am i meant to say eh!? She's as brilliant as Mary Poppins! :rolleyes:

Tom: No...i just expected you to be more enthusiastic that's all..

Max: You went behind my back Tom! You hired a nanny behind my back! We're meant to be brothers!

Tom: I'm sorry ok?! What more do you expect me to say?!

Max: You betrayed me Tom!

Tom: Your acting like i've done something seriously wrong when i haven't! Anyway, i thought you didn't want anything to do with your daughter or her welfare...that's why i hired the nanny myself!

Max: You could have atleast consulted me! I thought we agreed that we would find a nanny for the baby together!

Tom: I'm sorry...i never knew you would react like this!

Max: React like what?!

Tom: React like you care! React like you care for your daughter!

Max: Well that's it ain't it?! I've finally realised...i've finally came to terms with reality, i have a daughter...

Tom: You do...and it's up to you to care for your daughter, give her love...

Max: And that's why i don't want a nanny! I want to become a full time father to my daughter!

Tom: What?! :eek:

Max: Don't act so shocked! I thought you were the one who wanted me to take more responsibility for my own daughter!

Tom: But Joanna is gonna be gutted! I paid her in advance....we've got to let her stay...it's the only way we will cope!

Max: No we sack her...tomorrow!

Tom: No!

Max: What's wrong with you Tom?! Got a soft spot for her or something?

Tom: No! I just think she did a great job today that's all...

Max: Well i don't want her here! I want to look after my daughter myself, give her all the love i can!

Tom: You've certainly changed your tune haven't you?!

Max: I looked into my daughter's eyes today...i seen her cry...and i realised...i realised that her mother has left her...she has no one except from me!

(There's a long pause)

Max: Anyway, i am off too bed, see you in the morning...

(Max leaves to go upstairs. Tom tries to take in what Max has said to him)

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-10-2006, 19:00
WOW!! i was not expecting that, good on him though

Jojo
01-10-2006, 19:02
Fair play! Its good that hes finally realising his responsibilities, but how long will it last :hmm:

DaVeyWaVey
01-10-2006, 19:40
Scene 6- The Woods House- Early Morning

(It's 4am.The baby has been crying all night. Max has got up from his bed about 10 times since he went to bed. We see Max in bed. He is about to fall back to sleep when the baby starts crying again. Max loses it and starts shouting to the next bedroom where the baby is)

Max: Bloody hell! Just go to sleep! Just go to bloody sleep! You stupid stupid baby!!!

(Max covers his ears with his hands in frustration. The baby starts screaming and crying louder. Max marches into the baby's bedroom, clearly half-asleep and feeling frustrated)

Max: Why can't you just go to bloody sleep eh!? Why can't you shut your eyes and just bloody shut up!??! Eh!

(The baby screams even louder. Max screams back at the baby)

Max: Shut up!!!!

(Max grabs a pillow and puts it over the baby's face. Max speaks to himself, reassuring himself)

Max: This is the only way i can shut you up! This is the only way i can shut you up!!

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-10-2006, 19:43
OMG :eek: how could he do that, i could end up hating him very soon

Jojo
01-10-2006, 20:57
OMG! :eek: Please let Tom come in and see whats happening in time! Please!!!

Pinkbanana
02-10-2006, 01:49
Oh my goodness.....Max STOP!!! :eek:

Gripping stuff Dave :) Loving your work as per usual!

DaVeyWaVey
02-10-2006, 20:13
(Max grabs a pillow and puts it over the baby's face. Max speaks to himself, reassuring himself)

Max: This is the only way i can shut you up! This is the only way i can shut you up!!

(Tom suddenly storms into the room after hearing Max shouting and the baby screaming. He sees Max trying to suffocate the baby with the pillow. Tom shouts)

Tom: What the bloody hell do you think you doing?!

(Max has closed his eyes and repeating his words)

Max: This is the only way i can shut you up! This is the only way i can shut you up!

(Tom suddenly dives at Max and tackles him to the floor. Max falls to the floor. Tom removes the pillow from the baby's face. The baby starts crying again. Tom picks the baby up and cradles her)

Tom: What the bloody hell were you trying to do eh?!

(Max gets up from the floor, facing the reality of what he's done. He is puzzled as he speaks)

Max: I don't know...i don't know...

Tom: You nearly tried to kill your baby daughter! You must know!

Max: I'm sorry, ok! I'm sorry! I didn't know what i was doing! I'm tired! I just want some sleep and the baby wouldn't bloody shut up!

Tom: And that is your pathetic little excuse is it?! You were tired..that's why you tried to suffocate your own baby! You were tired!

Max: Oh shut up Tom! Just shut up!

Tom: Why? You might try and suffocate me too?

(Max gets up from the floor)

Tom: The nanny is staying...your obviously not fit to be a father!!

(Tom storms out cradling the baby in his hands, Max starts crying, realising the reality of what he just tried to do)

Xx-Vicky-xX
02-10-2006, 20:16
Thank god for Tom, hero of the hour, damn Max needs a head check, good stuff Dave

DaVeyWaVey
02-10-2006, 20:47
Scene 7- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Morning

(Chloe and Greg have gone out on a romantic day trip together. We see Kat leaving the bathroom after finishing putting some make-up on. She picks up the phone and dials a number with her long fingernails. The phone rings and she starts talking)

Kat: Hello, is this Hinston Church?

Kat: Yeah..hi..it's Chloe Blake here...

Kat: Yep..hello, i booked a wedding to my fiance Greg Finch for October the 15th...i rang yesterday?

Kat: Yeah that's right...well unfortunately, me and Greg have decided that we don't want to get married after all and we would like to cancel the wedding...

Kat: Yeah sorry for wasting your time...ok that's brilliant, ok then...bye!

(Kat hangs up the phone with a huge smile across her face)

Xx-Vicky-xX
02-10-2006, 20:49
OMG :eek: the cow, i hate her how could she do that

Jojo
02-10-2006, 21:35
OMG - I just knew she was going to do something!

Thank god Tom got there in time! Max needs to take a long look at himself and decide what he wants

DaVeyWaVey
03-10-2006, 20:19
Scene 8- The Campbells House- Morning

(Tanya is at home looking in the mirror, looking at her black eye after Eddie hit her. She rubs her hand over her black eye before starting to cry. Suddenly the phone rings. Tanya answers it, it's Luke ringing from prison. The scene cuts between Tanya and Luke)

Tanya: Luke! What are you doing ringing at this time babes?

Luke: I'm coming home Tan! I'm coming home!

Tanya: What?!...How?! :eek:

Luke: The case collapsed Tan! Because of Andy's dissapearance, there is no one to testify against me! The murder charges have been dropped! I'm coming home this afternoon!

Tanya: Oh babes! That's great news! Shall i come and pick you up from the prison?

Luke: Yeah...at 1pm..that's when i'm out! No more bullying, no more sleepless nights! I will be out of here! Back home, with you and the kids...

Tanya: Oh Luke...i'm so glad your being released but i just don't understand, how the case collapsed?!

Luke: Andy vanished...the police don't know where he is...that's all i know..but what does it matter! I'm gonna be out of prison, back in Hinston High with you and the kids!

Luke: Anyway, i have to go, i love you Tan!

Tanya: Oh Luke, i love you too...

(The phone hangs up. Tanya puts the phone down)

Bryan
03-10-2006, 20:47
:eek: to the baby suffocation - shocking stuff there, just good job tom saved the day!

:cool: to Kat, you know we all love you, ya twisted little bitch, go on and split them all, we're all behind you! :D

:cheer: to Luke returing, bring back the reunion and the spoiler that I know is set to unfold!


:bow: to daveywavey for writing a truely superb soap!

DaVeyWaVey
03-10-2006, 20:54
Episode 11

Scene 1- Hinston High- Noon

(Nina is walking to the local shops. She is walking in Hinston High and sees Mike entering the front gate of the Johnsons house. Nina shouts out to Mike)

Nina: Mike! Wait!

Mike: What do you want Nina?!

Nina: I want to explain Mike! The pub being burnt down wasn't my fault! I didn't set fire to our own business myself, you know!

Mike: I left you in charge though Nina! I left you in charge of our business. And after a few days, it's burnt to a crisp!

Nina: And it's not my fault!

Mike: How do you know the fire was caused deliberately? It could have been accidental!

Nina: It wasn't! I seen what happened!

Mike: And you never did anything?! You didn't try and stop them?!

Nina: I didn't have a bloody chance!

Mike: You allowed someone to burn down our pub, what a great wife you are! :rolleyes:

Nina: Your acting like a child Mike! Your acting like a petty little child, you don't know the full story! You weren't there when the pub caught fire! I was trapped inside...afraid that my life would be over!

Mike: Oh stop with the sob stories Nina! Just stop with the sob stories! I don't want to hear them!

Nina: Harry went in that pub to try and save me...

Mike: And apparently you already got out when he went in..he should have been the one who was afraid his life might be over, not you!

Nina: Why are you being so harsh Mike eh?! Why?! I thought you would come back fearing for my life...not fearing for the business! Does the pub mean more to you than me?! Have you ever loved me Mike?!

Mike: Oh don't be so damn stupid! Of course i love you and i always have done...it's just that our business has been destroyed and you let it happen! You could have done something!

Nina: Like what? Tackle the culprit to the floor when he had a lighter in his hand?!

Mike: Atleast you would have tried! Who was it anyway? Who set our pub on fire? You said you seen who did it!

Nina: It was Phil!

Mike: Phil?! Phil's dead!

Nina: He's not..he's alive...he wants revenge...that's why he burnt the pub down!

Mike: I never knew my wife was dillusional as well as stupid!

Nina: Mike, you have to believe me! I'm your wife!

Mike: You let our pub burn to the ground and now your saying a dead man who you murdered is the culprit!

Nina: Mike, keep your voice down!

Mike: Stop with the lies Nina! Stop with the lies!

(Mike enters the Johnson's house. Nina walks away, crying)

Xx-Vicky-xX
03-10-2006, 21:06
:bow: to daveywavey for writing a truely superb soap!

Amen to that Bry

Good stuff Dave cant believe Mike dont believe her

DaVeyWaVey
04-10-2006, 18:24
Scene 2- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(Tanya and Luke enter their house. Tanya comes in first, we see the bruise on her eye after Eddie punched her. Luke is following with a small suitcase in his hand. Tanya has just gone to pick him up, Luke has gone free after the case of Geena's murder collapsed)

Luke: Tan! I need to know!

(Luke slams the front door behind him. Tanya sits on the sofa feeling nervous and uncomfortable)

Tanya: I told you! I just walked into a door that's all so can we stop the fussing?!

Luke: But that's a massive bruise on your eye! It looks like someone has punched you!

Tanya: No one's punched me! Don't be so ridiculous! Anyway, the attention should be on you! You've just been released from prison, your a free man!

Luke: Stop trying to change the subject Tan! I can tell that this is serious!

(Tanya ignores what Luke is saying)

Tanya: And we can pop down the pub...you can show your face again, an innocent man! And this will be such a surprise for the kids...when they come home from school and see that your here, their faces will really light up! They've really missed you..you know?!

Luke: Tan! Did Andy do this to you? Did Andy punch you?!

Tanya: Andy's dissapeared Luke! You know that!

Luke: But you were gonna get revenge! You promised..and now i see you with a black eye and Andy's scarpered...something's gone on while i've been inside that i don't know about...and i think it's about time you told me...

(Tanya looks on anxiously as Luke looks at Tanya, concerned)

Jojo
04-10-2006, 18:57
Is Tanya going to reveal what really happened to Andy, or how she got her black eye?!

Great stuff as usual Dave..

Xx-Vicky-xX
04-10-2006, 19:05
Good stuff Dave cant wait to see if she tells him

DaVeyWaVey
04-10-2006, 21:38
Scene 3- The Campbells House- Afternoon

Tanya: Andy's dissapeared Luke! You know that!

Luke: But you were gonna get revenge! You promised..and now i see you with a black eye and Andy's scarpered...something's gone on while i've been inside that i don't know about...and i think it's about time you told me...

(Tanya looks on anxiously as Luke looks at Tanya, concerned)

Tanya: I don't need to tell you anything!

Luke: You do Tan! I can tell by the look on your face...something is troubling you...we've been married long enough for me to know that something's up...you can tell me, i'm your husband!

Tanya: I just want to forget about it, ok! I just want to sweep everything under the carpet and forget any of this ever happened!

Luke: There is something troubling you isn't there?!

(Tanya paces up and down the living room, frustrated with herself)

Luke: Your bottling something up! Just tell me what it is!

(Tanya screams)

Tanya: I can't take this anymore! I just can't take this anymore! I need to tell someone what happened! I need to tell somebody!

(Tanya breaks down on the carpet crying. Luke looks on shocked, he kneels down to comfort Tanya)

Luke: Oh Tan..i've never seen you like this! Your really worrying me now...what's wrong?!

Tanya: Just leave me alone....just leave me alone!

Luke: But Tan...

Tanya: Just leave!

Luke: Your keeping something from me and i want to know what it is! We're married Tan...i thought we said we wouldn't keep any more secrets, what happened to that promise eh?!

Tanya: I know where Andy is ok!? Is that enough for you?!

Luke: Where is he Tan!?

Tanya: He's lying in a ditch...dead! I killed him!

(Luke's face turns to utter amazement. He staggers to the floor in shock)

Bryan
04-10-2006, 21:45
*eastenders style drumbeats* cliffhanger of the series :eek:

so good to see Tanya and Luke reunited, me favourites back together to cause more high drama for HH!

keep up the great work Dave! :bow:

Jojo
05-10-2006, 11:38
Whats going to happen now Tanya has told him?! Will he be behind her all the way (as she did do it for him) ?!

Xx-Vicky-xX
05-10-2006, 13:30
:eek: she told him, fab scene great tension

DaVeyWaVey
05-10-2006, 21:42
Scene 4- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(Luke's face turns to utter amazement. He staggers to the floor in shock. Tanya starts crying. Luke is unable to say anything)

Tanya: Luke please! Say something!

Luke: You killed him?! You killed Andy!? Jesus Christ!

(Luke gets up from the floor, and rubs his hands over his mouth in total shock)

Tanya: Luke, i'm sorry!

Luke: I spose we are in the same boat...we've both killed somebody...we're both murderers!

Tanya: Don't say that Luke! Just don't say that!

Luke: But it's true Tan, we have to face facts! We are murderers!

Tanya: I just wish none of this ever happened...i just wish we never got involved with Andy Connel!

Luke: Well we did and we've got to face the consequences...

Tanya: Consequences?! I'm not facing any consequences! I want to move on, i want to forget that this ever happened! I want us to become a happy, normal family...

Luke: It's gonna take me a while to come to terms that you murderered someone...

Tanya: And it took me a while to come to terms that you shot dead Andy's wife!

Luke: I was forced into it Tan! Andy was evil, pure evil, if i didn't shoot his wife, we would be dead right now! Our kids would have become orphans!

Tanya: Oh don't try and put on the sympathetic innocent act!

(Luke points his finger at Tanya)

Luke: But, you! You killed someone out of spite...you murdered somebody in cold blood for revenge!

Tanya: It wasn't like that Luke! The revenge plan i had went wrong...he was gonna kill me, i had to do something! And besides i did you a favour, he's gone now.... meaning the case collapsed, if he was still around, you would face the rest of your life behind bars!

Luke: Don't try and turn what you did into something heroic! You killed somebody, it's a crime! It's nothing to be proud of!

Tanya: He had it coming...like you said, he was evil! Pure evil!

Luke: And have you covered your tracks?! Does someone know about this and is that why you have a black eye?!

Tanya: Stop jumping to conclusions Luke!

Luke: But was it like that?! Is what i'm saying true!?

Tanya: I told you, i walked into a door.....

Luke: I'm not gonna believe that for one bloody second!

Tanya: I am going to get the kids from school...

(Tanya grabs her coat and puts her shoes on but Luke blocks the door. Tanya realises she must tell Luke what happened)

Luke: Here we go again...you trying to change the subject! :rolleyes:

Tanya: I wanna forget this ever happened, i want to move on!

Luke: We're not moving on until you confess who hit you!

Tanya: It was a guy called Eddie...he works down the nightclub as a bouncer...

Luke: A bouncer did this to you?!

Tanya: Luke, just relax, please!

Luke: I can't believe i wasn't here to protect you! While i was inside, someone was giving you a black eye! I'm disgusted with myself!

Tanya: Luke, stop, please!

Luke: No one hits my wife and gets away with it!

(Luke marches out the front door and storms off, heading to the nightclub)

Xx-Vicky-xX
05-10-2006, 21:49
I sense this Luke isnt a very nice man, fab stuff Dave

Jojo
05-10-2006, 22:41
:hmm: Now its getting interesting - why is Tanya so different - it was to get Luke out! Some people are never grateful! :rotfl:

DaVeyWaVey
05-10-2006, 22:42
Scene 5- The Park- Afternoon

(George approaches the park in his wheelchair as he sees Sally sitting on the park bench in a daze)

George: Are you ok? You look like your in a dreamworld!

Sally: I just have a mixture of feelings at the moment, that's all...

George: Do you wanna talk? I have all the time in the world...

Sally: I'm sure you have better things to do than talk to me...

George: That's not true! I like talking to you...your the only friend i've got really...

Sally: And your the only person who seems to be here for me...my family are just too busy grieving for themselves to not realise what other people are feeling...

George: I told you Sal, i will always be here for you, through thick and thin...no matter what happens!

Sally: It's my father's funeral tomorrow...will you be here for me then?

George: Oh of course i will Sal, you know i will!

Sally: I'm really worried you know, i want the funeral to run smoothly, my mum and my sister are in a right state over my father's death...they haven't got over it, i don't think they ever will...

(Sally starts crying into George's arms. George comforts her)

George: They will get over it.... after the funeral, they will get over your father's death eventually and so will you...it just takes a long time that's all..

Sally: Oh George, you always stay so positive don't you!?

George: I like to stay positive.

Sally: I can't believe it's tomorrow though...tomorrow will be the last time that me, my family and Hinston High will pay their respects to my father, i'm just worried, i'm so worried for my family! I just keep thinking, how will they cope tomorrow?! Burying my father to the ground...saying goodbye...they'll find it so hard, so difficult...and i don't know what i could do...:crying:

(Sally starts crying. She looks into George's eyes. He has a concerned look on his face. Sally and George both share a hug)

Xx-Vicky-xX
05-10-2006, 22:45
Good stuff Dave them two are always so sweet

DaVeyWaVey
06-10-2006, 11:55
Scene 6- The Nightclub- Evening

(Luke approaches Hinston nightclub. The nightclub is open. Luke goes into the nightclub and sees Eddie sipping a glass of wine)

Eddie: We're closed mate! Come back in an hour!

Luke: Are you Eddie by any chance?

Eddie: Yeah....why?

(Luke goes up to Eddie and punches him in the face. Eddie falls back and knocks all the glass bottles behind him before collapsing to the floor. Eddie gets up and wipes the bleeding from his nose)

Eddie: What the bloody hell was that for!?

Luke: That was for hitting my wife...you piece of scum!

(Luke breaks a glass bottle, and forces Eddie against the wall. Luke puts the glass bottle to Eddie's neck. Eddie looks on, terrified)

Eddie: Just let go off me yeah?

Luke: No! You bloody well hit my wife didn't you eh!?

Eddie: Argh Tanya....the woman who murdered my boss!

Luke: He had it coming...

Eddie: She had a black eye coming!

(Luke kicks Eddie in his private parts. He falls to the floor in pain. Luke puts the broken glass bottle to Eddie's face. Eddie is still on the floor)

Eddie: Look, i'm sorry ok! I'm sorry! Just leave me alone!

Luke: I won't leave you alone until you leave Hinston for good...

Eddie: Don't worry i'm going, i'm packing my things!

Luke: You better get as far away from here as possible because if i ever see you again, you will be dead meat!

(Luke gets up from the floor and smashes the broken glass bottle against the wall before leaving the nightclub. Eddie gets up from the floor, clearly scared by Luke's threat)

Jojo
06-10-2006, 11:58
Ooo - I'm liking Luke!! Will Eddie clear out and will that be the last we hear of him?! :hmm:

This is great Dave - keep up the good work!

DaVeyWaVey
06-10-2006, 12:58
Scene 7- The Butleys House- Morning

(It's the morning of Ben's funeral. The Butley family are in a sombre mood as they prepare for the funeral. Julia is in her bedroom, looking in the mirror, seeing if her black dress fits on her well. Sally is in her bedroom reading over what she will say at the church. The camera turns to Marianne's bedroom. We see Marianne crying into her pillow. Sally leaves her bedroom and enters Marianne's bedroom)

Sally: Are you all set Marianne?

(Marianne lifts her face from the pillow, she turns to Sally and Sally can clearly see she has been crying)

Marianne: I can't go through with it Sal! I just can't go through with it!

(Marianne starts crying again. Sally sits on her bed by her side and puts her arm around her)

Sally: We've got to stay strong today Marianne for mum's sake....

Marianne: I can't stay strong! I've got to let everything out! I have too!

Sally: And that's why you are coming to the funeral, we have to say goodbye to dad properly...

Marianne: I don't want to say goodbye to dad though! I just want him back Sal! I want dad back! I want him back! :crying:

(Marianne sobs into Sally's shoulders. Sally tries her best to comfort her)

Sally: You know he won't come back Marianne and we have to accept that!

Marianne: But i want him back here...with us!

Sally: He'll still be here with us...he'll be looking down at us...we can always visit him...he'll hear us today at his funeral even if he's not there...

Marianne: But it's not the same though is it Sal!?

Sally: I know it's not, but we can get used to it...he'll always be here for us...loving us and we'll be loving him back! Just because dad's not here doesn't mean he can't still love us!

(Sally's eyes well up with tears)

Sally: Today is a goodbye to dad...but it doesn't mean he's gone...he'll never be gone...he'll still be here with us...forever!

(Sally gets up and leaves Marianne's bedroom, wiping the tears from her eyes. Marianne reflects on what Sally has said)

Xx-Vicky-xX
06-10-2006, 13:07
Oh i like the stuff with Luke though im still not sure what i make of him

:crying: That stuff with Sal was sad but i like to think that what she said is true with dead people good stuff Dave

Jojo
06-10-2006, 13:56
Wow - from the gripping episode of Luke and Eddie to the emotionally charged on just there! Fantastic stuff and great words from Sally!

DaVeyWaVey
06-10-2006, 15:59
Scene 8- Hinston High- Morning

(The Butley family are all suitably dressed for Ben's funeral. They leave their house and see the hearse approaching Hinston High. All the residents of Hinston High are gathered around Hinston High looking as the hearse slowly drives past them. We see that they all have tears in their eyes, and some residents can't help but cry when they see Ben's name made out of flowers leaning by his coffin inside the hearse. Everyone looks at the Butley family with sympathetic faces. The hearse drives past the Butley family and when Julia sees Ben's name, she collapses in the street in tears. Sally picks her up and comforts her)

Sally: Mum! Are you ok!?

Julia: No! I want my husband back!

(Julia's shouting turns to screaming)

Julia: I want my husband back now!!!

(Julia is on her knees in the street in floods of tears as she sees the hearse drive past her. Julia cries out and reaches her hand out to the hearse when she sees Ben's name in flowers)

Julia: Ben!! Ben!!!

(Julia falls to the floor and cries even more. The whole of Hinston High look on with tears in their eyes. We see Jenna whisper to Harry)

Jenna: This must be absolute hell for them! I have no idea what that family are going through...no idea!

(We cut back to the other side of the street where Julia is in floods of tears. Marianne watches her mother crying)

Marianne: I can't take this! I seriously can't take this!

(Marianne runs back into the house crying. Sally cries out to her sister)

Sally: Please Marianne! Please!

(George sees Sally struggling to cope. He comes across the street in his wheelchair and towards Sally)

George: Are you alright?

Sally: Does it look like it?!

George: I'm here to support you...give you a shoulder to cry on...

Sally: I'm sorry George...i'm sorry!

George: You don't have to be sorry...not on a day like today, come on let's head to the church eh!?

Sally: What about Marianne?

George: Give her time...i'm sure she will arrive at the church when she's ready...

(We see the Hinston High residents slowly walking towards the church and out of Hinston High. Sally helps pick her mother up from the floor. She is still crying. They all get into Liz's car and drive away following the hearse to the church. The camera cuts and we see Marianne inside the Butleys house crying into a cushion)

Xx-Vicky-xX
06-10-2006, 16:27
Good scene Dave very emotional bless them

DaVeyWaVey
08-10-2006, 18:48
Episode 12

Scene 1- Hinston Church- Morning

(All the residents of Hinston High are sitting down in the church, all of them have tears in their eyes, some residents are crying. The Butley family are trying to hold back their grief as Ben's funeral service continues)

Vicar: Now Ben's daughter, Sally will step up and say a few words about her father...

(Sally steps up wiping a tissue across her eyes to stop her crying. She steps up to where the vicar was speaking and starts talking)

Sally: I want to say a few words....a few words about my father...

(Sally gets a tissue from her pocket and wipes her eyes before starting to speak)

Sally: My father was a great father...my family was a great family....but now i don't have a great family and that's because of my murdering brother...me or my family will never get over what Danny did...we will never get over my father's death! Never! What happened on that night where my father was shot dead will stick in my mind forever...it will stick in my mind, my mum's mind and my sister's mind....my father is dead...we still haven't quite come to terms with that as a family but what we have to come to terms with is that my father is still watching over us...he's still here...his life may have been snatched away from him but i know he's still here! I know it!!

(Sally starts crying into her tissue. She overcomes her tears before speaking again)

Sally: I am now going to sing my father's favourite song...Mad World by Gary Jules...dad loves this...

(Sally starts singing Mad World by Gary Jules. As she sings the song, everyone in the church starts singing along to Ben's favourite song, crying at the same time)

Sally: All around me are familiar faces
Worn out places
Worn out faces
Bright and early for the daily races
Going no where
Going no where
Their tears are filling up their glasses
No expression
No expression
Hide my head I wanna drown my sorrow
No tomorrow
No tomorrow
And I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had
I find it hard to tell you
I find it hard to take
When people run in circles it's a very very
Mad world
Mad world
Children waiting for the day they feel good
Happy birthday
Happy birthday
Made to feel the way that every child should
Sit and listen
Sit and listen
Went to school and I was very nervous
No one knew me
No one knew me
Hello teacher tell me what's my lesson
Look right through me
Look right through me
And I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had
I find it hard to tell you
I find it hard to take
When people run in circles it's a very very
Mad world
Mad world
Enlarging your world
Mad world,they say they
Say theys theys they no!!

(Sally stops singing. Sally's eyes well up with tears)

Sally: Thank you...thank you for singing along, dad would have loved that...

(Sally starts crying as goes back to sit down)

DaVeyWaVey
09-10-2006, 20:52
Scene 2- Hinston Graveyard- Noon

(All the residents of Hinston High are standing in the graveyard watching as Ben's coffin is lowered into the ground. Julia and Sally are both hugging each other, offering each other comfort)

Sally: Why did it have to end like this mum eh?! Why did it have to end like this?!

Julia: I don't know love...but what i do know is that Marianne should be here, saying goodbye to her father, but she's not, she should be ashamed of herself! :angry:

Sally: Mum..this is hard for Marianne!

Julia: It's hard for all of us Sal! It's hard for all of us!

(Julia suddenly turns round and sees a police car in the distance. She then turns round in a different direction and sees Danny in handcuffs approaching his father's grave)

Julia: What the bloody hell is he doing here?! He has no bloody right!

(Julia's face turns to fury)

(Sally turns to see Danny)

Sally: Christ! :eek: Mum! Please don't cause a scene...

Vicar: From ashes to ashes to dust to dust...

Julia: Stop Vicar! Just stop!

(Danny has approached Ben's grave. The residents of Hinston High are looking at Danny in disgust. Danny is looking nervous)

Danny: Mum...Sal...

Julia: You were no son of mine...

Danny: I just came to pay my respects...

Julia: Pay your respects!? The cheek of that! You have no right to be here...get out of my face! This is Ben's day...the attention is on him! You just want the attention to be on yourself!

Danny: No Mum! It's not like that!

Sally: Just leave Danny...

Julia: No one wants you here...you piece of murdering scum!

(Danny starts crying. He collapses to his knees by Ben's grave)

Danny: I'm sorry dad...i'm so sorry! I never meant for it to happen! Please forgive me!

Julia: He can't forgive you! He's dead....and you made it happen! Get out of my sight!

Danny: Don't worry i'm leaving...that's all i wanted to do...

(Danny gets up and starts crying as he walks away from Ben's grave in handcuffs with the police officer accompanying him. Everyone stares at Danny as he walks, in disgust)

Jojo
09-10-2006, 21:17
I do feel quite sorry for Danny - he shouldn't have done it but I dont think he truly meant to and now everyone hates him.

DaVeyWaVey
10-10-2006, 17:46
Scene 3- The Cafe- Afternoon

(It is Ben's wake. The residents of Hinston High are in the cafe, helping themselves to food and talking amongst themselves. Julia is in the corner with tears in her eyes. Sally walks over, concerned)

Sally: Eh Mum! What's up?

Julia: Take a guess Sal! :rolleyes:

Sally: Is it Danny?

Julia: Yeah it is...

Sally: Well what is it mum?

(Sally sits down by her mum and comforts her)

Julia: I didn't mean to say what i said...i called Danny "murdering scum"...no mother calls her son that! I feel ashamed...

Sally: Oh mum...Danny understands....he's done wrong, he's commited murder...he knows how upset we all are...

Julia: But it was no excuse! I shouldn't have said those words to Danny...i regret what i said...:(

Sally: What you said was a bit harsh, i admit...but it's what Danny deserves...he killed dad! He's wrecked our family!

Julia: I know he's wrecked our family but do you think Ben would have wanted this eh?! For us all to argue!

Sally: I guess not...but he would want Danny to have a good telling off, he would want Danny to be punished and he will be punished...but you gave him a good telling off today mum, and dad would have been proud!

Julia: No he wouldn't have been proud! "Scum" is a word that dad never approved off...

(Sally gives Julia a hug..Julia starts crying)

Julia: I said such hurtful words today...such hurtful words...:crying:

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-10-2006, 10:48
Just caught up, good stuff Dave

DaVeyWaVey
14-10-2006, 16:49
Scene 5- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Ben's wake continues. The Hinston residents are all sitting around chatting, the Butley family are reliving old memories of Ben, and some are helping themselves to food. Megan is serving drinks to the residents. She sees Luke sitting on his own at a table. She walks over to him, clearly attracted to him and sits down by his side)

Megan: Wanna drink?

Luke: I think i'll pass...but thanks!

Megan: Oh c'mon! You seem like a right misery guts, here...get this gin and tonic down you!

(Megan passes Luke a glass of gin and tonic and he gulps it in one)

Megan: Well, you sure needed that!

Luke: Where did you get the drink from?

Megan: All alcohol is stored in my bedroom, got it from a stock supplier...

Luke: Don't you need to go and serve other people?!

Megan: No i've served everybody else their drinks, i just thought i'd come and sit down by you, keep you company...

Luke: Well i don't need any company, thanks!

Megan: Oooh your uptight! I love a man who's uptight!

(Megan starts feeling Luke's leg. Luke feels increasingly uncomfortable)

Megan: I've never seen you around here before....

Luke: I've been in prison...but i could say the same about you...

(Luke eventually eyes up Megan and he rests his hands on her phigh)

Megan: I'm new here, i work at the cafe, crap job though...

Luke: Atleast you've got a job! I've been in prison and have lost a job as a builder!

Megan: Oooh...a hot builder! You must have a bit of muscle on you...

Luke: You could take a deep look at my muscles upstairs if you want...

Megan: I'd love too...

(Megan lets out a smile. Luke and Megan head upstairs and into Megan's bedroom without being seen)

DaVeyWaVey
14-10-2006, 17:03
Scene 6- The Woods House- Evening

(Tom and Max have come from Ben's wake early. Joanna has been looking after Max's daughter since they've been gone. Max and Tom stroll in through the door, arguing with each other)

Tom: You can't do it Max! You just can't do it! Imagine how she will feel!

Max: I don't care how she feels! Joanna's getting the sack, and that's it!

(Joanna overhears from the living room and runs to the hallway to confront Tom and Max, horrified)

Joanna: Your sacking me!

Max: I'm sorry, but there's no other choice!

Joanna: You can't just sack me!

Max: I can do what i like, you work for me!

Joanna: Tom was the one who hired me to look after your daughter! And besides, if i get the sack, that little girl will be all alone! You two will just turn a blind eye and ignore her!

Max: It's not gonna be like that anymore! I have accepted she's my daughter!

Tom: I'm not stupid Max! I can remember what happened last night, you know...

Max: Last night was a mistake! I regret what i tried to do! Surely you can understand that?!

Tom: I try to understand it but i just can't...what would have happened if i didn't stop you eh?!

Joanna: What are you guys on about?!

Max: Family business....nothing to do with you which is why i'm sacking you!

Tom: You can't sack her Max! Your not fit to be a father after what you did last night! I try and forget about what happened, put it out of my mind but i just can't! Joanna knows how to look after your daughter!

Max: So why doesn't she just go ahead and adopt her then eh?! Do us all a bloody favour! :rolleyes:

Tom: Don't be so ridiculous Max! All i'm saying is that Joanna can't be sacked!

Joanna: Your brother is right Max, i can't be sacked! I know where Amy is! I know where your daughter's mum is!

(Tom and Max look at each other and then at Joanna, both shocked)

DaVeyWaVey
14-10-2006, 17:12
Scene 7- The Cafe- Evening

(Everyone has started going home from the cafe following Ben's wake. Pat and Felicity are clearing up)

Felicity: I just realised...where's Megan gone?

Pat: She's obviously skiving off! Can't face work, too afraid of breaking a nail most probably. :rolleyes:

Felicity: Well i am damn right sick of her excuses! She's probably in her bedroom right now and i am gonna go up there and tell her to come down here and help us clear up!

Pat: Just don't get in another scrap with her yeah?!

Felicity: I'm not scared of that cow!

(Felicity heads upstairs. We cut to Megan's bedroom, where we see Luke and Megan's clothes on the floor. The camera turns and we see Luke and Megan in bed together, kissing each other passionately)

Luke: I can't believe this has happened! I've just got out of prison and i'm lucky already!

Megan: Well i don't wanna be a girl that you can brag to your mates about!

(We cut back to Felicity who is approaching Megan's bedroom)

Felicity: Megan, you in there?! Your meant to be helping clear up! :rolleyes:

Megan: ****!!

Luke: Oh my god!

(Felicity slowly walks to Megan's bedroom and opens the door....)

Bryan
14-10-2006, 17:15
wow what a pairing! how can Luke cheat on Tanya after all she did to get him out of jail!? Seriously tough Luke and Megan are a great pairing, cant wait to see what happens with this storyline...but will Felicity catch them out just as its started!?

Xx-Vicky-xX
15-10-2006, 10:21
Good stuff Dave, cant believe you left it there though

DaVeyWaVey
15-10-2006, 11:44
Luke: Oh my god!

(Felicity slowly walks to Megan's bedroom and opens the door and sees Luke and Megan lying next to each other, frozen, in bed together. Felicity's face turns to shock)

Felicity: Christ!

(Felicity slams the door behind her. Megan holds the bedsheets up to her to cover her naked body as Luke climbs out of bed)

Megan: It's not what it looks like....i swear!

Felicity: It's exactly what it looks like! How could you two?!...How could you?!

(Felicity's face turns to anger)

Megan: You better not bloody well say anything!

Felicity: For christ sake, it was Ben's wake and you were up here shagging each other to death! Don't you have any respect?!

Megan: For god sake! Your sounding like my mother!

(Felicity tries to hold back her anger)

Luke: Right...i best be going...

Felicity: Your gonna walk out of this bedroom like nothing has happened?! You've just cheated on your wife! After all that Tanya has done for you to get you out of prison, this is how you repay her?!

Luke: Stop with the bloody lectures will ya?! It was only a bit of light-hearted fun!

Felicity: Light-hearted fun?! The pair of you make me sick!

(Luke heads for the door. Megan is still in bed, not knowing what to do. Felicity blocks the door)

Felicity: You two aren't going anywhere!

Luke: Oh yes, i'm going home....for some tea!

(Felicity slaps Luke across the face. Luke falls back holding his hands to his cheek)

Felicity: Tanya don't deserve you! You cheating scum! She deserves to know what you two have been up to!

Megan: (shocked) Your not gonna tell her are you?! :eek:

Felicity: What did you think i was gonna do?! Pretend i never saw you in bed together?! Keep quiet?!

(Pat suddenly heads upstairs)

Pat: Felicity love..i need your help clearing up! I thought you were just gonna get Megan but you've been up there for ages!

(Pat approaches Megan's bedroom)

Felicity: Mum...go back downstairs, i will be down in a minute!

(Pat heads back downstairs)

Felicity: Wow! Well that was a close shave, imagine if she burst into the room instead of me and caught you in the act! :rolleyes:

Luke: Thanks Flic..

Felicity: Thanks for what?!

Luke: Making Pat go back downstairs...she was about to burst into this bedroom!

Megan: I beg you Flic! Keep this quiet!

Felicity: Why?! You've been horrible to me since the day you arrived, why should i do you a favour and keep what you and Luke have been up to quiet?!

Megan: Because if you don't, i will get you back...good and proper!

Luke: You two stop arguing! I just want to go!

Megan: Your not going anywhere until Felicity promises to keep us quiet!

Luke: Christ! You actually think that your special!? Me and you are just a one-off Megan! It won't happen again!

Megan: Luke! How can you say that!?

Luke: Because i have a wife and kids!

Felicity: Fine! Ok! I will keep this quiet....

(Luke and Megan breathe a sigh of relief)

Felicity: But you have to give me something in return!

Megan: Like what?!

Felicity: A weekly payment! Both of you pay me £500 a week and i will keep what you have been up to quiet! :cool:

(Megan is horrified)

Megan: But...But that's blackmail! :eek:

Felicity: If you two don't pay me, i'll tell! Call it...payback time!

(Felicity leaves Megan's bedroom and heads back downstairs with a smile on her face)

Bryan
15-10-2006, 12:09
now isnt felcitity a little minx!? Blackmail - i dont like that - Luke and Megan are two of my favourite characters, lets hope Megan shows felicity some revenge!!!

I hope this isnt the end of the luke/megan relationship before its even begun

great episode there dave! :clap:

DaVeyWaVey
15-10-2006, 18:50
Scene 8- The Woods House- Night

(Tom and Max are reeling from Joanna's revelation that she knows who Max's daughter's mum is)

Max: What?! :eek: But how would you know! Your...your just a nanny! :eek:

Joanna: So! I'm a nanny, i look after children, sometimes i deal with mums who can't cope with children...your daughter's mum, Amy fitted into that category...

Tom: But i don't get it...why didn't you tell us this sooner?!

Joanna: Christ! I've only just started working for you...i wanted to get a chance...pick the right moment to tell you both...

Max: Well you picked a wonderful moment didn't ya eh!? :rolleyes:

Joanna: Well i was about to get the sack! I had to tell you what i knew before i leave! Anyway, i guess you don't want me here for much longer so i best be going...

(Joanna heads for the door)

Tom: No! Wait! You can't leave after telling us this!

Joanna: Your brother wants me to leave Tom, so i'm off!

Tom: But this has changed everything! Thanks to you, we can find Amy!

Max: I don't want to find Amy though, i've just come to terms that i have a daughter, i don't wanna go and find my daughter's mother now!

Tom: But if we know where she is, we have too! For the baby's sake so she can meet her mum! We could persaude Amy to come back, you never know you, Amy and your daughter, you could make a happy family!

Max: That will never happen! Amy was just a one-off and she doesn't love her baby, she dumped her daughter on us! She's made her bed so she can lie in it!

(Max storms off to the kitchen. Tom turns to Joanna)

Tom: I don't care what Max says, i want to find Amy now, i want to bring her back here and reunite her with her daughter whether Max likes it or not!

Joanna: Max won't like it guaranteed!

Tom: I don't care...can you take me to where Amy is?

(Joanna lets out a sigh)

Joanna: I guess it would be good if the baby was reunited back with her mother. :)

Tom: Thanks Joanna...

(Joanna leaves the Woods House. Before she leaves, she gives Tom a kiss on the cheek)

DaVeyWaVey
16-10-2006, 19:55
Episode 13

Scene 1- The Campbells House- Night

(Tanya is watching a cosmetic surgery programme on television. Luke is sitting in an armchair, thinking to himself)

Tanya: Are you gonna be like this all night? You haven't hardly said a sentence to me since you walked in through that front door!

Luke: I'm fine, just stop going on at me!

Tanya: But i'm worried about you...i know there's something wrong! I'm your wife! You can tell me!

Luke: There's nothing up! Just leave it will ya?!

Tanya: There's something on your mind Luke..that your not telling me!

Luke: Christ Tan! What would i have on my mind at a time like this eh?! I've got no job...no responsibilities, what would be on my mind?!

Tanya: I just wish you wouldn't be so snappy! You've been in such a mood all night! Is it Ben? Is his death getting to you?!

Luke: No! It's not that! I hardly never knew the man! We never crossed paths, i said hello to him now and again as we were neighbours but i never bonded with him or anything!

Tanya: Then what is it then?!

(Luke starts shouting at Tanya. They soon start shouting at each other and it becomes a slanging match)

Luke: Bloody hell! I've had enough of this!! You trying to figure out what's wrong! Nothing's wrong! I'm off to bed!

Tanya: Guess you won't be in the mood for some fun when i get to bed then?!

Luke: No i won't! Goodnight!

Tanya: Fine! Be like that!

(Tanya turns around and turns the volume up on the television. Luke goes into his and Tanya's bedroom)

DaVeyWaVey
16-10-2006, 20:08
Scene 2- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Morning

(Kat, Chloe and Greg are all around the table eating breakfast. Kat looks delighted with herself)

Chloe: You look in a happy mood this morning?! Something your not telling us?

Kat: No..i suppose it's just a nice morning...you have to be happy really...

(The phone suddenly rings. Chloe goes to answer it)

Chloe: Hello?.... What?!?! :eek: What do you mean?! What are you talking about?! :eek:

(Greg shows some concern on his face)

Chloe: But it can't be! Me and Greg....we booked the wedding ourselves..this can't have happened! It can't have!

(Chloe starts shouting down the phone)

Chloe: We booked the wedding for 25th of October!!...i don't understand...this can't be happening!

(Chloe hangs up the phone and starts crying. Greg runs up to hug Chloe)

Greg: Chloe...what's wrong?

(Tears are rolling down Chloe's face as she speaks)

Chloe: It's our wedding....it's been cancelled!!

Greg: What?! :eek: But it can't be....it can't be!! :eek:

Chloe: They just rang to comfirm the cancellation! We didn't cancel anything though did we eh?! :crying:

(Chloe sobs into Greg's arms. Kat acts as if she's devastated)

Kat: Christ! I don't understand! How could this have happened!! I was going to be your bridesmaid!!

Greg: We all don't understand...

Kat: Whoever cancelled your bloody wedding will pay...my claws will be out once i find out who did this! :angry:

DaVeyWaVey
16-10-2006, 20:24
Scene 3- The Johnsons House- Morning

(Harry is getting ready to go to work. He has a piece of toast in his mouth and tying his shoelaces at the same time. Jenna has a baby magazine in her hand trying to talk to Harry)

Jenna: Harry love! We have to think of these things...we've got loads of plans to make with our little baby bundle on the way...nine months may seem far away but it's fast approaching!

Harry: I'm well aware but i must dash to work, i can't be late again!

(Jenna holds up the baby magazine to Harry)

Jenna: What do you think of this cot for the baby? Shall we get it?! Or is too expensive?! Do you think our baby will like it? Or do you wanna build one to save the money?! I suppose it's a possibility, don't ya think?!

Harry: Jenna please! Since you've found out that your pregnant, all you've ever talked about is babies, i am getting sick of it!

Jenna: But we gotta get prepared Harry! Our bundle of joy will be here with us sooner than you think!

Harry: Look! I've gotta go to work...we'll talk about it later!

(Harry gives Jenna a quick peck on the cheek)

Jenna: You always say that but we never get round to talking about it..it's like your trying to avoid the subject!

Harry: Look i'm not, i've just got a lot on my mind at the moment with my work, i'm not trying to avoid anything! See you later darling...

(Harry kisses Jenna again before leaving. Once Harry leaves, Jenna starts flicking through her baby magazine again)

DaVeyWaVey
17-10-2006, 21:57
Scene 4- The Burdecks House- Noon

(Sally knocks on the Burdecks front door. Liz answers)

Liz: Yes?

Sally: Is George in? I wanted to speak to him...

Liz: What about?

Sally: I just wanted to say thank you for him supporting me at the funeral that's all...

Liz: Well i will pass on the message, good day to you!

(Liz gives a sarcastic smile to Sally. She tries to shut the front door on Sally but Sally puts her hand in the way of the door)

Sally: Wait! I want to speak to George myself! Isn't he in?!

Liz: No! Now go, please!

Sally: No! I want to speak to George!

Liz: Just piss of will ya?! You and your family have already done enough damage to my son!

Sally: Eh! Where's all this come from?! I would never harm George, we've become friends in the past few weeks, he's helped me through my father's death! He deserves a thank you!

Liz: He deserves a formal apology! Your brother made my son paralysed for the rest of his life! He will be in a wheelchair for the rest of his life! Imagine how that will feel for him?!

Sally: I can't imagine but i am nothing like my brother neither are my family!

Liz: You and your family have the same flesh and blood as Danny!

(There's a pause)

Liz: So just get lost and stay away from my son! He don't want any hassle from the likes of you or your family!

(Liz slams the front door in Sally's face. Sally slowly walks away from the front door, looking upset)

DaVeyWaVey
17-10-2006, 22:04
Scene 5- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Afternoon

(Greg and Chloe are out of the flat. Kat is in the flat all on her own. We see her in her bedroom. She has put a padlock on her bedroom door and locked herself in. The camera turns into her bedroom. We see Kat kneeling on the floor praying, she looks up at the wall where she has a designed a shrine of loads of photos she has taken of Greg. She lets out a smile before lighting some candles around her. She puts her hands together and starts praying)

Kat: Oh Greg....Oh Greg!! Gregory! Greg! Gregory! Greg! Gregory! Greg! You know you want me! Gregory! Greg! Gregory! Greg!

(Kat gets up and starts kissing the shrine of Greg on the wall)

Kat: You want me Greg! Gregory! Greg! The candles tell me that you want me! The lighted candles are lit and they're whispering to me! You want me! Gregory! Greg!

DaVeyWaVey
18-10-2006, 21:45
Scene 6- Hinston High- Afternoon

(Mike and Nina are arguing in the street in full view of passers by)

Nina: Mike, it wasn't my fault! I didn't want the pub to burn down!

Mike: But you let it burn down didn't ya eh?! Our business, our livelihood! All in tatters!

Nina: I love you Mike! I just want you back with me!

Mike: It's too late, i thought you could look after our business but you were useless weren't ya?!

Nina: Love is all that matters! Not our poxy business!

Mike: So the pub was poxy now was it?!

Nina: I didn't mean it like that! And besides, the builders are starting to rebuild it again, and we're getting insurance, money! We can start a fresh, forget this ever happened...please! Mike, i love you!

Mike: I want to know who was responsible though! I want to know who burnt our pub down! Who ruined our business and livelihood!

Nina: And i told you, i know who did it! It was Phil!

Mike: And how often do you want me to drag it up eh?! Phil is dead!

(whispers) You killed him!

Nina: I didn't! He survived what happened and he's come back for revenge!

Mike: Something's wrong with you Nina! Since i've come back, our pub's been burnt down and you think a dead man has come back to life! You need help Nina! Professional help!

Nina: How bloody dare you!! I know what i saw!

(Nina gives Mike a slap across the face. Suddenly a gunshot from the bushes rings out and Mike falls to the floor. Nina screams as she looks over Mike's motionless body on the ground. He's been shot in the back)

DaVeyWaVey
18-10-2006, 21:59
Scene 7- The Cafe- Afternoon

(The cafe is busy. Pat is wiping over tables as Megan is serving customers. Felicity appears from the counter to speak to her mother)

Felicity: Mum, i'm just off upstairs on my break...is that ok?!

Pat: Ok love, you deserve it, you've been grinding down to work most of the day!

Felicity: Thanks mum!

(Megan sees Felicity going upstairs. While Pat's turning the other way, Megan skives off her duties and heads upstairs, following Felicity. Megan gets to the top of the stairs and is confronted by Felicity)

Felicity: Shouldn't you be working?!

Megan: No, i came up here to put you in your place!

Felicity: Shouldn't it be the other way round?! After all, i'm blackmailing you!

Megan: No your not! You must be bonkers if you think me and Luke are paying you money to keep quiet over our one-off!

Felicity: Fine then! I'll go squeeling to Tanya over what her husband and you have been up to!

Megan: I thought you really knew me by now Flic! I thought after what i did to you last time, you would steer clear!

Felicity: I'm not scared of you Megan! You think your a control freak don't ya eh?! Well i am still gonna tell Tanya about what you've been getting up too with her husband!

Megan: You won't be doing anything of the sort!

(Megan slaps Felicity in the face before kicking her to the floor. Felicity yelps in pain)

Megan: I burnt your face last time with candles remember?! Well if you squeel, your face will come off for good as well as your tits! You won't be saying anything ok?!

(Felicity struggles to speak. Megan grabs hold of Felicity's neck and clenches it)

Megan: You got that?!

(Felicity struggles to speak)

Felicity: Ok...Ok..

(Megan spits at Felicity's face before heading back down to the cafe. Felicity gets up from the floor, clearly in a state)

DaVeyWaVey
19-10-2006, 18:00
Scene 8- The Weatherbys House- Afternoon

(Alicia is in the kitchen doing some housework, while Christina is lounging on the sofa reading Closer magazine)

Christina: Oh my goodness, what a great read! Closer has loads more celebrity gossip than Heat magazine!

Alicia: To be honest Christina, i couldn't really care!

Christina: What's wrong with you!? You've been in a mood for most of the day!

Alicia: I thought that you might actually know why i'm in a mood! :rolleyes:

Christina: In a matter of fact, i don't! You've been dropping hints for most of the day but i clearly don't see what your problem is!

(Alicia sits down on the sofa)

Alicia: The problem is you! Your lazy! It's about time you got a job! Since after what happened with the drugs, you've been lounging about the house all day, doing absolutely nothing!

Christina: It was a hard time for me mum! I was shaken up after what happened, i just needed to relax!

Alicia: So now you've got over it, you can get a job can't you?!

Christina: No i'm still trying to get over it...

Alicia: That excuse won't wash with me anymore young lady! Go on, hop it!

Christina: Fine, i'll go out!

Alicia: Out down the job centre i hope!

(Christina tuts before heading to the door. Nina suddenly bursts in through the front door in a panic)

Christina: Gosh! What's wrong with you?!

Nina: Call an ambulance! Call an ambulance now!

Alicia: What heaven's for?!

Nina: It's Mike! He's been shot!

(Alicia and Christina have a shocking but devastating look on their faces)