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DaVeyWaVey
19-10-2006, 18:17
Episode 14

Scene 1- The Burdecks House- Evening

(Liz and George are both eating chicken curry at the dinner table. All is silent until George starts speaking)

George: Who was at the door earlier?!

Liz: What a random question! Why do you ask that son?! Loads of people knock on our front door everyday!

George: But i heard you! You slammed the door on them earlier! You never usually do that...

Liz: Oh that! It was just a guy advertising double-glazed windows...they really get on my nerves so i just told him to get lost and that's why i slammed the door.

George: I'm not stupid mum! I thought you might have been atleast honest with me...

Liz: What? What are you talking about?!

George: Sally was at the door wasn't she?! I heard you two speaking earlier...she wanted to see me and you wouldn't let her!

(Liz lets out a huff)

Liz: Look son...i did you a favour! Her family have already caused enough damage, i mean for god sake, Sally's brother put you in a wheelchair! I don't want you to get involved with her or her family!

George: I'm old enough to make my own decisions mum!

Liz: I'm only thinking of your safety..if you go near them again, you will end up with two broken arms as well as two broken legs!

George: Sally or her family aren't like that at all! They're all nice, nothing like Danny!

Liz: Just stay away from Sally ok?! I don't want you getting hurt!

George: I'm not gonna listen to you! I like Sally...she's kind...nice..nothing like her brother! In fact, i think i love her!

Liz: What?! :eek: How the bloody hell can you love the girl who's brother made you paralysed?!

George: I can't help the way i feel!

(George smashes his dinner plate on the floor in a state before pushing himself in his wheelchair away from the dinner table)

DaVeyWaVey
19-10-2006, 22:08
Scene 2- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Evening

(Greg and Chloe come running through the front door, both with excitement on their faces. Kat turns round in disgust wondering what the fuss is about)

Kat: What are you both so excited about?!

Greg: Mine and Chloe's wedding! It's back on!

Kat: What?! :eek: How?! :eek: It's been cancelled, it can't be back on!

Chloe: Oh stop worrying will ya?! Mine and Greg's wedding is back on, don't worry about how!

Kat: But how?! I don't understand...

Greg: We just spoke to the vicar and he rebooked it for the 4th of November!

(Kat is delighted but it's just a disguise, inside, she is raging with jealousy)

Kat: Well that's great! I guess i get to be your bridesmaid after all...

Chloe: Yep! You certainly do! And as your a bridesmaid, you will come round the shops with me and help me pick out a wedding dress!

Kat: Oh..i'm not good at picking out good dresses..

Chloe: Oh come on Kat! Your my best friend as well as my bridesmaid, it's your duty to help me pick out a wedding dress!

Kat: Yeah..well, as long as you trust me!

Chloe: Of course i do! Also, i want you to give me away at the wedding!

(Kat speaks with shock)

Kat: Give you away?! :eek: But...but..

Chloe: You've been my best friend for yonks, come on, you have too!

Kat: Yeah ok then...

Chloe: Mine and Greg's special day is gonna be so special...:wub:

Greg: That reminds me we will need to book the honeymoon too!

Chloe: Oh Kat will help us with that too, won't ya?!

(Kat starts shouting, she loses it)

Kat: Oh bloody hell! Do i have to help you with everything?! Do i have to be involved in everything to do with your wedding?!

(Chloe and Greg look at Kat, surprised)

Kat: I'm off!

(Kat walks out the front door, fuming and full of rage)

DaVeyWaVey
20-10-2006, 18:24
Scene 3- Hinston Hospital- Evening

(Mike is recovering in hospital after being shot by in the back by an intruder in Hinston High. Nina is by his bedside speaking to her husband)

Nina: The doctor said you can come home tomorrow!

Mike: Home?! I've got no home! It was burnt down!

Nina: Please don't get snappy with me love, they said you could be discharged tomorrow then...that sound better for you?! :rolleyes:

Mike: I'm just facing facts! I don't have a proper home of my own!

Nina: We don't have a proper home of our own!! Anyway, the doctor said you were lucky to escape serious injuries...

Mike: Who would shoot me though in pure daylight and why did it happen?! It was all too random too me...

Nina: I think i know who did this to you...

(Mike knows what Nina is thinking)

Mike: Oh don't start that theory again! Phil's dead...get it in too your thick skull!

Nina: Oh i give up with you Mike! You won't give me a chance!

Mike: You don't deserve a chance, not after what happened to our pub!

Nina: That's it! I'm going...i'm leaving...

Mike: Good! I want some bloody piece and quiet and not listening to conspiracy theories! :rolleyes:

Nina: I mean, i'm leaving for good Mike! I've apologised about what happened even though it wasn't my fault that the pub got burnt down! And i thought we could face this as a married couple...i've lost as much as you! But you just think about your own bloody self!

Mike: Oh piss off Nina! I can't do with you yelling at me!

(Nina storms off out of the hospital. We see Phil by the entrance. He starts following Nina. Nina turns the corner where Phil grabs her by the throat. Nina jumps out of her skin. Phil covers Nina's eyes)

Phil: Guess who?...

DaVeyWaVey
20-10-2006, 18:44
Scene 4- The Woods House- Night

(Max is out on the town for the night. Tom and Joanna are sitting in the lounge)

Joanna: So are we on for tomorrow then?!

Tom: To be honest, i really don't know...i'm starting to have second thoughts over all of this..

Joanna: You said it yourself, Max's little girl deserves to know her mother, or atleast meet her!

Tom: I know..i know...but well, my thoughts have changed...i feel like i will be going behind my brother's back if we find his baby's mother!

Joanna: You won't be...i'm sure he will thank you in the long run...after all, you have his daughter's best interests at heart. :)

Tom: I know what my brother is like though...he won't realise why we're doing this! He just answers everything he doesn't like with his fists..he doesn't think of the logic behind it!

Joanna: Well if he starts on you, he will start on me! :)

(Tom lets out a smile)

Tom: Thanks! :) But what if Amy doesn't want to meet her daughter? What if she doesn't want to come with us too see her?! All these questions are running through my mind!

Joanna: Stop thinking about the buts! I've been a nanny for a long while now...i know how to tackle situations like this...i know plenty of mothers who have been in Amy's position...who've dumped their baby on someone's doorstep and done a runner...but every mother i've worked with, they've always come back to their senses...wanting to know their child again!

Tom: I just hope this works with Amy!

Joanna: Trust me, i'm highly confident that she will be back here this time tomorrow wanting to know her daughter again!

Tom: I hope you're right!

Joanna: You know i'm right!

(Joanna laughs. Tom smiles)

Tom: I'm glad your here...

Joanna: Why?

Tom: You always put a positive light on things!

Joanna: We on for tomorrow then? Tracking down Amy?!

Tom: Of course we are..

(Tom and Joanna gaze into each other's eyes before leaning in for a kiss. Their kiss turns to a snog and soon they are rolling on the floor with each other kissing each other. Joanna takes off Tom's shirt as Tom unzips his trousers and strips off Joanna's clothes...)

DaVeyWaVey
20-10-2006, 18:54
Scene 5- Outside Hinston Hospital- Night

Phil: Guess who?...

Nina: Oh my god! Phil! :eek:

Phil: Correct...

(Nina starts crying)

Nina: I'm sorry..look you've got your revenge...can't you just leave?! You've burnt my business, my home down and because of that my marriage is on the rocks! And i know you shot my husband!

Phil: Correct again....i wonder if you guess what my final revenge will be?!

Nina: Just let go off me!

(Phil grabs Nina by the neck. She fails to overstrain Phil as he carries her to his car. She screams)

Phil: Now come on! Don't cause a scene!

(Nina struggles as Phil opens the boot and bundles her in)

Phil: Time to pay the final, ultimate price for trying to kill me, you bitch!

(Phil slams the car boot down)

Xx-Vicky-xX
20-10-2006, 21:03
Just caught up...finally, fab stuff Dave still very much hating Megan, im glad Flic blackmailed her but she shoudlnt have backed down on it

DaVeyWaVey
21-10-2006, 14:47
Scene 6- Abandoned Factory- Night

(Nina is tied to a chair with gaffotape around her mouth. Phil is walking round her, as Nina looks terrified)

Phil: I've decided to keep you in suspense Nina....

(Nina squeels)

Phil: Got something to say?!

(Phil takes the gaffotape off Nina's mouth allowing her to speak)

Nina: Just please let me go! I'm sorry, i'm sorry i hurt you before...i didn't mean too, i'm not usually like that!

(Nina sobs)

Phil: I'm not falling for that! If you wanna get out of this abandoned factory alive, you have to cook up something better!

(Nina screams with fright)

Phil: There's no point in screaming Nina! This place is abandoned, no one will be able to hear you!

(Phil laughs)

(Nina carries on screaming)

Phil: Fine then...scream all you want, it don't bother me...

(Nina spits at Phil)

Nina: I wish i never met you! You piece...you piece of scum!

Phil: Now that's not very nice...you've just dug yourself a hole by calling me scum, just don't make the hole deeper!

Nina: Please, just let me go! I've learnt my lesson! I know i shouldn't have hurt you! Let's just leave it at that eh?!

Phil: You have to think harder Nina..

(Nina tries to break herself free in frustration. Nina starts screaming)

Nina: Let me go! Just let me go!! Just let me go!!!

Phil: No!

(Phil laughs)

Nina: Please..it's not too late, you can let me go! I won't say anything...i will forget this ever happened, i won't go to the police or no one!

Phil: Do you think i'm that stupid to believe what you just said?! This really is pure entertainment just watching you trying to worm your way out of this situation, when there is no way out!

(Nina screams)

Phil: I might go home now, head off to bed! Sweet dreams!

(Phil turns the light out in the warehouse and locks it with a key. We hear Nina screaming)

Nina: Don't leave me here! Don't leave me here!!

(Phil hears Nina's pleas, laughing as he walks away)

Xx-Vicky-xX
21-10-2006, 14:51
:eek: evil man. dont like him much either, good stuff Dave

DaVeyWaVey
21-10-2006, 15:01
Scene 7- The Weatherbys House- Morning

(The Weatherby family are at the breakfast table)

Alicia: You do understand my concerns though don't you Jack?! I mean Nina didn't come home last night for christ sake!

Jack: Stop worrying! She's a perfectly grown woman who can look after herself, you know what Mike said?! She stormed off after their row...

Alicia: Yeah well...it don't sound like the Nina i know...she never runs away from anything, she faces everything head first!

Jack: Look i just think you should take your mind off it, she will be waltzing through that front door in a tick i bet!

Alicia: I just can't help but feel that something bad has happened!

Jack: It hasn't..she probably just got drunk at a bar or something and didn't bother coming back home...she will be back safe and sound...i can assure you!

Alicia: If she doesn't come home by this afternoon, i'm calling the old bill!

Jack: Ok but i think you should take your mind off it, why don't you go down town with one of the girls across the road or something!? I know that Chloe might be wanting to look for a wedding dress..

Alicia: Yeah i might just do that Jack!, haven't been on a spending spree in ages!

(Alicia kisses Jack as she leaves the breakfast table)

Christina: I thought we agreed no kissing over the breakfast table?!

Alicia: Shut it you! Your going down the job centre today aren't ya?

Christina: Yes i am!

(Alicia smiles as she leaves the kitchen. Christina gets up and throws her breakfast bowl into the kitchen sink)

DaVeyWaVey
21-10-2006, 15:02
Scene 7- The Weatherbys House- Morning

(The Weatherby family are at the breakfast table)

Alicia: You do understand my concerns though don't you Jack?! I mean Nina didn't come home last night for christ sake!

Jack: Stop worrying! She's a perfectly grown woman who can look after herself, you know what Mike said?! She stormed off after their row...

Alicia: Yeah well...it don't sound like the Nina i know...she never runs away from anything, she faces everything head first!

Jack: Look i just think you should take your mind off it, she will be waltzing through that front door in a tick i bet!

Alicia: I just can't help but feel that something bad has happened!

Jack: It hasn't..she probably just got drunk at a bar or something and didn't bother coming back home...she will be back safe and sound...i can assure you!

Alicia: If she doesn't come home by this afternoon, i'm calling the old bill!

Jack: Ok but i think you should take your mind off it, why don't you go down town with one of the girls across the road or something!? I know that Chloe might be wanting to look for a wedding dress..

Alicia: Yeah i might just do that Jack!, haven't been on a spending spree in ages!

(Alicia kisses Jack as she leaves the breakfast table)

Christina: I thought we agreed no kissing over the breakfast table?!

Alicia: Shut it you! Your going down the job centre today aren't ya?

Christina: Yes i am!

(Alicia smiles as she leaves the kitchen. Christina gets up and throws her breakfast bowl into the kitchen sink)

Xx-Vicky-xX
21-10-2006, 15:22
He should listen to her, she is very right about Nina, good stuff dude

DaVeyWaVey
21-10-2006, 15:23
Scene 8- The Woods House- Morning

(It's the morning after the night before. Tom comes down the stairs only in his boxers to answer the front door. Greg is at the front door)

Greg: Oh..um..i haven't interrupted anything have I?!

Tom: Uh...no..i was just about to uh, well..have a shower!

(Joanna comes down dressed in her nightie)

Joanna: Who's at the door?

Tom: Oh this is Joanna...

(Tom gestures Greg to Joanna)

Joanna: Nice to meet you! :)

Greg: So i did interrupt something then?!

Tom: No..no..of course you didn't! I just wasn't expecting anyone to knock on my front door at this time of the morning!

Greg: Yeah...well, i just wanted to ask you a favour..

(Tom looks intrigued)

Tom: Go on...

Greg: I want you to be my best man at the wedding!

Tom: Me?! Best man?! Why me?! :eek:

Greg: Isn't it obvious?! Because your one of the closest friends i have around here, it was hard to choose between you and Max, but i think you could handle the best man role better as your more mature than your brother!

Tom: Well..i'm speechless!

Greg: All you have to say is yes or no? Do you want to be my best man?!

Tom: Of course i do...i'm delighted you offered it too me! I won't let you down!

Greg: I know you won't i can trust you, just think of a speech, take a few photos, you know...the usual! :cool:

Tom: Yep, i will get it all covered!

Greg: Well i better go...your not working at the garage today are you?!

Tom: Nope my day off!

Greg: Well, i will see you around!

(Greg leaves. Tom shuts the front door)

Xx-Vicky-xX
21-10-2006, 15:27
Oooh his gunna be best man, lets hope his better than Kat is atthis best friend thing

DaVeyWaVey
22-10-2006, 14:58
Episode 15

Scene 1- The Weatherbys House- Noon

(Alicia is in the living room, sitting in silence. Jack comes in with a cup of tea and hands it to his wife)

Jack: I thought i told you to go out...

Alicia: Well i decided to stay in! Nina still hasn't turned up... i am gonna have words with her when she returns, if she returns!

Jack: For god sake! Like i said before, she's a fully grown woman who can look after herself, your acting as if she's a kid!

Alicia: Why are you blaming me for being worried?! London's a dodgy place, shootings, rapes, stabbings every week!

Jack: Your just getting paranoid now, just cut it out, and drink your tea!

Alicia: Look, i'm sorry...but, well, i feel there's something wrong..she was out all night and she's yet to return...i think it's time we call the police...

(Jack lets out a huff)

Jack: If that what puts your mind at ease then call the police, but i bet it won't be worth it..

(Alicia ignores what Jack says and picks up the phone and dials 999)

Alicia: Hello...police please.....i would like to report a dissapearance, the name is Nina Dobson...

Xx-Vicky-xX
22-10-2006, 15:16
Thats it call the police :cheer: shes in trouble your dead right, well done Dave

DaVeyWaVey
22-10-2006, 15:17
Scene 2- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(Megan is on her break from the cafe. She knocks on the Campbells front door. Luke answers and has a surprised but frantic look on his face)

Luke: What the bloody hell are you doing here?!

Megan: Haven't invaded your personal space have I?

(Megan barges past the front door and into the house)

Luke: Why are you here?! Tan's gonna be back any second!

Megan: I was hoping for a repeat performance of the bedroom activities we got up too at Ben's wake!

Luke: Well sorry, there will be no repeat performance! It's over ok?! What happened was just a one-off! Ok?!

Megan: No it's not ok! Me and you Luke...we could be the real thing!

(Megan gets up close to Luke. She starts stroking his hair)

Megan: I could offer something that Tanya can't offer at all...good sex!

Luke: I'm not even tempted Megan! So just get out! Get out of my house now!

(Luke holds Megan's arms and pushes her to the front door)

Luke: Leave! Now!

Megan: You know you want me Luke, you can't just accept it!

Luke: We're being blackmailed Megan! We have to cough up money to Flic, if we don't, she'll squeel! Don't you understand the reality of the situation?!

Megan: Your the one who obviously doesn't understand the real situation, me and Flic, let's just say...we came to an agreement and we won't need to cough up money to her anytime soon!

Luke: Yeah well...it's still over...we're lucky that Felicity reached an agreement with you, if she didn't, my wife would have found out and all hell would have broken loose!

Megan: Stop worrying about the what ifs and the consequences...it's now that matters!

Luke: And now i want to forget about us...and be with my family! I want to stay faithful to my wife...

(Megan laughs)

Megan: Faithful?! Faithful! You don't even know the meaning of the word...

Luke: Just get out!

Megan: No! Not until you give into temptation...

(Megan starts taking all her clothes off. Luke tries to look away but he can't. He watches Megan before going over to her)

Luke: Look!

(Luke gazes into Megan's eyes)

Luke: Let me help you take off your bra...

(Megan smiles)

Xx-Vicky-xX
22-10-2006, 15:22
I hope Flic doesnt keep quiet they deserve to be found out, good stuff Dave

DaVeyWaVey
23-10-2006, 18:01
Scene 3- Council Estate- Afternoon

(Tom and Joanna park in a car park opposite a council estate)

Joanna: Well...this is it...

Tom: She lives here!

Joanna: Well what did you expect?! She is a mother who struggled with her child...her home wouldn't have been that posh and glamorous now would it?!

Tom: I can kinda understand why she gave up on her baby...if she's living on a rough estate like this with no money, no support, i can understand her point of view...

Joanna: Yeah, well, no matter what her situation is, she has a daughter that she has turned a blind eye on! We have to change it, make her realise that she needs her daughter...

Tom: She's not gonna take the baby away from Max though is she?!

Joanna: Don't panic..just keep your head focused on the current situation..

(Tom and Joanna get out of the car and head towards the council estate)

Tom: What's the address?

Joanna: No.28, Oxtridge Estate..

(Tom points to a block of houses)

Tom: It's up there then..

(Tom and Joanna walk up a flight of steps to the block of flats where they find Number 28. They stand outside the door nervously)

Tom: I don't think we should be doing this...interfering..

Joanna: We're not interfering Tom! Max is your brother, your an uncle to this baby!

Tom: I still feel like i'm poking my nose in though..

Joanna: Oh just shut up will you!

(Joanna knocks on the door. Tom looks on nervously)

DaVeyWaVey
23-10-2006, 20:19
Scene 4- The Weatherbys House- Afternoon

(Jack and Alicia are in the lounge, sitting down, telling the police what they know)

Alicia: Yeah..she's just vanished..she went out last night and hasn't returned, i'm really worried about her!

Police: Well we usually say to give it 24 hours and if she still hasn't turned up, to get in touch with us again...

Alicia: Well it's nearly been 24 hours! You can't just leave it like this...you've got to help! I'm worried for her safety!

Police: Give it 24 hours Mrs Weatherby! Then if she hasn't turned up, get in touch with us again, ok?

Alicia: It's not ok...the police these days...they're bloody awful!

Police: Look, it's police procedure that's all...

Alicia: Police procedure!! Yeah whatever! :rolleyes: More like you can't be bothered!

Jack: Just leave it Alicia...let's do what they say!

Alicia: Your meant to be on my side here! You police lot, your useless! You don't care, you just sit on your backsides all day drinking coffee, you don't care about people's safety!

Police: I think we better be going..if after 24 hours, she don't turn up, get in touch..

Alicia: Expect a 999 call at midnight then!

Police: We better let ourselves out...

(The police leave through the front door. Alicia turns to Jack)

Jack: Why did you have to react like that eh?! They're just doing their jobs!

Alicia: Oh perrlease!

(Alicia leaves the room and heads to the kitchen to make a cup of tea)

DaVeyWaVey
23-10-2006, 20:59
Scene 5- Council Estate- Afternoon

(Joanna knocks on the door. The baby's mother, Amy answers. She stares at Joanna and Tom)

Amy: Joanna! What the bloody hell are you doing here?!

Joanna: I'm sure you know why i'm here..i want to help you...

Amy: Help me?! Help me with what?! I'm fine...i'm coping fine...why are you here?! I thought you didn't want to know after you quit as being a nanny to Imelda!

Joanna: Imelda?!

Amy: The baby..i decided to call her Imelda..so why are you here?! I'm fine! The baby's fine!

Tom: The baby's not here though is it?!

Amy: Who the bleedin' hell's he? Your boyfriend Joanna?!

(Joanna gives an awkward look to Tom)

Tom: I'm in fact Max's brother! Remember Max?!

(Amy looks awkwardly)

Tom: You dumped your baby on my doorstep! Mine and my brother's doorstep!

Amy: He deserves to have a baby on his shoulders...i struggled with Imelda...look at this rough estate..people snorting and trading drugs everyday, no park in sight! This is no place for a baby!

Tom: I can understand but why did you just dump her on our doorstep!? You didn't have to leave a ruddy note! You could have spoken to us both in person!

Amy: I was scared alright?! Scared because I didn't know how your brother would react...i was just another notch on his bedpost for christ sake!

Joanna: Come back with us Amy...you can see your daughter, Imelda again..

Tom: If you come back Ams, we can work this out together, you, Max and Imelda could make a proper family...

Amy: Don't make me laugh! Max isn't family man material!

Tom: I know him better than you do, and he's made a big effort with his child, now you have too as well...

Amy: Look i don't want to know alright?! Just piss off both of you!

Joanna: She's your daughter for god sake! You have to know of her well-being...you have to go and see her! How do you think Imelda will feel when she grows older and doesn't even know her own mother eh?! How is she gonna feel?!

Amy: I don't bloody care how she'll feel! She needs a better life than i'm living..i'm not fit to be a mum!

(Amy starts to cry. Joanna comforts her)

Joanna: You can turn your life around...get a job..get out of this ****hole!

Amy: How's that possible?! I've got no qualifications..no skills..i wouldn't be able to get a job and i would be a useless mother! A useless mother!

(Amy breaks into tears. Joanna and Tom let themselves into Amy's flat)

Joanna: C'mon, you won't be a useless mother! Ok, you've got no qualifications or skills and your flat isn't the best, but a mother's job is to provide love! Love from the heart...if you give Imelda love, that's all that will matter!

(Amy thinks about what Joanna's saying)

Joanna: Love is better than anything else, you can't take love away...love will always be there! If you give your daughter love, she will cherish it! You know what's right...

Amy: Ok...i am going to have a shower and get changed, then i want you to take me to my daughter, so i can give her the love she needs...

(Tom and Joanna smile at each other, knowing they have succeeded)

DaVeyWaVey
24-10-2006, 20:18
Scene 6- Abandoned Warehouse- Evening

(Nina is still tied to a chair and is being held hostage by Phil. Phil has gone to get Nina some water. We see Nina struggling to untie her hands. She is in a panic and starts to moan to herself)

Nina: C'mon! Bloody come on!!

(Nina is trying her hardest to untie herself. The rope around her hands become loose. She tugs harder)

Nina: Come on! Come on!

(Nina pulls so hard, that she manages to untie her hands but the chair she is on loses its balance and she ends up falling to the floor with her chair. Phil is outside the warehouse getting some water and hears the commotion)

Phil: What the bloody hell does she think she's doing?!

(Phil approaches the warehouse. Nina is tugging her hardest to now get her legs free which are tied to the chair. She is on the floor, screeching as she tries to get her legs free)

Phil: Whatever she's done, she's wasted her own energy!

(Nina manages to get her legs free. She gets up from the floor. She is panting heavily after getting herself free. Nina is about to do a runner when Phil re enters the warehouse. Phil and Nina come face to face)

Phil: Tryin' to escape were ya?! You'll never escape, the last thing you'll see before you die will be me! Me!

(Phil runs up to Nina. Nina is terrified and tries to dodge Phil to get to the warehouse exit. Phil dives at Nina's legs with a knife. Nina screams and kicks Phil's face with her hard heels. Phil holds his face in pain. Nina starts to run)

Phil: You can run but you can't hide! Bloody cow! Trying to kill me wasn't a very smart thing to do!

(Nina struggles to run after leaving the warehouse. Phil has managed to get up from the floor after being kicked in the face and starts to run, chasing after Nina, hot on her trail)

DaVeyWaVey
24-10-2006, 20:38
Scene 7- The Weatherbys House- Evening

(The Weatherbys are at the kitchen table, eating curry with pasta. Alicia gets up and looks at her watch)

Alicia: Right that's it!..i would say that's about 24 hours now since Nina vanished!

Jack: For goodness sake love, finish your tea!

Alicia: I'm not hungry...i don't feel hungry knowing something bad might have happened to Nina, and that the police can't be bloody bothered, well they better be bothered 'coz i'm ringing them again! And this time they better handle this bloody well seriously!

(Alicia marches to the phone)

Sam: Mum! Don't go doing anything too hasty...

Alicia: This is serious Sam! Something could have happened to Nina...she's had a hard time of it lately, and i can tell that she's been feeling troubled...

Sam: Well she might have just needed a bit of space if she was troubled...just leave it mum!

Alicia: No i'm not leaving it! I'm ringing the police now and that's that! I'm not backing down on my word!

(Alicia picks up the phone and dials 999 again)

DaVeyWaVey
24-10-2006, 20:59
Scene 8- Hinston Hospital- Night

(Phil and Nina arrive at Hinston Hospital. Phil caught up with Nina who ran from the warehouse. Nina is walking in front of Phil. Phil is behind Nina holding a knife to her back)

Phil: You shouldn't have messed with me Nina...you shouldn't have tried to kill me!

Nina: Don't you think i know that?! I'm sorry ok?! I just want you to leave me alone, please!! Let me go! I will make whatever i did up to you!

Phil: You know what you bloody well did! You tried to kill me! It's too late... We're getting up on the roof!

Nina: What?! Why?!

Phil: So everyone can hear the truth...the truth on how you tried to kill me! The truth on what life i have led!

(Nina and Phil climb onto the hospital roof. Nina looks down to the ground- a massive drop down. Phil grabs Nina's hands and ties her hands up before taping her mouth together)

Phil: Nina Dobson won't be seeing daylight again...

DaVeyWaVey
25-10-2006, 21:36
Episode 15

Scene 1- Hinston Hospital- Night

(Phil is on the hospital roof looking at the big drop down to the ground. Nina is on the roof with her hands tied together, and tape around her mouth. She looks terrified. Suddenly a police car comes speeding past a corner and into the hospital car park. Jack and Alicia are in their car in pursuit of the police)

Police: Bloody hell!

(The police get out of their police cars and look at Phil and Nina on the roof)

Police 2: We've gotta get her down now..before that guy does anything stupid! What do we do?!

Police: When you've been in the police force for 15 years, you know what you do in situations like this, we try and calm the man down, try and take control of the situation, negotiate with him, hoping he will come down from the roof...

Police 2: Isn't it better to go in all guns blazing?!

Police: No! Have you ever thought that it might make the situation worse!? :rolleyes:

(We cut to Jack and Alicia who are arriving in the car park seeing the scene unfolding before them of Phil and Nina on the roof)

Alicia: Oh my god! That's Nina! He's got Nina on the roof! :eek:

Jack: Christ! That man with her really is a nutter...

Alicia: Wasn't he a regular punter at the pub?!

Jack: Yeah....

(Jack pauses)

Jack: You don't think..he was the one who burnt down the pub! Shot Mike! :eek:

Alicia: Jesus!! This man is a bloody nutter!!

(Alicia gets out of the car and runs and screams up to the roof)

Alicia: Get her down now!! You bloody nutter!! Bring her down now!!! What gives you the bloody right to threaten somebody's else's life?!

Phil: You don't know what she's done to me! She deserves to be thrown off this roof now!! None of you have a clue what she's done to me! None of you!!

(Phil grabs Nina and pushes her towards the edge. Nina squeels, clearly frightened. Alicia screams. Jack and the police watch on feeling helpless..)

DaVeyWaVey
25-10-2006, 21:51
Scene 2- Hinston High- Night

(Tom and Joanna arrive back in Hinston High in a taxi with Amy. They get out of the taxi and Joanna pays the cab driver)

Amy: I just wanted to say to you both..i'm sorry about earlier..snapping at you like that! Joanna's words made me think about loving my daughter...i'm ashamed that at one point i had a low opinion on my daughter...

Joanna: Eh! Come on, that don't matter now! You can get in that house now and put things right, provide your daughter with love, forget what you thought before!

Amy: You've really encouraged me...thanks...both of you! :)

(Amy smiles. Tom and Joanna lead Amy to the Woods House. They arrive at the front door)

Tom: You ready to do this?!

Amy: I feel nervous..but i've gotta come face to face with my daughter sometime.....and Max!

(Tom knocks on the front door. Max opens the door and sees Amy face to face. His facial expression turns to shock)

DaVeyWaVey
25-10-2006, 22:15
Scene 3- Hinston Hospital- Night

(Phil has pulled Nina with him, closer to the roof)

Phil: If i go, she comes down with me!

Police: Come on...get down from the roof! Think about what you're doing!

Phil: I know what i'm doing...i'm well aware of the situation...

(Phil pulls Nina's hair with rage on his face)

Phil: This woman tried to bloody kill me!! She stabbed me in the back...tried to finish me off...a life for a life...

Alicia: But she didn't kill you did she?! So it shouldn't be a life for a life!

Phil: I'm talking about now!

Police: Come on, just get down from there...you can sort this out...turn your life around...we'll say this was a moment of madness for you...

Phil: Turn my life around!? I could never turn my life around...my life has already had enough twists and turns as it is..i can't just turn my life around! None of you have a clue what kinda childhood i had!!

Police: Ok...you can get help...get over whatever problems you've had in the past!

(Nina starts to manage to untie her arms)

Phil: It's far from problems that i've had!! It wasn't the odd kick in the leg in class...the odd bit of name-calling, i wasn't the victim of that! I was the victim of rape!! I got raped at the age of 17! None of you have a clue what i felt like after that! It's the worst thing anyone can go through, i didn't think it would happen to me, i was a man! But it did, it did happen to me! Just because i didn't pay for my weekly supply of fags off a kid! It felt like my heart was ripped from inside of me...i couldn't see the good in people no more! Nina reminds me of a person who has no good inside of them! I hate everyone after the day i got raped.....i hated my life after what happened....the day of my rape was the 1st day of a life of bad memories!! They're gonna end now...i'm going to a better place and Nina's coming with me...

(Phil goes to the edge of the roof. He turns to Nina and grabs her arm, despite her breaking her arms free from the tape)

(Mike comes running out of the hospital at this fateful moment and sees the events unfolding)

Phil: A life for a life!

(Mike screams for his wife. Alicia also screams as everyone stands around feeling helpless)

Mike: Nooooo!!!!!!!!

(The camera goes black. We hear screaming and a massive thud on the ground)

Xx-Vicky-xX
26-10-2006, 20:15
AHHHH NO DONT END IT THERE!!!! good stuff dave :)

DaVeyWaVey
26-10-2006, 22:04
Scene 4- The Weatherbys House- Morning

(The Weatherby family are at the breakfast table, clearly bewildered after last night's events. Nina comes down the stairs wearing a dressing gown. She slowly approaches the kitchen)

Alicia: Nina, i thought i told you to have a lie-in!

Nina: I couldn't sleep....i'm shattered!

Christina: Are you ok?! After last night?!

Nina: What do you bloody well think!? A madman who i didn't really know tried to kill me!! I wouldn't be up in cloud nine right now would i eh?! :rolleyes:

Christina: Ok...i'm sorry!...I have to go for my job interview anyway, can't be late, must be willing to impress!

Jack: You go and give it your all love!

(Christina smiles at her father before leaving through the front door. Nina sits down by Jack and Alicia)

Nina: Sorry i don't mean to snap! I'm just still a bit shaken after last night...

Alicia: Don't worry! We don't expect you to be in a happy mood....you just take it easy yeah?

Nina: Well i want to do something! I want to try and forget what happened...get my life back to normal...start picking up the pieces..

Alicia: Well don't go doing too much at once! You went through one hell of an ordeal!

Nina: I was terrified Alicia! Terrified!

(Nina starts crying. Alicia gives Nina a comforting hug)

Alicia: Don't worry...it's all over now...Phil's gone...for good!

Nina: I thought he was gonna kill me though, i thought it was the end, the end of everything! When he pulled me to the edge with him...i thought he was gonna take me down with him!

(Nina bursts into tears. Alicia tries her best to offer comfort)

DaVeyWaVey
26-10-2006, 22:45
Scene 5- The Woods House- Morning

(Max is at the breakfast table clearly annoyed by Amy's arrival. Amy is upstairs asleep with Imelda. Tom and Joanna come and sit at the breakfast table)

Max: What the bloody hell did you think you were playing at eh?!

Tom: Look Max, i'm sorry to have sprung that surprise on you like that!

Max: A surprise?! It was a horrible surprise! Why did you have to go to all that effort to find Amy eh?!

Joanna: Do we really have to spell it out to you Max!? Amy is Imelda's mother...she has the right to know of her safety and well-being!

Max: No she don't! She dumped our baby here in the first place on a freezing cold night! She doesn't know what safety and well-being is!

Tom: That's cheap coming from you, safety?! You don't even know what it means either!

Max: Oh shut it Tom!

Joanna: Amy didn't know what she was doing when she dumped Imelda here! She was in a right state, she didn't have a clue what she was doing, she's come back here to put things right!

Max: Only because you forced her too!

Joanna: You really think that we forced Amy to see her own daughter?! It's love that brought her here! She loves her daughter, she has a right to come back and see her daughter!

Max: She made her bed when she dumped her baby, now she's gotta lie in it!

Joanna: Like i said she was in a state back then, she is attempting to put things right...get to know her daughter properly like you've done...can't you just give Amy a chance?!

Tom: Everyone deserves a second chance Max!

Max: Oh shut up both of you! Just shut up! I'm tired of you lecturing me! Telling me what the right thing to do is! Just keep your bloody noses out, she's my daughter not yours!

Tom: Your not doing a good job on looking after your daughter though are ya eh?!

Max: I'm pulling my weight...doing the best i can...i am making the effort!

Tom: Apart from that little hiccup eh Max?!

(Joanna looks puzzled)

Joanna: What are you talking about Tom!?

Tom: My brother tried to kill his own daughter! He tried to smother Imelda!

Joanna: What?! :eek:

(Max looks away, with regret on his face)

DaVeyWaVey
27-10-2006, 18:36
Scene 6- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Morning

(Chloe comes out of the bathroom after having a bath. She enters the kitchen where Kat is making some coffee and Greg is watching television)

Chloe: We're going down the high street today yeah?!

Kat: Uh..what for?

Chloe: You haven't forgetten have you!? Me and Greg's wedding is 8 days away! I have to go down the high street to pick out a wedding dress...you have to come to help me pick one out!

Kat: I told you i am crap at picking out wedding dresses...get somebody else to go down the high street with you...

(Kat gets her coffee and sits down close to Greg and starts watching the television, clearly trying to ignore Chloe)

Chloe: C'mon Kat! I thought we were gonna do this together!

Kat: Picking out a wedding dress doesn't have to be a team effort! After all, it's your bloody wedding not mine! :rolleyes:

Chloe: Your a part of mine and Greg's wedding Kat! Can't you see that?!

Kat: I'm giving you away yeah and i am your bridesmaid...that's enough responsibility as it is...i don't want another weight on my shoulders!

Chloe: It won't be a weight on your shoulders, it will be fun!

Kat: But i told you, i can't pick out a good dress when it stares me in the face!

Chloe: I don't care how useless you are at picking out dresses! I still want you to come with me, your my best mate! We've always done everything together..why does it have to change now?!

Kat: Ok..stop going bloody on at me! I'll come with you, if it makes you feel better! Let me get changed first!

(Kat storms to the bedroom, locking the door behind her)

Chloe: Why the hell does she have that lock on her bedroom door?! Something she doesn't want us to see?!

Greg: I dunno..having a lock on her bedroom door might make her feel a bit more comfortable?

Chloe: God knows! But Kat has changed...really changed...

Xx-Vicky-xX
27-10-2006, 19:26
Just caught up, brill stuff dude finally Chloe sees a change in evil Kat

DaVeyWaVey
27-10-2006, 20:05
Scene 7- Hinston School- Noon

(It's lunchtime. George sees Sally in the school yard sitting on her own. George wheels himself over to Sally to speak to her)

George: You called for me the other day didn't you?

(Sally takes a second to respond)

Sally: Oh George..sorry..i was in a bit of a daydream..yeah i did call for you, your mum said you weren't in..

George: Yeah..well..my mum was lying to you! I was in, she's just in a bit of a mood...

Sally: Oh nothing i've done i hope...

George: She just wants me to stay away from you after what happened with Danny but i'm not listening to her, i can do what i like, it's my life, she can't control me!

Sally: Yeah well, i don't wanna cause trouble...

George: Why did you come round anyway?

Sally: I just wanted to say thank you for supporting me at my father's funeral, you really gave me a shoulder to cry on, thank you! :)

George: It's ok, i'm here whenever you want to talk to me..

Sally: Oh George, the thing about you is that your such a good listener, i can talk or moan to you anytime i like and you never get annoyed, that's what i like about you! :)

(George smiles)

George: No one has ever said anything so nice to me like that before...

(There's an uneasy pause)

Sally: (jokingly) Anyway, i will see you around..won't try calling for you again though, your mum will bite my head off next time!

(Sally laughs and walks away from George. George looks from his wheelchair at Sally walking away and smiles)

DaVeyWaVey
28-10-2006, 12:18
Episode 16

Scene 1- Wedding Dress Shop- Afternoon

(Chloe and Kat are at a glamorous wedding dress shop. Chloe is trying on different wedding dresses, while Kat is sitting down on a chair pretending to be interested as Chloe keeps coming from the changing area wearing a different wedding dress each time)

Chloe: So what do you think? An improvement on the last dress i tried on?!

Kat: (Bored) Yeah looks great on you...

Chloe: Argh come on Kat! Be a bit more enthusiastic...i want your honest opinion! How do i look?!

Kat: Ok! I thought the other one you tried on suited you better..

Chloe: Well i thought the other dress looked awful on me! I think this dress is such an improvement! It brings out the real me!

Kat: Ok! Have that dress then! You asked for my opinion but you obviously know what dress you want, so why don't you just go ahead and buy it?! :rolleyes:

Chloe: What is your problem Kat?! You've been in such a mood lately...you've changed!

Kat: I haven't changed! I am just sick and tired of you and Greg going on about your wedding all the time that's all!

Chloe: Well i'm bloody well sorry if i can't stop talking about what will be the happiest day of my life! :rolleyes:

Kat: I bet when i get married i won't be going on about my wedding all the time!

Chloe: Oh for goodness sake, just be happy for me Kat! Your meant to be my bridesmaid on my wedding day, i feel that you won't be able to play the part when the day comes...

Kat: Oh just get rid of me then if you really want too! Go and assign someone else to be your bridesmaid if i'm not bloody well good enough! :rolleyes:

Chloe: Your my best friend Kat! You've always have been...you deserve to be my bridesmaid...

Kat: Just go ahead and buy the wedding dress you want, then we can get outta here!

(Kat walks out of the wedding dress shop, clearly distressed. Chloe goes into the changing area to change into her normal clothes and then goes to the till to buy the wedding dress she wants)

Xx-Vicky-xX
28-10-2006, 12:34
Fab Dave aww Sally/George :wub:

DaVeyWaVey
28-10-2006, 18:25
Scene 2- The Garage- Afternoon

(Greg is working on a car at the garage, while Tom and Max are arguing)

Tom: We can't talk about this in the workplace! I'm sure we don't want to burden Greg with our family problems...

Max: Your just trying to get out of an argument aren't ya?! You don't know how mad i am Tom! After your outburst, i bet Joanna thinks i am a bad father! In fact, i bet she's calling social services right now!

Tom: Oh for goodness sake Max! Come off it...Joanna knows what you did was just a one-off...

Greg: Please! Stop it both of you! I'm trying to concentrate...i have to get this car fixed today! There's a time and a place for family feuds so just argue at home!

Max: I can't wait until we go home! This argument needs to be dealt with now..because of you Tom, i could have Imelda snatched away from me!

Tom: That won't happen...i didn't mean to tell Joanna what you tried to do! It was just a slip of the tongue...

Max: Didn't sound like that where i was standing! Your meant to be my brother for goodness sake, i thought we were meant to keep what happened a secret!

Tom: I didn't tell Joanna what happened on purpose! The last thing i would want to do is get Imelda taken away from you!

Max: Well you could've caused my daughter to be taken away from me! If Imelda is taken away from me, i tell you now, i will have your head on a bloody stick!

Tom: Your talking madness Max! What you tried to do was just a moment of madness, Joanna understands what you tried to do was a one-off and you didn't mean to do it! She won't go to social services, Imelda won't be taken away from you! So stop being so bloody paranoid!

Max: Paranoid?! I'm not being paranoid...i am talking realistically...

Tom: Oh shut up! Basically Max, your talking crap!

(Max clenches his fist and swings for Tom. He smacks Tom in the face and Tom falls to the floor. Max steps back, shocked over what he did as Tom clenches his face in pain. Tom gets up and punches Max back. Max falls to the floor, and his nose starts bleeding. Tom grabs Max by the neck)

Tom: What's bloody wrong with you eh?! Stop being so bloody paranoid! Get it in your thick head of yours, Imelda won't be snatched away from you!

(Greg gets up from the car he is working on and grabs Tom to pull him back away from Max. Max wipes the nosebleed from his nose and storms off out of the garage)

Greg: For goodness sake Tom! Don't bring your domestic troubles to work!

(Greg goes back to the car and continues work on it. Tom looks on holding his face in pain after Max's punch)

Xx-Vicky-xX
28-10-2006, 19:15
Scene 3- The Butleys House- Evening

Julia is making tea as Sally walks in

Sally: Hello mum

Julia: Oh hello love

Sally: Where is Marianne?

Jula: She is in her room doing her home work

Sally: Oh i was hoping to have a chat with her

Julia: Oh *looks concearned* about what love

Sally: Oh it doesnt matter

Julia: Go on love thats what im here for

Sally: It's just....well...i think...i'm in love

Julia: Oh and who might the lucky boy be

Sally: George

Julia: Oh well George is a nice enough lad

Sally: Yeah his really great *dreams*

Julia: You really like him don't you Sal

Sally: Yeah i do he is really something

Julia amiles to herself and carries on cooking

Xx-Vicky-xX
29-10-2006, 12:05
Scene 4- The Café- Evening

Chloe and Kat are having a coffee and a chat at the café

Chloe: I'm just so excited Kat, it is going to be the best day of my life, the day i become Mrs Greg Finch, he is going to love me in this dress *strokes her new wedding dress*

Kat: Yeah Yeah Yeah so you keep saying

Chloe: Well you could pretend to be happy for me

Kat: Look i have heard you say the same thing about a thousand times already :rolleyes: it gets boring

Chloe: Well excuse me if im excited, god forbid anyone is happy eh :rolleyes:

Kat: I am happy, just i dont need to keep hearing about this bloody wedding every second of the day

Chloe: WELL IM SORRY IF MY WEDDING IS BORING YOU!! I shall finish my coffee and leave you too it shall i?

Kat: Do what you want, i dont care

Chloe: FINE!!

Chloe leaves the café but forgets to take her wedding dress with her, Kat gives a smirk and waits until she cant be seen then quietly goes out side with Chloe's dress and rips it to shreds when its all ripped up she smiles and looks pleased with her self then quckly leaves

DaVeyWaVey
29-10-2006, 15:23
Scene 5- The Weatherbys House- Night

(Christina enters through the front door after spending the day out. She comes in through the front door carrying loads of shopping bags, making clear that she has been on a spending spree. Jack and Alicia are in the lounge watching television. They hear the front door slam)

Alicia: Christina love...is that you?

Jack: What have i bloody told her about slamming the front door shut like that?!

(Christina comes through to the lounge with the shopping bags in her hands)

Jack: My god! How much money have you spent?!

Alicia: That lot must have cost you a fortune!

Christina: Oh stop panicing...i only bought a few bits and bobs...

Jack: A few bits and bobs?! Looks like more than that to me...

Christina: I had reason to celebrate...my job interview went well...and guess what?! I got the job!

(Christina jumps up and down in excitement)

Alicia: Oh Christina love, that's brilliant!

Jack: Atleast she won't be sitting on her **** all day now doing nothin'!

Christina: Well i better go and try these new clothes!

(Christina runs upstairs with her shopping bags in her hand, excited with herself)

Xx-Vicky-xX
29-10-2006, 15:25
Good stuff Dave so glad she got the job

Xx-Vicky-xX
29-10-2006, 16:50
Scene 6- The Burdecks House- Morning

George has just woke up and is getting ready for school

George: *hums yune to his favourite song "i thinkim in love with you" by Jessica Simpson* Morning

Liz: Morning love, your cheerful this morning

George: Yeah got alot to be happy about

Liz: Oh and why is that

George: I saw Sally yesterday

Liz: GEORGE!!! please tell me you didnt go near someone from THAT family again

George: Yes i did, i really like Sally mum and i dont care what you or anyone else says for that matterim not going to stop talking to her

Liz: YOU MY BOY WILL DO AS I BLOODY WELL SAY, THAT FAMILY PUT YOU IN A WHEELCHAIR FOR THE REST OF YOU'RE LIFE AND HERE YOU ARE TELLING ME THAT YOU WANT TO BE FRIENDS WITH ONE OF THEM

George: For YOU'RE information it was DANNY that did this to me NOT Sally, she didnt ask for a brother like that, none of them did

Liz: IM WARNING YOU GEORGE DONT DARE GO NEAR THAT FAMILY THEY ARE TROUBLE

George: Im not listening to you, i might be stuck in a wheelchair but im still my own person, im not some little kid you can control anymore, if i want to see Sally, guess what?....I will see Sally and i dont care if you want me to or not *leaves for school without saying his usual goodbye to his mum*

Xx-Vicky-xX
30-10-2006, 08:26
Posting this on behave of Dave

Scene 7- The Woods House- Morning

(Tom and Max have gone to work at the garage. Joanna is sitting on the sofa reading a magazine, while Amy is playing with Imelda’s toys with Imelda on the floor)

Joanna: You know what, I am getting sick to the back teeth of Tom and Max’s bloody arguing!

Amy: It’s because of me isn’t it?! As soon as I come back here determined to get to know my daughter, all hell breaks loose!

Joanna: Amy, this isn’t your fault! You don’t understand…their arguments haven’t got anything to do with you!

Amy: Well it seems like that too me….as soon as I walked through that front door and faced Max for the first time, I knew I was gonna stir things up!

Joanna: Yeah well…you didn’t stir anything up! Max was just a bit shocked to see you that’s all….

Amy: So what are they arguing over then?!

Joanna: I don’t think it’s my right to say…it’s just problems between them…their brothers, their rift will heal soon enough…

Amy: Yeah I hope so! I just feel like I am getting in the way that’s all…

Joanna: Your not getting in the way trust me, if anyone should feel that their getting in the way, it’s me! I have done my bit now….your reunited with your daughter…I feel like I’m here for nothing now…I’ve helped and now I think I should leave…

Amy: Well it’s your decision but I’m sure your not getting in the way…I just want to say thank you really, thank you for making me see the light…thank you for persuading me to come back here and pick up the pieces, get to know my daughter, you made me realise the right thing to do was to get to know my daughter before it was too late…

Joanna: Well I’m a nanny I suppose…it is kind of in the job description…

(Joanna and Amy smile at each other)

Amy: I feel like I am really bonding with Imelda now…I think she knows I am her mum! What I am unsure of though is Max….I mean he hasn’t said two words to me since I walked through that front door, all I seen was him in a state of shock, if I am sticking around which I am, we can’t carry on like that forever!

Joanna: I think you and Max should have a chat alone together…work things out…decide what you want to do for your daughter’s sake.

Amy: I might just do that!

Xx-Vicky-xX
30-10-2006, 15:19
Last scene today that is posted on behalf of Dave the last one today will be written by me

Scene 8- Chloe and Kat’s Flat- Morning

(Greg and Chloe are kissing passionately on the sofa. Kat comes out of her bedroom just after waking up and she looks over to Greg and Chloe kissing, a disgusted look on her face)

Kat: Oh perlease! The first thing I don’t want to see in the morning is you two kissing each other!

Greg: We’re in love Kat! Usually when people are in love and are about to get married, they do kiss each other from time to time! :rolleyes:

Kat: I’m about to make breakfast an’ all….I think I will give it a miss now after seeing you two snogging your faces off!

Chloe: For goodness sake Kat! Stop being so bloody childish and make breakfast! If it makes you happy, me and Greg will go to my bedroom!

(Kat starts smirking)

Kat: On another note, I hope you’ve hidden that wedding dress well from Greg, if the groom finds it, it’s bad luck I heard…

Chloe: My wedding dress! Oh my god! My wedding dress…

(Kat pretends to be alarmed)

Kat: What’s wrong Chlo?

Chloe: Oh my god!! I didn’t bring it home with me last night…oh Christ! I’ve lost my wedding dress….it cost me a fortune!

Greg: Are you sure you didn’t bring it home with you!?

Chloe: I’m certain! You didn’t see me yesterday with a bag in my hand when I came home did you?!

Greg: No…no…I didn’t!

Chloe: That means it’s gone! I’ve lost my wedding dress!

Kat: Jesus! That wedding dress cost a bomb and now you’ve lost it…what are you gonna wear on your wedding day?!

(Chloe starts sobbing into her hands)

Chloe: I don’t know! What am I gonna wear eh?! Our wedding day is doomed Greg! I have nothing to wear…

(Greg comforts Chloe)

Greg: Come on Chlo! Our wedding day is gonna be the best day of our lives, you can be wearing a binbag on our wedding day and I wouldn’t care, I would still marry you!

Chloe: But I wanna look nice…glamorous on our special day!

Greg: You will be no matter what you wear…

Kat: Just think back Chlo! What about the café?! We went there for a coffee but I swear you took your wedding dress with you when you left before me…

(Chloe’s eyes light up)

Chloe: The café! That’s it! That’s where my wedding dress is, I’ve left it there!

(Chloe runs out of the flat and heads to the café. Kat turns round, with a smirk across her face)

Xx-Vicky-xX
31-10-2006, 19:07
Should have posted this lastnight but I had an early night

Episode 17- Scene 1- Hinston High- Noon

Julia sees Liz outside sorting her rubbish out and decides to go speak to her having learnt of Sally’s admiration for George

Julia: Hello

Liz: What do YOU want

Julia: I was urrrm talking to Sally the other night, she seems to have developed quite a likening for George, infact she mentioned she thinks she loves him

Liz: Why are you even talking to me

Julia: I was just being friendly

Liz: Well don’t YOU’RE family are SCUM

Julia: Who do you think you are speaking about MY family like that

Liz: It is down to YOU’RE family that MY son is STUCK in a bloody WHEELCHAIR

Julia: No its down to Danny

Liz: Is Danny not part of you’re family then

Julia: He might be my son, and he might be my girl’s brother but we have nothing to do with what he did to George

Liz: I DON’T CARE I DON’T WANT SALLY OR ANYONE ELSE FROM YOU’RE SCUMMY LITTLE FAMILY NEAR MY SON EVER AGAIN DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME

Liz walks off before Julia can respond

Xx-Vicky-xX
31-10-2006, 19:10
Posted on behalf of Dave

Scene 2- The Café- Afternoon

(Luke is sitting down in the café. Megan comes over and sits down, passing Greg a coffee)

Luke: Thanks…how much is it?

Megan: Oh sod paying! Have it on the house…

Luke: Oh ok thanks…

Megan: What I really want to know Luke is when we can meet up again…

(Megan puts her hand down Luke’s trousers)

Luke: What the bloody hell do you think your doing?! Not here!

(Luke pulls Megan’s hand away and gets up from his chair)

Megan: I’m getting desperate Luke! We’ve gotta get together again soon, find somewhere where we won’t get disturbed…

Luke: It’s hard for me Megan! I have my family to think of…we can’t just have sex whenever we like!

Megan: Why not?! Just forget about your family, take a risk…

Luke: Look, I will sort something out if it makes you happy…I will arrange something, somewhere where we can go without getting disturbed….

Megan: Oh Luke….you’ve got my heart racing already!

(Megan winks at Luke as she walks away from him. Luke sits back down and finishes his coffee)

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-11-2006, 06:56
Scene 3- The Café- Afternoon

Chloe runs into the cafe out of breath looking distressed

Pat: Chlo? What’s wrong

Chloe: Pat, you haven’t seen my wedding dress have you

Pat: No sorry love I haven’t

Chloe: What about Flic? would she have seen it? it cost me a fortune and i just left it here

Pat: I will give her a yell

Chloe: Thanks *forces a half hearted smile*

Pat: FELICITY!!

Felicity: WHAT

Pat: COME DOWN A SEC

Felicity comes down and sees Pat's face is quite serious

Felicity: What's up?

Pat: *nods towards Chloe* Chlo would like a word with you

Felicity: Ah Chlo what can I do for you

Chloe: Flic, you haven’t seen my dress have you

Felicity: Sorry can’t say that I have

Chloe: OMG I’m so stupid, I had the most perfect dress, it was so expensive but I just left it behind

Felicity: Don’t blame yourself Chlo it could have happened to anyone

Chloe: Well it didn’t did it? It happened to me, anyway I suppose I better go home and tell Greg

Chloe walks out of the café distressed, moments after Chloe leaving the café Pat and Felicity see Chloe collapse in tears and run out and see what has happened

Pat: Chlo? What’s happened?

Chloe: My dress…this is my dress * holds something up * ITS BEEN RIPPED UP * cries even more *

Pat a Felicity hug Chloe and take her inside

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-11-2006, 07:19
Scene 4- The Woods House- Evening

Joanna Max and Tom are sitting eating dinner in complete silence

Joanna: Would the pair of you quit this

Tom: Quit what?

Joanna: Acting like babies, you haven’t said a thing to each other for days

Max: He started it

Tom: All I did was go and find you’re daughters mother

Max: No that wasn’t all you did was it Tom

Tom: I have said I am sorry

Max: Not good enough

Tom: Well I cant do anything else

Joanna: STOP IT!!! Now BOTH of you are behaving like babies, gees Imelda is more grown up than the pair of you, look Max I won’t tell anyone about what I heard, infact I will forget I even know about it

Max: *Looks surprised* really?

Joanna: Don’t look so surprised I’m not a monster you know

Max: Thanks *smiles*

Joanna: Now will you two grow up and make up with each other you should be working together WITH Amy to make sure Imelda is cared for correctly, not fighting

Tom: Sorry bruv

Max: me to

Max and Tom have a brotherly hug

Joanna: Now isn’t that nice

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-11-2006, 14:46
Scene 5- Chloe and Kat’s Flat- Evening

Chloe runs home and comes through the doors crying

Greg: Chlo? Whats wrong darling

Chloe: It’s ruined

Greg: What is ruined

Chloe: The dress

Greg: Did you find it

Chloe: Yeah but its ruined

Greg: What do you mean?

Chloe holds out her hands and shows Greg and Kat the remains of the dress

Chloe: Someone found it and must have ripped it up

Kat: OMG who could do a thing like that

Greg: Someone very twisted that’s who

Kat: Yes indeed

Chloe: I cant believe it, ive not had it five minutes and I leave it at the café and it gets ripped up

Kat: If I find out who did this their life wont be worth living

Kat smiles to herself with delight

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-11-2006, 16:00
Posted for Dave

Scene 6- The Woods House- Evening

(Tom is on the sofa watching television. Max enters)

Max: Turn that off for a minute will you?!

Tom: It’s about to get really good…

(Max grabs the remote and turns off the television. He sits down next to Tom)

Tom: Why did you do that for?!

Max: I want to talk to you…well actually, I want to apologise…I’ve acted like an idiot over the past few days...i’m sorry…

Tom: Wow! I never thought I would hear you say sorry! :rollseyes:

Max: Just accept my apology yeah?! I just wanna put our stupid dispute behind us…

Tom: Yeah ok! I accept your apology…I spose I should say sorry too…for opening up my big mouth…I really didn’t mean to tell Joanna that you tried to smother Imelda…you do understand that don’t you!?

Max: Yeah I understand…it was a slip of the tongue…I realise that now, that’s why I’m apologising…

Tom: Well I’m glad we patched things up! You’ve just gotta make a go of things with Amy and Imelda now…

Max: Yeah but it’s weird seeing Amy again…we haven’t really said much…she sometimes acts as if I’m not there!

Tom: She’s gonna be sticking around for a while Max, have a chat with her, sort things out for Imelda’s sake, you’ve got to exchange words with each other sometime….

Max: Yeah I will do that, I really love Imelda now you know, I have that feeling that Imelda loves me back too…like she knows that I’m her father, I’ve bonded with her and now I feel like a father, I really love her…

(Max leaves the room as Tom lets out a proud smile)

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-11-2006, 16:39
Posted for Dave

Scene 7- Chloe and Kat’s Flat- Night

(Greg is comforting Chloe on the sofa as Chloe continues to sob over her ripped wedding dress)

Chloe: I just can’t believe it! My wedding dress! Ripped to shreds!

Greg: It might have been an accident Chlo!

Chloe: If we think that, we’re kidding ourselves! This was done on bloody purpose, who would want to rip my wedding dress to shreds eh?! Why would someone want to do that?! I just don’t get it!

Greg: It’s gonna be ok Chlo…like I said earlier, you could wear anything and I could still marry you!

Chloe: This wedding is just gonna be a disaster Greg! I just know it is, there’s 3 days to go and we’ve got hardly nothing prepared!

Greg: Of course we have Chlo! You don’t have a wedding dress to wear, that’s it! Apart from that, everything is sorted! Stop worrying, our wedding day is gonna be just perfect!

Chloe: I just feel like someone’s against us…first our wedding got cancelled, now my wedding dress has been ripped to shreds…what next eh!?

Greg: Now your just being paranoid Chloe!

Chloe: I’m not being paranoid, I’m being bloody realistic!

(Chloe storms off out of the flat. Kat has overheard Greg and Chloe’s conversation from the bedroom. She speaks to herself)

Kat: Your wedding is gonna be far from perfect…

Xx-Vicky-xX
02-11-2006, 13:19
Posting this for Dave

Scene 8- The Woods House- Morning

(Tom is in the kitchen making breakfast. Joanna walks into the kitchen and gets some orange juice out of the fridge. She still has her dressing gown on. She pours herself a glass of orange juice and sits down)

Tom: Want some toast?

Joanna: No I’m not feeling that hungry…

Tom: You sound ever so grumpy this morning…what’s up?

Joanna: Well I don’t really know how to say this…but, well…

Tom: Go on…you can tell me anything, spit it out!

Joanna: I think I should quit my job here as a nanny….

Tom: (shocked) What?! Why?! Where’s this come from all of a sudden?!

Joanna: I just feel like it’s the right time to go now that’s all…I mean I’ve done my bit…I looked after Imelda and now she’s reunited with her mother…I don’t need to look after Imelda anymore…my job is done!

Tom: But what about us Joanna?! Remember the kiss we shared!

Joanna: I remember… but there is no “us” Tom! It was just a kiss that’s all…no big deal…

Tom: It was a big deal to me! I think I have feelings for you Joanna…I think I might be in love with you…

Joanna: Oh come off it Tom! Stop trying to make me stay…

Tom: I’m not trying to make you stay…my feelings for you are genuine!

Joanna: It was only a kiss…you’ve only known me five minutes…you can’t just have developed feelings for me!

Tom: Well I have!

Joanna: Well I’m leaving Tom! There’s nothing for me to do round here no more…my job is done…and now I am gonna move on and try and find other employment…

Tom: No one has upset you have they? Amy? Max? Is that why your leaving?! Somebody has upset you?!

Joanna: No that is not the reason! I told you…there is no job for me here anymore….there’s no one left to look after…

Tom: Please don’t leave Joanna! Don’t!

Joanna: I will give you my resignation this afternoon…sorry Tom…

Tom: Please Joanna…stay!

Joanna: I will stay for one more night….I will leave tomorrow morning…you don’t need me no more Tom!

(Joanna leaves the room. Tom has a tear in his eye)

Xx-Vicky-xX
02-11-2006, 13:56
Episode 18- Scene 1- The Garage- Morning

Tom: * sings * Oh happy day oh happy day Oh happy day oh happy day

Greg: * interrupts * would you shut up

Max: Maybe not such a happy day after all

Greg: Oh shut up Max

Tom: Someone is happy this morning

Greg: You can zip it aswell

Tom: Blimey Greg you’re getting married in a couple of days why are you so miserable

Greg: That is the problem it is so close

Tom: What?

Greg: It’s so close but everything is going wrong, first someone cancelled the wedding now someone had ripped Chloe’s dress to shreds

Tom: :eek: really? That is terrible, look me and Max will throw you the best stag night Hinston has ever seen and as for the wedding, it will be perfect

Max: Yeah it will be the best night ever

Greg: Thanks lads

Xx-Vicky-xX
03-11-2006, 15:18
Scene 2- The Café- Afternoon

Chloe is looking into her cup of coffee in the café looking depressed

Pat: Comeon Chlo you have had that same cup of coffee now for over an hour and you hardly touched it

Chloe: Im not in the mood

Pat: Dont worry about it, it is just a dress, Greg will be happy if you turn up in old rags

Chloe: But that is the point, i dont just want to turn up in rags, im marrying the most perfect man ever and i want to be the mostperfect bride ever in return

Pat: Look the wedding it will be fine, you could go in you jammies and Greg wouldnt care to be honest with you, he loves you, how about we have a hen party...here...at the cafe

Chloe: You would do that? for me?

Pat: Course

Chloe: *smiles* Thanks Pat that would be great

DaVeyWaVey
03-11-2006, 15:38
Scene 3- The Campbells House- Night

(Tanya and Luke are watching television. Lee, Tina and Emily are asleep. There’s a knock on the door)

Tanya: Fine….i’ll get it! :rolleyes:

(Tanya gets up from the sofa and opens the door. It’s Pat and Kat)

Tanya: Oh hi…I wasn’t expecting you at this time…

Kat: Well Pat suggested that we make preparations for Chloe’s hen night!

Pat: Yeah…do you wanna help Tan dear? I’m sure you would have some fun suggestions in mind on what we could do for her hen night!

(Tanya smiles)

Tanya: Well if your that desperate for some help…

(Tanya turns to Luke)

Tanya: You don’t mind if I go out for a bit do you babe? We’re making preparations for Chloe’s hen night!

(Luke thinks then smiles to himself)

Luke: No…take all the time in the world…

(Tanya kisses Luke on the cheek)

Tanya: Thanks babe

(Tanya grabs some shoes and her coat and leaves with Pat and Kat through the front door. Once they’re gone, Luke gets his phone out and sends a text message to Megan saying to meet him over the park)

Skits
03-11-2006, 16:40
i've just caught up. excellent stuff. what has kat got planned for the wedding day?

Xx-Vicky-xX
03-11-2006, 20:07
Scene 4- The Park- Night

Megan: You showed then

Luke: why wouldn’t I?

Megan: I thought that wife of yours might have you at home pretending to be happily married

Luke: I am happily married

Megan: Sure you are :rolleyes:

Luke: Your looking rather sexy tonight

Megan: * flutters eyelashes * Mmmm I know

Luke: I think the response is that I look good aswell

Megan: Oh well urrrm I suppose you will do * giggles like a school girl *

Luke: I went for the rough look as that’s simply how my women love me

Megan: I like my men rough, its well *gets closer to Luke * rather sexy

Luke and Megan kiss passionately and Luke forcefully pulls apart Megan’s blouse without ripping it

Megan: Wow all buttons intact, I’m impressed

Luke: Lets just say it isn’t the first time I have done it, and certainly won’t be my last either darling

Megan rips apart Luke’s zipped up jacket without touching the zip

Megan: * smiles * Not the first time ive done that either

The pair fall back on to the bench and start having sex in the park but unknown to them someone is watching them from the shadows

DaVeyWaVey
03-11-2006, 20:45
Scene 5- The Woods House- Morning

(Tom and Joanna are in bed together)

Joanna: Well I didn’t think this was gonna happen…

Tom: What?!

Joanna: Me and you…in bed together…I only planned to hand in my resignation…

Tom: But we couldn’t just keep our hands off each other…

Joanna: No we couldn’t…I thought I didn’t have feelings for you Tom…I was just gonna hand in my resignation and leave, forget about this place…but well, I couldn’t resist you…

Tom: So what now? Are we for real? Is there an “us”?!

Joanna: Looks like it don’t it eh?! Let’s keep it quiet for now!

Tom: My lips are sealed if yours are…

(Tom and Joanna smile gleefully at each other before sharing a kiss)

DaVeyWaVey
04-11-2006, 22:13
Scene 6- The Campbells House- Morning

(The kids have gone to school. Tanya is sitting down at the kitchen table, eating some toast while reading a magazine. Luke comes down the stairs and enters the kitchen with only his dressing gown on)

Tanya: Morning! :rolleyes:

Luke: Morning babe...wanna coffee?

Tanya: No thanks...

Luke: How did those hen night plans come along last night?

Tanya: It was alright...we've got something planned...just a small due at the cafe for Chloe..nothing too special...where did you swan off too last night?!

Luke: Me!?

Tanya: I'm not stupid Luke! I came home and you weren't here...the kids were left here all alone! What were you thinkin' leaving them here all alone eh?!

Luke: I wasn't gone long! Just popped out to get some milk that's all...

Tanya: Don't take me for a fool Luke! :rolleyes: You were gone ages! I came home and i went to sleep in an empty bed! You were gone hours, you were doing bloody more than buying milk! :rolleyes:

Luke: I went to buy some milk and then i went for a bit of a walk..no harm in that is there?!

Tanya: Well it depends what you were bloody well up too...

Luke: What's that sposed to mean!?

Tanya: Well you don't usually go to buy some milk at 9pm at night and go for a little walk until gone 1! :rolleyes:

Luke: Look..stop getting on my case Tan! It's my life, i can do what i bloody well like!

Tanya: You said that exact line when you were playing away before...cheating on me before!

Luke: And?

Tanya: Well are you cheating on me again eh Luke?! You've bloody well cheated on me so many times that i can see the signs!

Luke: Oh stop being so paranoid! I'm not having an affair for god sake! I've grown up...i want to be a family man...i've given up on playing away...it was just a phase that's all...

Tanya: Yeah a phase...you've cheated on me 4 times Luke since we've been married! 4 times! Why should i trust you now eh?!

Luke: If you don't trust me, what's the point in our bloody marriage?!

(Luke storms off out of the kitchen and leaves through the front door, slamming the door shut behind him)

DaVeyWaVey
04-11-2006, 22:23
Scene 7- The Garage- Morning

(Tom and Max are talking to Greg while he is working on a car. Kat is outside the garage with a camera)

Max: Tomorrow mate, you will be one happily married man!

Tom: Just the stag night to get through though first...

(Tom and Max laugh to themselves)

Greg: I hope you two haven't got anything up your sleeves...all i want for my stag night is a few drinks, no jokes or pranks, just a few drinks...

Tom: Yeah don't worry, your stag night is only going to be a few drinks, nothing else...

Greg: Good..i want to be decent for my wedding the next day...i can't believe it, it's tomorrow! Tomorrow will be the start of the rest of my life...

Max: Yep..you and Chloe do make a wonderful couple mate...me and Tom both hope you'll be happy together!

Greg: We will be...we both love each other...tomorrow will be the day where Chloe will become my wife!

(Greg smiles to himself)

Tom: Well i'm off to get some coffees from the cafe...i take it you both want coffee...

Greg: Yep..thanks..

Max: I will come and help you..

(Tom and Max both leave the garage, failing to notice Kat outside the garage. Greg bends down to carry on working on a car when Kat suddenly turns and takes a picture of Greg. Greg sees a flash and turns around, he looks around and then continues to work on the car. We see Kat with her camera, smiling to herself)

DaVeyWaVey
04-11-2006, 22:31
Scene 8- The Cafe- Noon

(We see Joanna entering the cafe and ordering a coffee. She sits down and starts reading a magazine. Megan is behind the cafe counter and suddenly recognises Joanna and smiles gleefully to herself. She sees Felicity carrying a coffee over to Joanna)

Megan: Don't worry...i will serve this coffee...

(Felicity looks surprised but hands Joanna's coffee over to Megan)

Felicity: Your gonna do some work for a change! :eek: I thought i would never see the day! :rolleyes:

(Megan walks over to Joanna's table and sits down by her)

Megan: Are you Joanna?

(Joanna looks at Megan and her face turns to horror)

Joanna: Oh my god, it's you!

Megan: You remember me then?!

Joanna: Get away from me Megan! Get away from me!

Megan: Shall we relive some childhood memories?! Remember when i did this to you in the school canteen?!

(Megan grabs the coffee and pours it all over Joanna. Joanna gets up from her chair and screams as she looks at her wet clothes and as the coffee burns her)

Joanna: You bitch!

(Joanna runs out of the cafe screaming as the hot coffee burns her. Megan walks away, laughing to herself)

Xx-Vicky-xX
05-11-2006, 12:30
Episode 19- Scene 1- Hinston Nightclub- Night

Greg is out on his stag night with Tom, Max, Mike, Harry, Jack and Luke and they have all blindfolded Greg so he doesnt know where he is

Greg: Come on lads take this thing off i wanna know what im missing

Tom: All in good time my friend, all in good time

Max: Tom i think this is over the top i mean come on it's his stag night he's not our prisioner

Tom: No but you will be if you dont shut up

Max: Just let him see

Mike Harry and Jack: Yeah come on Tom

Harry: Max is right

Greg: Come on diude you're scaring me, i tell ya Tom if you have taken us somewhere ridiculous i WILL kill you

Someones appears in the distance and catches Tom's eye and he smiles

Tom: Greg...my boy...prepare yourself for the best night of you're entire life

The others look confused and Tom indicates to the others the presence of a mysterious person and they nod as Tom walks off to greet the stranger and take them inside, once Tom has disapeared inside Harry removes Greg's blindfold and they all head inside where Tom is waiting

Greg: WOW Tom this is brilliant

Tom: Right what you lad's drinking

Harry: Shots all round lads?

Mike: Im up for that

Jack: Same here

Luke: Sounds good

Max: Why not

Tom: You know im always up for it

Greg: Na lads im just gunna have a lemonade

Tom: Oh come on Greg lets make this night as good as it looks

Greg: I dunno

Jack: Even Maxy boy is having one so you have to aswell

Greg: Oh go on then

Tom: Right lets start as we mean to go on

Tom gets them all shots and they drink them together and start on vodka they are all sitting down drinking and chatting

Greg: Seriously guys i love Chlo tomorrow is going to be the best day ever, i get to marry the most perfect woman ever

DaVeyWaVey
05-11-2006, 20:12
Scene 2- The Cafe- Night

(It is Chloe's hen night at the cafe. Chloe, Pat, Julia, Felicity, Tanya, Jenna and Liz are all joking and laughing in the background. Kat is at the cafe counter looking into her glass of alcohol. Pat spots Kat all alone and walks up to Kat and sits down by her)

Pat: What's up eh? It's your best friend's hen night!

Kat: I'm ok...just don't feel like laughing or joking that's all...

Pat: You should be enjoying Chloe's hen night, your her best friend! I thought you would be laughing and joking with us, we're having a great laugh..c'mon...

(Pat grabs Kat's arm but Kat pulls her arm back)

Kat: No! Just leave me alright?!

Pat: I don't know what the hell's wrong with you Kat but you better get your act together by tomorrow...your gonna be Chloe's bridesmaid for goodness sake!

Kat: I bloody well know....now just leave me alone and go laugh and joke with them lot over there...

Pat: Ok...but i know there's something wrong...your not your usual self...i thought you would be enjoying your best friend's hen night! :rolleyes:

(Kat huffs)

Kat: Just go!

Pat: Be happy for Chlo, Kat! She's gonna be married tomorrow...she'll want you to be happy for her...

(Pat walks back to join the rest of the girls who are laughing and joking. Kat turns and speaks to herself)

Kat: There is something wrong...Chloe and Greg are wrong! Me and Greg are right!

(Kat downs her drink with anger)

DaVeyWaVey
05-11-2006, 20:29
Scene 3- Hinston High- Night

(Greg's stag night is drawing to a close. Greg is clearly drunk, and Tom, Max, Mike, Harry, Jack and Luke are steadily walking by his side, ready to catch him if he falls over. Greg starts shouting)

Greg: Oh i'm going to be married tomorrow! Tomorrow! Gonna be married..tomorrow!

(Tom, Max, Mike, Harry, Jack and Luke come up by a lampost. Tom and Max grab Greg's arms. Greg is too drunk so is clearly oblivious to what is going on)

Jack: Ready!!

(Tom and Max grab Greg and pull him against the lampost. Jack gets some rope out, and with some help from Luke, Mike and Harry, they tie Greg's hands to the lampost)

Luke: Ready!!

(Luke pulls Greg's trousers and boxers down and he is left tied to the lampost half naked. The boys laugh at Greg)

Max: See you in the morning Greg!

(The boys head home as Greg wonders what is happening)

Greg: What's goin' on!? Eh guys! Come back 'ere!

(We suddenly cut to Chloe and Kat's flat where they have both just come back from Chloe's hen night at the cafe)

Chloe: Wow! Well that was a hen night i will never forget...

Kat: Yeah...right...

Chloe: You know what Kat..after tonight, i've realised how many friends i have round here...i mean, i never thought i would have a hen night like i've just had round here...but they actually came to the trouble of organising something so special as my hen night...thanks...

Kat: Yeah...no problem...

Chloe: Just think tomorrow....it's tomorrow...just a day away...and i will be married to Greg! We'll be man and wife! You don't know how excited i feel!

Kat: Yeah, well...i'm heading off to bed...night...

Chloe: Ok see you in the morning Kat, i know you won't let me down being a bridesmaid, your my best friend after all! :D

(Kat ignores Chloe and heads to her bedroom. As she heads to her bedroom, she picks up a photo of Chloe and Greg. She enters her room where we see candles lit and pictures of Greg all over her walls. Kat gets out her lipstick and draws a heart on her mirror and puts Greg's name in the middle. Kat gets a pin out of her drawer and stabs the pin into Chloe's eyes on the photo, she manages to gorge Chloe's eyes out of the photo. Kat looks on, with a look of pure evil on her face)

Kat: Greg will be mine tomorrow! All mine!

(Kat blows her candles out and her bedroom goes into complete darkness)

Bryan
05-11-2006, 22:01
the time has come for kat to shine! :D :cheer: come on show us all what a phyco bitch you be!!!

great stuff as usual dave (and now vicky!) keep up the good work!!!!

DaVeyWaVey
05-11-2006, 22:06
Tomorrow...Confessions and Obsessions Week Begins...What Will Be The Consequences?

DaVeyWaVey
06-11-2006, 18:19
Scene 4- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Morning

(Chloe and Greg's wedding day has finally arrived. Kat is in the kitchen in her bridesmaid dress, downing a bottle of wine with a horrifying, psychotic look on her face. Chloe is in the bedroom. She is looking in her mirror as she struggles to put her wedding dress on)

(Chloe speaks to herself in distress)

Chloe: Come on! Why won't the bloody buttons do up on this dress?!

(Chloe suddenly shouts to Kat from her bedroom)

Chloe: Kat..can you help me try and do the back buttons on my dress?

(Kat hears Chloe's shouting and rolls her eyes)

Kat: If i bloody well have too! :rolleyes:

(Kat finishes her drink and her angriness suddenly turns to pleasure as a smile crosses her face)

Kat: The bloody bitch won't even make it down the altar!

(Kat grabs a kitchen knife from the kitchen drawer and heads to Chloe's bedroom...)

Xx-Vicky-xX
06-11-2006, 20:59
Scene 5- The Woods House- Morning

Greg enters the Woods House after being untied from the lamppost

Tom: I mean you gotta agree that was a pretty funny game we played lastnight

Greg: :rolleyes: Oh yeah well ill tie you naked to a lamp post in November shall i see how funny you think it is then

Tom: Just 'cause you know i will pull more chicks than you did

Greg: Some of us dont need to pull ''chicks''

Max laughs

Tom: Yeah you can shut up i dont see a que of women waiting for you either

Greg: :rolleyes: Anyway im off to get sorted out

Greg goes and puts his suit on continuing to talk to Max and Tom

Greg: You do know lads i will get you back for what you did

Max: :eek: me aswell

Tom: Yeah you aswell

Max: Shut up Tom

Greg: Jesus :rolleyes: what has got into you two, you're behaving like a pair of babies

Tom: Yeah well someone has women troubles dont ya Max

Max: Shut it Tom!!!

Greg: Id help ya out Max but women troubles isnt something i know much about, if you know what i mean

Tom: Yawn...are you done yet

Greg: Alright alright im coming

Greg comes out in a posh black and white suit

Greg: Right lads we off then

Tom: *looks at the time* Yeah

Greg: Right quick check, me - check, best man - well not exactly best after lastnight eh Tom...

Tom: Oh ha ha very funny...just get on with it we dont have all day

Greg: phone - check, rings?? Tom please tell me you have the rings

Tom: *feels his pocket* I must have lost them

Greg: :eek: WHAT!!!

Tom: Calm down im having you on *pulls pings out of his suit*

Greg hits Tom playfully around the head they all laugh and leave for the church

DaVeyWaVey
06-11-2006, 22:21
Scene 6- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Morning

(Chloe is still looking in the mirror struggling to button up her wedding dress. Kat enters her bedroom with a kitchen knife behind her back and a psychotic look on her face)

Chloe: Oh there you are Kat! You made me jump there...you don't mind if you help me button this up will you?!

Kat: Are you gonna marry Greg, Chlo? Are you gonna go through with this wedding?!

(Kat draws closer to Chloe. Chloe looks baffled)

Chloe: What's brought this on?! Of course i'm gonna marry Greg, this is what today is all about...he's the love of my life...

(Kat's psychotic face turns into rage. Kat unleashes the kitchen knife from behind her back and screams as Chloe turns round)

Chloe: What the hell do you think your doin'?!

(Chloe sees the knife and looks terrified)

Kat: You won't make it down the altar Chloe! Not today, not ever!

(Kat suddenly plunges the knife into Chloe's stomach. Chloe screams in pain as she falls to the floor)

Kat: Greg's mine Chlo! Greg is mine! You can't touch him, no one can touch him...the only person who can touch him is me!

(Chloe holds herself in pain as blood pours out of her stomach and her wedding dress becomes blood stained)

Chloe: You psycho bitch!! Why are you doing this?! Why!?

Kat: I love Greg, Chloe, and he loves me....i'm gonna marry him today, not you!

Chloe: Just help me Kat! Help me! I'm bleedin' here!

Kat: Oh dear! :rolleyes: What the bloody hell do you want me to do about it eh?!

Chloe: Your my best friend Kat! You can't leave me here! I'm gonna die if you don't help me!

Kat: Well that's good then...coz me and Greg can be left all alone! When your out of the picture, Greg will be my possession! My possession, nobody else's! If someone lays a finger on Greg, they'll be dead meat!

(Kat picks up the blood stained knife and puts it in her pocket)

Kat: I'm marrying Greg today! We're gonna be man and wife...if someone tries to stop me, then stab! Stab! There'll be lying on the floor with a stab wound!

(Kat has a deranged look on her face. Kat leaves the flat as Chloe lays in her bedroom, crying and screaming as blood pours from her stomach, and her life hanging in the balance)

Xx-Vicky-xX
07-11-2006, 22:04
Scene 7- Hinston Church- Noon

The residents of Hinston are gathered at the church, waiting for the bride to appear

Greg: Where the bloody hell is she

Tom: She’s not late yet dude she still has 10 minutes

Max: Yeah you know what women are like they never show up a minute before they have to

Greg: Yeah I suppose so

Tom: Don’t worry about it, Chloe loves you, she will be here

Greg: Yeah well I’m going out for some air, see you two in a minute

Greg leaves the church

Max: She will show wont she Tom?

Tom: Not a clue bruv, not a clue

Xx-Vicky-xX
07-11-2006, 22:15
Scene 8- Hinston High- Afternoon

Kat is running from Hinston High towards the church, Kat seems to be having a conversation with someone only no one is there

Kat: Greg is mine, I am the only one who will have him

Kat: Chlo can’t take him away from me, we belong together

Kat: Greg needs me, Chlo will only make him unhappy

Kat: Me and Greg deserve to be happy, Chloe will only get in our way

Kat: Greg is mine, I am the only one who will have him

Kat: Chlo can’t take him away from me, we belong together

Kat: Greg needs me, Chlo will only make him unhappy

Kat: Me and Greg deserve to be happy, Chloe will only get in our way

Kat repeats this over and over as she puts her hand in her pocket and strokes the knife just before the scene cuts back to Chloe’s flat where Chloe is lying on the floor squeeling in pain as blood continues to pour from her stomach. She crawls from the bedroom and tries to reach the phone but she falls unconscious because of the stab wound in her stomach

DaVeyWaVey
07-11-2006, 22:57
Episode 20

Scene 1- The Church- Afternoon

(Greg is waiting uncomfortably at the altar by Tom and Max, awaiting the bride's arrival. The Hinston High residents are sitting in the church, waiting uncomfortably)

Greg: She still hasn't turned up! I'm getting really worried now...

Tom: Just relax...everything's gonna be just fine..trust me! :)

Greg: I hope it will be fine, i hope Chlo hasn't had any last minute nerves or anything and has ran away or something...

Max: Oh c'mon! Now your just being stupid....

(Greg looks at his watch in anticipation)

Greg: Well our wedding should have started 20 minutes ago! Where is she?! She should have turned up by now surely...no sign of my wife to be or Kat...

Tom: They're probably just running late...like i said before, you know what women are like...

Max: Tom's right mate...she probably wants to look her absolute best on her special day and that's why she's taking so long! :)

Greg: Thanks guys for trying to put my mind at ease..but it's just not working...

(We cut to the Hinston High residents talking in their seats)

Pat: I would have expected to see the blushing bride here by now...

Megan: Maybe she decided to run out on him, i mean look at him, he's hardly a hunk material is he?! :rolleyes:

(Megan looks over to Luke. They both smile at each other)

Pat: It's not just about looks you know?! Chloe genuinely loves Greg...she's probably just a bit behind...

(We cut to Tanya and Luke)

Tanya: What the bloody hell are you smiling about?!

Luke: Oh nothing love...just in one of those moods...

(Tanya gives Luke a suspicious look)

Luke: For christ sake, it's a wedding! I have to smile, no good crying and feeling sorry for yourself at a wedding is it eh?!

(We cut back to Greg, Tom and Max)

Greg: Something's happened, i know it has!

(Greg starts to have a paniced look on his face)

Greg: Chlo doesn't wanna marry does she eh?! She's standing me up at the altar...why do i deserve this?! I thought Chloe loved me! :(

(Greg sobs into his arms. Max puts a reassuring hand on his shoulder)

Max: Eh come on! Snap out of it...your just getting paranoid...Chloe loves you mate, she loves you to pieces! I bet she'll turn up looking gorgeous in any second!

(The vicar comes up to Greg)

Vicar: I'm sorry but proceedings must start in atleast 5 minutes time, i have a very tight schedule today...

Greg: 5 minutes?! :eek:

(Greg runs out of the church in despair)

Greg: Come on Chloe! Where are ya eh?!

DaVeyWaVey
08-11-2006, 22:27
Scene 2- The Church- Afternoon

(Greg is still nervously awaiting at the altar for Chloe's arrival. The guests are still in their seats muttering to each other over Chloe's lateness to get to the church. The vicar is standing by Greg, gesturing for the ceremony to begin. Greg turns to Tom and Max with a worried look on his face)

Greg: She's not gonna turn up! I know she's not gonna turn up! The ceremony should have started an hour ago now!

Tom: Something is obviously wrong...

(Kat suddenly runs into the church, causing everybody to turn round and see Kat panting for breath at the church entrance)

Kat: I'm sorry Greg! I'm so sorry...

(Greg looks confused and walks to Kat)

Greg: I don't understand...why are you sorry?! Why aren't you in your bridesmaid's dress?! Where's Chloe?!

Kat: It's Chloe...she doesn't want to go through with the wedding...she doesn't love you Greg...she's left you...

(Greg's face turns to amazement. Everyone in the church gasps over Kat's revelation. Tom whispers to Max)

Tom: There's something wrong Max, i know it...

Max: Chloe was dead set on marrying Greg...she loves him for christ sake! Something isn't quite right...

(Tom and Max turn to Kat and look at her suspiciously)

DaVeyWaVey
08-11-2006, 22:51
Scene 3- The Church- Afternoon

(The Hinston High residents watch the events unfold in the church following Kat's revelation. Greg is amazed by Kat's news. Tom and Max walk up to Kat to confront her)

Tom: I don't understand Kat...Chloe loves Greg to pieces...and now she doesn't want to go through with the wedding...it doesn't add up...

Kat: Well i'm sorry but Chloe is adamant that she doesn't want to go through with it, she said she didn't love Greg anymore, she told me that!

Max: But it doesn't make sense Kat! Chloe was adamant to go through with the wedding...something's gone wrong and your trying to cover it up...now what's wrong eh?!

(Kat starts to panic)

Kat: Nothing's wrong....i can't help it if Chlo don't wanna go through with the wedding!

Tom: But she did want to go through with the wedding, i know she did! Everyone saw how excited Chloe was over her own wedding! Your lying Kat, something's happened, now tell us all the truth!

Greg: I want to know Kat! What the hell's going on eh?! I thought Chloe loved me!

Kat: Nothing's happened! I swear!

(Kat's blood stained knife suddenly falls out of her pocket and hits the floor. Everyone looks to see the knife on the floor covered in blood, and is in deep shock. Greg goes mad)

Greg: What's happened?! What's happened?! :angry: What have you done to my wife?!

Kat: I can explain Greg...i wanted to get Chloe out of the way...she doesn't love you! I love you and now we can be together!

(Kat leans into kiss Greg. Greg pushes her to the floor)

Greg: Your insane! Chloe loves me, i know she does! And now you've done something to her! What have you done to her?! Is that her blood on that knife eh?! You bitch!

(Greg slaps Kat hard across the face, everyone gasps in shock as they feel the force of Greg's slap)

Greg: If anything's happened to Chloe, then your dead Kat! Your dead!

Kat: You don't know what your saying Greg! You love me...i know you do! Just accept it! I love you, and you love me! I have pictures of you up on my wall, i worship you...and you worship me! Just give me a chance...we can work this out...Chloe's out the way...now it can just be me and you...

(Kat has a deranged smile on her face)

Greg: Where's Chloe?!

(Greg screams)

Greg: Where's CHLOE?!?!?!

Kat: She's at the flat, but you want me now don't you eh?! Forget about Chloe!

(Kat grabs Greg's legs and starts kissing him all over. Tom and Max restrain Kat. She lets go of Greg's legs as Greg runs from the church to Chloe's flat in fear of her safety)

DaVeyWaVey
09-11-2006, 18:27
Scene 4- The Church- Afternoon

(Greg has ran from the church to Chloe's flat in fear of her safety. Kat is on her knees in the church and she starts to break down in tears. Everyone is watching Kat's deranged face turn to an emotional wreck. Tom and Max look down on Kat. Max shouts at Kat)

Max: What have you done eh?! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!

(Kat starts crying even more)

Kat: Greg loves me! He loves me, i know he does! I haven't done anything...

Max: Your deluded Kat! Your mad, bonkers! Greg doesn't love you!

Kat: He does, he wants me! Not Chloe! Now she's out of the way, we can both be together!

Tom: What do you mean out of the way?! What have you done to Chloe eh?!

(Kat's tears turn to happiness)

Kat: She's going now....i can feel it...she's gonna be gone forever and me and Greg can finally be together! What we've both always wanted!

(Max shakes Kat in anger)

Max: What the bloody hell have you done?! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!

(Kat laughs)

Tom: If you've done anything to harm Chloe, your gonna be bloody well responsible! Greg and Chloe love each other...your just imagining that Greg loves you...your jealous!

Kat: Jealous?! Chloe's the one who's jealous! She's taken Greg away from me! Destiny says that me and Greg should be the ones getting married and living our lives together...

Tom: She's your best friend Kat! How could you do this?! How could you do this eh?! You make me sick!

Max: You've ruined this wedding day Kat! You've ruined it...splitting up a happy couple because your jealous...it's just evil! It's sheer evil!

(Kat reaches for the blood stained knife on the floor. She grabs it and gets up and puts the knife to Max's throat)

Kat: Greg is mine, Max! Mine! Greg isn't Chloe's possession...Greg is my possession and always will be! I worship him every day...Greg is what keeps me alive... if anyone touches Greg, then i won't be very happy, they'll be hell to pay! if anybody gets in the way of me and Greg being together...then they'll find themselves going to doggy heaven...just where Chloe is off too right now...

(Kat has a deranged grin on her face, still holding the knife to Max's throat. The Hinston High residents gasp in shock over Kat's latest confession)

Max: What do you mean? Doggy heaven?

Kat: Isn't it obvious...i stabbed Kat right in the stomach...got her real good!

(Kat laughs at her comment. Tom has a look of rage on his face and grabs hold of Kat's arms and manages to tackle the blood stained knife off her. Kat panics and does a runner out of the church. We cut to Megan who talks to Pat)

Megan: Holy christ! That woman's a right bunny boiler ain't she?!

(Luke and Jack suddenly get out of their seats)

Tanya: Where the hell do you think your going?!

Luke: Chasing after Kat...she's not gonna get away with what she just confessed too!

Tanya: Bloody hell! Be careful, she's a right psycho!

Alicia: Be careful as well Jack...

Jack: Like Luke said love, Kat can't just get away with what she just told us all...

(Jack and Luke run out of the church in pursuit of Kat. Everyone else in the church looks on in complete despair)

Xx-Vicky-xX
09-11-2006, 21:01
Scene 5- The Church- Afternoon

Alicia is on the phone and we see Luke and Jack run out of he church chasing Kat

Alicia: Yeah police please

Alicia: Yeah I need to report an incident

Alicia: Yeah ill hold

The scene cuts to Max and Tom

Max: Well this will be a wedding to show the grandkids :lol:

Tom: This is hardly the time for you’re jokes and stupid little comments

Max: Why do you have to be so bloody serious all the time :rolleyes:

Tom: Just shut up eh Tom

Max: * sighs * I dunno cant get the brother’s these days

Tom: Can you give you’re mouth a rest

Max: :hmm: ….. NOPE!!

Tom: Well do something useful with it then and ring Greg tell him about Kat

DaVeyWaVey
09-11-2006, 22:38
Scene 6- The Church/Hinston Town- Afternoon

(Tom and Max ring Greg from their mobile phone to inform him of Kat's confession to stabbing Chloe. Greg answers it and the scene cuts between the church and Greg. Greg answers the phone panting for breath)

Greg: Yep...

Tom: Greg...have you arrived at the flat yet?!

Greg: No..but i'm not too far away...i wanna know what the bloody hell's going on! Kat loves me...is it some kind of joke or something?!

(Greg tries to laugh it off as Tom has a concerned look on his face as he looks at Max)

Tom: No..this is deadly serious mate...you need to know this...

Greg: It bloody well sounds serious...tell me what happened...it's not Chloe is it?!

Tom: I'm afraid it is...Kat's stabbed her Greg! Chloe's at her flat fighting for her life...Kat stabbed her and left her there!

(A tear rolls down Tom's face. Greg looks devastated and a tear rolls down his eye)

Greg: Jesus christ! How could Kat do that?!

(Greg screams in fury down the phone)

Greg: I'M GONNA KILL KAT IF ANYTHING HAPPENS TO CHLOE!

(Tom feels the force of Greg's screaming on the end of the line)

Tom: I'm sure she'll be fine Greg mate...just get to the flat and call an' ambulance...

Greg: She's not gonna be fine though is she eh!? She's slowly bleedin' to death at her flat...she's gonna die! My one and only love is gonna die because of that bitch! I thought Kat was her best friend! I've gotta get to Chloe's flat now before it's too late...i love Chloe...i love Chloe so much..

Tom: Greg...mate...wait!

(Greg drops the phone on the floor and he starts crying as he runs towards Hinston High. We cut to Chloe's flat where we see Chloe on the floor unconscious, covered in blood)

DaVeyWaVey
09-11-2006, 22:42
Scene 7- Hinston Roads- Evening

(Greg is running across the Hinston roads towards Chloe's flat. He runs by a main road, knowing that Chloe is bleeding to death, he doesn't bother looking at the road to see any passing vehicles and runs across the road only to get knocked down by a lorry. Passer bys scream as the lorry comes to a halt and Greg's motionless body lies in the middle of the road....)

Xx-Vicky-xX
10-11-2006, 19:31
Scene 8- The Church- Evening

We see the police arrive at the church and Alicia going to speak to them just before the scene cuts to Jack and Luke who have managed to catch up with Kat

Kat: Go away

Luke: Not a chance

Kat: I did it in the name of love, me and Greg deserve to be happy together without Chloe in the way

Luke: She wont be in the way, least not where Greg is concerned, Greg loves her, they are made for each other, clearly you are the only one who cant see that

Kat: Chloe and Greg? Pft Chloe and Greg are not made for each other, Greg is supposed to be with me

Jack: You aint right in the head love, you tried to kill you’re best friend in hope that Greg would want to be with you which he clearly doesn’t, there is only one type of woman that does something like that, and that is a mad woman which is what you are, you need help

Kat: I do not need help, im as normal as anyone else who is in love like I am

Jack: Gees are you hearing this? :rolleyes: You’re obsessed

Luke: Jack… calm down now go over there and ring someone, get the police down here ASAP

Jack: Fine but don’t let her get away with it

Luke: I wont but just chill yeah

Jack: Yeah

Jack tries to get hold of some people so they can get the police down to Kat

Xx-Vicky-xX
10-11-2006, 22:15
Episode 21- Scene 1- Chloe and Kat’s Flat- Evening

Alicia and Nina arrive at Chloe’s flat and they barge through the front door after nobody answers the door. They find Chloe lying motionless on the floor with blood all over the floor and all over her wedding dress.

DaVeyWaVey
11-11-2006, 13:47
Scene 2- The Church- Evening

(The police have finally caught up with Kat who is still being confronted by Luke and Jack. Kat looks but she realises there is nowhere to turn, she knows that she is cornered. Kat shouts)

Kat: Why did you have to go and call the police eh?! I'm only in love!

Jack: You need help Kat...you've got to realise that Greg loves Chloe and not you! You admitted to stabbing Chloe for christ sake!

Kat: I stabbed Chloe for love! Love isn't a crime is it?!

Jack: Stabbing someone is a crime! Your deranged! Your a psycho!

(Kat screams)

Kat: I'm just in love! I'm just in love!!

(Kat dives at Jack and starts attacking him. The police rush to Jack's aid and restrains Kat by the arms)

Police: I think we better get you down the station..don't you?!

(Kat screams as she is forced towards the police car)

Kat: Greg's mine! He's mine!! No one can take him away from me, no one! I love him, i treasure him!!!

(Kat breaks down as she is hurled into the police car. Luke helps Jack up from the ground)

Luke: You alright mate?!

Jack: Yeah....i never knew Kat had it in her...

(Luke and Jack watch as the police car drives away)

DaVeyWaVey
11-11-2006, 16:49
Scene 3- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Night

(An ambulance arrives at Chloe and Kat's flat. We see the paramedics making their way through the front door of the flat with a stretcher and with their equipment. Alicia and Nina stand at the sidelines as paramedics start to treat Chloe)

Alicia: We're so glad you got here! We thought you would never come!

Paramedic: We got here as soon as possible...

(There's a pause)

Nina: Is Chloe going to be ok? She's not gonna die...is she?!

(Nina starts crying after saying these words. Alicia comforts her, she also has a tear in her eye)

Paramedic: We don't know...we honestly don't know...but right now, we've got to get Chloe to hospital as soon as possible...

(The paramedics put Chloe on the stretcher trolley and wheels her out to the ambulance. Nina and Alicia follow the paramedics outside as the paramedics put Chloe in the ambulance. The paramedics drive off and the sirens of the ambulance can soon be heard. Nina and Alicia stand outside the flat reeling over these turn of events)

Nina: I want her to be ok!...i want Chloe to be ok! :crying:

Alicia: Chloe's gonna be fine...just fine...

DaVeyWaVey
11-11-2006, 21:03
Scene 4- The Church- Night

(The Hinston High residents make their way home from the church after a day of explosive events. Jack and Luke are both making their way home too, Jack's mobile phone rings and he quickly answers it. It's Alicia. The scene cuts between Alicia who is at Chloe and Kat's flat and the church where Luke and Jack are about to leave)

Jack: Alicia? Is everything ok?!

(Alicia is tearful as she speaks down the phone)

Alicia: No...everything is not ok...Kat was right by what she said...she did stab Chloe! Me and Nina...we barged into Chloe's flat...and we seen her...we seen her there! Lying on the floor covered in blood!!

(Alicia starts crying!

Jack: *******! Is she ok?! What's happening? Have you called an ambulance?!

Alicia: Of course i called a bloody ambulance! They just arrived and now Chloe is on her way to hospital...they don't know if she'll live or die! :crying:

Jack: Well what i do bloody know is that Kat is gonna pay for what she has done! How could she stab her own best friend like that?! :angry:

Alicia: It makes me so angry Jack! If she was here now, i would 'ruddy throttle her for what she's done! She makes my blood boil! :angry:

Jack: Is Greg there? He was heading to the flat...well he should have got there by now...

Alicia: No...Greg isn't here...there's been no sign of him all night...

Jack: Well that's strange..he was heading back to the flat...

Alicia: Well there's been no sign of him...

Jack: Something's up i know it...he wouldn't have gone anywhere else...he was in a rush...Chloe was his first priority!

(Jack hangs up the phone, clearly concerned)

DaVeyWaVey
11-11-2006, 23:04
Scene 5- The Cafe- Night

(Pat, Megan and Felicity are all walking back to the cafe after the explosive events that took place at the church)

Megan: Well that was certainly a day and an 'alf!

Pat: Oh put a sock in it Megan!

Megan: Why should I?! Everyone else will be talking about what happened today...the psycho bitch struck!

Felicity: Well Kat always seemed like a normal sort of woman too me...

Megan: Well she obviously pulled the wool over your eyes, you stupid cow!

(Megan laughs. Felicity suddenly stops speaking)

Megan: I mean that woman seriously has issues...she sounded like a right bunny boiler...confessing her love to a minger of a mechanic!

(Pat, Megan and Felicity arrive at the cafe. Suddenly two people step out of the shadows, it's Frank and Dave. They have both returned from Spain and their both holding suitcases in their hands)

DaVeyWaVey
12-11-2006, 18:50
Scene 6- The Hospital- Early Morning

(Alicia and Nina are in the hospital waiting room, anxiously awaiting news on Chloe. The doctor suddenly enters and closes the door)

Doctor: Sorry to have kept you waiting...

Alicia: It's ok...we can wait as long as we can...we just wanna hear news on Chloe! Is she ok?! Will she pull through?!

Doctor: Well...she's in a critical condition...that's all we can say at the moment..but she is currently undergoing some tests...

Nina: Can we see her?

Doctor: Yeah of course...but i must warn you Chloe is on an incubator...there are wires and leads everywhere...please don't be alarmed by this...it's just a procedure for her certain injuries...come this way...

(The doctor leads Nina and Alicia out of the waiting room and down the corridors to Chloe's cubicle. Nina suddenly looks into another cubicle as she is making her way down the corridor and she sees Greg lying motionless on a stretcher. Nina looks into the cubicle in complete shock, she witnesses the doctors suddenly putting a blanket over Greg's face. Nina screams)

Nina: Oh my god!! Oh my god!!!

(Nina collapses to the floor in floods of tears)

DaVeyWaVey
13-11-2006, 20:10
Scene 7- The Cafe- Early Morning

(Dave and Frank are in the cafe sitting down, drinking coffee. Pat, Megan and Felicity sit by them, clearly still shocked over their return)

Pat: But i don't understand...what? what are you doing here?!

Dave: We just wanted to come back and see you mum...i've been away a few months...no harm in that is there?!

Pat: Well of course not...i just thought that you would be too busy having a great time in Spain..and you would have forgotten all about us..and Hinston...

Dave: No it's not like that!

Megan: I personally would have stayed in Spain! Your missing out on the nightlife right now, swanning back here!

Dave: And who are you exactly?

Megan: I am Megan...an ex-model...your replacement at this cafe...

Dave: My replacement?! Well mum...you made a wonderful choice! :rolleyes:

Pat: We were stuck...desperate, Megan was just here at the right time...she's doing ok here...

Felicity: I think that's an overstatement mum! :rolleyes:

Dave: Anyway what have i missed?

Megan: Well that woman over the road...Kat...she went off her rocker today and might have killed her best friend! It all happens here...

Dave: Kat?! No...that can't be right...and you mean Chloe...her best friend is Chloe! Kat wouldn't have tried to kill Chloe!? :eek:

Pat: Calm down son...you need some rest...you can catch up on all the gossip in the morning...it must have been a long trip from Spain to get here...

Megan: And who the hell are you?!

(Megan points in Frank's direction)

Frank: I'm Dave's father if you must know! :rolleyes:

Megan: Oh your that type are ya?! Got Pat up the duff i take it and then left...only to come back whisking your son to Spain! Well...men like you are a bloody disgrace!

(Megan gets up from her chair and slaps Frank across the face)

Megan: Goodnight! Must get my beauty sleep! :D

(Megan heads up to her bedroom)

Frank: Bloody hell! She's got a cheek...why did ya have to go and hire a girl like her?!

Pat: It's none of your business Frank who i hired for this cafe! Anyway, what are you doing here?! I'm sure Dave could have accompanied himself back to Hinston without your assistance! :rolleyes:

Frank: Well...err..i just wanted to give Dave some company during the flight that's all..so he wasn't alone on the plane...anyway, i'm quite tired so i am going to bed, goodnight...

Pat: And where are you gonna sleep exactly?

Frank: The sofa i guess...

(Frank jokingly laughs before leaving to go to the living room)

Dave: Sorry about this...springing my arrival back here on you..i mean..

Pat: It's ok, i'm glad your back...i just thought you would be in Spain for a lot longer that's all...

Dave: Still! I should have called...gave you a bit of a notice...

Felicity: So how long are you sticking around for?

Dave: A little while...

(Dave turns to Frank who is entering the living room before turning back to Pat and Felicity)

Dave: Well it depends...it just depends...

(Pat and Felicity smile at Dave)

DaVeyWaVey
13-11-2006, 20:22
Scene 8- The Hospital- Morning

(Alicia and Nina are outside the hospital entrance, we can see that they have both been clearly crying. Alicia gets her phone out, her hands are shaking. She dials Jack's number into the phone and rings him. Jack answers and Alicia speaks tearfully)

Alicia: Greg's dead, Jack! Greg's dead! :crying:

(Alicia's eyes well up with tears. We can hear Nina crying in the background)

DaVeyWaVey
13-11-2006, 20:37
Episode 22

Scene 1- The Hospital- Morning

(Tom and Max rush to the hospital after hearing of Greg's death from Alicia's phone call. Tom and Max rush to the hospital reception)

Max: Where's Greg?! I want to know where he is! He's here! I want too see him!

Receptionist: If you give me his full details, i'll be able to help you..

(Alicia and Nina suddenly come to the reception. Tom and Max turn round. Alicia and Nina have tears in their eyes)

Alicia: I'm so sorry Tom and Max...i'm so sorry...

Max: Please don't tell us what i think your gonna tell us! Please! No!

(Alicia and Nina start crying)

Nina: Greg's dead! He's dead! :crying:

Max: No! No! He can't be dead! He just can't be...you must have got it all wrong...

Alicia: He got knocked down by a lorry....

(Max starts crying)

Max: He's got to be ok! Greg has to be ok! He has to be! He can't be dead! He just can't be! :crying:

Nina: He is dead Max! Greg is dead! :crying:

(Max screams before collapsing to the floor in tears. Tom starts crying, while Alicia and Nina try to hold back the tears)

DaVeyWaVey
14-11-2006, 18:44
Scene 2- The Cafe- Noon

(Dave and Pat are sitting down in the cafe. Dave is tucking into a chocolate muffin, while Pat is drinking a coffee)

Pat: So did you have a good sleep?

Dave: Yeah it wasn't too bad...took some getting used to though...sleeping in a different bed an' all that...

(Pat laughs)

Pat: You are sticking around though for a bit aren't you?!

Dave: Gosh mum! I've only just got back...i am not gonna be hopping on the next plane back to Spain!

Pat: Oh good..coz i want to spend some time with you...these few months, i've missed you and lots of stuff has been happening around here as well...

Dave: Which reminds me! What was that new waitress on about last night?! Kat and Chloe?!

Pat: What she said was true Dave...she just didn't really put it in suitable words...

Dave: So Kat did stab Chloe?! Christ! Before i left, i wouldn't imagine Kat doing anything like that...especially not to her best friend! :eek:

Pat: I know..we're all shocked as you are!

Dave: But why did she do it?!

Pat: She loves Greg too...she couldn't bear too see them get married! You should have seen her Dave, Kat was like, well...obsessed!

Dave: Well i hope Chloe is alright...i might go to the hospital later...

Pat: There's no need really...we'll hear news on Chloe as soon as anything happens, besides, i want to spend time with you...

Dave: ..and dad...he really wants to put the effort in now mum...

Pat: Effort?! The only effort he has ever put in with me is getting me pregnant with you!

(Dave stands up from his chair, clearly angry by Pat's comment)

Dave: For goodness sake mum, give dad a chance! He got to know me in Spain, now he wants to get to know you!

(Dave storms off)

DaVeyWaVey
15-11-2006, 17:42
Scene 3- The Hospital- Noon

(The doctors have allowed Tom and Max to see Greg's body. The doctor enters a cubicle followed by Tom and Max)

Doctor: Are you sure about this?

Max: We're sure! We just want too see our friend! We just want too see him! :crying:

(The doctor uncovers the blanket and unveils Greg's body)

Tom: Jesus Christ!

(Tom and Max stare at Greg's body before both of them break down in tears)

DaVeyWaVey
15-11-2006, 17:48
Scene 4- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(The kids are in school. Tanya is at the hospital visiting Chloe. Suddenly there is a knock at the door. Luke jumps up from the sofa clearly excited. He answers the door. It's Megan)

Luke: Well...well...fancy seeing you at my front door...

Megan: Hey sexy...

Luke: Come on in...i don't want you standing outside freezing your tits off...

(Megan enters. As she goes through, Luke slaps her bum)

Luke: Come on then baby!! Let's do it...let's get it on while we have the chance!

Megan: That's the best offer i've had all day!

(Megan smiles at Luke, as he slaps her bum again. Megan and Luke then, run to the bedroom...)

DaVeyWaVey
15-11-2006, 17:55
Scene 5- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Some of the Hinston High residents are in the cafe, chatting to each other, while drinking coffee. Pat and Felicity are at the counter)

Pat: And where is Megan right now exactly? I only sent her on a 15 minute break...she's been gone an hour! :rolleyes:

Felicity: Oh come on mum...you surely never thought that she would obide by what you say?! :rolleyes:

(Suddenly Tom and Max enter the cafe after returning from the hospital. They are both crying. Everyone in the cafe turns to Tom and Max, puzzled over why they are crying)

Pat: Oh my god...what the hell's happened?! Why are you crying?!

Felicity: Christ! Chloe is ok..isn't she?!

Tom: It's not Chloe! It's Greg...he got knocked down by a lorry...and now....and now....he's dead! Dead!

(Tom and Max collapse to the floor in tears. Everyone is devastated by Tom and Max's announcement, but they all have a tear in their eye)

DaVeyWaVey
16-11-2006, 22:25
Scene 6- The Hospital- Afternoon

(Alicia, Tanya and Nina are in the hospital waiting room, still shocked and devastated over Greg's death. The doctor enters. Alicia, Tanya and Nina abruptly stand up)

Nina: Is there any news?

Doctor: Chloe has undergone some tests and she has responded to treatment well...we're hoping that she will be awake in the next few hours, and we are confident that she will make a full recovery...

(Alicia, Tanya and Nina let out a sigh of relief)

Alicia: Oh my god! That's great news!

Tanya: This may be all well and good...but think about Greg...how are we going to tell Chloe that the love of her life is dead?!

Nina: I guess we'll have to cross that bridge when we come to it...

Doctor: I can break the news to Chloe if you like...

Alicia: No..we should do it...we are her friends after all....the main thing right now is that Chloe is ok...she's going to survive what's happened to her...that is all that matters!

Nina: I just dread us telling Chloe the terrible news that Greg is dead! :(

Tanya: Her heart is going to be broken...there's no mistaking that...

(Tanya, Nina and Alicia all look at each other with worried looks on their faces)

Xx-Vicky-xX
16-11-2006, 23:14
Scene 7- The Campbells House- Evening

Luke and Megan are upstairs in bed together and they hear the kids and Tanya arrive back home

Luke: **** is that the time

Megan:What

Luke: That’s Tan and the kids

Megan: WHAT?? You said they wouldn’t be home for hours

Luke: Yeah well that was half 9 its now half 4

Megan: My my doesn’t time fly when you are having fun

Luke: That’s not funny now get in the wardrobe before we get caught

Megan gets in the wardrobe just as we cut to Tanya putting her hand on the door handle

DaVeyWaVey
16-11-2006, 23:22
Scene 8- The Campbells House- Evening

(Tanya opens the door. Luke is stark naked in the bedroom)

Tanya: What the hell's bloody going on here?! Were you preparing yourself for me eh?

(Tanya has a cheeky grin on her face. Luke doesn't know how to respond)

Tanya: Well sorry i am not in the mood...maybe later hey babe...

Luke: I only went for a shower! I wasn't preparing myself for you...well i wasn't meaning too...

Tanya: Well look at you Luke! Your hardly wet are you eh?!

Luke: I dried off...

(Tanya feels Luke's hair)

Tanya: But your hair isn't wet....it's not even damp! Luke! What's going on?! You have something up your sleeve...some sort of surprise...

(Tanya looks around the bedroom as Luke starts putting his clothes back on)

Luke: There's no surprises ok...like i said i only went for a bit of a wash...

Tanya: I can tell when your lying Luke...it's so obvious and i know the signs after all the times you've lied when you've cheated on me!

(Tanya continues to look around the bedroom)

Tanya: I think my surprise is in the wardrobe....

(Tanya goes to open the wardrobe. Luke has a frantic look on his face. Megan stands hiding in the wardrobe knowing she is only seconds away of being found out....)

DaVeyWaVey
17-11-2006, 17:37
Episode 23

Scene 1- The Cafe- Night

(Felicity is in her bedroom sitting on the side of her bed with a pillow in her arms. Dave enters Felicity's bedroom)

Dave: Can i come in?

Felicity: It's a free country isn't it?!

Dave: Are you ok? Since i've returned...well...i've noticed that you've been acting weirdly...it's nothing i've done is it?

Felicity: Oh Dave...it's not you...this is nothing to do with you...

Dave: Well what is it eh? I'm your brother...

Felicity: Half brother Dave...

Dave: Well you can still tell me what's bothering you!

Felicity: But your hardly around no more...you won't be able to do anything! You'll be going back to Spain soon...it's hardly worth me telling you!

Dave: But your not acting the same Flic...i'm worried! I might be able to do something about it...i am sticking around for a while...

(Felicity turns away from Dave)

Dave: Tell me sis!

Felicity: It's Megan...

Dave: Megan?! Isn't she the new waitress?!

Felicity: Yeah she is...and she's a bitch! She's been terrorising me ever since she arrived here! She burnt my face with candles off a birthday cake!

Dave: Christ!! The bloody cow!! Wait 'til i get my hands on her!

Felicity: Dave! This is my problem...i've got to fight my own battles! I don't want you getting involved!

Dave: Does mum know about this?! Why didn't you and mum sack her for god sake?! Why the hell is she living here?! Sack her! Chuck her out! Get her out of your life!

Felicity: Mum seems to be turning a blind eye...i can't really sack her can i eh?! Mum's the one in charge!

Dave: The cafe is a family business Flic...you have as much right as mum to sack Megan...

Felicity: There's something else though Dave...

Dave: Well what? Come on...tell me...

Felicity: I know something...about Megan...

Dave: Well?

Felicity: She's having an affair Dave!...she's having an affair with a married man!

Dave: Well who is he? Does he live in Hinston?! Do we know him?!

Felicity: It's Luke...he's cheating on Tanya...Megan and Luke are having an affair! They're playing away!

Dave: Jesus! What are you gonna do about it?!

Felicity: I've been threatened to secrecy Dave! If i squeel, Megan is gonna get her claws out! I try and stand up to her but i just can't! I'm terrified of her! :(

Dave: Well bloody go against her word Flic! Don't be scared! That's what Megan wants! Get revenge! Tell Tanya about her husband having an affair!

(Felicity thinks about what Dave is saying)

Dave: I'll leave you too think about it...

(Dave leaves Felicity's bedroom)

DaVeyWaVey
17-11-2006, 17:55
Scene 2- The Campbells House- Night

(Tanya goes to open the wardrobe. Luke has a frantic look on his face. Megan stands hiding in the wardrobe knowing she is only seconds away of being found out....)

Luke: No Tan! Don't!

Tanya: Don't what? What are you hiding from me Luke?!

(Tanya turns the wardrobe door. Suddenly Emily runs into the room)

Emily: Mummy! Mummy! Lee and Tina have switched off my favourite tv programme!!

(Tanya turns away from the wardrobe)

Tanya: Christ Emily! Can't you just do something else apart from watch tv!?

Emily: No i want my favourite programme back on...now!!

(Emily stomps out the room. Tanya follows Emily)

Tanya: I'll be back in a minute...i'm gonna find out what your hiding from me Luke...

(Tanya leaves the bedroom, while Luke has a guilty look on his face)

DaVeyWaVey
17-11-2006, 18:30
Scene 3- The Campbells House- Night

(Megan gets out of the wardrobe after Tanya leaves the bedroom. Luke has a guilty look on his face)

Megan: Well that was a close shave....

Luke: This has to stop Megan!

Megan: What do you mean?! I thought you loved the sneaking around and playing away...you've had affairs before, for christ sake!

Luke: But i want to be a family man now...i've done my fair share of affairs... now i have to support my family!

Megan: You said that before Luke! But you just couldn't resist me...you'll never change Luke...

Luke: But i want too change!

Megan: I thought you loved the adrenaline rush Luke...i thought you loved taking risks..knowing that you might be caught out at any moment! I know i certainly do...

Luke: I'm over that now Megan...we have to finish...this affair has to stop!

Megan: Fine! i'll just go out into the living room now and reveal what we've been getting up too! Is that what you want eh?!

Luke: Ok Megan..ok! Just leave...i'll let you know when i'm next free for another session!

Megan: That's more like it...

(Megan gives Luke a cheeky grin before putting her high heels back on and climbing out of Luke's bedroom window. Luke lies on the bed, and lets out a sigh of relief)

DaVeyWaVey
18-11-2006, 12:26
Scene 4- The Butleys House- Morning

(The Butley family are around the breakfast table)

Marianne: Well i better be off to school...

Julia: Yeah you don't want to be running late now...you've got everything haven't you?!

Marianne: Yes mum! See you both later! :rolleyes:

(Marianne grabs her school bag and heads out of the front door)

Julia: You better get a shift on as well Sal..you don't wanna be late too!

Sally: I am tired of walking on my own to school though!

Julia: It's not that bad...once you get walking..you won't feel so lonely!

Sally: Maybe i should call for George...see if he wants to come up to school with me today...it'll give me a bit of company...

Julia: I don't think that's a very good idea Sal...

(Sally looks baffled)

Sally: What do you mean!?

Julia: I had a run in with George's mother, Liz the other day...she doesn't want us interfering with her or George...not after what Danny did...

Sally: What?! Why?! Danny's in the past now! What happened is in the past now! I just want to be George's friend...i really like him mum! You know that!

Julia: Yeah but i think it's best if this family steers clear from them for a while...until the dust dies down anyway...

Sally: The dust will never die down though will it eh?! What Danny did to George was a long time ago!

Julia: Six months ago Sal! George is paralysed...he's gonna be in a wheelchair for the rest of his life! You can't get over that in a matter of six months!

Sally: Well i know George wants too see me! Liz is just trying to stop George seeing me! That's what it is!

Julia: Sal! Please...!

Julia: Just stay away from him Sal, please!

Sally: He lives on the opposite side of the street mum! How can i stay away from him eh?!

Julia: Just try too! Before Liz starts another slanging match with me! We've had a tough few months Sal..i don't want to be in a slanging match with no one!

Sally: Maybe i should just forget my feelings for George then shall I?! :rolleyes:

Julia: I think it's best...

(Sally gets up from the breakfast table and angrily gets her school bag before slamming the front door behind her. Sally leans against her front door, and starts crying, looking over to George's house)

DaVeyWaVey
18-11-2006, 21:58
Scene 4- The Hospital- Morning

(Chloe has awoken from her coma in hospital after being stabbed by Kat. Alicia, Tanya and Nina enter her cubicle)

Alicia: Hi...we just thought we would pop in too see how you were...

Chloe: How do you think i'm feeling eh?! My wedding day got ruined! My best friend stabbed me and i nearly died!

Alicia: It's been a tough couple of months for you...we all know that...

Chloe: Yeah it has been a tough couple of months...i can't believe Kat has done this to me though! I thought she was my best friend...why did she have to do this when she knew i was happy!? Why?!

Tanya: We don't know...but when we see her next, we'll throttle her!

Chloe: That won't solve anything...i don't want too see Kat again! Not after she ruined my wedding day and stabbed me! I nearly died for christ sake! Where is Kat now anyway?

Tanya: She's been admitted into a mental hospital...

Chloe: You mean she's avoided arrest?! She deserves to be punished for what she did! Not help!

Tanya: Kat went bonkers on your wedding Chlo! I think we all know she had some mental issues...that's why she got admitted into a mental hospital after all...she needs help!

Chloe: Well i hope i never bloody see her again! Oh well, atleast she didn't manage to snatch Greg away from me! When i get out of here, i think i will suggest to Greg that we move away from here...i don't want to be here if Kat returns! Where is Greg anyway?! I thought he would be the first visitor...i thought he would be by my side when i woke up!

(Tanya, Alicia and Nina exchange uneasy looks. Chloe spots this)

Chloe: What's wrong?!

Nina: What?!

Chloe: There's something wrong...i can tell...i mention Greg and you all look uncomfortable...uneasy...what's happened?!

(Alicia, Nina and Tanya have tears in their eyes)

Chloe: What's up!? You all look like your gonna burst into tears! Come on, tell me! Your scaring me!

Alicia: Chloe...we've got terrible news...Greg got knocked down by a lorry, and now he's dead!

Nina: We're so sorry Chloe! So sorry...

(Chloe has a look of utter devastation on her face. Her face turns pale and she breaks down into tears)

DaVeyWaVey
18-11-2006, 22:17
Scene 5- The Johnsons House- Morning

(Harry is at the breakfast table eating some cereal. Jenna is making a coffee, and at the same time, stroking her bump, we can clearly tell she is pregnant)

Jenna: Well i'm counting down the days Harry...not long until our baby will be with us...

(Jenna crosses another day off on the calendar)

Harry: Oh Jenna! Do you really have to do that?! Cross days off on the calendar?! :rolleyes:

Jenna: I'm just excited about our baby that's all...i wish you would atleast share my enthusiasm...

Harry: Yeah..well..i'm not in the mood...

Jenna: You never are in the mood are you Harry?! :rolleyes: We have to start discussing our child...it's gonna be with us soon...and we've got nothing sorted...

(Harry rolls his eyes, clearly not wanting to talk about the subject)

Harry: Christ Jenna! Haven't you got any respect?! Greg has just died...and you can't even bear a thought for his memory...instead your up in the clouds over our bloody unborn child!

(Harry gets up from the breakfast table in a rage, and leaves the house via the front door, slamming it behind him. Jenna rolls her eyes and sits down, stroking her bump with both hands)

DaVeyWaVey
19-11-2006, 11:16
Scene 6- The Hospital- Noon

(Tom and Max are visiting Chloe in hospital. Chloe, Tom and Max all have tears in their eyes)

Tom: We're both so so sorry Chloe..

Chloe: How can you understand?! How can any of you understand?! I loved him...he was the love of my life...he still is! No one, NO ONE! can understand what i am going through... :(

Max: But that's it Chloe...we do know what your going through! We lost a friend in Greg as well you know...

(Chloe starts crying)

Chloe: But i loved him! I loved him!..and now he's been snatched away from me! And it's Kat's fault!! :(

(Chloe breaks down in tears. Tom and Max both try to comfort her)

Chloe: I can't carry on without him...he was my life...and now he's gone! My life just seems so bloody pointless now! :crying:

Tom: Don't you dare say that Chlo! You'll get over him eventually...you will find somebody else...you may not feel like that now...but you will!

Chloe: I will never find anyone else! All i want is Greg! I just want Greg back! I want him back with us NOW! :crying:

(There's an uneasy pause. Tom and Max are lost for words)

Chloe: There's no point to my life anymore! I might as well just end it all...

Tom: Don't be so bloody stupid Chloe!

(Chloe bursts into tears again, as Tom and Max both look at each other, clearly alarmed)

DaVeyWaVey
19-11-2006, 15:15
Scene 7- Hinston School- Noon

(Sally sees George sitting alone at lunchtime sitting in his wheelchair. Sally nervously walks over to him and sits down by him)

George: Oh hi Sal..i've been looking for you all lunchtime...

Sally: Yeah...sorry George...but..well, i don't think we should be hanging around with each other anymore...

George: What?! Why!? What do you mean?! :confused:

Sally: I just think it's best we don't hang around with each other anymore that's all...i've got nothing against you or anything...your really sweet and everything..

George: Then what's the problem!? Your the only friend i've got round here Sal...i'm just a fat loser in a wheelchair according to everyone else! Your the only person who doesn't stereotype me at this school!

Sally: Look! I just think we should stay apart for a while...that's all...i'll see you around...

(Sally turns to leave but George grabs her arms)

George: You can't fool me Sal! This is to do with my mum isn't it!? She hates us hanging around with each other because of what happened with Danny!

Sally: I just think it's best if we stay away from each other, i don't wanna cause any trouble...it's for the best George...i hope you understand that...

(Sally gets up and starts walking away from George. George shouts to Sally)

George: Sal! Wait! We can work this out...i really like you Sally! I don't want to lose you because of the dissaproval from my mum! Sal..i...i..

(Sally stands listening to George. George is unable to get the words out of his mouth)

George: Nothing...

(Sally turns away from George and walks off, she has a tear in her eye. George watches Sally walk away, devastated)

DaVeyWaVey
19-11-2006, 20:50
Scene 8- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Felicity is on her break from the cafe. She enters the living room where she sees Dave watching television)

Felicity: I thought about what you said...

(Dave turns off the television, clearly interested on what Felicity has to say)

Dave: Well?

Felicity: I am gonna go and tell Tanya about Luke and Megan's affair..i am gonna spill the beans and i don't care what Megan or anybody else thinks! You were right..Tanya does have a right to know..

Dave: Now your talking Flic!

Felicity: In fact, i'm gonna go over The Campbells house now and tell Tanya the truth!

(Felicity gets her shoes on)

Dave: Do you want me to go with you?

Felicity: No..this could get messy...i've gotta do this myself...

(Felicity leaves the cafe to head to the Campbells house. Dave lets out a smile)

Pinkbanana
20-11-2006, 12:34
Just to say, Dave loving your work!!! :D

Pm me the next few scenes please! As darent look through thread incase I spoil what happens in the future, for myself!!! :lol:

DaVeyWaVey
20-11-2006, 21:49
Episode 24

Scene 1- The Woods House- Afternoon

(Joanna is in the living room, reading a magazine. Tom comes into the living room, he is on a lunch break from the garage)

Tom: Shouldn't you be looking after Imelda?

Joanna: Nah..Amy took her out to the park for a while...

Tom: Oh right...well i guess we can both have time to ourselves...in peace...

(Tom leans in too kiss Joanna, but Joanna pulls away)

Joanna: Not now babe...i'm not in the mood...

Tom: Suit yourself...i should be getting off to the garage soon anyway...

Joanna: Yeah you don't wanna be late back...

Tom: Joanna...put that magazine down...and just listen to me...

(Joanna puts the magazine down and turns to Tom)

Joanna: What?

Tom: It's about us...

Joanna: What about us?!

Tom: I wanna tell everyone about us...i hate the sneaking around...the pretending! I want to tell everyone that we're an item!

Joanna: But why!? It's nobody else's business apart from ours! Why should we tell everyone that we're an item!? I thought we've been through this Tom!

Tom: What's the harm in telling everyone about our relationship though eh?!

Joanna: Fine! You win! We'll tell the whole world! :rolleyes:

(Joanna picks up her magazine and heads upstairs, angered by Tom's presence)

DaVeyWaVey
20-11-2006, 22:01
Scene 2- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(Felicity knocks on the Campbells front door, ready to spill the beans to Tanya over Luke's affair with Megan. Tanya answers the door)

Tanya: Oh...Felicity..isn't it?!

Felicity: Yeah...can i come in?...

(Tanya looks puzzled)

Tanya: Yeah sure...is this a social call?! As i've never spoken to you properly..

Felicity: No...it's something you should know...

Tanya: Oh..well what is it?! Come on...spit it out!

Felicity: It's about Luke...your husband...

(There's a pause)

Tanya: Well come on, don't waste my time! Spit it out for christ sake, i've got my kids to pick up from school!

(Felicity has an angry look on her face)

Felicity: It's...well...it's....oh just bloody forget it!!

(Felicity storms out of the Campbells house in tears. Tanya looks on, feeling confused. We see Felicity outside, in tears. She couldn't go through with spilling the beans, thinking about Megan's threats towards her)

DaVeyWaVey
21-11-2006, 19:05
Scene 3- The Johnsons House- Evening

(Alicia is sitting down on the sofa in Harry and Jenna's house to see how Jenna is feeling because of her pregnancy. Jenna enters the living room and passes a cup of tea to Alicia before sitting down herself)

Alicia: Jenna! I should have got the tea! You should be taking it easy...

Jenna: Oh don't worry about it! I want to be doing something...i don't wanna be sitting on the sofa all day, doing nothing because i'm pregnant!

Alicia: So how are you keeping anyway?

Jenna: Well it's early days...but the morning sickness has been terrible! Everytime i wake up, i feel like i want to throw up!

Alicia: I know what your going through Jen...i remember having that when i was pregnant with Christina and Sam..

Jenna: Yeah.....and on top of that, well....i don't know...it might be nothing!

(Alicia looks concerned)

Alicia: No..go on...tell me what's up..that's what friends are for!

Jenna: Well i'll put it bluntly....i don't think Harry wants a baby!

(Alicia looks shocked)

Alicia: Don't be so ridiculous! When you both announced that you were pregnant, he was over the moon! You couldn't wipe the smile off his face!

Jenna: But i just feel that's an act he's putting on...behind closed doors, he doesn't seem interested in our baby! He acts like he couldn't care less, like he doesn't want our baby...our unborn child!

Alicia: Oh Jenna...he might just be feeling scared, anxious...you know what men can be like when it comes to babies! Especially a first child, i remember Jack! Well gosh... he didn't know how to take the news, shocked for the first few months!

Jenna: I just feel like he doesn't want the child growing inside of me!

Alicia: Trust me...he's probably just the same as my Jack...doesn't know how to take the news, he's just nervous most probably...

(Jenna tries to feel reassured)

Jenna: Yeah...you might be right! Thanks Alicia...you've kinda reassured me..put my mind at ease...

(Alicia finishes off her tea and then gets up from the sofa)

Alicia: No problem...whenever you need to chat, just come over or ring me and i'll come over to yours...

Jenna: Yeah i will do. :)

Alicia: Well i best be off, got the tea to put on...see ya Jen..

(Alicia heads to the door, followed by Jenna)

Jenna: Yeah..bye Alicia..

(Alicia leaves. Jenna shuts the front door)

DaVeyWaVey
21-11-2006, 21:24
Scene 4- The Campbells House- Night

(Tanya and Luke are watching television)

Tanya: Oh..that reminded me...

Luke: What?

Tanya: Flic came to see me earlier...

(Luke's eyes light up)

Luke: What about? What did she say to you?!

Tanya: I don't know...she tried to tell me something...and then she ran out...i've never had any dealings with her since we've been here, none of us have!

Luke: Argh..it's probably nothing...

Tanya: I'm not so sure...she definetly wanted to get something out of her system...she wanted me to know something...about you...

Luke: About me?! But what have i done!? Why did she mention me eh!?

Tanya: Alright...alright...don't get your bloody boxers in a twist!

Luke: But what did she say?!

Tanya: Nothing...she didn't say anything! You sound like you have a guilty conscience or something...nothing your not telling me is there?!

Luke: No...no! Of course there isn't...

Tanya: As long as your sure...

(Tanya looks at Luke suspiciously)

Tanya: Coz remember what i said before Luke, next time you overstep the mark in this marriage...your life won't be worth living!

(Tanya gets up from the sofa and heads to the bathroom to start running a bath. Luke is red in the face, and has a very guilty look)

DaVeyWaVey
21-11-2006, 21:47
Scene 5- The Burdecks House- Night

(George arrives home, he has clearly been crying and has a very angered look on his face. He slams the front door behind him and Liz rushes into the hallway)

Liz: Where the bloody hell have you been?! You've been crying!

(George starts shouting at his mother)

George: I don't wanna talk to you! I don't wanna talk to you! Not after what you've done...

Liz: What?! What's happened?!

George: How can you be so cruel mum?! You've split up one of the best friendships i've ever had!

Liz: George...i don't know what your talking about!

George: Me and Sally! You've just possibly ruined our friendship for good! How could you be so heartless?!

Liz: I didn't approve of you or Sally but what have i exactly done!?

George: You told Sally's mum to stay away from us! You know how much i like Sally...but now she's staying away from me because of what you did!

Liz: You and Sally aren't good for each other...don't you remember what her brother did to you!?

George: She's not her brother though is she mum!? We've been through this before! How could you be so selfish to split up me and Sally?! You know i had feelings for her...but you thought you would just ruin us anyway...she was my only friend mum! My only friend! But you just decided to be so heartless and spiteful! I wish you weren't my mother!

(George wheels himself into the living room, feeling angry. Liz is in the hallway, speechless over George's words towards her)

DaVeyWaVey
22-11-2006, 18:47
On behalf of Vicky:

Scene 6- The Hospital- Morning

Tom and Max arrive at hospital to pick Chloe up

Tom: Now remember what I said yeah bruv

Max: Yeah I know, I must not mention Greg’s name

Tom: Exactly if you feel yourself think about him just bite your tongue or something we don’t want to upset chlo, it will be hard enough for her to go back home today as it is without us reminding her of Greg...

They both walk in a talk to reception who gets a nurse to bring Chloe out to them, then the 3 of them head off in the car back to Chloe’s flat

Max: Are you ok?

Chloe: I just wanna die...i just want to die! :crying:

Chloe is in tears

DaVeyWaVey
22-11-2006, 22:04
Scene 7- The Cafe- Morning

(Luke is sitting in the cafe drinking a coffee, Luke gestures to Megan from the counter to come over to his table)

Megan: Look...i know i'm irresistable..but i'm working...

Luke: Just sit down Megan! This is serious...

Megan: You bloody well sound serious! Makes you sound sexy...

(Megan sits down by Luke and starts feeling his leg)

Luke: I haven't got time to play games Megan! Just hear me out...

Megan: What is it then?! What are you getting so worked up about?!

Luke: We nearly got found out Megan! That's what i'm worked up about...

Megan: What!? :eek: But...how?! We've been ever so careful...

Luke: Felicity went over my house yesterday and nearly revealed all to my Tan!

Megan: Christ! I told that bitch to mind her own business! But she has to go against my bloody word doesn't she eh!? :angry:

Luke: I think we should just cool things off for a while Megan...

Megan: What do you mean!? :eek:

Luke: You know what i bloody well mean! I am tired of sneaking around, risking being caught! Let's just stop, while we're enjoying the fun...

Megan: We won't need to stop Luke! We are careful when we're together, you know that! No one will ever find out about our affair as long as we play it safe!

Luke: I don't know Megan...

Megan: You know you want too! Come on...

Luke: Well like i said before, you offer something that Tan can't...good, irresistable sex!

Megan: Oh Luke.....let's carry on where we left off then...not just end it! Let me deal with that bitch Felicity, she won't know what's hit her when i get my claws into her!

(Megan gets up and walks back towards the counter, giving Luke a seductive look)

DaVeyWaVey
22-11-2006, 22:11
Scene 8- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Noon

(Chloe has returned to the flat after being discharged from hospital. She is looking at a picture of her and Greg together, she sobs into the picture, before opening the bathroom cabinet and grabbing a bottle of tablets. She starts pouring the tablets into her hand)

Chloe: This is the only way! This is the only bloody way that i can be with Greg!

(Chloe grabs all the tablets from the bottle in her hand and swallows them...)

DaVeyWaVey
22-11-2006, 22:29
Episode 25

Scene 1- The Woods House- Afternoon

(Max is coming down the stairs after having a shower. Tom and Joanna are busy kissing each other on the sofa when Max suddenly walks in on them)

Max: What the bloody hell is going on here!?

(Tom and Joanna stop kissing and turn to Max, they both have shocked looks on their faces)

Tom: Max!

Joanna: It's not what it looks like!

Max: It looked exactly what it looked like where i'm standing!

Tom: Come on Joanna...we might as well tell him the truth...he's caught us at it and he was gonna find out eventually!

Joanna: I don't know...

Max: Come on then...stop keeping me in suspense!

Tom: Me and Joanna...we're an item...

Max: And you never bothered to tell me?!

Joanna: Well..we just wanted to keep it a secret for a while that's all...

Max: Oh...i see...

Tom: Your happy for us though bruv...aren't you eh?!

Max: Yeah course i am...why wouldn't I be!?

Joanna: Just keep it to yourself Max...

Max: What!? Why!? It's hardly a big secret that has to be kept is it eh!? Tell the whole world...unless your both ashamed to be with each other...:rolleyes:

Tom: Max is right...

Joanna: Fine..ok then...let's get an aeroplane to fly over Hinston saying Tom loves Joanna! Attention seeking would be written all over us! :rolleyes:

(Joanna gets up)

Joanna: I'm off to the park...

Tom: Well i was thinking of going to the cafe..coming Joanna?

(Joanna has a terrified look on her face)

Joanna: No! No way...

(Joanna exits. Tom and Max look puzzled over Joanna's reaction)

DaVeyWaVey
23-11-2006, 21:17
Scene 2- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Afternoon

(Alicia and Nina have decided to pay a visit to Chloe to see if she is ok after being discharged from hospital. They have knocked the door, numerous times but Chloe has failed to answer)

Nina: Are you sure Chloe was being discharged today?

Alicia: Yes i'm sure of it...Tom and Max were accompanying her back from the hospital...i remember them telling me!

Nina: Do you think?..Do you think something's happened?!

Alicia: Well Tom and Max said that Chloe was really upset following Greg's death...

Nina: Well it is understandable! He was the love of her life!

Alicia: There's something definetly wrong...i'm not taking any chances!

(Alicia breaks the front door down)

Nina: Alicia! What the bloody hell do you think your doing!?

Alicia: Something might have happened Nina! Chloe's really upset, maybe even depressed...she's had a tough few months, what with the car crash, her being stabbed and the love of her life being killed! I'm not taking any bloody chances!

(Alicia and Nina enter Chloe's flat. They see Chloe led on the floor unconscious, with a bottle of empty tablets on the floor)

Nina: Bloody hell! What the hell has Chloe done!?

Alicia: Quick! Call an ambulance! Just bloody call an ambulance! Before it's too late!

(Alicia lies down beside Chloe, picking up the empty bottle and looking at what tablets Chloe has taken as Nina calls an ambulance)

DaVeyWaVey
23-11-2006, 21:28
Scene 3- The Johnsons House- Evening

(Jenna and Harry are eating tea. Jenna is talking about plans for their baby)

Jenna: Yeah so i was thinking...we have a spare bedroom...so why not use that as our baby's bedroom!? You can decorate it...maybe make a cot or buy one...

Harry: Yeah...sounds great...

Jenna: Oh Harry! You could be atleast a bit more enthusiastic...this is our baby we're talking about! Your going to be a father...you'll be able to take him out fishing...or if it's a girl, you can take her to the park...

Harry: Yes i know and i will!

(Harry is clearly ignoring what Jenna is saying. Jenna notices this)

Jenna: Fine! If your not gonna listen to me...why should I bother eh?!

Harry: Oh sorry Jenna...i just have a lot on my mind at the moment...that's all...

Jenna: Like what?! What is more important than our baby eh!? Nothing should be more important!

Harry: It's nothing!

Jenna: We're married Harry! We both promised when we tied the knot that we wouldn't keep any secrets or problems to ourselves so what's wrong?!

Harry: Oh i've had enough of this! I'm not hungry and i don't want our child ok?! I've got a headache...a really bad headache!...i'm going for a lie down..

(Harry gets up and leaves. Jenna throws her plate of tea on the floor, angry by Harry's behaviour)

DaVeyWaVey
23-11-2006, 21:36
Scene 4- The Woods House- Evening

(Amy is playing with baby Imelda, she is talking to Joanna at the same time)

Amy: I was thinking Joanna...

Joanna: Thinking of what? Go on...

Amy: Well i've settled here properly now and got to know my daughter again really well...

Joanna: And? What are you trying to tell me Amy!?

Amy: Well i want to be with Max, Joanna! That's the bottom line...i want me and Max to become a proper couple, so me, him and Imelda can become one big proper family! Do you think he feels the same way?!

Joanna: I don't know Amy...i suppose it's worth the risk...even if your both not together, it won't make a blind bit of difference...as long as you and Max get along and your friends, you can both be proper parents to Imelda!

Amy: But it's just not the family unit that i'm thinking about...i think i love him too Joanna! I think i love Max...

Joanna: Well tell him how you feel...it's worth a try...

Amy: Your right! I've got to get him to realise my feelings for him...i'm gonna try kissing him...see how he reacts...

Joanna: Do you think that's the best way to go about it?!

Amy: I am rubbish with words Joanna...i'm just gonna go for the kill!

(Amy gets up and smiles. She heads to the kitchen to make a cup of tea. Joanna is sitting down, unsure over Amy's plans)

DaVeyWaVey
24-11-2006, 23:20
Scene 5- The Cafe- Night

(Megan drags Felicity out of the cafe and into an alleyway. Felicity is terrified as she tries to escape from Megan's clutches)

Felicity: What do you want Megan!? What have i done?!

Megan: I'll tell you what you done shall I?! You nearly revealed to Tanya abour mine and Luke's affair! You stupid bitch!

(Megan repeatedly kicks Felicity until she falls to the floor in pain. Felicity struggles to speak)

Felicity: I'm sorry...i'm sorry! But...the main thing is i didn't tell her the truth!

Megan: So what!? I'm still gonna make you pay for what you nearly did! You nearly blew the whistle on my affair! I can't have anyone do that...in fact, i can't let anyone cross me!

(Megan scrams Felicity's face and punches her head to the floor, she carries on punching her in the face, numerous times and kicking her repeatedly. Megan eventually gives up on this and watches Felicity squirming on the floor in pain)

Megan: That's not all bitch...i warned you...i gave you a chance to realise what i was capable of without me carrying it out but now you've crossed the line!

(Megan grabs a lighter out of her pocket and sets Felicity's hair alight. Felicity screams as the fire that Megan has created burns her hair. Felicity gets up and runs back to the cafe, screaming and squirming in pain. Megan laughs before walking away)

Megan: That'll teach the bloody bitch! :D

DaVeyWaVey
24-11-2006, 23:30
Scene 6- The Woods House- Night

(Tom, Max, Amy and Joanna are all watching television. Amy has been trying to tell Max through her body language about the way she feels about him throughout the night but Max has failed to respond)

Amy: Well i guess i'll be going to bed then! :rolleyes:

Max: Oh no stay Amy! The action is about to kick in! Atleast have one more drink...

(Amy sits back down and snuggles next to Max)

Amy: Well you twisted my arm...

(Joanna is watching Amy as she is flirting with Max)

Joanna: (To Tom) I think we better call it a night now eh babe?!

Tom: But like Max said...it's about to get good...

(Joanna whispers to Tom)

Joanna: Don't you see what Amy is trying to do?! She wants to make her move on Max...that's the bottom line and i don't think she'll want us both here when she makes her move on him!

Tom: Ok then...let's call it a night...but we're missing a good film here...

(Joanna rolls her eyes at Tom)

Tom: Well as long as you make it up in the bedroom! :D

(Tom and Joanna leave the room)

Amy: Well i guess it's just me and you then Max...

Max: Don't speak! This is a major part of the film!

Amy: I guess i'll have to just act out what i'm trying to say...

(Amy puts her drink down and makes her move on Max. Max is horrified and pushes her back)

Max: What the hell do you think your doing!?

Amy: I...i thought this is what you wanted!

Max: This is far from what i want! I don't want you...i can't believe you tried to even kiss me! Your only here because Imelda is your daughter, nothing else! I'm not the slightest bit interested in you ok!?

(Amy gets up clearly angry that her move on Max has failed and she leaves the room. Max is left surprised that Amy just tried to make a move on him)

DaVeyWaVey
24-11-2006, 23:37
Scene 7- The Hospital- Night

(Alicia and Nina are in the hospital waiting room, awaiting news on Chloe's condition after she took an overdose)

Nina: I just can't believe Chlo was so stupid!

Alicia: We've all done stupid things Nina...and besides, we all know Chlo would be depressed...her love of her life is dead for christ sake!

Nina: I know...but that's still no excuse! How she could even think of taking her own life like that, i don't know!

(The doctor enters)

Doctor: We've got some good news regarding Chloe's condition...

Alicia: Go on...

Doctor: Chloe will make a full recovery following her overdose...

Alicia: Oh that's wonderful news!

Nina: Yes...brilliant news!

(The doctor leaves the waiting room. Alicia and Nina look at each other, smiling, clearly happy over the good news)

DaVeyWaVey
25-11-2006, 20:11
Scene 8- The Cafe- Morning

(Dave enters Felicity's bedroom. He has heard her crying most of the night. He enters her bedroom and sees Felicity snuggling under her bedcovers crying her eyes out)

Dave: Flic!

(Dave sits on Felicity's bed)

Dave: Flic! What's wrong!? I've been hearing you cry all night!

Felicity: Leave me alone Dave! Just leave! Leave me alone!

Dave: No! There's something wrong! You've been crying buckets!

(Dave takes off Felicity's bedcovers and sees Felicity lying in her bed, bruises all over her body and her hair badly burnt)

Dave: Jesus Christ!! What the hell's happened!?

(Felicity turns her face, tears are running down her eyes. Her face is covered in cuts and bruises)

Felicity: Please! Just please go! I don't wanna talk about it...

Dave: It looks like somebody's beaten you up Flic! Tell me what's happened! Tell me! I hate seeing you like this...

Felicity: Your right... I have been beaten up...

Dave: Right that's it!! I'm not standing for this! You can't stand for this!! Tell me who did it and i will kick the living daylights out of them! :angry:

Felicity: No! I can't...i can't tell you! I'll get beaten up even more...it'll make matters worse!

Dave: But no one beats up my sister and gets away with it! No one!! :angry:

(Dave's face is clearly full of anger. He clenches his fists, clearly frustrated)

Felicity: It...it was Megan!

Dave: Right...she's gonna be knocked for six once i've finished with her! :angry:

(Dave storms down the stairs, his face looking like thunder. Felicity lays in her bed, continuing to cry)

DaVeyWaVey
25-11-2006, 20:17
Episode 26

Scene 1- The Cafe- Morning

(Dave rushes down the stairs, his face looking like thunder. Pat is at the cafe counter, Dave approaches her. Pat turns to Dave)

Pat: Gosh! You look like you've got out the wrong side of the bed this morning...

Dave: Mum..you don't bloody understand how angry i am! :angry:

Pat: Why!? What's happened!?

Dave: Once i see the sight of Megan...i am gonna hit her to the ground! :angry:

Pat: Dave! Tell me what's wrong! Tell me what's happened!

Dave: Go upstairs and see Flic...then you'll bloody know what i'm talking about..

(Pat looks at Dave, clearly confused. Then Pat slowly heads upstairs)

DaVeyWaVey
25-11-2006, 20:29
Scene 2- The Cafe- Morning

(Megan arrives at the cafe. She spent the night out after beating Felicity to a pulp. Dave sees Megan arriving, and he roars towards her as she enters the cafe)

Dave: You bitch!!

(Dave dives at Megan. Megan collapses to the floor and Dave starts punching her across the face, he starts shouting and screaming)

Dave: You cow!! You bitch!!

Megan: Get off me!! Bloody get off me!!

Dave: No!! You deserve everything you get, you cow!!!

(Dave gets up after going mad. He spits at Megan before walking away. Megan gets up, clearly surprised by Dave's attack)

Megan: Your mad! Bonkers! Off your friggin' head!

Dave: If you lay a finger on my sister again..there'll be hell to pay!

Megan: If you lay a finger on ME again, there'll be even more hell to pay! Just watch your back...your whole family better watch their backs!

(Megan storms out of the cafe)

DaVeyWaVey
26-11-2006, 18:48
Scene 3- The Woods House- Noon

(Joanna and Amy are both eating their lunch in front of the television)

Joanna: Are you ok?

Amy: Yeah!? Why shouldn't I be?! :confused:

Joanna: Don't pretend Amy! Don't feel embarrased..i know what happened between you and Max last night...

Amy: How do you know!? You weren't even there!

Joanna: I can tell...it's all in the body language! He knocked you back didn't he!?

(Amy holds her head down, clearly embarrased)

Amy: I can't believe i was so stupid...i can't believe i actually thought Max wanted me!

Joanna: Oh Ams...i'm sorry..

Amy: Don't be...it was my silly mistake...i feel embarrased, humiliated!

Joanna: Don't be...you were just acting on your feelings...you do love him don't you!?

Amy: Well i think i do...when he knocked me back last night, it made me realise...realise that i may need to take time to reassess my feelings..

Joanna: So your not totally sure if you love Max or not!?

Amy: No i'm not...but last night, it just felt right...i think i am falling in love with him..when i had my one night stand with him and we made baby Imelda...that night was so special...i really fancied him, i've had loads of one night stands in the past that didn't mean anything but, well, Max stood out for me...

Joanna: Maybe you should give Max time..or maybe he was just nervous or too shy?!

Amy: I very much doubt it...all i was to Max was a one night stand and all i am too him now is his daughter's mother...nothing else! All i want is to create a nice happy family...i want me, Max and Imelda to become a proper family! I am gonna do whatever it takes!

DaVeyWaVey
26-11-2006, 19:13
Scene 4- The Cafe- Noon

(Megan rushes out of the cafe, mortified after Dave's attack. She rushes over to the Campbells House hoping to get some comfort from Luke. We cut to Dave who is back at the cafe, he is leaning against the cafe entrance, running his hands through his hair)

Dave: Jesus! What the hell did i do that for!?

(We cut to Megan who is knocking on the Campbells front door. Luke answers and is surprised to see Megan)

Luke: Megan!?

(Megan starts crying)

Luke: Oh my god! What the hell's wrong!?

DaVeyWaVey
26-11-2006, 22:18
Scene 5- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(Luke lets Megan into the house after she starts crying. He gestures for her to sit down)

Luke: Well..come on...what's wrong?!

(Megan sobs as she speaks)

Megan: It's Dave...he...he hit me!

Luke: You mean Dave from the cafe?! Jesus! Why the hell did he do that!?

Megan: Coz he hates me! Since he has arrived back in Hinston, he has been bullying me! He shoved my head down the toilet for christ sake!

Luke: But...but...why didn't you tell me this before!?

Megan: Because i didn't want to worry you...i was scared...i still am...i'm terrified Luke!

Luke: Well..sorry..but i'm staying out of this!

Megan: What!? I came to you for support...i want you to sort Dave out! Don't you care if he bullies me, day in day out?!

Luke: Megan! You must have done something...i know Dave...he seems like a nice guy..

Megan: Well you obviously don't know him very well! He's a nasty piece of work Luke and nobody realises it apart from me! I mean, i didn't do anything to upset him...he just started picking on me!

Luke: You burnt Felicity's face with candles...could this be something to do with Dave bullying you eh!?

Megan: That was an accident! Since i've come here...i've been victimised! I don't think i can take it anymore Luke! I mean..the other night..Dave accused me of burning Felicity's face with those candles on purpose! And then he tried to burn my bloody hair off!

Luke: Nah...no way! I can't imagine Dave doing anything like that...

Megan: How well do you know Dave eh?!

Luke: Well...i can't say i've chatted to him properly...it's not like we're the best of friends or anything...

Megan: Exactly! So my point is, is that you don't know what Dave is truly capable of!

(Megan points to her face where she has been punched)

Megan: Look! That's what he just did to me! He pounced on me like a wild animal! This isn't the only thing he has done to me!! Look at this...

(Megan shows her leg to Luke. She has cut her leg)

Megan: He did that too me the other night...

Luke: Why should i know all this Megan eh!? If Dave is beating you up...giving you abuse...just go to the police because i'm not getting involved!

Megan: But i thought you cared for me Luke! You obviously bloody don't!

(Megan storms out of the house, outraged that Luke won't do anything to help her. She leaves the Campbells house and grins to herself, hoping that the lies she just told about Dave paid off)

DaVeyWaVey
27-11-2006, 20:58
Scene 6- The Woods House- Afternoon

(Max comes home on a lunch break from the garage. Joanna is babysitting Imelda in the living room and hears Max coming in. Joanna goes into the hallway)

Joanna: Max...what are you doing back here? Aren't you meant to be at work?

Max: Nah..i'm on my lunch break...

(Max grabs a cheese sandwich out of the fridge)

Max: Something i made earlier! I always think ahead! :D

Joanna: I heard about what happened with you and Amy last night...

Max: And what's it got to do with you exactly?!

Joanna: Amy was really upset Max! I just think it's my duty to say something..

Max: Yeah..well..keep your nose out..your here to be a nanny..not poke your nose in too other people's affairs!

Joanna: But Max! She wants to get back with you...she wants you and her to become proper parents to Imelda...she wants you, her and Imelda to become a proper family...i think what she meant by that was you and her getting back together...

Max: What!? Did she actually say that?!

Joanna: Well she didn't exactly say those words..but i know what she was hinting at..

Max: Well me and Amy aren't gonna become a couple! Never...me and her were a one night stand...nothing else! When we slept together, it was a mistake...the morning after i regretted it so much! I didn't even fancy her!

Joanna: I doubt she's not gonna be happy hearing what you just said...

Max: Yeah well..we can save her the heartbreak can't we eh?! She doesn't need to know how i feel!

Joanna: But if you don't tell her how you feel...she's gonna keep making a move on you, become convinced that you and her can become an item! You should tell her how you feel, not set her up for a fall!

Max: Just stop with the advice Joanna! I want to change the subject...and besides, as your poking your nose into my business...how are you and Tom doing eh?! How's your sex life?! Do you love him!? :rolleyes:

Joanna: Max! :eek:

Max: What?! I'm doing what you just did...poking my nose into your affairs!!

(Joanna storms out of the kitchen)

Xx-Vicky-xX
27-11-2006, 22:09
Scene 7- The Café- Evening

Megan arrives back at the café, everyone turns around and stares at her

Megan: What are you all starring at

Pat: Isn’t it obvious

Dave: She is clearly as dumb as she looks mum

Alicia Nina Mike Jack Tanya Frank: Yeah

Megan: I am not dumb :angry:

Dave: Well you aren’t too bright if you thought you would get away with bullying my sister

Megan: What about you?

Dave: What about me, I don’t go around burning people’s hair you stupid cow :rolleyes:

Megan: No but you did something else though didn’t you eh?

The residents look at Dave

Megan: That’s right angel boy Dave here hit me

Pat: :eek: Dave? Tell me this isn’t true? Tell me you didn’t sink to her level

Dave: Course not mum, she is making it up, don’t tell me you believe this nasty b!tch over me?

Pat: No course not son

Megan: You have to believe me, I am telling the truth

Pat: Why should I believe you, you have done nothing but pick on Felicity since you arrived

Megan: I am telling the truth

Pat: Just get out of my sight Megan

Megan: But….

Dave: You heard her GET OUT!!! *Drags Megan outside screaming* Just like the boy who cried wolf eh Megan, shame nobody believes you isn’t it darlin’ *laughs* PATHETIC!!!

Dave heads back inside leaving Megan with nothing

DaVeyWaVey
28-11-2006, 21:04
Episode 27

Scene 1- The Cafe- Night

(Pat, Dave and Frank are all in Felicity's bedroom, sitting on her bed. Felicity is in her bed, with tears running down her cheeks)

Pat: You've got to press charges Flic! There's no other choice!

Felicity: Mum! Don't you understand the situation i'm in!? If i go to the police and press charges against Megan, she will want revenge! Ok..she may get punished but she'll be free and roaming the streets again eventually and she'll be looking for me! Looking for revenge! Pressing charges isn't worth it!

Frank: So your just gonna let this woman terrorise you forever!? Your not gonna even try and do anything about it?!

Felicity: And what the bloody hell has it got to do with you eh!? Your not my father! Why are you even here?! Just go! Go and mind your own business!

Dave: Flic!

Felicity: Oh...all of you just leave! I don't wanna talk to any of you! I am not pressing charges against Megan and that's final! You can't change my mind! Now get out! Just get out!

(Felicity bursts into tears as Pat, Dave and Frank leave Felicity's bedroom. They start talking outside her bedroom)

Pat: We've got to do something! We can't just leave it like it is!

Dave: Mum! Just sack her for god sake...you should've done it a long time ago! Flic did tell me what Megan did to her before...she burnt her face with candles...and you stood for that mum!! It's definetly not the mum i know!

Pat: I was desperate for the staff at the cafe...i had to keep her! Now i wish i didn't...i didn't know Megan was this nasty or violent! I didn't know it would come to this...

Dave: Well you were wrong...just sack her mum! You know it's for the best...

(Pat looks at Dave and Frank, realising she has no choice)

DaVeyWaVey
28-11-2006, 21:19
Scene 2- The Woods House- Night

(Tom and Max are out on the town. Amy and Joanna are in watching television)

Amy: Where have Tom and Max gone tonight? Did they tell you?

Joanna: Out on the town i think...nowhere special...

Amy: Well i hope Max ain't pulling any girls...he should be saving himself for me!

Joanna: Look Amy...i was hoping to talk to you about that...

Amy: About what?! Me and Max?! We'll get together soon enough as a family... you know..it's only a matter of time...

Joanna: I just don't want you setting yourself up for a fall that's all...what if Max doesn't love you...he rejected you the other night...

Amy: That doesn't mean he doesn't love me Joanna...like you said he's probably just shy or nervous...

Joanna: I was only trying to put your feelings at ease Amy! We all know that Max is a womaniser!

Amy: Why?! Has he tried it on with you lately has he!?

Joanna: No...

Amy: Well then...you don't know! Your just jealous Joanna! You don't want me or Max to become a proper family to Imelda! Just because you ain't got a family of your own!

Joanna: Amy! I didn't say i was jealous!

Amy: It bloody sounds like it from where i'm standing!

Joanna: I'm just trying to warn you that's all! I don't want you to get hurt if Max does reject you!

(Joanna walks into the kitchen. Amy dwells on what Joanna has just said)

Xx-Vicky-xX
28-11-2006, 22:42
Scene 3- Hinston Cemetery- Morning

Julia is by Ben’s grave laying flowers when she spots Chloe and goes over

Julia: Chloe? Not interrupting anything am I?

Chloe: Nope I was just talking to the vicar about Greg’s funeral *cries*

Julia: *Hugs Chloe* Hard isn’t it *cries also remembering when she was arranging Ben’s funeral*

Chloe and Julia hug each other for a while then compose themselves

Chloe: You here visiting Ben?

Julia: Yeah…first Christmas without him

Chloe: Least you had a Christmas with Ben, this should be my first one with Greg as husband and wife, but the only first this will be for me is first time of going to a funeral, it should be Kat’s funeral I am arranging not Greg’s, he was so young and we was meant to be getting married, but now I am here and Greg isn’t and to be honest I don’t know what to do, I miss him so much *cries even more*

Julia: I wont lie to you Chloe it doesn’t get any easier as time goes on you just have to find a way to deal with it, some it can take a month others it can take a year two years what ever but eventually you will find the way that you feel is best to help you deal with it and move on

Chloe: Have you found you’re way yet?

Julia: *takes a moment to think* yeah I think I have, its still hard but we are getting there

Chloe: What about Danny?

Julia: I have been thinking about him a lot recently

Chloe: You ever likely to forgive him?

Julia: I could never forget what he did to us, but I am not as angry with him as I was when it happened, he is still my son, I can hate him all I want but that wont ever change which is why ive been thinking it might be nice to go and visit him

Chloe: Really? I don’t think I will ever forgive Kat

Julia: Some people just do not deserve to be forgiven and I am not saying I forgive Danny just I have found my way of dealing with Ben’s death and I just am not as angry as I was with him, well I better get home I have left dinner on we are having stew tonight, did you want to come to ours tonight?

Chloe: No thanks I would rather be on my own

Julia: You sure?

Chloe: Yeah I am fine

Julia: Okay well pop round when ever you want a chat yeah Chlo you know where I am

Chloe: Thanks *forces a smile*

Julie: Bye

As the scene ends they both head off back to their cars

DaVeyWaVey
29-11-2006, 22:05
Scene 4- The Cafe- Morning

(Megan arrives at the cafe after another night out. She finds binbags full of her clothes and belongings on the floor. Megan screams in fury)

Megan: What the bloody hell is going on?! :angry:

(Pat, Frank and Dave enter the cafe and confront Megan)

Dave: Your being chucked out of this cafe...

Frank: And your being sacked...

Pat: So get out you bitch!

(Megan picks up the binbags and starts "crying")

Dave: Oh stop with the crocodile tears! We can't be doing with it...my sister is crying properly upstairs! Her tears are real! And she is crying because of you, because of what you did!

Megan: She bloody deserved it! The stupid cow shouldn't have crossed me..that's what happens if someone gets in my way...

Frank: You really are a nasty piece of work aren't ya eh?! I can't believe Pat didn't sack you sooner!

Megan: She didn't sack me sooner because the woman who you got up the duff was too bloody thick and gullible to see what i was really like!

(Pat goes up to Megan and gives her a hard slap across the face before shouting at her)

Pat: Get out! Get out!! I don't want to see you step foot in this cafe ever again!

(Megan leaves with the binbags in her hands. She cries as she leaves. As soon as she leaves the cafe, the tears are wiped from her face and a cracking smile appears across her face. She heads to the Campbells house..)

DaVeyWaVey
29-11-2006, 22:19
Scene 5- The Campbells House- Morning

(Megan knocks on the Campbells front door with the binbags full of her clothes and possessions in her hands. She is "crying". Luke answers the door)

Luke: Megan!...Oh my god!! What's wrong now?! :eek:

Megan: They've sacked me from the cafe...they've chucked me out!

Luke: Jesus! :eek:

(Luke gives Megan a hug before letting her in)

Luke: Oh my god..i can't believe it...has this got to do with what you said yesterday?!

Megan: Yeah...Dave...well...Dave...oh god! i can't say...i just can't say it!

(Megan bursts into tears)

Luke: Megan! Tell me! I'm getting really worried now!

Megan: Dave....he..he tried to rape me! :crying:

Luke: You what?! :eek: Bloody hell! :angry: Did you say anything?! :eek:

Megan: I tried to speak up but Pat wasn't having any of it! She said she was tired of me making silly accusations all the time and she decided to chuck me out of the cafe and sack me!

(Luke gives Megan a comforting hug)

Luke: Wait 'til i get my hands on Dave! His life won't be worth living...the rapist *******! :angry:

Megan: Luke...please don't! I just want some comfort and support right now...my life is in such a mess! I've got no job...nowhere to live! What am i going to do?! :crying:

(Megan cries even harder)

Luke: You've still got me! We've still got our affair together...

(Megan and Luke smile at each other...they get up and head to the bedroom)

Skits
30-11-2006, 09:57
what will luke's wife think of all this? that megan is evil.

DaVeyWaVey
30-11-2006, 21:05
Scene 6- Hinston School- Afternoon

(George and Sally are moving to their next lesson. George tries to speak to Sally)

George: Oh Sal! We need to talk!

Sally: George! Can't you get the bloody message eh!? I don't want to hang around with you anymore!

George: But Sal! Why?! I've got no other friends...i've only got you...

Sally: Us being with each other as friends won't work! I wish i could explain...but i..i just can't!

George: I know my mum doesn't see eye to eye with your family..but we could still hang around with each other...nothing's stopping us..

Sally: I wish we could be friends George! Believe me...i wish we could hang around with each other but it just won't work...anyway, i can't stop and chat forever, we've both got lessons to go to..

(Sally walks away from George and wipes a tear from her eye. George wheels himself to his next lesson, devastated by Sally's response)

DaVeyWaVey
30-11-2006, 21:16
Scene 7- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(Megan and Luke are laying in bed together)

Luke: Well there's only one word that could be said for that last half hour...unbelievable!! Your so much better than my Tan..

Megan: Your not too bad yourself Luke.....well, your not the most boring person in bed! :D

Luke: I can't believe i even considered stopping our affair! The sex is just too bloody unbelievable! If i stopped this with you, i don't know how i could carry on!

Megan: I'm irresistable Luke...i know that! And besides i was thinking, as i have nowhere else to go.....

(Luke pauses for a moment, then realises what Megan is saying)

Luke: Your not staying here Megan! No way!

Megan: But i have nowhere to live! Nowhere to go! If i can't live here, what am i going to do eh?!

Luke: Well if we weren't having an affair, i might consider you moving in but no...no way! Over my dead body, your not moving in here!

Megan: Why not?! We can become a lot closer...we could do this more often..

Luke: It would be too risky Megan! Plus too tempting...it'll soon become obvious that something's going on between us if you move in here! And Tan won't approve of you or even another woman stepping foot in this house...not after the many times i've cheated on her! Did you hear what Tan told me?! She said if she finds out i'm having another affair, i'm dead meat! If we're revealed Megan, it'll be the end of the road for me...you don't know what my wife is capable of..

Megan: So i'm not moving in here then!?

Luke: No...no way!

(Megan gets up from bed, and grins to herself, knowing she could use what Luke said to her advantage)

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-12-2006, 15:02
Scene 8- The Butleys House- Evening

Julia and Sally are at the kitchen table finishing off their tea. Marianne is upstairs doing homework

Julia: So how are things at school?

Sally: Crap

Julia: Why is that love?

Sally: I really like George mum but now I cant talk to him anymore

Julia: I know love but it is probably for the best or else you will keep getting hassle from Liz "my family is to good for you" Burdeck

Sally: *laughs a bit* Yeah but it doesnt stop me feeling the way i do though, you cant turn feelings on and off at the click of your fingers you know

Julia: Yeah i know love *Hugs Sally* I am glad you have told me this because there is something i should tell you aswell

Sally: *Sits up and looks at Julia* What?

Julia: I have been thinking of going to...

Sally: Going where mum?

Julia: Going to...see..your brother

Sally: WHAT?

Julia: I want to go and see Danny

Sally: HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND?

Julia: He is my son Sally, i thought you of all people would understand

Sally: WHAT? WHY WOULD I UNDERSTAND THIS?

Julia: Like you said feelings can't just be turned on and off, and Danny will always be my son

Sally: HE KILLED DAD HOW CAN YOU GO TO SEE HIM?

Julia: I haven't made up my mind yet but i am thinking about it and i would like it very much if you and your sister would do the same

Sally: WHAT? NO...NO WAY NOT A CHANCE...NAHA NOT GONNA HAPPEN

Julia: Im off out just think about it

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-12-2006, 16:21
Episode 28- Scene 1- The Café- Evening

Felicity has locked herself in her room and Dave s trying to get her to come out

Dave: Just come out Flic

Felicity: No way I am staying in here

Dave: Are you going to let that b!tch win?

Felicity: She will hurt me even more if she sees me again, besides I look hideous

Dave: Fine you know what stay there, let her win see if I care

Dave goes down stairs

Pat: Well?

Dave: Nope no luck

Frank: I am worried about her

Pat: Yeah me to we have to do something guys

Dave: I say we sort this Megan b!tch out once and for all

Frank: Yeah lets go

Pat: NO!! Hold on I think you did enough to Megan the other day. We need to talk to Flic make her see she doesn’t look as bad as she thinks

Frank: Why can’t we just do Dave’s idea

Pat: Violence is not the answer

Dave: :rolleyes: Yeah I suppose you are right but Flic wont listen to us

Pat: Then we need another plan

They all sit down and try to think of a plan

Dave: What about if someone outside told her she looks okay

Pat: YES!!!! Perfect

Frank: Right then that is what we will do

DaVeyWaVey
01-12-2006, 21:08
Scene 2- The Campbells House- Evening

(Megan and Luke are in the bedroom, getting changed after sharing another moment of passion)

Megan: So there's no chance of me moving in then Luke?!

Luke: How many times Megan! You can't move in, like i said, it's far too risky! You just can't...i know you have nowhere else to go but i'm sorry!

Megan: Well..it looks like i don't have a choice then...

(Luke interrupts)

Luke: Yeah...i'm afraid you'll have to sleep on the streets or find somewhere else to go and live for a while...

(Megan laughs)

Megan: You are joking aren't you?! I would never sleep on the streets...never! What do you take me for Luke!? I'm not a tramp...or a hobo for that matter!

Luke: So what are you going to do then eh?!

Megan: I like living in a proper house Luke...not scrounging to find somewhere else to live! I'm not the desperate type Luke...that's why i'm moving in here..

Luke: But you can't!

Megan: But i can! If you don't let me move in...i will tell Tanya about our affair Luke!

(Luke has a terrified look on his face. Megan laughs)

Megan: Aww...your mood's changed Luke! What's wrong?! Oh yeah, if i tell her the truth, your dead meat aren't you! :rolleyes:

(Luke gulps)

Luke: Yeah...

Megan: Well that's tough then! You either let me move in here or I reveal our affair to your whole family and you'll be dead meat! It's up to you!

(Megan grins, knowing she has persauded Luke and won him round)

DaVeyWaVey
01-12-2006, 21:45
Scene 3- The Campbells House- Night

(Tanya arrives home with the kids. They come through the front door, and are left shocked when they see Megan with her feet up on the sofa, watching television)

Tanya: And what the hell are you doing here?!

Megan: Oh Tanya! Hiya...fancy a cuppa?

Tanya: Is this some kind of joke?!

Tina: What is she doing in our home!?

Lee: You don't live here!

Megan: Oh go to your bedrooms and do your homework! :rolleyes:

Tanya: I think i need to speak to my husband!

(Tanya storms to her and Luke's bedroom, clearly angry. Megan grins, loving the fact that she is making somebody angry)

(We cut to the bedroom)

Tanya: Luke! What the bloody hell is going on!? What the hell is that Megan doing in our house?!

Luke: Oh Tan...look..i need to explain to you...

Tanya: It better be good Luke! It better be bloody good...

Luke: Megan's been sacked from the cafe and she's been chucked out! She's had nowhere else to go, she was practically begging me to let her move in...

Tanya: Why us though eh?! Why can't she have got on her knees to somebody else and begged them to let her move in?! Why us?!

Luke: I don't know...she was upset...i felt sorry for her...i offered for her to sleep on our sofa..

Tanya: Oh my god! You must be joking! I can't believe i'm hearing this! Luke Campbell showing sympathy to woman! Not the first time that's happened now is it eh?!

Luke: Oh Tan leave it out! I've had a hard day...

(Megan peers into the bedroom)

Megan: I've had quite a hard time of it today as well...

(Tanya looks at Megan, fuming)

Megan: Oh sorry..i don't mean to cause any trouble...it's only til i find somewhere else to go...

Tanya: Why don't i believe any of this crap eh?! You've asked this ex-cafe waitress to move in with us coz you felt sorry for her! MY ****!

Luke: It's the truth Tan!

Tanya: Well i don't buy any of this Luke...i don't buy any of this!

(Tanya turns to Megan)

Tanya: You better be out of here fast young lady! I can't be putting up with you!

Megan: Oh don't worry i understand..Luke's had affairs...you don't trust him being in one metre of women right?! I've heard all about it from Luke...you better keep a firm eye on your husband! You never know, one day, we might be in that bedroom of yours getting it on! :D

(Tanya slaps Megan across the face)

Tanya: My husband wouldn't touch you with a bargepole! Bitch!

(Tanya storms into the kitchen, furious. The kids look on, hearing what has been said and they head to their bedrooms. Megan smiles. Luke is furious)

Xx-Vicky-xX
01-12-2006, 22:24
Scene 4- The Woods House- Night
Max is asleep. Amy enters his bedroom and unzips her nightie before joining him in his double bed.

DaVeyWaVey
02-12-2006, 20:18
Scene 5- The Woods House- Morning

(Max wakes up in bed and turns his head to see Amy in bed next to him. Max leaps up out of bed, horrified, and shouts)

Max: Jesus Christ!

(Amy hears Max's shout and wakes up)

Amy: Oh hey babe...how's you this morning?

Max: Oh my god!! Is this some kind of joke or something!?

Amy: (confused) What?!

Max: I went to bed last night and no one was in my bed apart from me!

Amy: Aww...don't look so horrified..i just wanted some company last night that's all...

Max: So you thought you would leap into my bed like a wild animal!? :eek:

Amy: Oh Max stop exaggerating and come back to bed!

(Amy gives Max a seductive look)

Max: Get out! Just get out!!

Amy: I can't...i love you Max! And i know your in love with me too! So our first step for us to start a proper relationship is for us to share a bed together...

Max: If you think that i love you, you must be deluded!! When i had that one night stand with you, i felt so dirty!! You made me feel sick!!

(Max storms out of the bedroom, horrified)

DaVeyWaVey
02-12-2006, 20:40
Scene 6- Young Offenders Institution- Morning

(Julia is sitting in a private visiting room with Danny opposite her)

Julia: So how've you been?

Danny: How do you think i've bloody been eh?!

Julia: Sorry...

Danny: Why have you come to see me eh mum!? It must be for some kind of reason...the last time i saw you, you hated my guts!

Julia: Well things have changed..

Danny: Things may have changed in your mind but i can't forget some of those harsh words you said to me!

Julia: You killed your father Danny! What did you expect?! I said things i regret, i wasn't gonna give you a pat on the back now was i eh?!

Danny: So what are you doing here?!

Julia: I came here to see how you were...despite what you did, your still my son...

Danny: That's not what you said a few months back...

Julia: Like i've said, things have changed! My mind's in a different order now! I had to have time to get over Ben's death...i was so angry, so upset when you killed him! You have to understand that! But i've had time to grieve and get over his death and now i'm ready to forgive you...

Danny: Forgive me?! But mum!! I can't believe i'm hearing this..

Julia: Your my son Danny! I just have to forgive you..i can't just turn my back and pretend i don't have a son! I can't just forget all about you because your in this place!

Danny: But what about Sally and Marianne?! They're not here...i guess they're not in the forgiving mood..

Julia: Give them time Danny...their father's death has hit them more than it has me! It's been a huge shock for them...they're still trying to get over what happened now..

Danny: Well i hope they do get over what i did...i really hope they do!

(Danny starts crying)

Danny: Because...because...i didn't...i didn't mean to kill dad! You have to believe me! You just have too! I loved him...i really did!! I loved dad so much! I really wish i didn't kill him! I really wish i didn't!! I just wish i could turn the clock back and change!! I really wish i could!! Every night, i wish that what i did was just a nightmare and i would wake up from it...but it's...it's just a reality! :crying:

(Danny falls of his chair and collapses to the floor in floods of tears. Julia stands him back up and comforts him)

Julia: I forgive you Danny! The whole family does!

Danny: I'm sorry...i really am! I'm so so sorry!! :crying:

Julia: It's ok...it's ok..

Danny: I just wanna go home mum! I just want to go home! :crying:

Julia: You can't Danny! You just can't Danny! You should know that...i wish i could take you back home with me Danny because i love you..i love you with all my heart!

(Danny tries to overcome his tears)

Danny: I'm facing up to what i did mum! I've pleaded guilty and i could be out in five years for good behaviour...

Julia: Then work towards it Danny! Be good! Get out in five years! I'll be waiting for you on the other side! Not just me, but the whole family too!

Danny: Do you really mean that!?

Julia: Of course i mean that...i love you Danny...i love you with my whole heart...

Danny: I love you too mum...i love you too...

(A prison officer comes into the room)

PO: Time's up!

(Julia and Danny give each other a hug and cry into each other's arms)

DaVeyWaVey
03-12-2006, 11:58
Scene 7- The Campbells House- Morning

(Tanya is in the kitchen washing up after tea. Megan enters the kitchen to make a cup of tea)

Megan: Want some tea?

Tanya: No! Thanks!

(Tanya tries to force a smile)

Megan: You don't like me being here do you?!

Tanya: No in a matter of fact, i don't! And i also hate you for poking your nose into my family's affairs!

Megan: Now hang on a second! It's not my fault if your husband comes to me and confides in me about his marriage problems!

Tanya: You just love stirring it up don't you eh!?

(Tanya grabs Megan by the neck)

Tanya: You better be out of my house in a week young lady or else i'll throw you out! Luke and me have had our problems in the past, but now we're solid! He promised no more affairs!

(Megan laughs)

Megan: Oh if only you could listen to yourself!

Tanya: You have no one Megan!! Is that why you like to stir things up? Cause trouble?!

Megan: I had nowhere else to go, i would be sleeping on the streets! It's not my fault that your husband offered me an invitation into your house!

Tanya: Your evil Megan! I heard about you bullying Felicity! What you did on my daughter's birthday...burnt her face with candles...well i hope that happens to you one day!

Megan: Well i bet you ain't perfect either Tan!

(Megan walks out of the kitchen with a cup of tea in her hand. Tanya sits down and dwells on what Megan just said)

DaVeyWaVey
03-12-2006, 18:22
Scene 8- Hinston School- Noon

(It's lunchtime at Hinston school. Sally approaches George)

Sally: Hi George..

George: Oh..i thought you weren't talking to me! :rolleyes:

Sally: I don't want a lecture George...i just came here to tell you something quickly..

George: Well come on then! Get on with it! :rolleyes:

Sally: I want to meet up with you after school...we need to talk...in private..

(George's eyes light up with excitement)

Sally: I mean..let's face it! School is hardly a private place to chat is it?!

George: But why!? Why do you want to talk to me?! I thought you wanted to stay away from me...i thought you didn't want us to communicate with each other!

Sally: Just meet me in Hinston High after school...everything will become clear..we just can't talk now..

George: Ok..5pm?

Sally: Yeah that's fine...

(Sally walks away from George. George is suspicious over Sally's intentions but excited at the same time)

DaVeyWaVey
03-12-2006, 18:42
Episode 29

Scene 1- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Pat is in the living room, taking a break from working at the cafe. Frank enters)

Frank: Are you ok?

Pat: Yes..i'm perfectly fine Frank!

Frank: Ok..no need to bite my head off!

Pat: Shouldn't you be helping out at the cafe?! I bet Dave is rushed off his feet!

Frank: It's quiet at the moment...he's ok...

(Frank sits down next to Pat)

Pat: Well i'm on a break so someone has to be out there helping him out with customers! I just took a break because i wanted time to myself!

Frank: There's something wrong Pat! Your not your usual self...

Pat: How do you know what my usual self is eh?! You've been away all these years that you don't even know me anymore!!

Frank: Pat! I want to help you...comfort you...it's Felicity isn't it?! The stuff with Felicity has took its toll on you..

Pat: Oh stop patronising me Frank!

Frank: Well your still the woman i used to know...

Pat: Oh Frank stop it...your not helping...everything's fine!

Frank: Yep your still the woman who refuses to believe that nothing's wrong!!

Pat: Ok! Something is wrong alright?! It's Felicity! Your right! I'm worried about her...

Frank: I knew it...

Pat: I am really worried for her...she's refusing to leave her bedroom for christ sake!! This isn't like my daughter...

Frank: Megan beating her up was just a shock to the system for her that's all..

Pat: It's more than a shock to the system!! I think my daughter's lost sanity after what that bitch did! She burnt her hair off for god sake!! I swear to god, no one does that to my daughter and gets away with it!

Frank: Eh..now come on...don't get yourself worked up about this...

Pat: I can't help it! She's my daughter! My flesh and blood...i can't help if i'm worried for her! I try and get her to come out of her bedroom but she just won't!!

(Pat starts crying)

Pat: I'm so worried for her..i'm so scared for her...

(Frank gives Pat a hug)

Frank: Come on...everything's gonna be ok..

Pat: How is it gonna be?!

(Pat and Frank both look up at each other. Frank wipes the tears from Pat's face)

Frank: I hate seeing you upset like this...

(Frank and Pat lean in and share a kiss)

DaVeyWaVey
04-12-2006, 21:32
Scene 2- The Campbells House- Afternoon

(Everyone is out of the Campbell house apart from Luke and Megan. The camera pans in on them. They're both lying on the sofa, passionately kissing each other)

Megan: Come on...let's head for the bedroom!

(Luke backs away from Megan)

Luke: No! Megan! This has to stop!

Megan: What?! What...what do you mean?!

Luke: We can't carry on our affair Megan, when we're living under the same roof!

Megan: Oh Luke...just because we're living together...it doesn't make a difference..

Luke: Of course it makes a difference! Your living with my family...Tan's getting suspicious about us...i know it! And you didn't bloody well help!

Megan: What do you mean!?

Luke: Telling her to watch out for us...coz we might be in bed together getting it on at any moment!! What were you thinking of eh?! You could have given the game away!! How could you have been so stupid!?

Megan: I was only bloody teasing her..christ!

Luke: You knew what you were playing at Megan! I thought we made a deal...if i let you stay here, you wouldn't tell my family about our affair! Well you nearly practically told her didn't you eh!? My wife ain't stupid!!

Megan: Relax Luke...she's not catching onto us!

Luke: Yeah right!! I've had so many affairs, your hinting to her that something might be going on between us...she is definetly latching onto us!

Megan: Luke!! Just forget it! We're meant to be having a good time while your family are out! Come on let's get to the bedroom before they come back!

Luke: Nope...i've decided...i want to cool things off Megan..we can't carry on like this...

Megan: You said that before but you proved you couldn't resist me! :rolleyes:

Luke: Well i am going to resist you now! I'm gonna make sure of it! Our affair is over Megan..over for the time being..

(Luke leaves the house. Megan sits down, shocked but determined to get Luke back)

DaVeyWaVey
04-12-2006, 21:49
Scene 3- The Garage- Afternoon

(Max and Tom are in the middle of a conversation at the garage)

Tom: It's not really the same without Greg here is it eh?! We always used to share a joke...all 3 of us..but now he's not here...it's not the same..

(Max clearly isn't concentrating)

Max: Huh!? What?!

Tom: Gosh Max! Your really not concentrating are you?! What's wrong?

Max: Oh it's nothing...well i will sound selfish if i said...we should all be thinking of Greg right now...

Tom: Oh come on...tell me..

Max: I don't think i really should...maybe after Greg's funeral, i should burden my problem on you...

Tom: Come on...just tell me now...

Max: It's Amy...

Tom: Oh yeah?!

Max: She creeped into my bed last night...

(Tom bursts into laughter)

Max: Tom! It's not funny!

Tom: Oh my god! You can't be serious!?

Max: I am...i'm concerned...i'm worried! She thinks i actually still love her!

Tom: Well have you put her straight?!

Max: I've tried but she won't listen! Me and her only go as far as that one night stand...i don't want to take things any further with her!

Tom: Well i wish i could help...but i don't really know how too..

Max: Like i said don't worry about it..

Tom: I'm just surprised..it seems a bit out of character for Amy..but then again, i haven't really known her for that long...

Max: Don't worry about it Tom..it might have just be a one-off..she might have realised she made a mistake... you know the morning after the night before type thing...we shouldn't be thinking about it right now...Greg's just died for christ sake and we should be thinking about Chloe...god knows what she's going through..none of my problems or worries compare to what she's going through...

Tom: Yeah your right..

DaVeyWaVey
05-12-2006, 21:22
Scene 4- Hinston High- Afternoon

(It's 5pm. Sally and George meet up in the centre of Hinston High, but they're both unaware that Liz is watching them from her front window)

George: So...you must have wanted to meet for a reason..what is it?

(Sally hesitates. She is clearly nervous)

Sally: This is really hard for me George...i can't just put how i'm feeling into words...i've never said this to any boy before..

(George is feeling excited inside, clearly confident that Sally will reveal how she feels about him)

Sally: George..I..

(Liz suddenly interrupts, shouting from her front door)

Liz: And what the bloody hell's going on here eh?! I thought i told you to stay away from her George!

George: Mum...it's my life! I can see who i like...

Liz: Danny's already broken your legs for christ sake!! For all you know, she'll break your arms!!

George: Mum!!

Sally: I like George..i really like him...i'm nothing like my brother! Why can't you see that?!

Liz: I can see you for what you really are...so stop trying to put on an innocent act! You don't fool me...your brother nearly murdered my son...

(Julia is hearing the commotion as she is putting the bins out. Julia slowly approaches Liz, Sally and George but is listening in to their argument at the same time)

Sally: I'm nothing like him! I'm sorry for what he did to George! I truly am...

Liz: Your not sorry! None of your family are!! Your brother's a murderer...he murdered your own father!! I'm so glad i haven't got a family like you have...atleast i taught my son some morals!

(Sally is getting upset)

Liz: Like brother, like sister...your family and you are a bunch of murdering scum!! It runs in the family...it just bloody has too!

(Julia hears Liz's words and suddenly charges at Liz, and pounces on her from behind. Liz screams and falls to the floor)

Julia: You bitch!!!

Liz: AAAH!! Let go off me!!! You psycho cow!!

(Liz and Julia both scream, as Liz pulls Julia down to the ground. They start rolling on the ground, slapping and kicking each other)

Julia: Don't you dare call my family murdering scum!! No one calls my family by a bad name!

Liz: I want my son to be protected from the likes of your daughter! From the likes of your family!!

(Julia pulls Liz's hair. Liz screams in pain. By now, the Hinston High residents are circling around the pair, watching them having a catfight on the ground. Sally and George are watching, not knowing what to do)

Julia: None of my family are murderers! None of them!! I've just got sick to the back teeth of the likes of you!!

Liz: Well i can't stand seeing your smug ugly face in the mornings from the opposite side of the road either!

(Julia hits Liz's head against the floor. Mike restrains the situation pulling Julia back from Liz. As he pulls her back, Liz spits in Julia's face. Julia screams in fury and frustration)

Liz: Your family are murdering scum! I'm right...i know i am!!

Julia: Stop talking about my family!! Why do you always have to bring them into this?!! You bitch!

Liz: Shut up you ugly cow!! I'm right!

Julia: Oh piss off you stupid tart! Just because George is in a wheelchair, doesn't make your scummy little family better than mine!

Liz: Leave my George out of this you blonde bimbo!

Julia: Well leave my family out of this then!! You brunette bimbo!!

(Julia spits back at Liz. Liz wipes the spit from her face and goes up to Julia and slaps Julia hard across the face. The Hinston High residents all let an ooh sound taking the pain of her slap. Julia suddenly steps up to Liz and slaps her back. They both look at each other)

Liz: Come on George!! Get home now!!

(George quickly goes to Liz and they walk home. The Hinston High residents look and stare at Julia. Julia looks around to see everyone looking at her)

Julia: The show's over! Just get out of my face!

(Julia runs home, completely humiliated by the situation. Sally stands in Hinston High as the residents walk away from the fight scene, disgusted by her mother's behaviour)

DaVeyWaVey
07-12-2006, 18:08
Scene 5- The Cafe- Evening

(The cafe has just closed. Pat is washing up some dishes. Frank enters the cafe and stands by Pat)

Frank: Pat..about earlier..

Pat: What about earlier?!

Frank: Our kiss..don't pretend you don't know!

Pat: Our kiss was a mistake Frank! You should know that, so just get over it!

Frank: I can't..

Pat: It was a mistake! I was upset..it was a spur of the moment thing! Surely you can understand that?!

Frank: Fine! Ok..i'll just forget about it! Whatever suits you!

Pat: Well i would prefer if you did forget about it..our kiss meant nothing! I know i'm gonna forget about it..

Frank: I know..i know..it was just a mistake...

(Frank leaves the cafe to head upstairs. He is secretly devastated by Pat's response)

DaVeyWaVey
07-12-2006, 18:49
Scene 6- The Butleys House- Evening

(Julia is recovering from her fight with Liz. She is in the bathroom washing her very badly scratched face. She leaves the bathroom and Marianne and Sally are standing in front of her, blocking her path)

Marianne: Sally told me what happened mum!

Sally: Mum, how could you be so stupid?!

Julia: Oh both of you, just go away! Go to your rooms...i don't want any more aggro today!

Sally: But what you did out there was completely out of order!

Julia: Liz was abusing our family name Sal! I just saw red!

Marianne: That's still no excuse mum! You should have kept your cool...

Julia: I wish i did...i truly wish i did keep my cool! But i lashed out..i saw red! I regret what i did! I'm sorry...

Sally: Sorry is just not good enough mum! You've drawn attention to this family yet again!

Julia: Like i said i'm sorry...i don't want my children to turn against me!

Sally: Well it could be too late mum! Me and Marianne both feel humiliated for this family to be the subject of gossip! Since September, we've been the subject of Hinston High gossip! I'm sick of it...bloody sick of it!! I don't think i can take much more!!

Marianne: I feel the same mum! First it was Ben's death, and i thought that had finally blown over and the residents found something else to talk about, but now you've gone and done this!! How could you have been so stupid?!

Julia: I told you! I wasn't thinking straight!! I've felt humiliated as well you know, it's not just you! I just humiliated myself in front of everyone!! The anger got the better of me!!

Sally: Well none of this would have happened if Liz would have just left me and George alone..you know, i was about to tell him how i felt when World War III kicked off! And mum i wish i never told you how i felt about George...this is how all this started!

Julia: I haven't done anything Sal!

Sally: I am sick to the back teeth mum! I just wish everyone would leave me and George alone!

(Sally storms off to her bedroom and slams the door shut. She is upset. Marianne gives Julia a shameful look, before heading to her bedroom. Julia leans her head against the bathroom door, and a tear rushes down her cheek)

DaVeyWaVey
07-12-2006, 19:52
Scene 7- The Burdecks House- Evening

(Liz is sitting in the kitchen, thinking about the fight she just had with Julia. George enters)

George: I can't believe you mum! I just can't believe you!

Liz: I thought you listened to me George!

George: Well for once, i don't care what you say! I'm not gonna listen to you! I'm not your little boy anymore mum! I've grown up...

Liz: Who was the person who stood up to all those bullies back in primary school eh!? Me!! You've always come to me when you've been in trouble! I've always fought your battles for you! And now you go and do this...

George: I love Sally..mum! I can't help how i feel! Besides, things have changed..i'm older..i can stick up for myself!

Liz: What are you trying to say eh!? You don't need me anymore is that it?!

George: Of course i need you...your my mum! I just wish you would leave me and Sally alone! She's the first proper friend i've ever had...i'm happy around her...don't you want to see me happy!?

Liz: Of course i do...i just don't want to see you get hurt! She is gonna hurt you...i know she is!

George: She won't! Fighting with her mum in the street was way out of order too! Seeing everyone looking at you, scrapping with a neighbour...it was completely humiliating!

Liz: She started the fight with me!

George: But what you said about her family...it was so harsh! I never knew my mum was so harsh...so nasty...

Liz: I'm not nasty! You've just got to understand George...i'm angry inside! I'm angry with that bloody family because of what Danny did to you! He paralysed you for life! And i'm your mum...i just can't describe how hurt and angry how i feel! :(

George: It's still no excuse mum! You've just got to accept it...me and Sally are good friends...and we always will be...

Liz: Well i'm warning you now son...don't come crying to me when she breaks your heart!

(Liz storms off out of the kitchen)

DaVeyWaVey
08-12-2006, 18:00
Scene 8- The Woods House- Night

(Max is in the living room, reading the newspaper. Amy comes into the living room, in her nightie)

Amy: I can't take it anymore Max..

(Amy sits next to Max and edges up close to him. Max replies clearly not concentrating)

Max: Take what?!

Amy: Us pretending that we're just friends...last night was so special..

(Max slams his newspaper down on the floor)

Max: Nothing happened last night! You just leaped into my bed like a bloody frog without me realising! I'm not in love with you..i wish you could just get that into your thick head!

(Amy puts her fingers on Max's lips before leaning in for a kiss. Max retaliates by slapping her across the face)

Max: Bloody hell Amy!! Can't you see how i feel!?

(Amy holds her face with her hands)

Amy: I thought you loved me Max! :(

(Max starts shouting, clearly angry)

Max: Well i don't..we go as far as a one night stand and that's it! How many more times do i have to tell you eh?! Besides, why would I look twice at an ugly slut like you?!

(Amy starts crying and storms out of the living room. Max sighs regretting what he just said)

DaVeyWaVey
08-12-2006, 18:14
Episode 30

Scene 1- The Cafe- Morning

(It's morning in Hinston High. Pat is outside opening the cafe doors. She looks around Hinston High and suddenly turns to the Campbells house where she witnesses Megan leaving the Campbells house. Pat's face is fuming. She suddenly rushes into Frank and Dave who are putting cakes in the cafe cabinet)

Pat: You never guess what?!

Dave: What now mum!? Your face looks like thunder... for goodness sake, you've been in an angry mood for the last few days!

Pat: Well what do you expect?! You can hardly blame me! That Megan burnt my daughter's hair off...beat her up..and Felicity is now refusing to leave her room and that's all down to Megan! And you'll never guess the latest stunt she's pulled now...

Frank: What? Come out with it..

Pat: She has moved herself into the Campbell household! Wait 'til i go over and see Luke and Tan...they'll have lots of questions to answer...how could they let that bitch Megan move into their own home after what she did to my daughter eh?! :angry:

Frank: Now come on love...don't get worked up about this...

Pat: Don't call me love!

Dave: What are you going to do about it mum?!

Pat: I'm gonna go round there...confront both Luke and Tan! What they're doing is disgraceful! :angry:

Frank: It was their own decision Pat to let Megan move in! No matter what you do, it'll be there decision to decide if Megan should still stay in their home!

Pat: But she's a cow...she's damaged my daughter's life! Mentally-scarred her!

Frank: The damage has been done now Pat! Just stay out of Megan's way, you know how nasty a piece of work she is! Storming over to the Campbells won't solve anything...

Pat: I don't care what you say Frank! I don't care what anyone says...i'm going over there...and i am gonna make sure that they chuck Megan out on the streets! :angry:

DaVeyWaVey
08-12-2006, 18:50
Scene 2- The Church- Morning

(Chloe has just left the church with Nina and Alicia after making preparations for Greg's funeral. They are walking through the graveyard to get back to the car. Chloe has a tear in her eye)

Nina: Are you ok?

Chloe: What do you think Nina?! I just had to arrange the funeral of the love of my life! :(

Nina: Yeah..sorry..a bit of a stupid question..

(Chloe looks around the graveyard, before breaking down into tears. Alicia and Nina both give Chloe a comforting hug)

Alicia: Come on...let it all out Chlo..just let it all out!

Chloe: This is so hard...so so hard! I can't believe he's gone! I promised myself i wouldn't cry! :(

Alicia: Of course you can! Let all those tears out! Just let them all out! You need to grieve...you need to cry!

Chloe: I just want this funeral to be over and done with...i just want this whole ordeal to be over! I want Greg back...i want my true love back! :crying:

(Chloe staggers to the floor in tears. She continues to cry, as Nina and Alicia look on feeling helpless)

Xx-Vicky-xX
08-12-2006, 22:42
Scene 3- The Woods House- Morning

Joanna: Have you been crying?

Amy: *shrugs*

Joanna: You have, why what has gone one now…it’s Max isn’t it

Amy: *nods*

Joanna: What did he do?

Amy: He was really mean

Joanna: You told him didn’t you?

Amy: *nods and cries*

Joanna: He clearly feels nothing for you, you should have just left it

Amy smiles

Joanna: What you smiling at

Amy: I know what I have to do…to get Max back I mean

Joanna: Oh Amy just drop it

Amy: Oh what do you know?

Joanna: Well quite a lot seeing as I knew he would hurt you like this

Amy: I just approached it wrong, this time I need to do it differently…I need to up my game or I will never get my man

DaVeyWaVey
09-12-2006, 18:25
Scene 4- The Campbells House- Noon

(Pat storms over to the Campbells house to confront the family over why they let Megan move in. She knocks the front door, and Tanya answers)

Tanya: Pat!

Pat: Tan!

Tanya: What's wrong? What makes you call round here?

Pat: How could you Tan?! You knew what she did to Felicity! I feel betrayed! I thought you were meant to be one of my friends!

Tanya: Is this about Megan?

Pat: Who else would I be talking about!?

Tanya: You best come in Pat...we need to be talk about this..

Pat: Too bloody right!

(Tanya lets Pat in. Tanya shuts the front door. Pat sits down in the living room. Tanya comes into the living room)

Tanya: Coffee?

Pat: I don't have time for coffee! But i do have time to talk about Megan..that's why i'm here!

Tanya: Pat...you shouldn't be mad...i hate her as much as you do! You've got to trust me on that...

Pat: How can I when you've let her bloody move in with you?! She's a bully..she beat my daughter to a pulp..and one of my neighbours...one of my friends! decide to turn a blind eye and offers for her to move in!

Tanya: You don't understand...i may be living under the same roof as her but i still hate her...i am surprised and shocked as you are!

Pat: And how does that work?!

Tanya: Well i came home to find her putting her feet up on the sofa! Then Luke told me he let her move in because she was homeless and had nowhere else to go! I had no choice in the matter! He didn't consult me!

Pat: Then why don't you chuck her out! Chuck her out..make her homeless! It's what that bitch deserves after what she did to my daughter! I'm even tempted to go to the police but i'm not for Felicity's sake! She doesn't want the police involved.. Megan better be thanking her lucky stars!

Tanya: Trust me...i want her out of my house and fast..i'm gonna get her out of my family home somehow...

Pat: Just throw her out on the streets! It's as simple as that! I can't get my head round it though...you may have not let her move in but why did Luke eh!? I thought he was my friend...he's betrayed me, and he's betrayed Felicity even more!

Tanya: I think i know why Luke let her move in..but i don't believe his story! He said he felt sorry for her because she was homeless but i don't believe it for one second!

Pat: Do you think there's more to it!?

Tanya: Yeah...i think he's shagging her! It's obvious, i've seen the signs so many times now that i know when Luke is playing away! He's had so many affairs that i can't keep count! He'll never let Megan move in because he felt sorry for her...i swear that Megan is taunting me about it..it's obvious!

Pat: Well that's your excuse for kicking her out of your house then! Because she's been sleeping with your husband!

Tanya: No..i can't chuck her out straight away! I'm not gonna go in all guns blazing! I need hard solid evidence that Megan and Luke are playing away together..i've acted on assumptions too many times in the past that i've made a fool of myself...i won't be doing that again!

Pat: Well get evidence fast Tan...and chuck her out of your bleedin' house! Please! For me and my family..

Tanya: Don't worry...Megan will get what's coming to her..

(Tanya smiles at Pat. Pat gets up and leaves through the front door)

DaVeyWaVey
09-12-2006, 19:05
Scene 5- Hinston School- Afternoon

(Sally catches up with George as they make their way to next lesson)

Sally: George! Wait..

(George turns to see Sally)

Sally: I want to apologise for my mum's behaviour...she was out of order starting a fight with your mum yesterday...i felt humiliated!

George: Your mum isn't the only one who should be at fault you know...it was my mum's fault too..she shouldn't have said all that stuff about your family! I'm sorry too..

Sally: It's ok George..i just want to forget that their fight ever happened..it was humiliating for us both! All i want is to be with you...i didn't know it would cause so much trouble!

George: You want to be with me!? Seriously!?

Sally: I'm being serious...i have strong feelings for you George..but there's no point me acting on them..i don't wanna cause another fight, i don't want no trouble!

(Sally walks away from George. George has a look of devastation on his face)

DaVeyWaVey
09-12-2006, 19:35
Scene 6- The Johnsons House- Afternoon

(Jenna enters the kitchen where Harry is eating lunch, and reading the daily newspaper)

Jenna: I made an appointment at the hospital today..

Harry: Oh yeah..

Jenna: Yeah i've booked to go for a scan..check that the baby's ok..the usual..

Harry: Oh right..

Jenna: Are you listening to me Harry!? Or are you too busy reading the paper?! Your always getting distracted by something!

(Harry puts the paper down and turns his attention to Jenna)

Harry: Sorry love...something you were saying about a scan?

Jenna: Glad you caught up! :rolleyes:

Harry: Well..what about it?

Jenna: Well aren't you coming with me?! We can see an image of our baby for the first time! :cheer:

Harry: Err...no thanks..it wouldn't be my scene to be honest...

Jenna: For god sake, it's our baby we're talking about here!

Harry: Well Jen..i'm busy with work...i'm afraid you'll have to go on your own...sorry..

Jenna: Well it's obvious where your priorites lie then! Work is obviously more important to you than me and our baby! :rolleyes:

Harry: Did i actually say that!?

Jenna: No but you made it crystal clear! You didn't have to say anything! You don't care for this baby do you?!

(Harry looks uncomfortably and fails to answer)

Jenna: I knew it! I bloody knew it!

Harry: Jen! Wait!

(Jenna fails to listen to Harry and storms out of the front door)

Xx-Vicky-xX
10-12-2006, 17:49
Scene 7- Chloe and Kat’s Flat- Afternoon

Alicia and Nina are round at Chloe's flat

Nina: So how you doing Chlo

Chloe: Im scared to be honest

Alicia: Why? Incase Kat comes back?

Chloe: No I just want this funeral to be perfect

Alicia and Nina look at eachother as if they think Chloe has gone mad

Chloe: Oh no come on guys don’t look like that, its just well my wedding day should have been the best day of my life but it wasn’t so now I just want the funeral to go smoothly so I can say goodbye to my one and only true love. Does that sound stupid?

Alicia and Nina: No course it doesn’t

Chloe: I hate her you know, I know that is awful she was my best friend for years, even Julia has decided to forgive Danny for what he did to them but I can’t I really r….re….really hate her

With those words Chloe breaks down into tears and Alicia and Nina both hug her

DaVeyWaVey
10-12-2006, 18:23
Scene 8- The Campbells House- Evening

(Tanya and the kids are out Christmas shopping. Luke and Megan are in the house together alone. Luke is flicking through the television channels, clearly bored. Megan is looking at OK magazine)

Luke: Well i'm going for a shower...not much cop on telly!

(Megan puts the magazine down and gives Luke a seductive look)

Megan: Your family ain't around Luke...sure you don't want to reconsider us?

Luke: No Megan..i've made my decision..our affair is over..i'm a changed man..

(Megan laughs at this)

Megan: A changed man!? You can be such a joker sometimes Luke! :D

Luke: I'm being perfectly serious..and if you keep going on about our affair, then i'll have no choice but to chuck you out!

Megan: And if you do that then i'll have no choice but to spill the beans over our affair on Christmas Day!

Luke: You wouldn't dare!

(Luke grabs Megan and pushes her against the wall)

Luke: You wouldn't do a silly thing like that would you eh?!

Megan: No..not if you don't chuck me out..and our affair resumes...

(Luke rolls his eyes)

Megan: You know you want me Luke...i know that you want me too..

(Megan stares at Luke. Luke tries to look away. Megan grabs his face and kisses him. Luke smiles at Megan, before they kiss again, but Luke backs away)

Luke: No! I can't do this!

Megan: You can Luke...you can!

(Megan gives Luke a seductive look before kissing him again)

Megan: Come on..you know you want too...

(Luke smiles at Megan, they both start snogging each other. Luke and Megan start to take each other's clothes off. Luke and Megan are against the wall, both moaning as they move against the wall)

DaVeyWaVey
10-12-2006, 19:34
Episode 31

Scene 1- The Cafe- Night

(Dave has managed to persaude Felicity to come down to the cafe. They are both in the cafe, both of them drinking tea)

Dave: See..i knew i could manage to persaude you to come down here!

Felicity: Yeah...yeah..

(Felicity looks around uncomfortably)

Dave: There's nothing to worry about now Flic! Your safe...it's only me here...Megan won't pop up and start attacking you again!

Felicity: I know..but it's just a big step that's all...but the tea's helping me ease my nerves i spose...

Dave: It's ok Flic...i know it's been hard for you...but you've done it now! You've left your room!

Felicity: I know..but i still feel terrified!

Dave: Well you don't need to be no more! I'm sticking around...i may only be your half brother, but i am gonna be here for you! I'm gonna stick up for you whenever your in trouble!

Felicity: I can fight my own battles Dave..i don't need anybody else!

Dave: But it's what half brothers and brothers do! Stick up for their family!

Felicity: You don't need to waste your life though Dave, protecting me 24/7!

Dave: I never said that..i just said i'll be here for you whenever your in trouble..it's what any other relative would do..

Felicity: But what about Spain?! I thought you only came here for a fleeting visit..aren't you gonna go back there?

Dave: I only went there so i could spend time with my real father...i needed to bond with him, get to know him properly without my other family being around me..i've done that now..

Felicity: But didn't you do anything else out there...i would love to go to Spain..the sun, the clubs..

Dave: Yeah..well..i did go to clubs and stuff...

Felicity: What about a girl?! Is there a girl waiting over there for you?

(Dave hesitates uncomfortably)

Dave: Stop with the questions Flic! I ain't got a girl alright?! I just went there to enjoy myself and get to know my father properly..now i'm back here permanently..

Felicity: Ok..sorry...well i've finished my tea so i'm off to bed....and thanks Dave, thanks for getting me down here...i don't feel so scared anymore..

(Dave smiles at Felicity before Felicity leaves and heads upstairs to her bedroom)

DaVeyWaVey
11-12-2006, 19:49
Scene 2- Chloe and Kat's Flat- Morning

(The day of Greg's funeral has arrived. Alicia, Nina and Tanya are around Chloe's flat comforting her)

Chloe: You didn't have to come round here this early you know...

Nina: We're your friends Chlo! We wanna be here for you for today..

Chloe: Thanks! Your all great friends..you know that don't you?!

Alicia: Of course we do!

(Chloe starts crying)

Tanya: Are you ok hun?

Chloe: No..no..i'm not ok....i just want today to be over...

Alicia: It will be over..it'll be over soon enough..

Chloe: I don't want to even say goodbye..i want Greg back with me! Here! Now!

Tanya: You know that won't happen darlin'...come on...it's gonna be ok...

(Tanya, Alicia and Nina all give Chloe a comforting hug. Suddenly there's a beeping sound)

Nina: Well that's the taxi...you ready to do this?!

(Chloe puts on a confident smile)

Chloe: Yeah i'm ready...i'm ready to give my husband-to-be a loving send-off..

DaVeyWaVey
11-12-2006, 20:24
Scene 3- The Woods House- Morning

(Tom and Max are preparing for Greg's funeral. Max is putting on his tie in the mirror, while Tom is circling the living room reading over the speech he will say at the funeral in his mind)

Tom: Do you think this is ok Max? My speech sound ok?!

Max: Sounds fine bruv...the best speech..Greg would be proud of you...he was a great man like you described...

(Tom wells up with tears)

Tom: Yeah..yeah..he was a great man..we always used to use share jokes, have a banter whilst working...it's not the same without him around...

(Tom breaks down to the floor in tears)

Max: Eh! Come on bruv...we've gotta be strong for Greg today...we've gotta be strong for Chloe too...it's harder for her, he was the love of her life!

Tom: I know..but he was our friend too!

(Max gives Tom a hug)

DaVeyWaVey
11-12-2006, 21:38
Scene 4- The Campbells House- Morning

(Luke and Megan are eating breakfast. Lee and Tina have gone to the park. Emily is still in bed)

Megan: Enjoy last night then?

Luke: You know i did Megan!

Megan: Good...maybe we could do it again after breakfast..

Luke: No i can't! I've got Greg's funeral to go too..

Megan: Argh come on! Sex is more important than some dead man! Get over it! :rolleyes:

Luke: How can you say that Megan?! Greg is dead! He got hit down by a lorry! It was a tragedy...Chloe has lost the love of his life...i was Greg's best mate! :angry:

Megan: Oh Luke stop moaning! Chloe will find another man, and well you'll make new friends! Stop being so bland and boring...your not as sexy when your a worrier! :rolleyes:

Luke: Oh i'm sick of this! I'm going to Greg's funeral and that's that! I was one of his best mates for christ sake! I can't just not turn up! What would people think eh!?

Megan: Who cares what people think! :rolleyes:

Luke: I'm going Megan...i'm going there to say goodbye to one of my mates whose life got tragically snatched away from me! I'm going there to support Chloe...pay my respects..

Megan: Stop with the speech Luke..your boring me to tears! :rolleyes:

Luke: Your unbelievable sometimes!! :angry:

Megan: Unbelievable in the bedroom department i know..

Luke: That's it! That was the final straw..it's over between us! Our affair is over for good! And i mean it this time! I'm getting my suit on and then i'm going to the church! I spose i won't expect to see you there! :rolleyes:

(Luke leaves for the bedroom to put his funeral suit on. Megan looks on, knowing she can win Luke back)

DaVeyWaVey
12-12-2006, 21:42
Scene 5- The Church- Afternoon

(Greg's coffin has been lowered to the ground. All the Hinston High residents are gathered around the coffin which is in the ground. Chloe is throwing ashes on Greg's coffin)

Chloe: I'll never forget you Greg! I'll love you always and forever...

(All the Hinston High residents well up with tears as they hear Chloe's words. A tear runs down Chloe's cheek)

DaVeyWaVey
12-12-2006, 21:54
Scene 6- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Greg's wake is taking place at the cafe. Everyone is helping themselves to food and drink. Chloe is in the corner, downing a bottle of vodka. Tom comes up to Chloe)

Tom: You like the speech that i did at the funeral?

Chloe: Yeah..it was really touching...thanks, Greg would have liked it!

(Tom smiles but then sees the empty bottle of vodka in Chloe's hands)

Tom: Don't tell me you've drank all that too yourself?!

Chloe: Oh Tom! Stop being such a worrier..it helps...it helps me cope that the love of my life has gone forever!

Tom: But drink won't help!

Chloe: It blocks out the hurt and pain though doesn't it eh!?

(Suddenly the cafe door opens. A hunky man enters with a motorbike helmet in his hand. He goes by the name of Damien)

Damien: Can anyone point me to the direction of the garage?

(Everyone turns to Damien. Chloe gets up and stares him in the face)

Damien: Haven't interrupted anything have I?

Chloe: Why do you wanna know where the garage is?

Nina: He probably wants to get his car fixed Chlo..

Damien: No actually...i'm a mechanic...i'm replacing someone at Hinston High Garage...

(Chloe's face is dumbfounded)

Chloe: What!? A replacement?! Your a replacement.....a replacement for Greg!

(Chloe's eyes well up with tears)

Max: I'm sorry Chlo..i was gonna tell you that we found a replacement for Greg...i just didn't know he was going to turn up today..

(Chloe grabs her empty bottle of vodka and smashes it against the wall. Everyone in the cafe jumps. Chloe turns to Max and screams)

Chloe: How dare you! How dare you forget Greg just like that! I bet he was just another employee at the garage to you that could easily be replaced...but no one will ever replace him! No one! He'll never be replaced in my mind, he will always be my true love!!

(Chloe storms out of the cafe. Everyone looks on worried over Chloe's state of mind. Damien is shocked, wondering what he's got himself into)

DaVeyWaVey
12-12-2006, 22:15
Scene 7- The Woods House- Evening

(Tom and Max have invited Damien back to their home after Greg's wake)

Damien: Well thanks for inviting me in...sorry if i arrived at a bit of a bad time..

Max: Well yeah, talk about bad timing! The worst possible time in fact...it was the wake of the mechanic who used to work for us!

Damien: If only i arrived a day later...

Tom: Oh don't worry about it...don't beat yourself up about it! How were you meant to know eh?!

Damien: Yeah..i spose it was just down to bad luck..i just wanted to make a good impression on you two by arriving early... It would show that i am enthusiastic about starting work at your garage!

Max: Well as you have arrived early, you can start at the garage tomorrow! 9 o'clock start! :D

Damien: Don't worry i'll be there! 9 o'clock on the dot!

Max: Good..i like your enthusiasm..

Damien: There's only one problem though, i've got nowhere to live...

Tom: No worries...you can stay here...you'll have to sleep on the sofa though, we've already got a house full!

Damien: That's fine...thanks! :)

(Damien smiles at Tom and Max)

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-12-2006, 14:36
Scene 8- The Campbells House- Night

Tanya witnesses Megan and Luke kissing in the kitchen and storms in horrified and grabs Megan

Tanya: WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING? GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!

Megan: No

Tanya: Get out…NOW!!!!!

Megan: Luke?

Luke: What?

Megan: You gonna tell her? Or shall I?

Tanya: TELL ME WHAT?…..Luke?

Luke: I think you better go Megan

Megan: What? Luke? Tell her

Tanya: You heard him….GET OUT!!! Or I will throw you out

Megan: I ain’t leaving…not without him

Tanya: DON’T SAY I DIDN’T WARN YOU, YOU LITTLE BITCH!

Tanya drags Megan out and Megan tries to fight back causing them to fight in the street while Luke is trying to separate them

Luke: Come on both of you STOP IT!!!!!

Megan: NO!!

Tanya: NOT….A….CHAN…CE

Luke manages to pull them apart

Luke: Now the pair of you calm down

Megan: She started it

Tanya: No I think you did when you kissed MY HUSBAND!!!

Megan: We both wanted it

Tanya: WHAT?

Megan: We have been having an affair

Luke: Don’t listen to her Tan she is lying, she’s mental in the head I swear we haven’t done anything

Tanya: Luke wouldn’t do that you lying BITCH!!!

Tanya storms back into the house

Tanya: LUKE!!!! COME ON INSIDE NOW!!!!

Megan: Liar

Luke: I’m sorry Megan

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-12-2006, 15:13
Episode 32- Scene 1- The Campbells House- Night

Luke comes back in the house and is slapped across the face

Luke: What was that for?

Tanya: You have been sleeping with that TART

Luke: I haven’t Tan I told you before she is lying

Tanya: Oh don’t come that with me you have been acting really weird recently

Luke: Do you really think I would sleep with her? For Christ sake Tan we have kids

Tanya: Then why would she say that?

Luke: I dunno? Maybe she is jealous

Tanya: But you were kissing her

Luke: She just came round to drop something off, next thing I know she is kissing me

Tanya: So she is lying? You are not having an affair

Luke: Yes

Tanya: You have been having an affair?

Luke: No. She is just jealous, she hates to see people happy, look at what she did to Felicity, is that the actions of a mentally stable person?

Tanya: No I suppose not

Luke: Well then

Tanya: I am sorry I listened to her

Luke: I will forgive you, just don’t do it again

The pair laugh

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-12-2006, 15:18
Scene 2- The Woods House- Morning

Joanna walks in on Damien having a shower. Damien is embarrassed, and Joanna apologises but we see that there is an instant attraction between the pair.

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-12-2006, 15:21
Scene 3- The Woods House- Noon

Amy tells Joanna that she has a plan up her sleeve that will ensure her and Max will become a couple. Joanna becomes very wary.

Xx-Vicky-xX
14-12-2006, 17:18
Scene 4- The Café- Afternoon

Pat and the family are sitting together organising a Christmas party to hold in the café

Pat: Right so far we have been sitting here for an hour and all I have on this bit of paper is a date

Dave: *laughs*

Pat: Its not funny I’m serious I really want a party this year

Dave: Sorry I know it’s not funny

Felicity: Who would we invite?

Dave: Usual crowd I would imagine, you know Tanya and Luke along with their kids, Julia Sally and Marianne, then there is that kid in the wheelchair and his mother

Pat: George and Liz

Felicity: What about Chloe?

Dave: Then there is….

Felicity: Chloe?

Dave: Tom and Max

Felicity: And of course Chloe

Dave: Does this girl ever shut up? :rolleyes: what is it with you keep mentioning Chloe all of a sudden

Pat: Yeah you have mentioned her a bit today Flic

Frank: Its obvious isn’t it she is turning into a lesbian

Pat: Oh Frank she is not

Dave: Wait a minute I know what this is…you want to set me up with her don’t you?

Felicity: Well it has been a long time since you was with anyone

The entire family laugh at what Felicity is trying to do

Dave: I am not getting with Chloe she is still really upset about Greg

This gives Felicity another idea and she smiles

DaVeyWaVey
15-12-2006, 18:14
Scene 5- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Felicity is in the cafe, cleaning up some tables. Pat is behind the counter. Megan enters the cafe, looking awful after spending the night sleeping rough)

Megan: Hi..

(Felicity looks at Megan, and stumbles back, remembering the night that Megan beat her up)

Felicity: No! Please! No! I haven't done anything to you! I haven't done anything to you!! Please! Please don't hurt me!! Don't hurt me, please!!!

(Felicity runs out of the cafe and upstairs crying. Pat turns to Megan)

Pat: What you've just witnessed is the emotional wreck that my daughter has become! And it's all down to her!

(Pat points directly at Megan)

Pat: What the bloody hell are you doing here!? Haven't you already caused enough trouble at this cafe eh?! Haven't you already wrecked my daughter's life!?

Megan: I'll be blunt...i want my job back!

Pat: You what!? You must be bloody joking! What you did to my daughter was unforgivable, you've ruined Felicity's life! What you've done is evil! I would never give you your job back if my life depended on it! In fact, you can get out of this cafe right now! I never want to see you in here again...your banned!!

(Pat goes up to Megan and drags Megan out of the cafe and onto Hinston High)

Pat: I hope you get what's coming to you one day because your one truly evil woman! I would love to see you suffer after what you did to Felicity!

(Pat walks back into the cafe. Megan stands outside, feeling upset. She then sees new mechanic Damien walking to the garage. He catches Megan's eye and she seizes an opportunity...)

DaVeyWaVey
15-12-2006, 18:18
Scene 6- The Cafe- Evening

(Felicity is upstairs, recovering from her crying. She picks up the phone and dials a number that she reads off a magazine)

Felicity: Hello...yep..i want to book for the upcoming speed dating night...is that ok?....oh that's great! Thanks...thank you..bye!

(Felicity puts the phone down, and manages to crack a smile)

DaVeyWaVey
15-12-2006, 18:39
Scene 7- The Garage- Evening

(Megan enters the garage where she sees Damien working on a car)

Megan: Hey..

(Damien turns to see Megan. Her clothes have been purposely ripped, and her face are full of scars that she has purposely put on her own face)

Damien: Oh my god! Are you ok!? You look awful!

Megan: No i'm not ok...i need help...i need your help..i don't know anyone else to turn too!

(Megan starts putting on the waterworks. Damien starts to feel sympathy towards Megan)

Damien: Why? What is it?! It must be more serious than that your car has broken down!

Megan: This is really hard for me...really tough..:(

Damien: What can i help you with!?

Megan: I've got nowhere to live...i'm homeless! :(

(Megan starts crying)

Damien: I don't want to sound mean...but why have you come to a stranger like me over this? What can i do?

Megan: I'm desperate! I'm just desperate...i've got nowhere else to turn too! I've been an orphan since i was a little girl...i just got kicked out of my latest B&B coz i didn't agree to have sex with the B&B manager! :crying:

Damien: Christ! I'm so...so..sorry!! That's just awful! Why don't you go to the police for christ sake?!

Megan: I don't know! I'm scared i guess...i've been the victim of abuse since my parents and my family died in that horrific house fire...everywhere i go, everywhere i have stayed someone has abused me! I went into prostitution just to try and get a little bit of money...to let me survive another day...:crying:

(Damien wells up with tears)

Damien: Well i promise you i'm nothing like that! I would never abuse anyone! Your in safe hands..:(

Megan: You mean..you'll take me in!?

Damien: Of course...what you've just told me is absolutely horrific...no one deserves to go through anything like you've just described! No one! What i don't understand is why you came to me?! And why hasn't anyone else helped you around here eh?

Megan: I've just arrived here...i was in the centre of London but i moved to Hinston..a change of scenery i spose...i am just desperate...i need somewhere to stay!

Damien: Why not a B&B?

Megan: I've got no money for another B&B! :(

Damien: What about other family? Can't you stay with them?

Megan: I've got no other family! They all died on Christmas Day...the whole family were round the dinner table..eating Christmas Dinner..then a fire broke out...i was the only one who got out alive! :(

Damien: Oh dear god! That's awful! Now come here...i've got some money...you come with me...and i'll sort out a B&B for you...

(Damien gives Megan a hug as she bursts into "tears" We see Megan's face, grinning that she has managed to trick someone with her sob story)

Megan: Thank you! :cheer:

DaVeyWaVey
16-12-2006, 17:05
Scene 8- The Woods House- Night

(Max is in the living room, watching the television. Amy enters the room and turns off the tv)

Max: Why the hell did you do that for?! It was about to get good!

(Amy gives Max a devious look)

Max: Oh dear god! Your not gonna try it on with me again are you?! For christ sake Amy, control yourself! :rolleyes:

Amy: Don't worry Max, i'm not gonna make another pass at you...all i want to know is the answer to one question..and Max give me a simple answer!

Max: What is it? Come on! Spit it out! :rolleyes:

Amy: Do you love me Max?

(Max's face turns to rage. Max gets up and confronts Amy, clearly angry)

Max: For christ sake Amy! No i bloody don't love you! I don't have any feelings for you whatsoever! How many more times eh?! How many more times do i have to tell you that i don't love you before it makes sense in your thick skull!?

Amy: Fine...that's all i wanted to know...i guess, i have no other choice...

Max: What do you mean no other choice? Are you leaving!?

(Amy laughs)

Amy: That was the last thing on my mind...i was thinking of another idea...

Max: What idea? You've lost me now Amy...

Amy: I will make this blunt and simple Max...if you don't get together with me Max, then i'll take our daughter away from you forever! You'll never see her again! If we do get together and become a couple, then me and Imelda will both stay here and you'll still be able to see your daughter everyday...your choice! :D

(Amy walks away, a devious smile on her face. Max stands, dumbfounded by Amy's blackmail)

DaVeyWaVey
16-12-2006, 17:22
Episode 33- Scene 1- The Woods House- Night

(Amy walks away, a devious smile on her face. Max stands, dumbfounded by Amy's blackmail)

Max: You what!?

(Amy turns back round and faces Max)

Amy: You heard me..if you don't get together with me, then i'll take our precious daughter away from you!

Max: But...but that's blackmail! :eek:

Amy: And?...look Max, i know it has come as a bit of a shock, but i'll give you time to make your choice...i don't want you to make a decision yet..think it through...

Max: You bitch! Your unbelievable! If you were the last woman on earth, i wouldn't get together with you!

Amy: Well it looks like me and Imelda will be packing our bags!

Max: Your loving this aren't you eh?! Watching me squirm!

Amy: No..i just want to be with you Max and this is the only way....

Max: Blackmail?! Pointing out the most precious person in my life and blackmailing me! Is that the solution is it!?

Amy: Looks to me like it is...we get together..and you can still see our daughter, we can be one big happy family!

Max: But we'll be living a lie Amy!

Amy: No we won't! I love you...you might grow to love me...

Max: No! I would never fall in love with you Amy! I don't want to live a lie, pretend that i'm in love with you...pretend that we're a real couple!

Amy: Well if you want to keep in touch with our daughter, that is your only option!

(Max looks displeased realising he has no choice, Amy looks at Max)

DaVeyWaVey
17-12-2006, 22:19
Scene 2- B&B- Night

(A B&B in the middle of London. Damien is paying for a room for Megan. Megan stands at the door, knowing that a double bed room costs more than a single bed room)

Damien: Yep...one room please...

B&B Man: Is that a room with a double bed sir?

Damien: No a room with a single bed please..

Megan: Actually, no...make it a double bed...

(Megan licks her lips at Damien)

B&B Man: That will be £7.50 for one night please..

(Damien hands over the money to the B&B man before turning to Megan)

Damien: What?....why did you do that for!?

Megan: Why do you think?

(Damien gives Megan an awkward look)

Megan: I can't bare facing another night alone...feeling vulnerable...i want someone with me...someone with me in my bed...

(Damien smiles)

Damien: And you want me to stay with you for the night!?

Megan: Why not!? You've been very good too me....paying for a room and everything...

Damien: I know but after what you've been through! Well, it's a pleasure! It's the least you deserve!

Megan: Well if i deserve more...

Damien: You do deserve more! Anything i can do, you just say!

Megan: Well i have an idea on how you could make me feel better!

(Megan gives Damien a seductive look)

Damien: Come on then...let's go up to our room...

DaVeyWaVey
17-12-2006, 22:32
Scene 3- B&B- Morning

(Megan and Damien are in bed together, after spending a night of passion with each other)

Megan: Your such a dark horse Damien...your the perfect man...nice, kind nature...good in the bedroom...the whole package! Your the first man...the first man that has ever made me feel special! :wub:

Damien: Oh Megan...i'm sure there has been loads of people in your life that has made you feel special...your parents? Your family?

Megan: Yeah but as i said, they died Damien! And since then, no one has ever made me feel special! You will look after me though...care for me..won't you Damien?

Damien: Of course i will Megan...what you've told me is so moving...your life has been such an upset...you need to be made to feel happy for a change and i'm here to do that...

Megan: Well one thing that makes me feel happy is shopping...

Damien: Well..we can go shopping if you like!

Megan: Well we can't...i've got no money! I've never been on a proper shopping spree before, and i really want to buy something special...after all it is coming up to Christmas! :(

Damien: Don't worry about the money...we can still go shopping...i'll pay for it all...

Megan: Really?

Damien: Yeah really! In fact, why don't i take you on a shopping spree...you name what you want to buy and i'll buy it for you...after all, it'll make me feel better and you deserve a good spending spree even if it's not your own money your spending!

Megan: Oh Damien...your so sweet...i've always struggled for money...being homeless, living on the streets, no job...i feel like i had nothing to look forward too...but now you said about a shopping spree, that's one thing i am looking forward too! Spending some money on something special...i've never had that chance before...

(Damien's eyes fill with tears)

Damien: Oh Megan...let's hit those shops before you make me cry! :(

DaVeyWaVey
22-12-2006, 15:37
Scene 4- The Woods House- Morning

(Tom and Joanna are eating breakfast. Amy and Max arrive downstairs together and enter the kitchen. Amy has a wide smile, while Max is clearly unhappy)

Joanna: Oh.. morning you two..

Amy: Morning! :D

Joanna: You seem chirpy this morning!

Amy: Well it's nearly Christmas isn't it!? And plus, i finally have my life back on track...i have a daughter who i love...i have a decent home that i live in...nothing like last Christmas...

Joanna: Yeah...things have really looked up for you haven't they!? I'm glad! :)

(Amy turns to Max)

Amy: And what's even better is..

(Max interrupts)

Max: No Amy! Don't! I thought we agreed to keep it quiet!

(Amy ignores Max)

Amy: I finally have the man of my dreams! Max Wood!

(Tom and Joanna have shocked looks on their faces)

Tom: You mean...you and Max are a couple!?

Amy: You guessed it...me and Max both love each other so much...being with Max is the best Christmas present i could ever have!

(Amy kisses Max on the cheek, but Max turns away uncomfortably, clearly embarrased)

DaVeyWaVey
22-12-2006, 15:52
Scene 5- The Campbells House- Morning

(Luke has made Tanya breakfast in bed. He enters the bedroom and passes it to Tanya who is still lying in bed)

Luke: There you go..and a nice cup of tea to go with it...

(Luke pops the tea on the cabinet next to the bed before kissing Tanya)

Tanya: No need to try and impress me you know!

Luke: Can't a man treat his wife special once in a while?!

Tanya: I know your trying to impress me Luke...what with the whole Megan situation....it makes me think that you may have a guilty conscience..

Luke: Christ Tan! I didn't have an affair with Megan...she's just jealous of us! She wanted to try and drive a wedge in our marriage because she is jealous of what we've got! She's got no one!

Tanya: I hope your not lying me to Luke!

Luke: I'm not lying Tan! I've had the few affairs in the past but we're happily married with kids and we genuinely love each other...i promised you before that i would never cheat on you again and i meant that! Please believe me Tan! Me and Megan haven't done anything together! I mean that kiss you saw...well...Megan was the one that lunged at me! She made the move on me!

(Tanya hesitates for a second)

Tanya: I believe you Luke...she's just a twisted bitch..i mean look what she did to Flic!

Luke: Exactly! She just wants to wreck everything that anyone has that makes them happy!

(Luke smiles at Tanya and they kiss)

Luke: I promise you and the kids the best Christmas ever Tan, i mean it!

DaVeyWaVey
01-01-2007, 09:45
Scene 6- The Garage- Afternoon

(Tom and Max are in the garage working)

Max: Well i'm not very impressed! Me and Damien are gonna have words when he turns up for work eventually!

Tom: I'm sure Damien hasn't done this on purpose Max! There must be some kind of explanation as to why he hasn't turned up for work...

Max: Well i hope that he has got a damn bloody good reason! I mean, i thought he made a good first impression on us but now he's 5 hours late for work...my impressions of him may have changed..

Tom: He seems like a good, hard working mechanic though Max...give him a chance! When he turns up for work, we'll question him over why he was late and we'll take things from there...

Max: Yeah well, Tom! This is a business...we can't afford to have employees who are 5 hours late for their work!

(Megan suddenly walks into the garage, a load of shopping bags in her hands with a new look and a massive grin on her face)

Megan: Heya Tom...Hiya Max...

Max: What are you doing here!?

(Damien walks into the garage)

Damien: Sorry i'm late....

Max: You better be sorry Damien! I want a good and valid explanation now!

Damien: I'm sorry but i just went to treat Megan that's all...

Tom: Megan!? Oh dear Damien...why?!

Damien: Why!? I'll tell you why...because she's homeless, she has no money and her whole family is dead! She came up to me, begging me to take her in, she was crying!

Max: Crying crocodile tears was it Megan!?

(Megan looks at Max and panics, before looking at Damien)

Megan: Ok..well thanks Damien, i best be off now...

Damien: Be off where!?

(Megan walks at a very fast pace away from the garage)

Damien: Megan! Wait!

(Damien watches as Megan dissapears in the distance. He turns back to Tom and Max)

Tom: Oh Damien! You complete and utter fool!

DaVeyWaVey
01-01-2007, 09:52
Scene 7- The Cafe- Evening

(Dave is sitting down in the living room watching television. Felicity comes downstairs and enters the living room, an excited look on her face)

Dave: What are you so chirpy about?!

Felicity: Oh your the one who should be really feeling chirpy Dave...

Dave: Why?! You've lost me...

(Felicity pulls out a speed dating ticket and passes it to Dave. Dave looks at it, and has a very uncomfortable expression on his face)

Felicity: Call it a late Christmas present or a New Year present...whatever you like..

Dave: I don't want it Flic...i don't want this!

Felicity: What!? But why not!? It's about time you got out there and got yourself a girlfriend!

Dave: Just shut up Flic...i don't want to go speed dating...it's not my thing! And i'm tired of you going on that i need a girlfriend..i don't need one! I'm happy without one so stop bloody going on at me! :angry:

(Dave gets up from the sofa and storms upstairs. Felicity sits down and stares at the speed dating ticket. Upset, she rips it up)

DaVeyWaVey
01-01-2007, 15:16
Scene 8- The Woods House- Evening

(Tom and Max are talking to Damien on the sofa)

Damien: What did you mean when you called me a fool earlier?

Tom: Damien mate, you have no idea what you've done!

Damien: Is this about Megan?

Tom: Yes it is about Megan! Don't you know what she's like?!

Damien: Don't you have any sympathy?! Your acting as if she's a piece of **** on your shoe!

Tom: You don't know what she's like Damien! She's took you for a ride...conned you out of your own money!

Damien: She hasn't! I've told you! Megan is homeless, she has no friends, no family! She was in tears when she was speaking to me!

Tom: It was fake...she was telling you a sob story...she was lying to you Damien! Taking you for a ride!

(Damien stands up and points to Tom with his finger in anger)

Damien: How dare you! How dare you accuse her of making up such a horrific story as that! You really do see the worst in people don't you eh!?

Tom: You've got to listen to me Damien! She was making it up, she was conning you, she was getting you to feel sorry for her so you could spend money on her without her spending a single penny!

Damien: Your telling me lies Tom! It's lies, all lies!

(Damien storms out of the house, unable to accept Tom's accusations against Megan. Tom attempts to chase after him but gives up and sits down, rubbing his hands in his hair in frustration)

DaVeyWaVey
02-01-2007, 13:42
Episode 34

Scene 1- B&B- Night

(Damien arrives at the London B&B in search of Megan. He walks up to the B&B manager)

Damien: Is Megan Blatchley still here? She's one of your guests..

B&B Manager: Oh yes...she's still here...

Damien: Ok thanks...

B&B Manager: Weren't you here yesterday with her?

Damien: Yeah i was.....i've just got to talk to her that's all...

(Damien heads upstairs to the B&B rooms. He knocks on Number 6 where he and Megan stayed the night previously. Megan answers)

Megan: Oh Damien....what do you want?

Damien: I want to know the truth Megan! Did you tell lies to me? Was what you told me lies?!

(Megan has a guilty look on her face, but then starts laughing)

Megan: Oh my god Damien.........i've never met a man as gullible as you, thanks for the cash and the shopping spree! But Damien, i'm afraid to say i told you a pack of lies!

Damien: So...you lied to me, used me! Conned me!

Megan: Afraid so...also may i add, your probably the most gullible man on Earth! :lol:

(Megan slams the door on Damien and starts laughing. Damien wipes a tear from his eye and leaves the B&B)

DaVeyWaVey
02-01-2007, 17:57
Scene 2- The Woods House- Night

(Tom and Max are watching television. Damien comes in through the front door and slams it behind him. Damien enters the living room. Tom and Max see Damien standing there, staring into space. Tom and Max turn the television off and put their full attention onto Damien)

Tom: Damien...where have you been?! We started to get worried...

Damien: I went to see Megan....you were right...

Tom: You went to see her?! Did she admit the truth!?

(Damien has tears in his eyes)

Damien: Yeah she told me the truth...she lied to me...everything she said, i believed! I'm sorry...i'm so so sorry....

(Damien starts crying)

Max: Come on Damien...you don't need to apologise! You weren't to know how much of a bitch Megan is!

Damien: I should have spotted what she was really like though...and Tom warned me...he told me she was lying...i should have believed you Tom! How could i have been so gullible!?

(Max and Tom both put their hands on Damien's shoulder)

Tom: Your aren't gullible Damien! You've just arrived here....you were just part of her latest evil scheme! Just stay well clear of her from now on Damien...don't let her pull you in to one of her sob stories again!

Damien: Don't worry, i'm not going to believe a word she says again! I know what she is really like now! I just wish i listened to you earlier...i wish i never believed her! She conned me!

Max: Just thank your lucky stars Damien that she didn't con you out of more money...she could have pulled you into her scheme even more! You could have spent more money on her, you could have kept falling for her wicked lies!

Damien: I suppose that's the only bright side to this situation....

Tom: Yeah it is...don't worry though Damien, Megan will pay for what she did one day! One day, she'll get what's coming to her...the only question is when...

DaVeyWaVey
02-01-2007, 22:46
Scene 3- The Cafe- Morning

(Joanna sees Damien looking into his cup of coffee at the cafe. Joanna sits down by him)

Joanna: You ok?

(Damien looks up from his coffee and sees Joanna smiling at him)

Damien: No...not really...

Joanna: Do you wanna talk about it?

Damien: I thought you would have heard about it by now! We do live under the same roof..

Joanna: I don't like to stick my nose in Damien..i'm not like that....i'll understand if you don't want to talk about it..

Damien: No i want too..i want to tell someone...

Joanna: Well i'm here and i'll listen for as long as it takes...i just hate seeing people looking so depressed!

Damien: I look depressed because i've been humiliated! By that Megan girl who works at this bleedin' cafe!

Joanna: Used to work at this cafe you mean....been bullying you has she?! Victimising you?! Like she's done to other people...

Damien: No...she played me for a fool! She told me a sob story about her life and i believed her! She told me a pack of lies...she lied about her own family being dead, who would do something like that!?

Joanna: Well trust me..she sinks to new levels of evilness...

Damien: Anyway, i took her in, paid for her to stay at a B&B...brought loads of stuff for her and gave her money because i believed she was poor and homeless, and had no family...now i feel like a humiliated gullible prat!

(A tear runs down Damien's cheek. Joanna gives Damien a hug)

Joanna: Now come on...don't get all upset...Megan will get what's coming to her one day...she's hurt a lot of people in her time...a lot of people!

Damien: And how would you know?

Joanna: I remember her from Comprehensive School...she used to bully me...beat me to a pulp every day after school...flushed my head down the toilet every lunchtime..

Damien: What!? You didn't let her get away with that surely?! You did tell someone didn't you!?

Joanna: I suffered in silence Damien...i took the beatings...nothing was ever done about it...she just got away with it every time...but now after seeing her arrive here, glamming it up, getting a job at the cafe, bullying Felicity, doing this to you...i wish i did speak up....

(Joanna has tears in her eyes. She wipes them away with her hand)

Joanna: Anyway, it was a long time ago...i've got over it...just try my best to avoid her round here...and that's what you should do too...

Damien: Don't worry i will..i'm keeping away from Megan Blatchley from now on...

DaVeyWaVey
02-01-2007, 22:52
Scene 4- The Garage- Morning

(Tom and Max are working in the garage)

Tom: So what's the deal with you and Amy then?

Max: Me and Amy?!

Tom: Your an item now i thought or did you forget? :rolleyes:

Max: Yeah...we are...we're a couple..

Tom: It came as a bit of surprise to be honest, i personally thought she wasn't your type..i thought i knew as a brother what type of a woman you go for but you really did take me by surprise!

Max: Yeah well...

Tom: You don't seem that happy about it! I never knew you really liked her...do you like her though Max? Do you love her!?

Max: Tom, can't we just move onto a different subject!

Tom: I want to know Max...do you think Amy's the one for you?

Max: Yeah she is...i love her...ok?!

(Tom turns away from Max, unconvinced by his brother's response)

DaVeyWaVey
03-01-2007, 22:04
Scene 5- Hinston Park- Afternoon

(Sally is sitting on a swing at the park. George passes by in his wheelchair and approaches her)

George: Hey..

Sally: Oh George...hi..

George: So what are you doing here?

Sally: I just needed time to myself...time to think...

George: Oh...well, i'll leave you too it...

Sally: Yeah...we don't want another catfight breaking out!

(George fakes a laugh)

George: Before i go, are you going to the cafe party, it's been 2 years since it opened...

Sally: Yeah...i'll go if i feel like it..

(George smiles)

George: Well i'll see you there...

(Sally smiles back)

Sally: I guess i will...

(George leaves the park, delighted)

DaVeyWaVey
03-01-2007, 22:16
Scene 6- The Cafe- Evening

(Pat is making final preparations for the anniversary party at the cafe. The cafe is decorated balloons and banners. Dave is sitting at a table, admiring the decorations. Felicity goes over to Dave)

Felicity: You ok?

Dave: Yeah i'm ok...like i said...i'm ok without a love life! So if your going to go on at me again, i suggest you leave me be now!

Felicity: No i'm not going to moan at you because you ain't got a girlfriend...i realised it's your life, you do what you want...i just came to apologise....i'm sorry...

Dave: I guess i accept your apology...as long as you accept that trying to give me a speed dating ticket wasn't in my best interests...

Felicity: Yes ok i admit that and i'm glad you accepted my apology...it was just a harmless gift that i paid for that's all...i don't know why you got so mad over it!

Dave: Well i'm sorry if i overreacted ok but from my point of view, it sounded like you were trying to persaude me to improve my life by getting a love life!

Felicity: I wasn't trying to put that message across...i'm sorry if i did...

Dave: It's ok..

Felicity: I was just surprised by the way you acted! You were horrified by that speed dating ticket, mortified in fact!

Dave: Can we just forget about it Flic?! And enjoy the party at this cafe tonight...

Felicity: Ok..i guess it's for the best...

(Felicity leaves Dave sitting at the cafe table)

DaVeyWaVey
03-01-2007, 22:34
Scene 7- The Woods House- Evening

(The Woods are preparing to go to the cafe anniversary party. Max has just come out of the shower and enters his bedroom, where Amy is changing her clothes ready to go to the party)

Max: Get out Ams..so i can get changed!

Amy: Oh come on Max..you don't mind if stare do you?! We're a couple now after all...

(Max looks at Amy coldly before starting to get changed)

Amy: Don't give me that look Max...we've got to act like we're happy together...remember?!

Max: Yes don't worry...i remember...

Amy: I love you and you love me don't you Max?

Max: No..

(Amy interrupts)

Amy: Don't you Max?!

Max: Yeah i love you Amy...

Amy: And we've got to show that at this cafe anniversary party...we've got to show Hinston High that we're a couple who are in love with each other and that our relationship is solid!

Max: Yeah we have too...

(Amy goes over to Max and grabs his neck)

Amy: Because if we fail to convince, you'll know what'll happen don't you...i'll take our precious daughter away from you...and you'll never see her again! So make sure you play your part well...and convince we are madly in love with each other....

(Amy leaves the bedroom leaving Max feeling worried)

DaVeyWaVey
03-01-2007, 22:43
Scene 8- The Cafe- Night

(The anniversary party at the cafe is in full swing. Most Hinston High residents have attended. Music is playing, everyone is dancing, drinking and eating. Pat is sitting down, watching everyone have fun. Frank goes up to her)

Frank: Things have turned out alright for you haven't they?

Pat: Yeah they have...i'm really surprised that this cafe has been so successful...Hinston High is a very small place..i thought i wouldn't get enough custom...

Frank: Well you were proved wrong Pat...this place has been very successful for you...whenever you set up a business, you always take a risk...it could be successful or you could end up being broke in a matter of months! Luckily, you made the right choice with this cafe and it has come up trumps for you!

(Pat smiles)

Pat: Yeah it has! It really has! Here's to another 2 years of successful business at Hinston High Cafe!

Frank: Do you fancy a dance to celebrate?

(Pat hesitates slightly then replies)

Pat: I'll be delighted!

(Pat and Frank smile at each other before grabbing each other by the hands and start dancing to the music)

DaVeyWaVey
04-01-2007, 23:28
Episode 35

Scene 1- The Cafe- Night

(The anniversary party at the cafe continues. Sally is sitting down, playing with a balloon. George wheels over to her)

George: So you decided to come to the party then?

Sally: Yeah...i can't stand just being stuck in the house all the time! I've got to get out...have a good time..

George: Yeah...i hate being stuck in the house too...

Sally: That's not the only reason why i came here though George...

George: Why? Why else have you decided to come here?

Sally: Because i knew you were going to be here George...

(George blushes. He is clearly nervous and starts fidgeting. He looks away from Sally as he speaks)

George: Yeah...well...i only asked if you were coming....i thought you wanted a good time...why have you came because of me?

Sally: Because i want to have a good time with you George...i like you...really like you..

(George turns to Sally. His eyes light up and he cracks a big smile)

George: You really like me?

Sally: Yeah...i really like you...in fact, i think i love you...

(George blushes as his smile widens. He stutters as he speaks, clearly nervous)

George: It's really hard for me to say this...but i think i love you too!

(George and Sally both gaze into each other's eyes and smile, before they move in and share a tender kiss)

DaVeyWaVey
04-01-2007, 23:37
Scene 2- The Cafe- Night

(Damien and Joanna are sitting down, nibbling on some food at the party)

Damien: I want to say thank you for earlier Joanna...

Joanna: What do you want to thank me for?

Damien: For being there...i felt so embarrased about Megan...but you reassured me everything was going to be ok..

Joanna: Oh it was nothing really...let's just forget about Megan! It's a party...she's not here so we can enjoy it!

Damien: But i want to repay you Joanna...i want to say thank you somehow...

Joanna: Oh yeah...what do you have in mind?

(Damien winks at Joanna. Joanna starts feeling his leg)

Damien: Let's go out to the back of the cafe and i'll show you!

(Damien grabs Joanna's hand and they secretly go outside to the back of the cafe, trying to avoid getting seen)

DaVeyWaVey
04-01-2007, 23:42
Scene 3- The Cafe- Night

(The party is still going on. Everyone is eating, drinking and dancing to the music)

Alicia: Come on Jack...get up and dance!

(Alicia grabs Jack)

Jack: If you insist...:rolleyes:

(Suddenly a brick is thrown through the cafe window. Glass goes flying everywhere. The music comes to a halt as everyone takes cover as the glass comes flying at them. There are screams as the glass shatters and comes flying through the cafe. Suddenly a dark figure enters.....

DaVeyWaVey
06-01-2007, 17:00
Scene 4- The Cafe- Night

(A dark figure enters as all the glass comes crashing down to the floor and everyone takes cover. The dark figure is Megan)

Megan: Hello....sorry to gatecrash! :D

(Pat gets up and sees Megan. She runs over to her and slaps her across the face)

Pat: You bitch!

Megan: You take that back...

(Megan picks up a piece of broken glass)

Megan: Or you'll no longer have a beautiful face!

(Pat backs away from Megan, clearly frightened)

Tanya: What are you doing here? Haven't you caused enough trouble!? Bullying Felicity...making up stories that you've been having it off with my husband!

(Everyone gasps at Tanya's comment)

Megan: It's true Tan! Luke's lying to you...we shagged each other and too top it off, we shagged each other in YOUR bed!

(Tanya gets up in a rage and charges at Megan. Megan defends herself by slapping Tanya across the face, but Tanya fights back by wrestling Megan to the floor. Megan falls to the floor as Tanya starts pulling her hair, but Megan is screaming as a piece of glass slices through her skin)

(Joanna gets up and restrains Tanya)

Tanya: I was about to bloody finish her off!

Joanna: Trust me Tan...i'm as angry as you are..

Tanya: Why?! What's that bitch done to you?!

Joanna: She bullied me too...a long time ago now back in school...and she conned Damien!! What you mentioned isn't all she's done!!

(Tanya looks shocked at Joanna. Megan gets up and shows off her arm, a piece of glass is stuck in her arm and her arm is bleeding)

Tanya: Oh well look at that, you don't look so beautiful now do you eh?!

(Megan gets up from the floor and points her finger at everyone in the cafe)

Megan: Just wait! All of you just wait....i am going to get revenge on every single one of you....and guess what, i can assure you that none of you will know what's hit you!

Tanya: And guess what Megan, one day...you'll be taught a lesson...get your just desserts...and i can assure you that it won't be nice!

(Megan looks at Tanya confidently before turning her head and storming out of the cafe)

DaVeyWaVey
06-01-2007, 19:37
Episode 36

Scene 1- Hinston High- Night

(The Hinston High residents are all walking home after the party at the cafe ended in chaos. Luke and Tanya are walking home)

Luke: I can't believe you caused a scene in the cafe Tan...what were you thinking?! You didn't need to get involved!

Tanya: I am involved though Luke! Megan has tried to hurt our family! She's made up lies about you copping off with her and i'm sick of it!

Luke: I thought we sorted it out though and it was behind us...and for once, i thought we would have actually kept our troubles to ourselves...but no, you had to blurt it out to a packed cafe didn't you!? :rolleyes:

Tanya: Well i'm sorry Luke if i'm trying to defend my family! I'm sick of her strutting her stuff around Hinston High...trying to hurt everyone...thinking she owns the place...something needs to be done about it!

Luke: Please Tan, don't get involved with Megan, just stay away from her!

Tanya: Ok...ok..

Luke: Tan...2007 will be a good year for our family...we went through a lot in 2006..but 2007, we'll be a happy family...2007 is going to be a perfect year for our family, i promise you!

Tanya: I hope so!

CUT TO:

Harry: Well that was eventful!

Jenna: Just think Harry...2007 will be the year when our child is born! I'm so excited! :D

(Harry hesitates before replying uncomfortably)

Harry: Yeah...i'm excited too...

DaVeyWaVey
11-01-2007, 17:49
Scene 2- Hinston Park- Morning

(Luke and Megan have met up at the park)

Luke: What's this about Megan? You were desperate to get me here..

Megan: And you agreed to come, to this park...alone..

Luke: And?

Megan: I'm not gonna mutter on and on...but the truth is, I want you back!

Luke: What?! Your never gonna get me back Megan! Especially after last night's performance at the cafe! It showed me what a nasty piece of work you are!

Megan: Last night, the anger got the better of me! I regret what happened!

Luke: Pull the other one! Your anger has got the better of you many times i heard last night!

Megan: And you believe Hinston High gossip! Christ Luke! I thought you weren't that gullible!

Luke: I'm not gullible Megan because i'm not falling for your pack of lies! You don't regret vandalising the cafe last night! It was intentional!

Megan: And Tanya assaulting me was by accident was it?! That was intentional too! Look what she did to me!

(Megan pulls up her sleeves and reveals her cut arm. She points at it)

Megan: Look at it! That's what she did to me!

Luke: Don't try and win me over Megan! You just want to stir up more trouble..like last night, you were trying to cause trouble by saying that we slept in mine and Tan's bed!

Megan: But it was true!

Luke: That's why i'm not going to resume our affair Megan! Because if i sleep with you again, you will probably mouth it off to a packed cafe again! And i'll have to hope that my Tan thinks it's a load of bollocks!

Megan: Fine...if you don't want to restart our affair, that's fine! But before you go, let's have it off on that bench! Just like old times..

(Megan tries to seduce Luke by touching him but Luke pulls away)

Luke: Forget it! Like i said before, me and you are finished! Over! Don't try bothering me again because Tan and my family are the ones i love and i don't want to risk losing them again!

(Luke storms off from the park. Megan sits on the swing, realising the extent of her loneliness)

DaVeyWaVey
12-01-2007, 21:57
Scene 3- The Woods House- Morning

(Tom, Max, Amy, Joanna and Damien are all sitting round the breakfast table. They have all just finished breakfast)

Damien: I'll wash up for a change if you like...

Amy: Oh no...i'll do it...

Damien: No i insist...

(Damien gets up from his chair)

Damien: Joanna....you don't mind if you help dry?

(Joanna is uncomfortable)

Joanna: Why me?

Damien: Because Tom, Max or Amy always do the washing up!

Tom: That's true babe...i am always slaving away!

Joanna: Fine...you win! :rolleyes:

(Joanna gets up nervously from her chair and enters the kitchen. Damien follows and shuts the kitchen door before grabbing Joanna by her shoulders)

Joanna: What the hell do you think your doing?! You just wanted to get me alone, didn't you eh!? I knew it!

Damien: No...i don't want a repeat performance of what we did at the cafe anniversary party....i just want us to talk about it!

Joanna: What!? So now we're gonna write an essay on what we did are we?! Write and debate the gory details?!

Damien: No...i didn't mean it like that! I just want to know where we stand...i want to understand why it happened!

Joanna: We were gagging for it...that's why it happened! But you got to understand Damien, what we did was a one-off! It will never happen again...i'm with Tom...he's the one i love!

(Damien forces a weak smile)

Damien: Ok i understand...

(There's a pause)

Joanna: Ok...let's get washing these dishes!

DaVeyWaVey
12-01-2007, 22:24
Scene 4- Hinston Park- Afternoon

(George and Sally have met up at the park)

George: Oh Sal...i'm so glad we're together...i don't feel so nervous or edgy round you no more...we opened up to our feelings and admitted to them...

Sally: That's the thing though George...we admitted our feelings for each other, and i love you, i really do...but we've got so many other hurdles to climb over!

George: What do you mean?!

Sally: Our families George! That's what i mean! Your mum will blow her top if she finds out we're together!

George: Well we can keep it our little secret then...a secret relationship between me and you, as long as we don't tell no one, no one will find out about us!

Sally: It's not simple as that though George...we can get caught out together you know!

George: We'll be careful! And besides, who cares who knows, who cares what people think! As long as we've got each other, we can get through anything!

Sally: You really are trying to keep positive George, but it just won't work! We both know it won't work! Your mum will blow her top if she finds out we're together!

George: Please Sal...i want us to be together!

Sally: I love you George, i really do love you...but i'm sorry, i'm so sorry, we just can't be together!

(Tears start to run down George's cheeks. He is trying his best to prevent himself from crying)

George: No Sal! Please no...don't break my heart! :(

Sally: I'm sorry George...but i don't want us to be together! I love you, you've got to know that!

George: Do you love me Sal? Really love me!?

Sally: Yeah i do...please believe me!

George: Well why don't you want us to be together then?! :(

Sally: Because our families will be at each other's throats...i will be tired of the sneaking around, keeping us a secret....i'm sorry George! But it just won't work, if we tip toe around pretending we're not together! Struggling to find time together without us getting noticed by our families! If they find out, all hell will break loose!

George: But no one should keep us apart Sal! No one!

Sally: I'm sorry George...

(George reaches his hand in sheer despair, crying as he begs)

George: Please Sal! Before you go, give me one kiss...one kiss is all i ask...to remember you by! :crying:

(Sally leans in and gives George a tender kiss on the cheek)

Sally: Goodbye George...i love you...

(Sally turns and walks away. A tear trickles down her cheek and she forces it away with her hand)

DaVeyWaVey
13-01-2007, 16:24
As you may have recognised, i have been unable to post 3 scenes per day of Hinston High for the past week or so. Due to other commitments and school work, Hinston High will now be wrote on the weekends, one episode on Saturday (8 scenes long) and one episode on Sunday (8 scenes long) Just thought i would let you all know. :)

This will start from today....

DaVeyWaVey
13-01-2007, 16:35
Scene 5- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Dave is sitting down in the living room watching television. Felicity, Pat and Frank all come into the room with cheerful looks on their faces)

Dave: Shouldn't you be in the cafe?!

Pat: Oh that can wait son....we've got a surprise for you!

Dave: Oh yeah....what kind of surprise?! Not another speed dating ticket i hope?! :rolleyes:

Felicity: Oh no...it's way different to that Dave! We're confident you'll be pleased!

Dave: Well, come on then....don't keep me in suspense...

Frank: Ok...well, as a treat....we've paid for you to have driving lessons!

(Dave has a surprised look on his face)

Dave: What?! Really?! Are you being serious?!

Pat: Perfectly serious!

(Dave jumps up from the sofa in excitement and hugs Felicity, Pat and Frank in turn)

Dave: Oh....thank you so much! Driving lessons is actually something i wanted!

(Dave has a huge smile across his face. Felicity, Pat and Dave smile back, pleased that Dave is happy)

DaVeyWaVey
13-01-2007, 16:45
Scene 6- The Woods House- Evening

(Max is reading the daily newspaper. Amy comes in, angry and distressed)

Max: What's wrong with you?! You've got a face like a sore bottom!

(Amy grabs Max by the throat)

Amy: I'll tell you what's wrong Max! I'll bloody tell you what's wrong!

(Max tries to get Amy's hands off him)

Max: Oi! What the hell are you doing?! Let go of me! What's the problem?!

(Amy lets go of Max's throat)

Amy: I'll tell you what the problem is! We're not convincing enough! Both of us together aren't convincing enough! We weren't a convincing couple when we went to the cafe anniversary party!

Max: What?! Of course we were convincing enough! Everyone clearly knew we were a couple! Why have you got this idea in your head?!

Amy: It's not in my head! It's in reality! We've both got to try harder...we've got to snog and kiss in public! Show we're a couple! You've got to play your part as my happy boyfriend a lot better than you have! You've gotta feel up my skirt, show affection!

Max: But Ams! I don't love you, i don't fancy you!

Amy: Have you completely forgetten the threat i gave you Max?! If we're not convincing enough as a couple, if you refuse to be with me....then i'll snatch Imelda away from you and you'll never see her again....ever!

(Amy gives Max an angry look before storming out of the room. Max looks on, clearly concerned)

DaVeyWaVey
13-01-2007, 16:52
Scene 7- The Weatherbys House- Evening

(Mike and Nina rush into the Weatherbys House and slam the front door)

Jack: Oi! What have i said about slamming the bloody front door!

Mike: Sorry Jack...i didn't think...but we've just had the most exciting news!

(Mike and Nina enter the living room where Jack, Alicia, Christina and Sam are watching television)

Christina: Go on then! Hit us with it!

Nina: The pub is going to be reopened in a week's time! Our business will be back in the running after the fire and we'll be out of your hair for good!

(Mike and Nina hug each other in excitement and share a kiss. The Weatherbys are delighted by the good news)

DaVeyWaVey
13-01-2007, 17:03
Scene 8- The Burdecks House- Night

(George is in his bedroom crying into his pillow. Liz walks by his bedroom and witnesses him crying. She enters his room, curious over what's wrong)

Liz: George, darling...what's wrong?

George: Mum! Just leave me alone...keep your nose out!

Liz: Sorry love...i just want to know what's wrong...i'm concerned!

George: I don't want to talk about it mum! I just want time on my own...time to think...

Liz: To think over what?! I want to help!

George: I told you mum...i want to be left alone! So keep your nose out!

Liz: There's no need to speak to your mother like that George!

George: Don't patronise me mum! I'm not your little boy no more!

Liz: So you've finally grown up from me fighting your battles now have you!?

George: Yes....i can proudly say i have! So just leave me be!

Liz: Fine, but if you want to talk...feel free....i am your mother! A mother's job is to listen....

George: Well you can't do anything about this, and even if you did, you would make matters worse!

Liz: (outraged) And what's that supposed to mean!?

George: Just get lost mum!

Liz: No...i want to know what you mean!

(George screams at his mother)

George: GET OUT!

(Liz is horrified over George's reaction and leaves his bedroom. George continues to cry into his pillow. We cut to Liz walking down the stairs, concerned over her son)

NEXT TIME: Amy's paranoia over her "relationship" with Max worsens. George admits his love to Sally once again but can he persaude her that a secret relationship is a good idea?

Tune in tomorrow for the next episode...

DaVeyWaVey
14-01-2007, 12:03
Episode 37

Scene 1- The Campbells House- Morning

(Tanya is in the kitchen, washing up after breakfast. Tina enters the room, along with Lee)

Tanya: Shouldn't you be getting ready for school?!

Tina: We have other things on our mind mum which are more important than school!

Tanya: And what's that then? You know you can always tell your mum anything...

Lee: And that's what we've decided to do...talk to you about it...

Tanya: Well go on then....spit it out!

Lee: We've noticed that you and dad....well have been acting strangely around with each other....are you both ok?!

Tanya: Of course we're ok....me and dad are as solid as a rock! What have you been doing...observing our body language to think otherwise?!

Tina: We're not stupid mum! And we could spot it from a mile off...you and dad have been acting off with each other...you don't need to tell us that everything's ok...we're old enough now to understand there's something wrong between you two...and we want to know what it is!

Tanya: It's nothing! We're fine....your worrying over nothing!

Tina: Is it Megan?! Has dad been playing away with Megan?! Is that why you chucked her out?!

Tanya: Of course not! She just outstayed her welcome that's all...

Tina: I don't believe that! Me and Lee aren't stupid mum...dad has played away so many times now that we can perfectly tell if he has or not! You always act the same around each other if dad has been playing away....it's so obvious!

Tanya: I can assure you there's nothing wrong ok?! Dad hasn't been playing away...so just get to school before your late...

(Lee and Tina leave the kitchen. Tanya sighs)

DaVeyWaVey
14-01-2007, 12:13
Scene 2- Hinston School- Noon

(It's lunchtime. George sees Sally alone staring into space. He wheels over to her)

George: Are you ok?

(Sally steps out of her daze)

Sally: Oh...yes, yes i'm fine! George....what do you want?

George: You know what i want, i want you!

Sally: For god sake George, i thought we went over this! We can't be together!

George: Yes we can! We can be together....why should anyone stop us eh?!

Sally: No one is stopping me! It's my choice!

George: But i thought you loved me!

Sally: I do love you George! I love you so much...

(A tear trickles down Sally's cheek)

George: Then what's the harm in us being together?

Sally: You know what'll happen if we get found out! Your mum will blow her lid, another fight will break out in Hinston, and we'll be the talk of Hinston High!

George: As long as we're careful Sal....no one would need to know! Please Sal! Please...

(George smiles at Sally, hoping for a response)

Sally: It's gonna be tough George....how are we going to find time to be together alone without no one seeing us?!

George: We'll cross that bridge when we come too it! All that matters now is that we become a couple!

(There's a pause)

Sally: Ok....George, let's be together!

(A huge smile crosses George's face. He is delighted)

Sally: But we must keep our relationship a secret....no one must find out!

George: Don't worry...no one will find out..

(George and Sally smile happily at each other)

DaVeyWaVey
20-01-2007, 12:01
Scene 3- Sewing Factory- Afternoon

(A sewing factory in the centre of London. We see Christina working. She has a new job as a sewer. Her new workmates, Becca, Nat and Cara come up to her)

Nat: Fancy going out on weekend?

Christina: Oh...um...it depends what i'm doing...

Becca: Argh come on Chris! 'Av some fun, it's just gonna be a girly girl night out, you know...

Christina: Ok...you twisted my arm...i'll come...what night we're going out?

Cara: Saturday night of course! Saturday nights is a ladies night! :D

Christina: Well ok...i can't wait...:)

(Christina smiles at her new friends)

DaVeyWaVey
20-01-2007, 12:24
Scene 4- The Cafe- Afternoon

(Pat is chatting to Amy in the cafe over a coffee)

Amy: So yeah...i'm so glad me and Max are together....he is the love of my life! I adore him!

Pat: Well to be honest with you, and i don't mean this in an offensive way but i could never imagine you and Max together...i don't know what it is but everytime i see you, you just don't seem to fit together...

(Amy has a face of rage)

Amy: Me and Max are perfectly compatible thank you very much! :angry:

Pat: Sorry Ams...i didn't mean for you to take it the wrong way! I was just giving my honest opinion that's all...

Amy: Well keep your thoughts and opinions to yourself next time! I can assure you that me and Max are fine together, Max loves me ok! He loves me...so we should be together! :angry:

Pat: I never said you weren't meant to be together....just calm down Ams!

(Amy realises how angry she's getting and quickly controls herself)

Amy: I'm sorry Pat...

Pat: It's ok..

Amy: I'm just tired of people thinking that me and Max don't fit together, don't suit each other! We do suit each other, we both love each other!

Pat: Who said you don't fit together?!

Amy: No one! But everytime i look around when i'm with Max, i can tell by people's expressions, i can tell their thoughts! I can tell that they think me and Max shouldn't be together and it upsets me! :(

(Amy starts crying)

Pat: Eh...come on Ams, that's ridiculous! I'm sure your just imagining it...and besides, you shouldn't care what people say or think about you and Max, it's just you and him together that counts! Ignore the gossip!

(Amy smiles)

Amy: Thanks Pat..you've made me feel slightly better....anyway, i best go, i'm sure Max wants me! :D

(Amy leaves the cafe. Pat watches her leave, slightly suspicious over her reactive behaviour)

DaVeyWaVey
20-01-2007, 12:38
Scene 5- Hinston Walkway- Evening

(Sally and George are going through Hinston Walkway Woods)

George: I can't believe we're together Sal....words can't describe how much i love you! :wub:

Sally: Oh George! Words can't describe how much i love you too! Your the first, the first proper man i've ever loved! :wub:

(George and Sally share a kiss)

George: It's a shame we can't kiss like that in public...show everyone our affections..

Sally: Don't start George! You know we have to keep it a secret! Like i said, your mum will blow her top if she finds out about us!

George: It's ok keeping it a secret...but i mean further down the line, when we're still together, i won't be able to keep us a secret! I won't be able to do it!

Sally: Well if you can't do it, what's the point in us being together eh?!

George: I'm sorry Sal...i just won't be able to bear keeping us a secret, but i will do anything to be with you, your my true love...so we will keep our relationship under wraps.

(Sally smiles at George, pleased by his response)

Sally: We both know it's for the best! :)

(George and Sally carry on walking through Hinston Walkway)