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Thicer Than Water is a 6 part mini series, giving Devon Seas readers an insight into the Ashworth Family: who will play an integral part of Series 2. The Ashworth’s will become the Taylors deadly rivals, they are richer and more powerful than the Taylors and will stop at nothing to make the Taylor family pay…
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Jared Ashworth (Gareth Hunt)
The head of the Ashworth Family; Jared is like Richard Taylor in many ways: a rich and prosperous businessman, however he is far more successful than Richard. Jared owns a chain of hotels, health spas and coach companies in Devon and Cornwall, and has the monopoly on the accommodation area in the South West. Jared is a intelligent individual, whose brains and cunning have allowed him to succeed in such a competitive business, having taken over the family business at a young age due to various tragedies. Family is important to Jared, however he is lenient with his children, giving them all the freedom that they wish. There are very often family feuds but at the end of the day he has brought his children up to believe that Blood is thicker than water. No matter what the Ashworth Family will stay together and support each other.
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Karen Ashworth (Cheri Lunghi)
Jared’s wife, Karen is the true brains behind the Ashworth company. It was Karen who gave Jared the money to expand the business, and in right the majority of the Ashworth’s fortunes belong to her. Karen concerns herself in the affairs of her family, doing her best to keep them together no matter what. Karen has a ruthless streak to her, and she is not a woman to be on the wrong side of. Respected by her family and all those that know her Karen is independent, confident and sophisticated.
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Max Ashworth (Martin Kemp)
The UK’s version of JR Ewing. Max is a successful businessman, the apple of his father’s eye Max is heavily involved in the Ashworth family business, earning millions a year from both that and other ventures.
Max has everything he could want in life: a glamorous and loving wife, two intelligent and beautiful children, and the permission to sleep with who he chooses when he chooses. Max is the ultimate playboy, driving fast cars, , drinking fine wines and bedding countless women. He has few friends and many enemies, but he wouldn’t have it any other way.
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Sophia Lloyd-Ashworth (Michelle Collins)
The Taylors/Ashworths may see many bitch fights and feuds, but not any of these feisty females compare to Sophia Lloyd-Ashworth. She is the queen of the bitches, and has made it clear that she is the top of the hierarchy of women in the Ashworth family. Totally materialistic, but she has never done a days hard work in her life. A once successful model, she has been married to Max for over 20 years. Their love for each other is passionate and strong, the pair know how each other works and what motivates them. Sophia is comfortable with her luxurious lifestyle and place in the Ashworth Family, she therefore allows Max to have his mistresses and affairs, as she too has fun from time to time. Sophia has a strong bond with father in law Jared, does their history go deeper than in laws?
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Will Ashworth (Rupert Penry Jones)
Will is the middle child of the Ashworth Siblings. With a family filled with ruthless capitalists and bitchy matriarchs, Will is the carming force of the Ashworth family. Very much like Nick Taylor, Will is a good natured man, who very often disagrees with the choices his family makes. Unlike his brother Max Will ditched the playboy lifestyle and refused to be handed his money on a plate, he went to university and worked hard to become a successful lawyer, not depending on his own family. Will chooses his women carefully, and is the ultimate definition of an eligible bachelor.
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Lauren Ashworth (Danielle Brent)
Lauren is the youngest of the Ashworth siblings. But what she lacks in age, she makes up for in immorality. Being brought up as a spoilt little brat has made taught Lauren that manipulation can get you anything she wants. Lauren is sly, devious and ruthless, Taking the sexuality and ruthlessness of her mother, and the intelligence and family values of her father Lauren is a highly sexed female who will do anything to get what she wants to protect those around her.
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Olivia Zitek (Alison King)
Olivia is a “ghetto princess”. Brought up on a rough council estate Olivia has been taught by the school of hard knocks. It takes a lot to break this tough cookie; she is a ruthless gold-digger who thrives on money. Olivia has used her natural good looks to get where she is, working in strip clubs and as a female escort to the rich to earn her money . It is clear she is not just another floozy, when she becomes Max’s latest mistress it is clear she is going to become a permanent fixture in the Ashworth family, whether they like it or not.
diamond1
07-08-2006, 15:06
oh wow I cannot wait for this mini series I wonder what their past is,
I think something dark and mysterious
wow this should be good
Ohhhh a mini series, looks good can't wait. And it will help with my withdrawal symptomfrom Devon Seas. And i have a feeling Sophia and Jared have maybe got to close...!
~Fill in that little whole that hasnt been filled. Is that the same Jared that was mentioned at the end of Devon Seas.
DaVeyWaVey
07-08-2006, 17:40
Wow...this sounds great! Some great actors and actresses you chose to play the parts too! I can't wait for this series to be shown, the characters sound brilliant and seem like they will liven up DS in Season 2 too.
They sound like great rivals for The Taylors. :)
Ooo Sophia versus Hilary - now that could be a brilliant fight!
This sounds great Bry - I do hope its starting this week :D
Is it?? Will it?? Whens it starting - no really?! :D :D
Jada-GDR
07-08-2006, 19:27
oh wow - no more devon seas, i thought, until september - but now, THIS! :D:D:D
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Bellamy Mansion
Home to The Ashworth Family. Bellamy Mansion is larger than Jenkins Manor, and is one of the biggest estates in Devon.
Part One - He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
INT. Bellamy Mansion - (2000)
A more modern version of "She's A Lady" is played as cameras follow servants around Bellamy Mansion: a large and grand mansion: home to the Ashworths. The camera is leading it's way up flights of stairs and to one of the larger bedrooms.
The camera cuts to a vanity table, where a blonde woman is dressed in a glamarous dress. We see various close ups of the woman applying up make up and putting on her jewllery.
A shot is shown of Sophia Lloyd Ashworth (Michelle Collins), she looks at herself in the mirror and takes a deep sigh.
CUT TO:
FLASHBACK - TORBAY CHARITY EVENT (1985)
Sophia Lloyd is looking into a vanity table, backstage. Various girls dressed in fancy frocks are sitting in a row, dolling themsleves up. A woman comes behind the curtain and claps her hands together to get the girls' attention.
Woman: OK ladies...you're on stage in one minute... show them all what your made of!!
Sophia takes a final look in the mirror and puts on a brave smile. One of the girls comes up beside her.
Girl: Hey Sophia...let's see a smile eh babes? Come on...we all know you're going to win this... a girl like you...with looks like that.. come on...knock em dead gal'.
Sophia takes a deep breath and puts on a confident smile. She walks out on stage with the other girls. The ballroom is filled with men and women dressed in smart attire. On top of the stage is a banner for "Miss South West 1985"
Man: Ladies and Gentlemen... now for the the culmination of tonight's events... all night we have seen many sparkling young ladies...and the judges have come to their final decison.
Sophia holds hands with the girls beside her. Each of them is clearly nervous and anxious to hear the result.
Man: I can now reveal...that the winner of Miss South West 1985 is...Miss Sophia Lloyd.
The room erupts into applause. Sophia holds her hands to her mouth in shock, some of the girls hug her in support and others give her jealous looks. Sophia, who is now in tears walks towards the judges who give her a bunch of flowers, tiara and sash.
CUT TO:
A few minutes afterwards Sophia is walking around the hall, talking to people and getting to terms with her newly earnt title. A tall, dark and handsome bachelor approaches her, giving her the eye. This is Max Ashworth
Max: Congratulations Miss Lloyd...clearly the most worthy contender of some a beautiful prize...
Sophia holds out her hand and Max politley kisses her.
Sophia: Sophia please... Mr?
Max: Ashworth...
Sophia: As in the "Ashworths"?
Max: It's but a Name Sophia.. so then you're now officially the most beautiful woman in the South West...
Sophia: (Shy) I wouldn't as far to say that...
Max: Don't be so modest... look even your sash says so...
Max walks up clolsey to Sophia and whispers in her ear.
Max: It would look better on my bedroom floor tough...
Sophia: (Shocked) Mr Ashwroth...what ARE you suggesting?
Max: I'll leave that to your imagination.
Max raises an eyebrow and takes a sip of champagne. Sophia bites her lips seductively and looks him up and down.
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INT. LUXURY HOTEL ROOM (1985)
Max and Sophia are on the bed, kissing each other and slowly taking each other's clothes off.
Sophia: This is madnes... pure madness...Miss South West and this...in one day...
Max: Some girls just have all the luck...
Sophia: Every girl in the South West must have heard about you... your the biggest playboy going...
Max: In all senses of the word...
Sophia: That I have yet to find out...
Max: All in good time...
Sophia: Look I don't want to be another of your one night stands... I want more than that....
Max: I had no intention for you to be... your the most beautiful woman I've ever seen...and youve got more to you than blonde hair and big breasts... you've got sophistication.. you don't often see that in a woman...
Sophia: Who'd have thought of it? Miss South West and the Ashworth playboy...
Max: A match made in heaven...
The camera pans down to the floor, where a pile of clothes have formed. Saphia maons in satisfaction.
CUT TO:
INT. BELAMY MANSION (2000)
15 years older, Sophia looks into the mirror, a glamarous woman staring back at her. She opens a box that is on the table beside her. Inside it is a stunning diamond necklace, with a note beside it.
"15 years of marraige, and many more to come. Love Max"
Sophia smiles to herself and puts on the necklace.
MORE OF PART ONE TO BE POSTED SOON
This is fab so far Bry!! Really setting the scene. This will keep me going in the absence of DS - and get me all excited when DS returns.
This is fab so far Bry!! Really setting the scene. This will keep me going in the absence of DS - and get me all excited when DS returns.
I am with you on this one Em.. I am missing my daily dose of DS.. this will tie it all in. Can't wait for more :cheer:
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MORE OF PART ONE TO BE POSTED SOON Is that soon today, or soon tomorrow, or better still, soon in the next hour ?? :D :D (please say its the latter, please say its the latter)
INT. ASHWORTH HOTEL (2000)
Jared and Karen are walking around the newst Hotel of the Ashworths, builders and decorators are still adding the finishing touches to the place.
Karen: Well It certainly is shaping up well...
Jared: Well!?... Karen we need this place in full working order by the end of the week...we have a conference booked in here... execs... we will make a killing in the opening week...
Karen: You should have some more confidence in your workers Jared... after all they've done us proud with all the other hotels...
Jared: True...but you can't help panic when you're investing millions in to each project...
Karen: Not just your money tough is it darling, mine to... but I'm not stressing...leave the jobs to the professionals...as long as we reap in the profits then I couldnt care less...
Jared and Karen sit down in the bar where a barman is unpacking boxes and crates of alcholol.
Jared: A bottle of your finest red wine when you get a moment Nathan...
Karen: Who'd have thought it... 30 years back... we wouldnt have ever imagine we'd be sitting here...drinking wine...in your 10th hotel...not to mention the spas and the coach companies...
Jared: Tell me about... life has been very lucky to us... apart from dad... you know I never thought'd be get trough that...
Karen: Yeah well you underestimate us... The Ashworths will get trough anything babe... we're made of tough stuff...
Jared has a breif smile. The wine is brought to their table.
Jared: It's certainly taking it's toll on me...running this mini little empire...
Karen: Well what are you saying darling?
Jared: Five years time...I don't want to be here...stressed... opening new hotels..I want to have retired...give the kids the buisness... a nice little villa in Spain... fine wines... the simple life...you know?
Karen: Well you've earnt it babes... to the future...
Karen and Jared hit toast to the future, and then take a sip of their wine.
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INT. BARRISTER CHAMBERS (2000)
Will Ashworth is standing up in his chambers, looking trough the legal books on his bookshelve. A glamarous woman is sitting down by his desk, wearing designer sunglasses, a large hat and an expensive dress.
Mz Verico: I heard that you have quiet a reputation Mr Ashworth... for getting results...
Will: I would like to think so yes... please call me Will...I hate formalities...
Mz Verico: I would have thought a man of such upbringing would be use to formalities...
Will: Doesnt mean I have to like them tough does it?
Will grabs a legal book and sits down at his desk, facing Mz Verico.
Will: So then "Mz" Verico...what is that I can do for you?
Mz Verico: I feel like a change...call it a mid life crisis... I want to trade in my husband... lost his use... except for his money... I could have a bit of a cashflow situation...seems the best solution...wouldn't you say?
Will: You want to divorce your husband!? Surely this is a solicitor matter...
Mz Verico: If I wanted a solicitor I'd have seen one.
Suzie begins to rub her foot against Will's tigh.
Mz Verico: If I want his money I should be dealing with the best lawyer in the land...
Will moves her foot away from his crotch.
Will: You can stop that for starters...
Mz Verico is slightly offended. She gets up and walks towards Wil. She sitting on the table and starts to caress him.
Mz Verico: Oh come on Will... a man like you could have any woman you wanted...
Will: Yes...and I'm picky on who I go with... and I don't go with them just so the sake of it...
Mz Verico: An Ashworth? It's what drives you all...
Will: Well not me! I prefer attractive and intelligant woman as oppose to desperate sex crazed housewives... get out...
Mz Verico: I beg your pardon!?
Will: Get out of here! I'm not like the rest! I don't drop my pants at the first bit of skirt that comes asking for it... just get out you trollop!
An offended Mz Verico storms out. Will lies back and takes a deep breath. His phone rings, it says Melissa is calling, hestiantly he answers his phone.
Will: (Into Phone) Look...Melissa...I thought we agreed... what? Well we've said all we've got to say surely?... Well I can't meet you now...It's Max and Sophia's party... tomorrow then? Yeah...ok....
Will cancels the call and throws the phone onto the desk in frustation.
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EXT. DESERTED DEVON LAYBY (2000)
Lauren is sitting behind the wheel of a luxury sports car. Her boyfriend is sitting beside her. The pair are panting heavily. His shirt is undone suggesting they have just been having sex.
BF: That...was **** hot babe... I swear to god... you are THE best...
Lauren licks her lips seductively, pleased that she has satisfied him.
Lauren: Your okay I suppose...
BF: Only okay!?
Lauren: About average...I've had better...
BF: Oh thanks Lauren...you know how to make me feel better...
Lauren bends over and grabs her boyfriend by the head. She plants him a long and seductive kiss.
Lauren: That...is for showing me and a good time.
Lauren's hands slide down his body. She lowers her head. The camera stays on the boyfriend as he closes his eyes and lies back.
Lauren: And this...
The sound of his tousers being unzipped can be heard. He takes a deep breath.
Lauren: (Outraged) Is for sleeping with my best friend!
The boyfriend screams out in pain as Lauren moves back up.
BF: You bloody ANIMAL! Phyco bitch! Your bite my... Jesus! You should be locked up in a kage!
The boyfriend, crawls up into a ball in pain, scraming out loud.
Lauren: That's what you get for sleeping around...making a bloody fool of me! And you can tell that trollop that if I ever see her again she'll need more surgery than Micheal Jackson...
Lauren opens the passenger door and pushes the boyfriend out onto the layby, shirt undone and trousers down. She clears her throat and spits on him.
Lauren: Dreadful...I prefer the Cumberland...
She slams the door shut and speeds off, a smile of vengful satisfaction on her face.
A FEW MORE BITS OF PART 1 TO COME LATER!
I didn't realise you'd posted. Oh this is fab. Go lauren!!!!
More soon please x
:eek: Ouch!!!! That was nasty - but bet he won't do that again - ever :rotfl:!!
Keep it coming Mr T - this is brilliant. Now you've started this, I want at least 4 episodes per day please :D :D
Edit: Mr T :rotfl: Do you have a mohican Bry?? :rotfl:
:eek: Ouch!!!! That was nasty - but bet he won't do that again - ever :rotfl:!!
Keep it coming Mr T - this is brilliant. Now you've started this, I want at least 4 episodes per day please :D :D
Edit: Mr T :rotfl: Do you have a mohican Bry?? :rotfl:
Mr T!? :angry: Shut Up Yo Fool! :rotfl:
Mr T!? :angry: Shut Up Yo Fool! :rotfl: Oh the image in my head right now!!! :rotfl: :rotfl:
Back on track - Lauren is definitely going to be one not to be messed with - thats for sure
Good girl Lauren.. she knows how to deal with a cheat
INT. BELLAMY MANSION (2000)
Jared, Karen and Will are all in the main lounge. Karen is pacing the wall.
Karen: Honestly where is Max!? Trust him to be late on an important day like this…if he cant be back in time for his wedding anniversary then what he can be back for!?
Jared: And Sophia! Where is she!? Honestly the guests will be here any moment…
Lauren walks in to the room with Sophia and Max’s two children: Abigail and Jonathon.
Lauren: No doubt she’ll make her grand entrance down the staircase at any moment (to kids) Go say hello to grandma.
The two children run up to Karen. She hugs them and makes a fuss of her. Jared gets up and walks into the hallway.
Jared: Sophia! Sophia are you ready yet!?
As Jared says this he catches Sophia at the top of the stairs. As Will, Lauren, Karen and the children walk out into the hallway, she begins to walk down the staircase. Looking like a princess she walks down the grand staircase with style and sophistication. Jared and Karen’s hearts melt, Lauren looks on with an disapproving and jealous look.
Sophia: How do I look?
Jared: As stunning as the day Max first brought you to see us…
Jared kisses her hand lightly. She takes her arm under his and escorts her into the lounge.
Jared: I thought we’d have some drinks among the family before we have the big bash…
Sophia: Sounds splendid…
Lauren: But we appear to be missing a vital part… the husband… maybe he’s realised that your not much cop after 15 years of marriage.
Sophia gives Lauren a scornful look.
Sophia: What did you just say!?
Lauren: Well you aren’t the model you was 15 years ago are you really Sophia? Everything’s starting to go south…if you know what I’m saying.
Sophia attempts to swing at Lauren. Karen stops her from doing so.
Karen: Sophia! Not infront of the children! Honestly… the pair of you need to stop this pointless bickering all the time…
Lauren gives Sophia a smug look, clearly the spoilt brat as always. Sophia points her finger at Lauren the sits down and takes downs a drink in one.
Sophia: She’s got a point tough hasn’t she…this isn’t the first time he’s stood me up like this…
Lauren: His shag must have taken up more time than expected
Jared: Lauren! We shan’t tell you again!
Karen: (To Jared under gritted teeth) I swear I’ll throttle Max when he gets back for this…
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INT. GENTLEMAN’S CLUB (2000)
Max is sitting down at a table, with a business college. The pair are relaxed with their jackets off and the top few buttons of their shirts undone: bottles of beers in their hands.
Women in skimpy bikinis are pole dancing on the stage infront of them. One of these women: Olivia Zitek is purposefully trying to catch Max’s eye. He cant keep his eyes of her.
Max: Well Laurence….I must admit this is a fantastic place to finalise a deal…
Laurence: Not the Ritz but…
Max: A bit of dirty smutt is good for the old sexual appetite… these birds are so up for it it’s untrue…
Laurence: And I’m sure you’re no hesitation to give it them…
Max: Well you know me Laurence, I’m a very generous gentlemen, hate to see women going without…I mean look at the **** on her…would be rude not to…
The two men laugh at this. Olivia moves closer up the stage to Max, purposely trying to show him her assets. Max gets a crisp £100 note out of wallet and places it in her bikini bottoms, smacking her backside in the process. The two men see this as a joke.
Olivia gives Max a seductive look and gestures that they leave the club, Max responds with a boyish grin on her face.
INT. BELLAMY MANSION (2000)
The party is in full swing. Sophia is standing alone, Max has yet to arrive. A tear starts to role down his face.
Jared: Hey Sophia, what’s all these tears for eh?
Sophia: That ******* son of yours! Shows how much this marriage means to him… why do I bother with him Jared!?
Jared: Because you Love him…and he loves you…
Sophia: Well he has a funny way of showing it!
Jared: Come on Sophia…no need to get over emotional… just give him a few more minutes…
Sophia: What’s the point Jared!? He had his chance and he’s bloody well gone and blown it!
Sophia storms out of the main hall. Jared has a concerned look on his face.
INTERCUT:
Sophia walks into her bedroom, totally demoralised. She throws her shoes onto the floor and sits down on her bed. Tears start to role down her face. She gets out her mobile phone from her handbag and dials Max’s number. The sound of his answer phone can be heard.
Max: Hey, you’ve reached Max Ashworth’s answer phone, I can’t take your call at the moment, but leave me a message and I’ll get back to you…
During this time Sophia has poured herself a drink and is downing it.
Sophia: Hey “Max” it’s your beloved wife… if you even remembered that you’ve got one…married for 15 years… on this date in fact! You *******! You couldn’t even turn up for our special day could you!? You know I’m lenient with you…I let you live your life and I live mine… I’ve said you can have your other women…on the exception that you stay with me… but for Christ’s sake Max if you can’t turn your floozy for our Wedding Anniversary! I thought I knew you Max…I thought I loved you… what a bloody fool eh!?
Sophia puts down the phone. She has finished her drink, in an emotional state she throws the glass at the wall, and continues to drink straight from the bottle, her mascara run down her face.
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INT. ASHWORTH HOTEL (2000)
Max is sitting on the bed in one of the luxury bedrooms at one of his family’s hotels. He is shirtless and is relaxed on the bed. He listens to his answer phone message from Sophia. He is looking slightly emotional. We get keep sharp flashbacks of Max and Sophia back in 1985 for their first time.
Olivia walks in from the ensuite bathroom, wearing only a skimpy thong. She stands infront of Max to get his attention, he continues listening to the message.
Olivia: You’re not gonna go all frigid on me now are you?
Max throws the phone on the floor, and gives her a seductive look.
Max: Frigid? I don’t even know what the word means..
The pair laugh as Olivia climbs onto the bed and pushes Max onto his back. The pair begin to kiss passionately.
Max: I think this could be the start of a very “interesting” relationship…
:eek: Naughty Max - and on their Wedding Anniversary too! Open marriage by the seems of it - it will be interesting to see the "connection" between Jared and Sophia, looks like the Ashworth's share a reputation as well as other things *winks*
JustJodi
08-08-2006, 23:27
very good stuff Bry... so are u giving us a summer script or are u gonna write both of them DS and TTW ??
I really like your characters in this new one :)
Message from Bry: Soap awards are now open for voting so getting vote for DS... I did!!!
diamond1
09-08-2006, 12:57
max is great so far a modern JR I can just see martin kemp playing this role he was born for it-devon sea's has got to be on tv one day or im not paying for my tv license:lol: .I like this mini series and something big is going to happen I can feel it
DaVeyWaVey
09-08-2006, 17:49
This is brilliant so far! I am gripped to this...Lauren is one girl not to be messed with! And how could Max cheat on his wedding anniversary?! Sophia should divorce him and not let him treat her like dirt....i have a feeling something might happen between Jared and Sophia though...:hmm:
Jada-GDR
09-08-2006, 18:32
i dont know how you do it bb... first class (should be) tv! lol :D
:eek: Max, that is a bit naughty. Poor sophia.
Bry this is fab and is definatly helping me cope with no devon seas (:( )
And people make sure you vote Devon seas.
Jada-GDR
17-08-2006, 20:19
are we going to see any more of this? *prays* lol :D
I should think we will as soon as Bry gets back from hols - he did promise before he went :D :D
Jada-GDR
18-08-2006, 12:57
oh right i didnt know he was on holiday. i didnt think it was like him to stop lol :D
Part Two - Family Fortunes
INT. ASHWORTH HOTEL ROOM (2001)
Max, and his new mistress Olivia are lying in bed, Max shirtless, Olivia in a revealing nighty. The pair are feeding each other strawberries, and lookign at each other seductivley. It is clear the room is filled with sexual chemistry between the pair.
Olivia: Can life get any better than this?
Max: I'm sure it could if we gave it a go...
Olivia: You know Max...these past few months...they have been amazing...
Max: Well I've never had any complaints in that department...
Olivia: No it's not just the sex...it's just being with you... you make me feel special.. like you know... fancy hotels, strawberries... the five star treatment...you make me feel like a princes... spoiled... loved...
Max runs his hand trough her air.
Max: Yeah well that's becuase you're my little princess...
Olivia: This is pure madness tough...I'm having an affair with a married man... what would your wife do if she found out?
Max: Nothing...she wouldn't dare...she know's what side her bread is buttered. We have our mutual agreement, she gets her fancy frocks and jewellry and I get to have my fun...however I see fit to have it...
Max gives Sophia a long and loving kiss.
Max gets up and parades around the room in his breifs.
Max: As much as I'd love to have a repeat performance of this morning...I need you to head off...I've got a meeting with the lawyer in a bit...
Olivia: And what am I supposed to do with myself?
Max: Treat yourself to some new underwear...and keep waiting for the next phonecall from me.
Max throws 200 pounds onto the bed and heads to the bathroom, a smug grin on his face.
EXT. BELAMMY HOUSE GROUNDS (2001)
Melissa Ashworth (Danielle Brent) is strolling around the grounds of Belammy House. She sits down beside a long lilly pond, and moves a lilly around in the water. Will walks down the steps and into the grounds, clearly disaproving of Melissa's prescence.
Will: I see you came after all then Melissa :rolleyes:
Melissa: Oh come on Will, you should know me after 4 years of marriage, I'm a woman that sticks to her word...
Will: More to the pity...you're not going to let this drop are you?
Melissa: Too damn right I'm not! No way are you going to fob me off with only 100 grand from this divorce Will!
Will: That's a resonable settlement Melissa!
Melissa: Well my lawyer seems to think otherwise...you alone have a few million stashed away in Swiss bank accounts...
Will shakes his head in disgust at Melissa's gold digging ways.
Melissa: You're a man of the law Will, you should know that I'm entitled to at least half of your assets, and more if I felt like being a bitch...
Will: Felt like... Melissa that's all you've ever been! You've done nothing to deserve a penny of my money!
Melissa: Apart from being married to a pafetic excuse for a man like you for four years! Yeah, so what I married into the money...but at least you could have been a real man...
Will: Well I'm sorry I'm not like Max! A sly and devious money grabber who mistreats his wife! All I ever did was love you Melissa, and what did I get in return!? For you to go having it off with my brother, in our bed! You're nothing but a dirty little slut!
Lauren: You tell her Will... it's the truth after all
Lauren walks down the staircase gracefully, having listened to the entire conversation between the former lovers. Lauren walks up close to Melissa and looks at her with a complete look of disgust on her face, looking down on her like she was a peice of dog ****.
Melissa: Typical Ashworths, can't have an argument without the whole family chipping in...
Lauren: If you think you're getting a penny from us, you've got another thing coming you gold digging cow...
Melissa: That's rich coming from a spoilt little brat who hasn't done a day's hard work in her life... flat on your back most of the time if i remember correctly.
Lauren: You cheaky bitch!
Lauren gives Melissa a slap around the face. Will breaks the potential fight between the pair.
Will: Pack it in will you! Christ! I've got enough to deal with, without you too at it hammer and tounges!
Melissa's phone rings, she steps away and answers it.
Melissa: Phillip darling... yes I will be with you soon...just tying up some loose ends with William... bloody fool wont agree on a reasonable settlement...
The camera cuts to Will and Lauren who are having quiet words with one another whilst Melissa is on the phone.
Will: Why have you had to get involved eh? It's between me and her sis...
Lauren: I know what you're like Will... a pushover... she'll feed you a few lines and you'll agree to give her half your money... and no way am I seeing that happen.
Will: Just leave it to me, yeah?
Melissa returns to the pair having come off the phone.
Melissa: We've had the banter Will, Phillip is getting irate waiting for me... just agree on what I want and I'll leave you and your little slut sister in peace...
Lauren: Phillip... Phillip Lawson is it?
Melissa: Yes..how did you know?
Lauren: Impressive in the bedroom department wouldn't you say...
Melissa: You what!?
Lauren: (Smug) Ohm hasn't he told you... we've been having it off for the past few months...on and off you know...mostly on tough...and boy he knows how to please a woman...
Melissa: You're lying...we due to be engadged... he wouldn't do that to me!
Lauren: No I'm not lying... I can even tell you about his birthmark...
Melissa explodes into a viciours rage, she runs up to Lauren and punches her, the pair begin a violent bitch fight, pulling and pushing each other all over the place. Will looks on in horror, scared to break up the two women.
Melissa: You bloody Ashworths have to ruin everything!
Lauren: Well I couldn't let you have him all to yourself, you're not worthy of such a man!
Melissa: You bitch!
Lauren throws Melissa into the lilly pond. Melissa is soking wet, Melissa tries to drag Lauren in, but Will pulls his sister back. Lauren smiles with satisfaction at the sight of Melissa in a wet and humiliated state.
Melissa: You cow! Just look at me! I'm a bloody state!
Lauren: I could have told you that five years ago darling!
Melissa steps out of the pond, dripping with water. She points her finger at the pair of them.
Melissa: I've had it with negogiating with you bloody Ashworths, I'm gonna sue you for every penny that you've got!
Lauren: You try bitch and I'll rip ya tits off! Now piss off right now! If I see you pafetic little face anywhere by me or Will again you'll end up with more than an expensive dry cleaning bill!
Melissa looks at the pair in disgust and storms off in a huff. Lauren laughs at loud at the confrontation. Will gives off a small smile.
Will: You shouldn't have done that you know, I could have handled it...
Lauren: Yeah well that's what I'm here for big bro... we might not always get on, but when it comes down to it, no one messes with my family...I'll always make sure of that.
INT. ASHWORTH HOTEL PENTHOUSE SUITE (2001)
Brendan Fairbanks, the Ashworth's family lawyer is sitting on a leather sofa in the luxurious penthouse suite at one of the Ashworth's hotels. The suite overlooks Torquey harbour and beach. Max Ashworth is at the cocktail bar pouring himself and Brendan a drink.
Brendan: So then Max...what can I do for you at such short notice...I got your call and well...thought for the worst...
Max: Oh it's nothing to worry about Brendan...It's just an oppurtunity has arisen, and the time is right for us to act on it....
Brendan: Us?
Max: Well you're a valued family friend...one of the few men my father trusts to deal with the families' fortunes...which is why I've invited you here today...
Brendan: I'm not quite following you Max?
Max opens his breifcase and hands Brendan a brochure of a super casino.
Max: As dad's no doubt informed you by now...he's about to sign a lucrative deal to open a franchise of super casinos... he has the money, he's all set to sign on the dotted line...
Brendan: And?
Max: Well I need you to help me get him to sign on a dotted line... make him thing he's signing for this super casino lark... but in reality...
Brendan: I don't like the sound of this Max...
Max: Let me finish Brendan... you see i'm getting tired of doing all the hard work for the family buisness... dad does very little but manages to rake in 60% of the overall profits...does that seem fair to you!?
Brendan: To be fair Max, it's his buisness...he's formed it from the beginning, it's all done to him...
Max: But without me it wouldn't still be here! I run everything...i do all the hard work...the meetings, the deals... the wining...the dining... and i get a miniscule amount... 40% is not good enough for me! I want the lot!
Brendan: You can't seriously be suggesting that I help you con your father out of all that he owns!?
Max: Oh come on Brendan... doesn't the money appeal to you!? 10% of the Ashworth Family...well soon to be Max Ashworth's estate and fortunes... you're a sensible man... you should know when to spot a good deal... 10%...that's got to be at least worth a few million... you could take an early retirement, live in the Caribean, you and your wife... what do you say?
Brendan: Max... I couldn't do it to your father...he's been a friend of mine since before you were born...it wouldn't be right...
Max: It's a man eat man world out there Brendan, if you don't use others they will use you! A few million to your name, i'm sure my dad's loyalty isn't worth that... just think it over yeah?
Brendan: Ok then... (downs drink in one) I'll have a think about it...
Max Excellent... excellent Brendan...can I get you another drink?
Max has a huge grin on his face.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2001)
Jared and Karen are sitting in the longue, looking over the architect plans of one of the planned super casinos.
Jared: And this one would be one of the smaller casinos... just outside of Goodrington Sands...
Karen: You know darling, I still have my doubts about this new venture...
Jared: There's nothing to worry about... have I ever let you down before?
Karen: No, but when you're asking to invest millions of our fortune into this...I don't even know if there's a need for these casinos
Jared: Oh course there is... I only ever provide services that are crying out to be given out...this is gauranteed to rake in the money for us...
Karen: But do you really need all of this money? I mean we have enough to do what we said...to retire to Spain... that's all that matters surely?
Jared: Just five more years Karen... this money isn't for our future, nor thr kids... but for our grand children... Abigail, Jonathon...and for Will and Lauren's when they have little ones... I can reire peacefully then, knowing why grandkids have been provided for.
Sophia storms into the room, dressed glamarously as usual. She looks distressed.
Karen: Sophia darling, are you okay!?
Sophia: No not really, Max was suppose to be taking me out for lunch at Newton Abbott, but he hasn't shown... have you heard from him at all?
Karen: No I can't say that we have love... I'm sure he'll be back soon to pick you up...
Brendadn knocks on the living room door and walks into the longue.
Sophia: Brendan darling... how are you?
Sophia and Brendan hug each other, clearly the family are found of their lawyer.
Brendan: The same as usual, tired, stressed and in need of a glass of whiskey.
Karen: Well we can see to the latter.
Karen gets up to pour him a drink.
Sophia: You don't happen to have seen my darling husband sniffing around Torbay this morning by any chance?
Brendan: As a matter of fact yes, I have just had a meeting at him at the hotel in Torquey..
Sophia: Oh hallejuah, we've located him...did he say where he was off to from there?
Brendan: Well a woman came into the room as i was leaving... i presume his next buisness meeting...
Sophia: Buisness meeting my eye! I know what that *******'s up to!
Sophia storms out of the room, and to her car.
Karen: Sophia! Don't do anything foolish!
The sound of Sophia's sports car speeding off can be heard. Jared shakes his head in disbeleif and gestures for Brendan to make himself at home.
Jared: So then Brendan what can we do for you?
Brendan: I need a word...with you both... you're not going to like it, but it's got to be said...
Karen hands Brendan his drink, and then sits down beside Jared, the pair of them looking concerned.
Brendad:... It's about Max...
INT. ASHWORTH HOTEL PENTHOUSE BEDROOM - NIGHT
The scene begins with Max and Olivia mid-romp, they are clearly enjoying themselves by the sounds they are making.
Max: You really are insatiable woman...
Olivia: I can't help it if I have needs...
Max: Well I'm not complaining
All of a sudden Sophia walks into the room, bold as brass. Max jumps off Olivia and covers himself up in the bed sheets.
Max: Sophia!? What the!?..How did you get in here!?
Sophia: When your husband has 40% shares in the hotel, the staff are more than happy to unlock a door for me!
Olivia: Erm, who the hell is she max!?
Olivia pulls up her knickers and puts on a skimpy dressing gown, embarassed at the scene that has come about.
Sophia: Sophia Llyod Ashworth...Max's wife...
Olivia: Jesus Christ!
Sophia: Look at the state of you...where did you pick up this trap of a dog darling?
Olivia: You're hardly fit to judge...mutton dressed as mutton...
Sophia: How niave of you... he had another girl yesterday...he'll have another tomorrow...you're just a cheap and easy one night stand... so don't think you're anything special sweetie...
Olivia: Shows what you know! We've been at it for months, and he said I'm the best he's ever had!
Sophia: You what!? Is she telling me the truth Max!?
Max: Hunny...you said you're fine with me having my own fun...
Sophia: One night stands Max! Not full on affairs with page 3 models!
Olivia: How dare you! I'm not a page 3 model!
Sophia: No of course not, even they have certain standards...
Olivia attempts to slap Sophia, but she grabs her arm and twists her. Olivia screams out in pain.
Sophia: If anyone's going to hand out slaps here, it will be me you cheap little slut!
Sophia lands a dry hard smack across Olivia's face, forcing her to land onto the bed. Max, who has put on his trousers, and his shirt, albeit undone walks up to Sophia.
Max: Look babe, forget about her... I'm sorry yeah?
Sophia lands a slap, equally as powerfiul to Max, however being Male he makes more of an issue of it.
Max: What the hell's that for!?
Sophia: For sleeping around with this common little street whore!
Olivia: Listen here lady, no one speaks to me like that!
Sophia: Now is that a fact!?
Sophia grabs Olivia by her extensions and drags her across the room, she opens the door and pulls off her nighty. She then pushes Olivia out into the coridoor and slams the door behind her.
Olivia, who is wearing only her knickers is left in the coridoor. A group of lads walk by and wolf whistle to her, eyeing up her breasts. She soon covers them and runs off down the coridoor, ashamed and humiliated as the lads laugh at her.
The scene returns to Sophia and Max in the bedroom. She paces the room, a look of disgust on her face.
Sophia: I'd have thought you'd have improved your standards... surely a regular fling is worthy of more than the penthouse suite...im suprised you havent brought the little slut her own apartment by now...
Max: Look Sophia babe... I thought you'd be okay with it...
Sophia: I may have said it to you Max, but i don't mean it! Christ what wife would have no issues with her husband sleeping around!? I said it ten years ago to save our marriage... but I thought you actually loved me... I thought you wouldn't actually go ahead and sleep with women just becuase I said you could!
Max: I do love you Sophia! You know that I do!
Sophia: Well you have a bloody funny way of showing it, bonking miss boobs of britain out there! You could have at least had the common cortesy of cheating on me with a more respectable woman...
Max: I'd say sorry again, but I have a feeling it'll go on death ears...
Sophia: I'm sick of hearing apologies from you... they have no meaning... becuase I know a week or two along the line, you'll be at it again, with not a care in the world...
Max: Please babe...I don't want to loose you...you know you're my world... the one woman...that really is for life....I love you so much...and there's no doubting that...
Sophia: It would serve you right if you did... but you're not getting rid of me that easily...
Sophia sits down beside Max and runs her hand trough his hair. She gives him a long and lasting kiss. Max sighs deeply.
Sophia: You might be a *******...but you know it turns me on... but seriously Max...you need to start treating me better... or one of these days you're going to regret it...
Max returns the favour by giving Sophia a kiss back.
Max: I have some good news for you babe... turns out we're going to end up with more money then we ever have before...
Sophia: How have you managed that then?
Max: Let's just say I'm taking what's righfully mine...then we can move on to better things than poxy Devon...and my useless family...
Sophia: That sounds devine darling...
The pair laugh together evily, a match made in heaven.
DaVeyWaVey
01-09-2006, 15:47
I loved the bitch fight between Lauren and Melissa! Go Lauren! :cheer:
I can't believe Max is going to con his father!! :eek: I wonder if Brendan will tell Jared and Karen!?!
I can't wait for more of this!
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - 2001
Jared, Karen, Will & Lauren are all sitting quietly in the longue, drinks in thier hands, obviously awaiting the arrival of Max and Sophia.
Soon after Max and Sophia walk into the room laughing and joking, they soon become quiet when they realise everyone is silent.
Max: Christ it's like a morgue in here, what's up?
Jared: We was all waiting for you to come back Max... have a suprise for you...
Max: Really? What kind of suprise...?
Jared: It's in that suitcase over there...
Max walks over to the suitcase, each of the family giving him dirty looks. Sophia cottons on that something bad is happening.
Sophia: What's going on eh? I've known you all long enough to know when there's a problem...
Jared: We had a visit from Brendan this afternoon...
Before Max opens the suitcase, he looks at Jared in horror, aware of what is going on.
Jared: Your darling husband asked him to help con me out of every last penny that I own..
Max: You what!? You must be joking!
Jared: You can save the bull****e Max! When it comes down to it I trust Brendan over you... you've always been a slimely crook...it didn't suprise me for a second when he told me...
Karen: (To Sophia) I suppose you was in on the act...
Sophia: No... of course I didn't...do you honestly think I'd condone such an act!?
Karen: Yes...actually I do... you two are both as bad as each other...
Max: Look dad... It wasn't real...it was a test you see... to see how trustwothy Brendan is...and well he's proved that he is... he sees good by the family...instead of running off with our money...
Jared: Save it Max... I've had enough of your lies... I knew you were a rotter...but I never thought you'd do this kind of thing to your own flesh and blood. If it's taught you all one thing...it's that family means everything...then you go and betray us all like this...
Max: Please....dad... It was for the good for the family...dad...
Jared: Don't call me that... you're no son of mine anymore...I want nothing to do with you ANYMORE!
Max: Mom...please make him see sense...I never meant to...it was just...
Karen: Don't expect me to defend you... it's a wikid trick you tried to play on us... I'm ashamed of you Maxwell...and you Sophia...
Max opens the case and out falls wods of change.
Karen: There's a million there... that should see you well to buy a house...far away from here... we've cleared your bank accounts... that's all you have....spend it wisely... if it was for your father you wouldn't have a penny, but I couldn't see you on the streets... now take it and get the hell out of my house!
Sophia: Jared! Please... give Max another chance... blood's thicker than water...so you always say...
Jared: In this case Sophia, I'm prepared to get rid... a life without Max in it can only be better... now pack your things, pick up the kids...and leave.
Max and Sophia leave the room. Will and Lauren look at each other, suprised by the reactions of their parents. Jared breaths heavily, Karen puts her arm around him to calm him down.
THE FINAL 2 PARTS WILL BE POSTED LATER THIS AFTERNOON
Jada-GDR
01-09-2006, 15:58
whoo its back ^_^ but is it not just olivia and max the first one you posted today? you keep saying sophia
DaVeyWaVey
01-09-2006, 16:08
So Brendan did grass on Max then!! I can't wait for the next two parts!
EXT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2001)
Max and Sophia are loading up the last of their bags into the 4x4. Jared looks on from the longue window. When Max goes to make eye contact Jared walks away.
Sophia: You've really gone and done it this time havent you!? How could you be so bloody stupid!
Max: I didn't hear you complaining when I told you about it earlier!
Sophia: Yeah well I thought you'd actually be able to pull it off without getting caught! I can't believe how much you've balls this all up!
Max: How was I to know Brendan would grass me up eh!?
Sophia: He's known your father for fifty bloody years Max! He actually has some morals unlike you!
Max: Just shut up and get in your car...
Sophia: Any ideas where we're off to!? Or hadn't you thought of that in your grand scheme to steal your father's assets!?
Max: Just follow the 4x4 okay!?
The pair get into their cars and attempt to leave the grounds. However Max's breaks soon come to a halt when Olivia walks trough the front entrance. Max and Sophia get out of their cars.
Sophia: For christ's sake, what does that jesabelle want?
Olivia: Max, I wan't a word...
Max: Just get lost with you!
Olivia: I deserve an explanation...and I'm not leaving until I get one...
Max walks over to Sophia, who is eyes and giving daggers to Olivia.
Max: Look? What should I do?
Sophia: Just feed her some lines..."It was good" blah blah and get on with it... I don't want Jared and Karen finding out what a fool you've made of me...
Max walks over to Olivia, she touches his torso but he moves her hand away.
Olivia: Max babe... why haven't you called me eh?
Max: It's over Olivia...
Olivia: What do you mean, it's over!? You can't just finish it with me!
Max: I can...and I am...
Olivia: (Heartbroken) But I'm your special little princess...
Max: You really haven't got a clue have you...Sophia was right.. you're nothing special... you were good for sex... I'll give you that... but that's all... you've served your purpose...good riddance to you.
Olivia spits on Max.
Olivia: You *******!
Max: Yeah I am... and I can live with that...now get the hell out of my way!
Max pushes Olivia aside as he gets back into his 4x4. Max speeds off, followed by Sophia. Olivia is left standing in the middle of the driveway humiliated. Jared comes out and sees her crying. He puts his arm around her and invites her inside for a drink.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2001)
Jared and Olivia are in Jared's office. He hands her a glass of wine. She downs it in one.
Olivia: I can't believe him! I thought he was different to the rest! He treated me so good for all that time...and then this!
Jared: I'm afraid my son has had much respect for women, he thinks he can trade them in like cars...
Olivia: Thank you for this drink... it's nice to know that some people in the world care for others...
Jared: I'm always here to help a damsel in distres...
Olivia: I thought me and him were solid... he promised he'd see good by me...make sure I got looked after, money, clothes...you know...
Jared takes out his chequebook, writes a cheque then hands it to her.
Jared: One grand... take it...get yourself sorted...
Olivia: A grand!? I can't take this off you! It's way too much...
Jared: Hey I can earn it back in under a minute... it's the least i can do to aplogise for my son's disgusting behaviour...
Olivia: If only Max were more like you...
Jared: Many people have said we're alike in many ways...
Olivia: Does that include in the bedroom department?
Jared is taken aback by this comment. Olivia walks up close to Jared and goes in for a kiss, but he pulls back.
Olivia: I'm sorry...I didn't mean too...look I'd best be off..
Jared grabs Olivia and pulls her towards him. He groups her breats and then passionatley kisses her. She undoes his tie as he lowers her onto the table. The pair begin to undress each other. All of a sudden the door opens and in walks Karen...
END OF PART TWO
no way!!! :eek::eek::eek: Sophia had nothing to do with this, why chuck her and the kids out too??
I want more Bry
DaVeyWaVey
01-09-2006, 17:45
Uh-oh!! Jared's gone and done it now!
Holy **** batman!!!! Karen is going to skin her alive.. Olivia has no morals. She just declared her undying love for Max and now she is getting it on with his dad.. £1000 is too much!!!! she must be a cheap ho!!
Chloe O'brien
01-09-2006, 21:42
you can't leave it there bryan we want a cat fight. Karen is so going to kick olivia's @$$
OMG Why did Jared kick Sophia out aswell - it was Max, not her!
I can't believe he's jumped into bed with Olivia though! Karen is going to go mad! Looks like its definitely a case of like father like son there!
Part Three - On The Edge
Previously...
Jared grabs Olivia and pulls her towards him. He groups her breats and then passionatley kisses her. She undoes his tie as he lowers her onto the table. The pair begin to undress each other. All of a sudden the door opens and in walks Karen...
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2001)
Karen has just walked in on Jared and Olivia who have been passiontaley kissing each other on the desk of Jared's office.
Jared: ****!
Jared immediatley gets up from the desk and away from Olivia. Olivia has a smug look on her face as she slowly gets up and pulls up her skirt. Karen, who is shaking with rage walks towards the pair.
Jared: Karen darling... I can explain... we were...
Karen: It's bloody obvious what you were doing! The question is why!? And how you had the bloody ordasity to do it under my roof!
Jared: Karen, let's not over react here...
Karen: Over react! I've caught my husband undressing some cheap little tart!
Olivia: What is it with all you Ashworth's calling me that!?
Karen: Maybe if you didn't offer your yourself around the whole family like your easy jesabelle then you might get some more bloody respect!
Olivia: You bitch!
Karen: At least I'm more of one than you'd ever be you marriage wrecking little whore!
Karen smacks Olivia around the face, causing her to fall back onto the desk. Karen runs over to her and pins her down by the arms. Olivia tries to move about but is screaming by the pressure that Karen puts on her arms.
Karen: I've had enough of women like you ruining perfectly good marraiges, it's about time you paid your price for what you are!
Olivia: Get off me, your hurting my arms!
Karen: Hurting them!? I'll bloody break them!
Jared: Karen for christ sake! Get a hold of yourself!
Jared grabs Karen and pulls her back from Olivia. She turns around and slaps Jared around the face so hard that he holds his face in pain for moments after. Karen points her finger at the pair.
Karen: Now the pair of thilthy little cheats, get the hell out of my house before I bloody throw you both out!
Karen storms out of the room in a rage. Jared and Olivia look at each other, lost of words, Jared looks at Olivia in a disproving way and then hurries out of the office.
go on Karen.. get your house and his millions.. cheating git
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2001)
Will is walking down the stairs as Jared and Karen cross the hallway, shouting at each other.
Jared: Karen!.... Karen!
Karen: Don't bother!
Will rolls his eyes and continues downstairs. He sees the study door open and Olivia inside, crying. Will approaches the room and knocks on the door. Olivia dries her eyes and looks at Will.
Will: Can I come in?
Olivia: It's not my house...so do what you want...
Will: I'm guessing you have something to do with their domestic?
Olivia: Give the boy a golden star
Olivia tries to laugh but continues to cry, Will walks up to her and puts his arm around her in support.
Olivia: Your mother...she caught me and your dad... you know...at it...
Will: Look I don't know the full story so I'm not going to start forming opinions...
Olivia: Just call me a slut, a whore... a tramp...everyone else seems to...
Will: I'm not like that...I judge people how I find them...not how others have... and to me you look like a young...emotional... vulernable woman...
Olivia: It's nice to see chivarly isn't dead...
Will gets up and heads to his father's drinks cabinet
Will: It looks like you could do with another drink...
Olivia: I think I've had enough already today...that's probably what's got me in to this situation
Will: Well one more wont make much difference...
Will hands her a drink and sits down beside her again.
Olivia: I hate the way I am...I fall for the wrong men, everytime..let them take advantage of me... use me...and throw me away like I meant nothing to them...
Will: Not all men are like that...
Olivia looks at Will, he gets a handerkcheif out of her pocket and whipes the running mascara from her face. She puts down her drink and holds his arm.
Olivia: Thank you...
The pair look into each other's eyes, Will moves in for a kiss, Olivia responds. The pair kiss each other tenderly as Will places his drink on the desk. The scene cuts to a long distance shot of the pair kissing trough the study door.
Oh my god. how many other male Ashworth are there for this woman to get through.. and Will how can you even think about been with the woman who causes trouble in your house???
EXT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2001)
Karen storms outside of the house and onto the gravelled driveway, she opens her car door and is about to step in. Jared runs outside shouting after her, he places his hands on the car door and pants heavily for breath.
Jared: Karen please...just listen to me...
Karen: I don't want to hear another word from you...
Karen puts the key into the igniton and starts up the engine. Jared removes the key and keeps it in his hand.
Jared: I wont let you leave until you've given me a chance to explain!
Karen: Leaving? (Laughs) I'm not leaving... you are. None of this is yours Jared... no way will you get MY house...or MY buisness...
Jared: OUR buisness!
Karen: No Jared! MY buiseness, you seem to forgotten that it's all mine. Ever since you was conned out of that land when you were 20, it was my money that saved your sorry ****! My families money! Every last penny of your empire... it's mine! Not your's!
Jared: But you promised me...what's your is mine... equal partners...
Karen: And you promised "to stay faithful to me for as long as we both shall live"...but that didn't stop you getting your hands on that dirty little mare in there did it!?
Jared looks at Karen, a look of bewilderment and panic about him.
Jared: But that's unfair Karen!
Karen: Face it Jared...life is a bitch...and you've just crossed her...
Karen grabs the keys back from Jared and starts up her engine. The sunroof comes up.
Karen: No more of the equal partners, I'm going to the bank now...to make sure you dont get another penny of my money... you've paid the price for cheating me Jared!
Karen speeds off in her sports car, out of the grounds of Bellamy house and into onto the peaceful Devon roads.
Jared: Damn you Karen! Get back here now!!!
Lauren has just come outside, she looks on at the scene, unaware of what has gone on.
Lauren: Dad? What's happened!?
Jared: That Olivia! She's ruined this family... I've got to catch up with your mother!
Jared runs to his car, starts the engine and speeds off in pursuit of Karen...
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2001)
Olivia and Will are lying in bed. Olivia's head is rest on Will's well toned torso. He is gently stroking her hair with his hand.
Will: What you thinking?
Olivia: That you're different to all the other men I've ever slept with...
Will: Different in a good way?
Olivia: Yes...
Will: You have me intriged now...
Olivia: You're just so kind...and sweet... and gentle... I don't deserve it...
Will: Yes you do, I'm choosey about my woman... I only go for special women... and you are special...
Olivia: You've only just meet me...
Will: I can tell this kind of things straight away... you're so beautiful, so innocent... I feel like I've known you a lifetime...
Olivia: Well maybe we can repeat this some time...
Will: I hope so...
The pair look longingly into each others eyes.
Olivia: You're ten times the man Max ever was...
Will: That's the first time I've ever been made to sound better than Max...
Olivia: I just can't get over how different you are to the rest of your family...money doesnt make your word go round...that's what I like about you...
Will: It never has...I never wnated it to...Max lived out of mom and dad's pocket... lived the high life...whereas me... I worked hard for my money, went trough Law school... got my degree...my own chambers... I am my own man...and that is what makes me different to them... they can have their egos and their wealth, but I don't have all that...
Olivia: And you're a better man for it...
Olivia gives Will a gentle kiss on the lips, she snuggles up to him and closes her eyes.
Will: (Smiles) Yes...I guess I am...
EXT. DEVON ROADS (2001)
Karen's Ferrari is speeding down the empty Devon Roads, with Jared's silver Jag in close pursuit. Karen notices Jared's car in her windscreen mirror and moves up and gear and accelerates her speed.
Jared loosens his tie, and whipes the sweat off his head. He looks agigated as he cruises fast down the roads in pursuit of his wife.
A matter of metres seperate the two cars, as the action cross cuts between both drivers, catching their facial expressions. Karen's phone rings, she answers it, it is Jared.
Jared: Just give up now Karen! There's no way I'm going to let you get away with this!
Karen: You undersestimate me Jared!
Karen looks over he shoulder to see how far Jared is behind her. All of a sudden she hears a loud beep of a horn, she turns around and sees that a coach is heading directly towards her, she screams and veers out sharply to the left. Her cars sppeds down a rough and wild hill, trough bushes and trees, she screams.
Jared sees the accident unfold as slams his breaks, as the coach speeds past. Jared gets out of the car and looks on as Karen's Ferrari speeds down the hill out of control.
Jared: Karen!
The action cuts to Karen's car, which has just crashed into a Tree. Karen's head is down on the car sterring wheel. Blood coming out of her ear. Her head is moving slightly as she stirs.
Jared: Karen! Stay there! I'm coming to save you!
Jared fights his way trough the large bushes and weeds to his wife. He slips over and slides down the muddy hill, twisting his arm on the way down.
Karen sees Jared coming towards her. She undoes her seatbelt and holds her head in pain. She opens the door and begins to run off towards the light, constanlty looking over her shoulder for Jared.
Jared, who is cursing in pain from his twisted arm. He manages to lift himself up and staggers in the direction that Karen is heading, screaming after.
Jared: Karen! Come back! Come on! Karen!
EXT. DEVON FOREST/CLIFFTOP (2001)
Jared is chasing after Karen, the pair of them battling their way trough overgrown bushes and weeds. Karen is beginning to breath heavily, in panic of Jared catching up with her.
Jared: Karen! Just wait will you!
Karen pushes her way trough the final bush, but trips over a tree root. She lands on her knees, half hanging off a cliff. A small cliff overlooking Torbay, below is a pile of jaged rocks, and the tide is beginning to come in.
Karen breaths heavily in panic, she gets up and is standing close to the edge. Jared makes it to the clifftop from the forest, he stands opposite Karen.
Jared: Look Karen! I'm not going to hurt you! You're safe! Okay!... Just move away from the cliff!
Karen steps away from the Cliff, looking down at the fall below, she continues to panic.
Karen: Please Jared...go away...don't hurt me...
Jared: Why would I hurt you!? I love you!
Karen: You've got a funny way of showing it! Chasing me to my death!
Jared: I just don't want you making any rash decisons! You can't cut me out of the family buisness like that!
Karen: Oh family buisness is it now? I thought it was just "yours"... dont you dare use the "family" to blackmail me... I'm not scared to cut you out of the buisness! It's no more than you deserve!
Jared: But I've worked so hard for all this Karen! 40 years of hard graft! Please...just reconsider!
Karen: You're not going to change my mind Jared! I've made my decisons... I want you out of my life... I want a divorce!
Jared: Now you're just being ridiculous Karen! You can't just throw away 40 years of marriage like this!
Jared gets closer to Karen, she steps backwarsds, nearer to the cliff edge, small peices rubble begins to fall from the cliff.
Karen: Like you give a toss about the marriage! If it was so important to you, you'd have bloody kept faithful to me! But that was too much to ask! Typical male!
Jared: Karen! Get away from that cliff edge! You're not doing anyone any favours here! Dont be such a fool.
Jared walks close to Karen, he grabs her arm to pull her towards him, but the heel of her shoe snaps, she is caught off balance and falls backwards, she begins to scream, Jared is holding on to her one arm, trying to pull her back up.
Karen: Jared! Help me! Please!
Jared begins to breath heavily. Panicking at the situation infront of him.
Jared: Not a penny eh!?...
Jared let's go of Karen, she screams as she falls off the cliff, plumiting to the bottom, landing on the jaged rocks.
Jared:...We'll see about that...
Jared walks up close to the cliff edge, and looks down cooly, at the sight of Karen lying on the jagged rocks. He straightens his tie, and walks away.
OH MY GOD!!! :eek::eek:
How can he do that, the evil *******... he better get what is coming to him and I don't mean the money
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2001)
Olivia and Will are alseep. Olivia stirs, and quietly gets out of bed. She looks on at Will sleeping with a smile. She puts on her clothes and kisses him goodbye, as Will stirs.
Will: You off babe?
Olivia: Yeah...figured I'd best evacuate the war zone before your parnets get back...
Will: You don't have to you know...
Olivia: It's best...I'll see you soon babes.
Olivia kisses Will and leaves the room. As Olivia is crossing the coridoor to go downstairs, she comes across Lauren, who has seen her leave Will's room.
Lauren: I suppose your "Olivia"?
Olivia: Look, I don't want no trouble..I'm leaving...
Lauren: Yeah, you'd better, and if you know what's best you'l not dare show your face around here again okay!?
Olivia: I will not be told to by no one, if I want to come here...then I will... bye for now..
Olivia walks down the stairs with a smug look on her face. An infuriated Lauren charges towards Will's room and storms in as he is getting out of bed, no clothes on.
Will: Lauren! Christ! Haven't you heard of knocking!
Lauren: Get some clothes on, I want a word!
Will grabs a dressing gown from the hook on the door and puts it on. He folds his arms and listens to what Lauren has to say.
Will: Well!?
Lauren: What was "she" doing your room just?
Will: Well I'd say that's kind of obvious...
Lauren grabs an empty champoagne bottle and throws it at the wall, narrowly missing Will.
Will: Jesus Christ!
Lauren: Dont patronise me Will!
Will: What is your problem!?
Lauren: My problem is that gold digging cow! She's already ruined two good marraiges in this family! I don't want to see her taking advantage of you aswell!
Will: She isn't taking advantage of me! She isn't like that!... She's a good hearted woman!
Lauren: (Laughs to self) I see she's already got you under her spell. For Christ's sake Will, you're such a bloody push over, why are you so blind to see it!?
Will: Who I sleep with is nothing to do with you, let me make my own choices and decisons!
Lauren: When it's affecting my family it has EVERYTHING to do with me...I'm warning you Will, if I see you around her again there will be Hell to pay!
With this strong words Lauren exits the room, leaving Will to dwell on the words that his sister has just given him.
EXT. DEVON FOREST/CLIFFTOP (2001)
Jared rushes away from the scene of the crime, having pushed Karen down onto the jagged rocks. He rushes back to her car and runs his hand trough his hair as he tries to formulate a plan.
He gets into her car and starts up the engine, after a few failed attempts, he puts his foot down and speeds the car trough the forest, as the bay comes into sight he slams the breaks and turns off the engine.
Jared gets out of the car. He takes off his jacket and throws it onto the backseats of the car. He rolls up his sleeves and breaths heavily. He then gets behind the car and begins to push it.
After a lot of effort the car begins to move, until it has fell off the cliff. The car splashes into the water with great intesnity, Jared watches as the car goes underwater.
Jared then makes his way down the hidden pathway to the beach at the bottom of the cliff. The tide has begin to come in, so he carefully walks across the rocks to avoid getting wet. He walks over to Karen's motionless body.
He gets down on his knees and holds her body in his hands. He begins to cry to himself, as he kisses his wife on the lips.
Jared: I'm sorry Karen...but it was the only way... you have to understand...it was the only way...
Jared takes the wedding ring off her finger and puts it in his pocket.
Jared: Goodbye my sweet...
Jared kisses her once more, and steps away from the body. He walks off down the beach, crying as he goes.
We see a close up of Karen's face. One of her eyelids opens slightly, she smiles to herself in satisfaction, then closes her eyes once more...
END OF PART 3
No Way... go Karen.. get him back for what he has done to you
:eek: OMG Is Karen still alive!!?? Holy .....
Olivia needs sorting out - and Will needs a slap too. Shes one slapper alright and he is soooo gullible. She'll take your money Will
Caught upand OH MY GOD us all i can say. SAo she is alive - well that is good. My god jared is a piece of work. And Olivia :rolleyes: Money grabbing cow who has had every male in that family! More more more
DaVeyWaVey
08-09-2006, 21:35
Oh my god!! What a brilliant Part 3!! I can't believe Jared pushed Karen off the cliff, he is so evil! I never expected the end either...is Karen really still alive?! Can't wait to read more!
Chloe O'brien
08-09-2006, 21:43
Oh jared is so busted I hope she takes him for every penny he's got and leaves him and his little scrubber Olivia on the streets
PART FOUR - A MARRAIGE OF CONVINIANCE?
EXT. DEVON FOREST/CLIFFTOP (2002)
The viewers see a series of short and sharp flashbacks of the events at the clifftop between Jared and Karen.
Jared: Karen! Get away from that cliff edge! You're not doing anyone any favours here! Dont be such a fool.
Jared walks close to Karen, he grabs her arm to pull her towards him, but the heel of her shoe snaps, she is caught off balance and falls backwards, she begins to scream, Jared is holding on to her one arm, trying to pull her back up.
Karen: Jared! Help me! Please!
Jared begins to breath heavily. Panicking at the situation infront of him.
Jared: Not a penny eh!?...
Jared let's go of Karen, she screams as she falls off the cliff, plumiting to the bottom, landing on the jaged rocks.
Jared:...We'll see about that...
After a lot of effort the car begins to move, until it has fell off the cliff. The car splashes into the water with great intesnity, Jared watches as the car goes underwater.
He gets down on his knees and holds her body in his hands. He begins to cry to himself, as he kisses his wife on the lips.
Jared: I'm sorry Karen...but it was the only way... you have to understand...it was the only way...
Jared takes the wedding ring off her finger and puts it in his pocket.
Jared: Goodbye my sweet...
Jared is standing on the exact spot where Karen was pushed, a year on. All is silent; then all of a sudden someone puts their hand on Jared's shoulder.
Jared: Oh my god!...
Jared jumps out of his skin and turns around to see who it is.
Jared: ... Olivia... you scared the life out of me.
Olivia is standing beside Jared, as usual she is dressed in a glamrous dress.
Olivia: I thought I'd come and see where you'd got to... we're all worried about you, you know..
Jared: Yeah well I needed some time alone, do some thinking, you know?
Olivia: Granted...it's a year since you know... the police found the car... but this wont do you any good threating over it...
Jared: I was married to her for 40 years Olivia! The woman I loved... she disapears... and they cant even find a body! Do you know what that is like!? Not being able to bury him! Not fully knowing if she's still out there somewhere...
Olivia: I'm not denying that you loved the woman, that's kind of obvious... but reliving it everday of your life isn't healthy Jared... you need to move on...
Jared: It isn't easy tough Olivia, so many things remind me of her... smells of her perfume, her favourite songs played on the radio...and the kids... the biggest memory of all, it's just so hard...
Olivia wraps her arms around Jared in her arms, he starts to sob.
Jared: I miss her Olivia! I miss her so much!
Olivia: Time is a great healer Jared... you'll something...or someone to help you move on...
Jared: Like who!?
Olivia: I've always felt guilty about what happened, as it was a result of you and me... but I've stuck around for a reason... becuase you are a good man Jared... a caring man... I want to help you get trough this... I know if we work hard you will become the man you once was...
Jared: Thank you Olivia, I don't know how lucky I am sometimes...
Olivia: No... I'm the lucky one...to have a man like you in my life...
Jared steps away from Olivia, he looks into her eyes and moves in for a kiss, Olivia responds and the pair kiss tenderly. Jared then holds her in his arms, he rests his head on her shoulder. Olivia smiles to herself in satisfaction.
Hang on.. it is a year later and I assume Olivia is still with Will so she is cheating on him with his dad!!! :eek::eek: still a nasty ho!!
INT. DARMOUTH RESTAURAUNT - (2002)
Jared and Olivia are seated in a five star restuaunt, the view looks out onto Darmouth harbour. Their table is light up by candlelight as they finish off their deserts.
Olivia: This has been a wonderful evening Jared...
Jared: No more than you deserve, it's the least I could do to thank you...
Olivia: I'm not use to all this tough, special treatment and luxuries like Lobster and all this...
Jared: Yes well hopefully that will all change now... you had best get used to it... because...well I see you as part of the family now...
Olivia: That's really touching Jared... not many people have said nice things like that to me in my lifetime...
Jared: Admitedly you have had a tough life by the sounds of it, but now you don't have to worry about that... you're part of the Ashworths now... i know Lauren doesnt exactly approve...I suppose she doesnt like to think of anyone replacing her mother...
Olivia: I wouldn't want to... I know how strong the love you had for Karen was... me and you... we have just helped each other trough difficult times... I couldn't even come close to Karen...
Jared: Don't undersell yourself... you remind me so much of Karen... and even you can't deny their is an attraction there between us...
Olivia looks down at her plate, unable to make eye contact with Jared.
Jared: Loosing Karen has made me realise that life is short... I'm not getting any younger and I would like to think that what time I had left...I could spend with my family... and you, Olivia... I've fallen in love with you...
Olivia: Jared...I'm flattered but...
Jared: No let me finish, you may think this is a rash decison, seen as we've only known each other a year, but I feel as tough I've known you a lifetime and don't want to waste anymore time... I brought you here tonight for a reason...
Olivia: Where is this heading Jared?
Jared gets up from his seat, and slowly gets down on one knee, he gets out a small box from his pocket and opens it to show a large and obviously expensive engadment ring.
Jared: Olivia Zitec...will you marry me?
Olivia looks at Jared in absoulte amazement. Jared looks in to her eyes and awaits her answer...
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2002)
Lauren and Will are in the longue, have a post meal drink. Will is relaxed on the sofa, but Lauren is clearly agrivated.
Lauren: I can't belive he's taken his tart to Dartmouth for the evening! She gets a five star meal and we merely get a three course cooked by the maid... I sometimes wonder if dad has got his priorites right...
Will: He's a grown man Lauren... let him make his own decisons
Lauren: You know I don't undertsand how you can be so calm about all this...
Will: About all what?
Lauren: Dad and her...
Will: Why would I be bothered?
Lauren: Dont treat me like a fool Will, I know that you and her are still seeing each other...
Will: If we are or aren't that has nothing to do with you! I thought you'd have dropped this ages ago!
Lauren: She's dating two men in the same family Will! Are you happy to share her with your father!?
Will: Her and dad... they aren't like that... she's just helped him...you know...get over mom... she promised me that's all it is...
Lauren: Yes well you and me both know that dad thinks theres more to it than that...
Will: Look if it makes him happy and gets him back to his old self that is fine by me... but me and Olivia we are the real deal... she'd never cheat on me with him... they are just good friends, that's all...
Lauren: You know, it makes me feel violently sick whenever we talk about her! You and dad... what the HELL do you see in her!? She is a gold digging little tramp...
Will: Lauren! That is the woman that I love that you're talking about!
Lauren: Love!? You don't even know what the word means, you said you loved Melissa, and look where that got you! A messy divorce settlement with her taking loads of our families money! Can't you and dad see I'm doing it for your best intrests!?
Will: If you had your way you'd have us both single, and in bed by nine o clock with a cup of coco! Jesus Christs Lauren, when will you learn that you dont rule us! Let us do what we want!
Lauren: Do you know what!? Do what the hell you like! I'm like of the men in this family thinking with their dicks instead of their brains!
Lauren storms out of the room, Will shakes his head in disaproval and downs his drink in one.
EXT/INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2002)
Jared's car pulls up on the driveway. Jared and Olivia get out of the car with childish grins on their faces.
Jared: I can't wait to tell them!
Olivia: I'm nervous...
Jared: So am I!
Olivia: Yeah well you haven't got anything to worry about, I'm the one that will get the abuse when you announce it...
Jared: I can't believe you said yes... you've made me so happy Olivia!
Olivia: Well as you say, life's too short... and I could be very short once Lauren finds out...
Jared: She wouldn't dare do anything, come on... let's do it.
Jared and Olivia hold hands as they enter the house.
Jared: We're back...
Will gets up from his seat and walks towards them.
Jared: Lauren! Can you come downstairs please!?
Lauren: No!
Jared: Now!
Jared and Olivia enter the lounge.
Will: Had a good evening?
Olivia: Yes it's been very...erm...eventful...
Will: Really? Why?... What's happened?
Jared: I'll wait until your sister get's down here.
Will tries to make eye contact with Olivia to see what's up but she looks away. Lauren walks into the room, clearly annoyed at having been asked downstairs.
Lauren: You've finally decided to come back then...
Jared: Me and Olivia have an anouncemnet to make to the pair of you...
Richard holds out Olivia's hand and shows her engadment ring.
Jared: We're getting married!
Jared has a look of complete hapiness on his face. Will looks at the pair shocked and heartbroken, Lauren is livid...
HOW WILL LAUREN AND WILL REACT? MORE TONIGHT...
god that olivia is some trollop.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2002)
Jared: Me and Olivia have an anouncemnet to make to the pair of you...
Richard holds out Olivia's hand and shows her engadment ring.
Jared: We're getting married!
Jared has a look of complete hapiness on his face. Will looks at the pair shocked and heartbroken, Lauren is livid...
Lauren: You what!?
Jared: I know it's a bit of a shock, but...
Lauren: No! No way! This CAN NOT be happening!
Olivia: (To Jared) I told you this would happen.
Lauren: Too dman right it would bitch! How Dare you even think you could marry my dad!
Will brushes his hand trough his hair in distress and starts to head out of the room.
Olivia: Will, wait...
Will: I can't believe you both have done this... I thought you were just friends....
Jared: Oh come on son, please me happy for us...
Will: Happy for you!? Happy for you!? How the bloody hell do you expect me to be happy for you! You both make me sick to the bone!
Will storms out of the room, Olivia tries to run off to get him back.
Olivia: Will, come back!
Lauren grabs hold of Olivi and throws her back into the room. She points her finger at her.
Lauren: You, are going no where bitch!
Jared: Lauren!
Lauren: No dad! This coniving little cow is playing you for a bloody fool! And I ent having it!
Olivia: I don't know what you're on about Lauren...
Olivia begins to breath heavily in a fake panic, all an act for Jared. Lauren's eyes light up in pure menance. She grabs Olivia's hair and pulls it hard.
Lauren: Now listen up you cheap little ho! and listen good... I'm gonna rip your bleding hair out root by root if you dont pack your bags and get the hell out of our lives for good! Do you understand me!?
Jared: Lauren get the hell off her!
Olivia kicks Lauren in between the legs, as Lauren buckles forwards Olivia pushes her forwards. Lauren crahses into the drinks cabinet, sending glasses and bottles flying to the floor.
Jared steps back in shock, scared to intervene. Olivia screams as she charges towards Lauren. Olivia gives Lauren a hard slap around the face. Lauren returns an eually powerful slap. Olivia grabs hold of Lauren, and swings her into the drinks cabinet. Lauren grabs a broken wine glass and slashes it around Olivia's face.
Olivia screams as the blood gashes from her next and chin. She steps back and looks into a mirror at the damage that has been caused.
Olivia: What the hell have you done to me you pycho bitch!
Lauren: That... is just for starters!
Lauren attempts to run over to Olivia but Jared grabs her and holds her tightly.
Jared: Enough is enough Lauren! I will not have any more of this hatred and violence in this house!
Lauren: And i wont have you two get married, I'd rather burn in hell than watch that gold digging witch get her hands on our money!
Olivia: I'd best get the fire extinguisher then Lauren... becuase I love your father...and no matter what you do or say... we WILL get married.
Lauren breaths heavily in rage, but Olivia just smiles at her smugly.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2002)
Morning light is shining trough the windows. Olivia stirs. The sound of Jared and Lauren arguing downstairs can be heard.
Olivia rubs her eyes and then gets up, she seats down by her vanity table and stares into the mirror, looking at the stiches along her neck. She flinches in pain as she touches them.
Will: See they sorted you out then...
Olivia turns around, Will has entered the bedroom, he sits down on the side of her bed.
Olivia: Look Will I could do without another argument, I've had enough with Lauren...
Will: That's good, becuase I didn't come here for one...
Olivia: Well did you come for then? To lecture me? To look at the freakshow with scars all down her neck?
Will: (Softly) No... to talk.
Olivia: Right what about? The weather? The economy? Politics?
Will: You know what about...
Olivia: I'm not going to change my mind Will... you should know me by now...
Will: Yes I do... but I think I deserve an explanation, dont you? I thought you and me...were you know the real deal...
Olivia laughs to self as she caresses her scar.
Will: I mean I had no idea you and dad were...you know...at it... you promised me...
Olivia: Didn't you mother either teach you not to listen to a word women tell you?
Will: I'm an Ashworth... parenting classes went out the window...look Olivia, I dont know why you are marrying dad...I'm sure you have your reasons... but I know you love me... the things you said to me...the way you was...I know that I'm the one you really love.
Olivia: Is that a fact?
Will: We are the best babe...you know that...your telling me that dad is better for you than me!?... Yeah he might have more money...but i know that doesnt matter to you...christ Olivia...just please...think this over...
Olivia: I did think it over... and I said yes to your father... do you think I didn't take a moment to think about us? Yes it was good...but what me and your father has is different...
A tear rolls down Will's eye as he speaks to her.
Will: But I love you Liv'... I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you...please...
Olivia: I'm sorry Will.. but you've got to move on with your life... I just don't love you...
Will: I know that isn't the truth! You love me! I know that! Liv'!
Olivia: I'm sorry Will...
Will leaves the room. Olivia looks over her shoulder, then sits back down at the table. She closes her eyes and takes a deep sigh. She then starts to cry.
END OF PART 4
DaVeyWaVey
14-09-2006, 17:36
A brilliant part..can't believe Olivia and Jared had the cheek to announce they were getting married in front of Will...Will thought Olivia loved him!! It must be really hard for him.
I loved the fight between Lauren and Olivia, brilliant stuff! I think Olivia does want Will as she started to cry at the end, not sure though. I definetly think she is using Jared though!
I am sure Olivia does love Will but she loves her money more and that is what Jared can give her that Will can't...
Part 5: Money Cant Buy Me Love
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - 2002
Olivia is standing on a stole in the living room, whilst a dressmaker is altering her wedding dress, it is large and ivory, with a green leaf embroidery.
Dressmaker: I think that's about right now...
Olivia: Thanks so much Lisa...I'll give you a call in the week to talk about payment...
Dressmaker: Oh right, you look a picture, I'll see you in the week
The dressmaker walks out of the room. Will walks into the room and folds his arms.
Will: So... you're going trough with this wedding then...
Olivia: Looks that way doesnt it... (jokes) the price Jared's paid for this dress I dare not jilt him now
Will: You can always put a stop to it... even at the last minute... if you don't your with him for life...
Olivia: That's the idea of marriage Will...I want to spend the rest of my life with him....
Will: I know that's not true!
Olivia: Excuse me!?
Will: You don't love him... you never have... what's the point in pretending Olivia...it's me you want...
Olivia: Things have changed Will...it was fun...more than fun...special... you were really nice with me...
Will: But?
Olivia: I don't really go for "nice" people..
Will: You've just never been used to them... but you deserve them... someone nice...a happy future... Olivia you and me...we'd be so happy together...I know you're heart is not in it with dad!
Olivia steps down from the stole and touches Will's cheak tenderly.
Olivia: I'm sorry Will...but I've made my decison...
Olivia moves her hand away and walks off. Will starts to burst into tears once she has left the room. Lauren, who is seated in the kitchen sees this in furry.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2002)
Olivia is in her bedroom, folding away her wedding dress into a presentation box. Lauren walks into the room, a look of disgust on her face.
Lauren: Suprised they found a dress that would fit you...
Olivia: Lauren... my step daughter to be... what brings you hear?
Lauren: Give you some perverse kick does it?
Olivia: Pardon?
Lauren: To tell Will you love him.. then go off and marry his father... you've reduced him to tears...
Olivia: He'll get over it... look I feel guilty for doing it...but I love your father...
Lauren: Bollocks do you... he's twice your age...
Olivia: Age isn't everything...
Lauren: No but money is...for you anyways...you only want me dad for his money...and no way am I going to let you do that...not in a million years...
Olivia laughs to herself and walks towards Lauren.
Olivia: I am getting really fed up this you know... why does it really conern you so much? Dont like the idea that someone will be taking the attention away from daddy's little princess?
Lauren: You're pathetic!
Olivia: And your a spoilt little brat...I'll let you into a little secret Lauren...you're absolutely right... I'm only marrying him for the money... but do you know the great thing... it's the fact that if you told him that... he wouldn't believe you... you see he's so besotted with me who wouldnt believe that I could do or say such a thing... face it Lauren... I WILL marry him... and you cant stop me...
Olivia gives Lauren a smug grin. Lauren grinds her teeth and gives her an evil stare.
DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 14:29
I wonder if Olivia will go through with the wedding with Jared...:hmm: Poor Will! I think he really does love Olivia. :(
DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 14:31
Omg! Olivia is marrying Jared for his money!! :eek: Quick Lauren! Do something! Don't let Jared marry Olivia!
Oh, gawd - will Lauren and Will be able to stop the wedding?! Shes only in it for the money and has admitted it - the wedding has to be stopped!!!
INT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Oldway Mansion - A large statley home and grounds owened by Torbay Council. This is where the majority of cival marriage ceremonies are taken in the Paignton area of Devon.
Jared, Oliva and a small number of guests are in the room, ready to start the ceremony. Lauren is at the back at the room, arms folded giving the pair disgusted looks. Will isn't present.
Registrar: Ladies and gentlemen we are gathered here today for the marriage of Jared Ashworth and Olivia Zitec.
Jared looks at Olivia, holds her hand and smiles, clearly in love with her.
Registrar: First I must ask that if anyone here knows of any lawful impediment to this marriage, then they should declare it now.
The doors open and Will storms in, Jared and Olivia look shocked, as they stare at Will.
Will: Stop the wedding! I'm sorry but I can't let you do this!
Jared: Will! Don't be a fool! She's not after my money! She's not here to con me! She loves me!
Will: No she doesnt dad... it's me she loves... and I love her...
Jared looks at Will speechless. Olivia takes a deep breath in fear of Jared's reaction...
Whats the betting that Jared won't believe Will, and Will will end up broken and Jared and Olivia will marry anyway - I bet they do :angry:
DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 14:51
This is getting interesting...i wonder if Olivia reveals she is in fact in love with Will and they end up getting married instead! I doubt it though lol.
I bet Jared will believe Olivia over Will.
INT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Will walks into the room, after his sudden revealation. Jared looks at the pair in shock and confusion.
Jared: What did you say!?
Will: I hate to tell you dad... but we are both in love...and it's not fair on you or us if we let this marraige go ahead...
Jared: Don't be so stupid! She doesnt love you! It's me she loves!
Will: That isn't true tough Dad...
Jared: But...but...you haven't even...
Will: Yes we have dad...long before you and her were "together"...
Olivia tries to touch Jared's hands but he backs away in disgust...
Jared: You've been having an affair!?
Will: No dad... becuase we were together before you and her even started seeing each other...
Jared: (To Olivia) Is this true!?
Olivia: Jared...
Jared: (Outraged) IS IT TRUE!?
Olivia: Yes.... but it was over when I started seeing you baby...I swear to you... I have never loved him... he's deluded...
Will: I know you Olivia... you and him aren't real... I saw the real you when we were together...you were yourself, so happy...so content...
Olivia: It was sex Will, that's all! You were nothing more than that to me! Love you...I wouldn't even go as far to say I liked you...what me and your father has is genuine! And by trying to ruin this...then you can't really "love" me that much can you!?
Will: (Stunned) But...
Jared: She's told you how it is Will, now I suggest you get the hell out of this wedding room now, before you cause any more upset! I can't believe you could do this to me, I thought you were my son..
Olivia and Jared holds hands and smile to each other relived as Will is starting to leave the room. Lauren unfolds her arms and walks towards the pair with an evil grin on her face.
Lauren: Child one has bent slapped on the wrists and sent to the naught corner... but you've still got me to deal with...and I can assure you I have concrete evidence to prove she doesnt love you dad...
Jared stares at Lauren, unaware of what she has planned. An anxious Olivia gulps and stares at Lauren in shock....
DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 15:02
Omg! I wonder what Lauren is going to do!
INT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Lauren walks up to the pair swinging her designer handbag as she goes. Will shakes his head and leaves the room. Jared steps towards her, hands on his hips in furry.
Jared: You two disgust me... trying to break up this marriage before it's started...Olivia deserves more respect than this...
Jared stares Olivia in the face.
Jared: I'm so sorry for this darling...
Olivia: You have nothing to be sorry for, it's these two that should be apologising...
Lauren: I'd save the apologies until you've heard this dad...
Lauren rumages trough her hand bag
Jared: Heard what?
Olivia: (Nervous) What ever it is...I didn't say it...
Lauren pulls out a dictaphone from her handbag.
Lauren: The age old trick...a taped confession... I never thought it would work for a second... but then I realised she's more dumb than she appears to be at first glance... it was like taking Candy from a baby...
A close up of Lauren's finger, which manicured nails can be seen as she presses play on the dictaphone. The message replays a snippet of Olivia's conversation with Lauren.
Olivia: I'll let you into a little secret Lauren...you're absolutely right... I'm only marrying him for the money... but do you know the great thing... it's the fact that if you told him that... he wouldn't believe you... you see he's so besotted with me who wouldnt believe that I could do or say such a thing... face it Lauren... I WILL marry him... and you cant stop me...
Lauren: I think the only aplogies that are needed here are to me dad...for not believing when I've told you about this gold digging little bitch!
Jared turns to face Olivia in absolute disgust.
Jared: How DARE you!
Olivia: I swear to you Jared I never said that...with the right money you can get these things forged... you check that tape out...it isnt me baby!!
Jared: Your feelings for me might not have been genuine, but mine were...to think I thought you could replace Karen...I know you inside out Olivia... and I know when you're lying to me...
Olivia: I'm so sorry Jared...
Jared slaps Olivia hard around the face. The congregation and registrar are shocked at Jared's behaviour.
Registrar: You can't just hit a lady like that!
Jared: She's not lady, she's a dirty little slut! And I swear to god Olivia if you dont get out of my sight in the next five seconds I will snap every bone in your god forsaken body!
Olivia: Jared, I'm sorry...please forgive me...
Jared: LEAVE! NOW!
Lauren stands on the spot, arms folded, a sucessful grin on her face. Olivia walks by, mascara running down her face. She spits in Lauren's face.
Olivia: You spiteful little bitch!
Lauren: You just remember that Olivia, no one dares mess with my family and get away with it...
Olivia walks out of the room, the congregation staring at her.
DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 15:45
Lauren taped what Olivia was saying! :eek: Brilliant! Lauren was definetly one step ahead, i am so glad she stopped Jared making the biggest mistake of his life!
EXT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Will is sitting in his car, rock music on at full blast. Olivia steps outside and walks towards his car. She bangs on the window but he refuses to answer. She continues to bang until he winds the window down, a look of frustration on his face.
Will: What!?
Olivia: He's ended it...
Will: Good
Olivia: Me and your father, over...
Will: Couldn't have happened to a nicer pair.
Olivia: Ok Will I'm sorry for what I said... you know I didn't mean it...
Will: Oh you meant it alright... "I wouldn't even go as far to say I liked you"... you said it less than five minutes ago!
Olivia: I've been confused Will, I never knew what I wanted... your father proposed...it seemed the right thing at the time, but it's been tearing my heart ever since...to go with him or you... I didn't want to hurt Jared...after all he's been so good to him... but it's you I love you Will...
Will doesnt respond to this.
Olivia: I said I love you Will...
Will: If you loved me you wouldnt have dumped me for my father...if you loved me you wouldn't have said the things you said...you don't know the meaning of the word..
Olivia: I do Will, you have to believe me baby... I was blinded by Jared's money..I'd never had that much in my life... but then I realised that money can't buy you what's most important...it can't buy you love...
Will: Do you know what Olivia? I don't care anymore...
Olivia's heart sinks as Will begins to reject her.
Will: I've taken about as much **** as I can from you... you're a liar and a cheat... not just to me but to my whole family...
Olivia: But Will...you love me...you said as much... and I love you!
Will: My father rejected me in there... said I'm no son of his... and that's all becuase of you... yeah Olivia I have feelings for you... but they dont even compare to that what I have for my family...you see Olivia, with me family will always come first...now please...just go away...
Olivia: (Quietly) But I love you...
As rain starts to beat down on Olivia, Winds winds the window up, she cries out.
Olivia: Will! Will! Please dont do this to me! Please!!!
Will raises the volume of his music, and cries to himself. As Olivia walks away he wipes his eyes and looks at Jared standing at the entrance to Oldway Mansion, gesturing for his son to come to him...
DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 15:53
I am so glad Will has rejected Olivia...will she be out of the Ashworths lives for good though?! Will Will manage to forgive Jared?! I can't wait to find out how this turns out!
INT. OLDWAY MANSION - (2002)
Will walks into Oldway Mansion, dripping wet from the rain outside. Jared takes off his jacket and wraps Will in it. Lauren hugs her brother who cries in her arms.
Lauren: Don't worry Will, it's all over now.. we haven't got to see her ever again...
Will: I loved her Lauren...I loved her so much...
Lauren: She didn't deserve it Will, there's much better woman for you out there....
Will: It feels like my heart has been torn apart... I hate her for what she's done to me!
Jared: To us...don't forget she's cheated us both...today was meant to be my wedding day....
Lauren: Yeah well, thanks to us we managed to convince you...
Jared: I'm sorry I didn't listend to you sooner, she pulled the wool right over my eyes...
Lauren: It's a bit too late dad...I wont forget this in a hurry...
Jared: Look Lauren...we are strong and together becuase we are a family...there is no point arguing between ourselves...
Lauren: Never a truer word spoken dad...
Jared walks up to Will and touches him on the shoulder.
Jared: Come on son, I don't want us to fall out over this... she's in the past now, we need to concentrate on the future..okay?
Will dries away his tears and hugs his father. The camera zooms out, and the cuts to Olivia outside in the pouring rain. A black cab has just pulled up.
Driver: Miss Zitec?
Olivia: Yeah...
She stares at Will and Jared hugging each other, and whipes away her tears. She strokes her stomach.
Oliva: Looks like it's just you and me now bump...
Olivia steps into the cab, and closes the door behind her.
Driver: Where you off to darlin'?
Olivia: Anywhere... anywhere far from here...
As the Cab pulls off Olivia looks once more at the Jared and Will, the two potential fathers of her child...
END OF PART 5
Duh duh daaaaa
Glad she didn't marry Jared, but shes gonna be back for sure if the child she is carrying is one of theirs.
Brilliant stuff Bry
DaVeyWaVey
16-09-2006, 19:31
Olivia is bound to return if she's pregnant with Jared or Will's child...i wonder who the father is though?! Great stuff, please reveal who the father is soon. :D
OMG :eek::eek: that had everything!!! I am so glad Jared saw her for what she is.. Who is the daddy??? Will? Jared? or just another man she had hidden away??
Excellent stuff bry!!! :clap::clap:
Xx-Vicky-xX
18-09-2006, 15:10
As promised just read all of this (dont want Bry to hate me do i lol) Good writting Bry some of that was very funny, made me happier anyway
Part 6: A Bitter Revenge...
EXT. INT/ PRIVATE MENTAL INSTITUTE - DAY (2004)
Jared's luxury sports car pulls up at the entrance to what appears to be a large mansion. A well maintained house and gardens, it is actually a private mental institute for those with mental health problems and those who have been sectioned.
Jared walks trough the entrance hall and into a communal room, a mad man is being dragged into his room to be given his daily medications, Jared looks on, a sick feeling in his stomach.
A couple of residents are sitting playing a game of chess, others are sitting, talking or carlessy wondering about. In the corner an old and frail woman called Gillian (Anette Crosby) is sitting by the window, motionless and silent, staring into space, not even blinking her eyelids.
Jared stands on the spot, looking at the woman from a distance, a concerned look on his face. A nurse comes up to Jared, obviously knowing him well.
Nurse: Mr Ashworth, it's been a while since we saw you come here...
Jared: I'm a very busy man... and it's a long way to travel...
Nurse: Indeed it is...I can assure you we are looking after her well here, its the best place she can be...
Jared: How is she coping? You know on a long term scale...
Nurse: (Sighs) We've had Gillian here for what...must be about 30 years now...
Jared: (Sad) 33...
Nurse: There hasn't been many signs of improvement since... it's a sad fact to deal with Mr Ashworth... but I think she will be like this forever...
Jared: Thanks...
Jared leaves the nurse and heads towards Gillian. He takes a seat beside her and holds her hand.
Jared: Hello mom...it's me... Jared
Gillian does not respond or aknowldge Jared's prescence, she continues to stare into space. Jared is disheartened as his smile fades.
INT. UNIDENTIFIED HOSPITAL - (2003)
Olivia is in a delivery room giving birth to her baby, she is alone, bar the mid wife. Olivia is breathign heavily and pushing with all her energy.
Midwife: Come on, just one more push...
Olivia: I can't do it!!!
Midwife: You can!!! Now push!!!
She screams loudly as she exerts the final push.
INTERCUT
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE - (2004)
The scene cuts to a woman orgasming at the end of sex. The woman is blonde and good looking. She has been sleeping with Will.
Will moves away from her, as they take seperate sides of the bed. The woman is happy and excited, whereas Will has no emotions on his face. She wraps herself around him, hoping for some affection.
Blonde: That was absoultely amazing...
Will closes his eyes and frowns as she touches him, he grabs her hand and moves it away from her.
Will: Get off me...
Blonde: You okay Will?
Will: I'm sorry...
Blonde: Sorry?... Sorry for what?
Will: I shouldn't have done this...
Blonde: Don't have any regrets... I sure dont...:p
Will gets up and puts on his boxer shorts.
Will: Look you're not my type...it didn't mean anything... I'm really sorry... we shouldn't have done this...
Blonde: Excuse me!?
Will: Look you have to believe me, I didn't mean to hurt you...or use you...it's just...
Blonde: You dont know what you want....
Will: Exactly...
The Blonde, offeneded gets up and puts on her underwear.
Blonde: You make me sick...think that's all us women are good for... pig!
The blonde slips on her dress, and holds her high hells in her hands, she gives Will a look of disgust and leaves the room.
Will sits down on the bed, and looks at himself trough the mirror, he looks at himself disgusted and then lowers his head in shame. He rubs his hand trough his hair in stress, and closes his eyes to avoid tears.
The sound of high hells can be heard as Lauren walks into the room, she stands beside Will, who is looking worse for wear.
Lauren: Hey bro... what's up? You look like ****...
Will: I feel like it...
Lauren: Are you okay?
Will: No... no I'm not..
Will suddenly bursts into tears. Lauren sits down beside her brother and holds him as he cries in her arms.
INT. PRIVATE MENTAL INSTITUTE (2004)
Jared is sat next to Gillian, he has a photo albumn in his hands, trying to show his mother some family photos.
Jared: This one was taken last year... we went over to the chaueat in France...
Gillian doesnt look at Jared, she continues to stare into space.
Jared: Mom are you going to look or what!?
No response. Jared grabs his mother and shakes her, she turns her head and looks at him motionless.
Jared: You recognise this people dont you mom...?
Gillian shakes her headly slightly.
Jared: You must do! It's your grandchildren mom!!
Gillian continues to shake her head, looking into Jared's eyes, bewildered.
Jared: Lauren...and Will... and me...
Jared starts to get emotional at his mother's lack of rememberance. He quickly flicks trough the pages to an old black and white photograph of a man, taken in the 1950s.
Jared: Ok then...what about this one...you know who this is... please tell me you know who this is mom!?
Gillian: ...Graham...
A slight smile of hapiness and hope appears on Jared's face.
Jared: That's right...Graham...your husband...what do you remember about him mom!?
Gillian:...I can;t... remember...
Jared: (Distressed) But he was your husband mom! You HAVE to remember him!?
Gillian shakes her head once more.
Gillian: (Confused) Who...who are you are?
Jared: (Quivering) I'm Jared.... I'm your son...
Gillian: I...don't have...a son
Jared: (Emotional) Of course you have a bloody son! I'm your bloody son!!
Gillian starts to shake in terror of Jared's anger. The nurse hears the commotion and walks towards the pair.
Nurse: I think it's best that you leave now Mr Ashworth...
Jared: She doesnt even know who I am anymore!!
Nurse: Dont take it to heart Mr Ashworth, it might just be one of her bad days...
Gillian is still shaking in fear.
Jared: My own mother...scared of me... doesn't know who I am... oh what's the point anymore!?
Jared storms off, leaving Gillian alone. Jared leaves the communal room and stops in the coridoor. Tears start to role down his eyes, he whipes them away and pulls out a peice of paper from his pocket.
The paper has the name of Hilary Blackstock on it, along with a mobile phone number. Jared dials the number and puts the phone to his ear.
Jared: Hello Hilary... it's Jared Ashworth... I think it's about time we had that meeting...
Jared fights back the tears, a look of deep seriousness on his face.
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2004)
Lauren and Will are seated on his bed, he is now dressed in his dressing gown, holding a glass of whiskey that Lauren has just gave him.
Lauren: Well you're the only man I know that's got depressed after wild sex with a busty blonde...
Will: She wasn't my type...
Lauren: She's every man's type...
Will: Not mine, I don't go for the easy tart usually do I...
Lauren holds back what she is thinking about Olivia.
Will: I thought that if I got out that... chatted up a bird... went with her...then something would change inside me...I'd feel better for it...
Lauren: I take it that it didn't then...
Will: I just can't get over Olivia... with all that's happened you'd think I'd hate her, but I don't... I loved her... I still do...
Lauren: She doesnt deserve your love... and you shouldnt give it her Will! There's plenty more tarts like her out there... you need to get yourself a good respectable woman...
Will: I dont want a good respectable woman, I want her...
Lauren: She was a gold digger Will, nothing more, nothing less... you deserve way more than her...I'm never gonna let a woman hurt you like that again...I promise you...
Will: It's too late Lauren... the damage is already done... everywhere i go, everything I do reminds me of her... what is the point of carrying on eh?
Lauren: You're a sucessful barrister, you could pull any woman you wanted...you have your health...good fortune...and me and dad...
Will: You know aswell as I do that me and dad havent been the same since...you know... the wedding day... I just feel so uncomfortable around him...
Lauren: I think you need a break Will, get away from here for a while...
Will: Yeah...I think you could be right... that's just what I need...
Will reflects on this, a slight smile emerging on his face.
MORE TO BE POSTED LATER
DaVeyWaVey
23-09-2006, 13:09
Great stuff! It's good that we're finding out about Jared's mother, Gillian. It must be so hard for him knowing that his mother doesn't even know him anymore :(
And the Ashworths are finally getting connect with the Devon Seas characters, what with Jared contacting Hilary, can't wait to read more! :)
S whats the Jared/Hilary connection?!
Powerful stuff Bry - looking forward to the next installment
Just caught up with this. Amazing stuff. So how does jared know hilary then?? And i have a feeling we'll be seeing Olivia again.... x
INT. FIVE STAR RESTAURAUNT - 2004
A piantist is playing the piano in a quality five star restauraunt. A glamarous red head is sitting down at a table, looking out over the devon clifftops. A close up shows her manicured hands holding a cigarette. She is on the phone.
Red Head: Segal darling... good to hear from you... how are you?.... oh amazing... look I shouldn't be much longer over in the UK... the funeral has been sorted and everything...
Jared Ashworth walks into the restaurant and heads towards the red head.
Red Head: Well mom had a good send off, that's the main thing... anyways I have to go... adios baby.
The Red head snaps her phone shut and places it down.
Jared: Up to your old tricks as usual I see...
Jared sits down, the camera shows the red head: Hilary Blackstock.
Jared: If memory recalls your mother died back in the 80s...
Hilary: I've been telling lies all my life, so why stop now?
Jared laughs at Hilary's joke. Hilary pours them both a glass of champagne.
Hilary: I must say it was a shock to see you call me out of the blue like this...I naturally presumed youd thrown away my number
Jared: I never get rid of a number, never know when you might need it... especially if it's the number of a woman so beautiful as yourself...
Hilary: That line worked along time ago Jared... but I know you... your not just here to flirt with me...
Jared: How observant of you...
Hilary: Well we were bed buddies for a good few years... you tend to pick up on things like that... go on... enlightn me as to why you asked me here...
Jared: Your mutual "friend"... Richard Taylor...
Hilary: (Disgusted) What about him?
Jared: I've let him get away with things for too long... thought it would be best to just leave it...
Hilary: What you mean about your father and...
Jared: It's had such an effect on us all... for so long...and to think he's out there, living his life...I want that man to suffer!
Hilary: There's a time that I'd have shared your hatred... but now...I couldnt give a damn what he did with his life...
Jared: Hilary I need you to do me a big favour...
Hilary: How big?
Jared: As big as they come...I want you to go back to Baymoore and marry Richard...
Hilary chokes on her champagne.
Hilary: Did I just hear you correctly!?
Jared: The pair of us were good together... and now we can work together...get our revenge on that scumbag, for all the heartache he's caused us both! What do you say!?
Hilary: This is pure madness! You are asking for us to rekindle our affair, and for me to remarry Richard!? Are you on drugs or something!?
Jared places his breifcase on the table and opens it, it is filled with crisp bank notes, Hilary's eyebrow raises.
Jared: And plenty more where that came from if you say yes...
Hilary: Intresting proposition...
Jared: So is that a yes then?
Hilary Well how could I possibly refuse?
Jared and Hilary toast the deal, and smile at each other seductivley
EXT. MIAMI HOTEL (2006)
"Miami" by Will Smith is playing as we see various shots of a luxury hotel in Miami. The shots show the sparkling pool, and the beautiful woman lying on deck chairs beside the pool.
Will Ashworth is dressed in a leightweight cream suit, wearing dark shades. He checks out the women as he walks by, getting some admiring looks back.
Will sits down on one of the stools at the circluar bar by the poolside. He orders a drink and stares out at the bikini babes swimming in the pool. The bartender hands Will a drink.
Will: Thanks, how much do I owe you?
Bartender: Nothing, the young lady has paid for it...
The Bartender steps to one side and gestures towards the woman sitting at the other end of the bar, she has long blonde hair, wears shades and is drinking an exotic cocktail. She gives him a breif smile and then stirs her cocktail with a stick. Will picks up his drink and sits down beside her.
Will: Do you mind if I sit down beside you?
Blonde: Be my guest...
Will: Well I can't say I've had many free drinks in my time... so I like you already :p
Blonde: I felt in the mood to buy you a drink...I've been at this bar for the past two weeks and every man I've seen has been some fat yank or a jumped up ****...
Will: I take it I'm neither of those then...
Blonde: Well your not fat...and certainly not american... and judging by that suit you have style...
Will: It's what's beneath the suit that matters...
Blonde: Apparantly so...
Will: Look I'm usually this...erm...forward...but do you want to take these drinks back up to my room?
The blonde gets up and wraps a serong around her waist.
Blonde: I was thinking the exact same thing...
Will gets up and directs her towards his room.
Will: I'm Joe Fletcher by the way...
Blonde: The names Taylor (removes sunglasses) Tanya Taylor...
INT. BELLAMY HOUSE (2006)
Jared is sitting ih his office, he lights a cigar, and takes a deep exhale. He is on the telephone.
Jared: Yes...it's well under way by now Hil... this time next week you and Richard will be married... It's like music to me hears... finally we can get our revenge... okay... i'll speak to you soon...bye...
Lauren walks into the room, carrying the newspaper.
Jared: I wish you'd stop moping around the house like a lost soul...
Lauren: I'm a lady of lesuire...no comitments... but what is a girl to do eh?
Jared: I tell you what you need, a good man in your life... give you something to take your mind off the "boredom".
Lauren: After the last one...no way... It'll be a long time before I trust a man again...
Jared: The right one is probably just around the corner...
Lauren: I suppose so... anyways I'll leave you to your buisnes...there's bound to be something on the TV...
Lauren places the newspaper on the desk, and leaves the room. Jared picks up the newspaper and turns to the buisness section. A large photo of Richard and Nick Taylor is shown, they have smiles on their faces and the accompanying article highlights their financial sucess in Devon.
Jared rips the page out of his paper and holds a lighter to the page. As the page starts to burn he drops it into his ash tray and watches as Richard and Nick burn away into ash.
Jared: You've had your time...now it's mine... it's time to pay...
END OF THICKER THAN WATER
DaVeyWaVey
23-09-2006, 17:56
A brilliant final episode Bry! I never thought the blonde was Tanya! And is Will someone else because he said a different name?! Is he under a false identity?! :eek: And Jared put Hilary up to marrying Richard! I can't believe it! :eek: Why does he want revenge?! Brilliant stuff, now i can't wait until Devon Seas returns next week!
So what did Richard do to Jared's father then?! And what did he originally do to Hilary?! Ooo the Tanya/Will thing will bug them all - it will be funny to see the looks on their faces when that one comes out.
Great stuff Bry - all ready for the new season of DS now! :cheer:
Xx-Vicky-xX
24-09-2006, 15:47
Just read this, great stuff, though im a tad confused but im sure ill work stuff out when it comes back properly :)
yeah I want to know the same Em.. what did Richard do to Jared's father?
Brillant stuff as usual bry.. roll on 30th September for the new DS season
yeah I want to know the same Em.. what did Richard do to Jared's father?
Brillant stuff as usual bry.. roll on 30th September for the new DS season Its kind of told us nothing, but told us a little bit too - talk about intriguing! How to get the viewers in!! :D :lol: Well, I'll be there for sure - just to find out that connection.....
Thinking about it though - Hilary is one heck of a nasty one - she had the twins kidnapped (which wasn't anything to do with Jared was it?!) which resulted in their death, she's married Richard in collusion with Jared, because of something to do with Jared's father, and possibly herself too (though no clues to that either) and you/me have gone into the house and very maybe possibly shot her (though I think its me/you thats dead and Hilary is going to be fine)
Bring on the new series of DS!!!! :cheer:
Its kind of told us nothing, but told us a little bit too - talk about intriguing! How to get the viewers in!! :D :lol: Well, I'll be there for sure - just to find out that connection.....
Thinking about it though - Hilary is one heck of a nasty one - she had the twins kidnapped (which wasn't anything to do with Jared was it?!) which resulted in their death, she's married Richard in collusion with Jared, because of something to do with Jared's father, and possibly herself too (though no clues to that either) and you/me have gone into the house and very maybe possibly shot her (though I think its me/you thats dead and Hilary is going to be fine)
Bring on the new series of DS!!!! :cheer:
NO WAY.. we can't die huns!!!! I think Emma jones stays.. and the real Siobhan Burke (hilary adopted daughter) comes back and kicks ass!!!
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