Sean sleeps with Bradley

[littlemo]

(In the Allen house, Sean, Bradley, Stacey, Ruby, all living there and have been doing for 3 months)

Stacey: Oi! you coming or what!

Bradley: I'm just getting changed, i'll be there in a minute.

Stacey (to Ruby): He knows we've got to be there by 8.

Ruby: Your mum won't mind if your a little bit late.

Stacey: That's not the point, I haven't seen her for ages, the least I can do is be on time.

Ruby: Where's Sean? Is he coming?

Stacey: No he's working at the garage.

Ruby: A bit late isn't it?!

Stacey: You know what Phil's like. If it was me I'd tell him to shove it.
(to Bradley) Bradley! 2 seconds and I'm going without you!

Bradley: I'm coming now. Alright!

(Cut to a bar, Sean sitting there with a drink in his hand, looks like he's had a couple).

Sean (to bartender): Another one in there.

Bartender: You alright

Sean: What's it to you?!

Bartender: Just wondering.

Sean: All I want is a drink, o.k.


(Cut to Jean's house)

Jean (to Stacey): Hiya love

Stacey: Hi mum, you alright (gives each other a hug)

Bradley: Hello Mrs Slater.

Jean: Bradley, I told you to call me Jean. Mrs Slater, sounds like I'm middle aged.

Bradley: Sorry, Jean.

Jean: No Sean then?! (Bradley looks awkward)

Stacey: I told you, he's working mum.

Jean: Oh right, yeah, I forgot.
So let's sit down. Can I get you two a drink?

Stacey: I'll get them.

Jean: No you won't, your my guests.

Stacey: I'm not, i'm your daughter.

Jean: Even so.

Stacey: You got any coke?

Jean: You can have a proper drink if you like, you know.

Stacey: No. Coke'll be fine.

Jean: Bradley?

Bradley: Yeah same here.

(Jean goes to the kitchen)

(Bradley and Stacey look at each other)

(Cut to Sean coming home)
(Ruby's standing in the living room)

Sean: Hey Rubes! Alright?!

Ruby: Your drunk.

Sean: Maybe a little bit.

Ruby: A little bit? your totally wrecked.

Sean: You still love me though, don't you?!

Ruby: I think you should just go up to bed.

Sean: That's a good idea! You want to come with me?!

Ruby: No!

Sean: Why not?!

Ruby: Because your drunk, and we're not seeing each other anymore.

Sean: Well how about just one last fling for old times sake?! (starts holding her)
(she pushes him away)

Ruby: Get your hands off me! (he looks sad) Look I know your upset, but your just going to have to start getting over it. We've been apart for a month now. I'll make you some coffee o.k.?!
(Sean sits down on the couch).

(Jeans house, having drinks)

Jean: Ah, this is so nice, all of us here together. Except Sean of course. But there'll be other times.

Stacey: Look mum, I think we're going to have to start making a move.

Jean: But you haven't been here long.

Stacey: It's 10 o'clock?!

Jean: It's not that late?!

Stacey: I have to be up early tomorrow though, for work.

Jean: O.k. if you have to. Can we at least have a coffee before you go?!

Stacey: We've really got to making a move. The buses only run till half 10 around here. It'll be a nightmare soon.

Jean: Right then.

(Stacey and Bradley get up to say their goodbyes)

Stacey: I really had a good time tonight. I missed you. I promise i'll come see you soon. (gives her mum a hug)

Jean: Love you Stacey.

Bradley: Bye Mrs, Jean.

Jean: laughs, Bye Bradley (gives him a hug). Hope to see you soon. You make sure you look after my daughter.

Bradley: I will.

(they leave)

All: Bye, see you soon.

(Cut to the Allens)

Ruby: You feeling any better.

Sean: Yeah, I'm alright. Sorry about earlier.

Ruby: Just try and keep your hands to yourself in future. I'm going up to bed. Night.

Sean: Night. (makes himself another cup of coffee).

( a few minutes later hears Bradley and Stacey coming in)

Sean: Hey!

Both: Hiya.

Stacey: (to Bradley) Look I'm going to go up to bed. You coming?!

Bradley: No, I think i'll get a coffee.

Stacey: Alright, see you tomorrow.

Bradley: Yeah, night (gives her a kiss).

Stacey: Night. (goes up stairs).

(Sean looks at Bradley, dismissingly)

(Bradley walks in the kitchen)

Bradley: Alright?!

Sean: Why? Shouldn't I be?

(Bradley looks at him)

Sean: I'm fine.

Bradley: You don't look it.

Sean: Just give it a rest will you?!

Bradley: What is it?

Sean: You know what it is. I don't need to spell it out.

Bradley: What happened between us last week, it was a mistake.

Sean: Was it?!

Bradley: Yeah

Sean: Didn't feel that way to me.

Bradley: I love your sister, more than anything.

Sean: Why do you always do that?

Bradley: Do what?

Sean: Pretend!

Bradley: I don't know what your talking about.

Sean: Your gay! You think you can prove your not by using my sister as some kind of sheild. Well it's not fair! It's not fair on Stacey! She's 18 years old, she doesn't deserve what your dishing out to her. She loves you!

Bradley: And I love her, your talking utter rubbish!

Sean: What would you do if I kissed you right now?!

Bradley: I'd push you away!

Sean: Would you?

Bradley: Yeah

Sean: Well lets try it shall we (gets up and kisses him passionately). (Bradley stops for a second and then kisses him back) (Sean locks the kitchen door, and pushes Bradley onto the table).

Scene end!

[Bryan]

superb script little mo! i really enjoyed it! Hope to see more scripts by you soon.

it captures the essence of eastenders in the 1990's, and has traces of tiffany/tony/simon. I think the future of Eatenders is with the Bradley/Stacey relationship, aswell as the extended Slater family. Lacey is a superb actress and they need to put her talent to good use.

Keep up the great work! :clap:

[littlemo]

superb script little mo! i really enjoyed it! Hope to see more scripts by you soon.

it captures the essence of eastenders in the 1990's, and has traces of tiffany/tony/simon. I think the future of Eatenders is with the Bradley/Stacey relationship, aswell as the extended Slater family. Lacey is a superb actress and they need to put her talent to good use.

Keep up the great work! :clap:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I was watching the episode about the Tiffany/Tony/Simon storyline yesterday, so that was in my head, when I wrote it. And there was a rumour a while ago about Bradley being gay, and then one about Sean. So I sort of put it all together.

I am too a huge fan of Bradley and Stacey, and I heard Sean is going to push them to the end with their relationship, so I thought that was a good way of showing that.

[Bryan]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I was watching the episode about the Tiffany/Tony/Simon storyline yesterday, so that was in my head, when I wrote it. And there was a rumour a while ago about Bradley being gay, and then one about Sean. So I sort of put it all together.

I am too a huge fan of Bradley and Stacey, and I heard Sean is going to push them to the end with their relationship, so I thought that was a good way of showing that.

It was really well written, you really did capture the essence of each of the character, each line of dialouge semed in the right context, I could imagine each character saying the lines.

This is the kind of drama that Eastenders used to thrive on, and in the past few years has lacked. They need a strong set of characters that they can give some gritty and long standing storylines to. All of the good examples the past have been based on relationships between a select few. For exmaple the Mel/Steve/Lisa/Mark/Phil group and the Carol/David/Biance/Ricky/Dan relationships.

Your peice reminded me of why I love Eastenders, so keep up the great work!

[littlemo]

God, I feel embarrassed now! lol. Thanks very much.

I'm starting a Media course in Uni this year. My ambition is to write scripts, it's something I love doing. And I will do more soon.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Great script Littlemo. I liked it! :)

I hope you make a habit of it, and maybe write other stuff to do with Eastenders?!

I also agree that Bradley and Stacey are the future of Eastenders. :)

[Bryan]

God, I feel embarrassed now! lol. Thanks very much.

I'm starting a Media course in Uni this year. My ambition is to write scripts, it's something I love doing. And I will do more soon.

Best of luck with the writing, judging on this peice I think you will go far!

I too enjoy writing scripts and hope to become a tv scriptwriter in the future. I have written two plays that were performed at the Birmingham REP and next year I hope to go to Bournemouth University for a scriptwriting course for film and tv.

I might attempt to write some Eastenders scripts some time this summer, as it is the end of series for Devon Seas, the soap i have created and write on soapboards each day.

Anyways I'm rambling on here, so yeah, all the best with the writing, let us all know how you get on! :D

[DaVeyWaVey]

Oooh wow! We all have something in common. :D I want to be a scriptwriter/soap producer when i am older too. I love writing scripts, it's the best thing yet!
Little Mo, check out my soap Hinston High. :)
And Bondboffin, is devon seas really ending??!! :eek:

[littlemo]

Oooh wow! We all have something in common. :D I want to be a scriptwriter/soap producer when i am older too. I love writing scripts, it's the best thing yet!
Little Mo, check out my soap Hinston High. :)
And Bondboffin, is devon seas really ending??!! :eek:

Yeah, I'll have a look at your soap.

Yeah scriptwriting is great isn't it?! I don't plan, I just keep writing. With stuff like Eastenders, it just comes to you. You get into the zone, and your fingers won't stop typing. I just love it!

[Bryan]

And Bondboffin, is devon seas really ending??!! :eek:

No its just ending for the summer break. Its the end of season 1. I have many exciting and explosive storylines for the next month months, with six shocking and nail biting cliffhangers. Season 2 will return later in the year bigger and better than ever.

[Bryan]

Yeah, I'll have a look at your soap.

Yeah scriptwriting is great isn't it?! I don't plan, I just keep writing. With stuff like Eastenders, it just comes to you. You get into the zone, and your fingers won't stop typing. I just love it!

Nothing can beat the joy of writing when you are in "the zone". When i was writing my second play "Stairlift To Heaven" it took me months to get the inspiration, then all of a sudden I wrote the entire 1 hour play in the space of a day, and producers, actors and the audience loved it.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Yeah, I'll have a look at your soap.

Yeah scriptwriting is great isn't it?! I don't plan, I just keep writing. With stuff like Eastenders, it just comes to you. You get into the zone, and your fingers won't stop typing. I just love it!

That's just like me. I don't plan, i just do it. The only exception is Hinston High. I did plan loads of characters and storylines in advance but i haven't actually planned the scripts i am writing, i just write them. I am hoping to take media studies for a level then go onto uni and do it there as well. :)

Bondboffin, i am glad Devon Seas isn't ending. :)

[Bryan]

That's just like me. I don't plan, i just do it. The only exception is Hinston High. I did plan loads of characters and storylines in advance but i haven't actually planned the scripts i am writing, i just write them. I am hoping to take media studies for a level then go onto uni and do it there as well. :)

Bondboffin, i am glad Devon Seas isn't ending. :)

you will enjoy media at a level dave, in the second year you learn about soap operas, of which you are very knowledgabel of, so it will be both enjoyable and youthful to your future occupation. Judging by the quality of Hinston High, i have every confidence that you will go far with your scriptwriting in the future.

[DaVeyWaVey]

you will enjoy media at a level dave, in the second year you learn about soap operas, of which you are very knowledgabel of, so it will be both enjoyable and youthful to your future occupation. Judging by the quality of Hinston High, i have every confidence that you will go far with your scriptwriting in the future.

Thank you. I am sure you will go far too, Devon Seas is great and it seems you have had lots of experience on writing scripts especially if you wrote a play that has been performed in front of an audience. :)

[littlemo]

Nothing can beat the joy of writing when you are in "the zone". When i was writing my second play "Stairlift To Heaven" it took me months to get the inspiration, then all of a sudden I wrote the entire 1 hour play in the space of a day, and producers, actors and the audience loved it.

Where did you send your scripts too, to get published?!

[Bryan]

Where did you send your scripts too, to get published?!

My two plays were part of the Transmissions programme for young playwrites in the Birmingham/Midlands area. I'm not sure where you live, but if you are intersted send me an email to the adress in my profile and I'll send you the details.

In regards to submitting scripts to television, by far the best option is the BBC. They have their own website http://www.bbc.co.uk/writersroom/ where they encourage people to send in scripts and ideas for new dramas. I am currently in the process of submitting my soap opera/drama Devon Seas (that i post here on soapboards) but the requirements are strict so I am taking my time, also having to put it on hold for my a level exams.

In regards to the other tv channels they only except work from indepedant production companies and distributors. Therefore, you would need to approach an independent production company with your outline and persuade them to help develop the idea. The television trade newspaper, BROADCAST, publishes a directory called 'The Production Guide' which lists names and addresses of independent production companies. The British Film Institute also publishes a Year Book which lists production companies. PACT (Producer’s Alliance for Cinema and Television) publish a handbook with details of their membership which is made up from independent production companies, a copy of which you should find in the reference section of your local library.

I hope this information has been of some help to you littlemo :)

[littlemo]

The British Film Institute also publishes a Year Book which lists production companies. PACT (Producer’s Alliance for Cinema and Television) publish a handbook with details of their membership which is made up from independent production companies, a copy of which you should find in the reference section of your local library.

I hope this information has been of some help to you littlemo :)

Yes, that's great, thankyou! A very detailed answer. You obviously took time coming up with that. Thanks for going to the trouble.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Thanks for the details bondboffin, i am on the writersroom website now, i might send something off. :)

[Bryan]

Yes, that's great, thankyou! A very detailed answer. You obviously took time coming up with that. Thanks for going to the trouble.

It's no trouble, anything to help a potential writer. From what I have gathered the main thing is to send work off to as many people as you can, you never know what may come of it, but it's better to try then to not bother at all. You will often find if they dont like your idea they may like your writing and offer you other project. Just get your work out there, for professionals to see and asses your talents.

Judging by the quality of the script I have read this evening I really do believe that you will go far. Many of the scriptwriters here on soapboards have incredible talent, and I hope that it gets recognised at somepoint in the future.

[di marco]

brill! :D that was really great, i enjoyed reading it

[Jada-GDR]

just read this, i dont mean to sound gushing but its fabulous! you've made the characters just like they are in the actualy soap, it was like i could see the screen in my head with them acting it out. its a great idea too, i think eastenders should read it and take note! its the sort of storyline that would fit into eastenders, they seem to be pulling them out of the blue now but this all clicks and would make sense. hope you do some more scripts in the future, i'm looking forward to reading them already!

[littlemo]

Thanks. I've been trying to write another one, I write pages and then I think it's not good enough. I just can't get into it for some reason. I think I just need a really good idea.

[.:SpIcYsPy:.]

Fantastic script!! Can't wait for the next one :D

[Jada-GDR]

Thanks. I've been trying to write another one, I write pages and then I think it's not good enough. I just can't get into it for some reason. I think I just need a really good idea. im sure one will come soon enough. as for being good enough, i'm sure it would be fantastic after reading this one but all the better if you give it your best. once again, fabby work :thumbsup:

[feelingyellow]

Fab script! You've got what the characters would say just right! :D You're a great scriptwriter, I hope to see more work from you soon! :thumbsup: :D

[bradley_fan]

great fanfic well done!:thumbsup: Ill look forward to reading more :)

[littlemo]

Thanks again. I'm glad you like it!

[DaVeyWaVey]

Hello littlemo, i was wondering if i could ask a favour, after reading your outstanding script of Sean and Bradley, i was wondering if you could help me write my soap Hinston High, your scripts are superb so i hope you can come on board. It will take a lot of pressure off me and i know the scripts you write are great and if you choose to write for Hinston High, i know there won't be an exception in you writing brilliant scripts!! So i really hope you accept and come on board for helping me write Hinston High, and help me make Hinston High the future of soapboards scripts!!

Please reply. Thanks. :)

[littlemo]

Hello littlemo, i was wondering if i could ask a favour, after reading your outstanding script of Sean and Bradley, i was wondering if you could help me write my soap Hinston High, your scripts are superb so i hope you can come on board. It will take a lot of pressure off me and i know the scripts you write are great and if you choose to write for Hinston High, i know there won't be an exception in you writing brilliant scripts!! So i really hope you accept and come on board for helping me write Hinston High, and help me make Hinston High the future of soapboards scripts!!

Please reply. Thanks. :)

Wow! I can't believe you'd think of me with all the great writing talent on here. I've only written one script. Thankyou. I'd love it!

I do work part time, and I am going to Uni in September, but I could write in my spare time. I'd enjoy the opportunity. Let me know what you need help with, and I'll try the best I can.

Thanks again, I can't believe this!

[DaVeyWaVey]

Thank you i am so glad you accepted!! I need the best help i can at the moment and i thought you were the perfect choice. Have you got an email address so i can email you on what i want you to write??

Thanks again, i am so glad you accepted!! :)

[xCharleyx]

it aint gonna happen is it so it was kind of pointless doing the script bradders aint gonna turn out gay and sleep with his girlfriends brother it just aint gonna happen

[Bryan]

it aint gonna happen is it so it was kind of pointless doing the script bradders aint gonna turn out gay and sleep with his girlfriends brother it just aint gonna happen

there is no need to be so horid in your posts, the whole point of fiction is that is make believe... many of the scripts on this boards would "never happen", its about writing alternate scenarios and having fun exploring characters etc. Little Mo was basing it on the Tony/Simon relationship of the early 90s and i for one enjoyed reading the script. Posts like this can discourage people from writing, so I suggest in future you are a bit more tactful with your words.

[xCharleyx]

Whatever you talk like dead posh in your posts oh my days!!! Idiot

[true.moon]

Little Mo :thumbsup: that was fantastic!! lol it was so great!! Lol i could actually imagine it happening! Can't wait for the next one keep up the good work :cheer:

[Bryan]

Whatever you talk like dead posh in your posts oh my days!!! Idiot

idiot am I? You should read the rules of this site, about respecting members, especially when they are moderators on this site.

You, my friend, have earnt your self a big fat warning. :)

[xCharleyx]

oh well it only 1 i aint gonna have ago dont want no more warnings just leave me alone

[x Amby x]

wow thats fantastic! i really enjoyed that so far keep up the good work!

[hannah-mj]

Oooh thats good that! Cant wait to here how it carries on :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Hey..i was just wondering littlemo..have you got any more Sean/Bradley scripts or any other scripts to post in the pipeline? Your script was brilliant so i was just wondering if there is any more to come?