Making Dad Proud

[the_watts_rule]

I'm back again with the sequel to Mia is my future.

The orginal script can be read here http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=52376



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Part 1

Many years have passed and Sharon and Mia are settled in a nice house on the Square.

“Mia I would like those things put away” shouts Sharon.
“ Mum, I am BUSY!!” I shout
“Mia, get down here now!!!” shouts Sharon.
I walk door the stairs, why does she have to be so stubborn?
“ Mia, for a nine year old you can be so darn awkward….” says Sharon.
“ Mum, I was busy!” I give Mum the evils.
“Don’t go giving me the evils, Mia get those things away NOW!”
“ Fine….” I sigh.
I walk up the stairs in a sulk. Dad wouldn’t treat me like this, he just wouldn’t. Mum is forever moaning at me. Well I suppose it’s just life isn’t it?
I put away my things a few Bratz dolls and a notepad. I walk down stairs again, Mum doesn’t look very happy. I peek through the living room door. She is staring at a photograph, I suppose it’s of Dad. I hate to see her upset even though I wish she would get out of my life sometimes. Must be hard being a single Mum. Especially with a pain like me…. I do feel really sorry for her sometimes. I think I will leave her alone for a while, she doesn’t need me bugging her.

[di marco]

great! :D really good start. cant wait to read the next part, more soon please

[Footie_Chick]

This is great, glad you decided to continue it on! :)

[the_watts_rule]

Part 2

I can’t sleep. Not tired really, too many things on my mind. Far too many things. I can’t seem to get this picture out of my head. It’s of Mum sitting in the living room earlier. It has upset me, I hate to see her like that. I have come to a conclusion: No use in trying.
I walk through to the other bedroom. Mum is sound asleep, how did I know? I walk downstairs, it’s a Friday night, so there is no school tomorrow.
I look through the cabinet, trying to find a DVD to watch. Not much…. I look at the back of the cabinet and see a video. It is labelled “Holiday” Hmmm, I wonder what this is?
I put it in the video machine, I can’t believe my eyes. It’s Mum, as in my Mum, on a beach, somewhere warm and sunny. Wait, there is a guy there too. I continue to watch… There is more of this guy. I glance at the mantelpiece and have a brainwave. That is Dad! How could I have been so stupid! I snuggled up on the sofa under the fleece blanket and watch the video. I hear a door creaking, Uh Oh!
“Mia, what are you doing” says Sharon.
Her face drops as soon as she sees what I’m watching.

[di marco]

great! :D i wonder what sharons gonna do. more very soon please

[Footie_Chick]

This is great more soon please.

[the_watts_rule]

Part 3

“ Mia, what did I tell you about getting up in the middle of the night!” says Sharon rubbing her sleepy eyes.
I say nothing. I will see what she says next.
“Mia, you get up in the middle of the night then you are exhausted in the morning!” says Sharon. “ You are forever doing this, you really need to stay in your bed!” says Sharon. She is getting rather annoyed because I’m not answering.
“Mia, answer me!” shouts Sharon.
“You know something Mum? You are making this up as an excuse because you don’t what to talk to me about Dad!” I shout.
“ Mia, it’s not like that” says Sharon.
“Yes it is Mum, you never talk about Dad around me. It’s like your embarrassed and I know that you are hurting inside.” I shout.
“ Mia, you don’t know what I feel like inside” says Sharon.
“ Well I do Mum. I have seen you sit by yourself and cry silently alone. I think I have the right to talk about my Dad!” I shout.
“ You don’t understand Mia” says Sharon.
“I can’t believe you would say such thing to me Mum. I want my Dad! “ I shout.
I burst into tears and run upstairs.

[di marco]

great! :D i wonder what sharons going to do. more very soon please, cant wait

[Footie_Chick]

ahhhh, wow, i'm loving this, can't wait to find out what else happens!!!!!

[the_watts_rule]

Part 4

I storm into my room, I feel like I’m going to scream! I grab my photo frame and hide under the covers in my bed, holding the frame tight.
“Mia...” says Sharon softly.
“What do you want?” I shout.
“Calm down Mia. I just want to talk to you,” says Sharon.
“I don’t want to talk to you, I want to talk to Dad!” I shout.
“I’m afraid, I’m the only one to talk to sweetheart” says Sharon softly.
Mum goes to sit on my bed.
“I just want to reach up into the sky and bring him back Mum” I cry.
“ I know Mia, I would have done that a long time ago, if it was possible” says Sharon bringing a tear to her eye.
“It’s not fair” I say.
I sit up and snuggle into Mum.
“ I know it’s not but we will get through this” says Sharon.

[di marco]

great! :D awwwwww poor mia and sharon. more soon please, cant wait