Hinston High

[DaVeyWaVey]

Hi guys, i have made a new soap called Hinston High. You may have remembered me posting here before about it but now i have made scripts for a few episodes and thought i would post them here so you can post what you like/dislike, opinions, criticisms, how i could improve etc. All comments are welcome :) Hinston High is set in a busy street and is a cross between Eastenders and Coronation Street. I hope you can find the time to read my first script which is episode one- part 1. Here it is:

Hinston High- Episode One- The Script

Scene One- Pat’s café.
(Kat and Chloe are talking while drinking coffee.)

Kat: A nice cup of coffee helps cure a night of drinking at the pub, I tell you.

Chloe: Yeah…I found that it never helps.

Kat: Well how would you know….you hardly ever drink.

Chloe: You mean I hardly ever get drunk. I do go to the pub quite often you know?

Kat: Yes I know you do but you gotta let your hair down a bit

Chloe: Yes I do…. But getting drunk isn’t the answer.

Kat: Well you can forget all your problems….

Chloe: But I don’t have any problems.

(Felicity suddenly appears wearing suitable clothes to work in a café.)

Felicity: How are you today ladies?

Kat: Umm…excuse me this is a private conversation if you hadn’t noticed?.... and my name is Kat and hers is Chloe. You don’t have to call us ladies you know??

Chloe: Kat, stop it! She was only trying to be friendly…and I am fine thank you Felicity.

Felicity: Good. Have you finished with your coffees?

Kat: Yes thank you.

Chloe: Oh no mine is still half full.

(Felicity exits)

Chloe: Why the hell were you rude to her for?

Kat: We were having a private conversation and she interrupted.

Chloe: She was only asking how we were….get a grip.

Chloe slams her coffee on the table spilling some coffee on the table. She stands up from her chair and leaves.

Kat: Oh Felicity, could you clear the coffee spill up? Thanks.

(Kat smiles before leaving and Felicity starts scrubbing the spilt coffee off the table.)

Scene Two- The Pub
(Chloe enters the pub as Nina steps behind the bar.)

Nina: You are late.

Chloe: I know… I am sorry. I will start cleaning now.

Nina: Aven’t you noticed? I done it for you.

Chloe: Oh thank you.

Nina: But you will have to make up the time or lose £10 from your weekly wage. There’s no other alternative.

Chloe: What? Are you joking?

Nina: Does it look like I’m laughing? You have missed half an hour of your shift. Where did you swan off to this time?

Chloe: If you must know I was in the café drinking a cup of coffee.

Nina: Thinking you had all the time in the world. (sarcastic)

Chloe: Well I will make the time up… whatever makes you happy.

Nina: What would make me happier is if you did not go swanning off to the café to have cups of coffee.

Chloe: Again… I’m sorry.

Scene 3- Luke and Tanya’s House
(Tanya enters the kitchen where Luke is preparing lunch. Luke turns to see Tanya still in a dressing gown and frowning.)

Luke: Your finally up then.

Tanya: Well I had to get up sometime babe.

Luke: Do you know how inappropriate it was to get drunk at the pub last night? I mean the kids had to go to school the next day.

Tanya: For goodness sake, your beginning to sound like my mum.

(Tanya pours herself a glass of milk.)

Luke: No I am sounding like a responsible parent.

Tanya: And your saying I am not?

Luke: Well you should take more responsibility. I had to take the kids to school today.

Tanya: Doesn’t sound much of a big deal to me? Anyway, Lee and Tina are both capable of walking to school themselves. After all they are 14. Emily was the only responsibility.

Luke: Well you can pick up the kids from school today.

Tanya: I don’t think so. I have to pick the kids up every day. I am going down the pub.

Luke: You what? After last night?

Tanya: Relax, I only had a hangover. Anyway the kids would like to see their dad picking them up from school. Emily anyway.

Luke: It’s about time you got a job.

Tanya: A job? Your doing ok as a builder?

Luke: I am working long hours…(Tanya interrupts)

Tanya: And providing for the family. That’s what counts. Anyway what’s for lunch?

Luke: Nothing for you.

Tanya: Well I am guess it’s down to the café and off to the pub. (Pause)

Luke: Tanya, I am sick and tired of being your slave.

Tanya: Your doing this to make up for our marriage darling.

Luke: But I am sorry about the affair. It should be in the past and stay there.

Tanya: You cheated with my boss two months ago….I can’t get over it that easily.

Luke: So your burying yourself in drink? Spending the family money on drink?

Tanya: Don’t you dare raise your voice to me. I’m off.

(Tanya leaves shutting the back door behind her as Luke looks on)

Scene 4- The Garage
(Tom is working on a car as Greg and Max are drinking from a flask of tea)

Greg: Sorry but have you spat in this tea or what?

Max: It’s home- made tea. Of course, no one’s spat in it. Anyhow I see you got an eye for a certain lady….

(Tom appears from underneath the car he is working on)

Tom: Oh yeah tell us about Chloe.

Greg: Chloe?

Max: The lovely lady you were talking to in the pub last night?

Greg: Oh her. We were just generally chatting.

Tom: About what?

Greg: Gosh, I never knew that mechanics liked a bit of gossip….look nothing happened. It was just a friendly drink. We weren’t talking about anything in particular.

Max: Well Greg, she is a lovely lady. Me and Tom have tried countless times to chat her up….

Tom:…Only for it to backfire.

Max: She’s had her fair share of men though. Her and Kat both have.

Tom: Yep but both Chloe and Kat have been friends for god knows how long, they will always look out for each other.

Max: They have had their ups and downs though.

Greg: Well thanks for that bit of history.

Max: Anytime mate but the way she was looking at you last night, she likes you very much.

Greg: Let’s just get back to work.

Scene 5- The Café
(Felicity is talking to a customer where Pat suddenly shouts from behind the counter)

Pat: (shouting) Do you think you could do some work today Felicity instead of gassing?

Felicity: Sorry mum.

(Felicity rushes behind the counter with plates, dishes and cups)

Pat: And Felicity, how many times do I have to tell you that calling me mum under working hours is strictly unprofessional.

Felicity: Oh mum please…everyone in Hinston knows that you’re my mum so what’s the harm?

Pat: The harm is that we are a business. We must act like a business. The café is a business.

Felicity: Sorry.

Pat: No harm done, now scurry along.

(Felicity exits with the dishes, plates and cups)

(The phone suddenly rings)

Pat: I got it.

Pat: Hi Pat’s café….hello? who’s calling?....hello? Anybody there?....anyone?...if this is a prank call your wasting your time??....Haha now very funny the joke’s over…who is it??

(The phoner hangs up and Pat puts the phone down)

(Dave appears)

Dave: Who was that?

Pat: Who was what?

Dave: On the phone?

Pat: Oh just prank callers. Don’t worry love.

Dave: Don’t panic I am not.

(Dave leaves from behind the counter as Pat looks on with disbelief)

Scene 6- The Pub
(Kat appears through the pub door as Chloe is serving from behind the bar with Nina serving punters in the background)

Kat: Look I am sorry about earlier.

Chloe: I think it’s Felicity you should be apologising too.

Kat: And you…you seemed pretty upset by my remarks. Is that why you stormed out so suddenly?

Chloe: I was late for work.

Kat: Anyhow, I wanted to make it up to you.

Chloe: And how do you suppose to do that?

Kat: Well I have been thinking about it long and hard…and I have decided that you should get to know Greg a little better.

Chloe: Greg?

Kat: I thought you would remember, I mean you weren’t drunk.

Chloe: The guy I was speaking too from behind the bar?

Kat: Yeah that’s him. I know he likes you.

Chloe: Have you actually got proof.

Kat: No..but…

Chloe: Exactly, so you don’t know if he likes me or not and I don’t give a toss to be honest because he’s not my type….and I don’t see how you mentioning Greg is you making it up to me.

Kat: Don’t you see? I am trying to pair you up with a really nice guy.

Chloe: I admit he’s a nice guy…

Kat: Well go for it then.

Chloe: I have only known him five minutes.

Kat: All the more reason for you to go on a date with him then.

Chloe: There’s no point…he’s not interested in me.

Kat: He is. I seen the way he looked at you last night.

Chloe: You were tipsy last night. How would you know how he looked at me?

Kat: Look if you ask Greg on a date, then I will apologise to Felicity over my behaviour this morning.

Chloe: Your going to apologise to her anyway. The way you spoke was out of order.

Kat: I know I will don’t worry, just ask Greg on a date, you won’t regret it.

Chloe: I am meant to be working.

Kat: Yeah I know and Greg will be here soon so I better go. Speak to you later.

(Kat exits)

Scene 7- Luke and the kids
(Luke is waiting outside Lee and Tina’s school in his car with Emily sitting in the back playing with her toys. Lee and Tina appear. Luke pulls down his windscreen)

Luke: Hey kids.

Tina: Don’t patronise us.

Lee: Dad, me and Tina are walking home.

Luke: But I came to pick you up especially.

Lee: Well sorry.

Tina: Where’s mum?

Luke: Down the pub drinking.

Lee: I don’t believe this. Mum getting drunk again.

Luke: She might just be going for a few drinks.

Tina: Oh please! We know what she’s like and you caused it by having an affair.

Lee: Let’s go Tina. See you later Dad.

Luke: See you later.

(Luke pulls the windscreen up and drives away as Lee and Tina walk away from the school)

[Bryan]

Great start! Look forward to reading some more of this soon.

I particulary like the Tanya and Luke storyline...nice to see a role reversal in a couple for a change with the woman being lazy and drunk... i'm sure you will delve deeper into their relationship for us to see why this is so

keep up the great work! If you need any hints then just ask, ive been writing Devon Seas on soapboards for about a year now, so any advice you need just ask. :)

[Bryan]

There is one improvement i could suggest, it is not regarding the content, more the layout.

Basically if you could put the characters names in bold and have a blank space between each line it would be a lot easier for people to read your script.

I, as im sure others have to, found it difficult to read trough your script, this can put some people off, which is a shame as it is good quality stuff that you are writing!

I've found that the suggested layout has worked on my scripts for Devon Seas, and i'd advise you do the same. But up to you, your script, you do what you want with it. :)

[bakedbean]

Good start and good episode hope you make it into an ongoing thing check out my soap Exeter

[big bro fan]

Well from one writer to another great job im looking forward to your next episode. Thanks for checking out my new soap. Like BB said bold letters and spaces my eyes hurt now lol. Check out my new soap coming soon oh and Exeter it is very good.

[Bryan]

Well from one writer to another great job im looking forward to your next episode. Thanks for checking out my new soap. Like BB said bold letters and spaces my eyes hurt now lol. Check out my new soap coming soon oh and Exeter it is very good.

what about Devon Seas? :p

Oh isnt it exciting folks! Long running soaps Devon Seas and Exeter have some fresh and exciting comepeton with Hinston High and Haven Holidays... it's looks like we have an exciting period ahead in the scripts section! Cant wait to see what a fantastic job all 3 of you do, your all talented writers and i cant wait to see what you all do next!

Hears to the future of the soap operas on soap boards! :clap:

[DaVeyWaVey]

Thank you for your opinions :) and BB i am taking your advice to put character's names in bold letters so it is easier to read, i was thinking about that myself. It's great that all our soaps are coming together here at soapboards, i love writing and will definetly carry on with Hinston High. I have big plans for it. and i think all of you are great writers :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Part 2

Scene 8- The Pub
(Greg turns up in the pub and Tom and Max go to sit down as Greg buys in the drinks. He is served by Chloe.)

Chloe: So how was your day?

Greg: Ok thanks and you?

Chloe: It’s been ok. So I guess your settling in then here in Hinston?

Greg: Yeah Tom and Max are good as flatmates and I never knew mechanics liked gossip.

Chloe: There are a lot of things you don’t know about Tom and Max. They have done mischievious things in the past. That’s £4.25 please.

Greg: There you go.

Chloe: Thank you, enjoy your drink.

Greg: Yeah if you want some company after I am just sitting over here.

Chloe: Ok thanks. I will bear it in mind.

(Greg winks at Chloe while carrying the drinks. As he looks round to admire Chloe, he accidentally pours the drink on Max’s lap)

Max: What the hell do you think your doing?

Greg: Huh? What?

(Greg looks round to see a puddle of beer sitting in Max’s lap)

Greg: Oh, I am sorry mate.

(Chloe looks round from behind the bar and laughs in front of Max)

Max: Yes Chloe the joke’s over. No need to keep sneering.

(Chloe looks away to serve another punter but she is still sneering)

Greg: I will clear it up for you if you want.

Max: You will not.

(Max jumps up from his seat and heads to the toilet)

(Tom suddenly starts laughing)

Tom: Nice one Greg.

Greg: Well I did offer to clean it off for him.

Scene 9- The Campbell’s House
(Luke is staring at the clock as Lee and Tina are watching tv)

Luke: It’s 9pm now.

Tina: And?

Luke: Well I better see if Tanya is ok.

Tina: She’s only across the road having a good time and she’s a fully grown adult. I am sure she can look after herself.

Luke: Well after last night’s performance, I highly doubt it.

Tina: Your just trying to stop her having a good time.

Luke: I’m not, I am just looking out for her, making sure she’s safe.

Tina: You mean hoping she won’t do anything stupid?

(Lee interrupts)

Lee: Yeah dad, maybe you should check how Tanya is doing over the pub.

Tina: Who’s side are you on?

Lee: I am not taking sides. I am just looking out for mum. Something your doing less off when each day passes by.

(Luke interrupts)

Luke: Look I know what I have done in the past was wrong. Your mum deserved better than that and I am trying to make amends now but like I said it’s all in the past and that’s where I want it too stay.

Tina: What you did to mum was unforgivable.

Luke: I understand that.

Tina: And you can’t admit what you did. You cheated on mum! You had an affair!

Luke: I know.

Tina: With her boss! I still can’t believe that!

Lee: Well it’s reality Tina, now accept it.

Scene 10- The Flat Above The Café
(The phone rings)

(Pat suddenly appears with her dressing gown on)

Pat: Who on earth would be ringing at this time of night?

(Pat answers the phone)

Pat: Hello. (Pause) Anybody at the end of the line? (Pause) Just say something please. Do you know what time it is?!

(Felicity appears)

Felicity: Who is it?

Pat: Sussh! It’s someone’s kind of a joke. They like ringing people at late hours? Is this your hobby?? If you don’t say anything then I am calling the police!

(The phoner hangs up. Pat slams the phone down and looks at the phone)

Pat: I think the caller got the message.

(Dave suddenly appears from his bedroom door)

Dave: Or did he?...I mean this is the second prank call today.

Felicity: Dave! Don’t worry mum, it’s just a coincidence.

Pat: Well it was definetly a prank caller and I think he won’t be calling anymore. I mean once you threaten them with police. They hang up like a shot. (Pause) Anyway I’m off to bed. See you in the morning.

Scene 11- Outside The Pub
(Mike suddenly opens the pub door carrying Tanya in his right arm)

Mike: Now sling your hook Campbell. You’ve had too much to drink the second night in a row.

Tanya: Get off me. I gotta husband you know.

Mike: Where’s your husband?

Tanya: Why you wanna get me in an alleyway? Well no can do…he will be over here soon.

Mike: I can’t see him.

Tanya: Shut your trap! Now let go off me! I am capable of walking home.

Mike: I think it’s best if I walk you home.

Tanya: I don’t bloody trust you. Now let go off me!

(As Tanya screams, Luke hears)

Luke: Ain’t that our Tan?

Tina: Yes it is.

(Tina darts out of the front door into the street with Luke following behind her)

Tina: Mum, your out of your head!

(There’s a struggle between Mike and Tanya, suddenly Tanya falls into the road. As she picks herself up, a car comes round the corner and knocks Tanya over)

Tina: Mum!!

Luke: Tan!!

[Bryan]

:eek: oh my god! i didnt see that coming!!!!

you'd not better kill of Tanya! She's my favourite so far!

[bakedbean]

wow that was a great first episode and the hit and run who would have seen that coming hey why dont you do a charecter biography on all your charecters so we know who is who???

[DaVeyWaVey]

I am glad you all like my first episode and Tanya's fate will be revealed a bit later on. Bakedbean, i will do a biography for all the characters so you know who is who, i will set up a hinston high character thread so then you can have a look and know who's who :)

[big bro fan]

:hmm: Well it has to be said i hate this script. Only joking LOL :rotfl: Your just too good. BB watch your self Devon Sea's and Exeter could go down the pan this soap has potential to go far. Great episode Dave. But watch out im coming back and better than ever LOL :rotfl: . More soon.

[DaVeyWaVey]

:hmm: Well it has to be said i hate this script. Only joking LOL :rotfl: Your just too good. BB watch your self Devon Sea's and Exeter could go down the pan this soap has potential to go far. Great episode Dave. But watch out im coming back and better than ever LOL :rotfl: . More soon.

Lol. I am really glad you like it and i am glad i have competition as well :) I have just made a Hinston High character thread so you know who all the characters are in my soap. I have also made a brief description for what each character is like but only half the cast list is up yet :)
Can't wait til i read your new soap though BBF :)

[big bro fan]

Lol. I am really glad you like it and i am glad i have competition as well :) I have just made a Hinston High character thread so you know who all the characters are in my soap. I have also made a brief description for what each character is like but only half the cast list is up yet :)
Can't wait til i read your new soap though BBF :)

It's coming soon gimme two weeks max and it should be ready.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 1- Inside The Pub
(Everyone inside the pub hears the screaming from outside)

Nina: What was that?!... Chloe look after the bar.

(As Nina runs outside, the residents flourish from the pub door)

(Greg suddenly approaches Chloe)

Greg: Chloe.

Chloe: Greg. (Pause) You don’t like being nosey then?

Greg: There’s a lot of stuff about me and one thing about me is that I don’t like to be nosy and hate to gossip.

Chloe: Well I don’t know everything about you.

Greg: Well no one knows everything about everyone.

Chloe: We are closing soon.

Greg: Yeah I better go.

Chloe: No wait. Umm….you don’t mind if you help me pick up the empty glasses?

Greg: Um…no anything to help a friend.

Chloe: A friend?

Greg: Yes that’s what you are to me…a friend.

Chloe: Well we have hardly known each other five minutes.

Greg: I’m aware but your still regarded as a friend.

(Chloe and Greg continue to pick up empty glasses. After about five seconds, Chloe speaks)

Chloe: How about a friendly date?

Greg: You what?

Chloe: Oh forget it.

(Chloe is about to leave)

Greg: No wait….I would love too.

Chloe: Are you being serious?

Greg: Yes perfectly….what’s the problem?

Chloe: Nothing. I think it’s great to go on a date…no I mean a date as in a friendly date.

Greg: Yeah I know. I will tell you where we are going tomorrow.

Chloe: Where are we going tomorrow?

Greg: On our date…look it will be a surprise just for you.

Chloe: Oooh…I like surprises.

Greg: Then you will like this one.

Scene 2- At The Hospital
(Tanya is lying in a hospital bed with Luke, Lee and Tina by her side)

Tanya: Hi kids….hi Luke.

Tina: Mum, what the hell were you thinking getting drunk again last night? You being knocked over could have had worst consequences than it already has on you.

(Luke interrupts)

Luke: But the doc says your going to be ok…he said you will make a fast recovery. Now kids I think you should be off to school.

Tina: We are not kids.

Lee: We are 14 years old.

Luke: Just please go to school, I need to talk to mum.

Tina: We don’t want to go to school, we want to be with mum.

Tanya: They can stay if they really want. One day off school won’t do any harm.

Luke: Well Tina and Lee go and get a coffee for your mum then.

(Tina and Lee reluctantly leaves the scene to get their mum a coffee)

Tanya: Your showing a caring side all of a sudden towards me.

Luke: Well what do you expect…you are my wife, I am meant to look out for you, I mean you were knocked over by a car while you were drunk… this whole situation could have been worse.

Tanya: I am just glad your showing some consideration instead of having a pop at me. What about the driver?

Luke: Well he gave a statement to the police last night. I don’t think it was his fault.

Tanya: I know I know, I shouldn’t have got drunk. I think I have learnt my lesson.

Luke: Well I think your going to be discharged at the end of today so you had a lucky escape.

Tanya: Thank goodness. I hate hospitals at the best of times.

Scene 3- The Weatherbys House

Jack: Are you off to college today?

Christina: No, I am meeting up with Sean. I told you yesterday dad, don’t you remember?

Jack: Oh yes you did. Sorry, I just thought you would be concentrating on your studies.

Christina: Oh dad, I do need to take a break from my studies from time to time you know.

Jack: I know, I know.

Christina: And finally you might be able to meet Sean.

(Alicia appears with a pile of washing)

Alicia: Oh finally. It’s about time we met him. Sean is your boyfriend right?

Christina: Yeah right. I am sure you will get along fine with him.

Jack: Let’s keep our fingers crossed….

Alicia: Oh Jack! Don’t be so negative.

(Pause)

Christina: Well I better be off.

Alicia: Yeah and I am sure Sam will be here as well to meet Sean.

Christina: Yeah it would be good if he was here. You know, so Sean can meet the whole family?

Alicia: Yeah sure love.

Christina: Ok well see you later.

(Christina exits)

[Abi]

BB watch your self Devon Sea's and Exeter could go down the pan

oh, i think your under-estimating us... do you really think Bry and me would let that happen?! :lol: Beleive me, the more competition we get- the better DS will become :p

Great script by the way. Keep it up, Dave.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 4- The Pub

Nina: Your early for a change then?

Chloe: Yeah I decided not to stop off for a coffee but there is only one reason why I am early.

Nina: And what’s that?

Chloe: Because I need to finish my shift early.

Nina: Oh Chloe we need you here.

Chloe: But Kat will be here, doing her shift.

Nina: But you know how busy it gets in the evenings?!, me, Kat and Mike can’t all cope on our own.

Chloe: Well I am afraid I can’t cancel my plans now.

Nina: Well you will have too. I am sorry.

Chloe: But Nina….

(Nina leaves the bar and heads to the back room while, Chloe stands in the bar and takes a deep breath)

Scene 5- Harry and Jenna’s House
(Jenna is laying in bed when Harry brings up breakfast in bed)

Jenna: Oh thanks Harry. This looks marvellous!

Harry: Well you know me Jen, I like to treat my wife. Making her realise how precious she is to me.

Jenna: Oh Harry your such a diamond, why don’t you come back to bed?

Harry: Now?

Jenna: Yes why not now?

Harry: Well I just find it weird that your in romantic mode right now.

Jenna: You are my husband Harry!

(Jenna and Harry kiss)

Harry: Yes I know I am your husband. You haven’t forgot my birthday next week have you?

Jenna: No what do you take me for?!

Harry: Well good, I was just checking. What are you planning to give me?

Jenna: A baby.

(Harry laughs politely)

Harry: You what?

Jenna: You heard me, I might give you a baby.

Harry: Are you pregnant?

Jenna: No but I want to be pregnant.

Harry: What’s brought this on?

Jenna: Well you’re going to be one year older next week and we are both growing old and there is one thing that we are missing…..children!

Harry: So your telling me that you want children?

Jenna: Yep. Wouldn’t that be a great birthday present for you?

Harry: Yes it would………(Harry sounds unconvincing)

Scene 6- The Weatherbys House

Alicia: Oh Sam….wait up!

Sam: Yes mother, what is it now?

Alicia: Umm….you sunshine need to stay here.

Sam: May I ask why?

Alicia: Well you know Christina’s new boyfriend?

Sam: No I don’t know him and I don’t particularly want to either.

Alicia: Well we are going to meet him today. Christina is bringing him round.

Sam: You must be having a laugh?

Alicia: No I am not having a laugh as you put it. Christina just wants the whole family to be here making it a proper occasion. She wants all of us to meet her new boyfriend Sean.

Sam: So we have got to play happy families for Christina’s sake.

(Alicia looks round to see Christina and her new boyfriend Sean entering the house from the back door)

Alicia: Oooh.... look they are here now…come on Sam, make an effort!

Sam: I will try my best!

Scene 6- Outside The Pub
(Chloe is on her mobile phone, phoning Greg, it goes to the answer machine)

Chloe: I am sorry Greg. I am so sorry, I can’t make it to our date, work just takes over my life. I have ruined everything!

(Chloe wipes a tear from her eye before heading back to the pub)

Scene 7- The Café
( The phone starts to ring)

Pat: Felicity, can you answer that?

Felicity: No sorry I am getting empty plates and cups.

Pat: Ok I will get it!

(Pat rushes to the phone and answers it)

Pat: Hello, Pat’s café.

Caller: I thought it might be you.

Pat: Oh my god! It’s you! It’s bloody you!!

(Pat hangs up the phone)

[DaVeyWaVey]

I was just asking how could i advertise my new soap more to other soapboard members?? If anyone could give me any help that would be great! :)

[Bryan]

I was just asking how could i advertise my new soap more to other soapboard members?? If anyone could give me any help that would be great! :)

tell all your msn contacts and close soapboards friends about it

have a link in your signature and have a hinston high banner.

I'll hapily make you a banner if you send me the images you want in it dave :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

tell all your msn contacts and close soapboards friends about it

have a link in your signature and have a hinston high banner.

I'll hapily make you a banner if you send me the images you want in it dave :)

Ok thanks i will tell as many people as i can about it and is it ok if you do make my banner for me?? because i don't know how to make one. If you can, thanks :) The only problem is i don't know what pictures/images to put on it.

[Bryan]

Ok thanks i will tell as many people as i can about it and is it ok if you do make my banner for me?? because i don't know how to make one. If you can, thanks :) The only problem is i don't know what pictures/images to put on it.

is there any part of the country its set in?

any ideas of actors/actrress youd like to see star in it?

any tag lines or phrases?

[DaVeyWaVey]

is there any part of the country its set in?

any ideas of actors/actrress youd like to see star in it?

any tag lines or phrases?

I thought of a tag line- Hinston High- The homes of secrets and lies!
It's set in a busy part of the country- london.
and if i get pictures of actors and actresses then can you make a banner for me please! :)

[Tori]

i've read it like you asked and i like it. a lot! so keep it up :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

My next script will be up tomorrow! :)

[Bryan]

heres a banner that i made for DaveyWavey:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/bondboffin/hinston.jpg

[Tannie]

Wow i love the Banner and the script is really good More soon please

[DaVeyWaVey]

Wow i love the Banner and the script is really good More soon please

Yep don't worry there will be more soon. The next script will be up a bit later on and thank you BB for my banner :)

[Emma-Lou]

This is really good well done can't wait to read more and the banner is fab :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

(It’s early morning in Hinston High)

Scene 1- The Café

(Felicity has just woken up and walks into the café where Pat is turning the café sign to open)

Felicity: You still haven’t told me who was at the end of the telephone line last night?

Pat: Oh Felicity please! Can you just give me a break love?

Felicity: You have got bags under your eyes, you didn’t sleep well did you?

Pat: No I couldn’t but we all have one of those nights where we can’t switch off.

Felicity: Don’t give me that mum, I seen you on the phone last night. You said something and you just slammed the phone down.

Pat: Look someone got the wrong phone number ok and I was just angry because it was getting late and I was about to go to bed so that’s why I slammed the phone down.

(Dave suddenly appears and interrupts)

Dave: Are you sure it wasn’t those prank callers again?

Pat: I am pretty sure, so can you stop giving me the third degree?!

Dave: Whatever.

(Dave is about to leave)

Pat: Oh Dave wait! I will need your help at the café so don’t you think of doing anything else.

Dave: Oh mum, I do need a social life!

Pat: And you can have one, after you helped me out today! You must help me, you can’t say no.

Dave: Ok mum.

Scene 2- The Pub

(Greg is banging on the pub door where Mike rushes to open it)

Mike: Greg, we are not open yet.

Greg: Look I need to speak to Chloe urgently!

Mike: I am sure it can wait, stop exaggerating.

Greg: Is she there though?

Mike: If you must know she is, she is cleaning as we speak.

Greg: Can she have say 3 hours off work?

Mike: Are you joking?!?! No of course she can’t.

Greg: Please, we were meant to go on a date but Nina wouldn’t let her leave work.

(There is a pause for a few seconds)

Mike: What’s in it for me?

Greg: Umm.,. Chloe doing overtime, a few drinks on me.

Mike: Nina’s gona kill me for this but Kat will be here in a few hours and the pub doesn’t open til 12, so yes I suppose you can take her off on a date. Anyway I hope this date is worth it.

Greg: It is. Look let’s just say, me and Chloe will be overlooking Hinston river in a few hours.

Mike: Oooh sounds good, I will get Chloe now.

(Mike shouts to Chloe who is cleaning some pub tables)

Mike: Chloe! Loverboy’s here!!

Chloe: Lover boy?

Mike: Greg.

Chloe: Oh Greg, tell him I am busy.

(Greg bursts in)

Greg: I am sure you can miss a few hours of work, I got your message.

Chloe: Oh I am sorry Greg, I thought I let you down and you would never want to speak to me again.

Greg: Look come on get your coat Chloe, I got a big surprise for you.

Scene 3- The Butleys House

Danny: Oh for goodness sake mum, how many more bloody times! I don’t want to go to school.

Julia: Your education is important, you must attend school. Sally and Marianne do, so why can’t you?

Danny: Well there’s a difference between me and Sally and Marianne. Sally and Marianne are swots, I am not.

Julia: Your dad will tell you, you must go to school!

Danny: Of course he would, he is a teacher for Christ sake! Why dad wanted to be a teacher is beyond me?!?!

Sally: Danny, are you coming?

Danny: Why would I wanna walk with you?

Sally: Well you’ve got no one else to walk with.

Danny: So I must sink so low and resort to walking with my own sister. No thank you!!

Sally: Well I am off, see you later mum.

Julia: See you darling.

(Sally leaves shutting the front door behind her)

Danny: I actually feel quite ill.

Julia: No excuses.

Danny: I suppose I could go to school for the fags.

Julia: You will not, you will go to school for the learning.

Danny: Oh please mum! Don’t patronise me, I am not a little mummy’s boys anymore.

Julia: I am not listening to you for any longer.

(Julia exits)

Scene 4- The Weatherbys House

(Sean appears from Christina’s bedroom where Jack comes out of the bathroom and bumps into him)

Jack: Umm…excuse me?

Sean: Oh you must be Christina’s dad, Jack?

Jack: Yes I am, who are you?

Sean: Christina’s new boyfriend, I have already introduced myself to Alicia and Sam.

Jack: You have stopped here for the night?

Sean: Umm yes… why is that a problem?

Jack: Well I didn’t see you here when I got home.

Sean: Well me and Christina were in bed by the time you arrived back.

Jack: I beg your pardon?

Sean: Umm we were in bed together, me and your daughter?!

Jack: You have made yourself very cosy haven’t you in my household! How long have you and Christina been dating?

Sean: Just under a month.

Jack: Your taking things very fast aren’t you??

Sean: What’s with all these questions?

Jack: I am just curious.

Sean: I have a feeling you don’t like me.

(Jack draws closer on Sean so he is breathing deeply against him)

Jack: I don’t.

Sean: I won’t mess Christina round you know?!

Jack: Good. You better not or there will be trouble.

Scene 5- Greg and Chloe

Greg: Here we are!

Chloe: We are by Hinston river.

Greg: Look to your left.

(Chloe turns to her left)

Chloe: Oh my god! It’s a hot air balloon!

Greg: I told you our date would be very special.

[bakedbean]

Wow i am really loving hinston high it has some great potential

[DaVeyWaVey]

Things are going to start getting better in Hinston High soon :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 6- The Campbells House

(Tanya enters through the door with a pair of crutches, with Lee, Tina, Luke and Emily following behind)

Luke: Now do what the doctor what says, take it easy.

Tanya: Oh for goodness sake Luke, I can look after myself, I don’t need to take it easy at all.

Lee: Yes you do, Luke is right.

Tanya: Look I don’t need all this pampering, it’s not like I have just had a major operation is it?!?!

(Tanya turns on the tv and sits down)

Tanya: Look I just wanna sit down and watch some daytime tv, now can you all please leave me alone?!?!

Luke: Come on kids, why don’t we go to the park? Give mum some peace.

Tina: I am going off to the café, no way I am going to the park.

Luke: Lee?

Lee: Yeah ok.

Scene 7- The Weatherbys House

(Christina and Sean appear in the kitchen)

Christina: Sean is taking me out for a bit ok?

Jack: Where exactly?

Christina: Well I don’t know, he said it will be a surprise, didn’t you babes?

Sean: Yep, a good surprise.

Jack: Oh right ok, well don’t be too late back.

Christina: Oh dad please! I am no longer a child, Sean is with me, standing by my side.

Sean: Yeah don’t worry I will look after her Jack.

Jack: You better.

Christina: Just going to get my shoes, left them upstairs.

(Christina exits)

Jack: You better look after her when your out mind, if anything happens to my daughter I will hold you personally responsible.

Sean: Look chill, she will be fine, have you always been this overprotective?

Jack: I have always been protective, she is my daughter for crying out loud. You two won’t last you know?

Sean: And how do you know that?

Jack: My daughter’s relationships have always been a walking disaster, she is in the clouds right now with you gazing at the stars, I think her new relationship with you is too good to be true.

(Christina returns)

Christina: Ok got my shoes, ready to go babes?

(Sean makes a stern stare to Jack as he replys)

Sean: Yep, I am ready.

Scene 8- The Café

(The phone rings)

Felicity: I will get it.

(Pat suddenly grabs Felicity’s hand as it reached the phone)

Pat: No I will answer it, now back to work.

Felicity: Ok suit yourself.

(Pat answers the phone)

Pat: Hello?

Caller: Hi Pat, me again!

Pat: What the bloody hell do you want? Why are you hassling me?

Caller: You hung up on me the other night, I thought that was pretty mean.

Pat: Well it was a bit of a surprise when I realised who it was. Now what do you want?

Caller: You know what I want…..i want to see Dave.

Pat: Well I am sure he doesn’t want to see you.

Caller: Well once he knows who I am, I am sure he would want to see me.

(Pat shouts down the phone)

Pat: Shut up! Just shut up!

(Pat slams the phone down)

Scene 9- Greg and Chloe

(Greg and Chloe are in the hot air balloon in the sky overlooking Hinston river)

Chloe: Oh Greg this is absolutely beautiful! Look at the view!

Greg: I know the view is fantastic, I paniced I thought you might have been scared of heights or something.

Chloe: Me and heights, no problem!

Greg: Oh good!

Chloe: This must have took you a lot of time to prepare.

Greg: Well I lent this hot air balloon from a mate.

Chloe: But it’s brilliant. This is just so……

Greg: Romantic?

Chloe: Yes, romantic.

(Greg puts his arm round Chloe as we see the hot air balloon moving along the sky)

Scene 10- The Pub

Nina: Umm…Kat where’s Chloe swanned off too?

Kat: Oh I swear Mike told me that Chloe had to leave early and that’s why I had to come in early to start my shift.

Nina: Oh I see.

(Mike appears from behind the bar and sees Nina and Kat talking)

Mike: What’s this? A woman’s meeting?

Nina: Well in a matter of fact I was just asking Kat where Chloe was?

Mike: Ah….

Nina: What?

Mike: Well…..

Kat: I better leave you two to it, there’s punters wanting serving.

(Kat leaves)

Nina: Just spit it out!

Mike: Well I let Chloe go early…

(Nina crosses her arms)

Nina: Why the hell did you do that for? Why did she deserves not to do all her shift? What did she do?

Mike: She didn’t do anything…her and Greg were going on a date.

Nina: Oh not this again! She asked me for time off for her to go on a date with Greg the other day!

Mike: And you told her no!

Nina: And you told her yes!

Mike: I didn’t really have much of a choice.

(Nina raises her voice)

Nina: Much of a choice? For Christ sake, you run this pub along with me, of course you had a choice! Chloe should put her love life aside when it comes to work, I am not very happy with you and I am definetly speaking to Chloe when she turns up for her next shift!

(Nina marches upstairs as Mike looks on)

Scene 11- The Butleys House

(Ben returns from work and enters the kitchen where Julia is cooking tea)

Julia: Hi love, good day teaching today?

Ben: Yeah fine, had to deal with some troublemakers but apart from that it was ok, I didn’t see you at work today.

Julia: Oh I didn’t need to go in and help today.

Ben: Oh right, by the way did Danny go to school today?

Julia: Yes he did.

Ben: Well how come I seen him by my classroom today smoking?

Julia: Well I thought he was at school.

(Ben raises his voice and starts to shout)

Ben: Well you thought wrong!

Julia: Sorry love.

Ben: Even worse, I left my classroom to see what he was doing and he said that you said he didn’t have to go to school today if he didn’t want too.

Julia: I didn’t say that, you don’t honestly believe him do you?

Ben: Education is important Julia, just remember that before telling him he could skive school!

(Ben exits)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 1- The Butleys House

(It’s morning and Sally comes down for her breakfast just before school, she goes into the kitchen where Julia is sitting down eating her breakfast)

Julia: Oh Sally, sorry love! I forgot about your breakfast, here’s me just thinking about myself again.

Sally: No it’s ok don’t worry, I will get something on the way too school.

Julia: Are you sure? It won’t take a minute.

Sally: I’m sure. Where’s dad?

Julia: Oh he’s gone to work love.

Sally: Already?

Julia: Yeah he’s got an early start today.

(Sally sits down at the kitchen table next to Julia)

Sally: I heard you and dad arguing last night?

Julia: Arguing?

Sally: Well ok not arguing, more like dad raising his voice too you.

Julia: Oh that was nothing.

Sally: I am not stupid mum!

Julia: Well you know it was just Danny causing trouble again.

Sally: What kind of trouble?

Julia: Now come on you better go off to school.

Sally: Not until you tell me what happened.

Julia: Ok… well Danny told dad that I let him skive school yesterday.

Sally: And dad actually believed Danny?

Julia: Yeah he did.

Sally: And that’s why he shouted at you?

Julia: Yes that’s right.

Sally: So what are you going to do?

Julia: What do you mean?

Sally: Aren’t you going to try and get dad to believe you and are you going to confront Danny over what he said to dad?

Julia: Oh no, I am not going to do anything like that. Dad will soon get over it and Danny will probably not do it again.

Sally: But mum you have to got to do something about it.

Julia: Off to school go on……before your late.

Sally: But mum!

Julia: Just go.

Sally: Ok but don’t let Danny get away with lying to dad.

Julia: Just go to school love, Danny is already there, he left early, he will be waiting for you.

(Sally leaves)

Scene 2- Chloe and Kat’s Flat

(Kat is sitting on the sofa reading a magazine as Chloe is in the kitchen making coffee)

Kat: Where were you yesterday anyway? I didn’t see you all day.

Chloe: Yeah I did arrive back late.

Kat: Where the hell were you?

Chloe: If you must know I was with Greg.

Kat: All day?

Chloe: Yep.

Kat: I wondered where you went off too because you didn’t do your full shift did you?

Chloe: No I didn’t.

Kat: Just a word of warning then… Nina is going to kill you when you arrive for your next shift.

Chloe: Oh great, I will be facing Nina’s wrath in about two hours then….

Kat: Anyway what did you and Greg get up to?

Chloe: Well if you must know, me and Greg went up in a hot air balloon together!

Kat: Are you being serious?

Chloe: Yep, we overlooked Hinston river and everything!

Kat: Aaah….I wish I had a bloke that would treat me like that…..

Scene 3- The Campbells House

(Tanya is about to get up on her crutches and leave when Luke walks through)

Luke: Oy! What are you doing Tan? You should be taking it easy.

Tanya: Look I just want to get out and get some fresh air, is that a crime?

Luke: Well I suppose you should go out, you have been stuck in here since you left hospital.

Tanya: Look some fresh air will do me some good, I am only popping to the café.

Luke: Well just make sure you take it easy then and don’t go to the pub!

Tanya: Oh please Luke, I am only going to the café and coming straight back. Nothing to worry about babes.

Luke: Ok well I am heading off to work in a while so I will probably see you later.

Tanya: Yes you probably will. See ya later.

(Tanya gives Luke a peck on the cheek before leaving)

Scene 4- The Weatherbys House

(Alicia and Jack are talking in the kitchen when Christina walks in)

Alicia: Oh Christina, where did Sean take you last night?

Christina: Out to dinner.

Jack: (sarcastic) Oh how original!

Christina: Well it may not be original but it was a great night out.

(Pause)

Christina: Oh I almost forgot, is it ok if Sean comes round for dinner tonight?

Alicia: Yeah. I don’t see a problem with that, Jack?

Jack: Yeah, yeah should be fine.

Alicia: Do you want me to cook anything special?

Christina: Oh no, there’s no need. He should be coming round about 6ish.

Alicia: Ok no problem.

Jack: We should have a wail of a time! (sarcastic)

[big bro fan]

Another good episode cant wait for the next part.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 5- The Flat at the top of The Café

(Dave and Felicity are talking)

Felicity: Dave?

Dave: Yes what do you want?

Felicity: Well I was wondering if you have noticed something?

Dave: Probably not, our minds are usually on different planets!

Felicity: Dave, I am being serious.

Dave: Well go on….

Felicity: Well don’t you think mum’s been acting weird lately?

Dave: Well I haven’t really noticed a change in her…. Apart from the prank calls of course!

Felicity: Yes, you see that’s the problem….well you haven’t been there.

Dave: Been where?

Felicity: You haven’t seen mum slamming the phone down on the person who calls here twice a day since 4 days ago!

Dave: You are on about the prank callers now, right?

Felicity: Yeah right. Everytime the phone rings, mum has to answer and when she does, she sounds…well she sounds….

Dave: Sounds like what?

Felicity: Threatening I suppose…..

Dave: Threatening?!?! Mum? No way!

Felicity: Well from where I have been standing when she has been answering that phone, she sounds threatening and I swear she knows who is on the end of the line…….

(Dave stands frozen as Felicity walks off)

Scene 6- The Garage

(Greg and Max are working on a car)

Max: I must admit though…you are onto a good ‘un.

Greg: Can we please stop going on about Chloe for atleast two minutes? That’s all I ask. It was a date nothing more….

Max: Yeah a date in a hot air balloon, you treated her good!

Greg: Yeah….

Max: I don’t think you know how lucky you are mate….. she’s nice looking…great personality, great bird!

(Greg starts to shout)

Greg: Well if you fancy her…you go on a date with her then!!

(Greg slams the screwdriver on the floor and walks out of the garage)

Scene 7- The Campbells House

(Luke walks through the front door after finishing his day at work. He walks into see Lee and Tina watching tv)

Luke: Where’s our Tan?

Tina: I dunno….

Lee: We had to walk home today and pick up Emily ourselves.

Luke: You mean Tan didn’t pick our Emily up from school?

Lee: No she didn’t.

Luke: Has she come back home at all?

Tina: Well we have only just got back ourselves.

(Pause)

Luke: Oh, I think I know where she could be….

Scene 8- The Café

(The phone rings)

Felicity: Now I will answer the phone this time mum.

(Felicity grabs the phone)

Pat: No….wait!

Felicity: Hello Pat’s café.

Caller: I need to speak to your mum.

Felicity: Why can’t you speak to me?

Caller: Just stop playing silly games with me and hand over the phone to your mum.

Felicity: Ok here she is.

(Felicity hands over the phone to Pat)

Pat: Well go on clear off…there are customers waiting to be served.

(Felicity exits)

Pat: Hello?

Caller: Oh Pat! Did Felicity just answer the phone?

Pat: Yes she did. Now what the hell do you want?

Caller: I was wondering if Dave was there…..I need to speak to him.

Pat: No he’s not here at the moment, so Frank please stop calling me!

(Pat slams the phone down)

Scene 9- The Weatherbys House

(Sean, Christina, Jack, Sam and Alicia are gathered round the kitchen table eating their tea)

Alicia: Well it’s nice having the whole family round the table eating tea for once isn’t it?

Jack: Except Sean isn’t family….

Alicia: Oh Jack stop it! Don’t listen to him Sean!

(Sean laughs politely)

Alicia: So Sean tell us a bit about yourself?

Sean: Well I am 21 years old.

Jack: A bit old for our daughter Alicia.

Christina: Oh dad stop it, Sean’s trying to speak.

Sean: And there’s nothing more to say really….apart from that I love your daughter.

(Jack begins to laugh)

Jack: You! You! You loving my daughter! Look at ya, you don’t even suit my daughter.

Christina: Dad, stop it! I love Sean and Sean loves me.

Jack: Oh come of it! You’ve only been going out five bloody minutes!

(Alicia tries to change the subject)

Alicia: Would anyone like pudding?

Sam: Oh yes please!

Jack: I will go and do it, I can’t stand that scruffy kid of an idiot round our kitchen table!

Sean: I will wash up if you like?

Alicia: Oh Sean that’s ever so kind.

Christina: Sean is always kind, aren’t you babes?!

(Sean leaves to go to the kitchen where Jack is making pudding)

Jack: Don’t you dare try and muscle in on my family!

Sean: Your lucky you have got a bloody family!

(Jack suddenly flies a punch at Sean and Sean knocks everything of the kitchen before collapsing on the floor)

Scene 10- The Pub

(Luke walks in on the pub door where he sees Tanya drinking from a glass bottle while singing)

Luke: Tan?

Tanya: Oh Lukey babes!

(Tanya tries to walk towards Luke but she ends moping around knocking glass bottles on the floor)

Nina: I have tried to tell her she’s had enough.

(Luke turns to Tanya)

Luke: You bitch! You stupid bitch! I have had it up to here with you!

Tanya: Don’t you dare call me a bloody bitch!

(Tanya swings and throws her glass bottle towards Luke’s face. Can Luke avoid the violent attack?)

[big bro fan]

Another great episode Dave you should do well at the script and soap awards.

[bakedbean]

Yeah you should do well when the soapawards appear at the end of july mid august

[DaVeyWaVey]

Well i really hope i do well in the soapboard awards:) and i am glad you all liked my latest episode:) A lot more action will be happening soon...and the next episode will be up just before 10pm tonight:)

[big bro fan]

Beware Haven Holidays starts this weekend. But im sure you will do well in all the awards.

[DaVeyWaVey]

(We pick up from where we left off in the last episode where Tanya chucked a glass bottle at Luke’s face)

Scene 1- The Pub

(Luke ducks and luckily the glass bottle that Tanya threw hits the wall)

Nina: Right! That’s it Tanya, your out of this pub now!

(Tanya shouts)

Tanya: Don’t worry I am going! I am not sticking round here.

Nina: Luke, take her home.

(Luke moves to Tanya and she leans on his shoulder to help her walk)

Luke: You cow! You stupid cow!

Mike: Do you need help taking her home?

Luke: Oh yes, if you wouldn’t mind, I don’t think she can walk home with her just leaning on my shoulder.

(Mike opens the pub door where Luke and Mike start to carry Tanya home)

Scene 2- The Weatherbys House

(Jack stands frozen as Christina, Sam and Alicia run into the kitchen to see Sean lying unconscious on the floor)

Christina: Oh my god dad! What the hell have you done?

(Jack continues to stand frozen)

Christina: You idiot! You bloody idiot!

(Christina tries to push Jack and then slaps him)

Sam: Is he dead?

(Alicia leans over Sean)

Alicia: No he’s still breathing.

Christina: I am calling an ambulance.

Jack: I didn’t mean to do this.

Christina: Dad, what you just did was unforgivable!

Scene 3- The Butleys House

(Sally goes to see Danny in his room)

Danny: What are you doing in my room?

Sally: I wanna know why you lied to dad?

Danny: Dad? When did I lie to dad?

Sally: The other day you told dad that mum let you skive school.

Danny: She did.

Sally: I don’t believe you.

Danny: I don’t care if you believe me or not.

Sally: You lied Danny, your trying to stir up trouble!

Danny: So what if I am?!

(Danny begins to laugh as Sally leaves his room)

Scene 4- The Pub

(Tom and Max are drinking at the pub)

Tom: Why ain’t Greg drinking with us tonight?

Max: I don’t know. Why are you asking me?

Tom: I just thought that you might have known that’s all. He usually comes for a drink with us every night.

Max: Well he might have not been in the mood for a drink tonight.

Tom: Yeah you could be right….Greg just seems awfully erratic lately. I feel it’s something I have said.

Max: Why do you think everything involves you?

Tom: I don’t think that…. I am just saying that’s all or it could have been something you said.

Max: No I haven’t said anything, why do you think I have said something?

Tom: You have said something to him, haven’t you?

Max: Not exactly….I was just talking to him about Chloe, then he went off on one.

Tom: Aha, now that explains why he was giving you the cold shoulder after lunchtime.

Max: Yeah well…I don’t exactly know what I said.

(Tom and Max continue to drink their drinks)

Scene 5- The Campbells House

(Luke and Mike enter through the front door with a drunken Tanya. Lee and Tina appear)

Tina: What the bloody hell’s happened?

Lee: I think I can guess….

Luke: Yeah your mum’s got drunk again.

(Luke and Mike throw Tanya onto the sofa)

Luke: Thanks for helping me carrying her home mate.

Mike: No problem, I think she shouldn’t be going to the pub anytime soon.

Luke: Yeah….

Mike: Well bye.

Luke: Thanks again.

(Mike exits)

Luke: Where’s our Emily?

Lee: She’s just gone to sleep….Tina put her to bed.

Tina: Yeah I did.

Luke: Good… I don’t want Emily seeing Tan in this state.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 6- The Hospital

(It’s early morning, and Sean is laying in a hospital bed with Christina by his side)

Sean: Oh, Christina! I am so glad you are here for me.

Christina: I will be here with you all the time darlin’ no matter what. You know that don’t you?

Sean: Yes I know.

Christina: I am just so sorry about my father’s behaviour.

Sean: You shouldn’t be sorry, if anyone should be sorry, it should be him.

Christina: Well I am still blaming myself over what happened.

(The doctor appears)

Doctor: Ok now Sean, you did really suffer a hard punch from whoever did this to you but you have recovered quickly and you can go home by the end of the day...

Sean: Oh that’s brilliant!

Doctor: And now I think your fit enough to face police questioning, the police are here to see you Sean……

(Sean looks worried as Christina looks terrified……)

Scene 7- The Campbells House

(Tanya is laying on the sofa suffering from a hangover and Luke appears from the kitchen with a glass of water)

Luke: Here you go.

(Luke passes the water over to Tanya)

Luke: Now Tan…I must really be getting off to work.

Tanya: Oh can’t you just stay here today for me? Atleast skive one day of work darlin’.

Luke: I thought I was meant to be providing for the family and I am not if I am here looking after you.

Tanya: Fine! Don’t be here looking after your wife then…..

Luke: Oh for goodness sake Tan, I am sick of you…..what you did last night was so humiliating for me and for you. You looked like a bloody laughing stock! You gotta stop this drinking or our marriage will be on the line…..

Tanya: You made our marriage go on the line with that bloody affair! Now get out of here!

Luke: I am just about to go but last night, you chucked a glass bottle at me and it nearly hit my face!

Tanya: Just get out of here!

(Luke leaves and slams the front door)

Scene 8- The Garage

(Greg appears for work and Tom is already working on a car)

Tom: Oh alright?

Greg: Yeah alright.

Tom: How come you didn’t come for a drink last night?

Greg: Oh, I just didn’t want too.

Tom: Why not?

Greg: Because I didn’t. Now what’s with the questions?

Tom: Just wondering that’s all.

Greg: Where’s Max?

Tom: Oh he went to get two coffees from the café.

(Pause)

Tom: He said something about Chloe to you yesterday didn’t he?

Greg: Stop talking about Chloe! I had enough grief about her from Max yesterday….just please! I want to get on with working with this car.

Tom: Ok.

Scene 9- The Weatherbys House

(Jack and Alicia are arguing over Jack’s fight with Sean in the kitchen)

Alicia: Oh Jack, how could you?

Jack: Don’t you see Alicia, Sean is just like the rest of Christina’s numerous ex-boyfriends. He will mess her about.

Alicia: Well she will have to work out if Sean is messing about with her herself.

Jack: So you want to see our daughter get hurt? Is that it?

Alicia: No it’s just part of growing up. I won’t be surprised if we get a visit from the police.

Jack: Oh Alicia, that squirt won’t press charges, don’t be so ridiculous!

Alicia: He was in a bad state when he went into hospital….

Jack: And now he’s come round.

Alicia: And now our own daughter won’t speak to us after what you did!

Jack: Once she knows the truth, the better!

Alicia: What I don’t understand is how do you know he is trouble?

Jack: I can just feel it Alicia, there’s something dodgy about him that needs to be discovered……

Scene 10- The Pub

(Chloe and Kat are talking behind the bar)

Kat: Now what are you going to do about Greg after your date?

Chloe: Oh Kat, I have had enough of you talking about Greg.

Kat: But the way you described your date, it just sounded so romantic, I think he really likes you and I think you really like him too.

Chloe: How do you know what I am feeling?

Kat: Oh Chloe, I would die to have a guy like him! Come on! Grab Greg while he’s here before you lose him to someone else or even worse lose him forever…….

(Kat walks off as Chloe thinks about what Kat just said)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 1- The Hospital

(Sean has just been discharged from hospital and he is waiting outside with Christina waiting for his dad to arrive to pick him up)

Sean: I don’t know why I had to stay overnight!

Christina: I think they just wanted to keep you in for one more night just to check you were ok.

Sean: Yeah your probably right, I just don’t know what to do about dad. I mean once he picks me up, he will question me over my injuries. I mean I can’t actually say, oh my girlfriend’s dad walloped me! Can I?

Christina: No I suppose you can’t. I just can’t believe that you didn’t grass my dad up to the police…..

Sean: Christina, I am not a grass!

Christina: But you lied to them, you said you fell of your bike and hit a tree for Christ sake!

Sean: Oh Christina, please! I just don’t want the police on my back.

Christina: Why not?

Sean: I just don’t…..

(Sean’s dad Dean soon turns up in a sports car outside the hospital and pulls his windscreen down)

Dean: Come on son, get in! You can tell me what happened, tell me who bloody did this, and they will pay, I can guarantee it son!

(Christina looks terrified)

Sean: Ok, well I will see you later.

(Sean kisses Christina)

Dean: Don’t your girlfriend wanna lift?

Christina: Oh no, I am fine thanks.

(Sean gets in the car)

Dean: Ok your loss!

(Dean pulls the windscreen up and him and Sean speed off in the sports car)

Scene 2- Chloe and Kat’s Flat

Chloe: I thought about what you said Kat.

Kat: Oh yeah, and what have you decided?

Chloe: I decided that I am going to go for it.

Kat: You mean asking out Greg?

Chloe: Yeah, you were right, an opportunity like this doesn’t come round everyday!

Kat: Do you fancy him though?

Chloe: Yeah I think I do, I just need to get to know him a bit better.

Kat: Oh this is the best news I have heard all morning.

(Kat hugs Chloe before heading to the bathroom)

Scene 3- The Café

(The phone rings. Pat darts over to answer it)

Pat: Hello.

Caller: Hi Pat, guess who?

Pat: I get the impression that you didn’t take my advice then.

Caller: I was just ringing to see if we could make some arrangements….

Pat: What kind of arrangements?

Caller: You know the arrangements…..the arrangements to see Dave.

Pat: Your not seeing him and that’s final!

Caller: No it’s not final, you can’t stop me seeing Dave now can you?

Pat: Stay away from Dave, you hear me!

Caller: I am coming round Pat, I am coming round to your café in Hinston….to see Dave.

(The caller hangs up and Pat is left terrified….as Pat turns round, Dave and Felicity are standing right in her face)

Felicity: I think it’s about time you tell us the truth mum, we know something is going on.

Pat: Look there’s nothing going on.

Dave: Who was on the phone?

Pat: Nobody.

Felicity: We are not children anymore mum, so just tell us the truth!

Pat: Come on, you should be getting on with working.

Dave: Not until you tell us the truth.

Pat: Stop being awkward please, now can I just get passed? Atleast I will be carrying on serving customers at the café.

Felicity: Your not going passed us until you tell us the truth…..the whole truth and nothing but the truth…….

(Pat stands frozen)

Scene 4- Harry and Jenna’s House

(Harry is about to head off to work and Jenna has just made him lunch)

Jenna: Now remember home early!

Harry: Oh Jen, I can’t promise anything you know!

Jenna: Look I will be ready and prepared by the time you get back.

Harry: I just don’t think I will be in the mood when I get back.

Jenna: Well I thought you would be, I mean you would be putting your cab in overdrive for most of the day….

(Pause)

Jenna: You are still interested in having children aren’t you?

(Pause)

Harry: Yeah….yeah of course I am still up for it….just not today. I am not in the mood especially after a tough day at work.

Jenna: You have used that same excuse for 2 weeks now!

Harry: Look, I am still interested.

Jenna: Well prove it to me then! If your really interested in have children with me, show it to me!

Harry: Look see you later.

(Harry pecks Jenna on the cheek before leaving for work)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 5- The Café

(Felicity and Dave have blocked Pat’s path and corners her by the phone demanding to know the truth)

Pat: I don’t have time for this, now stop playing silly games!

Felicity: You’re the one playing the stupid games by not telling us the truth!

Pat: Look there’s nothing going on, so I don’t see the big deal.

Dave: There is something going on.

Felicity: Yeah there is, you’re the only person who is allowed to answer the phone, when you do whisper and sometimes shout and then slam the phone down!

Dave: I think it’s someone you know who has been making these awkward phone calls…..

Felicity: And we think that you know who it is……

Pat: Look I am in a bit of money trouble…….

Dave: Money trouble?

Pat: Yes money trouble, I owe people money.

Felicity: Oh dear mum, you haven’t been involved in any scams have you?

Pat: No nothing like that…..look listen to me, we are in serious debt and if we don’t pay these debts then we will lose the café forever…..

Dave: We will lose the café?! I don’t believe it, it’s a family business and everything.

Pat: Well it’s the way life goes sometimes, now this is why I have been so awkward and have had so much pressure on my shoulders plus you have been hassling me all the time asking me what’s up and that has made matters worse…..

Felicity: Oh mum, we are so sorry.

Dave: Yeah sorry mum, we didn’t know what was happening that’s all.

Felicity: Is there anything we can do?

Dave: Maybe we could sell some of our stuff so we can raise the money to pay the debts off?

Pat: No Dave, we will not do anything like that.

Felicity: Well what else are we going to do?

Pat: I will think of something, now come on back to work!

(Dave leaves to serve customers at the café counter)

Felicity: Oh mum, we are so so sorry, me and Dave both are!

(Felicity hugs Pat)

Felicity: We will fight these debts together…….

Scene 6- The Weatherbys House

(Jack and Alicia are in the kitchen)

Alicia: I am very well surprised that the police haven’t been round here yet to arrest you after what you did to Sean!

Jack: Oh look, can we stop going on about Sean?!?! I have realised now that punching Sean was a big mistake.

Alicia: You mean assaulting Sean was a big mistake?

Jack: I only gave him a punch and he lost his balance….

Alicia: I hope your not lying to me.

Jack: You were there.

Alicia: Me, Sam and Christina came through once we heard Sean crash onto the kitchen floor!

Jack: After I punched him….. I bet the little squirt hasn’t grassed me up!

Alicia: Don’t speak too soon.

Jack: Do you want me to get done by the police for punching or assaulting Sean, Alicia?

Alicia: What you did was such a big mistake, we (only known him five minutes but once we were at the dinner table, you came out with all guns blazing…..

Jack: I can see that I am getting so much moral support from my wife! (sarcastic)

Alicia: I am trying to support you but what you did was wrong and if Sean didn’t grass you up to the police, then your very lucky! I am not trying to take sides you know Jack!

Jack: I know.

Alicia: I will always love you no matter what you do……all I think you should do now is apologise to Sean and try and get along with him.

Jack: What?!

Alicia: Please just please, put the effort in to try and get along with him for Christina’s sake.

Jack: Ok.

(Christina suddenly comes bursting through the back door)

Alicia: Oh Christina, how’s Sean?

Christina: You mean, has Sean grassed dad up to the police?......Well good news dad, he didn’t, you better thank your lucky stars!

Jack: Look I am sorry Christina.

Christina: You should be saying sorry to Sean, not me!

Alicia: Well I am glad your back now, would you like something to eat?

Christina: Oh no, I am not stopping for long, I am staying over Sean’s for the night.

(Christina rushes upstairs as Jack and Alicia look on dismay)

Scene 7- The Garage

(Chloe enters, she suddenly turns to Max and Tom, while Greg is working on a car)

Chloe: Oh Tom and Max, is it ok if I speak to Greg in private?

Tom: Sure, we will just be leaving won’t we Max?

(Tom winks at Max)

Max: Um….yeah we better be going. See you later Greg.

Tom: Greg, there’s someone here to see you.

(Greg looks up from the car he is working on to see Chloe, while Tom and Max leaves)

Chloe: Hi Greg.

Greg: Oh hi Chloe, what are you doing here? You don’t want a car fixed do you?

Chloe: Oh no, nothing like that.

(Pause)

Chloe: Look, maybe I should go. I shouldn’t be speaking to you in professional hours.

Greg: No stay.

Chloe: No I should be getting back to the pub anyway, Mike and Nina will have a fit!

Greg: I thought you finished work at 1pm, it’s 3pm now.

Chloe: Oh……well……I am working overtime today.

Greg: Ok well, I might see you in the pub later.

Chloe: Yeah maybe…..bye.

(Chloe leaves anxiously while Greg goes underneath the car to continue to work)

Scene 8- Harry and Jenna’s House

(Harry walks through the door after finishing his shift and sees Jenna in a nightie)

Jenna: You decided to come home early then?

Harry: Yeah like I said I wanted to prove to you I want what you want, my steering wheel has been in overdrive all day……

(Jenna undoes her nightie and Harry soon realises that Jenna has no clothes on)

Jenna: We better head upstairs then………

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 1- Hinston School

(Sally runs outside the school to hear fellow pupils chanting fight)

Pupils: (shouting) Fight! Fight! Fight!

(Sally breaks through the crowd of pupils to see Danny fighting with another teenage his age)

Sally: Danny, what the hell do you think your doing?

(Danny punches the teenager to the ground)

Danny: He is getting what he deserves, Sal.

Sally: This isn’t right your going to get in trouble.

Danny: I know I will, I am not stupid but I don’t care, he’s worth it.

(A group of teachers run outside to try and stop the fight)

Teacher: Ok, everyone step back, in fact everyone go home! School has finished, the bell has gone, now off you go, all of you!

(The pupils back off and begin to walk away from the fight, while Danny has stopped punching the teenager to the ground and he stands there with a nose bleed)

Teacher: Now Danny, what do you think your doing fighting with a fellow pupil?

Danny: He deserved it.

Teacher: Fighting doesn’t solve anything, now come back into the school, we are ringing your parents, and your not just going to get in trouble with them, your going to be in big trouble here too!

(The teacher pulls Danny by the collar and back into the school. The teenager gets up from the ground with Sally standing by him)

Sally: Are you ok?

George: Yeah I am fine, just a few bruises and a bit of blood that’s all.

Sally: You make it sound like it isn’t a big deal.

George: Well it isn’t.

Sally: By the way, the kid you were fighting with…..

George: Danny?

Sally: Yeah…..he’s my brother.

George: Oh I see…..

Sally: And I just want to apologise on his behalf.

George: Oh no, you shouldn’t be sorry.

Sally: Just accept my apology.

George: Ok, that’s alright.

(Pause)

Sally: Will you be ok walking home?

George: Yeah I will be fine…..I will see you around.

Sally: Yeah, see you around.

(George and Sally begin to walk home from the school in opposite directions)

Scene 2- Sean’s House

(Christina knocks on Sean’s door and she is carrying a small bagpack, Sean answers the door)

Sean: Oh hi.

Christina: Is it alright if I stop here for the night?

Sean: Oh yeah ok then, come in.

(Christina enters Sean’s house, takes her shoes off and puts her bag down)

Christina: It’s just I have had a big bust-up with my parents after that incident…..

(Dean appears)

Dean: What incident?

Sean: Oh dad, I can introduce you to Christina properly.

Dean: Don’t try and change the subject, is this incident about your black eye Sean?

Sean: Oh dad please, just drop it.

Dean: No I won’t drop it, maybe your new girlfriend can tell me what happened?

Christina: Um….

Sean: She can’t tell you anything! Now leave us be…

Dean: Why did you have a bust up with your parents Christina? Was it because of the incident you just mentioned of my son being punched unconscious? Did one of your parents punch my son?

Christina: (shouts) No!

Sean: Yes!

(Christina makes an angry look at Sean)

Dean: Right, that’s it!

(Dean grabs and twists Christina’s arm)

Dean: Now you better tell me who punched my son unconscious!

(Christina speaks in pain)

Christina: Ah….ah…let go off me!

Dean: Tell me or I will make things a lot worse for you.

Sean: Let go off her dad! It’s not her fault!

Christina: It’s my dad’s fault, he punched Sean!

Dean: Right! You live in Hinston right?

Christina: Yeah.

Dean: Right then, your going to show me where you live and I am going to teach your dad a lesson he will never forget………

Scene 3- The Pub

(Chloe walks into the pub and heads straight to Kat who is working behind the bar)

Chloe: Oh Kat! I couldn’t do it…..

Kat: Do what?

Chloe: Ask out Greg, I couldn’t do it.

Kat: Why not? I thought you were well up for asking him out?

Chloe: I was, but when I had to actually ask him, well I was too nervous I suppose.

Kat: Do you want me to ask him out for you?

Chloe: No no, you don’t do anything. I want to ask him out myself. He said he might be in here later.

(Greg, Tom and Max walk into the pub)

Kat: Well here’s your chance………

(Chloe turns round to see Greg)

Scene 4- Harry and Jenna’s House

(Harry brings up a cup of tea to his and Jenna’s bedroom where Jenna is lying in bed. Harry passes over the cup of tea to Jenna)

Jenna: Well we didn’t do that in a while…..

Harry: I told you I would prove it to you.

Jenna: You do want children though don’t you?

(Pause)

Harry: Yeah….of course I do.

Scene 5- The Pub

(Luke walks in to see Tanya drinking. He walks over to her)

Luke: What do you think your doing here?

Tanya: Only having a drink, no harm in that is there?

Luke: I had to a double shift today at work because another builder was ill, then I got a phone call to say you didn’t pick Emily up from school, so I had to get her home from school.

Tanya: Sounds like you had a busy day then….

Luke: I was wondering where you got too….but then I thought, of course she will be in the pub, where she always is….

Tanya: Yep, go on then get home, cook the tea.

Luke: I am not going home to cook tea, I am going out to enjoy myself like you seem to do every night….

Tanya: Like you enjoyed yourself with my ex-boss….

Luke: It’s your turn to look after the children and cook them tea tonight, I’m off.

(Luke leaves as Tanya looks on)

[DaVeyWaVey]

The next part of Hinston High will be up tomorrow night. :)

[bakedbean]

Oh i cant wait to see who is the caller i hope Pat gets them big time lol

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 6- The Weatherbys House

(Dean goes up to the Weatherbys front door and slams it down by kicking it with his feet)

(Alicia and Jack are in the kitchen, they both jump when they hear the noise)

Alicia: Oh my god, what was that?

Jack: I think it was our front door…..

(Jack runs to the front door where Dean punches him in the face, Sean and Christina are standing behind him in dismay)

Sean: Dad, don’t be so stupid!

Christina: My dad’s not worth it Dean.

Dean: He is worth it! If he’s been beating up my son, he’s definetly worth it!

(Alicia rushes through to the hallway after hearing the punch. She looks in horror as Jack struggles to stand up from the floor)

Alicia: Oh my god, Jack! Dear Jack! Are you ok?

Jack: I am fine love….

Alicia: What the bloody hell do you think you are doing in our house?

Dean: Teaching your husband a lesson about not messing around with the Gallagher family……

Jack: Have you ever heard of anger management?

Dean: Looking for another punch are you mate?

Jack: You just gave me a punch….atleast when I punched your son, I knocked him out! Look at you, you throw a punch at me, and I struggle to the floor!

Dean: You better watch your mouth because if you don’t you won’t have a mouth left…..

(Dean gets a knife from his back pocket, and pins Jack to the floor holding the knife to his mouth ready to peel it off)

Scene 7- Nightclub

(Luke enters a nightclub just outside of Hinston, we see pole dancers and hear music blaring. Luke heads to the bar, when he gets to the bar, a sexy barmaid appears)

Geena: Anything I can get you?

Luke: Just a drink….

Geena: The name of the drink would help?

Luke: Just a vodka then, and one for yourself.

Geena: Oh your ever so kind…..

(Luke gets out his cash as Geena goes to get the drinks)

Scene 8- The Pub

(Greg, Tom and Max are sitting drinking as Kat and Chloe are speaking behind the bar)

Kat: Come on Chloe, they are gonna leave soon.

Chloe: I think I will wait for Greg to make the first move.

Kat: But what happens if he doesn’t?

Chloe: Then he obviously isn’t interested.

Kat: Has it ever appeared to you that Greg might be shy as well?

(Pause)

Kat: Go on Chloe, go for it, before it’s too late, live for the moment!

Chloe: Your right, but what shall I actually say?

Kat: Umm…hi, how are you? Would be a start…….

Chloe: Then?

Kat: Then just ask him!

Chloe: Just like that?

Kat: Well build up to it then! Just do it!

Chloe: Why are you so interested in me going out with Greg anyway?

Kat: Because it’s a romance waiting to happen….look I will go over there and ask him for you!

Chloe: No, just bring him over here, I will speak to him then.

Kat: Ok.

(Kat goes to Greg’s table where Greg, Tom and Max are sharing a joke over a drink)

Kat: Greg, Chloe needs to speak to you.

Greg: Oh right, why don’t she come over here, share a drink with me?

Kat: Actually she would want to share a date with you….

Greg: You what?

Kat: A date, she wants to go on another date with you Greg.

Max: Oooh…told you mate, love is in the air!

Greg: Give it a break will you Max?!

Kat: So go over and talk to her before it’s too late….

Greg: Well you’re her best friend, so what should I actually say to her? What is she impressed by?

Kat: Well she was impressed by that hot air balloon that’s for sure…

Greg: Ok…well she will be even more impressed tomorrow then!

Kat: So the date is on then?

Greg: Yeah of course it is, with Chloe right?

Kat: Yeah….obviously not me!

(Kat runs over to Chloe)

Kat: Chloe, you got a date!

Chloe: What?

Kat: You got a date with Greg!

Chloe: I wanted to ask him out myself, thanks a bunch!

Kat: I was only trying to help….

Chloe: He thinks I can’t cope with my private life myself, what’s he going to think of me?!

Kat: For goodness sake, you should be celebrating, you got another date with a hunk like him!

Chloe: Oh Kat, give it a rest, you can’t help yourself but mess around with my private life, arranging my life for me! I should be doing it myself!

(Chloe walks out of the pub while Kat pours herself a drink from behind the bar)

Scene 9- The Café

(Pat is about to get into bed when the phone rings, Pat rushes to the phone and picks it up)

Pat: Hello?

Frank: Hi Pat.

Pat: Oh Frank it’s you again!

Frank: You don’t sound very pleased to see me!

Pat: Well do you know what time it is?!?! Half past bloody 10!

Frank: Well I just didn’t want to turn up out of the blue did i?!

Pat: What do you mean by that?

Frank: I am coming round the café tomorrow Pat, to see my son!

(Frank hangs up as Pat looks alarmed)

Scene 10- The Campbells House

(Tanya comes through the front door as Lee and Tina are watching tv)

Tina: Mum, where the hell have you been?!

Tanya: Been painting the town red, love.

Lee: Have you been drinking again?

Tanya: I have only had a few drinks….calm down! Anyway where’s Luke?

Tina: He ain’t came home either! Bet he’s gone off with another slapper…….

[big bro fan]

Im guessing that Frank is an old flame of Pat's from the past and perhaps he was violant and now wants to see his son. I love this script it's fantastic more soon please.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 1- The Weatherbys House

(As Dean is about to cut Jack’s mouth with a knife, Christina hits Dean over the head with a vase, Dean is knocked out and falls to the floor with the knife in his hand)

Christina: Oh my god, I can’t believe I just did that!

(Sean and Alicia stand frozen as Jack gets up off the floor in shock)

Christina: Sean, I’m sorry!

Sean: I thought your dad was violent, I never knew you were violent, is your whole bloody family violent?

Christina: No I didn’t mean it, I paniced, he nearly cut my dad’s mouth open!

Alicia: I will call an ambulance.

Christina: No, don’t.

Jack: Are you mad?

Christina: He will come round…..

Jack: He might have a serious head wound. I never knew you were mad and stupid……

Christina: For goodness sake dad, I was protecting you, he could have cut your mouth open!

Jack: You tried to protect me, but look what you did, you stupid, stupid girl! I mean you decide to go out with a loser like him, and then you knock his stupid dad out with a vase! You stupid girl, I told you there would be trouble!

Sean: I am going….

Alicia: Don’t you want to stay with your dad? I just called an ambulance, they will be here soon, you might as well stay Sean…

Sean: Ok I will.

Christina: What are we going to say when the ambulance gets here? Shall I just say it wasn’t me?

Jack: And what will we say then? It was Mr. Blobby?

Alicia: They won’t actually ask us who did it, they will just want to know how he got his injuries, why don’t we say Dean lost his balance after he started a fight with you Jack, he got a knife out, you pushed him away and Dean hit a vase and got knocked out?

Christina: Sounds like a good enough story to me.....

Jack: Yeah but will the police believe it?

Alicia: We will just have to wait and see……

(It’s morning in Hinston High)

Scene 2- Nightclub

(Luke wakes up in a bed next to the barmaid he met last night, Geena)

Geena: Hiya babes.

Luke: Oh my god! I shouldn’t be here….

Geena: Why not? Late for work?

Luke: Not just that, I got a wife. I got children!

Geena: You what?! You said you were a free agent last night?

Luke: I was drunk last night.

Geena: Well you were a bit tipsy….

Luke: I can feel the headache coming on now…

(Geena suddenly hears footsteps coming up the stairs)

Luke: What’s that?

Geena: Oh my god, quickly! Hide!

Luke: Who is it?

Geena: Hide in the wardrobe now, quickly….

Luke: Who is it though?

Geena: My husband!

(As Luke is getting into the wardrobe, Andy, Geena’s husband turns the door handle, as Luke hides, he opens the door)

Andy: Did you just mention my name?

Scene 3- The Café

(Frank bangs on the café door, Pat rushes to the door and opens it, Franks barges through)

Pat: Oh my god, it’s you!

Frank: I did tell you I was coming, I want to see my son!

Pat: Why are you trying to get so involved all of a sudden? When you left, Dave was a baby and you didn’t have a single care in the world!

Frank: I want to start building bridges with my son, I want to have a bond with him. You see I watched a documentary on the TV a while back, it was about the family tree….

Pat: And that’s what’s made you come back here to look for Dave?

Frank: That is what made me come back here to look for my son! Now where is he?

Pat: He’s not here….

Frank: Don’t play games with me, now bring him down here to see his father before I do something I will regret…….

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 4- The Butleys House

(Danny and Sally are about to head off to school together, Julia passes Danny his lunch)

Julia: Now Danny, atleast try your best to behave at school today, you had a lucky escape yesterday….

Danny: I know I did and it was all thanks to you.

Julia: That teacher was really going to punish you, you know?!?! From what I heard, you hit that kid with so much force!

Danny: Mum, I don’t wanna talk about it, thanks for bailing me out and everything but I just want too sweep this whole incident under the carpet….

Julia: But I promised the teacher that I would punish you enough and that you didn’t need to be punished by the teachers but by me! But now, I am letting you get away with it scot-free…..

Danny: But mum, I promise that I won’t get into any more trouble…

Julia: Me and dad still have to think of a punishment for you so you really learn your lesson…

Danny: Whatever, see you later.

Sally: See you mum.

Julia: Bye loves.

(Danny and Sally leave for school)

Scene 5- The Nightclub

(Andy has just entered his and Geena’s room while Luke is hiding in the wardrobe)

Geena: What are you doing in here anyway?

Andy: What do you mean what I am doing here? This is my bedroom as well as yours….

Geena: I know…..

Andy: Why is our bed so untidy? Look the covers are all over the place, especially on my side of the bed……

Geena: Well you know….I spread my wings last night, I had to make the most of having the double bed all to myself for one night, anyway how did your business trip go?

Andy: It went ok, our club is doing well, the money going in and out of the business is doing well. Basically love, we are in the money! The club is getting plenty of profits!

Geena: Well good, anyway I am about to get changed, so if you don’t mind….

Andy: I am your husband Geena! I can stare at you when your getting changed if I want too.

Geena: Well you know me Andy, I like my privacy.

Andy: Well how about I decide what you should wear today?

(Andy heads over to the wardrobe)

Geena: No Andy, don’t!

Andy: You sound guilty, what are you hiding?

(Andy opens the wardrobe and stares straight into Luke’s face!)

Scene 6- Chloe and Kat’s Flat

(Greg rings the bell, Kat answers)

Greg: Is Chloe in?

Kat: Well she’s about to head off to work…..

Greg: Can I just speak to her?

Kat: Is it about the date you had planned for you and Chloe?

Greg: Well it’s none of your business, it’s between me and Chloe.

Kat: She doesn’t want to speak to you.....

Greg: What?

Kat: Chloe doesn’t want to speak to you, I told her about the date but she wanted to ask you on a date herself but I did it and now she thinks that you think that she can’t control her private life and she’s really mad now…..

Greg: But I don’t think that at all.

Kat: Well she’s doesn’t want to go on a date with you today because she didn’t ask you herself.

Greg: But I had a big surprise planned, now it’s ruined!

Kat: Maybe you will see her in the pub later, or call back round tomorrow, she might speak to you then…..

Greg: Ok, I will pop back by tomorrow, anyway I better be getting back to work.

Kat: Ok see you later.

Greg: See ya.

(Kat shuts the door as Greg walks off)

Scene 7- The Hospital

(Sean comes into the waiting room and Christina, Alicia and Jack are already sitting there)

Christina: How’s he doing babes?

Sean: He’s doing ok, anyway why do you care?

Christina: I care because he’s your family, like I said, I didn’t mean to hit him with the vase, he was about to attack my own dad!

Sean: Well you can tell the police that yourself, they are coming to the hospital now, they will want to know what happened.

Jack: Well I am going to tell the police that my daughter is dating the son who has a dad who is a mental maniac!

(Sean tries to control his anger)

Sean: We will see what happens when the police get here….

(Sean leaves the waiting room)

Scene 8- The Café

(Frank is sitting down on a chair when Pat comes down to the café with Dave following behind her)

Pat: Dave, there’s someone here to see you….

(Dave looks at Frank)

Dave: Sorry but I don’t think I know you.

Frank: You may not know me but I know you….

Dave: Who are you?

Frank: I am your dad, you’re my son!

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 1- The Café

(Dave stands frozen after Frank’s revelation)

Dave: What did you just say?!

Frank: I am your dad, you’re my son.

Dave: What? I think I know who my dad is.

Frank: Do you?

Dave: Yes he died in a car crash when I was a baby.

Frank: Who told you that?

Dave: My mum told me that.

(Pat looks terrified)

Dave: Look whoever you are, can you just leave?! The café hasn’t opened yet!

Frank: But I am your dad.

Dave: Look it’s not funny, impersonating my dad isn’t funny, he is dead! Do you find that funny, do you?!

Frank: Your mum’s been lying to you, your dad isn’t dead because I am your dad!

Dave: I don’t believe you!

Frank: Dave, you’re my son!

Dave: How do you know my name?

Frank: Because I named you when you were born! Do you believe me now?

Dave: You got it wrong, my mum would never lie to me!

Frank: I don’t blame your mum or should I say Pat, for saying to you that I was dead because at the time she hated me, she chucked me out, she said I could never see my son again!

Pat: How dare you Frank, how dare you try to pin the blame on me, you were the one who left us!

Frank: See your mum just admitted it!

Dave: Oh my god! You are my dad, you’re my dad! Mum, how could you?! You lied to me! You lied to your own son!

Pat: Look Dave, it was the right thing to do at the time, you were about 5 when you started asking questions about your dad, and that was the first thing that popped it in my head!

Dave: What that my dad was dead?!?! You have got a sick mind mum, you have got a sick mind!

Pat: Dave, I wasn’t the one who left you when you were a baby!

Dave: No, you were the one who decided to make up the fact that my dad was dead!

(Dave runs off and wipes a tear from his eye)

Pat: Dave….wait!

(Pat turns to Frank)

Pat: Now look what you have bloody done!

Frank: You were the one who lied to your own son, I just arrived to try and get to know him while I still can.

Pat: You make it sound like that leaving your own son when he was a baby, isn’t a big deal!

(Pat is about to lash out at Frank, but Frank stops her by grabbing her arm)

Pat: Let go off me!

(Pat tugs her arm from Frank’s hand)

Pat: What are you trying to do, tear my family apart!

Scene 2- The Hospital

(The police arrive to interview Dean. Dean is laying in a hospital bed)

Police: Now Dean, we just want to ask you a few questions, regarding how you got your injuries?

Dean: Oh right I see.

Police: So if you can tell us what happened from the start….

Dean: Well you see my memory of the event is a bit vague, I did have a head wound…..

Police: Yes we do understand but if you could tell us what you remembered?

Dean: Well I was going over to this family’s house, you see my son has started dating this girl and I was going to round to my son’s girlfriends house so we could meet each other…..

Police: I see and what happened next?

Dean: Well I arrived and everything was going well, until I offered to help with dinner, I was cutting onions you see and some of it got in my eye, so I was obviously holding the kitchen knife in my hand and I was walking round and I wasn’t able to see anything, this is when I lost my balance and hit my head against a vase….

Police: I see, well we did notice a knife in your possession….

Dean: And that was the knife I was using to cut the onions.

Police: I see, so no one was responsible with what happened?

Dean: No not at all, it was just all an accident….

Police: Ok well we are sorry to bother you, but I think this matter is closed….

Dean: Ok, well bye.

Police: Thanks for your time.

(The police leave)

(Sean enters)

Sean: Dad, what did you say to the cops?

Dean: That it was all an accident, your new girlfriend is off the hook….

Sean: But dad….

Dean: But nothing son, you know me, I am not a grass, I think your new girlfriend should come in here and thank me.

Sean: I will get her now for you, she will definetly thank you dad, you can be sure of that!

Scene 3- The Nightclub

(Andy stares straight into Luke’s face, he grabs him by the neck in a rage)

Andy: Who the bloody hell is hiding in our wardrobe Geena?

Geena: Oh I can explain….

Andy: It better be good, it better be damn good…..

Andy: So what is your name?

(Andy has still got Luke by the neck)

Luke: Um….Luke.

Andy: Oh Luke is it? And what are you doing in mine and my wife’s bedroom?

Luke: Well...

Andy: You were sleeping with my wife wasn’t you?! No one sleeps with my wife apart from me! You slept here all night, on my side of the bed, by the side of my wife, your gonna pay for that!

(Andy grabs Luke by the throat)

Andy: Tell me now that you didn’t sleep with my wife!

Luke: I didn’t sleep with your wife.

Andy: Liar! You bloody liar! I could murder you!

(Andy moves Luke by the throat to the edge of the window and opens the window, there’s a huge drop to the ground)

Andy: Your going to be in for a rough ride, I can assure you!

Luke: Please, don’t drop me….I am sorry, I was drunk, your wife came onto me!

Andy: My wife would never come on to anyone else!

(Andy pushes Luke out of the nightclub window, Luke screams, as he hits the ground, he falls unconscious, and blood starts to leak from Luke’s head)

Scene 4- The Hospital

(Christina goes to see Dean by his bedside)

Christina: Sean said that you didn’t grass me up to the police, I just want to say thank you.

Dean: I don’t want to have any thanks from you, if you really want to thank me for not grassing you up to the police, you have to do something for me, you gotta help me out…..

Christina: What do you mean? I only came in here to say thank you for what you have done, I am not doing anything else…..

Dean: So you want me to go to the police and tell them what really happened?

Christina: No….

Dean: Then you will help me out with a deal.

Christina: What kind of deal?

Dean: A drugs deal………..

[DaVeyWaVey]

Scene 5- Hinston School

(It’s lunch break at Hinston school and Sally approaches George)

Sally: Are you ok?

George: Yeah, why wouldn’t I be?

Sally: Well you are sitting on your own for lunch……….

George: I always am on my own for lunch, it doesn’t bother me!

Sally: Well I will keep you company today, I will sit with you for lunch….

George: No you don’t have too…..

Sally: I want to, were you ok after Danny punched you yesterday?

George: Yes I was fine, I can cope with a few bruises….

Sally: Why did my brother beat you up anyway?

George: Because I wouldn’t let him borrow a pen in class, and he got a detention because he didn’t have pen.

Sally: And this is why he punched you?

George: Yeah…

Sally: Well wait til I get hold of Danny…..

George: No don’t……I don’t want any more trouble.

Sally: There won’t be any more trouble once I have dealt with him.

George: Your nothing like your brother you know that?

(Sally smiles)

Scene 6- The Café

(The café is open, there are people drinking coffee in the background, Pat approaches Frank)

Pat: Are you ever going to leave?

Frank: I told you, I am here to see my son.

Pat: And where are you going to stay?

Frank: Here.

Pat: You’ve got a bloody cheek, your not staying here over my dead body.

Frank: Oh I am staying here, Felicity said I could.

Pat: What? Does she know who you are?

(Pat walks off in shock as Frank laughs. Pat approaches Felicity from behind the counter)

Pat: Do you know who he is?!

Felicity: What?

Pat: That man sitting over there with a newspaper and a coffee.

Felicity: Oh I knew you would have a fit, look he’s only staying here for a few nights, he’s got nowhere else to go.

Pat: I am surprised he hasn’t told you who he is…

Felicity: Look mum, calm down, who is he?

Pat: He is Dave’s father!

Felicity: What?! He’s here now!

Pat: Yes, that’s him.

Felicity: No wonder Dave has locked himself in his bedroom! He wouldn’t tell me what happened!

Pat: Yeah well, you just gave Dave’s dad a place to stay for the night, Dave will be over the moon! (sarcastic)

Felicity: Well I think Dave is just shocked to see him, after all, you did tell Dave that his father was dead! I think that’s why Dave is upset because you lied to him.

Pat: We both lied, do you remember when Frank left us? We both agreed that Dave should think that his father was dead, so don’t you dare try and pin the blame on me! Dave should be upset with Frank, because he decided to leave his own son when he was just a baby!

(Pat leaves in a rage)

Scene 7- The Nightclub

(Luke is lying unconscious on the ground as Geena looks down from the window)

Geena: What the hell were you playing at Andy?!?! Look at him! We gotta call an ambulance now!

(Geena reaches for the phone but Andy stops her)

Andy: No we won’t call an ambulance! We will leave him to die! He slept with my wife, he deserves to pay the price, and so do you…..

Geena: Please before he dies!

Andy: No!!!!!!!

(Andy grabs the phone and smashes it against the floor)

Andy: He will die! He will pay the price!

(Geena has a scared look on her face and she tries to grab the door but Andy grabs her by the waist and pushes her away from the door)

Andy: And you will pay the price too……..

Scene 8- The Campbells House

(Tina is ill and is lying on the sofa, Tanya sits by her side)

Tanya: Where the hell is Luke? He wasn’t home last night and I haven’t seen him all day, I am getting worried now, I might call the police.

Tina: Oh mum, don’t be so ridiculous! Like I told you, he probably is playing away like before…..

Tanya: Don’t say things like that, he promised he would never cheat on me again, he was truly sorry.

Tina: Was he?

[DaVeyWaVey]

Hi guys, just to let you know, my script will be written and posted scene by scene now, this way you can read more of my soap. :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- NIGHT

(The pub is crowded, Mike serves Harry)

Mike: Oh hi Harry, what would you like?

Harry: Oh just a brandy and a gin and tonic for Jenna please.

Mike: Coming right up….

(Harry gets his cash out as Mike prepares the drinks)

Mike: I haven’t seen you around here lately…..

Harry: Yeah well you know me, I have been busy.

Mike: Well your usually in here?!

Harry: Yeah I know but Jenna doesn’t want me to drink so much anymore…..

Mike: Why not? A good old drink won’t hurt you…..

Harry: That’s what I have been trying to tell her!

Mike: So what’s the problem?

Harry: She wants to try for a baby…..

Mike: I see, but you don’t have a problem with that do you?

Harry: Well you and Nina haven’t got kids and your doing ok….

Mike: So your not keen on the idea then?

Harry: One word: No!

Mike: So why don’t you tell her that?

Harry: Because she will get all upset and I know that she’s always wanted kids, so for me to tell her, I don’t want kids, well…..her heart will be broken!

Mike: Oh, I am sure your just exaggerating a bit?!

Harry: I’m not, I am being serious Mike! It will break her heart if I tell her I don’t want kids!

Mike: Well I suppose you got plenty of time to have kids…

Harry: We are getting old Mike, me and Jenna are both getting old! Before long, it will be too late to have kids…..

Mike: But Harry do you actually want kids? Have you and Jenna both tried yet?

Harry: Yeah we have both tried already, this is when I was trying to come to terms with the idea of having children, I really did try and approve of the idea of having children but I just can’t! I just don’t want children! Jenna keeps going on about baby plans now since I agreed with her idea of trying for children but now I am getting sick and tired of it!

Mike: The only advice I can give you mate, is to tell Jenna how you truly feel! Tell her you just don’t want children!

Harry: But it will break her heart…..

Mike: She deserves to know how you feel so tell her how you feel, she will soon get over it, I am sure of it!

(Mike passes the drinks over to Harry)

Mike: That’s £4.90 please.

(Harry passes the money over to Mike)

Mike: Thanks.

Harry: No thank you! Thanks for the advice, I am going to take it, I am going to try and tell Jenna how I feel…………

(Harry turns round with the drinks and sees Jenna smiling, he heads over to her with the drinks)

[DaVeyWaVey]

NIGHTCLUB- NIGHT

(Andy locks Geena in the bedroom and speaks through the door)

Andy: Now I dealt with you Geena, I am now going to dispose of Luke……

(Geena calls back through the door)

Geena: No, Andy no!!! Don’t do anything stupid! I love you!

Andy: You love me so that’s why you slept with another man!

Geena: You’ve played away as well! And I have forgiven you, I didn’t go crazy like you’ve just done!

Andy: Don’t you dare answer back you stupid bitch!

(Andy walks away from the door, as Geena starts crying, we see from the other side of the door Geena crouching against the door crying with blood dripping from her mouth, and a bruise on Geena’s eye)

Geena: What are you going to do with Luke?!?! The nightclub is opening soon!!

(Andy shouts from the bottom of the stairs)

Andy: I will dispose of him somehow, don’t you worry!

(Andy runs outside and looks round the back of the nightclub where Luke fell, he’s gone!)

Andy: Bloody hell, he’s still alive! :eek:

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFÉ- NIGHT

(Pat calls through Dave’s bedroom door)

Pat: Dave, let me in please! I need to explain!

Dave: Explain what?!?! Explain that you lied, you lied to me! You told me my father was dead! Was Felicity in on it as well?......

Pat: Just let me in, then I will explain.

Dave: I deserve an explanation even if I don’t let you in! The least you could do is to give me an explanation of why you lied to me! :angry:

Pat: Then let me in!

(Dave opens his bedroom door and Pat steps in and closes his bedroom door)

Dave: Now tell me why you lied about my father?

Pat: I didn’t just lie to you….

Dave: What?! Was Felicity in on the big black lie as well?

Pat: Yeah she was……

Dave: How could you both do this?!?! For all these years you have lied about my father and I bet you didn’t give a first thought over how I might feel, you must have known that I would find out sometime?

Pat: Well me and Felicity kind of forgot about it love, we thought he would never turn up again, he left you when you were a baby! If you had to have a go at someone, have a go at him!

Dave: So now your trying to pin the blame on my father…..

Pat: That’s not what I am trying to do love, he left you and you should ask him why!

Dave: I am not up to speaking to him yet, I was a bit shocked when you told me to come down to the café for my supposedly dead father to introduce himself…..

Pat: I am sorry about the way it’s turned out love….

Dave: You knew the way it would turn out, since you lied to me about my father!

Pat: I told you, I thought he would never turn up again!

Dave: So you didn’t think that he would have the slightest interest to meet his own son?

Pat: No!

Dave: So have you lied to Felicity about her father?! I am surprised I am not in on the big lie! :rolleyes:

Pat: Don’t talk about Felicity’s father!

Dave: Just get out of my room, I can’t even look at you mum, not after what you and Felicity have done! :angry:

Pat: Dave, hear me out…..

Dave: I have already listened to what you said, now get out! :angry:

Pat: Ok, by the way, your dad is staying for the night!

Dave: Oh sorry, I thought he was dead! :rolleyes:

(Dave wipes a tear from his eye using a tissue while Pat leaves Dave’s bedroom. As Pat leaves Dave’s bedroom, she sees Frank coming up the stairs)

Pat: You can borrow some bed sheets from the wardrobe in my bedroom.....

Frank: Ok love…

Pat: Don’t you dare call me love! Today, you have turned Dave’s life upside down by coming into his life!

Frank: I am his father, what do you expect?

Pat: You just wormed your way back into his life and now you have ruined my relationship with my son! :angry:

Frank: Your fault, you lied! :mad:

Pat: Your fault, you left! :mad:

(Pat turns her back to Frank and heads down the stairs)

[bakedbean]

Oh im really loving Pat and Frank:cheer:

[DaVeyWaVey]

GALLAGHERS HOUSE- NIGHT

(Christina enters Sean’s house)

Christina: You don’t mind me staying here for the night, do you?

Sean: No I told you I want you here, my dad’s not coming out of hospital until tomorrow, I want some company for the night….

Christina: Well as long as your ok about it, it’s just you have changed your tune, after I hit Dean with the vase, you just wasn’t happy with me at all…..

Sean: He is my dad, I was scared he was going to die because of what you done but now I am glad he’s ok, I just want the whole situation under the carpet now, Dean didn’t grass you up to the police and you said sorry over the incident so the matter is officially closed….

Christina: Yeah…….I just need to pop to the bathroom, I will be back in a sec.

Sean: Ok, I will stick on a film.

Christina: Ok.

(Christina goes upstairs and rings Dean from her phone)

Christina: Dean?

Dean: Yes, hello?

Christina: It’s me.

Dean: Oh Christina, are you still ok over the arrangements for tomorrow?

Christina: No I want to drop out of this drugs deal your planning….

Dean: Well your making a big mistake darlin’, I will be off to the police station first thing tomorrow morning, and tell the police what really happened. I could get you done for assault or even GBH. It’s your choice!

Christina: Well going up for assault or GBH is better than facing a stretch inside for possession of drugs…..

Dean: Well you won’t get caught if you take part in this drugs deal and help me out, but I could tell the police about how you assaulted me and you would still face a stretch inside prison, so like I said, it’s your choice!

Christina: I thought you weren’t a grass!

Dean: I am not a grass if you give me something in return……now you either help me out or you will be going to prison and when you get out, I will make your life hell!

Christina: Ok I have decided, I will help you out. We better not be caught out!

Dean: Oh, we won’t. We won’t!

Christina: You haven’t told me what part I am playing in this drugs deal yet?

Dean: Well I am going to be giving you step by step instructions, let’s just say I am handing over some drugs to an old friend and you’re my assistant…..

Christina: Ok.

Dean: Now your first instruction, go into my bedroom and go to my first drawer on the left by my bed, open it and you will find a stash of cocaine, this will be what you will be meeting me with tomorrow….

Christina: Where are we meeting tomorrow?

Dean: Outside Hinston Pub at 8am, be there!

Christina: What about Sean?

Dean: Sneak out early, he won’t notice, just tell him you have to go, you understand?

Christina: Ok I understand…..

Dean: Well bye for now!

(Christina hangs up and heads for Dean’s drawer, she opens it to find a stash of cocaine, she stares at it before closing the drawer quickly)

Sean: Christina, the film is about to start……

(Christina stares at the drawer as she slowly walks away, she replys)

Christina: Ok, I will be down now……

[Skits]

this is excellent. i've just read the whole thing from start to finish. i have read parts before but never altogether. keep up the good work.

[DaVeyWaVey]

this is excellent. i've just read the whole thing from start to finish. i have read parts before but never altogether. keep up the good work.

Thank you Skits. :) I will definetly keep this up, i have lots planned. :D

[DaVeyWaVey]

GARAGE- MORNING

(Chloe appears at the garage as Greg is working on a car)

Chloe: Greg?

(Greg replies without turning round)

Greg: Yeah, what’s up with your car? What do you want fixing?

Chloe: I don’t want any car fixing, I want to speak to you.

(Greg turns round and sees Chloe)

Greg: Oh, Chloe! I didn’t realise it was you, what are you doing here?

Chloe: Yeah I knew it, I am disturbing you at work again, I bet you like to keep your job and social life separate?

Greg: No not at all, I like to mix my job and social life, makes my life a whole lot more interesting! :D

Chloe: Well I will make it quick, I am sorry about the other day…..

Greg: What do you have to be sorry about?

Chloe: About leaving you in the lurch?! You had a big surprise planned for me apparently and I ruined it…..

Greg: No you didn’t ruin anything.

Chloe: Well Kat said that you said that I ruined everything…..

Greg: I didn’t say that at all, ok, I did plan a big surprise for you but you didn’t ruin everything.

Chloe: Well I just came here to say sorry, I just got very OTT about everything, I flipped because Kat asked you out on a date with me and was trying to set up my life and who I got to go on dates with and I just got so mad, I just wanted to ask you out on a date myself and that’s what I am doing here now……:o

Greg: To ask me out on a date?

Chloe: Yeah, I will understand if you say no......:wub:

Greg: I would love to go on a date with you, of course I wouldn’t say no!

Chloe: Well meet me at the pub after your shift, I got time off tonight.

Greg: Ok I will… :)

(Chloe is about to leave but Greg grabs her and they both lean in and share a tender kiss)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFÉ- MORNING

(Frank knocks on Dave’s bedroom door)

Frank: Dave, we need to talk!

Dave: I don’t want to talk to you or anybody else!

Frank: But Dave you gotta hear me out……

Dave: I am still reeling over the fact that you’re actually alive! Mum lied to me, she told me you died in a car accident!

Frank: I know, I know…your mum just wasn’t thinking straight at the time and neither was I but I seen sense now and now I want too see my son which is you so please let me in…..

Dave: It took you 18 years to see sense! :rolleyes:

Frank: Well I had to take a lot of time to think son.

Dave: Don’t you dare call me son! You have no bloody right to call me son! :angry:

(Dave chucks his cd player against the wall)

Dave: You’ve never loved me! You’ve never loved me! You don’t deserve to be a father to anyone! :angry:

(Dave begins to cry)

Frank: Son, I am so sorry! I am so sorry! :(

Dave: Everyone I know and all my mates have fathers that have stuck by them and never left them and have always loved them but I am the bloody exception!

Frank: I wanna make it up to you Dave!

Dave: It’s too late, I have grown up now, I am an adult! You have missed me growing up and we couldn’t do father and son things because you couldn’t be bothered to stick around! You could never be bothered to stick around, all you’ve ever done is think about yourself! It’s too late! :angry:

Frank: No it’s not son, I am sure I can do something to make it up to you! :(

Dave: Don’t you dare call me son, as far as I know, I don’t have a father, like my mum said, my father’s dead! :angry:

(Frank begins to cry and walks away from Dave’s bedroom door) :crying:

[DaVeyWaVey]

FACTORY- AFTERNOON

(Christina and Dean are at an abandoned factory with Christina holding the stash of drugs in a bag)

Dean: Well they should be here soon…..

Christina: We have been here for ages…..

Dean: They are always promptly on time especially where drugs are concerned…..

Christina: I see, why am I holding this stash of cocaine anyway?

Dean: Because your doing me a favour…..

Christina: What?! Carrying a bag full of cocaine?!?! It can’t be that hard to carry a bag full of cocaine?

Dean: Well you can get in a very tricky situation if your caught out by the police with a stash of cocaine in your hand, you basically get caught red- handed!

Christina: You promised we wouldn’t get caught!

Dean: Are you that stupid?! I am not god, I can’t make things happen, I can’t promise anything!

Christina: Right, that’s it I am outta here!

(Christina is about to leave but Dean grabs her and pins her against the wall)

Dean: No your staying here, oh look they are here now.

(Christina turns round to see two men approach them)

Dean: Now remember all you have to do is hand over the drugs….

Christina: And then you will forgive and forget that I even put you in hospital?!

(Dean smiles)

Christina: There’s a catch……..isn’t there?

Drug Dealer: Where’s the coke?

Dean: Here it is, Christina if you wouldn’t mind passing over the cocaine…..

(Christina hands the bag of cocaine to the drug dealers)

Drug Dealer: You must have travelled a long way to get here?

Christina: Yes we did….

Drug Dealer: Well we appreciate that, coming all this way just to give us drugs…..

(Pause)

Drug Dealer: Here! Have this drink, you must be worn out!

(The dealer passes the drink over to Christina and she drinks it)

Christina: Thanks, but…..I feel quite dizzy……aahh!!!! I feel pain, someone help me please! Help me! Help me now!!!

(Christina’s whole body begins to shake and her eyes become bloodshot and begin to flicker, she is sick all over the floor. She weakly points her arm at Dean)

Christina: You! You! You planned this….there were drugs in that drink!

(Christina’s body shakes violently and she collapses on the ground before choking on her own sick)


Will Christina Survive???!!!

[DaVeyWaVey]

The next script of Hinston High will be up on Monday night because i am away for the weekend camping. :)

[Skits]

i hope christina will be ok. cruel dean. poor dave. it must be terrible having your "dead" father turn up after all that time. can't wait until monday night.

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- AFTERNOON

(Tanya is in the living room reading a magazine where Luke walks through the door)

Tanya: Where the bloody hell have you been?

Luke: Look I can explain…..

(Tanya raises her voice)

Tanya: You can explain?!?! You say that bloody excuse everytime you turn up home after being out for god knows how long! The same excuse will not wash with me any longer so there’s no point in trying to make something up because it won’t work! Now tell me the truth….

Luke: Well last night I was working late and I was on a building job and that’s when a piece of scaffolding hit me over the back of my head, I thought I would be ok but I collapsed and was rushed to hospital, I was forced to stay at the hospital over night so they could check me over and I have just been discharged now, that’s the truth!

Tanya: Have you got proof to what you have just told me?

Luke: Yes I have in a matter of fact!

(Luke turns his head and shows his blood stained head)

Luke: Believe me now Tan?

Tanya: What about your limping leg?

Luke: I have had that limping leg for ages, haven’t you noticed?

Tanya: No I haven’t…..

Luke: I am not lying to you Tan! I swear! Look at my head Tan, look at it!

(Luke wipes some blood from his face and shows it to Tanya)

Tanya: Ok, I believe you…..

(As Tanya walks into the kitchen, Luke breathes a sigh of relief)

[DaVeyWaVey]

FACTORY- AFTERNOON

(Christina is vomiting violently)

Dean: Look what have you done, look what you have bloody done!

(Dean puts Christina in the recovery position)

Drug Dealer: What do you mean?! You said she needed dealing with….

Dean: Yes but not in this way, I didn’t want you to give her drugs! I wanted you to threaten her a bit, put her in her place……

Drug Dealer: Well you could have told me that, all you said was that she needed dealing with and to use my imagination on how to deal with her…..

(Another drug dealer comes back into the scene after ringing the ambulance)

Drug Dealer 2: I just rang an ambulance, it’s on its way….

Drug Dealer: Why the hell did you do that?!

Dean: Because he is seeing sense, I supply you with drugs and you pay me back by getting revenge on people I don’t like but now I think you have both lost your touch what with devising this plan to overdose this girl with drugs! You could kill her….

(Christina is lying on the floor unconscious with vomit dripping out of her mouth)

Drug Dealer: We’ve killed before……

Dean: That was a mistake, a massive mistake!

Drug Dealer 2: We better go before the ambulance arrives!

Dean: Yeah we better, thanks to your silly actions, we could be caught and she could die!

Drug Dealer: You have really changed Dean, you have really changed! You never used to care about anything, and you didn’t care if anyone got hurt!

Dean: I’ve got a heart you know?! Don’t forget that!

Drug Dealer: We thought you had a cold heart……

Drug Dealer 2: Will she be ok?

Dean: I am not sure, all we can do is hope….

(An ambulance siren is heard and the ambulance is heading to the abandoned factory)

Dean: We’ve gotta go now!

(Dean and the drug dealers run from the factory as the ambulance pulls up outside of the factory but the drug dealers have left the cocaine behind…….)

[Bryan]

Looks like more trouble in Tanya and Luke's marraige. I am loving this soap dave, great addition to soapboards! Keep up the good work!

[bakedbean]

yeah me to i am loving the relationship problems between Tanya and Luke

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFÉ- NIGHT

(Pat has just shut the café and has changed the open sign to close. Dave comes down to the café to grab some food)

Pat: Are you still seeking refuge upstairs?

(Dave gives a stern look to Pat)

Pat: You can’t keep this up love, you’ve got to talk to me sooner or later! I know your dad turning up was a massive shock but I heard what you said to him!

Dave: What did I say to him?

Pat: You shouted that as far as you knew, your father was dead, that wasn’t a nice thing to say love!

Dave: And why would you care?! When my father left, as far as you knew, he was dead because that’s what you told me! So what’s changed?

Pat: I’ve changed…….

Dave: What?

Pat: It was a big shock for you when your father turned up!

Dave: It was more than a big shock, I nearly had a heart attack!

Pat: And it wasn’t the perfect surprise for me either and I nearly had a heart attack too……

Dave: So what are you trying to say?

Pat: I am trying to say that I think you should spend some bonding time with your father……

Dave: What?! You’ve certainly changed your tune!

Pat: Well he won’t leave here until he’s had a proper chat with you, so I don’t really have a choice!

Dave: I thought you wanted to chuck him out?!

Pat: I am doing this for you…I want you to get to know your dad…..

Dave: I have a say in this as well you know?!

Pat: I know but I know your really mad at me at the moment because I lied to you saying your father was dead so I thought I would make it up to you by letting your father stay so you can both get to know each other…..so what do you say?

Dave: I will try and speak to him but I regret what I said about me thinking he was dead, I heard him cry, it was unforgivable…….

[DaVeyWaVey]

WEATHERBYS HOUSE- NIGHT

(Jack and Alicia are sitting down watching tv where Sam enters the room)

Sam: Where’s Christina?

Jack: Still over her bloody boyfriend’s house…..

Alicia: Well she’s been there for an awfully long time….

Sam: Christina didn’t seem right when she left the hospital, she looked as white as a blanket……

Jack: The guilt must have overwhelmed her, she must have paniced because the police were at the hospital questioning Dean…..

Alicia: Yeah she must have been scared because she must have thought that Dean would confess the truth and tell the police what really happened…..

Sam: Yeah but it was after that, it was after the police questioned Dean, in a matter of fact, she didn’t seem right after she left the hospital after apologising to Dean…..

Alicia: I wonder why that was?!

Sam: Dean didn’t threaten her did he?....

Alicia: No….don’t be so stupid, stop jumping to conclusions!

(The phone rings, Alicia answers it)

Alicia: Hello?

(There’s a pause)

Alicia: Oh gosh, no! No! No! What’s happened to my daughter?!?! What’s happened?! I will be there now! I will be there! I will be there for her!

(Alicia starts shaking and puts the phone down)

Jack: What the bloody hell’s happened?

Sam: It’s Christina isn’t it?! Something has happened to Christina!

Jack: If Sean’s got something to do with this, I will kill him!

(Alicia stutters)

Alicia: The hospital rang, it’s Christina, it’s our precious daughter, something has happened to her, she’s in a critical condition!

(Alicia collapses and sobs into her hands)

[Bryan]

Alicia: The hospital rang, it’s Christina, it’s our precious daughter, something has happened to her, she’s in a critical condition!

dum dum dum! what a cliffhanger!!!

cant wait to read the next installment dave! :bow:

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- NIGHT

(Jack, Alicia and Sam rush to reception)

Jack: My daughter?! Where’s my daughter?!?!

Receptionist: Um…who is your daughter?

Alicia: Our daughter is Christina, Christina Weatherby….

Receptionist: Oh yes, she’s here.

Jack: Is she ok?

Receptionist: Well you will have to ask the doctor who is treating her…

Jack: Who’s treating my daughter? Tell me!

Receptionist: Look if you just take a seat, the doctor treating your daughter will be able to speak to you later….

Jack: Later?! Later isn’t bloody good enough!

Alicia: Calm down love, calm down!

Sam: Dad, why don’t we do what the receptionist says and take a seat?

(A doctor appears at reception)

Receptionist: Oh Dr. Wells, are you treating a Christina Weatherby?

Doctor: Oh yes, I am. Why is that?

Receptionist: Well Christina’s relatives are here…..

Alicia: Yes we are Christina’s family, how is she doing?

Doctor: Why don’t we go to the waiting room and we can discuss Christina’s condition in there?!

(Jack, Alicia and Sam follow behind the doctor as they make their way to the hospital waiting room)

Sam: Oh no! It’s bad news, isn’t it?!

(Jack, Alicia and Sam enter the waiting room and the doctor closes the door before he explains Christina’s condition)

Doctor: Well it’s not bad news exactly….

Jack: What do you mean by exactly?

Doctor: Well your daughter is in a critical but stable condition….

Alicia: What happened to our daughter? How did she end up in hospital like this?!

Jack: It’s because of her bloody dodgy boyfriend, that’s why she is in hospital like this!

Alicia: Shut up Jack! Let’s just listen to the doctor and what he has to say……

Doctor: Well your daughter has ended up in this condition because she has taken an overdose on drugs…..

Jack: What?! Your kidding me, you have to be kidding me! :eek:

Alicia: Christina would never take drugs, never! :eek:

Doctor: Well I am afraid she has, we did a scan and it showed that she had taken drugs, also because of the condition she was in, it was obvious that she had taken something……

Alicia: Will she be ok?

Doctor: Let’s hope so…..she was lucky not to have brain damage...anyway I will leave you too it….I will update you on more news of your daughter’s condition when I can, just stick around here…..

(The doctor leaves the waiting room as Jack, Alicia and Sam look on reeling in shock over the news that Christina took drugs.)

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- NIGHT

(Harry is talking to Mike from behind the bar)

Mike: So have you told Jenna how you really feel yet?

Harry: What? About me not wanting children?

Mike: Yeah, what else would I be on about?!

Harry: Well to be honest, I can’t get a word in edge ways…..

Mike: So she’s pushing you about?

Harry: No of course she’s not pushing me about, it’s just all she’s been talking about is babies, babies and more babies! I feel like I’m trapped because that is all she’s talking about!

Mike: I am sure it’s just her having a broody phase, she will get over the subject in a month or so, I remember it was like that with me and Nina, Nina felt broody for a while but then she completely forgot about it…..

Harry: Me and Jenna have both done it quite a few times, I don’t know what else she wants!

Mike: Where is Jenna now?

Harry: Taking a pregnancy test……

(At that moment, Jenna runs into the pub with her pregnancy test kit in her hand)

Jenna: Oh my gosh Harry! Guess what?!

Harry: What now Jenna?

Jenna: I’m pregnant!

Harry: What?! No you can’t be….

Jenna: I am, look!

(Jenna shoves the pregnancy kit in Harry’s face)

Jenna: Look the pregnancy test says positive, I’m pregnant, our dream has come true Harry! We are going to have children!

(Harry looks in horror)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CHLOE AND KAT’S FLAT- MORNING

(Chloe walks into the lounge from her bedroom as Kat is drinking coffee reading a magazine)

Kat: I didn’t hear you come in last night……

Chloe: Well you didn’t wait up for me did you?!

Kat: Oh, did you want me to wait up for you?

Chloe: No it was ok, I was back quite late!

Kat: Oh right I see….

Chloe: You know what Kat?! I think I have found the one……

(Kat doesn’t take much notice and carries on reading her magazine)

Kat: Really?! Well good for you…..

Chloe: I am being serious Kat, Greg is the one…..

Kat: When are you going to stop being in the clouds and actually pull yourself to reality?!?!

Chloe: What?

Kat: Men are men, and men never change, so I don’t know why you are going to waste your time on Greg…..

Chloe: I think I love Greg, so I am not wasting my time…..

Kat: But does Greg love you?

(Pause)

Chloe: What has happened to you Kat?!, you’ve always been telling me to get a boyfriend and you have played matchmaker on all occasions to try and get me a man but now when I think I have found someone, you go cold on me…..

Kat: I am not going cold on you, I just don’t want to stick my nose in your love life, that’s all and i am doing what best friends do, and that's making sure you don't get hurt!

Chloe: Look, I’m sorry I had a go at you before, that was just me in a mood, I didn’t mean it, I am glad you make the effort to try and find me someone and we are best friends so we share everything together…..

Kat: Yeah your right, so as we share everything together, tell me how your date went with Greg last night!

Chloe: It was fabulous! I felt like sweet sixteen all over again, Greg certainly knows how to treat a woman…..

Kat: Oh I am glad you enjoyed it….

Chloe: Yeah we went to dinner and then after we just gazed at the stars and to top it all off, we shared a kiss at the end of our date!

Kat: Aww, that’s so sweet! So what now?

Chloe: Well that’s the problem, I don’t know what’s next or what to do next. I don’t know where I stand with Greg at all.

Kat: Well find out!

(Kat leaves)

[bakedbean]

I really am enjoying Hinston High i can see it doing well in the Soapawrds in august

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- MORNING

(Sally enters Danny’s bedroom)

Danny: What the hell do you want sis?

Sally: I know I don’t usually come into your bedroom but I want to talk to you about George…..

Danny: What?! That fat plank!

Sally: He’s not a fat plank, when will you stop picking on him?

Danny: I’m not picking on him, I just threw a few punches at him that’s all.

Sally: I know your picking on him, I can tell by the look on his face, everytime I mention your name to him it sends a shiver down his spine!

Danny: Well what are you going to do about it?

Sally: You mean, what are you going to do about it?!

Danny: I am not going to do anything about it.

Sally: Can’t you just lay off him….

Danny: Why are you sticking up for him all of a sudden?

Sally: Because I don’t want to see my brother be a bully, and I hate seeing people being bullied anyway, so please just apologise to him!

Danny: No.

Sally: Danny, you have to, for your own sake!

Danny: If George stops getting in my way at school all the time, then I may consider apologising to him!

Sally: Good.

(Pause)

Sally: Well you should be apologising to him no matter what!

Danny: Don’t push your luck Sal, or I won’t even consider apologising to George at all!

Sally: Ok, well we better be getting off to school, you won’t be skiving today will you?

Danny: No, now go on ahead, I will catch you up.

(Sally leaves Danny’s bedroom)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFÉ- MORNING

(Frank and Dave are sitting at a table, Dave is drinking a can of coke and Frank is drinking coffee)

Dave: Mum said I’ve got to try and make the effort to talk to you….

Frank: Really?! She doesn’t want rid of me then?

Dave: Yes she does but you won’t budge until I talk to you, so now I am talking to you, you will leave after we have chatted…

(Pause)

Frank: I don’t want it to be like this.

Dave: You made it like this, you were the one who walked out on me when I was a baby!

Frank: I want to be a father too you….

Dave: Like I said, it’s too late, now what have you come here to say?

Frank: I came here to get to know you, to try and patch things up with you, to do father and son things, is that really a crime?

Dave: You’ve come here to cause trouble…..

Frank: How have I caused trouble?

Dave: You’ve caused trouble between me and my mum and between me and my sister, they told me a lie about you being dead, but I bet you thought, if I turn up out of the blue, they will no longer be happy families because Dave will realise that his mum and sister has lied to him!

Frank: No I didn’t think that at all….

Dave: It was pretty obvious that you turning up out of the blue would cause rifts between the family….

Frank: But I didn’t turn up out of the blue, I rang your mum numerous times to say I was coming to see you!

Dave: What?! That explains the phone calls that mum was getting……it all adds up, why she was trying to disguise them as prank calls and why she had to answer the phone and nobody else could….

Frank: She told me to back off, she didn’t want us to meet up together, she didn’t want you to meet your father, she was going to carry on telling that big black lie for all of your life saying your father was dead, your mum wanted me dead!

Dave: Oh my god, I don’t believe it, she was going to carry on lying to me, she lied to me about the phone calls, she didn’t tell me what was really going on!

Frank: If she had her way, we could never get in contact! I bet she’s cooking up a plan now to prevent us from contacting each other again! You know when you were locked up in your bedroom when I first turned up?

Dave: Yeah….

Frank: Well who locked you in there?

(Dave suddenly looks surprised)

Dave: Mum!

Dave: But I locked myself in my bedroom…..

Frank: Yeah but who locked you in the second time?

Dave: My mum did….

Frank: And that’s when I asked her if I could speak to you….see what I mean?! She is trying to stop us from communicating with each other!

Dave: No she wouldn’t…..

Frank: Yeah she will, do you know she threatened to kill me the other day if I didn’t back off?

Dave: What?! No! That can’t be right, mum would never say anything like that, your making it up!

Frank: I knew you wouldn’t believe me which is a shame because it’s true…..

Dave: Why did you know that I wouldn’t believe you?

Frank: Because you’ve known your mum for your whole life but you’ve only known me for 2 days.

Dave: Oh right, well I don’t believe you….

Frank: Well it’s too late then, I might as well leave now…

Dave: But we haven’t finished our conversation!

Frank: There’s no point, your mum will chuck me out and prevent us from keeping contact….

Dave: No she won’t, I will persuade her to let you stay…..

Frank: It won’t work, the only way that we can spend proper time together is by you coming to Spain with me….

Dave: Spain?! Why Spain?!

Frank: Because I got a villa there, and we can spend proper time together….

Dave: I don’t know….

Frank: I thought your mum wanted us to spend some time together?

Dave: I thought she wanted to prevent us from communicating with each other?

Frank: Well that won’t happen if you come to Spain with me, and it will just be a holiday, once you go back to Hinston, that’s when she will prevent us from communicating!

Dave: Ok

(Pause)

Frank: Well?

Dave: Well I will think about it……

(Dave leaves the table while Frank continues sitting there, drinking the remainder of his coffee)

[Bryan]

This is getting really intresting Dave! You have establish the characters and now the good stuff is kicking in! Cant wait to read more! As bakebean says I hope you get some well earned awards at this years soap awards.

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- MORNING

(Jack, Alicia and Sam are in the waiting room after a long night of awaiting news of Christina’s condition. The doctor appears)

Doctor: Ok, well I got some good news for you, Christina has regained consciousness.

Alicia: Oh my gosh, that’s brilliant!

Jack: Alicia, our daughter will be ok!

(Jack hugs and kisses Alicia)

Sam: Can we see Christina now?

Doctor: Yes, I think she wants to see you actually but just to warn you, the police are on their way to question her….

Alicia: Oh right I see….

Doctor: Ok, come this way…..

(Jack, Alicia and Sam follow the doctor to Christina’s cubicle)

Doctor: Here we are, now I will leave you too it….

Jack: Thanks doc.

(Jack, Alicia and Sam enter Christina’s cubicle)

Christina: Hi mum, Hi dad, Hi Sam.

Jack: Now you better explain yourself young lady…..

Alicia: Jack, calm down love, she’s recovering in hospital, we shouldn’t be pressurising her over questioning, we are her family, we came to see that she was ok, she will have enough questioning off the police over what happened when they get here…..

Jack: Ok, but I want to get too the bottom of this whole situation, why did our own daughter take drugs?! Why?! I thought she was mixing in with the right crowd, well that was until she met Sean, I wonder why Sean isn’t right here now, seeing if Christina is ok?! Maybe Sean has a guilty conscience over something?!

Christina: Sean had nothing to do with why I am here!

Jack: So why are you here? What made you get here?! Because something happened and I want to know what!

Alicia: Jack, please! Christina wants her family here to help her to recover to receive comfort from us, that’s what we are here for, not to give her quick-fire questions over what happened and how she ended up here….

Jack: Ok, ok…now I am going to get a coffee, do you want one?

Alicia: No I am ok.

Jack: Sam?

Sam: No I don’t want a coffee thanks.

Jack: Ok, well I am going to get one, I will be back in a minute….

(Jack leaves)

Sam: You had a lucky escape sis….

Alicia: Yeah you did love, do you want anything?

Christina: Well I was wondering if you could contact Sean for me, get him to come to the hospital, I want him to know I’m here, I bet he’s wondering where I am, but yeah I need to speak to him urgently!
Do you know his number?

Alicia: Yes you gave it to me before, I will ring him now for you.

Christina: Thanks mum.

(Alicia leaves)

Sam: By the way sis, the police are coming over now to question you over how you got here.

Christina: What?! Now?!

Sam: Yes, now!

Christina: But I got to speak to Sean first before I speak to the police!

Sam: Why?

Christina: I just have too!

(Christina has a worried look as Sam looks on suspiciously)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- MORNING

(Luke is getting ready for work, while Tanya is in the kitchen, suddenly the door bell goes)

Luke: I will get it Tan.

(Luke answers the door and gets the shock of his life…..it’s Geena!)

Luke: Oh my god, Geena! What the bloody hell are you doing here?!

Geena: I need to speak too you….

Luke: Well now’s not a good time, my wife’s in the kitchen!

Tanya: No, I am right here!

(Luke turns round in horror)

Tanya: Now, what does this girl want to speak too you about?! You better tell me everything….

(Luke and Geena look at each other in horror as Tanya looks on with her arms folded)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HARRY AND JENNA’S HOUSE- MORNING

(Jenna is in the kitchen making breakfast and Harry enters)

Jenna: Hi love, wanna fry-up?

Harry: No I’m not hungry thanks….

Jenna: Aww….it’s not like you to lose your appetite?!

Harry: Well I am still reeling over the fact that you told a whole pub full of people last night that you were pregnant?!

Jenna: Oh Harry, what’s the harm?...people would find out eventually anyway that I was pregnant when the big bump begins to show….

Harry: It might not even get to that stage….

Jenna: Well thanks for being optimistic! You do want me to have this baby don’t you?

(Pause)

Harry: Yeah of course I do, what a stupid question to ask!

Jenna: Well you got a funny way of showing it!

Harry: I am still shocked that you are actually pregnant, I just wanted to come to terms with it first before you told anybody else that’s all!

Jenna: Ok I understand….

Harry: As long as you understand, I better be getting off to work anyway!

Jenna: Ok see you later…..

(Harry kisses Jenna on the cheek before leaving)

[DaVeyWaVey]

GARAGE- NOON

(Chloe enters as Greg is on his lunch break)

Chloe: Hi Greg.

Greg: Oh hi Chloe.

Chloe: I just came to say that I enjoyed our date last night.

Greg: Oh, me too.

Chloe: Yeah it was great.

Greg: Do you want to do it again sometime?

Chloe: Yeah I would love too.

Greg: Well, that’s good.

Chloe: I came here to ask you something else though.

(Long pause)

Greg: Well? What is it?

Chloe: Do you like me?

Greg: Of course I like you, what a stupid question. If I didn’t like you, I would have told you!

Chloe: Not that kind of like. I mean like, like. You know what I mean?

Greg: Um…no sorry I am really confused by what you just said.

Chloe: I will say this quickly……I want to know where I stand!

Greg: Where you stand? Your standing right here……:confused:

Chloe: Oh forget it! :mad:

(Chloe looks upset as she leaves)

Greg: No, Chloe wait!

Chloe: Oh forget it Greg! Just forget it! In fact, pretend that I never came here to talk to you! :(

Greg: Why are you so angry? I don’t get it, what have I done wrong! :confused:

(Chloe ignores Greg)

Greg: Chloe! Talk to me! I want to know what I have done wrong!

Chloe: I was trying to tell you how I feel!

Greg: How do you feel?!?! You look ill, you look under the weather! Do you feel sick? :confused:

Chloe: Yes I feel sick, I feel lovesick! :mad:

(Chloe leaves as Greg stands there, shocked by Chloe’s remark)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- NOON

(Luke and Geena are looking in horror as Tanya is standing with her arms folded)

Tanya: So who are you? What are you doing here? Why do you want to speak to my husband?!

Geena: Uh….

Luke: She was just advertising about double glazing….

Tanya: Double glazing?! Sorry we’re not interested! So if you wouldn’t mind leaving my front door?

Geena: Ok, well it was worth a try….

Tanya: By the way, you look awful!

Geena: Thanks.

Tanya: What the hell happened to your face darlin’?

Geena: I fell down the stairs!

Tanya: What and ended up with a face like that?!

Luke: Tan, just leave it! I am sure Geena wouldn’t like you to poke her nose into her business….

Tanya: Geena?! You know her name, how do you know her name?!

Luke: Uh….

Geena: I was only being friendly, I introduce myself to all my potential customers….

Tanya: Well we aren’t going to be customers and don’t you dare start eyeing up my husband because you will have my fist to answer too…

Geena: You really don’t have a clue do you? Your husband is the one that has been eyeing up me…..

(Tanya clenches her fist as Geena smiles and Luke looks terrified)

[Bryan]

Geena: You really don’t have a clue do you? Your husband is the one that has been eyeing up me…..

What a cliffhanger! :eek:

Hinston High is getting better by the episode Dave! I am toroughly enjoying it!!!

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON SCHOOL- NOON

(It’s lunchtime and George is eating his lunch alone and Danny and Sally are on the other side of the yard looking over at George)

Danny: I can’t do it! I just can’t do it!

Sally: Cat got your tongue?

Danny: You’ve backed me into a corner here!

Sally: You deserve to be backed into a corner, after beating up George!

Danny: Look can’t we just drop it? , it’s over and done with, I won’t beat George up again, ok?

Sally: We can’t drop it just like that, you’ve got to say sorry!

Danny: I’m sorry!

Sally: Don’t say sorry to me, say sorry to George!

(Danny stares at George)

Sally: Do it Danny, just do it!

Danny: Ok, I will say sorry, but that’s the end of it, and I am only apologising once….

Sally: That’s all I ask, now walk over to him and apologise!

Danny: Ok.

(Danny walks over to George, George sees Danny approach him and George looks terrified. George tries to start walking but Danny grabs his shoulder)

George: Please, not again! I beg you, not again!

Danny: Chill George, just chill! I ain’t come here to beat you up, I came here to apologise.

George: Apologise? Danny Butley is apologising?!

Danny: Yes believe it or not, I am.

(Pause)

Danny: Now I am only saying this once, I’m sorry.

George: Ok.

Danny: In fact, I will apologise to you even more, why don’t we go for a picnic?

George: What?! A picnic! Danny Butley, did I just hear you say that?

Danny: Well your not dreamin’ mate.

(George takes some time to think about it)

Danny: Well I will understand if you say no, but I want to make amends.

George: Did Sally put you up to this? Because I swear this isn’t Danny talking…..

Danny: Sally has nothing to do with this, this is my idea! Now say yes or no, before I lose my patience!

George: Ok, yes.

Danny: Right, good.

George: Where will our picnic be?

(Danny points)

Danny: At the top of that hill.

George: By that waterfall place?

Danny: Yeah by the waterfall place….

George: Well I can’t wait, I am quite excited actually, have you turned over a new leaf Danny?

Danny: No I am still the Danny you know.

George: Without the bullying streak it seems…..

Danny: Well meet me at the top of that hill tonight at 7, agreed?

George: Agreed!

(Danny walks away from George, George has a happy smile on his face)

Danny: That kid will have what’s coming to him! Gullible prat!

[Bryan]

Danny: That kid will have what’s coming to him! Gullible prat!

:eek: Oh my god! :eek:

Is Danny going to push George off the waterfall!!!?? :eek:

This just keeps getting better and better!

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- AFTERNOON

(The police enter the hospital to question Christina)

Christina: Mum, have you got hold of Sean?

Alicia: Yes he’s right on his way! He is really worried about you….

Christina: Yeah, well I need to speak to him before the police start to question me!

Alicia: Why? Sean’s got nothing to do with this as he?

Christina: No, how many times! No! He is not involved with any of this!

Jack: Oh Christina, I wish you would tell us the truth, we are your parents!

Christina: You will go spare if I told you the truth…..

(The police enter)

Christina: Oh no! They can’t question me now!

Police: Christina Weatherby, we need to question you in private, if you wouldn’t mind?

Alicia: Ok we will leave, come on Jack, come on Sam…..

Jack: Tell them the truth Christina! Tell them the truth!

Alicia: You will be ok love, just tell them what you know and what happened…..

(As Jack, Alicia and Sam leave Christina’s cubicle, Christina grits her teeth wondering if she will cope with the pressure of police questioning)

[bakedbean]

i wonder if Chrisstina will keep up the great work Hinston High is fantastic

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- AFTERNOON

(The police begin to question Christina)

Police: Now Christina, we need to establish over how you got here…..

Christina: Well I had an accident….I fell down the stairs! No harm done!

Police: Don’t play games Christina, we know your lying, we can see it right through you! Your not very good at lying are you?!

Christina: I’m not lying, I’m not!

Police: Christina, this was no accident!

Christina: It was an accident…..

Police: Well we tried to give you a chance to tell the truth but it obviously hasn’t worked….where you were found in the abandoned factory, well it became a crime scene!

Christina: And? How is this meant to effect me?

Police: Well when we looked at the crime scene, we found a bag, a bag full of cocaine! It’s gone off for fingerprints, if your fingerprints are found on the bag, you will be arrested and charged!

(Christina begins to sob into her hands)

Christina: Oh god! Why did I do this?! Why did I do this?!

Police: Do what Christina? It’s about time you told us the truth…..

Christina: It wasn’t my drugs, ok, so please don’t arrest me! Please don’t! I won’t be able to handle time inside!

Police: It might not come to that, just tell us what you know! It will help you out in the long run…..

Christina: I can’t tell you the truth, I just can’t! I will let so many people down….

Police: So you want to be arrested for perverting the course of justice do you?! Because your obviously lying to us saying you don’t know who the drugs belong too, your holding back information, you could be holding back a criminal conviction!!

Christina: Ok…ok! I will tell you! I know who it is! I got involved with some people and I did something wrong, I had to make it up to them so they said I had to help out on a drugs deal!

Police: And you accepted?

Christina: Yes I did and I was a fool…..we had to meet at the abandoned factory, we got there and some drug dealers turned up, I handed over the bag, and the drug dealers offered me a drink, I accepted it but it was mixed with cocaine, now I am here and that’s all I remember…..

Police: You had a lucky escape girl, you had a lucky escape! Now all we need is names?!

Christina: I forgot their names…..

Police: You bloody tell us the truth because if you don’t, we will make life very difficult for you!

Christina: Ok I did the drugs deal with Dean Weatherby, he said I had to take part in the drugs deal with him….

Police: Do you know the names of the drug dealers?

Christina: No I never seen them before in my life!

Police: Ok, so it’s Dean Weatherby?

Christina: Yeah, Dean Weatherby.

Police: That name sounds familiar…..anyway thanks for your time.

Christina: What will happen now?

Police: We will get back to you.

(The two police officers leave. Christina begins to cry)

Christina: I’ve let Sean down, I’ve let him down!

(Christina starts crying into her hands)

[Bryan]

so the truth has been revealed! what next for christina!? good stuff as usual dave!

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- AFTERNOON

(Tanya looks in horror after Geena’s shocking line, Luke stares frozen)

Tanya: What the bloody hell did you just say?

Geena: I said that your husband has been eyeing up me….

Tanya: In your dreams darlin’. My Luke wouldn’t touch you with a bargepole.

Geena: You seem so sure but you should ask Luke!

(Luke remains frozen)

Tanya: Luke, she is lying, right?

(Luke is still frozen)

Tanya: For Christ sake Luke, answer me!

Luke: She is telling the truth…..

Tanya: What?

Geena: Told ya so. Your Luke slept with me!

Tanya: Luke, tell me this isn’t true?!

Luke: It’s true!

Tanya: You lied to me Luke, you lied to me!

Luke: I’m sorry, but the way you’ve been treating me!

Tanya: The way I’ve been treating you! You’ve got a bloody cheek! What about how you have treated me! You had an affair behind my back!

Geena: You had a taste of your own medicine then!

Tanya: You bitch!

(Tanya slaps Geena across the face)

Tanya: Stay away from me and my husband, you hear me?! Stay away!

Geena: You should tell your husband that! Do you know what he said?! He said that I was better in bed than you!

Tanya: Biiiitch!! (screams) :angry:

(Tanya runs at Geena, jumps on her back and starts pulling her hair. Geena tries to kick Tanya away but Tanya gives her an almightly slap)

Luke: Break it up! Break it up!

Geena: Aaah! Let go off me!

Tanya: No you stupid bitch! You’ll get what’s coming to you. :angry:

(Luke restrains Tanya from Geena as she turns round, Geena has a nosebleed)

Tanya: Seems like you will have a few more bruises to add to your collection…..

(Geena walks away with her eyes full of tears)

[Skits]

excellent stuff. what'll happen with christina now?

[Bryan]

Horay the first bitch fight in Hinston High! One of many I hope! Wonder what type of revenge our Tanya has in store for Luke and Geena!

Great post, keep up the good work! You've got me addicted! :D

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL-AFTERNOON

(Sean rushes to see Christina who is lying in her hospital bed)

Sean: Oh my god! What the hell’s going on? Are you ok?

(Sean hugs Christina)

Christina: Yeah everything’s ok….

Sean: You don’t seem so sure…..

Christina: Well the police have come to see me!

Sean: I just seen your father, he was flying accusations at me, he told me that you took a drugs overdose. Why, Christina?

Christina: I didn’t take the drugs on purpose Sean, someone gave them to me, they were mixed into a drink…..

Sean: What?! Do you know who did this to you?! I’ll kill them if I get my hands on them, they have no right putting my girlfriend in hospital!

Christina: No Sean, violence won’t solve any problems!

Sean: So what do you suggest I do? Let the person who mixed the drugs into your drink get away with it?

Christina: No.

Sean: Do you actually know who mixed the drugs into your drink?

Christina: Well, not exactly…..

Sean: What do you mean not exactly?! It’s a yes or no answer!

Christina: Well it was some drug dealers obviously because they had drugs on them!

Sean: But who were the drug dealers?

Christina: Well….I don’t know how to break this to you….but!

Sean: But what Christina?! Your not making any sense!

Christina: Your father was one of the drug dealers!

Sean: You what?! My father?! How dare you accuse my father of being a drug dealer!

Christina: But it’s the truth Sean! Your dad deals drugs! I’m sorry if the truth hurts!

Sean: But my father would never touch drugs, never!

Christina: Well he did!

Sean: So you said the police were here, what did you say to them?

Christina: I said your dad’s name….

(Christina squirms)

Sean: You said my dad’s name?! How could you! You bitch! You stupid bitch! :angry:

(Sean raises his voice)

Sean: You cow! Your going to pay for this you stupid bitch! You lied to the police! :angry:

Christina: I didn’t lie to the police, it’s the truth Sean!

Sean: But he didn’t mix your drink with drugs did he?

Christina: No he didn’t….

(Sean interrupts)

Sean: But you thought what the hell, why don’t I mention Dean’s name?! :rolleyes:

Christina: It wasn’t like that! The police really pressurised me!

Sean: But you still decided to betray your boyfriend!

Christina: No Sean no! You got it all wrong!

Sean: Your going to pay for what you’ve done!

(Sean leaves Christina’s cubicle in a rage)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON WATERFALL- EVENING

(George reaches the top of the hill by the top of the waterfall. He looks at the waterfall which is on his left before turning around seeing Danny by a tree with a picnic full of a big selection of food to choose from)

George: Oh my gosh! I can’t believe it! You’ve done a picnic just for me and you….

Danny: Yeah well don’t get too excited, I am only making my peace! Anyway you like food don’t you, just look at how fat you are!

George: That’s not very funny Danny….

Danny: I am only telling the truth, facing the facts is the best thing to do!

George: Well I know I am pretty big…

Danny: Pretty big?!

(Danny begins to laugh)

Danny: You’re an obese monster!

George: Danny, I really thought you turned over a new leaf, but it seems you only wanted to meet me up here so you could pick a fight…..

Danny: Well let’s face it, I am not going to get a fight out of you!

(George clutches his fist)

George: That’s the final straw!

Danny: What are you going to do? Belly flop me?!

(Danny laughs but George clutches his fist and punches Danny in the face. Danny falls to the floor)

George: That was for bullying me for the last week!

(Danny picks himself up from the floor and wipes his nosebleed with his sleeve)

Danny: You’re going to regret punching me like that!

George: I’m not afraid of you!

(Danny walks forward towards George with a stern look on his face, with his face going red and his eyes narrowed. He clenches his fist. George begins to walk backwards to the edge of the waterfall)

Danny: Your going to get what’s coming to you, you prat!

(Danny punches George but George tries to punch him back but misses, soon they begin to fight, kicking and punching each other. George falls to the ground but as Danny is about to walk off, George grabs his feet and Danny trips. George picks himself back up, there’s a struggle between Danny and George and then in the background, we hear a scream)

WHO FELL FROM THE WATERFALL?

[true.moon]

wow dave thats really good :thumbsup:

[DaVeyWaVey]

wow dave thats really good :thumbsup:

Thanks, i hope you become a regular reader, i have lots planned! :)

[true.moon]

i will
:) :thumbsup: keep up good work

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFÉ- EVENING

(Pat has just closed the café. Dave comes down to the café to speak to Pat)

Dave: Mum, I gotta speak to you about something…..

Pat: Oh right well come on, spit it out love….

Dave: Well it’s about dad….

Pat: What’s he done now?

Dave: He hasn’t done anything, you always assume the worst of him, don’t you?

Pat: Well he is the worst of things!

Dave: I don’t think he is…..

Pat: Look love, you can’t be thinking straight, your dad left you when you was a baby!

(Dave raises his voice)

Dave: And you lied to me saying my father was dead!

(Pat stands frozen, shocked over her son shouting at her)

(Dave calms down)

Dave: Anyway, what I wanted to tell you was that dad has made me a proposition….

(Pat crosses her arms and speaks suspiciously)

Pat: What kind of proposition?

Dave: He asked me if I wanted to go to Spain with him…..

(Pat raises her voice)

Pat: What?! Don’t tell me you accepted!

Dave: I told him that I was considering it….

Pat: I can’t believe it, your actually considering going to Spain with your father!

Dave: Yes I am considering it, I have a mind of my own you know, mum, you must realise I am not 10 years old anymore!

Pat: But love, your not thinking straight!

Dave: So you say! You know what, I think dad was right about what he told me! Your trying to stop our father/son relationship, you’re trying to stop me and dad communicating with each other!

Pat: What?! Is that what he told you?! Dave, he is playing with your brain! And when did you start sticking up for your father all of a sudden?

Dave: Since we had our talk….

Pat: And that’s when he told you, I was trying to prevent you from seeing him! Is that it?! Where is your father now?

Dave: Over the pub….

Pat: Right, I am going over to the pub, he can’t boss you around like this and give you a ridiculous offer of going to Spain with him, he can’t make you choose between Spain and Hinston!

Dave: No Pat, wait!

(Pat marches off towards the pub as Dave anxiously follows her)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON WATERFALL- EVENING

(We cut to the waterfall to see George lying unconscious at the bottom of the waterfall after being pushed by Danny, as we look up at the waterfall, we see Danny looking down on George with an evil look on his face)

(Danny begins to speak to himself)

Danny: He got what was coming to him……none of this was my fault! None of it!

(He looks at George again and begins to snigger)

Danny: I better get out of here sharpish!

(Danny makes his way from the waterfall, and picks up the food from the picnic and puts it in a bag. He turns to see a man walking his dog by the side of the waterfall)

Danny: Oh god! Don’t look down, please don’t look down! I gotta get out of this damn place now before I get found out!

(Danny begins to walk down the hill quickly holding the food from his picnic in a bag, as he gets to the bottom of the hill, he hears a shout from the man walking his dog)

(Danny utters to himself)

Danny: Oh no, he’s found George! I am going to be in trouble, deep trouble…….

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- EVENING

(Pat marches in, with Dave desperately following behind. She sees Frank and heads to confront him. She utters in a loud voice)

Pat: Frank!, what the bloody hell are you playing at?!

Frank: I beg your pardon….

Pat: You know what I’m talking about! Do you really want the whole pub to hear our conversation?!

Frank: Well I wouldn’t mind, I haven’t got anything to hide, I don’t even know what the hell’s going on for starters…..

(Pat shouts out to the pub)

Pat: Hello everyone! I just thought I would tell you all that Dave’s father is trying to take my son away after he left Dave when he was a baby!

(The pub look in shock)

(Frank begins to shout)

Frank: Well if they are hearing your side of the story, they might as well hear mine…… Everybody! Pat lied to her own son and said that I was dead, what kind of mother would tell a big black lie like that to their son!

(Pat slaps Frank as Dave feels humiliated)

Dave: Stop it! Both of you, just stop! Do you know humiliated I feel?!

(Dave marches off angrily)

Pat: Now, look what you’ve gone and done!

Frank: You started it, you triggered all this off, I really feel sorry for Dave, you made a slanging match over the topic of our own son, no wonder he feels humiliated!

Pat: He’s not our son, he’s my son!

(Pat marches off and leaves the pub to go after Dave)

Tom: Oooh, we all love a bit of gossip from our local!

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- EVENING

(Luke has come home from work, he has avoided Tanya after her bitch fight with Geena. He walks into the house where Tanya is standing in the living room wiping her eyes with a tissue)

Tanya: How could you Luke?! How could you?! You cheated on me again, I don’t think I can ever trust you again!

Luke: I don’t know what to say Tanya……apart from sorry obviously!

Tanya: Is that it?! Sorry?! Is sorry as low as you can go?! Your pathetic! Do you know how much you have hurt me?

Luke: I know I have hurt you a lot, but I don’t know what to do to make it up to you…..

Tanya: Well you better do something fast or our marriage will be over! For good this time!

(Luke peers over to see two bottles of vodka on the living room cabinet)

Luke: Oh Tanya! You haven’t been drinking again, have you?!
Tanya: What do you think?! The man I loved has cheated on me twice and all he can say is sorry, can’t I have a drink for being in that situation?!

Luke: Well remember the last time you drank, you ended up in hospital!

Tanya: And that was the only time you seemed to care! Once I was out of hospital, and everyone had got over the shock of your last affair, you thought, why don’t I start playing away again?!

Luke: No I didn’t think that at all, it just happened….I regretted it as soon as I woke up the next morning.

Tanya: And that makes it all better does it?! Do you love me Luke? I mean, do you really love me? Seriously love me?

Luke: Of course I do, that’s why I married you!

Tanya: And as soon as we were married and we had kids, you thought why don’t I start playing away?!

Luke: I love you Tan, I never meant to cheat on you! It just happened, and I didn’t mean for it to happen! Anyway Geena made the first move!

Tanya: Geena said that you said she was better in bed than me!

Luke: And you believe her?! She’s a stirrer….

Tanya: I believe her Luke, I can’t trust you, I can’t believe anything you say anymore! Our marriage is over Luke, over!

Luke: But I love you…

Tanya: You don’t seem to care, all you can say is sorry! I don’t want to hear any of your pleas about saving our marriage, because you used that tactic last time I found out that you were having an affair!

Luke: But….

(Tanya interrupts)

Tanya: But nothing! You made yourself clear, you don’t care for our marriage anymore. I want you out of our house before I come back from the pub!

Luke: What?! But you can’t do this, it’s our house! The kids will want me to stay!

Tanya: No they won’t, not after they find out that you have had another affair!

Luke: It wasn’t even an affair, it was just a one night stand!

Tanya: That doesn’t make a difference in my eyes! Now, you better get out before I come back!

Luke: But where am I going to go?

Tanya: Use your imagination!

(Tanya leaves, as Luke tries to hide the tears in his eyes)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON WATERFALL- EVENING

(There are paramedics lifting George up on a stretcher from the waterfall. He is still unconscious. The man with the dog who found George is still there looking at George being pulled up from the waterfall)

James: Oh my god, I know him! That’s George Whitehead! Oh my goodness, is he ok?

Paramedic: No, he is still unconscious and he is in a serious condition!

James: Oh gosh, I’ve gotta call his mum, Liz! She will be worried sick!

(The man gets out his phone and rings Liz)

James: Liz!

Liz: What?! Hello?

James: It’s me, James! Look I just found your son at the bottom of Hinston waterfall, he is in a serious condition!

Liz: What?! You can’t be bloody serious! George is usually careful!

James: Well not this time, and even worse, when I found him, I seen someone run away from the scene!

Liz: So someone pushed him?!

James: Well I’m not sure, but that’s the impression I got!

Liz: No one pushes my son off a waterfall and gets away with it! I will meet you at the hospital! Go with George in the ambulance. Is the ambulance there?

James: Yeah they are putting him in the ambulance now, I will go in the ambulance, I will see you at the hospital……

(Liz hangs up. James puts his phone away)

Paramedic: Oh, are you coming in the ambulance?

James: Yeah I am.

Paramedic: The police will arrive to seal this scene off, do you know if this was an accident?

James: I don’t think it was……

Paramedic: Well the police will need to speak to you, after they sealed this place off and you can tell them everything then…..

James: Ok.

(James gets into the back of the ambulance. The two paramedics get into the front of the ambulance and drive away to the hospital)

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- NIGHT

(The Butleys are watching TV. Julia interrupts the TV programme they are watching)

Julia: I am worried sick now, it’s 9pm and Danny still hasn’t come home…..

Ben: Don’t worry when Danny comes home, he will have a lot of questions to answer!

Julia: I think we should call the police….

Sally: Oh mum, please don’t bother! Danny is just looking for attention like he always has! There’s no point on wasting a breath talking about him!

Julia: Sally, this could be serious! Did he tell you where he was going tonight?

Sally: No he didn’t…

Julia: Did anything happen that was unusual today?

Sally: Well I made Danny apologise to George, but that was it! What’s with the 20 questions!

Julia: I’m only trying to figure out what happened love! I am worried about him….

Sally: Well you shouldn’t be…..

Julia: He just came home from school, and then left again saying he would be home before dark!

Ben: Oh brilliant! So you didn’t actually ask him where he was going? Excellent! :rolleyes:

Julia: It wasn’t my fault! He just left after telling me he would be home before dark!

Ben: For goodness sake! Use some authority woman!

(Julia walks out the living room)

Julia: Danny better be home soon……

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- NIGHT

(Greg walks in the pub as Chloe is stood behind the bar. Greg goes over to Chloe)

Greg: Chloe, I need to speak to you….

Chloe: And I needed to speak to you at lunchtime but you just ended up saying silly remarks when I was trying to tell you how I feel!

Greg: I know and I’m sorry, I didn’t realise that you were trying to say how you feel….

Chloe: Well it’s too late for apologises now, anyway I am busy serving punters…..

(Chloe is about to walk away from Greg to serve a drink to a punter but Greg grabs Chloe’s arm and begins to shout)

Greg: Chloe, please don’t walk away! I really like you, I think I love you!

(The whole pub falls silent as Chloe goes bright red)

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- NIGHT

(Julia has called the police after Danny vanished)

Sally: Mum, your overreacting way too much! Danny will turn up soon, I know he will!

Ben: Your mother’s not overreacting at all, it was the right decision to call the police, so don’t you dare question your mother’s judgement! :mad:

Sally: I wasn’t!

Ben: And don’t you dare answer me back! :mad:

Julia: Oh stop it both of you, now is the time not to argue! Our son is missing!

Sally: Oh please don’t over exaggerate!

Ben: Don’t even try to protect Danny, Sal! He’s going to get into trouble when he does eventually come back home!

Julia: We’ve got to keep it down, Marianne is only upstairs, I don’t want us to accidentally wake her up, I don’t want her to know that her brother is missing….

Ben: Well if Danny doesn’t turn up by morning, Marianne will definetly know about it!

Julia: Danny will turn up by morning, I know it!

Ben: Are you sure?

Julia: Oh for goodness sake Ben, don’t be so pessimistic!

(The police suddenly knock the door. Julia darts to open the door)

Julia: Oh my goodness, thank god you’re here! You were quite quick actually!

Police: Yeah, well, we are dealing with a serious incident in the local area….

Julia: Oh I see, well I called you because my son has gone missing…

Police: I see, and what is your son’s name?

(Ben interrupts)

Ben: Danny, Danny Butley.

Police: Ok, and how long has he been missing for?

Julia: Since 5pm this afternoon, he walked from school, came here, and just told me he was going out and Danny left.

Police: Did you ask your son where he was going?

Julia: Uh…

(Ben interrupts again)

Ben: No, the stupid woman didn’t ask him where he was going, she just let him walk off! I swear to you, I will throttle Danny when he eventually comes back home! :angry:

(Julia looks embarrassed and guilty at the same time)

Police: Don’t worry we will find your son soon….

Julia: I hope so….

(Sally butts in)

Sally: What’s this serious incident in the local area?

Police: Well a teenager fell from Hinston waterfall, and a witness seen a teenage boy run away from the scene…

Julia: He ran away! Oh my goodness! :eek:

Police: What is it?

Ben: What time did this happen?

Police: Well we got called to the scene at half 7.

Ben: Has the witness described the boy he seen run away from the scene?

Police: Why? Do you think your son could be in connection with the waterfall case we are currently investigating? :confused:

Julia: Well his behaviour hasn’t been good lately…

Police: Well the witness described the boy as being quite small for a teenager, with dark hair and wearing a blue hoodie….

Julia: Oh my god, that’s what our Danny looks like! :eek:

Ben: Julia, what was Danny wearing when he left this house?

(Julia stutters)

Julia: A blue hoodie!

Sally: What is the victim’s name?

Police: Well his first name is George, does that ring any bells?

Sally: George?! My god! No, not George! It can’t be George! :eek:

(Sally looks on in despair)

Julia: Oh my god Danny, what have you done! :eek:

(Ben, Julia and Sally look in a state of shock as the police look on)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFÉ- MORNING

(Dave walks downstairs to the café where he sees Frank eating toast and drinking a cup of orange juice. He walks over to him and sits down)

Dave: Hey dad.

Frank: Wow! Isn’t that the first time you called me dad?

Dave: Maybe….

Frank: Anyway why are you down here so early?

Dave: Because I wanted to see you…

Frank: Oooh I see…..what do you wanna talk about son?

Dave: Well you’ve only been staying here for nearly 2 weeks now and I have got to know you a little bit….

Frank: Well we’ve had a few chats, but it took you a long time to come round to the fact that I was your father…..

Dave: Yeah it was a shock, I mean, I thought you were dead!

Frank: Yeah I understand…anyway, what are you trying to say?

Dave: Well it’s about your offer, you know, the offer you delivered to me yesterday? About me living with you in Spain?

Frank: Yeah it was stupid of me to ask if you wanted to come to Spain with me, you obviously have friends in Hinston and of course you have your mum and sister, and this place…..I wouldn’t expect you to leave all of this just to come to Spain with your father who left you when you were a baby and the father you’ve only known for two weeks!

Dave: No, you got it all wrong dad, I have made a decision, I want to get to know you a lot more so I decided that I want to come to Spain with you!

(Frank and Dave both look delighted)

[littlemo]

Hey, this is Little Mo. I have kindly been asked to write some scripts while the author of Hinston High is away. I'm going to try my best. I've read a few of his previous scripts, and I get the jist of what's going on. But may not be perfect. So hopefully you'll be kind?! lol.

O.k. here it goes my first attempt.


(Cafe Morning) (In the cafe before opening up)

Dave: Hey mum.

Pat: Alright son.

Dave: You o.k.

(Pat gives him a look)

Dave: I've got something I want to tell you.

Pat: This isn't about your dad is it?!

Dave: I've made my decision. I'm going to Spain.

Pat: I thought we talked about this?!

Dave: You were the only one doing the talking.

Pat: He's not to be trusted.

Dave: Look, I know how you feel about him mum, and it's understandable. But I need the chance to find out for myself what he's like. And I can't do that with you there judging and criticising all the time. Your suffocating me!

Pat: I suffocate you?!

Dave: You know you do?!

Pat: All I want to do is protect you. That's all I've ever wanted. Your the most important thing in the world to me. You and Felicity. You don't know what I went through trying to raise you, a single mother on benefits.

Dave: It's always the same story isn't it?! The guilt trip. I try and find some happiness, and you throw your rotten life back in my face.

Pat: How dare you?! I've made sacrifices.

Dave: I didn't ask you too.

Pat: Would you have rather been putten into care?!

Dave: Right now, it wouldn't seem like such a bad plan!

Pat: Your so cruel!

(Dave gives a look and storms off, Pat starts to cry)

[littlemo]

(Cafe Morning)

Pat: (Pats crying) You know what he said to me. That he would have rather been put into care than living with me.

Felicity I'm sure he didn't mean that.

Pat Oh he mean't it alright! What am I going to do? i've lost him.

Felicity Mum, you haven't lost him. He loves you to bits. He's just a bit confused right now, that's all.

Pat That man is a bad influence on him. He's putting terrible thoughts into his head. He's been here 5 minutes, and he's already turned my son against me.

Felicity Look, I'll talk to him. He's not going anywhere. Hinston is where he belongs. He's never known anywhere else. What would he do in Spain?! Please.

Pat You really think you can change his mind?!

Felicity Yes, I'm sure I can.

Pat I hope your right, because I want him in my life. I love him so much.

Felicity I know you do. I would be heartbroken to if he left. Hinston is where he needs to be.

[bakedbean]

Just caught up with evreything and this is some kicksass stuff looking forward to see what happens next. Dont forget to check out Exeter lol

[Bryan]

well done dave, brilliant as usual! you never fail to disspaoint!

look forward to seeing what you and little mo write next!

I cant wait to the soap awards to see who wins what. I'm sure Exter and Devon Seas has some tough competiton against Hinston High!

[littlemo]

Just caught up with evreything and this is some kicksass stuff looking forward to see what happens next. Dont forget to check out Exeter lol

Thanks. I'm ready to do my next installment now.

Here it goes.

(Park-Morning)

Felicity: Dave, you know how upset mum is?! I've never seen her like this.

Dave: This is what I want to do Felicity!

Felicity Is it really?! You think whatever happens now is going to change the past. He left you!

Dave No! He left mum.

Felicity Same difference.

Dave Look you can tell mum, that i'm not angry with her anymore. I don't agree with what she did, but life's too short. That's why I'm going to Spain. So I don't have to regret anything.

Felicity And you won't have any regrets if you run off and leave us?!

Dave I love you both, you know that.

What happened with mum earlier... I didn't mean most of that stuff. I was just angry.

Felicity You gonna tell her that?!

Dave Yeah, I will. Before I leave.

(Felicty looks at him, Dave looks away)

[littlemo]

It's occured to me, I've done 3 scripts on the same storyline. So I'm going to try and space the other scripts out a bit, so it's more like a soap. Maybe we can call the 3 i've just done a 3 hander! lol.

O.k.

Police Search-Afternoon

In the Butleys

Julia: He's been gone ages now!

Sally: Look it's going to be o.k. They'll find him.

Julia: How can you possibly know that?!

(cut to police searching around the area)

(Then to Marianne)

Marianne: Danny! Danny! (Comes across a patch of ground, which appears to be an entrance to a mine)

(Back to house)

Julia: It's no use. I'm going to have to look for him myself.

Sally: There's plenty of people out there looking for him.

Julia: I don't care! I can't sit here and do nothing. He's my son!

Ben: Julia, Sally is right. Marianne is out there. We need to be here in case he comes back.

Julia: Yeah well it doesn't need all of us does it?!

(puts on her coat, and goes out the door, Ben follows her)


(Cut to mine, Marianne's gone down into it)

Marianne: Danny!

(hears rustling)

Are you in here?!

(sees his white t-shirt illumianted in the dark)

Danny: Marriane.

Marianne: Danny! (runs up to and give him a hug) Your safe!

Danny: Yeah I'm fine.

Marianne: What are you doing down here?!

Danny: How did you find me?

Marianne: Wild guess. Come on let's get home, everyone's worried sick about you.

Danny: Are the police here?!

Marianne: No, it's just me. Come on let's go!

Danny: I can't come home

Marianne: Why not?!

Danny: I'm just not o.k.

Marianne What are you talking about?!

Danny Look, just go o.k. I'll be fine.

Marianne You've got to be joking! I'm not leaving you here!

Danny Why not?! I'm no good to anyone.

Marianne That's not true! We all care about you. We just want you back.

Danny: How's mum?!

Marianne: She's devestated! She needs you back with her Danny. She loves you! Whatever it was that made you run away, she doesn't care about it! All she wants it her son!

Danny: I don't know.

Marianne: Look I'm not leaving until you come home with me. I don't care how long I have to be here for. And I'm going to ring mum, let her know your safe.

[Bryan]

great start little mo! loving your work! keep it up!!!

[littlemo]

(Hospital-Noon)

(Butley family enter hospital room)

Christina: Mum! (hugs her mum, starts crying)

Alicia: What's the matter sweetheart?

Christina: Mum I need to tell you something.

Jack: Did you tell the police the truth about what happened?!

Christina Yes. It was my fault.

Jack: What are you talking about?! I hope your not sticking up for that toerag Sean.

Christina: No dad, why do you always jump to the wrong conclusions, hey! Just let me speak!

Alicia: Jack, just calm down. What happened darling?!

Christina: It was Dean, he set me up, but I went along with it! He threatened me because of me hitting him with the vase! I thought i'd go to jail!

Jack: What did Sean's dad do to you?!

Christina: I was involved in a drug deal with him.

Jack: What?!

Christina: I handed over some cocaine to a friend of his. Sean thinks I'm lying!

His friend handed me a drink, and I drank it. I know it was stupid, but I was't thinking straight. The drink was drugged.

Jack: Somebody did that to my baby girl?! Sick *******s!

Alicia: Oh Christina! (weeping)

Jack: You told the police everything didn't you?!

Christina: Yes, dad I told them.

Jack: You don't want to let him get away with this. Why didn't you come to be when this kicked off hey?! You shouldn't have gone through this alone. Dealing drugs?! Nothing is worth that!

Christina: Dad I know I'm sorry. I was just so scared! Sean won't even talk to me.

Jack: If he trusts that scum over you then he's not worth it darling.

Christina: But I love him so much!

Jack: Oh Christina. You should have been able turn to me. I wasn't there for you. I am so sorry! You are so precious to me, you know that. I know you care for Sean, but if he trusts that scumbag over you it's not worth it.

(Christina starts crying, her dad gives her a hug)

Christina: Dad, I love you. (gives her mum and dad a hug)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Hey well there's been some excellent scripts written for Hinston High while i have been away. Well done to little mo! She is now a writer for Hinston High along with myself. :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON STREET- AFTERNOON

(Kat is walking while getting some cash from her bag. A gang of yobs approach, and try to steal her cash. There's a struggle until Kat falls to the ground and the yobs run away. Greg is in the distance reading a newspaper and runs to Kat's aid)

Greg: Oh my goodness! Are you alright?! What just happened? :eek:

(Kat picks herself up from the ground with the cash in her hand)

Kat: Didn't you see?! A gang of bloody yobs tried to rob me!

Greg: Well i was busy reading the newspaper.....

Kat: Yeah well i am ok, there's no need to fuss over me or anything! :rolleyes:

Greg: Well as long as your ok....

Kat: Yeah just about!

Greg: Oh you dropped your credit card on the floor.

(Greg picks Kat's credit card up. Kat grabs it and tries to stuff the credit card in her bag)

Kat: Yeah thanks, it must have dropped out of my bag.....

Greg: No problem, anytime.

Kat: Oh Greg! Your such a sweetie! What with just picking up my credit card and telling Chloe you loved her in the pub last night, has she told you her decision yet?

Greg: Well she said she really likes me but doesn't know if she wants to start a relationship....

Kat: Well if Chloe lets you down, you've always got me! If you ever want to talk, i am always here to speak!

Greg: Well thanks but i think i will be ok, and if i have a problem, i will probably go to Chloe.....

Kat: Why?! You don't like me do you?! Just admit it, you hate me! :(

Greg: No, i just don't want to burden you with my problems....

Kat: That's just a bloody excuse! If you don't like me, say it too my face, don't make petty excuses! :mad:

(Kat marches off as Greg walks away with a guilty look)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- AFTERNOON

(Liz rushes to the hospital reception. She stutters while speaking to the receptionist. She has a tear in her eye)

Liz: Where's my son? His name is George, ok?! George?! Now i want to know where he is? He's been in an accident!!!

Receptionist: Ok, well if you take a seat, i can find out where he is for you, does that sound ok?

Liz: No, that doesn't sound bloody ok! I don't have time to take a seat! Now tell me where he is or i will go and find George for myself!

Receptionist: Well i will just need to type his name in on the database and then you will find out where he is in the hospital but this does require patience.

(Pause)

Liz: Oh, i have had enough of this, i am not playing games with you or anybody else! I am going to find my son myself!

(Liz runs through the reception into the cubicles, she opens each curtain until she sees George lying in a hospital bed. James is by his side and George is clearly in pain)

Liz: Oh my god! My baby boy! Are you ok?

(Liz hugs George)

James: Well he had a serious fall....

Liz: I am not speaking to you....

George: Oh mum, give him some credit. He came with me to the hospital and found me at the bottom of the waterfall, imagine if no one found me, i would be dead!

Liz: Your right, thanks James.

(Liz smiles at James)

Liz: Now what i want to know is who did this to you?

George: Oh mum, does it really matter?! Isn't it good enough that i am ok?

Liz: I need to hunt down whoever did this to you, they can't get away with it!

George: Well the police will hunt him down for you, but i thought my health was all that mattered to you!

(The doctor suddenly enters the cubicle)

Liz: Oh hi doctor, it's clear that my son is ok, so when will he be coming home?

Doctor: He's far from ok.....I presume your George's mum?

(The doctor takes Liz away from the cubicle)

Liz: Yeah.....but what do you mean? I don't get what you mean! My son is ok, look at him doctor! Look at him!

Doctor: He's had severe damage to both his legs when he fell from the waterfall and i am afraid your son will never be able to walk again! :eek:

(Liz wipes a tear from her eye, the doctor walks away before Liz breaks down in tears. We see George lying in his hospital bed. He begins crying too obvious that he overheard what the doctor said)

James: Your mum will always be here for you George.

(James gets a tissue and passes it to George. He wipes the tears from his eyes)

[DaVeyWaVey]

GALLAGHERS HOUSE- AFTERNOON

(Sean is watching TV when he suddenly hears a hard knocking noise from the back door)

Sean: Ok! Ok! Hold your horses!

(Sean rushes to the back door. He opens it and is left shocked to see his dad, Dean)

Sean: Oh my god dad! Where the bloody hell have you been?

Dean: I thought you would have known the bloody story by now....

Sean: Don't worry, i know what's going on alright!

(Dean rushes upstairs)

Sean: Dad, i need to tell you something....

Dean: Don't worry son, i can guess what's going on......the police are after me, right?

Sean: Yeah right, Christina told the police everything! She said you forced her to take part in a drugs deal!

Dean: I knew she couldn't keep her mouth shut! That Christina is a vulnerable young woman...

Sean: So it's true then?

Dean: Yeah it's true....

(Dean rushes into his bedroom and starts packing his suitcase. Sean follows him)

Dean: I know your mad at me son, because after all she is your girlfriend.....but i just don't believe in eating humble pie!

Sean: I was mad at you dad, but I'm not anymore....

Dean: Why the hell not? Your girlfriend was nearly killed because of me...

Sean: I am mad at her now because she grassed on you to the police, she named you as being responsible for putting her life at risk and holding a drugs deal! The police are now after you because of her! You will face time behind bars because of that stupid cow!

Dean: There's no need to call your girlfriend a stupid cow!

Sean: Christina is no longer my girlfriend because she grassed on you so i can call her what i like....

(Dean finishes packing his suitcase and rushes down the stairs)

Dean: Ok i need to go son but i will be in touch.

Sean: Where the hell are you going?

Dean: On the run from the police, i am going to go abroad so the police don't catch me. Look i hope you can patch things up with Christina...

Sean: I won't be patching things up with Christina, i will be getting my revenge!

(Dean is half listening. He looks outside the window where he sees a police car pulling up outside the house)

Dean: Sh** the police are here! I need to get out of here now!

(The police knock the door. Sean looks worried as Dean panics)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFE- AFTERNOON

(Pat goes to the bathroom where she peers into Dave's bedroom to see Frank helping Dave pack his bags)

Pat: What the hell do you think your doing?

Frank: What does it look like Pat?! He's packing his bags....

Pat: Dave! Why are you packing your bags for?

Dave: You know why mum! I want to go to Spain and live with dad!

Pat: But you can't! I love you! Your my son!

Dave: I know. Look I'm sorry about what i said earlier, it was just me feeling angry. I never wanted to be put into care, i am glad that i have a mum like you!

Pat: Do you mean that?

Dave: Of course i mean that, you are my mum!

Pat: Then why are you leaving?

Dave: I've told you a million times, i want to go to Spain with dad! I am going to Spain with dad whether you like it or not!

(Pat starts walking down the stairs. As she gets to the bottom step, she bursts into tears)

[DaVeyWaVey]

POLICE SEARCH-AFTERNOON

(Marianne rings Julia from the mine. Danny is sitting in the corner of the mine shivering)

Marianne: Hi mum, you never guess what?! I've found Danny!

(Cuts to Julia)

Julia: Oh my goodness, you've found Danny! Is he ok, is he safe?

(Cuts to Marianne)

Marianne: Yeah mum, stop panicing. Danny is just fine.

(Cuts to Julia)

Julia: Oh my god! Yes! Yes!

(Julia puts the phone down and runs to Ben and swings round to hug him)

Julia: Our son is ok Ben! Our precious son is ok!

Ben: He won't be ok when I deal with him. How dare he run away like that, like he didn't have a care in the world! He didn't think who would be worrying about him! Danny just thinks of himself!

(Ben starts working himself up)

Julia: Danny is ok Ben! That's the main thing!

(Sally appears)

Sally: I just heard you shouting at the top of your voice mum! Is everything ok?

Julia: Yes, everything is just perfect, Marianne has found Danny! Everything is now fine!

Sally: Oh my goodness, is he ok?

Julia: Marianne said he was fine, so he must be! Danny must be heading home now!

(Sally peers out of the window at the police)

Sally: Well the police are still searching for him! We better tell them that Danny is alive and well!

Ben: Yeah but the police will still be sticking around, they will need to question him over the waterfall incident with that other boy.....

(Cuts to mine)

Marianne: Oh Danny, mum was overjoyed! See i told you she was worrying about you! Everyone was worrying about you!

Danny: Yeah well....I don't particularly want to go back home!

Marianne: But you have too Danny!

(Danny shouts at Marianne)

Danny: But i don't have too! There's someone i have to see before i go back home!

Marianne: Who do you have to see?

Danny: No one you know so don't worry....

Marianne: I am your sister Danny!

(Pause)

Marianne: You didn't have anything to do with that boy falling from the waterfall did you?

Danny: Stop asking me questions! Just stop it! Now get out of my way!

(Danny pushes Marianne away from the mine entrance before he lifts himself from the mine and runs off. Marianne lifts herself from the mine also and sees Danny running)

(Marianne screams)

Marianne: Danny!!!

[DaVeyWaVey]

GALLAGHERS HOUSE- AFTERNOON

(Dean is half listening. He looks outside the window where he sees a police car pulling up outside the house)

Dean: Sh** the police are here! I need to get out of here now!

(The police knock the door. Sean looks worried as Dean panics)

Dean: Sean, cover me! I am going to try and sneak out the back door!

Sean: I will do anything for you dad!

Dean: Remember son, i love you!

(The police knock louder)

(Dean runs to the back door. He sees the police at the back door too)

Dean: Sh**. They are round the back too! What am i gonna do?

Sean: Try the window! Just try anything!

(The police suddenly break into the back door. Dean panics and runs to the bedroom. He opens the window and looks down)

Police: It's the police! Now where are you?!

Sean: What the bloody hell is going on? You've wrecked my back door!

Police: Open the front door and then we will tell you!

(Sean opens the front door. The police march in)

Police: We have a warrant to search these premises, that's what's going on!

Sean: Well what are you looking for?

Police: Don't play stupid games. Are you Dean Weatherby?

Sean: No.

Police: Then who is he?

(The police start marching upstairs. They turn to open the bedroom door)

Sean: No you can't go up there!

Police: Why? Because we will find Dean!

(As the police open the bedroom door, Dean jumps out of the window with his suitcase)

Sean: Run dad! Run!

(Dean lands at the ground. He begins to run but the police run out of the house and start to give chase)

(Dean speaks to himself)

Dean: I've gotta get away! I just got to!

(The police suddenly pounce on Dean. Dean falls to the floor. The police put handcuffs on Dean)

Police: Dean Weatherby, you are arrested on suspicion of possession of drugs and drug dealing. Also, attempted murder!

(The police pull Dean as he goes into the police car)

(To Sean)

Police: We will be in touch, this isn't over yet!

(The police get into the police car and drive off carting Dean away with them)

(Sean closes the door and leans against it with an angry look on his face)

Sean: The bloody Weatherby family made this happen! In fact, Christina made this happen! Christina isn't just gonna pay, her whole family is too!

(Sean punches the front door in anger)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON HIGH- NIGHT

(Luke walks outside the pub after a day of drinking following his bust up with Tanya over his night of passion with Geena. Suddenly a man dressed in black walks up behind Luke and knocks him out with a brick.)

NIGHTCLUB- NIGHT

(Luke wakes up after being knocked out. He stands up to familiarise his surroundings. He realises he is at Andy's nightclub. Luke turns round to see Andy)

Luke: What the hell is going on?

Andy: Don't speak to me in that tone of voice! Your gonna pay for sleeping with my wife! I am going to make sure you will never sleep again!

Luke: Look, please! I'm sorry! I will do anything to make it up to you! Seriously, i will!

Andy: It's too late! You shouldn't have slept with my wife!

(Andy drags Luke to his office. He shuts the door)

Luke: Oh my goodness! What the hell is going on?! Are you mad?!

(Luke sees Geena tied at one side of the room on a chair and his wife, Tanya tied to a chair on the other side of the room)

Luke: What have you got planned Andy?

Tanya: Luke, you ar****** Our marriage is over if i get out of here! You hear me, it's over! Look what you got me in too! I am opposite that slapper and face to face with some madman!

(Andy grabs Tanya's neck)

Andy: Don't you dare, call me a madman and don't you dare call my wife a slapper!

(Andy lets go off Tanya's neck. Tanya looks terrified)

Andy: Now Tanya, you have a 50/50 chance of getting out of here alive!

Tanya: You really are a madman! I hope when you die you rot in hell!

Andy: You might die before me....

(Tanya shuts up, while Geena remains quiet on the other side of the room. Luke peers over to Andy's office desk to see a gun)

Luke: Uh.. i hope you don't mind me asking but what's that gun for?

Andy: It's for you. Now this is what you have too do....you have to shoot and kill Tanya or Geena.

Luke: What?! Are you joking?! Did i hear what you just said?!

Andy: Yes, loud and clear!

(There's a pause. Geena, Luke and Tanya are all looking nervous)

Andy: Now if you don't shoot and kill one of them, they will both be killed!

(Andy points to two envelopes)

Andy: Now pick up one of those envelopes and open it, whoever's name it reads (either Tanya or Geena's name) you will have to shoot and kill them, do you understand?

Luke: I can't do this, i can't! No way! It's out of the question!

Andy: Then i will have to kill them both right in your face and you will have to die a slow and painful death, and trust me it will be slow and painful! If you follow my instructions and shoot one of them, i will never bother you again!

(Andy picks up the gun)

Andy: I hope you have nightmares over this!

Luke: No!

Andy: No? Does that mean you will follow my instructions?

(There's a pause. Luke looks at both Geena and Tanya)

Geena: Do what Andy says! Just do it! Before he shoots all our brains out!

Luke: Ok.

(Luke picks up an envelope and opens it....)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Geena: Do what Andy says! Just do it! Before he shoots all our brains out!

Luke: Ok.

(Luke picks up an envelope and opens it....)

(Luke shudders as he drops the envelope to the floor)

Andy: Well? Who's name did it reveal?

(Luke is unable to speak. Andy grabs Luke by the neck and pins him against the wall)

Andy: Now we haven't got all night! Now tell me whose name it revealed, i don't want to waste any time!

(Andy lets go of Luke's neck and Luke stutters)

Luke: It.....

Tanya: For goodness sake, just bloody tell us!

Luke: The envelope revealed Geena's name!

(Luke looks at Geena with a guilty look on his face. Geena begins to cry)

Geena: I am going to die.....aren't I?! I am going to die!

(Geena bursts into tears)

Tanya: Oh babes, i am so sorry!

Andy: You bloody deserve it, i can't believe you became my wife, stupid bitch!

(Andy slaps Geena across the face)

Tanya: Why did you marry him Geena?! Why did you marry him?

Andy: Because she was meant to love me.

Geena: I do love you Andy! I really do love you! I am going to get my life taken away from me because of a one night stand! Please! Please! I don't want to die!

(Geena bursts into tears again)

Andy: Kill her Luke! Just bloody kill her! I don't want to hear her cries any longer!

(Luke grabs the gun and points it at Geena)

Luke: I'm so sorry!

(Luke is about to pull the trigger....)

Tanya: If you do this Luke, if you pull the trigger on Geena, then our marriage is over!

(Luke looks at Tanya)

Andy: Do you wanna die a slow and painful death? It can be arranged!

(Andy grabs a knife and holds it to Luke's neck. Geena continues to cry)

Luke: I'm so sorry too Tan!

(Geena screams)

Geena: Nooooo!

(Luke pulls the trigger. It hits Geena's chest and her blood hits the wall. She lays dead tied to a chair)

Andy: She had what was coming to her, stupid bitch! Now you two can go...

(Andy removes the knife from Luke's neck. Luke unties Tanya before rushing off)

Andy: I hope you have nightmares over this night.....

Tanya: Come on Luke! Let's get out of the madman's hell hole!

(Luke and Tanya leave Andy's club. Andy turns to Geena who is laying dead in her chair)

Andy: The stupid bitch is dead, but my revenge isn't over yet against Luke....

[Bryan]

great stuff! A gripping scene and Andy is a true villain! I seriously can not wait to see what revenge he has in store for Luke and Tanya!

Hinston High = the best soap on soapboards, i hope it wins some awards at the soap awards in august

keep up the good work dave! :thumbsup: :clap:

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- NIGHT

(Danny is in the hospital car park. He sets off a car alarm. The security guards rush over as Danny sneaks inside the back entrance of the hospital. He goes through the cellar and into a lift. He goes from the lift and sneaks into a cubicle. Some nurses walk past the cubicle Danny is hiding in. When they walk past, he sneaks out and walks into George's cubicle.)

Danny: Hello George.

(Danny shakes George. George wakes up)

Danny: George, its your most favourite person in the entire world here making a late night visit! :rolleyes:

George: What the bloody hell are you doing here?! You haven't came here for a flying visit have you?!

Danny: In a matter of fact, it will be a flying visit because i only came here to say one thing to you!

George: Well tell me before i call security!

Danny: If you call security, your life wouldn't be worth living!

George: So out with it!

(Danny grabs George's neck and whispers violently in his ear)

Danny: If you tell the police that I pushed you off the waterfall, then you will be dead meat, you hear me?

(George takes a nervous gulp)

George: I hear you....

Danny: The story is that you accidentally fell off the waterfall, you understand?

George: Yes I understand.

Danny: If you don't do what i say, then there will be hell to pay!

George: Yeah i know, i will do everything you say honestly i will! I don't want any more trouble!

Danny: Good....Now remember the story?

George: I accidentally fell from the waterfall, no one else was involved!

Danny: That's good, now keep that story and don't change it!

George: Don't worry i won't change it, i promise!

Danny: Good, i will be seeing you soon George....

(Danny lets go off George's neck and is about to leave when George shouts)

George: You know, i am paralysed because of you! I will never be able to walk again because you pushed me off that waterfall! I am going to be in a wheelchair for the rest of my life!

Danny: Does it look like i give a damn!

(Danny leaves the cubicle laughing)

[DaVeyWaVey]

WOODS FLAT- MORNING

(Tom is still in a dressing gown making breakfast. He suddenly hears a knock on the door and answers it. He opens the door and sees Chloe on the doorstep. Tom looks surprised)

Tom: Oh hi Chloe, what are you doing here? I mean, you don't really come round to see us this early in the morning!

Chloe: I just need to see Greg, is he in?

Tom: Um...he might be in the shower, let me go check....

(Tom leaves and heads upstairs. Chloe stands waiting impatiently for a few seconds when she suddenly sees Greg run down the stairs in a towel)

Greg: Hey Chloe.

(Chloe makes a sexy stare at Greg)

Chloe: Hey...

Greg: So how come your here looking for me so early in the morning?

Chloe: It's only 7am Greg....

Greg: That's too early for me...

Chloe: I've made a decision....

Greg: You have?! :eek:

Chloe: And seeing you in that towel has made me even more sure that i have made the right decision.....

(Greg looks shocked)

Chloe: I think i love you Greg.

Greg: Oh Chloe, i think i love you too.....

(Chloe and Greg hug before they passionately kiss. Greg shuts the door once Chloe has entered and lets go off his towel.....)

[DaVeyWaVey]

WEATHERBYS HOUSE- MORNING

(Jack and Alicia enter with Christina in tow)

Christina: Oh i am so glad to be home!

Jack: Yeah, home sweet home....

(Christina falls onto the sofa and starts to relax. Sam enters)

Sam: Oh sis, your home! Is everything ok?

Christina: Yeah everything is just fine, bruv.

(Sam gives Christina a hug)

Jack: Now Christina, you promise to stay away from that Sean Weatherby!

Christina: Oh dad! Please don't worry! I think everything is over between me and Sean anyway, well i presume so, he's not going to bother me again....

Alicia: Well it won't be over yet will it?! I mean if Dean gets charged, then you will probably have to go to court to testify.....

Christina: But i don't want to testify!

Jack: Well if i put a good word in to the police then hopefully you won't be needed for his court case and they will be able to get a criminal conviction without the use of you....

Alicia: Yeah well let's hope so ey?

Christina: Yeah, i just can't believe i got myself in this mess! Will i go to prison too? For assisting a drug dealer?

Alicia: Well this is your first offence love, so i am sure you will get off with a caution....

Jack: Yeah fingers crossed.....

(Christina sighs)

Christina: I've gotta speak too Sean....

Jack: No you can't! What the bloody hell are you thinking?!

Christina: I am going to see him to clear the air, to tell him our relationship is over! It will just be like a final meeting!

Jack: I'm not sure.....

Christina: He seemed pretty wound up after i told him what i said to the police, so i just want to say my peace, i don't want a reconclication!

(There's a pause)

Christina: Please dad, please! It will just be a final meeting!

Jack: Ok but you better be careful.....

Christina: Oh thanks dad.

(Christina hugs Jack)

[diamond1]

lmao at greg and chloe very funny haha:rotfl:

and danny hmm you will get yours sunshine

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- MORNING

(Julia is making breakfast for Sally and Marianne. Ben comes down the stairs after having a shower. Ben enters the kitchen to see Sally and Marianne sitting at the dining room table.)

Ben: Sally and Marianne, do you mind if you go and sit in the living room and watch TV for a minute please? Me and mum have to have a chat....

(Julia looks at Ben suspiciously)

Sally: Ok. Come on Marianne, let's go.

(Sally and Marianne leave the kitchen. Julia shouts down the hallway)

Julia: I will bring you your breakfast in a minute.....

(Sally and Marianne exit)

Ben: We need to chat about Danny, Ju!

Julia: Well what is there to say about him?! The police are still searching for him, Marianne found him and he ran away again! What are we meant to do?!

Ben: We've gotta go out there and try and find Danny too, we are his parents!

Julia: Bad parents!

Ben: We're not bad parents!

Julia: We certainly are! Well i know i am a bad mother!

Ben: Stop beating yourself up...none of this is our fault!

(Ben hugs Julia)

Julia: Oh Ben! It must have been something we did....we must have brought Danny up wrong.....

Ben: No don't talk utter rubbish! We brought Danny up just the same as Sally and Marianne. And Sally and Marianne are as good as gold!

Julia: So where did we go wrong with Danny? Huh?! We must have done something!

Ben: We didn't do anything!

(Julia starts to cry)

Julia: Danny could be lying in a ditch right now! He could have had an accident and we wouldn't have been there for him as responsible parents.....plus if he is found...

(Ben interrupts)

Ben: What do you mean if he is found?! Of course he will be found! Don't be so bloody pessimistic!

Julia: When he is found then, he will be in serious trouble with the police after pushing that boy from the waterfall! He will go to court, we would be all over the papers labelled as bad parents!

Ben: Not all court cases make it to the papers you know?! And how do we know if Danny pushed that teenager off the waterfall in the first place?!

Julia: Well it doesn't look good for him does it?! I mean a witness saw someone running away from the scene matching Danny's description! And Danny probably doesn't have an alibi!

Ben: We could give him an alibi....

Julia: It's too late for that now!

Ben: If we give him an alibi, we can deal with Danny in our own way without the police getting involved!

Julia: We told the police that Danny had ran away when the accident had happened, it's too late for alibis!

Ben: Then what do you suggest we do?

Julia: We can't do anything....we've made Danny like this, we're too blame, we can't make things any better!

Ben: I am sick and bloody tired of your constant whining! I'm off! :angry:

(Ben exits. Julia begins to cry again)

[big bro fan]

Do you still need another writer. If you do let me know.:)

[Katy]

wow, Dave thats excellent. I have just read the whole thing from start to finish. I cant believe Andy made Luke kill Geena that was so nasty. I hope Dean rots in his prison cell the evil man. Its great stuff, keep it up.

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- MORNING

(The police enter Danny's cubicle where they see Liz hugging George at his hospital bedside.)

Liz: Oh finally! It's about time you arrived.....

Police: We have came to ask George a few questions over what happened, hopefully with the help of his information we can catch whoever pushed you off the waterfall....

Liz: Well i gathered that!

Police: Ms Burdeck, would you mind if you left this cubicle for a moment while we speak to your son?

Liz: I want to be here for him....

Police: Well i am not being funny but i think he would be better answering our questions with you not being here....

Liz: Fine! I will wait outside! Just don't go terrorising him with quick- fire questions!

(Liz leaves the hospital cubicle. George is looking nervous)

Police: Now George, can you remember what happened on the evening you were pushed from the waterfall?

George: Well to be honest officer, i can't remember much.....

Police: You must have remembered something! It's important that you tell us all you can so we can nail who did this to you!

(George pauses for a moment)

George: No sorry i can't remember anything.

Police: Well how about telling us what happened leading up to you being pushed off the waterfall?

George: Well to be honest officer, i don't think i was pushed of the waterfall...

Police: What do you mean you don't think?! You either got pushed off that waterfall or not!

George: I didn't get pushed, i fell off that waterfall! Now i am scared that i have been wasting police time.....

Police: Well you might be wasting police time if your lying to us....

(George shivers)

Police: A witness found you at the bottom of the waterfall unconscious and he seen someone run away from the scene.....now tell us the truth!

George: I am telling you the truth, i fell! The witness must have got it wrong....

Police: The witness seemed pretty certain to me.

(George shouts)

George: Well the witness must be wrong! Now leave me alone!

(Liz suddenly dashes back into the hospital cubicle to come to her son's defence)

Liz: Have you been asking my son awkward questions? Ey?

Police: No we've been trying to get him to tell us who did this to him but he won't respond!

Liz: Come on George, tell them who did this to you! Tell them who pushed you off the waterfall!

George: No!

Police: The person who did this to you has made you disabled for the rest of your life and your protecting him....it's unbelievable!

George: I'm not protecting no one.....i fell from that waterfall!

Police: Well without you telling us who pushed you off that waterfall, we may never find the culprit! Without your co operation, the culprit will still be free!

(There's a pause)

Police: Well we tried, all we can go on now is the witness, if the witness fails to spot the culprit in an identity parade, then the culprit will be free....we might be in touch...

(The police leave)

Liz: Why didn't you tell them what bloody happened?! You stupid idiot! He's going to be free now! He won't get his just desserts!

George: I'm sorry mum....

Liz: I know someone pushed you off that waterfall and i am going to find out who it is!

(Liz leaves the hospital cubicle in a rage)

[Katy]

i wonder if ther going to find Danny out as the one thats pushed him off the waterfall. Its all go in Hinston.

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- MORNING

(Ben has just stormed off and Julia has started crying. Suddenly there is the sound of broken glass coming from the back garden window.)

Julia: What the bloody hell?!

(Sally and Marianne rush into the kitchen)

Sally: What was that?

(Suddenly Danny enters the kitchen. There's a long pause of surprise)

Danny: Well what can i say?! I am home....

Marianne: You could have tried using the front door though. :rolleyes:

Danny: Well i didn't have time to think about using the front door did i?

Marianne: Well why did you run away from me when i found you? I thought you were coming home!

Julia: You've got a lot of explaining to do Danny!

Sally: Yeah and i will start by asking if you pushed George from the waterfall?!

Danny: I didn't push anyone of a waterfall! For goodness sake! Marianne asked me the same question when she found me!

Sally: Then why did you run away?

Danny: Because i had other things on my mind!

(Julia interrupts)

Julia: Your in deep trouble young man, and when dad gets back, you won't be hearing the last of it!

(There's a silence)

Sally: I'm off to see George....

Julia: What about school?

Sally: George is more important than school!

Julia: No lad is more important than school!

(Danny looks nervous)

Danny: Why do you want to see George anyway?

Sally: So i can find out what really happened....

Sally: I will go to school first though so don't worry yourself mum!

(Sally goes to get her school shoes. She comes back to the kitchen, and approaches Danny. She whispers in his ear)

Sally: I know your lying!

[DaVeyWaVey]

I hope your enjoying Hinston High so far everyone! There's lots more to come so keep reading!

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFE- MORNING

(Pat is laying on her bed looking at a family photo of her, Dave and Felicity. Suddenly Dave knocks the door.)

Pat: Come in....

(Pat wipes the tears from her eyes quickly. Dave opens the door)

Dave: Hi mum...

Pat: I thought you would be in Spain by now! :rolleyes:

Dave: Oh mum, please don't start! This is the last few hours i will see you!

Pat: I thought you were only going away with your father for a short while, your making it sound like a lifetime!

Dave: I will be back mum, i can count on it!

Pat: Well you better be back, me and Felicity can't handle this cafe on our own!

Dave: Well you can hire new staff can't you?

Pat: Yeah i am advertising for new staff now....

Dave: Well that's alright then....

(There's a pause)

Dave: I am sorry mum...

Pat: Sorry for what? What do you have to be sorry for?!

Dave: I know how much this hurts for you so don't go hiding it and pretending your ok!

Pat: I am trying to be happy for you Dave! Your going to Spain with your father, you should be overjoyed! Not feeling guilty or feeling sorry for me!

Dave: You do believe me though don't you about me coming back here? Because i will be back!

Pat: I know you will be back love, i can trust you!

(There's a pause again)

Pat: What time's your flight?

Dave: 12:30.

Pat: Well you better be getting a move on then!

Dave: I am gonna miss you mum. :(

(Dave sheds a tear from his eye)

Pat: Don't cry love, please don't cry or you will make me cry!

Dave: I love you mum.

(Dave and Pat hug each other)

[DaVeyWaVey]

GALLAGHERS HOUSE- MORNING

(Christina knocks on Sean's front door. Sean answers looking surprised)

Sean: What the bloody hell are you doing here you stupid bitch?! :angry:

Christina: I came to pick up the pieces Sean so just hear me out....

(Christina forces her way through the front door. Sean slams the front door behind her)

Sean: I don't want to hear anything from you! Do you know how much trouble you have caused?!

Christina: Yeah and i am sorry but none of this is my fault! Your father forced me to take part in that drugs deal, i had no choice!

Sean: Of course you had a bloody choice! :angry:

(Sean suddenly screams before sweeping everything off the kitchen table in a rage)

Christina: Sean, stop! Please stop! I am so sorry!

Sean: You grassed my father up to the police, 'sorry' won't cut it!

Christina: Then what will?

Sean: Nothing will! You've ruined everything! :angry:

(Sean grabs some kitchen plates and starts smashing them against the floor)

Christina: Sean, your scaring me!

Sean: Have you heard ey?! Have you heard?!

Christina: Heard what Sean? Heard what?!

Sean: My father has been charged for possession of drugs and attempted murder because of you! You stupid cow! He's going to court and he's going to face a long prison sentence because of you! :angry:

(Christina begins to cry)

Christina: I'm sorry Sean, i am so so sorry! Everything was going so well for us!

Sean: Nothing was going well for us, our relationship wasn't going anywhere!

Christina: I love you Sean....

Sean: I loved you Christina!

(Christina bursts into tears)

Sean: What's wrong Christina?! Does the truth hurt? Well the reality hurts for me!

(Sean grabs Christina by the neck)

Sean: You and your family are going to be pay for what you've done! :angry:

(Christina looks terrified)

Christina: Look Sean, we can sort this out....

Sean: It's too late to sort things out!

(Sean grabs a chair and forces Christina to sit down)

Christina: What are you doing?

Sean: I am being a gentlemen and offering you to sit down Christina, we are going to sort things out by you sitting down!

(Sean grabs some gaffotape and starts wrapping it around Christina)

Christina: What the hell do you think your doing?!

Sean: Your going to pay Christina for putting my father in prison, for putting my father in trouble with the police! :angry:

(Christina tries to fight back but she can't. The gaffotape is wrapped round her. Sean ties Christina's hands and feet to the chair)

(Christina starts to scream loudly)

Christina: God help me! Nooo!

Sean: Shut up you stupid bitch, just shut up!

(Sean puts gaffotape over Christina's mouth. Sean goes upstairs and grabs a syringe from his bedside table. He goes downstairs back to Christina. Christina sees the syringe and looks terrified.)

(Sean holds the syringe to Christina's arm)

Sean: Don't worry, this will be slow but painless....

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(Sean holds the syringe to Christina's arm)

Sean: Don't worry, this will be slow but painless....

(As Sean is about to inject Christina, Sean hears a police siren and pauses. Christina is looking mortified)

Sean: Sh** This is all i need!

(Sean puts the syringe down and looks outside the window to see a police car parked in his driveway.)

Sean: I need to get out of here fast!

(Christina is squeeling from behind the gaffotape on her mouth. She is trying to speak. Sean looks at Christina)

Sean: I am not taking that gaffotape off your bloody mouth! You will scream the place down!

(There's a knock at the door)

Sean: What do the bloody police want?! Ey?! Why can't they leave me alone?!

(The police start to speak through the door)

Police: Hello? Is anybodyhere?! Someone has reported a disturbance at this house....we came here to investigate...is there anybody in?

(Sean looks at Christina)

Sean: Right that's it! We can't stay here, not with the police swanning about, we've got to go to a more hidden location where nowhere can find us, where i can finish you off once and for all!

(The police begin to speak through the door again)

Police: If nobody answers this door, i am afraid we will have to break it down!

(Sean speaks to himself)

Sean: Again?! I've only just fixed that door!

(There's a pause. Sean is thinking to himself)

Sean: Right, i will have to answer the door to them! I've gotta hide you first though!

(Sean grabs Christina who is tied to the chair and carries her to the hallway where she hides her in the airing cupboard)

Sean: Don't even think of squealling!

(Sean closes the airing cupboard on Christina and heads to the front door)

Sean: Ok! Ok! I'm coming!

(Sean answers the front door to the two policeman....)

Sean: Yes?

Police: We had a report over a disturbance at this address....

Sean: A disturbance?! What disturbance?

Police 2: So nothing has been going on here?

Sean: Not a thing! I am the only person here for goodness sake!

Police: Then what are those plates doing smashed on the floor? Do you like smashing plates in your spare time sir?!

Sean: No in a matter of fact i don't, i just accidentally dropped some plates on the floor!

(The two policeman barge past Sean and into his house)

Police 2: What about that syringe on the kitchen table?

Sean: I'm diabetic ok?! So is that it now with the questions?!

Police: Yes we only came to check to see if you were ok....

Sean: Well does it seem like anybody else is with me?!

Police: No....

(The two policeman suddenly hear a squealling sound from the airing cupboard)

Police: What was that?

Sean: What was what?!

Police: There was a squealling sound from the airing cupboard....

Sean: That was nothing! So if you wouldn't mind leaving now please...

Police: Ok we're going....

(The two policeman leave Sean's house. Sean slams the front door behind them. The police stand on Sean's driveway)

Police: There's something suspicious going on in that house....

Police 2: Don't worry, we will stick around here for a bit and catch him off guard....

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAFE- MORNING

(Dave and Frank carry their suitcases to the cafe, where everybody watches in surprise. Jenna calls over to Pat who is behind the cafe counter looking devastated)

Jenna: Ey Pat!

(Pat walks over to Jenna who is sitting down drinking a coffee)

Pat: Yes?

Jenna: Is Dave off somewhere?

Pat: If you must know, he's going to Spain with his father!

Jenna: His father?! You mean Frank! :eek:

Pat: Yes that's exactly who i mean.

Jenna: Well you've kept his arrival pretty much a close guarded secret haven't you?!

Pat: Well i wasn't actually going to have a song and dance over his arrival was i?!

Jenna: How was Dave after he arrived?

Pat: Upset...Surprised....you know, everything you would expect really....

(Jenna looks over to Dave)

Jenna: Well Dave looks happy now....

Pat: Yeah and that's why i have let him go with his father...I mean i couldn't keep hold of Dave forever could i?!

Jenna: Yeah....

Pat: But don't get me wrong, when Frank first turned up, i didn't want him to have anything to do with Dave! Dave was upset and surprised, after all i have lied to him under this roof for so many years!

Jenna: So was he angry with you?

Pat: Yeah he was, but who could blame him....

Jenna: Was he upset with Frank too? After all, he was the one who left you and Dave and Felicity!

Pat: He wasn't really upset, he was more confused over why he left in the first place......but i eventually gave in, Dave wanted to see his father so what could i do?! Dave is entitled to know why Frank left him when he was a baby...Dave is entitled to see his own father! I couldn't stop him!

Jenna: I hope your doing the right thing letting Dave go to Spain with his father....

Pat: If Dave is happy going to Spain with his father, i know i am doing the right thing. :)

(Pat leaves Jenna's table and approaches Dave and Frank)

Pat: Ok now have you got everything?

Dave: Yes mum, i have got everything! There is no need to panic!

Pat: Good...

(Felicity suddenly calls to Dave and Frank)

Felicity: The taxi is here...

Frank: Well we better be off, we don't want to miss our flight do we?!

Dave: No we don't....

(Pat wipes a tear from her eye)

Pat: I am going to miss you love.

(Pat and Dave share a hug)

Dave: I am going to miss you too mum....

Pat: You will come back and visit won't you?

Dave: Yeah of course i will mum...of course i will! Now you concentrate on looking after this cafe....

Pat: I will don't you worry....

(Pat turns to Frank)

Pat: You better look after him Frank!

Frank: Don't worry, he's in safe hands.

(Frank and Dave make their way to the taxi with their luggage)

Felicity: Well i guess this is goodbye bruv....

Dave: Yeah it's goodbye sis....

(Felicity and Dave hug)

Dave: Make sure you look after mum and this cafe.

Felicity: Don't worry i will.

(Dave and Frank get into the taxi)

Pat: Bye son, goodbye!

Felicity: Bye bruv!

(The taxi drives away. Felicity and Pat wave as Dave and Frank wave back. As the taxi turns the corner, Pat starts to cry)

Pat: I am going to miss Dave so much! :crying:

(Felicity hugs Pat)

Felicity: I am going to miss him too mum, i am going to miss him too. :(

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- NOON

(Luke enters his house to see Tanya watching TV)

Tanya: Luke! What the hell are you doing here?! Your meant to be at work!

Luke: I can't face work right now....

Tanya: Your meant to be looking after the family, if your not working, your hardly looking after us are you?!

Luke: Tan! Have you actually forgotten what events took place last night?! :rolleyes:

Tanya: Of course, i haven't bloody forgotten but we have to carry on like normal for the kids sakes....

Luke: Well the kids are at school now aren't they so it gives us the perfect opportunity to talk....

Tanya: To talk?! I don't really wanna talk to you.....

Luke: We've gotta talk about last night and what happened last night!

Tanya: I know what happened last night, i found out that you cheated on me once again with yet another slapper and then you shot her dead!

Luke: It wasn't like that, me and Geena were a one night stand and he forced me into shooting Geena, if i didn't shoot her, we would be dead instead...

Tanya: You could have got out of the whole situation if you put your thinking cap on!

Luke: If i didn't do what he said last night, our lives would still be at stake, we would be in danger and so would the kids but because i shot Geena, he agreed to leave us alone....

Tanya: And you believed him?! You gullible prat!

(Luke starts to cry)

Luke: I can't take this anymore, i just can't take this anymore! I have tried to keep everything that happened last night bottled up but i just can't. I've got to tell someone what really happened!

Tanya: What?! Are you being serious?! We can't breathe a word about this to anyone! You've got to keep your mouth shut!

Luke: I can't, i just can't. You know what?! I am going to confess....

Tanya: Confess?! What's bloody wrong with you?! Your definetly not the man i married....

Luke: Well you didn't marry a murderer did you?! But now i am a murderer and i have to tell the police!

Tanya: And face life in prison?! Don't do it!

Luke: I have to do it!

Tanya: Think about what your going to lose, your going to lose me and the kids! You will have no one!

(Luke thinks about this before replying)

Luke: I didn't want to kill her! I didn't want to kill her!

(Luke breaks down into tears and Tanya kneels down to comfort him)

Luke: You know Andy has achieved his aim, i am having nightmares over last night! I am not just having nightmares at night but i am having nightmares over what i have done all the time, every second of every minute of every hour, i am thinking about what i have done! I am trying to accept the fact that i am a cold blooded murderer!

Tanya: Stop being like this Luke, you have to pull yourself together! If you stick with me, we will be ok. Together, we are going to make sure that Andy doesn't beat us! Let me handle this, leave everything to me, i have everything planned just right.....

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CHLOE AND KAT'S FLAT- AFTERNOON

(Chloe enters the flat singing to herself as Kat is making lunch in the kitchen)

Kat: You seem very happy with yourself.....

Chloe: Oh i am very happy, in fact, i am over the moon!

Kat: Why?! I mean your never usually acting like this....

Chloe: We were going to keep it to ourselves but i suppose your my best mate and everything so i can tell you.....

Kat: Tell me what?

Chloe: Me and Greg. We're a couple!

(Kat looks gobsmacked)

Kat: Your a couple? When did this happen?

Chloe: This morning, i woke up and had this feeling inside me, it was like a feeling of love, love towards Greg!

Kat: You've fallen in love with Greg?

Chloe: Yes, i am in love with Greg! I love him!

Kat: You can't fall in love that quickly, surely?!

Chloe: Well trust me i have fallen in love. I have a feeling inside me towards Greg that i have never felt before....

Kat: But i thought you weren't interested in Greg, i thought he wasn't your type!

Chloe: Well it's early days i suppose! We will have to see how our relationship goes....

Kat: Well let's face it, most of our relationships have ended in complete sheer disaster!

Chloe: Yeah but Greg could be the one! I am in love with him!

Kat: Yeah, just be careful, i don't want you to get hurt....

Chloe: He will never hurt me...i know it! Just don't tell anyone that me and Greg are a couple yet, we want to tell everybody ourselves ok?

Kat: Ok....my lips are sealed!

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HOSPITAL- AFTERNOON

(Sally is in the waiting room with her school uniform still on and holding her school bag at her side. A nurse enters the waiting room)

Nurse: Sorry to keep you waiting...George is ready for visitors now!

Sally: Ok thanks.

(Sally gets up and leaves the waiting room. The nurse directs Sally to George's cubicle)

Nurse: Ok...here he is! Take all the time you need....

Sally: Thank you.

(Sally enters George's cubicle)

George: Hey George.

George: Hi Sal.

(Sally hugs George who is lying in his hospital bed)

Sally: I am so sorry!

George: Sorry for what?! What do you have to be sorry for?

Sally: I know that Danny did this to you....

George: Sal! I thought you came here to see how i was doing, not trying to find out who did this to me! I thought you cared about me!

Sally: I do care about you, that's why i am trying to find out who did this to you!

(There's a pause)

Sally: It was Danny wasn't it? It was Danny who pushed you off that waterfall!

George: Yes it was Danny ok! Your brother has made me paralysed for life! I can't even believe your related to him.....your nothing like him!

Sally: Ok that's all i needed to know...

(Liz suddenly bursts into the room)

Liz: Danny who?

Sally: Pardon?

George: It's nothing mum....

Liz: It sounded like something to me! Was it me or did i just hear you confess to this stranger who pushed you from that waterfall?!

George: Mum! Can you just leave this be?! It doesn't matter who did this to me! I am alive and well, that's all that matters!

Liz: This Danny person has made you paralysed for life! Of course it bloody matters!

(Liz turns to Sally)

Liz: Did i hear you say that Danny was your brother?

(Sally feels awkward)

George: Just tell her Sal!

Sally: Yeah Danny is my brother....

(Liz suddenly slaps Sally across the face. Sally covers her face with her hand trying to recover from Liz's slap)

(George crys out)

George: Mum!

Sally: George, i think i better go....

Liz: Your not going anywhere! Your going to direct me to your house, i am tracking down your family and giving them a piece of my mind!

George: Mum, just leave it!

Liz: I'm not leaving it, now direct me to your house and don't think that i will apologise for that slap!

(Sally accepts Liz's orders reluctantly)

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GALLAGHERS HOUSE- AFTERNOON

(We cut to the garage where we see Sean push Christina who is tied and gagged into the boot of his car)

Sean: I am going to wash my hands of you, you stupid bitch!

(The police suddenly pull into Sean's driveway. We cut to the police in the car)

Police: That man is up to something, i damn well know it!

Police 2: Shall we see if he is in?

Police: No stay in the car, like you said, we are going to catch him off guard...

(Sean gets into the car and drives away with Christina gagged and tied in the boot. The police see Sean drive away)

Police 2: Quick! We need to follow him!

(Sean speeds off in his car out of his driveway and the police are soon in hot pursuit. Sean looks back to see the police following him)

Sean: Sh** I need to lose them! The police will never leave well alone!

(Sean cuts a corner, while Christina manages to untie herself in the boot)

Police 2: We need to pull him over before he gets away!

Police: Don't worry, i know what i am doing....

(Sean sees the police car behind him and starts to panic. He starts to speed and as he does, the police sirens begin to go off)

Sean: I've got to get away! I have to kill Christina, for my dad's sake!

(The police try to pull him over)

Sean: Do the police really think i am going to pull over?! I am smarter than they think!

(Sean cuts another corner, he is now picking up more speed and the police are beginning to lose him)

Police 2: He's speeding now! He is way over the limit! It must mean that he has something to hide.....he has something in his car that he doesn't want us to see!

Police: Great observation skills! But i think we will need to pick up speed if we want to catch this ba*****

(As Sean cuts another corner, he looks back to see if the police are behind him. Sean hasn't got his eye on the road and fails to see a skip up ahead)

Sean: Yes! I think we lost them! We are close to our location now....Christina Weatherby, i am going to finish you off once and for all!

(As Sean mutters these words, the car smashes into the skip and the car flips over the skip and starts sliding upside down along the derelict road. The car slides before crashing into a tree. We see a close up and see Sean is lying unconcious in the drivers seat with his face covered in blood and his head bleeding heavily. Meanwhile, Christina is in the boot. Her head is also bleeding but she has managed to untie herself and has managed to peel the gaffotape away from her mouth. The police turn the corner and are horrified to see the car wreckage lying against a tree upside down.)

Police: Oh my god!!

(The police drive up slowly to the car wreckage and suddenly discover that the car is catching fire........)

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Police: Oh my god!!

(The police drive up slowly to the car wreckage and suddenly discover that the car is catching fire........)

Police 2: Oh my god! The car's gonna bloody blow up!

Police: We gotta get Sean outta there!

(The two policeman run out of the police car where they suddenly hear a scream from Sean's car boot)

Police 2: Did you hear that?

Police: Yeah....i think there is someone else stuck inside that car!

(Christina screams her loudest)

Christina: Help me!!!

Police: Quick! Get open that boot!

(The policeman kicks open the boot where Christina is inside terrified and helpless...)

Christina: What's happening?....

Police: We've got no time to explain!

Police 2: We gotta get Sean out the driver's seat!

Police: It's too late, the car is going to blow up!

(As he says these words, the car bursts into flames and the two policeman and Christina jump back and fall to the floor as the car slowly burns to pieces....)

Police: Oh my goodness!

Christina: I nearly got killed!

Police 2: Come on, we better get you home....

Police: I'll call an ambulance and stay at the scene and seal it off as a crime scene....

Police 2: Ok i am going to take Christina home or maybe i should take you to hospital so they can check you over?

Christina: No...honestly! I am ok! I only got out of hospital a week ago, i am not going back there again....not twice in one week!

Police 2: But your clearly shaken up....

Christina: I insist! I am ok! Just get me home!

Police 2: Ok, I'll get you home....

(Police 2 and Christina get into the police car and drive away as the other policeman stays on the scene staring at the car that has burnt to pieces....)

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- EVENING

(There is a sudden slam on the front door. Julia is preparing dinner, while Ben is in the living room reading a newspaper)

Julia: Shall i get that?

Ben: Yeah.....they seem pretty desperate for someone to answer!

(Julia opens the door to see Liz standing with an angry look and holding Sally's ear)

Julia: What the hell do you think your doing?! Let go of my daughter immediately!

(Julia pulls Sally into the house and Liz lets go of her ear)

Julia: What makes you think that you have the right to clip my daughter around the ear?! I've never seen you before in my life!

Liz: I haven't seen you before in my life either! We have something in common!

Julia: Well what do you want exactly?

Liz: Does Danny Butley live here?

Julia: Yes he does...he's my son.

(Liz slaps Julia round the face. Julia looks shocked)

Julia: What the hell was that for?! How did i deserve that?! What have i done?!

Liz: I'll tell you what you've done....you've given birth to a crazed psycho!

Julia: Don't you dare call my son a psycho!

(Julia slaps Liz across the face before Liz slaps her back. They are soon fighting before they both fall over and start tussling and rolling in the garden punching, kicking and slapping each other. Liz soon pulls Julia's hair and Julia lets out an angry scream. Ben comes rushing out in the front garden)

Ben: Hey! Hey! Break it up! Both of you break it up!

Julia: You bitch! I will ask you again....why did i deserve that?!

Liz: You deserved that because your son pushed my son off the waterfall!

(Ben and Julia look at each other in utter surprise)

Liz: You heard me?! Now is Danny in! I need to speak to him!

Ben: Umm...we will do the speaking!

Liz: I need to give Danny a piece of my mind for my son's sake!

(Liz barges past Ben and Julia and marches into their house before running upstairs in a rage. Ben and Julia follow in a panic)

Julia: You can't come in our house and throw your weight about!

Liz: I can do what i bloody well like!

(Liz marches into Danny's bedroom and sees Danny who looks petrified)

Liz: You deserve a bloody good smack for what you did to my son!

(As Liz swings a punch to Danny's jaw, Ben grabs Liz and pulls her back)

Liz: Let go off me! Let bloody go off me!

(Liz tries to bite Ben's hand so she can pull him off but she fails)

Ben: Get out of my house!

Liz: Your son is gonna get everything that's coming to him! Sally will explain to you, my son confessed to her that Danny pushed him from the waterfall! Your family has done so much damage, your son has done so much damage, you will soon learn not to mess with me or my son, you'll see....

(Liz marches out of the Butleys house as Julia and Ben look on in a state of utter shock and surprise)

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- EVENING

(Chloe and Greg are talking at the bar)

Chloe: Look Greg! People are going to get suspicious that something is going on between us....

Greg: And? What are you trying to say?

Chloe: I am trying to say that we might as well tell this whole pub now that we are an item!

Greg: You what?!

Chloe: You sound angry with me....you sound embarrased! Are you ashamed to be with me or something?!

Greg: No of course i am not, i love you Chloe! Your the first proper woman that i have fallen in love with so i am not ashamed to be with you!

Chloe: Then why won't you let anybody know?

Greg: Because it's nobody elses business! Just our business! Why should anybody want to know what we get up to behind closed doors?!

(Chloe thinks for a second. We cut to Kat who is also in the pub. She suddenly stands up on a pub table and starts knocking her glass. She begins to shout.)

Kat: Everybody, i would like to propose a toast.....

(Chloe and Greg look baffled)

Chloe: What toast?!

Kat: To Greg and Chloe and most of all, young love! These two are meant for each other!

(Everybody in the pub looks surprised. Greg has an angry expression on his face. He starts shouting at Chloe)

Greg: You told her! I thought this was meant to be between us!

Chloe: Kat is my best friend, i told her to keep it a secret, i thought she wouldn't blurt it out to the whole pub!

(Cuts to Kat)

Kat: To Greg and Chloe!

Everybody: To Greg and Chloe!

(Cuts back to Greg and Chloe)

Greg: Well you obviously forgot to tell Kat to keep our relationship a secret...because best friends never usually blurt out secrets!

(Greg storms out the pub and Chloe is soon following him. Kat sits back down and takes a sip of her drink with a smirk on her face)

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- EVENING

(A punter called Phil shouts out to Nina holding his pint glass towards her)

Phil: Oi! Fill me up again, would ya!

Nina: A please would be nice!

Phil: Please!

Nina: Well to be honest, i think you've had enough, i mean your looking the worst for wear aren't you?! And you seem to be in this pub 24/7....have you got anything better to do?!

Phil: No i haven't ok! I've got nothing better to do! Now is it a problem if i come in here everyday to have a few drinks?! :angry:

Nina: Ok...Ok...there's no need to snap!

(Phil's mood suddenly changes)

Phil: Sorry....I didn't mean to be like that....

Nina: It's fine....i mean, i don't have a problem with you coming in here everyday for a few drinks, it means more money for the pub, it's just i have only noticed you here the past week or so....

Phil: Yeah well it's just been the past week or so since my wife died.... :(

(Nina has an upset look on her face)

Nina: Oh my gosh! I'm so sorry....

(Phil begins to cry)

Phil: I've been trying to cope, i've really have! But i haven't got anybody to turn too, nobody! The only thing i have to turn too is the drink....that's what's kept me going!

Nina: Well...i don't know what to say!

Phil: She became seriously ill when we went on holiday abroard...she contracted an illness and her condition detioriated....and she died! :crying:

(Phil breaks down and Nina rushes round to comfort him)

Phil: Why are you hugging me?! I mean your a complete stranger....I've only known you for two minutes!

Nina: You've got nobody else! That's why i am hugging you!

(Nina wipes a tear from her eye)

Nina: Why don't you have a drink on the house ey?!

Phil: Yeah that would be great!

(Nina goes back behind the bar to get a drink for Phil as Phil's crying soon breaks into a smile)

[DaVeyWaVey]

WEATHERBYS HOUSE- EVENING

(Jack and Alicia are waiting anxiously in the sitting room)

Alicia: Christina should have been home ages ago, she said she would be back for her tea!

Jack: I knew it was a bad idea to let her have a final meeting with Sean....god knows what's happened to her!

Alicia: What are you talking about?! Your speaking like her life is on the line, like she is dead!

Jack: Well Sean's father nearly killed Christina himself so what do you think Sean might be thinking to do?! Finishing her off for his father!

Alicia: Don't be so negative!

Jack: I have a bad feeling inside me though...i knew Sean wasn't too be trusted...why does Christina always go for the badduns ey?!

Alicia: I don't know....I honestly thought that Sean was different....but i was obviously wrong!

Jack: Sean's father is a drug dealer and like they say, like father like son......

Alicia: You never know, she could be ok....i mean she could just be chatting with Sean like adults and she might have lost track of time or something....

Jack: Have you tried ringing her?

Alicia: No, her phone is switched off which makes me even more worried....

Jack: I think we should call the police....

(As Jack reaches for the phone, the door bell goes)

Alicia: Wait! That could be Christina now!

(Alicia rushes to the front door where she opens the door seeing Christina battered and bruised with a police officer by her side)

Alicia: Oh my goodness Christina! What has happened?!

(Christina runs to Alicia and Alicia gives her a big hug)

Jack: Sean did this to you, didn't he?! Wait until i throttle his neck.....

Christina: Sean is dead, dad! Sean is dead!

(Christina breaks down into tears)

Jack: Oh dear lord! :eek: Tell us what happened!

Christina: We were in a car chase with the police....

Alicia: You were running away with Sean?!

Christina: No it wasn't like that! He held me hostage, he was getting revenge after i grassed his dad up to the police over the drug deal! He was going to kill me!

Jack: Well i hope Sean rots in hell, and his dad Dean rots in prison.....

Alicia: I don't understand....how did Sean die?

Christina: He lost control of the car when the police were after him, i was in the boot and the car flipped up and crashed into a tree...the police managed to get me out of the boot but as they did, the car blew up in flames and Sean was still inside!

(Christina continues crying)

Jack: Well look on the bright side ey?!

Christina: What bright side?!

Jack: We've washed our hands of the Gallagher family....Dean is rotting in prison as Sean is rotting in hell.....

Christina: Have we washed our hands of them?!

(Christina looks unconvinced as Jack and Alicia look on)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Christina: Have we washed our hands of them?!

(Christina looks unconvinced as Jack and Alicia look on)

Police: Don't worry, i wouldn't panic....Dean is behind bars and Sean is obviously dead!

Christina: It isn't over yet though is it?! What about the trial?

Police: Yes, you will have to go to Dean's trial to testify....

Christina: Testify!? I can't do that.....

Police: If you testify...Dean will be behind bars for a very long time!

Alicia: When will Dean's trial be?

Police: In a few months but for now you can forget about it...

Christina: It will take me a long time for me to forget about the last few weeks....

Police: I will keep you posted over the trial proceedings....goodbye.

Alicia: Bye officer....

Christina: And thanks for your help.

(The policeman leaves as the Weatherby family all let out a groan)

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- NIGHT

(Tanya has just put Emily to bed, Luke is watching tv with Tina and Lee. There is a sudden bang on the door. Luke jumps)

Tanya: What the bloody hell is that?!

Police: It's the police, open up!

Luke: *******

Tanya: Kids, go to bed!

Tina: But mum...

(Tanya shouts)

Tanya: Now!

(Lee and Tina run to their bedrooms)

Tanya: Just relax Luke, just relax, i have everything under control....

Luke: Have you?!

Tanya: Just bloody trust me....i am your wife, i will stand by you every step of the way and make sure that ba***** Andy gets what he deserves!

Police: Open up now!

Tanya: Ok! Ok! Don't get your knickers in a twist!

(Luke is looking incredibly nervous..Tanya opens the door)

Tanya: It's bloody late you know!

Police: Does Luke Campbell live here?

Tanya: Yes, he's my husband but he's in bed right now as you can imagine, so you will have to wait until the morning to speak to him!

Police: We can't wait until the morning to speak to your husband Mrs Campbell! Your husband has recieved a serious allegation....in fact, it may no longer be an allegation.....

Tanya: You what?!

(The police march past Tanya into the house)

Tanya: Ey! Who said you could come into my house?! Ey?!

Police: Oh...it looks like your husband isn't in bed after all....

Tanya: What do you want with him?!

(The police stare into Luke's eyes)

Police: Luke Campbell, we're arresting you on suspicion of the murder of Geena Hartridge, you don't have to say anything to harm your defence, but if you do say anything, it may be given in evidence!

(The police put handcuffs on Luke's hands and arrest him)

Tanya: What the hell do you think your doing!? My husband ain't done anything wrong....you've got it all wrong! You have!

Police: We'll see about that....

Tanya: How dare you come into my house and arrest an innocent man!? How bloody well dare you!?

(The police ignore Tanya and march Luke outside in handcuffs. Tanya chases after them)

Tanya: Hang in there Luke! Hang on in there!

Luke: I love you Tan!

(Luke begins to cry as he is forced into the police car)

Police: We'll be in touch!

Tanya: Not if i get in touch first to prove my husband's innocence!

(The police ignore Tanya and drive off)

Tanya: Wait until Andy sees me! His life won't be worth living....

(Tanya walks off determined...)

[Bryan]

:eek: could Luke being going down for killing Geena! :eek:

gripping part Dave!

[diamond1]

awww dont let luke get arrested for geena,

him and tanya are the best neither of them can go!!

damn why are the baddies in these soaps getting away with what they like?

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- NIGHT

(Ben and Julia confront Danny in the living room following Liz's outburst)

Julia: Tell me this isn't true Danny!? Please tell me this isn't true!

(Danny is sitting down with no expression on his face)

Ben: Sally, was what Liz told us true!? Did George confess to you that Danny pushed him off that waterfall!?

(Sally doesn't say a word...Ben starts to shout)

Ben: Just bloody tell me will ya!? :angry:

Sally: Yes ok! It is what George told me! George confessed to me that Danny pushed him off the waterfall!? Happy now!

Danny: Grass! :mad:

Julia: Oh my goodness, this is true isn't it!? Please let this be a dream! :eek:

(Danny gets off the couch and begins to shout confidently)

Danny: This isn't a dream mum! I pushed George off the waterfall and you know what, i loved it! I loved hearing him scream as he fell and i loved it seeing him unconscious, knowing when he wakes up he would be in so much incredible pain!

(Ben shouts loudly)

Ben: You stupid stupid boy! I am ashamed of you! :angry:

(Ben punches Danny across the face)

Ben: What the hell did we do wrong when bringing you up!?

(Ben leaves the room as Julia and Sally look on in shock)

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CHLOE AND KAT'S FLAT- MORNING

(Kat wakes up and walks from her bedroom to the kitchen where she sees Chloe and Greg kissing. Kat has a surprised look on her face)

Kat: Have you two settled your differences!?

Chloe: Yes we have.....

Kat: Well, please! I am about to have my breakfast!

Chloe: Sorry, but we just can't resist each other, can we Greg?

(Greg smirks)

Greg: No we can't....

(Greg and Chloe start to snog)

Kat: How come you two made up anyway!? When you left the pub yesterday, you were at each other's throats! I thought your relationship was over before it already begun!

Chloe: Well we talked and we decided that we don't care who knows....we love each other and that is all that matters...we don't care what anybody thinks!

Kat: Yeah well....if you wanna get all lovey dovey, please do it in the bedroom from now on!

(Kat begins to walk away)

Chloe: What's wrong Kat!? Woke up on the wrong side of bed this morning!?

(Kat has an angry look on her face and enters Chloe's bedroom. Chloe fails to realise as her and Greg are in a passionate clinch in the kitchen)

(Kat sneaks into Chloe's bedroom and sees Greg's watch on the bedside cabinet. She grabs the watch and holds it close to her face before kissing it)

(Kat begins to speak to herself)

Kat: If Chloe's got Greg, i got his watch!

(Kat looks on menacingly)

[diamond1]

Kat: If Chloe's got Greg, i got his watch!



ok im guessing ummm......bunny boiler??

[DaVeyWaVey]

CAMPBELLS HOUSE- MORNING

(Lee and Tina are eating their breakfast, Tanya starts to sit down with them to eat her cereal)

Lee: Look, mum! What's up!?

Tanya: What do you mean what's up!? I am absolutely fine! You don't have to save your memory span for me!

Tina: There is definetly something going on mum...for a start, you don't eat cereal!

Tanya: Well maybe i am in a different mood today and i feel like cereal...

Tina: Why can't you tell us the truth!? There's no point hiding what is going on!

Lee: We heard police outside last night...when you carted us off to bed....

(Tanya doesn't say a word, instead she tucks into her cereal)

Lee: Mum, is dad in serious trouble?

Tina: We heard him get arrested last night and you shouting he was innocent, we heard another woman's name too.....

Tanya: It's too hard to explain...

Lee: We are grown up now! We can understand what might be going on!

(The phone suddenly starts to ring)

Tanya: I'll get that...

(Tanya reaches for the phone. She answers it and is surprised to hear Luke's voice. The scene is now seen with Luke on the phone and Tanya on the phone speaking to each other)

Tanya: Luke!? Where are you calling from!?

Luke: Where do you think!?

Tanya: Don't tell me they have chucked you in a prison cell!? Please no!

Luke: Yeah they have....

(Luke starts to break down on the phone)

Tanya: Don't start crying please...i thought you were stronger than that!

Luke: They have charged me with Geena's murder, Tan! :(

Tanya: What!? They can't have....i will be right over to see you.... :eek:

Luke: You can't see me until prison visits....

Tanya: When will the prison visit be?

Luke: Tomorrow afternoon.....

Tanya: I don't believe this...this is all we bloody need! Why did you get involved with a bloody slapper ey!? :mad:

Luke: I don't know... :crying:

Tanya: If you didn't get involved with that Geena, you wouldn't be on a bloody murder charge, right now would ya!?

(The phone suddenly hangs up. Luke ended the call)

Tanya: Luke and Andy are both to blame for this....ba******! :angry:

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- MORNING

(Nina is behind the bar cleaning pub glasses. There is a sudden bang on the pub door)

Nina: Hello?

Phil: Nina! It's me!

Nina: Phil!? What are you doing here!? The pub isn't open until midday!

Phil: Let me in please!

Nina: What do you want?

(Mike comes running down the stairs and hears Nina speaking to a person who is outside the pub door)

Mike: Who you speaking to?

Nina: It's that punter from yesterday...

Mike: He's back for more drink already! I thought he would still have a hangover after last night.....

Nina: Don't give him a hard time Mike! His wife has just died....

Mike: But he's in the pub 24/7...

(Mike starts shouting to Phil who is standing outside the pub)

Mike: The pub is closed, just go away will ya!?

Phil: Let me in please!

Mike: If your that desperate for alcohol, why don't you buy some from the local supermarket so you can leave us in peace!?

Phil: It's not alcohol i am after....

(Mike and Nina look at each other)

Nina: I am gonna let him in....

Mike: What for!? He needs to learn to get lost!

Nina: Mike, give the guy some sympathy! His wife is dead!

(Nina opens the pub door and sees Phil drenched in water from head to toe. All the water is dripping from him as he stands there motionless)

Nina: Oh my goodness, what the bloody hell happened!?

Phil: My house got flooded.....

Nina: Oh no, i am so sorry!

Mike: Have you got a plumber in to sort it out?

Phil: I don't have enough money to pay for a plumber....

Mike: So what are you doing here!? This isn't our problem....

Nina: Have you got family or friends who can sort this problem out with you?

(Mike interrupts)

Mike: Yeah because we've got a pub to run, so we don't really have time for anybody else....

Phil: Well i've got no family and your my only friends....

Nina: What are you trying to say Phil?

Phil: Can i stay with you for a few days?..i know it's a lot to ask but i would really appreciate it.

Mike: You've got a cheek, you really have!

Nina: Mike, shut it! Why don't you come into the pub and dry yourself off...then we can talk about this situation properly....

(Phil enters the pub as Nina and Mike look at each other in amazement)

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- MORNING

(Sally and Marianne have gone to school. Danny is still in bed. Ben and Julia are talking in the kitchen after last night's events)

Julia: I can't believe it Ben....our own son! Our own son! How could he be so capable of doing such a thing!

(Julia wipes a tear from her eye. Ben hugs her)

Ben: There is something up with that boy, he needs to be taught a lesson....

Julia: But how? Should we contact the police?

Ben: It's all down to George if he wants to press charges against Danny but at the moment, he won't budge.....

Julia: Wouldn't you feel guilty if we turned our own son into the police?

Ben: He needs to be shown some discipline Ju...we will do whatever it takes but i wouldn't inform the police, i would go for a different approach....

Julia: Like what?

Ben: I don't know....I really don't know...we will think of something.

Julia: When all this gets out, you know we will be labelled as bad parents don't you?

Ben: Don't be so stupid Ju...we're like every other parent...Danny is just a bad 'un....we need to sort Danny out....he needs to be punished....

Julia: And punching him last night was the answer was it!?

Ben: Don't start having a go at me Ju....it was just a reaction....it was a shock, what was i meant to do!?

Julia: You were meant to control your anger not use it....

Ben: Well being told that our son attempted to kill another student but ended up paralysing him for life is a shock! He's such a stupid stupid boy!

Julia: To be honest, i want to put this behind us if George doesn't want to press charges....

Ben: What!? Are you out of your mind!?

Julia: No i am not, i am just thinking what is best for our son....

Ben: Well that's not it! Danny needs to be taught a lesson....he needs to be punished. I can't believe we have brought up a bloody monster!

(Ben storms off to work. Julia stays in the kitchen looking helpless)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HOSPITAL- NOON

(Liz is helping George leave the hospital. He is in a wheelchair)

Liz: Now are you feeling ok son? The wheelchair isn't too uncomfortable is it?

George: No the wheelchair is fine mum, i just want to go home....

Liz: I know you do love....

George: I want to put this whole situation behind us too....

Liz: You what!? You can't do that! That Danny needs to get what he deserves!

George: I don't want to fight him mum....he'll win...i know he would so what's the point in trying ey!?

Liz: That's not the attitude you need.....i thought you had attitude like me! Danny pushed you off that waterfall and has made you paralysed for life. If your press charges son, Danny will be charged and he will face prison....

George: It's not as simple as that mum....for a start, Danny could get let off the hook, and i will have to face the papers everyday as i go into court and be face to face with that monster! I wouldn't be able to bear it mum! He's made my life a misery but now i want to move on and try and rebuild my life again but this time in a wheelchair.....

(George is starting to feel emotional. Liz comforts him)

Liz: I'm not forcing you to do anything son...but i think it's for the best if you do press charges against Danny...he's the bad guy in all of this, not you! You don't have anything to be ashamed of!

George: What happens when he gets out!? He will be wanting revenge...he will come after me and this time he would do more than paralyse me! Or if he goes down....Danny could phone or get in touch with his contacts and they could beat me up....or worse, kill me!

Liz: Oh George, don't be so ridiculous! What contacts does that Danny have!? He's a teenage loser! I have more contacts than he does....i will protect you George, i am your mother!

George: Your such a great mum....i don't know what i would do without you....

Liz: Don't get all soppy on me...Danny will get his just desserts no matter what....i can guarantee it....even if you press charges or not...Danny will get what's coming to him!

(Liz walks away from the hospital pushing George in his wheelchair)

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CHLOE AND KAT'S FLAT- NOON

(Greg knocks on the door. Chloe answers in surprise)

Chloe: Hey babes. Aren't you meant to be at work?

Greg: I am on my lunch break....

Chloe: So you decided to spend all your lunch break with me...awww...sweet!

(Greg and Chloe kiss)

Greg: Well in fact, i came back to look for my watch....

Chloe: Your watch!? Didn't you pick it up this morning before you went off to work?

Greg: No i didn't so i thought i would just come back in my lunch break and get it back....

Chloe: Well i swear that when you left, i looked at the bedside table and your watch wasn't there so i presumed that you took it with you...

(Greg looks baffled)

Chloe: You did leave it on the bedside table didn't you!?

Greg: Yeah i did....

(Greg walks into the flat and heads straight to the bedroom. Chloe follows him. Greg looks at the bedside table to find his watch isn't there)

Chloe: See your watch isn't there...

Greg: Is this some kind of joke!?

Chloe: Pardon!?

Greg: You've hidden my watch for a joke haven't you!? Well it's not funny....my grandfather gave it to me before he passed away...

Chloe: How dare you accuse me of hiding your watch! I would never do such a thing....it must have gone missing or something, i wouldn't have took your watch....

Greg: I'm sorry Chloe...i don't mean to snap but that watch cost a fortune and my late grandfather gave it to me, i've got to find it!

(Greg looks determined as Chloe looks worried)

[diamond1]

aww poor greg thats that bunny boiler hiding it!!:angry:

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- AFTERNOON

(The pub is open but quiet. Phil is drinking behind the bar. Mike and Nina are talking at the end of the bar)

Mike: Your seriously not gonna let Phil move in with us are you!? We've got no room for anybody else apart from us!

Nina: Well you have to feel sorry for him....his wife has just died, he has no family or friends and now his house has flooded!

Mike: And that's everything he's told you is it!?

Nina: Yes he has told all that himself....i mean look at the bloke, he's drinking heavily and is getting drunk all the time....i suppose it's just his way of dealing with his grief...

Mike: I can't believe that your buying this....

Nina: What!? You think this man is lying!? How could you think that Mike!? Who would lie about there wife's death and having no family or friends ey!? :mad:

Mike: Look don't have a go at me...it's just my opinion, i think Phil is lying!

Nina: Well i think that Phil isn't lying and now you have helped me make my decision!

(Nina walks over to Phil)

Mike: Nina, you must be kidding me! Your not seriously gonna...

(Nina interrupts)

Nina: Yes i am being serious....i am going to let Phil move in with us....

Mike: Well i can't believe that i married a gullible prat! :angry:

(Mike storms off upstairs. Nina ignores him and approaches Phil)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON WALKWAY- AFTERNOON

(Liz is pushing George in his wheelchair through some woods which leads to Hinston)

George: Mum, why are we coming past here?

Liz: I just thought it would be nice to walk past a bit of nice environment...after all, you've been stuck in that stuffy hospital for days now..thanks to Danny!

George: Don't talk about Danny mum....I just want to forget about him...

Liz: It's ok, i am not going to talk about him, we shouldn't waste our breaths talking about him....in fact, i wanted to talk to you about something else....

George: Like what?

Liz: Well i did something while you were recovering in hospital....

George: What did you do mum!? :rolleyes:

Liz: Don't act as if i have done such a serious crime because i haven't....i didn't get into any trouble or anything....

George: Well what is it mum!? Just spit it out!

Liz: Ok....i sold the house!

George: What the hell for!? That house was perfect....why sell it!? :eek:

Liz: Because we're moving house....we're moving to Hinston High! :eek:

George: You what!? How could you mum?! How could you!? I will be seeing more of that monster Danny than ever before...he will make my life a misery.... :(

Liz: Well that's why you should press bloody charges against him...then we could live in Hinston High happy ever after.....

George: But i told you, i don't want to press charges against him....i have been over this with you....i can't bear to face the papers and Danny in court! You knew this but you still decided to sell the house and move to Hinston High... :angry:

Liz: I was doing it for your benefit as well as mine....i didn't know that you didn't want to press charges against Danny, in fact, when i sold the house i didn't even know that one of Hinston High's residents pushed you off that waterfall...so its not my bloody fault! :mad:

George: I'm sorry mum....but i am going to be closer to that monster and that bully than ever before...i will see him everyday...and he will take pleasure in making my life a misery.... :(

Liz: And i will take pleasure on taking on his family and making their lives a misery.....just look on the bright side son, remember you've got me and i will fight Danny with you every step of the way.

George: I know...i know...

Liz: And besides you might be able to teach Danny a lesson yourself...stand up to him...

George: But i am in a wheelchair mum! Atleast Danny can walk away on his own two feet! :(

Liz: Just because your in a wheelchair doesn't mean you can't get your revenge!

(Liz and George leave Hinston walkway and head home)

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CHLOE AND KATS FLAT- EVENING

(Chloe is preparing to go off to do her night shift at the pub. Kat suddenly walks in through the door after finishing her shift at work)

Chloe: Oh hi...how was work?

Kat: I was rushed off my feet....Mike and Nina were too busy arguing and Mike ended up storming out of the pub so i was left to dealing with the punters...not that it was that busy anyway....

Chloe: Oh right, what was their argument over?

Kat: Well it was pretty weird to be honest....i mean when have you ever heard Mike and Nina argue!? Hardly never! but today some stranger turned up at the pub and it seemed like Mike and Nina were arguing over him...he was a scruffy chap mind!

Chloe: It is pretty unusual to hear that Mike and Nina have been arguing....their marriage is like a solid rock!

Kat: Exactly....just what i was thinking, anyway when you start your night shift, see if you can find out any more gossip about it...

Chloe: I'm not sure if we should stick our noses into their business...

Kat: Come on Chlo! We like a bit of gossip to talk about don't we!?

Chloe: It's their business! I don't like talking about other people's business!

Kat: Well i am surprised...this isn't the Chloe i used to know!

Chloe: Well maybe the Chloe that you used to know has changed....

Kat: What since Greg came along?

Chloe: This has nothing to do with Greg...this is to do with me, i feel i am more mature now....

Kat: Are you sure your not changing for Greg though!? Because i thought Greg hated gossip :rolleyes:

Chloe: He does hate gossip...but i suppose it does have something to do with Greg, he's my first proper love, i want things to work out between us properly...

Kat: Well it can only work out between you two if you show the real you!

(Chloe is about to leave but stops and turns around to Kat)

Chloe: Just before i go....have you seen Greg's watch anywhere?

Kat: His watch!? No...why?

Chloe: It's gone missing, that's all....he left it on the bedside table but it seems to have vanished now....

Kat: Well i haven't seen his watch sorry....

Chloe: It's ok...he's got it into his head that he thinks that it might have been stolen....

Kat: Stolen!? :eek: Tell him not to be so bloody ridiculous!

Chloe: I have told him that...i mean if he thinks it was stolen, we would be the only two suspects...and what would us two want with Greg's watch!?

(Chloe leaves the flat)

Kat: Exactly!

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BURDECKS HOUSE- EVENING

(George is in his wheelchair watching the television. Liz is sitting at the dining room table thinking....there is a sudden knock on the door. Liz answers it to the police)

Liz: Oh....what a pleasant surprise! :rolleyes:

Police: Hello...we've come to speak to George again.

Liz: Come through....

(Liz directs the police to the living room. George is watching the television trying to ignore the police)

Police: We've come to speak to you again George...i am sure you know what over!

George: Yeah me being paralysed after i fell from the waterfall....

Police: But you didn't "fall" did you!? You were pushed!

George: I wanna drop the subject ok! I just want to forget that this ever happened!

Police: Why!? The person who made you paralysed for life can be brought to justice! Don't you care!?

George: As a matter of fact, i don't care!

Liz: Come on son! Tell them who it was!

George: I've told you a million times mum, no!

Liz: I guess i will have to tell them myself then! It was Danny Butley who pushed my son off that waterfall! He lives in Hinston High.

George: Mum! :eek:

Liz: It's for the best if he's brought to justice son!

Police: He can only be brought to justice if your son is willing to press charges against him....

(The police look at George waiting for him to speak)

George: I'm not pressing charges! :mad:

Police: So your going to let this person off scot-free are you!?

(George begins to shout)

George: Just leave me alone will ya!? Just bloody leave me alone! I don't want to press charges and that's final! My final decision...now go! Please just go! Before i get you done for police harassment! :angry:

Police: It seems like he's made his decision...we better be off then...Danny has got away with this scot-free just remember that George!

(The police head for the front door. Liz leaves the living room to see them out)

Liz: Is there anything else you can do!? I know my son doesn't want to press charges but you've got evidence haven't you!?

Police: No i'm afraid we haven't got any evidence...all we have is a witness seeing a teenage boy run away from the scene at the time of the incident...that's it! All we can do now is an identity parade for the witness to see if he can spot this person again....but if the witness does spot him, we probably won't have enough evidence to charge the teenage boy anyway!

Liz: So what!? Your going to let Danny walk away from this scot-free too are you!? :rolleyes:

Police: Well we're not very hopeful...there's nothing we can do apart from the identity parade...We will make Danny be part of the identity parade and see if the witness recognises him...that's it i am afraid, we're sorry.

Liz: Your not bloody sorry at all! The bloody police of the 21st century...they don't have a clue! :angry:

(Liz slams the door behind the police and walks to the kitchen looking devastated)

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PUB- EVENING

(Nina is behind the bar and sees Mike storm in from the back entrance. Nina turns round to see him)

Mike: Nina, we need to talk!

Nina: Yes your bloody damn well right! We need to talk...and this time like adults and without the audience...

(Mike drags Nina into the cellar)

Mike: Is this private enough for you!? There is no audience just as you requested! :rolleyes:

Nina: Don't go cold on me!

Mike: What do you bloody expect ey!? You've moved a complete stranger who you've only known for a few days into our own pub! How am i meant to react!? :mad:

Nina: Don't you bloody feel sorry for him!

Mike: No because i don't believe anything he says! I think every word he's told you is a lie! :mad:

Nina: Well your not a very good judge of character are you!?

Mike: No! Your not a very good judge of character! This is a very bad idea...

Nina: It's only temporary...it's not like he's gonna stay with us forever! He said he would only be with us for a few weeks until he's got his life sorted out...

Mike: A few weeks!? I might have been able to understand a few days but a few weeks!? No way! :nono:

Nina: Well you can either like it or lump it but right now, i have punters to serve! :cool:

(Nina storms off behind the bar to carry on serving)

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PUB- NIGHT

(Most of the punters have gone home. Greg and Chloe are sitting at a table sharing a drink)

Greg: Look, i am sorry i snapped at you today over my missing watch...

Chloe: It's ok...you have nothing to be sorry for, i totally understand the situation and that watch is very important to you as your late grandfather gave it to you....

Greg: Oh Chloe! Your so caring, that's why i love you so much!

(Greg and Chloe share a kiss)

Chloe: It's weird though...i mean one minute your watch is on the bedside table, the next it has vanished without a trace...

Greg: That's why i have decided that i am going to call the police...

Chloe: What!? Over something so trivial!?

Greg: Well it's an expensive watch Chlo which my late grandfather gave to me! I've got to find it and we have all looked ourselves and can't so someone must have taken it....

Chloe: What are you trying to suggest!?

Greg: You know what i am trying to suggest...someone has stolen my watch!

Chloe: But me and Kat are the only suspects, if someone has stolen it and we both would never do such a thing....

Greg: Well i still think i should call the police!

Chloe: What are the police going to do!? If we can't find it, they won't be able to find it either!

(Greg thinks for a moment before replying)

Greg: Your right! I could even get done for wasting police time if i'm not careful! But i am determined to find my watch...it's got to turn up somewhere!

(Greg and Chloe gulp their drinks)

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BUTLEYS HOUSE- MORNING

(Ben enters Danny's bedroom. Danny is watching tv)

Ben: Son, we need to talk...

Danny: Talk...that's a bit different isn't it!? You usually lash out than rather talk! :rolleyes:

Ben: That's why i came to see you....i want to say sorry for punching you the other day....it was out of order! Despite what you did, i shouldn't have punched you...you are my son after all....

Danny: I remember you saying that you couldn't believe that you gave birth to a monster! Is that what i am is it!? A monster!? :mad:

(Danny gets up and lashes out by smashing his cd player to the floor. He then knocks all his dvds from the shelf and punches the wall)

Ben: For christ sake Danny, stop it! Just bloody stop it will you!?

(Ben attempts to control Danny but fails. There is a sudden knock on the front door. Danny suddenly calms down)

Ben: Right....now i am going to see who's at the door! Don't go do anything stupid son!

(Julia calls up the stairs)

Julia: The police are here to see Danny....

(Danny looks alarmed but happy at the same time)

Danny: The perfect opportunity to explain my black eye to the police! :hmm:

Ben: Don't you dare son! I told you i was sorry!

(Danny points to his black damaged eye)

Danny: Look at it dad! Look at it! That's what you bloody did to me! And your gonna pay... :angry:

Ben: Don't forget Danny...the police are here to see you...your going to pay for pushing George off that waterfall!

Danny: So...your going to pay for punching me and giving me a black eye! I think they call it domestic violence! :rolleyes:

(Danny begins to laugh)

Danny: Your going to pay just like i am going to pay!

(Ben lets his anger out and pushes Danny against the wall by his neck)

Ben: Don't you dare say anything to the police about me giving you a black eye! :angry:

Danny: What have i got to lose!? I am going to go down for making George paralysed for life!

Ben: If you tell the police about me punching you, i will give out my own brand of justice to you and it won't be nice! :angry:

(Danny looks alarmed as Ben lets go of Danny's neck. Danny heads for the stairs)

Ben: You won't tell the police then, right?

Danny: They'll want to know how i got my black eye though.....

(Danny laughs as he walks down the stairs. He gets to the bottom of the stairs and is soon face to face with the police)

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Danny: They'll want to know how i got my black eye though.....

(Danny laughs as he walks down the stairs. He gets to the bottom of the stairs and is soon face to face with the police)

Police: Oh hello Danny...how did you get that black eye?

(Danny turns and gives Ben an evil stare. Ben is sitting on the stair nervously)

Danny: Oh nothing to worry about....just been in a few fights at school that's all...

Police: Well we would like you to come down to the station with us....

Danny: Am i under arrest?

Police: Yes technically you are as you will be taking part in an identity parade...

Danny: An identity parade!?

Police: Yes...George refused to press charges against you and we have no evidence against you...so an identity parade for the witness at the scene is our only hope....

Danny: So i am likely to be let off the hook....brilliant! :D

Police: Don't look too happy...i am sure your parents will punish you in there own way...and you should thank your lucky stars...Butley!

Danny: Oh i am thanking them! :D

(The police grabs hold of Danny's arm and they escort him to the police car. Ben shouts to Danny)

Ben: I will pick you up from the station...

(Danny ignores him and enters the police car before the police drive away)

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PUB- MORNING

(Phil enters the kitchen where Nina is making some coffee. Mike is in the shower)

Nina: Oh hi Phil...had a nice sleep?

Phil: Yeah i had a nice sleep thanks...best sleep i've had in ages!

Nina: Oh good..do you wanna coffee?

Phil: Oh no it's ok...i will just get myself some milk....

(Phil heads to the fridge and pours himself some milk before sitting back down)

Phil: Look...i don't know how to put this...but...well..i don't mean to be treading on your toes or anything....

Nina: What do you mean!?

Phil: I am getting in the way aren't I!?

Nina: Of course your not getting in the way...you've only slept here for one night!

Phil: But i heard you and Mike arguing last night in the cellar...i could hear that it was about me...

Nina: Oh don't worry about Mike...he can just get really uneasy sometimes that's all...you can stay as long as you want...

Phil: Well i will make sure that i will only stay for a few more days...

(Phil heads to leave the kitchen)

Nina: Phil..there's no need to be scared of Mike...he's just a bit wary with meeting new people that's all...

Phil: I have got to give you something though for giving me somewhere to stay temporary...

Nina: Oh don't worry about giving me anything, i am doing this out of the kindness of my own heart!

Phil: But i wanna get you something...something to say thank you...

(Phil leaves the kitchen as Nina sits down to drink her coffee)

[bakedbean]

Im really loving Hinston High at the moment just catched up on evreything.

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Im really loving Hinston High at the moment just catched up on evreything.

Glad your liking it! The season finale is this Friday. :)

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CHLOE AND KATS FLAT- NOON

(Kat is eating her lunch on the sofa. Chloe is reading a magazine. There is a knock on the door. Chloe answers the door to Greg)

Chloe: Oh Greg...i wasn't expecting you to call on me this early...

Greg: Well i am on my lunch break from the garage so i was wondering, maybe we could both go out for lunch together....

Chloe: Oh, i have just started eating my lunch but you can come in if you want...i will make lunch for you if you like...

Greg: Nah it's ok...i am not feeling that peckish anyway to be honest.

(Greg enters the flat and sits down)

Kat: Any luck on finding your watch yet Greg? Chlo was telling me all about it!

Greg: No...no luck yet...have you seen it anywhere?

Kat: Me!? No! I haven't seen any watch!

Greg: Well..i will carry on looking...hopefully it will turn up somewhere! But anyway never mind my watch...i was going to go to the police about it but..

(Kat interrupts)

Kat: The police!? :eek:

Greg: Don't seem so shocked! I seen sense in the end though...Chlo said they could get me done for wasting police time!

Kat: Yeah she's right there...

Greg: But forget the watch...i have got a surprise in store...

Kat: Oooh for me i hope!

Greg: No obviously not you :rolleyes: I was thinking of more of a surprise for Chlo!

Chloe: Oooh i am getting excited now...come on babes, spit it out!

(Chloe has an exciting look on her face. Greg pulls out a house key from his pocket and hands it to Chloe)

Chloe: What's this!?

Greg: A copy of my house key...i love you to pieces Chlo, so move in with me..what do you say?

Chloe: Oh my goodness...i'm lost for words! Of course i will move in with you! :wub:

(Greg picks up Chloe and swings her around the room before they share a snog. They are both delighted)

(Kat whispers to herself)

Kat: Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!

(Kat looks on menacingly with a plan in mind.....)

[bakedbean]

Glad your liking it! The season finale is this Friday. :)

Cant wait looks like Exeter is the only soap around this summer

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HINSTON PRISON- AFTERNOON

(It's visiting time at Hinston prison. Luke is sitting at a table with a prison's uniform on. Tanya suddenly strolls in with a load of other prison visitors. She rushes too see Luke. Luke stands up to kiss Tanya before they both sit back down)

Tanya: How you doing love?

Luke: How do you think!?....prison life is an absolute bloody nightmare! I just wanna get out of this sh**hole!

Tanya: Well it's your own bloody fault that your here in the first place so don't you dare snap at me!

Luke: Oh well...thanks for the confidence, i appreciate it! :rolleyes: Anyway how are the kids?

Tanya: They are fine...absolutely fine...they're just missing you....i have told Lee and Tina the full story...they can't believe your in here! But anyway I haven't come here to argue Luke....i have come here to try and get you out of this sh**hole!

Luke: And what do you propose to do ey!? I mean for goodness sake, all the evidence is stacked up against me!

Tanya: Well you were the one who shot Geena...you actually picked up that gun and murdered her so technically you should be in here....

Luke: I knew you wouldn't help....why did you come and visit me anyway...your just putting a negative spin on everything!

Tanya: I told you! I want to get you out of here!

Luke: It's impossible...like i said the evidence is stacked up against me! I have been charged for Geena's murder and i could be facing a long time in prison!

Tanya: When's your court hearing?

Luke: Tomorrow morning...

Tanya: Well just stay hopeful for the court hearing yeah!? You never know you might be let out before the trial!

Luke: You will come to the court hearing won't you!?

Tanya: Yeah of course i will...i will be with you every step of the way supporting you...me and the kids will always be here for you....i know you have done stuff that has hurt me in the past, but i don't care, i love you Luke Campbell...and that's why i want to get you out of here!

Luke: I love you too Tan...but you can't get me out of here, why can't you face reality!?

Tanya: Well if i can't get you out of prison...i will have to sort out the person who put you in this dump in the first place....

Luke: Your not are you!?

Tanya: Not gonna do what!?

Luke: You know what i am talking about...don't you even think of messing with Andy! He's a dangerous man!

Tanya: I will have the upper hand when i have finished with him.... trust me!

Luke: Andy is not what you expect....he's had his wife killed and if you go messing with him, you could be next on his hitlist....

Tanya: I'm not scared of Andy for christ sake.....he needs to be taught a bloody lesson for putting you in here and making you murder his wife....justice needs to be done and i am going to make sure of it!

Luke: Just don't do anything stupid Tan...don't do something you will regret! Be careful Tan, be very careful!

Tanya: Calm down Luke...i have everything under control...Andy won't do anything to me, he wouldn't dare!

Luke: Just please don't go starting any battles with Andy, please! I am begging you!

Tanya: If i start a battle with Andy, he will lose, i can guarantee it!

Prison Officer: Ok time's up! Visiting time is over!

Tanya: I will see you soon babes...and don't worry about me, all i will be doing is getting my revenge, and Andy won't be able to fight back, the evil ba*****!

(Tanya leaves the visiting room as Luke begins to worry for Tanya's safety)

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POLICE STATION- AFTERNOON

(The witness to the waterfall incident- James is walking slowly looking at the suspects at the identity parade. Danny is standing within the suspects shifting his eyes nervously and also standing nervously. James suddenly walks past Danny and looks at him closely for a few seconds suspiciously before walking back to the police officer)

Police: Any luck?

James: No...i'm sorry....i don't recognise any of those people leaving the scene of the waterfall incident...

Police: What about the teenage boy on the end? Danny? He's the prime suspect in this case. Are you sure that you don't recognise him as the person running away from the crime scene?

(James looks at Danny again for a few seconds)

James: No i'm sorry...my mind has gone blank.....i can't recognise any of those suspects as matching the description of the figure at the crime scene...again, i'm sorry!

Police: It's ok.... are you sure you don't want to look at the suspects again? Sometimes it helps jogging people's memories...

James: No i don't need to look at the suspects again...i'm quite confident that all those suspects weren't running away from the crime scene.

Police: Ok well i can't force you to look at the suspects again but thanks for your time.

(James exits the room. As James closes the door behind him, the policeman mutters to himself)

Police: Seems like there's nothing left for this case...our prime suspect, Danny has just been let off the hook....

(The policeman looks on angrily)

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CHLOE AND KAT'S FLAT- EVENING

(Chloe has just left to start her shift at the pub. Once she left, Kat puts on some gloves and grabs the copy of her keys to Greg's flat and leaves also without trying to be seen)

(We cut to Greg's house. Kat lets herself into Greg's house with Chloe's copy of Greg's flat key. Once inside, she goes berserk. She goes into the living room and chucks Greg's television and hi fi system against the wall. She then goes into the kitchen and turns Greg's kitchen table upside down. She goes to his study and and grabs all his books and rips the pages out of them before hitting the books against the floor. She grabs all the framed pictures in Greg's flat and smashes them violently against the floor. She goes upstairs into his bedroom and chucks Greg's bedside cabinet out the window. She goes back downstairs and smashes all the vases and ornaments he has against the wall. Suddenly Kat hears police sirens. Someone has called the police)

Kat: Sh** i gotta get out of here fast!

(Kat dashes to the front door and places Chloe's copy of Greg's flat keys on the doormat before breaking out of the back door and running away from the scene. Once out of breath, she stops in an alleyway and takes her gloves off before muttering to herself)

Kat: This should end Greg and Chloe's relationship once and for all! :)

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BUTLEYS HOUSE- EVENING

(Ben and Julia are alone in the kitchen talking about Danny)

Ben: I can't bloody believe it! Danny got off, he was let off the hook for pushing that boy off the waterfall...the police just can't do anything right can they!? :angry:

Julia: Don't get so worked up over it...we will have to punish Danny ourselves that's all!

Ben: That poor boy was too scared to press charges against our son, i bet Danny got to him before the police did....

Julia: What are you trying to imply Ben!?

Ben: That Danny probably threatened George into not pressing charges against him...i wouldn't put it past him!

Julia: You think that our own son is that evil!? :eek:

Ben: He is already evil Ju for pushing George off that waterfall and we've got to do something about it!

Julia: Like what!?

Ben: I think we should send Danny to somewhere where he can't get into deep trouble!

Julia: Where do you have in mind?

Ben: I think we should get Danny packed off to boarding school!

Julia: :eek: Boarding school!? Why boarding school!?

Ben: So he can't face getting into any more trouble...i think it's for the best don't you!?

Julia: Well we will never get to see him...the family would drift apart from him...we would only get to see Danny in the holidays!

Ben: Well to be honest, i don't really want to see Danny, not after what he did! I would rather swap Danny for George to be my son anyday, atleast he knows some bloody discipline! :mad:

(Ben says this statement without realising Danny is on the other side of the kitchen door listening....Danny suddenly enters. Julia tries to disguise what Ben just said)

Julia: Oh Danny...want anything for tea?

Danny: I'm not hungry...and i am not going to boarding school!

Ben: You will bloody do what i say! :angry:

Danny: Or what!? Your gonna punch me again!?

(Ben grabs Danny's shoulders and pushes him against the wall)

Danny: I'm not threatened....i just heard what you said though..

Ben: I don't care what you heard me say...you need to know the true extent of what you've done....you've put a bad name on this family! :angry:

(Ben releases Danny from against the wall. Danny leaves through the back door slamming it behind him)

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PUB- EVENING

(Nina and Mike are working behind the bar serving punters. Phil comes in through the back of the pub and pulls Nina into the cellar)

Nina: Phil! What the hell do you think your doing!?

Phil: Sorry i didn't mean to give you a fright...

Nina: No you nearly gave me a bloody heart attack! Anyway why have you dragged me into the cellar?

Phil: I want to give you something....

Nina: Give me something?!

Phil: Yeah that's right....

(Phil pulls out a bunch of flowers from behind him and gives them to Nina. Nina looks surprised)

Nina: Oh gosh! Thank you! I don't know what to say!

Phil: Don't say anything...it's just to say thank you that's all.

Nina: Thank you for what? What have i done?!

Phil: You've given me a place to stay, that's what you've done but don't worry i will be out of your hair by the end of the week....

Nina: You will!? Why where are you going?

Phil: I've paid a plumber to sort out the flooding at my house...

Nina: Where did you get the money from? I thought you were skint!

Phil: I am....but let's just say, an old friend lent me some money...the bedsit should be ready for me by the end of the week...

Nina: But you don't want to stay in a grotty old bedsit do you?!

Phil: I want to get out of your hair as soon as possible Nina...i am fed up of getting in the way all the time!

Nina: But your not getting in the way!

Phil: Yeah i am getting in the way, i can tell! Just don't worry about it...you hardly know me...i am just a stranger to you....

Nina: Yeah..well....thanks for the flowers! Why did you drag me into the cellar to give them to me?

Phil: Because i know what your husband is like!

(Nina laughs at this)

Nina: Well i will put these flowers in some water....

(Phil stares at Nina intently as she leaves the cellar)

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HINSTON PARK- EVENING

(Sally is sitting on the swings with George talking unaware that Danny is hiding behind a bush listening in on their conversation)

Sally: Are you ok George after what happened with my brother?! You know he got let off the hook don't you!?

George: Yeah i know....i just want to forget that this ever happened ok! I don't want to talk about your brother!

Sally: I know...i'm sorry...i just came to sit with you just to see how you were that's all....

George: Thanks Sal...it's appreciated. :)

Sally: Anyway i didn't know you were moving to Hinston High!

George: Yeah i'm moving here tomorrow with my mum...just thought i would look around...have a feel of the place...

Sally: What in that wheelchair?! It must have been hard for you to get here....

George: I don't live far from here...and i can push myself round on my own, i don't need anyone to help me....just because i am disabled doesn't mean i am restricted from doing certain things!

Sally: I know....i'm sorry...

(George begins to feel upset)

George: I just don't know how i am going to cope! :(

Sally: Ey! Ey! There's no need to get upset.

George: I have reason to be upset though Sal, i mean tomorrow i am moving here where i will be living right opposite the person who pushed me off that waterfall and i will have to cope with being disabled for the rest of my life! My whole life....ruined! :crying:

Sally: Don't start crying! Please...be brave George! Be brave!

George: I can't stand living opposite Danny though...i won't be able to survive! :crying:

Sally: You will survive...you've got your mum..............you've got me! :)

(Sally wipes the tears from George's eyes and they both lean in and share a passionate kiss. Danny sees this and flies off the handle approaching both Sally and George)

Danny: How dare you take advantage of my sister!?!? Ey?! What gives you the right!? :angry:

Sally: Danny, just leave him! Look how much misery you've already caused! He's in that wheelchair because of you, don't make life worse for him!

(Danny doesn't listen to Sally and he angrily pushes George who is sitting in his wheelchair to the floor)

Sally: Danny, don't you bloody listen! :mad:

George: I'm sorry Dan....please don't hurt me! I didn't do anything wrong!

Danny: What gives you the right to call me Dan ey!? You call me by my full name because your a disabled loser! You stay away from my sister before i break your arms just like i broke your legs! :angry:

(Sally pushes Danny to the floor violently but Danny gets back up and punches Sally across the face. She falls and hits her head on a swing before hitting the floor. Danny panics and runs away from the scene)

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BUTLEYS HOUSE- EVENING

(Danny rushes home and shuts the door behind him. Ben and Julia are sitting at the kitchen table)

Julia: Oh Danny, just in time! We need to talk to you...

Danny: I don't have time for chit chat....

(Danny rushes upstairs. There is a sudden knock on the back door. Julia answers it and sees Sally)

Julia: Sal! You look awful!

Sally: My head feels funny mum...i feel weird...

Julia: What happened?

Sally: Danny pushed George off his wheelchair and he pushed me over and i knocked my head against the swing, that's what bloody happened!

Julia: Oh my goodness!

Ben: I knew Danny would be involved, i need to speak to him!

Julia: We all need to speak him...as a family!

Ben: We've got this latest crisis to worry about first...

(Sally sits down)

Sally: Something needs to be done about Danny...mum! I know he's my brother and all that, but he is one vicious bully, you should have heard him threaten George at the park...i was the one who stepped into Danny's defence...

Julia: Don't worry...something is being done about it....

Sally: George is moving here tomorrow mum!

Julia: He's moving to Hinston High!? :eek:

Sally: Yeah and he's terrified, mum! He's terrified because of what Danny might do to him next! Danny threatened to break his arms just like he broke his legs! I'm not exaggerating mum....i'm not lying!

Julia: Don't worry, i never brought you up as a liar....

(Sally suddenly collapses to the floor. Julia screams Ben's name)

Julia: Ben! Ben! Come down here now!

(Ben rushes down the stairs with Danny following)

Julia: Sally has collapsed, call an ambulance now!

(Ben turns to Danny)

Ben: Look what you've done, you don't deserve the family name!

(Ben rings the ambulance as Danny runs upstairs)

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PUB- NIGHT

(Greg storms into the pub with a terrifying look on his face. Greg grabs Chloe from behind the bar and forces her outside the pub. Chloe is baffled by the whole scene)

Chloe: Greg....what's wrong!? Why have you dragged me out here?!....do you want some private time with me do you?! Well sorry, no can do....

Greg: I haven't dragged you out of the pub so i can snog your face off! I dragged you out of here so we don't cause a scene....

Chloe: What?! Sorry Greg, you've completely lost me! :confused:

(Greg takes Chloe's copy of his flat keys from out of his pocket)

Chloe: Greg....there your house keys! What have they got to do with anything?

Greg: Don't act all innocent with me....my house got burgled earlier and when the police came swanning around they found the copy of your flat keys to my flat on my doormat!

Chloe: Well how did they get there?! I left the copy of the flat keys to your flat at my flat!

Greg: Admit it Chloe! Just admit it! I don't want to play games with you....you burgled my house didn't you?! I thought i could trust you Chlo!

Chloe: What!? :eek: I didn't burgle your house! I would never burgle your house!

Greg: Well someone let themselves in through the front door to turn my flat over...and your the only other person with a set of keys! :angry:

Chloe: Still...it wasn't me! How dare you think it was me?! :eek: You really think i am that type of person do you!?!?! Going round burgling people's houses! You disgust me! :mad:

(Chloe walks away but Greg grabs her arm)

Greg: Prove it to me then Chlo! Prove that you had nothing to do with my flat burglary! Despite your set of my keys miraculously turning up on my doormat....:rolleyes:

Chloe: I can prove it you actually Greg! Because at the time of the burglary, i was at the pub, here doing my shift!

(Greg's mouth drops open)

Greg: Of course...of course you were here....oh my god Chlo! I am awfully sorry! :eek:

Chloe: To late for apologies Greg....you thought your own girlfriend would burgle your flat!?! I thought we loved each other Greg....i thought that i wouldn't come across in your mind as being a suspect! :mad:

(Chloe walks back into the pub disgusted at Greg's accusations)

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BUTLEYS HOUSE- NIGHT

(Julia has just left the house with Marianne to visit Sally in hospital who is recovering from her head injuries. Ben sees it as an opportunity to go upstairs and speak to Danny. Ben opens Danny's bedroom door to see him sitting rocking on his armchair)

Danny: What do you want dad?! Came to have another go have you?! Or have you come to have another punch at me?!

Ben: What you've done is unforgiveable...you know that don't you?!?!

Danny: I know what I've done dad and i know it was wrong....

Ben: It wasn't just wrong Danny...it was against the law! You were very lucky that you got away with pushing George off that waterfall!

Danny: Can you stop reminding me please!?! I am going to lose the will to live with you muttering on! I got away with it...that's the main thing!

(Ben grabs Danny and pushes him against the wall)

Ben: Like i said...i wish George was my son and not you....you useless piece of rubbish... what you've done has made me sick! :angry:

Danny: I don't care what you think dad....i got away with it and i am pleased i did it, I'm proud of what i have done!

Ben: If you weren't my son, i would knock your lights out! :angry:

Danny: And if you weren't my dad, i would do what i did to George!

Ben: You need help! How can you have such evil thoughts?!?! I am ashamed to see you as my son! In fact, i wish you weren't my son, you've made me so angry over what you've done! :angry:

Danny: So you think boarding school is the answer for my problems?! I'm not crying for help!

Ben: Yes boarding school is the answer and i am going to make you go to boarding school....

Danny: You can't make me! I'm not going to boarding school and that's that!

Ben: Too late...me and your mum have rang...you will be going to boarding school at the start of September....your days in this household are numbered!

Danny: Well i'm not going, i don't care what it will take but i am not going!

Ben: You will do as i say!

Danny: No i won't do as you say!

Ben: Jesus Christ! I wish you weren't my son! I wish you weren't even born...you evil evil boy! :angry:

(Ben leaves Danny's bedroom, Danny starts crying feeling hurt by Ben's words)

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PUB- MORNING

(Mike walks into the kitchen and sees Nina sitting at the kitchen table eating breakfast. He turns to his left and sees a vase full of flowers in some water)

Nina: Oh hi love...sorry i forgot to make you breakfast...i made you a cup of tea though....

(Mike picks up his cup of tea and sits next to Nina)

Mike: Don't worry...i am not feeling that hungry this morning....a cup of tea will do me fine!

(There's a pause)

Mike: Would you like to tell me about the flowers that are on the side in a vase full of water? I know i didn't give them to you....

Nina: Don't fly off the handle...but Phil gave them to me!

Mike: It must have cost him a bomb, i know flowers like that don't come cheap...

Nina: Well it was just him saying thank you that's all for keeping him up here.

Mike: Well how long is he actually staying with us?

Nina: Don't worry...he will be out of our hair by tomorrow...he's paid a deposit on a bedsit!

Mike: Where did he get the money from?

Nina: From a mate of his...

Mike: I thought he didn't have any friends or family...we better watch our backs Nina...i can't trust him as far as i can throw him!

Phil: Talking about me are you?!

(Mike and Nina turn their heads to see Phil standing in the kitchen doorway. Mike replies nervously)

Mike: No..

Phil: You don't fool me Mike....i am going for a shower!

(Phil leaves the kitchen as Nina and Mike both feel guilty)

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BUTLEYS HOUSE- MORNING

(Ben wakes up and heads to the bathroom but Julia stops him by calling up the stairs)

Julia: Tell Danny his breakfast is ready!

Ben: Danny doesn't deserve any breakfast!

Julia: For christ sake Ben! He has to eat, he can't starve!

(Ben opens Danny's bedroom door where he makes a shocking discovery....)

[DaVeyWaVey]

Tomorrow the Hinston High season finale will begin...there are 10 scenes left...what will be the fate of the residents of Hinston High? Find out tomorrow!

[DaVeyWaVey]

Ok this is the start of today's season finale. Hope you enjoy it! :)

(Ben opens Danny's bedroom door where he makes a shocking discovery....)

Ben: Jesus! :eek:

Julia: Ben....what's wrong? Is Danny coming down for his breakfast?

(Julia rushes upstairs and Ben turns to Julia horrified)

Ben: Danny has gone, Ju! Danny has gone....vanished! :eek:

(Julia peeks into Danny's bedroom to see that Danny has vanished..then she looks at his bedside table and sees a piece of paper)

Julia: Look...there's a piece of paper...maybe he had to go out for a while or something and he told us where he was going.

Ben: Oh Julia, stop kidding yourself! The piece of dirt has done a runner! :rolleyes:

Julia: Don't you dare call Danny a piece of dirt! He's our son! :mad:

(Julia picks up the piece of paper and reads the note that Danny has written)

Julia: I think we might have to call the police...

Ben: The police?! Not again! You know what the residents of Hinston are like! As soon as the police turn up outside someone's house, they all come over asking questions...wondering what the commotion is! I don't really want our family to become a bad image!

Julia: So you care more about what people think do you?!?! more than your own flesh and blood! :mad: Just read this note while i call the police..it shows how he truly feels!

(Julia pushes the note into Ben's hands and marches down the stairs to call the police)

(Ben reads the note. He is reading what Danny has put in the note)

Ben: Dear mum and dad, i know i have been a pain and not someone you thought i would be, i haven't lived up to your expectations and i feel it's too late to forgive the people i have hurt. I know you don't love me anymore, after what i have done and that's why i have left for good. From Danny.

(Ben pauses and tries to sink in what Danny has said)

[bakedbean]

So Danny has done a runner intesting. I cant wait to see what happens next!

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON COURT- MORNING

(Tanya comes out of Luke's court hearing with Jenna by her side)

Tanya: I just can't believe it Jen...Luke has been refused bail! He won't be able to see the kids...this is awful. :crying:

(Tanya starts to cry and Jenna comforts her)

Jenna: It's gonna be ok Tan....you can fight through this, you and the kids both can! They will get to see Luke you know!

Tanya: I know but they will see him on damn prison visits! They won't be able to bear it, they will be asking questions, i won't be able to handle it!

Jenna: You will...you've got a lot of people that care about you you know?!

Tanya: I know...thanks for coming here with me today, i wouldn't have been able to do it on my own!

Jenna: When are you going to tell the kids about this situation?! They will want to know why their dad is in prison!

Tanya: I will tell them when the time is right....why can't the judge understand that Luke is innocent though?! Luke is innocent, he's done nothing wrong and he faces a lifetime behind bars! An innocent man doesn't deserve that...i know the person who does deserve the rest of their life behind bars though!

Jenna: Tan, your not making any sense! What do you mean?

Tanya: Nothing that worries you Jen...let's just say that i am going to get my own justice for Luke....

(Tanya begins to walk away and Jenna rushes behind her)

Jenna: Tan, don't do anything stupid, promise me?!

Tanya: I am just getting my own justice for Luke...nothing will go wrong, just trust me....

Jenna: What about the taxi?

Tanya: Catch it yourself...i've got some unfinished business to sort out...:cool:

(Tanya walks off from the court as Jenna stays waiting for the taxi that will accompany her back to Hinston High)

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CHLOE AND KAT'S FLAT- MORNING

(Chloe and Kat are eating lunch while watching the television)

Chloe: I just can't believe that Greg would accuse me of such a terrible crime...i would never burgle his house!

Kat: Can you just stop going on about it?! You've been moaning about it all morning! i want to listen and watch the television now!

Chloe: I am sorry Kat...i don't mean to burden you with my problems!

Kat: It's ok...but if he's causing you so much problems...why don't you just break up with him?! The relationship isn't going anywhere and Greg obviously doesn't trust you because he accused you of burgling his house!

Chloe: I think we've already broke up anyway...the argument we had last night outside the pub was no normal argument...it was heated....

(Kat's face suddenly breaks into a smile)

Kat: Well as they say...there's plenty more fish in the sea! Greg obviously isn't the one for you!

Chloe: I think your right you know?!...what i want to know though is how my copy of Greg's flat keys got on his doormat..i left them here...

Kat: Well that remains a mystery i suppose....

Chloe: Yeah...well thinking about it....someone was obviously trying to frame me for the burglary! It's pretty obvious, going over it in my mind, it's obvious they were trying to frame me for Greg's burglary because they wouldn't have nicked my copy of Greg's keys and put them on his doormat! Why would they want to frame me though and most of all why would they go to that much trouble?!

Kat: God knows...but forget about Greg now! You've broken up with him now, we can get back to our girly nights out can't we?!

(There is a knock on the door. Chloe rushes to answer the door. She answers it to see Greg on the doorstep)

Chloe: Oh my god Greg! You've got a nerve coming to my flat after what you accused me of last night...

(Kat jumps to Chloe's defence)

Kat: Clear off Greg! Chloe doesn't want you! She doesn't love you anymore...not after what you accused her of! So leave us both alone, you hear me?!

Greg: I want to chat to Chloe in private so if you wouldn't mind?!

Chloe: Kat, i will be ok...just leave us both for a moment...

(Kat leaves the front door and sits back down and carries on watching the television)

Greg: Chloe...please! Just hear me out...i have made a big mistake!

Chloe: Your damn right! You have made a big mistake! I never burgled your house! Why would I?!

Greg: I came to say sorry Chlo! Please accept my apology...i would like to think that we are still together as a couple.

Chloe: Sorry won't cut it Greg!

Greg: I know...so that's why i have booked us a weekend away at a country cottage...i rang my friend and he said we could rent it out to us!

(Chloe's face turns from anger to amazement)

Chloe: What?! Are you being serious?!

Greg: Yep..he's going away for the weekend so he said he would rent out the cottage to us....think about it Chlo, we will have time to ourselves to build up our relationship, do whatever we want without no one bothering us...

(Chloe thinks for a moment)

Greg: Will you come with me then Chlo?! I have paid for everything, you don't have to pay a thing! I love you Chloe and this is how i am proving to you with this romantic weekend trip away and with this...

(Greg kisses Chloe and she responds)

Chloe: Yeah Greg...i will come with you! I love you too!

Greg: Am i forgiven?

Chloe: Of course you are....this romantic weekend trip must be good though!

(Chloe and Greg both laugh at this)

Greg: We are leaving tonight...

Chloe: Ok..i will go and pack my things...i am actually getting really excited about this!

Greg: I'm sorry though Chlo! I didn't mean what i said last night!

Chloe: I know your sorry and i accept your apology. Your my world Greg and i love you...

(Greg and Chloe share a passionate kiss. Kat interrupts them with anger on her face)

Kat: You two made up then?!

Chloe: Yep we certainly have and Greg has made up for it...we are both going on a romantic weekend trip away to a country cottage...isn't it brilliant Kat!? Greg is a true gentlemen!

(Chloe has an excited feeling on her face and Greg and Chloe kiss again as Kat looks on in disgust)

[DaVeyWaVey]

HINSTON HIGH- NOON

(Liz and George have just moved into Hinston High. They are viewing their new house from Hinston High)

Liz: Aaah...doesn't our house just look beautiful son?!

George: Yeah it does..

Liz: I think we will have a happy time here...

George: Are you taking the mick?! Danny is living right opposite us! My life will never be the same again, it's going to be pure hell!

Liz: What did i tell ya ey son?! Have you took any of my advice?! You need to toughen up, be a man! You have to fight your own battles and stand up to Danny and tell him what's what! I can't be with you 24/7 you know?!

George: I know mum..but i never exactly told you to fight my battles for me!

Liz: I am looking out for my own son that's all...it's a mother's prerogative...

(Liz suddenly turns to see Julia also outside her house)

Liz: Right! I am going to nail that bitch right now!

George: Mum! Don't make a fool of yourself...

Liz: Danny has got off scot-free...it's time for the Butley family to pay...

George: Mum! Please!

(Liz walks over to Julia as George sits in his wheelchair in the background feeling nervous)

Liz: Well...well! Look what we got here, your my new neighbour!

Julia: Oh gosh! Not you again...i thought i washed my hands of you!

Liz: Well you clearly haven't...i am now living right opposite you...

Julia: Look i don't want any trouble, can we just stay away from each other?

Liz: Not as simple as that darlin'. You see...your Danny has got away with paralysing my son! He won't be able to walk again! :mad:

Julia: I am aware of that...

Liz: But you don't give a toss do you?! That's why i have a score to settle...

Julia: Look just back off will you!!?

(Julia pushes Liz away from her but Liz responds by pushing her back)

Julia: I just want to stay away from you!

Liz: But you can't...because your son is a ba***** and your a bitch! Your both suited to the same family! :mad:

Julia: Don't you dare call me a bitch! :angry:

Liz: I'll call you what i want...no law against it is there?!

(Julia slaps Liz across the face. Liz slaps her back. George stands back feeling unable to control the situation and getting the women to stay apart)

Liz: You slag! :mad:

Julia: Slut! :angry:

(Liz lashes out and punches Julia knocking her to the floor. Liz grabs her hair but Julia manages to get up and push Liz to the floor. They are soon kicking and screaming insults at each other causing a scene)

George: The pair of you..just please stop it!

(The whole of Hinston High is now watching the scene)

Ben: You two...stop it both of you! Fighting isn't the answer and your making a scene!

(Ben seperates both Liz and Julia)

Ben: Just back off will you?! Danny has already gone missing...we don't want both of you fighting to make things worse..

Liz: Danny has gone missing...brilliant! Let's hope he never comes back and he's lying dead in a ditch burning in hell!

Julia: How dare you?! :angry:

(Julia takes a swing at Liz but Ben stops her)

Ben: She's not worth it...

Liz: I am worth it....you see, i am the new bitch of Hinston High and no one can stop me from doing anything! :cool:

(Liz walks away pushing George who is in his wheelchair)

[DaVeyWaVey]

GREG'S FLAT- AFTERNOON

(Kat approaches Greg's car. She checks no one is looking before tampering with his car brakes.....)

[DaVeyWaVey]

BUTLEYS HOUSE- NIGHT

(The Butleys are holding a family meeting)

Julia: Right...i think we should call the police...

Ben: Julia, he's just looking for attention like the time he ran off before! He will return eventually after realising how much family means to him!

Sally: I think dad is right mum...Danny will come back when he wants too...

Julia: I am worried about his safety though...we've got to get Danny back home! Despite what he's done, he's our son Ben! Even if he will come back to us eventually or not, we've still got to get him back!

Marianne: Mum is right...

(Ben thinks for a moment)

Julia: Liz might be right you know! Danny could be lying injured in a ditch right now, he might even be dead!

Ben: Don't be so ridiculous Ju! Liz doesn't know anything! Your making this whole situation go to your head!

Marianne: So are we going to call the police?

Ben: Yeah we are...

(Ben leaves the living room and picks up the phone to ring the police. We cut from the Butleys house to Hinston High. Liz and Danny are both approaching the Butley household in different directions and they are both brandishing a gun....)

[DaVeyWaVey]

WOODS FLAT- NIGHT

(Max and Tom are both watching television. They suddenly hear a disturbance outside their front door)

Tom: What was that?

Max: Search me....look something big is going to be happening on here in a minute..so keep your eyes peeled to the tv set!

(Tom ignores Max's comment. He heads to the front door and opens it. He looks down on the doorstep and makes a shocking discovery.....)

[DaVeyWaVey]

PUB- NIGHT

(The pub has just closed. Mike is upstairs in bed with Nina)

Mike: I thought you said Phil was leaving tonight...

Nina: He was meant too love but well he's sticking around for one more night, he said he will be out of our hair by tomorrow though....

Mike: Ok...well i am glad that he will be out of our lives for good by tomorrow!

Nina: Aww..don't be like that! We have done him a favour!

Mike: He's a weirdo Nina...and i can't trust him as far as i can throw him, like i said before!

(There's a sudden noise from the pub)

Nina: What was that noise?

Mike: I'm not sure...

(Mike gets out of bed and rushes down the stairs. Nina follows him)

Nina: Mike, be careful!

Nina: Don't worry Nina...it's probably nothing!

(Mike enters the front of the pub where he witnesses Phil stealing money from the till)

Mike: What the bloody hell do you think your doing?! :angry:

Phil: *******

Mike: I knew i couldn't trust you as far as i could throw you! :angry:

Phil: I've got no money though...i've got no money! Please, can i borrow some money from the till?! I am begging you! I will pay it back to you!

Mike: I don't trust you!

Nina: For christ sake Mike, just let Phil take some money!

Mike: I'm no pushover! Who's side are you on Nina?!

Nina: I'm not taking sides...

(Phil does a runner to the pub door but Mike manages to catch him up as he is about to jump to the window. Mike tackles Phil to the floor. There's a struggle and Phil suddenly turns violent. He grabs Mike's head and smashes it against the floor over and over....)

(Nina screams in fear and fury)

Nina: No! Phil! No! Your going to kill my husband! :crying:

(Nina grabs Phil and tries to pull him off Mike but she fails)

Nina: Stop it Phil! Stop it! :crying:

(Nina cries in vain)

Nina: Your killing him! Your killing him! :crying:

(Nina rushes upstairs and grabs a kitchen knife. She rushes back downstairs and sees Phil getting up from the pub floor. Nina plunges the kitchen knife into Phil's back. Phil lets out a screech before falling to the floor)

(Nina looks on as she sees Mike and Phil both unconscious on the floor. Nina cries out to Mike hoping he will wake up but he fails to respond)

Nina: Wake up Mike! Wake up! Come on your a fighter, your not dead are you?!

Are Mike And Phil both dead?

[DaVeyWaVey]

COUNTRY LANE- NIGHT

(Chloe and Greg have set off to go on their romantic weekend away. They are in the car heading to the country cottage that has been rented to them. They are travelling on a narrow country lane which is on top of a small rocky cliff)

Chloe: Be careful turning this corner Greg! It looks quite narrow...

Greg: Relax and enjoy the ride...i am always careful...i will put the brakes on a bit as we are going round the corner...will that make you feel better?

Chloe: Yeah thanks. :) I am really looking forward to this...we can finally spend some proper time together, with no one getting in the way! :)

Greg: I know...ooh here comes this sharp corner!

(Greg tries to put the brakes on but they fail)

Greg: *******! The brakes don't work!

Chloe: What?!

Greg: We are heading straight for that wall! We're not going round this corner!

Chloe: Didn't you check the brakes before we left?!

(Greg hesitates...Greg tries to turn the corner at high speed but the car skids and flips over the wall. Chloe and Greg scream for their lives as the car flips over the wall and slides down the rocky cliff. The car eventually hits the floor and Greg and Chloe are both unconscious inside the car...)

[DaVeyWaVey]

NIGHTCLUB- NIGHT

(It's nearly closing time at the nightclub- Tanya enters hell bent on revenge on Andy. She heads to his club office and opens the door)

Andy: Have you got an appointment?!

Tanya: I don't need an appointment...

Andy: Oh you seem like a familiar face....i think i might know you!

Tanya: Let me jog your memory...you made my husband kill your wife and i was there! Remember me now?!

Andy: Oh yeah i do...how is your husband coping?! Having nightmares is he!?

Tanya: You've got a bloody nerve...Luke's in prison and you know that because you set him up! I never knew you were a grass!

Andy: Well let's face it...you don't know me very well do you?!

Tanya: I know you well enough to know that your a manipulative ba***** that needs sorting out!

Andy: Was that a threat i heard?!

Tanya: It damn well was!

(Andy gets out of his chair and grabs Tanya by the neck)

Andy: People who usually make threats to me end up dead!

Tanya: Was that a threat i heard too Andy?!

Andy: Don't get all cocky with me Tan!

Tanya: You don't have the right to call me Tan!

Andy: I can do what i like whenever i like...

Tanya: Well not for much longer you won't...

(Andy turns his back from Tanya and pours himself a drink)

Andy: Would you like a drink Tanya?!

Tanya: No i came here to get my own justice for Luke...not to have a chat over some drinks! Anyway i can't trust you! I won't take anything from you!

(Andy grabs a knife from his safe)

Andy: You know Tan...someone's going to die in the next few minutes!

Tanya: I know...don't worry i came well prepared...i'm not scared of you Andy!

(Tanya steps up to Andy)

(A few minutes later a scream is heard from the club office...no one notices as the club music is drowning the sound of screaming away)

[DaVeyWaVey]

That's the end of the Hinston High season finale. I hope you all enjoyed it!

Season 2 will begin at the beginning of September. :)

[bakedbean]

Wow well that was something pratically evrey one in Hinston High could be dead oh well this give you more time to read Exeter lol

[Bryan]

superb! i can't say anythign else really... apart from i want season 2 back as soon as possible! a totally enjoyable and thrilling read! I hope Hinston High gets the recognition it deserves at the Soap Awards in august.

[diamond1]

Daveywavey what a cliffhanger ending :clap:

well done,hinston high just gets better
as I said to the writers of devons sea's I want to say a big thank you for all your hard work and I cannot wait for more of hinston high

[DaVeyWaVey]

Lines are now open for the Soap Awards. Get voting for Hinston High!

Also..Hinston High Season 2 will begin on Saturday 2nd September. :)

[Abbie]

wow Dave I finally managed to read it all, and I thought it was great. Fab storylines and cliffhangers through out especially at the end. Great job. Each storyline made me want more. My fav being the andy tanya luke and geena, that was amazing and very dark.
Also what bunny boiler Kat is!!!!!!!