Bryan
14-04-2006, 13:44
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Here is my first attempt at a Bad Girls script. If its sucessful i will contunue it, anddo others similar. This is set at the beginning of season 6, when Yvonne's body is discovered.
INT. LARKHALL PRISION - ABANONDED EXECUTION CHAMBER - NIGHT
Yvonne is banging on the door in a panic. She is trapped and unable to escape. She is breathing heavily and shouting at the person on the other side.
Yvonne: Fenner! Get me out of here! Help! Fenner! You *******!!!
Fenner smiles to himself, satisifed that he finally has the upper hand on his arch enemy.
Fenner: Bye bye Atkins. Don’t bother screaming, you might want to save on the oxygen...
Fenner laughs evily and walks off leaving Yvonne alone. Screaming in desperation!
Yvonne: Fenner! Fenner!!!!
Yvonne bangs on the doors. The room becomes disorientated as he wear constant screaming, banging and scratching. Yvonne's head fills the scream as it rots away to show a skeleton riddled with worms.... the skull then transforms into Fenner's face.
CUT TO:
INT. FENNER'S FLAT - NIGHT
Fenner wakes up screaming. He has had a nightmare.
CUT TO:
INT. COURT ROOM - DAY
Lauren Atkins stands in the dock awaiting her sentance from the judge.
Judge: Lauren Atkins, you have been found guilty of countless criminal charges, that are strictly disalowd in this country, as a result you face life imprisonment... at her HMP Larkhall...
Lauren has a satisfied smile on her face.
Here is my first attempt at a Bad Girls script. If its sucessful i will contunue it, anddo others similar. This is set at the beginning of season 6, when Yvonne's body is discovered.
INT. LARKHALL PRISION - ABANONDED EXECUTION CHAMBER - NIGHT
Yvonne is banging on the door in a panic. She is trapped and unable to escape. She is breathing heavily and shouting at the person on the other side.
Yvonne: Fenner! Get me out of here! Help! Fenner! You *******!!!
Fenner smiles to himself, satisifed that he finally has the upper hand on his arch enemy.
Fenner: Bye bye Atkins. Don’t bother screaming, you might want to save on the oxygen...
Fenner laughs evily and walks off leaving Yvonne alone. Screaming in desperation!
Yvonne: Fenner! Fenner!!!!
Yvonne bangs on the doors. The room becomes disorientated as he wear constant screaming, banging and scratching. Yvonne's head fills the scream as it rots away to show a skeleton riddled with worms.... the skull then transforms into Fenner's face.
CUT TO:
INT. FENNER'S FLAT - NIGHT
Fenner wakes up screaming. He has had a nightmare.
CUT TO:
INT. COURT ROOM - DAY
Lauren Atkins stands in the dock awaiting her sentance from the judge.
Judge: Lauren Atkins, you have been found guilty of countless criminal charges, that are strictly disalowd in this country, as a result you face life imprisonment... at her HMP Larkhall...
Lauren has a satisfied smile on her face.