Mia is my future

[the_watts_rule]

Hey.

This is my first script, so I'm a bit nervous :p It's a Shannis script about Sharon's time in America. If all goes well, I will write a sequel to her growing up. Hope you like it. :)


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I sit here, in my bedroom and I know something is missing. Where has the male touch gone? Why did my future have to be cruelly snatched away from me? Things seemed to be getting much better and everything just collapsed, so suddenly around me. We were going to be a happy family, just like in my dreams. I looked down at baby Mia, lying ever so peacefully in her cot. Ever so cute, takes after her father, so people say. I glance at her, she has Dennis’ eyes. I realise she is the only piece of him, I have left. My darling Dennis, I wish you were here. I walk over to the bedside cabinet where Dennis’ picture is sitting. A tear comes to my eye, my love for him has never died. Mia starts to cry, I walk over to her cot and pick her up. I rock her back to sleep again. There she is, our Mia, Dennis would have been proud. I have to carry on, Mia is my future and I need to give her the best possible life.

“Daddy’s watching” I whisper.

[Tannie]

aw wow hun i love it it is really good.

[the_watts_rule]

I have decided to make this one Sharon and Mia's time in America. Then if all goes well I might write a sequel to her growing up.

[Angeldelight]

it's soooo sad but intruiging... post more soon

[Chloe-Elise]

Awwww bless! Great start, more soon please :D

[the_watts_rule]

Here is just a short part. I'l post the next part or two later.

I have been trying to sleep all night and just seems impossible. All my happy memories are going through my mind but I can’t concentrate. Mia won’t stop crying you see and I have tried everything. I walk over to her cot and pick her up. I try to comfort her but she just isn’t settling. Mia’s arm touches mine and her skin is roasting. I don’t think she should be this warm. Maybe it’s just a fever… but she could be really ill. I think I will get her doctor’s appointment in the morning. I’m not going to let Mia be taken from me….

[Angeldelight]

Noooooooooo don't let their baby be poorly... make her better
post more soon

[the_watts_rule]

Here is the next part. Things will get better, I promise.

“I have an appointment with Dr Thomson.” I said.
“Go through, he will see you now.” replied the receptionist.
I walked through to the doctor’s office very anxiously and paranoid.
“Hello, Miss Rickman, how may I help?” said the doctor.
“It’s MRS Rickman” I replied abruptly.
“Ok, MRS Rickman” he said.
“Mia has been very warm during the night and I’m concerned for her” I told the doctor anxiously.
“Ok, maybe it’s just a fever. I will do some checks” he replied with understanding.
I realised what an idiot I had been, speaking to him abruptly. I sat on the edge of my seat, hoping that my little Mia would be ok. After about 10 minutes, I got a response.
“Mrs Rickman, Mia has a very high temperature and seems to be getting warmer by the minute” he told me.
Tears filled my eyes, nothing can happen to her, I wouldn’t cope.
“I would like you take Mia to the local hospital and get her temperature checked out” he said with understanding.
“Ok…. Will she be alright?” I said with a stutter.
“I don’t know, you just have to hope for the best” he replied.

[di marco]

brill! :D awww let mia be ok. more very soon please

[Bree]

wow fab stuff hun i love it more asap

[the_watts_rule]

I will try and get a part or two posted tomorrow but I might not because it's my little sister's birthday. :p

Thanks for all the comments, much appreciated. :)

Here is another part.

I rushed into the local hospital, my heart beating more than normal. I am so concerned from her. They took Dennis and they want to take Mia away from me aswell. They just can’t, I won’t it let happen.
“Doctor, I need see a doctor!” I shouted.
They must think I’m some sort of a nutcase, running about all over the place.
“What’s wrong Madam?” said some nurse.
“My little girl, she has an increasing temperature, the doctor sent me here. Please tell me she is going to be alright” I said about to burst into tears.
“Ok, follow me and we will get her checked out” she replied.
The nurse took me to the children’s ward, so they could examine Mia. A doctor came and they were trying to see what was wrong with her. I sat there for probably about half an hour, trying to entertain myself but I was far too worried. I’ve tried tapping my feet, clicking my fingers and thinking of good memories but nothing is working. I need Dennis here, I need someone to comfort me, tell me everything is going to be alright. Is everything going to be alright? Is it?.
“Mrs Rickman, little Mia’s temperature was increasing but we think we have managed to decrease it slightly but we are not saying it won’t increase again” said the doctor.
“Will she be alright, please tell me she will be alright. I can’t lose her” I replied tears flowing down my cheeks.
“Mrs Rickman, don’t get yourself all wound up. We will keep Mia overnight for observation” said the doctor trying to be polite.
“ You don’t understand. You just don’t understand!” I shouted.
“Please Mrs Rickman, don’t shout, children are sleeping” he said to me abruptly.
“I want to stay by my little Mia. I want to make sure she is ok, she is precious to me” I said holding in my anger.
“Mrs Rickman, all children are precious to their mother’s. Now please either be quiet and stay here or go to the relative’s room.” he said to me, as kind as he could.
“He just doesn’t understand…” I muttered under my breath.

[di marco]

fab! :D awwww poor sharon, hope mias going to be ok. more very soon please

[the_watts_rule]

I will post one more part tonight. In thanks of all the comments. :)

I have been sitting here all night by Mia’s cot. I am really tired but I just can’t close my eyes I need to be there for her. I have put the teddy bear that Dennis won me at the fair in her cot. I hope he is watching over her. I hope my Dad is watching over her too. I really did hate him at times but I did love him. He is probably to busy causing trouble to watch over her. I look a mess, my mascara is all down my face from me crying. I wish that Mia will alright, what is there to live for without her. Mia Rickman, our Mia.
“Are you ok Mrs Rickman, need anything?” said the nurse.
“I need Mia to be alright, apart from that no” I replied.
“I understand, I have come to take her temperature. Let’s see if she has cooled down a bit” said the nurse.
“Her temperature has gone done by 3 degrees, Mrs Rickman. That’s a good sign” said the nurse.
“Yeah, it is” I said with relief.

[di marco]

great! :D glad mias getting better. more soon please

[the_watts_rule]

I will try my best and post more tomorrow. If not I will definitley post more on Saturday.

Comming Up:

Sharon spends as much time as she can with her daughter.

[Emma-Lou]

:cheer: It's really good poor little Mia hope she makes a full recovery and poor Sharon can not wait to read more soon.

[Layne]

Just read it all! And its fab, let little mia be okay!
More soon

BTW - just noticed how pretty sharon/letitia looks in your banner, :wub: :p

[Rach33]

awwwwwwwwwwww a baby Rickman how cute I want one please post more it's fabbie I'm sure Dennis is watching over her and he's making her all better

[the_watts_rule]

Hey guys.

Here is the next part.


By this morning, Mia’s temperature has gone by 5 degrees. I’m a bit more relaxed, now that it is decreasing. I knew Dennis was watching over her.
“How are you and Mia this morning Mrs Rickman” said the doctor.
“I’m fine but tired, Mia is getting better” I replied sleepily,
“She certainly is on the mend. How about you go home for a couple of hours and take a nap” he replied.
“No, I can’t leave her. If I’m going to sleep anywhere, then I will sleep here” I replied.
“Ok, I’ve got good news. Mia might get home tomorrow” he said with happiness.
“That’s great” I replied then yawned.

[di marco]

great! :D awwww im glad mias getting better. more soon please, cant wait

[the_watts_rule]

Would you like me to post next part tonight?

[di marco]

Would you like me to post next part tonight?

yes please lol! :D if youre able to that is!

[the_watts_rule]

yes please lol! :D if youre able to that is!

Ok. Sorry if things get a bit boring for the next 2 parts or so but I promise things will get messy.

I walked in the front door of our apartment, Mia in tow. She was discharged from the hospital as her temperature has gone down to normal temperature. I’m so relieved, I’m glad she is ok. I sat down on the sofa with Mia in my arm. I looked at her and realised she and dropped off to sleep again. I am so proud of her, she is the baby I thought I would never have. She is the perfect baby, I just love her so much. I’m going to make Dennis proud and bring her up to the best she can be. I looked at Mia and kissed her forehead.
“Sleep well, my little angel” I whispered.
I shut my eyes and dozed off to sleep.

Comming up:

It's Mia's first Christmas.

[di marco]

fab! :D good that mias gone back home. cant wait for more

[the_watts_rule]

I will post the next part in a wee while. I was thinking about writing a sequel to this about Mia growing up, once this one finished. Would anyone be interested if I did?

[di marco]

I while post the next part in a wee while. I was thinking about writing a sequel to this about Mia growing up, once this one finished. Would anyone be interested if I did?

yeh a sequel would be really good! :)

[the_watts_rule]

Here is the next part.

I open the living room curtains, it’s a beautiful morning especially for December. I walk over to the kettle and boil some water. I think I will take Mia out somewhere today, maybe to the park. That is if she finally wakes up. Sleepy Bones! Yeah, I think I will take her to the park, which will be something different. I walk through to her room. Finally she has woken up. I pick her up and cosy her in for a minute. Well I suppose it’s time for breakfast.

[di marco]

great! :D awwwww sweet bless! more soon please

[the_watts_rule]

Here is the next part.

We are walking through the park and it is fairly busy. Seeing all these families brings a tear to my eye. Well I’ve got Mia and Mia has got me. I push the pram over to a picnic bench and get one of Mia’s toys out of her changing bag. I just sit and watch all the children playing. Mia will be like that someday, running about and banging into things. There is a flier sitting on the picnic table. I pick it up and read it.
"Baby and Toddler Group”
Come along to East Street’s Group.
Meet new friends and have lots of fun.
All new members come along on the 12th of January.
See you there.
East Street Elementary School
School Extension, Room 12
East Street
Hmm… Sounds interesting. I think I will take Mia along to that. It will be good for her to mix with other babies.

Comming up in the next 3 or 4 parts.

It's the anniversary of Dennis' death.

[Layne]

Awww this is fab, little mia awwwwwwww, glad she is all better more soon x

[Angeldelight]

awwwwwwwwww :wub:
pweaseeee psot more really soon

[Cornishbabe]

ive just read it the whole way through its a great script. keep up the good work:)

[di marco]

great! :D cant wait to read the next part. more soon please

[Rach33]

Just caught up this is amazing more soon

[the_watts_rule]

Thanks for all the comments :D Just a short part...

Part 10

December has seemed too flown in. It’s Christmas Eve today and I wish Dennis was here. Well I will hopefully have a nice Christmas without him. It’s Mia’s first Christmas!!!! I’m all excited! I’m just away to put her presents out and then get off to my bed. I know she is only a baby but I hope she likes her things. I bought her one of those baby leapads because they looked quite good. I go and get an empty vase that was sitting on the table and put water in it. I get the roses that I bought earlier and put them in the vase.
“Those are for you Dennis. Merry Christmas” I say.

[Layne]

Awwww her first xmas :wub: More soon x

[Angeldelight]

awwwwwwwwwwww :wub: it soooooo cute but sad
Pweaseeee psot more really soon

[di marco]

brill! :D awwwwwww how sweet! more soon please

[the_watts_rule]

Part 11
“Merry Christmas Mia!” I say even though Mia just looks at me.
“Look there is some presents over there!” I told her.
“Will Mummy help you open them?” I say.
Mia just babbles. I help her take off the wrapping paper.
“Aww look Mia… That should be fun” I say to her and she just carries on staring at me.
There were a few more presents for Mia, so I opened them for her. Mia has now stopped watching me like a hawk and is now playing with this cuddly toy bunny. I walked through to the kitchen to get a glass of orange juice and soon as I got the glass out, the doorbell rang. I went to answer the door and it was the lady from across the hall.
“Hey. Merry Christmas! This parcel came for you yesterday when you were out. So Ii thought I would bring it to you.” said Jennifer.
“Hi, Merry Christmas to you too. Thanks a lot” I replied.
“What’s wrong Sharon? Something happened?” she asked me.
“ No I’m fine. Just a bit tired that’s all” I replied.
“Ok. See you later Sharon. Bye” said Jennifer.
“Bye” I replied.
Of course I wasn’t ok, was I? Do people expect me to be ok on Christmas Day without my husband?. Dennis missing our daughters first Christmas. Dennis missing seeing Mia at all!! Ok.. Calm down Sharon, calm down.

[Rach33]

awwwww wow this is amazing I'm welling up poor Sharon please post more soon

[the_watts_rule]

Thanks for all the comments.

Part 12
I sit down and open this parcel. I wonder who it’s from. I open it and there is a card inside.

Dear Sharon

This is a little parcel just to say Merry Christmas.
Hope you are well and the little baby is well too. I hope to visit in a month or two but I am busy at the moment trying to get custody of Ben because Kathy and her husband died in a car crash. So I’m trying to get him from “Squeal Beale”.

Oh, Mum says hello and hopes you are well.
Grant says hello and get back to Walford.

Phil
X

I open the parcel and it’s a bracelet with a diamond in the middle. How nice of him, he didn’t need to send anything. There was also a book in there for Mia about a duck. She will like that. I seem to have my head in the clouds at the moment. I seem too busy , wishing Dennis was here, when I know it’s not going to happen unless he comes back from he dead like Dad (which ain’t gonna happen!!).

[di marco]

fab! :D awwwwwwwwww! more very soon please, cant wait

[Layne]

Aww Poor Sharon :( But bless Mia :p xxx

[the_watts_rule]

Thanks for the comments :D

Part 13

This is written in an email to Phil.

Hi Phil.

Thanks for the present. I really like the bracelet and Mia loves her book. I’m fine but a bit all over the place because it is the anniversary of Dennis’ death soon. Not been up to much, you? Shame to hear about Kathy. Poor Ben and Ian, they must be gutted. Fair enough if you want custody of Ben but Phil please don’t cause any trouble. Also don’t go flushing Ian’s head down the toilet, the poor man has been through enough. That will be nice if you come over to visit. Maybe you could bring Ben aswell?

Hi Peggy.

I’m fine thanks, yourself? I’m coping alright.

Hi Grant

I might come back to Walford someday, I can’t stay away for long. Grant, don’t go beating the living days lights out of Ian either.

Hope you all are well.

Love

Sharon xx

[Rach33]

awwwwww poor Sharon please post more soon I love this script

[di marco]

brill! :D this is great. more soon please, cant wait

[the_watts_rule]

Hey. I'm going on holiday tomorrow til Saturday so I won't be able to post anymore of this til then, sorry x. I doubt if I'l get online tomorrow morning but if I do I will post another part. I'l post another part later.

Part 14

It is the anniversary of Dennis’ death today. I am really quite upset but I’m not letting anyone know that. Nobody knows over here anyway. They think I’m just a single mother and the father done a runner. I don’t want anyone to know anyway unless it’s a good friend. I don’t need the sympathy. I lit a candle in his memory this morning. Mia doesn’t know anything about it. I’ll tell her when she is older. She can’t be asked to understand at a young age. I decide to take Mia for a walk in the park maybe lay some flowers. I go over and put the candle out. Don’t want the house to go on fire do we?
We are walking through the park, it is rather cold but is fairly busy. There is a few people here and there. In distance, I spot a nice tree and a picnic bench. We go over to it and I sit down. Such a quiet little spot. I take the flowers that I got on the way here out of the carrier bag.
“ Will we lay these for Daddy, Mia?” I say.
Mia just babbles. I knew she would, I wasn’t expecting an answer.
I lay the flowers just beside the tree.
“That looks nice, doesn’t it. Hope he likes them” I say.

[Skits]

this is excellent. can't wait til you post more.

[di marco]

great! :D this is so sweet! more soon please

[Layne]

Awww poor sharon :( More soon this is fab x

[Rach33]

wow amazing poor Sharon and poor Mia for when she's having to find out how her father died loving this very moving more soon

[the_watts_rule]

Hello. I won't be able to post a new part for a few days because both our computers at home need new virus scan software, so we won't be able to use them unti it gets delivered. It is should be getting delivered in the next few days. Sorry :) x

[Angeldelight]

wow wow wow. amazing, fantastic, fabulous. this is soooo well written. pwease post more soon

[the_watts_rule]

I'm back :)

Part 15

We haven’t been up to anything interesting. We went shopping the other day, been to the park a few times, just been in the house really. I bought some new clothes for Mia, so I was putting them in her wardrobe. The past few days have been boring really. Well today, I’m taking Mia to that baby and toddler group. I wonder what it’s like. I bet you’ll get at least one snob, who has to cause trouble. I get Mia all sorted in her pram, ready to go out. I go round the house and turn the television off, put out the candle, switch off the lights.
“Come on Mia, let’s go” I say.
We are walking all one of the streets and it’s a typical Monday morning. Quite a lot of cars, a lot of people and noise. I come towards the school and go in the gate.
“Mia, we’re here!” I say.

[Layne]

Yey your back :cheer: How is it going to be ? more soon x Fab btw x

[the_watts_rule]

How is what going to be?

Part 16

I walk into the room and it is filled with people. A lot of people infact. There was some sitting in the corner, some standing beside a table, some standing beside a cupboard and one lady standing by herself. I walk over and smile at the lady.
“Hello, I’m Sharon” I say
“Hi, I’m Chrissie, I’m new, you?” she replies.
Oh my god, she reminds me of some people, *shoves Chrissie, Sam and Zoë to the side of my mind for a minute*
“I’m new aswell. This is Mia” I say
“That’s good, I’m not the odd one out, this is Rachel. Are you married?” she replies.
Oh god, what I’m going to say. Say the truth Sharon but not too much , there might be troublemakers in here.
“Used to be, yourself?” I reply anxiously.
“Yeah we have been married for two years, aww, what happened if you don’t mid me asking?” she replies.
What will I say, What will I say. Better just too say the truth but not too loudly.
“He was murdered…” I whisper.
“Aww, you poor soul. I won’t tell anyone, I promise” said Chrissie.
“Thanks alot, much appreciated.” I reply.
Thank God she ain’t going to say anything.

[Layne]

How was the mother and toddler thing going to be :p
Chrissie seems nice ........ More soon x

[the_watts_rule]

How was the mother and toddler thing going to be :p
Chrissie seems nice ........ More soon x

I'm keeping it a secret, wait til she goes back :p

[di marco]

fab! :D hopefully nothing will go wrong, but why do i have a feeling that it will! more very soon please

[the_watts_rule]

Thanks for all the comments.

This part is dedicated to Layne, dimarco, Joel_Beckett_Lover and Angeldelight :)

Part 17

Had a nice time at the baby and toddler group. Made a new friend, her name reminds me of things. I will say no more. I’m away to see if I have any emails before I got to my bed.

You have one new email





Hello Sharon

Glad you are both well. Everyone is fine here. Courtney says hey (grant brought her with him). Glad you liked the presents. Well I was almost killed by Danny Moon, Grant an all. He has lost it I tell you. He was killed, dropped down dead, he was shot. Sorry to hear about Dennis’ anniversary. Hope you are ok. I’ll bring Ben over if Squeal Beale lets me!

Got to dash

Phil



Hello Phil

That’s good to hear. I don’t think I have met Courtney before but Hi Courtney x. Oh my God, you poor thing… Danny and Johnny are two peas from the same pod. Do you know who shot him? Well I took Mia to a baby and toddler group today and it went well. I was speaking to this lady for a while. She seemed nice. I am just going away to my bed, I’m really tired.

Night

Sharon
Xxx

[di marco]

fab! :D loving this script, its really good. more very soon please, cant wait


This part is dedicated to Layne, dimarco, Joel_Beckett_Lover and Angeldelight :)

ooooo its dedicated to me! :)

[the_watts_rule]

fab! :D loving this script, its really good. more very soon please, cant wait



ooooo its dedicated to me! :)

I thought I would dedicate it to the regular replyers. :)

[the_watts_rule]

Part 18

I go in the baby and toddler group door and once again it’s a busy atmosphere. I take Mia out of her pram and go to sit down.
“Hello” I say
“Um…. Hi” says the lady in the corner.
The room falls silent. What have I done?
“Steven bought me a bracelet yesterday” said the one in the corner.
She sounds like trouble….
“Ooooo…. How lovely Susan” said this other woman.
“Husbands……..What would we do without them?” she sniggers. “Oh, I’m sorry, you don’t have a husband do you?” she says.
Ooooo. She is asking for trouble.
“Used to you” I say.
“I heard he was murdered, how tragic!” she laughs.
“Just shut your mouth” I shout.
“Perhaps he was getting himself in to bother” she shouts.
“Keep you nose out of my business. Where are you hearing this from” I shout.
“Word gets around darling, word gets around” she laughs.
Great, I’m getting humiliated and at this rate the world will know my business.
“Sharon, I didn’t tell her anything, I promise” shouts Chrissie.
“God, you Chrissie’s you are all the same” I shout back.
“She told me everything, oh wait, did she?” she laughs.
“Go back to your dog kennel and chew on a bone. It might break your precious teeth” I shout furiously.
I collect my things, put Mia in her pram and leave.

[Layne]

Go sharon, what b****s!!
And thanks for the dedi more soon x

[di marco]

brill! :D awwwww poor sharon, theyre all so mean! more very soon please, cant wait

[Angeldelight]

What a B***H! poor Sharon, doesn't anything go her way? post more soon. i'm addicted to this fic.

[the_watts_rule]

Thank you for all the comments. :D Hope you all like the next bit. It's pretty short though :D

Part 19

I storm into our apartment, I’m furious! How dare she stick her big nose into my business! I just want to phone Chrissie and get her bumped off aswell! Nah, come to think of it, I couldn’t do that. I don’t think Chrissie would want two murder charges! I’m so angry! I go and put Mia in her cot for a nap. The doorbell goes and I go and answer it.
“Hello, are you Sharon Rickman?” she says.
“Yes, who are you” I reply.
“I’m Sandra Allen. Johnny Allen’s sister” she says.

[di marco]

great! :D omg johnny allens sister! more very soon please, cant wait

[Angeldelight]

What the F**k!!! what the hell does she want?!?
i :wub: this fic. pretty pwease psot more really soon

[Layne]

What Johnny Allen's sister :eek: What does she want more soon?! x

[Footie_Chick]

Oh my ...... I can't wait to find out more, what does she want!!!!

[the_watts_rule]

Part 20

My mouth drops with horror.
“ Don’t panic hun, May I come in?” she says.
“Eh, yeah, um, no, yeah, um” I’m speechless.
She pushes past me. Why did I let her in?
“ Excuse me! “ I shout
“Oh, sorry” she replies.
“Why on earth are you here” I say.
“Johnny wants to give you money, he is really sorry” she says.
“Sorry ?!?” I laugh.
“Yep, that is the word” she replies.
“ A hardman sorry, excuse someone who thinks they are hard!” I laugh.
“Don’t talk about my brother like that!” she shouts.
“He is a dweeb Sandra, a complete utter dweeb!” I shout.
“I came to give you some money, now will you hurry up and take it ?!?” she shouts.
“ I don’t want his filthy money. You can’t even force it into my hand” I yell.
“ He offers an apology and you slam it into his face!” she shouts at me.
“ Well how would you like it if your husband was killed. You go and explain to my little daughter why she doesn’t have a Dad. I won’t accept his apology over my dead body!” I shout.
Oh dear, I think I’m getting a bit hysterical.
“ Johnny didn’t kill him. “ she blurts out.

[di marco]

brill! :D awwwww poor sharon. more very soon please

[the_watts_rule]

Since I hadn't posted any of this script since last Thursday, I will post another part in an hour or so.

[di marco]

Since I hadn't posted any of this script since last Thursday, I will post another part in an hour or so.

ooooooooooo yay thanks lol! :D

[the_watts_rule]

Your welcome :)

Part 21

“What on earth did you just say” I shout
“Johnny didn’t kill him. He just organised a hitman. Your darling husband left him for the dead.” she shouts in my face.
“ Your brother sent out various threats to me while I was pregnant. He deserved what he got”
“Oh what a shame, you can’t take a threat” she laughs.
“ Try getting pushed up against a brick wall!!” I yell.
“ I heard that you were your Dad’s little princess. I heard he was killed an all! “ she shouts.
“ Shut up, just shut up. I want to know who killed my Dennis! “ I yell.
“ Well you asked, it was Danny Moon darling” she says quietly.

[di marco]

fab! :D omg what a bitch! sharon chuck her out of your house! more very soon please, cant wait

[the_watts_rule]

I might post more tonight, if i get around to it. I won't be able to post a part tomorrow but I will on wednesday.

[Emma-Lou]

This is great she is total horrible can't wait to read more soon :)

[Angeldelight]

WOW wow i can't say ias expecting that. pretty pwease post more really soon

[the_watts_rule]

Thanks so much for the comments, I really do appreciate them.

Part 22

“ Well you learn something new every day, don’t you” I shout.
I just want to cry but I can’t, not in front of her.
“You do, don’t you. Don’t go after him he is dead” she smirks.
“Just aswell the bloke wouldn’t still be alive after I had finished with him” I shout.
“ Like father, like daughter” she laughs.
“Just get out. GET OUT!!” I yell.
I hear Mia starting to cry.
“ You have woke my daughter up an all. Now GET OUT!!” I yell.
“ I have woke her up to reality” she laughs.
I grab her arm and drag her to the door.
“ Stay out of my life!!” I shout.
I push her out the door and slam the door shut.
I walk through into the living room trying to control my anger. I notice she had left the money sitting on my coffee table. She has some nerve. I walk over to the window and see her walking towards her car.
”Take your money an all!” I shout.
I throw the money out of the window and I watch as it floats down to the ground.

[di marco]

great! :D awwwww poor sharon! more very soon please

[the_watts_rule]

I have now finished writing this script. I have 6 more parts to post. I will try my best to post them at least daily. Maybe 2 parts a day. :)

Look out for the sequel to Mia is my future - Making Dad Proud.

Comming to soapboards soon.....

[di marco]

I have now finished writing this script. I have 6 more parts to post. I will try my best to post them at least daily. Maybe 2 parts a day. :)

Look out for the sequel to Mia is my future - Making Dad Proud.

Comming to soapboards soon.....

oh cool sounds good cant wait! :D

[the_watts_rule]

oh cool sounds good cant wait! :D

The new script will hopefully start sometime next week. :)

[the_watts_rule]

Just a short part.

Part 23

I walk through to Mia’s room and I pick her up. Poor thing, she got a fright from me shouting so loudly.
“ I’m sorry baby, didn’t me to upset you. Mummy was just getting an evil lady out of the house” I say softly.
“Mu-m-nny” stutters Mia.
I look astonished.
“What was that sweetie?!” I reply with shock.
“Mu-mm-y” she says.
I felt so touched. She said Mummy, she said Mummy!!
“ Aren’t you a clever girl!” I exclaim.
Mia just babbles, as usual.

[di marco]

great! :D awwwwwww bless her! more very soon please, cant wait

[the_watts_rule]

Part 24

I manage to get Mia settled again. I walk into the living room. Dennis picture is sitting on the coffee table. My eyes fill up with tears, I should be happy, Mia has said her first word. *sigh* I just can’t, that evil cow has got me in an extremely bad mood. I sit down and I just can’t control my tears. My tears start flowing out and keep on flowing.
“ Dennis, why did you have to go.. Mia said her first word today, her first word. You should have been there. I want to fight for what is right, babe. I will do the Rickman name proud. If it’s Mia or myself, we will make this family name proud” I say

[the_watts_rule]

Part 25

I pick up the phone and dial Phil’s number.

“Hello, Phil Mitchell here” he says.
“ Phil…” I can’t control my tears again.
“What’s wrong Sharon had something happened ?!? “ exclaims Phil
“Johnny Allen’s sister turned up and hurled a mouthful of abuse at me then tried to offer me money then told me who killed Dennis” I say.
“ Sharon, don’t cry love” he says.
“Phil, I just can’t take it anymore” I cry.
“ Sharon, calm down, would you like me to come over and see you ?” says Phil
“ Phil, I just can’t handle this anymore. I just want Dennis back, my Dennis, bring Dennis back !” I scream.
The tears are dripping off my face.
“ Sharon, I know you want Dennis back but I can’t do anything about it. I would if I could” says Phil.
“ I want Dennis, I need him, I need someone to keep me warm at night, someone to snuggle up and watch TV with, I need Dennis back, just bring him back!” I cry.
“ Sharon, take care of Mia for Dennis, do it for Dennis” replies Phil.
“ I can’t Phil, I need him here with me. I have lost everyone I have ever loved. Mia is all I have left.” I cry.
“ Sharon, I can’t leave you in such a state like this, I will get the next flight over” says Phil.
“ No Phil, don’t” I say.
“ Sharon, I feel it’s my duty to make sure you are ok.” says Phil.
“ Dennis has to look after me, my Dennis, I want Dennis, and I want Dennis to look after me” I cry.
“ Sharon, you have Mum in tears, I am coming on the next flight.” says Phil.
“ No” I say.
“ What?!?” replies Phil.
“ I have had enough of America. Nobody likes me, I have no friends here, and people are so stuck up. I’m coming back to Walford” I say.

[di marco]

great! :D awwwwwwww poor sharon! more very soon please, cant wait

[the_watts_rule]

Part 26

“ Sharon, what did you say ?!? “ says Phil.
“ I said I’m coming back to Walford. America can get stuffed.” I say.
“ I’m more than happy to see you back, Sharon” says Phil.
“ That’s good then, I want to come home” I reply
“ Sharon, are you sure about this ?” says Phil.
I wipe my tears.
“ Certain , absolutely positive” I reply.
“ Thinking of Walford makes me think of people I love. There’s Mum, Dad and there… there..there is Dennis” I stutter. I burst into tears.
“ Sharon please don’t cry” says Phil.
“Phil are you crying ?!? “ I exclaim.
“ Um, yeah. You have made me cry Sharon, I don’t like seeing you upset “ cries Phil.
“ I will see you soon then” I say
“ Take care Sharon “ says Phil
“ I will” I reply

[di marco]

great! :D more very soon please

[the_watts_rule]

Sorry I haven't posted any of this a a while.


Part 27

I look back on my empty flat. This place has caused me nothing but trouble. I came to start a new life here. How could I have been happy without the one thing that I love. Dennis, I will never stop loving you, you will always be in my heart..
“ Come on Mia, let’s go” I say.
I pick up Mia’s changing bag. Hanging out of it is the teddy bear that Dennis bought for our baby. Sharon, don’t cry. I carefully put the teddy bear safely into my hand luggage.
“ Mummy” says Mia.
“ Mia and Mummy are going on an adventure. Won’t it be fun? “ I say holding back my tears.
I walk through the hall and close the door behind. Goodbye America, Hello Walford.

[di marco]

great! :D wonder what its going to be like back in walford. more very soon please

[the_watts_rule]

Here is the last part :(

Just a little speech. I would like to say thank you to all the people that have commented on this fiction and I hope you have all enjoyed reading it. Don't forget, Sequel to Mia is my future, Comming soon.... :)

Dedicated to everyone who is commented, Thanks :D

Part 28

I step out of the black cab, Walford doesn’t look any different. Same smell, same houses, same atmosphere you get the drift. There is new people, I don’t recognise them. Where has the community gone. There is some place, I would like to go before I show my face.
I walk into Walford Cemetery. I sure this place has got fuller. People are always dying these days. I walk over to Dennis grave. Looks just like it did a year ago.
“ Baby, it’s Sharon.” I say.
“ I brought Mia with me, just to say hello”
” She doesn’t understand any of this Dennis. Dennis, I really miss you, I need you here” I say.
I feel the tears trickling down my face.
“ I need you here to keep me warm at night, I want us to snuggle up in front of the TV again. Dennis, I miss these days *sigh* I wish you would come back to me. “ I cry.
“ I promise you I will make you proud. Raise your little girl to the best she can be. Dennis, you will always be in my heart. I love you for forever, I mean it!”

[di marco]

fab! :D awwwww how sweet! cant wait til the sequel

[Emma-Lou]

That was a fab last part it has been great all the way through i really like it well done.Can't wait for the sequel :)

[Angeldelight]

more more more :thumbsup: more more more:thumbsup: pretty pwease