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bakedbean
03-04-2006, 16:04
SEASON 4 EPISODE 1

THE HOSPITAL/WARD C INTERN NIGHT

BROOKE IS UNCONCIOUS IN HER BED SHE IS ON A LIFE SUPPORT MACHINE, JENNY AND VIV ARE WATCHING HERE, STEVE COMES IN WITH TWO COFFEES HE HANDS THEM TO JENNY AND VIV.

VIV: Thank you
JENNY: Ta
STEVE: Is she going to be ok
VIV: We dont know yet Steve

ANDY WALKS IN LOOKING TIRED, HE WALKS OVER AND SEES HIS LITTLE GIRL ON THE LIFE SUPPORT MACHINE.

ANDY: Oh no...my little baby girl...my princess
VIV: Andy i think it is best if you sit down love...the doctors have done some tests and they need to operate on her as soon as possible
ANDY: Its that bloody Ramsays fault i swear if i get my hands on him i will...

EXETER STREET EXTERN NIGHT

PAUL IS LAY ON THE FLOOR IT IS STILL RAINING, BLOOD IS RUNNING FROM HIS MOUTH DOWN THE DRAIN. SHAWN COMES OUT NOT KNOWING WHAT HAS HAPPENED HE IS BRINGING THE SIGN IN AND SEES PAUL. SHAWN RUNS OVER TO HIM.

SHAWN: Paul...Paul

SHAWN NOTICES THE BLOOD

SHAWN: Oh god

SHAWN RUNS INTO THE LION.

THE HOSPITAL/WARD C INTERN NIGHT

THE MACKLIN FAMILY ARE WATCHING OVER BROOK, A DOCTOR WALKS UP TO THEM WITH TWO NURSES.

ANDY: Doctor
DOCTOR: Mr macklin...erm we are going to have to operate immediatly
ANDY: Ok but she is going to be fine right
DOCTOR: I cant say but we will do are best i promise you that

THE NURSES WHEEL BROOKE OUT OF THE WARD THE MACKLIN FAMILY FOLLOW. THEY WALK WITH HER UNTIL THEY ARE STOPPED AT THE THAERTER. ANDY TURNS ROUND TO SEE PAUL BEING RUSHED IN BY PAREMEDICS HE LOOKS SHOCKED TO SEE PAUL, SOPHIE AND LEXI ARE FOLLOWING BEHINED.


OUTSIDE RICS FLAT EXTERN NIGHT

A TAXI PULLS UP AND SHARON STEPS OUT WITH HER SUITCASE, SHE PAYS THE TAXI DRIVER AND THE TAXI DRIVES OFF. SHARON LOOKS AROUND AND THEN RINGS RICS DOOR BELL...RIC ANSWERS THE DOOR AND SEES SHARON.

RIC: Sugar what are you doing here
SHARON: Oh dad you were right he is evil have you got room for me please
RIC: Of course i have sugar

SHARON HUGS RIC WHO SMIRKS AND THEY WALK INTO THE FLAT SHUTTING THE DOOR BEHINED.

THE HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

THE MACKLINS ARE WAITING, JENNY IS READING A MAGAZINE AND STEVE IS PLAYING ON HIS GAMEBOY, VIV AND ANDY ARE TALKING.

ANDY: Why could you not tell us mum...tell us that you had cancer why
VIV: I did not want to upset you
ANDY: Upset me...my daughter is fighting for her life in there becuse of this becuse of that Ramsay
JENNY: I wonder what happened to him
ANDY: I hope he is suffering

THE DOCTOR WALKS IN.

DOCTOR: I am afraid there were some complications and we are going to have to operate in the morning
ANDY: What complications
DOCOTR: We fear that your daughter may have brain damage
JENNY: Brain damage no not are little girl please no

VIV HUGS JENNY AS SHE BEGINS TO CRY ANDY LOOKS IN COMPLETE SHOCK.

Bryan
03-04-2006, 17:47
Welcome back!!!

Good opener... i hope Paul makes it!!!!

Keep them coming

Exeter: Best Soap On The Boards!!!

big bro fan
03-04-2006, 20:48
:cheer: wow EXETER is back and better than ever i cant wait to really get into this go BakedBean :cheer:

bakedbean
05-04-2006, 16:25
EPISODE 4.2

THE HOSPITAL/WING E INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS ON A LIFE MACHINE LEXI AND SOPHIE ARE WATCHING OVER HIM. A DOCTOR WALKS IN.

LEXI: Doctor
DOCTOR: Mrs Ramsay please sit down
LEXI: What is it doctor is Paul going to be ok
DOCTOR: Well the operation went well and we removed the bullets he is stable but we need to keep him on the life support machine for at least another 24 hours just to be sure
SOPHIE: But he will wake wont he
DOCTOR: Its hard to say at this time but it is looking good fingers crossed
SOPHIE: Well what if he does not wake up
DOCTOR: We will cross that bridge if we get to it.

THE LION/KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

LUCY IS BUSY MAKING SOME BREAD ROLLS WHEN SHAWN WALKS IN.

LUCY: Oh hello love
SHAWN: Any news from the hospital
LUCY: Well Viv rang and said that they need to operate on Brooke again
SHAWN: And Paul
LUCY: I dont know why are you so intrested one minute you are enemys the next thing you are saving his life
SHAWN: Come on mum he was shot
LUCY: Yes well i dare say he did not deserve it
SHAWN: Mum
LUCY: Well lets face it he told a packed pub that Viv had cancer in front her family and friends embarrising her i mean what sort of person would do such a thing like that aye

THE HOSPITAL/WAITING ROOM INTERN MORNING

THE MACKLINS ARE SITTING DOWN, STEVE AND JENNY ARE ASLEEP, VIV AND ANDY ARE TALKING.

ANDY: So when is your operation...oh no please tell me that you are having an operation to get rid of it
VIV: Im not sure yet Andy
ANDY: What the flammin hell do you mean you are not sure yet for god sake this thing is going to kill you if you dont get that thing out of you
VIV: Well maybe i dont want to go under the knife maybe i am scared ok ever thought about that
ANDY: [REALISING THAT HE HAS UPSET HIS MUM] Im sorry...its just that i dont want to lose you
VIV: We all have to die sometime and maybe well maybe i am ready to die
ANDY: Please mum think about this...we cant live without you mum please have the operation
VIV: I will think about it
ANDY: Thankyou

THE HOSPITAL/WING E INTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL IS IN THE BED, SOPHIE AND LEXI ARE NOT THERE. ANDY IS WATCHING THROUGH THE WINDOW LOOKING ANGRY AT PAUL...ANDY SLOWLY WALKS IN AND UP TO PAUL.

ANDY: Of all the things you have done in your life Ramsay this is the worst...i hope that you are in so much pain i hope you are feeling what my baby girl is feeling Paul...i know you can hear me and i hope you die in here and i hope you rot in hell.

ANDY LOOKS AT THE LIFE SUPPORT MACHINE AND LOOKS AT THE TUBE IN PAULS MOUTH.

ANDY: Well maybe i will help you

ANDY GETS A SINISTER LOOK ON HIS FACE AND HE SLOWLY TAKES THE TUBE OUT OF PAULS MOUTH...ANDY LEAVES QUICKLY BUT AS HE DOES PAULS LEFT HAND SLOWLY MOVES AND HE CLENCHES HIS FIST...PAUL SLOWLY OPENS HIS EYES AND SMILES IN AN EVIL WAY.

bakedbean
11-04-2006, 14:11
4.3

HOSPITAL CORRIDOR INTERN AFTERNOON

ANDY IS WALKING DOWN THE CORRIDOR LOOKING PLEASED WITH HIMSELF, NURSES AND DOCTORS RUSH PAST HIM AS THEY ENTER PAULS ROOM. ANDY TURNS ROUND AND LOOKS STUNNED TO SEE PAUL BEING WHEELED OUT IN A WHEEL CHAIR AWAKE. PAUL NOTICES ANDY AND SMIRKS, ANDY KICKS THE BIN NEXT TO HIM AND STORMS INTO THE WAITING ROOM.

GLASS JAMES OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

JAMES IS INTERVIEWING A YOUNG ATTRACTIVE WOMAN.

JAMES: So Courtney tell me a bit about yourself
COURTNEY: Well i am from essex and i have worked in clubs before
JAMES: But have you ever managed a club
COURTNEY: No i havent
JAMES: So you have never managed a club but you think that you could handle the job...you will be working here for at least a month non stop while i am away
COURTNEY: It will be a challenge...but i like challenges
JAMES: Really...it is going to be hard work
COURTNEY: Im not afraid of hard work
JAMES: Well thats good... you have the job
COURTNEY: You mean it
JAMES: Yes you start next week
COURTNEY: Oh thank you so much

THE HOSPITAL/ DOCTORS OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

INSPECTOR GROUSE IS QUESTIONING PAUL.

GROUSE: And you can not think of any one who could have done this
PAUL: Well i have my suspicions
GROUSE: Well that is what i am here for
PAUL: James Perry ring a bell
GROUSE: He is the owner of the local nightclub where you live...why would he shoot you
PAUL: Well i own that complex and lets just say me and James have had are diffrence...come on Inspector sureley you have heard the stories about him and what he has done in the past
GROUSE: Yes but i dont really believe them...we have no evidence to prove any of this
PAUL: Oh come on Inspector its all true and i am sure he shot me
GROUSE: Well thank you for your time.

INSPECTOR GROUSE LEAVES THE OFFICE.

HOSPITAL CORRIDOR INTERN AFTERNOON

GROUSE IS WALKING WITH A FEMALE POLICE WOMAN.

POLICE WOMAN: Where to now sir
GROUSE: Glass we are going to pay a visit to Mr Perry

GROUSE AND THE POLICE WOMAN WALK DOWN THE CORRIDOR EXITING THE HOSPITAL. LEXI WHEELS PAUL OUT OF THE OFFICE JUST AS ANDY COMES OUT OF THE WAITING ROOM. PAUL SIGNALS HIS MUM TO STOP AND ANDY STOPS AS WELL.

PAUL: Mum if youo could just give us a minute
LEXI: Right ok

LEXI WALKS OFF.

PAUL: Let me just tell you Andy i heard evreything you said and if i did not know any better i would have thought you shot me
ANDY: Dont be so stupid Paul if i had done it i would have made sure you never woke again
PAUL: You will get whats coming to you Andy

ANDY BEGINS TO WALK OFF

ANDY: Oh yeah and what are you going to do
PAUL: Just you wait

ANDY LAUGHS AS HE WALKS OFF...PAUL IS LOOKING FURIOUS.

GLASS/JAMES OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

JAMES IS TALKING TO GROUSE AND THE POLICE WOMAN.

GROUSE: Can you tell us where you were the night of Mr Ramsays shooting
JAMES: I was here i have a club to run
GROUSE: Do you have any one that can say that you were here all night
JAMES: Well no i was in my office but i have video proof that i was here if you want to see it
GROUSE: We will take it with us
JAMES: Your waisting your time you know Inspector...Ramsay has had it in for me since the day his sister left me and so he will try and frame me for it
GROUSE: Well if this evidence proves that you were here all night then you will be left out of this investigation

THE HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM INTERN EVENING

THE MACKLIN FAMILY ARE SITTING DOWN ALL LOOKING TIRED, ANDY IS LOOKING OUT OF THE WINDOW WHEN THE DOCTOR WALKS IN.

ANDY: Well is she going to be ok
DOCTOR: The operation was sucessful
VIV: Oh thank god
JENNY: When can we see her
DOCTOR; In the morning

bakedbean
18-04-2006, 20:44
4.4

THE HOSPITAL WARD E INTERN MORNING

THE MACKLIN FAMILY ARE WATCHING OVER BROOKE WHO IS ASLEEP...BROOKE SLOWLY WAKES NOTICING EVREYONE SHE SMILES.

ANDY: Hello darlin
JENNY: Oh..morning...dont ever do that to us again
VIV: Yes you gave us quite a scare
BROOKE: Evreyone get off my case...man i have just woken up

THE MACKLINS ALL LAUGH

BROOKE: Gran
VIV: Yes sweetheart
BROOKE: You are going to have the operation arent you to get rid of that thing
VIV: You mean my cancer...[VIV LOOKS AROUND TO THE FAMILY] Yes...yes i will

THE MACKLINS LOOK PLEASED AND RELIVED AT THIS NEWS.

GLASS/JAMES OFFICE INTERN MORNING

JAMES IS LOCKING UP HIS FILING CABINET, HE SWITCHES OFF HIS COMPUTER AND PICKS UP HIS SUITCASE HE TAKES ONE LAST LOOK AROUND AND WALKS OUT.

THE HOSPITAL PAULS ROOM INTERN MORNING

SOPHIE IS TALKING TO PAUL, LEXI IS NOT IN THE ROOM.

SOPHIE: I promise dad that whoever did this to you is going to pay and trust me i will find out who did this
PAUL: No Sophie i dont want you to run into any sort of trouble do you understand me
SOPHIE: But dad
PAUL: Promise me that you will not go looking for whoever did this to me
SOPHIE: Yeah ok

THE PARK EXTERN MORNING

TRUDY IS WITH STACEY WHO IS PUSHING BOBBY ON THE SWINGS. THEY ARE CHATTING ABOUT PAUL.

TRUDY: It is awful what happened even if it was Paul Ramsay
STACEY: I think he deserved what happned to that evil man
TRUDY: Look i know you still blame him for The Coach crash and evreything but no one deserves to be shot
STACEY: Dont they Trudy

GLASS INTERN AFTERNOON

COURTNEY IS ON HER PHONE IN THE CORRIDOR SHE IS SLOWLY WALKING UP TO JAMES OFFICE.

COURTNEY: Yeah...look im there now...yes i will find it...dont worry evreything is going to work out perfectley.

COURTNEY SMERKS AND PUTS THE PHONE DOWN SHE SLOWLY WALKS INTO JAMES OFFICE MAKING SURE NO ONE IS WATCHING.

bakedbean
19-04-2006, 09:57
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big bro fan
19-04-2006, 20:24
Checked out the web site it's cool please post when you have done anything else to it. So we know to check it out.

Abi
20-04-2006, 20:53
Just made your banner for Exeter, as i promised on msn. Check out my banners thread to grab it :) Keep up the good work :D

bakedbean
22-04-2006, 19:08
4.5
OUTSIDE THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD EXTERN MORNING

LEXI AND SOPHIE WALK UP THE PATH AND UNLOCK THE DOOR PAUL FOLLOWS.

LEXI: Are you sure you dont want to come and stay back at my place Paul
PAUL: No mum we will be fine...honestley there is no need to worry
LEXI: Well if you are sure
PAUL: I am more then sure im positive so stop worrying about nothing

PAUL, LEXI AND SOPHIE WALK IN.

OUTSIDE VIVS EXTERN MORNING

A ROUGH LOOKING MAN WITH A BAG OVER HIS SHOULDERS KNOCKS AT VIVS DOOR, TRUDY ANSWERS.

VADER: Hello Trudy

TRUDY LOOKS STUNNED AND SLAMS THE DOOR SHUT IN VADERS FACE. VADER KNOCKS ON THE DOOR AGAIN.

INSIDE VIVS INTERN MORNING

TRUDY IS SLUMMPED DOWN BY THE DOOR LOOKING WORRIED. THE KNOCKING ON THE DOOR HAS STOPPED SHE SLOWLY STEPS UP AND PEERS OUT OF THE WINDOW, VADER IS NOT THERE. TRUDY SIGHS WITH RELIEF, HOWEVER THE BACK DOOR OPENS AND VADER WALKS IN.

VADER: Now thats no way to treat your husband now is it Trudy
TRUDY: Ex-husband if you dont mind, what do you want.
VADER: I have come back for you Trudy
TRUDY: What do you mean
VADER: Trudy all those years inside i had a lot of time to think, and i realise that what i did to you and the kids was wrong and i want to apolize.
TRUDY: Well you just have now if you dont mind i have things to do
VADER: Your always busy, i remeber when we were married you were always doing something, potting about.
TRUDY: What are you trying to do Vader your not wanted here.
VADER: Oh come on Trudy, i know you still love me
TRUDY: Love you...love you never not again, you were a mistake apart from you being the father of my children of course.
VADER: Now thats not very nice is it Trudy
TRUDY: Why what are you going to do hit me agian, well go on then.
VADER: Im a change man Trudy...i have found god.
TRUDY: [LAUGHS] You a born again christian i dont think so Vader and why would that convince me that you are changed...well.

JILLS CAFE INTERN MORNING

ALAN WALKS IN WITH HIS PAPER HE LOOKS AROUND TO SEE THAT THERE IS NO ONE ELSE AROUND HE LOOKS SHOCKED.

ALAN: Where is evreyone Jill
JILL: Bussiness has been slow ever since Paul opened up that Wine Bar i can't compete with there prices and there food. Your my first customer in two days.
ALAN: You cant be serious
JILL: I am Alan, if i dont get any customers soon im going to have to sell up.
ALAN: Well why dont you have a word with Paul about this i mean this is his Complex he will understand.
JILL: Paul Ramsay understanding oh come on Alan.
ALAN: Well i have heard he is going soft after evreything that has happened.
JILL: You really think so
ALAN: Well its worth a go now aint it.
JILL: Yeah...i might just do that Alan, here [PASSES HIM A MUFFIN] On the house

JILL TURNS OFF THE LIGHTS AND ALAN WALKS OUT WITH HER WHILE EATING THE MUFFIN.

INSIDE VIVS INTERN MORNING

SAME AS BEFORE.

VADER; Trudy i have changed...Trudy i am telling you the truth
TRUDY: First time for evreything
VADER: Trudy why wont you believe me
TRUDY: What you want me to believe you...oh dont make me laugh Vader for 32 years you lied to me day in day out. Lie after lie...woman after woman.
VADER: Trudy please dont wind me up im begging you all i want is for you to forgive me and realise that you still love me i know you do deep down
TRUDY: Im sick of this it has been over for fifteen bloody years i am married again and for once i am happy.

VADER GRABS HOLD OF TRUDYS ARMS

TRUDY: Let go of me...let go of me
VADER: Not until you admit the truth
TRUDY: You want the truth...I love Alan with all my heart more than i ever loved you

THE RAMSAYS LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

JILL WALKS IN AND BEGINS TO TALK TO PAUL.

PAUL: Jill how can i help you
JILL: Well Paul ever since you opened that wine bar...well...well i have been struggling with evreything
PAUL: Well Jill can we talk about this tommorow becuse i will be checking your books and if it is not good then well we have a problem now dont we.

OUTSIDE THE MACKLINS EXTERN MORNING

THE MACKLINS ARE IN THE GARDEN GETTING READY TO WALK INTO THE HOUSE, ALAN WALKS UP TO THEM.

ANDY: Alan
ALAN: How are you all
JENNY: We are fine thanks
VIV: Tell Trudy to put that kettle on i will be round soon

THEY HEAR A SCREAM FROM VIVS HOUSE.

ALAN: TRUDY
VIV: Andy come on

ANDY, VIV AND ALAN RUN ACROSS TO VIVS.
VIV AND ALAN BEGIN LOOKING INTO THE WINDOW AND ANDY KICKS DOWN THE DOOR THEY RUN IN.

VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

THE DOOR BURTS OPEN AND VIV,ANDY AND ALAN WALK IN THEY SEE VADER CLENCHING HIS FISTS TRUDY IS LOOKING SCARED.

ALAN: Who the hell are you and what are you doing with my wife
VIV: I will tell you who he is Vader
VADER: Hello Viv nice to see you
ALAN: Who the hell
VIV: Are you going to tell him Vader or shall i...hes Trudys ex
ALAN: You...you son of a bitch

ALAN GRABS VADER BY THE T-SHIRT

ALAN: You can get out and come anywhere near my wife again and i will kill you
VADER: Get your hands off me you daft old fool

VADER PUSHES ALAN TO THE GROUND ANDY IS READY TO PUNCH VADER BUT VIV STOPS HIM

VIV: Dont give him the satisfaction Andy please
VADER: Well i guess i should get going
VIV: Oh i think you should and you come anywhere near my sister or Exeter Street again and so help me god i will ring the police
VADER: The police what are they going to do
VIV: If i am not mistaken you have only just got out of prison so...
VADER: Alright...fine i will leave but trust me i will be back and when i do you will regret it
ALAN: Get out and dont ever come back

VADER WINKS AT TRUDY AND LAUGHS AS HE LEAVES.

bakedbean
25-04-2006, 19:49
4.6

THE WATER FOUNTIN/COMPLEX EXTERN MORNING

COURTNEY IS WALKING UP TO GLASS WHEN HER MOBILE RINGS SHE GETS HER PHONE AND ANSWERS IT.

COURTNEY: Hello...yes i have it...today...well yeah if your sure...the canal at twelve ok i will see you then.

COURTNEY PUTS HER PHONE BACK INTO HER HANDBAG AND OPENS THE DOORS TO GLASS AND WALKS IN.

VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

TRUDY,ALAN, VIV AND STACEY ARE ALL EATING THERE BREAKFAST.

ALAN: What did he think he was doing just walking in like that
TRUDY: Alan can we drop it please i dont want to talk about it
ALAN: No Trudy i wont just drop it i think we should ring the police
VIV: He is right Trudy if we dont do something well i dont want to even think about it
STACEY: Who is he anyway
TRUDY: He is my ex-husband look i dont want the police involved or anything like that he wont come back
ALAN: Oh Trudy please he will come back
VIV: Trudy if you dont then i will
TRUDY: Look i dont see what the fuss is all about Vader is gone and he will not come back
STACEY: What a stupid name it sounds like that weird guy off that movie whats it called
TRUDY: Star wars yes it is... Its not his real name just his mum called him that becuse he was always in trouble at school or something
VIV: Stop trying to get off the subject Trudy are you going to ring the police or not?
TRUDY: Fine you want me to ring the police i will ring the police if it makes you happy
ALAN: Trudy we are only worried for you sweetheart
TRUDY: I know you are but i dont like all the fuss

AMYS AND ROBERTS FLAT/BEDROOM MORNING

AMY AND ROBERT ARE LYING IN EACH OTHERS ARMS IN BED THEY ARE TALKING.

AMY: Hey i was thinking what about if i ask Shawn if we can have Kristen for the weekend
ROBERT: Amy you know me and children dont mix
AMY: Oh please she has not slept her since i moved here
ROBERT: Shawn may say yes but i doubt that mum will agree
AMY: Well it is not up to her is it
ROBERT: Come on Amy mum controls Shawn
AMY: Well we shall see wont we
ROBERT: Good luck

AMY GETS OUT OF BED AND AS SHE DOES ROBERT SLAPS HER BUM

AMY: Cheeky

AMY FALLS BACK INTO BED AND GOES UNDER THE COVERS WITH ROBERT AND WE HEAR HER LAUGH.

THE BOOKIES/PAULS OFFICE INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS GOING THROUGH THE CAFES BOOKS, JILL IS SAT AT THE OTHER SIDE OF THE DESK.

PAUL: This does not look good Jill
JILL: Look Paul i have told you why its becuse of the wine bar selling food, im a cafe and i only do simple food and Paul you are ruining me
PAUL: Well you do know Jill that if you can not afford it i will have to shut you down and judging by the books it is what i will have to do
JILL: No Paul you dont understand
PAUL: I understand alright Jill its just i dont think you do, you have one week to improve or i will shut you down
JILL: But if you shut me down i will not have a home or anything
PAUL: Well im sorry but thats my only option

VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

VIV IS SAT ON THE CHAIR AND TRUDY JUST COMES OFF OF THE PHONE.

VIV: Well what did they say
TRUDY: They are going to come round for a statement

THE CANAL EXTERN AFTERNOON

A MAN IS SITTING ON THE BENCH WAITING FOR SOMEONE, COURTNEY WALKS DOWN THE STEPS AND UP TO THE MAN.

COURTNEY: Hello Nick
NICK: Well have you got it or what
COURTNEY: Well that depends on what i get out of it
NICK: Look you give me that and well lets just say you will never have to work again

COURTNEY LOOKS AT NICK FOR A MINUTE AND SHE THEN PICKS A FILE OUT OF HER BAG AND HANDS IT OVER TO NICK

NICK: Well it looks like project 98 is about to begin

COURTNEY AND NICK LAUGH.

bakedbean
01-05-2006, 10:30
4.7

THE LION/BAR INTERN MORNING

LUCY AND VIV ARE PREPARING TO OPEN UP THEY ARE TALKING...

LUCY: So what did the Police say
VIV: They already wanted him for questioning over a robberey a week ago and he is in serious trouble
LUCY: Well they will catch up with him eventually its Trudy im worried for how is she coping
VIV: She is still shaken up a bit
LUCY: First that bomb on the coach and Paul getting shot and now this what is next
VIV: Your right
LUCY: So did you say you need next week off
VIV: Yeah its my operation get rid of this damn cancer
LUCY: Its just a shame James is not here for you
VIV: I know but he is busy visiting family abroad
LUCY: Well if he loves you then he should be here
VIV: You know i have never got to the bottom why you and mike never got on with James
LUCY: Its nothing really
VIV: Yeah well you know me Lucy i always get to the bottom of evreything

VIV UNBOLTS THE DOORS AND LUCY LOOKS WORRIED

THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD/LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS ASLEEP ON HIS CHAIR HE IS MOVING IN HIS SLEEP AND SWEATING

PAULS DREAM

PAUL IS HAVING A FLASHBACK OF THE NIGHT THAT SHARON LEFT HIM AND HE WAS SHOT. PAUL WATCHES ON AS SHARON LEAVES...PAUL SLOWLY TURNS BUT EVREYTHING GOES BLACK.

SOPHIE: Dad...dad

THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD/LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

SOPHIE IS WAKING UP PAUL.

SOPHIE: Dad wake up
PAUL: What...what is it
SOPHIE: Its nearley 12
PAUL: What...oh yeah

PAUL STEPS OUT OF HIS CHAIR AND PUTS HIS JACKET ON AND WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE.

JILLS CAFE INTERN AFTERNOON

THE CAFE IS EMPTY, JILL IS BEHINED THE COUNTER LOOKING WORRIED, WHEN PAUL WALKS IN.

PAUL: Jill how nice to see you [LOOKS AROUND] Oh bussiness is slow today as usual
JILL: Paul look just give me a few more
PAUL: Jill you know i hate excuses now lets get down to well bussiness [PAUL LAUGHS]
JILL: Paul please i am begging you this is my life
PAUL: Im sorry Jill but you can not afford this place and i have been offered a lot of money for this place already so im telling you now to pack your bags and leave oh and dont forget to drop the keys in my letter box.
JILL: You really are pathetic, your going to grow old and lonley with no one wanting to know you
PAUL: Do i care what you think...no now get out and i dont want to see you here ever again.

PAUL WALKS OUT WITH A SMUG FACE.

THE COMPLX/WATER FOUNTIN EXTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL WALKS OUT OF JILLS LOOKING SMUG, UNTIL HE STANDS STILL AND BEGINS TO SHAKE HE SLOWLY MAKES HIS WAY TO THE WATER FOUNTIN AND SITS DOWN.

PAULS MIND/FLASHBACK

THE SCREEN IS FLASHING WHERE WE JUST MAKE OUT PAULS VIEW, PAUL ONCE AGAIN SHOUTS IN THE STREET THAT HE LOVES SHARON AND TURNS ROUND WHEN HE IS SHOT TWICE, PAUL FALLS TO THE GROUND BUT SLOWLY LOOKS UP SEEING WHO HIS ASSINATOR IS BUT BEFORE WE SEE THE FACE EVREYTHING GOES BLACK.

EXETER STREET EXTERN NIGHT

THERE IS A TAXI ON THE STREET CORNER, JILL WALKS UP TO IT WITH HER SUITCASE AND TAKES ONE LAST LOOK AROUND THE STREET AND STEPS INTO THE TAXI AND IT DRIVES OFF.

DaVeyWaVey
01-05-2006, 11:09
I have just read season 4 so far baked bean and it's brilliant! Paul seems really evil and i hope he gets his just desserts, and i think Vader will back for revenge (just my prediction) and poor Viv :( I hope her operation is successful. Keep up the good scripts bakedbean, they are great to read :)
And don't forget to check out my latest scripts for my new soap Hinston High :)

Bryan
01-05-2006, 11:26
goobye Jill! Paul is loosing everyone he gets close to - it coudnt happen to a nicer man!

i NEED to know who shot Paul - the suspense is killing me!

great work bakedbean keep it up!

bakedbean
01-05-2006, 12:13
Next week you will have the answer Bondboffin and you wont believe who did the deed

Bryan
01-05-2006, 12:15
Next week you will have the answer Bondboffin and you wont believe who did the deed

I have my suspicions... :hmm: ...im sure you wont fail to disapoint!

bakedbean
01-05-2006, 12:18
I hope so oh and Daveyway Paul is going to get his just desserets very soon

DaVeyWaVey
01-05-2006, 13:23
I hope so oh and Daveyway Paul is going to get his just desserets very soon

Good! He sounds like a very evil man indeed!

bakedbean
06-05-2006, 09:55
4.8

SWEETHORN GRAVEYARD/TEXAS USA EXTERN MORNING

A YOUNG MAN IS STANDING AT A GRAVESIDE HE HAS TEARS IN HIS EYES. THE YOUNG MANS NAME IS ALEX. ALEX IS TALKING TO THE GRAVESIDE.

ALEX: Dont worry mum, he wont get away with this my father will pay for evreything he has done.

ALEX SMIRKS AND WALKS AWAY.

PAULS DREAM

PAUL IS HAVING THE SAME DREAM AS LAST EPISODE WITH HIM BEING SHOT, HE GETS EVEN CLOSER TO SEEING WHO SHOT HIM JUST REACHING THE BOTTOM OF THERE FACE HOWEVER EVREYTHING GOES BLACK.

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL IS ASLEEP ON HIS CHAIR WHEN SUDDENLY HE WAKES WITH A LOOK OF SHOCK ON HIS FACE.

THE LION/CELLAR INTERN AFTERNOON

SHAWN IS CHANGING A BARREL, AMY AND ROBERT ARE TRYING TO TALK TO HIM.

AMY: So can i
SHAWN: Can you what
AMY: Have Amy over the weekend

SHAWN LOOKS AT AMY AND THEN ROBERT.

SHAWN: No
AMY: You can not do this i have rights

SHAWN IS ABOUT TO REPLY HOWEVER LUCY WALKS IN.

LUCY: You have no rights
ROBERT: Oh mum just stay out of this will you
LUCY: No i will not she is my grandaughter and Amy has no rights
AMY: Im her mother Lucy i have every ri...
LUCY: [INTERUPTING] Rights...you dont have rights the day you slept with Robert and at the same time Shawn was in a comor you know what you are your a...
AMY: Dont you dare i want my daughter and i want her now
SHAWN: Your not taking my daughter away from me never
AMY: Well if you wont do it the easy way we will have to do it the hard way now wont we
SHAWN: What the hell are you talking about
AMY: I want full custody of my daughter and you know i thought this was going to happen so guess what im taking you to court
LUCY: You cant do this
AMY: See you in court

AMY AND ROBERT WALK OUT


NEXT WEEK THE TRUTH ON WHO SHOT PAUL AND A BLAST FROM THE PAST FOR THE MACKLINS AND THEY ARE OUT FOR REVENGE!!!

big bro fan
06-05-2006, 17:07
Jill is not gone forever. If you want to know what happens to Jill be sure to read my new soap when it starts. Of course if it is still all right with BakedBean :D .

big bro fan
06-05-2006, 17:08
Oh yeah great job i think i know who might have shot Paul but we will find out soon.

Bryan
06-05-2006, 17:27
Jill is not gone forever. If you want to know what happens to Jill be sure to read my new soap when it starts. Of course if it is still all right with BakedBean :D .

:cheer: great news Jill lives on! I loved her character!

im excited to see what you do with her in Haven Holidays... cant wait to start reading your soap bbf!!!

DaVeyWaVey
06-05-2006, 21:22
Can't wait to find out who shot Paul! :)

bakedbean
07-05-2006, 10:50
4.9

THE LION/LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

SHAWN IS FEEDING KRISTEN,CHRISSIE AND LUCY ARE EATING BREAKFAST.

CHRISSIE: You dont seriously think that Bitch stands a chance of winning do you
SHAWN: I doubt that she will win
LUCY: Well i mean come on she can not win not when the court hears the truth.
SHAWN: Well anyway im going to take my little princess becuse i think she needs a lie down.

SHAWN TAKES KRISTEN UPSTAIRS.

CHRISSIE: Do you think she is worried
LUCY: Yeah but he is dealing with it in his own way Chrissie

THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

THE FAMILY ARE DISCUSSING A HOLIDAY

JENNY: Blackpool, you want to go to Blackpool with your mother and Trudy and Alan
ANDY: Yeah it will be like old times me you the kids mum and well Alan and Trudy
BROOKE: Cant we go back to America again
ANDY: Nah not this year love i cannot afford it
STEVE: Can we go the plesure beach and oh yeah top of the eifel tower
BROOKE: Thats in Paris dimwit which is in France
STEVE: Well i dunno do i
ANDY: So thats it then three weeks today we go Blackpool

AIRPLANE INTERN MORNING

THE PLANE IS PACKED FULL OF MANY DIFFERENT PEOPLE BUT WE FOCUS ON ONE ALEX, HE IS LOOKING OUT OF THE WINDOW.

CAPTIN: Ladies and Gentlemen we shall be landing in Birmingham in the next few minutes

ALEX LOOKS OUT OF THE WINDOW AND SMIRKS.

AMYS FLAT/BEDROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

AMY IS AT HER DESK WRITING A NOTE TO ROBERT BESIDE HER IS A PACKED BABY BAG AND A PACKED SUITCASE, AMY PUTS THE NOTE INTO AN ENVELOPE AND WRITES ON IT ROB. AMY STANDS UP AND WALKS OUT WITH THE BAGS.

OUTSIDE THE MACKLINS EXTERN AFTERNOON

ALEX WALKS THROUGH THE FRONT GARDEN OF THE MACKLINS AND KNOCKS ON THE FRONT DOOR. BROOKE ANSWERS.

BROOKE: Can i help you
ALEX: Hi erm does Andy Macklin live here
BROOKE: My dad yeah why do you want him
ALEX: Please
BROOKE: Are you from america
ALEX: Austin Texas
BROOKE: Hold on

BROOKE WALKS BACK INTO THE HOUSE AND COMES BACK WITH ANDY. ANDY STARES AT ALEX.

ANDY: Look if its about the rent tell Paul i will give it him tomm...
ALEX: Dont you remeber your own son
ANDY: Dave is that you
ALEX: No its Alex i know its been a long time
ANDY: Alex how are you doing i thought you were still in Texas or something running your new bussiness
ALEX: Its a long story
ANDY: Well come on in and you can tell me how your brother is doing to

ANDY,BROOKE AND ALEX ALL WALK INTO THE HOUSE, ALEX SHUTS THE DOOR AND SMIRKS.

THE LION/KRISTEN BEDROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

KRISTEN IS AWAKE MOVING ABOUT IN HER COAT SOMEONE PICKS HER OUT OF HER COAT THE CAMERA MOVES UP AND REVEALS THE PERSON IS AMY. AMY WALKS OUT WITH KRISTEN WITH THE BABY BAG AND HER SUITCASE.

bakedbean
09-05-2006, 20:21
4.10

THE LION/KRISTENS BEDROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

LUCY WALKS IN WITH A BABY BOTTLE SHE NOTICES THAT KRISTEN IS NOT IN HER COAT AND SCREAMS SHAWN RUNS IN AND NOTICING KRISTEN IS MISSING.

SHAWN: Where is Kristen
LUCY: I dont know

ROBERT WALKS IN WITH THE NOTE.

ROBERT: I do

ROBERT HANDS SHAWN THE NOTE, HE READS IT AND STORMS OUT OF THE BEDROOM.

LUCY: Where are you going

THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

ANDY AND ALEX ARE TALKING JENNY IS IN THE KITCHEN.

ANDY: So how is evreything between your brother and your mum are they getting along alright
ALEX: No not really listen dad i need...
ANDY: You know David really is a bully i swear he gets a kick out of winding people up
ALEX: Well you were never around were you
ANDY: Im sorry about that but it has been tough for us all so what did you want to tell

JENNY WALKS IN WITH DINNER.

ANDY: I tell you what tell me after dinner yeah
ALEX: Yeah lets eat first

MAIN ROAD EXTERN AFTERNOON

SHAWN GOES SPEEDING DOWN THE MAIN ROAD. HE LOOKS FURIOUS.

THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

ANDY AND ALEX AND JENNY HAVE JUST FINISHED DINNER AND ARE SITTING AT THE TABLE.

ANDY: So what is it you wanted to tell me
ALEX: Its about mum and David about a month ago they were having an argument and we were all in the car David was driving and well it all got out of hand and David nearly hit a Truck and crashed into a tree
ANDY: My gosh are they ok
ALEX: No dad im sorry but there dead
ANDY: What no no...not David not Penny no

ANDY RUNS INTO THE KITCHEN JENNY FOLLOWS AND ALEX SMIRKS.

THE AIRPORT/DEPARTURES LAND INTERN EVENING

AMY AND KRISTEN BORED THE PLANE JUST AS SHAWN ENTERS DEPARTURES HE LOOKS AROUND BUT CAN NOT SEE THEM AND PUNCHES A WALL.



4.11

PAULS DREAM

PAUL IS IN THE STREET IN THE POURING RAIN THE PICTURE KEEPS JUMPING. PAUL LOOKS ON AND SEES THE NIGHT HE WAS SHOT HE SEES HIMSELF LYING ON THE FLOOR IN THE POURING RAIN. PAUL SEES ANDY COME FROM THE ALLEYWAY WHO NOTICES PAUL AND JUST LOOKS AT HIM AND WALKS OFF. THE PICTURE SKIPS AND PAUL IS STOOD IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STREET WITH THE SHOT PAUL STILL ON THE FLOOR STARING AT PAUL IS JAMES WHO HAS BLOOD ON HIS HANDS AND LAUGHING. THE PICTURE SKIPS AGAIN AND PAUL IS THE ONLY ONE IN THE STREET HE KNEELS DOWN AND LOOKS AT HIMSELF HE HEARS FOOTSTEPS AND LOOKS UP AND SEES STACEY RUN FROM THE BUSHES AND INTO THE ALLEYWAY SHE IS CARRYING A GUN!!!!!

PAULS BEDROOM INTERN NIGHT

PAUL WAKES IN A COLD SWEAT HE LOOKS SHOCKED. PAUL GETS OUT OF BED AND SEES THE MACKLINS WALKING INTO THE LION AND SEES STACEY SHUTTING THE DOOR OF VIVS. PAUL SMIRKS HE HAS A PLAN.

STACEYS BEDROOM INTERN NIGHT

STACEY IS PUTTING BOBBY TO BED.

STACEY: Dont worry Bobby its all going to be over soon that evil man is going to get it.

STACEY SMILES.

OUTSIDE VIVS EXTERN NIGHT

PAUL LOOKS AROUND SEEING NO ONE IS THERE AND KNOCKS ON THE DOOR HE WAITS A FEW MOMENTS WHEN STACEY ANSWERS.

STACEY: What do you want
PAUL: I want to come in
STACEY: Excuse me

PAUL BARGES IN AND PULLS STACEY INTO THE HOUSE SLAMMING THE DOOR BEHINED HIM.

VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

PAUL THROWS STACEY ONTO THE SEATEE HE KNEELS DOWN AND BEGINS TO WHISPER TO HER.

PAUL: Now i want the truth Stacey and i want it now
STACEY: I dont know what you are talking about
PAUL: Oh i think you do come on think it was what three weeks ago this very night pouring with rain come on you must rember i was shot
STACEY: What does that have to do with me
PAUL: Dont play games with me Stacey i know what you did
STACEY: Did what
PAUL: I know you shot me you stupid bitch
STACEY: I never
PAUL: LIAR...I know for a fact that you shot me im not stupid all i want to know is why you did it i wont tell the Police i will tell no one not a soul
STACEY: You want to know Paul do you really
PAUL: Yes i do
STACEY: Well what if i dont
PAUL: If you dont then you and your baby boy are going to get hurt and we wont want that now will we
STACEY: All right so i shot you so what you survived didnt you your fine
PAUL: Fine...fine how does having a two bullet wounds in your chest sound all i want to know Stacey is why you did it and that will be that no police no nothing.
STACEY: Ok you want to know why i will tell you...It was becuse of you that my Brother and that my Dad were killed on that damn coach it was becuse of you that my son will never meet his uncle or his grandfarther it is all your fault. Then of course you reveled that Viv had cancer to evreyone and i knew you deserved evreything you got.
PAUL: The gun where did you get that
STACEY: Where did i get that i wonder
PAUL: Tell me
STACEY: The person that gave me the gun was your good friend well your enemy Andy Macklin
PAUL: What
STACEY: I went round to the Macklins just after the hit and run and Andy was there i walked in to the living room and Andy was sat there holding a gun i told him he could not do it and promised him that you would get it once and for all and so he handed me the gun little did he know that you were to be shot the very same night.

THE LION/BACKROOM INTERN NIGHT

SHAWN AND CHRISSIE ARE ENJOYING A GLASS OF WINE.

CHRISSIE: Look you will find them and when you do you will bring your daughter home
SHAWN: No i wont Amy has gone and she has hidden all of her tracks not even a private investigator will find her
CHRISSIE: Shawn come on

THEY HUG AND LOOK INTO EACH OTHERS EYES AND BEGIN TO KISS PASSIONATLY.

VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

PAUL IS LOOKING OUT OF THE WINDOW AND STACEY IS SAT ON THE SOFA

STACEY: Well i have told you evreything now you can leave
PAUL: Oh no Stacey your not going to get away with this
STACEY: But...you
PAUL: You have an aunt up in glasgow right
STACEY: Yes why
PAUL: I am giving you 48 hours to get out of Exeter Street and if you dont i wont ring the Police...I will hurt you and your son

PAUL LAUGHS

big bro fan
09-05-2006, 20:37
OMG Stacey shot Paul this just gets better and better.

Bryan
09-05-2006, 20:48
a bit of a shock! but will she go!?

DaVeyWaVey
10-05-2006, 20:57
I never suspected that it was Stacey. I think she will leave Exeter Street:)

bakedbean
16-05-2006, 16:23
4,12

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM MORNING INTERN

ANDY AND STACEY ARE SPEAKING NO ONE ELSE IS AROUND.

ANDY: What the hell were you thinking telling him
STACEY: I had no choice he thretened to hurt my baby boy
ANDY: So what is he going to do
STACEY: Nothing as long as i leave Exeter Street and dont worry i am going tonight but Andy i want you to promise me something i want you to make sure that Paul Ramsay gets what he deserves once and for all.
ANDY: Oh believe me Paul Ramsay will regret the day he ever messed with me and my family

THE LION/SHAWNS BEDROOM INTERN MORNING

SHAWN AND CHRISSIE ARE IN BED TOGETHER,CHRISSIE IS AWAKE LOOKING WORRIED WHILE SHAWN IS ASLEEP. CHRISSIE SLOWLY GET OUT OF THE BED AND GETS DRESSED, SHAWN WAKES AND LOOKS SHOCKED TO SEE CHRISSIE.

SHAWN: What the hell is going on
CHRISSIE: You dont remeber
SHAWN: Oh no we did not get drunk and
CHRISSIE: Yeah
SHAWN: We cant let mum see us
CHRISSIE: Its okay shes down in the bar and i think we should never speak of this again
SHAWN: Deal

EXETER STREET EXTERN MORNING

STACEY IS GETTING INTO THE TAXI WITH BABY BOBBY, VIV AND TRUDY ARE SAYING GOODBYE, PAUL WALKS OUT OF HIS HOUSE AND SMIRKS, STACEY STICKS HER TWO MIDDLE FINGERS UP TO HIM AND SHE LEAVES.

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM MORNING INTERN

ANDY IS LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW HE IS WATCHING PAUL WHILE SPEAKING TO SOMEONE ON HIS MOBILE.

ANDY: Dennis yeah i was wondering how you are doing...me oh im fine listen you and Paul Ramsay go back dont you...yeah and he screwed you around well you know that favour you owe me...tonight sure.

ANDY PUTS THE PHONE DOWN AND SMERKS.

DaVeyWaVey
16-05-2006, 18:21
I wonder what Andy has planned...:hmm: I hope Paul Ramsay gets his just desserts! :mad:

big bro fan
16-05-2006, 22:17
Well as an exeter fan aving read all the season by any chance is the Dennis on the phone the one and only Dennis Hill. Is Stacey gone for good. Thanks for letting me have Jill BakedBean she will be a great asset to my show.

bakedbean
17-05-2006, 16:53
Yeah it is Dennis there is only one but this will be his final apperance over the next two weeks but he will return some time next year maybe earlier. Stacey had to leave im afraid but the door has been left open for her and there will be a chance that she will return in another who dunnit with another Ramsay family member but who??? and yeah i cant wait to see what you have planned for Jill in Haven Holidays but please dont bring Malcolm back from the dead i can only do that if i want to on my show!!!

big bro fan
17-05-2006, 17:23
I had no intention of bringing Malcolm back. He's not my sort of character im intrested in. It's nice to have characters move from one soap to another. It is ok if i mention Malcolm though isn't it.

bakedbean
17-05-2006, 19:03
Yeah it is but like i say dont use him and i do agree with you cant wait to see what you have planned for her.

bakedbean
17-05-2006, 19:51
4.13

DENNIS OFFICE INTERN EVENING

DENNIS IS SAT BEHINED HIS DESK ANDY IS SITTING DOWN TALKING TO HIM.

DENNIS: So what is it about Paul Ramsay
ANDY: Me and him have a bit of history like you do with him.
DENNIS: You mean bad history
ANDY: You bet
DENNIS: You know Andy, Paul Ramsay is not very good with making friends however he is lets say excellent at making enemys. Anyway what is this favor you want to know.
ANDY: I want you to get rid of him once and for all
DENNIS: And then thats it right no more favours
ANDY: Deal

THE LION/THE BAR INTERN EVENING

LUCY AND VIV ARE BEHINED THE BAR TALKING.

LUCY: What she just decided to leave
VIV: To be honest Lucy i think she was pushed into leaving
LUCY: By who
VIV: Are local villian
LUCY: Paul but what would he be doing with Stacey
VIV: That is something i would like to know Lucy

PAUL WALKS IN WITH SOPHIE

LUCY: Speak of the devil
VIV: Well that is debatable

LUCY AND VIV LAUGH. PAUL AND SOPHIE SIT DOWN.

SOPHIE: I can not believe that little bitch shot you
PAUL: Keep your voice donw i dont want anyone to know about this okay
SOPHIE: Yeah sure
PAUL: Now tell me about this new menu idea for the Wine Bar

GLASS/THE BAR INTERN EVENING

ALEX IS AT THE BAR TALKING TO COURTNEY.

COURTNEY: Im new around here so erm i probably have not seen you round before
ALEX: Well im new to im Andy Macklins son
COURTNEY: Who
ALEX: He owns the Garage
COURTNEY: Oh really
ALEX: So what is a gourgeous woman like you doing around a dump like this
COURTNEY: I would rather not go into it

OUTSIDE VIVS EXTERN EVENING

TRUDY IS PUTTING OUT THE RUBBISH SOMEONE IS WATCHING HER FROM A DISTANCE, TRUDY LOOKS ROUND AND WALKS BACK INTO THE HOUSE. THE CAMERA SWINGS ROUND TO REVEAL VADER IN THE ALLEY.

VADER: Oh dear oh dear Trudy what fun it would be if i turned up in Blackpool while you were on holiday...yeah what fun it would be

VADER LAUGHS.

bakedbean
23-05-2006, 18:23
4.14

BLACKPOOL SEAFRONT EXTERN MORNING

THE MACKLINS AND THE ROUNDS PULL UP IN ANDYS VAN AT THE SEA FRONT, THE TIDE IS OUT. BROOKE AND STEVE JUMP OUT OF THE VAN.

ANDY: Right you two this is a holiday and i dont want it to be a disaster like that time in bloody spain
BROOKE: That was the prats fault
STEVE: Hey
ANDY: Now we will just be across the road at the Silver Tree right so be there by eight okay

ANDY DRIVES OFF IN THE VAN.

SILVER TREE CAR PARK EXTERN MORNING

THE MACKLINS AND ALAN AND TRUDY STEP OUT OF THE VAN NOT NOTICING VADER STANDING AT THE CENTRAL PIER WATCHING THEM.

VIV: Remeber when we were kids Trudy me and you on the beach for hours on end
TRUDY: I do miss it you know
VIV: Good old days
ALAN: So how about i give you the tour of all the best pubs Andy while the girls go well wherever they want
ANDY: Yeah why not
JENNY: Oh great so im stuck with your mother and her sister for the holiday while you go off boozing
ANDY: Oh will you stop moaning and anyway there is no point you coming you have given up the flammin alchol after evreything
JENNY: I can see this is going to be a great holiday
ANDY: There is nothing like the Blackpool sea air
JENNY: What the smell of a tip
TRUDY: Jenny you cant knock Blackpool it has evreything

THE CENTRAL PIER EXTERN MORNING

BROOKE COMES OFF THE BUMPER CARS AND LOOKS OUT TO THE SEA, SHE TURNS NOTICING VADER WHO IS WATCHING THE MACKLINS. BROOKE WALKS SLOWLY UP TO VADER.

BROOKE: What the hell are you doing here

VADER TURNS AROUND.

VADER: Oh if it is not the Macklins youngest bitch im your great uncle
BROOKE: Your following Trudy you just cant let go
VADER: Now listen to me you little bitch if you want to keep the use of your legs then i suggest you shut your mouth and you breathe a word about this you and your family will get hurt
BROOKE: You dont scare me
VADER: Oh you really are like your grandmother arent you a real bitch
BROOKE: Dont you dare talk to me like that
VADER: Its time you learnt some home truths about your family
BROOKE: I dont need to listen to this
VADER: Oh but you do Brooke you need to know the truth

BROOKE RUNS OFF VADER SHOUTS.

VADER: This aint over not by a long shot you hear me not by a damn long shot

THE NORTH PIER SUN LOUNGE EXTERN AFTERNOON

TRUDY,ALAN,VIV,ANDY AND JENNY ARE ALL RELAXING.

TRUDY: Oh this is fantastic give me a choice between sunny spain and wet blackpool i would choose Blackpool any day
ALAN: They have great beer up north we should...
TRUDY: Alan we go through this evrey year we are not moving up north just becuse of the bloody booze
VIV: This is a holiday just relax
TRUDY: When you got your oporation
VIV: Oh a few weeks and then just a few months of chemo mind you i dont really want that but i have to fight it or well you know
TRUDY: Well im just popping up to Woolworths and put the lotterey on
VIV: You want me to come with you
TRUDY: No its only across the road hey i might take a donkey

THEY LAUGH AND TRUDY WALKS OFF

JENNY: Is she all right after evreything with that Vader
ALAN: Yeah she is fine
VIV: Well i dont know Alan she likes to cover things up

EXIT OF NORTH PIER EXTERN AFTERNOON

TRUDY IS CHECKING IN HER BAG WHEN VADER COMES BEHINED HER AND GRABS HER AND HOLDS HER MOUTH.

VADER: Your coming with me Trudy we are going home


Will Trudy survive???

DaVeyWaVey
23-05-2006, 19:33
Another good episode bakedbean, i hope Trudy gives Vader a taste of his own medicine. :cool:
I can't wait to see the next episode to find out what happens next! :cheer:

bakedbean
26-05-2006, 22:01
4.15

INSIDE VADERS CAR CENTRAL CAR PARK INTERN AFTERNOON

VADER IS TALKING TO TRUDY WHO IS IN THE BOOT.

VADER: Trudy i am only doing this becuse i love you...you understand dont you Trudy

VADERS BOOT INTERN AFTERNOON

TRUDY IS LYING UNCONCIOUS IN THE BOOT HER PHONE IS RINGING NEXT TO HER.

VADER: Im just going to coral island i wont be long

WE HEAR THE CAR DOOR OPEN AND SHUT AGAIN, AS THE DOOR SHUTS WITH A THUD TRUDY WAKES AND GRABS HER PHONE AND DIALS IN A NUMBER.

TRUDY: Viv where are you...i need help im in central car park Vader has got me...its a blue mini please hurry

SUN LOUNGE EXTERN AFTERNOON

THE MACKLINS AND ALAN RUN OUT OF THE SUN LOUNGE DOWN THE NORTH PIER

CENTRAL CAR PARK EXTERN AFTERNOON

VADER IS SMIRKING AND WALKS TO THE BOOT OF HIS CAR AND OPENS IT HE LOOKS AT TRUDY WHO APPEARS TO BE UNCONCIOUS.

VADER: Its not like you to have a lie in Trudy

VADER LAUGHS BUT TRUDY OPENS HER EYES AND KICKS VADER IN THE GROIN HE FALLS TO THE GROUND, TRUDY JUMPS OUT OF THE BOOT AND BEGINS TO RUN, VADER FOLLOWS.

VADER: Come here you bitch
TRUDY: Help...Help

SEAFRONT EXTERN AFTERNOON

THE MACKLINS AND ALAN ARE RUNNING TO CROSS THE ROAD BUT NOTICE TRUDY JUMP IN FRONT OF SOME CARS JUST MISSING HER SHE SEES HER FAMILY AND RUNS TOWARDS THEM NOT NOTICING A TRAM SPEEDING SHE SEES IT AND MOVES HOWEVER VADER JUMPS TRYING TO GRAB TRUDY BUT THE TRAM KNOCKS HIM DOWN. TRUDY FALLS TO THE GROUND AND SEES VADER DEAD ON THE FLOOR SHE SCREAMS ALAN AND VIV RUN TO HER AND HUG HER.

VIV: Its all over Trudy its all over now
ALAN: Dont worry sweetheart hes never going to hurt you again

FADE OUT WITH THE CAMERA GOING UP WITH A BIRDS EYE VIEW OF VADER LYING DEAD ON THE FLOOR AND VIV AND ALAN COMFORTING TRUDY.

Next week: Goodbye Paul...Andy has a plan!!!

big bro fan
27-05-2006, 10:03
Exeter keeps getting better and better good on ya Trudy cant wait for the next episode.

bakedbean
28-05-2006, 11:54
4.16

THE BOOKIES/PAULS OFFICE INT EVENING

PAUL IS ON THE PHONE.

PAUL: Yeah i got rid of her once and for all shes not coming back

KNOCK AT THE DOOR

PAUL: Look i will talk to you later i have got to go okay bye.

PAUL PUTS THE PHONE DOWN

PAUL: Come in

THE DOOR OPENS AND DENNIS HILL WALKS IN WITH ONE OF HIS THUGS PAUL JUMPS OUT OF HIS SEAT AND BEHINED HIS CHAIR.

PAUL: What do you want
DENNIS: Oh thats nice Paul all i wanted was a friendly chat
PAUL: You dont do friendly Dennis now what do you want
DENNIS: Turns out i owe someone a favour and well your that favour you see when i burnt down this place with you inside i was hoping you had well passed on but no you survived but i also know you lost the use of your legs for a while. I was satisfied if i have to be honest but then i was visited by someone and well i owed them a favour and here we are.
PAUL: What is this favour
DENNIS: How did they put it, erm...oh yeah put that b****** away for good and thats what i am here to do

PAUL TRYS TO RUN OUT OF THE DOOR BUT THE THUG SLAMS THE DOOR SHUT PAUL LOOKS WORRIED AND DENNIS LAUGHS.

GLASS/BAR INT EVENING

ROBERT IS KISSING A WOMAN, THEY SMIRK AND ROBERT WHISPERS IN HER EAR SHE LAUGHS AND THEY GRAB THERE COATS AND WALK OUT.

THE COMPLEX CAR PARK EXT EVENING

DENNIS AND THE THUG ARE STRUGGLING TO PUT PAUL IN THE BACK OF THE CAR, ROBERT AND THE WOMAN WALK PAST, ROBERT SEES PAUL IN TROUBLE AND SMIRKS.


PAUL: Let go of me...i said let go of me
DENNIS: Just get in the damn car

THE THUG AND DENNIS PUSH PAUL INTO THE CAR AND DRIVE OFF.

QUARRY EDGE EXT EVENING

DENNIS CAR PULLS UP AT THE EDGE OF THE QUARRY AND HE AND THE THUG STEP OUT, THEY DRAG PAUL OUT OF THE CAR WHO IS TRYING TO FIGHT THEM OFF.

DENNIS: When you started working for me Paul what did i say...i said keep your nose clean or you will get hurt...but did you do that no...i hate people that dont take notcie of me and well i have got to do what i have got to do.
PAUL: Please Dennis im begging you please dont do this i can work for you we can work something out right come on Dennis
DENNIS: Do it

DENNIS TURNS TO HIS CAR WE SEE IN THE REFLECTION OF HIS WINDOW THE THUG PUSH PAUL OFF THE CLIFF EDGE, PAUL SHOUTS UNTIL WE HEAR A THUD. DENNIS SLOWLY WALKS TO THE CLIFF EDGE AND SEES PAUL IN THE PIT, BLOOD POURING OUT OF HIS MOUTH AND HIS LEG TWISTED, DENNIS LAUGHS.

big bro fan
28-05-2006, 13:31
So is Paul finally dead now. Good episode cant wait to see how the news of his death will shake the street. Maybe Dennis could get some mystery cards from Paul making him wonder if Exeter's bad boy really is dead.:cheer:

Bryan
28-05-2006, 14:59
Superb episode BakedBean if that doesnt win a soap award then i dont know what will!

Sad to see Paul gone, but boy did he go out in style! Great to see Dennis involved in his exit! Cant wait to see the repercussions of his death and what Sophie has in store before her exit!

Superb Bakedbean! Keep up the great work! :cheer: :bow:

bakedbean
28-05-2006, 19:21
Thankyou very much both of you trust me Sophies story will be one to watch and she will go out with a bang but who will be the cause of it???

DaVeyWaVey
29-05-2006, 19:36
Great episode bakedbean. Finally Paul and Vader got there commeupance, i am sooo happy :cheer:

bakedbean
31-05-2006, 16:46
4.17

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING

A POLICE CAR PULLS UP OUTSIDE THE RAMSAYS, LUCY IS WATCHING FROM THE BEER GARDEN, ANDY IS WATCHING FROM THE WINDOW. WE SEE THE SOPHIE COME OUT OF THE HOUSE WITH INSPECTOR GROUSE CRYING IN HIS ARMS, THEY STEP INTO THE POLICE CAR AND DRIVE OFF. ANDY SMIRKS AND WALKS OFF.

THE MACKLINS INT MORNING

BROOKE IS TEXTING ON HER PHONE AND STEVE IS PLAYING ON HIS XBOX 360 ANDY IS TALKING TO JENNY IN THE KITCHEN.

JENNY: Well why were they there and where was Paul
ANDY: I dont know but you can gurrantee the visit has something to do with him

THE PAPER BOY DELIVERS A PAPER INTO THE DOOR, JENNY GRABS IT AND LOOKS ON THE FRONT PAGE TO SEE THE HEADLINE "MAN FOUND DEAD IN QUARRY"

JENNY: Do you think
ANDY: What

JENNY HANDS PAPER TO ANDY

ANDY: Maybe...but i dare say he didnt deserve what he got
JENNY: Yeah but even you wouldnt wish your enemy dead right
ANDY: Of course not

JENNY TOAST POPS UP AND SHE BEGINS TO BUTTER IT, ANDY GIVES A GRIN.

THE LION/BACKROOM INT MORNING

SHAWN IS INTERVIEWING ALEX ABOUT A JOB.

SHAWN: So you think you would be up for it helping me run this place
ALEX: Yeah course i would
SHAWN: Well you know what you have the job

LUCY WALKS IN.

LUCY: Whos this
SHAWN: Andy Macklins son Alex...hes going to be taking your place as manager here seen as your away for a few weeks
LUCY: Do we really need extra staff Shawn i mean you have Chrissie and Viv and i will only be gone for a few months
SHAWN: Well Viv needs time off with her cancer
LUCY: I wish i could be here for her but my sister needs me, shes even worse then Viv at the moment
SHAWN: Do you think aunt lisa will pull through
LUCY: Course she will

POLICE STATION/QUESTION ROOM INT MORNING

SOPHIE IS SAT AT THE TABLE WHEN PETE GROUSE WALKS IN WITH TWO COFFEES AND HANDS ONE TO SOPHIE

PETE: And you cant think of anyone who would push your father
SOPHIE: You said it was suicide
PETE: I said it might be look we both know that your father did some dodgy things in his time and he made a lot of enemys i mean maybe well no forget that.
SOPHIE: What...go on tell me
PETE: Maybe it was the person who shot him
SOPHIE: Stacey but
PETE: Whos this Stacey
SOPHIE: What...oh erm one of my cousins she will need to know
PETE: Well we have told your Grandma and she is on her way down


THE LION/BAR INT AFTERNOON

CHRISSIE IS BEHINED THE BAR THE PUB IS EMPTY AND ANDY WALKS IN. ANDY WALKS TO THE BAR.

ANDY: A double scotch please love erm...is Shawn around
CHRISSIE: Yeah hes in the backroom doing the books
ANDY: Is it alright if i just pop in
CHRISSIE: Yeah course you can
ANDY: Thankyou darling

THE LION/BACKROOM INT AFTERNOON

SHAWN IS DOING THE BOOKS AND ANDY KNOCKS ON THE DOOR AND WALKS IN.

SHAWN: Andy good to see you
ANDY: What did you want
SHAWN: I need help
ANDY: What sort of help
SHAWN: Its this place bussiness is slow and i have done evreything i can i need money and i need it now
ANDY: Im sorry bussiness is slow for me it might just be a slump you know bussiness today
SHAWN: No not for me its Glass that is driving this place to the ground
ANDY: Look i...i tell you what i know a few ways we could both benefit but let me warn you it can be criminal
SHAWN: Look im a Scotsman
ANDY: Yeah...yeah look it might take me a few weeks if you can handle that
SHAWN: Course i can
ANDY: Okay i see what i can do

THE LION/THE BAR INT AFTERNOON

ANDY WALKS IN AND PICKS UP THE GLASS OF SCOTCH AND TAKES A SIP OF IT, HE PUTS THE SCOTCH DOWN AND SMIRKS.

NEXT TIME: Alexs "dead" brother turns up for one final showdown but who dies and who survives??? Plus Sophie turns to drink!!!

bakedbean
01-06-2006, 20:31
4.18

THE RAMSAYS/LIVING ROOM INT MORNING

LEXI IS SAT AT THE TABLE TALKING TO A FUNERAL DIRECTOR.

DIRECTOR: Mrs Ramsay i know this must be very hard for you and evreything but im afriad we have to do this
LEXI: Yes i understand
DIRECTOR: Do you know what your son would have wanted
LEXI: How do you mean
DIRECTOR: Well would he have wanted to be buried or cremated
LEXI: You know he never really spoke about this sort of thing i suppose well Paul being Paul he thought he was invinceble but obviously not i think its best if we have him buried
DIRECTOR: Ok then no is there anything speacial you want at the funeral like music, ceremonys anything like that
LEXI: No just an ordinary funeral
DIRECTOR: Do you know how many people will be coming to the funeral
LEXI: Oh i dont think there will be many attending my sons funeral and those who do will be there just to check he is dead

THE MACKLINS/KITCHEN INT MORNING

JENNY IS READING THE LOCAL PAPER AND VIV IS TALKING TO HER, ANDY IS ON HIS LAPTOP.

JENNY: It says here they suspect he jumped
VIV: What Ramsay no thats bull Paul Ramsay would never jump not when he could make so much miserey for so many people...i tell you he was pushed i mean look at his past, the bookies getting burned down and then him getting shot. Paul Ramsay had more enemys than anyone else that i know.
ANDY: Maybe that low life picece of scum realised his life was worthless and just decided to jump
VIV: Well he did have something...he had his daughter.

THE LOCAL PARK EXT MORNING

SOPHIE IS SAT ON A PARK BENCH SHE IS DRINKING A BOTTLE OF VODKA, A YOUNG COUPLE WALK PAST AND GLAANCE AT HER.

SOPHIE: What the hell are you starring at...well have you got a problem

SOPHIE SLOWLY STANDS UP AND STUMBLES TO THE LAMPPOST.

SOPHIE: If you were going through what i was going through then you would do the...do the...

SOPHIE FALLS TO THE FLOOR LEANING ON THE LAMPOST CRYING.

BACKALLEY INT MORNING

ALEX IS WALKING DOWN THE BACK ALLEY WHEN HIS MOBILE RINGS, HE ANSWERS.

ALEX: Hello...what do you want...how did you get my number where...you better have a good reason for this

ABANDONED CAR PARK INT AFTERNOON

THERE IS A MAN WHO LOOKS A LOT LIKE ALEX STANDING BY AN OPEN BROKEN DOWN LIFT. HE IS WAITING FOR SOMEONE...WHEN THE DOOR FROM ACROSS THE CAR PARK SWINGS OPEN AND IN WALKS ALEX.

ALEX: What the hell do you want David
DAVID: Oh come on Alex you know what i want
ALEX: No i dont
DAVID: What the hell are you doing telling are Dad that me and mum are dead
ALEX: I dont know what you are talking
DAVID: I have read your diary and your plans on your computer Alex its sick and it is wrong
ALEX: Oh i suppose you have told mum
DAVID: No not yet i think dad deserves to learn the truth before mum...before you hurt his family
ALEX: He deserves what he gets leaving us as kids and starting a new family and evreything else
DAVID: But what you are planning is just sick its wrong
ALEX: And since when have you told me what to do
DAVID: Look im telling dad evreything

DAVID BEGINS TO WALK OFF BUT ALEX STOPS HIM, DAVID TURNS AND LUNGES AT ALEX AND THEY BOTH FALL TO THE GROUND. DAVID BEGINS TO PUNCH ALEX, BUT ALEX REVERSES AND PUNCHES DAVID. THEY BOTH STAND UP AND FIGHT MORE.

DAVID: Dads going to know the truth once and for all.

DAVID SWINGS A PUNCH AT ALEX BUT, ALEX DUCKS AND PUSHES DAVID WHO FALLS BACKWARDS INTO THE OPEN LOFT, HE YELLS AND THEN WE HEAR A THUD. ALEX WALKS OVER TO THE LIFT AND SEES DAVID DEAD ON THE FLOOR.

ALEX: No one will ever know what i have planned and no one will ever know about you.

ALEX LAUGHS.

DaVeyWaVey
01-06-2006, 23:20
Another good two episodes bakedbean, i think we have a new Exeter badboy in the shape of Alex, and Sophie nearly tripped up in the police interview room. :)

bakedbean
06-06-2006, 16:29
4.19

OUTSIDE LOCAL CHURCH EXT MORNING

LEXI AND SOPHIE ARE WALKING INTO THE CHURCH BOTH CRYING, FOUR UNDERTAKERS FOLLOW CARRYING PAULS BODY. THE MACKLINS AND SHAWN FOLLOW. AS DOES MAX PALMER WHO IS CARRYING SOME FLOWERS THEY ALL WALK INTO THE CHURCH.

INSIDE THE CHURCH INT MORNING

THE RESIDENTS OF EXETER STREET ARE ALL STANDING IN THE PEWS SININGING "ALL THINGS BRIGHT AND BEUTIFUL" SOPHIE WONT STOP CRYING AND LEXI IS ALSO FINDING IT HARD TO HOLD THE TEARS BACK.

VICAR: We are here today for the funeral for...

THE CHURCH DOORS SWING OPEN AND SHARON IN HER HIGH HEELS WALKS IN WITH HER DAD RIC, EVREYONE TURNS AND LOOK ON IN SHOCK, VIV INVITES RIC AND SHARON TO SIT WITH HER AND THE VICAR CONTINUES TALKING.

SOPHIE: What is that bitch doing here
LEXI: Not now Sophie please this is your dads day not hers.

CAMERA SWINGS TO VIV AND SHARON WHO ARE WHISPERING.

VIV: Its so good to see you Sharon
SHARON: And you Viv

THE LION/BAR INT AFTERNOON

THE RESIDENTS ARE ALL CHATTING, LEXI AND SOPHIE ARE SAT ON THERE OWN. MAX PALMER COMES FROM THE BAR AND WALKS OVER TO SOPHIE AND LEXI.

MAX: I just want to offer my condonlensess for the loss of your son mrs Ramsay
SOPHIE: And you are
MAX: My names Max Palmer i was a friend of your farthers i was at your christening
LEXI: Oh i remeber you...you were the owner of that nightclub in town.
MAX: Yeah, well me and Paul went a long way back but anyway i have to shoot of now but maybe i will see you around.
LEXI: Yeah it has been good to meet you
MAX: And the same to you

MAX WALKS OUT.

LEXI: Well he is a charmer always has been always will be

THE LION DOOR SWINGS OPEN AND SHARON AND RIC WALKS IN SOPHIE STANDS UP AND WALKS UP TO SHARON

SOPHIE: What the hell are you doing here
SHARON: I dont think it has anything to do with you
SOPHIE: But it does why did you come back here
LEXI: Thats enough Sophie
SHARON: No...no she wants the truth i will give it to her i came here to pay my last respects even if he was an evil pathetic man but i loved him once. But thats not why i just came here no i came here to let you all know im leaving Exeter Street and im never ever coming back and there is something else.
LEXI: Look we dont care Sharon
RIC: Thats enough Sharon your going to harm yourself and the baby
LEXI: Baby what baby
SHARON: Thats what i was coming to tell you im carrying your grandchild and also no matter what you do you will never ever see my child becuse i dont want him or her to ever get involved with the Ramsay family.

bakedbean
12-06-2006, 16:12
4.20

THE LION/BAR INT MORNING

VIV IS BUSY HELPING TRUDY CLEANING THE BAR WHILE CHRISSIE IS CHECKING THE STOCK, ANDY WALKS IN.

VIV: What are you doing here Andy
ANDY: I want to see Shawn is he around
CHRISSIE: Yeah he is in the cellar go through
ANDY: Cheers

ANDY WALKS INTO THE BACK AND DOWN THE CELLAR, VIV LOOKS TIRED AND WARN OUT TRUDY NOTICES

TRUDY: Viv are you okay
VIV: Yeah just a bit out of breath thats all
CHRISSIE: Viv you should not even be here you have an operation to get ready for
VIV: Im fine i just want to get through today okay

THE LION/CELLAR INT MORNING

ANDY WALKS DOWN THE STAIRS AND CALLS OUT SHAWN WHO IS BUSY MOVING SOME BARRELS.

SHAWN: Andy whats up
ANDY: Its tonight
SHAWN: What is
ANDY: The raid they have moved it to tonight now are you in
SHAWN: Yeah where is it
ANDY: A computer store i figured you can get the money and i will get the computers
SHAWN: Yeah alright see you round here bout eight
ANDY: Yeah

ANDY WALKS BACK UP THE STEPS WITH A SMIRK ON HIS FACE.

THE COMPLEX WATER FOUNTIN EXT AFTERNOON

COURTNEY IS SITTING BY THE WATER FOUNTIN AND CHRISSIE WALKS PASSED WITH SOME SHOPPING, CHRISSIE DOES NOT SEE COURTNEY STAND UP WITH HER COFFEE AND ACCIDENTALLY WALKS INTO COURTNEY SPILLING COFFEE ALL OVER HER NEW TOP.

COURTNEY: Damn it this is a new top
CHRISSIE: Im sorry i did not see you
COURTNEY: Yeah like i have never heard that one before
CHRISSIE: What is that supposed to mean
COURTNEY: It is obvious you did this delibretley
CHRISSIE: Why would i want to do that
COURTNEY: Becuse that is the sort of person that you are
CHRISSIE: Excuse me
COURTNEY: I dont have time for this i have a club to run dont you know
CHRISSIE: Yes unfortunetley i do

CHRISSIE AND COURTNEY BOTH STORM OFF.

THE LION/BAR INT AFTERNOON

THE PUB IS OPEN BUT ONLY A FEW PEOPLE ARE INSIDE, VIV IS BEHINED THE BAR WITH ALEX AND CHRISSIE WALKS IN LOOKING FURIOUS.

VIV: You okay Chrissie
CHRISSIE: Me oh yes im fine just that i had a run in with that Courtney
VIV: What happened
CHRISSIE: Oh it does not matter

CHRISSIE STORMS INTO THE BACK.

VIV: You may as well take your break now Alex
ALEX: Oh okay then gran

ALEX WALKS OUT.

THE GARAGE EXT AFTERNOON

ANDY IS LOCKING UP WHEN ALEX RUNS UP.

ALEX: Hey your locking up early
ANDY: What...oh yeah i have got to meet up with a few people for half an hour
ALEX: Well im on my break i will stay in case of any phone call or anything
ANDY: Are you sure
ALEX: Yeah

ANDY THROWS THE KEYS TO ALEX.

ANDY: I will be half an hour tops

ANDY STEPS INTO HIS CAR AND DRIVES OFF ALEX SMIRKS AND UNLOCKS THE DOOR OF THE GARAGE AND WALKS IN.

GARAGE OFFICE INT AFTERNOON.

ALEX WALKS IN AND TURNS ON THE LIGHT, HE MOVES OVER TO THE FILEING CABINET AND UNLOCKS IT WITH ONE OF THE KEYS, HE SEARCHES THROUGH SOME FILES, ONE OF THEM DROPS ONTO THE FLOOR WITH A PIECE OF PAPER FALLING OUT OF IT. ALEX GRABS THE FILE AND THE PAPER HE READS IT AND HAS A SHOCK ON HIS FACE. IT READS "ADOPTION AGENCEY-BROOKE SINCLAIR ADOPTED BY MR.ANDY MACKLIN AND MRS.JENNY MACKLIN." ALEX GIVES OUT AN EVIL SMILE AND PUTS THE PAPER INTO HIS POCKET AND THE REST OF THE FILES BACK INTO THE CABINET.

COMPUTER WAREHOUSE ROOF EXT NIGHT

ANDY AND SHAWN SLOWLY WALK UP THE LADDER ON TO THE ROOF, SHAWN HURRYS ACROSS THE ROOF HOWEVER ANDY NOTICES A SECURITY CAMERA.

ANDY: Stop the camera hold on i will cut the wires.

ANDY SLOWLY WALKS TO THE CAMERA AND PICKS OUT SOME PLYERS AND PRETENDS TO CUT THE WIRES SHAWN NOW WALKS PAST THE CAMERA JUST AFTER HE DOES THAT ANDY CUTS THE WIRE. ANDY THEN FOLLOWS SHAWN AND THEY GET TO THE SHAFT. ANDY OPENS THE HATCH AND THROWS A ROPE DOWN.

ANDY: You go down first i will tie up the rope
SHAWN: You sure no one is down there
ANDY: Course i am go

SHAWN SLOWLY CLIMBS DOWN THE ROPE ON TO THE WAREHOUSE FLOOR.

SHAWN: Okay im down

ANDY MOVES AWAY FROM THE SHAFT AND PICKS OUT HIS MOBILE AND DIALS IN A NUMBER.

ANDY: Yeah do it

ANDY PUTS DOWN THE PHONE AND THE WAREHOUSE ALARM GOES OFF.

SHAWN: Andy you said no one was here
ANDY: I lied Shawn sorry...but i want that pub and the only way i could do it is this way so see ya around Shawn
SHAWN: Andy damn it dont do this

ANDY THROWS THE ROPE DOWN THE HATCH AND RUNS OFF.

THE LION/BAR INT NIGHT

CHRISSIE IS SERVING A CUSTOMER WHO WANTS A J20.

CHRISSIE: Hold on i will go get some from the cellar
VIV: No i will go get it
CHRISSIE: Viv come on your not
VIV: What up to it i think i can manage a few bottles dont you

VIV WALKS INTO THE BACK AND DOWN THE CELLAR.

THE LION/CELLAR INT NIGHT

VIV IS LOOKING FOR THE BOTTLES WHEN SHE SUDDENLY FEELS FAINT SHE COLLAPSES ON TO THE FLOOR.

VIV: Please lord not yet...im not ready...please

VIV SLOWLY CLOSES HER EYES.


Will Shawn escape??? Will Viv be found in time??? Find out Thursday

bakedbean
15-06-2006, 16:48
4.21

CHARNLEY STATION/INTERVIEW ROOM INT NIGHT

SHAWN IS SAT WITH HIS SOLICITOR WHILE INSPECTOR GROUSE IS INTERVIEWING SHAWN.

SHAWN: I was with Andy Macklin damn it...he came up with the idea
GROUSE: Mr Scotsman the camera saw you and no one else how could Andrew Macklin have been with you
SHAWN: He has set me up damn it
GROUSE: Interview terminated 22:34

GROUSE WALKS OUT WITH HIS OFFICER, SHAWN BEGINS TO TALK TO HIS SOLICITOR.

SHAWN: He has set me up good and proper hasnt he...and i aint got a leg to stand on

SHAWN LOOKS ANGRY.

THE LION/CELLAR INT NIGHT

VIV IS SLUMPED ON THE FLOOR, THE CELLAR LIGHTS TURN ON.

CHRISSIE: Viv...Viv you down here...Viv

CHRISSIE WALKS DOWN THE STAIRS AND SEES VIV...CHRISSIE LOOKS SHOCKED AND SHOUTS FOR ALEX.

CHRISSIE: Call an ambulance its your Grandma she has collapsed.

EXETER STREET EXT NIGHT

AN AMBULANE IS OUTSIDE OF THE LION AND EVREYONE IS GATHRED ROUND WE CAN NOT SEE WHO IS BEING TAKEN INTO THE AMBULANCE. ANDY PULLS UP IN HIS CAR. ANDY STEPS OUT OF THE CAR AND TAKES A LOOK AT WHAT IS GOING ON HOWEVER HE CAN NOT SEE WHO IS BEING TAKEN INTO THE AMBULANCE. ANDY SEES TRUDY WALKING INTO THE AMBULANCE HE LOOKS WORRIED AND PUSHES THROUGH THE CROWD. ANDY WALKS UP TO THE AMBULANCE AND SEES VIV IN THE AMBULANCE AND THE DOORS SLOWLY SHUT. JENNY PUTS HER ARM ON HIS SHOULDER.

ANDY: Whats happened
JENNY: Its your mum they found her collapsed down the cellar
ANDY: She was not even supposed to be working.
JENNY: Andy it was not Shawns fault he never put her on the rotor
ANDY: Look im going to the hospital
JENNY: Im coming with you


ANDY AND JENNY STEP INTO THERE CAR AND DRIVE OFF.

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INT NIGHT

LEXI IS WATCHING WHAT IS GOING ON THROUGH THE WINDOW. SOPHIE STAGGERS IN FROM THE BACK DOOR SHE IS DRUNK.

LEXI: Sophie look at you your drunk
SOPHIE: Just leave me alone
LEXI: Now you listen to me young lady [ MOVES CLOSER TO SOPHIE] I am your guardian and this is our home so you are going to do as i say
SOPHIE: Dont be so stupid i own this place and the complex
LEXI: Dont you talk to me like that
SOPHIE: Oh shutup you stupid bitch

SOPHIE BEGINS TO WALK TO THE STAIRS BUT LEXI PULLS HER BACK, SOPHIE SLAPS LEXI HARD.

SOPHIE: Now will you leave me alone.

LEXI LOOKS STUNNED AS SOPHIE WALKS UP THE STAIRS INTO HER BEDROOM. SOPHIE FALLS ON TO HER BED AND BEGINS TO CRY. SOPHIE ROOTS THROUGH HER DRAW AND PICKS OUT A BOTTLE OF VODKA AND BEGINS TO TAKE A SWIG OF THE BOTTLE.

THE HOSPITAL INT NIGHT

VIV IS ASLEEP ON THE BED A NURSE IS CHECKING HER OVER WHILE THE DOCTOR IS TALKING TO TRUDY,ANDY AND JENNY.

ANDY: So whats wrong with her is it the cancer
DOCTOR: Mr Macklin i am afraid that the cancer is taking its toll on your mother we need to operate tonightt to get rid of the cancer
TRUDY: You mean she need her matectomy tonight
ANDY: And if she doesnt
DOCTOR: Then she wont make it to next week
ANDY: Well do it then...what are you waiting for my mums life is in danger.

WILL VIVS OPERATION BE A SUCCSESS FIND OUT MONDAY

big bro fan
15-06-2006, 17:55
:crying: :crying: Viv cant die it it just wouldnt be the same with out her im really loving exeter at the moment well done Baked Bean.:)

bakedbean
20-06-2006, 19:29
4.22

THE HOSPITAL INT NIGHT

ANDY,TRUDY AND JENNY ARE IN THE WAITING ROOM. ANDY IS LOOKING OUT OF THE WINDOW, TRUDY IS SITTING DOWN LOOKING WORRIED, WHILE JENNY IS TRYING TO READ A MAGAZINE.

ANDY: What time is it
JENNY: [LOOKS TO HER WATCH] Half eleven
ANDY: What
JENNY: She has only been in there half an hour
ANDY: No its not about mum...look i have got to go somewhere i will only be half an hour
JENNY: You cant leave Andy your mum is having surgerey
ANDY: Yeah there gonna be in there for hours look dont worry i wont be long.

ANDY WALKS OUT OF THE ROOM, ALAN ENTERS, TRUDY STANDS UP AND THEY HUG.

ALAN: She is gonna be fine Trudy dont worry

THE LION/BAR INT NIGHT

CHRISSIE IS LETTING THE LAST FEW PEOPLE OUT OF THE DOOR. ROBERT IS SAT AT THE BAR STILL DRINKING HIS PINT.CHRISSIE LOCKS THE DOOR.


CHRISSIE: Come on Robert drink up i want to go to bed
ROBERT: Let me help you lock up
CHRISSIE: No im okay thankyou
ROBERT: Im not going to let you do this all by yourself

ROBERT STANDS UP AND BEGINS TO COLLECT THE GLASSES UP WITH CHRISSIE, CHRISSIE SMILES AT ROBERT AND HE WINKS AT HER, CHRISSIE LAUGHS.

ROBERT: What is it
CHRISSIE: Dont think that using your old charm is going to whoo me again
ROBERT: Im not trying to whoo you
CHRISSIE: Come on Robert how long have i known you
ROBERT: I dunno something like 12 years
CHRISSIE: And how many of them have we been married
ROBERT: Five years
CHRISSIE: Yeah and how many times did you go behined my back
ROBERT: That was in the past i have changed
CHRISSIE: Robert you never change darling
ROBERT: Oh im darling now am i
CHRISSIE: Yeah i suppose you are

CHRISSIE AND ROBERT GET CLOSE TO EACH OTHER WITH BOTH OF THEM ABOUT TO KISS HOWEVER THEY ARE INTERUPTED BY THE PHONE RINGING. CHRISSIE BEGINS TO WALK TO THE PHONE BUT ROBERT PULLS HER BACK AND THEY KISS. THEY BOTH FALL ON TOP OF THE BAR AND KISS PASSIONATLY, THE PHONE IS STILL RINGING.

LOCAL PARK EXT NIGHT

INSPECTOR GROUSE IS SAT ON A PARK BENCH, LOOKING AROUND. ANDY MACKLIN WALKS UP TO HIM AND HANDS HIM OVER A SUITCASE.


ANDY: You done what you have to do
GROUSE: Andy as far as evreyone down the station is concerned Shawn Scotsman is guilty as charged
ANDY: Good and it better stay that way Grouse else your dirty little secret will come out understand me
GROUSE: Loud and clear
ANDY: The money is in the suitcase, enjoy it

ANDY WALKS AWAY AND SAYS UNDER HIS BREATH

ANDY: While you can

ANDY STEPS INTO HIS CAR AND TAKES A FINAL LOOK AT GROUSE AND SMIRKS.

THE HOSPITAL/WAITING ROOM INT NIGHT

ANDY IS NOW BACK IN THE WAITING ROOM WITH EVREYBODY ELSE. THE DOOR KNOCKS AND A NURSE WALKS IN,EVREY ONE STANDS UP.

ANDY: What is it...my mum whats happened
NURSE: Your mums fine mr Macklin there is some one here to see you all

A MAN WALKS IN WEARING A SUIT,EVREYONE HAS A SHOCK ON THERE FACE.

TRUDY: Nick what are you doing here
NICK: Hello mum

Why has Nick returned and what will the familys reaction be find out on Thursday

big bro fan
20-06-2006, 22:11
Is Viv ok what has Andy got in store for Grouse great episode cant wait for Thursday.:cheer: :thumbsup: :)

bakedbean
23-06-2006, 22:01
4.23


HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM INT NIGHT

EVREYONE LOOKS SHOCKED, NICK IS SMIRKING.

NICK: Well am i going to get a kiss or what
TRUDY: What are you doing here Nick
NICK: Well i went to the house to find that you dont live there any more instead its my cousin and his family (LOOKS AT ANDY AND JENNY) and i was told by my little niece that you were all at the hospital becue Viv had collapsed.
ANDY: So why are you here
NICK: Well i was around the neighbour hood and i thought why not

TRUDY HUGS NICK AND GIVES HIM A KISS, SHE THEN SLAPS HIM HARD ACROSS THE FACE.

NICK: What the hell was that for
TRUDY: That was for all the birthdays and christmas that you have missed, you have a son for goodness sake and you have not seen him for even years.
NICK: Look when i have time i will go and see him all right
TRUDY: You better Nick im warning you this is your last chance

THE DOCTOR WALKS IN.

ANDY: Is it mum whats wrong
DOCTOR: Nothing is wrong, evreything is fine the operation was a succses now im afraid you wont be able to see your mum until tommorow but she is going to be fine.
TRUDY: Thank you Doctor, thank you

THE LION/CHRISSIES BEDROOM INT MORNING

CHRISSIE IS WAKES SHE IS LYING IN ROBERTS ARMS HE IS ALSO AWAKE.

CHRISSIE: I dont believe this
ROBERT: What is wrong now
CHRISSIE: You and me i swore this would never happen again
ROBERT: Oh come on dont tell me you did not enjoy it
CHRISSIE: Oh i did but that is not the point
ROBERT: What point
CHRISSIE: I swore that after evreything that has happened i would never ever sleep with you again
ROBERT: Well thats out of the window so how about round two
CHRISSIE: I really dont believe you

CHRISSIE STEPS OUT OF THE BED AND PUTS HER DRESSING GOWN ON AND GRABS SOME CLOTHES.

CHRISSIE: Im going to get changed and i am going down stairs and once i have done that you can help me get the barrels in and leave

CHRISSIE STORMS OUT.

HOSPITAL/WING 8 INT MORNING

VIV IS SITTING UP ON HER BED TALKING TO THE FAMILY SHE IS SUPRISED TO SEE NICK.

VIV: So what are you doing here
NICK: Well this and that
VIV: So what are you really doing here
NICK: I have come to visit my family
TRUDY: Including your son
NICK: Yes including Daniel
TRUDY: When are you planning on seeing him
NICK: Soon
TRUDY: No not soon...today i have rang up the house and told Amber that you are on your way
NICK: Mum i am not a kid anymore i can look after myself
TRUDY: Oh i know you can Nick its just the looking after evreybody else that you have difficulties with
NICK: All right Mum thats enough...i come back and see you and what do i get a mouth full as usual i dont even think that you are pleased to see me
TRUDY: Oh Nick of course i am pleased to see you i just dont want you to dissapoint me and evreyone else again

THE LION/BACKROOM INT MORNING.

CHRISSIE IS DRINKING A CUP OF TEA AND CHECKING THE BOOKS. ROBERT WALKS IN.

ROBERT: So does this mean that me and you are back together or what
CHRISSIE: Dont be so stupid all last night was, was a bit of fun thats all i dont want anybody especially Shawn finding out
ROBERT: Where is my little brother
CHRISSIE: He went out last night
ROBERT: And he is not back
CHRISSIE: Well he said he was going to be out all night, now you can help with the barrels and then you leave before Shawn gets home.
ROBERT: Allright...what ever but why dont we make a go of it again.
CHRISSIE: Robert we have been through this so many times its not going to happen not now not ever

THE PHONE RINGS ROBERT ANSWERS.

ROBERT: Hello the Lion whos speaking...Shawn whats up...what oh im just helping out Chrissie...your where...what the hell happened...yeah yeah okay this afternoon okay.
CHRISSIE: What did he want
ROBERT: He is down the police station he has been arrested
CHRISSIE: What
ROBERT: Look i have got to go and see him
CHRISSIE: Well i want to come
ROBERT: No you stay here look after the place and maybe when i get back we could
CHRISSIE: Dont push your luck Robert

ROBERT SMILES AND HE WALKS OUT.

POLICE STATION/INTERVIEW ROOM INT AFTERNOON

ROBERT AND SHAWN ARE TALKING. A POLICE OFFICER IS STANDING BY.

ROBERT: That damn Macklin is gonna get whats coming to him trust me Shawn
SHAWN: Robert please dont get involved Andy Macklin will screw you up as well just dont...but i do want you to do for me
ROBERT: Anything you name it
SHAWN: Im gonna be inside for a long time and i cant afford to keep the pub open i want you to sell the Lion as soon as possible

Its a war for the Lion but who will come out on top???

bakedbean
27-06-2006, 20:58
4.24

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING

ANDY WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE AND BEGINS TO WALK TOWARDS THE GARAGE HOWEVER HE NOTICES ROBERT TALKING TO A MAN IN A SUIT THEY SHAKE HANDS, ANDY LOOKS UP AND SEES A FOR SALE SIGN BY THE LION, ANDY SMIRKS.

THE LION/BAR INT MORNING

CHRISSIE IS SETTING UP THE BAR, ROBERT WALKS BACK IN.

CHRISSIE: Well you have done evreything you need to do so you can go now
ROBERT: Come on Chrissie why dont we make a go of it...we were good together...we were a team
CHRISSIE: I think you are forgetting something that little affiar you had with Amy...oh yeah and then there was that thing when you know you punched me
ROBERT: That was an accident...hey i saved you from those guys who kidnapped you
CHRISSIE: Yes but Robert that was your fault that i got kidnapped
ROBERT: I have changed cant we just have a go at it and i swear that if it does not work out then i will leave
CHRISSIE: Well i suppose you can live here seen as Shawn wants you to sell the place...but that does not mean me and you are back together okay
ROBERT: Okay

CHRISSIE WALKS INTO THE BACK AND ROBERT SMILES.

THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD/KITCHEN INT MORNING

LEXI WHO HAS A BRUISE ON HER CHEEK IS LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW CRYING, SOPHIE WALKS IN WITH A HANG OVER SHE STARTS LOOKING THROUGH THE CUBORDS FOR SOME PARACETEMEL.

LEXI: I suppose you dont remeber what happened last night
SOPHIE: Oh dont start gran im not in the mood
LEXI: You mean you have another hangover
SOPHIE: Just leave me alone im going back to bed
LEXI: Oh no your not Sophie you have jobs to do...you have the complex to run i think its time you sell up the wine bar and the bookies
SOPHIE: Its my bussiness i will do what i want with the Complex when i want
LEXI: Sophie your running out of money and i cant afford to keep you as well as evreything
SOPHIE: Gran for once in your life just shutup please
LEXI: Sophie you dont understand you need to keep a hold of yourself the complex cant run it self
SOPHIE: Fine you know what this is my house im 18 now so here is what we are going to do, you going to pack your bags and leave my house by tonight...then i will sell up the complex you happy now
LEXI: You cant kick me out Sophie im your Grandmother
SOPHIE: Yeah and dont i know it you heard what i said now you better start packin your bags or i will be ringing the police
LEXI: Dont be so stupid
SOPHIE: Just shutup and do as i say now get out

SOPHIE WALKS OUT AND BACK UP STAIRS, LEXI BEGINS TO CRY AGAIN.

THE GARAGE/ANDYS OFFICE INT MORNING

ANDY IS BUSY ON HIS LAPTOP WHEN ROBERT WALKS IN.

ANDY: What do you want
ROBERT: Shawn has told me evreything you know and well we are selling up but dont think your going to get the lion
ANDY: I always get what i want Robert
ROBERT: Dont make me laugh...you will never get that place not now...not ever

OUTSIDE THE RAMSAYS EXT NIGHT

A TAXI IS WAITING OUTSIDE, LEXI WALKS OUT CARRYING HER SUITCASE. SOPHIE FOLLOWS HER.

LEXI: Please dont do this to me Sophie i want to help you
SOPHIE: With what i dont need help on anything
LEXI: You have had a tough few months what with your mother and father and i can understand why you are turning to drink
SOPHIE: Shut up i dont have a problem for godsake just leave and dont you ever come back.

SOPHIE STORMS BACK INTO THE HOUSE, LEXI SLOWLY WALKS TO THE TAXI CRYING.

Next time: Sophie plots her revenge on Andy but makes a shock discoverey about Alex!!!

bakedbean
30-06-2006, 09:38
4.25

THE MACKLIN KITCHEN INT MORNING

ANDY IS FINISHING OFF HIS TOAST WHILE JENNY IS MAKING A CUP OF TEA, ALEX WALKS IN JUST AS ANDY GETS READY TO WALK OUT.

ALEX: See you later dad
ANDY: Yeah course son see you Jenny
JENNY: Bye darlin

ANDY WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE, ALEX PUTS SOME BREAD IN THE TOASTER.

OUTSIDE THE MACKLINS EXT MORNING

ANDY IS WALKING DOWN THE PATH ON TO THE STREET WHEN HIS MOBILE RINGS, HE GRABS IT OUT OF HIS POCKET AND ANSWERS IT.

ANDY: Well now what do you want darling...oh right....yeah i might be able to get away...i tell you what i know a nice little motel just down the road how about me and you meet up later this afternoon...excelent.

VIVS LIVING ROOM INT MORNING

TRUDY AND ALAN ARE WATCHING JEREMEY KYLE ON THE TV.

ALAN: You know are family should go on this
TRUDY: Alan could you imagine us all on that show with are problems we would need an entire week to areselves
ALAN: Yeah i suppose we would

NICK WALKS DOWN THE STAIRS, TRUDY SEES HIM.

TRUDY: Nick good morning
NICK: Morning mum Alan
ALAN: All right
TRUDY: So how long are you planning on staying
NICK: You know i like being back here im home
TRUDY: You cant stay here forever
NICK: No i know...im looking around for a flat around here somewhere
ALAN: There is a few flats up for sale in Riverway flat
NICK: Yeah i will go have a look later
TRUDY: And what about a job
NICK: I will just carry on with what i have been doing
TRUDY: You have been in spain how can you carry on
NICK: Im a builder mum...i set up my own company over there i will just start one over here
TRUDY: Well i suppose
ALAN: Hey you could set it up on the complex use the bookies as your office and well there is plenty of land space
NICK: Who owns the complex
ALAN: Well i dunno it was that Paul Ramsay i suppose his mum or his daughter own it now, they live just across the road number 12
NICK: Looks like i have a busy day

THE GARAGE/OFFICE INT MORNING

ANDY IS BUSY ON THE PHONE WHILE ALSO ON HIS LAPTOP, SOPHIE WALKS IN.

ANDY: Look love i have got to go...yeah i will be home late i have got a meeting with a few bussiness asociates...okay love see you tonight bye. [ANDY PUTS THE PHONE DOWN] And what do i owe the pleasure of seeing you
SOPHIE: Cut the crap Andy i know evreything
ANDY: About what sweetheart
SOPHIE: That you killed my dad
ANDY: Oh yeah and where is your proof
SOPHIE: I will find some soon enough
ANDY: What you have got a private investigator or something [long pause] you have your really unbeliveble. If you think i had anything to do with your dads suicide then think again
SOPHIE: He was murdered my dad would have never of commited suicide never
ANDY: And what makes you so sure of that then Sophie well...your dad was a loser who acted like a big shot and when he finally took a good look in the mirror he realised what he was nothing
SOPHIE: I will make you pay Andy one way or another
ANDY: Dont make me laugh you what are you going to do...look at you when was the last time you had a mannacure here [pulls a few fivers out of his wallet] treat yourself from the kindness of my heart
SOPHIE: You make me sick you know that
ANDY: Whats wrong Sophie dont you want it there is what sixty pound there or are you just an ungreatfull bitch
SOPHIE: Dont talk to me like that you dont want to mess with me macklin
ANDY: You...your a kid like i am going to be afraid of you
SOPHIE: Im 18 Andy i aint a kid your going to regret messing with my family
ANDY: What family...your dad and mum are dead and oh yeah your grandma has left you so who is your family Sophie...you have no one your a nothing just like your farther and a drunk just like your mother so why dont you just leave now and dont bother coming back
SOPHIE: Your sick Macklin and you will pay the bad guys always get whats coming to them
ANDY: Just like your farther did Sophie
SOPHIE: My dad was a kind hearted man
ANDY: Oh please Sophie your dad was bad just like me becuse lets face it,its no fun being good now is it.
SOPHIE: Just shut up Andy i dont care what you think...im going to find out the truth about my dad no matter what.

SOPHIE STORMS OUT SLAMMING THE DOOR BEHINED HER, ANDY LOOKS WORRIED.

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT NIGHT

JENNY IS PUTTING HER LIPSTICK ON. ALEX COMES FROM UPSTAIRS.

JENNY: Well im off Alex dunno when i will be back there is a caseroll in the oven.
ALEX: Okay Jenny see you later.

JENNY LEAVES, ALEX TURNS OFF THE TELEVISON AND THE LIGHTS, HE WALKS OUT AS WELL. THE DOOR SHUTS AND FROM THE KITCHEN WALKS IN SOPHIE. SOPHIE BEGINS TO LOOK AROUND THE LIVING ROOM WHEN THE FRONT DOOR REOPENS AND ALEX WALKS IN, SOPHIE HIDES BEHINED THE SOFA. ALEX WALKS INTO THE KITCHEN AND TURNS OFF THE OVEN AND WALKS BACK OUT AGAIN. SOPHIE SLOWLY STANDS BACK UP AND WALKS UP THE STAIRS INTO ALEXS BEDROOM.

THE MACKLINS/ALEXS BEDROOM INT NIGHT.

SOPHIE SLOWLY CREEPS INTO THE BEDROOM, SHE ROOTS UNDER HIS BED AND FINDS A BOX SHE OPENS IT AND SEES TWO PASSPORTS AND PLANE TICKETS THE FIRST PASSPORT SHOWS ALEX BUT THE OTHER SHOWS THE FACE OF DAVID MACKLIN. SOPHIE READS THE PLANE TICKET AND LOOKS SHOCKED.

Sophie has made a shock discoverey what will she do next???

diamond1
30-06-2006, 14:28
oooh andys done a den watts to shawn...awww that sucks and after everything shawns done for exeter in the past i guess we will be seeing him when he's 64

bakedbean
02-07-2006, 20:16
Yeah maybe but keep your eyes glued to Exeter over the summer becuse there is a murder,kidnap,rape and the 200th episode and its explosive!!!

bakedbean
04-07-2006, 19:43
4.26

SOPHIES BEDROOM INT NIGHT.

SOPHIE IS SITTING ON HER BED DRINKING A GLASS OF RED WINE SHE IS LOOKING AT THE PASSPORT AND PLANE TICKET. SOPHIE WALKS UP TO HER WINDOW AND LOOKS THROUGH THE CURTAINS SHE SEES ALEX WALKING INTO THE HOUSE. SOPHIE GRABS HER PHONE AND DIALS IN A FEW NUMBERS.

SOPHIE: Hello Alex...yeah its me Sophie....Sophie Ramsay from next door....yeah i was wondering why dont you pop over i have something for you...something very intresting.

SOPHIE PUTS THE PHONE DOWN AND SMIRKS.

THE MACKLINS/LIVING ROOM INT NIGHT

ALEX IS PUTTING HIS COAT ON WHEN JENNY WALKS IN.

JENNY: Off again are we
ALEX: Yeah i wont be long

ALEX WALKS OUT, ANDY WALKS IN.

ANDY: Allright love
JENNY: Did your meeting go well
ANDY: Yeah it did...hang my coat up for me

ANDY HANDS JENNY HIS COAT AND WALKS INTO THE KICTCHEN JENNY SMELLS HIS JACKET, SHE SMELLS SOME PURFUME.

ANDY: Whats for tea

THE RAMSAYS LIVING ROOM INT NIGHT

SOPHIE IS SITTING ON THE SOFA SHE HIDES THE PASSPORT AND THE TICKET BEHINED SOME CUSHIONS, THERE IS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR. SOPHIE ANSWERS AND IN WALKS ALEX.

ALEX: So what did you want
SOPHIE: I...I just wanted to talk
ALEX: About what
SOPHIE: Well you know me and you have alot in common we have both lost loved ones...how did your brother and mum die again
ALEX: Car crash
SOPHIE: And you were the only one that survived thats amazing
ALEX: How did your mum die
SOPHIE: She died in the coach crash you probably dont know about that

ALEX HAS A FLASH BACK OF HIM PLANTING THE BOMB ON THE COACH.

SOPHIE: Well Alex
ALEX: What oh yeah i did well i heard about it
SOPHIE: Yeah and then a few months later my dad was killed
ALEX: I thought it was suicide
SOPHIE: Oh no my farther was killed i know it... you know i think your dad had something to do with it
ALEX: My dad why would he
SOPHIE: So i thought that i would look for some evidence so i went into your house and do you know what i found [PULLS THE PASSPORT AND TICKET FROM UNDER THE CUSHION]
ALEX: What the hell are you doing with them
SOPHIE: Now you say your brother and your mum died in a car crash so what are you doing with your brothers passport and a plane ticket in his name dated just a few weeks ago.
ALEX: Give me them

ALEX REACHES OUT FOR THEM BUT SOPHIE PUTS THEM IN HER CLEAVEGE

SOPHIE: Now you put your hand down here and i will get you done for sexual harrasement
ALEX: What do you want Sophie
SOPHIE: Well you know im leaving this hell hole in a few days and well i want money you know how much...3 grand
ALEX: What i dont have that sort of money
SOPHIE: Oh Alex you dont get it do you...if you dont give me what i want then the truth will come out you have 24 hours.
ALEX: Im not going to give you anything
SOPHIE: Oh yes you are dont mess with me Alex you have 24 hours

ALEX SLOWLY WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE, SOPHIE OPENS ANOTHER BOTTLE OF WINE.

THE MACKLINS/KITCHEN INT NIGHT

ANDY IS EATING THE CASSAROLL WHILE JENNY IS WATCHING HIM

ANDY: You alright love...something on your mind
JENNY: What no im just a bit tired you know
ANDY: Well you can go to bed i will be up in a bit maybe me and you could...
JENNY: No Andy not tongiht im not feeling up to it
ANDY: Come on Jenny we have not had a sex life for the last year
JENNY: You know why
ANDY: Look i know it has been hard on you with losing the baby
JENNY: Are baby Andy are baby
ANDY: Yeah...yeah i know
JENNY: When i lost are baby you never spoke to me about it you know how hard it was...thats why i turned to drink Andy it was becuse of you
ANDY: Yeah i know you keep telling me this rubbish about how its my fault and how you keep trying to give up...just face up to it Jenny your a drunk always have been always will be
JENNY: Yeah well not anymore
ANDY: Oh dont start this twaddele again
JENNY: No i mean it Andy im giving up the booze

JENNY WALKS UP TO THE DRINKS CUBOARD SHE PICKS OUT THE THREE BOTTLES OF WINE. JENNY WALKS OVER TO THE SINK AND OPENS THE BOTTLES AND POURS THE WINE DOWN THE SINK.

JENNY: I will show you Andy and i mean it this time

Next time: Andy gets a shock...the new owners of The Lion show up but who are they???

bakedbean
06-07-2006, 21:44
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We see Alex in a dark empty warehouse, he is looking at a photo of the Macklin family.


ALEX

What a perfect happy family, Until now! I have waited for years and years for this to get my revenge on my good old daddy. What he did to my family was evil and now he must pay. The wedding would be the perfect place to get my revenge so its bye bye daddy.

Alex lights a match and sets the picture on fire and drops it. Alex walks off laughing.

bakedbean
10-07-2006, 18:23
4.27

THE LION/BACKROOM INT MORNING

ROBERT IS ON THE PHONE WHILE CHRISSIE IS EATING HER BREAKFAST.

ROBERT: Yeah ok...well thankyou...so tongiht excellent well see you then.
CHRISSIE: Who was that
ROBERT: What...oh pack your bags
CHRISSIE: Why
ROBERT: Becuse this place is no longer ares
CHRISSIE: They have found us a buyer
ROBERT: Yeah they have
CHRISSIE: Well where are we going to live
ROBERT: I still own the flat up the road
CHRISSIE: Well will i be keeping my job
ROBERT: Yeah they want to keep the staff
CHRISSIE: Well who is it then...who owns this place
ROBERT: Youll see

CHARNLEY FLATS BLOCK A EXT MORNING.

A VAN PULLS UP OUTSIDE OF THE FLATS AND OUT STEPS VIC GROUSE (INSPECTOR GROUSE) AND HIS BROTHER PETE GROUSE. THEY BOTH LOOK AT THE FLAT.

PETE: Dunno look like much
VIC: Well its a start
PETE: Yeah i suppose it is
VIC: Now remeber what i said i dont want anymore trouble we moved here becuse of well you know what
PETE: Yeah i know becuse of me
VIC: And dont breathe a word of it to anyone
PETE: Scouts honour
VIC: You were kicked out of the Scouts on your first day
PETE; Well we were making fires was not my fault that i tryed to do it in the toilet
VIC: Yeah well pouring bleache evreywhere and then lighting a match is not what i call an accident
PETE; Alright that was years ago now can we please unload all the stuff and get upstairs
VIC: Yeah come on.

VIC AND PETE BEGIN TO UNLOAD THE VAN, VIV AND TRUDY ARE WALKING PAST. VIV STOPS AND SAYS HELLO.

VIV: Inspector Grouse
VIC: Oh hi Mrs Macklin
VIV: Oh please call me Viv are you moving in
VIC: Yeah me and my brother
VIV: Well i tell you what...you and your brother come round to Exeter Street and to the Lion and i will buy you a drink
VIC: Well i dunno
PETE: Oh come on Vic one drink cant do any harm
VIC: Well okay then

VIV AND TRUDY WALK OFF.

VIC: What the hell did you do that for
PETE: Do what
VIC: Say yes
PETE: Why i dont see whats wrong
VIC: We are trying to keep a low profile remeber around that place things always come out
PETE: Its only one drink Vic god
VIC: Alright...fine but only one

THE SHOP/FLAT INT AFTERNOON

JAKE AND EMMA ARE READING THERE PLANE TICKETS.

EMMA: You over booked are plane tickets
JAKE: It was an accident Emma im sorry
EMMA: Yeah...yeah i know
JAKE: Well what are we going to do
EMMA: I know Sophie has been a bit depressed lately why dont we take her
JAKE: I dont know
EMMA: Oh come on Jake please
JAKE: Alright but she needs to stay off of the booze
EMMA: Great i will go and tell her the good news

EMMA WALKS DOWNSTAIRS. JAKE SMILES AS HE BEGINS TO READ THE PAPER.

THE LION INT EVENING

THE RESIDENTS OF EXETER STREET ARE ALL IN THE LION EXCEPT FOR ALEX. SOPHIE IS SAT AT A TABLE WITH JAKE AND EMMA.

SOPHIE: Look i will drive us to the airport tommorow i mean its the least i can do
JAKE: Yeah if your sure
SOPHIE: Oh im sure allright

VIC AND PETE WALK IN, VIV WELCOMES THEM.

VIV: Boys come and join us i want to introduce you to my family
VIC: Oh we dont want to intrude
VIV: Nonsense
PETE: Yeah come on Vic whats the worst that could happen
VIC: We are supposed to be keeping a low profile remeber
PETE: Come on Vic whats the harm

SOPHIES GARAGE INT NIGHT

THE GARAGE DOOR SLIDES OPEN AND A TORCH LIGHT TURNS ON AND IN WALKS ALEX. ALEX SHUTS THE DOOR AND SLOWLY MOVES TO THE CAR, HE OPENS UP THE BOOT AND PLACES A RUCKSACK UNDER SOME CLOTH. ALEX WALKS OUT SMILING. WHAT HAS HE PUT IN THE BOOT OF SOPHIES CAR???

THE LION INT NIGHT

ANDY WALKS UP TO THE BAR AND BEGINS TO TALK TO ROBERT.

ANDY: I see you have not sold this place yet
ROBERT: Well...
ANDY: [INTERUPPTING] I want to make you an offer for this place

ANDY PULLS OUT A CHECK AND HANDS IT TO ROBERT

ROBERT: Well thats very generous of you and evreything but i have already sold this place
ANDY: What
ROBERT: And i would never sell this place to you not in a million years
ANDY: Well who has brought it
ROBERT: Oh we all know them very well

ROBERT LOOKS AT JAKE AND EMMA, ANDY NOTICES THIS AND WALKS OVER TO THEM.

ANDY: I want to congratulate you
JAKE: On what
ANDY: Buying this place
EMMA: What are you talking about
JAKE: Yeah the shop is enough for us why would we want this place then.
ANDY: So if you have not brought this place then who has

ANDY TURNS BACK TO THE BAR AND SEES SHARON AND RIC BEHINED IT.

ROBERT: Andy welcome the new landlord and landlady of the Lion
SHARON: Hello Andy

Sharon and Ric settle in...Will evil get rid of Sophie once and for all??

bakedbean
18-07-2006, 16:07
4.28

THE LION INT MORNING BACKROOM

RIC AND SHARON ARE SAT AT THE TABLE, SHARON IS EATING A BOWL OF SHREDDIES, RIC IS GOING THROUGH THE PAPERWORK.

RIC: Shawn really did leave a mess
SHARON: What do you mean
RIC: Well his sums dont add up, im going to have to go to the bank
SHARON: Oh while your in town could you get me some strawberrys
RIC: What for you dont even like Strawberrys
SHARON: I know but i have a real craving for them
RIC: Anything my daughter wants my daughter gets
SHARON: And your grandchild
RIC: Yeah and my grandchild

ANDYS WHEELS/OFFICE INT MORNING

ANDY IS AT HIS DESK AND JENNY IS SAT ON THE DESK THEY ARE TALKING.

ANDY: Those bloody Scotsmans get right up my nose sometimes
JENNY: Yes so you keep saying Andy look can we talk about something else
ANDY: [IGNORING JENNY] And another thing we could have had that pub that was the best bid out of them all but damn Scotsman ripped it up

JENNY MOANS...ANDYS PHONE RINGS HE PICKS IT UP.

ANDY: Hello...yeah of course yeah okay...oh no dont worry about it okay see you then.

ANDY PUTS THE PHONE DOWN.

JENNY: Who was that
ANDY: What...oh it was erm...Roy Crabtree you know
JENNY: No i dont
ANDY: Well anyway he is an old associate and wants to meet me in an hour or two
JENNY: Can i come
ANDY: Nah best not you will get bored

ANDY STANDS UP AND TURNS OFF HIS PC HE GRABS HIS COAT AND KISSES JENNY.

ANDY: See ya later love
JENNY: Yeah bye

ANDY LEAVES, JENNY MAKES SURE OF THIS AND THEN PICKS UP THE PHONE SHE DIALS 1471 AND THEN PRESSES 3.

JENNY: Hello...who is this...Hello...Its you aint it Roxanne how many times have i told you to keep away from my hus...hello...hello.

JENNY SLAMS THE PHONE DOWN, AND STORMS OUT OF THE OFFICE.


SOPHIES FRONT ROOM INT MORNING

SOPHIE ANSWERS THE DOOR AND ALEX WALKS IN.

SOPHIE: Well have you got it...the money have you got it
ALEX: No...i dont
SOPHIE: Oh dear Alex well we are in trouble now arent we
ALEX: Look just give me a few more days
SOPHIE: I tell you what i will give you three weeks
ALEX: What
SOPHIE: Im going on holiday today and i wont be back for about three weeks so you give it to me then, but mess me around Alex and the evidence will be going straight to the police, now get out.
ALEX: Have a nice holiday

ALEX WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE LAUGHING.

ROBERT AND CHRISSIES FLAT INT MORNING.

CHRISSIE AND ROBERT ARE KISSING.

ROBERT: Aint you at work today
CHRISSIE: No Sharons given me the day off

THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR, ROBERT ANSWERS IT JENNY WALKS IN.

CHRISSIE: Jenny whats up
ROBERT: I think i better go

ROBERT WALKS OUT, JENNY SITS DOWN BY CHRISSIE.

CHRISSIE: Well are you going to tell me or am i going to play the guessing game
JENNY: Its Andy
CHRISSIE: Andy whats he done
JENNY: I think he has been having an affair
CHRISSIE: No he wouldnt do that
JENNY: He would Chrissie he has before and i think he is doing it again with that bloody Roxanne
CHRISSIE: Whos Roxanne
JENNY: His Mistress for the last four years
CHRISSIE: But how can you be so sure he is having an affair
JENNY: The other night he came in smelling of some cheap purfume
CHRISSIE: Well that could have been anything
JENNY: Oh no it was not anything Chrissie it was another woman i just know it
CHRISSIE: Look i think you need to calm down about this it could be nothing
JENNY: Maybe but i doubt it Andy has had affair after affair, well this time im not going to let it continue. I just started getting my life back together and then this bombshell. Im going to leave him Chrissie, once i find out the truth and then when i find out who the woman is im going to kill them.

EXETER STREET/OUTSIDE THE SHOP EXT MORNING.

SOPHIE IS HELPING JAKE AND EMMA PUT THERE THINGS IN THE BOOT NOT REALISING ALEXS SPEACIAL PRESENT. ALEX WALKS OUT OF THE MACKLINS AND SEES SOPHIE,JAKE AND EMMA STEPPING INTO THE CAR, HE SUDDENLEY LOOKS SHOCKED TO SEE JAKE AND EMMA GETTING INSIDE THE CAR, SOPHIE DRIVES OFF, ALEX CHACES AFTER THE CAR HOWEVER SOPHIE SPEEDS OFF. ALEX PICKS OUT HIS MOBILE AND DIALS IN A NUMBER.

SOPHIES CAR INT MORNING.

SOPHIE IS BUSY DRIVING WHEN HER HEADSET RINGS.

SOPHIE: Hello...What...
CUT TO ALEX:
ALEX: What ever you do dont stop the car...becuse there is a bomb inside alright
CUT TO SOPHIE:
SOPHIE: Well what the hell am i going to do
CUT TO ALEX:
ALEX: I will think of something i promise
CUT TO SOPHIE:
SOPHIE: Hello...Hello.
JAKE: Evreything okay Sophie
SOPHIE: Yeah...yeah evreythings fine.

SOPHIE HAS A LOOK OF WORRY ON HER FACE.

EXTERNAL SHOT OF THE ROAD THAT SOPHIES CAR IS ON, THE CAR SPEEDS PAST THE CAMERA.

CHRANLEY MOTEL/ROOM 18 INT AFTERNOON.

ANDY IS WALKING UP THE HALL WAY TO ROOM 18, HE KNOCKS ON THE DOOR WE HEAR A FAMILIAR VOICE SAYING "WHO IS IT"

ANDY: Room servivce

THE DOOR OPENS TO REVEAL THE FAMILIAR FACE TO BE CHRISSIE, ANDY WALKS IN CLOSING THE DOOR BEHINED THEM.

ANDYS WHEELS/OFFICE INT AFTERNOON

JENNY IS LOOKING THROUGH ANDYS FILES AND NOTES, SHE GETS ANNOYED AS SHE CAN NOT FIND ANYTHING, VIV WALKS IN.

VIV: Jenny are you okay
JENNY: What yeah im fine what do you want
VIV: Well im looking for Andy
JENNY: He has gone to a meeting with someone called oh what was it...Oh yeah Roy Crabtree.
VIV: [LAUGHS] Oh dont be silly
JENNY: What are you laughing about
VIV: Andy could not have gone to see Roy Crabtree
JENNY: Why not
VIV: Well becuse hes dead

JENNY LOOKS SHOCKED AND HURT.

VIV: Are you okay Jenny

JENNY STORMS OUT OF THE OFFICE AND INTO THE STREET SHE GETS INTO HER CAR AND SPEEDS OFF.

COUNTRYSIDE ROAD EXT AFTERNOON.

SOPHIES CAR SPEEDS BACK, FURTHER UP IS A TRACTOR THAT IS GETTING CLOSER AND CLOSER TO SOPHIES CAR. SOPHIE CONTINUES TO SPEED UP THE ROAD NOT KNOWING WHAT LIES AHEAD. SOPHIE NOT REALLY TAKING NOTCIE OF THE ROAD AND MORE IN A DAY DREAM IS SUDDENLEY STARTLED BY JAKE.

JAKE: Sophie look out

SOPHIE LOOKS UP AND SEES THE TRACTOR, SOPHIE SWERVES NOT TOUCHING THE BRAKES, THE CAR GOES SPEEDING INTO A WALL CRASHING, SOPHIE AND EMMA BOTH SCREAM AS THE CAR TOPPELES OVER ONTO THE ROOF. SMOKE BEGINS TO POUR OUT OF THE CAR. JAKE IS UNCONCIOUS, SOPHIE IS STUCK AGAINTS THE WHEEL AND EMMA IS LYING ON TOP OF THE SMASHED FRONT SCREEN. EXTERNAL SHOT OF THE FIELD AND THE ROAD, THE FARMER RUNS OUT OF HIS TRACTOR AND GETS CLOSE TO THE CAR BUT ITS TO LATE THE CAR EXPLODES WITH SOPHIE,JAKE AND EMMA BOTH TRAPPED INSIDE. AS THE EPISODE COMES TO A CLOSE 1000 MILES BY VANESSA CARLTON PLAYS AS THE SCENE FADES INTO THE CREDITS.

Next week: Alex begins to feel guilty after evreything he has done but will that stop his evil plan to destroy his family once and for all?...Plus a shock return for Viv which means more heartbreak!!!

bakedbean
23-07-2006, 19:39
4.29

THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

JENNY,VIV AND ALEX ARE ALL SAT AT THE TABLE TALKING.

JENNY: I still cant believe it Jake,Emma and Sophie all dead
VIV: Well the paper says they were speeding
JENNY: Thats the last of them though aint it
VIV: Who
JENNY: The Ramsays all gone first Eileen then Paul and now Sophie that family is cursed i tell you
VIV: I feel sorry for Lexi no family left or anything she is all alone
JENNY: Shes strong
VIV: But lonely before you lot came back and Trudy and Alan moved in there was just me in that house evreyday it was hard.

ANDY COMES FROM DOWN STAIRS HE PUTS HIS JACKET ON.

JENNY: Where you going
ANDY: Ive got a meeting thats all
JENNY: Right...when will you be back
ANDY: Tonight...see you all later.
VIV: Bye son

ANDY LEAVES, JENNY LOOKS CONCERNED.

THE LION/BACKROOM INT MORNING

SHARON IS READING THE HEADLINE ABOUT JAKE,EMMAS AND SOPHIES DEATH. RIC IS LOOKING THROUGH THE BOOKS.

RIC: This is all still a mess
SHARON: What is
RIC: The book keeping, It looks likes Shawn has not touched them for months
SHARON: I thought you went to the bank the other day
RIC: Yeah but they werent much help
SHARON: Have you seen this
RIC: Seen what
SHARON: The paper about poor Sophie and those two that owned the shop, i know that Sophie could be well a bitch sometimes but she did not deserve what happened to her.

HILLS INCORPROATION/DENNIS OFFICE INT AFTERNOON.

DENNIS IS SEARCHING THROUGH SOME OF HIS FILES IN HIS CABINET. THE DOOR KNOCKS AND NICK WALKS IN.

DENNIS: Glover how good to see you after all this time.
NICK: What do you want Dennis
DENNIS: A little dicky bird has told me you are finacialy stuck
NICK: How do you know that
DENNIS: Oh come on Nick im Dennis Hill i know evreything
NICK: Why do you want to know about my finacial bussiness
DENNIS: Becuse Nick i can help you
NICK: The last time you heleped me i had to go on the run to Spain remeber
DENNIS: Look take it or leave it but i could help you out here
NICK: What do i need to do
DENNIS: You remeber Paul Ramsay he used to work for me a few years back and then moved into Exeter Street
NICK: Yeah i remeber him dead now aint he
DENNIS: Yes he is, such a shame he was one of the best once
NICK: Whats Ramsay got to do with anything
DENNIS: Well he brought the Coxplex and on that Complex he brought the Bookies but now he is dead it went up for sale
NICK: And you brought it
DENNIS: Exactly Nick and you can help me and i can help you by you running the place
NICK: Why would someone as rich as you want anything to do with a small bussiness in the backstreets of Charnely
DENNIS: Exactly
NICK: Wait a minute you just want me to run the place as a bookies for a front so you and your people can do bussiness
DENNIS: Why arent you a clever boy, so you in or what
NICK: Im in

DENNIS AND NICK SHAKE HANDS, DENNIS SMILES.

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

JENNY DRIVES OUT OF THE STREET WHILE A TAXI ROLLS UP. VIV WALKS DOWN THE ALLEYWAY BACK INTO THE MAIN STREET AND SEES THE PERSON GET OUT OF THE TAXI SHE SMILES AS THE PERSON TURNS AROUND TO REVEAL THEMSELVES TO BE JAMES PERRY.

VIV: James your back
JAMES: Hello sweetheart

VIV AND JAMES HUG AS THE TAXI DRIVES OFF.

VIV: Do you want to come in for a drink
JAMES: Yeah why not

JAMES FOLLOWS VIV INTO THE HOUSE.

CHARNLEY MOTEL CAR PARK EXT AFTERNOON.

JENNYS CAR PULLS UP INTO THE CAR PARK, JENNY LOOKS THROUGH THE WINDOW AND SEES ANDYS CAR. JENNY STOPS THE ENGINE AND BEGINS TO CRY.

VIVS LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

VIV AND JAMES ARE SAT DOWN THEY ARE TALKING ABOUT JAMES TRIP TO SPAIN.

VIV: So how was it
JAMES: What Spain hot nothing really intresting look i want to talk to you
VIV: Oh did you hear the good news.
JAMES; Whats that then
VIV: I beat the cancer
JAMES: What thats fantastic news how long ago
VIV: About a month oh you need to hear whats been going on here while you were away
JAMES: Not now Viv save it i want to talk to you
VIV: Paul Ramsays dead
JAMES: What
VIV: And his daughter
JAMES: How when
VIV: Paul commited suicide just after you left
JAMES: No wait a minute Paul Ramsay commited suicide
VIV: Yes i know a bit strange
JAMES: Somethings going on there look can we leave that for now and talk
VIV: We are talking James
JAMES: No i mean really talk
VIV: Whats up...what has happened James
JAMES: I want you to be the first to know
VIV: First to know what...your not back with Phillipa
JAMES: What...no
VIV: Becuse if you are then...
JAMES: Viv please shut up a minute i need to tell you this
VIV: Alright then im all ears
JAMES: I didnt just go to Spain for a holiday...i went to think.
VIV: About what
JAMES: A few weeks before i went i had to go the hospital for a scan
VIV: What sort of scan
JAMES: Just a scan and they found something
VIV: Oh god its not cancer
JAMES: No its not cancer well not really
VIV: What are you talking about
JAMES: Viv they found a tumor...a tumor in my brain
VIV: What...they can cure it right
JAMES: Not mine...its got to big Viv im dying i only have months to live

VIV BEGINS TO CRY AND JAMES HUGS HER.

bakedbean
25-07-2006, 18:55
4.30

THE MACKLINS BATHROOM INT MORNING

JENNY IS SAT ON THE SIDE OF THE BATH SHE IS LOOKING AT A PHOTO OF ALL THE FAMILY TOGETHER A TEAR DROP FALLS ONTO THE PICTURE. JENNY THROWS THE PHOTO ACROSS THE BATHROOM CAUSING IT TO SMASH AGAINTS THE WALL. THE DOOR KNOCKS.

ANDY: You alright darlin
JENNY: [WIPING AWAY TEARS] Im fine
ANDY: Well im going to be out of Charnley again today i dont know when i will be back
JENNY: Okay Andy take as long as you want [TO HERSELF] You cheating scumbag
ANDY: What did you say
JENNY: Oh nothing Andy
ANDY: Alright well se you later

JENNY WATCHES THROUGH THE WINDOW ANDY LEAVE THE HOUSE AND GET INTO HIS CAR AND DRIVE OFF. JENNY GATHERS HER STUFF AND WALKS OUT OF THE BATHROOM, FADE OUT WITH THE CAMERA FOCUSING ON THE SMASHED PICTURE.

THE CLUB INT MORNING.

COURTNEY IS BEHINED THE BAR CHECKING THE STOCK, JAMES WALKS IN.

COURTNEY: James your back
JAMES: Yeah i am
COURTNEY: How was your holiday
JAMES: It was good
COURTENY: So now your back does this mean that im out of a job
JAMES: No course not i want you to continue to run the club
COURTNEY: Really
JAMES: Sure you have done a great job while i was away so why not.

THE BOOKIES INT MORNING

NICK IS BEHINED THE COUNTER COUNTING OUT THE MONEY. THE DOOR OPENS AND DANIEL WALKS IN.

NICK: Hello son what you doing here
DANIEL: Dad can i move in with you please
NICK: Hey hold up a minute whats going on
DANIEL: Its mum shes being a stupid b...
NICK: Alright whats happened
DANIEL: She wont let me live my own life come on dad me and you together it would be great.
NICK: I dont know son i mean ive only just come back and i dont know if im going to be staying here for longer
DANIEL: Well let me come with you
NICK: Look how about i close up early at lunch time you go see your nan and i will go see your mum and we will talk alright
DANIEL: Yeah fine
NICK: That a boy

CHARNLEY MOTEL CAR PARK EXT AFTERNOON.

ANDYS CAR CAN BE SEEN CLOSE TO THE ENTRANCE OF THE MOTEL. JENNY PULLS UP INTO THE CAR PARK AND SEES ANDYS CAR. JENNY HAS BEEN CRYING, SHE STOPS THE CAR AND WASHES AWAY THE TEAR. JENNY GETS OUT OF THE CAR LOCKS IT AND WALKS CONFIDENTLEY INTO THE MOTEL.

ROSEVELT FLAT 3RD FLOOR/GAILS LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

GAIL WALKS IN FOLLOWED BY NICK.

GAIL: I suppose he has come up with some stupid story as usual
NICK: What is going on Gail he comes into the bookies this morning complaining that you and him aint gettin on.
GAIL: Oh look at you after seven years away you finally roll back up and act like the caring farther
NICK: Im just concerned about my son.
GAIL: You come on Nick what is this making up for lost time and anyway do you even know why where not getting on
NICK: Thats why im here remeber
GAIL: Alright hes been caught stealing from the local supermarket again hes on his last warning before he gets sent to prison
NICK: What but he cant hes only 19
GAIL: Exactly and if we dont do something soon he will end up inside

CHARNLEY MOTEL ROOM 19 INT AFTERNOON.

ANDY AND CHRISSIE ARE IN BED KISSING.

CHRISSIE: What if she finds out about us
ANDY: What Jenny shes not going to find out
CHRISSIE: And how are you so sure

THE DOOR SWINGS OPEN JENNY WALKS IN AND SLAMS THE DOOR SHUT, CHRISSIE LOOKS SHOCKED AND PUTS HER CLOVES BACK ON.

JENNY: Becuse i have never caught him in the act before have i Andy.

NEXT TIME: Jenny gives Andy an ultamaitum

bakedbean
28-07-2006, 10:05
4.31

CHARNLEY MOTEL ROOM 19 INT AFTERNOON.

JENNY IS STOOD AT THE DOOR, CHRISSIE NOW HAS HER CLOTHES ON AND ANDY IS GETTING DRESSED.

JENNY: Becuse i have never caught him in the act before have i Andy.
CHRISSIE: What do you mean before
JENNY: Oh dear Andy has not told you about all the other affairs you really are a naughty boy arent you
ANDY: Look Jenny just calm down before you say or do anything drastic
JENNY: Im already calm becuse Andy i have known about this for quite a while and i have been planning what i am going to do next. Your not going to manipulate your way out of this one.
ANDY: Oh here we go the usual rutine so what are you going to do Jenny leave for six months then return for the kids and we make a fresh start all over again
JENNY: Oh Andy you really are foolish you think your going to win agian dont you well not this time
ANDY: What the hell are you going on about
JENNY: Im not leaving this time Andy you are
ANDY: What
JENNY: Your bags are packed and your all set to go i never want to see you again Andy

JENNY BEGINS TO WALK OUT BUT TURNS BACK TO CHRISSIE.

JENNY: Oh yeah and one more thing

JENNY SLAPS CHRISSIE HARD ACROSS THE FACE.

JENNY: You ever go anywhere near my family again i will kill you

JENNY STORMS OUT ANDY FOLLOWS HER CHRISSIE LOOKS SHOCKED.

CHARNELY MOTEL CAR PARK EXT AFTERNOON.

JENNY STROMS OUT OF THE MOTEL AND STEPS INTO HER CAR, ANDY FOLLOWS AND SEES JENNY START THE ENGINE UP. JENNY BEGINS TO SPEED OFF BUT ANDY STANDS IN FRONT OF THE CAR.

ANDY: Jenny please dont do this we can work things out please...Jenny dont do this...I love you.

JENNY REVS UP THE CAR AND THE CAR BEGINS TO MOVE ANDY QUICKLY MOVES OUT OF THE WAY AS JENNY SPEEDS OFF OUT OF THE CAR PARK. ANDY RUNS TO HIS CAR, CHRISSIE RUNS UP TO HIM.

CHRISSIE: Wait what about me
ANDY: Get lost Chrissie youve caused enough problems already
CHRISSIE: dont blame me for all this.

ANDY STEPS INTO HIS CAR AND SPEEDS OFF OUT OF THE CAR PARK FOLLWOING JENNY.

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

VIV,TRUDY AND ALAN COME FROM THE COMPLEX THEY ARE TALKING. JENNYS CAR SPEEDS DOWN THE STREET UNTIL SHE TURNS INTO THE DRIVEWAY. JENNY GETS OUT OF THE CAR AND RUNS INTO THE HOUSE.

ALAN: Whats going on
VIV: I dont know

VIV,ALAN AND TRUDY SEE ANDY PULL UP INTO THE DRIVE WAY AS WELL, ANDY STEPS OUT OF THE CAR.

VIV: Andy whats going on
ANDY: Not now mum aye

ANDY RUNS INTO THE HOUSE SLAMMING THE DOOR SHUT.

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

JENNY COMES FROM DOWNSTAIRS CARRYING ANDYS SUIT CASE SHE THROWS IT AT ANDY WHO CATCHES IT.

ANDY: Come on Jenny you need to calm down
JENNY: Calm down me calm down you prat
ANDY: Jenny please lets talk this through
JENNY: Talk things through no thankyou just get out
ANDY: Im not leaving Jenny
JENNY: What is it with you and other woman first that slapper Roxanne and now Chrissie whos next Andy.
ANDY: There wont be anyone else Jenny i swear
JENNY: Like you swore last time
ANDY: Things will change i promise
JENNY: To little to late Andy me and you are other and done with
ANDY: You need me
JENNY: No i dont
ANDY: Oh yes you do and you know it
JENNY: Just leave me alone Andy
ANDY: Please darlin lets talk
JENNY: We are talking and stop calling me darling
ANDY: You dont want to do this we love each other
JENNY: I did once Andy but not anymore you have blown it
ANDY: Jenny please look youve always said that we should renew are wedding vows so why not me and you do that

ROBERTS FLAT LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

ROBERT IS ON THE COMPUTER WHEN CHRISSIE WALKS IN.

ROBERT: Chrissie are you okay
CHRISSIE: Robert ive got something to tell you and your not going to like it.

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

JENNY LOOKS SHOCKED AT WHAT ANDY HAS JUST ASKED.

JENNY: I dont think so Andy whats the point
ANDY: Come on it will be a fresh start we could move away from here
JENNY: Im not leaving Exeter Street Andy i will renew my vows with you as long as you get it all sorted for two weeks time but Andy you cheat on me again and i will kill you.

ROBERTS FLAT LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

ROBERT LOOKS ANGRY AT WHAT CHRISSIE HAS JUST TOLD HIM.

ROBERT: You did what
CHRISSIE: Im so sorry
ROBERT: We were just getting started again and you go and do this
CHRISSIE: I know thats why i have made a descion
ROBERT; What descion
CHRISSIE: Im leaving and i dont know when i will be back
ROBERT: No Chrissie you cant leave please we can work things out
CHRISSIE: Its to late Robert

CHRISSIE KISSES ROBERT ON THE CHEEK AND WALKS OUT OF THE DOOR.

ROBERT: What about your bags
CHRISSIE: I will send you an adress

CHRISSIE LEAVES AND SHUTS THE DOOR, ROBERT FALLS TO THE FLOOR CRYING.

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

A TAXI ROLLS UP JUST OUTSIDE ROBERTS FLAT. CHRISSIE STEPS OUT OF THE FLAT AND WALKS TO THE TAXI. CHRISSIE LOOKS UP TO THE WINDOW AND SEES ROBERT. CHRISSIE STEPS INTO THE TAXI WHICH DRIVES OFF, JENNY LOOKS THROUGH THE WINDOW AND GIVES CHRISSIE THE EVILS.


Has Chrissie gone for good?...Lexi returns and discovers the truth about evil Alex what will she do??? Anoter unmissible episode of Exeter

bakedbean
30-07-2006, 13:48
4.32

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

A TAXI ROLLS UP DOWN THE STREET AND STOPS OUTSIDE THE RAMSAYS HOUSE. THE TAXI DOOR OPENS AND LEXI RAMSAY STEPS OUT. LEXI WALKS INTO THE GARDEN AND WALKS INTO THE HOUSE.

THE MACKLIN KITCHEN INT AFTERNOON.

THE MACKLIN FAMILY ARE ALL SAT IN THE KITCHEN ANDY AND JENNY ARE TELLING THEM THE GOOD NEWS.

JENNY: Me and your Dad are going to be getting remarried
BROOKE: What thats great when
ANDY: Two weeks today
STEVE: I aint being page boy
ANDY: Its not going to be in a church
VIV: Well where then
ANDY: The club i have spoke to james and he has agreed.
ALEX: Hey dad im gonna have to take you on a stag do
ANDY: Yeah that would be great son.

THE FAMILY CONTINUES TO TALK,ALEX SMILES.

THE RAMSAYS/LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

LEXI IS LOOKING THROUGH SOME OF THE PACKED BOXES. LEXI PULLS OUT A FOLDER THAT READS ON THE FRONT "PRIVATE". LEXI OPENS THE FOLDER AND IS SHOCKED TO SEE WHAT SHE HAS FOUND.

THE CLUB/COURTNEYS OFFICE INT AFTERNOON.

COURTNEY IS BUSY ON HER LAPTOP WHEN THE DOOR KNOCKS.

COURTNEY: Come in...

THE DOOR OPENS AND NICK WALKS IN.

COURTNEY: Aghh if it isnt Nick Glover
NICK: Hello Courtney
COURTNEY: You know this is like old times remeber that time me and you met in the office.
NICK: As if i could forget
COURTNEY: So what do you want
NICK: What do you mean
COURTNEY: Well you only ever see someone when you need something i mean you moved back to Exeter Street for no apparent reason
NICK: I came to see my son
COURTNEY: The time me and you spent together in Spain you never even mentioned him
NICK: Well times have changed and so have i
COURTENY: So what do you want
NICK: I take it this was not what you really want
COURTNEY: Well no but im happy at the moment
NICK: Do you miss the old times
COURTNEY: What scamming all those people out of there money yeah that was great but it got to far we ended up in prison
NICK: True but what if i could make you a very wealthy woman
COURTENY: What do you mean
NICK: What i mean is lets do it for one more time
COURTNEY: I dont know Nick i mean...
NICK: It will be the biggest scam we have ever pulled and it will make us both very rich
COURTNEY: Who does it involve
NICK: Ric Grand

THE SCENE FADES OUT WITH NICK TELLING COURTNEY THE PLAN, COURTNEY SMILES AND SHAKES NICKS HAND.

THE RAMSAYS LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

LEXI IS STILL LOOKING AT THE FILE SHE IS SHOCKED. THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR AND LEXI HIDES THE PAPERS BACK IN THE BOX. LEXI WALKS TO THE DOOR AND OPENS IT TO SEE ALEX.

LEXI: Alex what can i do for you
ALEX: [WALKING IN] I just want to offer my condolencess
LEXI: Well thankyou
ALEX: Me and Sophie we were close anyway got to go

ALEX BEGINS TO WALK BACK TO THE DOOR.

LEXI: Just like you were close to your brother
ALEX: Sorry
LEXI: Well he died to in a car crash
ALEX: Oh yeah
LEXI: Its hard losing a loved one
ALEX: Yeah it is
LEXI: But i cant imagine what your feeling
ALEX: What do you mean
LEXI: Oh come on Alex enough of the games i know that you killed your brother and i know that you killed Sophie.
ALEX: What gives you that idea

LEXI GRABS THE FILE OUT OF THE BOX.

LEXI: This my dear...Sophie left it behined and it tells all about your brother and how he died to think that you wrote and i quote "my brother was getting in the way i could not let him ruin my plans after all this time. So i did what i had to i pushed him down the lift shaft and left him there to die". You make me sick Alex
ALEX: That dont prove anything
LEXI: Oh yes it does Alex and you know what you need help and the only way your going to get that is if i take it to the police.

LEXI PUSHES ALEX ASIDE AND WALKS TO THE DOOR, ALEX GRABS ON TO LEXIS SHOULDER.

ALEX: Oh i dont think so Lexi me and you should have a little chat.

ALEX SMIRKS AND LEXI LOOKS AFRAID OF WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO HER.

Next time:A familiar face returns

bakedbean
31-07-2006, 20:44
4.33

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING

THE SHOWS OPENS WITH THE CAMERA FOCUSED ON THE RAMSAY HOUSE. VIV WALKS OUT OF HER HOUSE WITH TRUDY THEY LOOK AT THE HOUSE.

TRUDY: Well she wasnt back long was she
VIV: Your right bit odd dont you think
TRUDY: Yeah anyway hows James
VIV: Hes a bit shakey but hes coping.

CHARNELY POLICE STATION/VICS OFFICE.

VIC IS BUSY SEARCHING THROUGH SOME FILES WHEN A POLICE OFFICER WALKS IN.

VIC: You ever heard of knocking before entering
POLICE: Sir this is important
VIC: What is it
POLICE: We have found a body in the old carpark
VIC: What whereabout
POLICE: In the lift shaft.

THE CHASE/ABANDONED WAREHOUSE INT AFTERNOON.

THE CAMERA PANS AROUND THE WAREHOUSE IT IS EMPTY. THE DOOR SWINGS OPEN AND ALEX WALKS IN AND SHUTS THE DOOR BEHINED HIM. ALEX LOOKS AROUND CHECKING NO ONE IS ABOUT, ALEX MOVES FURTHER INTO THE WAREHOUSE AS THE SCENE FADES OUT.

THE LION/BAR INT EVENING

MOST OF THE RESIDENTS ARE IN THE LION FOR THE REOPENING. SHARON AND RIC ARE SERVING PINTS, VIV IS AT THE OTHER END OF THE BAR. ALEX WALKS IN THROUGH THE BACK.

RIC: Whre have you been your 20 minutes late
ALEX: Sorry i was stuck in traffic
RIC: Yeah well dont let it happen again
ALEX: I promise i wont

THE CAMERA PANS TO TRUDY AND VIV WHO ARE TALKING AT THE BAR.

VIV: Well i havent seen her all day
TRUDY: No neither have i...i popped round but there was no answer.

ALEX WALKS UP TO THEM GRABBING A BOTTLE OF LAGER FROM THE FRIDGE.

ALEX: Whos this
TRUDY: Lexi Ramsay no one has seen her since yesterday
ALEX: Well maybe she went out
TRUDY: No i dont think so her car is still outside

ALEX WALKS OFF LOOKING WORRIED BUT CAN STILL HEAR WHAT VIV AND TRUDY ARE SAYING.

VIV: Hey did you hear on the radio about that body they found in the lift shaft at the old carpark
TRUDY: No when was this
VIV: This morning
TRUDY: What has happened to Charnely these days murders and bombings what ever next
VIV: I know

THE CAMERA SWINGS ROUND TO ANDY AND JENNY WHO ARE TALKING ABOUT THE WEDDING.

JENNY: So im going to buy myself a new dress for the wedding
ANDY: Its only going to be in the club
JENNY: I dont care Andy

THE DOOR SWINGS OPEN AND A DRUNK ROBERT WALKS IN, HE SEES ANDY AND JENNY.

ROBERT: Well look who it is the happy couple
RIC: Come on Robert i think its time you leave
ROBERT: Shutup do you all want to know what this scumbag has done
ANDY: Who you calling a scumbag
ROBERT: Who do you think
RIC: Thats enough Robert
ROBERT: Evreybodys favourite person Andy Macklin did the dirty with my wife

EVREYONE LOOKS ON IN SHOCK.

ANDY: Oh here we go evreyone shocked at this announcement...well what does it matter its great news for you all something to really talk about at the wedding.
ROBERT: Dont try and change the subject
ANDY: What are you talking about Robert...do you think anybody here really cares about what happened between me and your wife...no of course not they just want a good gossip about it thats all.
ROBERT: How you can remarry him Jenny i do not know
JENNY: Becuse i love him
ROBERT: Yeah well i loved Chrissie but you dont see me and her getting remarried do you
JENNY: Thats your problem Robert not ares
ANDY: And anyway who the hell do you think you are having ago at me about having an affair. You were the one that slept with your own brothers wife, and then what do you do when evreyone finds out you hit Chrissie.
ROBERT: Yeah well i made a mistake, my family forgave me and let me back in.
ANDY: Oh well congratulations Robert...At last you have got what you always wanted
ROBERT: Oh yeah and whats that
ANDY: Your finally head of the family...mind you there is none of you left now let me see....first your dad mysteriously dissapears...then you get sent to prison for hitting your wife...then Amy runs away with the baby...then your mum leaves...then of course Shawn ends up in prison...and oh yeah your wife leaves...seems to me that ever since you returned evreyone around you left...wonder why that is.
ROBERT: Dont talk about me and my family like that you smug son of a...
ANDY: Your family...what family...come on Robert the Scotmans may have been the big shots years ago but now times have changed...your family used to own Charnley...now look at you all...you have nothing
ROBERT: Yeah and whos fault was that Andy
ANDY: Well i dont know please tell me
ROBERT: Its all your fault

WHILE ANDY SPEAKS CUT TO OUTSIDE WHERE WE SEE A TAXI PULL UP OUTSIDE THE LION, WE SEE TWO LEGS WITH HIGH HEELS WALK INTO THE LION.

ANDY: My fault oh right okay becuse i told Amy to run off with the baby and i told Shawn to rob that factory...dont be so pathetic...The Scotmans are and forever will be overated

WE HEAR A FAMILIAR VOICE.

LUCY: Oh i dont think so Andy

EVREYONE LOOKS ON IN SHOCK TO SEE LUCY SCOTSMAN STANDING AT THE DOOR.

ROBERT: Mum your back
LUCY: Oh you bet ya and im not going anywhere

LUCY LOOKS AT ANDY AND GRINS...ANDY DOES NOT LOOK HAPPY.

NEXT TIME: LUCY CONFRONTS ANDY AND THERES A CAT-FIGHT

bakedbean
08-08-2006, 20:14
4.34

THE LION BAR INT EVENING

LUCY IS STANDING AT THE DOOR, ANDY LOOKS SHOCKED AS DOES EVREYONE ELSE.

ROBERT: Mum your back
LUCY: Oh you bet ya and im not going anywhere

LUCY LOOKS AT ANDY AND GRINS...ANDY DOES NOT LOOK HAPPY.

LUCY: Well well well things have changed around here havent they

LUCY WALKS TO THE BAR UP TO SHARON AND RIC.

LUCY: You two behined my bar

LUCY PUTS OUT HER HAND...RIC SHAKES IT.

LUCY: Good luck Ric your going to need it...mark my words i will get my pub back and thats a fact
RIC: As good as it is to see you Lucy your not getting this place back
LUCY: We will see about that...but get ready for the fight of your life.

LUCY WALKS OVER TO ROBERT.

LUCY: Let me have a look at you
ROBERT: Hello mum

LUCY SMILES AND THEN SLAPS ROBERT HARD ACROSS THE FACE.

ROBERT: What was that for
LUCY: Letting your brother get into this mess and selling the Lion you stupid boy.
ROBERT: Oh thanks.
LUCY: How could you let Shawn get locked up and then lose this place.
ROBERT: I never did anything
LUCY: Exactly and where is Chrissie
ROBERT: Why dont you ask Andy
LUCY: What are you talking about
ROBERT: Him and Chrissie slept together about 2 weeks ago
LUCY: Well what do you expect Robert after all the things you have put her through
ROBERT: You know i can never do anything right for you can i
LUCY: Oh i didnt mean it like that Robert...

ROBERT STORMS OUT OF THE PUB.

ANDY: As i was saying The Scotsmans are slowly falling apart pathetic

LUCY SLAPS ANDY HARD ACROSS THE FACE.

LUCY: My family...look at you family...you go missing for years on end and then you return with a wife and two kids...then your other little secret comes out that you have two other childrens and then you have an affair with Chrissie...not to mention that your wife is an alcholic but wont admit it...and you say my family is bad.
VIV: [WALKING FROM ACROSS THE BAR TO LUCY SHE OPENS THE DOOR] I think that it is time you leave Lucy before i do something that i will really regret
LUCY: Im not talking about you Viv im...
VIV: When you talk about one member of my family your talking about all of us.

THE MACKLIN FAMILY STAND UP AND ALAN AND TRUDY JOIN THEM.

VIV: This is my family Lucy and i dont care what you think or what you say...you will never ever bring us down...now get out and stay out of me and my familys life.
JENNY: Why did you even bother coming back Lucy nobody wants you here...look at you...you dont even respect your own son
LUCY: You know how stupid you are Jenny for taking him back he will only break your heart again.
JENNY: Maybe he will Lucy but if that ever happens i will deal with it

LUCY TAKES A LOOK AROUND AND SLOWLY WALKS OUT.

NEXT TIME: Its the day before the wedding and Alex plans his revenge on the Macklins let the build up to the 200th episode begin.

bakedbean
13-08-2006, 21:14
4.35

ROBERTS FLAT LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

ROBERT IS ASLEEP ON THE SEATEE, THE LIGHT COMES ON AND LUCY WALKS OUT OF ROBERTS BEDROOM. LUCY OPENS THE CURTAINS AS ROBERT SLOWLY WAKES UP.

ROBERT: Mum its [LOOKS AT HIS WATCH] Its half seven
LUCY: I know what time it is Robert
ROBERT: Well why are you up so early
LUCY: Becuse im going to see Shawn...and your going to have a wash get dressed and find yourself a job.
ROBERT: I dont need a job i am getting money from renting out the flats
LUCY: What flats
ROBERT: The flats that we are living in
LUCY: You own these block of flats what did you do to get them
ROBERT: You are always suspicious about evreything i do...you never believe me do you
LUCY: What do you expect your just like your dad a lyer and a cheat
ROBERT: Just for once mum shut up

ROBERT STORMS INTO THE BATHROOM SLAMMING THE DOOR BEHINED HIM.


EXETER STREET EXT MORNING

ANDY WALKS OUT OF THE MACKLIN HOUSE SMIRKING. THE POSTMAN HANDS ANDY HIS POST.

ANDY: Cheers

ANDY LOOKS THROUGH THE MAIL AND THEN PUTS IT INTO HIS POCKET HE LOOKS TO THE FLATS AND SEES LUCY WALKING OUT.

ANDY: Morning Lucy...beutiful day aint it

ANDY WALKS TOWARDS THE COMPLEX, LUCY DOES NOT LOOK PLEASED.

THE MACKLIN HOUSE LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

JENNY,TRUDY AND VIV ARE SAT AT THE TABLE ORGINISING THE WEDDING.

JENNY: So thats it then the wedding will be by the pond on the complex and the party after will be in the Club.
VIV: Yep...Oh that reminds me James is offering the first drinks free.
TRUDY: Oh god dont tell Alan becuse he will get bladdered.
JENNY: I hope that Lucy does not show up to ruin evreything
VIV: I dont think even Lucy is stupid enough to try and ruin my familys big day.
JENNY: I hope so Viv i dont want anything to ruin the big day
TRUDY: Stop worrying Jenny nothing could possibly go wrong

THE GARAGE ANDYS OFFIC INT AFTERNOON.

ANDY IS AT HIS COMPUTER, STEVE IS COMPLAING ABOUT THE STAG NIGHT.

STEVE: Come on dad let me come
ANDY: No Steve your not old enough
STEVE: But dad
ANDY: No and thats final

THE CHASE LATE NIGHT EXT

ALEXS CAR PULLS UP INTO THE WOODS. ALEX STEPS OUT AND ANDY STAGGERS OUT OF THE CAR DRUNK.

ANDY: What are we doing here
ALEX; I have a suprise for you
ANDY: What sort of suprise

ANDY AND ALEX WALK FURTHER INTO THE WOODS, ANDY WALKS IN FRONT.

ANDY: You know son...and this is not the drink...i know i dont tell you this enough but i do love you.

ALEX WACKS ANDY ACROSS THE HEAD HARD WITH A PLANK OF WOOD KNOCKING HIM TO THE GROUND.

ALEX: I love you to Dad

ALEX STANDS ABOVE ANDY LAUGHING AS THE CAMERA MOVES INTO A BIRDSEYE VIEW OF THE TWO.

Next Time: The 200th episode and its the big day but what has evil Alex planned for Andy???

alohachica82
15-08-2006, 11:22
What is Exeter? I've never heard of it before! When can I see it?

DaVeyWaVey
15-08-2006, 17:55
What is Exeter? I've never heard of it before! When can I see it?

It's one of the best soaps on soapboards and you just read the scripts, you don't actually get to see it. :)

bakedbean
21-08-2006, 14:24
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4.36

200 AND COUNTING!

ABANDONED WAREHOUSE THE CHASE INT EARLY MORNING.

ANDY IS UNCONCIOUS HE IS TIED UP TO A PIPE. THE DOOR OPENS AND ALEX WALKS IN, HE CHUCKS WATER OVER ANDYS FACE WAKING HIM UP.

ALEX: Morning Dad
ANDY: Whats going on...is this one of your stag night jokes or something
ALEX: If it was a joke dad i would have tied you up in Exeter Street naked.
ANDY: So what the hell is going on
ALEX: You really dont know do you
ANDY: No i dont now cut the crap and tell me what is going on.
ALEX: Well lets just say that today is going to be the worst day of your life

ALEX LAUGHS.

ANDY: What are you going on about
ALEX: Its game over dad...all the planning and thought i have put into this and now finally we are here. It was tough at times what with David and the Ramsays.
ANDY: What about David he is dead he died in the car crash with your mum.
ALEX: Oh yeah about that David didnt die in a car crash and neither did mum
ANDY: What so they are still alive.
ALEX: Mum is but Davids dead
ANDY: How did he die
ALEX; He got in my way...he found out about evreything and he was going to ruin it all...so i did what i had to
ANDY: What did you do
ALEX: I didnt do much punched him and then he stummbeled and fell down the hatch.
ANDY: What hatch
ALEX: Do you remeber the over week when they found a body in the empty lift shaft
ANDY: You have got to be kidding me

THE COMPLEX MARQUEE INT MORNING.

THE MARQUEE IS GETTING SET UP FOR THE WEDDING, JENNY WALKS IN WITH VIV AND TRUDY.

JENNY: Its going to be perfect...no one is going to destory my big day not even Lucy Scotsman
VIV: Dont worry about her Jenny she wont be coming anywhere near here i promise.
TRUDY: Yeah and if she does me and Viv will sort her out.
VIV: Yeah nothing is going to go wrong today i promise

ROBERTS FLAT/ KITCHEN INT MORNING

LUCY IS MAKING HERSLEF A COFFEE, ROBERT WALKS IN LOOKING ROUGH.

LUCY: What time did you come in last night
ROBERT: I dunno and whats it to you
LUCY: Your brother is in prison and all you can do is drink evreyday
ROBERT; What i do is up to me
LUCY: Of course it is Robert i mean heaven forbid that you should be there for the family
ROBERT: Oh yeah and what has the family ever done for me
LUCY: We have been there for you
ROBERT: I never got one visit while i was inside
LUCY: Well thats different
ROBERT; How the hell is it
LUCY: You hit Chrissie for gods sake and now look shes left you and never coming back
ROBERT: Just shutup for one in your miserable life shut up.

ABANDONED WAREHOUSE INT MORNING

ANDY IS STILL TIED TO THE PIPE AND ALEX IS TAUNTING HIM.

ANDY: Your sick you know that killing your own brother
ALEX: Well i only learnt it from the best
ANDY: What you talking about
ALEX: I know that you got Dennis Hill to kill Paul Ramsay
ANDY: Oh yeah and how do you know that
ALEX: Now that would be telling wouldnt it
ANDY: Oh right so what else have you done
ALEX: Thats a very good question...you see to get you to return to Exeter Street i had to put the rest of the family in danger.
ANDY: Wait a minute please tell me you didnt plant the bombs
ALEX: Well
ANDY: Your sick you really are
ALEX: Yeah maybe i am but hwat can you do
ANDY: Okay so what are you planning on doing to me
ALEX: Well you know i had a good long think and the bets thing to do is get rid of you once and for all
ANDY: Go on then do your worse...you think im afraid...whats up Alex cat caught your tongue...you see im not afraid of anyone so do your worse...i have no weakness.
ALEX: But Dad you do...that weakness is Brooke
ANDY: What...you leave her out of this
ALEX: But the strange thing is you treat Brooke more like your own then me or Steve
ANDY: I dunno what your going on about
ALEX: I found the adoption papers dad, Brooke is not really a Macklin is she and now she is going to get involved in are little drama
ANDY: I swear if you touch her
ALEX: You will what dad...you cant do anything your tied up here
ANDY: Jenny will wonder where i am the wedding is only in a hour or so.
ALEX: Dont worry Dad i will explain evreything

ALEX LEAVES THE WAREHOUSE LAUGHING, ANDY STRUGGLES TRYING TO GET HIMSELF UNTIED.

CHARNELY POLICE STATION/GROUSES OFFICE. INT MORNING.

VIC IS BUSY SERCHING THROUGH SOME FILES WHEN AN OFFICER BARGES IN.

VIC: You ever knock when you come in
OFFICER: Sorry sir but
VIC: Come on spit it out
OFFICER: Well we have found new evidence about the man that was pushed down the shaft
VIC: What sort of evidence
OFFICER: We have video footage of the killer.
VIC: What

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

ALEX PULLS UP BY THE COMPLEX, JENNY WALKS UP TO HIM.

JENNY: Alex where is your dad
ALEX; Dont worry Jenny he is getting himself ready
JENNY: Oh right
ALEX; Dont worry Jenny nothing is going to go wrong erm where is Brooke
JENNY: Why
ALEX; Dad wants to see her
JENNY: Shes just in the Marquee

JENNY SHOUTS BROOKE WHO WALKS UP TO THEM.

BROOKE: What now
JENNY: You need to go with Alex your Dad wants you
BROOKE: What for
JENNY: I dont know

BROOKE AND ALEX STEP INTO THE CAR.

ALEX CAR INT MORNING

ALEX AND BROOKE STEP INTO THE CAR AND SHUT THE DOORS.

ALEX: Buckel up Brooke its going to be one hell of a ride.

ALEX AND BROOKE BOTH LAUGH AS ALEX LOCKS THE DOORS.

BROOKE; Why have you locked the door
ALEX: Like i said its going to be one hell of a ride

ALEX SPEEDS OUT OF EXETER STREET WITH BROOKE LOOKING WORRIED.

THE ABANDONED WAREHOUSE INT MORNING

ANDY IS TRYING TO GET HIMSELF UNTIED, BUT FAILS HIS PHONE BEGINS TO RING IT SAYS VIV ON IT.

VIVS KITCHEN INT MORNING.

VIV IS ON HER MOBILE, TRUDY IS STANDING NEXT TO HER.

TRUDY: Well has he answered it
VIV; No its the answer machine...Andy ring me as soon as you get this i mean it Andy you ditch her i will personally find you and well you know the rest.

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

JENNY IS STANDING IN THE STREET WELCOMING THE GUESTS.

JENNY: Hi how are you
COURTNEY: Im fine thanks Jenny and you on your second big day
JENNY: Yeah
COURTNEY: Where is Andy
JENNY: Oh he will be here soon

WE CAN HEAR SIRENS IN THE DISTANTS.

COURTNEY: Wonder whats going on
JENNY: Yeah same here

THE POLICE CARS SPEED UP TO EXETER STREET AND STOP RIGHT BY JENNY.

JENNY: What the hell is going on

VIC STEPS OUT OF HIS CAR.

VIC: Jenny where is Alex
JENNY: Why whats going on
VIC: Look Jenny we need to know where Alex is now
JENNY: He has just taken Brooke to go and see Andy
VIC: Where
JENNY: Well i dont know
VIC: Alright just stay here and stay calm

VIV AND TRUDY COME OUT OF THE HOUSE AND SEE THE POLICE WITH JENNY THEY RUN OVER.

VIV: Jenny what is going on
JENNY: I dont know Viv they are looking for Alex
VIV: What do they want with Alex
JENNY: They didnt say

THE POLICE CARS RUSH OFF.

ALEX CAR INT MORNING.

THE CAR IS RUSHING DOWN A LANE GETTING CLOSER AND CLOSER TO THE CHASE.

BROOKE: What are you doing
ALEX: Its such a shame that you have to get involved in this mess i mean your not even family.
BROOKE: What are you talking about im your sister.
ALEX: No your not
BROOKE: Your mad
ALEX: You dont know do you
BROOKE: Know what
ALEX: That your adopted
BROOKE: What

THE CAR TURNS INTO THE CHASE SPEEDING DOWN THE LANE COMING CLOSER AND CLOSER TO THE WAREHOUSE.

BROOKE: You really are losing it
ALEX: Im not Brooke im telling the truth

BROOKE NOTICES THAT THE CAR IS SPEEDING UP TO THE WAREHOUSE.

BROOKE: Slow down your going to crash
ALEX: Goodbye Brooke its been fun

ALEX LAUGHS AS BROOKE SCREAMS, THE CAR CRASHES INTO THE WAREHOUSE,CRASHING INTO THE PIPE WHICH SPLITS CAUSING GAS TO POUR OUT. ANDY RUNS OVER TO THE CAR AND TRYS TO OPEN BROOKE DOOR BUT IT IS LOCKED. ANDY GRAPS A BRICK AND SMASHED THE WINDOW OPENING THE DOOR AND PULLING BROOKE OUT. ALEX WAKES AND CAN SEE THAT ANDY AND BROOKE ARE ESCAPING.

ALEX: No your not supposed to escape your ruining it all
ANDY: I hope you rot in hell.

THE ABANDONED WAREHOUSE EXT MORNING.

THE WAREHOUSE EXPLODES JUST AS THE POLICE TURN UP.

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

JENNY,VIV AND TRUDY ARE SAT AT THE BENCH LOOKING WORRIED. A TAXI ROLLS UP INTO EXETER STREET. 2 BLACK HIGH HEELS STEP OUT OF THE TAXI AND OUT STEPS SUSAN MACKLIN.

SUSAN: Jenny,Viv and Trudy what a suprise

SUSAN SMIRKS AS JENNY,VIV AND TRUDY LOOK SHOCKED.

bakedbean
29-08-2006, 19:15
EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

JENNY,VIV AND TRUDY ARE SAT AT THE BENCH LOOKING WORRIED. A TAXI ROLLS UP INTO EXETER STREET. 2 BLACK HIGH HEELS STEP OUT OF THE TAXI AND OUT STEPS SUSAN MACKLIN.

SUSAN: Jenny,Viv and Trudy what a suprise

SUSAN SMIRKS AS JENNY,VIV AND TRUDY LOOK SHOCKED.

JENNY: What the hell are you doing here
SUSAN: I have come to my son be the best man its a big thing for David
VIV: David
SUSAN: Yeah you know
JENNY: No wait a minute its Alex who is the best man we have not seen or heard from David.
SUSAN: No he was on the phone to me last week and told me about you and Andy getting remarried and well i just had to come
JENNY: To cause trouble yeah
VIV: Alright you two calm down now Susan we have not seen or heard from David well not for a very long time its Alex who is here and who is the best man
JENNY: Except the police are after him
SUSAN: Oh god not again
JENNY: What do you mean not again well

THE CHASE OUTSIDE THE WAREHOUSE EXT MORNING.

THE POLICE ARE SURRONDING THE AREA WHILE THE FIRE BRIGADE ARE PUTTING THE FIRE OUT. VIC IS TALKING TO ONE OF HIS OFFICERS.

VIC: Do we know if anyone is still in there
OFFICER: We dont know sir
VIC: Well find out there could be three dead in there

INSIDE THE WAREHOUSE INT MORNING.

THE CAR HAD FLAMES BURSTING OUT OF IT, THERE IS RUBBLE ALL OVER THE GROUND. ANDY AND BROOKE ARE LYING UNCONCIOUS CLOSE BY. ANDY BEGINS TO COUGH AND SLOWLY WAKES HER SEES BROOKE AND NOTICES THAT THE FIRE IS SURROUNDING THEM.

ANDY: Brooke...Brooke wake up...Brooke...

ANDY BEGINS TO CHOKE AS THE SMOKE FILL THE WAREHOUSE. THE DOOR IS KICKED DOWN AS TWO FIRE OFFICER RUN IN AND PULL BROOKE AND ANDY OUT OF THE WAREHOUSE.

THE MACKLIN HOUSEHOLD/LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

VIV,JENNY AND SUSAN ARE ALL SAT AT THE TABLE TALKING ABOUT ALEX.

JENNY: So what do you mean not again
SUSAN: A few years ago Alex started asking questions about Andy where he was and who he was. So i told him evreything that i didnt really know just knew he lived around Charnley.
JENNY: And what
SUSAN: Well he started acting strange he found a few photos of Andy and started burning them in the flat but erm one day he accidentley burnt down the flat. Well he blamed it on his David and i believed him. I sent David off to military school but soon found out that was a teriable mistake. Alex started asking more questions about Andy and i stupidly answered them. Alex knew that i really knew where Andy was but i wouldnt tell him. So he hit me and i fell hitting my head on the table, i was knocked out. Anyway Alex set the flat on fire again and i was trapped inside, thankfully i was saved. But Alex had gone on the run and i didnt know where he had gone.
JENNY: So you let him come here to cause us grief
VIV: When was this
SUSAN: About this time last year
VIV: Wait a minute fires no...no not my own grandson
SUSAN: What are you talking about
VIV: Its obvious dont you see it was him it was Alex
JENNY: I dont understand
VIV: It was Alex who planted all the bombs.
JENNY: No Viv it was one of Paul Ramsays enemys who did all that
VIV: No dont you see Alex came to Exeter Street to get his revenge on Andy
JENNY: But me and Andy were not even around when the plane exploded plus we were not on the coach
VIV: Yes but he didnt know that did he, it was a big day and Susan told him how Andy would always be the centre of attention so he must have thought my dad would have been on that plane and when he found out that he did not die he decided to do it again on the coach. But that never worked so he came to Exeter Street to act out his final revenge on his dad.
JENNY: And what a day to do it on the biggest day of his life.
VIV: My god we need to tell the police before anything happens.

VIV AND JENNY RUSH OUT OF THE HOUSE, SUSAN FOLLOWS.

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

VIV AND JENNY RUN OUT OF THE HOUSE SUSAN RUSH OUT AFTER THEM.

SUSAN: Wait a minute, Alex wouldnt do this i just know he wouldnt.
JENNY: Your son is a nutter
SUSAN: How dare you
VIV: Will you two stop bickering you can do that later on but now we give 100% on finding Andy and Brooke.

JENNYS PHONE RINGS SHE ANSWERS IT.

JENNY: Hello...what...oh yeah we will be right there. JENNY PUTS THE PHONE DOWN. Looks like they already found them
VIV: Are they okay
JENNY: There in the hospital
SUSAN: And Alex
JENNY: I dont know and i really dont care.

JENNY,SUSAN AND VIV STEP INTO JENNYS CAR AND THEY SPEED OFF. THE CAMERA TURNS TO THE COMPLEX WHERE RIC IS WALKING OUT OF THE TENT HE ACCIDENTALY BUMPS INTO COURTNEY. NICK IS CLOSE WATCHING.

RIC: Oh im sorry love
COURTNEY: No its fine
RIC: Courtney isnt it
COURTNEY: Yeah thats right Courtney Cox and you must be Ric Grand the landlord of the Lion
RIC: Yeah thats right hey i might see you some time
COURTNEY: Maybe you will

RIC WALKS OFF TO THE LION, COURTNEY MAKES SURE THAT RIC ENTERS THE LION BEFORE GOING TO NICK.

NICK: So the balls started rolling
COURTNEY: You bet the con is on

NICK AND COURTNEY WALK OFF TOGETHER LAUGHING.

Part two next!!!

bakedbean
29-08-2006, 19:16
THE LION LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

RIC WALKS IN LOOKING SMUG. SHARON IS SAT AT THE TABLE READING A MAGAZINE.

SHARON: So is the wedding on or what and why are you looking so smug.
RIC: What im not oh and neithers the wedding
SHARON: Well thats a shame i just about fit into this dress what with the baby
RIC: You look gorgeous priness absolutley gorgeous.
SHARON: Why are you so happy
RIC: Cant a man be happy

RIC KISSES SHARON ON THE FORHEAD AND WALKS OUT OF THE ROOM, SHARON SMILES.

EXETER STREET/BACK ALLEY EXT AFTERNOON.

PETE GROUSE IS WALKING DOWN THE ALLEY WHEN HE IS STOPPED BY TWO MEN.

PETE: Garry look just give me a few more days and i promise i will get you the money.
GARRY: Pete how many times have i heard you say that, now look im giving you one last chance i want the money by tomorow night or else
PETE: Alright
GARRY: Good we have an understanding.

GARRY AND THE OTHER MAN LEAVE, PETE LOOKS WORRIED.

THE HOSPITAL/ANDYS ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

VIV,JENNY AND SUSAN ARE SAT AROUND ANDYS BED.

SUSAN: Alex would never do anything like this
ANDY: Well he did and he neraley killed me and my daughter
VIV: Is there any word on Alex
ANDY: Hopefully he is rotting in hell right now
SUSAN: Your sick to talk about your own son like that
ANDY: As far as im concerned i only have two sons David and Steve
SUSAN: I wish i knew where David was i havent seen him for months no phone calls no nothing.
ANDY: Susan look David...i dont know how to put this
SUSAN: Well come on
ANDY: Davids dead
SUSAN: What no
ANDY: That sick nutter of ares killed David a few weeks ago
SUSAN: No...no i dont believe you.

THE LION/BAR INT EVENING.

SHARON IS BEHINED THE BAR WITH ANOTHER OF THE BAR STAFF. THE PUB IS QUITE WITH ONLY A FEW PEOPLE INCLUDING PETE WHO IS SAT IN THE CORNER. RIC WALKS IN WEARING HIS JACKET.

RIC: You sure your going to be okay darling
SHARON: Im going to be fine dad
RIC: Well i wont be to late.
SHARON: See you later Dad

RIC EXITS AS SHARON OPENS THE TILL, PETE WATCHES SHARON PUT THE CODE INTO THE TILL AND SEES HOW MUCH MONEY THERE IS INSIDE. PETE THEN MAKES A QUICK EXIT OUT OF THE LION.

THE ABANDONED WAREHOUSE EXT EVENING.

THE POLICE ARE STILL INVESTIGATING THE ACCIDENT. VIC IS TALKING TO ANOTHER INSPECTOR.

VIC: Well whats the verdict
INSPECTOR: They have done all they can but there is no other body there
VIC: You mean that Alex managed to escape
INSPECTOR: Looks that way boss

VIC HAS A LOOK OF FEAR ON HIS FACE.

VIC: Right here is what i want you to do, get two police officers to the hospital and keep guard of Andy Macklin and Brooke Macklin and then get two more officers to patrol Exeter Street i dont want Alex to cause anymore trouble got it.
INSPECTOR: Boss.

THE LION BAR INT NIGHT.

SHARON SHOWS THE LAST FEW PEOPLE OUT OF THE PUB AND THEN LOCKS THE DOOR. SHARON COLLECTS THE GLASSES AND GETS READY TO GO UPSTAIRS WHEN THERE IS A BANG ON THE DOOR.

SHARON: Sorry we are closed

ANOTHER KNOCK AT THE DOOR.

SHARON: Alright hold on im coming.

SHARON WALKS TO THE DOOR AND OPENS IT, A MALE WEARING A BLLACLARVER BARGES PAST AND RUNS TO THE TILL AND OPENS IT TAKING THE MONEY OUT OF IT. SHARON TRYS TO STOP THEM BUT THE MALE PUSHES HER TO THE GROUND KNOCKING HER HEAD ON THE BAR. THE MALE TAKES A QUICK LOOK AT SHARON UNCONCIOUS ON THE FLOOR AND THEN RUNS QUICKLY OUT OF THE LION.


THE HOSPITAL ANDYS ROOM INT NIGHT

THE MACKLINS ARE ALL AROUND ANDY, BROOKE IS IN A WHEELCHAIR.

JENNY: You heard the doctor Brooke you need to stay in the wheelchair for a few days
BROOKE: But mum i have things to do and people to see
ANDY: Your going to rest Brooke and once your out of the wheelchair your going to start work
BROOKE: What no
ANDY: Yes your are sweetheart your going to be my receptionist
BROOKE: Will i get good pay
ANDY: Course darlin

VIC WALKS IN THE ROOM WITH TWO POLICE OFFICERS.

ANDY: Oh what now Grouse
VIC: Andy we need to talk its about Alex
SUSAN: Is he okay
VIC: We have serched through what was left of the warehouse after the explosion and there is no sign of him
ANDY: What no thats not possible i saw him with my own eyes when the place exploded
VIC: We have a serch team looking for him at the moment but meanwhile we are not taking any risks and so these two officers will be watching and protecting you
ANDY: I dont need any protection
VIC: Im afraid you do Andy becuse Alexs is at large and very dangerous im not taking any chances
BROOKE: Do you think he will come back
VIC: Like i said im not taking any risks

THE MACKLINS ALL HAVE A LOOK OF CONCERN ON THERE FACE.

THE LION INT EVENING

THE DOOR IS A JAR AND SHARON IS LYING UNCONCIOUS ON THE FLOOR WITH BLOOD POURING FROM HER HEAD. RIC WALKS IN AND TURNS ON THE LIGHT HE LOOKS AROUND AND SEES SHARON.

RIC: Oh god Sharon...Sharon wake up...Sharon.

RIC RINGS FOR AN AMBULANCE AND HOLDS SHARON IN HIS ARMS.

RIC: Please i need help its my daughter shes been attacked please shes pregnant.

THE SCENE FADES OUT WITH RIC HOLDING SHARON IN HIS ARMS.

bakedbean
31-08-2006, 14:57
4.38

THE HOSPITAL/SHARONS ROOM INT MORNING

RIC IS SAT AT SHARONS BEDSIDE WHO IS ASLEEP, HE LOOKS WORRIED. VIV WALKS PAST THE WINDOW AND SEES SHARON AND RIC SHE WALKS IN.

VIV: Ric whats happened
RIC: I dont know i left her to close up and then i came back the door was open and Sharon was on the floor with blood coming out of her head.
VIV: Is she going to be alright
RIC: Yeah she'll be fine
VIV: And the baby
RIC: They had to operate and they found that it wasnt breathing shes lost it. Sharons lost her beutiful baby.

RIC BEGINS TO CRY VIV GIVES HIM A HUG.

VIV: Evreything is going to be fine Ric dont worry
RIC: Its all my fault Viv i shouldnt have left her.
VIV: Its not your fault.

EXTER STREET/BACK ALLEY EXT MORNING.

GARRY IS LURKING IN THE BACK ALLEY WATCHING THE POLICE SERCHING THE LION. PETE COMES BEHINED HIM WITH A BAG.

GARRY: You got it then or what
PETE: Yeah i have

PETE PASSES GARRY THE BAG.

PETE: There is a bit extra in there for some more stuff
GARRY: Yeah right what do you want
PETE: I need some coke
GARRY: Alright i will see what i could do, so did you do that
PETE: Do what
GARRY: Rob that place
PETE: Does it matter how i got it
GARRY: No suppose not only i heard that the landlady was hurt and that she lost the baby
PETE: What she lost the...look it dont matter okay just get me the coke as soon as you can
GARRY: Pleasure doing bussiness with you.
PETE: Yeah you to.

GARRY WALKS OFF CARRYING THE BAG IN HIS ARMS, PETE HAS A LOOK OF GUILT ON HIS FACE.

CHARNLEY POLICE STATION INT AFTERNOON.

VIC IS WATCHING A SECURITY TAPE IN HIS OFFICE OF WHEN ALEX PUSHED DAVID DOWN THE LIFT SHAFT. A POLICE OFFICER WALKS IN.

VIC: Well any sightings
PO: No sir none at all
VIC: Someone must have seen him.
PO: No we have asked all over the area and checked all the tapes
VIC: Well at least he is no where near Charnley or Exeter Street
PO: Hopefully sir
VIC: We need to find him and put him away for life what he has done to the residents of Exeter Street is sick it really is.

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

JENNY IS SAT WITH BROOKE WHO IS STILL IN HER WHEELCHAIR.

BROOKE: Mum can i ask you something
JENNY: Course you can
BROOKE: Its something Alex said to me when he you know kidnapped me and all that
JENNY: What did he say (looking concerned)
BROOKE: Well you know i dont think its true but he told me...he told me that i was adopted that i really was not a Macklin after all

JENNY DOES NOT GIVE BROOKE AN ANSWER SHE TRYS TO IGNORE WHAT SHE SAID.

BROOKE: Oh my god he was telling the truth im not really a macklin
JENNY: Of course your a Macklin no matter what...
BROOKE: No matter what that im adopted
JENNY: I never said that
BROOKE: No but you were gonna
JENNY: No i was not
BROOKE: Mum i want to know the truth after all this is my life we are talking about
JENNY: I think we should wait until your dad gets home
BROOKE: No mum i want to know and i want to know right now.
JENNY: But Brooke
BROOKE: Please mum i want to know
JENNY: Ok alright you old enough now to know the truth.

THERE IS A SHORT PAUSE OF SILENCE

BROOKE: Well come on then
JENNY: Ok here goes...When me and your Dad got married the first thing we did was try for a baby and we tried and tried for months and months and we realised that something was not right so we went to the Doctor. It turned out that i only had one good ovary left and the Doctor thought it best if we tried adoption. So thats what we didand here you are.
BROOKE: No that doesnt explain anything
JENNY: It does
BROOKE: Who are my real parents i mean who really am i
JENNY: Your a Macklin Brooke you always have been and you always will be.


THE HOSPITAL SHARONS ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

RIC IS STILL SAT AT SHARONS BEDSIDE, SHARON SLOWLY WAKES UP.

RIC: Sharon princess are you okay
SHARON: Whats going on why am i here
RIC: Sharon you were attacked last night remeber
SHARON: Sort of i dont really remeber much
RIC: Princess i need to tell you something
SHARON: What about my baby what did they say about my baby
RIC: Im sorry Sharon im so sorry
SHARON: No please no not my baby no.

SHARONS CRIES AND RIC HUGS HER.

RIC: Evreything is going to be fine Sharon i promise
SHARON: How can you say that i have just lost my child and all you can say is evreything is going to be fine.
RIC: Well it is
SHARON: No it not it never ever will be again

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON

A TAXI PULLS UP OUTSIDE OF VIVS HOUSE. A WOMAN STEPS OUT OF THE TAXI WITH A SUITCASE SHE PAYS THE DRIVER AND SHE RINGS VIVS DOORBELL. THE DOOR OPENS AND ALAN ANSWERS HE LOOKS SHOCKED.

ALAN: Kat what are you doing here
KAT: Hello Dad

KAT SMILES AS ALAN LOOKS SHOCKED.


VIVS FRONT ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

ALAN AND KAT WALK IN TO THE FRONT ROOM.

KAT: Make us a coffee Dad
ALAN: You still have 3 sugars
KAT: No im on a diet no sugars
ALAN: So what are you doing around Charnley
KAT: Im moving in
ALAN: There is no room here sweet heart
KAT: No the flats
ALAN: Oh right where the kids
KAT: Well there not kids anymore
ALAN: So where are they
KAT: Katy living in London with her new boyfriend hes a model
ALAN: Really well as long as he treats her right
KAT: Yeah he seems like a decent bloke
ALAN: And what about Warren
KAT: What about him
ALAN: Where is he
KAT: I dont know and i dont care
ALAN: Come on you dont mean that
KAT: No not like you mean it with Tim your only son
ALAN: Thats different and you know it is so where is he
KAT: I really dont know the last i heard was he went to court for GBH and it didnt look good
ALAN: Oh thats all i need what prison is he in
KAT: Your not going to see him Dad
ALAN: I am Kat im going to find my Grandson no matter what you say

bakedbean
02-09-2006, 15:54
4.39

EXETER STREET LATE NIGHT EXT

THE STREET IS EMPTY AND QUIET NO ONE IS AROUND. ROBERTS FLAT LIGHT TURNS ON AND HE WALKS OUT OF THE FRONT DOOR. ROBERT LOOKS AROUND MAKING SURE NO ONE IS AROUND AND GETS INTO HIS CAR AND DRIVES OFF.

CHARNLEY TRAIN STATION PLATFORM 3 EXT LATE NIGHT

A TRAIN PULLS UP INTO THE STATION ONLY A FEW PEOPLE STEP OFF, THE LAST CARRIAGE DOOR OPENS AND WARREN ROUND IS THROWN OUT OF THE CARRIAGE. ONE OF THE TICKET MEN JUMPS OUT AND BEGINS TO SHOUT AT WARREN.

TICKET MAN: So have you got the money for the trip or what
WARREN: Does it looks like i have any money you stupid prat
TICKET MAN: Right thats it i have had enough of your cheek im getting the police involved
WARREN: Look mate
TICKET MAN: I aint your mate
WARREN: Look how about i take your adress and when i get the money i will send it on to you
TICKET MAN: How many times have i heard that before
WARREN: Oh right well theres only one solution then
TICKET MAN: Oh yeah and whats that
WARREN:This

WARREN PUNCHES THE TICKET MAN KNOCKING HIM TO THE GROUND AND WARREN RUNS OFF.

THE COBRA NIGHT CLUB/DENNIS OFFICE INT EARLY MORNING.

DENNIS HILL IS SAT BEHINED HIS DESK, ROBERT IS SAT OPPOSITE HIM.

ROBERT: So what do you want and i know it aint no freindly chat
DENNIS: Well yes that is true i have a bit of a problem Robert and i want that problem eliminated.
ROBERT: Oh yeah and who is this problem
DENNIS: You know him
ROBERT: Please tell me its Macklin
DENNIS: No while yes he can be a problem he is also very usefull to me no the problem im talking about is Nick Glover
ROBERT: I thought he was useful i mean he is running the bookies for you
DENNIS: True but lets just say he has got to involved
ROBERT: And what if i dont get rid of him
DENNIS: You see Robert i needed to make sure you would do this for me so i dug around and found your wife, now if you do this i will tell you where she is but if you dont then i will go visit her and well you know the rest
ROBERT: How long have i got
DENNIS: You have till the end of the night now dont mess me around Robert you know what will happen next

DENNIS SMILES AND ROBERT LOOKS WORRIED.

VIVS KITCHEN INT MORNING.

IT IS MORNING IN EXETER STREET AND EVREYONE IS STILL ASLEEP IN VIVS HOUSE EXCEPT FOR JAMES WHO WALKS INTO THE KITCHEN LOOKING TIRED, JAMES WALKS TO THE CUBORD AND PICKS UP A BOX OF ASPRINS, HE GETS ONE OUT OF THE BOX AND POURS HIMSELF A DRINK OF WATER HOWEVER BEFORE HE CAN TAKE THE ASPRIN HE COLLAPSES ON THE FLOOR WITH THE GLASS SMASHING NEXT TO HIM. VIV RUNS INTO THE KITCHEN AND SEES JAMES.

VIV: James...James please speak to me...James.

JAMES DOES NOT ANSWER, VIV PICKS UP THE PHONE AND DIALS A NUMBER.

VIV: Doctor, its James hes collapsed again.

ROBERTS FLAT/BEDROOM INT MORNING.

ROBERT IS SAT ON HIS BED HE IS HOLDING A GUN IN HIS HANDS, ROBERT LOOKS UP AND SEES HIS REFLECTION IN THE MIRROR HOLDING THE GUN.

VIVS HOUSE/JAMES BEDROOM INT MORNING.

JAMES IS ASLEEP IN THE BED, VIV IS STANDING AT HIS BEDSIDE WITH THE DOCTOR.

VIV: Hes not getting any better is he Doctor
DOCTOR: Im sorry Viv hes getting worse
VIV: How long does he have left
DOCTOR: By the looks of it at the most 3 weeks
VIV: What oh no please no

VIV LOOKS AT JAMES AND BEGINS TO CRY

THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

TRUDY,ALAN AND KAT WALK INTO THE LION, RIC IS BEHIND THE BAR, ALAN WALKS UP TO THE BAR.

ALAN: Erm 2 half pints of lager and a pint for me
RIC: That aint Kat is it
ALAN: Yeah she came back yesterday
RIC: I aint seen her for years
ALAN: Same here hows your Sharon
RIC: Shes getting there i took her to a heatlh spar and shes staying there for a few weeks
ALAN: Bet that cost a bit
RIC: Yeah but shes worth evrey penny

THE CAMERA TURNS TO TRUDY AND KAT WHO ARE TALKING AS THEY ARE TALKING THE SCENE CHANGES TO THE STREET.

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

TRUDY: What is it with you and your Warren
KAT: Its nothing i just...couldnt handle him anymore you know he was such a loving boy back then but he changed he really did change turned nasty he stole he took drugs evreything he even hit me once and i chucked him out. Next thing i know he was in Prison for GBH

AS KAT SPEAKS WE SEE WARRENS FEET WALKING DOWN THE BACK ALLEY OF THE STREET COMING CLOSER AND CLOSER TO THE LION.

KAT: And you know what i hope i never see him ever agian.

AS KAT SAYS THOSE FINAL WORDS THE CAMERA TILTS UP TO SEE WARRENS FACE, WARREN LOOKS AROUND THE STREET AND BEGINS TO WALK TO THE LION, WARREN ACCIDENTALLY BARGES INTO ROBERT.

ROBERT: Hey watch where you going kid
WARREN: I aint no kid old man
ROBERT: Excuse me
WARREN: What you expect me to be scared or summit becuse i aint
ROBERT: Well you better be kid
WARREN: Well go on then do your worst

THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

RIC IS LOOKING OUT OF THE WINDOW.

RIC: Hey you seen this guys Robert and some kid are arguing.

EVREYONE WALKS OUT OF THE PUB.

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

EVREYONE WALKS OUT OF THE LION JUST AS WARREN PUNCHES ROBERT KNOCKING HIM TO THE GROUND. TRUDY,ALAN AND KAT WALK OUT JUST AS WARREN DOES THIS.

KAT: What the hell are you doing here
WARREN: Mum what a suprise

WARREN SMILES AND KAT LOOKS ANGRY.

bakedbean
05-09-2006, 14:43
4.40

VIVS LIVING ROOM INT AFTERNOON.

THE DOOR OPENS AND KAT WALKS IN LOOKING FURIOUS,ALAN,TRUDY AND WARREN FOLLOW HER IN.

KAT: Your supposed to be inside
WARREN: I was a good boy they let me out early
KAT: You wouldnt know what good is if it came and slapped you on your backside and what the hell did you think of when you hit Robert Scotsman i mean of all people.
WARREN: He had it coming
KAT: Oh im sure he did Warren becuse lets face it evreyone that you have ever hit had it coming.
ALAN: Come on Kat lay off him
KAT: No Dad i wont hes bad to the bone and i dont want him round here
ALAN: Well i do and if Warren wants to stay in Charnely than he is welcome to stay here.
KAT: Dad you dont understand you let him back into your life and he will throw it back in your face

THE COBRA/DENNIS OFFICE INT EVENING.

DENNIS IS SAT BEHIND HIS DESK ON HIS PHONE.

DENNIS: Robert i trust that you are on your way now i want him gone by tonight no questions asked and you will find out where you wife is.

ROBERTS FLAT/BEDROOM INT EVENING.

ROBERT PUTS HIS PHONE DOWN AND GOES INTO HIS DRAW HE GRABS THE GUN AND TAKES A LOOK AT IT AND PUTS IT IN HIS INSIDE COAT POCKET AND WALKS OUT.

THE BOOKIES INT EVENING.

NICK BEGINS TO TIDY UP THE BOOKIES, HE THEN TURNS OFF THE LIGHTS AND WALKS INTO HIS OFFICE SHUTTING HIS DOOR. ROBERT THEN SLOWLY WALKS IN THROUGH THE FRONT DOOR SHUTTING IT QUIETLY HE PULLS HIS GUN OUT OF HIS POCKET AND WAITS UNTIL NICK WALKS OUT, NICK WALKS OUT LOOKING SHOCKED.

NICK: Robert how nice to see you and oh whos your little freind

NICK SMIRKS AS ROBERT HOLDS THE GUN AT NICK.

ROBERT: Enough of your cheek Glover i have it up to here with you and your flammin family
NICK: Let me guess my good cousin Andy
ROBERT: You bet ya
NICK: And i hear my young nephew well hes not really but hey hes my favourite now after what he did to you.
ROBERT: Dont push your luck Nick in case you dont know your in a lot of trouble
NICK: Oh really well some how i have this funny feeling that if i was in trouble with you then i wouldnt have a gun pointed at my face so my guess is Dennis Hill
ROBERT: Got it in one
NICK: Now what are you doing working for a man like Dennis Hill
ROBERT: We go back a while
NICK: Oh really and let me guess he is blackmailing you to do it same old story
ROBERT: What would you know about it
NICK: Well thats easy i did exactly the same thing all hes doing is getting rid of the old blood and bringing in the new your next for the chop Robert
ROBERT: What are you talking about
NICK: You know what im talking about youve heard the storys and trust me you will be next maybe not today and not tommorow but soon believe me.
ROBERT: And why should i believe you
NICK: Come on Robbie boy you know its true
ROBERT: So what am i supposed to do about it

NICK SMIRKS ALREADY HAVING A PLAN.

THE LION INT EVENING.

RIC IS LETTING THE LAST FEW PEOPLE OUT OF THE LION, COURTNEY IS SAT AT THE BAR.

RIC: Thank you good night.

RIC LOCKS THE DOOR AND GOES BEHINED THE BAR.

RIC: Drink
COURTNEY: I thought you would never ask.
RIC: Do you want me to order you a taxi
COURTNEY: No i will walk
RIC: Oh no im not letting you go out at this time of night on your own after what happened to Sharon, no i will walk you home.
COURTNEY: Or i could stay here
RIC: Well that would be intresting.

RIC AND COURTNEY KISS PASSIONETLEY AND WALK INTO THE BACK.

THE BOOKIES INT EVENING.

ROBERT IS STILL POINTING THE GUN AT NICK.

NICK: I will tell you what we are going to do about it get rid of the problem
ROBERT: What are you talking about
NICK: We finish off Dennis Hill once and for all
ROBERT: Oh you really thick or what get rid of Dennis Hill thats suicide
NICK: You have got to go and see him tonight after you "kill" me right
ROBERT: Yeah
NICK: Well he will be all by himself no one else there but him we take him for a trip to the chase and we only come back, so whats it to be Robert me or Dennis?
ROBERT: Give me a good reason why i should get rid of Dennis Hill apart from saving your skin
NICK: You dont know do you
ROBERT: Dont know what
NICK: He killed your Dad

bakedbean
18-09-2006, 19:05
4.41

THE COBRA CLUB/DENNIS OFFICE INT NIGHT.

DENNIS HAS HIS BACK TO THE DOOR, HE IS GOING THROUGH SOME OF HIS FILES IN HIS CABINET AND HE PICKS OUT A FILE WITH THE NAME CHRISSIE SCOTSMAN. THE DOOR OPENS AND DENNIS BEGINS TO TURN WHILE HE IS TALKING.

DENNIS: So you have done it yes
NICK: You mean me

DENNIS TURNS ROUND AND LOOKS ON IN SHOCK AS HE SEES NICK AND ROBERT WHO IS POINTING A GUN AT HIM.

DENNIS: What the hell are you doing Robert
ROBERT: Its time that you where put in your place Dennis its time that you payed for your sins.
DENNIS: Dont go all christian on me Robert
ROBERT: Pass me the file
DENNIS: Why should i
ROBERT: Becuse if you dont i will blow your brains out
DENNIS: What right here, right now smile kids your on camera
ROBERT: Just give me the file

DENNIS HANDS ROBERT THE FILE AND ROBERT PASSES IT TO NICK.

ROBERT: Move
DENNIS: What
ROBERT: Were going for a little trip Dennis in your car.

DENNIS BEGINS TO WALK OUT OF HIS OFFICE FOLLOWING NICK.

DENNIS: You wont get away with this Robert you wont.

VIVS HOUSE/JAMES BEDROOM INT NIGHT

JAMES IS ASLEEP IN HIS BED, A LAMP IS ON AND VIV IS SAT AT HIS BEDSIDE. JAMES SLOWLY WAKES UP AND SEES VIV SAT AT HIS BEDSIDE WITH TEARS IN HER EYES.

VIV: You should be asleep
JAMES: And so should you
VIV: No im fine
JAMES: No your not
VIV: I dont want to leave you
JAMES: Well there room for you in here

VIV LIES DOWN NEXT TO JAMES.

JAMES: You know i heard what the doctor said
VIV: You did
JAMES: Yeah three weeks left of my life and all im going to be doing is lying here in my sick bed
VIV: Well i tell you what you have a holiday home in Devon right
JAMES: Yeah i do
VIV: Well lets go there for a few days just me and you
JAMES: If your sure
VIV: I am sure
JAMES: You know Viv i do love you i always have and i always will
VIV: And i love you to

VIV AND JAMES SHARE A KISS BEFORE JAMES FALLS BACK TO SLEEP, VIV THEN FALLS TO SLEEP IN JAMES ARMS.

CANAL SIDE EXT NIGHT.

DENNIS CAR PULLS UP BESIDE THE CANAL, ROBERT STEPS OUT AND PULLS DENNIS OUT WITH HIM,NICK STAYS IN THE CAR.

ROBERT: Move
DENNIS: Your making a mistake Robert i mean why isnt he the one pointing the gun
ROBERT: Does it matter
DENNIS: It does becuse once they find me should you kill me then you will get the blame
ROBERT: Oh there not going to find you, do you remeber this place
DENNIS: No not really
ROBERT: Dont play dumb this is where you brought my dad this is where you killed him.
DENNIS: I never killed Mike hes swanning off somewhere in Spain
ROBERT: No you took him here and you shot him and threw him in the canal
DENNIS: Alright so what if i did he got what he deserved stealing money from me like that hes a louse and a cheat
ROBERT: Tell him your sorry
DENNIS: What
ROBERT: Tell my dad your sorry
DENNIS: I dont think so he got what he deserved your family are overated always have been and always will be.

ROBERT SHOOTS DENNIS WHO FALLS INTO THE CANAL.

bakedbean
22-09-2006, 17:00
4.42

VIVS LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

JAMES IS SAT ON THE CHAIR BESIDE THE PHONE. VIV WALKS IN WITH WARREN BRINGING IN WITH THEM A FEW SUITCASES.

VIV: Right are you ready to go

JAMES BEGINS TO COUGH HEAVILY

VIV: James oh dear...Warren get him a glass of water...look i dont think us going to Devon is such a good idea after all
JAMES: No we are still (coughs some more)
VIV: No we are not now come on back to bed
JAMES: Im not going back up to that room until tonight
VIV: Well what are you going to do
JAMES: I want to go the Lion
VIV: What but the place is full of smoke and its not a place for an ill man to go to
JAMES: Look it might be the last pint i ever have and i wanna go
VIV: Fine but you start to choke and we come straight back deal
JAMES: Deal
VIV: Well im going to get ready
JAMES: Yeah look can i use the phone
VIV: Course you can

.VIV LEAVES THE LIVING ROOM AND JAMES DIALS A NUMBER ON THE PHONE

JAMES: Max, its me James listen i have a proposition for you

ROBERTS FLAT INT MORNING.

ROBERT IS IN THE FRONT ROOM PACKING A BAG LUCY COMES OUT OF HER ROOM.

LUCY: What are you doing
ROBERT: Im packing
LUCY: Packing but where are you going
ROBERT: Brighton
LUCY: Brightom but why
ROBERT: Thats where Chrissie is
LUCY: You dont seriously think that she is going to take you back after evreything you have done to her
ROBERT: Me and her got back together when you were away and we were just fine
LUCY: Oh im sure you were thats why she was sleeping with Macklin
ROBERT: Im going Brightom and im going to find my wife and when i do im going to bring her home and i want you out of my flat
LUCY: Where am i going to go
ROBERT: There is an empty flat downstairs you can move there

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.
VIV AND JAMES WALK OUT OF THE HOUSE AND SLOWLY WALK TO THE LION. VIV BEGINS TO WALK IN BUT JAMES STOPS.
VIV: Whats wrong
JAMES: Nothing i just...you go in i will catch you up
VIV: Okay a pint then is it
JAMES: Yeah it is

VIV WALKS INTO THE PUB, JAMES TAKES ONE LAST LOOK AROUND THE STREET AS HE WALKS INTO THE LION.

THE LION INT AFTERNOON

JAMES WALKS INTO THE PUB AND SITS DOWN AT THE END TABLE, VIV WALKS OVER BRINGING WITH HER A PINT OF BITTER AND HALF A PINT OF LAGER.

VIV: So who were you on the phone to
JAMES: A freind, look when im gone i know that you really dont want to be stuck with the club
VIV: Well yeah that is true
JAMES: So i have sold it
VIV: You have sold it but to who
JAMES: A local tradesman
VIV: Who are they do i know them
JAMES: Yeah used to live round here
VIV: The only tradesmen that i knew are dead
JAMES: Even Max Palmer
VIV: Oh please tell me you have not
JAMES: The clubs going to be a factory
VIV: Are you stupid or what the last time Max Palmer lived round here he caused us all nothing but misery
JAMES: Hes a changed man
VIV: Oh i bet he is
JAMES: No he has a family now
VIV: Oh and that means hes a good guy now, look at Paul Ramsay he had a daughter and was married to Sharon but did that stop him from being evil
JAMES: I promise you Viv that he has changed. Where is my pork scaratchings
VIV: You never asked for any
JAMES: Well could you get me some please
VIV: Of course
JAMES: Viv
VIV: What James
JAMES: I do love you
VIV: And i love you to

JAMES AND VIV KISS BEFORE SHE GOES TO THE BAR AND UP TO RIC.

VIV: You have any pork scratchins
RIC: I have just sold the last packet.
VIV: [HER BACK TO JAMES] They dont have any James [NO ANSWER SO VIV TURNS ROUND TO SEE JAMES WITH HIS EYES CLOSED.] James...James wake up please James

VIV RUNS OVER TO JAMES AND CHECKS HIS PULSE, SHE REALISES THAT JAMES HAS GONE AND SHE FALLS TO HER KNEES CRYING. THE SCENE FADES OUT WITH VIV CLUTCHING JAMES WHILE SHE IS ON HER KNEES SOBBING. IN THE BACKGROUND SNOW PATROLS "CHASING CARS" PLAYS AS THE SCENE FADES OUT. :crying: :crying: :crying:

bakedbean
03-10-2006, 16:24
4.43

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

THE RESIDENTS OF EXETER STREET ARE STANDING ON THE PATH ALL DRESSED IN BLACK WITH THERE HEADS DOWN, THE UNDERTAKERS DRIVE PAST WITH JAMES COFFIN INSIDE, VIV BEGINS TO CRY ON TRUDYS SHOULDER. THE MACKLINS STEP INTO ONE OF THE CARS AS THEY DRIVE OFF OUT OF EXETER STREET.
ST PAULS CHURCH/GRAVEYARD EXT MORNING.

THE RESIDENTS ARE AROUND THE COFFIN WHICH IS BEING PLACED IN THE HOLE. THE VICAR FINISHS WHAT HE IS SAYING AND MOST OF THE RESIDENTS LEAVE, TRUDY AND VIV STAY BY JAMES GRAVE.
VIV: He was fine i mean i know he was ill and all that but he really was fine, happy and evreything. All i did was turn to get some Pork scratchins and then i looked and he...he...[VIV BEGINS TO CRY AGAIN]
TRUDY: Its okay Viv hes in a better place now
VIV: I hope he is
TRUDY: What do you mean
VIV: Well we know what he did in the past and well you know.
TRUDY: Yeah but he was a changed man when he returned.
VIV: Yeah i suppose your right.

A WOMAN ALL IN BLACK SLOWLY WALKS UP TO VIV AND TRUDY WE CANT SEE HER FACE AS HER HAT IS COVERING IT.

VIV: Whos this
TRUDY: I dont know [THE WOMAN WALKS UP TO TRUDY AND VIV] Can we help you

THE WOMAN REMOVES HER HAT TO SHOW HER FACE AND IT IS NONE OTHER THAN PHILLIPA PERRY.

PHILLIPA: Oh no i will be all right
VIV: What on earth are you doing here
PHILLIPA: I have come to pay my last respects to my husband
VIV: You...dont make me laugh
PHILLIPA: Why else would i be here
VIV: You left him in the lurch and if it was not for you he would not have been ill
PHILLIPA: If i remeber rightfully Viv i had no choice you forced me out of town.
VIV: Yeah and i told you to never come back
PHILLIPA: I can see the cancer has not changed you one little bit
VIV: At least i am not a gold digging bitch
PHILLIPA: You are only saying that becuse you are jealous
VIV: Of you, why would i want to be like you
PHILLIPA: I can see that you never took my advice and had any Botox you could also do with a boob job your sagging a bit
VIV: I will grow old gracefully thankyou not like you, your nothing but a human ballon
TRUDY: Ladies please this is not the time or place.
VIV: Shes right we have a wake to go to.

THE LION INT MORNING

THE RESIDENTS ALL ARRIVE TO THE LION, RIC GOES BEHINED THE BAR AND BEGINS TO SERVE DRINKS. MAX PALMER AND HIS DAUGHTER LOUISE ARE SAT IN THE CORNER.

LOUISE: Why do i have to be here Dad i never knew the guy
MAX: Your here to pay your respects and besides it will be good to get to know the residents after all i am opening my factory here.
LOUISE: But im not i have nothing to do with the buissenss, Martin and Tom have more to do with it than me
MAX: Look we will stay here for another hour and then we will go home okay
LOUISE: Good i dont like this dump
MAX: This dump is where i was brought up if you dont mind,mind you we never had the Complex it was just the farm how times have changed
LOUISE: Dad i hate it when you start talking about the good old days

VIV WALKS IN THE LION WITH TRUDY BY HER SIDE.

RIC: Viv how are you
VIV: Im fine really i am and i want to thankyou all for evreything you have done for James.
RIC: A toast for a great community spirited man James Perry

EVREYONE RAISES THERE GLASSES, PHILLIPA WALKS IN AND THE PUB FALLS SILENT.

PHILLIPA: Oh is this for me

PHILLIPA SMIRKS AS VIV GIVES HER A LOOK OF DISGUST

bakedbean
31-10-2006, 17:10
4.44

MOTORWAY JUST OUTSIDE BRIGHTON INT MORNING.

ROBERTS CAR GOES SPEEDING DOWN THE MOTORWAY HEADING INTO BRIGHTON.

SOMEWHERE IN BRIGHTON/ROSIES FLAT INT MORNING.

ROSIE (CHRISSIES MUM) WALKS INTO THE FLAT JUST COMING OFF HER NIGHT SHIFT AT THE CLUB, SHE PICKS UP THE POST AND WALKS INTO THE KITCHEN AND TURNS THE KETTEL ON. ROSIE GOES THROUGH THE LETTERS AS SHE COMES TO THE FINAL ONE SHE SEES ON THE ENVELOPE THE COUNCILS LOGO, ROSIE LOOKS WORRIED AND THROWS IT IN THE BIN. THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR AND ROSIE JUMPS, SHE LOOKS THROUGH THE WINDOW AND SEES ROBERT, NOT KNOWING WHO HE IS SHE LOOKS WORRIED. ROSIE WALKS TO THE DOOR AND PUTS THE CHAIN ON AND OPENS IT.

ROSIE: Can i help you
ROBERT: Im looking for Chrissie im Robert her husband
ROSIE: Oh why didnt you say

ROSIE TAKES THE CHAIN OFF AND OPENS THE DOOR, SHE SLAPS ROBERT HARD ACROSS THE FACE.

ROSIE: Now get lost
ROBERT: No please Rosie is she here
ROSIE: No she aint here
ROBERT: Well where is she
ROSIE: At work i suppose
ROBERT: Well when will she be back
ROSIE: Sunday for her lunch as always
ROBERT: She dont live with you anymore
ROSIE: No she lives with Mark
ROBERT: Whos Mark
ROSIE: Her boyfreind.

ROBERT LOOKS STUNNED AT WHAT ROSIE HAS JUST REVEALED.

ROSIES LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

ROBERT IS SAT ON ROSIES SEATEE, ROSIE WALKS IN CARRYING TWO CUPS OF TEA.

ROBERT: How long has she been with this Mark
ROSIE: She was with him before you came along
ROBERT: I dont remeber her ever talking about him to me
ROSIE: Well i dont suppose she did, she really did love him until they broke up
ROBERT: What changed
ROSIE: Marks mum died and he isolated Chrissie they split up and the wedding was off
ROBERT: The wedding
ROSIE: Yes the wedding and then she met you and you made her life hell.

THE LION/RICS BEDROOM INT MORNING.

RIC AND COURTNEY ARE LYING IN EACH OTHERS ARMS.

RIC: You know Courtney i have not been this happy for a very long time
COURTNEY: The same here Ric
RIC: I think...i think i might love you

ROSIES LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

ROBERT AND ROSIE ARE STILL TALKING.

ROBERT: I need to see her Rosie please
ROSIE: Oh no Robert you made her life hell
ROBERT: Please shes all i have got Rosie i love her with all my heart please
ROSIE: Oh yeah and what are you going to tell her aye how sorry you are and it will never happen again
ROBERT: Please just give me the adress
ROSIE: Alright fine but she wont take you back Robert she is with Marc now
ROBERT: Ok if she says no i wont bother her ever again.

THE LION/RICS BEDROOM INT MORNING.

RIC AND COURTNEY ARE STILL LYING IN BED TALKING.

COURTNEY: Do you think Sharon will be ok when she comes back
RIC: I hope so Courtney i really do, now lets talk about something else
COURTNEY: Like what
RIC: Me and you
COURTNEY: Whats there to talk about
RIC: Marry me Courtney

CHRISSIE AND MARCS HOUSE/KITCHEN INT AFTERNOON.

CHRISSIE IS SAT AT THE TABLE EATING A SANDWICH, THE DOORBELL RINGS AND CHRISSIE ANSWERS THE DOOR SHE LOOKS SHOCKED TO SEE ROBERT.

CHRISSIE: Robert what are you doing here
ROBERT: Hello Chrissie

TIME HAS PASSED AND BOTH CHRISSIE AND ROBERT ARE SAT IN THE KITCHEN.

ROBERT: So what about you and this Marc
CHRISSIE: We have been finished for a while now
ROBERT: But your mum
CHRISSIE: She does not know she has enough to deal with at the moment.
ROBERT: Why did you break up
CHRISSIE: Becuse i realised something
ROBERT: Whats that then
CHRISSIE: I still love you thats what

CHRISSIE AND ROBERT KISS.

THE LION INT/RICS BEDROOM AFTERNOON.

COURTNEY AND RIC ARE NOW BOTH SAT UP TALKING.

COURTNEY: Are you serious Ric i mean really
RIC: Yeah i am
COURTNEY: Then yes

CHARNLEY POLICE STATION INT AFTERNOON

VIC IS BUSY IN HIS OFFICE WHEN A POLICE OFFICER WALKS IN.

PO: Sarge
VIC: What is it
PO: We have found evidence
VIC: What sort of evidence
PO: Its evidence to prove that Alex Macklin is still alive hes been sighted around Birmingham
VIC: What

bakedbean
06-11-2006, 19:59
4.45

THE MACKLINS/BATHROOM INT MORNING.
JENNY IS SAT ON THE BATH SHE IS LOOKING AT A PREGNANCY TEST IT READS POSITIVE.

THE BOOKIES/NICKS OFFICE MORNING.
NICK IS SAT BEHIND HIS DESK WHEN COURTNEY WALKS IN.

NICK: Courtney what a pleasent suprise
COURTNEY: Aint it just i have an update
NICK: An update
COURTNEY: Rics asked me to marry him
NICK: Your kidding your actually telling me that the old coot has fallen for you
COURTNEY: I think he has you know he told me that he loved me
NICK: Well now we need to make a descision
COURTNEY: Oh yeah
NICK: Do you go with it or run with his money now

VIVS HOUSE/KITCHEN INT MORNING.

TRUDY IS IN THE KITCHEN LOOKING IN THE PAPER, VIV WALKS IN.

VIV: What you looking at
TRUDY: What oh just the Cafe is finally up for sale
VIV: You still dont have that dream of buying the place do you
TRUDY: It would be great behined that counter serving all those people
VIV: Im sure Jill thought that and look what happened to her
TRUDY: Yeah but my cafe would be different
VIV: And anyway Trudy you dont have enough money
TRUDY: Maybe Nick could help me
VIV: I doubt it Trudy
TRUDY: Anyway enough of me how are you
VIV: Well you know this and that
TRUDY: No really Viv come on
VIV: Im fine im just so angry that bitch Phillipa has come back
TRUDY: We all know why though dont we
VIV: She wont get a single penny im going to make sure of that

THE GARAGE/ANDYS OFFICE AFTERNOON.

JENNY AND ANDY ARE TALKING IN THE OFFICE.

JENNY: We are alright aint we Andy
ANDY: Yeah we are good
JENNY: Do you think another baby in the family would destroy it all
ANDY: Steady on Jenny Brooke has not even got a boyfriend let alone a child
JENNY: Yeah well...

THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR.

ANDY: Can we finish this later darlin

VIC WALKS IN.

ANDY: So i take it you have come to tell me that you have found Alex
VIC: No but it is news on Alex
ANDY: Well come on then spit it out
VIC: Alexs has been sighted around the Birmingham area
ANDY: What well get some bloody police down there and get him
VIC: Its not that easy Andy we are looking for him dont worry
ANDY: You better find him and fast

THE LION/BAR INT AFTERNOON

PHILLIPA IS SAT AT THE BAR DRINKING A GLASS OF RED WHINE. VIV WALKS IN AND PHILLIPA SEES HER.

PHILLIPA: Well, well look who it isnt
VIV: Im sick and tired of your comments Phillipa why dont you go back to where you came from
PHILLIPA: Oh how common you think im going to leave before James will is read
VIV: Your not going to get a single penny Phillipa
PHILLIPA: Im still married to him i will get evreything i have had my lawyers on to it and lets just say im feeling very confident
VIV: Well i will see you there then wont i
PHILLIPA: You bet and may the best bitch win

PHILLIPA SMIRKS AND VIV LOOKS ANGRY.

bakedbean
27-11-2006, 21:17
4.46

VIVS KITCHEN INT MORNING.

TRUDY IS MAKING A CUP OF TEA WHEN VIV WALKS IN SHE HANDS HER THE TEA.

VIV: Oh i dont want that
TRUDY: Come on it will build your strength up

VIV TAKES THE TEA.

TRUDY: What are you so worried about Viv, James wont have left Phillipa anything shes just here to cause trouble.
VIV: She thinks that i want the money like im some sort of golddigger but im not i just dont want that bitch to get anything
TRUDY: And she wont so stop worrying, your taxi will be here in a minute so you best get yourself ready.
VIV: But what if she gets evreything i mean what if she gets away with it
TRUDY: James would have never of left anything to her, he is not that stupid.

VIV TAKES A SIP OF HER TEA AND LOOKS WORRIED.

THE LION/CELLAR INT MORNING.

COURTNEY SHUTS THE CELLAR DOOR AND TURNS ON THE LIGHT SHE WALKS DOWN THE STAIRS AND DIALS A NUMBER IN HER PHONE.

COURTNEY: Hey hansome...its going fine trust me...they are both idiots...Ric thinks that i love him...And Nick just fancies me...But its you i want baby...Its all going to be ares...evrey single penny.

COURTNEY LAUGHS.

CHARNLEY PARK EXT MORNING.

JENNY IS SAT ON THE SWINGS SHE IS LOOKING DEPRESSED, TRUDY WALKS PAST AND SEES HER SHE WALKS UP TO HER AND SITS ON THE SWING NEXT TO HER.

TRUDY: Jenny whats wrong
JENNY: Nothing im fine
TRUDY: No your not come on tell me whats up its Andy aint it
JENNY: No well sort of
TRUDY: Whats he done
JENNY: Nothing much he has been the perfect husband this last month
TRUDY: Well what is it then look if your worried about Alex well you heard Vic he said there was no way he would come back
JENNY: Trudy im pregnant
TRUDY: What

JAMES SOLICITORS INT MORNING.

JAMES SOLICITOR IS SAT BEHIND HIS DESK, VIV AND PHILLIPA ARE SAT OPPOSITE HIM WAITING FOR HIM TO READ THE WILL.

PHILLIPA: You know Viv there really is no point you being here becuse lets face it im getting evreything
VIV: Is that wishfull thinking Phillipa

CHARNLEY PARK EXT MORNING.

TRUDY AND JENNY ARE SAT ON THE SWINGS. TRUDY IS STUNNED AT JENNYS ANNOUNCEMENT.

TRUDY: Pregnant well thats good news
JENNY: I dont know Trudy
TRUDY: I dont understand what you mean
JENNY: Things have been going fine for us all lately and Brooke has finally forgiven us about the adoption and Steves behaving himself
TRUDY: So whats the problem
JENNY: The last time i was pregnant the whole family got excited and then i lost it, Andy wouldnt talk to me,Steve treated me like dirt and i turned to drink.
TRUDY: But you wont lose this one Jenny you just need to be careful
JENNY: I was carefull last time Trudy, and if i have this baby Steve will resent me even more for not paying him enough attention.
TRUDY: Oh now come on Jenny Steve is just an attention seeker he will get over it
JENNY: I dont even know if i want this baby
TRUDY: Your not seriously thinking about having an abortion
JENNY: Its for the best

ANDYS GARAGE/OFFICE INT MORNING.

ANDY IS WORKING HARD ON HIS COMPUTER WHEN KAT WALKS IN.

ANDY: Oh and what do you want
KAT: Have you missed me Andy
ANDY: You dont make me laugh
KAT: Funny becuse the last time me and you saw each other well we were very close
ANDY: That was in the past Kat i have moved on since then
KAT: Yeah you have been busy married twice 5 kids, one dead and one a psycho.
ANDY: Dont you dare talk about David that way and...wait a minute what do you mean 5...i only have Brooke,Steve,Alex and David.
KAT: Wrong Andy you see i came back to Charnley for a reason and that reason was to get evreything you owe me and are son.
ANDY: I dont know what your talking about
KAT: Im talking about Warren Andy hes your son
ANDY: What
KAT: And if you dont pay up soon then the whole world will know your dirty little secret and do you know who i will go to first Lucy Scotsman thats who
ANDY: What do you want
KAT: Three thousand pound by Monday or i will go and visit her.

JAMES SOLICITORS INT MORNING.

THE SOLICITOR IS READING THE WILL TO PHILLIPA AND VIV.

SOLICITOR: To my darling Viv my one true love i leave evreything that i own to you
PHILLIPA: What you must be joking
SOLICITOR: And to my bitch of a wife Phillipa i leave her nothing becuse that is all the daft cow deserves
PHILLIPA: This is a scam it must be
VIV: Like you said Phillipa the best bitch will win.

VIV SMILES KNOWING SHE IS VICTORIES OVER PHILLIPA WHO LOOKS FURIOUS.

ST PAULS CHURCH/GRAVEYARD JAMES GRAVE EXT AFTERNOON.

PHILLIPA WALKS UP TO JAMES GRAVE SHE IS HOLDING SOME FLOWERS, SHE PLACES THE FLOWERS ON JAMES GRAVE.

PHILLIPA: You may have got the last laugh James but for what you have done i will make your true loves life a living hell, i will be back James i always come out on top. Rot in hell becuse thats where you belong.

PHILLIPA TAKES ONE LAST LOOK AT JAMES GRAVE AND SLOWLY LEAVES.

bakedbean
11-12-2006, 16:09
4.47

EXETER STREET OUTSIDE PENNYCROFT FLATS EXT MORNING.ROBERTS BLACK BMW PULLS UP OUTSIDE THE FLATS, ROBERT STEPS OUT OF THE CAR FOLLOWED BY CHRISSIE. CHRISSIE LOOKS AROUND EXETER STREET AND TAKES A DEEP BREATH AND WALKS INTO THE FLATS HOLDING ROBERTS HAND.

THE MACKLINS ANDY AND JENNYS BEDROOM INT MORNING.JENNY IS SAT ON THE BED WITH THE YELLOW PAGES SHE IS DIALING A NUMBER, THE CAMERA PANS DOWN TO THE YELLOW PAGES WHERE ON THE PAGE IT REVEALS ABORTIONS.

JENNY: Hello...yes i would like to make an appointment please...Next week ok fine...thankyou.

JENNY PUTS THE PHONE DOWN AND WONDERS IF SHE IS DOING THE RIGHT THING.

ROBERTS FLAT/FRONT ROOM INT MORNING.
LUCY IS SAT AT THE TABLE DRINKING A CUP OF TEA, THE DOOR OPENS AND IN WALKS ROBERT AND CHRISSIE, LUCY LOOKS SHOCKED TO SEE HER.

LUCY: What the bloody hell are you doing here
CHRISSIE: Hello Lucy
LUCY: Oh Robert you really are a stupid idiot.
ROBERT: Oh here we go and anyway what are you doing here i told you to move downstairs
LUCY: Well someone needed to look after you flat for you
ROBERT: Yeah you were just being nosey as usual
LUCY: I really can not believe that you even considered bringing her back into your life
ROBERT: I love her mum and i want to be with her for the rest of my life and if you dont like that then you can shove it becuse i dont care anymore about what you or anyone else thinks.

THE COMPLEX EXT AFTERNOON.
VIV AND TRUDY ARE WALKING THROUGH THE COMPLEX THEY STOP AT THE CAFE.TRUDY: So do you think we have seen the last of Phillipa
VIV: I really do hope so Trudy

TRUDY TAKES A LOOK AT THE CAFE.

VIV: You really want this place dont you
TRUDY: Oh its nothing but a stupid dream
VIV: Well that stupid dream is about to come true
TRUDY: What are you talking about
VIV: Trudy you know James left me quiet alot of money what from all the propeteys and business he owns, and i know that you had your eye on this place and so i brought it for you
TRUDY: Viv thats wonderful but i cant take it
VIV: Yes you can Trudy and you will

TRUDY AND VIV HUG.

VIV: There is something else i want to tell you
TRUDY: What is it
VIV: James left me his villa in spain and im going away for a few weeks so i want you to do something for me
TRUDY: Anything
VIV: I want you to watch over the family becuse i really do have a funny feeling something bad is going to happen
TRUDY: Nothings going to happen Viv you go and enjoy yourself dont worry about a thing.

THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

RIC AND COURTNEY ARE SAT AT THE BAR KISSING, THE DOOR OPENS AND SHARON WALKS IN.

RIC: Sharon your back early
COURTNEY: What a nice suprise
SHARON: Thanks i wanted to suprise you well do i get a hug.

RIC AND SHARON KISS, SHE SEES AN ENGAGEMENT RING ON COURTNEY.
SHARON: Who is getting married
RIC: We are
SHARON: What
COURTNEY: Oh Sharon its going to be fantastic

COURTNEY AND RIC HUG, COURTNEY SMIRKS AT SHARON WHO LOOKS FURIOUS.

bakedbean
14-12-2006, 19:49
4.48

THE COMPLEX MORNING EXT.

ALAN AND TRUDY ARE SAT ON THE BENCH LOOKING AT THE CAFE.

TRUDY: Its all ares Alan evrey last bit of it.
ALAN: Yeah and just think hard work
TRUDY: Oh Alan it will be a breeze.
ALAN: I cant even cook
TRUDY: Well you can work at the counter and do the accoutants.
ALAN: Yeah i suppose you know we better start advertising for more work.
TRUDY: Oh yeah i forgot about that
ALAN: And we need a buisness plan.
TRUDY: Bloody hell it is hard work.

THE LION KITCHEN INT MORNING.

COURTNEY IS SAT AT THE TABLE READING HER MAGAZINE. SHARON WALKS IN AND PUTS THE KETTLE ON.

SHARON: Where is Dad
COURTNEY: Gone the brewerey
SHARON: Good becuse its time me and you have a little chat
COURTNEY: What about dont worry i have saved you a space to be my bridesmaid.
SHARON: You dont need to becuse i am not coming to the wedding becuse there will not be a wedding.
COURTNEY: I think there will Sharon becuse your dad loves me and...
SHARON: You love his money if you think that i will let you walk all over my dad then you can think again you gold digging bitch.
COURTNEY: Sharon there is absolutley nothing you can do about it i will marry your father and once i have your out of the picture once and for all.

COURTNEY STORMS OUT OF THE KITCHEN.

THE GARAGE ANDYS OFFICE INT AFTERNOON.

ANDY IS LOOKING IN HIS SAFE WHEN KAT WALKS IN.

KAT: So do you have my money then or what
ANDY: You know what tell Lucy tell who ever you like i really dont care.
KAT: Funny becuse Trudy was telling me that you were on your last warning with Jenny and some how i dont think she will take to kindly to Warren being your son. So my money.

ANDY PICKS OUT A HEAVEY ENVELOPE AND PASSES IT TO KAT.

ANDY: You ever breathe a word of this and i will kill you Kat family or not.

THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

COURTNEY IS SERVING PETE A BEER.

PETE: Thank you darling and can i just say how good looking you are.
COURTNEY: Thank you very much your not so bad yourself.
PETE: You know if you ever get board with old man Grand and you want something a bit younger then just give me a call.

COURTNEY SMILES.

CHARNELEY ABOARTION CLINIC EXT AFTERNOON.

A TAXI PULLS UP OUTSIDE THE CLINIC, JENNY STEPS OUT OF THE TAXI AND PAYS THE DRIVER SHE WALKS TO THE DOOR BUT SHE STOPS AND WONDERS IF SHE IS DOING THE RIGHT THING, SHE TAKES A DEEP BREATH AND WALKS INTO THE CLINIC.

bakedbean
17-12-2006, 11:03
4.49

THE COMPLEX PALMERS CARPETS EXT MORNING.

LORRY PULL UP TO THE FACTORY AND THEY ARE FOLLOWED BY A BMW. MAX PALMER STEPS OUT WITH HIS DAUGHTER LOUISE.

LOUISE: I still dont see why i have to come with you
MAX: Becuse princess this is a brand new start for us all this is a brand new start for you
LOUISE: Look Dad i would rather be getting settled in the house
MAX: Well you can tonight we have work to do
LOUISE: What are you talking about
MAX: Your going to be my new secretery
LOUISE: Oh no Dad please
MAX: Its time you earnt your money for once come on

MAX AND LOUISE BEGIN TO WALK INTO THE FACTORY WHEN ANDY WALKS TO HIS GARAGE AND NOTICES THAT MAXS CAR IS BLOCKING HIS DOOR WAY.

ANDY: Hey you
MAX: You talking to me
ANDY: Depends this your car
MAX: Yeah it is
ANDY: Well move it
MAX: Its fine where it is
ANDY: If you dont move it i will.
MAX: With what

MAX WALKS INTO THE FACTORY, VIC PULLS UP.

VIC: Andy can i have a word
ANDY: Yeah come into my office.

THE ALLEYWAY EXT MORNING.

COURTNEY IS WALKING DOWN THE ALLEYWAY WHEN PETE STOPS HER.

COURTNEY: Im not up for any of your games Pete
PETE: What games
COURTNEY: Oh come on im not stupid
PETE: Look i see the old man has gone out
COURTNEY: Out all day taking his bitch for a daughter with him
PETE: An empty flat and a bar full of booze sounds like heaven
COURTNEY: I have a pub to run
PETE: Yeah but not all day and lets face it i can give you 10 times more than old man grand can ever do.
COURTNEY: All right but its a one off i shut at three
PETE: Great

COURTNEY AND PETE BOTH WALK OFF NOT REALISING THAT WARREN HAS BEEN LISTENING TO THE WHOLE CONVERSATION FROM BEHINED THE BINS.

THE GARAGE/ANDYS OFFICE INT MORNING.

VIC AND ANDY ARE TALKING.

VIC: Alex is getting closer Andy we are playing a dangerous game
ANDY: Well what the hell are you going to do about it
VIC: We need to catch him thats for sure and i have an idea but its up to you if we go through with it.

THE LION INT AFTERNOON.

COURTNEY IS BEHINED THE BAR AND THE PUB IS BUSY, PETE IS SAT AT THE BAR WATCHING COURTNEY. WARREN WALKS IN CARRYING A BAG, HE WALKS THROUGH THE BACK MAKING SURE NO ONE NOTICES HIM HE WALKS UP THE STAIRS AND GOES INTO COURTNEYS BEDROOM, HE PULLS OUT OF HIS BAG A CAMERA AND PLACES IT IN A PILE OF CLOTHES HE SWITCHES ON THE CAMERA AND SMILES.

THE GARAGE/ANDYS OFFICE INT AFTERNOON.

ANDY AND VIC ARE STILL TALKING.

ANDY: So let me get this straight you want me to fake my own death and then stage a funeral and then Alex might just might turn up.
VIC: He will turn up Andy so what do you say
ANDY: Alright lets do it.

THE LION YARD EXT EVENING.

THE BACKDOOR OPENS AND WARREN WALKS OUT WITH HIS CAMERA, HE QUIETLY SHUTS THE DOOR, HE WALKS OUT OF THE YARD INTO THE ALLEYWAY AND TURNS ON THE CAMERA AND SEES COURTNEY AND PETE, WARREN SMILES.

WARREN: Money money money.

WARREN WALKS OFF LAUGHING.

Next week: Its the finale week where anything can happen!!!

bakedbean
17-12-2006, 18:58
4.50

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

ANDY JENNY AND THE KIDS ARE ALL SAT DOWN WE CAN SEE TWO SUITCASES PACKED.

BROOKE: You leaving Dad
ANDY: Yeah but its not how you think listen Alex is close by and well me and the police have come up with a plan.
JENNY: Your Dad is going to fake his death now its going to be hard for the next few weeks and we are going to have a funeral.
STEVE: But why would Alex come back now your dead
ANDY: Oh trust me he will come back and when he does im going to get him once and for all.

THE LION THE YARD INT MORNING.

COURTNEY WALKS OUT OF THE LION AND EMPTYS THE BINS, THE BACK GATE OPENS AND PETE WALKS IN.

PETE: Aye up gorgeous
COURTNEY: Not now Pete last night was a one off.
PETE: Oh come on just one more go.
COURTNEY: Im not some toy that you can play with
PETE: Alright but once you have had me you will be hard to please dont play to hard with Ric now we wouldnt want him to have a heart attack.

PETE WALKS OFF WITH A GRIN ON HIS FACE. COURTNEY PUTS THE RUBBISH IN THE BIN AND WATCHES PETE WALK OFF.

EXETER STREET EXT AFTERNOON.

ANDY IS PUTTING HIS BAGS IN HIS CAR, LUCY WHO IS WALKING FROM THE COMPLEX SEES HIM.

LUCY: Leaving are we
ANDY: Now why would i give you the satisfaction Lucy
LUCY: The day you leave im going to have a street party
ANDY: The day i leave your going to be so depressed becuse lets face it Lucy who else do you have to plot againts and fight with.
LUCY: Your going to get what you deserve Andy Macklin i promise you that
ANDY: How is Shawn i suppose he feels right at home locked in that cell. Mind you i suppose it is better than being with you.
LUCY: Go to hell Andy
ANDY: You know i might just do that.

ANDY SMIRKS BEFORE GETTING IN HIS CAR.

ANDY DRIVES OFF AND ROBERT AND CHRISSIE WALKS UP TO LUCY.

ROBERT: What did he want
LUCY: I really dont know

THE ALLEYWAY EXT AFTERNOON.

COURTNEY IS WALKING DOWN THE ALLEYWAY WARREN JUMPS OUT AT HER AND MAKES HER JUMP.

COURTNEY: What are you trying to do Warren
WARREN: You have been a naughty girl Courtney
COURTNEY: What are you going on about
WARREN: Im talking about you and Grouse
COURTNEY: I dont know what your talking about
WARREN: Oh i think you do and it would be a real shame if your secret got out especially seen as though its on DVD
COURTNEY: You recorded us you make me sick
WARREN: Say what you want but if you dont pay up i will reveal all you have 24 hours.

WARREN WALKS OFF COURTNEY LOOKS WORRIED.

4.51

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

LUCY IS STANDING AT HER FLAT DOOR WHEN THE PAPERBOY HANDS HER THE PAPER SHE READS THE HEADLINE "LOCAL BUISSNESS MAN KILLED IN HORRIFIC CAR CRASH" LUCY LOOKS AT THE PICTURE OF THE MAN AND IT IS ANDY. LUCY LOOKS SHOCKED AT WHAT SHE SEES.

THE BOOKIES/NICKS OFFICE INT MORNING.

NICK AND COURTNEY ARE ARGUING.

NICK: What the hell were you doing you realise that you could destroy evreything we have worked for.
COURTNEY: Look maybe you could just scare him off.
NICK: You really dont know Warren do you he wont listen to me he wont listen to anyone
COURTNEY: You have a gun persuade him
NICK; Im not pointing a gun at my nephew
COURTNEY: Well what are we going to do
NICK: Im going to have to tell him
COURTNEY: Letting him in on it you cant
NICK: Trust me its going to work.

THE MACKLINS FRONT DOOR EXT MORNING.

TRUDY IS AT THE DOOR TALKING TO JENNY

TRUDY: Im so sorry about Andy
JENNY: Its fine Trudy
TRUDY: Look i know you might find it tough but we will get through this
JENNY: Trudy its fine Andys not dead
TRUDY: What are you talking about
JENNY: Come inside

THE LION KITCHEN INT AFTERNOON.

COURTNEY AND SHARON ARE TALKING.

SHARON: I know your game Courtney and your time is running out
COURTNEY: Why what are you going to do Sharon your Dad is in love with me and theres nothing that you can do about it
SHARON: We will see Courtney we will see.

SHARON WALKS OUT AND COURTNEY S PHONE RINGS SHE ANSWERS AND IT IS WARREN.

COURTNEY: Im not giving you what you want
WARREN: Tick tock Courtney times up.


THE PARK EXT AFTERNOON.

WARREN SMILES AND PUTS THE PHONE DOWN, HE TURNS ONLY TO BUMP INTO NICK.

WARREN: Watch it oh its you
NICK: Yeah its me
WARREN: What do you want
NICK: A talk if you dont mind
WARREN: Im busy i have stuff to do

WARREN BEGINS TO WALK OFF.

NICK: What like blackmail Courtney

WARREN STOPS AND TURNS BACK TO NICK.

WARREN: I dont know what your talking about
NICK: Oh i think you do Warren now im warning you tell anybody about the other night and you will get hurt.
WARREN: What have you got to do with it
NICK: Thats not relevent
WARREN: No come on Nick why would Courtney tell you about me
NICK: Im your uncle
WARREN: Hold on ive just figured it out you and her your scamming old man Grand aint you

NICK DOES NOT ANSWER

WARREN: Oh this is brilliant
NICK: Look you cant tell anyone
WARREN: Why whats in it for me
NICK: You can have a cut in what we get well what do you say.

bakedbean
17-12-2006, 18:58
Tomorow its the season finale who is shot???

bakedbean
18-12-2006, 19:05
4.52

THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INT MORNING.

JENNY,TRUDY,ALAN,BROOKE AND STEVE ARE ALL DRESSED IN BLACK.

JENNY: Are you ready for this we cant let anyone know that Andy is still alive we need to catch Alex once and for all.

EVREYONE NODS IN AGREEMENT THE FRONT DOOR OPENS AND VIV WALKS IN BACK FROM SPAIN. SHE IS CRYING.

VIV: Oh my poor Andy
JENNY: Nobodys told her
TRUDY: I thought you did
VIV: Told me what

ROBERTS FLAT INT MORNING.

CHRISSIE COMES OUT OF THE BEDROOM DRESSED FOR THE FUNERAL, LUCY IS PUTTING ON HER EAR RINGS AND ROBERT IS TALKING TO HER.

ROBERT: No trouble today mum
LUCY: Im going to a funeral and the only reason i am going is to make sure that son of a bitch is dead.
CHRISSIE: Lucy that a horrible thing to say
LUCY: Oh come on Chrissie that man destroyed are family what with him putting Shawn in prison and his affair with you.
ROBERT: Anyway were just going to the funeral and thats all.
LUCY: Oh you two might but im going to the wake as well and tell evreyone what that man really was.
ROBERT: No your not mum think about his family.
LUCY: Oh like he thought about ares we used to be the Top dogs of Exeter Street until he turned up and ruined evreything. Its time the whole street knew what he really is.

EXETER STREET EXT MORNING.

THE RESIDENTS ARE ALL STANDING IN THE STREET AS THE HEARSE PULLS UP WITH ANDYS COFFIN, JENNY AND THE REST OF THE FAMILY STEP INTO THE CAR. THE CAMERA FOCUSES ON COURTNEY,SHARON AND RIC.

COURTNEY: How strange it is that after evreything Alex did he never managed to kill his dad but instead it was a car.
RIC: If it wasnt for Andy a lot of people would still be very much alive.
SHARON: Yeah but you cant blame Andy for all of this madness
COURTNEY: Well someone has to take the blame
RIC: Lets just thank god that Alex is dead at least we wont have anymore chaos.

AS RIC SAYS HIS FINAL WORDS THE CAMERA PANS TO THE BACK ALLEY WHERE HIDING BEHINED A BIN AND WATCHING THE STREET IS ALEX WHO IS HOLDING A GUN!!!

THE GRAVEYARD EXT MORNING.

THE RESIDENTS ARE GAVERED AROUND ANDYS FAKE GRAVE.

LUCY: [WHISPERING TO ROBERT] The evil swine is finally six feet under
VIV: What was that Lucy
LUCY: Nothing Viv
VIV: Oh come on Lucy for once you have been given centre stage to say your piece
LUCY: I dont think i should say
VIV: No please do we are all dying to hear
LUCY: Well ok then i was saying how Andy is finally where he belongs dead and buried.
VIV: One day Lucy you will get whats coming to you
LUCY: Yeah oh and one last thing i hope Andy rots in hell.

LUCY WALKS OFF TOWARDS THE WOODS.

JENNY: You evil bitch

LUCY SMIRKS AS SHE WALKS INTO THE WOODS.

ROBERT: Look im sorry evreyone for her outburst
VIV: She can say what she likes the miserable old cow.

THE WOODS EXT MORNING.

LUCY IS WALKING THROUGH THE WOODS WHEN SHE BUMPS INTO A MAN SHE LOOKS AND SEES THAT THE MAN IS ANDY.

LUCY: What the hell
ANDY: Lucy suprise
LUCY: But your...and there all...what the hell is going on.
ANDY: Thought you got rid of your worst enemy once and for all did you Lucy
LUCY: Your supposed to be dead Andy
ANDY: Well seems like im still alive dont you think
LUCY: But what about the crash and evreything
ANDY: All a trick
LUCY: That is some sick trick
ANDY: No not to trick you to trick Alex
LUCY: But hes dead
ANDY: Wrong again Lucy my son is still alive and i reckon hes close by...SO WHY DONT YOU SHOW YOUR FACE ALEX...COME ON...YOU HAVE WAITED FOR THIS MOMENT ALL ALONG TO SEE YOUR OWN DAD DEAD AND BURIED...WELL GUESS WHAT IM NOT...SO WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR ALEX COME ON SHOW YOURSELF YOU COWARD.

ALEX SUDDENLY APPEARS FROM THE BUSHES POINTING HIS GUN RIGHT AT ANDY WHO WITH LUCY LOOKS SHOCKED AND AFRAID.

ALEX: Hey Dad is this what you want a final standoff me and you.
ANDY: Go on then shoot me or better still shoot her.
LUCY: What are you doing.
ANDY: But then again you shoot her and you would be doing me a huge favour Alex so whos it to be.
ALEX: I only came here for one reason to check if you were really dead and if you werent then i would make sure that you would be so see you hell dad.
ANDY: Alex think about this

ALEX PULLS THE TRIGGER AND FIRES A SHOT RIGHT AT ANDYS STOMACH HE FALLS TO THE GROUND IN PAIN AND LUCY SCREAMS. ALEX STARTS TO WALK CLOSER TO LUCY POINTING THE GUN RIGHT AT HER.

ALEX: Kill two birds with one stone aye

ALEX LAUGHS AS LUCY SCREAMS FOR HELP.

See you next year for another explosive Season of Exeter.