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Jada-GDR
31-03-2006, 18:18
Some people would give everything for their wish to come true.

Even their lives.

A young woman. Married to a young man. Living in a house in the country, a life that seems so beautiful that nothing could taint it.

Until that young woman became pregnant.

At first they were happy. Both had wanted a child for so long that it hurt everytime their attempts at conceiving one failed. The couple celebrated, and the young woman spent nine months of pregnancy in bliss. The burden of a growing child inside her was a hard one to carry, but everytime her stomach hurt, or someone laughed at her for being fat, she simply reminded herself that it was all worthwhile, for very soon she would be having her own baby.

One day, as the young man was driving home from work, he recieved a call from his wife's friend, telling him that his wife had gone into labour and was being rushed to the hospital. The young man immediately turned his car around and drove in the direction of the town.

When he arrived, he demanded to see his wife. A nurse led him up the stairs, but when he tried to enter her room he was heald back. Told that he could not go in, that she was in a critical state. A red light was flashing beside the door of her private ward. Nurses and doctors rushed back and forth, all muttering restlessly.

The young man waited for two hours. Sitting in the hallway, occasionally standing up and making another attempt to enter the young woman's ward, but being told to go back.

Then one of the nurses came out. She was holding something in her arms, wrapped in white towels. The young man could not believe his eyes. He and his wife had finally achieved what they had been trying to achieve for a long, long time. But the nurse had a look on her face. He immediately knew something was wrong.

Her voice shook as she informed him of what had happened. His child had been badly injured in the birth procedure, but there was a good chance it would survuve.

Unfortunately, the same could not be said for the young woman.

Layne
31-03-2006, 18:45
What is the woman okay?!?! This is good more soon ........

Chloe-Elise
31-03-2006, 18:54
Fab start hun :D More soon please, its good :)

Jada-GDR
01-04-2006, 10:32
thanks. it's not something i was going to continue but if you want me to i will

Chloe-Elise
01-04-2006, 10:48
I really liked it, it would be really good if you continued :D

Layne
01-04-2006, 14:24
I really liked it, it would be really good if you continued :D


I agree i think it would be fab if you continued :) x

Jada-GDR
01-04-2006, 17:49
ok, i'll make it a two-parter, and post part two soon :D

Jada-GDR
02-04-2006, 18:08
The young man was allowed in to see his wife. She was lying still, wires attached to her head and body, leading up to a monitor that was slowly beeping.
He sat by her bedside, rocking their baby slowly. The nurse told him that she was in a bad condition, and the chances of her survival were 50/50. The young man looked down at the child, and the nurse informed him gently that it was a baby girl. The baby wrinkled her nose, making the young man smile in spite of everything. The nurse asked what he would call her. the young man looked up at the nurse, tears springing to his eyes, and said that he would decide that with the mother when she woke up.
The nurse looked sad. She told him he might start thinking of some possible names. So he did. His eyes darting back and forth from the baby girl to his possibly dying wife.

Elizabeth...

Josie...
Carla...

Jennifer...
Magda...

"Rosie" he whispered. The nurse looked down at him, smiling, and said that Rosie was a lovely name.


The slow beeping of the monitor attached to the young woman suddenly speeded up. The nurse's eyes widened in shock. She called out to the other nurses.
The young man looked up. He demanded to know what was happening. The nurse had time to whisper that she was sorry, before other nurses and doctors raced in front of her towards the bed.
The young man, still clutching onto his baby girl, darted towards the bed. He shouted out to the young woman, hoping, praying that she could hear him, somewhere... wherever she was...

The beeping on the moitor stopped.




A young woman. Married to a young man.
They had a child. The father called the child Rosie. He watched over her from the second she was brought into the world.
And so did the mother.

Just from a different place.

di marco
02-04-2006, 18:15
fab! :D omg that was so sad, excellently written though

Jada-GDR
02-04-2006, 18:21
thanks dm! glad you liked it and thanks everyone else for reading

lollymay
02-04-2006, 18:45
thats was really good especailly the end.

Chloe-Elise
02-04-2006, 19:54
Awww that was amazing! Fab writing hun, glad you did a second part :D

Angeldelight
04-04-2006, 18:57
WOW wow wow :bow: that was sooooooooooooooooo sad :crying: :wub: :crying: it was amazingly written, absolutely amazing :bow:

Layne
05-04-2006, 09:43
Awww, that was so sad, but so bloody good aswell! Really well written, well done x

Skits
05-04-2006, 10:27
that was excellent. it brought a tear to my eye.

Jada-GDR
05-04-2006, 12:19
aww thanks guys!!! i'll maybe do another one sometime in the near future :D

the_watts_rule
05-04-2006, 18:38
Aww, That was really good, very well written. Well Done! :)