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Summer Party
Chapter One, Messages.
DS Phil Hunter walked into CID, his colleague and friend Samantha Nixon was already at her desk. As he passed her she looked up. "Oh hi Phil." She smiled.
"Hiya Sam." Phil replied smiling before sitting down opposite her. She carried on with her work and he started to turn his computer on.
PC Reg Hollis walked in at that moment holding some papers, he put one up on the wall then walked back out again. Curious, Sam walked over to the illuminous orange paper and read what it said.
Summer Party.
Adam Okaro has decided to hold another summer party to celebrate summer!
The theme is favourite childrens characters, the super would like to see the child within and see how imaginative and creative you all really are. Hopefully you can get a partner and have a few dances together.
Time: Half six until whenever.
Date: Saturday 29th July 2006.
So come along, socialise, dance, get drunk, get something to eat and have a good time!
DC Jo Masters read over Sam's shoulder. "Childrens caharcters!"
Sam nodded. "Looks that way."
The people that were huddled around reading, groaned.
"Oh c'mon don't be so down. We could go as Disney characters." DC Susie Sim said.
"Now's the cue for Susie to break into song about cheering up and we have 'CID, the musical'!!!" Sam said, everyone laughed including Susie.
Everyone went back to their desks and started working. Even though it looked like Sam and Jo were working they were actually instant messagin eachother.
Jo: What you wearing for this thing on Saturday?
Sam: I'm slightly embarassed about mine, you go first, pleeease.
Jo: Might go as Dorothy Gale from Wizard of Oz.
Sam: lol.
Jo: What about you?
Sam: I was possibly thinking about Esmerelda from Hunchback of Notre Dame. Basically a gypsy.
Jo: Cool. You going with anyone?
Sam looked up at Phil, sighed then began to type.
Sam: Probably not. I mean, I would like to possibly go with a bloke but I don't think even notices me. At times it's like I'm invisible.
Jo: It's not Stuart Turner by any chance is it?
Sam: No, why?
Jo: Oh I heard him say to Mickey that he may ask you but he didn't know if you'd want to go with him or not.
Sam: Oh, I didn't know that.
Jo: Would you like to go with him?
Sam: I don't know. I guess so, he is nice and everything. I should say yes, I mean I can't linger in the past for the rest of my life.
Jo: Huh!
Sam: Sorry, random mumblings/typings. Forgte about that. Yes, if he asks then I'll say yes!
Jo: COOL!!!
Sam: Alright, calm down Jo! lol.
Jo: Sorry, better go. DCI's coming my way.
Sam: Alright see ya.
They both clicked out of the conversation. Jo had enough time to make it look like she was doing something just before the DCI walked up to her. Sam started her own work. Across from Sam, Phil was sat also instant messaging but he was talking to Zain.
Zain: You going to that party?
Phil: Yeah, you?
Zain: Probably. I want a girl to go with though.
Phil: So do I. I kinda have someone in mind though.
He cast a look at Sam, she was concentrating and gently biting her bottom lip. He tore his eyes away from her then looked at his computer.
Zain: Who?!
Phil: Promise you won't tell anyone.
Zain: Yes, now who?
Phil: Sam.
Zain: Nixon?
Phil: No, of course Sam Nixon you twerp.
Zain: Sorry. I didn't realise you liked her.
Phil: Well I don't exactly walk into CID and shout it everytime she's in too do I?
Zain: Well no, but usually I can pick up on these things.
Phil: Good for you.
Zain: Alright, don't be mean! Anyway, what you wearing?
Phil: Dunno. What 'bout you?
Zain: Um, I dunno. Depends what my date's wearing.
Phil: Why, who you going with?
Zain: Wait two secs and see.
Phil looked at Zain, Zain brought his head up too.
"Oi Susie!" He called.
"Yeah." She said looking up at him.
"Wanna go with me to the summer party?" he said not caring about the people looking at him. Phil slapped his forehead, he was going to get rejected in front of everyone.
"Yeah alright." She smiled back.
"Cushty." Zain said then looked at Phil. Phil's mouth was open and looking at Zain unbelieving. Zain smiled at him. "Simple."
Phil shook his head and rolled his eyes. He casually looked at Sam, she was with Jo and Susie. They were all gossiping together. He could slightly hear them.
"Zain's stupid." Jo said.
"No he isn't, that's sweet." Sam told her. "At least he's not scared to show his feelings." She turned, Phil quickly moved so that he was facing her. She thought his sudden change of movement strange but let the thought pass. She wnet back to her seat. Phil felt like kicking himself, he was doing exactly the opposite of what she thought was sweet. He was scared of sahowing his true feelings. He used to be like Zain, be able to ask a woman out in front of a whole crowd without caring but he'd changed, quite a bit.
Phil decided that he'd conquer that fear at the party but asking her, it would have to be just the two of them. However, whenever he got close, Jo and/or Susie would walk over and so he couldn't say it. He found out that Susie and Zain were going to go to the party as Robin Hood and Maid Marion, he laughed as it meant Zain would have to wear tights!
It was Wednesday, Phil only had until Friday to actually ask her. Saturday would be too short notice. He thought that he had to sleep on it though. He wnet home, all he could think about was what he'd say to Sam, whether she'd accept or not. At ahlf eleven he tried to sleep but couldn't. He was wishing for her, he wished that she could lay beside him. He wished he could watch her dream, would he be in her thought like the way she's always in his. To help him sleep he did something that he hadn't done in quite a few years. He said a prayer.
Let Sam sleep peacefully and be out of harms way. Let her be able to dream the night away without a care in the world, let her sleep and be watched over by a thousand angels and let their wings protect them against the harshness of the night.
Just then his mobile beeped. He had a text message from Sam. His heart skipped a beat as he opened up the message.
Random thing: If the world ends then don't worry because it's tomorrow in Australia!! Love you Phil, Sam. xxx
Phil laughed to himself. They always sent random stuff to eachother, especially jokes. He then thought, it said: Love you Phil! Did she mean that in a friendly way, or more than that? He didn't care, he was happy with whatever it meant.
He then got into bed, rolled over and fell asleep.
Forgot to say, Phil sweet in this and nice. Hope you like and please review. Cheers. xxx
samantha nixon
26-03-2006, 15:42
aww thats really good i like it and a very random thing that sam sent phil
Oooooo lovely Phil. i love this, i already have insider knowledge and know what this is going to be about, it's great!!! :D
It's a display picture on msn, it cracks me up so I put it on here. I also couldn't help but put about the musical, just reminds me of the kind of thing they say in a musical before breaking into song! lol.
baby oranges
26-03-2006, 19:31
this is so good, just wish it would happen in real life!!!
please update soon!!!
adorableangel
26-03-2006, 21:16
this is great, a masterpiece in the making !!! cant wait for an update....no pressure!!!!
love the story so far, its great. The bit with zain reminds me of harry potter lol
update soon!! :D:D:D
Chapter Two
"Do you want to go with me?"
The next morning Samantha parked her car as DS Stuart Turner got out of his, he smiled at her so she smiled back before getting out.
"Hello Sam." He said cheerfully.
"Hiya Stuart." She replied happily.
"Are you going to this party?" He asked, Sam nodded. "Do you, um, do you want to go with me?"
Sam hesitated, she thought of Phil. It would be a lie to say that she didn't love or think about him anymore, but he'd probably moved on. Maybe she should too.
"Ok, I'll go with you." Sam agreed, she smiled as his face washed over with relief.
"Wicked! What are you dressing up as?" He asked.
"I was thinking about Esmerelda from the Hunchback of Notre Dame but I was talking on the phone to Jo last night and she said I should go as Tinkerbell. What about you?"
"I hadn't exactly considered it yet, but if you're going as Tinkerbell I could go as Peter Pan." Stuart said smiling.
"You do realise that you'd have to wear tights, like Zain." Sam laughed.
"Nah, I'll wear three quarter lenghts that are covered in leaves and acorns and stuff." He said. He then laughed. "I'll leave the tights for Zain."
Sam laughed. "Oh have you heard, Honey Harman and Will Fletcher are going as Mickey and Minnie Mouse! And Reg Hollis is going as Kermit the Frog from the muppets!" Stuart laughed. "I also heard that because Jo's going as Dorothy from the Wizard of Oz, Terry's going as the lion, Mickey's going as the scarecrow and Dan Casper from uniform has agreed to be the tinman."
"Yeah, Emma Keane, Leela Kapoor and Yvonne Hemmigway are going as the female three musketeers." Stuart said.
They walked up to CID talking about the Tinkerbell and Peter Pan costumes. Sam knew a good place in Canely High Street where they'd be able to get them. When they walked through the doors of the CID department Jo walked over to Sam, Stuart went and talked to Mickey. Both Samantha and Stuart told their friends excitedly. Jo and Terry were both pleased for them.
"About time a bloke made you smile again." Jo said.
"Yeah, he's really sweet." Sam said. "Right, lets get on with some work."
"Sarge." Jo wlaked over to her desk, Phil was stood by it.
"What was that all about?" Asked Phil casually.
"Not much, just Sam telling me that she was going to the summer party with Stuart."
Phil felt his stomach drop into his stomach. "Are you alright sarge? You look Pale." Jo said.
"I'm fine." he replied then walked back to his desk. He looked up at Sam, she was looking at a file. He couldn't help but notice she looked happy, she was smiling and her eyes seemed to be sparkling. He felt worse knowing that she was so happy with Stuart.
The day went quietly and soon Sam was on her way to Canely high street with Jo after their shift. They tried the outfits on and laughed at eachother. Sam's one was just like the disney oridional, she even had a hair scrunchy for her hair to tie in a bun. She laughed at Jo's outfit, it was proper Dorothy style dress with red shoes. Jo laughed at it too but said it was perfect.
Sam dropped Jo off at her house then went to her own house. She laughed to herself as she remembered Jo's comment about the good witch in The Wizard of Oz, Glinda. It was; "Why didn't Glinda, save time by saying to Dorothy all you gotta do is click your heels three timnes and say there's no place like home. Then you'd get there." Sam had replied with.
"Because then, the film would finish and Dorothy wouldn't of helped all the other characters out."
She got out of her car and took her dress to her house. She got in and checked the phone. Their was two misssed calls. One from Stuart telling her that he'd found a really good Peter Pan outfit and had brought it. Then another from Phil, it was a random joke.
"Hey Sam. What did Zero say to Eight? Nice belt. Ok, it's rubbish but I thought I'd tell you anyway. See you tomorrow."
She smiled to herself, thinking about how much of a good friend Phil really was. Oh well, she guessed that was all he was ever going to be.
samantha nixon
27-03-2006, 18:30
aww thats really good and phil comes up with some random things
So does Sam. Then again, so do I. I'm including my random thoughts in this, the joke was what my mate told me earlier. Hope everyone get's it though, if not then oops and sorry. lol. xxx
I didn't get it at first until i thought about it! lol
adorableangel
27-03-2006, 22:29
ha i thought that joke was good!!
baby oranges
28-03-2006, 06:50
took me ages to get the joke, im so dumb!!! :lol:
the story is great, please update soon!
don't worry some of my mates didn't get it either. Sophie's a bit blonde though anyway so she wouldn't!
As a blonde, I could take offence at that lol :p
The rest of the week went quickly and it was soon Saturday. The party was at the pub, Reg and his 'team' had decorated the room really well. Lewis Hardy was able to be a DJ and happily offered to sort out the music. Stuart arrived and waited outside the pub for Sam. Sam's car pulled up and she got out with Jo and Susie. Stuart smiled as she walked over to him. He handed her a red rose.
"Aww, that's really sweet, thanks." She smiled accepting it. Stuart kissed her cheek.
"Are you too coming or what, we're fricken freezing over it!" Jo called. Sam and Stuart laughed before walking hand in hand into the pub. The room was big, Lewis was already playing tunes and some people were already dancing.
Moodswings by Charlotte Church was on. Stuart led Sam on to the dance floor and they danced together. A few songs later, most people were on the dance floor. Jo dragged Sam away from Stuart and made her dance to One Night Stand by Mis-teeq with her, Susie, Honey, Gina and June. Gina and June made her laugh. They'd jokingly gone as a devil and angel. June beign the angel of course and Gina the devil.
The night went along well and Sam had a laugh with Stuart and the girls. Sam looed up while dancing and noticed Phil sitting by himself at the side. The song ended and Stuart went to talk with Zain. Sam walked over to Phil.
"Hiya Phil." She said. He smiled at her. She took in his appearance. He had a pair of black trousers, white, old top and a white half, face mask on. "By any chance are you The Phantom of the Opera?"
He nodded. "It's stupid isn't it." He said solemnly.
"No, it's a great idea." Sam said enthustiastically. Phil face lit up.
"You think so?" He asked.
"Yeah." She said. Filthy/Gorgeous by Scissor Sisters started to play. "I love this song."
"So do I." Phil said, he then started to mouth the words. Sam laughed.
"Hey, why don't you come and dance with me." Sam said holding out her hand. Phil took it, for that moment he fegot about Stuart, he just thought about him and Sam dancing together. They danced and laughed together. When the song ended Lewis announced that the buffet was open. Sam went to meet Stuart and get something to eat. She also got a drink of diet coke. She sat between Stuart and Gina. They were in a huddle in the corner laughing and talking. When everyone had finished eating they went back to dancing. A slow song started and Stuart pulled Sam closer to him.
Phil watched from the side listening to the lyrics and relating to them. He wished that he was Stuart.
I've been alone with you inside my mind
And in my dreams I've kissed your lips a thousand times
I sometimes see you pass outside my door
Hello, is it me you're looking for?
I can see it in your eyes
I can see it in your smile
You're all I've ever wanted, (and) my arms are open wide
'Cause you know just what to say
And you know just what to do
And I want to tell you so much, I love you ...
I long to see the sunlight in your hair
And tell you time and time again how much I care
Sometimes I feel my heart will overflow
Hello, I've just got to let you know
'Cause I wonder where you are
And I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely, or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying, I love you ...
Hello, is it me you're looking for?
'Cause I wonder where you are
And I wonder what you do
Are you somewhere feeling lonely or is someone loving you?
Tell me how to win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying ... I love you
The song ended and Phil felt like someone had suddenly stopped torturing him. Stuart walked over to the bar to get a couple of drinks.
Reg walked out of the toilets and tripped on a speaker box accidentally. He looked down but didn’t notice anything wrong. He didn’t notice that wire had been pulled out. The speaker box had also been pushed against the wall. Sam stood on the dance floor dancing with Jo again. They walked over to Lewis and talked to him for a bit. Jo walked over to Gina, who had just called her. Sam stayed talking to Lewis.
Suddenly there was a deafening bang. Everyone ducked and looked around, they could a noise like cracking, then a parts of the ceiling fell down. People tried to get out as quickly as possible. They stood outside of the pub. Phil stood in the cold looking around at all the people. He then realised that a few people were missing, he looked around. He looked towards the door, PC Tony Stamp was half carrying, half dragging fellow PC Lewis Hardy out of the building. He went over to him.
“Is she out, did she get out. I couldn’t see, is she here?” Lewis said.
“Who?” Tony asked. “Did who get out?”
“Sam Nixon, she was talking to me and I didn’t see if she got out. The ceiling, it collapsed and I don’t know if she managed to get out.” He said.
Phil scanned the area again, and saw that there was no sign of her. He could see Jo, Gina, Stuart but no Sam. Sam was still in the building.
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Omigod, shock horor! Did you see that coming? Well, the only way is up, baby! Sorry, song moment. lol. Will update soon, hopefully.
From this Thursday to next Wednesday I will NOT be updating coz I'm in Barcelona. Sorry for pretty short notice, but at least I did tell you. Also sorry to anyone i do roleplay's with, I guess I'll be on hold until I get back. Please don't hate me! lol. Nah, you probably don't, anyway. End of Notice!
adorableangel
28-03-2006, 18:12
awwwwwwwwwwww im loving it, youv got me adicted to this script now!!
samantha nixon
28-03-2006, 18:43
this is realy good but i hope sam is ok
Awwwwwwww I hope Sam's alright!!!!!!!
Footie_Chick
30-03-2006, 11:11
Wow, this is really good, totally wicked!!!
Can't wait to find out what happens.
this is really good, please up date soon!
Sory that I ain't been replying/updating. Come on internet and get distracted by msn and roleplay's. They're fun though. But so is this, I've also started fics on fanfic.net so if you can you might wanna check them out.
Sorry, that's it's been so long, here's the next part for all of ya. Please read and review.
"Jo!" He called, Jo ran over.
"Wassup?" She asked.
"Sam's still in the building, tell the DCI and tell him to get paramedics just in case. I'm gonna go in and try to find her." Phil said.
"You sure that's a good idea?" Jo asked.
"Just do it." Phil shouted before turning and walking back into the now deserted pub.
He walk through the corridors and into the room where everyone had been minutes before dancing. He went over to where he'd seen Lewis and Sam talking.
"SAM?!" He called. He called again and again.
"Phil?" He heard a faint whisper.
"Sam!" He ran over to where a pile of ruble was. He moved a small peice and found her hand. "Sam, it's alright. I'm here now." He held her hand tightly.
He could see through a gap her face, she has a nasty cut on her forehead. Blood was trickling out of it.
"Sam, I need you to keep talking. You've got to keep talking to me, ok?"
"Ok." Sam said. "My body is all twisted and being pressed upon by the ruble. I can't breath."
"Come on Sam, don't worry, ok." Phil begged. There was no answer. "Sam?"
He could hear the footsteps of the paramedics, they entered the room followed by Jack Meadows, Gina Gold, Jo and Stuart.
"She's stopped talking." Phil told them. "She was saying that she found it hard to breath, and she has a bleeding cut on her forehead."
The paramedics, Phil, Stuart and Jack helped to unbury her. Gina and Jo watched in horror. When she was free the paramedics carried her out of the pub and into the ambulance. Lewis had already been taken to the hospital. Jack drove Phil, Stuart and Gina to the hospital. Jo was going to go back to the station with everyone else so she could pass on the information about Lewis and Sam.
When they arrived at the hospital, Sam was in theatre. Phil, Gina, Jack and Stuart waited outside in anticipation. A nurse walked out. Phil approached her. "Excuse me, we know Sam Nixon, what's up with her?"
"Ms Nixon has had slight internal bleeding where the debris and brick had trapped her. Her breathing has steadied but she's still unconcious. Her head has been hit too, this is causing the unconciousness." The nurse said.
Phil sat in one of the chairs. Stuart stood leaning against the wall. Jack took Stuart to go and get a coffee while Gina talked to Phil.
"You love Sam, don't you?" Gina said sitting next to him.
He nodded. "So much that it hurts when I see her with him."
"You mean Stuart." Gina said. Phil nodded again.
The nurse reappared. "Ms Nixon, been taken to ward G on floor 2."
Gina told Phil to go, she would wait for Jack and Stuart to turn up. Phil rushed to the ward and found her room. He went in and felt like crying. Sam was hooked up to a machine, she had a square bandage on her head. Her hair had been taken out and was spread over the pillow. He sat in the chair beside her, took her hand and gently kissed it.
"I love you." He whispered.
Gina burst into the room. "Sorry, Stuart and Jack have had to leave to make statements."
"Shouldn't Stuart haved saved it until he'd seen Sam and made sure she was alright." Phil spat.
"He would of, but I told him not to. This way, you are here when Sam wakes up and not him." Gina smiled.
"Your evil." Phil grinned.
"I know." Gina smiled. "I've got to go too but make sure you look after her."
"I will, I promise." Phil smiled. Gina left and Phil stayed sitting next to Sam.
After half an hour the doctor walked in with a nurse. He checked things over.
The nurse talked to Phil. "She can hear you, it's soothing if you talk to them."
"Ok, I'll talk to her." Phil said. The doctor said that she was fine for the moment.
They left and Phil resumed sitting next to Sam. "Hey, apparently you can hear me. Ok, well this is really weird but I'll do it anyway." He laughed. "Remember earlier, us too dancing to Filthy/Gorgeous by Scissor Sisters. That was fun, you were laughing so much, causing me to laugh. You've got to get well soon though, I miss you. I miss your voice, I miss you talking. Abi was told and she's coming tomorrow morning. She'll bring all your stuff too. I love you so much Sam. I'm sorry that I haven't told you sooner but I do. I have for so long now."
After a while he drifted off to sleep. He had his arms folded on the bed and his head rested on them.
Sam lay in bed, her eyes fluttered open. She saw Phil sleeping beside her. She looked around and realised that she was in hospital. She didn't know why. After a few minutes Phil woke up.
"You're awake!" Phil exclaimed.
"Yeah." Sam smiled.
"Hang on, I'll go get the nurse." He said walking out of the room and getting nurse. He came back with one.
"Ok, Ms Nixon. You were in an accident. It's ok though, you just need to have someone keeping an eye on you." The nurse said.
"I got Phil, ain't I?" She said turning to Phil.
"Cause." Phil said holding her hand. The nurse left.
Sam realised that there was a 6x6 bandage on her forehead. "Where's the bandage come from?"
"You hit your head, where you were stuck." Phil explained.
"Oh, I remember being trapped. Then you came, I herad you and then I called to you." Sam said.
"It's ok, I'm here now. It's ok." Phil said hugging her.
The door burst open and Stuart ran in. "Sam! You're awake."
Phil pulled away from Sam. Stuart kissed Sam's cheek. "I was so worried."
She looked at him. "Who are you?"
To Be Contunued . . . . . .
tv_addict245
14-04-2006, 22:08
wow! i can't wait to find out what happened! please update asap!!
billbabe04
14-04-2006, 22:32
oh yes, she cant remember Stuart, this could be interesting!!! good update!! xx
adorableangel
14-04-2006, 23:35
yes i have really missed your usual daily updates loving this script cant wait for the next update
Update really soon!
Does she remember Phil, or has she forgotten im too?
Aww, I'm sorry adorableangel, will try to be more frequent again.
Stuart stood rooted to the spot, shocked. "Sam, it's me. Stuart. I work with you, we were at the party earlier together."
Sam shook her head. "I don't know you."
Stuart looked at Phil and glared. "I bet your so happy now. Get me out the way so you can muscle in. You won't get away with this. You'll regret doing this. I swear you will."
"I think you should leave." Sam said, Stuart glared one last time at Phil before storming out. "Are doctors suppose bang the door like that?"
"Sam. He isn't a doctor. He's the replacement for Ramini, you know. DS Turner." Phil told her. "I'm going to get a doctor, ok?"
Phil walked out and told a doctor. "That would be normal, she's got a nasty bang on the head she will forget somethings. They should come back with time but you'll have to be patient."
"Ok." Phil said walking back. He went and sat beside Sam again. Just then Abi walked in. She went over to her mum and hugged her.
"Mum."
"Woah, this is a bit of a surprise." Sam laughed.
"What do you mean?" Abi asked.
"Well your usually telling me that you hate me." Sam said. "And why do you have a pram?"
"Abi, can I talk to you a minute." Phil said he walked over to Abi and pulled her outside.
"She's lost parts of her memory. I think she may have forgotten the whole Hugh thing. It'll come back with time but the doctor said to be patient. Just don't preassure her to remember things." Phil told her
"So, she can't even remember her own grandson?" Abi said annoyed.
"You can't blame her, she just needs to recover." Phil said.
They went back to see her. She was holding the baby boy.
"Sorry, he started to cry." Sam apologised.
"Don't worry, it doesn't matter." Abi said smiling slightly. Sam bounced him on her lap. Abi put the bag of Sam's stuff on the cabinet beside her.
"I'll take him out with me while you change if you want." Phil offered.
"Cheers." Abi said handing the baby to him.
Phil stood waiting outside while Sam changed into her pjamas. Abi put her hair out the way in a french plait before Phil was allowed back in. They sat talking for a while then the nurse went in to take Sam's bandage off. There was a stitched scar on her head. Sam looked at it in a handheld mirror and sighed.
"Don't worry, it'll be fine." Abi reassured her.
"It looks horrible." Sam muttered. Aftre a bit more talking Phil looked at his watch. "I'd better go, I've got to get changed and ready for work. I'll tell everyone how your doing though becasue I know that they're worried. I'll probably see you later though."
And with that Phil left feeling slightly lonely and wishing he could stay with her.
adorableangel
16-04-2006, 09:15
anotherhr great installment bex!!!!!
Crazy Gal 88
16-04-2006, 16:35
wow - this is definiterly your best script yet - took me ages to read but well worth it. please update soon.
ok i dont mean to sound dumb and this is rather embarassing but i still dont get that joke about 7 saying to 8 about a belt? can someone explain it to me please...so confused!!
adorableangel
16-04-2006, 22:22
it was 0 to 8.
both numbers would look like this 0 0
but one of the numbers is wearing a belt turning the 0 to an 8
Crazy Gal 88
16-04-2006, 23:30
oooooooooooooo ok iget it now - thank you! i cant believe i didnt get that - im so not with it.
lmao, don't worry. when most people tell me a joke I just sm8ile and nod while going over it again in my head. e.g:
Friend: Tell Joke.
Me: Laugh.
Friend: So you get it then.
Me: No.
Just about to update, sorry about long waits my computer mucked up, then I was ill yesterday so I'll update today and may update again because of how I've been 'blowing you all off!!'
baby oranges
23-04-2006, 14:34
this is a great story, can't wait for the next update!!!
tv_addict245
23-04-2006, 21:10
same here! please update soon. i'm loving this story so far!
bex
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Phil sat at his desk at work, he'd told everyone Sam's condition. Stuart wasn't talking to him, but he didn't really care. He noticed a change in CID. Without Sam it was boring. Phil was bored without her there flirting. It was the same feeling he got if she had time off.
At his lunch break he went and brought a big card and a bunch of red roses. He took them back to CID and got everyone to sign it. Even Stuart signed it, Phil scowled at his message.
'Dear Sam, get better soon and I hope your memory comes back. I'll always be here for you and love you forever. Love you lots, Stuart.'
Phil wrote his own message of : To Sam, get better soon so you can come back to work and make it less boring. :D Missing you lots and want to hear one of your random jokes again. Love a very, very bored Phil.
He took it to her after wrok, it was filled with people's messages. He went to her ward, Abi wasn't there yet.
"Hiya." Phil said. Sam looked up at him and smiled.
"Hey."
"You ok?" He asked.
"Yeah, bit bored. You?" Sam asked.
"Same actually very boring without you." Phil admitted. "Here."
He gave her the roses and card. "I got everyone to sign the card. Some messages are funny. Every one's missing you."
She smelt the roses. "Oh thank you Phil. Guess what!"
"What?" Phil asked.
"I got my memory back, it was only a bit of concussion, making things patchy. I got a grandson." She said happily.
"Does that mean you remember your Summer Party date, Stuart?" Phil asked.
"Yeah." Sam sighed.
"What's wrong?" Phil asked.
"Well he's nice but a bit boring. Not like you. You make me laugh." Sam smiled at him. Phil felt like he was on cloud nine.
"I do my best." Phil said.
Sam smiled. "I know."
"Oh, I'd better go." Phil said looking at his watch. "If I can then I'll nbe back later."
"Ok, hopefully see you then." Sam said. Phil left and Sam read her card. She read Phil's message last. She looked at the word love, did he mean it or just put it? She secretly hoped that he meant it.
baby oranges
11-05-2006, 15:53
awww, so sweet, bless them both, they are the ultimate couple, :wub:
hope you carry this on, it's really, really good to read
Crazy Gal 88
11-05-2006, 18:51
another good one - please update soon!!!
great update! i'm really enjoying this skript
Ok, here's the next part, hope you like.
Phil kept to his word and came back a few hours later.
"The doctor just told me that you can go home but you'll have to come back for test in a week." Phil said happily.
"Great, will I have to go straight home and rest or what?" Sam asked.
"Well, what would you rather do?" Phil replied.
"Go for a walk, my legs need to be used." Sam laughed. "Otherwise I'm going to not be able to walk again!"
"Don't worry, you'll be able to. Want to get changed with the stuff Abi brought you before and then go and walk around Canely Park?"
"Sure, will you come with me?" Sam asked. Hoping he would.
"Yeah, absolutely."
Sam got changed while Phil waited outside then he went to help her, they put her stuff in his car before walking towards Canely Park. It was a lovely summer's day and Sam really loved the hot weather.Sam was planning to say about her feelings to Phil but was unsure if he'd be happy about them.
"Sam, are you ok? You look distant." Phil commented looking at her and stopping.
"No, I'm not ok. We need to talk." She said.
"About what?" he asked not sure where it was going, he watched her walk on a tiny bit then followed.
"About us, what's going to happen? Is anything going to happen? I like you Phil, more than a friend should but I can't help it. You mean so much to me that it hurts when you sleep around with so many people. I wanted to tell you everyday since the whole Weaver thing and you getting shot but knew it wouldn't work out. Well maybe now it will, I just want you to reject me so I can move on." She finally said feeling numb all over from the feeling of him not loving her.
"Not ina million years would I ever reject you. Sam, I love you." Phil admitted, Sam turned to face him. He hugged her. "I have done for so long, it breaks my heart when I see you sad. It broke my heart when Abi was missing, I feel sick when I hear your in danger. Like at the pub, I went in after you because I had to, I had to save you before something else happened."
Sam kissed him sweetly and they both felt in pure bliss. She pulled back and saw Stuart standing behind Phil. She looked at him, she could see how hurt he was and felt guilt rush through her. She ran over to him but he turned away.
"I'm sorry Stuart. Please listen to me. I'm sorry that I forgot who you were but when I did remember I couldn't go back to you because I love Phil. I always have done but didn't think he loved me back. Please don't hate me, I know I must seem like a slut but I care about Phil so much. Your a lovely man, your just a better friend to me." Sam said quickly wanting so badly or him to stay as her friend.
yay!! theyt kissed!!! hope Stuart isn't too angry with Sam
Awww poor Stuart. yay at Phil and Sam getting together though lol
Stuart turned back to her and sighed. "I don't think your a slut."
"Do you hate me?" She asked.
"No, I could never hurt you. It was only a matter of time until this happened, your way too out of my league anyway." Stuart said. "Still friends eh?"
"Of course." Sam smiled. Stuart smiled at her then looked at Phil.
"Don't you dare let her slip away or hurt her." Stuart said. Phil smiled.
"I won't."
Sam went back to walking with Phil. Stuart left them to it. Phil linked his arms with Sam's as they walked and she rested her head against him. They walked through the park talking then went back to the hospital car park. Phil took Sam home. He kissed her on the doorstep.
"Do you want to come in?" She asked.
"He smiled. "Ok."
He walked in and she shut the door.
I think I'm gonna leave it there now. Sort of like if it was an actualy episode then it might do that. Did'nt realise how short it is, opps. Hope you don't mind and please review after reading.
Awww that was a reallly good skript and a sweet ending
Crazy Gal 88
13-05-2006, 20:48
good story and i think youre right to leave it there as i guess its more episode-realistic-like! (hope that makes sense - i couldnt exactly find the words!)
tv_addict245
13-05-2006, 21:46
i have really enjoyed reading this story, it is one of my favourite fanfics ever! i think you were right to end it there. great ending. well done and looking forward to more of your scripts.
bex
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That was a really good ending to a great story Well done :D
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