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Xx-Vicky-xX
16-03-2006, 12:44
This is my first propper script so i hope you like it

Narrator: Imagine growing up always knowing what you want to do when you grow up well that was eactly what a group of 3 friends did. From the age of five Vicky Emmie and Heleyna knew that they wanted to sing when they were old enough but their parents all thought it was just some silly thing that they would grow out of afterall didnt all little girls want to be famous. As they all got older their parents realised they wasnt showing any signs of growing out of this but still laughed it off as a big joke but the more they got laughed at the more they were determined to form a band when they turned 16.

Vicky:Hey hunnies you ready for music class
Layne and Emmie:yep
Vicky:God it would be so boring if we wasnt allowed to sing in the practice room
Emmie:It sure would im glad we got Mr Marshall again and not Mrs Price she would never let us practice im glad she is leaving next week
Layne:Yeh are you going to the leaving do
Emmie:Well i thought we could ask Mr Marshall if we could pratice in private while everyone is out there saying goodbye to the old dragon
Vicky:Ohhhhh yeah good idea
Emmie:Right lets go to music then and we can ask him after class

Narrator:The girls walk in to class

All: Hey Mr Marshall
Mr Marshall:Hey its my 3 best students
Emmie:Can we have the key please sir
MM:Sure *hands the key to Emmie
All:Thanks Mr Marshall

Emmie:So what we going to sing today
Vicky and Layne:*look at eachother smile then look back at Emmie* Our song
Emmie:We have loads which one
Vicky and Layne:*look at eachother and smile* Worlds Greatest
Emmie:*laughs*Okay

Narrator: The class is over and the girls stay back to talk to Mr Marshall

Emmie:Hey Mr Marshall we have been thinking that we could maybe use the room next week when everyone is saying goodbye to Mrs Price
Mr Marshall:Well i will have to think about it but i have to go as im covering Mrs Price's music class she isnt in again today
All:Okay bye Mr Marshall
MM:*laughs*Bye girls

What next: Stay tuned to find out if Mr Marshall lets the girls use his room

feelingyellow
16-03-2006, 18:28
Ooo I really like the beginning hehe! So glad I'm in your script lol, it's fab darling! Can't wait for more and remember to slip peas in there somewhere! :rotfl:

Xx-Vicky-xX
16-03-2006, 18:56
Narrator:Later that day Emmie Vicky and Heleyna see Mr Marshall coming out of the head teachers office Mr Peterson

Emmie:Hey Mr Marshall have you thought anymore about what we said earlier
MM:Ive spoken to Mr Peterson he said if you really dont want to say good bye to Mrs Price then you girls can come down to me as long as i agree to be there aswell
Emmie:And do you agree sir?
MM:I dont see why not but ill be busy so you dont have to worry about being disturbed and i know i can trust you girls if i have to dissapear so yeh come down
Emmie:Thanks sir
MM:Okay girls now get out of here school finished 15 minuites ago
All:Okay*waits for Mr Marshall to leave and they hold hands and jump up and down only to be interuped by Mrs Price*
Mrs Price:*coughs* Girls whats going on here
Emmie:Mrs Price your back what a...urrrrm...pleasant suprise
Mrs Price:If only i could say the same im only here for some stupid meeting
Emmie:Are you in tomorrow then Miss?
Mrs Price:Nope but i will be in on Monday
Emmie:*whispers to Vicky and Layne* Joy
Mrs P:What did you say
Emmie:Nothing
Vicky and Layne:She never said anything
Mrs P:Urrrrrm well i must be off dont want to be late *walks away*
Emmie:*pokes tounge out at Mrs Price*
Vicky and Layne:*Laugh at Emmie's actions*

What happens next:The girls try to rehearse some songs

Layne
16-03-2006, 19:00
Ahhh Honey this is fab! I am in a script wooooo!
You do know that in real life i can't actually sing don't ya! :p
More soon x

feelingyellow
16-03-2006, 19:19
Hehe fabolous hun! Can't wait for more! :D

Lanye, I bet you can :p

feelingyellow
17-03-2006, 16:31
Lmao! Hell yeah peas are better! :p Fab part, liking the comedy! :thumbsup: Can't wait for more hun! :bow:

(if your part has been deleted, I can see it cos I suscribe to threads and got it emailed to me :) - Lucky me haha :p)

Xx-Vicky-xX
19-03-2006, 09:39
This should have been above Emmie's post but it dissapeared so im re posting it

Narrator: The girls all go home arranging to meet at the practice hall after dinner but in the mean time they arrange to talk on the phone and Emmie rings Layne first with some excting news

Emmie:Hi hunz ive got some really exciting news for you
Layne:What have we managed to find a record company to sign us
Emmie:Nope
Layne:Then what
Emmie:I just had some peas for dinner
Layne:Well thats nice hunni but id prefere to have Nigel for dinner any day
Emmie:Well id rather peas so there :p
Layne:I dont care because im going to see Nigel your not going to see peas are you :p
Emmie:Nope but wouldnt it be cool if peas could perform i would so go and see that
Layne:Really? Nope give me Nigel anyday
Emmie:I might bring some peas with me to the practice hall
Layne:No bring Nigel and i will love you forever
Emmie:Well dont you love me anyway
Layne: Urrrrrm :hmm: yeh course i do
Emmie:Good :p
Layne:Well ive got to go now hunz my dinner is ready ive made mum do me alphabet spagetti so i can write Nigel all over my plate will see you later love you
Emmie:Bye huz and peas are better
Layne:NO!! *quickly hangs up*

Narrator:The girls all arrive at the hall and set up their equipment

Emmie:What are we singing first
Vicky:Well i guess we do what ever song plays first
Layne:Sounds good to me *presses play*

Narrator:Song for lovers comes on first but Layne doesnt want to do that song so she finds the worlds greatest and puts that on and the girls practice that but they are interupted by the owner of the hall Mr Arkwright

Next time:Stay tuned to see what the owner of the hall wants

the_watts_rule
19-03-2006, 10:16
Well Done, Great script. More soon please.

Layne
19-03-2006, 10:41
Lanye, I bet you can :p

No i honestly can't i am like the most unflexible and worst singer you'll ever meet ever!

Fab honey and urmm nigel rules! :p

feelingyellow
19-03-2006, 11:33
No i honestly can't i am like the most unflexible and worst singer you'll ever meet ever!

Fab honey and urmm nigel rules! :p

Bet ya not :p

Why must you continue to tell lies?? :eek: :p

Xx-Vicky-xX
20-03-2006, 15:10
Bet ya not :p

Why must you continue to tell lies?? :eek: :p

Yeh Emmie you tell her. Layne luvvie you can sing you was on the phone the other night lol and also Emmie have you seen a pic of Layne at all if you have tell her you agree with me that she is pretty enough to be a model

feelingyellow
20-03-2006, 20:01
Yeh Emmie you tell her. Layne luvvie you can sing you was on the phone the other night lol and also Emmie have you seen a pic of Layne at all if you have tell her you agree with me that she is pretty enough to be a model

Lol yeah she is :( Tis jealous lol :( Layne be ugly! :p

Xx-Vicky-xX
22-03-2006, 17:47
Narrator:Last time you saw the girls rehearsing but were interupted by Mr Arkwright the owner of the hall the girls use

Mr Arkwrigt:Girls ive come to see that everything is okay down here some people have complained
All:*look puzzled*
Layne:Not about us have they Mr Arkwright
Mr A: No there were a group of lads hanging around and some of the people around here who know only you three use the hall were worried so i needed to come see you were all alright
Emmie:We are fine we have only seen one person around and that was Jamie who came down to watch for a bit
Mr A: Alright girls not to worry i was just checking
Layne: Do you want a cake Mr A
Mr A: Not for me thanks ive got to meet my wife for dinner tonight its my birthday and she wanted to do something speacial
Layne:Oh Happy Birthday
Vicky:Happy Birthday Mr A
Emmie:Yeah Happy Birthday
Mr A: Thanks girls well i better be off i was in the middle of opening the presents that Josh got me he was ever so upset i had to leave
All: Bye Mr A
Mr A: Bye girls *leaves*
Emmie: Who is Josh?
Vicky: Oh thats Mr Arkwright's son from when he was married to Chloe
Layne:Yeh he is only five bless him he is so sweet but Mr A dont see him very much because he lives quite far away from Josh now but luckily Chloe lets them speak on the phone every night and brings him down sometimes
Emmie:How do you two know all this
Vicky:We had to take care of Josh alot when Mr A and Chloe split up
Emmie:Was i not around
Layne:It was when your mum wouldnt let you talk to us
Emmie:Oh is there anything else i missed
Vicky:*Looks at Layne*
Layne*Shakes her head*
Emmie:Oh now come on guys we tell eachother everything

Next bit:Will Vicky and Layne tell Emmie the big secret

feelingyellow
22-03-2006, 18:36
Fabolous darling! Tell me the secret! :p Can't wait for more! :cheer:

Xx-Vicky-xX
22-03-2006, 18:49
Okay i know Emmie cant wait too long for the big secret to come out so here is the next bit

Emmie: Oh come on guys we tell eachother everything
Vicky: *looks at Layne again*
Layne:*Signals for Vicky to talk to her alone
Vicky: *Goes*
Emmie: Fine then leave me out
Layne: Emmie hunni we aint leaving you out we just dont want your mum saying you cant be mates with us again
Emmie: Okay *Puts music on*

Narrator: Vicky and Layne discuss telling Emmie and they decide they will tell her but she will have to keep quiet about it

Vicky&Layne: *go back to Emmie*
Layne: Vicky will tell you when im out the room but you have to keep it secret
Emmie: *looks worried* Oooo...okay
Layne: *leaves*
Emmie:whats going on
Vicky:Layne got in some serious trouble
Emmie:and...
Vicky: She ended up pregnant
Emmie: :searchme: OMG really
Vicky: yeah she got rid of it though and she is really embarassed about it
Emmie:Im gonna go an see her *rushes off*
Vicky: *calls after Emmie* Emmie....
Emmie:Yeah
Vicky:Look after her
Emmie:*Nods*

Next time:Find out if Layne is okay

I would just like to say nothing in this story is true

feelingyellow
22-03-2006, 18:53
13 minutes, you made me wait THIRTEEN MINUTES!!!? :eek: Jokes :p

Aww, fab part hunni! Poor Lanye, was it Nigel's baby? :p

Can't wait for more huns!

Xx-Vicky-xX
25-03-2006, 10:14
Emmie: *goes out to Layne and stands there quietly*
*Pause*

Layne:I suppose you hate me now
Emmie: Dont say that
Layne:Its true though
Emmie:No it isnt
Layne:You should do i dont deserve to be liked *starts to cry*
Emmie:Awww now look come here *hugs Layne* course you do
Layne:I dont
Emmie:You do hunz your lovely
Vicky:*signals for Emmie to tell her whats happening*
Emmie:Hang on you sit there *goes to Vicky*
Vicky:Is she okay
Emmie:No not really look i think you should go and see her im not very good at this
Vicky:We will do it together she needs us both right now
Emmie:If i wasnt so worried i would bring up the fact you only told me because i asked you to
Vicky:Im sorry Emmie but can we do this another time
Emmie:Yeh we have to go and see she is alright
Vicky:Yeh right whats happened
Emmie:She thinks i dont like her and she says she doesnt deserve to be liked then started crying and thats when you wanted me
Vicky:Right lets go

Narrator:Vicky and Emmie go to see Layne

Vicky:Come on you come here silly
Layne*Gets up*
Vicky:*Hugs Layne* Now whats all this about you thinking you dont deserve to be liked
Layne:I dont
Vicky:Yes you do silly
Layne:All i do is mess things up
Vicky:You didnt mean to get pregnant
Layne:I know but i chose to terminate it though
Vicky:Yeh but your 15 years old the dad was a vile man we understand dont we Emmie
Emmie:Yeh course
Layne:Really :searchme:
Vicky:Yeh
Layne:*cheers up* thanks guys *hugs Vicky and Emmie*
Vicky:Guys ive been thinking maybe we should hold auditions for a new member of the band
Layne:Yeah that could be good
Emmie:Shall we go and put some posters and stuff up then
Vicky&Layne: Yeh

Narrator:The girls go and make posters and put them all over the town

Next bit:Find out how auditions go

If you would like a part in this script let me know it may not be straight off you ay not be involved in the auditions but i will squeeze you in where appropriate

feelingyellow
25-03-2006, 11:17
Aww so sweet! :wub: Fab writing darling, can't wait for more! :cheer:

Layne
26-03-2006, 17:26
This is fab honey do some more soon please!


BTW-Just wanna point out i have never actually been pregnant :p Just thought i'd let ya'll know!