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big bro fan
12-03-2006, 14:00
Hi guys here is extra time
Charaters
Joly Salter
Reese Salter
Yasmin Salter
Chanelle
Matt
Cash
Sebb Webb
Oliver Ryan
Annika Beaver
Garry Ryan
Darius Fry
Episode 1
1. Yasmin's flat Intern Day
(Yasmin walks out of her bedroom and goes into the kitchen. She puts the kettle on and goes to the door to pick up the paper and post. She has some coffe but spits it out when she reads the headlines. WEBB TRANSFERRED TO CITY IN SECRET OVERNIGHT SALE. Yasmin runs into the bedroom.)
2. Bedroom Intern Day
(Yasmin runs to the bed to wake up Sebb.)
Yasmin: wake up Sebb you've been transferred
Sebb: what
Yasmin: look at the paper
Sebb: (scans the headlines) i dont beleive this
Yamin: who dunnit
Sebb: who ever bought earls park
Yasmin: better get down there right away
(Sebb gets out of bed and starts to get changed)
3. Anika and Olivers house Intern Day
(Anika is also reading the paper)
Anika: Ollie isnt Sebb Webb Rodgers lad
Ollie: yeah my dad's mates with him
Anika: he's been sold to city
Ollie: yeah well whats that got to do with us
Anika: because whoever has bought Earls Park sold him
Ollie: i dont know where this is going
Anika: my sister has bought Earls Park
Ollie: what Tanya you have'nt seen her in years
Anika: maybe it's time for a catch up
(She puts down her coffee and goes out the door)
Next episode soon
shannisrules
12-03-2006, 17:25
good start im hooked already lol
bakedbean
12-03-2006, 18:36
another intresting start to footballers wives dunno which i prefer extra time or footy wives oh well bring on the next episode
youve really captured the essence of extra time - i dont like the tv version but theres something here thats drawing me in... keep it up david!
big bro fan
12-03-2006, 21:21
wow thanks guys next episode up tommorow
Fab loved it cant wait for the next bit xxx
big bro fan
14-03-2006, 09:57
1. Earls Park Intern Day
(Tanya is sat at her desk when her secetury talks to her on the intercom)
Secetury: miss beaver to see you miss turner
Tanya: send her in (thinks to herself) beaver beaver
(Anika comes in smiling at Tanya)
Tanya: Anika oh my god how are you
Anika: im fine hows about yourself
Tanya: you know busy club wont run it's self
Anika: true
Tanya: sit down we need to catch up coffee or something stronger
Anika: glass of red
(Tanya goes out the office Anika's smile drops)
2. City Football Club Extern Day
(All the players are on the pitch. Chanelle and Yasmin are walking in the stands)
Chanelle: so this is were the've moved him to
Yasmin: yeah it's not exactly Earls Park premiership but it could be all right in the right hands
Chanelle: what you talking about girl
Yasmin: well what if we were to buy this place
Chanelle: i think your hat's on too tight we dont no anything about football
Yasmin: well yeah but my mum she's good at business i mean look at the resteraunt
Chanelle: true and Reese knows the basics of football
Yasmin: let's go for it
Chanelle: you got some whack ideas but im with you all the way
3. Earls Park Intern Day
Tanya: so what have you come for
Anika: cant a girl catch up with her sister
Tanya: im not stupid we are sisters
Anika: i read about Sebb this morning
Tanya: oh yeah what about him
Anika: well i want you to (Anika thinks) give me a job
Tanya: a job
Anika: yeah sisters working together
Tanya: well i could do with a new secetary
Anika: im flexible and got good comunication skills
Tanya: no
Anika: what
Tanya: no i dont need you now if you wouldnt mind i have work to do
Anika: fine but our relationship is over
(Anika storms out)
4. Salters Resteraunt Intern Night
(everyone is celebrating Yasmin's new business)
Joly: i can't beleive you got your dad to agree to this
Yasmn: yeah well he wont miss out he makes his fair share
Reese: well i say good luck to you Yas
Joly: To Yas and Chanelle
Everyone: YAS AND CHANELLE
5. Dark Country Road Extern Night
(Anika's car is going 100mph down the road she continues to gain speed. a sign ahead says road closed Anika's car comes head to head with the sign causing the car to flip over thunder strikes and a pylon smacks into the car. From a distance we hear an explosion and a cloud of smoke)
Is Anika alive find out tommorow or tonight not sure when yet
Aw this is really good i love it!!! more soon please
oh my god - this is excellent. as soon as i seen the name tanya i knew it would be brilliant. more soon please.
big bro fan
16-03-2006, 17:33
1. Rampant Sounds Extern Morning
(Oliver and his dad Garry are holding an interview with the press outside)
Interviewer: have you got a message for Anika if she's watching
Oliver: Anika babe if your watching this please come home we miss you so much
Interviewer: do you think that she would have struggled getting out of the car i mean very few can escape before a car explodes
Oliver: i dont want to think about it
Interviewers: Mr Ryan please Mr Ryan
Garry: i think that's enough for today...it's been a hard time for all of us
(Garry and Oliver get into a blacked out car. the press atempt to follow)
2. Car Intern Morning
(Garry is talking to his son)
Garry: you'll make money out of this
Oliver: what are you talking about
Garry: interviews photoshoots your hot at the moment and when Anika's found you'll make even more
Oliver: i'd rather have Anika back then any money
(Oliver goes quiet Garry knows he's upset his son)
Garry: look take this (opens his cheque book) it should keep you going
Oliver: this is 2 million pounds
Garry: your worth it
Oliver: thanks dad
3. City Football Club Intern Day
(Sebb is talking to Yasmin and Channelle in their office)
Sebb: so what do you want boss
Yasmin: no need to be funny
Sebb: sorry
Channelle: if you would just listhen we got good news for ya
Sebb: oh yeah what's that
Yasmin: the last captain left and we talked to some people and...congratulations your the new skipper
Sebb: i..i dont know what to say
Channelle: nothing just go out there and score those goals
Sebb: you wont regret this (kisses Yas)
4. Oliver's House Intern Night
(Oliver is in bed wide awake his phone starts ringing)
Oliver: hello
Anika: hi gorgeous
Oliver: good to hear your voice
Anika: has everyone bought it
Oliver: you bet
Anika: how's Tanya
Oliver: devistated
Anika: well from reading this morning's paper's Tanya is offering a 1 million pound reward to whoever find's me
Oliver: which is why i find you and the moneys ours
Anika: leave it a while yet the press will pay you loads even for a sentence
Oliver: my dad gave me two million pounds today
Anika: that's fantastic...i miss you
Oliver: see you soon...bed's empty without you
(Anika and Oliver put the phones down)
5. Anika's HideOut Intern Night
(camera focuses on Anika)
Anika: (looks at picture of Tanya) you will pay
(she chucks the picture it smashes everywhere)
bakedbean
16-03-2006, 17:36
wow intresting i wonder what Tanya has done for Anika to want revenge???
big bro fan
16-03-2006, 17:41
She wouldnt give her a job. what we dont know is that Oliver and Anika had money troubles.
thats a bit drastic for not givinbg her a job...but hey its footballers wives so its excused!!! :D great stuff david! keep it up!!!
big bro fan
16-03-2006, 17:49
Well yeah she dint give her a job but there's still more to it which we will find out but im keeping it secret because i dont want to give it all away.
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