billfan
07-03-2006, 18:07
Might help to read story idea. so you can see who everyone is.
"Two households, both alike in dignity,
In fair Verona, where we lay our scene,
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean."
Original Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare.
Smithy, Mickey and Will walked through the streets of sun hill, they were bored and wanted something to do. Just then they noticed Gabriel Kent and Rob Thatcher sat on the front steps of a house. Gabriel and Rob were part of the Nixon crew while Smithy, Mickey and Will were part of the Hunter Crew. They carried on walking past, Gabriel and Rob sneered at them. Will stuck two fingers up at them. This made them angry so they got up and stood on the path.
"Are you swearing at us?" Rob asked.
"Maybe I am." Will said.
"Well are you or aren't you?" Gabriel shouted.
"Alright, I am." Will shouted back.
Rob and Gabriel looked at each other before taking out their guns. Mickey and Will quickly did the same. The door to the house opened and a bloke named Neil stepped out.
"What's this then?" He asked looking at Rob and Gabriel.
"If we all just put the guns away and we'll resume walking past without anyone getting hurt." Smithy reasoned. Neil laughed.
"No way, your part of the Hunter Crew. Our families have been enemies for years and we can't pass in the streets without fighting, ever." He told them. Everyone cocked there guns and then they started shooting and ducking away. A car came round the corner and drove with speed towards the six eighteen year olds. It was a police car followed by a police van. Gabriel and Rob ran off in one direction while Mickey and Will ran off in the other. Smithy and Neil stood on either side of the road pointing their guns at each other. Superintendent Adam Okaro stepped out of the car followed by a couple of officers. SO19 officers jumped out of the van and pointed their guns at Smithy and Neil. He held a megaphone in one hand. “Drop you weapons to the ground and step away. Do it now!” He shouted into it. Reluctantly both Smithy and Neil dropped there guns to the ground, stepped away and put the hands behind their head.
“Three times you have disturbed the peace of Sun Hill.” Okaro said. They were now in his office at Sun Hill police station. Kevin Hunter and Charlie Nixon were sat in front of him. At the back of the room standing next to police officers were Smithy and Neil. “If anybody known to associate with a Hunter or Nixon is causing trouble and disturbing the streets again then you shall pay the ultimate price. Now go and don’t let me arrest you for civil brawls again.”
Sorry no R and J/ P and S yet but it’s coming up. Just the first instalment for the time being. Hope you liked it and please review.
"Two households, both alike in dignity,
In fair Verona, where we lay our scene,
From ancient grudge break to new mutiny,
Where civil blood makes civil hands unclean."
Original Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare.
Smithy, Mickey and Will walked through the streets of sun hill, they were bored and wanted something to do. Just then they noticed Gabriel Kent and Rob Thatcher sat on the front steps of a house. Gabriel and Rob were part of the Nixon crew while Smithy, Mickey and Will were part of the Hunter Crew. They carried on walking past, Gabriel and Rob sneered at them. Will stuck two fingers up at them. This made them angry so they got up and stood on the path.
"Are you swearing at us?" Rob asked.
"Maybe I am." Will said.
"Well are you or aren't you?" Gabriel shouted.
"Alright, I am." Will shouted back.
Rob and Gabriel looked at each other before taking out their guns. Mickey and Will quickly did the same. The door to the house opened and a bloke named Neil stepped out.
"What's this then?" He asked looking at Rob and Gabriel.
"If we all just put the guns away and we'll resume walking past without anyone getting hurt." Smithy reasoned. Neil laughed.
"No way, your part of the Hunter Crew. Our families have been enemies for years and we can't pass in the streets without fighting, ever." He told them. Everyone cocked there guns and then they started shooting and ducking away. A car came round the corner and drove with speed towards the six eighteen year olds. It was a police car followed by a police van. Gabriel and Rob ran off in one direction while Mickey and Will ran off in the other. Smithy and Neil stood on either side of the road pointing their guns at each other. Superintendent Adam Okaro stepped out of the car followed by a couple of officers. SO19 officers jumped out of the van and pointed their guns at Smithy and Neil. He held a megaphone in one hand. “Drop you weapons to the ground and step away. Do it now!” He shouted into it. Reluctantly both Smithy and Neil dropped there guns to the ground, stepped away and put the hands behind their head.
“Three times you have disturbed the peace of Sun Hill.” Okaro said. They were now in his office at Sun Hill police station. Kevin Hunter and Charlie Nixon were sat in front of him. At the back of the room standing next to police officers were Smithy and Neil. “If anybody known to associate with a Hunter or Nixon is causing trouble and disturbing the streets again then you shall pay the ultimate price. Now go and don’t let me arrest you for civil brawls again.”
Sorry no R and J/ P and S yet but it’s coming up. Just the first instalment for the time being. Hope you liked it and please review.