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Bryan
26-02-2006, 21:17
It's your first time. As you lie back your
muscles tighten. You put him off for a while
searching for an excuse, but he refuses to be swayed as he approaches you.

He asks if you're afraid and you shake
your head bravely. He has had more experience, but it's the first time his finger has found the right place

He probes deeply and you shiver; your
body tenses; but he's gentle like he promised he'd be. He's deeply within your eyes and tells you to trust him - he's done this many times before


His cool smile relaxes you and you
open wider to give him more room for an easy entrance. You begin to plead and beg him to hurry, but he slowly takes his time, wanting to cause you as little pain as possible. As he presses closer, going deeper, you feel the tissue give way; pain surges throughout your body and you feel the slight trickle of blood as he continues.

He's at you concerned and asks you if it's painful. Your eyes are filled with tears but you shake your head and nod for him to go on. He begins going in and out with skill but you are now too numb to feel him within you.

After a few moments, you feel something bursting within you and he pulls it out of you, you lay panting, glad to have it over.
He stares at you and smiling warmly, tells you, with a chuckle; that you have been his most stubborn yet most rewarding experience.


You smile and thank your dentist. After all, it was your first time to
have a tooth pulled.

Naughty, Naughty! What were you thinkin' hmmm....I know what you were thinking!! You dirty gits!

littlemo
13-07-2006, 23:52
That was really good! lol. Very funny!

Meh
14-07-2006, 00:08
I just have too much of a dirty mind :thumbsup:

Jojo
14-07-2006, 12:23
Oh dear - I won't admit to what I was thinking *whistles* :D

Chloe O'brien
14-07-2006, 12:33
I knew what the poem was about as I have an innocent mind and don't think mucky thoughts :D

Tori
14-07-2006, 12:37
I have a dirty mind, and i know it!!!

if it's so innocent, shouldn't it be in normal jokes?! :hmm:

Luna
14-07-2006, 12:40
I knew what the poem was about as I have an innocent mind and don't think mucky thoughts :D


oh me too kath me too........:rolleyes:

Jojo
14-07-2006, 12:44
oh me too kath me too........:rolleyes: Now why don't I believe either of you :D :rotfl:

xCharliex
14-07-2006, 14:09
:rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl:

That was fab!!!