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I thought id give another script ago. Its about Lucy Beale and a new friend of hers called Sophie. Might not be very good but here goes.
Sophie and Lucy had only just met each other but there friendship was something special. They had clicked straight away. There was only one thing getting in the way. Ian didnt Like her. Lucy was devestated by the fact her dad didnt like her friend nothin was ever good enough for her in Ians mind, nothing anyone could say was going to help matters not even Jane
"please Jane, shes my best friend i really want to see her"
"look im sorry lucy..Your dads made up his mind he dont want you going out with her tonight your to young for starters"
"Its so unfair peter gets to meet Darren all i want to do is go to the park with Soph and Dad wont even let me do that"
Lucy stormed up stairs she hated not getting her own way. Jane hated being horrible but what Ian said goes they are his kids afterall.
"im going out and theres nothing you can do about it"
Lucy Packed a small back took 20 pounds from her collection picked up a her phone and snuck downstairs, she waited till Jane had the telly on then crept out. No one knew any different...........
Chloe-Elise
21-02-2006, 15:38
Good start, more soon please :)
fab hun more asap please :) x.x.x
di marco
21-02-2006, 15:55
thats good! :D more soon please
Next Part. Thanks for reading.
"luce.. I thought you werent coming"
"i wouldnt let you down your my best mate soph, my dad was being a pain but nothing i cant handle"
"well my dads the same, there born to worry... Oh yeah you can stay at mine tonight Luce i got loads of things planned"
"yeah that will be great"
"come on then, well have a great time.........Dont you need to phone your dad"
"soph hell be coool about it chill out"
Lucy and her friend walked of through the square to catch the last bus back to Sophies house.
"make your self at home"
"thanks Sophie"
"back in a minute i just got to go get some supplys"
"al right ive got a DVD we can watch shall i put it on"
"yeh go for it"
Sophie went down stairs to get something for the film. When She returned Lucy was shocked to see what she was planning on having as a snack.....
di marco
22-02-2006, 14:48
great! :D cant wait for the next part, more soon
"drugs"
Lucy sat there in disbelief, this ws one thing that Lucy thought Sophie wasnt capable of.
"come on Luce. Dont tell me youve never tried em" Sophie was reacting as this wasnt a big deal
"I cant believe your even suggesting we try it"
"look. . . It wont hurt my dad keeps it in the cupboard"
"wo wo wo... You Dad has Drugs in the cupboard, you are having a laugh"
"look its just a bit of coke no one cares, look if its your dad your worried about then dont well sort him out"
"i cant i cant believe you, i thought you were different, not like the rest of them me and you had something special, and you know what my dad was right about you, your just like the rest"
Lucy couldnt believe she had let her dad down like this he was going to be so angry that she didnt trust him. She knew hed hate her for it, not listening. Lucy stormed out of Sophies house with tears running down her cheek.
"lucy wait"
"leave me alone, i was wrong about you"
Lucy ran and ran through the streets of walford she had no idea where she was. She was Lost, tired, Scared and Alone.
great stuff cornetgal! keep it up! really talented peice of writing here! really cpatured the essence of Lucy's ideolect and attitude.
wow fabby hun i love it more asap xxxx
di marco
22-02-2006, 19:59
great again! :D omg drugs i wonder what ians going to say! more soon please
Chloe-Elise
22-02-2006, 21:44
:eek: Drugs?! Ian will flip about that! Fab, more asap please :D
Back at the beales house
"dad im home" Peter shouted as he returned.
"ok Son, theres some dinner if you want it"
"alright Peter you had a good time"
"yeh thanks Jane it was mint, i didnt see lucy or Sophie though"
"thats because Luce is in her room sulking as your father wouldnt let her out"
"oh can i eat in my room theres something i need to tell lucy"
Go on" Jane replied
"Jane your far to soft on my kids im sure if you had your way lucy would have gone out tonight"
Peter headed upstairs with his dinner
"Luce"
He looked in the rooms but couldnt find her
"luce i gotta tell you something its so funny yourll never guess who Demis new Boyfriend is....Luce where are ya sis"
Jane and ian were having a conversation in the living room when Peter came bursting through the door.
"came down son your...."
"shes not there"
"What!!"
"ian dont panic, Peter what do you mean shes not there"
"ive checked the whole upstairs, shes not in her room"
Jane ran upstairs, looking frantically round Lucys bedroom.
"shes took her phone, money and some clothes, were going to have to phone the police"
"shes my little girl, why did she go out, where is she jane"
Ian cried into his girlfriends arms
"what we going to do.......
di marco
23-02-2006, 16:33
great! :D more soon, cant wait to see what happens next
more tomorrow. Just working out where i can go next.
Chloe-Elise
23-02-2006, 18:33
Awww fab :D I hope Lucys ok, more soon please :)
samantha nixon
23-02-2006, 19:29
this is really good cant wait for the next bit
From Lucys point of view in the middle of nowhere
"why did i not listen to my dad"
Lucy was so lost the only person she could talk to was herself.
"come on luce you know your way round walford, think girl think"
Lucy continued to search for Albert square she could nt even remember the bus her and Sophie had got on. she didnt know what she was going to do.
There was a phone call back at the beales
Ian ran to the phone in desperation he knew it would be his daughter.
"Lucy is that you"
"no, its sophie i was just wondering if i could speak to Lucy"
"no you cant, You im going , im"
"come on Ian your in no fit state" Jane took over the phone call and waited to see what Sophie had to say"
................................
di marco
25-02-2006, 17:27
brill! :D i wonder what sophie has to say for herself! more soon please, cant wait
Chloe-Elise
25-02-2006, 19:25
Fab :D I wonder what Sophie is gonig to say, more soon please :D
"hi Sophie here, i need to apologise to Lucy"
"Lucys at your house though" Jane was begining to panic. She couldnt let Ian know no one had any idea where his daughter was
"No she left here about 3 hours ago"
Sophie began to cry
"this is all my fault"
"calm down so Lucy was definatly at your house"
"yes but we had a row and she stormed out...What if somethings bad happened"
"Im going to come and meet you we need to look for her.....its ok well find her"
Ian was walking round the room
"wheres my little girl"
"Ian we have to stay positive for Lucys sake she left her friends about 3 hours ago"
"3 hours that ages ago anything could have happened"
Ian went to get his coat
"what you doing"
"im looking for Lucy Ian your in no fit state yourll have to stay here to wait for any news"
Ian was not going to win
"just find her".....................................
di marco
26-02-2006, 14:45
great! :D more very soon please
sorry not posted for a while
Come on Lucy thought to herself, there has got to be a way home. Lucy felt in her pocket for her phone, itw as no where to be scene.
"this cant be happening"
Lucy recognised a familier sound.
"i knew it, its the canal, surely i just have to keep going arghhhhhh"!!!!!!"
Lucy screamed.........................................
Emma-Lou
03-03-2006, 19:22
This is really good can't wait to see what has happened to Lucy
di marco
04-03-2006, 10:56
great! :D whats happened to lucy? more soon please
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