Rember me this way

[Bree]

hi i just made a new script tell me what you think :D

Chrissie p.vo

I stand here waiting to make my speech a pack of lies I hate lying to Sharon but then again do I cause if I where to tell her the truth I end up in prison the vica saying something about den he didn’t even know him Sharon was the only one who really knew him not even I could get to the bottom of him he was as deep as the sea

Vica: I believe his loving wife Christine would like to say a few words
Chrissie: thanks you
Sharon: go on Chrissie
Chrissie: now we are all today to say goodbye to den he wasn’t the most perfect person he lied cheated and betrayed those he loved but make no mistake he loved his family very deeply
Sharon burst into tears witch made Chrissie feel even worse
Chrissie: well I cant tell you right words to describe dens good points so im gonna read this
Just as Chrissie was about to start reading Peggy Mitchell aperd out of no where
Peggy- that’s very good act you got going there Chrissie I take my hat off too you ohh and by the way take yours off it looks terrible
Chrissie- Peggy
Sharon- what you doing here
Peggy- I thought id let you know what a lying little tart she is
Jake stepped forward
Jake- she’s no tart Peggy
Peggy- hiding behind your toy boy are ya
Chrissie pushed Jake out of the way and walked strait up too Peggy
Chrissie- im not hiding Peggy now just go away and let us ay den too rest
Peggy- you got a cheek when you’re the one that put him in the box I the first place
Chrissie- Sam did peggy not me sam
Peggy- ohh yea
Chrissie- and with any luck she’ll hang her self and you can lay her to rest
And with that peggy let out a giant punch and sent chrissie flying back into jake
Chrissie- right that’s it
She walked up too peggy and they both started to fight she pulled peggy back towards the grave and just as chrissie was gonna slap peggy
peggy pushed her
Chrissie- ahhhh
Peggy- now with any luck there leave you down there
Chrissie was now on top off dens coffin

[Tannie]

That is brilliant Hun. it's really good. More soon please!

[feelingyellow]

Fabolous hun :) Can't wait for more :D

[Bree]

thanks emmie tanya :wub: heres the next part

Chrissie- GET ME OUT OF HERE
Jake- Chrissie
Sharon- you utter cow you have ruined dads funeral
Peggy- and I would do it again Sharon she’s playing you for a mug
Chrissie- hello im still down here
Jake bent down and helped Chrissie out of the hole
Chrissie- thank you
Peggy- should of left you down there
Chrissie- leave me alone
And with that Chrissie went back to the car and waited for Sharon dot and Pauline to get back too the car


When they got strait back to the pub Chrissie went strait up stairs to get changed Jake followed her up there he wasn’t buying the poor Chrissie act any longer he needed the truth and he needed it now
Chrissie- sorry bout today Jake
Jake- well why you gotta say sorry to me for its not like I knew the bloke
Chrissie- no I know I was just saying about Peggy Mitchell calling you all the names under the sun
Jake- well I can take it
Chrissie- umm I know you can
Chrissie went too put her arms around jakes neck but he backed away
Chrissie- what what’s wrong
Jake- you know what’s wrong
Chrissie- ohh come on
Jake- no I wanna know the truth
Chrissie- ohh god that lines getting old
Jake- Chrissie look
She went to walk away but Jake grabbed her arm
Chrissie- Jake don’t do this
Jake- iv got too
Chrissie- jake
Jake- Chrissie I just gotta know did you kill den

ill post more when i right it :D x.x.x.x

[Tannie]

you left it on a cliff hanger ohhhhhhhhhhhh what's he goin to do?

[feelingyellow]

Aww that was a fab part! Can't wait for some more soon ... such a great cliffhanger! :D

[Bree]

heres the next part im getting fast at this now tanya lol :p

Chrissie- yes
Jake- why
Chrissie- I dunno
Jake- you don’t know you take a mans life and you don’t even know why
Chrissie- Jake please
Jake- Jake please what forgive you I cant bare too look at you right now
Chrissie- what
Jake- your not who I thought you where your what Peggy said you are a murder
Chrissie- where the hell do you get off telling me you cant bare too look at me
Jake- why it’s the truth
Chrissie- you really wanna know the truth
Jake- yea lets hear it
Chrissie- I have never loved you
Jake- what
Chrissie- it was always about one thing and about one thing only making it look good
Jake- your twisted
Chrissie- ohh come on jake you wanted to know im giving you it
Jake- I cant handed this
Jake went too walk out the door
Chrissie- aww poor little jakey just as the heat turns up he dose a diapering act
Jake- what you on about
Chrissie- den may have been a liar and a cheat but he was more a man then your ever be
Jake- you evil bitch I loved you
Chrissie- yea well do you wanna know something jake when den died when I hit him he let out this little yelp ahh then he died and do you know seeing that was almost worth being married too him
Jake couldn’t help him self but he drew back and punched Chrissie causing her to fall to the floor
Chrissie- that make you feel better Jake dose it
Jake- no not really but telling Sharon will
He went to walk out the door but Chrissie ran up to him and grabbed hold of his arm she looked so scared so venerable so young it made him rember why he loved her
Chrissie- jake please im begging you don’t please for me
Jake- why should I
Chrissie- I cant give you a reason jake I can only hope you take pity on me
Jake looked at her h nose poring with blood and her tear stained cheeks
Jake- alright I wont tell her
Chrissie- thanks jake ill do anything for you
Jake- there is something you can do jake
Chrissie- of coarse ill do anything
Jake- stay away from me
An with that he left the room leaving Chrissie in floods of tears

luv ya all
bree x.x.x

[feelingyellow]

Absoloutely fab part hun! Hope they stay together though! :) Can't wait for more! :cheer:

[Bree]

thanks emmie hunni :wub: well you never no what will happen in albert square :D
heres the next part anyway

Jake made his way down the stairs and was greeted by alife
Jake- morning
Alife seemed upset- morning
Jake- what’s up with you
Alife- you are
Jake- why what have I done
Alife- you know what you done
Jake- oh don’t start that again alife
Alife-I had here round her again last night balling her eyes out
Jake- so
Alife- I thought you where different from Danny
Jake- I am
Alife- your clearly not this is just the sort of thing he’d do fro no reason at all
Jake- she lied to me alife I don’t think I can forgive her for that
Alife- you paretic
And with that alife left him on his own Jake made his way upstairs and threw himself on his bed on the bed side table there was a pitcher of him and Chrissie she looked so gorges he picked it up and took the photo out of the frame and ripped it into tiny pieces

At the queen Vic Chrissie was sitting alone upstairs with only a bottle of vodka staring art her wedding album she saw a pitcher off her and den it made her feel sick thinking that she let him use her time after time and she wasn’t going to sit up in the flat all alone and morn Jake
Chrissie- Sharon
Sharon- yea
Chrissie- you fancy going out tonight
Sharon- sure where
Chrissie- I don’t mind as long as im not up here morning Jake
Sharon- good on your girl ok umm how bout scarlet
Chrissie- fab
Sharon- so there no hope of you and Jake getting back together then
Chrissie- not a one
Sharon- what happened with you two
Chrissie- I found out jakes a spoilt selfish brat
Sharon- oh rite anyway ill get Dennis to cover for us
And with that Sharon left the room leaving Chrissie by her self she wasn’t going to sit on her own while Jake went out if he could get over her surly she could get over him or could she

ill post more soon x.x.x.x

[feelingyellow]

Hehe, it ok :) Another fab part hun, can't wait to see what happens next and please let them get together! :D

[Chloe-Elise]

Fab hun :D Loved it, brilliant writing :D More asap please :)

[Emma-Lou]

That is really good i can not wait to read more :)

[Bree]

thanks everyone i love reading your replys heres the next part not all that good tho the next part will be better :D

Chrissie sat holding her head in pain from the night before
Chrissie- I need a strong black coffee and I need it now
Sharon- and here she is the black cat of walford
Chrissie- ummm what did I do last night
Sharon- well you snoged one guys on the door
Chrissie- god I never did I
Sharon- no no you didn’t
Chrissie- thank god how did I get home last night
Sharon- well I took you out of there along Jake
Chrissie- Jake
Sharon- yea and then he started to give me a Letcher about taking you out and getting you drunk
Chrissie-god what dose he think gives him the right
Sharon- but then
Chrissie- ohh whys there’s always a then with me and alcohol
Sharon- you went all weird and started on about dad
Chrissies heart sank please she couldn’t of said anything she wouldn’t of
Chrissie- what did I say
Sharon- well for some reason you thought Jake was dad and all of sudden you just punched him
Chrissie- oh god
Sharon- im not sure but I think you broke his nose
Chrissie- I am never drinking again
Sharon- ahhh you say that now
Chrissie- no I mean it
Suddenly there was a knock at the door
Chrissie- Sharon can you get it please
Sharon- sure
She went too open the door
Sharon- ah look who it is

[Bree]

i will post more tomorrow promise :)

[feelingyellow]

That was a fab part hun, and yay can't wait :)

[Bree]

sorry about the delay but im real busy at the moment :D

jake- is she in
Sharon- yea she’s in a bit of a bad way
Jake- can I see her
Sharon- well I don’t know if she’s up too visitors
Jake- please Sharon its important
Sharon pouted she saw Jake really wanted something so she let him in
Sharon- you got ten minuets
Sharon made her way up the stairs closely followed by Jake
Sharon- Chrissie im just gonna pop out
Chrissie- fine
Sharon turned round too face Jake
Sharon- you better be gone by the time I get back ok
Jake- ok
Sharon- OK
Jake- yea ok
Chrissie- Sharon who are you talking too
Sharon- no one
And with that Sharon left Jake standing on the landing then Jake made his way into the kitchen
Jake- chrissie
Chrissie- jake what are you doing here
Jake- umm I came too see if you where ok
Chrissie- not bad a bit of a hangover but ill live how’s your hooter
Jake- fine
Chrissie- sorry Jake did you want something
Jake- yea well im im leaving
Chrissie’s heart sank
Chrissie- where where you going
Jake- Danny’s getting married so im going to go and stay with him for a bit
Chrissie- ohh well see ya jake
Jake- is that all your gonna say
Chrissie- why what else is there to say
Jake- I was excepting to see more of a re action
Chrissie- what you want me too break down in tears
Jake- no well im not going to 11 tonight I got a cheep flight too Spain
Chrissie- ok well good luck jake
She held out her hand jake took it and shock it casually
Jake- nice knowing you Chrissie
Chrissie- you too
Jake was just about too walk out the door when Chrissie stepped up from her seat
Chrissie- jake wait ….

[feelingyellow]

That was a fab part hun, I hope they get together! :cheer: Can't wait for more! :)

[Layne]

Just read it all this is fab, what is chrissie going to say, post more soon please x

[Bree]

aww thanks guys here the next part :D xxx

Part 2

Chrissie- jake wait
Jake- what is it
Chrissie- you said your not leaving till tonight
Jake- yea that’s right
Chrissie- well maybe you could come back here for a drink later you know for old times sake
Jake- sure why not bout 7 then
Chrissie- great
And with that jake left Chrissie all alone in the kitchen she didn’t know how she felt by the news that jake was leavening it was only yesterday that she said that she didn’t care anymore who was she trying too fool she loved jake
Chrissie- I love jake

Jake walked towards alfie who was on his stall
Alife-so did you tell Chrissie then
Jake- yea I did
Alife- how did she take it
Jake- to be honest alife it didn’t really seemed like she cared
Alife- im sure that’s not true
Jake- it is alife she’s over me
Alife sighed - what about you jake
Jake- what about me
Alife- you over her
Jake looked back at the Vic for a brief moment - no I still love her alife but where not mean too be
Alfie- I was you and her where going to be perm ant
Jake- so did I
Alife- did you ask her did you acutely say Chrissie you I love you do you want to get back together
Jake- no
Alife- well why don’t you just ask her she can only say no cant see
Jake- that’s what im afraid of
Alife- so its really over then
Jake- yea its over im going to have a drink with her later
Alife- what
Jake- for old times sake
Alife- well its up too you
Jake- listen I don’t like long goodbyes so
He hugged alife
Alife- ill miss ya
Jake- I will too
And with that jake turned away and headed towards the house to pack his things
Alife- be lucky mate
He turned to alife once more
Jake- aint I always

more soon i promise

bree xxxxx

[feelingyellow]

Woo fab part hun! How come I feel that drink in the Vic will turn into something else!? :D Can't wait for more! :cheer:

[Bree]

thanks :wub: heres the next part

Chrissie stood at her wardrobe trying desperately to find the perfect out fit Chrissie couldn’t decide so she knew she needed some help
Chrissie- Sharon
Sharon came from down stairs- yea Chrissie
Chrissie- witch one should I wear
She picked up three dresses from off the bed - the red one the black one or the white one
Sharon- oh Chrissie there all gorges
Chrissie- I know I cant decide witch one to wear you pick
Sharon took a long look at all three dresses- um the black one
Chrissie - you sure
Sharon- it’s the best suited for a farewell drink
Chrissie- ohh right
Chrissie looked down sadly at the floor
Sharon- but if you wanna have one last flirt id go for the red one
Chrissie- your right thanks for that Sharon
Sharon- your welcome
And with that Sharon left Chrissie alone in the bedroom
Chrissie- red or black
She looked in the mirror and held both dresses up to her
Chrissie- the black one
Chrissie went to hang up the red one but she stopped and took one last look this was properly be the last time she was ever going to see Jake
Chrissie- red or black flirty or dignity

[Tannie]

aw i love it babe and i say the red one the black one looks like she's going to a funeral and really if she wants to get jake back that would not be the one to wear:p

[Layne]

red i say red, red suits chrissie :p more soon x

[feelingyellow]

Woo! That was fab! I say black cos duh it's a funeral :p But maybe like a red rim sort thing if ya get me lol! Can't wait for more, and btw if you wanted to improve your spelling go in Microsoft Word and do spell check :p

[Bree]

ok thanks for the tip emmie heres my new part its long to make up for the delay

Jake made his way across the square as he entered the pub he could see Chrissie was not behind the bar
Jake- Sharon where’s Chrissie
Sharon- upstairs waiting for you
Jake- ohh right can I go up
Sharon- that’s a first
Jake looked puzzled - what is
Sharon- you asking you usually just go up
Jake- well that was when Chrissie and I where together
Sharon- go up then
Jake- nice knowing you too Sharon
As Jake made his way up the stairs there was no sign of Chrissie until he entered the living room
Chrissie- hey
Jake couldn’t take his eyes off of Chrissie she looked stunning but his eyes where drawn to her smile
Jake- wow
Chrissie- you don’t think its too much then
Jake- you should never take this dress of I always said red was your colour
Chrissie- thanks
there was a brief silence
Chrissie- so you wanna drink
Jake- sure not too much tho I don’t want you getting me drunk
Chrissie- would I
Jake- oh you would
Chrissie giggled - ahh you know me to well Jacob
Jake- sometimes I think I know you better then you know your self Christine
The both burst out laughing

Chrissie and Jake had been drinking for an hour they where both really enjoying each others company
Chrissie- I did not
Jake- oh yea you did cause you thought I was flirting with her
Chrissie- ohh that was ages ago on our trip to Brighton
Jake- you still did it
Chrissie- I was drunk
Jake- you had three glasses
Chrissie- you know Champaign goes strait to my head
Jake- you dragged her out of the bar by her hair your lucky she didn’t press charges
Chrissie- yea I wonder why she didn’t
Jake- cause I paid her off
Chrissie- I never new that you aint half good at keeping secrets Jake moon
Jake- not as half as good as you
There was another brief silence- well I better get going
Chrissie- you don’t have to go just yet do you
Jake- yea I wont get a cab If I don’t go now I wont get a cab
Chrissie- I can drive you go on stay for another
Jake- Chrissie the last time you drove me any where we nearly ended up in the teems and tonight you properly end up in a & e
Chrissie- point taken
Jake looked at Chrissie was upset - maybe I could stay for one more

[Tannie]

aw i love it hun please make them stay together!!

[feelingyellow]

Aww, that was fab hunni! :cheer: The spellings improved a bit hehe :p Well done! :D Can't wait for more! :cheer:

[Tannie]

Bree you need to post more soon Hunnie i need to know what's happening:p

[Layne]

Awwww :wub: That is sweet! Make jake stay more soon x

[Bree]

ill post more of this tonight and i dunno jake might stay or go :p xxx

[feelingyellow]

ill post more of this tonight and i dunno jake might stay or go :p xxx

Yay! :cheer:
Stay, he better stay!!! :p

[Tannie]

Bree hun we're waiting your loyal fans are waiting! Through i'm a bigger fan then emmie aka Pea Lover:p

[feelingyellow]

I'M a BIGGER fan Tanya aka Spudders :p

[Tannie]

No your not i am:p and its not spudders it's tannie:p

[feelingyellow]

No your not i am:p and its not spudders it's tannie:p

I am! I am! :p
Well it's Tannie Spudders from now on :p

Bree... we're waiting :p

[Tannie]

Yeah Bree we are waiting:p

Excuse me spongebob:p
I am!! I am!!:p

[feelingyellow]

Why am I Spongebob lol :p
Me - no.1 fan :p
Tanya - smelly and no.2 fan :p

[Tannie]

i dunno why your called spongebob:p

[Bree]

ok sorry about last night i forgot to post it :p xxxx
here it is

Another ten minuets went by neither of them hardly said a word
Jake- right well I gotta go
Chrissie- right ok bye Jake
he got up to walk out the door but he turned back
Jake- come with me
Chrissie- what
Jake- yea we can start a new life together in Spain just say your come with me
Chrissie- I cant
Jake- why not what’s keeping you here
Chrissie- iv got the pub I cant just up sticks and go you know that… why don’t you stay with me
Jake- I I cant
Chrissie- why cant you what’s stopping you
Jake- you are
Chrissie- why what have I done
she said tears welling up in her eyes
Jake- Chrissie every time I walk into that pub I see den I see the blood all over the floor I see you with a door stop and we can start again a whole new life in Spain
Chrissie- do you really think Jake that if I go to Spain with you that these feeling are going to go away
Jake- they will im sure they will Chrissie lets take a chance come to Spain with me
Chrissie paused
Chrissie- no
Jake- please Chrissie why not
Chrissie- I have my heart broken too many times Steve den this time im gonna follow my head not my heart
Jake- ok.. You sure you wont come
Chrissie- yea im sure
Jake- right well I gotta go
Chrissie- im gonna miss you
Jake- ill miss you more
Chrissie- I doubt that a couple of days out there
Jake- ohh ill never forget you bye Chrissie
Chrissie- bye
and with that he left her sitting there

ill post more soon luv ya bree xxxx

[Tannie]

No! you come back here right now Jake moon and stay with her in her time of need!!

[Skits]

go with him chrissie. get out of walford and all it's bad memories.

[feelingyellow]

i dunno why your called spongebob:p

Physco :p

Great part Bree! :cheer: Go to Spain just go girl! :p Next time post it on time, I nearly chucked a chair at someone cos of you! :p

[Bree]

cheers guys sorry i havent posted in a while heres the next part :p x

Two weeks had passed since Jake had left Chrissie put on a tough act but really her heart ached her heart ached for Jake
Sharon- so what are you up two today then
Chrissie- well im going to do what I do every other day im going to go and pull pints and have some old women tell me how sad I look and how could Jake do such a thing to a nice kind girl like me
if only they knew she thought to her self
Sharon- well I was planning on going shopping do you feel like coming Chris
Chrissie- shopping what a fantastic word Mo and Tracy can mange cant they
Sharon- of cores they can lets shop till we drop
Chrissie- ok
Sharon- and how bout a bit of lunch after wards my treat
Chrissie- your spoiling me Sharon
Sharon- yea well you deserve it after what you’ve been through with that heart less git
Chrissie couldn’t stand to hear someone bad mouth Jake in front of her
Chrissie- it wasn’t all his fault Sharon it was half mine as well
Sharon- yea well I don’t see how
Chrissie- yea well I don’t really want too talk about it
Sharon- yea ok Hun
there was a knock on the door
Chrissie- that’ll be Rosie and as soon as Mo and Tracy get here we can head off
Sharon- ohh cant wait
Chrissie smiled and got up too open the door but she felt dizzy and had too sit back down again
Sharon- Chrissie what’s wrong
Chrissie- nothing I just had a funny turn that’s all
Sharon- you feel ok now
Chrissie- just a little bit sick ill be fine in a minuet
Sharon- alright look ill go get the door you get your self a glass of water and you handbag and when and Mo gets here we can head off
Chrissie- thanks Sharon
Sharon- its ok
and with that Sharon went to open the door Chrissie held her head in her hands she thought it was most properly a bug she’d caught from one of the punters she got up and got a glass of water suddenly a thought came into her head no it cant be we were always so careful but you read about these things it dose happen no it cant be she put the thought too the back of her head
Sharon- right Mo’s here you ready
Chrissie- yea coming
she grabbed her bag and her and Sharon left the pub

ill post more soon xxx

[Tannie]

yay hunnie i bet you she's pregnant aw and i'm upset at Jake through i hate to admit it.

[Layne]

Ohhh is she pregnant??? More soon x

[feelingyellow]

She's pregnant duh :p Hehe fab part, more soon! :cheer: