My mistake ruined your life.

[billfan]

This is very different to normal. It's not about television programs or anything. I made it up like five minutes ago. It's a poem about something that's quite frequent with young adults. Hope you like it, please review. Becky.

My Mistake ruined you life.

I was the stupid one,
I was the fool,
I thought it would be alright,
That it would be cool.

Now I'm sitting here alone,
With no one to see,
I lost all my friends,
The day I set your ghost free.

You're gone and it's my fault,
You're dead because of me,
I was the one who let you down,
I showed off with stupidity.

This is a message to warn you all,
Make most of life while you're alive,
But above everything else,
Don't drink and drive.

[annaz]

That is so deep, I'm really touched by it. You do it so well.

[samantha nixon]

ah thats really good well done

[lollymay]

that is brilliant - wish i could write like that.

[CrazyLea]

that is really good! as are all your poems

[annaz]

I'd love to be able to write like that, it would have taken me ages to do that!

[Chloe-Elise]

That was brilliant, you are such a good writer :)

[feelingyellow]

Aww! That was fabolous hunni! Very good writing :)

[Bree]

thats fab hun loved it your well good at this x.x.x.x