Do it for me. Poem. EE

[billfan]

This is different to my normal ones. It's about Sharon and Dennis from Eastenders. I'm saying that they baby is a boy but it could be a girl. Unless they already know that it's a boy then I'm in the clear. Hope you like it. Don't forget to review after. Becky. xxx


Do It For Me
By Rebecca .C.

Just wipe your eyes,
Carry on,
I may not be around,
But I'm forever looking down.

Take careof our child,
Let him know who I am,
I was stolen away,
But Daddy does always care.

Never forget,
The love I felt for you,
Please carry on,
Do it for me.

[Bree]

wow that is brill hun im close to tears :(
luv ya

bree x.x.x.x

[samantha nixon]

ah thats really good
all your writing is great

[Chloe-Elise]

Awwww that was brilliant! Very well written :D

[big bro fan]

have you got any more poems in mind or is it only this one.

[billfan]

I also made a poem about Sam and Phil from The Bill.

[Abi]

Thats really good. Its quite touching actually. I think it would be even better if you didn't write "do it for me" as the first line, so made it different from the title. Apart from that, its great.

[annaz]

That's great, it's really touching :)