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this is mine and tanya (jake_luva) new script here the first bit tanya will be doing the next part hope you like it guys tanya :p
part one
Chrissie woke up early that morning and made her way into the kitchen and pored her self some coffee as she pored herself the coffee she saw den coming out of the bed room
Chrissie- your alright sweetheart
Den- yea sleep well
Chrissie- yeah you
Den- not really you know I came out here this morning and found these two men
Chrissie- oh my god how did they get in here
Den- god only knows but they where looking for alife
Chrissie- ohh must be some family members
Den- yeah look im goanna go open up you take your time
Chrissie- ok den
Den- what
Chrissie walked up too him and kissed him
Den- oh what was that for
Chrissie- cause I love you
Den- I love you too see you down stairs
Chrissie- ok
Chrissie went and took a shower about 30 minuets later she made her way down stairs too see den talking to a handsome stranger
Den- its called breaking an entry
Jake- yeah well I still thought alife lived here
Chrissie- den ahh hello
Jake- why hello
Chrissie- you must be one off the men den was talking about
Jake- Jake moon
Chrissie- Chrissie watts
Jake held out her hand and Jake kissed it
Jake- ill see you around
Chrissie- see ya
As Jake left the pub den turned to face Chrissie
Den- Chrissie can I have a word upstairs
Chrissie- well I was
Den- now
Chrissie- fine
Chrissie and den went upstairs and into the kitchen
Den- I don’t want you to talk to him again
Chrissie- oh come on your no being serious
Den- yes I am your not to go near him again
Chrissie- I don’t think you have the right to tell me what to do den
Den- apart from the fact that we are married
Chrissie- oh my god after the number off affairs you have had you have the cheek to say that
Den- your not to talk to him again
Chrissie- ohh just bugger off den
Chrissie went to walk out the door but den grabbed her arm
Den- ohh yeah
Chrissie- get off your hurting
Den- yeah that’s the point do I have to knock some séances into you
Chrissie- please I wont go near him just get off
Den let Chrissie go and went to go out but he turned to Chrissie
Den- rember stay away or next time I wont be so nice
And with that he left the room leaving Chrissie in floods of tears
hope you like it :)
Chloe-Elise
31-01-2006, 20:13
Fab start hun, more asap please :D
Here is the next part.
Part 2.
She had to sit down. Once she had stopped crying she grabbed her bag and walked out slamming the back door shut to make it obvious she wasn't in the mood with talking to Den. He just sighed and decided to leave her alone. She walked into the Cafe and not looking where she was going bumped right into Jake.
Chrissie: Oh hi Jake.
Jake: Hi.
Jane: Do you want something Chrissie?
Chrissie: Tea to go please.
Turns around to Jake.
Chrissie: I'm sorry about Den he's kind of paranoid.
Jake: Well i could see that.
Chrissie: (Laughing) Well i think anybody that know's him reliseas he is paranoid.
Jane: Here's you're tea Chrissie that's 90p please.
Chrissie gets her purse out and gives Jane the change and then her and Jake walk out of the cafe deep in chat not knowing that Den was looking out the window. He couldn't believe what was going on she had gone against what he'd said really this was getting worse by the second because that Jake walked in.
End of part 2
here part 3 guys :p
Jake- so why are you with a man like den then do you have a thing for older guys
Chrissie- no nothing like that
Jake- well why are you with him then
Chrissie- despite the fact that hes a jelouse git I love him and I would do anything for him
Jake- aww well they say love conkers all don’t they
Chrissie- yeah look well I gotta get back I said id only be an hour iv been gone two
Jake- ok see you around Chrissie
Chrissie- yeah I look forward to it and Chrissie left Jake and made her way towards the queen Vic she could see none off the lights where on just then she bumped into Sharon
Sharon- Chrissie
Chrissie- you alright Sharon
Sharon- yeah
Chrissie- what’s going on in there then
Sharon- oh no dad went upstairs came down and told every one to get the hell out of his pub his exactly
Chrissie- oh god ill have too go and see what’s wrong with him
Sharon- oh well good luck
Chrissie- oh thanks Sharon
And with that Sharon walked off and left Chrissie standing outside the Vic she went to open the door it was locked so she went round the back and opened the door with her key she made her way up stairs all the lights where off she sat down in the kitchen suddenly den came in she could see he was upset
Den- what took you so long
Chrissie- I got talking to Jane in the café
Den- your lying
Chrissie- no no im not
Den- why are you lying to me I saw you
Chrissie- that’s why you closed the pub
Den- yeah and I told you stay away from Jake moon
Chrissie- ohh for god sake look I cant helping bumping into him can I
Den- looks like im goanna have to teach you a lesson
Chrissie- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
And Chrissie got up and went to run out the door but den grabbed her and threw her into the bedroom
Chrissie- den please don’t
Den drew back and punched Chrissie strait in the eye
Chrissie- den please that another
Den- no not yet
And then he kicked Chrissie right in her stomach
Den- now that is anoth
Chrissie was rolling around on the floor trying to catch her breath den grabbed her arm and pulled her to her feet
Den- now that anoth see you with Jake moon again ill brake you neck
Chloe-Elise
31-01-2006, 22:20
Well done both of you, its really good :D More asap please
Part 4
She couldn't believe it just this mornng he had said he loved her and now look what he had done to her. She heard knock on the door she tryed to get up but couldn't she called for Den to get it. She heard Sharon's voice in the hall.
Sharon: So where is she?
Den: Who?
Sharon: Eh Chrissie!
Den: Oh her in the living - rom.
She had tears coming down her face by the way Den spoke about her. SHaron walked in.
Sharon: You okay i heard screaming?
Den: She's fine aren't you?!
Chrissie: Y . . Yeah.
Sharon: Dad leave i need to talk to her alone.
Den: Whatever!
With that he woke out and Chrissie looked up so Sharon could see her black eye.
Sharon: Oh my god what happened?
Chrissie: He . . . . he punched me.
Sharon: Why?
Chrissie: It's a really long story. But try and keep him occupied for ten will you.
Sharon: Where you going?
Chrissie: Out.
Sharon: Will you be back?
Chrissie: I really don't know.
Sharon: Ok.
She walked out and walked into the Kitchen where Den was and they started Chatting. Chrissie grabbed her bag and walked downstairs glad to see the vic was open. She couldn't looke anybody in the face and walked out and headed over to the Moon's She knocked on the door and Jake answered.
Jake: Chrissie i wasn't expecting you.
Chrissie: (Nearly in tears) Can i come in?
Jake: Yeah sure.
With that she walked in and looked up to faced Jake.
Chrissie: He punched me and kicked me.
Jake: Who?
Chrissie: Den!
Jake: Why?
Chrissie: He must of saw me and you leave the cafe and he dosn't like you because you broke an entry and he told me never to see you but the problem is i don't knwo if i can do that.
Jake: Why?
Chrissie: I . . . I think i love you.
End of part 4
this is excellent. well done to both of you.
here part 5 guys :D
Jake was stunned by what Chrissie had just said too him
Jake- what
Chrissie- ohh look im sorry its just a little crush no biggy
Jake- ohh right
Chrissie- so I better get back other wise den will relies where I am
Jake- Chrissie wait
Chrissie- what is it
Jake walked up too her and gently stroked her cheek and before both of them knew it they where kissing as they broke apart Chrissie smiled and so did Jake
Jake- you wanna come in
Chrissie- sure
Jake- ok
Chrissie- no one else is in there are they
Jake- no just me
Chrissie- ok
And Chrissie walked into Jake house they where in the living room for an hour or so talking she could never really do that with den but with Jake he seemed to understand her
Chrissie- well I better get back
Jake- so Chrissie where are we going with this relationship
Chrissie- well what do you mean
Jake- I mean our we going out just a bit of fun or just one time thing
Chrissie- no no im sure we can have some fun cant we
She smiled and went to walk out the door but before she could Jake grabbed her arm and started to kiss her
Jake- ill call you
Chrissie- yeah well you better
They shared one last kiss and then Chrissie left as she made her way back too the pub she looked up at the window the lights where now on and the doors where unlocked as she opened it she was shocked to see the pub full of people
Pauline- ohh Chrissie what happened to you
Dot- ohh yes Chrissie what happened
Chrissie- I walked into a door
Pauline- a door
Chrissie- yeah lucky den was there really
Dot- yeah it was
Pauline- yeah
Chrissie- what was that yeah for Pauline
Pauline- ok usually are caused to den
Chrissie- what you think hit me
Pauline- wouldn’t be the first time
Chrissie- no den may be many things but he is no wife beater
Pauline- oh ok
Chrissie- well im going up stairs see later Paul dot
Dot- bye Chrissie
Pauline- bye
As Chrissie walked up the stairs she made her way into the kitchen and den flowed her in
Den- you alright sweet heart
Chrissie grabbed a kitchen knife
Chrissie- just stay away from me
Den- look im sorry about today it will never happen again
Chrissie- well it better not den other wise im out of here
Den- fie
He hugged her Chrissie felt kind of onward she wasent in love with den yet she was hugging him but she knew that this couldn’t go on forever and when he did find out he wouldn’t be very happy
Part 6
She headed down stairs and started serving people when Jake walked in she walked up to him and asked him what he wanted.
Chrissie: What do you want and don’t you dare say what I think you’re going to say!
Jake: Fine. Can I get a pint of lager then?
Chrissie: Coming up.
Just at that point Den walked down and Pauline walked over to him.
Pauline: Dennis Watt’s you are a wife beater!
Den: Says who?
Pauline: Says loads of people come on first Angie then Chrissie.
Den: (Turns around to face Chrissie) you’ve blabbed!
Chrissie: No I never!
Den: And who’s that for?
Chrissie: Em . . . . . . Jake.
Den: What did I say!
Chrissie: you know what you said and sorry but he drinks in here and I work in here and guess what that’s rich coming from you with the amount of affairs you’ve had on me!
With that she chucked the lager at Den and walked out leaving him fuming.
Den: Christine Watt’s get in here now!
Chrissie: You must be dreaming if you think I am!
Den: Oh come on I didn’t mean it!
Chrissie: Den I can’t take it anymore I want a divorce!
Den: Why?
Chrissie: I just do!
End of part 6
good girl chrissie. will pauline ever learn to keep her nose out?
heres part 7
Den- Chrissie don’t do this I am so sorry
Chrissie- well sorry isn’t good anoth this time
Den- please don’t say that Chrissie
Chrissie- you don’t trust me how can we have a marriage basted on no trust
Den- please look I do trust you ok I really do look If you wanna talk to Jake moon you can
Chrissie- oh this has got nothing to do with Jake moon its about you beating me half to death
The whole pub fell silent as the words beat me half to death echoed round the room
Den- I know and im sorry I will never do it again
Chrissie- no its too late
And with that Chrissie went to walk out but as she did she bumped into Sharon the last person on earth she wanted to see
Chrissie- why why did you do this too me Sharon
Sharon- do what
Chrissie- I told you not to tell any one and you just went ahead and did it any way
Sharon- I only told Pauline
Chrissie- you only told Pauline you weren’t supposed to tell anybody
Den- Chrissie don’t shout at her
Chrissie- I can do what I like listen Sharon I like you ok but next time keep your nose put of my business
And with that’s Chrissie stormed out of the pub followed closely by den every one else fell silent in the pub den grabbed Chrissies arm as snow began to fall
Den- where do you think your going
Chrissie- get off me den its over ok
Den- its not over till I say
Chrissie- oh yeah watch me
And she started to walk faster but den was too quick he grabbed her arm
Chrissie- let me go den just let me go please
Den- no way
He then kicked her once again causing her to scream with pain she fell to the floor
Chrissie- den please NOOOOOOO
Den the kicked as heard as he could in the back off the head she screamed again this time so loud causing most off the pub to come out her body suddenly went limp
Den- Chrissie get up
Chrissie wasent moving suddenly Jake came out of the pub
Jake- Chrissie god den what have you done
Suddenly den ran off Jake would of ran after him but he didn’t want to leave Chrissie
Jake- Chrissie
Chrissie- Jake
Jake- Chrissie thank god
Chrissie- my head hurts
Jake- ok look lets get you back to mine
Her helped Chrissie to her feet and walked her over to the moons house
Jake- there we go you alright
Chrissie- yeha just a bit of a head ace
Jake- come on lets get you inside
Chrissie and Jake went into the living room and sat and talked
Chrissie- god how things can change in a day
Jake- your telling me
Chrissie- hell be long gone by now wont he
Jake- yep do you wanna stay here tonight
Chrissie- do you mind
Jake- no
Here is part 8
Chrissie and Jake sat in the living - room talking way past 11 that night. The thing Chrissie like most about Jake Moon was he made her laugh more then anybody had even Den.
Chrissie: So i take it were together which means we don't have to hide to see each other?
Jake: Yep!
Chrissie: Good.
Jake: What made you burst out to the whole pub that he had nearly beaten you to death?
Chrissie: I don't know it's just the way i felt and i really did love him but after you came he showed his true colours and i fell in love with you.
Jake: Well from the first time i saw you i knew you were the one.
Chrissie: Hmmmm.
Jake: Come here.
She moved closer to him and they cuddled and kissed when the doorbell went.
They both got up and answered it and came face o face with Den.
Chrissie was about to shut the door in his face but Den put his foot against it.
Chrissie: I think you’ve said all you wanted to say!
Den: Have I!?
Chrissie: yeah you have!
Den: But I know have some questions!
Chrissie: Well what are they?
Den: Why were you acting all weird around me?
Chrissie: If you haven’t figured it out by now then you ain’t the brightest bulb in the box!
Den: Are or were you having an affair with him?
Chrissie: Wow he’s just figure that one out!
Den: You little Bitch!
Chrissie: Anything else you want to know?
Den: Yeah what’s so great about him?
Chrissie: he’s everything you ain’t!
Den: Like?
Chrissie: Oh come on just leave it ok. I want a divorce!
Den: And you’re not getting one!
Before anyone could stop her she had slapped Den he launched back by Jake punched him and soon a fully fledged fight erupted.
ill post more later promise :p x.x.x.x
ok hunnie you got me all excite thinking you had posted some you're evil:( not really:p
hre my next part
Jake- you come any where near her again ill kill you
Den- id like too see you try
Chrissie- stop it the too of you
Den- he started it
Chrissie- I don’t care who started it im finishing it
Jake- come on Chrissie
Den-Chrissie
Chrissie- no den its over
And with that she closed the door in dens face and left him outside alone
Jake- you alright
Chrissie- but I cant help feeling guilty
Jake- you have got nothing to feel guilty about
Chrissie- really
Jake- yeah come on
Chrissie- what
Jake- im going to cook you dinner
Chrissie- aww aren’t you cute
Jake- yeah
Later on at one a clock in the morning she got a phone call on the mobile
Chrissie- hello
Den- Chrissie
Chrissie- ohh den what do you want
Den- you back
Chrissie- well that’s no going to happen
Den- im gonna get you back ill do anything to get you back
Chrissie- den
Den- don’t say anything I got a surprises for you
Chrissie- well what is it
Den- your have to wait and see
Chrissie- den
Den- no till tomorrow lover
And then he hung up leaving chrysie stunned
Jake- who was that
Chrissie- den
Jake- what did he wont
Chrissie- he wants me back
Jake- oh cant he just leave you alone
Chrissie- he said he got a surprises for me
Jake- what is it
Chrissie- he said I will have too wait till tomorrow
feelingyellow
01-02-2006, 19:04
Fab script hunni's!! Took me a while to read, lol - I like short things better then long - but hey :p Can't wait for more and a joint script is sooo cool lol :D
Here is the next part. :cheer:
The next day Chrissie got up after Jake and walked down the stairs where Jake and Danny were sitting.
Chrissie: I didn't know he was here?
Danny: I came back last night. What are you doing here?
Chrissie: I take it he dosn't know!?
Jake: No he dosn't do you want him to know?
Chrissie: I'm not fussed.
Jake: Ok well let's just say me and Chrissie are together and she's divorcing Den!
Danny: Was that, that grumpy man that caught us breaking into the pub?
Chrissie: Sure was.
Danny: Is she always like that?
Chrissie: Depending what mood he's in.
Soon there was a knock on the door.
Chrissie: I'll get it.
She goes to open the door and is faced with Sharon.
Chrissie: Do you whnt something Sharon?
Sharon: I want to say sorry.
Chrissie: Sorry for what?
Sharon: For teling Paul i didn't mean it, it just slipped.
Chrissie: It's ok I'm glad you've apologised. Jake get a move on i want to know what he has for me!
Jake: Coming babe.
Jake came into the hall and grabbed his jacket and they headed over to the Vic hand in hand. Sharon had already said she was alright with it but they didn't know about anyone else and this was there first time being out as a couple. They walked into the Vic and everyone stared at them, Chrissie and Jake walked up to the bar where Den was.
Chrissie: Right what is it?
Den: i wanted to give you the Vic.
Chrissie: No you can give Sharon the Vic i don't want it and i don't want to be near you!
Den: But i didn't mean it . i love you!
Chrissie: Well i've gone off you i love Jake now and you're not going to do anything about it!
With that they walked out and headed to the cafe.
feelingyellow
02-02-2006, 21:45
That is fabolous hunni, glad Chrissie didn't accept the Vic off Den. :D Please do more soon :)
Thanks Emie i'm waiting for Bree to post her next bit which will proabley be tonight so i'll post more aftre
feelingyellow
03-02-2006, 17:30
Hehe it ok hun :)
Looking forward to it ... Bree - your fans are waiting :p
Yeah Bree come on all our dedicated fans re waiting lol :p only joking take you're time hun.
here it is guys sorry for being so slow :D
Chrissie and Jake where just about to enter the cafe when den came up to them
Den- Chrissie please just talk to me
Chrissie- den please leave me alone
Den- I just wanna talk
Chrissie- fine
Jake- Chrissie
Chrissie- he wont leave me alone till I do ill meet you at the house
Jake walked on without her as she turned to face den
Chrissie- ok den what do you want
Den- whys this happening
Chrissie- id like to tell you but there are children about I cant say it in front of them
Den- Chrissie
Chrissie- no den its over just accept it
Chrissie then walked back to the moons house a couple of hours later at one in the morning her mobile rang once again
Chrissie- for god sake HELLO
Den- hiya
Chrissie- ohh for god sake den its one o clock in the morning I need sleep sleeps good you should try it
Den- come over to the Vic
Chrissie- why den
Den- just do it
And with that he hung up on her she quickly she walked threw the bag still in her night close she didn’t have the heart to wake Jake again so she kept out and into the Vic
Chrissie- den what’s this about
Den- I want you back
Chrissie- den that lines getting old now
Den- so things where fine before he got he
Chrissie- you mean Jake
Den- yeah I have come up with a plan
Chrissie- and what might that be
Den- im gonna kill Jake …
And with that he pulled out a gun
feelingyellow
03-02-2006, 18:48
Fab part as usual hunni! :D It's getting so exciting :eek: :p Can't wait for more... come on Tanya :p
yeah come on tanya joking take your time hun :D x.x.x
emmie cool you're jets :p Well here's the next part guys.
Chrissie: You're what?
Den: I'm going to kill Jake Moon!
Chrissie: But that isn't going to help anything!
Den: It will i'll have you back!
Chrissie: Den when i said i wanted divorce i ment it!
Den: I don't care i'm still going to kill him!
Chrissie: Den give me the gun now!
Den: Oh no know why would i do something like that?
Chrissie: look Ok just give me that gun and move on!
Den: But i don't want to move on i want to be with you!
Chrissie: Yeah well you should of thought bout that before you tried to beat me to death!
Den: How many times do i need to say i'm sorry?
Chrissie: As many times as you want but it's not going to work!
With that Chrissie walked out. Den comes after her and grabs her by the arm.
Chrissie: Den just leave me alone!
Just at that point Jake walked out.
Chrissie: Jake go back inside please!
Den: Now look here he is.
With that Den got the gun out his pocket and aimed it at Jake. Chrissie ran and pulled him down and they both ran into the house which annoyed Den even more.
This is Fab please post some more soon xxx
feelingyellow
03-02-2006, 20:59
emmie cool you're jets :p Well here's the next part guys.
Chrissie: You're what?
Den: I'm going to kill Jake Moon!
Chrissie: But that isn't going to help anything!
Den: It will i'll have you back!
Chrissie: Den when i said i wanted divorce i ment it!
Den: I don't care i'm still going to kill him!
Chrissie: Den give me the gun now!
Den: Oh no know why would i do something like that?
Chrissie: look Ok just give me that gun and move on!
Den: But i don't want to move on i want to be with you!
Chrissie: Yeah well you should of thought bout that before you tried to beat me to death!
Den: How many times do i need to say i'm sorry?
Chrissie: As many times as you want but it's not going to work!
With that Chrissie walked out. Den comes after her and grabs her by the arm.
Chrissie: Den just leave me alone!
Just at that point Jake walked out.
Chrissie: Jake go back inside please!
Den: Now look here he is.
With that Den got the gun out his pocket and aimed it at Jake. Chrissie ran and pulled him down and they both ran into the house which annoyed Den even more.
My jets? :rotfl:
That was a fab part hunni :D
And now Bree's turn *tick tock* :p
heres my next part :p
Chrissie- lock door jake
Jake- god
Chrissie- look if you don’t want to be with me any more ill go
Jake- Chrissie im not going to let you go out there hes got a gun for god sake
Chrissie- I don’t want you to get hurt Jake
Jake- I don’t care about me along as your ok
Chrissie- ohh jake how did we get into this
Jake- I dunno come on lets get you upstairs
Chrissie- ok
Suddenly there was a knock on the door it was den
Den- CHRISTINE WATTS YOU GET OUT HERE NOW
Chrissie- god hes not going to go away is he
Jake- come up stairs quick
Suddenly den began trying to kick the door down
Chrissie- ahhhhhhh
Jake- upstairs quick
Chrissie and jake ran up the stairs
Chrissie- how are we gonna get out of here
Jake- where not
Chrissie- what
Jake- we are trapped
Chrissie- we are trapped
Suddenly den opened the door
Den- you got no where to run now
Chrissie- DEN PLEASE
Jake- if you where any sort of a man you’d let her go your not a man you’re a bully
Den loaded the gun
Den- now that’s either very brave or very stupid thing to say
He pointed the gun at jakes head
Den - id go for the second one
He was just about to pull the trigger when Chrissie lunged at him
Chrissie- NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..........
feelingyellow
04-02-2006, 13:51
Aww! That's a fabolous part and it looks to be getting very very interesting :D Can't wait for more huns :)
dont worry emmie im sure tanya will post more soon x.x.x.x
Emma-Lou
04-02-2006, 15:06
This is really good can not wait to read more soon its is very interesting
Here's the next Part guys.
She knocked the gun out his hand before he could pull the triger and held it away from him.
Den: You really are stupid aren't you?
Chrissie: No you are! Ok i don't want to be with you anymore get that in you're head!
Den: Yeah well you're making the wrong decision!
Chrissie: I'l tell you something you need to go to a mental home Dennis Watt's and get you're head sorted!
Den: Oh really?
Chrissie: Well i just said it!
Jake: Ok so really Den get out the house now!
Den: Or what?
Chrissie: Look just get out!
Den: Or what?
Chrissie: I'll tell you're dear princess that you tried to kill someone!
Den: Oh come on you haven't got the guts!
Chrissie: You think i haven't but i have and i swear i will phone her up right now and do it!
Den: Fine i'm leaving!
Chrissie: Yeah leave!
Den made his way downstairs threatning Jake again. Chrissie told him what would happen if he would do it again!
heres my next part
Chrissie- im so sorry about that Jake
Jake- its ok its not your fault your husbands a psycho
Chrissie- no really I am
Jake- Chrissie if it wasn’t for you he would off killed me I owe you my life
Chrissie- oh yeah
Jake- yeah
Chrissie- a kiss will do it
Jake leaned forward and gently kissed her lips
Jake- come on lets go to bed
Chrissie- ok
Jake- I love you Chrissie I love you too
Suddenly there was a knock at the door
Chrissie- god is it him
Jake- lets see
Jake went and opened the door it was Sharon
Sharon- Chrissie have you seen dad
Chrissie looked at Jake
Chrissie- no
Sharon- your lying
Chrissie- ok I have seen him
Sharon- I knew you had
Chrissie- about ten minuets ago he came with a gun and threatened to kill Jake
Jake- its true
Sharon- that’s it I have had anoth of him
Chrissie- what you going to do
Sharon- tell him hes no longer my father
Chrissie- Sharon wait
Before Chrissie could do anything Sharon was gone
Chrissie- god
Jake- what now Chrissie
Chrissie hes gonna kill me
Jake- why
Chrissie- if I urn his princess agents him I don’t know what hell do
feelingyellow
04-02-2006, 22:01
Aww! That was really good can't wait for some more soon. Hurry up Bree or Tanya - I can't tell the difference :rotfl: :p
Here's the next part.
Jake: You ok?
Chrissie: Yeah I’m fine just a bit iffy really Jake I’ve just turned his princess against him I’m going to get it!
Jake: He won’t touch you with me here.
Chrissie: Jake you don’t know what he’s like.
Just then the door went. Chrissie went to answer it.
Dennis: You ok and have you seen Sharon?
Chrissie: Eh I’m ok and yeah she left here about 10 minuets ago and she’s over at the Vic but I would advise you not to go near the Vic.
Dennis: Why?
Chrissie: Long story! Oh look here’s Sharon.
Dennis turns around and walking towards them is Sharon.
Sharon: Well that’s sorted!
Chrissie: I can’t believe you done tht I’m going to get it now!
Sharon: He won’t touch you!
Den: CHRISTINE WATT’S YOU BETTER WATCH IT!!
Chrissie: Yeh so who was he talking about then?
Dennis: Who’s Christine!
Chrissie: Oh mi god are ou really this thick?
Shron: Christine is Chrissie but we all call her Chrissie!
Dennis: I know you’re first name now!
Pauline: What’s he yelling about?
Chrissie: Nothing!
Pauline: Oh come on Chrissie cool it!
Den: Christine get over here now!!
Chrissie: Dennis get lost!
Dennis: You talking to me?
Chrissie: NO that’s you’re dad’s name but we all call him Den!
Dennis: Oh my god I get called after him!
Chrissie: I know it’s shocking!
Jake: What’s going on!
Chrissie: Den ain’t very happy.
Jake: Well we knew that!
Den: Jake you’re a toyboy!
Chrissie: You want me to tell the whole world what you did to me!
Den: No!
Chrissie: Well shut up then!
Chrissie, Jake, Dennis and Sharon all walked back into the house and slammed the door back in Den’s face.
wow that was fab hunni ill post my part tonight sorry my msn aint working x.x.x.x
Nooo well tell it to work!:( it's ok
feelingyellow
05-02-2006, 13:39
That was a really fab part hun - Dennis :rotfl: More soon please :cheer:
heres my next part you guys
Chrissie awoke the next morning at the kitchen table
Chrissie- god
Jake- what’s the matter babe
Chrissie- im just scared
Jake- ill look after you baby
Chrissie- thanks Jake
She kissed him
Chrissie- well im goanna go take a shower
Jake- ok Il stay here
Chrissie- no you don’t have too do that’ Jake go to work ok ill be fine
Jake- if your sure?
Chrissie- im positive
Jake- fine then
He kissed Chrissie on the cheek and left once Jake had gone she went to take a shower when she came out she had nothing but a towel on but she felt like some one was watching her as she walked into the kitchen den was sitting at the table
Den- wow look at you
Chrissie- did I not make myself clear last night go away
Den- now that’s not very nice Chrissie is it ?
Chrissie- im not a very nice person when your around
Den- don’t I know it Chrissie out turned my baby agents me
Chrissie- no I didn’t you did den you turned Sharon just like you did with Vicki and Dennis
Den- me and you are going for a drive
Chrissie-and if don’t ?
Den- I have got one of my friends following your toyboy around with gun and all takes is one phone call
Chrissie- your bluffing
Den- try me
Chrissie- you’d never go though with it
Den- you wanna try me
Chrissie- sod off den
Den- fine your call
Den got out his mobile and dialed a number
Den- ill put it on loud speaker so you can hear him scream
Chrissie- den are you for real
Gavin- alright you want me to do him now
Chrissie- noooo Ill do anything you want please
Den- no not just yet
He hung up and pushed Chrissie towards the stairs
Chrissie- ahh
Den- get dressed
Chrissie heisted
Den- NOW
Chrissie got dressed and her and den went outside Sharon came running up to them
Sharon- what’s going on Chrissie
Chrissie- me and your dad are back together
Sharon- no what bout Jake
Chrissie- sod Jake don’t love him
Chrissie got in the car
Sharon- dad don’t do this
Den- just let me get rid of her then you me and Dennis can be a family again
Den kissed Sharon on top of the head then he got into the car and speed off
Sharon- CHRISSIE
feelingyellow
05-02-2006, 16:12
Fab part huns :D Can't wait for more :cheer:
Have just caught up! Den is very mean! Make chrissie be alright!
more soon x
Hiya guys heres my part.
Den stopped while he had to phone someone he got out the car and walked deep into the woodland so he was surronded by tress. Back at the car Chrissie grabbed her bag out the boot and took out the gun the same one that Den had used to threatenn Jake with. She sat down but hid the gun beneath her jacket. Den came back and started the car back up with a smirk on his face but before he could get anywhere Chrissie had grabbed the and place it to his right temple.
Chrissie: Now Den you better give me you're phone!
Den: Come on you wouldn't use that on me?
Chrissie: Shut it right. You've ruined my life as it is! Now give me the phone!
Den handed her the phone she dialled the home number and got through to Sharon.
Sharon: Thank god you're alright Chrissie!
Chrissie: Of course i am. Get Jake to drive to the first service station you see on the motorway and don't worry you're dad won't be going anywhere.
Sharon: Ok!
With that Sharon hung the phone up and her Jake and Dennis all walked out to the car and Jake sped out of Albert square.
Chrissie: You! You're nothing to me at this moment you're pathetic!
Den: Oh come on . . .
Chrissie: Don't you dare tell me what to do Den Watt's because i could have you done!
Den: For what?
Chrissie: For what . . . for raping me!
Den: But i never . . . .
Just at that point Chrissie's phone rings.
Den: Who's that?
Chrissie: Natasha!
Den: Who's Natasha?
Chrissie answers the phone.
Natahsa: Hiya mum!
Chrissie: Heya sweetheart.
Natasha: you feeling alright?
Chrissie: Nope i am getting held hostage by you're father!
Natasha: Oh my god how low can he get?
Chrissie: Very! Well i got to go!
Natasha: See you.
Chrissie: See you soon!
With that she hung up.
Den: Who the hell is Natasha?
Chrissie: Natasha is our child!
Den: But we've never had a kid!
Chrissie: So when you raped me!
Den: I thought you had put her up for adoption?!
While they were arguing they didn't notice that Jake and Dennis had got out the car.
feelingyellow
05-02-2006, 22:35
Oooo that's a fab part hunni, but I thought Natasha was in Chrissie's trial :p Can't wait for more :)
heres my next part
Den- well you had that hint of lust in your eye
Chrissie- you are sick
Den- well you did anyway I don’t want talk some little brat i wanna do what I came here to do
He grabbed the gun from Chrissie hand and slapped her
Den- kill you
Chrissie- ohh go on then
Den- watch me
He pointed the gun at Chrissie head
Chrissie- go on then den do it shot me
Den went to shot Chrissie but Jake grabbed him
Jake- run Chrissie get in the car
Chrissie ran and climbed into the car Jake and den where now rolling around on the floor
Chrissie- just leave him Jake hes not worth it
Jake- you come any where near Chrissie again ill kill you
Den- what id like too see you try
Jake- ok
And with that Jake punched den in the mouth den got up and hit Jake back
Jake- why do you get pleas in hurting other people
Den- my best subject isn’t it
Jake lunged at den once again with the gun in his hand they both rolled about
Chrissie- Jake just leave it
Dennis- Jake come on
Suddenly the gun went off but both men where still on the ground Chrissie new one of them, had been shot but witch one had the bullet gone into suddenly he got up
Chrissie- oh my god …….
Chrissie: Oh my god!!!
Jake: I’m ok!
Sharon: Dad he’s bleeding!
Chrissie: So what he would of killed me if Jake hadn’t came!
Dennis: She’s telling the truth.
Chrissie: What are we going to do that gun has my dna on it I could go down for shooting him!
Dennis: Look I’ll show you what!
With tht he got out the car and walked over to where the gun was, he kicked it intill it went into the woodlands.
Dennis: Now what are we going to do with him?
Before they could do anything Den stood up.
Den: What?!
Chrissie: Oh my god!
With that she fainted Jake went over to her.
Chrissie slowly woke up.
Chrissie: Ok please just tell me that was a dream?
Jake: Nope sorry babes it was real.
Chrissie: Ahhhh that is like the second time he’s came back from the dead!
Jake: I know now just breath!
Chrissie: I can’t believe you!
Dan: What are you on about?
Chrissie: You know fine well what I’m on about!
Dennis had went back to retrieve the gun. Pointed it at Den’s head and shot him 5 times!
i will post more tonight promise luv ya bree x.x.x
feelingyellow
07-02-2006, 20:10
Aww that was a fab part hun's :) Can't wait for it!
heres my part hunnis :D
Chrissie- DENNIS
Sharon- DAD DENNIS WHAT HAVE YOU DONE
Dennis- shot him and Id do it again
Chrissie- Jake
Chrissie hugged Jake so tight
Jake- its ok baby
Chrissie- I just wanna go home
Sharon- what we going to do about him
Chrissie- we are going to burry him
Jake- what
Dennis- but where
Chrissie- ill show you
Chrissie walked up to dens body
Chrissie- Jake come help me lift him
Jake went over to Chrissie who was now shaking
Chrissie- you grab his legs ill grab his arms
And with that they picked him up and placed him in the boot of the car
Sharon- ohh my god
Dennis- just snap out of it Sharon
Chrissie- ok Sharon Dennis Jake in the car ill drive
Jake- where are we going
Chrissie- there’s a river some where around here
Sharon- we gotta call the police
Chrissie slapped Sharon
Chrissie- snap out of it Sharon I for one am not going down for murder
tell her chrissie!! fab hun
more soon
xxxxxxx
i will post more tonight i promise
xxxx
feelingyellow
08-02-2006, 17:37
That was a fab part hunni :D It's all getting so exciting (Den's dead wahey! :p) Can't wait for more! :cheer:
I will post more soon! I promise! And Den's dead woohoo! lol:p
feelingyellow
11-02-2006, 12:20
Lol, ok ... *tick tock* I'm waiting Tanya ... :p
Here's the next part guys i'm sorry for the wait:p
Sharon wouldn't budge from where she stood.
Chrissie:Sharon get in the car!
Sharon: No!
Chrissie: Sharon for once think about someone else!!
Sharon: How can i my dad's dead!
Chrissie: Oh come on you washed you're hands of him now get in the car!
Sharon: Fine!
With that she walked in the car and drove along by the canal hoping to dunp the body in it!
Chrissie: Dennis help me.
Dennis: Will do!
When the coast was clear Dennis and Chrissie got out the car opened the boot. Took the body out and chicked it in the canal!
Chrisise: Now we will never speak about this again but what are we going to say happened to you're dad?
Dennis: I don't know!?
What they didn't know was Sam had watched them do the whole thing.
feelingyellow
15-02-2006, 21:05
That was a fab part hun and oooo Sam's found out :eek: What she going to do...
fab part hunni will post more tomorrow
heres my part guys :p
Chrissie woke up the next morning she felt lifeless like a big part of her had been taken way she may of hated den but she didn’t want him dead
Chrissie- Jake jake wake up
Suddenly den turned over
Chrissie- ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Den- ahh whats the matter Christine ohh never mind lets kiss and make up
Chrissie- this is a dream this is a really bad dream
Den- you wish sweet heart
Chrissie- what do you want
Den- you know what I want
Chrissie- no just stay away from me
Den- whats wrong with you im not going to hurt you
Chrissie- god please help me god help me
Den- god cant save you now no one can
And with that den climbed on top of her and ripped off the bed sheets
Chrissie- ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Suddenly she woke up in a cold sweat
Jake- Chrissie whats wrong
Chrissie- Jake is that you ?
Jake- who else would it be
Chrissie- den
She burst into tears
Jake- shhh its ok dens dead he cant hurt you anymore he’s dead
Chrissie- so you think being gonna stop him
Jake- Chrissie your talking stupid he’s gone
Chrissie- but what if someone saw us
Jake- I promise no one saw us
Suddenly the phone began to ring
Jake- its properly Danny god why do I bother letting him out
Chrissie- you better get it
Jake- no to tired too talk
Chrissie- ehh Ill get it then
Chrissie reached over and grabbed the phone
Chrissie- hello
There was no reply
Chrissie- who is this hello
Caller- I know what you’ve done it makes me sick im going too tell
Chrissie slammed the phone down
Jake- ohh how drunk is he
Chrissie- Jake im gonna be sick
She got out of bed and an too the loo Jake followed her into the bathroom he was greeted to the sound of her being sick
Jake- whats the matter Chrissie babe whats wrong
Chrissie- someone know what we did
Jake- what who
Chrissie- I don’t know I didn’t know the voice
Jake- well Chris what did they say
Chrissie- that it made them feel sick and that they where going too tell
Jake- what do we do
Chrissie- there nothing we can do
Jake- threes gotta be something
Chrissie- all we can do is sit back and wait and get on our hands and knees and pray for a miracle cause the only bloody thing that’s gonna save us all now …..
luv ya all bree x.x.x :D
feelingyellow
18-02-2006, 21:02
:cheer: Excellent part, it's getting really scary! Can't wait for more! :cheer:
Emma-Lou
20-02-2006, 19:16
That was really good its getting intense can not wait for more
hiya sorry guys but you are going to have to wait as i have exams soon and i really need to study! sorry!
Tanya
xxx
feelingyellow
21-02-2006, 16:37
Aww that's too bad but ok and good luck with your exams! :cheer:
Have just caught up, this is fab, more when you can! x
Guys i have some good news espicially for the big fans:p i will post the next part tonight.
feelingyellow
28-03-2006, 18:04
Guys i have some good news espicially for the big fans:p i will post the next part tonight.
Tonight was yesterday :p So where is it!? I wanna hear the big news! :p :D :cheer:
Tonight was yesterday :p So where is it!? I wanna hear the big news! :p :D :cheer:
me too :)
hope your exams went well.
Here's the next part guys enjoy :D :p
Chrissie - we need a god damn miracle Jake! Someone saw us and i want to know who it is!
Jake - Well we'll find out soon i'm sure.
They went downstairs to sit and get breakfast but Chrissie couldn't even go near the kitchen without felling dizzy and sick!
Jake - Babe you ok?
Chrissie - It must be a bug or something i have.
Jake - you want me to get you an appoinment at the doctors?
Chrissie - yea please.
Jake phoned up Walford General and was able to get an apointment for her at half 11!
Jake - chrissie the appointment is at half 11 and it's 5 to 11 so i would advise you to get dressed!
Chrissie - Will do
She quickly got dressed and walked down the stairs and her and Jake headed off to The doctor's they said she was there and they sat down Jake holding onto Chrissie's hand!
What is wrong with Chrissie?
What is wrong with her?! Make her alright :( More soon x
feelingyellow
13-04-2006, 00:40
Bet she's pregnant lol :p
Fab part huns! More soon! :cheer:
Bree Your turn Hun the fans are waiting lol take your time hun xx
Heres the next part guys :p
Chrissie slipped in to deep thought she scanned her brain trying to think of who could of seen them she was so deep in thought she didn’t even listen to what the doctor was saying
Jake- what are you sure
Doctor- yea Mrs. Watts is pregnant
Jake- that’s fantastic what do you think Chris
Chrissie- ummm
Doctor- what plant is she on
Jake- look even I don’t know that one Chrissie are you listening
Chrissie- what sorry what was that
Jake- Chrissie sweet heart you’re your pregnant
Chrissie didn’t speak at first she was still busy taking it all In
Chrissie- Really
Doctor- yea for cretin
Chrissie- that’s the best news ever
Jake- yea I cant believe it im gonna be a dad
Chrissie- and im gonna be a mum ohh im gonna be a mum
Jake placed his hand on her stomach tears rolled down Chrissie cheeks
Jake- thanks so much doc
Doctor- ohh please don’t thank me im just happy to give some one some good news
Chrissie- come on then I cant wait to tell Sharon
Jake- yea thanks again doc
Chrissie- yea thank you ever so much
Doctor- its ok
Chrissie and Jake walked out hand in hand
feelingyellow
01-05-2006, 13:49
Ooo fab hunni! Bless Chrissie and Jake! :p Hmm, what plant is she on, very interesting question! :moonie: :lol: :p More soon! :cheer: Tannie I is waiting! :p
I think Bree means Planet don't you Hun lol:p and i dunno i might do somemore tonight it depends through:p
feelingyellow
15-05-2006, 18:47
I think Bree means Planet don't you Hun lol:p and i dunno i might do somemore tonight it depends through:p
Lol :p Well tonight's gone past Tannza :p
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