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Snowboy
29-01-2006, 10:47
*This is the future fantasy for me, so its saying if she got freeeee*

Part one.

It was 6am, Sharon couldn't sleep as she was feeling sick from drinking too much the previous night. She went to the window, and saw a cab pull up outside The Vic. Not caring, she drew the curtains and returned to bed, but couldn't sleep. She got up, got dressed and took a stroll around the Square. Sharon walked into the Cafe and congratulated Jane on her baby news.

SHARON: Hey Jane, just a tea for me thanks.
JANE: Coming up, how have you been feeling?
SHARON: So and so, sleepless nights, thinking. Anyway, how are you?
JANE: Uh, the baby isn't even born yet and it's bothering me. The amount I throw up in the morning you'd think I was 290 pounds!
SHARON: Aww Jane, is Ian doing well?
JANE: He is still shocked, apparently it's against the law to have some sperm remaining from a vesectomy.
SHARON: Well, thats natural from Ian. Thanks for the tea, I'll see you later.

Sharon left the Cafe and continued to walk down the market. She made a turn at the arches and made her way to the playground. She drank some of her tea, and started swinging gently in the breeze. (Cameras rotate from Sharons face to behind her shoulder)

CHRISSIE: Hello Sharon.

Part 1 ends here. :P

Layne
29-01-2006, 10:51
I am LOVING this more soon please!

*i want chrissie to be freed! :p*

Tannie
29-01-2006, 10:59
Aw please do more soon

Bree
29-01-2006, 13:47
thats fab hun :) more soon

diamond1
29-01-2006, 13:52
wow go on chrissie

Tannie
29-01-2006, 14:03
please do more soon please!!

Snowboy
29-01-2006, 14:44
*This is the future fantasy for me, so its saying if she got freeeee*

Part one.

It was 6am, Sharon couldn't sleep as she was feeling sick from drinking too much the previous night. She went to the window, and saw a cab pull up outside The Vic. Not caring, she drew the curtains and returned to bed, but couldn't sleep. She got up, got dressed and took a stroll around the Square. Sharon walked into the Cafe and congratulated Jane on her baby news.

SHARON: Hey Jane, just a tea for me thanks.
JANE: Coming up, how have you been feeling?
SHARON: So and so, sleepless nights, thinking. Anyway, how are you?
JANE: Uh, the baby isn't even born yet and it's bothering me. The amount I throw up in the morning you'd think I was 290 pounds!
SHARON: Aww Jane, is Ian doing well?
JANE: He is still shocked, apparently it's against the law to have some sperm remaining from a vesectomy.
SHARON: Well, thats natural from Ian. Thanks for the tea, I'll see you later.

Sharon left the Cafe and continued to walk down the market. She made a turn at the arches and made her way to the playground. She drank some of her tea, and started swinging gently in the breeze. (Cameras rotate from Sharons face to behind her shoulder)

CHRISSIE: Hello Sharon.

*Part 2 starts here*

Sharon jumps up off the swing, drops her tea and turns to face Chrissie in shock.

SHARON: Chrissie...what the hell are you doing here?!
CHRISSIE: I got out early for good behaviour, mind you, I will probably have to go back inside after I'm finished.
SHARON: You what?
CHRISSIE: You'll find out in time.
SHARON: I'm not having this, I'm calling the police.
CHRISSIE: Go ahead, they're the ones that let me go, they'll just tell you the same thing.
SHARON: This is ridiculous, you killed Dad!
CHRISSIE: I paid for that, I stayed in prison for 2 years.
SHARON: That's not enough, you will pay for Dads death Chrissie. One way, or another.
CHRISSIE: We'll see Sharon.

Chrissie is grinning at Sharon. Sharon puts down the phone and starts to walk away breaking into tears. Chrissie stands still, makes a phone call and walks the opposite direction from Sharon. Sharon has arrived at Paulines house and is now knocking on the door.

SHARON: Pauline! Are you in there?!

Sharon is now crying and shaking wildly, her encounter with Chrissie really shook her up. She sits on the doorstep and presses her head against the door, which then opens and Sharons head falls to Joes feet.

JOE: Sharon, what is wrong?
SHARON: Is Pauline there?
JOE: No, she went out to grab a few bits and bobs from the high street. She'll be back as quick as she can, is there anything I can do?
SHARON: No, it's fine. Bye.
JOE: Bye...

Before Joe got a chance to say bye properly, Sharon had already left and slammed the porch closed. Sharon stood opposite The Queen Vic for a few moments and persued home. As she opened the front door, she sighed and looked greatful she was home at last, safe and sound. Sharon went upstairs and opened her flat door and ran to the phone that was ringing.

SHARON: Hello?
PEGGY: Ah Sharon darling, Phil phoned! He said he and Ben is fine. They're visiting...
SHARON: That's great Peggy, but I have the food boiling and it's about to burn. I'll call you back.
PEGGY: Ok Sharon.

Sharon slammed the phone down and again stared into space after telling a bare faced lie to Peggy for no reason. For some reason, she wasn't in the mood to socialise with anyone. However, Sharon put on the kettle and was preparing tea for herself. She placed it all on a tray and went to sit down. The tv was on, loud and for some reason, Sharon found every little thing funny. She decided she wasn't very hungry anymore and stood up - only to be confronted by Chrissie grabbing the tray and throwing it against the wall.

~End of Part 2~

Tannie
29-01-2006, 15:01
Go chrissie go Chrissie more soon it's fab

big bro fan
29-01-2006, 15:25
Is Chrissie going to kill Sharon.

big bro fan
29-01-2006, 15:25
I don't like Chrissie i prefer Sharon.

Chloe-Elise
29-01-2006, 15:33
Fab, more asap please :D

Bree
29-01-2006, 15:37
wow this is fab

big bro fan
29-01-2006, 15:44
Great script.

Layne
29-01-2006, 18:25
This is fab, go chrissie go!!! :cheer:
More soon x

Tannie
30-01-2006, 11:14
please do more soon xx

Bree
30-01-2006, 12:59
yep please do hun this is a fab script

big bro fan
30-01-2006, 13:16
please post some more soon

Snowboy
30-01-2006, 18:00
*This is the future fantasy for me, so its saying if she got freeeee*

Part one.

It was 6am, Sharon couldn't sleep as she was feeling sick from drinking too much the previous night. She went to the window, and saw a cab pull up outside The Vic. Not caring, she drew the curtains and returned to bed, but couldn't sleep. She got up, got dressed and took a stroll around the Square. Sharon walked into the Cafe and congratulated Jane on her baby news.

SHARON: Hey Jane, just a tea for me thanks.
JANE: Coming up, how have you been feeling?
SHARON: So and so, sleepless nights, thinking. Anyway, how are you?
JANE: Uh, the baby isn't even born yet and it's bothering me. The amount I throw up in the morning you'd think I was 290 pounds!
SHARON: Aww Jane, is Ian doing well?
JANE: He is still shocked, apparently it's against the law to have some sperm remaining from a vesectomy.
SHARON: Well, thats natural from Ian. Thanks for the tea, I'll see you later.

Sharon left the Cafe and continued to walk down the market. She made a turn at the arches and made her way to the playground. She drank some of her tea, and started swinging gently in the breeze. (Cameras rotate from Sharons face to behind her shoulder)

CHRISSIE: Hello Sharon.

*Part 2 starts here*

Sharon jumps up off the swing, drops her tea and turns to face Chrissie in shock.

SHARON: Chrissie...what the hell are you doing here?!
CHRISSIE: I got out early for good behaviour, mind you, I will probably have to go back inside after I'm finished.
SHARON: You what?
CHRISSIE: You'll find out in time.
SHARON: I'm not having this, I'm calling the police.
CHRISSIE: Go ahead, they're the ones that let me go, they'll just tell you the same thing.
SHARON: This is ridiculous, you killed Dad!
CHRISSIE: I paid for that, I stayed in prison for 2 years.
SHARON: That's not enough, you will pay for Dads death Chrissie. One way, or another.
CHRISSIE: We'll see Sharon.

Chrissie is grinning at Sharon. Sharon puts down the phone and starts to walk away breaking into tears. Chrissie stands still, makes a phone call and walks the opposite direction from Sharon. Sharon has arrived at Paulines house and is now knocking on the door.

SHARON: Pauline! Are you in there?!

Sharon is now crying and shaking wildly, her encounter with Chrissie really shook her up. She sits on the doorstep and presses her head against the door, which then opens and Sharons head falls to Joes feet.

JOE: Sharon, what is wrong?
SHARON: Is Pauline there?
JOE: No, she went out to grab a few bits and bobs from the high street. She'll be back as quick as she can, is there anything I can do?
SHARON: No, it's fine. Bye.
JOE: Bye...

Before Joe got a chance to say bye properly, Sharon had already left and slammed the porch closed. Sharon stood opposite The Queen Vic for a few moments and persued home. As she opened the front door, she sighed and looked greatful she was home at last, safe and sound. Sharon went upstairs and opened her flat door and ran to the phone that was ringing.

SHARON: Hello?
PEGGY: Ah Sharon darling, Phil phoned! He said he and Ben is fine. They're visiting...
SHARON: That's great Peggy, but I have the food boiling and it's about to burn. I'll call you back.
PEGGY: Ok Sharon.

Sharon slammed the phone down and again stared into space after telling a bare faced lie to Peggy for no reason. For some reason, she wasn't in the mood to socialise with anyone. However, Sharon put on the kettle and was preparing tea for herself. She placed it all on a tray and went to sit down. The tv was on, loud and for some reason, Sharon found every little thing funny. She decided she wasn't very hungry anymore and stood up - only to be confronted by Chrissie grabbing the tray and throwing it against the wall.

~End of Part 2~

~Part 3 begins here~

Sharon stared at Chrissie in shock. Scared something very bad would happen Sharon backed up a little bit to be atleast 10 spaces away from Chrissie. Chrissie stared at Sharon without saying anything. The phone rang again, Sharon glanced at it on the wall and made a dash for it. Chrissie cracked and lashed out.

CHRISSIE: Oh no you don't!

Chrissie had slapped Sharon with the back of her hand as hard as she could, and it sent Sharon flying against the wall - knocking down her portrait. The phone stopped ringing, as Sharon's nose bled, Chrissie finally spoke.

CHRISSIE: Do you think I'm stupid?
SHARON: That's depends on who is answering that question.
CHRISSIE: You cheeky bitch!
SHARON: Chrissie...what do you want?
CHRISSIE: I want revenge.
SHARON: Revenge for what Chrissie! You lost nothing, you killed dad - I lost him, NOT you!
CHRISSIE: I lost two years of my life for that scumbag and it's your fault.
SHARON: You deserved it.

Sharon's nose was now bleeding heavily and Sharon was beginning to breath badly. Chrissie span around and started whispering something to herself that Sharon couldn't quite understand.

SHARON: Chrissie, I'm bleeding heavily 'ere.
CHRISSIE: What? So? Do you want me to clean your nose for you? Hopefully after that slap it will be permanant damage.
SHARON: Please Chrissie, let me just go get a towel, please. Just to the kitchen, please Chrissie.
CHRISSIE: Why should I believe you?
SHARON: I'm not going anywhere looking like this am I Chrissie?
CHRISSIE: Oh fine, just do it and shut that hole in your face.

Sharon smiled briefly and crawled to the kitchen, Chrissie turned her back to the Kitchen door and ripped the phone wires to pieces - making sure phonecalls couldn't come in, or out.

SHARON: There Chrissie, just a towel see?
CHRISSIE: Great, now all we now all we need is a tray for you to lay in and an apple for your gob and then we can serve you up as prize pig!
SHARON: What do you plan on doing Chrissie?
SHARON: CHRISSIE!
CHRISSIE: WHAT?!
SHARON: I said what do you plan on doing to me?
CHRISSIE: Oh that's right, you never could keep your nose out of it so you stick it in someone elses business. You'll find out Sharon.

Chrissie was now glancing at her watch, anticipating something. Sharon was silently weeping but sneakily shuffeling a little to the left. She picked up half a plate that was smashed during Chrissies arrival, and hid it in the towel. Chrissie spun around and kicked Sharon in the gutts.

CHRISSIE: I don't think so sweet heart.
SHARON: Uh Chrissie...

Sharon was now panting for air, the kick had knocked the air out of her, aswell as the plate. Sharon stood up while shaking wildly and put her hands behind her back.

SHARON: Why are you so anxious?
CHRISSIE: Shut up!
SHARON: Why are you so anxious?
CHRISSIE: I said shut up, unless you want me to do it for you.

With this, Sharon took a lunge at Chrissie with a kitchen knife she had snuck in from the kitchen. She cut Chrissies arm and then dropped the knife, Chrissie reacted by chucking Sharon over the armchair and into the tv. Chrissies arm was not deeply cut, just scratched so she made a lunge at Sharon.

Sharon grabbed Chrissies curley locks, Chrissie grabbed Sharons straight blonde hair and then came a kick from Sharon right in the stomach. Chrissie was winded. Chrissie regained her breath after a few seconds and notice Sharon trying to grab a weapon. Chrissie dived for Sharon and kicked her in the chest. Sharon hit the wall, and rebounded back onto Chrissie - who punched her and sent her flying through the window.

Bree
30-01-2006, 18:05
thats good post more soon

Layne
30-01-2006, 18:07
Through a window lol! This is fab more soon xxx

Tannie
30-01-2006, 19:55
this is brilliant more soon please

Bree
01-02-2006, 19:39
you must post more of this soon its fab :p

Snowboy
02-02-2006, 14:59
part 3

Sharon stared at Chrissie in shock. Scared something very bad would happen Sharon backed up a little bit to be atleast 10 spaces away from Chrissie. Chrissie stared at Sharon without saying anything. The phone rang again, Sharon glanced at it on the wall and made a dash for it. Chrissie cracked and lashed out.

CHRISSIE: Oh no you don't!

Chrissie had slapped Sharon with the back of her hand as hard as she could, and it sent Sharon flying against the wall - knocking down her portrait. The phone stopped ringing, as Sharon's nose bled, Chrissie finally spoke.

CHRISSIE: Do you think I'm stupid?
SHARON: That's depends on who is answering that question.
CHRISSIE: You cheeky bitch!
SHARON: Chrissie...what do you want?
CHRISSIE: I want revenge.
SHARON: Revenge for what Chrissie! You lost nothing, you killed dad - I lost him, NOT you!
CHRISSIE: I lost two years of my life for that scumbag and it's your fault.
SHARON: You deserved it.

Sharon's nose was now bleeding heavily and Sharon was beginning to breath badly. Chrissie span around and started whispering something to herself that Sharon couldn't quite understand.

SHARON: Chrissie, I'm bleeding heavily 'ere.
CHRISSIE: What? So? Do you want me to clean your nose for you? Hopefully after that slap it will be permanant damage.
SHARON: Please Chrissie, let me just go get a towel, please. Just to the kitchen, please Chrissie.
CHRISSIE: Why should I believe you?
SHARON: I'm not going anywhere looking like this am I Chrissie?
CHRISSIE: Oh fine, just do it and shut that hole in your face.

Sharon smiled briefly and crawled to the kitchen, Chrissie turned her back to the Kitchen door and ripped the phone wires to pieces - making sure phonecalls couldn't come in, or out.

SHARON: There Chrissie, just a towel see?
CHRISSIE: Great, now all we now all we need is a tray for you to lay in and an apple for your gob and then we can serve you up as prize pig!
SHARON: What do you plan on doing Chrissie?
SHARON: CHRISSIE!
CHRISSIE: WHAT?!
SHARON: I said what do you plan on doing to me?
CHRISSIE: Oh that's right, you never could keep your nose out of it so you stick it in someone elses business. You'll find out Sharon.

Chrissie was now glancing at her watch, anticipating something. Sharon was silently weeping but sneakily shuffeling a little to the left. She picked up half a plate that was smashed during Chrissies arrival, and hid it in the towel. Chrissie spun around and kicked Sharon in the gutts.

CHRISSIE: I don't think so sweet heart.
SHARON: Uh Chrissie...

Sharon was now panting for air, the kick had knocked the air out of her, aswell as the plate. Sharon stood up while shaking wildly and put her hands behind her back.

SHARON: Why are you so anxious?
CHRISSIE: Shut up!
SHARON: Why are you so anxious?
CHRISSIE: I said shut up, unless you want me to do it for you.

With this, Sharon took a lunge at Chrissie with a kitchen knife she had snuck in from the kitchen. She cut Chrissies arm and then dropped the knife, Chrissie reacted by chucking Sharon over the armchair and into the tv. Chrissies arm was not deeply cut, just scratched so she made a lunge at Sharon.

Sharon grabbed Chrissies curley locks, Chrissie grabbed Sharons straight blonde hair and then came a kick from Sharon right in the stomach. Chrissie was winded. Chrissie regained her breath after a few seconds and notice Sharon trying to grab a weapon. Chrissie dived for Sharon and kicked her in the chest. Sharon hit the wall, and rebounded back onto Chrissie - who punched her and sent her flying through the window.


PART 4

Chrissie ran to the window and glanced outside it. Watching the motionless Sharon laying there made her realise she'd have to get out - and fast! She got out her phone and started shouting to the person on the other line to get to the square in 30 minutes. Chrissie still had some unfinished business to attent too before fleeing the square.

Chrissie trashed the flat to make it look like a huge struggle broke out and then finally, left the flat and avoided further contact with Sharons body. Walking around it and making her way through the square, she saw Pat walking up to Sharons house. Walking faster she finally reached her destination. Standing outside the Queen Vic and looking at it, she took a deep breath and walked in.

CHRISSIE: Who are you?
HONEY: I'm Honey. What can I get for you?
CHRISSIE: Hmm... Peggy said you have to close The Vic early and go home.
HONEY: Oh how nice of her!
CHRISSIE: Isn't it just.
HONEY: Excuse me everyone! The pub is closing early for um...bug renovations! All out please and we'll see you tomorrow!
CHRISSIE: Good job!
HONEY: Thank you. Let me clear these up before I go.
CHRISSIE: No it's ok Honey, just go and I'll do it.
HONEY: Well ok, your hands are more manly than mine. I mean look at all those scratches and bruises! You look like you've been in a huge cat fight. Hey, your name isn't Cat or Kitten is it? Hehe
CHRISSIE: No, it's Maple, Maple Syrup.
HONEY: What a unusual name Maple, well anyway! Bye!

Honey left The Vic and Chrissie now sighing with relief over how easy that was locked up. She turned around and heard footsteps coming down the stairs. She took cover in the gents and listened carefully.

PEGGY: Everyone we have huge...! Where is everyone? Oh whatever.

Peggy switched off the lights and went upstairs. Chrissie snuck out and followed her into the living room and slammed the door closed.

CHRISSIE: Peggy!
PEGGY: What are you doing here!
CHRISSIE: I'm here to see my dear old friend Peggy Mitchell.
PEGGY: Friend! Hah, that's the joke of the year.
CHRISSIE: Well I've come to give you a gift.
PEGGY: You what?
CHRISSIE: A gift, for coming back to Walford and terrorising me. Slapping me into a grave, harassing me and turning everyone against me. I think you'll like my gift. It's the perfect thing to say thank you.
PEGGY: What is it?
CHRISSIE: Oh I'm sure it will blow your wigs away!
PEGGY: Oi! Get out of my pub now!
CHRISSIE: I don't think you're in any position to start ordering me around you old prune!
PEGGY: How dare you!

Peggy walked up to Chrissie and gave her a huge slap. Chrissie ofcourse didn't take that lying down. She got up and put her hands (which were now in leather gloves) around Peggy's throat.

CHRISSIE: Tell me you're sorry! Sound familiar does it?
PEGGY: N..oo...
CHRISSIE: It should. That's exactly what you said to me before you pushed me into Den's grave.
PEGGY: I..i..
CHRISSIE: Speak up Peggy - can't hear you!
PEGGY: get off me

Peggy struggled and managed to kick Chrissie off of her, however a car honk was going off in the backround. Chrissie's escape plan had arrived and her time was narrowing. She grabbed the closest thing to her (a vase) and threw it at Peggy. It hit her shoulder and Peggy was wounded. Chrissie went mad and grabbed another antique clay vase that Phil or Grant made for her when they were little. She went up to peggy and said:

CHRISSIE: This reminds me of when I bashed Den's skull in. Except this time, I'm fighting a piece of mouldy old fruit and not something that will fight back.
Peggy: YOU CHEEKY BITCH!

The honk of the car was now getting impatient. Chrissie hit Peggy on the head with the clay vase which then smashed, and began to walk down the stairs. A bottle of brandy went flying into her back and she span around to see Honey raging.

HONEY: MAPLE? Why are you doing this to Peggy?
CHRISSIE: Oh, it was her present from me. I was showing her how to fight old fruits, and also how to outsmart thick people.
PEGGY: Honey let her go and phone an ambulance!
CHRISSIE: Goodbye Honey, make sure Peggy doesn't get well too soon!
HONEY: Shut up Maple!

Chrissie ran out the pub and into the car.

JAKE: Did what you had to do?
CHRISSIE: All sorted babe.

They kissed and then finally, Jake drove off.

[THE END]

Bree
02-02-2006, 15:04
wow that was brill :eek: loved it go chrissie god i miss her :p

Tannie
02-02-2006, 16:36
oh my god it's brilliant xxxx i am going to miss Chrissie so muuch she was fab lol

Snowboy
02-02-2006, 16:59
thanks guys :p

Tannie
02-02-2006, 17:17
will you be doing any othere Chrissie scripts? xxxx

Snowboy
02-02-2006, 17:38
will you be doing any othere Chrissie scripts? xxxx

I might do one with her life on the run with Jake after this :P

depends if i get inspired or not

Tannie
02-02-2006, 17:42
ok well you're really good at them or this one xxx

Snowboy
02-02-2006, 17:51
ok well you're really good at them or this one xxx

Thanks hunny :)

Layne
02-02-2006, 17:55
The end noooooooooooooooooo!Honey that was a fab script!I loved reading it, fab ending too! Anymore scripts you could post or write for us chrissie fans! :p

Layne
xxx