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billfan
19-01-2006, 16:33
This one's very different to what I usually do. It's a smithy and louise one. It's after she was killed and he misses her so much. hope you like it. Just the song reminds me of them. One off.
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Smithy sat in his cell. He'd put so many people in this cell, now he was here. Talk about put yourself in the killers shoes. But I'm not a killer, I didn't kill Louise. Did I? He couldn't remember. He wouldn't kill her though. He loved her. He'd been fitted up. I'm innocent. If he kept remembering that, if he didn't give up hope then ... Ah, who was he kidding. Gina wasn't here, no one cared. Except Zain, he was trying his very best. All I want is Louise. I wish she was here. I miss her so much. I love her too. He started to think of Kerry. He silently started to cry. Two women that he truly loved had been killed. His thoughts travelled back to Louise.

Did I disappoint you? Or let you down?
Should I be feeling guilty, or let the judges frown.
'Cause I saw the end, before we'd begun.
I saw you were blinded and I knew I had one.
So I took what's mine, by eternal right.
Took your soul out, into the night.
It may be over, but it won't stop there.
I am here for you, if you'd only care.
You touched my heart you touched my soul.
You changed my life and all my goals.
And love is blind and that I knew when,
My heart was blinded by you.
I've kissed your lips and held your hand.
Shared your dreams and shared your bed.
I know you well, I know your smell.
I've been addicted to you.

Goodbye my lover.
Goodbye my friend.
You have been the one.
You have been the one for me.

I am a dreamer but when I wake,
You can't break my spirit - it's my dreams you take.
And as you move on, remember me,
Remember us and all we used to be
I've seen you cry,
I've seen you smile.
I've watched you sleeping for a while.
I'd be the father of your child.
I'd spend a lifetime with you.
I know your fears and you know mine.
We've had our doubts but now we're fine,
And I love you, I swear that's true.
I cannot live without you.

Goodbye my lover.
Goodbye my friend.
You have been the one.
You have been the one for me.
And I still hold your hand in mine.
In mine when I'm asleep.
And I will bear my soul in time,
When I'm kneeling at your feet.

Goodbye my lover.
Goodbye my friend.
You have been the one.
You have been the one for me.

I'm so hollow, baby, I'm so hollow.
I'm so, I'm so, I'm so hollow.

Smithy looked up. His jail door was being opened. He turned back down thinking of even more bad news.
"Hey, don't I get a hello."
Smithy looked up. Standing there was Gina Gold. "Before you ask. I was at Glasgow Airport and I got a call from June who told me everything. Now you're courtcase is next week and I am going to fight until the end for you. How about that?"
Smithy smiled. For the first time in hours, he smiled. He had new hope, new light. He was going to fight. Not only for himself, but also for Louise. Because she would help him and so would Kerry.
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Song: Goodbye My Lover by James Blunt. Album: Back to Bedlam.

Tori
19-01-2006, 17:02
awww, made me blub lol!!! awww

Katy
19-01-2006, 17:27
aww i love that song.

feelingyellow
19-01-2006, 18:26
www that's so sweet! even though i don't watch whatever smithy and louise are in lol

Chloe-Elise
19-01-2006, 19:13
Awwwww fab :)

Angeltigger
20-01-2006, 09:35
www that's so sweet! even though i don't watch whatever smithy and louise are in lol

It "the bill"

aaww that was lovely and sad

samantha nixon
20-01-2006, 22:32
aww thats so sweet

myra129
20-01-2006, 22:39
Awww thats dead sweet

Emma-Lou
22-01-2006, 13:46
Aww thats really, good love the song

xStephaniex
22-01-2006, 17:50
awwwwwwwwww thats well sad :( i love that song !! so does gem :p

diamond1
22-01-2006, 17:59
Awww thats dead sweet no pun intended?