Down Under Season 1

[big bro fan]

Well after waiting forever it's finally here Surf's Up based in Sydney Australia.

Characters

Mike Wilkinson- local night club owner has a dodgey past and a thing against Steve Rodgers. Lives with daughter Mel. In his eye's she can do no wrong but the truth is no one like's her.

Mel Wilkinson- gangsters daughter best bitch on the beach. Takes after her mum in men the way she uses them. Has a hidden secret which is unknown at the moment but believe me it's going to cause a stir. Her only friend is Donna Gates and even there not the best of mates.

Steve Rodgers- owns the pub what else can i say except the fact he's an ex drug dealer pimp and has been in prison 23 times. Live's with wife Maria and his kids Sharon Dawn and Paul

Maria Rodgers- people tell her she's stupid for staying with Steve but she ignores it. Try's to be as good a wige and step mum as she can

Sharon- apple of her dad's eye. Anyone would think that she get's more attention than her stepmum off her dad but to the tell the truth she does. She is the only daughter he really cares about because she was the daughter of his late wife Louise who left him but he still loves dearly.

Dawn- she is'nt the prettiest but she gets heads turning. she loves Max but he does not love her as he does'nt know.

Paul- nice guy there's a rift between him and his dad but they try to get along. Paul is the fittest man around and if a girl says yes please then you can bet he'll be in there bed before you can say "take your kit off"

Gaz Redding- nice guy who love's his family. He lives with brother Max and sister Stacey. Gaz like Paul has been in more girls bed's than hot showers

Max Redding- want's to be sex symbol like brother but is a flop does not know about Dawn's feeling towards him but they are the best of mate's.

Stacey Redding- takes nothing from no-one got a mouth on her the size of Australia cheeky wishes she had a mate her own age.

Matthew Thompson- leader of his family like's to fish is constantly around his daughters houses trying to calm down no doubt because the Thompson girld don't half like a slanging match

Lisa- Matthew's oldest daughter lives with husband Carl with daughter Sindy who is three

Carl- owns the cafe is very strong which comes in use when pulling his wife out of a fight

Kat- single looking for love has a child with Gaz who he does not know about named Michelle

Lynn- another Thompson sister live's with husband Mickey want's a baby but can't have them

Mickey: hate's dissapointing his wife because he can't give her what she want's

Sam Dales- single enjoys life on the beach like's to surf men drool over her but she is too smart to sleep around.

Amber Cole- another single girl best mate and lives with friend Sam

Jake King- single like's to surf like's to party

Viv Gates- leader of the family gossip likes her war paint and a night on the town

Donna- her daughter friends with Mel Wilkinson

Scott- heartthrob viv's daughter

Dianne Michaels- trys to keep her family in line and her son's out of prison

Sean- her son

Phil- her son

Kim- her daughter

Roy Wood- lives with wife Paula and Brother Brian retired like's to fish

Paula- wife

Brian- his brother

First episode up tommorow.

[Skits]

can't wait.

[Chloe-Elise]

Cool,looks good.

[big bro fan]

1 WILKINSON HOUSE INTERN MORNING

MEL AND MIKE ARE SAT EATING BREAKFAST

Mike: i have to work late tonight so the house is your's for a bit
Mel: yeah ok
Mike: are you...ok
Mel: yeah of course
Mike: ok well i'll see you later...and remember don't stay on the beach too long

MIKE KISSES HER GOODBYE SOMEONE STARTS RINGING MEL'S PHONE SHE LOOKS AT THE NAME CALLING HER

Mel: go away

2 REDDING HOUSE INTERN MORNING

GAZ COMES OUT HALF DRESSED

Stacey: put some cloths on will ya
Gaz: sorry i;ve just had um
Max: a women in the sack
Stacey: if this is going where i think it is i'll see you later
Gaz: bye Stace
Max: how do you do it
Gaz: do what
Max: get girls
Gaz: just do why you want a bit of action do ya

GAZ LAUGHS TO HIMSELF

Max: well yeah
Gaz: oh...um soory mate i thought you were more into books than girls
Max: i am nineteen
Gaz: yeah you are

GAZ STARTS TO THINK

Gaz: when you get a girl um...you think advice would be easy to give...just becareful and wear protection
Max: of course but i doubt i'll get a girl for a while yet

3 WILKINSON HOUSE INTERN MORNING

MEL RECIEVES HER TENTH MESSAGE ON HER PHONE SHE SCREAMS CHUCKS HER PHONE AT THE WALL THEN LEAVES THE KITCHEN TABLE

4 THE BEAR INTERN MORNING

BAR IS QUIET PAUL IS SERVING MAX

Paul: what's up kido
Max: nothing
Paul: oh yeah you look down mate
Max: you would'nt understand
Paul: try me
Max: i want some action
Paul: bedroom
Max: got it in one
Paul: you need to be confident like this watch

ENTER AMBER AND SAM

Paul: Amber fancy a drink later and a bit of you know
Amber: pick me up at eight
Paul: see you then...see how easy it is
Max: thanls for the advice

PAUL GOES TO OTHER END OF THE BAR STEVE WONDERS OVER

Steve: could'nt help overhear your problem
Max: what is it to you
Steve: i can help... be down the alley of the pub at eight tonight
Max: ok

Next part tommorow

[Chloe-Elise]

Good start, more soon please :)

[big bro fan]

Thanks here's what coming up

Max is in for a shock down the alleyway
We find out what is annoying Mel

[Bryan]

good start keep it up!

[big bro fan]

1 WILKINSON HOUSE INTERN NIGHT

WE SEE MEL DREESED UP IN VERY TARTY CLOTHS. SHE OPENS THE DOOR THEN WALKS OUT TOWARDS THE ALLEY

2 ALLEY EXTERN NIGHT

MEL'S PHONE RINGS

Mel: what
Steve: don't take that attitude with me missy
Mel: yeah sorry...what's it this time
Steve: customer showing up at eight are you in the alley
Mel: yes
Steve: good when he pays you you come straight to me...and Mel make it memrobile it is his first time
Mel: right bye

MAX COMES INTO THE ALLEY

Max: Mel
Mel: allright sexy...got the money
Max: all here
Mel: let's go then

GRABS HIM BY THE TIE AND LEADS HIM TO HER HOUSE

[big bro fan]

1 THE BEAR INTERN MORNING

IS VERY QUIET THEN IS LOUD BANGING ON THE DOOR

Steve: what do you want
Mel: here's your money
Steve: [smiling] so how was it
Mel: do you get some kind of sick pleasure out of this
Steve: of course i do

HE REACHES INTO HIS POCKET AND CHUCKS A LOAD OF MONEY ON THE FLOOR

Mel: you know what if it wern't for the fact of you knowing what you know i would have slapped you by now
Steve: you can slap me any time
Mel: wanna be carefull your wife and kid's don't hear you say that

2 BEACH EXTERN MORNING

THE OCEAN IS FULL OF PEOPLE SWIMMING AND MICKEY AND JAKE ARE SAT IN CHAIRS TALKING

Mickey: i need a girlfriend
Jake yeah you do
Mickey: your supposed to tell me as long as i have you everythings fine
Jake: let's go out tonight see if we can't find you someone
Mickey: allright then

3 CLUB INTERN AFTERNOON

MEL IS SAT AT THE BAR MIKE COMES OVER

Mike: allright darling
Mel: fine
Mike: you don't sound it
Mel: well i am ok
Mike: ok...anyways i have a party in a few day's time and i thought you could help me out with some things
Mel: sure
Mike: that's my girl

MIKE WALKS AWAY MEL GET'S A PHONE CALL

Mel: what
Steve: over the club tonight don't ask questions there's two grand in it for ya
Mel: see ya then

4 REDDING HOUSE INTERN AFTERNOON

MAX IS JUST GETTING IN GAZ IS COOKING FOR HIM AND STACEY

Gaz; what time do you call this
Max: i um met someone
Gaz: who
Stacey: he's dunnit ya can see it in his eye's
Gaz: is she right
Max: well.....yeah
Gaz: nice one bruv good job you used protection
Max: protection
Gaz: you did did'nt you
Max: i can't remember

Next part soon

[big bro fan]

Part 1

1 REDDING HOUSE INTERN EVENING

GAZ HAS AN ANGRY LOOK ON HIS FACE MAX LOOKS SCARED

Max: i did
Gaz: did what
Max: you know
Gaz: thank the lord...fancy a pint
Max: ok then

2 THE BEAR INTERN EVENING

STEVE IS QUIETLY TALKING TO MEL AT THE OTHER END OF THE BAR

Steve: if he comes in tonight you humiliate him ok
Mel: ....ok
Steve: good now look busy your bringing the place down

Part 2 coming soon

[Skits]

wonder what mel's going to do.

[baileya]

This is great big bro fan really great

[bakedbean]

A fantastic new soap

[big bro fan]

Part 2

1 THE BEAR INTERN NIGHT

VIV SCOTT AND DONNA ARE DISCUSSING SCOTT'S 22ND BIRTHDAY

Viv: so he says we can ave it over the club
Scott: sounds good mum
Viv: look at Mel she looks a right state
Donna: that's my friend your talking about
Viv: sorry

GAZ AND MAX ENTER THE BAR

Steve: ger day mate what will it be
Max: two pint's of larger
Steve: Mel tell's me she wants a word with ya
Max: really
Steve: better see what she wants

HE WALKS OVER TO HER

Max: hi Mel
Mel: [shouting] look i am not going to sleep with you again
Max: but i never said....

WHOLE PUB GOES QUIET

Mel: you are rubbish in bed and besides if you had'nt got me drunk i would'nt have laid eye's on you

VIV STANDS UP

Mel: oh look it's Viv do you want to give im a go in the sack eh everyone knows your desperate
Viv: how dare you

VIV SLAP'S MEL HARD ACROSS THE FACE

Mel: you little cow
Viv: want another piece of me do ya
Mel: look i came out here to do what i needed to do so to bring it to a close lady's in this pub do not sleep with Max he is a dirty disgusting perv

MAX LOOKS TO GAZ FOR ADVICE

Gaz: i think you better go home

MAX STORMS OUT MEL FOLLOWS SHE GET'S OUTSIDE AND SPOT'S MAX

Mel: look we need to talk
Max: i think you have said enough
Mel: i was payed to do that
Max: what
Mel: look it's a long story but i really do like you everyone just thinks i'm a cow but i'm not i'm actually quiet nice
Max: you are nice
Mel: anyway take this get a plane first thing tommorow morning and get out of here till ok
Max: thanks

MEL KISSES HIM THEN WALKS OFF

Next episode soon

[big bro fan]

Ok so Max has now left and he will not be back till season two when he will have a very good year. so don't miss it

[big bro fan]

I'm thinking of changing the name of the soap so any idea's would be great

[big bro fan]

http://www.channel4.com/bigbrother/media/housemates/profiles/rula_profile.jpg

say hello to Rula Wilkinson Mike's wife. She lives in England she is posh nice to everyone so why is she with Mike. well all i'm going to say is she has a big part to play as certain event's start to unfold.

[big bro fan]

1 WILKINSON HOUSE INTERN MORNING

THERE IS A MASSIVE ROW BETWEEN MIKE AND MEL

Mike: what do you think your playing at Mel
Mel: nothing
Mike: nothing nothing you getting into a fight slap bang in the middle of the pub does not seem like nothing to me
Mel: yeah well it's my business not your's
Mike: you stay in this house and don't go out you hear me
Mel: you can't tell me what to do
Mike: i just did

HE LEAVES THE HOUSE

2 CAFE INTERN MORNING

EVERYONE IS TALKING ABOUT LAST NIGHT'S EVENT'S

Sheila: if you ask me something does not make sense
Brian: she slept with someone like a common prostitute
Sheila: yeah well i think i will go and see her see you later love

SHEILA LEAVES GAZ COMES OVER

Gaz: mind if i sit here
Brian: not at all...how's your brother
Gaz: gone
Brian: gone...where!
Gaz: Melbourne say's he is staying for a few week's
Brian: it's probably what's best...fancy a pint
Gaz: go on then

3 WILKINSON HOUSE INTERN AFTERNOON

MEL IS TELLING SHEILA EVERYTHING

Mel: and now he's using me to do his dirty work

MEL'S PHONE RINGS

Mel: hello
Steve: it's me got another little job for you
Mel: i'll go to hell before i do anything for you again
Steve: you better or i will tell the whole pub evrything tonight it's the dart's tournament and it's Scott's birthday having at the pub see after what you did last night...everyone has gone right off your father
Mel: i'll be there later

SHE PUT'S THE PHONE DOWN

Sheila: that's it i am putting an end to this

SHE GET'S OUT HER PHONE

Sheila: it's me...get over here as soon as.....five day's see you then
Mel: who was that
Sheila: never mind but let's just say Steve is in for a shock

Next episode will be up soon :angel:

[big bro fan]

Next episode coming soon where we find out what Steve has in store for Mel.

[bakedbean]

i wonder what Steve has in store for Mel???

[Bryan]

I'm thinking of changing the name of the soap so any idea's would be great

Down Under?

[big bro fan]

Down Under?

I like it that is the new name.

[xStephaniex]

aww coool :p - fab script too :cheer: wel done

[big bro fan]

1 THE BEAR INTERN NIGHT

STEVE IS WAITING FOR MEL

2 MEL'S HOUSE INTERN EVENING

Sheila: just ask him what he want's and do it ok
Mel: but what if it is something wrong and horrible
Sheila: he'll pay for it believe me when your mother
Mel: you called mum
Sheila: yeah

MEL PICK'S UP HER COAT AND LEAVES

3 THE BEAR INTERN NIGHT

MEL WALKS UP TO STEVE

Steve: where you been
Mel: not important now what do you want
Steve: upstairs

4 STEVE'S ROOM INTERN NIGHT

STEVE CLOSES THE DOOR BEHIND HIM

Mel: what's going on
Steve: you are going to sleep with me
Mel: oh no
Steve: if you don't i will tell everything
Mel: ok

STEVE UNDOES MEL'S DRESS AND SHE START'S TO UNDRESS HIM.

Next part soon

[Bryan]

I like it that is the new name.

do you want me to edit the name of the thread then?

[big bro fan]

Yes please bondboffin if you could that would be great thanks.

[big bro fan]

1 WE SEE MEL AND STEVE IN BED TOGETHER.

Steve: that was great
Mel: so what was that for
Steve: i have always been a family man
Mel: and...
Steve: i alway's wanted another kid
Mel: oh my day's we did'nt
Steve: i did not use protection

MEL LOOK'S LIKE SHE IS ABOUT TO EXPLODE SHE GRAB'S THE PILLOW AND STARTS TO VIOLANTLY BEAT STEVE.

Mel: you b*****d why me why i did'nt want kid's you have ruined my life

STEVE GET'S OUT OF BED AND GRABS THE PILLOW

Steve: you want to watch yourself
Mel: [crying] you've ruined my life
Steve: look at me
Mel: no
Steve: [aggressivly grabs her hair] i said look at me
Mel: your hurting me
Steve: tommorow you tell me if your pregnant if not we try again
Mel: ok ok
Steve: good now get out of mysight

MEL GOES OUT THE ROOM AND DOWN THE STAIRS. PAUL OPENS HIS DOOR BUT DOES NOT SEE WHO HAS JUST LEFT.

Paul: been at it again
Steve: shut it and get some cloths on

Next part soon.

[big bro fan]

Just in case you are wondering where Steve's wife is she is currently not in the soap but is coming back next episode. Here is the low down on her.

Maria does not know her mum. She is Steve's partner but are not actually married she is actually only two years older than Sharon. There is something dark in her past which she does not know about but will all come together in the season finale. As will all this Mel stuff etc be tied up. The season finale will tell you everything so you will understand how the various things like Mel having money off Steve came around.

[big bro fan]

Would just like to say sorry that most characters have not been used they will be used all the time in season two.

[big bro fan]

First things first sorry for not posting much will have loads coming up.

1 MELS HOUSE INTERN MORNING

MEL IS LYING ON THE FLOOR IN TEARS A PREGNANCY TEST BY HER SIDE. THERE IS A KNOCK AT THE DOOR.

Sheila: Mel open up i know your in there

MEL SLOWLY OPENS THE DOOR AND SHEILA COMES IN.

Sheila: what's he done to you
Mel: tricked me into sleeping with him

SHEILA SPOTS THE PREGNANCY TEST ON THE FLOOR

Sheila: your not
Mel: i don't know

MORE TOMMOROW

[Bryan]

:eek: you cant leave it like that!

more more more!

i can see Devon Seas isnt going to have some strong competiton in the upcoming months!

fantastic work! keep up the goodness! :thumbsup: :cheer:

[big bro fan]

I will post the next part later today when Rula Mel's mum enters the soap.

[big bro fan]

1 MELS HOUSE INTERN MORNING

SHEILA HAS JUST FINISHED LISTHENING TO MEL

Sheila: i'll get him for this
Mel: suppose
Sheila: does your dad know
Mel: he's away on business
Sheila: when does he get back tommorow or
Mel: tommorow
Sheila: he's in for a shock
Mel: why

2 PUB INTERN MORNING

THE PUB IS QUIET THE DOOR SLOWLY OPENS AND STEVE IS NO LONGER ALONE

Steve: you
Rula: [puts out her ciggarette] hello darling

[big bro fan]

Here is some news for surfs up fans. we are about five episodes away from the season finale then we will be back for season two. im going to take a two week break might post some little scripts in between. season finale will have some major major news that will effect everyone.

[big bro fan]

1 PUB INTERN MORNING

RULA IS SAT PERFECTLY CALM STEVE IS SHOCKED.

Rula: why so supprised to see me
Steve: it's been a while
Rula: it has
Steve: i can never remember why you left
Rula: because of you
Steve: oh yeah you needed money so you borrowed from me could'nt pay it back slept with me and then came along Maria
Rula: how is she
Steve: OUR daughter is fine yet she thinks i'm her boyfriend
Rula: you make me sick
Steve: and then of course Mike left you and you left for England
Rula: i've put all that behind me
Steve: so what brings you here
Rula: i have reason to believe that the same thing that happned to me is happening to Mel
Steve: yeah like mother like daughter
Rul: well be carefull because when i tell Mike you will be sorry.

[big bro fan]

Here is a little spoiler for season two Max comes back and is now engaged to a local well known character any guess's

[big bro fan]

1 MELS HOUSE INTERN MORNING

SHEILA IS COMFORTING MEL

Sheila: it's going to be allright
Mel: i want my mum
Rula: i'm here darling
Mel: mum
Sheila: Rula

[Tannie]

sounds good and you are brilliant at this

[big bro fan]

Thanks Jake luva i will post some more of it soon.

[Skits]

just caught up. it's brill. has mike met his match with rula? post more soon please.

[big bro fan]

i will try and post some more tonight as it is so near the finale then i'm taking a break to wright big brother but i will be back about march april maybe.

[big bro fan]

Ok people tommorow night before soapboards big brother of course is the season finale extra long edition so don't miss it. Wont be back till after Celebrity Big brother as i need a break to come up with better and more storylines. Season two will be back about Easter maybe.

[big bro fan]

1 MELS HOUSE INTERN MORNING

MEL SHEILA AND RULA ARE SAT EATING BREAKFAST

Mel: so glad your here
Rula: it's nice to see you again
Sheila: so what you got planned for today
Rula: business
Sheila: what kind
Rula: business

RULA LOOKS AT THE CLOCK

Rula: must go

2 MIKES CLUB INTERN MORNING

MIKE GOES INTO HIS CLUB

Person: good trip Mike
Mike: not bad how is everything
Person: fine.......oh there's someone i your office

MIKE HEADS TOWARDS HIS OFFICE THE DOOR OPENS SLOWLY AND WE SEE RULA SAT AT THE DESK

Mike; Rula
Rula: Mike

3 PUB INTERN MORNING

MARIA AND STEVE ARE OPENING THE BAR

Maria: so nice to be back
Steve: good to have you back
Maria: oh i'm going out with the kid's
Steve: anywhere nice
Maria: pictures
Steve: it's nice that they can accept my girlfriend
Maria: i know how you feel

4 CLUB INTERN AFTERNOON

MIKE IS SAT CONFUSED AT HIS DESK

Mike: so you've come back to see our daughter after you left her at the age of five because you were having another man's baby
Rula: yeah
Mike: rubbish
Rula: if you can't accept the truth
Mike: so why you realy here
Rula: well it's Mel she's in trouble
Mike: what's wrong what's happned
Rula: it's what happned to me before i left
Mike: what happned
Rula: well when we got together and married everyone thought i was a gold digger so i thought if i had cash of my own so i went to Steve. he had me doing job's etc for him and he payed me eventually i wanted out and he said if i slept with him i'd be fine he would leave me alone.........but i had his baby which he took to spain and left her there with friends. well anyway i left after the birth and Steve went back two years ago and now Maria Steve's daughter thinks that there dating and now Mel wanted money she went to steve he turned her into a prostitute that's why she had ago at Viv because she was paid and now she is pregnant with his child

THERE IS SILENCE

Mike: i'll kil him
Rula; MIKE

5 PUB INTERN NIGHT

PUB IS PACKED MIKE COMES BURSTING IN

Mike: i'll kill ya
Steve: what
Mike: you know what

MIKE SMASHES A GLASS AROUND STEVE'S HEAD AND DRAGS HIM OUTSIDE

6 THE BEACH EXTERN NIGHT

MIKE HAS STEVE IN A HEADLOCK ON THE SOUND

Mike: i could have you killed right now but i'll save you till you explain yourself
Steve: what do you want to know
Rula: Mike
Steve: oh here we go what have you said
Rula: the truth now leave Mel alone
Steve: shut up you stupid b***h

HE SMACKS RULA OUTCOLD

Mike: so [mike pulls out a gun]
Steve: i did it for revenge
Mike: for what
Steve: taking Lisa away
Mike: that was an acident
Steve: as if [Steve also produces a gun]

7 PUB INTERN NIGHT

SOMEONE IS CLEANING UP THE GLASS

Mel: has anyone seen my dad
Person: on the beach with Steve
Mel: oh no

DAVID GRAYS THIS YEARS LOVE PLAYS IN THE BACKGROUND AS WE SEE MEL RUNNING IN SLOW MOTION TOWARDS THE BEACH

8 THE BEACH EXTERN NIGHT

MIKE AND STEVE BOTH HAVE GUNS POINTED AT EACH OTHER

Steve: we both deserve to die
Mike: i agree

JUST AS MEL REACHES THE BEACH SHE SEES HER MUM KNOCKED OUT ON THE SAND AND WE HEAR MIKE WHISPER SORRY AS THE TRIGGER PULLS AND STEVE FALLS TO THE FLOOR DEAD

Mel: nooooooooo i want him to raise my baby
MIKE REALISES WHAT HE HAS DONE
Mike: night angel

MIKE SHOOTS HIMSELF IN THE HEAD HE IS DEAD MEL TEARS FALLS TO THE FLOOR WE HEAR DAVIDS GRAY THIS YEARS LOVE IN THE BACKGROUND AS WE FADE OUT.


Well it's been a great season writing it brought a tear to my eye :crying: so season two a few things to think about

will Rula move back full time
will Maria finds out her stepkids are her brothers and sisters
Will mel be here when the soap comes back- i can exclusivly reveal at the start of the season tow mel will not be in the start as she is with Max in Melborne

also we focus on all the other characters

see you about easter for season two

[big bro fan]

Please let me know what you think and any ideas for season two.

[big bro fan]

Please let me know what you think cause no one has replied yet.

[Bryan]

a dramatic finale... my words of widsom are to go on character devlopment rather than storyline lead drama...it makes better drama in the end and we feel for characters a lot more when weve got to know them...

sorry i didnt reply sooner but been busy with sbbb and the new series of devon seas, but keep up the good work and look forward to reading season 2 come easter time

[big bro fan]

cheers bb means a lot season two is going to be so much better.