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Crimson Tears:(
06-01-2006, 19:38
This is just my random unrealistic script, enjoy anyone who wants to read it.

Dennis felt the life slowly drain from his body, it was all getting cloudy, he was dying, after all he'd said to Sharon he was leaving her for good. His eyes suddenly shot open and he looked around, he was no longer in Albert Square.

'Hello son, long time no see.'

He turned round and stared at wonder towards the figure of his dead father. 'You never stay dead do you?'

'Arn't you going to ask where you are?' Den smirked.

'With you, so obviously hell. I'm doomed to spend it with you.' Dennis felt a surge of anger rush through him, he needed to be with Sharon.

'I'm supposed to help you,' Den's eyes filled with amusement 'Be your guardian angel.'

'I'm not that desperate' said Dennis, 'but if i'm ever am, i'll call you. Right now i need to know how to get out of this place and get back to Sharon.'

'There is no way out. Only an option.'

Dennis sighed and shot Den a glare, 'What are you on about? I didn't order the ghost of xmas past, what next? Is Pauline going to come along and show me tiny Tim?'

'I'm going to give you some glimpses Dennis on how it could of been, if you hadn't been so pig headed. My princess is suffering because of you. I would like nothing more but to see you rot here, but they have other plans, you're going back to a different past.'

'What are you talking about? Chrissie hit you too hard with the door stop?'

'Mind your tongue boy,' Den smirked 'It's time, i'd love to chat but i've got a certain woman to haunt.'

Dennis stepped forwards to open his mouth 'what are you-' The world went black.

Colours were swirling across his eyes, head throbbing dully.

'Dennis, you getting up? Sharon and Tom need some help with the decorating.' Dennis's eyes shot open, he looked around, this wasn't his room, this wasn't his house, and that was Vicki's voice.

Chloe-Elise
06-01-2006, 19:42
Fab start, please post more asap :D

Jada-GDR
06-01-2006, 22:06
i like this! very different post more soon please

squillyfer
08-01-2006, 19:36
i loike this do more soon

di marco
08-01-2006, 20:56
this is great, please post some more soon! :D

samantha nixon
08-01-2006, 22:04
this is realy good

Skits
09-01-2006, 14:25
this is brill. please post more.

sheilamarie
09-01-2006, 16:30
this is fab more asap

Jada-GDR
09-01-2006, 21:59
please do some more!

Crimson Tears:(
20-01-2006, 22:59
Cheers everyone :)

Dennis shakely rose from his bed as Vicki came bounding into his room.

'Come on Dennis,' she muttered, 'We've got heaps to do.'

Dennis stood frozen staring at his half sister 'what's going on?'

'We're decorating, you know, in time for Sharon and Tom's wedding.' smiled Vicki brightly.

'Tom?'

'You know, one who's about to marry your sister.'

Dennis felt a tight feeling in his stomach. 'She's already married.'

Vicki laughed, 'Who to, you?'

'Is Den playing an early April fools joke?' muttered Dennis.

'Dennis, our father's been dead for years.'

He paused, knowing about Den the ticking time bomb in Spain. 'What's Tom like?'

'You've been living in the same house as him for two years.' She rolled her eyes.

'Someone mention my name?' A dark haired man stood in the door way.

Dennis glared, there was only room for one man in Sharon's life and that was him. He loved Sharon and this man was stopping him from being with her and still he had no idea what was going on. He paused feeling a sharp pain in his heart, he was going to find out what was going on.

di marco
21-01-2006, 10:02
wow this is really good, cant wait to read the next part! :D

Chloe-Elise
21-01-2006, 10:25
Fab, more asap please :D

sheilamarie
21-01-2006, 16:35
wow brill hun more asap

big bro fan
21-01-2006, 20:14
Brilliant please post more soon

myra129
21-01-2006, 23:29
This is brilliant, more plz :)

squillyfer
22-01-2006, 17:10
cool more soon

Jada-GDR
22-01-2006, 19:38
you've got the characters just right! please do more asap :cheer: