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feelingyellow
03-04-2006, 21:47
YAY! THEY'RE GETTING BACK TOGETHER! THEY'RE GETTING BACK TOGETHER! :cheer: Come on! Come on! Yay YAY yay! More MORE more! :p :cheer:

Bree
04-04-2006, 13:15
wow fab part yay jake and chrissie kissed :wub: more soon xxxx

Emma-Lou
04-04-2006, 15:46
:cheer: It's really good i hope Jake and Chrissie get back together more soon please.

Angeldelight
04-04-2006, 18:49
WOW wow wow... :cheer: have just read the fic from the beginning and it's absolutely AMAZING... :bow:

pretty pretty pweaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee post more soon i'm cvompletely hooked on this fic :thumbsup:

Amber
04-04-2006, 22:00
Thanks everyone x

It Ain't Easy
Forty One
Chrissie pulled away, realising what she'd just done.
"I'm so sorry. I don't know what I was thinking. Let's just forget it ever happened." She said as she walked back into the Vic.

"Have you seen Chrissie?" Jake asked Alfie.
"I saw her go out there." He replied, pointing to the hall.
Jake walked in. Chrissie was sitting on the stairs, her face buried in her hands.
"Hiding from someone?" Jake said after a while.
She looked up.
"I'm sorry about what happened. I don't know what made me do it. But at least you know how I feel about you." She said, still regretting their kiss.
"And I feel the same."
She blinked.
"What?"
"I feel the same way about you, that you do about me."
"Really?"
He nodded and sat down beside her. She pulled him close and kissed him hungrily.

Bree
04-04-2006, 23:28
wow fab part hun yay jake and chrissie are so sweet :wub: more asap xxx

Layne
05-04-2006, 09:40
He nodded and sat down beside her. She pulled him close and kissed him hungrily.

now that is what i like to hear :p This is fab babes do more soon please x

Tannie
05-04-2006, 10:22
Oh wow this is brilliant please let chrissie stay with Jake and not go back to greece.

Amber
05-04-2006, 17:13
:( It's near the end. Only a couple more parts.

Amber
05-04-2006, 21:57
Thanks everyone :wub:

It Ain't Easy
Forty Two
They broke away, breathless. He grinned and stroked her cheek.
"You're so beautiful." He said softly.
"Thankyou." She whispered.
She stood up.
"Do you wanna go somewhere else? It's a bit loud here." She asked.
He nodded 'ok' and lead her out the back.
"Where do you want to go?" He said, slipping his hand into hers.
"I don't know.. Do you want to go back to yours'?"
"Yeah, if you want to."
She smiled and squeezed his hand. He pulled her close and kissed her passionately. She smiled once again.

Tannie
05-04-2006, 22:24
Yesssssssssssss woohoo she better not be goin back to greece well she can't anyway as she has just declared her love for Jake! Will there be a sequal? noooo it can't be that soon:(:(:(:(:(

Layne
06-04-2006, 10:31
"You're so beautiful." He said softly.

She smiled and squeezed his hand. He pulled her close and kissed her passionately. She smiled once again.

:wub: :wub: Awww how cute!!! Amber this is fab, i can't believe its nearly over :crying: You better be doing a sequel or i will huny you down and kill you! Love ya honey! x

Angeldelight
06-04-2006, 15:59
:wub: awwwwwwwwww how cute are they? :wub:
it can't be nearly over *horror stricken*
pweaaaseeeeee post more soon... then you can do a sequel and a prequel :cheer:

Layne
06-04-2006, 16:47
pweaaaseeeeee post more soon... then you can do a sequel and a prequel :cheer:


:lol: What the hell is a prequel, is it real or have you just made that up! >?

Angeldelight
06-04-2006, 17:53
:lol: What the hell is a prequel, is it real or have you just made that up! >?

:hmm: i wondering whether i should answer that insulting question :lol: it's the story before this one. You have a prequel or prologue, than the story your writing, then a sequel

Layne
06-04-2006, 18:34
:hmm: i wondering whether i should answer that insulting question :lol: it's the story before this one. You have a prequel or prologue, than the story your writing, then a sequel


Its not insulting its just i know what you are like when you haven't taken your pills! :rotfl: JOKES she isn't really on pills! :p
Oh okay i get you! Wuboo! :p

Angeldelight
06-04-2006, 18:41
Its not insulting its just i know what you are like when you haven't taken your pills! :rotfl: JOKES she isn't really on pills! :p
Oh okay i get you! Wuboo! :p

Ssssshhh they don't have to know about my little... problem :lol:

Post more fic soon i think i'm get withdrawwl symptoms :angel:

di marco
06-04-2006, 20:43
fab! :D for a second there i thought you were going to split jake and chrissie up, but glad theyre together! more soon please, cant wait

Amber
06-04-2006, 21:54
Just so you know I won't post the sequel for like a month. I do need a break from it! Thanks for the comments again. They're much appreciated :)

It Ain't Easy
Forty Three
Chrissie and Jake stood were stood in his room kissing. Their lips parted as he started to unzip her dress.
"Wait. Stop." Chrissie said suddenly.
"You don't want to do this, do you?" Jake said, a little disappointed.
"No, no I do. It's just my hair's caught in the zip."
He fiddled with it until her hair was free. He continued to unzip it. She let her dress fall to the floor. He kissed the soft curve of her shoulder. She moaned and turned round. She began to unbutton his shirt, kissing his chest as she went. He pulled her into a passionate embrace and kissed her gently.

This isn't the last part btw.

Layne
06-04-2006, 21:56
Ohhhhhhhhhh :wub: someone is going to have a good night!
Oh okay honey we will just all have to find somehting else to do for a month *starts tapping fingers & Whistling*
This has been amazing well done, but is there still more to come?!?

You just edited you post! :p More soon then :wub: x

feelingyellow
07-04-2006, 15:45
Fabolous fabolous fabolous parts huns! Yay yay yay, let them stay together together together! :D More more more! I love it so much, it's fab it's fab it's fab! :D Sorry in hyper mood mood mood! :p
Lol ok ... but 28 days EXACTLY 28 days no more! :p

di marco
07-04-2006, 20:05
great! :D glad jake and chrissie are together, i hope den dont come and ruin it! more soon please, cant wait

Amber
07-04-2006, 21:57
Thankyou for reading everyone! This is for you lot! x

It Ain't Easy
Forty Four
Chrissie lay with Jake's arms around her waist, never letting her go. He kissed her neck gently. Chrissie's phone began to ring. She dipped her hand into her bag and fished it out. 'Sharon calling' was displayed on the screen. She answered it.
"Hi Sharon."
"What are you doing? You're meant to be here at the party."
"Well, before you phoned I was lying in bed with the man I've just had sex with.." She said, annoyed.
She blinked at herself. She'd just said it, hadn't she? She opened her mouth to apologize when she heard Sharon's giggling in the background.
"You know you really should think before you speak Chrissie." She said, still laughing.
"Yeah, yeah."
"Anyway who was it with."
"No one." She whispered. Jake kissed her neck so softly it tickled. "Stop it Jake!"
"Oh so it's Mr Moon. I always knew you'd get together."
"Yeah well.. Do you mind? I mean I don't really want to come back.."
"No, no. It's fine. I'm sure Jake will be very happy to have your company!"
Chrissie pressed the end call button. She turned around and kissed him hungrily.

She lay with her head resting on his shoulder. He stroked her hair. She closed her eyes. It was just silent. But it was nice. Like no one would disturb them. She breathed a sigh of relief. Den was stupid. She hated him sometimes. But she wasn't thinking about him she was thinking about Jake. How he'd stood by her and reasured her that everything was going to be ok. And he was right. Everything was just fine. No, it wasn't fine.

It was perfect.

Bree
08-04-2006, 00:20
ohh wow that was fab hun loved jakissie :wub: but i cant help but feel a littel sorry for den :eek: cant belive i just said that :p xxx

di marco
08-04-2006, 08:43
fab! :D wow that was great, chrissie and jake are together yay!

Layne
08-04-2006, 10:53
It was perfect.

Well lets just hope it stays that way! :wub: Fab honey love it ! xxxxxx

Tannie
08-04-2006, 12:02
wow it's really good i love it i always have loved this script!

Angeldelight
08-04-2006, 13:44
It was perfect.


Let's hope and pray to god with our finger crossed that it will last FOREVER and EVER and EVER and EVER :wub:

absolutely amaxzing hun :bow: pweaseeeeeeee post more soon

feelingyellow
08-04-2006, 20:17
but i cant help but feel a littel sorry for den :eek: cant belive i just said that :p xxx

:eek: You on those pills again Breeza :p

Fabolous part Amber hunni, so sweet - so perfect! Don't go and ruin it pleee-ase! :bow: More! :cheer: :cheer: :cheer:

Amber
08-04-2006, 20:22
I might start the sequel on here soon. I need to write the first 5 or so parts first though. It shouldn't take too long.

feelingyellow
08-04-2006, 20:38
I might start the sequel on here soon. I need to write the first 5 or so parts first though. It shouldn't take too long.

:eek: Yay yay yay! :cheer: Now now now :p OK, I'll be a little more patient... :p
Was that the last part before then lol ...
Sequel sounds so good... but that was the perfect ending... you're plotting evil stuff aren't you :p

Tannie
08-04-2006, 20:38
Yay can't wait till the sequel:p

Amber
08-04-2006, 21:13
you're plotting evil stuff aren't you :p
Yeah I guess so. It's going to be depressing stuff. My friend gave me an idea and when she told me it, I cried :( and I sort of stole it and it's the main part of the fic.

But on a lighter note. I'm writing the sequel right now :) x

Amber
09-04-2006, 17:40
If I post the first part now, I won't post alot this week but if you can wait for two weeks I'll post one a day. What do you think I should do?

Amber
09-04-2006, 21:04
I'm just gonna post it now.

The sequel is called 'Addicted'.

feelingyellow
09-04-2006, 21:55
I don't mind if it's depressing... just a happy ending hehe! :D
Yeah go on post it now... I might be able to survive for 2 weeks! :p
Ooo Addicted that's a Kelly Clarkson song love that, I see your a Kelly fab by your sig lol :D