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id thought id start my own script please repliy i want ya to be honest
Jake woke up his head banging and two empty bottles of vodka on the table he used achole to try and get rid of his pain but no matter how much he drunk he couldn’t get rid of this sick scary feeling what if Danny had never came back what if they hadn’t been fighting if only Danny hadn’t walked out in the road if only Phil hadn’t been driving at 45 miles a hour if only Phil hadn’t been driving at all then maybe Phil and Danny would still be alive he got up off the sofa and went and threw the empty vodka bottles in the bin in the kitchen he herd some one coming down the stairs
Dawn: alright babe
Jake: no not really
Dawn: you didn’t come to bed last night
Jake: sorry
Tears slid down jakes face he couldn’t say that Danny was gone if he didn’t say it might not be true It might just be some bad dream that seems so real that’s how Jake felt but then dawn said it
Dawn: I take it they ave switched the machine off then
Jake: yea yeah they have
Dawn: wh what time did they
Jake: one thirty this morning
Dawn: Jake im sorry but at least he’s not suffering any more
Jake: yeah I know
Dawn: look I wont go to work today ill stay home with you
Jake: no no its okay
Dawn: no I don’t mind
Jake: to be honest dawn I just wanna be on my own
Dawn: oh okay then so ill see you tonight then
Jake: yea ill come to the Vic a bit later
Dawn: are you sure your up to it
Jake: well I got to face it some time it might as well be now
Dawn: ill see you then
Dawn kissed him on the cheek and walked out the door and headed towards the Vic
And left Jake on his own Jake wiped his eyes and went to go and get changed he walked towards the stairs he took a deep breath and went up stairs to take a shower a couple of hours later the phone rang
Jake: hello
No one answered all Jake could hear was this person breathing
Jake: hello who is this
Mystery person: -whispering- I said you’d forget me
Jake: what who is this hello
The phone line went dead Jake put the phone down and grabbed his coat from the rack he walked towards the Vic as he walked threw the doors of the Vic every one fell silent as Jake walked towards the bar he could feel there eyes burning into him as he reached the bar dawn was there holding out a pint she pored
Dawn: hey babe -she kissed him-
Jake: hi
Dawn: what took you so long
Jake: nothing I was just on the phone to the funeral director
Dawn: when is the
Jake: Thursday
Dawn: well that was quick
Jake: yea lucky weren’t we
Dawn: Jake don’t be like that
Jake: well how do you want me to be my little brothers dead
Jake went to walk out the door he bumped into some one not looking to see who it was
Jake: sorry
Jake then looked up to see the one person he’d thought he’d never see again
Jake: Chrissie
Chrissie:hello Jake you miss me
Chloe-Elise
04-01-2006, 09:19
Fab start, more soon please :D
she's back woohoo brill hun do more soon!!
sheilamarie
04-01-2006, 14:07
wow this is fab aww poor jakey crying you no i can see that in my head :( more asap hun
oh no! just as jake and dawn are together chirssie returns!? What happens next!? I want more!!!!
Fab start. More asap please:)
fantastic!!!!she's back
more soon
xxx
squillyfer
04-01-2006, 17:12
oooh this looks interesting more soon
hi guys thanks to all for the replieys here part two
Jake: Chrissie what are you doing here
Chrissie: long story
Jake: you haven’t done a runner have you
Chrissie: no
Jake: well what you doing here then
Chrissie: um well my new brief came in to see me and said I should try for a appeal for unfair sentencing I thought it was a total waste of time but then I told the whole story about Zoë every thing about her baby and getting him there that night Sharon clearing it up and him well try to insert me into the fruit machine and that it was a big mess and that I didn’t mean to kill him and then the judge changed my sentence from 10 years to 3 time that had all ready been served
Jake: can we get out of here and talk back at the house cause any minuet Peggy’s going to
Peggy: WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE
Jake: to late
Chrissie: hello Peggy nice to see you to
Peggy: get outta my pub
Chrissie: alright im going
Jake: come on Chrissie
The walked out for some reason the pain of Danny seemed to be dieing he couldn’t quite make out his reaction of Chrissies return was he angry happy upset he looked at her face smiling taking the Mick out of Peggy
Chrissie: who dose she think she is all that she says get out my pub
Jake: you sound just like her
Chrissie: well I don’t want to talk about Peggy so alife and nana they okay
Jake: alife left with Kat on Christmas day 3 years ago
Chrissie: oh sweet and nana
Jake: well nana passed away a month before alife left
Chrissie: oh Jake im sorry
Jake: no its okay
Chrissie: look I should of never came back im sorry look ill go
Jake: no no stay
Chrissie: only if your sure
Jake: yea im sure
Chrissie: so umm you and dawn are you to together now
Jake: yea we are where Im going to ask her to marry me
Chrissie heart sank she knew they could never be together but she didn’t want him to marry some one else but she played it cool as long as she was around him she could settle for just being his friend
Chrissie: that’s great news
Jake: so you got any where to stay
Chrissie: no no I haven’t
Jake: well you can stay here if you want
Chrissie: oh Jake id love
She gave him a big kiss on the cheek and hugged him just as dawn walked out the doors of the Vic
Dawn: what do you think your doing…………………
To be continued
squillyfer
04-01-2006, 17:44
oooh I smell trouble do more asap pleeeeeeaaaaaaase :)
uh oh i smell bitch fight lol
Chloe-Elise
04-01-2006, 18:19
Oooo fight! Brilliant, more asap please :)
OMG! I just read this and its fab i love it!
Jake is with dawn :(
Chrissie is back yey
Wonder what is gonna happen?
PLease post more i need more please please xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
post more soon!
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hi guys glad you like the story here part 3
Chrissie: dawn its not what you think
Dawn: what do I think
Chrissie: that me and Jake where
Dawn: where what kissing oh right so your where cleaning each others mouths out you little bitch
Jake: DAWN
Chrissie: its alright Jake I can fight my own battles
Dawn: yeah we all know you can you wore
Chrissie: who you calling a wore
Dawn: shut up bitch
Chrissie: I think you better just calm down
Dawn: please tell me your joking I catch you with your tongue stuck down my boyfriends neck and you tell me to calm down
Chrissie: look I don’t want to fight with you but if you wanna stand here and fight in the street im just about ready for it
Dawn: fine with me
Then dawn ran and Chrissie and grabbed her by her hair they stumbled into the road Chrissie was now on the ground and had dawn on top of her ripping her hair out
Chrissie: get her off me get her off me get her off me Jake
Dawn: your going to be low on teeth before your much older
Jake: stop stop stop stop it
Jake managed to get dawn off Chrissie she got up her nose was bleeding but she managed to split dawns lip
Dawn: that’s just for starters
Jake: dawn me and Chrissie aren’t back together I told her I was going to ask you to marry me
Dawn: wh what
Jake: that’s why she kissed me
Dawn: well why didn’t you say that
Chrissie: you didn’t give me a chance to breath let alone tell you I wasn’t snoging your boyfriend he said I could stay the night that’s all
Dawn: im sorry
Chrissie: it okay
Jake: well
Dawn: well what
Jake: will you marry me
Dawn: yeah I will
Jake: that brill
And with that he hugged dawn Chrissie smiled to the faces but all she rally wanted to do was poke dawns eyes out she loved Jake but she knew for cretin that it was over for good now ......
to be continued
squillyfer
04-01-2006, 21:10
aww poor chrissie maybe dawn could die in some freak weather accident or be kidnapped by pirates hint hint....
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor chrissie!
I soooooo miss her!
Your fic is fab and you most post more soon
Luv ya
Layne
xxxxx
sheilamarie
04-01-2006, 21:49
aww poor chrissie dawn :angry: please dont let jake and dawn get married more asap
Chloe-Elise
05-01-2006, 12:10
Noooooo Dawn and Jake cant get married! Fab, more asap :)
hey guys ill post more tonight here what will happen in part four
its christmas and jake gets chrissie a present
jake and dawn have a row and he leaves her on her own
jake gose home and chrissie there will there be kissing under the misoltoe
squillyfer
06-01-2006, 16:48
great cant wait
sheilamarie
06-01-2006, 16:56
chrissie and jake plz let them snog
squillyfer
08-01-2006, 19:36
please post more of this soon
Please post more soon hunnie i think it's brilliant well it's a jakissie script so it is to me lol.
Tanya
xxx
hi i will post more soon i promis its dedicated to tanya for my fab banner love ya
bree x.x.x.x.x.x.x
Heres part 4 guys sorry about the delay this is for Tanya for my fab banner and I have done part 5 ill post it tonight I promise
Dawn: only one days to the wedding now I cant wait can you
Jake: no then we can start our new life together
Dawn: yeah Jake I wanted to talk to you about after the wedding we cant have Chrissie living with us
Jake: have a heart dawn she’s no where else to go
Dawn: doesn’t she have any family
Jake: the only person she has left in the world is me and im not abandoning her like that
Dawn: no your right im sorry you always look out for her don’t you
Jake: yeah she’s my best friend
Jake suddenly felt like he’d just told a real big lie how could he be lying Chrissie was his best friend then Chrissie walked in Jake looked at her she looked so beautiful he shook his head to get rid of the feelings he was marrying dawn not Chrissie Chrissie was his past
Chrissie: I hope you too are making the most of your time together
Jake: why?
Chrissie: why he asks well tonight its her hen night and Christmas eve so tomorrow you’ll only see each other in the morning then she’s off to her mums for the night
Jake; well what’s the point in that?
Dawn: cause you cant see me before the wedding its bad luck
Jake: alright well we have got all afternoon together
Dawn: sorry babe im going to have to love you and leave you
Jake: why
Dawn: I got my shift at the Vic sorry babe ill see you 7 Chrissie
Chrissie: sure
And with that she got up and kissed Jake and left for the Vic
Chrissie: im tired
Jake: (laughing) you only work on a market stall
Chrissie: well im used to be pampered aren’t I
They both burst out with laughter then they caught eyes they both moved forward like they where going to kiss it felt so right but then so wrong but that’s when Chrissie came to her senses and pulled away
Chrissie: well I gotta get back to that stall
Jake: yeah and I gotta put the flowers on Danny’s grave
Chrissie: ill see tomorrow if I don’t see you today
Jake: yeah okay
And with that Chrissie grabbed her coat and left Jake didn’t know what to think of himself thank god Chrissie pulled back but he felt sort of rejected but you only feel like that when you love some one don’t you god maybe he was in love with Chrissie but he could do nothing about it now it was to late it was over he was going to marry dawn and that was that …………
Hope you like it I will post more tonight
Luv ya all
Bree x.x.x.x.x.x.x
brilliant hunni omg chrissie why did u pull away awwww thanks hun you've made my day i had a pretty crappy day. lol
Luv Tanya
xx
aww sorry about your day hunni but im sure the next bit will cheer you up wink wink
luv bree xxxxx
Chrissie why did you pull away!
More soon this is fab! x
sheilamarie
11-01-2006, 18:03
wow hunni this is brill why did chrissie pull away i hope im guessing wink mean somthing we all want lol
luv sheila
aww sorry about your day hunni but im sure the next bit will cheer you up wink wink
luv bree xxxxx
yeah!!! lol please post it soon!!!!
luv Tanya xxxxxxxx
when will it be up lol
luv ya
Tanya xxxx
ill post more tonight hun i promise id just like to say thanks to all ya for reading my story im sure you will all like the next bit wink wink
luv ya
bree x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x
yay lol kk
luv ya
Tanya
xxxx
heres part 5 hope you like im sure you will
dawn: pretty dead in here tonight aint it
chrissie: yeah it is well we will wait for the others then were head off to scarlet
dawn: okay
about ten minets later the other guest arived and they all headed off to scarlet
jake was at the house with alife who had come back for the wedding
alife:come on jake i have waitd less time for a bird
jake: coming well what do i look like
alife: you look like a girl as well
jake: oi
jake hit him playfully
alfie: only joking cus so you looking forward to being a old married man then
jake: yeah i think so
alife: what do you mean i think so
jake: im having secounds thoughts alife
alife: oh come on jake you asked her to marry you not the other way round
jake: i know
alife: this hasent got anything to do with chrissie has it jake
jake: no
alife: come on jake your talking to me here
jake: i still love her alife
alife: have you told her this
jake: no i nearly kissed her
alife: jake
jake: i know alife but she pulled away ok i think i got the message
alife lets get to the vic then
and with that they both went over to the vic mean while at scarlet dawn was plarsted
dawn: you mum this women sittig next to me she has been the best friend a girl could ask for
chrissie: stop it now your making me blush
dawn: no no i just want to raise a toast to my good friend chrissie
sudenly dawn threw up all down chrissies dress
chrissie: ewwww
rosie: aww look chrissie she ruined your dress
chrissie: no big deal ill got home and change into another dress and come back
and with that chrissie left
jake: alife i think im going to go home
alife: ok look do you want me to come with you
jake: no you stay here and have a drink
and with that jake left the pub and went back to the house and was greeted by chrissie
jake: hi
chrissie: ohh hi jake
jake: wow you look amazing
chrissie: thanks you dont looks so bad your self
they caught eye contact again they both smiled
jake: that dress looks real good on you
chrissie: thanks
jake: but do you know where it will look better
chrissie: where
jake: my bedroom floor
chrissie: jake are you saying what i think your saying
jake: damn right i am i want you chrissie
chrissie: jake i need to think about this
jake: yeah look im sorry
chrissie: i thought about it
and with that they started to snog and they both ran up the stairs .......
hope you liked it i will post more soon
luv ya all
bree x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x
awww brilliant yeh hopefully they will get back together!
Luv Tanya
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glad you like it ill post more soon guys love ya
bree x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x
heres part sixs guys
Chrissie woke up the next morning in jakes bed she quickly got up and got dressed Jake awoke to see Chrissie fully clothed
Jake: morning sexy
Chrissie: morning Jake
Jake: so we gotta tell dawn and every one were back together
Chrissie: yeah Jake about that I don’t think that’s a good idea
Jake: what are you on about
Chrissie: I don’t think you should call of the wedding
Jake: Chrissie I got to I don’t love dawn I love you
Chrissie began to cry her eyes slowly dripping with tears
Chrissie: no you don’t
Jake: oh yea I do chrissie
Chrissie: no you cant not after what I did
Jake: chrissie I see past all that
Chrissie: how can you though I murdered him in cold blood I danced all over his grave
Jake: chrissie are you forgetting about Andy that night I just sat there and watched it happen I could of stopped it but I didn’t
Chrissie: its not the same Jake you didn’t kill him
Jake: yea but I could of stopped it you you had to do it he was going to kill you it was self defense
Chrissie: its not just den Jake she can give you something I can never give you
Jake: and what’s that
Chrissie: a family a child a baby im too old now Jake
Jake: chrissie if that’s what you worried about don’t be we can adobed
Chrissie: Jake get real there never gonna let me adobet are they
Jake: chrissie I don’t need all that when I got you I love you
Chrissie: yea well I don’t love you
Jake: what
Chrissie: yea I don’t love you it was just sex
Jake: no no I no you don’t mean it
Chrissie: oh yes I do Jake we have drifted apart im not in love with you any more
Jake: fine but im not getting married to her no way
Chrissie: Jake you say that you love me yea
Jake: chrissie you know I do
Chrissie: well if you do marry her have a family
Jake: fine I will bye chrissie I take it ill see you tomorrow
Chrissie: yeah you will bye Jake
And with that she left the room when she closed that door she collapsed in floods of tears she loved Jake so much but she could never give him what he wanted a family
squillyfer
15-01-2006, 18:16
awww poor chrissie poor jake I have no sympathy for dawn :p
noooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!! you will make her changed her mind!! she is not to old for Jake!!!!!
Awww poor chrissie, she loves jake :wub: more soon x
It had finally arrived the day of the wedding Chrissie woke up that morning and ran past Jake and into the bath room and threw up what was wrong with her she felt numb it was properly just because of the wedding her one true love was marring someone else the thought of that made her want to be sick alone but she knew it wasn’t that she splashed some cold water on her face and made her way down the stairs and greeted Jake in the kitchen
Chrissie: morning
Jake: is it
Chrissie: oh Jake don’t be like that
Jake: oh im sorry Chrissie how am I soused to be you broke my heart
Chrissie: I know and im sorry
Jake: yea well too little too late
Chrissie: oh Jake please don’t hate me
Jake: hate you I love you but you don’t feel the same about me do you
And with that Jake got up and left the room how wrong Jake was Chrissie loved him with all her heart she made her way up the stairs she needed to get going but something stopped her he ran to her diary
Chrissie: oh my god its today
Most of Albert square turned up for wedding he all made there way into the church Jake looked threw the crowed nope she weren’t there Chrissie was no where to be seen
Jake walked over to demi who was also a brides maid
Jake: demi did Chrissie show this morning
Demi: no she didn’t why you asking for any way
Jake: oh no It don’t matter
Jake felt sick he knew Chrissie would have done a runner that’s it she was gone he would never properly see her again he walked away from the crowed and round to the back of the church he slowly broke down in tears she was gone his soul mate was gone forever suddenly he felt a hand on his solder it was alife
Alife: we gotta go into the church now mate
Jake: yeah ok
Alife: jakey boy are you alright
Jake: yea im fine just cant believe im getting married
And with that they both made there way into the church about two minuets later the car arrived it was dawn as she walked up the isle Jake looked at her she looked beautiful but she weren’t Chrissie about half way though the ceremony the vicar came to the part of the wedding every bride dreaded
Vicar: I ask you to speak now or forever hold their peace
Suddenly the doors of the church swung open
Chrissie: I object
Dawn: Chrissie
Rosie: Chrissie
Jake: Chrissie
Chrissie: he cant marry her
Dawn: and why the hell not
Chrissie: because im pregnant with his baby
sheilamarie
15-01-2006, 21:29
hiya just caught up wow fab more soon
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww woohoo up you dawn she pregnant with his baby!! I knew this was to goo to be tue like it's brill hun luv ya xxxx Tanya
yay!!!!!!!!! more soon its fab
brill! i'm delighted - dawn's not good enough for jake.
hehe yey she objected!!! hehe!
Now by law the vicar can't carry on!!! :cheer:
awwww jakissie baby :wub:
More soon x
squillyfer
16-01-2006, 17:53
Yay that was brilliant do more soon im getting addicted to this script
ohh thanks you guys i love reading your replys here it is part 7
Dawn: your sick in the head go on Jake tell her to buger off
Chrissie: im not sick in the head on Christmas eve me and Jake slept together now im pregnant
Dawn: your obsessed with him you just cant handle that me and him are together tell her Jake
Jake: dawn im so sorry but its true I love Chrissie
Jake walked up to Chrissie who was shaking
Jake: so your pregnant wow but I thought
Chrissie: so did I
Jake: but are you sure have you taken a pregnancy test ?
Chrissie: I didn’t think about that Jake cores I have
Jake: so where gonna have a baby
Chrissie: looks that way don’t it
Suddenly that passionately started to kiss every one gasped as the mouths touched
Dawn: oh im sorry do you too wanna be alone
Chrissie and Jake broke apart and looked at dawn who burst into tears Chrissie couldn’t help but feel guilty
Dawn: ohh no Jake don’t stop don’t stop on the account that its our wedding day
Jake: dawn im so sorry but I love Chrissie
Chrissie: well I love you too
Dawn: Chrissie you say your pregnant
Chrissie: I am
Dawn: well not for much longer
And with that dawn went to run at Chrissie but alife grabbed so she could not hurt the pregnant Chrissie
Dawn: let me go im gonna kill her
Alife: I think you should just calm down darling
Mickey: don’t tell her to calm down after what your pig of a cosins just told her
Kat: don’t talk to alife like that
Dawn: and who asked you any way
And with that a fight broke out with everyone fighting Chrissie and Jake both snuck out the back giggling to them self’s
Jake: you know I really thought you where gone
Chrissie: do you wanna no something jake im never gonna leave you againg I love more then I can say
Jake: well why don’t you give it ago
Chrissie: oi watch it you cheeky git or your gonna get a slap
Jake: well it was worth a try
Chrissie: jake please tell me im not dreaming that this gonna last forever
Jake: this is gonna last forever
Chrissie: well jugging the vicars still alive you can always go back and get married
Jake: Chrissie dawns a sweet girl and I like her but nothing compares to you
Chrissie: oh jake you don’t know how long I have waited to hear you say that
And with that they leaned forward and passionately kissed each other and then they walked off hand in hand back to walford to start their new life together
thats not the end ill post more soon luv ya all
bree x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x
ohhhhb yeah they are bk togeter omg thanks!
Luv Ya Tanya
x.x.x.x.
ive just read it all and its really really good!
squillyfer
16-01-2006, 22:34
yay that was good do more soon tell you what here's the deal. You post another bit of this and I will do the epilogue for Keepsakes :)
squillyfer
16-01-2006, 22:37
ok deal I'd say that was fair wouldnt you
yea ill post more tonight :)
squillyfer
17-01-2006, 00:24
ooooh I'm dissapointed in you where is it :angry: not really LOL :)
squillyfer
17-01-2006, 00:27
thankyou just posted my half of the deal
ok ill post mine in 15 mins promise :)
squillyfer
17-01-2006, 00:33
Ok but I have to go sleeps now. School in the morning, dreaded P.E so I will reply tomorrow when I get back ok. I'm sure it will be great. Night night
hey guys here part 8 ( heres my part of the deal sqillyfer )
Jake awoke early the next morning he turned and looked at Chrissie sleeping next to him he started to fiddling with one of her curls she looked so peace full wow this was it he knew that this happiness was going to last forever
Chrissie: stop fiddling with my hair
Jake: sorry
Chrissie: and stop saying sorry ok
Jake: oh sorry Chrissie I did that one on purpose
Chrissie: yeah I know you did
Jake: so what are you going to do today
Chrissie: pretty much what im doing now
Jake: hey why don’t you take your self off shopping
Chrissie: Jake what is the point in going shopping in a couple of months im not going to fit into it am I
Jake: well maybe you should bye some bigger sizes
Chrissie: Jake do you know what I really don’t want to leave the house people are gonna hate me more so then they already do I think I just better stay for a couple years until the day I die
Jake: yeah I cant see that working
Chrissie: neither can I
Jake: how about me and you do lunch
Chrissie: yeah I like the sound of that
Jake: well go and get dressed then and where head over to the café
Chrissie: you dare Jake
Jake: alright then fargos
And with that Chrissie left jakes bed room to go and take a shower about 30 minuets later her and jake left for Fargos but bumped into Rosie and Mickey
Rosie: how you have the nerve to show your faces around here
Chrissie: Rosie I know you’re a miller and you lot only have 3 seconds memories but I live here
Rosie: you wicked cow
Chrissie: really and that’s the first time anyone’s ever said that too me
Mickey: just leave it mum she’s not worth it
Then Mickey and Rosie walked away leavening Chrissie and Jake alone Jake could see Chrissie was upset people thought she was so was strong but she was just really a scared little girl in side her eyes slowly started to water
Chrissie: see I told you Jake people would hate me
Jake: well their the millers Hun their excepted to hate us
Chrissie: I know but
Jake: look I was going to ask you this later but I might as well do it now
Chrissie: ask me what
Jake: will you marry me .......
Chrissie say yes you've got to!!!!
squillyfer
17-01-2006, 16:54
Just Say Yes!!!!
Oh have just caught up!¬!!! Say yes chrissie :wub: xxxx
Please do more soon hun i love this script!!!
Luv Ya
!x! Tanya !x!
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ill post more tomorrow hun
luv ya bree x.x.x.x.x.
sheilamarie
17-01-2006, 23:56
cant wait to read it
yeah more woohoo
luv ya
!x! Tanya !x!
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.:SpIcYsPy:.
18-01-2006, 18:02
Please reduce text talk jake_luva and jake.fan
Are you doing anymore anytime soon? And sorry for the text talk people *embarresed*
ill post more soon promise
heres the next part guys oh and sorry about the text talk
Chrissie: married you want us to get married
Jake: Chrissie I love you I wanna commit my self to you in front of the lord
Chrissie: ummm jakey
Jake: is that a no then
Chrissie: no
Jake: is that a maybe
Chrissie: maybe
Jake: is that a yes
Chrissie: yes
Jake: really
Chrissie: really really
Jake picked her up and swung her round people began to stare
Chrissie: im not really that hungry any more
Jake: I seem to of lost my appetite now
Chrissie: tell you what ill race you home
Jake: Chrissie your pregnant
Chrissie: doesn’t mean I cant run now dose it
Jake: god
And with that him and Chrissie ran as fast as they could backs to jakes place jake beat her by five seconds
Jake- I won
Chrissie: yeah only just
Jake: still beat
Chrissie: oh yeah
Jake: yeah
Chrissie: come on lets get in
Suddenly a black cab pulled up and out steped a pretty young women she had long blonde hair and bright green eyes she paid the cabbi with a ten pound note
Roxy: keep the change huh so this is the famous walford
She walked to Jake and Chrissie house and knocked on the door
Jake got up and answered it
Jake: hello
Roxy: umm hello
Jake: sorry do I know you
Roxy: no Im looking for chrissie watts
Jake: yeah shes hear CHRISSIE
Chrissie: what
Jake: come here
Chrissie: what is it
Roxy: hello chrissie
Chrissie: what the hell are you doing here
Roxy: aww now that’s no way to talk to your sister
ill post more soon promise luv ya all
bree x.x.x.x.x
yay so good
more soon
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squillyfer
24-01-2006, 18:09
oooh more soon!
heres the next part guys :D oh jakes so sweet in this part enjoy
Chrissie- you aren’t my sister you a lying cheating little
Roxy- umm wash your mouth out
Chrissie: umm Jake you don’t want to spend all day down the police stasion do you
Roxy- oh here we go drama queen act
Jake- no why
Chrissie- cause im about to kill her
Jake- Chrissie no
Jake grabbed Chrissie by the waist to stop her from running to beat up her sister
Chrissie- let me go
Jake- not until you calm down think of the baby
Roxy- baby what baby
Jake- she’s pregnant
Roxy- oh well its about time you gave me a little niece or nephew
Chrissie- this baby is having absolute nothing to do with you just stay away from me
And with that she shut the door in roxys face
Roxy- ok then be like that
And roxy made her way over to the queen vic as she entered the pub she saw Garry and minty staring at her
Garry- why hello
Roxy- umm hello
Minty- alright
Roxy- yeah
Garry- can we get you a drink
Roxy- yeah ill have a white wine please
Garry- Tracy can I have a white wine please
Tracy- sure Tracy handed roxy the drink Garry gave Tracy the right change
Garry- what your name then
Roxy- roxy
Garry- well im garry and this is
Minty- minty
Garry- well whats a single sexy girl doing here in the vic then
Roxy- im not
Garry- yeah you are pretty
Roxy- oh no sorry I know that I mean im not signal any way cheers for the drink
And she walked off leaving minty laughing at Garry’s failed attempt to charm her
Chrissie- ohh just leave it jake alright
Jake- no I wont leave not until you talk to me
Chrissie- there’s nothing to talk about im fine
Jake- Chrissie that little performance out there your not fine
Chrissie- ok we don’t get on
Jake- nooo really
Chrissie- jake its complicated
Jake- well chrissie we are ment to be getting married
Chrissie- I know and I cant wait but just drop it jake yeah
Jake- please chrissie don’t shut me out
Chrissie- im not jake I just
Jake- whats she done to you
Chrissie- nothing she hasent done anything
Jake- chrissie if you don’t tell me im gonna go and ask her
Chrissie- ok jake you really want to know
Jake- yeah I do
Chrissie well when me and den first go together
Jake- den
Chrissie- yeah well me and my brothers stoped talking they dident approve of den
Jake- ok
Chrissie- but roxy she was totally different she really took to den a little to much
Jake- meaning
Chrissie- meaning I found them in bed together
Jake- what
Chrissie- yeah my own sister
Chrissie slowly broke down in tears jake pulled her into him tight gently stroking her hair
Jake- shhh its ok
Chrissie- so now you know
Jake- yeah I do and chrissie ill look after you
And with that they both lent forward and shared a pasoint kiss
ill post more asap love you all
bree x.x.x.x
awww poor chrissie, more soon xxxxxxxx
awww Jakey is so sweet more soon please
aww thanks guys i love reading your replys here the next part
Roxy woke up in the bed of a handsome stranger she had picked up her she looked at him sleeping and quietly got her cloths on and snuck out the back but she bumped into and old face
Johnny- roxy
Roxy- geese you scared me
Johnny- deeps regrets
Roxy- long time no see
Johnny- too long
Roxy- so how much do you own of walford then
Johnny- I own a night club scarlet
Roxy- ohh that place yeah I herd its puts on a good show but I still prefer the circus
She went to walk off but johnny grabbed her arm
Johnny- can see you aint changed
Roxy- same here your still a sad little old man perfetic
She shook his hand off and headed towards Jake and Chrissie she knocked on the door Chrissie answered it as she went to shut it again roxy stopped her
Roxy- look I just wanna talk
Chrissie- yeah but I don’t wanna talk to you
Roxy- please five minuets
Chrissie- why should I
Roxy- I cant give you a reason Chrissie I just wanna say im sorry and can I come in please
Chrissie- you got ten minuets
She opened the door so roxy could come in and lead her into the living room
Roxy- well where should I start
Chrissie- how about im soooooo sorry for sleeping with den that’s always good
Roxy- yeah well I am Chrissie
Chrissie- err I don’t wanna hear it
Roxy- please you said five minuets
Chrissie- right what’s next then
Roxy- well with den it was I don’t know Chrissie I was real drunk I I im so sorry If I could turn the clock back I would
Chrissie- but you cant can you but it doesn’t matter now den gone he’s in my past and so are you so get out
Roxy- Chrissie
Chrissie- GET OUT
Roxy- fine
Roxy grabbed her coat and stormed out leaving Chrissie in tears Jake slowly kept down the stairs and into the living room in his dressing gown
Jake- hey
Chrissie wiped away a tear- alright Jake
Jake- listen umm I gotta go and get your birth present sorted out
Chrissie sort of smiled when he said present- oh come I hate surprises just tell me
Jake- no your gonna have to wait till tonight
Chrissie- Jake moon what are you up too
Jake kissed her lips gently - now that’s for me too know and you to find out
And with that Jake left the room and up the stairs to get dressed leaving Chrissie smiling to her self
She knew that her and Jake where gonna be together forever and no one could hurt her anymore
ill post more soon
luv ya
bree x.x.x.x
Brilliant hunny do more soon please
awww chrissie :wub:
more soon x
squillyfer
29-01-2006, 18:18
I really want her to make up with roxy she sounds like a very interesting character
I really want her to make up with roxy she sounds like a very interesting characterohh belive me hun Roxy is a bit nice she got a nice part but this dont come out when she is with johnny allen lol ill post more tonight and for all those who hate dawn chrissie punches her in the next part :p
big bro fan
30-01-2006, 13:45
i like dawn she is a great character.
i like dawn she is a great character.well i dont mind her but in my script shes a bit umm clingey lol
yay can't wait for dawn to get punched! wish we could see it.
can't wait dawn's getting punched.
heres the next part guys
Jake made his way across the square to the Vic as he entered Peggy gave him an evil stare along with dawn she walked up to him
Dawn- you pig you know I work here
Jake- and you know I drink here so
Dawn- your evil
Jake- dawn I tried to love you but Chrissie and me we are meant to be
Dawn- so your saying even if she had never came back
Jake- we would never of worked dawn all I can say is sorry
Dawn- yea well sorry not good another
Dawn picked up the pint that the person next to her was drinking and threw it over Jake
Jake- uhh thanks for that dawn
Dawn ran out of the pub in tears with Mickey following behind her Jake walked up to Peggy
Jake- so is it all sorted then
Peggy- I cant believe im doing this
Jake- yeah well you are Peggy so we still on
Peggy- yea we are still on alright
Jake- good well Ill be back in here at 6 then
Peggy- six it is
Jake- good
And with that Jake walked out of the pub and across the square and stopped in his tracks when he saw Chrissie and dawn yelling at each other
Chrissie- dawn I don’t wanna have a fight with you so go away
Dawn- no I wont go away you have ruined my life you evil cow
Chrissie- now that’s the first time iv ever herd that please just go away
Dawn- make me
Chrissie- alright then
And with that Chrissie drew back and punched dawn right in her nose causing dawn to fall to the drowned
Dawn- you have broken my nose
Chrissie- believe me if I had of done you would no about it
Dawn- why did you do it
Chrissie- cause your really starting to tick me off
Dawn- no Jake why
Chrissie- he don’t love you sweet heart get over it
Dawn- but I loved him and you took him away
Chrissie- look ill help you up if you can just accept that me and Jake are together
Dawn held her hand up Chrissie grabbed it and pulled dawn to her feet
Chrissie- look I know that you will never talk to me again but I don’t wanna fight we see each other Ill stay away from you and you stay away from me deal
Dawn- deal
Jake walked up to Chrissie and kissed her as soon as dawn left
Jake- you know you really are something miss watts
Chrissie- why thank you Mr. moon
Jake- come on im taking you for lunch after I have had a shower
Chrissie- ohh yeah I thought I could smell something
Jake- yeah well I will meet you in the Vic at 12 ok
Chrissie- ok ……..
brillaint more soon hun. Loved the bit where Chrissie punched Dawn.
Go chrissie! Fab more soon x
please do more soon i am in suspense of what she will do about it please i am begging you hun.
ill post more 1n 20 mins ok hun
i better be on please mum let me on lol *praying* i am hoping i will be on.
here the next part sorry its a bit short will post more soon
Jake and Chrissie walked out of fargos arm in arm Chrissie began to smile she looked at Jake she knew that thy where going to make good parents
Chrissie- so what names do you like then
Jake- umm how about Jake for a boy
Chrissie- I am not calling my baby Jake
Jake- why the hell not
Chrissie- cause that’s your name
Jake- and
Chrissie- no
Jake- ok how about blain
Chrissie- blain
Jake- well your not coming up with anything
Chrissie- I always like Craig for a boy
Jake- Craig
Chrissie- and what’s wrong with Craig
Jake- nothing but what if it’s a girl
Chrissie- how about Emma
Jake- yeah that’s nice
Chrissie- umm so you like any girls names
Jake- well I always liked Bethany
Chrissie- Bethany moon umm Bethany moon I like it
Jake pulled Chrissie into a pasoint kiss ghost
Chrissie- what was that for
Jake- I love you Chrissie
Chrissie and I love you too
Jake- well I gotta sort out your present
Chrissie- ummm Jake I want it now
Jake- no your have to wait
Chrissie looked at Jake before they new it they where kissing once more
Jake- im taking you out to dinner tonight
Chrissie ok ill meet you in at the house at 7 then ok
Jake- ok
this is good wonder what the prezzies is ! :p more soon x
heres my next part
Jake headed towards the queen Vic he looked at his watch it was now 7 god Chrissie would kill him if he wasn’t backing time but he couldn’t turn up with out this present he promised her could he as he entered the queen Peggy called him into the back he quickly put his hand in his pocket to check the second part6 of his present was still there and walked though the back and up the stairs and into the kitchen
Peggy- take a seat
Jake- you got it
Peggy got out a piece of paper and laid it on - there you go god I cant believe im doing this is cause im desperate
Jake- yeah well and the only reason im doing this is for Chrissie
Peggy got out a pen and handed it to jake - you first
Jake signed on the bottom line and the handed the pen to Peggy she hearted but then signed it
Jake- well that’s it then ill give you till tomorrow
Peggy- fine
Jake got up and left the room and made his way over to the house Chrissie was in the living room waiting for him
Chrissie- jake where the hell have you been
Jake- you look amazing
Chrissie- you forgiven
Jake- so do you want your prezzie
Chrissie- yeah go on
Jake- close your eyes
Chrissie-- what
Jake- just do it
Chrissie closed her eyes and jake placed the paper in her hands
Chrissie- what the hell is this
Jake- read it
Chrissie- you a nut
Chrissie began to read it suddenly the paper slipped from her hands
Chrissie- jake what the hell
Jake- the Vic its yours I brought it for you
Chrissie- jake where did you get the money
Jake- I have been saving up for a while
Chrissie got up and snoged jakes face off - your really something jake
Jake- ohh that’s not all
Chrissie- what more
Jake put his hand in his pocket and put a box in Chrissies hands it was an engament ring
Chrissie- so it official then where getting married
Jake- yeah
Chrissie- I love you jake
Jake- I love you Chrissie
more soon i promise x.x.x.x.x.x
yes the Vic is now in Watt's hands yet again
this is the next bit i am helping Bree on this bit.
Dawn walked into the Vic and couldn’t see Peggy anywhere. She walked up stairs to see her packing.
Dawn: What’s going on?
Peggy: Oh em I’ve sold the Vic.
Dawn: Who to?
Peggy: Em . . . Do you really want to know?
Dawn: Yep.
Peggy: Chr . . .
Dawn: Let me guess Chrissie and Jake?
Peggy: y . . . yeah
Dawn: But why?
Peggy: I need money Dawn.
Dawn: Fine well I’m out of here!
With that she walked out the Vic and headed over To the Moon’s household just as Chrissie and Jake came out. Dawn walked up to them and slapped Chrissie she nearly fell so Jake grabbed her.
Chrissie: Oh come on is that all you have one lousy punch?
Dawn: You wish I’m going to make you’re life hell!
Chrissie: Oh really well guess what it looks like you’ve just lost you’re job!
Dawn: Yeah so what I can get a new one else where!
Chrissie: Really because remember you have to behave!
Dawn: Oh I can!
Chrissie: Don’t make me laugh! Come on Jake oh and Dawn I would maybe look around every corner you come across and look behind you’re shoulder because I swear you’re life won’t be worth living foe much longer.
Dawn: Oh and do I look scared?
Chrissie: Yep!
Dawn: How do you know?
Chrissie: I can see it in you’re eyes!
With that Chrissie and Jake walked off and Dawn headed down to Scarlet’s.
Hope you like it
xxx
ill post more tonight thanks tanya for that fab part hun :p
Thanks n yay can't wait for more. more son please hun:p
Thanks for posting! :) Fab more asap xxx
heres the next part guys :)
Dawn knocked back her vodka
Dawn- get me another one please
Amy- your knocking them back a bit tonight aren’t you
Dawn- that’s none of your biasness
Amy- suit your self
Dawn- yeah I will thank you
Roxy walked in at took a seat at the bar next to dawn
Roxy- umm orange juice please
Dawn- and another when your ready Amy
Roxy- Bad day
Dawn- you cant even imagine
Roxy- I saw you and my big sis at it today
Dawn- Chrissies your sister
Roxy- yep unfortanly so
Dawn- so you two don’t talk
Roxy- nope see she found me bed with her old husband den
Dawn- wow god
Roxy- I didn’t even like him
Dawn- serves her right
Roxy- what did she do to you
Dawn- stole my fiancée
Roxy- and she has the cheek to say that too me
Dawn- god I just want to get revenge on them both
Roxy- I could help you with that
Dawn- how
Roxy wisped in dawns ear an evil smile crept on too dawns face
Dawn- its perfect
Roxy- so partners
She held her hand out to dawn
Dawn- partners
She shook roxys hand
Dawn- dawn
Roxy- roxy
Dawn- well roxy lets hope his will ruin her sad little life
Roxy- hope ahh I know it will
ill post more soon x.x.x.x.x
what are dawn and roxy planning?
more soon x
Angeldelight
05-02-2006, 19:45
wow brilliant... i :wub: this. uh-oh what are they up2?
he next part more tonight i promise
Dawn staggered into the millers drunk at 1o clock in the morning where Rosie was still up waiting for her shed been waiting since 7 o clock
Rosie- where the hell have you been
Dawn- out
She flopped onto the sofa
Rosie- your drunk
Dawn- yeah well that’s what you do when you lose your job you go out and you get drunk
Rosie- dawn come on how did you lose your job
Dawn- cause Peggy Mitchell’s a lying bitch
Rosie- ohh dawn Peggy’s alright ill tell you what ill come with you tomorrow and where get you your job back ay
Dawn- naaa
Rosie- why not
Dawn- cause Peggy’s not gonna be there in the morning
Rosie- what are you on about
Dawn- she’s sold the pub
Rosie- what too who
Dawn- Chrissie and Jake the happy couple
Rosie- what Chrissie cant sack you
Dawn- she didn’t ’t I quit
Rosie- ohh well never mind babe your get another job don’t worry about Chrissie watts
Dawn- oh I know mum shell get what’s coming too her
luv ya all
bree x.x.x.x
squillyfer
06-02-2006, 19:45
oooh wonder what dawn and roxy have in mind? This is great please do more asap
heres the next part guys
Chrissie and Jake where lying in bed Chrissie started to toss and turn Jake new something was wrong
Jake- come on tell me what’s wrong
Chrissie- ummm I was asleep
Jake- no you weren’t now come on I know you wanna talk baby details
Chrissie- really
Jake- really
Chrissie sat up and produced a baby magazine she had brought
Jake- I knew it
Chrissie gently turned the pages till she stopped dead in her tracks
Chrissie- ahh
Jake- what’s wrong now
Chrissie- that she pointed to a page in the magazine
Jake- ewww
Chrissie hit him with the pillow
Chrissie- Jake your not helping
Jake- sorry its just
Chrissie- I know
Jake- well that doesn’t matter that much
Chrissie hit him again this time a bit harder
Jake- ow what was that for
Chrissie- you wanna try having this baby
Jake- no
Chrissie- exactly
Jake- but what I meant was at the end of all that that
Chrissie- pain screaming blood
Jake- yeah your gonna have a new born baby in your arms
Chrissie smiled and placed his hand on her stomach
Jake- it wont be that long I love you
He kissed her and turned over
Chrissie- you say that like its gonna end this convocation and it so wont
Jake- what have I done wrong
Chrissie- I just wanna talk bout it jake
Jake turned over again and kissed her
Jake- come on lets hear it
Chrissie started to talk about the pain and names jake looked at the clock 2 in the it was gonna be a long night …..
Fab as always honey, more when you can x
Angeldelight
10-02-2006, 18:49
clap clap clap... post more soon... pretty pretty please
i will post more tomorrow promise :p x.x.x
Angeldelight
10-02-2006, 20:18
that's what we like to hear. can't wait
i will post more tomorrow promise
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