My New Soap-Hinston High

[DaVeyWaVey]

I have made a new soap called Hinston High set in a normal busy street which follows the lives of its residents and their ordinary lives. Now i have done 859 episodes of the soap and wrote the sypnosis and storylined all of them but now i am thinking of writing scripts for each episode of my soap. So i was wondering if anyone could give me any tips on how to write scripts. It is not my strong point so if anyone could please reply and help i would appreciate it. Thanks.

[baileya]

Easy tip just have a look at several soaps on this page including Merseysiders,Exeter and Devon Seas. Then you will get a clear view of how to write them. Looking forward to reading this.

[DaVeyWaVey]

I was wondering could i share my soap with everyone here at soapboards?? :)

[Luna]

i dont see why not go ahead

[DaVeyWaVey]

Ok i will but its only sypnosis too episodes and the first few episodes are boring but its just the start of plotlines so it will get better trust me :) Ok so i will start of with the characters before telling you episode one!
Here are the characters as follows:
Jack Weatherby-Family Man, likes to keep his family together.
Alicia Weatherby-Married to Jack. Soft and nice person.
Sam Weatherby-Son to Jack and Alicia. Likes to be independent-18 yrs old.
Christina Weatherby-Daughter to Jack and Alicia. Likes to do what she wants. 17 yrs old.
Harry Hartson-Married to Jenna for 7 years. Age 39. No children.
Jenna Hartson-Married to Harry for 7 years. Age 38. No children.
Mike Dobson- Married to Nina for 3 years. Owner of Hinston pub. No children.
Nina Dobson-Married to Mike for 3 years. Owner of Hinston pub. 1 adopted child.
Chloe Fletcher-Single. Fancies Greg the mechanic. Age 22
Kat Davey-Single. Chloe's best mate. Age 22
Pat Mason-Divorced. 2 children with different fathers. Owner of the cafe.
Felicity Mason-Daughter to Pat. Her father left when she was 8 yrs old.
Dave Mason-Son to Pat. Never heard from or seen his father.
Ben Butley- Married to Julia. 3 kids. Age 41
Julia Butley- Married to Ben. 3 kids. Age 45
Danny Butley- Son to Ben and Julia. Always gets himself in trouble.
Marianne Butley-Daughter to Ben and Julia. Age 10.
Sally Butley- Daughter to Ben and Julia. Age 16
Luke Campbell- Married to Tanya. Love cheat. 3 kids.
Tanya Campbell-Married to Luke. Has a bitchy side. 3 kids
Lee Campbell- Son to Tanya and Luke. Age 14
Tina Campbell-Daugher to Tanya and Luke. Age 16.
Emily Campbell-Daughter to Tanya and Luke. Age 3.
Tom Wood-Brother to Max. Family yet unknown. Owns the garage with his brother.
Max Wood-Brother to Tom. Family yet unknown. Owns the garage with his brother.
Greg Hawker-Mechanic. Works for Max and Tom. May fancy Chloe.

So what do you think of the characters biographies?? Shall i carry on??

[DaVeyWaVey]

Ok here are the 1st three episodes. I will give you the other five if the rest of you are interested. Ok here we go..............
Hinston High- Episode 1
Pat begins to recieve strange phone calls in which the caller is anonymous and won't speak. Meanwhile, Luke isn't happy when Tanya gets drunk at the pub, and Chloe plucks up the courage to ask Greg out on a date.

Hinston High-Episode 2
Greg and Chloe's date proves successful. Could love be in the air? Meanwhile, Harry and Jenna agree to try for a baby before its too late, and Jack and Alicia fail to be pleased by Christina's new boyfriend, Sean.

Hinston High-Episode 3
Greg wants to know where he stands with Chloe after their date, while Jack lets Christina know that he doesn't approve of Sean, and Pat's anonymous phone caller is revealed but who is it?

Find out next time...............

What does everyone think?

[diamond1]

yeah look's good but do the episodes get longer as you go along or is it meant to be a little over a sentence an episode?

[diamond1]

oh dear didnt read the first few posts dont worry....sorry

[DaVeyWaVey]

Well thats the problem i am afraid i have done 859 episodes like this aswell as concentrating on storylining and character development. Do you like it in this format?

[DaVeyWaVey]

Oh dont worry lol. Do you like it in this format though?

[Bryan]

Well thats the problem i am afraid i have done 859 episodes like this aswell as concentrating on storylining and character development. Do you like it in this format?

you do need to explore it more in a bit more detail, you dont have to rush those number of episodes! people will read them! delev deeper otherwise its hard for people to understand characters or get envolved

but keep it up! and keep trying! cant wait for another soap rival to Devon Seas!

[diamond1]

to be honest....not really i prefer scripts, but its up to you how you write your story/soap

[DaVeyWaVey]

Your right. I think i need to explore it in more detail. I will stop at the 859 episodes and start putting the first few episodes in more detail. Thanks for the advice :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

I will try writing scripts aswell but its not my strong point. I will post a few scripts soon to see what you think.

[diamond1]

you do need to explore it more in a bit more detail, you dont have to rush those number of episodes! people will read them! delev deeper otherwise its hard for people to understand characters or get envolved

but keep it up! and keep trying! cant wait for another soap rival to Devon Seas!

very well said :clap:

[DaVeyWaVey]

Well Hinston High will be back soon with scripts so listen out for it :)

[Kim]

They sound good, can't wait to read them in detail :)

[DaVeyWaVey]

I have started writing scripts for episode one!! :)

[Bryan]

I have started writing scripts for episode one!! :)

cool stuff! look forward to reading them soon!

[DaVeyWaVey]

I will probably put the first scripts on next week :)

[big bro fan]

it's good but be better if it was in script format.

[DaVeyWaVey]

it's good but be better if it was in script format.

Yeah i agree it will be better in script format. Expect the first scripts to be on sometime next week. By the way the scripts will appear in this thread. :)

[baileya]

Looking forward to reading them.

[DaVeyWaVey]

Just finished episode 1! :) wahooooo! :cheer: It is pretty long though

[big bro fan]

the longer the better that's what i say (well i don't but it's a bit of encouragment) :thumbsup: