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Bryan
01-01-2006, 12:36
The seconds seemed light minutes...the haunting song of Auld Lang Syne echoed trough her head, as an overdose of emotions flooded her mind. He was gone...the love of her life...her darling...was dead. 2006, the plans they had were now gone...she had to face a life without Dennis... as one story ends another begins...she wasnt going to let this one go...

i_luv_dennis
01-01-2006, 12:44
thats good bondboffin

Jada-GDR
01-01-2006, 12:45
oooooooh looks good! can't wait post asap :D

Tannie
01-01-2006, 12:49
looks good more soon please

Kim
01-01-2006, 13:42
Looks fab.... more asap please :)

Emma-Lou
01-01-2006, 13:49
Looks good post more soon please

Chloe-Elise
01-01-2006, 14:18
Great start,more asap please:)

shannisrules
01-01-2006, 14:43
good start more soon

lollymay
01-01-2006, 14:47
oooh sounds fab

Bryan
01-01-2006, 15:36
Tears fell slwoly down my face as the fireworks lighted up the sky. Everyone was looking forward to the new year...everyone except me. My emotions were overpowering me i couldnt take it anymore, i fell to the floor next to my darling Dennis...who could have done this to him? We had a future...with our little baby...are those dreams destroyed.

"Sharon!" shouted Pauline as she ran towards me. No, leave us be Pauline, i want to be alone with my darling...I'd love Pauline as a mother but i need to be alone...to cherish my final moments with my husband before he is taken away from me for good...

Pauline was not bending down beside me, her arm stroking my hair, the crowds soon gathered as they realised what had happened. If only theyd paid attention in the first place instead of staring gormlessy at Gary's fireworks then maybe it wouldnt have happened...maybe Dennis would still be alive.

Tonight has been filled with many "ifs" and "maybes"...what if Ian had not stopped the Cab? What if Phil wasnt looking for a fight... we would now be off for a new life...celebrating a new year with Michelle and Vicki and little Mark Jnr....but now as i lie on the cold concrete...on the precise spot where Tiffany lay motionless 6 years ago to the day...theres no point looking back...i have to look forward and face facts...me and my darling are no more...

Bree
01-01-2006, 15:51
wow it good

.:SpIcYsPy:.
01-01-2006, 16:06
I love the last paragraph about the If's!! Please post more soon!!

lollymay
01-01-2006, 16:22
are thats well good. please do more soon.

Bree
01-01-2006, 16:25
thats well good do more soon

Bryan
01-01-2006, 16:30
i was wondering if i should do it all from sharons point of view, or if i should explore other characters viewpoints aswell? :searchme: :confused:

.:SpIcYsPy:.
01-01-2006, 16:47
I think... Explore other chracters.. Dot's for one!!

lollymay
01-01-2006, 16:50
i agree do other characters aswell

Bryan
01-01-2006, 16:52
im going to cover her funeral week, her trip to america (we hear from vicki and michelle) and then she returns and we have all the johnny and mitchell stuff to deal with, as sharon tries to rebuild her life....

cant wait to write it all! :D

Chloe-Elise
01-01-2006, 20:23
Brilliant,more soon please :D

Tannie
01-01-2006, 21:25
aww brilliant

Kim
01-01-2006, 21:33
This is great already, and the stuff coming up sounds even better.

Charmed
01-01-2006, 21:47
Sad,but great!

feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 22:17
awww brilliant but her funeral? lol, i think dennis might just be a he! :lol:

Bryan
02-01-2006, 10:09
awww brilliant but her funeral? lol, i think dennis might just be a he! :lol:

i stand to what i say....

her funeral week

i.e her week when the funeral happens, told from HER perspective

feelingyellow
02-01-2006, 12:33
i stand to what i say....

her funeral week

i.e her week when the funeral happens, told from HER perspective

ah that makes sense ... sorry for mis-reading you lol

Bryan
02-01-2006, 12:59
A glass of sweet cherry...what is that going to do for me Pauline!? If anything i need a bottle of vodka, the wash away my thoughts, to numb the pain and the misery...i just want to forget about everything...without dennis i cant see a way to continue...i might aswell give up now...what have i got to live for?...

and then it dawned on me... to stop being so selfish Sharon...i was pregnant, carrying denni's baby inside me. All these years i had wanted nothing more than a child of my own, and having it with the love of my life...everythign seemed so pefect. This baby would be a constant reminder of Dennis, but whos to say the memories are sad? I have something to live for....our maybe...and as a result the memory of my darling will live on

Every time i stare into my beautiful babies eyes, i will see my darling Dennis looking back at me...everytime i witness a new event in my child's life...first words, first tooth, first walk...i will have him there beside me in spirit. He may be gone, but he will never be forgotten. He is now looking down upon me and baby Rickman from heaven...and that is enough to see me trough.

Today was the start of my new life...things could only get better...

Debs
02-01-2006, 13:02
brilliant bb

i dont usually read the scripts but i love this, please mre soon!

Kim
02-01-2006, 13:24
Fab, more soon please:)

Layne
02-01-2006, 13:45
This is fab bb honey x

feelingyellow
02-01-2006, 14:44
awwww :wub: that is so sweet!!

Tannie
02-01-2006, 14:54
aww it's really good

Bree
02-01-2006, 15:24
this is brill more soon

Chloe-Elise
02-01-2006, 16:00
Fab,more asap please :)

.:SpIcYsPy:.
02-01-2006, 16:18
i dont usually read the scripts but i love this, please mre soon!
Same here!! Can't wait to read them all!! :clap:

Emma-Lou
02-01-2006, 19:39
This is fab can not wait to read more

Bryan
03-01-2006, 18:22
Guilt is the worst feeling of all. Lying in bed, i had the events of the night buzzing trough my head...i couldnt settle, the same things kept popping trough my mind...should i have told Dennis? Should i have goaded him? At the time it seemed the right thing to do...it seemed only fair that Johnny should pay the price...but now it seems so wrong. A dark depression is starting to engulf me...knowing that i was responsible for the death of a man...not just any man...but the husband of one of my closest friends...

If id heard this news half a year ago i would be laughing my self silly with joy, the man who set me up for armed roberry...all the times id wished him and Den dead, but now cirumstances have changed...and his death has hit home...i used him as a weapon against johnny and now he was dead...how many more people will suffer as a result of my resentment towards him? Ruby, Juley, Sharon, Dennis...the list was increasing...was it time to stop? Should i let him win? No chance...

Tannie
03-01-2006, 18:44
this is really good more soon please

Chloe-Elise
03-01-2006, 19:17
Brilliant, more asap

feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 19:24
fabolous!! :cheer: that was phil's pov right? lol, are you just forgetting to put who's it is or doing it or purpose? lol ... it keeps it mysterious until you start to find out who it is, lol

Debs
03-01-2006, 20:02
fab! more please

squillyfer
04-01-2006, 21:45
more soon this is great

Charmed
04-01-2006, 22:15
More soon

Layne
05-01-2006, 16:26
fab! more please



Yeh basically what debs said! :p

More now please x

di marco
08-01-2006, 09:31
wow thats really great bryan, post more soon please! :D

Kim
08-01-2006, 10:39
wow! More asap please:D

Angeldelight
30-03-2006, 16:29
wow wow... it's sooooooo sad. post more soon