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sheilamarie
19-12-2005, 12:51
hey guys ambers work inspired me to write a chrissie and jake story of my own so tell me what you guys think :D
Chrissie opened her eyes it had been two months since the whole den trauma but she was
still haunted by dens ghostly face that keep her awake at night she looked at the clock on the wall each minuet seem like an hour to Chrissie she got up and headed towards the kitchen and made a fresh pot of coffee it was her eighth coffee of the night suddenly she was startled by some one shouting outside in the square it was those moon brothers Chrissie had a soft spot for Jake she didn’t think much of Danny
She looked out the window and hid behind the Curtains and watched the two squabble between each other
Danny: ohh just back off Jake your not my mum
Jake: sometimes I doubt we come from the same mum Danny
Danny: what you saying you wish I weren’t here
Jake: no im saying why do you always do the oboist of what I say
Danny: your not the boss of me I can do what I like
Before Jake new it he was talking he spotted Chrissie in the window he waved at her she blushed a bit but waved back at him what was she doing her husband was down stairs and she had to be responsible and not act like she was sixteen again she had to much for a man to handle surely no one could love her after what she did ?
The next mornig came and went and another day was nearly at an end but chrissie was in a bit of mood because zoe was going more mental by the day and it was finaly sinking in den wasent coming back he was gone for good this time
l.mo: chrissie what time do you need me tomorow
chrissie:i dont know right now mo because
l mo: well could you give me an hour of tomorow please
chrissie: i just said i dont know for god sake i run this pub not you and i decide on your hours OKAY so just leave me alone
chrissie walked over to the next costomer she felt guilty but she couldent have people thinking she was a push over
Chrissie:What can i get you jake ???
Jake: Whisky make it a doubel
chrissie: a bad day
Jake: a bad week
Chrissie: why whats danny done now ???
Jake: he wont leave johnny alen alone
Chrissie: well whats he done two johnny
Jake:winded him right up
Chrissie:here you go
Jake:thanks how much is that
chrissie: no its on the house
Jake: thanks listen do you have plans on tomorow night ?
chrissie: no why ?
jake: well maby i could take you out for dinner or somthing
chrissie: listen
Jake: its okay if you dont want to i mean i know your still in love with den
chrissie: no i do wanna have dinnerf with you i was going to say that i just was rude to mo and i think shes pissed at me so i dont know if she will cover for me
sam: ill do it
chrissie: sam are you sure
sam: yes
chrissie:well that settels it tomorow then say bout ummm 8thish
Jake: yea great
to be contined
please post back
sounds like a good script to me. post more soon.
sheilamarie
19-12-2005, 14:16
thanks :wub:
ill post some more tonight but i think the dates gonna go a bit wrong
not to worry. it's fantasy after all!
big bro fan
19-12-2005, 16:26
is this your first time because if it is then well done cause i think you done good.
sheilamarie
19-12-2005, 16:31
is this your first time because if it is then well done cause i think you done good.Yea it is and thank you ill post the second part tonight
Chloe-Elise
19-12-2005, 21:44
Good start, more soon pelase. :)
sheilamarie
20-12-2005, 22:39
ill try to get it out on here tomorow
Good start, well done:). Looking forward to the next part.
sheilamarie
21-12-2005, 11:40
hey guys nearly finsed part two
and heres some clues to whats going 2 happen
chrissie and jake go on the date but somthings gose horrible wrong
sam and chrissie start to birker
sam knows chrissie secret but will she tell zoe
sheilamarie
22-12-2005, 22:16
sorry guys about the delay it will be done tomorow i promise :)
Chloe-Elise
23-12-2005, 11:27
Sounds good, can't wait to read it :)
sheilamarie
24-12-2005, 17:13
sorry about the delay guys here it is part two
Together at last
Chrissie made her way across the square as she made her way to the door of the moons house she saw that the curtains where drawled and no lights where on she hadn’t a clue what Jake had planed she knocked on the door Jake opened it
Jake: hey you look amazing love the dress
Chrissie: umm you don’t look so bad your self
Jake: so…. You wanna come in
Chrissie: guess so
Jake: close your eyes
Chrissie: you what ?
Jake: close your eyes
Chrissie: Jake moon what are you ?
Jake: why do you all ways answer a question with a question come okay
Chrissie: ok I trust you
Jake put his hands over her eyes and walked her though to the living room Jake lifted his hands from her eyes
Jake: open your eyes
When Chrissie opened her eyes she was absolute stunned the room was filled with pink fairy lights and the floor was covered with rose petals she span around and In the corner was a table set for two
Jake: so what do you think
Chrissie couldn’t quite get the words out
Jake: I know its not really what your used to I mean your used to posh restraints and
Before Jake could finessed his suntans she pulled him by his tie and kissed him passionately
Chrissie: dose that answer your question
Now Jake was speechless Chrissie pushed his chin up
Chrissie: well we goanna eat or what im starving here
Jake: yea over there
Chrissie: this looks lovely I mean wow Jake where did you get the idea of this from ?
Jake: guess im one of the last born romantics round here
Chrissie: you can say that again
Jake: I know its not what your used to with den
Chrissie: this means more to me then anything in the world
Jake: your worth the world and more
Chrissie: oh Jake no ones ever said anything like that to me with out something in return
Jake: I do want something in return Chrissie
Chrissie: and whats that
Jake: I want you to sit down and eat the meal I spent 1 hour cooking
Chrissie giggled and sat down
Ten minuets into the meal both Chrissie and Jake where enjoying each others company they where getting on so well until the subject of den came up
Jake: so when’s the last time you herd form him then
Chrissie: who
Jake: den
Chrissie: two weeks ago
Jake; do you know what he was a idiot for letting you go
Chrissie: well he always was a sucker for a pretty face
Jake: you got the prettiest face in the whole square
Chrissie: ohh well I don’t know about that
Jake: well it’s the truth so where did you see him
Chrissie: he came back to get his things and wallet credit card mobile cloths
Jake: so do you think he’ll ever come back
Chrissie: I don’t know can we change the subject now please this pain for me to relive
Jake: well its not all about you Chrissie he’s got the Vic and Sharon to think about
Chrissie: you know Jake I came here thinking that it was going to be two people on this date and some how den managed to wangle his way in and he’s not even here
Jake: alright Chrissie don’t throw a wobble
Chrissie: what do you mean a wobble is that what you think of me ?
Jake: your acting like a like you still care for den
Chrissie: well why would I be here with you if I had feelings for den
Jake: I don’t know Chrissie you tell me
Chrissie: Jake you nothing about me and the way your going on you properly never will
Jake: sorry you feel like that
Chrissie: yeah well maybe this date was a bad idea from the start
Jake: well you said it I didn’t
Chrissie: you know what Jake you can stuff your meal
Chrissie got up and stormed out as she walked across the square towards the Vic she could feel her eyes watering up she really liked Jake but he could never know what she did as she walked though the Vic doors she bumped into little mo
l.mo: how did the date go
Chrissie ran past little mo so fast she nearly fell over she couldn’t let any one she her crying she hated pity she ran up the stairs and into her bedroom she threw herself on to the bed and thought though what had just happened how could Jake be like that about a hour later she re did her lippy and eye liner and went down stairs
Sam: how did the date go ?
Chrissie: don’t ask
Sam: ohh now Chrissie no need to be like that just showing interest like a loyal friend
Chrissie: if you must know it didn’t go well
Sam: really ohh well life goes on
Sam walked off to serve a customer
l.mo: you alright Chrissie???
Chrissie: yea I was just thinking what a good friend Sam is always knows the right things to say when your feeling down
And Chrissie walked over to see the next customer
Chrissie: and what can I get you Danny
Danny: pint please listen I thought you where spoused to be round ours
Chrissie: yea well I thought so to
Danny: well why aren’t you then
Chrissie: I think that’s between me and Jake don’t you
Danny: have you two had a Barney
Chrissie: if you want to put it like that then yea yea we did
Danny: well sorry bout that
Chrissie: its okay and that will be 1.20
Danny handed Chrissie the money as Chrissie put the money in the till she could see someone behind her it was Sam
Sam: umm Chrissie could I have a word
Chrissie: what is it now Sam
Sam: not here up stairs
Chrissie and Sam both made there way up stairs
Chrissie; what is it Sam
Sam: I wanted to talk to you about my money
Chrissie: not now Sam
Sam: Chrissie you wont have anoth time to do anything if you don’t
Chrissie: and what’s that spoused to mean
Sam: I was just saying I need my money
Chrissie: NOT NOW SAM
Chrissie got up to walk away
Sam: YOU LEAVE NOW AND I WILL TELL EVERY ONE WHAT YOU DID
Chrissie: you what ?
Sam: I know you killed den not Zoë and if you don’t give me my money Zoë will be the first on my list to tell what you did...............
to be contiued
Great. More asap please:)
sheilamarie
26-12-2005, 12:25
hey part 3 nearly done heres a sneak peek at whats going to happen
sam and chrissie have there first catfight
jake and chrissie arent speaking will they make up ?
chrissie gets depressd with only a bottel of vodka and den for company
aww poor chrissie and jake i hate sam :angry: post more soon
aww it's brill. sam's evil :angry: please do more a.s.a.p
shannisrules
28-12-2005, 13:23
awww this is brill keep going
sheilamarie
28-12-2005, 13:44
thanks guys ill try post some more tonight
good cant wait to read plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz let jake and chrissie make up ohh cant wait to she chrissie and sam fight Chrissie had better win
sheilamarie
29-12-2005, 13:01
ill try post part 3 tonight :) i think chrissie and jake will make up but you neva no :wub:
ill try post part 3 tonight :) i think chrissie and jake will make up but you neva no :wub:good good cant wait to read it
sheilamarie
31-12-2005, 14:31
im posting the next part tonight guys promise :)
sheilamarie
31-12-2005, 20:07
hi thanks for posting heres part 3 ill post the rest tomorow
Chrissie was stunned by what Sam had just said to her she wanted to rip Sam’s head off but she played it cool
Chrissie: you don’t have the guts you sad little bitch
Sam: you wanna bet you frizzy haired cow
Chrissie: very original Sam is that the best you can do oh im shaking in my boots here
Sam: fine lets tell them
Sam went to walk out the door Chrissie ran at her and pulled her back by her hair they began to fight Chrissie slapped Sam as hard as she could but then Sam turned round and punch Chrissie right in the nose causing her to fall to the ground blood flowing form her nose and lip Sam had split it
Sam: now I want my money tomorrow other wise ill tell Zoë
Chrissie: you do that we will all go down you stupid little bimbo
Sam: no no you see that’s where your wrong Chrissie me and Zoë will blame it all on you
Chrissie: Zoë would never do that
Sam: yeah she will If I tell her to
Chrissie: what is she your Barbie doll now
Sam: no but she listens to me and you know that other wise you wouldn’t of stopped me form going down stairs now would you
Chrissie: she listens to me two
Sam: yeah I know she dose but shed always chose me over you Chrissie
Chrissie: she wouldn’t go to the police
Sam: well if you want to take the chance
Sam went to leave the room Chrissie was still on the floor holding her nose in pain then Sam tuned to her once more and smiled
Sam: money tomorrow other wise I tell Zoë everything
As same left Chrissie saw a glass on the table she picked it up and flung in agents the wall as it smashed she screamed with anger then she ran into the bath room she looked at her nose and lip in the mirror it brought back painful memories of her and her first husband he used to hit her she dident want to go back to that time in her life ever again
sheilamarie
31-12-2005, 20:12
ill try post more tomoz just for jake fan next part jake and chrissie make up
shannisrules
31-12-2005, 23:31
really good keep doing more
wow that is really good hunni plz keep it going dont let sam get the better of chrissie any way glad to here jake and chrisse make up
sheilamarie
02-01-2006, 14:31
thanks guys heres part 4 sorry its sort but ill post more tonight :)
:heart: jake and chrissie loving in this bit :heart:
She knew she had to do something and quick she needed to come up with some sort of plan to get Zoë on her side and away from Sam she cleaned up he swollen nose and lip she put on some lip-gloss to cover her lip up a bit and went and got changed into her white shirt and long black skirt with black kitten heels as she walked down stairs she could she Sam looking at her as she walked out of the doors of the Vic she bumped into someone bumped heads with them they both feel to the ground
Chrissie: oh im sooooo sorry
Jake: no im sorry
Chrissie: Jake what are you doing here
Jake: like I said I came to say sorry if its not to late
Chrissie: you made me feel so small like I deserved what den did to me
Jake: I know im
Chrissie: sorry I know you said that already
Jake: well yeah I brought you these
Jake pulled these gorges red roses from behind his back
Chrissie: there lovely thank you
Jake; so you missed dinner you fancy some fish and chips
Chrissie look at the slaters house but then she looked at Jakes puppy dog eyes
Chrissie: id love to
Jake: come on the Madame
Jake put his arm around Chrissie the time soon passed she was soon back at the Vic on her own at least she thought she was on her own then Sam cam from out of the dark ness
Sam: Chrissie never leave your doors unlocked
Chrissie: Sam what are you doing here
Sam: I want my money and your not going to give it to me
Chrissie: you know your not so dumb as every one thinks you are
Sam: I saw you with Jake I cant believe you your husbands only been dead two months and your with your new blue eyed boy
Chrissie: some of got it some of haven’t
Sam: do you ever think about what you did
Chrissie: cause I do
Sam: say it go say it to me
Chrissie: I killed den watts you happy now
Then some one else cam from the shadows Chrissie couldn’t make out a face she kept thinking and wishing please don’t be Sharon then the came into the light
Mystery person: you wicked cow
brilliant who was in the shadows Brilliant!!
who is it ???? this is fab hun plzs do more i need to know
sheilamarie
03-01-2006, 17:32
hi ill post more tonight but here part 5 enjoy
Chrissie: Zoë
Zoë: all those times you said that it was me that I killed the one true love of your life when all the time it was you
Chrissie: Zoë I know how this may look but the last thing you want to do is go to the police
Zoë: is that all you can think about a man is dead here
Sam: all ways thinking of your self Chrissie
Chrissie: do you two really think you stupid little girls that if she goes to the police we all wont go down
Zoë: well me and Sam have come up with a plan
Chrissie: NO NO YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME
Zoë: keep your hair on Chrissie I wont go to the police
Chrissie: oh thanks Zoë
Zoë: if
Chrissie: if what
Zoë: if you give Sam her money
Chrissie: over my dead body
Sam: well come on zo lets go and
Chrissie: Okay ill do it
Sam: okay well then
Chrissie: but there’s a little catch
Sam: and what might that be
Chrissie: I want you two out of the square out of walford out of London out of the country
Zoë: no way
Chrissie: fine then well im not giving you a penny
Sam: well if you to want to go to prison fine by us
Chrissie began to laugh
Sam: and whats so funny
Chrissie: no I was just thinking how fun it will be playing share’s
Zoë: what you on about you nuttier
Chrissie: no I was just thinking what if we all get put in the same cell it’ll be like a girly sleepover for 7 to 8 years wont it
Sam: she’s lost it hasn’t she
Zoë: umm no she aint
Sam: what
Zoë: I do need to get away away from you you sick twisted cow
Chrissie: and there was me looking forward to that sleepover
aw brilliant hun please do more soon
this is good more soon girly sleepova lmao :lol:
sheilamarie
04-01-2006, 16:26
heres part 6 guys some real jc loving in this part
it had been 2 months since zoe and sam left and chrissie was now getting on with her life and her life was getting better to she had just properly started dating jake and was going to ask him to move in with her but she dident know how to say it
chrissie: so jake what doing tonight then
jake: well going out for a drink with my brother but not being abel to get you off my mind then more beer more lusting after you and then comeing back to the vic at closing time and beg you to put me up for the night
chrissie: well im gonna be real tired when you get to the vic and i might be in bed
jake:right is this you telling me not tonight jake
chrissie:well i dont know mayby if you moved your stuff in and had a key you could come and go when you please and seeing how the spare room is full of old junk you'd have to share my bed
jake:is this you asking me to move in with you
chrissie: maybe
jake: well if you are id be happy to acsept
chrissie:so when could you move in
jake: how about now
sheilamarie
04-01-2006, 16:26
sorry it short ill post more soon
aww jake and chrissie foreva love it more soon
This si fab! Jake and Chrissie :wub: xxxxxxxxx
sheilamarie
05-01-2006, 14:37
hi guys here part 7 guys some real jake and chrissie loving in this part
chrissie woke up in the middel of the night lying next to her one true love was the best feeling in the world and to see him breathing aww she thought she could fly she kept touching his arm to make sure he was real
jake: stop toching me
chrissie: sorry
jake: its ok i wasnt a sleep
chrissie:i know listen do you want some breakfast
jake: no i want you to sit there and i will get you breakfast
chrissie: oh jake you do spoil me
jake: i spoil all my girls
chrissie: i hope that was a joke jake
jake: yeah it was
go on tell him go on tell him he needs to know what you have done your sick just tell him she shock her head to get rid of these voices as jake brought the tray in with her breakfast
chrissie: wow this looks great
jake: yeah smell great too
chrissie: listen jake theres somthing i wanna tell you
sudenly there was a bang on the door jake went to awnser it it was pauline she came for her door stop
jake: a what
pauline: it my doorstop and i want it back
jake: oh right look ill ask chrissie when she gets up
chrissie:no its okay jake here you go pauline
pauline: thank you
and with that pauline left with the dog under his arm
jake: that dogs freaky
chrissie: yeah
jake: so what did you wanna tell me
chrissie: no it dosent matter ......
this is brill and it was worth the wait!! my own fault of course as i was too relaxed over crimbo to bother swithching on the pc. well done.
aaww lovin it!!!lol freaky dog lol
more soon
xxxxxxx
sheilamarie
05-01-2006, 20:53
heres part 8 guys :D some real jc loving :wub:
jake: how about i take you out to dinner tonight
chrissie: as tempting as that sounds i have already given tracy the night off sorry babe
jake: i could always get danny to cover
chrissie: danny as in your baby brother and when i say baby i mean it
jake: i know what dannys like but hes my brother and i love him
chrissie:i know you always think of others dont you
jake: i know and thats what you love about me right
chrissie:i know as much i love you im not letting your brother look after my pub not even for one night and pulling your puppy dog eyes wont work this time
jake: i can always try to make you change your mind
chrissie: jake
jake: chrissie please ill do anything
chrissie: anything
jake: anything
chrissie: ill make a deal with you okay
jake: okay lets hear it then
chrissie: well if i do let brother look after my pub and he so much break a glass you are mine for a day do any thing i say
jake: whateva you say god help me ..........
aww jake and chrissie foreva dannys bound to screw up what will she make him do lol :)
brilliant hun do more soon
hey guys ambers work inspired me to write a chrissie and jake story of my own so tell me what you guys think :D
Aww! Thanks hun. I've had a quick scan through and it's fab! Keep up the good work :D
i had a dream about this story last night lol
sheilamarie
08-01-2006, 19:17
thanks for guys here part 9
chrissie sat at her dressing tabel getting her make up ready for her meal with jake she saw a pictcher of her and jake on the tabel she kissed her finger and placed on him in the photo and gabed her jacket and made her way down stairs she saw him standing there smiling at her she lost breath for a second when she saw him in his suit
jake: wow you look amazing
chrissie: really
jake: when i saw you my heart skiped a beat
chrissie smiled she looked at him a diffrent way she now knew it was true love shed found her soul mate she kissed him on the cheek she felt like they were the only people in the world even though there was a pub full of people who where now staring at them
chrissie: can we get going
jake: yeah
chrissie where are we going
jake: only to ians chippy
chrissie: you dare
jake: only joking fargos
chrissie:good
and with that they walked out hand in hand ........
sheilamarie
09-01-2006, 15:59
chrissie and jake where walking back from dinner a star filled sky it was so romantic then jake said somthing that was going to change their lives forever
jake: so what are you thinking right now
chrissie: just thinking that i proberly should not of had the chocolate cake i think id better go for a jog tomorrow
jake: no your perfect in every way
chrissie: aww jake thats so sweet what do you want
jake: no i mean it you are the most beautful thing i have seen
chrissie: so you dont want anything
jake: umm well yeah there is somthing i want
chrissie: i knew it ok what is it
jake: well i umm i was going to ask umm
chrissie: go on jake spit it out
jake: marry me
chrissie: what
jake go out a box and placed it in chrissies hand she slowly opend it there was a small dimond she looked at it her eyes slowly filling up with tears of joy
jake took the box and got out the ring and took of her old wedding ring and placed his on her finger instead
jake: so
chrissie: so what
jake: will you marry me
chrissie: yeah i will
jake: really
chrissie:really
jake hugged her so tight then picked her up and span her around then put her down and placed her old wedding ring in her hand
jake: its okay if you want to keep it i mean i wont mind
chrissie: ill awnser your qustion
and with that she threw the rings down the drain
jake: what are you doing
chrissie: thats in my past
jake: you really are somthing miss watts
chrissie: soon to be miss moon
he kissed her pasointly and they walked off into the night hand in hand to go and tell everyone there news ..........
to be continued
yeh they're gettin married woohoo
Awww sweeet more soon xxx
sheilamarie
09-01-2006, 20:12
here part 10 somthing really sad happens in this bit guys :(
chrissie couldnt stop smileing she was so happy but her new found happiness was going to be sort lived
chrissie: so where do we go from here
jake: what do you mean
chrissie: is the fairytale forever
jake: corse it is
chrissie: you promise
jake:i promise
sudenly as they reached the vic chrissie bumped into someone
chrissie: oh im sorry
clive: watch where your going
jake: oi she said she was sorry
clive: well she should watch wheres she is going
jake: dont talk to my Fiancé like that
clive:ha dont me laugh
befor chrissie knew it jake ran at him they strugeld sudenly befor chrissie could blink the man ran off
chrissie: the cheek of some people come on lets go inside babe
jake never spoke chrissie knew somthing was wrong
chrissie: come on jake lest go inside
then jake turnd around blood poring from his stomach hed been stabed sudenly jake fell to his nees chrissie ran by his side
jake: jake please no no JAKE SOMONE HELP US PLEASE
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo don't let him die please i'm begging you
i know i just posted but nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooplease please please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please i am begging you
Oh no this reminds me of ee, please don't let him die :( xxxx
awwwwwwwwwwwww noooooooooooooooooooooooo you cant let jake die i need more now :)
sheilamarie
10-01-2006, 17:40
here part 11 guys
chrissie: jake dont dare leave me
jake: -whistper- chrissie im sorry i love you
chrissie: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DONT YOU LEAVE ME HOLD ON
chrissie ran to the pub and shouted for help danny came out along with the reast of the pub
danny: bro please dont go
dot: has someone called an ambalnce
chrissie: DONT JUST STAND THERE SOMONE CALL THEM
and with that chrissie fell back wards danny caught her she wasent going to pass out jake needed her right now
dot: chrissie are you okay
chrissie: dont worry about me its jake that needs help
jim:the amblance is on its way
dot: has any one checked to see if hes still alive
chrissie ran over to jake and felt to see if he was still alive
danny: chrissie is he alive ..........
don't let him die please please i am practically begging you!!!!!!!!!
im here down on my hands and knees begging you PLEASE don't let him die!!!!!!!
nooo you get baack here now or ill hate you i need to know if jakey dies
Don't you dare let him die!
xxx
sheilamarie
12-01-2006, 14:26
here part nine could not have jake.fan hating me or any one else
Chrissie: no no he’s still alive
Dot: the ambulances here
Then the paramedics jumped out and ran to jakes aid
Paramedic1: what’s his name
Chrissie: Jake
Paramedic2: Jake can you here me
Paramedic1: we gotta get him to a hospital
Chrissie: he will be alright wont I mean you can save him
Paramedic2: will do our best love but I doesn’t look good
And with that they put Jake on a stretcher and took both him and Chrissie away in the ambulance bout a mile down the road Chrissie was in a bad way
Paramedic1: you alright love I think we better look you over
Chrissie: its not me you have to worry about its Jake just constraint on him alright
Paramedic1: if your sure your okay
Chrissie: positive
Paramedic1: so what happened then
Chrissie began to cry tears slipped down her cheeks she was covered in jakes blood it was all over her on her cloths in her hair it was dried all up her arms and her legs she looked like shed taken a blood bath they looked at Chrissie funny Chrissie suddenly had a thought what if they thought she did it
Chrissie: um well we where just about to go in the pub and I bumped in to some one he got nasty and Jake Jake ran at him that’s all I saw he stabbed him please tell me what the worlds coming to people don’t fight fare any more they pull out a knife and what kind of person could do that
Then Chrissie remberd she was that kind of person what she did to den was just as bad as what that bloke did to Jake if not worse she was brought back from her thoughts by aloud bleeping sound the paramedics ran to Jake again she knew something was wrong
Chrissie: what’s that sound
Paramedic1: his heart stopped
Chrissie: nooooo please help him
The paramedics shocked him once then they did it again and again and then again they looked at Chrissie then they looked at jakes who’s skin had gone grey
Paramedics: that’s all we can do im afraid
Chrissie: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO JAKE ………..
TO BE CONTINED
oh my god. get back here now please.
you cant kill jake get back here now it worked last time lol
WHAT? No he can't be dead, he can't leave chrissie no
more now x x x
sheilamarie
12-01-2006, 19:03
hey vguys what happens next you decied should jake live or die you decide
live, live, live , live, live you know i want him to live please hun i'm begging you!!!!
Tanya
xxxx
live please im begging you down on my hand and nees you cant kill jake
please do more soon and please let him live
just caught up!
:crying: dont let him die!!!
xStephaniex
17-01-2006, 14:00
omgggggggggggggggggggg he cant dieeeee :( dont make him die pweaseeeeeee !!!!! great script !!! :D - just dont make jake die , coz....coz....ill....cryyyyyyyyyyyy :crying:
sheilamarie
18-01-2006, 20:57
here it is
Chrissie: noooo please one more time im begging you
Parimedic1: there’s no point love
Chrissie: please just once more
Paramedic2: ok here we go stand back
Suddenly the world seemed so slower to Chrissie she was shaking and crying as they shocked him one last time Chrissie held her breath suddenly the beeping stopped it went back to normal
Chrissie: is that good
Paramedic1: wow I got a pulse
Chrissie: ohh thank god Jake your going to be alright yeah your gonna be alright darling
Paramedic1: where nearly there now
Chrissie: hold on Jake hold on
When they arrived at the hospital Jake had to be taken strait to intensive care unit Jake had to be taken for a ex-ray when he got back dr. smith came up too Chrissie
Dr.smith: miss watts could i have a word
Chrissie: yes doctor what is it
Dr.smith: well not too much dammed done but I am concerned about the amount of blood he has lost
Chrissie: oh god he will be ok wont he
Dr.smith: its hard to say but he stands a real good chance
Chrissie: thanks doctor can I go in there now
Dr.smith: yeah ok
As Chrissie entered the room the sight of Jake hooked up to a number of different machines made her blood run cold if only she watched where she was going maybe this would not of happened
Chrissie: hey you the doctor thinks you stand a real chance so do I so you better hurry up and wake up you scared us all to death Jake boy you know that don’t you for a minuet there I thought id lost you rember just before you know what umm you promised me a fairy tale where is it please don’t leave me I love you so much
Jake: you don’t get rid of me that easy
Chrissie: Jake shhh don’t try and talk
Jake: I love you too you know
Chrissie: I know you do this it now Jake me and you
Jake: yeah
Chrissie: now you get some sleep ill be back in the morning ok
Jake: ok
Chrissie : love you
And with that Chrissie left Jake and went to tell Danny that he was ok
ill post more soon
Yey he survived! More soon x
awwww!!! glad hes alive!
more soon! :)
sheilamarie
23-01-2006, 15:35
heres the next part guys
Chrissie and Jake made there way into the pub both hand in hand they where going to be a happy family
Chrissie: well you should be taking it easy
Jake: oh hark at Florence nightingale
Chrissie: oi watch it or your have stab wound to match
Jake: is that you threatening me
Chrissie: it might be
Jake- oh yea
Chrissie- yea
Jake began tickling her
Chrissie- get off NO
Jake- alright… keep your knickers on
Chrissie: umm now Jake that’s the last thing im gonna do
And Chrissie walked up the stairs closely followed by Jake
Later that day Chrissie and Jake where up stairs in bed Chrissie laid next to Jake staring at him and thinking about her and den when they first got married she thought they would be together forever
But then she relished something she couldn’t marry Jake cause everyone thought den was still alive so she was still legally married to him and she couldn’t divorce him could she but then she had an Idea she got up and got out her mobile
Chrissie- hi Amanda its me yea I was hoping you could do me a favor yea ok an hour then ok bye
sorry its sort ill post more soon i promise
wow fabby glad to see jakes still alive
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