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Well this is the first time ever putting a script on any board but please tell me what you think?
Part one
She couldn’t believe her ears when the judge said not guilty she was Happy. She was getting out. She could hear Sharon sigh a long and sad one; she could hear Peggy calling her names.
Jake: Chrissie!
She looked she sat there with tears of joy in her eyes she couldn’t even recognize him but she recognized his voice when she got let out the court room she ran to him and they hugged. She was so happy.
Ruby; Chrissie are you free?
Chrissie: Yep!
Ruby; Oh my god dad will be so happy and so will Kerrie!
Chrissie: I know now let’s go back to Walford.
Jake, Chrissie and Ruby all got in a cab that took them back to ruby’s house where Johnny and Tina and Kerrie and Noah were all waiting for the news. They all walked in.
Ruby: Dad, Tina, Kerrie and Noah I have a surprise for you!
Kerrie: What?
Ruby: This!
End of part one
good, but we need some explanation:
why has tina come back?
why are the allens close to chrissie?
whos kerie and noah?
sorry people.
Tina came back to see Johnny.
Kerrie and noah are friends of johnnys.
Chrissie's connections lie with The Allen's being her family
Hope you enjoy it
the_watts_rule
17-12-2005, 20:23
Good Start.
Part two
Here's the next part!
Chrissie took a deep breath and walked in with Jake. Kerrie just screamed!
Chrissie: Heya!
Kerrie: You got off!!
Chrissie: Of course it was classified as self defense though that stupid cow Sharon didn’t think so!
Johnny: Watch your mouth she’s your stepdaughter!
Chrissie: I really don’t care, anybody want to come to the Vic for a drink it will be on my lovely fiancé Jake.
Everybody: Sure.
They all walk out the door and standing up at the Vic window was Vicki and Sharon they were looking right at Chrissie and Jake and the others.
Chrissie: Oh great this is all I need!!
Jake: what is it?
Chrissie: Vicki is back?
Jake: who’s Vicki?
Chrissie: Den’s youngest daughter.
Jake: I’ve heard about her.
Chrissie: I bet you have! Come on let’s get going.
They all walk into the Vic but as soon as Chrissie put her foot through the door there was a deathly silence as the old landlady walked into the Vic.
sorry people.
Tina came back to see Johnny.
Kerrie and noah are friends of johnnys.
Chrissie's connections lie with The Allen's being her family
Hope you enjoy it
how is she related to the allens?
Chloe-Elise
17-12-2005, 21:33
Great start, more asap :D
sorry i'll post more soon and the answer to Bondboffin's question. She is Johnny's daughter.
Thanks for replying.
Tanya xx
sheilamarie
18-12-2005, 00:56
sorry i'll post more soon and the answer to Bondboffin's question. She is Johnny's daughter.
Thanks for replying.
Tanya xxGood 2parts more soon :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
Not bad, keep trying, your doing good.
heya sorry about the delay am not allowed on the internet
Great script. Please do more when you can:).
dennis_babe
24-12-2005, 12:30
part 3
They all walk out the door and standing up at the Vic window was Vicki and Sharon they were looking right at Chrissie and Jake and the others.
Chrissie: Oh great this is all I need!!
Jake: what is it?
Chrissie: Vicki is back?
Jake: who’s Vicki?
Chrissie: Den’s youngest daughter.
Jake: I’ve heard about her.
Chrissie: I bet you have! Come on let’s get going.
They all walk into the Vic but as soon as Chrissie put her foot through the door there was a deathly silence as the old landlady walked into the Vic.
Dennis: Well she’s out!
Chrissie: Looks like it doesn’t it!
Dennis: What can I get you?
Chrissie: Large bottle of champagne!
Dennis: coming up (He gets the bottle of champagne and Get’s the glasses and puts 8 glasses out)
Chrissie: There are only 7 of us!
Dennis: What am I not allowed some?
Chrissie: I thought you were like Sharon and wanted me to be found guilty?
Dennis: No, I really don’t care who killed Den and you were there for me after what Den had done!
Chrissie: Yeh well he’s not worth worrying about now I am going to get on with my new life!
Sharon: What new life?
Chrissie: Oh you haven’t heard have you! I and Jake are getting married!
Dennis: congratulations!
Jake: Thanks Dennis.
Sharon: Wow you’re getting married
Chrissie: I just said that!
Sharon: I know!
Chrissie: So why the hell did you say it again!
Just at that point Vicki walks down and turns to face Jake.
end of part 3
dennis_babe
24-12-2005, 12:31
sorry i'm jake - luva to i just signed on the wrong one.
sheilamarie
24-12-2005, 13:14
wow its getting good welldone more soon :thumbsup:
Emma-Lou
24-12-2005, 15:04
Thats good well done more soon please
part 4
Vicki: How can you look Chrissie in the face at night, Kiss her or hug her when you know that she is a murderess and killed my father?
Chrissie: Excuse me Vicki but I don’t see why you’re asking that question because was it not Last Christmas you told me that you wished your father was dead because he paid more attention to Sharon and he kept on treating you like a child? And when he is dead you mourn and don’t care what anyone else is feeling?
Sharon: Did you actually wish he was dead Vicki?
Vicki: Yeah because he didn’t even care about me or Dennis we were his Children we had a piece of him somewhere in us but you, you’re adopted but he spent more money and cared more about you then he did with me or Dennis did you ever notice that?
Sharon: Were did all this hatred come from?
Vicki: What do you mean where did it come from I’ve always felt it!
Chrissie: I really don’t think this is the right place to argue!
Sharon: Yeah I agree with Chrissie!
Vicki: Well I don’t agree with the murderess!
Dennis: Vicki I have had enough of you now go upstairs and calm down!
Vicki: Seeing as you’re not my Father! You’re my Brother and my Uncle which is not right you and Sharon should never have gotten married it is just not right!
Sharon: Right pack you’re bags and I’ll book a flight for tomorrow and you can go and live with Pauline because I can’t have you in the same Room as me!
She walks out and heads over to Arthur’s bench and thinks to herself.
Chrissie walks over to her.
End of part 4
Thanks to everyone who has replied
Brill. More asap please:D.
heya sorry about the wait my dad has just flattened my computer which means that i cna't put a new part up because it is no longer on my computer sorry. but after i have installed msn office i will type some more a.s.a.p!!
Luv Tanya
xxx
Part 5
Chrissie: Sharon you alright? That must of been pretty hard on you?
Sharon: It was a bit. i never knew Vicki was not happy with me and Dennis.
Chrissie: she hid it from you and pretended.
Sharon: But why?
Chrissie: Beacuse she knew what you would do didn't she!
Sharon: Yeah she did.
Chrissie: Coming in?
Sharon: yeah it's freezing out here.
Chrissie: What do you expect it's the middle of december of course it's cold!
Sharon: Yeah come on.
They both got up and walked into the laughing Vicki was over beside pauline and was shocked to see Sharon and Chrissie walk in laughing and Talkin.
Sorry it is so short people but that was right off my brain so i'm sorry if it's not good.
Luv Tanya
xxx
this is a well good script more asap :)
part 6
Jake: You two look freezing?
Chrissie: That is because we are!
Dennis: That is what you get for going outside then isn't it!
Chrissie: Enough of the cheek young man!
Sharon: Yeah enough of the Cheek Dennis!!
Sharon saw Vicki looking over and saw her face it was full of hatred. Then Peggy walked in.
Peggy: Well look she's out!
Chrissie: Sure am and i'm here to stay!
Johnny: Chrissie!
Chrisise: I'm not going to do anything harsh!
Johnny: Good!
Just at that point Kerrie walked in.
Kerrie: What's going on in here, Peggy have you got a problem?
Peggy: No why?
Kerrie: I thought you had a staring problem that's all!
Peggy: You Cheeky wee . . .
Johnny: You carry on and you won't know what's hit you!
Chrissie: Oi the pair of you's stop actin like two year olds!!
Johnny: Fine!
Chrissie: Anyboy want to come over to mine's or rather my dad's there are two many people who hate me here!
End of part 6
Hope you like it
Tanya
xxx
x Amby x
28-12-2005, 12:37
Good script tanya! can u giv me a hand making my animated banner coz i cnt do it! lol ill tlk 2 ya on msn!
lov Amber xxxx
shannisrules
28-12-2005, 13:17
keep going with this story its really good
its getting good more soon
heya thnks for all the replies but i can't think of any ideas so if anybody has any ideas for the next part please post and i'll tell you if i like it thanks!
Luv Tanya
xxxx
feelingyellow
28-12-2005, 20:32
good script, keep it going :)
Part 7
They all headed towards Chrissie's house. When they heard someone yell Chrissie's name.
Sam: Chrissie!
Chrissie: Yes sam?
Sam: What are you doing out?
Chrissie: Oh i got found not guilty!
Sam: But we all know you killed den!
Chrissie: Yeah i know but they had no evidence did they because i gave pauline the dog back didn't i!
Sam: Oh yeah!
Kerrie: Like mother like daughter a pair of idiots!
Sam: What did you just say?
Kerrie: Oh my god the sayin blond bimbos it is so true if you point it at her!
Sharon: Excuse me kez but i'm blond to!
Kerrie: Oops sorry Sharon i didn't mean it!
Sharon: You better not have!
Chrissie: Come on i'm freezing my but of let's go!
They all walked over when something caught Chrissie's eye?
Cheers for all the replies
Tanya
xxxxx
feelingyellow
28-12-2005, 21:09
fab hunni, can't wait for the next part :cheer:
Part 8
Chrissie told the others to go on and she said she would only be a minuet. She walked towards the cloaked figure she had seen and sure enough it was an ex.
Chrissie: Jamie what are you doing here?
Jamie: I came to see you?
Chrissie: Well that makes sense because i'm the only person you know in walford! Well cut to the chase!
Jamie: I want you back?
Chrissie: Oh sorry no can do Jamie i am engaged! Sorry.
Jamie: bUT HOW!
Chrissie: Oh it dons't matter well bye.
She made her way towards her house when someone grabbed her wrist.
Thanks feeling yellow and everyone else who have replied Thanks.
Tanya
xc
shannisrules
28-12-2005, 21:39
cool keep posting
Part 9
She quickly turned around to see who it was that had grabbed her. She relisead by the tight grip he had on her wrist it just had to be Jamie's dad Scott.
Chrissie: Scott get off me!
Scott: How did you know it was me?
Chrissie: Because you dated my sister remember and abused me enough times so i think i would know someone's grip wouldn't i!
Scott: No need to be a typical women!
Chrissie: Funnily enough i am a women get through that head of you'rs might help a bit!
Scott: Enough of the cheek!
Chrissie: Who the hell are you my Father!
Scott: No i don't think i am!
Chrissie: Well neitehr did i.
She yanked one more time and walked of into the darkness and headed to the park with tears in her eyes.
End of part nine
Part 10
She slowly sat down on the swing she didn't want to let the tears come. She felt useless even from beyond the grave Den was runing her life. She slowly put her hand to the buldge that was coming from her stomch. I'm pregnant kept on running through her mind it wouldn't register in her head no matter how times she looked at the photo of the baby or the amount of times she told herself. Noone knew not even Jake through he was the father. She didn't know how to tell Jake she was to scared to. Then all of a sudden it started to snow. She had been there nearly half an hour when Jake found her. He gently took her hand in his and pulled her p and they walked slowly back to the house.
End of part 10
feelingyellow
29-12-2005, 00:47
WOW! fab - keep it going!! :cheer:
thank you to all the replies but i'm going out today so i will do some tonight.
Luv Tanya
XXXX
wow its getting good more soon yay shes having a baby is she jake is so sweet look forward to reading it
Part 11
She slowly turned around to face Jake.
Chrissie: Jake i have something to say.
Jake: What?
Chrissie: I'm pregnant.
Jake: Since when?
Chrissie: Excuse me but this is not the way you're suppose to react or do you just don't want one!
Jake: I didn't mean it in that way!
Chrissie: Well what did you mean then?
Jake: I was just asking when you found out?
Chrissie: Two weeks ago even through i can't get it around my head.
Jake: So you found out in prison?
Chrissie: Yeah but i didn't know how to tell you.
Jake: It dosn't matter because we're going to be a real family now, you, me and the baby!
Chrissie: I know!
Jake: Come on let's go in.
They walked back to the house but Chrissie was silent she was glad she had told Jake now maybe she could get it round her head!
End of part 11
wow its getting good i luv jake :wub:
Part 12
They walked in through Chrissie rushed up tot the toilet to be sick everybody thought she had a bug but she didn't she was pregnant and she was happy. There was a knock at the door and Ruby answered it and standing there was Scott Jamie's dad he asked if Chrissie was in. Just at that point Chrissie had walked down and saw him she said she would be there in a minuet she grabbed her Jacket and her and Scott stood outside talking.
Chrissie: What is it scott?
Scott: I just want to say that if you know what's good for that sister of you'rs you would tell her to watch her mouth?
Chrissie: what sister?
Scott: Kerrie!
Chrissie: What's she done wrong?
Scott: She's a cheeky wee Cow that one!
Chrissie: Yeh well it's not like i can do anything!
Before she could scream Scott had his hand round her neck.
Scott: if you know what's good for you and Kerrie i would sort it out!
Chrissie: yes.
He let go and she nearly collapsed. it brought back painful memories. She walked back into the house and Ran up to the toilet again.
End of part 11
getting good my best friends boy friend used to hit her :( she dumped him now so thats good okay but the storys really getting good now more asap
Thanks for all the replies you've boosted my confidence :cheer:
Jake.fan i love jake to :wub:
Part 12
She slowly walked back downstairs and heade into the kitchen. She must of been in there for f minuets when Sharon came in. she shut the door behind her.
Sharon: Chrissie are you alright?
Chrissie: No.
Sharon: What's wrong?
Chrisse: I'm pregnant, i've just beem strangled and threatened because of Kerrie!
Sharon: What has she done this time?
Chrissie: She use to go out with Scott a father of one of my ex's but she dumped him and now she's acting like a total gobby cow to him and i got abused by him when Kerrie dumped him which would of been five years ago!
Sharon: So that is why you cated the way you did with my father?
Chrissie: Yeh!
Sharon: Do you want to me to shout Kerrie?
Chrissie: yes please.
Sharon: Kerrie!!!!!
Kerrie: what?
Sharon: Get through here now!!
Kerrie: Coming!
Kerrie walked through and shut the door behind her.
Kerrie: What is it?
Chrissie: Stop acting all gobby to Scott!
Kerrie: Why?
Chrissie: (Stands up) Why!! i've just been strangled because of you!!! And guess what Kez i'm Pregnant!!!!
With that she got up, grabbed her jacket and opened the door and slammed it behind her.
End of Part 12
wow it's soooo good!!
more soon
xxx
Part 13
she didn't know where to go so mant people hated her since. She murdered Den but nobody would listen to her when she keep on sayin she didn't mean so she had just stopped saying it all together.noboby not even Zoe and Sam knew the pain Den put her through with all the cheatin and lies i hurt she tried so hard not to think of it but she did. She decided to go to the Cafe. She walked slowly over there and opened the door when she walked in everybody went silent. She didn't mind she was use to this.
Chrissie: Jane i get a cup of Tea to go please?
Jane: YEAH SURE.
She wasn't going to sit in with a bunch of ignorant people who didn't care about her or spoke to her. She got her tea just as Stacey, Zoe and Kat walked in. She ignored them and walked out the door. She headed down to the club to see if her dad was working and he was so she walked in and eaded over to him.
Johnny: Chrissie you alright?
Chrissie: I don't know?
Johnny: Whar do you mean?
Chrissie: I'm pregnant, everybody apart from Sharon, Dennis, You, Jake, Kerrie, Noah, Tina and Ruby all hate me because i murdered Den but no one knows what he did to me and how much he hurt i've just been strangled by Kerrie's ex and she dosn't give a damn! (By this point her eyes had filled up with tears)
Johnny: Go home and see the others it might help!
Chrissie: Ok i'll see ou later.
She got up and walked through the door just as Zoe and Stacey came down.
Zoe: Chrissie You okay?
Chrisise: Does it look like it?
Stacey: you want a drink?
Chrissie: I can't have one.
Stacey: How come?
Chrissie: I'm pregnant.
Zoe: Congratulations.
Chrissie: Thanks but i have to go.
Stacey: By the way Chrissie you do have a friend me!
Chrissie: Thanks Stac well i better go see you later!
Stacey: See you.
She carried on up the stairs and headed back to the house when she got in she dropped her jacket and walked into the living-room where everyone else was
End of part 13
i think we all cant help loving jake hes sooo sweet and kind :rolleyes: any ways hunni the story is fab loving it and im really likeing sharon now lol more asap
i know He's so sweeet * Thinking * .... :wub:.
sorry people lost track.
part 14
She walked in and sat down and ignored Kerrie completley she had been a selfish cow she really had!
Dennis: You okay?
Chrissie: yeah of course i am Dennis. Sharon did Kerrie sort the thing out?
Sharon: No she hasn't!
Chrissie: Kerrie i would like you to sort tnhat!
Kerrie: Whatever.
Chrissie: You want to know something i don't care if you're my sister you're a selfish cow who only thinks about herself! Well guess what darlin there's more people in this house! Apart from you!!!!
Kerrie: who the hell you calling a selfish cow how about you look in the mirror then you might find out which one of us is the selfish cow!
Chrissie: Wow look she can stick up for herself!
Kerrie: I know i can you're murderess!!!
But before Chrissie could say another word Johnny walked in!
End of part 14
Wonder what johnny is gonna do
more soon x
Part 15
Chrissie: you evil cow!
Johnny: What's going on in here?
Chrissie: Kerrie called me a murderess even through i am but she done it beacuse probley like the rest of you i ment to kill Den well guess what you none of you know the pain he put me through with his cheatin and lieing.
Johnny: Yeah she's right noone knows and you (Looks at Kerrie) You know that today or tonight you're eldest sister who is also pregnant got strangled by you're ex because you have been cheeky to him!
End of part 14
Ut oh kerrie is in trouble!
Part 15
Kerrie: Well it's not my fault!
Johnny: Actually Kerrie i think it is you're fault!
Kerrie: yeah well he shouldn't of been asking for it then!
Chrissie: Right do you want to know something i've had enough of you Kerrie maybe you haven't noticed but i should not be gettin all stressed or angry but you you've just made me do that! I'm out of here i need some freeze air.
End Part 15
dum dum dum i love this story more soon hunni
this is sooo great!!
more soon
xx
Part 16
Instead of going to the park she soon relieased she had her car keys in her pocket she got them out and walked over to a silever audi tt and gently got in it and started up the engine. She put a cd on and started the car up and she was soon out of walford it took her ten minuets to get to the place she wanted to be. She got out the car and walked along the row of headstones intill she came to one it read ~
Dennis Watt's
dear husbands of Christine watt's
and Father of Sharon Rickman, Dennis Rickman and Vicky fowler.
Chrissie: You've made my life hell i hope you know that my life was perfevt intill i met you i thought you were diffrent but you're not you're just like steve no good. But funnily enough i have to admit i loved you in my own way but infortenatley you ruined that by bedding you'r son's girlfriend! Well i feel used and useless and now thanks to me killing you everybody i like hates me but i hate you to even more then i did infact.
With that she walked off to the car opened it up and soon drove off in to the night heading back to walford.
End of part 16
aaw poor Chrissie
fab hunni
Part 17
she got out the car and locked it. Not knowing that Kerrie was looking out the window to see who had came. When she relised it was Chrissie she just went back to watching tv. Chrissie walked in and pulled her shoes off and hung her jacket up and walked into the living - room and sat down next to Jake.
Johnny: you seem much happier where did you go?
Chrissie: Oh no where!
Ruby: i bet you i know?
Chrissie: go on then i'll give you five guesses!
Ruby: You went to a grave yard?
Chrissie: Yep!
Ruby: The one where mum and scarlet is buried?
Chrissie: Nope!
Sharon: Where my dad's buried?
Chrissie: How did you know?
Sharon: And i bet you where telling him what ou thought of him?
Chrissie: I sure did! Which really helped my anger vaniosh instead of taking it out on Kerrie!
Kerrie: Oh yeh where did you get the car from?
Chrissie: Oh Dad bought it for me last year remember you got the porsche!
Kerrie: Oh yh!
Chrissie: You are really forgetful!
Kerrie: I know oh and i'm sorry i shouldn't of said thoese things!
Chrissie: It's ok!
But then there was a knock at the door.
End of part 17
Who could be at the door?
who's at the door
fab as always, you're such a great writer
part 18
Chrissie got up and went to get the door and standing there was Demi.
Demi: Heya Chrissie would you mind doing me a favour?
Chrisise: Yeah what?
Demi: Would u mind baby sitting leesha for me it's just we are all going out?
Chrissie: Yeah sure i would love to!
Demi: Thanks.
Demi Handed chrissie lessha and her baby bag. Chrissie shut the door behind her and took leesha into the living room and sat down beside Jake.
End of part 18
oh it was demi at the door i need more lol its getting goood your well good at ths hun :)
feelingyellow
30-12-2005, 16:12
this fab! :cheer: can't wait for more :D
Part 19
Kerrie: who's that?
Chrissie: Demi's daughter aleesha but we all call her leesha!
Kerrie: Cool!
Johnny: i've got to go back to work but i'll see you lot when i come in okay?
Chrissie: Yeh okay dad oh have you got the Reef for mum's headstone?
Johny: Yeah it's out the back.
Chrissie: Thanks!
As soon as he walks out Chrissie, Ruby, Kerrie, and Sharon all stand up!
Chrisise: We are going to my mum's headstone to put something down but do not even touch anything apart from the t'v!
Jake: OK OK!
cHRISSIE: We'll be back in an hour ok?
Jake: Yeah ok!
The girls all get ready and chrissie opens her car so everyone can gt in they drive off but not before Sam and Peggy can see who's inside the car.
End of part 19
feelingyellow
30-12-2005, 16:22
aww fab more soon please :)
absolutely fabulous more soon
xxxxxx
Part 20
After work Johnny walks into the pub and Phill serves him. After a few drinks walks over to Phil and start's taunting him about Ben. Phil lunges at him nbut Johnny dodges him and Phil knocks his head off the bar and lies unconcese on the floor. He gets back up and bangs his head off of the bar which had glasses on it. Johnny leaves him there bleeding and finding it hard to breath. Johnny walks back home and walks in but dosn't realise that Kerrie is in the kitchen and Kerrie notices The blood on Johnny's suit Jacket and hand.
End of part 20
wow its getting good :thumbsup: more soon
:cheer: Fabulous :clap:
More Soon
xxx
Part 21
Kerrie had to sit down, She didn't know what to think could her dad really be a murderer? Chrissie and Sharon headed into the Kitchen to get sharon a glass of wine and to get Chrissie a glass of water.
Chrissie: What's wrong with you're face?
Kerrie: Oh nothing?
Chrissie: no need to use a tone with me i was only asking!
Kerrie: woh who are you my mother?
Before another fight could erupt between the pair of them Sharon steered Chrissie out of the Kitchen and bck in to the living - room.
End of part 21
Part 22
They walked in and Chrissie sat next to Jake. He put an arm around her she just laid her head on his chest. Just thinking about what had happened that day or rather that year. She never relly meant to kill Den but everyone thought she did! Well it wasn't her fault that dennis's ex was cow was it?
She thought she was lucky to even meet Jake and she actually loved him she had once made a promise to herself that she would never fall in love with anybody again or try to atleast well that was intill Jake moon came along he had it all he was handsome and had charms he was and sweet what more could she ask was also having his baby.
She then woke up. She hadn't relise she was sleeping but she was.
Then there was aknock on the door
End of part 22
Part 23.
She looked up and saw it was nearly midnight. she had been asleep for 2 hours and 55 minuets. She looked around she had her family and her boyfriend and her friends around her. Soon they heard a siren in a distanste. She slowly got up and headed towards the window and there was an ambulance parked outside the Vic she wondered why but she recognised the face that was on the stretcher it was Phil. she didn't know what to think she knew her father and Phil had been fighting with each other but she didn't think her dad would do this but then he did push Andy off of the flyover he never even knew that she knew.
End of Part 23
Part 24
She walked bak over to the sofa and they all counted down the seconds till 2006. When it was officially midnight. Her and Jake kissed Sharon and Dennis kissed and all the rest were just yelling and being noisey. Chrissie then decided to go to bed seeing as she was shattered. She walked up the stairs but as she walked up she heard a noise coming from her and Jake's room. She thought it must be her imagination. But as she got to the door and turned the handle and opened it she came face to face with Scott.
End of part 24
wow im loving this more asap
feelingyellow
31-12-2005, 22:01
fab hunni - keep it up!! :cheer:
Thanks for the replies but i won't do any more tonight but i hope you all have a good hogmany and i will post more tomorrow i promise!
Happy new year Bring on 2006!
Even through i'm not ready but anyway!
luv Tanya
xxxxxx
feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 00:42
:cheer: lol, looking forward to it and happy new year!!
can't wait
Happy New Year Everyone!!
happy new year to all this is well good i want more
Emma-Lou
01-01-2006, 14:01
its really good can not wait for more.Happy New year
Part 24
She froze she didn't know what to do it was like her mind had told her to freeze but she soon came out of it.
Chrissie: Scott get out my room now!
Scott: Why?
Chrissie: Because i said so!
Scott: Oh and i should do what you say because?
Chrissie: Because Kerrie won't be a gobby cow to you anymore now just get out!
He done as he was told and got out the window Chrissie reliesaed he had brought ladders. After he left she changed and just as she layed her head on the pillow she fell fast asleep.
End of part 24
feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 18:16
fab hunni!!
Part 25
They all get woken up by a knock on the door at 3 o'clock in the morning. Chrissie and Kerrie go down to answer it together and see the police standing there.
Chrissie: May i help you?
PoliceMan: Yes is Johnny Allen in?
Chrissie: Yeah why?
PoliceMan: I need to see him a minuet so could you please get him for me?
Chrissie: yes.
She walks into the living - room where her father is watching t.v and tell her that the police are at the door for him so he walks to the door.
PoliceMan: Johnny Allen i am aresting you on attempted murder of one Philip Mitchell tonight at 11 o'clock you may say something but this will harm you're defence in court.
Johnny: Fine take me away then!
Chrissie: But . . .
Johnny: No but's Chrissie!
The Policemen take him away and Kerrie and Chrissie head into the living - room.
Chrissie: Is that what was wrong with you earlier on?
Kerrie: yeh i saw the blood on his suit and his hands!
Chrissie: Kerrie i need to tell you something but you can't tell anyone!
Kerrie: OK go ahead.
Chrissie: He murdered Andy Hunter so whatever you think about dad like he wouldn't be able to kill anyone well unfortenatley he has! I'm going back to bed.
Chrissie leaves Kerrie in the living - room and goes up to the bedroom she is sharing with Jake and gets back on to bed. And falls straight asleep.
End of part 25
feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 18:33
:cheer: more soon please!
Part 26
They all woke up apart from Chrissie at nine o'clock. But Chrissie soon got up at 10 o'clock she needed the long lie and was glad to be in a comfy bed! But being in walford brought back to many memories but she didn't want to leave she knew to many people and all her mates stayed in Walford but she couldn't look over at the vic poperly without all the screaming and zoe crying and the last words she ever said to den and the last words he had ever said to her and they weren't i love you! But then she was mad at him she couldn't blame herself for what she had done she knew who she could blame little miss oerfect (Zoe). She was annoying like all the time she only ever cared about her reputation and herself but then she wouldn't of had the guts to kill den anyway! People who think she's a bitch should know one thing Den made her into what she is today! She tried to erase the thoughts so she walked downstairs into the living - room where everyone was listenin to music and talking and literally having a good time! She sat down next to Jake and they all laughed and talked.
End of part 26
feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 20:08
FABOLOUS!! can't wait for the next part :cheer:
Part 27
But her mind kept on wandering back to the moment's of Den's death but what noone relised what it really hadn't gone the way she had planned it to go but noone listens to her. well it's not like he was liked around the square. Chrissie could name quite a few people who hated him. Pauline Fowler - he beded her youngest daughter Michelle.
Dennis Rickman- His own son hated him because he was never there for his mother or him and he had to get adopted because of it! herself - For cheating and lieing!
All the mitchell's - for conning sam out of stuff well sam's blond so she's not very bright she thought quietly to herself! She suddenly felt pains in her stomach it wasn't the baby kicking either. She didn't know what it was but by mistake she screamed then doubled over she was in pain!
End of part 27
feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 20:52
aww what's happening to chrissie?? hope she's ok, post more soon please!!
part 28
The pain had gone as quick as it had came. She didn't know what it was but she knew it had gone! shr then had run up 2 the toilet to be sick. Then she went to get changed nothing woh just a pair of trousers and a top then went to put her make-up on. Then walked downstairs and gave Jake a kiss before he went off to work and then she walked back through to the living - room where Kerrie, Ruby, Sharon and Sam was. She rubbed her eyes when she saw Sam but she was there she just groaned this was all she needed. But Sam ignored her and spoke to Kerrie.
Sam: I just dropped by to say that you're father is a murderer!
Chrissie: yeh well Phil shouldn't of been asking for it and you all knew it was coming anyway!
Sam: Like Father like daughter!
Chrissie: Just get out the house now you spiteful cow.
Before anybody could say anything Sam had slapped Chrissie. Chrissie Pulled her hair. Without knowing Chrissie was pregnant Sam punched her in the stomach. All they heard was a soft thud as Chrissie fell to the floor and doubled up in pain but this time it was worse.
End of Part 28
feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 22:02
aww no poor chrissie! damn sam! more soon please!!
Part 28
Sharon: You stupid cow you know she's pregnant don't you!
Sam: No i didn't!
Kerrie: This is nothing against you Shaz but you really are a blond bimbo you know that!
Sam: I've been told that!
Chrissie: Guys it's not funny!
Sam: Well sorry but i was laughing!
Kerrie: You are a spiteful cow now get out!
Sam left while Chrissie slowly stood up. She was lucky she had an appointment just then. She and Shaz headed out to the car and drove off to the hospital. she got gel put on her stomach but the worst moment of it was when the doctor said she had lost her child. She broke down in tears she couldn't believe it. Her and Sharon gor back in the car and went back to walford. The first thing she done was walk into the Vic, walk up to Sam and goes at the top of her voice I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY YOU KILLED MY CHILD AND IT WASN'T EVEN BORN YET. then she walked out and collapsed on a bench and sat there in tears.
End of part 28
awwww nooooo!!!!!!! poor Chrissie! God Sams evil, just caught up, it's fab more soon
xxxx
feelingyellow
01-01-2006, 23:53
:crying: poor little chrissie and jake awwwww :(
wow this is good poor chrissie evil sam :angry: poor chrissie post more soon
Part 29
She soon got up and wiped the tears from her eyes and now she was just mad plain mad. She went back into the vic walked up to Sam and asked her it they could speak in privet!
Sam: Yeah Okay come in to the basement!
Chrissie: Fine!
They both walked in and before sam could even do anything Chrissie had her by the hair!
Chrissie: you pathetic cow you thought just becuse you're mother thinks more of them brothers then you! You would kill an unborn Child well it is not going to work that way! I swear it's revenge time so if i was you i woul you're back everytime you turn around because i might be there!
She shoved her to the ground and walked back out and headed over to the house where Jake ws she know had to tell Jake the news but she didn't know how.
End of part 29
wow this is brill hunni more soon
xStephaniex
02-01-2006, 14:28
wooooooooooooooow like how they went tp the basement where chrissie actually burried den lmao. this is great stuff more soon :D
Emma-Lou
02-01-2006, 14:34
This fab can't believe she lost the baby stupid Sam.More soon please
Part 30
She sat down next to Jake wondering how to say this she knew she had to.
Chrissie: Jake i need to tell you something.
Jake: What?
Chrissie: You know when you went away and Sam was here she said she wanted to talk to kerrie?
Jake: Yeah.
Chrissie: Well she said my dad was a murderer and i called her a spiteful cow so she grabbed my hair and i punched but then she punched my stomach. Luckily i had my appointment but i got given some bad news.
Jake: What?
Chrissie: Sam killed the baby!
Jake: She what?
Sharon: It's true she did.
Before anyone could say another word Jake got up walked out the door and Headed to the Vic.
End of part 30
feelingyellow
02-01-2006, 15:05
awwwww, evil sam more soon please
sheilamarie
02-01-2006, 15:05
wow hun this is brill more asap
Awwww poor chrissie and jake, wonder where he has gone more soon x
Part 31
Chrissie ran after him not wanting him to do something he regretted. When she ran into the vic she could see him taling to sam she rushed over to them!
Jake: You killed my baby!
Sam: eh no i didn't!
Chrissie: Eh yeah you did! Sharon and me and the doctor all know you did so there is no point in lieing and anyway Jake's going to believe me anyway!
Jake: Yeah i am going to believe you oh and Sam if you come anywhere near Chrissie again i swear you will not know what has hit you!
And with that Chrissie and Jake linked hands and walked off to the house.
End of part 31
hun this is fab more asap poor jakey and chrissie i hope jake kickls sam butt lol
feelingyellow
02-01-2006, 15:32
fab! :D
Part 32
Chrissie felt someone grab her arm she turned around to face Peggy.
Peggy: How dare you're boyfriend threaten my sam!
Chrissie: wow is she you're Sam now! It was a shame you weren't here when al the Andy stuff happened and u were stupid enough to trust him!
Peggy: Yeah well he was an honest young man!
Chrissie: Sure was oh and he was true you're Sam is a blond bimbo.
Before Peggy could say anything Chrissie walked into the house.
End of part 32
wow go chrissie fab
more soon
xxx
Part 33
She walked upstairs to get ready. Jake was taking her out for a meal and she knew which outfit she was going to wear to. She shut the door behind her and open the wardrope and right at the front was a pale pink spaghetti strap dress. That her Dad had bought her for her birthday. Then she went downstairs to get her black heeled sandels. Then she went back up the stairs and locked her bedroom door behind her. She quickly got changed into her dress then sat down at her dressing table. She put her make - up on then she done her hair she didn't know what to have it like so she had it down it only took 2 hours. Chrissie was quite surprised at herself this would normally take 4 hours. She walked back down the stairs to see Dennis and Jake in tuxedos and Sharon in a pale blue dress with black heels she had her up in a high ponytail. She sat down on the sofa to get her shoes on by the time she had done that it was 7 o'clock the resevation was at half 7 so they all headed out and the taxi came and all 4 got in it just as Steve an Ex of Sharon walked out of The vic. He had just seen Sharon and he thought she looked beautiful.
End of Part 33
feelingyellow
02-01-2006, 21:30
fab hunni, can't wait for the next part :)
Part 34
They soon arrive home at 11 o'clock and they decide to go down the Club for a drink. Jake puts his arm around Chrissie's waist as she is slightly Drunk and Dennis and Sharon link hands not aware that Steve can see them. They walk up to the bar where Tina is serving and ask for 2 whiskys, coke and a vodka and tonic. Chrissie thanks Tina and pays her and they all go off to find a seat when Stacey comes in with Ruby.
Ruby sees Chrissie and that and walk over to them.
Ruby: Heya guys.
Chrissie: Heya rubs, stace.
Stacey: Heya.
Ruby: Who's are those men staring over here?
They all turn there heads and Chrissie recognises Jamie while Sharon recognises Steve but pretends she dosn't know him beacause her life is perfect now. After they finish there drinks they walk off and head into the house where Chrissie and Jake go straight to bed.
End of part 34
This is fab, more asap please:D
Part 35
They all got up at 11. Chrissie didn't want to get up she loved her bed through not as much as she loved Jake. She was nice and Warm but then remembered that her, Ruby, Stacey and Sharon were all going shopping so unwillingly she got out of bed. She put on Her White Trouseres that she loved tand Her Low cut black top and then she decided to put heels on even through she would get sore feet but she didn't care. Then she walked downstairs where Jake, Sharon, Kerrie, Ruby and Stacey. They were all ready so Chrissie gave Jake a kiss and they all headed out to see Sam staring at Chrissie she just waved and they walked to the car they all got in and then made there way out of walford.
End of part 35
Thanks for all the replies i appreciate them loads hehe.
Luv Tanya
xXx
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 12:22
fab :) can't wait for the next part! :cheer:
Part 36
They soon came home laden with bags they had all gone out on what to by but funnily enough the boys didn't mind. Jake was glad that Chrissie was happy after what had happened with the baby. They soon all decided to go to the the Vic. so They all head out but Chrissie has a plan up her sleeve. They headed into the Vic and walked up with Jake. Chrissie knew that Sam had a crush on him. Sam came up to take there orders.
Jake: 2 whiskeys, coke, vodka and tonic (looks to Chrissie) What do You want babe?
Chrissie: A vodka and Lemon please sam!
Sam: Coming right up.
Once the drinks came Chrissie and jake walked back over and sat down beside the others.
End of Part 36
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 12:47
fab hun, can't wait for the next part :)
PART 37
They were all having a laugh when Chrissie caught Sam staring at Jake.
Chrissie just gave her an evil llok and went back to join in the conversation.
Sharon: Chrissie you okay?
Chrissie: Yeah of course.
Sharon: Because you looked at sam when she was staring at Jake?
Chrissie: Oh that's nothing really she dosn't know what i'm like if she even flirts with him!
Jake: Yeah i know but you better watch out by the way because you know what Peggy's like!
Chrissie: Why would i be scare of pintsize?
At this remarke they all burst out laughing Sam looked over but Chrissie just waved and turned back to the others.
End of part 37
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 13:28
fab! more soon please :cheer:
Part 38
They all decided to head out because it was getting boring. Just as they were about to leave Scott came up wanting to speak to Chrissie.
Chrissie: What is it now?
Scott: I just wanted to say thanks for sorting Kerrie out for me.
Chrissie: It's ok. wow you're saying Thanks.
Scott: it'll be the last time!
Chrissie: (rolls her eyes) Typical men!
Scott: Well see you!
Chrissie: See you!
She headed out to the others.
End of Part 38
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 13:51
fabolous :D
part 39
She walks over to the others and Jake put's her arm around her waist. Kat notices she's out.
Kat: How did you get out?
Chrissie: I was found not guilty.
Kat: But . . . . .
Chrissie: see the one thing i am good at is lying and it finally paid off!
Kat: Very Funny!
Chrissie: you must have a stupid sense of humor because that wan't a joke! Well i don't have enough time in the day to talk to the likes of you so bye!
With that the all headed back to the house.
End of part 39
sheilamarie
03-01-2006, 17:43
this is brill hun more asap
Part 40
i can't believe Scott said thank you that is so not like him. I've known him that long what wih kerrie and me dating Jamie. I can't believe that Sam fancies Jake sorry but he's mine. I love him even after I said i wasn't going to love anyone else i have i fell in love with him. He's just sweet and sensieble and cute annd gorgeous i could go on like this forever he has a thousand good points about him. Just then she was brought out her thought by the door slamming.
End of part 40
Emma-Lou
03-01-2006, 18:54
this is fab can not wait for to read more
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 18:55
fab!!! :cheer:
Part 41
Chrissie: What happened there?
Ruby: Stupid cow she can hardley talk!
Chrissie: Who?
Ruby: Sam!
Chrissie: What she done this time?
Ruby: Well me and Stacey were talking about how cute a couple you and Jake are and she goes well they won't be for very long because i'll get him and he'll dump her! And i went well you're like late because there gettin married and she goes well they won't when i get to him. And i just yelled at her you stupid cow and walked out!
Chrissie: Let me at her!
Before anybody could stop her she was walking over to the vic.
End of part 41
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 19:37
FAB!! can't wait to see what happens! :cheer:
Part 42
She walked in and swung the doors to the vic so hard silence was in the Vic.
Chrissie: You, You stupid Cow. You are not going to get your hands on Jake no matter what happens because who would want to go out qithe a blond bimbo and a selfish cow like you!
Sam: Well it's true!
Chrissie: Well he wouldn't wnat you anyway he's got me.
Before Sam could say anything chrissie slapped her so hard her nose started to bleed.
Chrissie just walked back out.
End of PART 41
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 19:53
fab! :cheer:
Part 42
She gets her car and drives to a cemetry and went to Den's Grave.
You i hate you you really have ruined my life. Honestly now Sam wants to nick Jake from me. But she can't i love him to much if he ever left i wouldn't know what i would do. I promised myself once i had killed you i would never fall in love with anyone else.
But that didn't work. You are just a useless git and i'm glad i finished you off you won't be hurting anymore pople you have hurt me more then anyone will ever know.
She couldn't say anything else. she was crying so hard. She saw a bench nearby and collapsed on that.
End of Part 42
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 20:11
aww, more soon please :)
Part 43
She couldn't face Jake so she went right to the club. Since her dad was in Jail she owned it. she walked in and walked into the office and just sat there deep in thought when Sharon walked through.
Sharon: Chrissie you ok?
Chrissie: Yeah of course.
Sharon: I heard what you did to Sam that was really brave of you when you had done it Peggy came round to look for you but you weren't hom. where were you?
Chrissie: At you're fathers grave.
Before Sharon could say anything Jake walked in.
End of page 43
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 20:25
fab :)
Part 44
Jake: Chrissie you okay?
Chrisie: Yeah of vourse i am why wouldn't i be?
Jake: it's just Peggy was looking for you earlier on.
Chrissie: I know but i wasn't in walford.
Jake: Good i's just glad you weren't hurt i don't know what i would do without you.
Chrissie: me to
Chrissie walked over to Jake and they cuddled and then linked hands and walked outside and went over to the Vic. Chrissie didn't care what would happen because Sam was nothing to Jake. But Chrisie was his world.
End of part 44
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 20:35
aww more soon please :)
Part 45
They walk in but the Vic falls silent because Peggy stares right at Chrissie.
Chrissie: Peggy take a picture it might actually last longer.
Peggy: Why eould i want a picture of an ugly mug like you?
Chrissie: I'm a human being not a Dog or a cup!
Peggy: No you're not a dog you're a b***h!
Chrissie: I know Den made me that way!
Peggy: No you were like that before you even met him!
Chrissie: How do you know?
Peggy: Because you're mother was one to!
Chrissie: don't you dare talk about my mother like that or i'll . . .
Jake: Babe come on let's go!
Chrissie: Tou and that B***h of a daughter of you'rs better watch out.
With that she walked out with Jake's arm around her waist just as sam comes back from visiting Zoe!
End of part 45
sheilamarie
03-01-2006, 21:11
wow that told peggy this is brill hun keep it going
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 21:14
fab :) more soon please
Part 46
Chrissie: you little grass can you not keep anything from mummy aw pity!
Sam: Yeah well you wait and see i will get Jake!
Chrissie: Yeah in you're dreams because guess what i'm his world and he's mine and we love each other just because Andy hated you and only used for money dosn't mean you have to take it out on me i've had enough with Den and everything!
Sam: Why is it everytime we talk it all turns round to be you!
Chrissie: hut you're mouth you stupid . . .
Jake: Babes come on i think you need to calm down!
Chrissie: yOU BETTER WATCH IT!!
then her and Jake head into the house.
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 21:41
Fab!! :cheer: can't wait for the next part :D
Part 47
Chrissie: Oh my god sorry but i swear i will kill her i've done it before and if i need to i will do it again!
Jake: Chrissie calm down please!
Chrissie: Ok, you want to discuss the wedding?
Jake: Yeah okay.
He sits down beside her.
Chrissie: How about july a summer wedding?
Jake: Yeah that sounds really nice!
Chrissie: Who do you want for you'r best man?
Jake: i'll proabley ask Dennis!
Chrissie: Yeah that sounds good!
Jake:Who do you want or bridesmaids?
Chrissie: Kerrie, Sharon, Ruby and Stacey.
Jake: Sounds good and you know what else sounds good!
Chrissie: Nope what?
Jake: Me, you out for dinner just the two of us!
Chrisie: Yeah i'll just go up and get changed.
She kisses him lightley in the lips before walking up the stairs to get changed
End of part 47
my 100th post is dedicated to my script and a big thank you to all the replies including Emmie thank you.
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 22:13
hehe it ok :) 100th post - only 400 til banner time :cheer: fab script hunni :D
Part 48
She came down half an hour later in a skirt and topm with her new pink boot she bought the day before.
Jake:wow you look beautiful.
They walked out to Chrisses car but what they saw was terribel someone had written stuff about Chrissie and put Sam for Jake on it. Chrissie really had enough and before Jake could stop her she walked into the vic walked through the side door and up stairs into the living - room where Sam was watching t.v.
End of part 48
feelingyellow
03-01-2006, 22:20
ooooooooo things are getting ugly, lol - more soon please :)
Part 49
Chrissie: You b***h!
Sam: What did i do now?
Chrissie: you know full well what you done!
Sam got up to leave but before she could get out Chrissie had shut the door.
Sam: Let me out!
Chrissie: No way!
Sam: Fine!
Sam: Punched her, Chrissie grabbed sam's hair.
Chrissie: Don't act like a b***h it don't suit ya!
Sam: Well i think it does!
Chrissie: Listein to someone who could give you bitch lessons it don't suit ya!
Sa,: I don't care!
Chrisie: You will care when i ask for money for a paintjob on my car!
Sam: I won't be paying!
Chrissie: Fine i'll go to the police then won't i!
Sam: Okay i'll pay!
Chrissie: Thought you would.
She let go of sam's hair and headed down the stairs and out into the bar when she entered the bar area the whole place went silent and she just walked out walked around the corner and phoned the police! Chrissie wasn't going to make any promises to that bitch!
End of part 48
Part 49.
After she had phoned the police she walked back into the house and went straight upstairs to the bathroom. Se saw that her nose had been bleeding it reminded her of scott. she shook her head fircealy she didn't want any of these memories coming back to her she had a new life with Jake. She was happy but she hadn't finished with Jake. The door rang Jake went to get it.
End of part 49
feelingyellow
04-01-2006, 12:41
o0o0o0o0o fab!!! :cheer:
sheilamarie
04-01-2006, 14:45
this is brill more soon
Part 49
Jake: Chrissie it's peggy!
Chrissie: Wait a min babe!!
She tried really hard to stop her nose from bleeding 5 minuets later it finally stopped. She walked downstairs where peggy was!
Chrissie: What is it?
Peggy: You phoned the police on my daughter.
Chrissie: very well observed!
Peggy why did you do it?
Chrissie: Because she vandilised my car!
Peggy: well you deserve it you murderess cow.
Before anyone could stop chrissie she had slaped Peggy.
Chrissie: See what i see it is i done it in self defence. But you're daughter can't take it that i am going out with the one she fancies well tough luck on her he choose me not her!
Chrissie just walked out and headed over to the club once she was in the club she quietly smiled to herself and got down to work on her next part of revenge but as she always said revenge is a dish best served cold!
End of part 49
feelingyellow
06-01-2006, 17:58
Part 49
Jake: Chrissie it's peggy!
Chrissie: Wait a min babe!!
She tried really hard to stop her nose from bleeding 5 minuets later it finally stopped. She walked downstairs where peggy was!
Chrissie: What is it?
Peggy: You phoned the police on my daughter.
Chrissie: very well observed!
Peggy why did you do it?
Chrissie: Because she vandilised my car!
Peggy: well you deserve it you murderess cow.
Before anyone could stop chrissie she had slaped Peggy.
Chrissie: See what i see it is i done it in self defence. But you're daughter can't take it that i am going out with the one she fancies well tough luck on her he choose me not her!
Chrissie just walked out and headed over to the club once she was in the club she quietly smiled to herself and got down to work on her next part of revenge but as she always said revenge is a dish best served cold!
End of part 49
fab :D
Part 50.
She was thinking of a good revenge for Sam when Jake walked in.
Jake: Can i take you out for Dinner now?
Chrissie: You sure can!
They both walked out and sitting out there was a limo. Chrissie turns to Jake.
Chrissie: Is that for us?
Jake: Sure is!
Chrissie: Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sam heard her screaming and looked out the window just to see Chrissie and Jake get in the limo.
Chrissie: Oh my god it's lovely thank you babe!
Jake: It's nothing really.
Chrissie: It's not nothing it's everything.
Jake: Ok.
He sat back, Chrissie leaned on him and He put his arm around her waist. She thought to herself Now i really am Happy!
End of part 50
Thanks to Emmie and everyone else who have left comments i appreciate them.
Luv Tanya xx
sheilamarie
06-01-2006, 18:51
aww sweet
feelingyellow
06-01-2006, 18:57
aww love it!! more soon please and lol it ok :)
Part 51
When they got back home Chrissie went straight to bed she had a meeting with her solicitor about Sam. She woke up at 2 o'clock after having a bad nightmare but it was really werid. She tried to go over it, it was Den's funeral and he came back as a zombie he kidnapped Chrissie and tried to suffocate her but that didn't work so he let her go and came back to haunt her. It rwally freaked her out. She walked downstairs and sat on the sofa thinking but as she did tears slowly ran down her face.
End of part 51.
Chrissie's dream is one i actually had not last night but the night before but through her eye's ofcourse it was actually really freaky.
Luv Tanya xx
feelingyellow
06-01-2006, 21:03
god that is freaky lol! but fab script :thumbsup:
Part 51
Sharon walked down as she couldn't sleep and walked into the living - room and found Chrissie crying.
Sharon: Chrissie you ok?
Chrissie: I am now (Wiping the tears from her eyes. she hated it when people saw her cry)
Sharon: Good you want a cup of tea?
Chrissie: if you wouldn't mine?
Sharon: No problem i need one now anyway.
Chrissie: Why are you up?
Sharon: You know how Scott was with that man that night we were down the club?
Chrissie: Yeah.
Sharon: I didn't say anything because my life is perfect.
Chrissie: It won't last i'm not being mean but i thought when i was with you're dad i was happy but i wasn't.
Sharon: I know i still remember when he served Angie with divorce papers!
Chrissie: When did he do that?
Before Sharon could speak Ruby and Stacey walked down.
End of part 52
Luv Tanya xxx
Part 53
Ruby: Chrissie you okay?
Chrissie: Yeah i'm fine i just couldn't sleep!
Ruby: Cool well me and Stacey are going to watch a dvd in the living - room!
Chrissie: But it's (looks up at the clock on the kitchen wall) 3 o'clock in the morning!
Ruby: I know but we can't sleep.
Chrissie: Ok i'll come and join you but i don't know about Sharon?
Sharom: Yeah i'll come to!
Once the tea's were made they all headed into the living - room and Half way through the movie Chrissie was asleep.
End of part 53
Luv Tanya xxxx
feelingyellow
06-01-2006, 21:46
FABOLOUS!! :cheer: :D
Part 54
Jake wakes up and the bed beside him is empty he starts to panic. He walks down stairs and sees Chrissie sleeping on the couch. He walks over and gently kisses her she stirs and slowly wakes up. She wakes up and the first thing she sees is Jake.
Jake: What are you doing down here?
Chrissie: Long story!
Jake: Ok well i better get to work!
Chrissie: OPk well i'm going out with Ruby and Kerrie we're going to try and get in to see dad!
Jake: Ok well see you later.
Chrissie: Yeah see you later.
Before he left they kissed again and she walked upstairs in her pyjamas and quickly got changed she had one wee thing she had to sort out before anything!
End of part 54
feelingyellow
06-01-2006, 22:28
fab :cheer:
Part 55
She swiftly walked over to the Vic well her and Sharon that is they were planning to meet Amanda over there. Just as they walked in Amanda walks in.
Chrissie: Heya Mandy!
Amanda: Heya so what is it?
Chrissie: Well let's just say i would like to buy the Vic but the only problem is i need them to go bankrupt so i was wondering if you could maybe pull a few strings at the bank?
Amanda: I'll Try.
The three of them just stared over at peggy with smiles on there faces.
Peggy: Do you want something ladies?
Chrissie: Not from you well anyway i will see you two later i'm off to see my dad!
Before Peggy could say another word Chrissie had left and had got a phone call that they could not see there dad today so chrissie decided to go down the club and speak to Jake.
End of part 55
feelingyellow
06-01-2006, 22:43
Fab :)
Part 56
Jake: i was not expecting a visit from my fiance! (As he said this danny looked up)
Chrissie: Oi mind not everyone knows!
Jake: Opps sorry danny just get back to work now!
Chrissie walks over and sits up on the bar just as Sam comes down.
Chrissie: Sam what can i do for you?
Sam: Mum was wondering could she get a crate of champagne?
Chrissie: Yeah but tell her it's ten pounds a crate i am not giving the Mitchell's free stuff!
Sam: Yeah whatever!
Chrissie: Shove off you stupid cow!
Sam knew better then to fight with her and walked back out!
Jake: i thought you were going to see you're dad?
Chrissie: The evil people won't let us see him! Althrough i have a feeling he's been fighting again!
Jake: Yeh problaey!
Chrissie: Well i'm going to sort the paper work out!
Jake: Okay we still having lunch together?
Chrissie: We sure are!
Chrissie walks back into the office.
End of part 56
feelingyellow
06-01-2006, 22:58
fab *clap clap* :D
Part 57
Two hours later Chrissie and Jake walked out of the Club and over to the Vic for a drink.
Pegy: What can i get you two?
Chrissie: Whisky and Vodka straight through!
Peggy: Not like you to drink it straight?
Chrissie: Peggy don't even try and get on the good side of me it won't work!
Chrissie carried the drinks over to Jake where Sharon, Dennis, Ruby, Stacey and Dawn were.
Chrissie: Honestly that women thinks she can just get on the good side of me as quick as you can say victoria well you can't!
Just at that point Amanda came up to them.
Amanda: Chrissie the thing we were talking about the bank have gone through with it i just need to give them this!
Chrissie: Thanks Amanda.
Everybody apart from Sharon and Chrissie looks puzzled while Amanda goes up to Peggy to give her the letter from the bank manager.
End of part 57
Part 58
Peggy: Since when have we became bankrupt?
Grant: I don't know?
Chrissie: What don't you dare stare at me i had nothing to do with it but if it helps i'll buy the vic off you!
Peggy: Never!
Chrissie: Fine but remember not everyone will want the vic not that Den's body was under the basement!
Peggy: What are you stating?
Chrissie: Nothing just that i want the Vic!
Peggy: Well you're not getting it!
Grant: Mum just give her the Vic then we'll have money!
Peggy: Fine you can have the Vic!
Chrissie just smirked now the last part of this revenge had to be a good one it had to be a decent ending. But what.
End of part 58
feelingyellow
07-01-2006, 14:29
ooooooooo fab! :cheer:
Emma-Lou
07-01-2006, 18:12
Thats fabulous :cheer:
Part 59
Chrissie just smirked and they all headed out. Chrissie and Ruby were going shopping. Jake and Danny were going back to work. Dennis was going back to the bookies. Sharon and Kerrie were going to the hairdressers. While Chrissie drove out of walford the car was silent chrissie just thought to herself about the next revenge.
Ruby: Chrissie you ok?
Chrissie: Yeah sure why?
Ruby: Just the look on you're face.
Chrissie: That's the way i always look when i think you terror!
Ruby: (laughing) ok.
They just sat there chatting while Chrissie was driving obviousley. They were in the centre of london half an hour later.
End of part 59
feelingyellow
08-01-2006, 18:53
fab :cheer:
They came back 5 hours later and had loads of bags. Sam looked out the window to see Jake walk over to Chrissie.
Jake: What the heck did you buy?
Chrissie: Don't worry darling it was all in the sale! But also i bought the bridesmaid dresses i didn't find a dress i liked for myself and i bought someone a pink shirt.
Jake: It better not be for me!
Chrissie: It might or might not!
Before chrissie could move Jake had her around the waist and was tickling her.
Chrissie: Get off me now!
Jake: Well tell me you didn't but a pink shirt then!
Chrissie: Ok i didn't but a pink shirt!
Jake: Thank you.
He let go of her and helped carry in the bags.
End of part 60
feelingyellow
08-01-2006, 20:27
fabbie :cheer:
Part 61
Sharon walks out.
Sharon: What was all that about?
Chrissie: Nothing.
Sharon: Come on tell me!
Chrissie: I bought Jake a pink shirt and he ain't happy.
Sharon: i don't think he would be.
Chrissie: Wel anyways i bought the bridemaids dresses!
Sharon: Yeah!!
Chrissie: I didn't buy me a dress through there were none i liked!
Sharon: Aww to bad.
Ruby: The dresses she bought us are gorgeous.
Jake comes to the dorr.
Jake: do you three want to come in before you freeze!
Chrissie: Yeh sure babe!
Jake: Good i don't want a snowwomen for a bride!
Chrissie: Oi remember i still have that Pink Shirt!
Jake: (Blushes) Ok sorry!
Chrissie: You better be!
They all walked inside and walked through to the living roon.
brill as usual. can't wait to see what chrissie's final revenge will be.
feelingyellow
09-01-2006, 16:02
hehe, fabolous! :D
sheilamarie
09-01-2006, 16:10
keep it going hun its fab
Part 62
Dennis: What was all that about?
Chrissie: Nothing now may you please go!
Dennis: Why?
Chrissie: If you ask anymore stupid questions you'll be wearing the pink shirt!
Dennis: OK OK I'm out of here.
Chrissie: Good!
Jake and Dennis headed over to the Vic. While Chrissie showed the others there dresses for the wedding. Then they all headed over there.
sheilamarie
09-01-2006, 21:31
this is fab hun :)
wow just caught up hun this is great stuff more soon
love ya
bree x.x.x
Part
Chrissie: So now all we need are the tuxes for you two and my dress!
Jake: Well i could have the day off tomorrow and we could go shopping if you want?
Chrissie: Yeah ofcourse.
Jake: Good now all we need after that is the food and for the church!
Chrissie: Yeah i know.
Jake: I am finally going to marry my beautiful fiance!
Sam: Go and shut it please we don't want to know about you're doppy wedding!
Chrissie: (Turns around) I don't think we were really talking to you!
Sam: so . . . . . . .
Sharon: Sam dinnie start just because noone wants to marry you dosn't mean you have to be a bitch about it!
Sam: Well then if i'm a bitch so is Chrissie!
Chrissie: Oh i knew that. And guess what i'm proud of it!
Sam: Jake you better make sure she dosn't murder you in you're sleep!
By this time chrissie had had enough of her she stood up picked up her glass and chucked right at sam!
Chrissie: See what happens when you mess around with a bitch then that bitch gets even nastier! I'm off to see Amanda i'l see you when i get back!
Chrissie walked out and smirked. Sam was defenatley going to be a walk in the park compared to that pintsize of a mother ofhers.
End of part 63
Emma-Lou
10-01-2006, 18:48
Its great babe more soon please
this is fab hun more soon :)
Part 44
instead of going to Amanda's, She headed towards the hospital hoping that no one could see her. When she said she was there she sat down and waited for 5 minuets then got called through. She had came later on in the week to get a number of tests done.
Doctor: Mrs Watt's i am please to say that you are 2 months pregnant!
Chrissie: Yes!! Thanks.
With that she got up to leave now she only had two things to think about how she was going to tell Jake that she was pregnant again and try and ruin sam'#s reputation without having to stress out.
End of part 64
sheilamarie
11-01-2006, 18:31
aww that fab hun
Part 65
She drove around a bit intill she saw the most gorgeous wedding dress in a window s. She got out her phone and Phoned Jake to get there as soon as he could. He came 10 minuets later.
Jake: What is it?
Chrissie: I have found the perfect dress for me!
Jake: Where?
Chrissie: over there (points towards the shop window!)
Jake: Yeah that does look like a dress that would suit you.
They went in and she tryed it on and they bought it and then they walked back and drove home.
wow hun thats fab love it more asap
feelingyellow
14-01-2006, 16:46
fab!!!!!! :cheer:
would you lot mind if i went onto the wedding because it seems to be getting dragged on a bit but i don't know wht to do! lol so i am really giving you the choice!
Luv Tanya
xxxx
Part 66
The wedding day slowly dawned. At the Moon's Jake got up at nine and walked over to the wardrope and opened it and saw that the only shirt that was in there was pink. He thought Chrissie had something to do with it but infact it was Dennis and Danny wanting him to wear it. Over at the Allen's Chrissie got up at ten and walked downstairs to get a cup of coffee and was surprised to see Ruby, Kerrie and Sharon up.
Kerrie: So how you feeling?
Chrissie: Perfectly fine!
Sharon: Are you not even nervous?
Chrissie: I am a bit.
Ruby: A bit?
Chrissie: Remember i've already been married once!
Ruby: how could we forget!
They got up and went to get there hair and make - up done then got into there dresses by the time they got ready It was 10 to 1. They had 10 minuet to spare.
End of part 66
Luv Tanya
xxxx
feelingyellow
14-01-2006, 20:11
would you lot mind if i went onto the wedding because it seems to be getting dragged on a bit but i don't know wht to do! lol so i am really giving you the choice!
Luv Tanya
xxxx
i'm sure a wedding would be fab!! :cheer: :D
feelingyellow
14-01-2006, 20:12
woooooooooo fab 1st wedding part!! :cheer:
Part 66
Chrissies "pov"
I can't belive i am getting married again but the only problem i have now is Sam and the other one that my dad can't give me away because of the stupid Mitchell's well Kerrie's going to be given me away. Right well get a move on. Oh great here's the car and everyone's gathered around the Gate to see me coming out. Well rthere's Sharon yelling at me to get a move so i better get going!
End of Chrrissies "pov"
Chrissie: I'm coming keep you're Hair on!
End of Part 66
Luv Tanya xxxxx
feelingyellow
14-01-2006, 20:27
fabolous :cheer:
Part 67
She walked out the door and saw nearly the whole square apart from the Mitchell's everyone else was there. She got into the car after Kerrie and slowly let out a breath of air. She soon started to feel sick but she couldn't do anything about it she was in a car! She finally decided to let Jake know after the Wedding. But they soon ot to the church.
End of part 67
feelingyellow
14-01-2006, 21:38
fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cheer:
Part 68
As soon as the car stopped Chrissie noticed that Dennis wouldn't let Scott in but then he didn't have an invitation and she didn't want him there.
Dennis: You lot ready?
Chrissie: (look's at the others) Yeah!
They all walked to the doors while Dennis went down to tell the others that they were ready. Chissie and Kerrie walked down but Chrissie suddenly felt sick she didn't know what to do she had to be sick . She let go of Kerrie's arm and rushed back outside to be sick. Jake didn't care if he would have bad luck ran up after her and found her being sick in some bushes.
Jake: Babe you okay?
Chrissie: Yeah let's just say i'm pregnant!
Jake: aww that's brilliant!
Chrissie: I know come on let's get this wedding over and done with!
Jake: Yeah.
Jake headed into the church with Chrissie right behind him. This time her and Kerrie succesfully got down the aisle.
end of part 68
feelingyellow
15-01-2006, 12:04
fab!! more soon please :cheer:
xStephaniex
15-01-2006, 16:53
awww its brillll !!!! continue soon !!!! please :D :D :D x
Part 69
After the wedding they all headed back to the club. Chrissie was surprised to see her dad down there.
Chrissie: Dad i thought you were in jail?
Johnny: I was but i got let out.
Chrissie: Good good.
Just at that point everyone else appeared. Jake walked over to her.
Jake: Now how do you feel Mrs Moon?
Chrissie: A bit sick but that must be the baby!
Jake: When did you find out?
Chrissie: Yesterday!
Jake: And you kept it from me because?
Chrissie: I don't know.
Jake: That's no good!
Just at that point Dennis walks over.
Dennis: How do you enjoy wearing the pink shirt Jake?
Jake: It was you all along!
Dennis: (Laughing) Yep me and Danny!
Jake: You two are evil!
Just at that point someone Jake recognised walkeed over to them?
End of Part 69
luv Tanya
xx
Part 70
Jake looks around and is surprised to see Aimee a ex standing there.
Jake: Aimee what do you want?
Aimee: I came to see if we could try again?
Jake: That's never going to happen for two reason's!
Chrissie: Babe who's that?
Jake: Chrissie This is Aimee an ex, Aimee this is my Wife Chrissie.
Aimee: Sorry do you want to repeat that again?
Chrissie: Is there somethig wrong with you're hearing he said his Wife!
Aimee: Did anyone ask you because as far as i can see no one did!
Jake: Aimee i would never take you back for cheating on me with m own brother!
Aimee: But that was a mistake!
Chrissie: Ye right!
Aimee: go and keep you're nose out of this!
Chrissie: And who's going to make me?
Just at that point someone Chrissie knew walked over to Aimee.
End of part 90
Luv Tanya
feelingyellow
15-01-2006, 19:52
fabolous!! more soon :)
Part 91
Chrissie: Steve i did not invite you now get out!
Steve: Say's who?
Chrissie: Are you really this thick because i can't remember you being thick when we were married!
Steve: Yeah well i wasn't to happy when you asked for a divorce!
Chrissie: You honestly think i would want to stay with you after you abused me, i still remember it by the way!
Aimee: You deserved it!
Chrissie: You remind me of someone i know!
Aimee: Who?
Chrissie: Sam Mitchell and she's just like you a blond bimbo!
With that Chrissie walked off
End of part 91
feelingyellow
15-01-2006, 20:32
ooooooooo fab :D
Part 92
Chrissie walks around and finally has to sit down. She suddenly get's sharp pains in her stomach she dosn't think of anything of it but suddenly everything goes black and next time she wakes up she's in the hospital. Jake, Stacey, Ruby and Sharon are around her.
Chrissie: What happened?
Jake: You were under two much stress babe so you collapsed.
Chrissie: I know why!
Jake: So do i!
Sharon: Was steve there i thought i saw him but i wasn't sure?
Chrissie: No it was him alright! How's the baby?
Jake: It's fine!
Chrissie: good (Yawns)
Sharon: I think we'll let you get some sleep!
Chrissie: Jake can you stay with me please?
Jake: Yeah sure babes.
With that they all left and chrissie fell straight asleep.
End of part 92
awww yay shes ok, more soon
Part 93
She woke up quite slowly and her head was pounding she didn't know where she was. But as everything came into view she relised she was in the hospital. She Saw Jake, Sharon, Dennis and Kerrie standing there.
Sharon: How are you feeling?
Chrissie: i'm actually fine thanks!
Dennis: Good!
Kerrie: I have a surprise for you!
Chrissie: What?
Kerrie: Now that's for me to know and you to find out.
Chrissie: But . . .
Kerrie: Nope you will find out soon!
Chrissie: Yeah whatever!
MM: Watch you're mouth Chrissie!
Chrissie: Who the hell said that?
Becky: Me!
Chrissie: Oh my god i haven't seen you in ages!!
Becky: Yeah well i never really contacted you because i felt you had moved on from me!
Chrissie: I never Moved on from you how could i?
Becky: I don't know!
Chrissie: Well see you will always be my best mate!
Becky: Good because you will always be mine!
Chrissie: Good!
Just at that point the nurse came in.
Nurse: Chrissie i have some good news for you!
Chrissie: What?
Nurse: You are getting discharged you can go now!
Chrissie: Yesssssssssss!!
End of part 92
Becky is Chrissie's best mate!
feelingyellow
16-01-2006, 20:40
fab fab fab!! :D
I will write the next part later on i have tutoring so i promise i will!
Luv Tanya
feelingyellow
17-01-2006, 20:24
I will write the next part later on i have tutoring so i promise i will!
Luv Tanya
now pumpkinpie... now *evil face* :p
I seem to be dragging it on a bit so i'm going to do the scene after she has given birth! Please Comment!
Lol
Luv ya
Pumpkin (Tanya)
Part 93
Chrissie slowly woke up. She was still groggy after all the drugs they gave her to help give birth to her Daughter Libby Moon! Standing around her was Jake, Sharon and Dennis.
Jake: Hyea babe how are you feeling?
Chrissie: Groggy!
Jake: Well obviously!
Chrissie: I might be drugged up but i will not tolerate that now how is libby!
Sharon: Now that is one women you do not want to mess with!
Chrissie: I agree with her!
Before anyone could say anything else Chrissie fell fast Asleep!
End of page 93
feelingyellow
17-01-2006, 21:42
aww yay libby!!!!!!!!!!!! yes yes yes more soon please!
Part 94
The next day she woke up and her and Libby were allowed out. Jake came to collect them. They soon arrived back at walford Chrissie got out carefully carrying the travel cot with Libby in it. She walked into the vic to see her dad and show him Libby.
Chrissie: Heya dad. Here is the new edition to the family Libby Moon.
Johnny: Aww she's like her mum!
Chrissie: Yeah i know well i better go!
Johnny: Ok i will speak to you later!
Chrissie: Ueah!
She walks over to the Vic!
Chrissie: Peggy you have till Monday to get out the Vic!
Pegy: Fine now who's that (Pointing to Libby)?
Chrissie: That is Libby Moon my daughter!
Before Peggy could say anything Sam came over and she had heard what Chrissie had said!
feelingyellow
17-01-2006, 22:04
fabtabolous!!!
Part 95
Chrissie just walked out she really wasn't in the mood to talk to sam. She headed over to Pauline's where she knew Sharon and Dennis would be. She knocked on the door and Sharon answered.
Sharon: Heya come in.
Chrissie: Thanks i thought i would show you and Dennis Libby!
Sharon: Come on through!
Chrissie walked through as Sharon shut the door.
Dennis: Hi.
Chrissie: Hiya i just came round to show you Libby.
Dennis: Awww she's so cute!
Sharon: Yeah she is!
Chrissie: Sharon i am not trying to rub it in honestly but you can look after her while i'm out and while Jake is out.
Sharon: Ok thanks!
Chrissie: it's ok. Well i better get back. i'm going to put her to bed and i'm going to lie down!
Sharon: I'l come!
Dennis: Yeah i'll come to!
They all headed over to there house when Chrissie noticed Becky with someone.
End of part 95
feelingyellow
18-01-2006, 20:14
fab fab fab!!!!!! :cheer:
Part 96
Chrissie couldn't believe what she could see. She saw Becky holding hands with Steve!
She couldn't really think properley. But then Jake came up to her to see what was wrong.
Jake: Babe what's wrong?
Chrissie: Nothing i'm just tired.
Jake: Come on then let's get you home.
Chrissie was glad she had someone like Jake. They walked to the house and Jake took libby up to bed while Chrissie walked throught to the living - room absoulotely exshausted. But then Becky and Steve walked in!
End of part 96
sheilamarie
19-01-2006, 22:55
brill hun more soon
feelingyellow
20-01-2006, 16:44
fab as always :D
Part 97
Chrissie: Get him out my house now!
Jake: What are you yelling about?
Chrissie: i want steve out my house.
Jake: Why?
Chrissie: Because i don't like him!
Jake: Steve would you please get out now!
Becky: but . . . .
Chrissie: No but's i don't like him!
Steve: But i'll be on my best behaviour!
Chrissie: What you on you're best behaviour. since when!
Steve: I will be!
Chrissie: Well even if you will be i won't be here to see it happening!
With that she walks out and heads over to the club not knowing that steve is far behind her.
End of part 97
feelingyellow
21-01-2006, 20:42
wooo fab :)
Part 98
As soon as steve could literally reach out and touch Chrissie he leaped forward and put his hand over her mouth so she couldn't scream. He quickley took a gun out of his pocket and thought for a moment without putting it to her head. Her mind had frozen she didn't know what to do. So she kicked him hard in the leg while he quickly let go and she ran home.
End of part 98
feelingyellow
21-01-2006, 21:05
ooo poor chrissie - more soon please :D
Part 99
She slammed the door and leaned against it and slowly sled down it in tears when Sharon came out of the living - room to see who it was.
Sharon: Chrissie what's wrong?
Chrissie: He tried to kill me he nearly put a gun to my head but i kicked him!
Sharon: What slow down?
Chrissie: Steve tried to kill me!
Becky: Chrissie stop being an attention seeking bitch!
Sharon: Becky she's not lying!
Just at that point the doorbell went Chrissie got up quickly and screamed and ran into the living - room where Jake and Dennis was they had heard the whole thing!
End of part 99
feelingyellow
21-01-2006, 21:14
woo fab and you're nearly to 100 parts!! eek yay!
Emma-Lou
22-01-2006, 13:40
This fab more soon please
oh no part 100! but i'm writing the parts so small that's why.
Part 100
Sharon: do you want me to get the door or not?
Jake: I don't know!
Becky: Either you answer it or i will!
Sharon: we're not going to answer it!
Becky: But you can't leave him out there.
Chrissie: Well guess what we are.
Becky: But he's my boyfriend!
Chrissie; Yeah well you can either choose him or me?
Becky: You can't make me do that.
Chrissie: Guess what i am!
Just at that point Libby started crying.
Chrissie: I'll get her.
Chrissie slowly got of the sofa and walked up the stairs and headed in to Her and Jake's room where Libby was wide awake and talking to herself.
Chrissie gently liffted her out the cot and took her downstairs to see the others.
Jake: How are you feeling?
Chrissie: Terrified and Shattered.
Jake: Well get some sleep.
Chrissie: But i don't know if i will be able to.
Jake: You will don't worry.
Chrissie handed Libby to jake and she lay down on the couch and within 5 minuets she was fast asleep.
End of part 100
feelingyellow
22-01-2006, 16:27
oo fabolous!! can't wait for more wooo 100 parts :D
Chrissie finally woke up at half 3 but no one was around! Well Dennis was but he was in the kitchen she slowly woke up and sat up shivering the heating must of gone off while she was asleep. Dennis then walked into the living - room.
Dennis: i can see you are up!
Chrissie: Well i think i am!
Dennis: I get the drift sleeping beauty.
Chrissie: Oi quite it! And make me a cup of tea please.
Denis: Fine fine!
He got up to make her a cup of tea when Jake walked in with Baby Libby he had just taken her for a walk and she had fallen asleep.
Jake: How are you feeling?
Chrissie: Cold! The heater must of gone off while i was asleep!
Jake: Yeah it did!
He sat down on the sofa and chrissie cuddled into him hoping to get some heat in her when Dennis cam back with her Cup of tea.
End of part 21
feelingyellow
24-01-2006, 22:10
fab more soon huni!
Emma-Lou
26-01-2006, 18:34
This is great you have written lots and you can still keep the tension there well done can not wait for more
You will get more soon it's just i don't know what else to put that's all.
Tanya
x.x.x
You will get more soon it's just no one seems to be replieing to this one anymore:p
i've just caught up. poor chrissie, she's not having an easy time of it.
Thanks but it will brighten up for her
Thanks but it will brighten up for herglad to hear it :p cant wait
feelingyellow
31-01-2006, 17:51
You haven't posted anthing so I have nothing to comment lol :p But now I am, please do some more soon hun :D
Next part
Ruby: Do we live in the north pole?
Chrissie: Nope.
Stacey: So why does it feel like you are?
Chrissie: The heating's broken.
Dennis: Do you want me to phone the plumber for you m'lady?
Chrissie: Why that would be nice.
Jake: What's up with the fake posh accents?
Chrissie: Nothing i just need some fun.
Ruby: Why? What?
Sharon: Dosn't matter.
Just at that point the doorbell goes.
Chrissie goes to answer it and finds Steve and Sam there.
She runs back into the living - room and jumps on the seat.
Jake: what is it?
Chrissie: He's out there.
Dennis: Steve get lost and Sam what do you want?
Sam: To give Chrissie these.
Chrissie: Give me what?]
Dennis: Keys.
Chrissie: Oh he keys to the Vic!
Jake: I forgot about that.
Chrissie: So did i.
Sam gave Chrissie the keys and her and Steve walked off.
wow thats fab hun you must post more soon :p
feelingyellow
01-02-2006, 17:36
Fab part as always hun :D Please post more soon ... or else :p
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