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bakedbean

08-12-2005, 17:07

QUICK NOTE: "PAUL CAN NOW WALK AGAIN BUT WILL ALWAYS HAVE A WALKING STICK BY HIS SIDE."

EPISODE 1

1. THE LION/BAR INTERN DAY

LUCY IS BUSY WITH STEPH PUTTING UP THE CHRISTMAS DECERATIONS WHEN CHRISSIE WALKS IN FROM THE BACK WITH HER COAT ON AND CARRYING A BAG.

CHRISSIE: Im off now Lucy

LUCY: Oh ok then love

CHRSSIE; Thanks

CHRISSIE WALKS OUT JUST AS SOME OF THE CHRISTMAS DECARATIONS FALL DOWN.

STEPH: I think it gonna be one of those days

2. RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD KITCHEN INTERN DAY

SHARON IS BUSY COOKING WHILE SOPHIE IS MAKING A CUP OF TEA. SOPHIE PURS THE WATER INTO THE CUP AS SHE TURNS ROUND SO DOES SHARON WHO ACCIDENTEALLY KNOCKS THE CUP OUT OF SOPHIES HAND ONTO THE FLOOR.

SOPHIE: Oh my gosh now look what you have done
SHARON: Im sorry
SOPHIE: Mum brought me that last Christmas
SHARON: I will get you another one
SOPHIE: YOU BETTER

PAUL WALKS IN

PAUL: Whats going on

SOPHIE STORMS OUT PAUL TURNS TO SHARON.

SHARON: Dont ask

3. OUTSIDE THE CAFE EXTERN DAY

JILL IS BUSY POSTING A SIGN UP THAT READS "CHRISTMAS TEA 24TH OF DECEMBER" ALAN WALKS UP.

ALAN: Christmas Tea aye i might bring Trudy to that
JILL: Well you better hurry im nearly fully booked.

4. THE LION BAR INTERN DAY

LUCY IS AT THE BAR WITH VIV WHEN STEPH COMES OUT OF THE TOILET LOOKING VERY PALE.

VIV: You look terrible
STEPH: Ive just been sick
LUCY: I think you should go home me and Viv can handle evreything
STEPH: Are you sure
LUCY: Go on home

5. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

PAUL AND SHARON ARE WATCHING TV TOGETHER

PAUL: Fancie going out for tea tonight
SHARON; Yeah why not

6. THE LION BAR INTERN NIGHT

THE PUB IS VERY BUSY WITH ALL THE LOCALS HAVING A LAUGH ALAN AND TRUDY ARE PLAYING POOL WHILE HUGH IS TEACHINF NICK HOW TO PLAY DARTS VIV AND LUCY ARE BUSY BEHINED THE BAR.

LUCY: Blimey i did not think it would be this busy
VIV: Yeah i bet youll miss it though
LUCY: Of course this has been my home for over thirty years
VIV: Then dont sell up
LUCY: No its time to move on

7. RESTURANT INTERN NIGHT

PAUL AND SHARON ARE ENJOYING A MEAL TOGETHER

SHARON: This is lovely
PAUL: I know that Sophie can be a bit of a handful
SHARON: Say that again
PAUL: Its just she wants me and Eilleen to get back togther but thats not going to happen
SHARON: I know
PAUL: Sharon marry me

8. THE LION BAR INTERN NIGHT

THE PUB IS NOW EMPTY VIV PUTS THE LAST FEW GLASSESS ON THE BAR WHILE LUCY WAITS AT THE DOOR.

VIV; I hope Steph is back tommorow
LUCY: Yeah so do i
VIV: Well i best be off
LUCY: Ok then

LUCY OPENS THE DOOR FOR VIV WHO WALKS OUT LUCY CLOSES IT AND PUTS THE BOLT ON. SHE THEN TURNS OFF THE LIGHTS TO THE BAR BUT AS SHE TURNS ROUND SHE IS HIT ON THE HEAD WITH A BAT.

big bro fan

08-12-2005, 17:39

good but just a few questions

1.Who is Steph
2.is'nt Nick a bit young to be in a pub
3.have you read my Emmerdale script yet

post more soon please. :thumbsup:

bakedbean

08-12-2005, 18:10

i introduced steph in the last episode of the last season she is the new bar maid
nick is 14 but kids are allowed in the lion

big bro fan

08-12-2005, 20:05

very nice please post more soon

bakedbean

09-12-2005, 17:13

next episode up tommorrow

will sharon accept pauls proposal
and will Lucy escape from the fire!!!!!!!!

bakedbean

09-12-2005, 18:09

1. THE LION THE BAR INTERN NIGHT

THE BAR IS DARK THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES ALONG THE BAR AS WE SEE BOTTLES SMASHED ON THE FLOOR AND ALCHOL POURING OUT OF BROKEN GLASSESS THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES TO THE EDGE OF THE BAR WHERE WE SEE LUCY LYING IN A HEAP WITH BLOOD RUNNING DOWN HER HEAD. A BLACK BOOT APPEARS BY LUCY THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES UP TO THE TOP OF THE PERSONS LEG WHO IS HOLDING A PHOTO OF THE SCOTSMAN FAMILY THE PERSON LIGHTS A MATCH AND SETS THE PHOTO ALIGHT AND DROPS IT ON THE FLOOR AND THE FLOOR BECOMES ENGULFED IN FLAMES. THE PERSON RUNS OFF WITH LUCY STILL UNCONCIOUS ON THE FLOOR.

2. RESTURANT INTERN NIGHT

PAUL AND SHARON ARE STILL SITTING AT THE TABLE PAUL IS HOLDING SHARONS HAND THERE IS WAITERS CLEANING EMPTY TABLES.

SHARON: What
PAUL: Marry me
SHARON: [SHE SMILES WITH GLEE AS SHE CRYS HAVE SOME SOFT ROMANTIC MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND] Yes
PAUL: You mean it
SHARON: Yes, yes i want to be Mrs Paul Ramsay

THEY HUG AND SMILE AND THEN KISS

3. THE LION THE BAR INTERN NIGHT

LUCY IS STILL LYING ON THE FLOOR WITH FLAMES DRAWING CLOSER AND CLOSER TO HER HAVE SOME DRAMATIC MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND.

4. OUTSIDE THE SHOP EXTERN NIGHT

JAKE WALKS OUT OF THE SHOP YAWINING HE GOES ROUND THE BACK AND BRINGS BACK WITH HIM THE DUSTBIN HE QUICKLY GLANCES AT THE PUB WHICH HAS ORANGE LIGHT FLASHING INSIDE JAKE LOOKS AGAIN WITH SHOCK AND RUNS BACK INTO THE SHOP.

5. INSIDE THE SHOP INTERN NIGHT

EMMA IS COUNTING THE MONEY FROM OUT OF THE TILL WHEN JAKE RUNS BACK IN.

JAKE: Ring the Fire service
EMMA: Jake
JAKE: Just do it tell them there is a fire at the Lion
EMMA: What
JAKE: Just do it

EMMA RUNS TO THE PHONE AS JAKE RUNS BACK OUT.

6. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

JAKE RUNS OUT OF THE SHOP AND UP TO THE LION

JAKE: LUCY, LUCY

VIV OPENS HER DOOR AND WALKS OUT WITH ALAN AND TRUDY TO SEE WHAT IS GOING ON.

VIV: Jake whats going...oh my god
ALAN: Fire
TRUDY: Is Lucy inside
JAKE: Thats what i am going to find out

JAKE RUNS DOWN THE ALLEY AND TO THE BACK OF THE LION

VIV: JAKE NO

7. INSIDE PAULS CAR INTERN

PAUL IS DRIVING THE CAR WHILE SHARON IS SITTING IN THE PASSENGER SEAT THEY TURN INTO EXETER STREET SEEING THE PUB.

PAUL: Whats going on
SHARON: I dont know

8. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

EVREYONE FROM THE STREET ARE NO OUTSIDE EXCEPT FROM EMMA WHO RUNS OUT OF THE SHOP TO VIV. SHARON AND PAUL STEP OUT OF THE CAR.

EMMA: The fire service are on there way, wheres Jake
VIV: He is inside
EMMA: NO JAKE

9. THE LION THE BAR INTERN NIGHT

LUCY IS STILL LYING UNCONCIOUS ON THE FLOOR AS THE FIRE IS BUILDING UP. JAKE RUNS IN COUGHI NG AS THE SMOKE DEEPENS HE SEES LUCY AND PICKS HER UP. PART OF THE BACK DOOR COLLAPSES HE LOOKS AROUND AND RUNS INTO THE CELLAR WITH LUCY AS THE FIRE BEGINS TO BURN DOWN THE BAR.

big bro fan

09-12-2005, 18:51

very good as usual nice to have you back

bakedbean

10-12-2005, 10:48

1. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

EVREYONE IS STANDING OUTSIDE WAITING FOR JAKE AND LUCY TO WALK OUT ALIVE.

PAUL: Did you ring the fire service
EMMA: Yeah
PAUL: How long ago
EMMA: About ten minutes
PAUL; They should be here by now
VIV: They need to be out of there now
JAMES; Look im going in
PHILLIPA: No james please

JAMES WALKS FORWARD TO THE LION WHEN THE DOOR EXPLODES KNOCKING DOWN JAMES.

PHILLIPA: JAMES
VIV: Oh my god

THE FIRE COUNTINIUES TO RIP THROUGH THE NOW OPEN DOOR WHILE JAMES IS LYING ON THE FLOOR. PHILLIPA AND VIV ARE ATTENDING HIM.

2. THE LION THE CELLAR INTERN NIGHT

SMOKE IS FASTLY SPREDING THROUGH THE CELLAR WE SEE JAKE CARRYING LUCY, HE SEES A SMALL WINDOW AND PUTS LUCY DOWN ON THE FLOOR AND HE RUNS TO THE WINDOW BUT REALISES IT IS TO SMALL TO FIT THROUGH.

JAKE: HELP SOMEONE HELP [JAKE COUGHS AND COLLAPSES]

3. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

SAME AS BEFORE ACCEPT JAMES IS STILL ON THE FLOOR WITH PHILLIPA AND VIV ATENDING HIM.

PAUL: Where are they
SHARON: There here

FIRE ENGINES SPEED ROUND THE CORNER WITH A FEW AMBULANCES THEY ALL STEP OUT AND THE FIRE MEN BEGIN TO PUT OUT THE FIRE.

INSPECTOR GROUSE: Is there anyone inside
EMMA: Yes my boyfriend Jake Mkcall and Lucy Scotman
INSPECTOR GROUSE: Ok

GROUSE RUNS OVER TO THE FIRE SERVICE TO TELL THEM ABOUT LUCY AND JAKE

EMMA: What if they dont make it
ALAN: They will love dont you worry
NICK: We were in there earlier dad
HUGH: We all were son

4. LION CELLAR INTERN NIGHT

JAKE AND LUCY ARE BOTH ON THE FLOOR UNCONCIOUS THE ROOF OF THE CELLING BEGINS TO CRACK WHEN SUDDENLY IT ALL FALLS DOWN ON TOP OF LUCY AND JAKE. HAVE SOME DRAMATIC MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND FOR THIS MOMENT THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES AROUND THE RUBBEL WE SEE JUST LUCYS HEAD AND ARM IN THE RUBBEL BUT JAKE IS NOWHERE TO BE SEEN.

big bro fan

10-12-2005, 16:01

very good please post more soon

bakedbean

10-12-2005, 16:54

1. OUTSIDE THE LION EARLY MORNING.

THE FIRE IS NOW OUT AND THE FIRE SERVICE ARE LOOKING INSIDE OF WHATS LEFT OF THE LION. EMMA,ALAN,TRUDY AND VIV ARE ALL STANDING OUTSIDE.

VIV: I think you need some sleep Emma
EMMA: No i want to know if Jake is all right
TRUDY: He might have got out.
ALAN: Trudy is right

JILL WALKS OUT OF THE CAFE AND UP TO VIV,EMMA,ALAN AND TRUDY.

JILL: Hey any sign
VIV: No
JILL: Well im doing tea and i could cook you up a fry up if you want no charge
ALAN: Yeah that would be nice, come on Emma
VIV: If they find anything youll be the first to know.

2. CELLAR INTERN DAY

THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES AROUND THE RUBBEL IT STOPS WHEN WE SEE LUCY, SHE SLOWLY OPENS HER EYES AND LOOKS AROUND.

LUCY: [VERY QUITLY AND IN AGONY] Help, please help

3. THE CAFE INTERN DAY

EMMA,ALAN,TRUDY AND VIV ARE ALL SAT AT A TABLE DRINKING TEA.

TRUDY: How did it happen
VIV: I dont know
ALAN: Any news on James
VIV: No last i heard was he was fine just a few cuts and brusies.
TRUDY: First the Plane Crash and now this what next
ALAN: Yeah your telling me
TRUDY: You ok Emma
EMMA: Im fine it just that...

EMMA STOPS SPEAKING WHEN SHE SUDDENLY SEES A VISION OF JAKE LOOKING HAPPY BY THE COUNTER.

TRUDY: Emma, Emma
EMMA: [JUMPS] What yeah im fine

4 INSIDE THE LION INTERN DAY

THE POLICE AND FIREMEN ARE SERCHING THROUGH THE RUBBEL INSPECTOR GROUSE WALKS IN AND TALKS TO ONE OF THE POLICE MEN.

INSPECTOR GROUSE: Well any sign
POLICE MAN: Not yet sir, we still have alot to serch through
INSPECTOR GROUSE: Have you checked the Cellar
POLICE MAN: Not yet sir there is to much rubbel in the way and it has caved in
INSPECTOR GROUSE: Do you think we will be finding them alive
POLICE MAN: Unlikly sir

5. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

PAUL,SHARON AND SOPHIE ARE HAVING AN ARGUMENT.

SOPHIE: WHAT YOUR MARRYING HER
PAUL: Yes you dont need to shout
SOPHIE; But you cant
PAUL: Why not
SOPHIE: Becuse i dont want you to
SHARON: You cant always have what you want Sophie
SOPHIE: I was not talking to you if you marry her i will never forgive you

6. THE LION THE CELLAR INTERN DAY

THE POLICE AND INSPCETOR GROUSE ARE SERCHING THROUGH THE RUBBEL.

GROUSE: Found anything yet
POLICE MAN: Sir i have found a female body

GROUSE RUNS THROUGH THE RUBBEL TO THE POLICE MAN WHO HAS NOW PULLED OUT LUCY.

GROUSE: How is she
POLICE MAN: Not good sir, she has a weak pulse
GROUSE: Get her to the Hospital and quick, we have one more to find and hurry or else we could be to late

baileya

10-12-2005, 18:45

What a way to return, fire!!!! Good 4 parts,nice to see you back.

bakedbean

11-12-2005, 10:11

1. THE LION CELLAR INTERN DAY

THE SERCH TEAM ARE STILL GOING THROUGH THE RUBBLE SERCHING FOR JAKE INSPECTOR GROUSE IS HELPING WHEN EMMA RUNS IN.

GROUSE: What are you doing down here someone get her out of here
EMMA: Where is my boyfriend
GROUSE: Who
EMMA: Jake where is he
GROUSE: We are serching for him
EMMA: But you found Lucy straight away but you cant find Jake
GROUSE: Look there is a possibility that he may have escaped
EMMA: How
GROUSE: Well for starters the window was open and smashed
EMMA; So he may not be here
GROUSE: It is possible

A POLICE MAN WALKS IN AND BEGINS TO TAKE EMMA OUT.

EMMA: Please find him, please

2. OUTSIDE THE PERRYS EXTERN DAY

JAMES COMES OUT OF THE HOUSE AND WALKS TO HIS CAR FOLLOWED BY PHILLIPA WHO IS IN HER DRESSING GOWN.

PHILLIPA: Be back soon
JAMES: Of course love

THEY KISS

JAMES: See you tonight

3. BUS STOP JUST OUTSIDE OF EXETER STREET EXTERN DAY

A BUS PULLS UP AT THE BUS STOP A MAN LOOKING VERY SMARTLY DRESSED STEPS OUT.

MAN: Thanks mate you dont know where Exeter Street is do you
BUS DRIVER: Just round the corner
MAN: Cheers

4. THE LION CELLAR INTERN

THE SERCH TEAM ARE STILL CHECKING THROUGH THE RUBBLE INSPECTOR GROUSE IS HELPING ALONG.

GROUSE: Come on people we need to find him time is running out
POLICE MAN: Sir i have found something
GROUSE; What

GROUSE RUNS OVER TO THE POLICE MAN TO SEE WHAT HE HAS FOUND. THE POLICE MAN REVEALS A ARM WHICH IS TRAPPED IN THE RUBBEL, GROUSE CHECKS FOR A PULSE.

GROUSE: Ok guys he has a very weak pulse we need to get him out of here and fast

5. HOSPITAL WARD 12 INTERN DAY

LUCY IS LYING ON THE BED WITH AN OXYGEN MASK ON HER MOUTH VIV WALKS IN LOOKING WORRIED.\

VIV: Lucy
LUCY: [TAKES OFF MASK] Viv...how are
VIV: Oh forget about me i wanna know about you
LUCY: [STRUGGLING TO TALK] Im fine
VIV; You dont sound it

6. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN DAY

EMMA IS STANIDING OUTSIDE WITH ALAN WATCHING ON PAREMEDICS RUSH PAST THEM AND INTO THE PUB.

EMMA: I think they have found him

GROUSE WALKS OUT OF THE LION AND WALKS OVER TO EMMA AND ALAN.

GROUSE: We have found Jake and we are getting him out of the cellar now, but i have to warn you he is in a critical state at the moment.
EMMA: Critical
GROUSE: He has a very weak pulse and time is running out
EMMA: You mean he could die
GROUSE: I dont know

bakedbean

11-12-2005, 10:45

HERE ARE A FEW SPOILERS FOR 2006 AND BOY IS IT GONNA BE A BIG YEAR FOR EXETER.

WHILE ON A MYSTREY COACH TRIP THE RESIDENTS OF EXETER STREET CRASH INTO THE MURKY SEA WATER CAUSING MANY PEOPLE TO DISSAPEAR AND A MURDER :eek: BUT THE QUESTION IS WHO WILL SURVIVE?????

PAULS MUM JOINS THE STREET JUST AFTER CHRISTMAS AND SHE WILL BE CAUSING MAYHEM FOR THE NEIGHBOURS!!!!

EILLEEN ROBINS RETURNS FOR HER DAUGHTER SOPHIE AND ALSO TO SEEK REVENGE ON PAUL.

LUCY FEARS THAT THE PUB WONT SELL AFTER THE FIRE UNTIL CHRISTMAS DAY WHEN A BUYER MAKES THERE PRESCENCE FELT BUT THE QUESTION IS WHO IS IT???

PHILLIPA BEGINS A PASSIONATE AFFAIR WITH A CERTAIN INDIVIDUAL THAT HAS YET TO BE SEEN, BUT WHAT WILL JAMES DO IF HE FINDS OUT????

AND FINNALLY VIVS FAMILY COMES TO STAY BUT SHE FINDS OUT THAT SHE HAS A LIFE THRETENING DISEASE WILL SHE SURVIVE?????

ALL THIS AND MUCH,MUCH MORE ALL EARLY NEXT YEAR????? :thumbsup: :cheer:

big bro fan

11-12-2005, 17:25

Sounds good can't wait can you give spoilers for christmas episode

bakedbean

11-12-2005, 18:53

there is some spoilers for crimbo episode already in there

bakedbean

11-12-2005, 19:33

Hey People Im Planning Ahead For An Explosive 2006 I Already Have My Season Finale Planned And Exeters Birthday Episode Is Also Planned. But I Am Also Focusing On Newer Faces And Seen As The Street Does Not Have Enough Room For Evreyone It Means We Will Be Saying Goodbye To Quite A Few. I Am Planing On Revamping The Show Making It More About Real Life (e.g. Ilness, Pregnencey) But It Will Also Be Filled With Drama And Suspens. As You May Have Noticed I Have Been Using Fire Alot Heck Exeter Street Has Seen Three Fires In Eight Months. You Will All Know By Now That I Am Killing Off Quite A Few Charecters At The Beggining Of The Year In A Huge Coach Crash Into The Sea. Which Will Leave Evreyone Wondering Who Has Survived. But Not All The Charecters That Are Leaving Will Be Killed Off Phillipa Perry Will Be Leaving On The Crimbo Edition, Simply Becuse I Dont Have Anything For Her About From Her Just Being James Wife. But I Know That You The Readers May Have Some Thoughts On All This So If There Is Any Charecters You Feel Are Not Going Anywhere Or Charecters That You Really Want To Keep Then Just Post Your Thoughts Thanks.

baileya

11-12-2005, 21:34

Exeter is looking good next year. I have my work to do.

big bro fan

12-12-2005, 16:39

Stacey stacey stacey stacey stacey stacey oh and um Stacey if your not beggining to get the picture keep stacey

bakedbean

13-12-2005, 17:27

1. OUTSIDE THE PERRYS EXTERN DAY

THE MAN THAT WE SAW GET OFF THE BUS IN THE LAST EPISODE WALKS TO THE FRONT DOOR, HE IS WEARING A TOP HAT AND A LONG LEATHER JACKET, HE SMIRKS AS HE KNOCKS ON THE DOOR, HE CHECKS HIMSELF OUT IN THE REFLECTION OF THE WINDOW WHEN PHILLIPA OPENS THE DOOR.

PHILLIPA: Vic what the hell are you doing here
VIC: Ello darlin

2. THE HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY

LUCY IS SITTING UP ON HER BED WHILE VIV IS TALKING TO HER.

LUCY: So how bad is the pub
VIV; Its bad, the cellar has caved in and there is barley any of the bar left
LUCY: What am i going to do im not going to be able to afford to pay for it to be rebuilt for goodness sake no one wants to buy a burnt out pub
VIV: You can claim insurance

INSPECTOR GROUSE WALKS IN AND WITH A BAG OF GRAPES IN HAND WALKS UP TO LUCY.

GROUSE: Mrs Scotsman how are you
LUCY: Im baring up
GROUSE: I have some questions i would like to ask you
LUCY: About the fire
GROUSE: Well how it started
LUCY: I dont know
GROUSE; What do you mean you dont know
LUCY: Look all i remeber about last night was that i locked up and when i turned round well it all went black.

3. INSIDE THE PERRYS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

PHILLIPA IS POURING HERSELF A DRINK OF WINE AND VIC IS LOOKING AT THE PICTURES ON THE FIREPLACE HE PICKS UP A PHOTO OF JAMES

VIC: Who is this
PHILLIPA: My husband
VIC: He dosent look happy hes not even smiling
PHILLIPA: Look if you are going to insult my husband like that then you can damn well get out
VIC: Ok ok im sorry
PHILLIPA: What do you want anyway
VIC: I want you
PHILLIPA: Oh dont be so stupid
VIC: Look you dont need him you dont need any of this
PHILLIPA: Oh yeah and what do i need...well
VIC: Me you need me
PHILLIPA: You i need you i dont think so
VIC: We need each other
PHILLIPA: I dont need you
VIC: Yes you do
PHILLIPA: Why would i leave the man i love for you
VIC: Becuse you love me
PHILLIPA: Oh please
VIC: Yes you do
PHILLIPA: You left me for that tart urshula you left me with nothing
VIC: I left you becuse i had to
PHILLIPA: Dont make me laugh
VIC: Look
PHILLIPA: I dont want any of your excuses just...just get out of my house
VIC: You dont mean that
PHILLIPA: I do

PHILLIPA WALKS CLOSER TO VIC UNTIL THEY ARE VERY CLOSE TO EACH OTHER.

PHILLIPA: Why dont you crawl back to Urshula and stay there that tart and you deserve each other
VIC|; I love you
PHILLIPA: Well i dont love you
VIC: Will you listen to me you stupid cow

PHILLIPA ATTEMPTS TO SLAP VIC BUT HE CATCHES HER HAND, THEY LOOK INTO EACH OTHERS EYES AND KISS PASSIONATLEY

4. JAKES EYE SIGHT

THE SCREEN IS BLACK WHEN WE HEAR EMMAS VOICE

EMMA: Jake...Jake...are you awake

JAKES EYELIDS OPEN SLOWLY WHEN THEY FINNALLY OPEN IT IS VERY BLURRAY JAKE TURNS TO EMMA BUT HE CAN JUST ABOUT MAKE HER OUT

EMMA: Jake are you ok
JAKE: I...I...I cant...I cant see

big bro fan

13-12-2005, 17:32

Wow very good is Jake going to go blind then or somethimg.

bakedbean

13-12-2005, 19:06

we will find out tommorow plus Vivs family arrive yay

bakedbean

14-12-2005, 18:07

1. HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY

EMMA IS SITTING BY JAKE WHO IS HAVING HIS EYES CHECKED BY THE DOCTOR.

JAKE: So why cant i see
DOCTOR: Im not entirley sure we are going to do some tests ok
JAKE: There is a cure right
DOCTOR: Well lets just wait and see

THE DOCTOR WALKS OFF, JAKE TURNS TO EMMA.

JAKE: I wish i could see your beutiful smile
EMMA: I do to
JAKE: I love you
EMMA: I love you to

EMMA KISSESS JAKE ON THE FORHEAD

2. OUTSIDE VIVS EXTERN DAY

CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE FRONT DOOR WHEN WE SEE A FIST WHICH KNOCKS ON THE DOOR, VIV OPENS IT AND LOOKS AND SMILES

VIV: Your here

CAMERA TURN TO SHOW ANDY,JENNY,BROOKE AND SCOT

ANDY: Mum

VIV AND ANDY HUG.

VIV: And how are my two favorite grandkids
BROOKE: We aint kiddes anymore
JENNY: Brooke dont be rude, im sorry viv
SCOT: Hi gran
VIV: Hello Scot well come in

3. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

JENNY,ANDY,BROOKE AND SCOT WALK IN FOLLOWED BY VIV WHO SHUTS THE DOOR

VIV: Now whos for coffee

3. THE PERRYS KITCHEN INTERN DAY

PHILLIPA IS SINGING TO THE MUSIC FROM THE RADIO WHEN JAMES WALKS IN.

JAMES: Mornin
PHILLIPA: Morning
JAMES: Your in a good mood this morning
PHILLIPA: Yes i suppose i am

PHILLIPAS PHONE RINGS SHE PICKS IT UP AND READS THE TEXT, SHE SMILES.

JAMES: Who is it
PHILLIPA: Oh just the phone company
JAMES: Well anyway i better be going

PHILLIPA AND JAMES KISS AND JAMES WALKS OUT OF THE KITCHEN, PHILLIPA READS THE TEXT AGAIN AND SMILES

4. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

VIV,JENNY AND ANDY ARE ENJOYING A CUP OF COFFEE THE KIDS ARE IN THE STREET.

ANDY: So how come Aunty Trudy and Alan are living here
VIV: Its a long story so what have you been up to i have not seen you in a while
JENNY: Well i have been doing absolutley nothing these last few weeks but pack
VIV: Yes well thats what happens when you move house so Andy what made you decide to buy the Garage
ANDY: Well after buying another propetie it suddenly came to me one day to well return to my roots and work in a Garage
VIV: When you say work you mean be the boss
ANDY: A bit of both and then i saw the advert in the paper and thought why not
VIV: Well i suppose and you are going to be moving in when
JENNY: Just before Christmas we hope
VIV: Wonderful

5. CANAL SIDE EXTERN DAY

PHILLIPA IS SITTING ON A BENCH WATCHING THE DUCKS WHEN VIC COMES FROM AROUND THE CORNER PHILLIPA SEES HIM AND STANDS UP AND THEY HUG AND KISS.

PHILLIPA: I missed you last night
VIC: Me to
PHILLIPA: So what did you want to ask me
VIC: Come and live with me in America
PHILLIPA: America, me and you well i dont know what to say
VIC: Yes
PHILLIPA: But James
VIC: Do you love James
PHILLIPA: I dont know
VIC: I will give you till Christmas Eve
PHILLIPA: What
VIC: Just make the right choice

VIC KISSESS PHILLIPA AND SMILES AND WALKS OFF INTO THE DISTANCE

6. THE HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY

EMMA IS SITTING BY JAKE WHO IS TRYING TO SEE THE DOCTOR WALKS UP TO THEM.

DOCTOR: We have the results
JAKE: And
DOCTOR: The fumes from the alchol has indeed damaged your eyesight and i would like to operate as soon as possible but im afraid there is only a 25% chance of you being able to see again.
JAKE: I will do it.

bakedbean

14-12-2005, 20:42

It starts off as a nice day evrey resident is smiling and happy but little do they know that disaster is just round the corner. Paul is haunted by his past when a dark secret is close to being revealed to his devoted Sharon.

PAUL: What the hell are you doing here
As evreyone is on the way home the coach slowly drives up to the top of the cliff to take one last look, but Chrissie gets a text message warning her there is danger close by. Suddenly the engine explodes and the Coach spins out of control into the deep murky sea water.

SHOW THE COACH FALLING FROM THE COACH AND INTO THE SEA!!!!
TRUDY: NOThe fight for survival is on and only few will make it back to EXETER STREET!!!! BUT WHO????

big bro fan

14-12-2005, 23:03

wow it was kind of scary in a way but you know lookin forward to it i got something up my sleeve for christmas. So um don't worry ForeBridge is gonna be shocked for ever.

Bryan

16-12-2005, 19:55

can i suggest that you start a thread with pictures of your characters and a breif description of them so its easier for posters to catch up if they havent read before, see the devon seas - characters and locations profile thread for ideas

Lindy

17-12-2005, 13:23

Wow this is amazing well done. Keep it up

bakedbean

18-12-2005, 18:36

i might do that my next episode is up tommorow

big bro fan

18-12-2005, 20:09

Can't Wait

baileya

18-12-2005, 21:02

Looking forward to your next part.

bakedbean

20-12-2005, 20:22

1. THE HOSPITAL DAY INTERN.

JAKE IS LYING ON THE BED HOLDING EMMAS HAND WHO IS SITTING ON THE BED BESIDE HIM PLAYING WITH HIS HAIR, JAKE IS BLINDFOLDED WITH BANDAGES.

JAKE: If i go blind, i mean if i am blind you can leave me
EMMA: Im not going to leave you not now not ever
JAKE: You deserve better than this, you will be running the shop be yourself and looking after me.
EMMA: I have Trudy working for us now and i can hire some more staff. I am never ever going to leave you i love you too much.
JAKE: I love you to.

2. INSIDE THE LION INTERN DAY

LUCY IS SITTING ON A CHAIR LOOKING AROUND REMINISCIG OVER SOME OF THE GOOD AND BAD TIMES OF THE LION, WE HAVE FLASHBACKS OF SHAWN AND AMYS WEDDING AND THERE RECEPTION IN THE LION. THE NEXT FLASHBACK IS WHEN SHAWN AND AMY BROUGHT BABY KRISTEN HOME THEN IT TURNS TO THE FLASHBACK WHEN MIKE KICKED OUT LUCY AND HANDED HER DIVORCE PAPERS FOR HER BIRTHDAY AND THEN IMMEDIALTLY CHANGES TO LUCY BUYING THE PUB OFF MIKE.

3. THE BOWLERS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

HUGH WALKS IN LOOKING TIRED AND OUT OF BREATH HE IS CARRYING TWO CARRYBAGS, HE SMILES AND WALKS OVER TO A CUBORD AND PUTS THE BAGS INSIDE HE LAUGHS.

HUGH: This is gonna be a good Christmas.

4. THE GARAGE INTERN DAY

ANDY IS IN HIS OFFICE DOING SOME PAPERWORK WHEN JENNY STORMS IN WITH STEVE.

ANDY: Jenny i thought you were out shopping and whats Steve doing here.
JENNY: Teacher caught him smoking behined the Science block could have caused a fire and to top it off he told the teacher to f off, hes been suspended for a month.
ANDY: Oh Steve
STEVE: It wasnt my fault
JENNY: So what you were made to do those things, well you can forget about Christmas
ANDY: Now come on Jenny we were alot worse than him at School
JENNY: Thats not the point
ANDY: Look you go and finish your shopping and Steve can go round his nans and help her put up the Chrsitmas Decerations.
JENNY: So your not going to punish him
ANDY: I think him going to help mum put up the decerations is hard enough dont you.

JENNY STORMS OFF WITH STEVE AND SLAMS THE DOOR, ANDYS MOILE RINGS HE ANSWERS IT.

ANDY: Hello Darlin how are you...yeah well thats Christmas for you...tonight no i cant how bout boxing day yeah i will see you then love you lots.

5. THE HOSPITAL INTERN DAY

SAME AS BEFORE EXCEPT FOR THE DOCTOR TAKING OFF THE BANDAGES OF JAKE VERY CAREFULLY.

EMMA: Well

JAKE BLINKS AND RUBS HIS EYES THERE IS A FEW MOMENTS PAUSE AND JAKE BEGINS TO CRY.

JAKE: I...I...can see...i can see

bakedbean

21-12-2005, 13:43

1. EXTERN THE CANALSIDE DAY

PHILLIPA IS SITTING ON THE BENCH NEXT TO VIC THEY ARE HOLDING HANDS.

VIC: Well are you going to come with me
PHILLIPA: Yes im going to come with you
VIC: I knew you would make the right descision the plane leaves on sunday at about four in the afternoon
PHILLIPA: Christmas Day, you want us to leave on Christmas Day
VIC: I have booked us the tickets we are going to Barcelona
PHILLIPA: I cant leave on Chrsitmas day thats obsered
VIC: I dont understand
PHILLIPA: Well there is Paul
VIC: Like he is going to mind think about it he is always off somewhere new when hes in trouble
PHILLIPA: Your in trouble
VIC: No i was just using that as an example
PHILLIPA: And then there is James i cant leave him not on Chrstimas Day
VIC: He wont care he never takes any notice of you anyway
PHILLIPA: But he loves me
VIC: And i love you and you love me dont go having second thoughts on me Phillipa
PHILLIPA: Ok, i will leave
VIC: And when are you planning on telling him
PHILLIPA: ChristmasEve
VIC: Are you sure i dont want you bailing out on me
PHILLIPA: I love you
VIC: And i love you

2. THE JEWLEERS INTERN DAY

JAMES IS LOOKING THROUGH THE GLASS COUNTER HE POINTS TO A DIMOND RING AND THE SHOP KEEPER TAKES IT OUT AND HANDS IT TO JAMES WHO GIVES HIM THE MONEY.

JAMES: Thank you this is going to be the best Christmas ever.

3. THE CANTELS KITCHEN INTERN DAY

ANDY IS SITTING READING THE PAPER AND HAVING A CUP OF TEA WHILE STEVE IS EATING HIS BREAKFAST.

STEVE: Dad
ANDY: Yeah
STEVE: Does mum hate me
ANDY: [PUTS HIS PAPER DOWN] Your mum loves you your very speacial to her
STEVE: But she is always having a go at me
ANDY: Oh come on, now you know thats not true, its just your always giving her grief
STEVE: Its not my fault
ANDY: Your mums had a bad year what with losing the baby and evreything cut her some slack aye
STEVE: Yeah ok

4. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

PAUL IS BUSY TYPING ON HIS LAPTOP WHEN SOPHIE WALKS IN, IN HER OWN CLOTHES.

PAUL: Why arent you in your uniform youve got school
SOPHIE: Its muffty
PAUL: Muffty what the bloody hell is muffty
SOPHIE: Non-Uniform
PAUL: Oh right how much is that going to cost me
SOPHIE: A pound
PAUL: My wallets in the kitchen

5. THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN DAY

THE KITCHEN IS CLEAN WITH THE ONLY THING ON THE SIDE BOARD PAULS WALLET SOPHIE WALKS IN AND SERCHES THROUGH PAULS WALET AND TAKES OUT A POUND, SHE THEN TAKES OUT A FIFTY POUND NOTE AND SMILES AS SHE PUTS IT IN HER POCKET.

bakedbean

21-12-2005, 15:57

bakedbean

21-12-2005, 17:01

baileya

21-12-2005, 21:57

ooooo little thief good episode again.

bakedbean

22-12-2005, 08:54

1 THE RAMSAY KITCHEN DAY INTERN

THE KITCHEN IS AS THE SAME AS BEFORE WITH THE WALLET STILL ON THE SIDE BOARD, PAUL WALKS IN YAWNING HE PUTS SOME WATER IN THE KEATTEL AND TURNS IT ON, HE LOOKS IN THE FRIDGE AND PULLS OUT SOME MILK, HE POURS SOME IN THE CUP AND PUTS A TEA BAG IN. PAUL PUTS THE MILK BACK IN THE FRIDGE AND GRABS HIS WALLET HE LOOKS INSIDE TO SEE THAT SOME MONEY IS MISSING HE LOOKS CONFUSED WHEN THE KEATTLE BOILS AND HE FORGETS ABOUT THE WALLET AND POURS THE WATER IN THE CUP AND STIRS IT AND WALKS BACK IN TO THE FRONT ROOM.

2. INSIDE THE SHOP INTERN DAY

EMMA AND JAKE ARE BEHINED THE COUNTER SMILING AND LAUGHING WHEN LUCY WALKS IN SHE SEES JAKE AND WALKS UP TO HM.

LUCY: I want to thank you for saving me last week
JAKE: It was nothing
LUCY: It was evreything you could have been killed
JAKE: Look i was just helping a freind
LUCY: Well let me give you some money at least
JAKE: No, no i dont want any money.
LUCY: Well if your sure
JAKE: Im positive
LUCY: Thank you anyway

3. GLASS/JAMES OFFICE INTERN DAY

JAMES WALKS IN WITH A CARRY BAG IN HIS HAND HE WALKS TO HIS SAFE AND OPENS IT HE PUTS THE BAG INSIDE AND SMILES, HE SHUTS THE DOOR WHEN VIV WALKS IN WITH SOME PRESENTS.

JAMES: Viv what are you doing here
VIV: Here its for you and Phillipa [VIV HANDS HIM THE PRESENTS]
JAMES: Thanks
VIV: My plesure

4. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

PAUL IS STILL AT HIS LAPTOP NOW EATING A PACKET OF CRISPS WHEN SOPHIE WALKS IN.

PAUL: Alright sweetheart
SOPHIE: Yes dad
PAUL: Erm Sophie
SOPHIE: Yes dad
PAUL: When you went to get some money from my wallet how much did you take
SOPHIE: Only a pound why
PAUL: It does not matter

SOPHIE RUNS UP THE STAIRS INTO PAUL AND SHARONS BEDROOM.

5. SHARON AND PAULS BEDROOM INTERN DAY

SOPHIE WALKS IN AND SHUTS THE DOOR, SHE GOES INTO SHARONS DRAW BY THE BED AND PULLS OUT THE FIFTY POUND FROM HER POCKET AND PUTS IT IN SHARONS DRAW AND SMILES.

6. THE CANAL BRIDGE EXTERN DAY

VIV IS WALKING OVER THE BRIDGE WHEN SHE SEES PHILLIPA AND VIC KISSING BY THE CANAL, SHE LOOKS HORRIFIED AND THEN SMILES. WHAT WILL VIV DO?????

baileya

22-12-2005, 10:32

oooooh i do wonder what viv will do!

bakedbean

24-12-2005, 12:37

1. VIVS BEDROOM INTERN MORNING

ITS CHRISTMAS EVE IN EXETER STREET AND VIV IS PEERING OUT OF HER BEDROOM WINDOW ON TO THE STREET SHE SEES LUCY WITH A SUITCASE GOING INTO JILLS FLAT, VIV ALSO SEES PEOPLE ADMIRING THE CHRISTMAS TREE. VIV SMILES AND TURNS TO SEE PHILLIPA IN HER DRESSING GOWN BRINGING IN THE MILK, VIV SMILE TURNS TO A SMIRK AS SHE WATCHES PHILLIPA GO INTO THE HOUSE.

2. THE PERRYS KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

PHILLIPA WALKS IN CARRYING THE MILK WHILE JAMES IS SITTING AT THE TABLE READING THE PAPER.

JAMES: Blimey my shares have gone up looks like we will be having that new conservatrey after all
PHILLIPA: Yeah, look James there is something i have got to tell you
JAMES: And i might get a new office in the club.
PHILLIPA: James are you listening to me
JAMES: Yes sorry dear what is it
PHILLIPA: It can wait
JAMES: Ok well [LOOKS AT THE CLOCK] I best be going i shall be back about one seen as we are open tonight
PHILLIPA: Cant you come home for tea
JAMES: Im sorry im just to busy to think about tea

JAMES WALKS OUT.

PHILLIPA: But i have to [THE FRONT DOOR SLAMS SHUT AND PHILLIPA NOTICES THAT JAMES HAS GONE] Tell you something

3. THE MACKLINS FRONT ROOM INTERN MORNING

ANDY IS WATCHING THE TV WITH STEVE.

STEVE: Have you got me an Xbox 360 for christmas
ANDY: Now that would be telling wouldnt it
STEVE: Dad just tell me
ANDY: Look you have only about what [LOOKS AT HIS WATCH] another 18 hours before christmas now stop moaning.

4. OUTSIDE THE CORNER SHOP EXTERN MORNING

VIV IS WALKING UP THE ROAD ABOUT TO GO INTO THE SHOP WHEN PHILLIPA COMES OUT AND BARGES PAST HER.

VIV: I would watch it if i was you Phillipa
PHILLIPA: Sorry
VIV: You and that man by the canal yesterday looked very cossey
PHILLIPA: He is my cousin
VIV: So does paul know that his cousin has been seeing you
PHILLIPA: No what are you trying to say
VIV: What i am saying is that i know that you are having an affair with your [SARCASTICALLY] Your cousin
PHILLIPA: And what has it got to do with you
VIV: Evreything
PHILLIPA:What do you want money or something
VIV: Dont be silly i want you out of Exeter Street by tonight
PHILLIPA: What
VIV: You heard or i will tell James

NEXT EPISODE UP LATER ON

bakedbean

26-12-2005, 11:29

This is the continuation of the christmas eve episode christmas day episode will be up later on.

1. THE PERRYS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

THE CAMERA MOVES SLOWLY ALONG THE ROOM WE SEE TWO SUITCASES AT THE FRONT DOOR AND WE SEE PHILLIPA ON THE PHONE.

PHILLIPA: Vic meet me at the bus stop in five minutes...i love you to.

PHILLIPA LOOKS AROUND AND SMILES WITH TEARS IN HER EYES SHE PULLS OUT A ENVELOPE WITH JAMES NAME ON IT SHE PUTS IT BY THE LAMP AND PICKS UP HER BAGS AND TAKES ONE LAST LOOK AT THE HOUSE AND WALKS OUT.

2. THE STREET EXTERN NIGHT

VIV COMES OUT OF HER HOUSE AND SLOWLY WALKS ACROSS THE STREET TO THE MACKLINS, SHE SEES PHILLIPA WALK OUT OF HER HOUSE WITH HER TWO SUITCASES PHILLIPA LOOKS TO VIV AND WALKS TO THE BUS STOP, VIV LOOKS PLEASED WITH HER SELF AS SHE WALKS INTO THE MACKLIN HOUSE.

3. THE BOWLERS KITCHEN INTERN NIGHT

HUGH IS DRAINING OUT THE TURKEY IN THE SINK WHILE STACEY IS FEEDING BOBBY, NICK IS WATCHING TV IN THE OTHER ROOM.

STACEY: Its going to be a good christmas this year isnt it dad
HUGH: You bet it is.

4. THE PERRYS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

SAME AS BEFORE WITH THE NOTE BY THE LAMP. JAMES WALKS IN LOOKING VERY HAPPY.

JAMES: Honey im home...Phillipa...you here

JAMES SEES THE NOTE HE PICKS IT UP AND READS IT, HE LOOKS SHOCKED AND ANGRY AT THE SAME TIME.

Bryan

26-12-2005, 11:53

good stuff keep it up!

i managed to squeeze in a crimbo story into devon seas! but now im having a break until 06! read the last episode and tell me what you think!

bakedbean

26-12-2005, 11:58

i will do soon

bakedbean

26-12-2005, 12:06

1. THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

ITS CHRISTMAS MORNING AND STEVE AND BROOKE ARE SITTING ON THE FLOOR OPENING THEIR PRESENTS, JENNY IS SITTING DOWN ON THE SEATEE WATCHING THEM OPEN THEIR PRESENTS, ANDY COMES DOWN THE STAIRS SMILING WITH A BAG FULL OF PRESTENTS.

JENNY: Morning love
ANDY: Yeah this is for you

ANDY PULLS OUT A SMALL LONG PRESENT FROM THE BAG, JENNY OPENS IT TO REVEAL A SILVER NECKLACE.

JENNY: Oh Andy its beutiful [JENNY STANDS UP AND KISSESS ANDY]
ANDY: And these two i guess are for you

ANDY HANDS THE BAG TO BROOKE AND STEVE WHO BOTH PULL OUT BIG PRESTENTS, BROOKE OPENS HERS FIRST TO REVEAL A SELF TANNING KIT.

BROOKE: Thanks Dad
ANDY: Yeah well it will save me some money in the long run insted of you and your mum running of to the beutey shop evrey five minutes oh and that reminds me i have something extra special for you Jenny.
JENNY: Oh yeah and whats that then
ANDY: You will have to wait. Well go on the son open it up.

STEVE OPENS HIS PRESENT TO REVEAL A WHITE BOX AND ON THE FRONT IS A PICTURE OF AN XBOX 360.

STEVE: Dad, wow thanks
JENNY: How did you get that there all sold out in the shops
ANDY: Amazing what you can do on ebay in it.

ANDYS MOBILE RINGS HE PICKS IT OUT OF HIS POCKET AND TURNS IT OFF.

2. ROXANNES KITCHEN INTERN DAY

WE SEE A WOMAN BY THE NAME OF ROXANNE ON HER MOBILE PLAYING WITH A SIMILAR SILVER NECKLACE THAT ANDY BROUGHT JENNY.

ROXANNE: Andy thanks very much for my present, i know you cant get away today but what about tommorow.

3. THE PERRYS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

JAMES IS SITTING ON THE SEATEE BY HIS SIDE IS A HALF EMPTY BOTTLE OF GIN HE IS LOOKING AT A PHOTO OF PHILLIPA HE SMIRKS AND THROWS THE PICTURE TO THE GROUND.

4. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

VIV IS LAYING OUT THE PLATES IN THE FRONT ROOM, SHE HAS ONE LAST CHECK AT THE CHRISTMAS TREE WHEN THE DOOR BELL RINGS, SHE WALKS TO THE DOOR AND OPENS IT WHERE OUTSIDE IS JAKE AND EMMA STANDING OUTSIDE.

VIV: Come on in you two
JAKE: Its cold out there
EMMA: I was hoping for snow
VIV: Oh it has not snowed round here for the last ten years i doubt we will see any this year.

5. THE MACKLINS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

ANDY IS PUTTTING ON HIS COAT WHILE HE IS TALKING TO BROOKE AND STEVE, JENNY IS IN THE KITCHEN.

ANDY: Now you two i dont want any arguments, your nan has gone to alot of trouble now off you go me and your mum will be there in a moment.

BROOKE AND STEVE WALK OUT SHUTTING THE DOOR BEHINED THEM, ANDY WALKS OVER TO JENNY.

ANDY: I dont want you to touch a drop of wind do you promise
JENNY: I promise
ANDY: Becuse if you do you will be straight out of that door understand me
JENNY: I said yes didnt i
ANDY: Dont you dare talk to me like that, never.
JENNY: Else what
ANDY: You know what
JENNY: I am suprised your not off with one of your tarts
ANDY: Thats enough
JENNY: What your not going to see one of them today, its what you did last year, you left me to cook that stupid Turkey all by myself your selfish.
ANDY: Im selfish am i now, look at you, that dress makes you look like a complete slapper.

JENNY SLAPS ANDY ACROSS THE FACE.

ANDY: That just proves my point

JENNY GIVES OUT A EVIL CACKAL AND ANDY LOOKS FURIOUS.

6. JILLS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

JILL IS PUTTING ON HER EAR RINGS WHEN LUCY WALKS IN FROM THE BATHROOM WITH HER MOBILE IN HER HAND.

JILL: Who was it
LUCY: My solicitor
JILL: On christmas day
LUCY: Yeah
JILL: What did they want
LUCY: The new landlord of the Lion is coming tonight
JILL: Someone has bought the Pub
LUCY: Yeah oh im so excited Jill
JILL: I bet you are

7. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

VIV,JAKE,EMMA,TRUDY,ALAN,ANDY,JENNY,STEVE,BROOKE,J ILL AND LUCY ARE ALL ENJOYING THERE CHRISTMAS LUNCH AND EVREYONE IS CHATTING TO EACH OTHER, VIV IS TALKING TO LUCY.

VIV: And this person is coming tonight
LUCY: Yeah supposed to be

VIV PICKS UP THE WINE BOTTLE

VIV: Would you like some wine Jenny
JENNY: Well [JENNY LOOKS TO ANDY AND SMILES] Yeah that would be lovely
ANDY: Jenny
VIV: Oh come on Andy its not as if she is an alcholic

VIV AND JENNY BOTH LAUGH

ANDY: If only you knew
VIV: Knew what son
ANDY: It doesnt matter

8. THE STREET EXTERN NIGHT

BROOKE AND STEVE ARE OUTSIDE PLAYING WITH STEVES BMX WHEN IT BEGINS TO SNOW, STEVE RUNS INTO VIVS HOUSE AND BRINGS EVREYONE OUT THEY ALL SMILE EVEN JENNY AND ANDY LOOK HAPPY. LUCY LOOKS TO THE LION AND LOOKS SAD SHE TURNS BACK WHEN VIV CALLS HER SHE WALKS OVER TO HER. A CAR SLOWLY DRIVES DOWN THE STREET PULLING UP AT THE LION, THE CAR DOOR OPENS AS A BLACK SHOE STEPS OUT FOLLOWED BY THE OTHER, THE PERSON STANDS UP AND SHUTS THE DOOR. LUCY TURNS ROUND AS SHE HEARS THE CAR DOOR SHUT AND LOOKS HAPPY AND SHOCKED. LUCY RUNS TO THE CAR AND HUGS THE PERSON SHE STARES AT THEM TO LET THE CAMERA REVEAL NON OTHER THEN SHAWN SCOTSMAN.

LUCY: What are you doing here
SHAWN: What do you mean, didnt my solicitor tell you
LUCY: Tell me what
SHAWN: Its me im the new landlord the Lions mine.

Well thats all for now im currently planning out the whole of next year i will post later what you can expect to see! I will try to write another episode up before the new year bonanza and boy is that a tough one to write at the moment and i hope you all had a happy Christmas

bakedbean

26-12-2005, 12:16

Thats my motto for this year, already i have planned out the rest of season three and a little bit of season 4. But dont worry the season wont end till april but any way lets get on with it.

Family is important
Well the street only has four familys and seen as one family will be soon saying good bye i think its time we bring in a new family by the name of the michels. The ever power hungray family are set to turn Exeter Street upside down with some shocking incidents and could the Michles precense also bring back a certain villian by the name of Dennis Hill??? I have also planned to extend another family but that wont be till later in the year. Also get ready as the Scotsmans are going to get bigger as Amy and Robert are soon to return as well as two more family faces.

The Macklins
They have only been here five minutes (except Viv) and they are going to have a huge year. The show will mostly follow this family throughout the year. Whether it be Andy and his affairs or Jenny and her alchol problems you can tell that there is lots to do with this family. Plus i have not forgotten the kids becuse Brooke is going to be part of some excellent storys in the new year. Plus Vivs life is soon to be turned upside down with an illness but could love be in the air.

Coach Crash
Now i know you know that there will be a Coach Crash in the new year but this is going to effect evreyone throughout the rest of the year. As the mystrey attacker continues there mission to destroy lives.

So thats all for now but you can tell this will be a superb year for Exeter and i promise you wont want to miss a single moment.

baileya

26-12-2005, 12:24

very good bakedbean as usual.

bakedbean

28-12-2005, 08:33

i wont be posting another episode up until new years eve but it will be a big episode i promoise

bakedbean

29-12-2005, 11:08

1. THE STREET EXTERN DAY

THE STREET IS BUSY WITH PEOPLE HAVING FUN IN THE FUNFAIR, VIV COMES OUT OF THE HOUSE AND LOOKS PLEASED WITH HERSELF SHE LOOKS TO JAMES HOUSE TO SEE THE CURTAINS SHUT, SHE WALKS ACROSS THE STREET AND KNOCKS ON THE DOOR THERE IS NO ANSWER SHE KNOCKS AGAIN LOWDER, THE DOOR OPENS AND STANDING THERE IS JAMES IN HIS DRESSING GOWN LOOKING TIRED AND OLD.

VIV: James what has happened to you
JAMES: What do you want
VIV: Can i come in
JAMES: If you really want

VIV WALKS IN AND JAMES SHUTS THE DOOR BEHINED THEM.

2. JAMES LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

VIV WALKS IN AND LOOKS AROUND TO SEE DIRTY PLATES, EMPTY BOTTLES AND EMPTY CURRY TRAYS JAMES WALKS IN LOOKING DEPRESSED.

JAMES: Sorry about the mess its just well...dont matter
VIV: No Phillipa
JAMES: No...read this

JAMES HANDS HER A NOTE FROM HIS POCKET SHE READS IT AND LOOKS BACK AT JAMES.

VIV: There is something i have to tell you
JAMES: Oh yeah whats that
VIV: Its about Phillipa and evreything...i know why she left
JAMES: You do cuse all it says in there is that she does not love me any more.
VIV: Well it all happened Christmas Eve i was walking by the canal and i saw Phillipa with another man
JAMES: What
VIV: I dont know who he was but they were close to close and so i confronted her and she told me evreything...and well...i told her to leave...to leave the street
JAMES: You did what
VIV: It was for you and for her safety
JAMES: How dare you...get out of my house...GO ON GET OUT.
VIV: James now listen to me please.
JAMES: GET....OUT OF MY HOUSE

3. INSIDE THE LION INTERN DAY

SHAWN IS WALKING AROUND LOOKING AT THE BAR, THERE ARE BUILDERS BUSY FIXING UP THE PUB, LUCY WALKS IN.

SHAWN: Where is precious
LUCY: Trudy is looking after her...what are you doing in here
SHAWN: Oh i have just been going through some plans with the builders they say it wont be ready till the end of next month.
LUCY: I still cant believe what happened
SHAWN: Well its over and done with now
LUCY: Oh Steph was on the phone wanting to know if she still had a job.
SHAWN: Course, did you ring Chrissie
LUCY: Yeah she thinks its best if she stays with her family until all of this is over.
SHAWN: True

4. INSIDE THE SHOP INTERN DAY

JAKE IS BEHINED THE COUNTER WITH EMMA, THEY ARE KISSING.

JAKE: I love you
EMMA: I love you to
JAKE: You know when i was stuck in that hospital and blind folded you know what a feared the most
EMMA: What
JAKE: Not being able to ever see your beutiful face ever again
EMMA: You can be real sweet sometimes you know that

5. THE MACKLIN KITCHEN INTERN DAY

JENNY IS BUSY IN THE KITCHEN MAKING A CAKE WHILE ANDY IS AT THE TABLE READING THE PAPER.

JENNY: So how we going to celebrate the new year
ANDY: Sorry
JENNY: The new year how we going to celebrate
ANDY: Do what evreyone else is doing i suppose
JENNY: Why dont we celebrate in are own little way
ANDY: I dont know what you mean
JENNY: I mean lets not go out lets stay in the bedroom
ANDY: Im not in the mood for sex if thats what you are talking about
JENNY: You havent been for the last year
ANDY: What is that supposed to mean
JENNY: We dont have a sex life any more
ANDY: And thats a problem is it
JENNY: You have a sex life with evreyone else why not me
ANDY: I dont know what you are talking about and quite frankly i dont care.
JENNY: Well you wouldnt would you
ANDY: Not really.

6. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

PAUL IS BUSY ON HIS LAPTOP SOPHIE AND SHARON ARE BOTH WATCHING THE TV WHEN THE DOOR BELL RINGS.

SOPHIE: I suppose i better get that
PAUL: Thank you sweet heart

SOPHIE WALKS TO THE FRONT DOOR AND ANSWERS IT TO REVEAL AN OLD LOOKING WOMAN AT THE DOOR.

SOPHIE: Gran
LEXI: Hello sweetheart
PAUL: [STANDS UP] Mum [PAUL WALKS WITH HIS WALKING STICK TO LEXI AND THEY HUG.]
LEXI: I can see you have been busy well can i come in
PAUL: Sure...sure erm mum this is my fiancey Sharon and Sharon this is my mum Lexi
SHARON: [STANDS UP AND WALKS TO LEXI] Its good to meet you
LEXI: Me two i have heard so much about you
PAUL: So erm what are you doing here
LEXI: Oh thats a nice thing to say to your mother, i hope there is room for me
PAUL: I dont understand
LEXI: Im moving in

7. VIVS HALLWAY INTERN DAY

VIV IS PUTTING ON HER COAT AS TRUDY WALKS DOWN THE STAIRS.

TRUDY: Where you off to
VIV: I have a bit of shopping to do
TRUDY: Well dont be late back you dont wanna miss the party

8. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

PAUL IS SITTING TALKING TO LEXI WHEN SHARON WALKS IN WITH A TRAY OF TEA.

LEXI: Thank you dear
PAUL: But mum you cant move here what about the bussiness
LEXI: The coach trips oh please im bringing that with me
PAUL: Your doing what
LEXI: Yeah i have a job for you to do
PAUL: What sort of job
LEXI: Next week i want you to tell evreyone they are invited to come on a free mysterey tour trip
PAUL: When next week
LEXI: Yes next week

9. THE STREET EXTERN NIGHT

EVREYONE IS STANDING TOGETHER AS THEY ARE COUTING DOWN TO THE NEW YEAR

PAUL: I think this is going to be a good year Sharon
SHARON: I think so to

THE FIREWORKS GO OFF AS EVREYONE SHOUTS HAPPY NEW YEAR.

FADE OUT

"NEXT WEEK IT IS THE END AS ONE FAMILY GOES OUT WITH A BANG BUT WHO WILL SURVIVE???" EXETERS BIGGEST WEEK ALL NEXT WEEK

critch

29-12-2005, 17:31

good part.

bakedbean

29-12-2005, 20:47

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ITS THE END FOR ONE FAMILY AS WE SAY A TRAGIC GOODBYE TO EITHER THE RAMSAYS??? THE SCOTSMANS??? THE ALDROPS??? OR THE BOWLERS??? PLUS THERE IS A FEW SUPRISES IN STORE.

EXETER STREETS BIGESSETS WEEK EVER!!!! ALL NEXT WEEK!!!

http://www.five.tv/media/image/3805085.gif GOODBYE LUCY???

http://www.bbc.co.uk/drama/neighbours/whoswho/characterbiogs/contentimages/img_p146_s13819_txd20050822_v1_f32_392.jpg A BLAST FROM THE PAST FOR PAUL!!!

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ALL NEXT WEEK ON EXETER!!!

baileya

29-12-2005, 23:06

Again great writing Bakedbean. I cant wait to read your coach crash.

big bro fan

02-01-2006, 14:19

Brilliant as usual

bakedbean

03-01-2006, 12:42

1. THE MACKLIN KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

ANDY IS MAKING HIMSELF A DRINK OF JUICE WHILE JENNY IS STANDING NEXT TO HIM,THEY ARE BOTH HAVING AN ARGUMENT.

JENNY: Why couldnt we go on that trip
ANDY: Becuse i said so
JENNY: I dont have to do evreything you say
ANDY: Well you know where the door is
JENNY: What do you mean
ANDY: I have told you before if you dont like it then leave
JENNY: Thats not going to happen not while my children are at school but as soon as they leave im outta here and they will know evreything
ANDY: Great another six years of you
JENNY: Six years im going to put you through hell

JENNY LAUGHS IN A EVIL WAY AND ANDY DOES NOT LOOK PLEASED.

2. INSIDE THE COACH INTERN MORNING

THE COACH IS MOVING THROUGH THE COUNTRY SIDE AND EVREYONE ARE ENJOYING THEMSELVES, LAUGHING AND SINGING EXCEPT FOR LEXI AND PAUL WHO ARE TALKING.

PAUL: Well who are they
LEXI: Who are you going on about
PAUL: The new manager
LEXI: Look we will see them when we get there now please shut up.

TURN TO LUCY,SHAWN AND CHRISSIE

LUCY: It was good of Viv to look after Kristen
SHAWN: Yeah remind me when we get back to give her some money
LUCY: She wont except it
SHAWN: Well she is going to have to
LUCY: How do you mean
SHAWN: Im her boss and i will add it to her wages.
LUCY: Oh Shawn

STEPH WALKS UP TO THE SCOTSMANS.

CHRISSIE: Hello Steph
STEPH: Mind if i sit by you
CHRISSIE: Course
STEPH: Those Ramsays are so arrogant
CHRISSIE: You can say that again
STEPH: And that Paul i mean i know he is fit but god is he cocky
CHRISSIE: You think Paul Ramsay is fit
STEPH: Yeah i could teach him a thing or two
CHRISSIE: I dont believe you

THEY BOTH BEGIN TO LAUGH

3. THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

ANDY IS READING THE PAPER, WHEN JENNY COMES DOWNSTAIRS IN A THIN BLACK GOWN, SHE WALKS OVER TO ANDY WHO IS NOT TAKING ANY NOTCIE OF HER.

JENNY: Andy...Andy
ANDY: [STILL READING THE PAPER] What
JENNY: Look at me
ANDY: I am busy
JENNY: Look at me
ANDY: Fine [ANDY PUTS THE PAPER ON HIS LAP]
JENNY: Well what do you think
ANDY: I think you look like a tramp
JENNY: What
ANDY: You heard now put some decent clothes on you make me sick sometimes
JENNY: How dare you
ANDY: [ANDY PULLS THE PAPER BACK UP AND BEGINS TO READ IT AGAIN] Now do as i say
JENNY: Your the most evil son of a...
ANDY: [THROWS THE PAPER TO THE FLOOR AND STANDS UP.] Thats it im going out and i wont be back till tonight in fact i dont know when i will be back
JENNY: Off to see one of your slappers are we

[ANDY WALKS OUT SLAMMING THE DOOR SHUT]

4. THE WHITE CLIFFS OF DOVER PICNIC AREA EXTERN AFTERNOON

THERE IS A WOMAN SITTING ON ONE OF THE BENCHES WITH LONG BLACK HAIR COULD SHE BE THE NEW MANAGER??? THE COACH PULLS UP AND THE DOOR OPENS AND OUT STEPS SOPHIE AND SHARON, THE WOMAN ON THE BENCH STANDS UP AND SOPHIE SEES HER, THE CAMERA TURNS TO SEE THE WOMANS FACE AS NON OTHER THAN EILEEN.

SOPHIE: Mum
EILEEN: Hello sweetheart

SOPHIE RUNS OVER TO EILEEN AND THEY HUG, LEXI COMES OUT OF THE COACH AND SMILES, THEN PAUL SLOWLY COMES OUT OF THE COACH AND SEES EILEEN HE LOOKS SHOCKED, HE TURNS TO LEXI AND LOOKS FURIOUS.

PAUL: What the hell have you done
LEXI: Come on Paul she was the best woman for the job

TURN TO SOPHIE AND EILEEN

SOPHIE: What are you doing here
EILEEN: Well your gran offered me a job and well im coming back to Exeter Street

5. UNDERNEATH THE COACH EXTERN DAY

THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES AROUND THE MOTOR UNDERNEATH THE COACH DRAMATIC MUSIC BEGINS TO PLAY AS THE CAMERA STOPS AT THE BACK OF THE BUS WHERE THERE IS A BUS TICKING AWAY ON THE DIAL IT SAYS 8:55 AND IT IS COUNTING DOWN.

6. PICNIC AREA EXTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL IS TALKING TO EILEEN THE REST OF THE VISITORS ARE PLAYING FOOTBALL.

PAUL: I dont know what stunt that your trying to play but if you think you are coming back to Exeter Street then you can think again
EILEEN: Come on Paul now you know your not going to stop me
PAUL: What do you want
EILEEN: To see my daughter
PAUL: Thats a first, what do you really want
EILEEN: [LAUGHS] Money
PAUL: How much
EILEEN: Ten thousand pounds.
PAUL: What i dont have that kind of money
EILEEN: Well you have a problem then dont you becuse if you dont give me what i want by next week your secrets will come out
PAUL: I dont have any secrets
EILEEN: Please Paul, when we were married i knew evreything you may have thought that i never knew a thing but i know a lot and also have evidence
PAUL: What sort of evidence
EILEEN: You give me the money and i will give you the evidence
PAUL: And if i dont
EILEEN: [LAUGHS] You know what will happen Paul

7. OUTSIDE ROXANNES FLAT EXTERN LATE AFTERNOON

ANDY IS AT THE DOOR CARRYING A BOTTLE OF RED WINE THE DOOR OPENS AS ROXANNE ANSWERS, SHE SEES ANDY AND SMILES.

ANDY: Fancie a drink
ROXANNE: No but i fancie you

THEY KISS AS ANDY WALKS IN SHUTTING THE DOOR BEHINED THEM

8. THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INTERN LATE AFTERNOON

JENNY IS DRINKING A BOTTLE OF WHITE WINE, SHE LOOKS TO THE TABLE WHERE THERE ARE SOME SLEEPING PILLS SHE LAUGHS AND PICKS THEM UP AND SWALLOW THEM ALL AND TAKES ANOTHER SWIG OF THE BOTTLE SHE LAUGHS AGAIN AS SHE DROPS THE BOTTLE WHICH SMASHES SHE FALLS TO THE GROUND UNCONCIOUS.

9. INSIDE THE COACH INTERN EVENING

EILEEN IS STANDING UP WHILE THE COACH IS MOVING UP TO THE EDGE OF THE WHITE CLIFFS,EVREYONE IS CHATTING AWAY FOCUS ON CHRISSIE WHO IS TALKING TO SHAWN WHEN HER PHONE SIGNALS THAT SHE HAS A TEXT MESSAGE SHE READS THE MESSAGE AND LOOKS SHOCKED IT READS ON IT "THE END IS HERE" SHE SHOWS IT TO SHAWN.

SHAWN: What on earth is that all about
CHRISSIE: I dont know
EILEEN: [TALKING TO EVREYONE] I hope you have all enjoyed yourse...

THE COACH RUMBELS AS THE DRIVER LOSES CONTROL OF THE COACH EVREYONE BEGINS TO SCREAM AND SHOUT AS EILEEN FALLS DOWN THE STEPS AND THE COACH SPEEDS TO THE EDGE OF THE CLIFFS THE DRIVER TRYS TO CONTROL IT BUT THE COACH GOES OVER THE EDGE INTO THE SEA.

Bryan

03-01-2006, 12:45

:eek: WHAT AN EPISODE! brillaint start to the new year!

loved the you look like a tramp scene! :lol:

bakedbean

03-01-2006, 12:58

loved the you look like a tramp scene! :lol:

I got that from J.R. and Sue Ellen in Dallas

baileya

03-01-2006, 13:04

Bakedbean that was brilliant. It was full of everything emotional scenes,comedy and suspense. I can not wait to read your next part it will be great. Ooooooo Eileens back poor Paul :bow:

bakedbean

03-01-2006, 14:39

1. THE SEA OUTSIDE THE COACH EXTERN NIGHT

THE COACH IS FLOTING IN THE SEA BASHING AGAINTS THE COACH THERE IS BROKEN WINDOWS WITH THE WATER FLOODING IN. HAVE SOME DRAMATIC MUSIC AS THE CAMERA SLOWLY MOVES INSIDE THE COACH.

2. INSIDE THE COACH INTERN NIGHT

THE COACH IS FLOODED WITH EVEN MORE WATER POURING IN THROUGH THE BROKEN WINDOWS, BUBBLES BEGIN TO APPEAR FROM THE WATER WHEN ALAN AND LUCY COME UP.

LUCY: ALAN WHERE ARE THEY ALL.
ALAN: I DONT KNO...TRUDY...TRUDY
LUCY: WHAT
ALAN: When she crashed she...she was holding on to my hand and now she is not here
LUCY: Look we will find her...Shawn and Chrissie are here somewhere they will be up in a min i just know they will
ALAN: Yeah and Trudy they all with
LUCY: What happened
ALAN: I dont know one minute we where on land the next we crash into the bloody sea we have got to find them
LUCY: What are we going to do
ALAN: I dont know...i really dont know

BUBBLES APPEAR BY LUCY AND ALAN AS PAUL APPEARS FROM THE WATER, BREATHLESS.

LUCY: Paul are you alright
PAUL: Yeah...im fine where where is Sharon where is my littel girl
LUCY: We dont know look we need to calm down and we need to get...

LEXI COMES FROM THE WATER.

PAUL: Mum...MUM
LEXI: WHERE IS MY GRANDAUGHTER
PAUL: I DONT KNOW
LEXI: What the hell happened
PAUL: I dont know a bomb or something

3. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

VIV IS PUTTING KRISTENS TOYS BACK IN THE BAG THE NEW IS ON THE RADIO.

NEWSREADER: News just in there has been a major Coach Crash going off the White Cliffs of Dover

VIV DROPS THE BAG OF TOYS AS SHE TURNS THE RADIO UP.

NEWSREADER: RESCUE TEAMS ARE ON THERE WAY HOWEVER WE FEAR THAT FEW MAY NOT SURVIVE.

VIV RUNS TO HER HANDBAG AND GRABS HER MOBILE PHONE AS SHE DIALS A NUMBER AN ANSWER MACHINE ANSWERS.

ANSWER MACHINE: Hi this is Trudy sorry i cant be with you right now just kind of busy please leave a message after the tone.

4. THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

JENNY IS LYING ON THE FLOOR WITH PILLS BY HER MOUTH SHE IS UNCONCIOUS, THE DOOR OPENS AS ANDY WALKS IN NOT NOTICING JENNY.

ANDY: Alright you miserable old cow where are you? Well

ANDY TURNS ON THE LIGHT AND SEES JENNY, HE STANDS IN SHOCK AND RUNS AND KNEELS DOWN TO HER HE SEES THE PILLS AND THE CONTAINER THEY WERE IN.

ANDY: Jenny

4. OUTSIDE THE COACH EXTERN NIGHT

LEXI,ALAN AND LUCY ARE SITTING ON TOP OF THE COACH LOOKING AROUND.

LEXI: This is all my fault
LUCY: Now dont say that...look i know that we have not got on in the past but well what i am trying to say is evreything is going to be ok,
LEXI: Thankyou

THEY HUG.

ALAN; This is it all over what am i going to do with out Trudy
LUCY: Dont talk like that Alan she is probably on land, you heard Paul a rescue team would be out here by now
ALAN: Yeah but they aint found us yet have they
LUCY: Its only a matter of time
LEXI: Paul is trying to find a radio so he can contact someone.

5. INSIDE THE COACH INTERN NIGHT

SAME AS BEFORE BUT PAUL IS SERCHING LOOKING FOR A RADIO.

PAUL: SHARON...PRINCESS WHERE ARE YOU

EILLEEN FLOATS TO THE TOP

EILEEN: PAUL THANK GOD I HAVE FOUND YOU
PAUL: SOPHIE...SHARON HAVE YOU FOUND THEM
EILEEN: NO...THEY ARE MISSING LOOK WE HAVE TO FIND THEM
PAUL: OH NO YOU DONT ITS OVER FOR YOU EILEEN YOU THINK THAT YOU CAN BLACKMAIL YOUR WAY INTO MY DAUGHTERS LIFE WELL I HAVE NEWS FOR YOU...YOU CAN GO TO HELL [GRABS HER BY THE NECK] ITS TIME I PUT YOU AWAY...AWAY FOR GOOD.
EILEEN: PLEASE PAUL NO DONT DO THIS
PAUL: I AM SORRY EILEEN ITS TO LATE
EILEEN: NO

PAUL PUTS EILEENS HEAD INTO THE WATER SHE STRUGGLES FOR SOMETIME PAUL IS LOOKING IN HIS USUAL EVIL WAY IS FORCING HER INTO THE WATER BUBBLES APPEAR BUT THEN STOP EILEEN IS DEAD.

PAUL: See you in hell.

6. SOMEWHERE IN THE SEA EXTERN NIGHT

THE MOON IS SHINING ON THE SEA WE SEE STACEY FLOTING ON THE SURFACE WITH STEPH

STACEY: DAD...NICK
STEPH: Your not going to find them
STACEY: I can try
STEPH: Listen to me they are gone...gone for good.
STACEY: They could have been rescued
STEPH: You think
STACEY: Maybe

FADE OUT OF SEEN WITH THE CAMERA MOVING SLOWLY OUT INTO THE SKY STILL LOOKING ON AT THE SEA AND THE MOON.

7. OUTSIDE THE MACKLINS EXTERN NIGHT

JENNY IS BEING WHELLED INTO THE AMBULANCE WITH ANDY LOOKING ON VIV COMES OUT OF THE HOUSE AND RUNS OVER TO ANDY.

VIV: Andy what is going on
ANDY: Its Jenny mum she has taken an over dose
VIV: What...look there is something i have to tell you
ANDY: What
VIV: Its your Aunt and well evreyone else there has been a crash
ANDY: A crash
VIV: Into the sea
ANDY: Well are they alright
VIV: I dont know...i...[BEGIN TO CRY] just dont know
ANDY: Mum [THEY HUG]

8. ON TOP OF THE COACH EXTERN NIGHT

SAME AS BEFORE EXCEPT FOR PAUL WHO IS NOW ON TOP AS WELL

PAUL: It must have been a bomb, there was a bang right
LUCY: There was a bang
LEXI: But who would put a bomb on the coach i mean what sort of person would put a bomb on a coach full of people
ALAN: A sick person thats who someone who has no heart who is a sick minded human
PAUL: They dont even deserve to be called humans

WE HEAR A SCREAM THE SURVIVORS TURN AROUND TO SEE TRUDY STRUGGLING TO SWIM TO THE COACH

ALAN: TRUDY...TRUDY
TRUDY: HELP...HELP

ALAN GETS READY TO JUMP IN BUT PAUL PULLS HIM BACK

ALAN: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING
PAUL: LOOK IM A CHAMPION SWIMMER I HAVE WON MEDALS AND ALL SORTS LET ME GET HER PLEASE
ALAN: OK...THANKYOU
LEXI: BE CAREFULL

PAUL LOOKS BACK AND SMILES AS HE JUMPS INTO THE SEA HE FRANTICALLY SWIMS TOWARDS TRUDY WHO IS STRUGGLING PAUL GRABS HOLD OF TRUDY AS THEY SWIM CLOSER TO THE COACH.

ALAN: SHES ALIVE SHE IS GONNA MAKE IT OH THANK GOD

EVREYONE LOOKS HAPPY

PAUL: ARE YOU OK
TRUDY: IM...IM COLD BUT...BUT IM FINE

PAUL CARRYS TRUDY CLOSER TO THE COACH ALAN IS HAPPY BUT ALSO HAS TEARS IN HIS EYES BUT THESE ARE TEARS OF JOY BUT SUDDENLLEY AS PAUL AND TRUDY GET CLOSE A WAVE TOWERS OVER THEM AND COVERS THEM, THEY DISSAPEAR!!!

ALAN: TRUDY....NO TRUDY
LEXI: PAUL...PAUL PLEASE GOD NO

ALAN FALLS TO HIS KNEES AND BEGINS TO CRY.LUCY HUGS LEXI AS THE SCENE FADES OUT.

baileya

03-01-2006, 14:56

Wow this is getting better.

bakedbean

04-01-2006, 11:17

1. THE HOSPTIAL NIGHT INTERN

ANDY IS BY JENNYS BEDSIDE WHO IS ASLEEP A NURSE COMES AND CHECKS ON HER. ANDY IS LOOKING REALLY GUILTY.

2. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

VIV IS LISTENING TO THE RADIO FOR NEWS ON THE COACH WHEN THERE IS A KNOCK ON THE DOOR. VIV OPENS THE DOOR TO REVEAL JAMES AND JILL.

JILL: I heard what happened
JAMES: Are they ok
VIV: I dont know...i dont know [VIV BEGINS TO CRY AND JAMES HUG HER, BOBBY CRYS FROM UPSTAIRS]
JILL: I will go and see to those two

JILL GOES UP THE STAIRS.

JAMES: Look im sure they are ok
VIV: You think
JAMES: Alan and Trudy they can survive anything and just think Shawns there and he wont let anything happen now will he
VIV: I suppose your right

THE PHONE RINGS, VIV RUNS TO IT AND ANSWERS IT

VIV: Hello...Yes this is Viv Macklin...Oh ok...Yeah i will be there as soon as possible.

VIV PUTS THE PHONE DOWN

JAMES: Well
VIV: Its Alan they have found him
JAMES: Alive
VIV: Yes
JAMES: And Trudy
VIV: No word on her yet
JAMES: Well get your coat on
VIV: I cant go the hospital i have got to look after the kids
JAMES: Jill will look after them now come on.
VIV: Let me go and tell her then

3. THE HOSPITAL WING INTERN EARLY MORNING

ALAN IS AWAKE SITTING UP ON HIS BED TEARS ARE IN HIS EYES, LUCY IS ASLEEP IN THE OTHER BED WHILE LEXI IS LYING ON THE BED BESIDE HER THINKING ABOUT EVREYTHING THAT HAD HAPPENED. TWO NURSES WALK IN WITH A BED BESIDE THEM, INSIDE THE BED IS PAUL.

LEXI: [JUMPS OUT OF BED] Paul...Paul

PAUL IS UNCONSICOUS, ALAN WALKS TO ONE OF THE NURSES

ALAN: My wife have they found my wife
NURSE 1: Whats her name
ALAN: Trudy...Trudy Albert
NURSE 1: I will go and check for you
ALAN: Thankyou
LEXI: Oh Paul please wake up

4. JAMES CAR INTERN DAY

JAMES IS DRIVING THE CAR AND VIV IS IN THE PASSENGER SEAT THEY ARE LISTENING TO THE RADIO

RADIO: Four more survivors have been found from the devestating coach crash there names are Paul Ramsay
JAMES: Of all the people to survive they have to find him
VIV: Shh
RADIO: Sharon Grand...Sophie Ramsay and Trudy Aldrop who is in a critical sate.
VIV: Oh no
RADIO: More survivors are still expected to be found the next update will be later on today
VIV: What if she doesnt make it
JAMES: She will i promise

bakedbean

04-01-2006, 12:17

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The summer is going to be even hotter in 2006 when a new Bitch joins the Street. Courtney Holland will join at the beggining of seson 4 and will rock evrey male residents world. Courtney is a real gold digger with alot of power, she has been married before to a very rich bussiness man who sadly died in the autumn of last year doctors say that his death was suspiscious and Courtney was questioned by the police about the very healthy Tony Holland...however it was later discovered that he killed himself by drinking poision. So now Courtney is on her way to Exeter Street and she will turn heads but who will she end up with and what will she do to get what she wants??? She is coming this Summer.

Bryan

04-01-2006, 12:32

baileya

04-01-2006, 13:27

Great part bakedbean. I wonder if they will find trudy.

bakedbean

04-01-2006, 15:40

1. THE HOSPITAL RECEPTION INTERN DAY

VIV AND JAMES BOTH RUN INTO RECEPTION AND UP TO THE DESK.

VIV: Hi erm i am a realitive of two of the Survivors
RECEPTIONIST: Ok can i have there names
VIV: Mr and Mrs Aldrop
RECEPTIONIST: I will just check for you [SHE SERCHES ON HER COMPUTER] Ok just walk straight through there and your next left

VIV WALKS OFF JAMES STAYS AND LOOKS AT THE RECEPTIONIST

JAMES: Thank you

2. HOSPITAL WING B INTERN DAY

ALAN IS PACING UP AND DOWN THE WING, LUCY IS READING THE LOCAL PAPER AND LEXI IS AT PAULS BEDSIDE.

ALAN: Any news on the rest of them in there
LUCY: No...No sign of Shawn or Chrissie or the rest of them
ALAN: Damn it i wish these doctors would hurry up with this bloody operation

VIV WALKS IN WITH JAMES SHE WALKS TO ALAN AND THEY HUG.

VIV: Well how is she becuse it said on the radio that she was critical
ALAN: She is in Theatre
VIV: What...why
ALAN: Something to do with her heart
VIV: But she is going to be fine right
ALAN: I dont know

JAMES TURNS TO LOOK AT LEXI, LEXI GIVES HIM AN EVIL SMIRK. JAMES QUICKLY TURNS TO LUCY.

JAMES: Are you ok
LUCY: I am fine just got a few bruises thats all
JAMES: Shawn and Chrissie have not been found.
LUCY: No but they are still serching
JAMES: Well no news is good news
LUCY: Yeah i hope so

THE WING DOOR BURST OPEN AS STACEY IS BROUGHT IN CRYING IN A WHEELCHAIR.

LUCY: Stacey are you ok
STACEY: No im not
LUCY: Where is your dad and your brother
STACEY: I dont know
LUCY: Well who were you with when they found you
STACEY: Steph
LUCY: And where is she
STACEY: They had to examine her

A NURSE WALKS IN AND UP TO LUCY.

NURSE: Mrs Scotsman
LUCY: Yes
NURSE: They have found another survivor
LUCY: They have who
NURSE: We need you to identifie them
LUCY: Well come on then

THE NURSE AND LUCY WALK OFF AND A DOCTOR WALKS IN AND UP TO ALAN AND VIV.

DOCTOR: Mr Aldrop you should be resting
ALAN: Resting...oh no not until i know my wife is ok
DOCTOR: Well you can sit down then becuse she is going to be fine

ALAN AND VIV HUG...JAMES LOOKS AT LEXI WHO GIVES HIM A EVIL LOOK.

3. PRIVATE ROOM INTERN DAY

THE NURSE AND LUCY WALK IN LUCY LOOKS TO THE BED TO SEE CHRISSIE ASLEEP

LUCY: Yeah thats her...thats Chrissie Scotsman

big bro fan

04-01-2006, 16:30

Good part it's reallly got me hooked i hope they find Shawn quickly

bakedbean

04-01-2006, 17:15

Survivors- LUCY SCOTSMAN,CHRISSIE SCOTSMAN,SHARON GRAND,PAUL RAMSAY,SOPHIE RAMSAY,LEXI RAMSAY,TRUDY ALDROP,ALAN ALDROP,STACEY BOWLER,STEPH HATCHER

MISSING- JAKE MCALL,EMMA RATCHIN,SHAWN SCOTSMAN,EILEEN ROBINS,HUGH BOWLER,NICK BOWLER

big bro fan

04-01-2006, 18:27

when do we find out who is actually dead

bakedbean

06-01-2006, 17:08

Recap...Eileen returned and blackmailed Paul...The Bomb went off under the coach causing it to crash...Paul drowned Eileen...Trudy and Paul were swept away...Trudy was found with Paul and was operated on...Jenny attempted suicide...Chrissie was found...

1. THE MACKLIN LIVING ROOM INTERN DAY

ANDY WALKS IN HOLDING JENNY WHO HAS A BLANKET OVER HER SHE STILL LOOKS ILL.

ANDY: Here you just sit down and i will make you some breakfast
JENNY: I dont want any breakfast
ANDY: You have got to eat Jenny
JENNY: I said i dont want anything to eat
ANDY: Tough you have got to eat to keep your strength up what are the kids going to say when they come home from your mums
JENNY: They will be told the truth
ANDY: No i dont think so
JENNY: They deserve to know the truth
ANDY: I said no

2. THE SEA EXTERN DAY

THE COACH IS STILL FLOATING ON THE SEA DIVERS ARE SERCHING AROUND THE COACH LOOKING FOR BODIES BUT WILL THE FIND ANY???

3. THE HOSPITAL INTERN DAY

VIV IS SITTING DOWN WITH JAMES BY TRUDYS BEDSIDE A DOCTOR COMES IN.

DOCTOR: Mrs Macklin you made an appointment
VIV: Yes i did
DOCTOR: Please this way

VIV STANDS UP AND FOLLOWS THE DOCTOR.

4. THE DOCTORS OFFICE INTERN DAY

THE DOCTOR WALKS IN FOLLOWED BY VIV THEY BOTH SIT DOWN.

DOCTOR: Well Mrs Macklin i have not seen you for quite some time but you say this is urgent
VIV: Im afraid it is
DOCTOR: Well what seems to be the problem
VIV: Well when i was getting changed a few days ago i...i...i found a lump
DOCTOR: A lump where abouts
VIV: My left breast i think i might have cancer

bakedbean

06-01-2006, 18:36

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Alex Michels- The loving father and husband that is Alex Michels but he has a past and it will soon be following him and what does he know about James Perry???
Sam Michels- The mother of young and cocky Shane is a loving woman and will do anything for Alex.
Vernon Michels- Alexs nephew an mechanic but likes to use his fists
Shane Michels- The son of Alex and Sam but will he ever be able to please his father???

baileya

06-01-2006, 19:50

oooo Viv may have breast cancer looking good.

big bro fan

07-01-2006, 16:19

that's well good

bakedbean

07-01-2006, 17:50

MONTAGE FEATURING THE MACKLIN HOUSEHOLD AND THE HOSPITAL MUSIC IN THE BACKGROUND U2 "SOMETIMES YOU CANT MAKE IT ON YOUR OWN.
SHOW VIV BEING EXAMINED BY THE DOCTOR SHE IS LOOKING VERY WORRIED...ANDY IS TRYING TO GET JENNY TO EAT HER BREAKFAST BUT SHE WALKS AWAY ANDY LOOKS ANGRY...ALAN IS WATCHING OVER TRUDY WHO IS ASLEEP...PAUL IS UNCONCIOUS ON THE BED SHARON,SOPHIE AND LEXI ARE ALL AT HIS BEDSIDE...CHRISSIE AND LUCY ARE SITTING ON THE BED LOOKING WORRIED ABOUT SHAWNS WHEREABOUTS...STACEY IS CRYING INTO STEPHS ARMS.

1. THE MACKLIN KITCHEN INTERN DAY

ANDY WALKS IN LOOKING UNHAPPY HE IS CARRYING THE COOKED BREAKFAST HE LOOKS AT JENNY AND TEARS BEGIN TO FALL FROM HIS EYES HE SLAMS THE PLATE ONTO THE FLOOR BRAKING IT.

2. THE DOCTORS OFFICE INTERN DAY

THE DOCTOR IS TALKING TO A WORRIED VIV.

DOCTOR: We are going to have some results
VIV: But i can beat it right
DOCTOR: Of course but for now i want you to relax becuse i know that you are worried but it may be nothing
VIV: Ok
DOCTOR: Now just a few questions i need to ask has anyone in your family been affected by Cancer
VIV: Not that i know of
DOCTOR: Ok
VIV: What tests are you going to do
DOCTOR: Some blood tests dont worry Mrs Macklin

3. THE HOSPITAL WING INTERN DAY

LUCY AND CHRISSIE ARE STILL SITTING ON THE BED LOOKING WORRIED A NURSE COMES UP TO THEM.

NURSE: Mrs Scotsman
LUCY: Yes
NURSE: They have found your son
LUCY: How...how is he
NURSE: He is fine but asleep and he was found with another person
LUCY: Who
NURSE: We dont know
LUCY: You would like me to identifie them
NURSE: Yes please
LUCY: Ok

4. HOSPITAL ROOM INTERN DAY

LUCY WALKS IN WITH THE NURSE SHE SMILES AS SHE SEES EMMA ASLEEP

baileya

07-01-2006, 19:08

Very good again. It looks like Viv is going to go through a hard time.

bakedbean

08-01-2006, 14:53

1. HOSPITAL WING INTERN MORNING

LUCY AND CHRISSIE ARE BY SHAWNS BEDSIDE WHO IS NOW AWAKE

LUCY: So are you sure your ok
SHAWN: Mum im fine
CHRISSIE: You where in the water for 48 hours Shawn you could have died
SHAWN: Well yeah i was close to giving up but when i found Emma i knew i had to get back to land
CHRISSIE: What about Jake he is not back yet
SHAWN: I know when i found her she was all on her own
CHIRISSIE: Do you think i should go and see her
LUCY: If she is awake

CHRISSIE STANDS UP AND WALKS OUT

SHAWN: How is Kristen
LUCY: Dont worry Jill is looking after her back home
SHAWN: I never want to lose my baby
LUCY: And you wont she has a brilliant father just a shame about her mother
SHAWN: Amy is not all that bad
LUCY: Really
SHAWN: Maybe i was wrong to leave her like that
LUCY: No Shawn she is nothing just Kristens mother and does she bother to contact no she does not i think it is best if you forgot about her once and for all

2. HOSPITAL PRIVATE ROOM INTERN MORNING

EMMA IS AWAKE ON THE BED CRYING HOLDING ON TO A PICTURE OF JAKE, CHRISSIE WALKS IN AND HUGS EMMA.

CHRISSE: Oh Emma im sure they will find him
EMMA: No not now he is dead he could not have survived that
CHRISSIE: Miricales can happen you see it on the Tv all the time
EMMA: Yeah but not like that, he is gone forever and i will never see him again
CHRISSIE: Emma dont talk like that
EMMA: But its true he is dead and thats it

3. EXETER STREET EXTERN AFTERNOON

THE STREET IS EMPTY NO ONE IS TO BE SEEN...A CAB PULLS UP OUTSIDE THE LION THE DOOR OPENS AND OUT STEPS AMY SCOTSMAN SHE HANDS THE DRIVER SOME CASH AND LOOKS AROUND SHE SMILES.

AMY: Welcome home Amy

bakedbean

08-01-2006, 15:47

Tommorow she is back but why??? The survivors return to Exeter Street but what will Shawn have to say about Amys return??? Plus Viv gets her test results back has she got cnacer???

bakedbean

08-01-2006, 18:36

1. VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

JILL IS SITTING DOWN WITH BABY BOBBY, AMY IS SITTING NEXT TO HER WITH BABY KRISTEN AND THEY ARE TALKING.

AMY: So what about Shawn he is ok right
JILL: Oh yeah he is fine one of the lucky ones
AMY: That good for nothing Paul Ramsay i just know that bomb would have something to do with him
JILL: What do you mean
AMY: Well he has plenty of skeletons in his closet someone is bound to want revenge and he has to survive after it all
JILL: We dont know if there was a bomb yet or not
AMY: Oh come on Jill of course there would a Coach just does not spiral out of control like that
JILL: Well i suppose you are right

THE DOOR OPENS AND VIV,TRUDY AND ALAN WALK IN THEY ALL LOOK STUNNED TO SEE AMY. BUT NOT AS SUPRISED AS LUCY WHO WALKS IN WITH A LOOK OF DISGUST ON HER FACE.

LUCY: What on earth are you doing here

AMY STANDS UP AND PUTS KRISTEN IN HER COT AND WALKS OVER TO LUCY.

AMY: Hello Lucy how are you

LUCY SLAPS AMY HARD ACROSS THE FACE JUST AS SHAWN WALKS IN WITH A CRUTCH. SHAWN LOOKS SHOCKED!

LUCY: Dont you give me that i told you before we dont want you here in Exeter Street none of us do
AMY: Shawn
SHAWN: Stay away from me Amy and my daughter
LUCY: What are you doing here
AMY: I came for my daughter
LUCY: What do you mean
AMY: When i heard on the news that you were all in a crash and then announced the surivors before they found Shawn i knew that i had to come and collect my daughter
LUCY: Well Shawn is alive and well so you can leave
AMY: Oh no becuse now im back i am staying put
LUCY: What
AMY: Im moving back into Exeter Street welcome to your worst night mare

AMY LAUGHS AS EVREYONE LOOKS ON IN HORROR

2. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

THE RAMSAY FAMILY WALK IN ALL LOOKING TIRED.

PAUL: Well im off to bed im so tired
SHARON: Yeah me to
LEXI: Paul i want to speak to you in private
PAUL: Ok

THEY WALK INTO THE KITCHEN

3. RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL AND LEXI WALK IN LEXI SHUTS THE DOOR BEHINED HER.

PAUL: What do you want
LEXI: Its about the Coach one of the officers told me that they found a bomb on the coach
PAUL: What
LEXI: Thats not all they also told me they found a body
PAUL: A body
LEXI: Eileens
PAUL: What...what are we going to tell Sophie.
LEXI: I dont know

4. DOCTORS OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

VIV IS SITTING DOWN TALKING TO THE DOCTOR SHE IS LOOKING VERY WORRIED.

DOCTOR: Well we have the results
VIV: Yes and
DOCTOR: Mrs Macklin i am afraid... im afraid you have Breast Cancer

VIV BEGINS TO CRY

baileya

08-01-2006, 18:49

Ooooooo the return of Amy! Poor Viv :( Well done bakedbean

big bro fan

09-01-2006, 15:53

Can't wait for the next episode

bakedbean

09-01-2006, 17:02

1. AMYS FLAT LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

REMOVAL MEN ARE BUSY WORKING PUTTING THE SEATEE IN THE LIVING ROOM AMY WALKS IN.

AMY: Erm just there please thanks, man this place needs redecorating.

2. EMMA AND JAKES LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

EMMA IS SAT ON A CHAIR IN HER DRESSING GOWN CRYING SHE IS LOOKING AT A PICTURE OF JAKE.

EMMA: I...i...i love you
VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

INSPECTOR GROUSE IS SEATED ON VIVS SEATEE NEXT TO STACIE AND VIV THEY ARE TALKING.

GROUSE: We have found a body and the description matches the one of your dad
STACIE: No...no
GROUSE: Obviously we will need one of you two to identify the body
STACIE: Its all that Paul Ramsays fault him and his dodgy deals someone planted that bomb to get Paul
GROUSE: We are working on who planted the bomb miss Bowler
VIV: I think it is best if i identify the body
GROUSE: Yes i think that would be wise

4. THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN MORINING

PAUL IS SITTING AT THE TABLE WITH SOPHIE WHO IS CRYING.

PAUL: Look i know me and your mum never got on but still im sad about it to but i dont think she would want to see you like this
SOPHIE: Dad i miss her so much and im never going...going to see her again
PAUL: You still have me your gran and Sharon
SOPHIE: But dad
PAUL: You need to get over this

SOPHIE RUNS OUT OF THE HOUSE CRYING PAUL STANDS UP AND WALKS INTO THE LIVING ROOM, THE BACK DOOR SLOWLY OPENS AND WE SEE A SHADOW OF SOMEONE WALKING IN BUT WHO???

5. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS WATCHING THE TELEVISION SOME ONE WALKS BEHINED HIM, PAUL TURNS ROUND AND SEES NO ONE.

PAUL: Sharon, mum, Sophie

PAUL STANDS UP TO GO AND INVESTIGATE BUT AS HE DOES THE PERSON HITS PAUL IN THE BACK OF THE HEAD WITH A CANDLE STICK KNOCKING PAUL DOWN TO THE GROUND THE CAMERA MOVES UP TO REVEAL STACIE WHO IS HOLDING THE CANDLE STICK SHE SMILES AS SHE HURRYS OUT THROUGH THE KITCHEN. THE CAMERA MOVES DOWN TO THE FLOOR WHERE PAUL IS LYING UNCONSIOUS BLOOD IS COMING OUT OF THE BACK OF HIS HEAD WILL HE SURVIVE???

Bryan

09-01-2006, 17:10

what a cliffhanger! :eek:

paul isnt havent much look in life is he...especally knowing what you saids coming up for him aswell

bakedbean

09-01-2006, 17:13

Yeah but who is going to find him??? and what will they do???

Bryan

09-01-2006, 17:14

Yeah but who is going to find him??? and what will they do???

i have no idea! but i cant wait to find out!

keep on churning out the episodes for the greatest soap on the boards!!!

bakedbean

09-01-2006, 17:17

keep on churning out the episodes for the greatest soap on the boards!!!

Thanks for the compliment but merseysiders and Devon seas are way better but Exeter is the oldest and we will be celebrating its 1 year birthday

baileya

09-01-2006, 20:43

That was great Bakedbean good old wack across the head with a candle stick.

bakedbean

10-01-2006, 16:23

1. RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL IS STILL LYING UNCONSIOUS ON THE FLOOR NOW IN A PUDDLE OF BLOOD WILL HE BE FOUND IN TIME???

2. THE PARK EXTERN AFTERNOON

STACEY IS CRYING ON THE BENCH LUCY IS WALKING DOWN THE ALLEY WAY, SHE STOPS WHEN SHE NOTICES STACEY CRYING SHE SLOWLY WALKS UP TO HER AND SITS BY HER.

LUCY: I heard about your dad im so sorry
STACIE: It was all that Ramsays fault
LUCY: I know they found a bomb but why would they go for Paul
STACIE: You know he has lots of skelotons in his closet
LUCY: Well that is true but who would want to plant a bomb on a coach full of people that have nothing to do with Paul
STACIE: I just know someone was out to get him i mean who else
LUCY: I shouldnt really tell you this but Chrissie got a text message of some sort telling her that she was in danger just before the bomb so Paul could have not have anything to do with it.
STACIE: I dont know
LUCY: Just trust me

THEY BOTH HERE SIRENS AS AN AMBULANCE SPEEDS PAST THEM, STACIE LOOKS SHOCKED AS A POLICE CAR COMES PAST AS WELL LUCY WALKS TO THE STREET AND SEES PAUL BEING CARRIED INTO THE AMBULANCE AND SHARON COMES OUT OF THE HOUSE CRYING STACIE WALKS UP AND SEES WHAT IS GOING ON.

LUCY: Maybe you were right

baileya

10-01-2006, 16:31

Good tension there. I wonder who did plant the bomb.

bakedbean

10-01-2006, 17:30

1. GLASS (JAMES OFFICE) INTERN EVENING

THE MUSIC FROM THE CLUB IS BOOMING THROUGH THE WALLS JAMES IS TRYING TO DO SOME PAPER WORK WHEN HIS PHONE RINGS HE ANSWERS IT

JAMES: Sid...yeah...you have excellent...oh believe me he is going to wish he never ran off with my wife.

JAMES PUTS THE PHONE DOWN AND BEGINS TO LAUGH AS HE STANDS UP AND PUTS HIS PAPER WORK AWAY AND PUTS ON HIS COAT AND GRABS HIS CAR KEYS AND WALKS OUT OF HIS OFFICE.

2. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN EVENING

PAUL SLOWLY WALKS IN WITH SHARON BY HIS SIDE THEY SIT DOWN.

PAUL: Lock the door will you
SHARON: Ok

SHARON LOCKS THE DOOR

PAUL: Erm...ring the security service i want 24 hour cctv and whatever else
SHARON: Are you sure
PAUL: I dont want my girls getting hurt what with me and this stupid stick

3. THE CHASE EXTERN NIGHT

A TALL LOOKING MAN IS HOLDING VIC AND COVERING HIS MOUTH, JAMES CAR PULLS UP AND HE STEPS OUT SMILING.

JAMES: Well, well look who it is
MAN: What do you want me to do with him
JAMES: Hold him [WALKS CLOSER TO VIC] You were screwin my wife behined my back and she left me no one gets away with screwing James Perry no one surely Phillipa must have told you that, well maybe she didnt. [JAMES LAUGHS] Now it looks like we have are selves a dilema dont we becuse you see i dont want anybody to find out about this so there is only one thing i can do.

JAMES PULLS OUT A GUN FROM HIS INSIDE COAT POCKET VIC STRUGGLES BUT THE MAN KEEPS A TIGHT GRIP ON HIM, JAMES SHOOTS VIC WHO FALLS TO THE GROUND WITH BLOOD POURING OUT OF HIS MOUTH AND HIS CHEST.

JAMES: Get rid of him understand
MAN: Yes boss
JAMES: Erm...what did you do with Phillipa
MAN: She was not there boss
JAMES: Good, good right now do what you have to do

JAMES WALKS BACK TO HIS CAR AND MUTTERS TO HIMSELF.

JAMES: No one messess with James Perry no one.

big bro fan

10-01-2006, 18:04

Great episode is Phillipa due for a comeback

baileya

11-01-2006, 16:01

Great part bakedbean James the murderer.

bakedbean

11-01-2006, 17:50

So Exeter is nearing its first anniversairy and its going to be a huge week with the wedding of Paul and Sharon...The Michels Family Arrive...plus the return of one of Exeters many bad boys?

Im going to start spicing up the show with alot more new faces, and some more edgy storylines. You are going to see some of the familiar faces change from good to evil and evil to good. Plus get ready becuse this summer is going to be a hot one for some explosive storylines and a shock Wedding? Things are going to take a turn for the worse for one family as well but who??? Get ready for the biggest year yet of Exeter (Even though there has only been one lol) Things will never be the same again in Exeter Street but why??? :hmm:

big bro fan

11-01-2006, 20:18

Sound's good

bakedbean

12-01-2006, 17:26

1. THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS MAKING SURE THE WINDOWS ARE SECURILY SHUT AND LOCKED SHARON COMES IN PAUL DOES NOT NOTICE.

SHARON: Mornin love

PAUL JUMPS AND TURNS ROUND SHAKING

PAUL: Dont do that Sharon
SHARON: Sorry honey
PAUL: No im sorry, its just well you know im a bit how shall i put this
SHARON: Paronoid
PAUL: [SIGHS] Yeah i suppose

THEY HUG

SHARON: Hey are wedding is in six weeks you know we need to start planning evreything
PAUL: Yeah if im still alive
SHARON: Paul
PAUL: Im sorry its just that well after the Plane Crash with the bomb and then the Coach with the Bomb and now yesterday
SHARON: But honey you were not on that plane
PAUL: But it was my idea
SHARON: Paul no one is after you well almost nobody

baileya

12-01-2006, 19:06

Looks like Paul's getting nervous! Another great part as usual.

big bro fan

12-01-2006, 22:43

Is it just me or did Paul just admit to the plane disaster and Sharon just Pull a blind eye on the subject :hmm: well anyways great part looks like surf's up's got a lot of competion i think my second episode will have to be better cause i don't think the first one was as good as it could have been. good part :cheer:

bakedbean

15-01-2006, 17:33

Is it just me or did Paul just admit to the plane disaster and Sharon just Pull a blind eye on the subject :hmm:

No Paul just said that he was the one who came up with the plane ride

bakedbean

15-01-2006, 18:04

MONTAGE: DANIEL POWTERS "FREELOOP" PLAYS IN THE BACKGROUND AS WE SEE VIV READING THROUGH LEAFLETS ON CANCER...LUCY AND SHAWN WITH BABY KRISTEN WALK INTO THE LION WHICH IS NOW ALL DONE UP THEY BOTH SMILE... EMMA IS CRYING AS SHE IS GETTING READY FOR THE MEMORIAL SERVICE... STACEY IS BY THE CANALSIDE CRYING...PAUL IS COMFORTING SOPHIE

1. INSIDE THE LION INTERN MORNING

LUCY AND SHAWN ARE LOOKING AROUND THE NEW BAR KRISTEN IS IN HER PUSHCHAIR ASLEEP.

LUCY: They have done a really good job
SHAWN: Yeah they have
LUCY: Shame that Chrissie is away she wont be here for the grand opening
SHAWN: Yeah but Amy is here
LUCY: What does she want
SHAWN: I dont know mum

2. CANALSIDE EXTERN MORNING

STACEY IS SAT ON THE BENCH WITH BABY BOBBY IN THE PUSH CHAIR, STACEY IS CRYING WHEN JILL COMES UP TO HER.

JILL: Hey come on dont cry
STACEY: They have gone...they have both gone
JILL: They are in a better place now and your dad would not want to see you like this
STACEY: I suppose
JILL: Come on the memorial service will be starting soon

3. SUMMERSET PARK EXTERN MORNING

THE SUN IS GLEEMING OFF OF THE POND THERE IS A WHITE MARQUEE AND THE RESIDENTS ARE GATHERING INSIDE FOR THE MEMORIAL SERVICE.

4. INSIDE THE MARQUEE INTERN MORNING

THE STREETS RESIDENTS ARE ALL SITTING IN ROWS A MINISTER IS STANDING AT THE FRONT

MINISTER: We are all here today to commemorate those lives of Jake Mcall, Hugh and Nick Bowler and Eileen Robins today we will celebrate there lives and we will have the family members speak of there happiest times first Stacey will speak on her Farther and Brother

STACEY STANDS UP AND WALKS TO THE FRONT.

STACEY: My dad was the best dad in the world...he was the best grandfarther

SOMEONE IS WATCHING THE CEROMONEY FROM THE FRONT BUT IS NOT IN VIEW OF ANYONE, TIME GOES BY AND NOW EMMA IS TALKING ABOUT JAKE.

EMMA: Jake was always there for me he always knew when somethig was up, he was the one the one that i really loved. I know he is looking down on us all and i just want to say this...

JAKE COMES FROM THE FRONT OF THE MARQUEE EVREYONE IS SHOCKED TO SEE HIM EXCEPT EMMA WHO DOES NOT SEE HIM

EMMA: That i love him
JAKE: And i love you to

EMMA TURNS ROUND TO SEE JAKE SHE IS SHOCKED

FADE OUT

big bro fan

16-01-2006, 16:02

that was so good brought a tear to my eye :crying:

baileya

16-01-2006, 18:43

That was fantastic

bakedbean

17-01-2006, 11:59

1. INSIDE THE MARQUEE INTERN AFTERNOON

AS BEFORE

JAKE: Emma

EMMA LOOKS AT JAKE AS SHE BEGINS TO CRY

JAKE: Hey dont cry

JAKE GOES TO HUG EMMA BUT SHE STOPS HIM

JAKE: Whats the matter babe

EMMA SLAPS JAKE ACROSS THE FACE

EMMA: Dont you babe me

EMMA RUNS OUT OF THE MARQUEE A STUNNED JAKE FOLLOWS EVREYONE LOOKS ON IN TOTAL SHOCK

PAUL: Blimey

2. THE SHOP FLAT [LIVING ROOM] INTERN AFTERNOON

EMMA RUNS IN CRYING SHE SITS DOWN ON THE SEATEE AND HUGS A PILLOW JAKE WALKS IN

JAKE: Emma, whats wrong
EMMA: Whats wrong...WHATS WRONG...YOUR SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD THATS WHAT IS BLOODY WRONG
JAKE: But im not
EMMA: No your not for the last two weeks i have had to be strong i have had to open that Shop up evrey morning i have had to be happy for the customers, and all i really wanted to do was sit down and cry becuse i thought that my boyfreind was dead
JAKE: But i thought you were dead
EMMA: What
JAKE: You were not in the papers and then today it said that there was going to be a service for those that died and they showed the pictures of Me and evreyone else that well you know but you were not on thereand thats when i realised that you had survived
EMMA: So what you did not come back becuse you thought i was dead, i thought you were dead and guess what i came back i carried on as normal while you were starting a new life
JAKE: I could not face life without you
EMMA: Life without me dont make me laugh
JAKE: I love you Emma
EMMA: Yeah well so did i
JAKE: What
EMMA: Get out
JAKE: Emma
EMMA: GET OUT

EMMA STANDS UP AND BEGINS TO SLAP JAKE HARD ON THE ARM

EMMA: Get out
JAKE: But i love you
EMMA: As far as i am concerned your still dead

bakedbean

17-01-2006, 12:20

Next time on Exeter!!!

Amy and Lucy are at war!!!
James finds out about Vivs Cancer!!!
Jake tries to make it up with Emma!!!
James thretans Paul!!!
Can Shawn stop Sharon from making the biggest mistake of her life by marrying Paul!!!
Is Phil stalking Sharon???

xStephaniex

17-01-2006, 13:50

:cheer: gripping stuff !! well done !!! this is fab :cheer: moreeeeeeeee soooon

bakedbean

17-01-2006, 17:29

1. THE LION LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

SHAWN IS IN HIS DRESSING GOWN READING THE FRONT PAGE OF THE LOCAL PAPER ON THE FRONT IS A PICTURE OF PAUL AND SHARON LOOKING VERY HAPPY TOGETHER, LUCY WALKS IN.

LUCY: Morning love
SHAWN:Have you read this

SHAWN HANDS LUCY THE PAPER WHO READS IT

LUCY: Oh thats nothing its just Paul Ramsay being Paul Ramsay if you know what i mean
SHAWN: [READS FROM PAPER] We are very happy together says Mr Ramsay the owner of the local Bookies and part owner of Ramsays Coach Trips. [SLAMS THE PAPER DOWN] What the hell was Sharon thinking about marrying that sleezeball
LUCY: Oh now Shawn come on, Sharon and Paul are very happy
SHAWN: [LAUGHS] What ever you say mum

SHAWN STANDS UP AND WALKS OUT OF THE ROOM

LUCY: Now where are you going
SHAWN: I have things to do
LUCY: Hey dont you forget we are opening up tommorow
SHAWN: I know

baileya

17-01-2006, 20:58

Looks like shawn is getting a bit jealous I think!

bakedbean

18-01-2006, 10:47

1. THE CAFE INTERN MORNING

SHARON IS SITTING AT A TABLE WITH AN ELDERLY MAN.

SHARON: So you will give me away
MAN: Of course i will love my little baby girl getting married at last
SHARON: Thanks dad

SHARON HUGS HER DAD AS SHAWN WALKS IN

MAN: Well, well if it is not Shawn Scotsman
SHAWN: Ric how are you
RIC: All the better to hear that my daughter is getting married
SHAWN: Yeah i suppose you would be

bakedbean

18-01-2006, 13:09

big bro fan

18-01-2006, 14:23

looks very good indeed

bakedbean

18-01-2006, 18:43

1. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN AFTERNOON

SHAWN WALKS OUT OF THE LION WITH A BILLBOARD AND STANDS IT UP IN THE PATH IT READS ON IT "GRAND REOPENING TOMMOROW FIRST DRINK FREE!!!" SHAWN LOOKS AT THE SIGN AND SMILES RIC COMES OUT OF THE CORNER SHOP WITH A PAPER HE SEES SHAWN AND WALKS UP TO HIM.

RIC: This place dont change much does it
SHAWN: Your right there Ric
RIC: I never thought that i would see James Perry back in Exeter Street
SHAWN: I dont think anyone did
RIC: Your dad around
SHAWN: My Dad no, he left my mum a while back
RIC: What? now that does not seem like the Mike Scotsman i used to know he would never leave this place especially with the Pub and well he was the king if you know what i mean
SHAWN: No he just thought that he was king
RIC: Erm something tells me that you dont really approve of this Paul and my daughter
SHAWN: Trust me Ric, Paul Ramsay is the slizzeist man on the Planet and would sell his own family to get power and Money
RIC: Oh he is one of them
SHAWN: Yeah he is

SHAWN WALKS BACK INTO THE LION AND RIC WALKS ACROSS THE ROAD TO THE RAMSAY HOUSE.

Bryan

18-01-2006, 18:46

http://www.footballerswives.tv/characters/chars_files/chars_old/old_pics/chars_old_fl3.jpg

Ric is Sharons farther who certainly has a past, there are plenty of skeletons in his clorset. Has he come to Exeter Street just to Give away his daughter???

Ric will only be sticking around until the wedding but will be back in the Summer full time!!!

great choice of actor...cant wait to see how the character unfolds...

keep up the good work bakedbean!

exceter is still the best soap on the boards!

bakedbean

18-01-2006, 18:50

ITS PARTY TIME FOR ALL YOU EXETER FANS THIS MARCH IS GOING TO BE EXETERS FIRST BIRTHDAY AND WE WILL CELEBRATE IN STYLE. IT WILL BE A WEEK LONG OF CELEBRATIONS AS THERE WILL BE A WEDDING, NEW ARRIVALS AND EVEN A FEW SUPRISE RETURNS, PLUS WE WILL FIND OUT WHAT REALLY HAPPENED TO MIKE!!! :cheer: :cheer: :cheer:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/eastenders/images/eastenders/characters/den_w/char_denwatts.jpgHAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!http://www.bbc.co.uk/drama/neighbours/whoswho/characterbiogs/contentimages/img_p146_s13819_txd20050822_v1_f32_392.jpg

bakedbean

18-01-2006, 18:51

keep up the good work bakedbean!

exceter is still the best soap on the boards!

You dont know how much that really means to me thankyou this is going to be a year to remeber for Exeter!!!

Bryan

18-01-2006, 18:56

bakedbean

18-01-2006, 18:58

it gets better and better...me thinks ill need to get some good storylines going for my new soap opera!!!

Hold on what about Devon Seas but if you do end it do a final episode please!!!!

bakedbean

18-01-2006, 19:04

THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD LIVNGING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

RIC IS SITTING DOWN HUGGING SHARON PAUL WALKS IN WITH HIS BRIEFCASE LOOKING TIRED.

PAUL: Hello darlin

PAUL KISSESS SHARON AND THEN TURNS TO RIC.

PAUL: You must be Ric

RIC STANDS UP AND LOOKS AT PAUL IN A SUSPISIOUS WAY HE SMILES AND SHAKES HIS HAND.

RIC: And you must be Paul
PAUL: Its so great to meet you at last
RIC: Why thankyou i hear you own the local bookies
PAUL: Yeah thats right Sharon told me once you used to own it
RIC: Yeah me and my dad before that until well i had other things now i hope you and me can have a drink or something afterall i will soon be your Father in Law
PAUL: I suppose whisky
RIC: Ha this man knows me already

Bryan

18-01-2006, 19:18

Hold on what about Devon Seas but if you do end it do a final episode please!!!!

devon seas...i cant do on my own...its too much and no one has offered to help me write after my request...also i wasnr sure where storyline were going...i could think of them but i was starting to think of another idea that im developing at the moment that is a more managable and practical idea...rather than an ongoing soap a drama with regular cliffhangers and intervals...closely mimicking the worlds of dallas/dynasty/oc/footballers wives

big bro fan

18-01-2006, 20:03

You can not end Devon Sea's it is like the mac daddy of all soap's. But i suppose Exeter the boards first will take the top spot nice scripts bakedbean have you read any of my new soap yet :thumbsup:

baileya

18-01-2006, 22:23

Brilliant again Bakedbean. BondBoffin dont end Devon seas.

bakedbean

19-01-2006, 09:50

INSIDE THE SHOP INTERN EVENING

EMMA IS BEHINED THE COUNTER BUSY CHECKING THE STOCK A MAN WEARING A HOODY AND A BASEBALL CAP WITH SUN GLASSESS WALKS IN.

EMMA: Excuse me can you take that stuff off please

THE MAN WALKS AROUND IGNORING HER EMMA GETS FRUSTRATED

EMMA: Excuse me did you hear me oy im talking to you

EMMA WALKS UP TO THE MAN

EMMA: Look if your not buying anything get out please i wont tell you again i will ring the po...

THE MAN PULLS OUT A GUN FROM HIS POCKET EMMA LOOKS SHOCKED.

MAN: Now you do as i say and if you dont you will get a bullet through your head
EMMA: What do you want
MAN: All your money now

EMMA STANDS STILL IN SHOCK

MAN: NOW

THE MAN POINTS THE GUN AT EMMA, SHE RUNS TO THE TILL AND OPENS IT TO GET ALL THE MONEY SHE HANDS IT TO THE MAN WHO PUTS IT ALL IN A BAG HE BEGINS TO WALK OUT STILL WITH THE GUN IN HIS HAND WHEN JAKE WALKS IN HE LOOKS SHOCKED.

JAKE: Who the hell are you
MAN: Move

THE MAN POINTS THE GUN AT JAKE

MAN: Move or i will blow your Brains out
JAKE: Im not moving anywhere
EMMA: Jake please move

OUTSIDE THE SHOP EXTERN EVENING

ANDY COMES OUT OF THE GARAGE AND WALKS TO HIS HOUSE A GUN SHOT IS HEARD FROM THE SHOP ANDY LOOKS IN SHOCK.

big bro fan

19-01-2006, 15:41

Is Jake dead!!! :crying:

bakedbean

19-01-2006, 16:36

OUTSIDE THE SHOP EXTERN EVENING

ANDY RUNS ACROSS TO THE SHOP HE TRIES TO LOOK IN THE WINDOW BUT POSTERS ARE BLOCKING HIS VIEW, PAUL,SHARON AND RIC COME OUT OF THE HOUSE AS DOES THE REST OF THE MACKLIN FAMILY, SHAWN AND LUCY ALSO COME OUT OF THE LION.

SHAWN: Andy what the hell was that
ANDY: I dunno it came from in there sounded like a gun shot

TURN TO RIC,PAUL AND SHARON

RIC: God its good to be back home it has not changed one bit

VIV: Someone should ring the Police
SHAWN: Well aybe we should go in and ch...
LUCY: No Shawn i nearley lost you in that flamming Coach disaster im not losing you again and i dont want my Grandaughter growing up without a father. I will go and ring the Police

INSIDE THE SHOP INTERN EVENING

THE GUN MAN IS PEERING OUT OF THE WINDOW HOWEVER IS NOT VISSIBLE TO THE RESIDENTS, HE TURNS TO SEE JAKE AND EMMA TIED UP ON TWO CHAIRS IT SEEMS NO ONE HAS BEEN SHOT.

GUNMAN: Now look what you have gone and done

EMMA STRUGGLES TRYING TO GET HERSELF FREE , JAKE IS STARING AT THE GUNMAN.

GUNMAN: Whats the matter darlin cat got your tonuge

THE GUNMAN LAUGHS AS HE PUSHES EMMA AND THE CHAIR OVER ON TO HER BACK, JAKE STRUGGLES LOOKING CONCERNED FOR EMMA.

GUNMAN: Oh dear oh dear now what are we going to do

CAMERA FOCUS ON EMMA WHO IS ON THE FLOOR HER HAND IS CLOSE TO SOME BROKEN GLASS SHE PICKS A PICECE UP AND BEGINS TO CUT THE ROPE THE MAN TURNS BACK TO THE WINDOW.

GUNMAN: Now what am i going to do, they would have heard the Gun shot meaning that they have rang the Police i know i will lock this door and the back door that way no one leaves and no one escapes.

THE GUNMAN LOCKS THE FRONT DOOR AND WALKS INTO THE BACKROOM, FOCUS ON EMMA WHO HAS NOW CUT THE ROPE SHE STANDS BACK UP AND GRABS A MILK BOTTLE SHE WAITS FOR THE GUN MAN TO WALK BACK IN HE NOTICES THAT EMMA IS MISSING

GUNMAN: Where is she

EMMA SNEAKS UP ON THE GUN MAN AND SMASHES THE BOTTLE ACROSS THE GUNMANS HEAD KNOCKING HIM OUT.

baileya

20-01-2006, 15:33

Wow absolutley fantastic. Exeter is on form at the minute.

bakedbean

22-01-2006, 17:14

Thank you very much Baileia i have to say the same for Merseysiders

Bryan

22-01-2006, 17:16

gunmen, coach crashes, cancer storylines! omg bakedbean if you dont write for soaps when you are older than that is a talent wasted

keep up the good work! cant wait for this years soap awards...even tough exceter will knick all the gongs off devon seas

bakedbean

22-01-2006, 17:39

Thanks for evreything you said BondBoffin!!!

1. GLASS JAMES OFFICE INTERN NIGHT

JAMES IS POURING TWO DRINKS OF BRANDY, HE PICKS UP THE FIRST CUP AND HANDS IT TO VIV WHO IS SITTING BY THE DESK, JAMES PICKS UP THE OTHER AND GOES AND SITS DOWN.

JAMES: So what did you want to chat about
VIV: I dont know life i suppose
JAMES: Life
VIV: Yeah, i mean lets face it me and you have never had the eaisiest of lifes
JAMES: No but i have enjoyed it all and i would not change a single thing do you want a cigarette becuse you can it wont bother me
VIV: Im tryin to give up
JAMES: How many times over the years have a i heard you say that
VIV: No this time i mean it, i may not have long left and smoking will lower it even more
JAMES: Whats that supposed to mean
VIV: Nothing
JAMES: Come on you wanted to speak to me and talk about life and now your giving up smokin now i know you and i know that something is wrong
VIV: You wouldnt understand
JAMES: Oh yeah what is it womans troubles
VIV: No dont be so stupid
JAMES: Well what then someone caught the birdflu
VIV: Look i dont want to talk about it
JAMES: A ha so there is something going on come on tell me
VIV: Nothing
JAMES: Viv
VIV: If you must know then...then...i have got...
JAMES: The flu...a cold...mind you its the same thing
VIV: CANCER...I...I HA...ve got Cancer
JAMES: WHAT???

diamond1

22-01-2006, 17:41

wicked is rob still gonna return be intresting to see him and shawn go at it

bakedbean

22-01-2006, 17:42

Maybe...maybe not but you will find out in March!!!

bakedbean

22-01-2006, 17:50

GLASS JAMES OFFICE NIGHT INTERN

AS BEFORE

JAMES: Cancer...you have cancer no not you
VIV: Well i have
JAMES: Is that what the Doctor wanted you for
VIV: Yes
JAMES: Trduy and Andy know right
VIV: No they dont know i have cancer
JAMES: What
VIV: Well they dont need to worry im going to beat it
JAMES: But they need to know, they need to know that you have Cancer.

OUTSIDE JAMES OFFICE NIGHT INTERN

AS JAMES SAYS THAT FINAL LINE PAUL RAMSAY WALKS TO THE DOOR AND OVERHEARS IT, PAUL LOOKS SHOCKED BUT THEN SMIRKS AS HE WALKS BACK OUT!!!

big bro fan

22-01-2006, 17:51

OMG what will happen next

bakedbean

22-01-2006, 18:00

JENNY AND ANDYS BEDROOM

PETE BURNS "YOU SPIN ME RIGHT ROUND" IS PLAYING IN THE BACKGROUND FROM THE RADIO THE FLOOR IS A MESS AS THERE ARE CLOTHES EVREYWHERE, JENNY IS JUMPING ON THE BED HOLDING A GLASS OF WINE AND A BOTTLE IN THE OTHER. JENNY BEGINS TO SING AND DANCE.

JENNY: If i get to know your name...you spin me right round...

ANDY WALKS IN NOT KNOWING WHAT IS GOING ON HE LOOKS AT THE MESS AND AT JENNY HE LOOKS FURIOUS HE WALKS OVER TO THE RADIO AND TURNS IT OFF.

JENNY: Oy i was listening to that
ANDY: Not anymore what the hell is going on
JENNY: Im having [HICCOUPS] a disco
ANDY: Your drunk again arent you
JENNY: Me dear, no dear i dont drink the stuff
ANDY: Red wine where did you get this
JENNY: I will let you in on a secret [JENNY MAKES ANDY GET CLOSER AS SHE IS ABOUT TO WHISPER SOMETHING IN HIS EAR
JENNY: Go to...Hell
ANDY: [GRABS HER BY THE THROAT] Now you listen to me you stupid tart im going out and i want you to clean this all up and yourself.

ANDY LETS GO OF JENNY AND SLOWLY WALKS TO THE DOOR

JENNY: Off to see one of your Slappers

ANDY TURNS BACK ROUND

ANDY: Darlin im lookin right at the biggest tart why would i want another

ANDY LAUGHS AS HE WALKS OUT

bakedbean

22-01-2006, 18:57

PAUL RAMSAY HAS NEVER BEEN SOMEONE TO TRUST LETS FACE IT HE IS A LOUSY FRIEND AND A REAL BACK STABBER!!! BUT THAT COULD ALL END SOON BECUSE THE SEASON FINALE WILL END WITH A BANG WELL TWO ACTUALLY. PAUL RAMSAY HAS STABBED SOMEONE IN THE BACK FOR THE VERY LAST TIME AND SOMEONE IS OUT FOR REVENGE!!! PAUL RAMSAY BETTER KEEP HIS FRIENDS CLOSE AND HIS ENEMYS CLOSER OR HE WILL REGRET IT BECUSE HE IS ABOUT TO GET SHOT!!!
http://www.bbc.co.uk/drama/neighbours/whoswho/characterbiogs/contentimages/img_p146_s13819_txd20050822_v1_f32_392.jpg

WATCH YOUR BACK PAUL

big bro fan

23-01-2006, 15:42

sounds good can't wait.

bakedbean

23-01-2006, 16:46

OUTSIDE GLASS EARLY MORNING EXTERN

JAMES WALKS OUT OF GLASS HE LOOKS AROUND TO AN EMPTY STREET HE SHUTS THE DOOR AND LOCKS IT, JAMES TURNS ROUND TO SEE PAUL RAMSAY STARING RIGHT BACK AT HIM.

JAMES: What the hell do you want
PAUL: You know you really should keep your voice down when you are talking privetley about things.
JAMES: What are you going on about.
PAUL: What im talking about is that i know all about you and Viv and her cancer
JAMES: What how
PAUL: Its amazing what you can hear when you are not meant to aint it
JAMES: You breathe a word of this to anyone and i will kill you
PAUL: Yeah right
JAMES: Spoken to phillipa lately
PAUL: Last night shes my sister
JAMES: And did she tell you about Vic
PAUL: What
JAMES: I would be careful if i am you becuse bad things will happen

JAMES WALKS OFF NOT LOOKING HAPPY PAUL TURNS ROUND LOOKING ANGRY.

baileya

23-01-2006, 22:02

I will repeat what you said bakedbean watch out Paul!

bakedbean

24-01-2006, 18:25

Inspector Dave grouse is a regular to Exeter Street he has investigated in the death of ROY Crabtree and arrested Phil langton after he shot Shawn Scotsman and Sharons kidnapper. Inspector Grouse is a hard worker and is determined to do the job and do it right. Dave Grouse will be moving into the street next season and will be part of some cracking Storylines over the next year so will Exeter Street be a safer place to live now we have a copper??? I dont think so!!!

big bro fan

24-01-2006, 22:11

Bryan

24-01-2006, 22:16

It never seem's to amaze me how good soap's can get. Plus i notice new characters are alway's moving in. Can i assume that the season finale has something to do with Paul. Good script please do more soon.

ive got a good idea what will happen, if bakedbean bases the conclusions and build up on JR and Dallas...which i hope he does as that is one fantastic show!

bakedbean

25-01-2006, 16:23

THE BOOKIES PAULS OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL IS INTERVIEWING A YOUNG VERY ATTRACTIVE WOMAN.

PAUL: Thankyou that will be all for now

PAUL WATCHES AND LOOKS TO HER BUM AS SHE WALKS OUT

PAUL: NEXT

AMY WALKS IN SHE IS WEARING BUSSINESS CLOTHES SHE SITS DOWN AT THE DESK.

PAUL: Well well well if it is not Mrs Scotsman
AMY: No its not its Miss Salt now im divorced
PAUL: I see and what makes you think that you can work here
AMY: Well if you look at my CV then you will find out

PAUL LOOKS AT THE CV HE SMILES AND LOOKS BACK.

PAUL: You have not had many jobs have you
AMY: Well when your Husband runs a Pub you dont need another job mr Ramsay
PAUL: Manners my my this is looking good
AMY: Well have i got the job
PAUL: [PAUSE FOR A MOMENT] How badl do you want it
AMY: Really badly and you know how much it would annoy Shawn knowing that i have a job in Exeter Street
PAUL: You start on monday

THEY BOTH SMIRK.

baileya

25-01-2006, 17:11

This Paul storyline is really building up now it is all very exciting BakedBean. Well done!

bakedbean

25-01-2006, 18:30

1. OUTSIDE NUMBER 7 EXTERN DAY

A CAR SLOWLY PULLS OUTSIDE NUMBER 7 THE MOTOR STOPS AS THE DRIVER STEPS OUT REVEALING THEMSELVES TO BE ALEX MICHELS. ALEX LOOKS AROUND AND SMILES AS VERNON,SHANE AND SAM ALL STEP OUT, SAM SLOWLY WALKS OVER TO ALEX AND THEY KISS AND HUG.

ALEX: You know love i think we made the right descision to move here looks like a nice place
SAM: It does dont it
VERNON: Oy come on we have gotta get this in the house
ALEX: Alright...come on then evreyone help out now.

SAM WALKS OVER TO SHANE WHO IS LOOKING AROUND.

SAM: Shane come on your dad wants a hand
SHANE: Ok

SHANE SEES BROOKE COME OUT OF HER HOME NEXT DOOR, SHANE SMILES AT HER AND BROOKE SMILES BACK.

ALEX: Oy come on

2. INSIDE GARAGE OFFICE INTERN DAY

ANDY IS BUSY DOING SOME PAPER WORK HE IS LOOKING VERY TIRED AND STRESSED. BROOKE WALKS IN.

BROOKE: Hi daddy
ANDY: Oh mornin princess how are you
BROOKE: Im good
ANDY: Thats wonderful
BROOKE: What are you doing
ANDY: What..oh just some paperwork
BROOKE: We have got new neighbours
ANDY: Have we
BROOKE: Yeah one of them is kind of cute
ANDY: Is he now
BROOKE: Yeah he is
ANDY: Well is he your age
BROOKE: No
ANDY: Well dont get any ideas
BROOKE: I only said he was cute
ANDY: I suppose...so erm what do you want
BROOKE: I just came to see you
ANDY: Yeah of course princess the only time you come and see me is when you want money or summit that is going to be expensive and right now i cant afford either
BROOKE: But dad i have seen this really nice skirt
ANDY: Oh really how long is it
BROOKE: Its a mini
ANDY: Thought so and how much [TAKES A SIP OF HIS TEA]
BROOKE: Thirty pound
ANDY: [CHOCKING ON TEA] How much for a mini skirt that is bloody expensive aint it
BROOKE: Oh but daddy
ANDY: Ok but this is the last thing i buy you and dont tell your mother

bakedbean

25-01-2006, 18:34

WILL SHE WONT SHE???

http://www.bbc.co.uk/drama/neighbours/whoswho/characterbiogs/contentimages/img_p146_s13255_txd20050504_v1_f33_528.jpg

THAT IS THE QUESTION WILL SHE MARRY PAUL OR NOT THESE NEXT FEW WEEKS WILL BE TOUGH BUT CAN SHE PULL THROUGH AND MARRY PAUL??? OR WILL A RETURN OF A CERTAIN CHARECTER RUIN EVREYTHING???

Bryan

25-01-2006, 18:46

oh my god! your ideas get better and better! if you dont send exeter off to the bbc writersroom by the end of the month i will throttle you lol!!!! :lol:

bakedbean

25-01-2006, 18:50

Bryan

25-01-2006, 19:10

lol no my teacher is sending one of the scripts that i am writing and it will be in Exeter eventually to Granada becuse she knows one of the Corrie Wresiters. But i would prefer it to be the BBC oh well

oh my god you have contacts to a soap writer!!!???

im so jealous! thats what you need to get into the career, oh my your so lucky!

big bro fan

25-01-2006, 20:18

It's better than my soap i'll say that. Although i am going to start and write everyday as soon as i get internet on my laptop.

baileya

25-01-2006, 22:24

So the Michels have arrived. Cant wait to see what they are like.

bakedbean

27-01-2006, 16:05

This is the chance where you can decide whether one charecter should return from the dead or not in march Mike Scotsman??? Here is all the episodes from the first two seasons and Mike has been in alot of them so good luck

Season 1 http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=1734
Season 2 http://www.soapboards.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=14798

http://www.hellomagazine.com/profiles/lesliegrantham/lesliegranthamb.jpg

bakedbean

27-01-2006, 16:34

THE MICHELS LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

THE LIVING ROOM IS EMPTY EXCEPT FOR A SEATEE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE ROOM SAM WALKS IN FOLLOWED BY THE BOYS.

SAM: Eww this place is going to need redecorating
ALEX: I take it thats a job for me then
SAM: Oh thankyou darling
SHANE: I will help you dad
ALEX: Are you sure that you are up for it i mean after the last time you made me fall off of the ladder
SHANE: I did not that was an accident and you know it was
ALEX: Yeah yeah what ever

THE CAFE INTERN AFTERNOON

RIC AND SHARON ARE SAT AT A TABLE HAVING A CUP OF TEA.

RIC: So you are happy with Paul then
SHARON: Yeah of course i am dad
RIC: You dont still have you know
SHARON: What
RIC: Feeling for Phil
SHARON: Of course i do dad but Phils gone and he is never coming back its time i moved on.

bakedbean

27-01-2006, 18:43

THE HIGHSTREET EXTERN AFTERNOON

RIC IS SLOWLY WALKING UP THE HIGHSTREET LOOKING THOURHG THE SHOP WINDOWS NOT NOTICING THAT AMY HAS COME OUT IN FRONT WITH QUITE A FEW SHOPPING BAGS THEY BUMP INTO EACH OTHER KNOCKING THE BAGS OUT OF AMYS HANDS.

AMY: Oh now look
RIC: Im so sorry look let me help you

RIC HELPS AMY PICK UP THE BAGS AND HANDS THEM BACK TO HER.

AMY: Thankyou
RIC: Its a pleasure

RIC WALKS OFF INTO THE CROWD AS AMY WATCHES ON AND SMILES. COULD THIS BE THE START OF A NEW ROMANCE???

bakedbean

27-01-2006, 18:50

Thats a question i have been asked alot and we are not going to find out for quite a while. But lets look at how this all started.

It all started in late October when Exeter Street celebrated 100 years, Paul Ramsay orginised a Plane Trip with some of the residents on including Lucy and Chrissie Scotsman and Bob and Silvia. However the plane crashed into the chase causing it to explode with Bob and Silvia trapped inside. It was later discovered that someone had planted a Bomb!!!

Then in late November just a mear moth after the Plane Disaster Lucy was shutting the Pub for the night when someone from behined attacked her and set The vLion ablaze, causing Jake to run in and attempt to save Lucy which he did. Could this have been the Attacker???

Finally just a few days into the new year the residents of Exeter Street went on a coach trip little did they know a Bomb was also on this Coach and when it exploded it caused the Coach to crash into the Sea killing Hugh and Nick Bowler.

So who is the attacker out to get Lucy Scotman it seems she has been in the middle of evrey disaster but why would the attacker go after her??? Could someone from her past be after her or could we have got it all wrong. After all the attacker had Chrissies mobile number and did text her to be carefull while she was on the Coach.

Will the attacker strike again and why???

baileya

27-01-2006, 19:48

Oooooh Amy and Ric. I cant wait to find out who the attacker is.

bakedbean

28-01-2006, 11:11

THE LION LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

CHRISSIE IS SITTING AT THE TABLE EATING SOME TOAST, LUCY IS PLAYING WITH KRISTEN ON THE SEATEE, SHAWN WALKS IN CARRYING THE POST IN HIS HANDS.

SHAWN: Bills,bills,bills...oh there is one for you Chrissie hold on thats funny there is no adress or stamp or anything on it.
LUCY: Thats odd
CHRISSIE: Pass it here

SHAWN PASSESS CHRISSIE THE LETTER SHE OPENS IT AND READS IT AND HAS A SHOCK LOOK ON HER FACE.

LUCY: Chrissie are you alright...what is it love
CHRISSIE: I dont know i dont understand it

CHRISSIE HANDS SHAWN THE LETTER HE READS IT OUT.

SHAWN: Keep your friends close but keep your enemys even closer what the hell does that mean
LUCY: Enemys you dont have any enemys
CHRISSIE: Well there is Amy
SHAWN: Yeah even Amy would not do this
CHRISSIE: Hold on a minute
LUCY: What
CHRISSIE: The night of the crash i got a text telling me something bad was going to happen
LUCY: You mean to tell me that whoever planted that bomb on the coach is out to get you and sent that letter
CHRISSIE: It seems that way
SHAWN: She may be right
CHRISSIE: Well what am i going to do
LUCY: The police
SHAWN: [SARCASTICALLY] Sure becuse they can do something
LUCY: Yes well they may be able to trace it
SHAWN: How its not even hand written mum
CHRISSIE: I think its best if i go stay with my sister again until this has all blown over
LUCY: Now dont be silly nothing bad is going to happen not with Shawn around
SHAWN: Mums right Chrissie i wont let anything happen to you

bakedbean

28-01-2006, 11:14

Stacie Bowler is leaving Exeter Street this Summer in an explosive way. I wont reveal how but she is soon to be leaving Exeter Street in style but not before she gets her revenge on a certain someone who she feels is the cause of her dad and brothers death. Stacie wont die but she will be leaving in an explosive way that will leave evreyone in shock but will she leave with her son Bobby???

bakedbean

28-01-2006, 11:45

THE LION BAR INTERN AFTERNOON

SHAWN,LUCY AND CHRISSIE ARE ALL BEHINED THE BAR SERVING CUSTOMERS, SOME OF THE LOCALS ARE ALREADY IN ALAN, TRUDY AND VIV ARE ALL SAT AT THE TABLE CLOSE TO THE POOL TABLE AS THEY ARE PLAYING POOL. ANDY COMES OUT OF THE TOILET AND SITS DOWN WITH THEM, JAMES IS IN THE FAR CORNER READING THE PAPER WHILE DRINKING A SMALL GLASS OF BRANDY. RIC,PAUL,SHARON AND LEXI ARE ALL SAT AT THE TABLE CLOSET TO THE DOOR CHATTING AWAY.

LEXI: Four weeks and its the big day
SHARON: I cant wait
PAUL: Neither can i
LEXI: So how long are you staying for then Ric
RIC: Me oh you know just till after the wedding i wuold not miss my baby girls big day for the world.
LEXI: No i didnt think so

AMY WALKS IN NOT NOTICING RIC HOWEVER RIC NOTICES HER.

RIC: Erm fancie another
LEXI: Yes please
PAUL: Let me get them
RIC: No no i will get them.

RIC WALKS TO THE BAR AND STANDS CLOSE TO AMY. AMY TURNS TO SEE HIM AND LOOKS SHOCKED.

AMY: You
RIC: Excuse me
AMY: Your the one that knocked the shopping out of my hand.
RIC: Oh down the high street
AMY: Yeah down the high street
RIC: Well my names Ric, Ric Grand
AMY: Amy Salter...hold on Ric Grand
RIC: Yeah
AMY: You dont happen to be realated to Sharon Grand do you
RIC: Yeah shes my daughter why do you know her
AMY: We used to be freinds
RIC: Used to be
AMY: Its a long story
RIC: Then tell me about it tonight at seven... Bella Italia do a good meal
AMY: Are you asking me out on a date
RIC: Maybe
AMY: Ok seven it is.

baileya

28-01-2006, 13:13

Amy and Rick! Looking like a couple already! Very good yet again.

bakedbean

28-01-2006, 13:18

This week Chrissie Scotsman recived a letter telling her "Keep your freinds close but your enemys even closer" what does this mean??? Is someone after Chrissie could it be tha attacker??? After all she did recive a text just before the Crash warning her she could die!!! Now Chrissie is becoming incersingly paronoid that someone is following her but is she right???

http://www.bbc.co.uk/bbcthree/imagedump/12098.jpg

IS CHRISSIE IN DANGER???

bakedbean

28-01-2006, 14:54

BELLA ITALIA INTERN EVENING

RIC AND AMY ARE SAT AT A TABLE WITH A BOTTLE OF RED WINE AND TWO GLASSESS THEY ARE WAITNG FOR THERE FOOD.

AMY: I have never been here before
RIC: Me neither
AMY: So tell me a bit about yourself
RIC: Me well i used to live in Exeter Street and i used to be the owner before Roy Crabtree of the Bookies
AMY: Im working there
RIC: Oh really what do you think of Paul
AMY: Well he is not my favorutist person mind you i dont think many people like him
RIC: I know erm that Scotsmna lad Shawn he does not like him much
AMY: Oh you just ignore Shawn
RIC: Do you know him
AMY: Know him i was married to him
RIC: And the baby is yours
AMY: Yep just im not allowed to see her
RIC: Whys that
AMY: I dont really want to talk about it
RIC: Oh ok

FADE OUT

OUTSIDE AMYS FLAT EXTERN NIGHT

AMY AND RIC WALK UP TO THE FLAT AMY AND RIC ARE BOTH A BIT DRUNK.

AMY: Do you want to come in for a coffee
RIC: I dont like coffee
AMY: Neither do i

THEY BOTH LAUGH AS AMY OPENS THE DOOR LETTING HERSELF AND RIC IN, SHE SHUTS THE DOOR.

Bryan

28-01-2006, 16:49

intresting...very intresting :hmm:

keep up the good work bakedbean! terrefic stuff

just so as you know Devon Seas returns next Saturday, with a new writer on board!

bakedbean

28-01-2006, 16:50

Oh i cant wait i have read some of your spoilers and i see that i am going to have to work hard looking forward to some more competition again lol. Merseysiders is the best at the moment its absolutley amazing!!!

bakedbean

28-01-2006, 16:55

THE LION BAR INTERN NIGHT

LUCY IS SWEEPING THE FLOOR WHILE CHRISSIE IS COLLECTING THE GLASSES.

LUCY: Oh Chrissie you couldnt take the rubbish out could you
CHRISSIE: Yeah no problem

CHRISSIE GRABS THE RUBBISH BAG AND WALKS INTO THE BACK.

OUTSIDE THE LION ALLEYWAY EXTERN NIGHT

CHRISSIE WALKS OUT INTO THE ALLEYWAY WITH THE RUBBISH BAG, SHE PLACES THE RUBBISH INTO THE BIN AND LOOKS AROUND.

CHRISSIE: Hello...Hello...Is anybody there

CHRISSIE SLOWLY LOOKS AROUND BUT SEES NOTHING SHE HURRYS BACK INSIDE AND SHUTS THE DOOR BEHINED HER. A SHADOW APPEARS FROM BINS THE SHADOW OF A PERSON SLOWLY LEAVES THE ALLEYWAY IS SOMEONE AFTER CHRISSIE???

Bryan

28-01-2006, 16:57

:eek: watch out chrissie!!!!

it gets better and better, terrefic stuff!

baileya

28-01-2006, 16:58

This storyline with Chrissie is one of the best I have read. It is full of suspense wow. Brilliant!

big bro fan

28-01-2006, 22:18

Wow just caught up it's great.

big bro fan

29-01-2006, 15:30

Please do more soon.

bakedbean

29-01-2006, 17:13

Next episode is up tommorow with the morning after the night before between Amy and Ric.

big bro fan

29-01-2006, 18:53

can't wait.

big bro fan

30-01-2006, 13:17

can't wait for next episode.

bakedbean

30-01-2006, 15:56

OUTSIDE THE LION MORNING EXTERN

THE CAMERA OPENS LOOKING AT THE FRONT OF THE LION ON THE DOOR IS SPRAY PAINTED IN RED "YOUR NEXT"

AMYS BEDROOM INTERN MORNING

AMY AND RIC ARE BOTH ASLEEP, RIC WAKES UP AND SLOWLY SITS UP NOT REALLY KNOWING WHERE HE IS HE LOOKS TO AMY

RIC: [WHISPER] Not again

RIC SLOWLY MOVES OUT OF THE BED NOT WAKING AMY AND GRABS HIS CLOTHES AND SLOWLY LEAVES WITH AMY STILL IN THE BED FAST ASLEEP.

big bro fan

30-01-2006, 17:57

i can't wait to see if Amy is pregnant or not.

bakedbean

30-01-2006, 18:58

This Summer there is going to be a shocking marriage, but the streets residents wont be pleased at all!!! But the question is who will the couple be???

Plus there will be a funeral just before Christmas and many will be upset but will this certain person be murdered or die of natural causes???

big bro fan

30-01-2006, 19:36

My guess would be that Paul dies as for the marriage i'm not sure.

bakedbean

31-01-2006, 17:16

http://www.bbc.co.uk/drama/faces/images/michael_french.jpg

Thats right folks Mr Nasty Robert Scotsman is on his way back to Exeter Street, the last time we saw him he was being thrown into a prison cell after punching his wife Chrissie. But now hes back and what will Shawn and Lucy think??? After all Robert did have an affair with Shawns wife Amy and Shawn is Lucys favourite and you dont upset Shawn!!! But has Robert turned over a new leaf??? Or is he still that nasty piece of work find out very...very...soon!!!

bakedbean

31-01-2006, 17:17

My guess would be that Paul dies as for the marriage i'm not sure.

Nope Paul is not going to die any time soon but someone that loves him will be affected by both the Wedding and The Funeral!!!

bakedbean

31-01-2006, 17:26

OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN MORNING

THE GRAFFITI IS STILL ON THE DOOR SHAWN IS TALKING TO THE PPAINTER LOOKING FURIOUS ABOUT IT.

INSIDE THE LION LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

CHRISSIE IS TRYING TO MAKE HER SELF A GLASS OF WATER BUT KEEPS SHAKING AND THE WATER FROM THE JUG SPILLS EVREYWHERE, LUCY WALKS IN SHOCKING CHRISSIE AS SHE DROPS THE JUG.

LUCY: Chrissie are you all right
CHRISSIE: No Lucy im not
LUCY: Look if its about the graffiti it is probably just some kids
CHRISSIE: No Lucy someone is out to get me i just know they are
LUCY: Oh now come on why would anyone go after you i mean you have only been here a few months and you lived in Australia for a while.
CHRISSIE: Oh no
LUCY: What
CHRISSIE: Remeber when i told you about me and Robert in australia and the trouble he had with that bussiness man
LUCY: Yes but i mean they dont know where you are
CHRISSIE: You dont know them Lucy if they still want Robert then they are going to go straight after me

big bro fan

31-01-2006, 18:08

wow looks like things are going to hot up.is It sharon who will be affected by the wedding of her dad to amy perhaps.

baileya

31-01-2006, 18:18

Looks like chrissie is getting spooked. This storyline with chrissie is brilliant.

big bro fan

31-01-2006, 18:20

i know he is so good at this is'nt he. How have you been Baileya.

bakedbean

01-02-2006, 17:11

INSIDE THE LION LIVING ROOM AFTERNOON

CHRISSIE IS PUTTING ON HER COAT AS IS STEPH.

STEPH: I know you are worrying about evreything but going shopping might take your mind off of things.
CHRISSIE: Yeah hopefully

THEY BOTH WALK OUT

THE SHOPPING MALL INTERN AFTERNOON

CHRISSIE AND STEPH BOTH WALK UP TO THE TOILETS

STEPH: Oh i need the toilet just wait here
CHRISSIE: Yeah ok

STEPH WALKS IN FOCUS JUST ON THE TOILET DOOR...TIME PASSESS BY AND STEPH WALKS BACK OUT TO SEE THE SHOPPING BAGS DROPPED ON THE FLOOR AND CHRISSIE IS NO WHERE TO BE SEEN.

ABANDONED WAREHOUSE INTERN AFTERNOON

CHRISSIE IS ALONE IN A DARK ROOM SHE IS BLIND FOLDED AND TIED TO A CHAIR.

CHRISSIE: Hello...Hello

THE WAREHOUSE DOOR OPENS AS WE HEAR FOOTSTEPS THE DOOR IS SLAMMMED SHUT. THE PERSON SLOWLY WALKS OVER TO CHRISSIE AND TAKES OFF THE BLIND FOLD CHRISSIE LOOKS ON IN HORROR.

CHRISSIE: You

big bro fan

01-02-2006, 17:29

OMG you can't leave it there i need to know what's happned to Chrissie. Please post some more soon.

Bryan

01-02-2006, 17:30

:eek: what a cliffhanger!

get back right now and post the next part! :lol:

bakedbean

01-02-2006, 17:51

Who Has Got Chrissie???

Next Time On Exeter Chrissie Is In Great Danger But Will Shawn Find Her In Time Or Could Someone Unexpected Save The Day???

big bro fan

01-02-2006, 17:59

i absoluty cannot wait do you like my new banner.

baileya

01-02-2006, 18:54

Wow that is absolutley fantastic! Who is it? Hurry next part please!

bakedbean

02-02-2006, 16:35

THE LION LIVING ROOM INTERN EVENING

LUCY IS PUTTING ON HER EARINGS WHEN SHAWN WALKS IN.

SHAWN: Ready to open up
LUCY: Come on then

THE BACKDOOR BANGS

LUCY: Whos that

SHAWN WALKS OUT AND OPENS THE DOOR STEPH WALKS IN

LUCY: Steph where is Chrissie
STEPH: I dont know
SHAWN: What do you mean you dont know
STEPH: I went to the toilet
SHAWN: Where
STEPH: The Mall and Chrissie was outside with the shopping i came back out and she was not there but the bags where on the floor
LUCY: What...Im going to ring her

LUCY DIALS IN THE NUMBER ON THE PHONE WAIT FOR A MOMENT AND SHE PUTS THE PHONE DOWN.

LUCY: Voicemail...maybe we should ring the Police
SHAWN: Yeah and what are they going to do
LUCY: Well we need to do something
SHAWN: Steph you come with me we are going to find her
LUCY: Be careful.

THE ABANDONED WAREHOUSE INTERN EVENING

CHRISSIE IS SITTING ALON ON THE CHAIR

CHRISSIE: They will find me you know, Shawn will find me [MUTTERS] i hope!!!!

big bro fan

02-02-2006, 18:31

i cannot wait to see where this storyline is leading i'm hooked.

bakedbean

05-02-2006, 16:50

ABANDONED WAREHOUSE INTERN NIGHT

CHRISSIE IS SAT ON THE CHAIR IN THE DARK SOMEONE ELSE IS ALSO IN THE ROOM BUT WE CAN NOT SEE THEM.

CHRISSIE: Look i have told you he is in prison you wont get away with this Shawn will find me and when he does...

A SCRUFFY LOOKING BUT WELL TANNED MAN APPEARS FROM THE SHADOWS HE HAS A STRONG AUSTRALIAN ACCENT.

MAN: What...what will he do Chrissie beat me up...kill me...dont make me laugh
CHRISSIE: He will kill you becuse of what you did
MAN: What kidnappping you
CHRISSIE: No all those things Blowing up the coach...burning the pub...The plane
MAN: What are you going on about
CHRISSIE: It was you i know it was
MAN: I dont know what you are talking about
CHRISSIE: Your the one that sent me the text on the night of the crash
MAN: And why would i want to blow up a coach full of people or a plane you know my style Chrissie i only go for the ones that have hurt me...so whatever has happened has not been becuse of me...but now your going to pay for what your husband did

THE MAN PULLS A GASOLINE BOTTLE FROM THE SHADOWS AND POURS IT AROUND CHRISSIE HE DROPS IT AND PULLS OUT A LIGHTER

MAN: See you in hell

THE DOOR SMASHES OPEN AND IN RUNS HOLDING A GUN ROBERT SCOTSMAN!!!!

diamond1

05-02-2006, 17:00

oh dear he's back most likley he will end up HELPING whomever it is

bakedbean

05-02-2006, 17:09

THE WAREHOUSE INTERN NIGHT

ROBERT IS STANDING POINTING THE GUN AT THE MAN WHO IS HOLDING HIS LIGHTER CHRISSIE IS SITTING ON THE CHAIR LOOKING SHOCKED.

MAN: Robert how nice of you to join are little shindig [THE MAN LAUGHS] Its about to get really hot in here
ROBERT: Leave my wife alone or you will get it
MAN: Oh please Robbie boy you can do better than that at least you could when you worked for me
ROBERT: I wont tell you again
MAN: Now come on Rob you dont want to end up in prison again now do you and after all you are one for payback
ROBERT: Well paybacks a bitch
MAN: Oh dear oh dear now i would love to chat with you Robert but im afraid i have a plane to catch so if you dont mind.

THE MAN LIGHTS THE LIGHTER CHRISSIE LOOKS ON IN SHOCK REALISING SHE IS IN DANGER ROBERT RUNS TOWARDS THE MAN WHO PUTS OUT THE LIGHTER AND THE TWO MEN BEGINS TO FIGHT KNOCKING EACH OTHER TO THE GROUND. IN THE BACKGROUND WE HEAR A POLICE CAR

CHRISSIE: Stop it both of you

THE CONTINUE FIGHTING AS INSPECTOR GROUSE WALKS IN FOLLOWED BY TWO POLICE MEN WHO RESTRAIN THE MAN AND SHAWN AND STEPH WALK IN.

SHAWN: Robert
ROBERT: Shawn its good to see you

big bro fan

05-02-2006, 20:49

wowi can't wait to see what happens next. How will Shawn take it.

bakedbean

06-02-2006, 17:23

THE LION BAR INTERN NIGHT

THE BAR IS BUSY AND LUCY IS SERVING DRINKS ALL THE RESIDENTS ARE IN THE PUB NOT KNOWING ABOUT CHRISSIE. SHAWN WALKS IN NOT LOOKING HAPPY LUCY SEES HIM.

LUCY: Shawn, have they found her
SHAWN: Yeah but there is something else mum
LUCY: Oh yeah what is she hurt has something happened to her
SHAWN: No its not that its

STEPH WALKS IN FOLLOWED BY CHRISSIE, LUCY WALKS OVER TO CHRISSIE AND GIVES HER A HUG AND THEN TURNS TO LOOK AT THE DOOR WHEN ROBERT WALKS IN THE PUB GOES SILENT AS EVREYONE LOOKS ON IN SHOCK.

ROB: Hello Mum
LUCY: What the hell are you doing here...what is he doing here Shawn
ROB: Mum
LUCY: Get out...get out of my pub go on get out
CHRISSIE: Lucy...he saved me
LUCY: He did what
CHRISSIE: He saved me from Dave Allen
LUCY: Dave who
CHRISSIE: Its a long story maybe if we go into the back room and talk about it
LUCY: Me and you but not him no i want him out of here and i never want to see him again Shawn come on
SHAWN: Mum come on he saved Chrissies life
LUCY: No
ROB: Oh this is tipical you aint it mum always blaming me...always the one who has done evreything possible to make your life miserable.

LUCY SLAPS ROBERT HARD ACROSS THE FACE ROBERT SMILES AT HER

LUCY: How dare you now get out in fact...your bard.

Bryan

06-02-2006, 17:33

:cheer: fab stuff! good to see rob back in exeter!

baileya

06-02-2006, 20:55

Brilliant as usual this storyline has been brilliant. Robs back! :cheer:

bakedbean

07-02-2006, 17:15

OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

THE PUB IS STILL BUSY, BUT OUTSIDE ON THE STREET IT IS QUIET, NO ONE IS AROUND EXCEPT FROM AMY WHO IS LOCKING UP THE BOOKIES AND ROBERT WHO IS SMOKING A CIGARETTE AND SITTING ON ONE OF THE PICNIC BENCHES OUTSIDE THE LION. ROBERT NOTICES AMY, AMY TURNS ROUND AND BEGINS TO WALK ACROSS TO HER FLAT UNTIL SHE SEES ROBERT SHE LOOKS ON IN SHOCK AND WALKS CLOSER TO HIM.

ROB: Oh and what do you want
AMY: Im just shocked to see you here again, i mean i thought you would never show your face around here again.
ROB: I have family here, i came back for my wife
AMY: [LAUGHS] You went to prison becuse you hit her for crying out loud
ROB: Oh yeah and whats your excuse for being back here i thought Mum sent you packing
AMY: Oh she did but after all i do have a daughter her
ROB: So you do
AMY: Look at us both outside in the cold me and you have something in common
ROB: I doubt that very much
AMY: Me and you are outcasts we dont belong in there with evreyone else
ROB: What are you trying to say
AMY: We would be good together me and you just think of all the things we could do
ROB: Your talking a load of crap
AMY: Oh yeah so why are you out here and golden boy is back in there
ROB: You know why
AMY: Becuse your mum hates you...She only loves Shawn your nothing compared to him in her eyes...just like me and Chrissie. Lucy only likes Chrissie becuse she can handle you, they are all pathetic.
ROB: Wiat a minute me and you a team
AMY: Yes
ROB: Let me think about it
AMY: Thursday i want an answer Rob...me and you will be good together.

baileya

07-02-2006, 20:10

Ohhh very demanding Amy. I wonder what Rob says.

bakedbean

08-02-2006, 17:05

GLASS JAMES OFFICE INTERN MORNING

JAMES IS TALKING TO VIV THEY ARE SITTING CLOSE ON THE LEVER SEATEE.

JAMES: Your going to have to tell them sooner or later they will find out
VIV: No they dont need to know
JAMES: But what about when you go into hospital to remove the cancer
VIV: Who says i am going to have the operation
JAMES: What??? You cant do that
VIV: Maybe its my time to leave at least i will be ready for it
JAMES: Viv your not thinking
VIV: Oh but i am i have never thought any clearer about anything
JAMES: But what about Brooke and Steve and Andy, or Trudy it would brake her heart if you died
VIV: Well we will all die some day just im dieing sooner
JAMES: Your 59
VIV: Sixty in a few months
JAMES: Viv you must have the operation
VIV: No
JAMES: Well at least tell Andy
VIV: I dont want him worrying
JAMES: Viv
VIV: Look i am not having the operation and thats the end of it James now if you dont mind i have some shopping to do

bakedbean

08-02-2006, 18:08

Thats a question evreyone in Exeter Street is asking strange things have happened and people have been hurt and killed!!! By the mystrey Attacker but who are they??? and why are they attacking Exeter Street???

One possible answer is Paul Ramsays enemys heck he has a lot of them from his time outside of the street and in. Someone asked could it be Dennis Hill after all Paul worked for him to destroy Exeter Street and help him buy it, but Paul fell for Sharon and told Dennis where to stick it!!! Could Dennis Hill or one of his croonies be the Attacker???

This storyline will not be resolved for quite a while yet and many more strange things are going to happen could someone be punished for there dastardly deeds or will someone end up dead at the hands of the attacker???

WHOS THE ATTACKER???

bakedbean

08-02-2006, 20:16

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN EVENING

PAUL AND SHARON ARE ENJOYING A MEAL TOGETHER, A ENVELOP FALLS FROM THE LETTER BOX, SHARON NOTICES IT AND SHE WALKS OVER AND PICKS IT UP. IT IS ADRESSED TO SHARON SHE OPENS IT AND SLOWLY READS IT.

PAUL: Who is it babe...Sharon...whats up

PAUL STANDS UP AND WALKS OVER TO SHARON AND GRABS THE LETTER HE READS IT AND LOOKS SHOCKED.

PAUL: Was this adressed to you, Sharon
SHARON: Yeah...yeah it was
PAUL: To my one and only you were lucky...what the hell does that mean
SHARON: I dont know, Paul what if its the attacker what if they are after me
PAUL: Now come on why would anyone be after you, its me they are after why would anyone want to hurt you
SHARON: Your right
PAUL: Right find me the number of my security service
SHARON: What...why?
PAUL: Becuse we need 24 hour pretection thats why
SHARON: Maybe we should call the wedding off i mean if the attacker is after us then they will target the wedding
PAUL: No, no they wont

baileya

08-02-2006, 20:46

So now its Sharons turn. I wonder what Paul will do!

bakedbean

08-02-2006, 20:53

AMYS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

AMY IS WATCHING THE TELEVISION, SHE IS FALLING ASLEEP UNTIL SOMEONE KNOCKS ON THE DOOR. AMY GETS HERSELF TOGETHER AND ANSWERS THE DOOR TO SEE ROBERT WHO IS HOLDING A BOTTLE OF RED WINE.

AMY: Well look who it is your early you have at least another 24 hours
ROBERT: Just shut up and kiss me

ROBERT AND AMY KISS PASSIONATLY

AMY: Shall we

AMY AND ROBERT WALK IN SHUTTING THE DOOR BEHINED THEM.

baileya

08-02-2006, 21:02

It must be love love love. Nothing more nothing less. OOOOOOO Rob and Amy.

bakedbean

08-02-2006, 21:36

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

SHARON AND PAUL ARE ASLEEP IN BED, THE ROOM IS DARK AND THE CURTAINS ARE CLOSED. HOWEVER A BRICK SMASHES THROUGH THE FRONT WINDOW WITH A NOTE ON IT. THE LIGHT TURNS ON AND PAUL SLOWLY COMES DOWN THE STAIRS FOLLOWED BY SHARON.

SHARON: What going on
PAUL: Sharon go back to bed

PAUL WALKS SLOWLY TO THE BRICK AND PICKS UP THE NOTE ADRESSED TO SHARON HE OPENS IT AND READS IT ALOUD.

PAUL: If you know whats good for you...you will leave him
SHARON: What is that all about
PAUL: I dont know, Sharon get dressed and pack your bags
SHARON: What why
PAUL: We are going to spend some time in a hotel until all this is sorted out

SO PAUL AND SHARON LEAVE THE STREET IN FEAR OF GETTING ATTACKED!!!
AMY AND ROBERT ARE TOGETHER WHAT CHAOS WILL THEY CAUSE???
AND IS THE ATTACKER AFTER SOME ONE ELSE???

big bro fan

08-02-2006, 22:24

By anychance could Phil be the attaker maybe he found sharon when he came out of prison.

baileya

09-02-2006, 15:52

Good theory that Big Bro fan! It could be Phil after all.

bakedbean

09-02-2006, 16:36

OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN MORNING

LUCY COMES OUT OF THE LION CARRYING THE BILLBOARD SHE PLACES IT ON THE PATH, SHE TURNS TO SEE ROBERT AND AMY KISSING ON THE BALCONY OF AMYS FLAT, LUCY LOOKS FURIOUS ROB AND AMY NOTCIE HER.

ROB: Hey mum
LUCY: What the hell is going on
AMY: Sorry Lucy i dont understand
LUCY: You two really do have black hearts
AMY: Oh come on Lucy shall we let bygons be bygons, hey how about you come to are party at the weekend it will be good evreyone is welcome including you
LUCY: Not in a million years
ROB: Oh come on mum it will be fun

LUCY WALKS INTO THE LION FURIOUSLY, ROB AND AMY LAUGH.

bakedbean

09-02-2006, 17:09

JILLS CAFE INTERN MORNING

JILL IS CLEANING UP SOME OF THE TABLES, WHEN JAMES WALKS IN HOLDING SOME PAPERS.

JILL: James are you ok
JAMES: You have got the letter right
JILL: What letter
JAMES: The letter from the council
JILL: I left early this morning what does it say

JAMES HANDS JILL THE LETTERS. JILL READS THEM AND DOES NOT LOOK PLEASED.

JILL: What the complex has been brought
JAMES: Meaning yours, mine and Paul bussiness could be closed down
JILL: But sureley they cant do that i mean this is are liveley hood
JAMES: They can and if they are offred enough money they will sell up and you know that people want Exeter complex all the time
JILL: Well who is the owner
JAMES: I dont know but apparentley we will find out next Tuesday

big bro fan

09-02-2006, 21:23

Wow so has someone bought exeter street. :hmm: wonder who.

bakedbean

12-02-2006, 21:14

GLASS JAMES OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

JAMES IS ARGUING ON THE PHONE TO THE COUNCIL.

JAMES: Sureley you know who has brought the Complex...what do you mean your not at libertey to say...hello...is anyone there...hello...damn

JAMES SLAMS THE PHONE DOWN, THE DOOR KNOCKS.

JAMES: WHAT

THE DOOR OPENS AND IN WALKS PAUL WITH A BRIEFCASE IN HIS HAND, HE IS SMIRKING.

JAMES: Paul im not in the mood to play games with you today
PAUL: Oh but you will like this one James
JAMES: What are you going on about Paul, I presume you know that The bookies could end up closing, becuse someone has decided to buy the complex off of the Council, meaning we could lose are bussiness
PAUL: Oh yes i know, and thats where my game comes into it
JAMES: I dont understand
PAUL: You see James, the new complex owner is Me
JAMES: What
PAUL: And this game we are going to play is if you annoy me or offend me, or upset me in anyway...then i will kick you off of my land and believe me i would do it with great pleasure.

PAUL OPENS HIS BRIEFCASE AND PULLS OUT A CONTRACT.

PAUL: You will need to sign this
JAMES: What for
PAUL: To agree to my terms
JAMES: And what are those terms
PAUL: Well if you read it

JAMES READS THE CONTRACT

JAMES: You can not be serious Paul
PAUL: Oh but i am
JAMES: Your rasing the Clubs bill by 20% you must be joking
PAUL: Im deadley serious James if you dont like it you can always leave

PAUL LAUGHS AS HE WALKS OUT OF THE OFFICE AND SHUTS THE DOOR JAMES LOOKS FURIOUS.

bakedbean

13-02-2006, 11:58

EXETER STREET MORNING EXTERN.

VIV WALKS OUT OF HER HOUSE AND PICKS UP THE MILK SHE LOOKS AROUND AND SMILES TO JAKE AND EMMA WHO ARE OPENING UP THE SHOP, ANDY COMES OUT OF THE MACKLIN HOUSE AND GETS HIS MILK, VIV AND ANDY SMILE. AMY AND ROBERT BOTH WALK OUT OF THE FLAT IN THERE DRESSING GOWNS SMIRKING, EVREYONE LOOKS AT THEM IN SHCOK.

AMY: Morning

EVREYONE LOOKS AT THEM IN DISGUST AND ALL WALK BACK INTO THERE HOMES.

ROB: Welcome back Robert
AMY: Well im happy your back at least

PAUL AND SHARONS HOTEL ROOM INTERN MORNING

PAUL COMES OUT OF THE BATHROOM SHARON IS CHANGED AS IS PAUL.

PAUL: Are you ready darlin
SHARON: Yeah im ready

THEY BOTH GRAB THERE SUITCASES AND WALK OUT OF THE ROOM.

HOTEL CARPARK EXTERN MORNING

SOMEONE IS AT PAULS CAR LOOKING AT THE MOTOR, THEY HAVE PLYERS IN THERE HAND AND CUT THE BREAK CABLE!!!!

VIVS KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

VIV IS IN THE KITCHEN TALKING TO TRUDY.

VIV: I cant believe that bitch and that good for nothing, well you know
TRUDY: Lets just hope we have no trouble from them.

HOTEL CAR PARK EXTERN MORNING

PAUL AND SHARON ARE IN THE CAR DRIVING OUT OF THE PARK. A CHILD RUNS IN FRONT OF THE CAR.

SHARON: LOOK OUT PAUL

PAUL SWERVES THE CAR JUST MISSING THE KID AND HE TRYS TO SLAM THE BREAKS DOWN AS THEY CRASH INTO A BRICKWALL.

SHARON: NOOOOOOOOOO

THE CAR CRASHES INTO THE WALL, SHARON HITS HER HEAD ON THE BONNET AND PAUL IS UNCONCIOUS WITH HIS FACE ON THE STERRING WHEEL

baileya

13-02-2006, 15:54

:eek: :eek: :eek: Wow fantastic. I wonder if Paul and Sharon are ok.

big bro fan

13-02-2006, 16:39

wonder who the breaks cutter is.

bakedbean

13-02-2006, 21:02

LEXIS LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

LEXI IS BUSY WATCHING THE TELE WITH SOPHIE.

SOPHIE: When are we going to go back to Exeter Street
LEXI: Oh about another week yet
SOHPIE: A week
LEXI: Well your dad and Sharon need to get settled back in.
SOPHIE: That meddeling bitch always in first
LEXI: Now i know you and Sharon do not get on but give her a chance, after all she will be your stepmum soon enough
SOPHIE: Great

THE PHONE RINGS, LEXI STANDS UP AND WALKS TO IT AND ANSWERS IT.

LEXI: Lexi Ramsay...yes...what???...of course...yes...right...okay.

LEXI PUTS THE PHONE DOWN.

LEXI: Sophie get your coat
SOPHIE: Why
LEXI: Becuse, your dad and Sharon have had an accident
SOPHIE: What accident
LEXI: They have crashed the car come on.

OUTSIDE HOSTEL EXTERN AFTERNOON

A DADGY,SCRUFFY LOOKING MAN IS STANDING OUTSIDE THE HOSTEL, AMYS CAR PULLS UP. AMY LETS THE MAN IN.

INSIDE AMYS CAR INTERN AFTERNOON

AMY: Well have you got it
MAN: Depends if you have the money or not

AMY LOOKS AROUND AND HANDS HIM SOME MONEY, THE MAN HANDS HER A POT OF PILLS, AMY SMILES. THE MAN LEAVES THE CAR AND AMY DRIVES OFF.

big bro fan

13-02-2006, 21:52

OMD amys a drugy who would have thought

baileya

14-02-2006, 15:46

Tut tut amy. Great as usual Baked Bean.

bakedbean

14-02-2006, 16:19

THE HOSPITAL WING INTERN AFTERNOON

ON ONE SIDE OF THE WING IS SHARON GETTING HER EYES CHECKED OUT AND RIC IS SITTING NEXT TO HER. ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE ROOM IS PAUL WHO IS GETTING PART OF HIS FACED STICHED. SOPHIE AND LEXI ARE SAT NEXT TO HIM.

LEXI: The police will need to speak with you paul
PAUL: i know
LEXI: Goodness knows how you crashed
PAUL: I dont know, one minute i am swerving to get out of the way and i try and slam my breaks and they dont work.

INSPECTOR GROUSE WALKS IN.

PAUL: Oh here we go
GROUSE: Mr Ramsay do you mind if we have a word
PAUL: Sure fire away
LEXI: Ok me and sophie will go and get a coffee
SOPHIE: What...but i...
LEXI: Sophie

LEXI AND SOPHIE LEAVE AS GROUSE TAKES A SEAT AND TALKS TO PAUL.

GROUSE: So you say the breaks did not work
PAUL: Yes
GROUSE: Mr Ramsay we have checked the motor and the breaks had been cut
PAUL: What
GROUSE: Mr Ramsay do you have any enemeys
PAUL: What your saying someone is after me
GROUSE: You did have a brick through your window and you were on the coach
PAUL: Your saying this could connected
GROUSE: Not could Ramsay i think that the attacker has a connection to you, Mr Ramsay i ask you to be very careful, your life could be in danger.

big bro fan

14-02-2006, 18:35

wow i cant wait to see where this is going.

baileya

14-02-2006, 21:19

Mmmmmmmm this has got me thinking. The attackers close to Paul. :searchme:

bakedbean

15-02-2006, 10:53

Inside The Cafe Intern Early Morning

Jill Comes From Her Flat Into The Cafe. Jill Puts The Chairs On The Floor. She Then Moves Over To The Counter And Turns On The Radio, She See That There Is An Envelope On The Floor By The Door. Jill Walks Over To It And Picks It Up. She Opens It To See That It Is An Aneversairy Card, Jill Opens It And Reads It "to My Darling Wife Happy Anniversary P.s. Watch Your Back. Malcolm" Jill Drops The Card And Falls Back On To A Chair She Begins To Cry. Could Malcolm Still Be Alive And Is He After His Wife???

baileya

15-02-2006, 21:38

Short but brilliant and gripping. Malcolm alive :eek:

big bro fan

16-02-2006, 00:44

im looking forward to seeing where this is going i love exeter

bakedbean

16-02-2006, 14:24

Paul Ramsay is living in fear, once he was the most evil villan in Exeter history but now Paul has lost his Mojo. Paul may own the complex, heck he is the most powerfull man in Exeter Street but is he losing his touch? Sophie his daughter can see that he has lost his mojo what will she do to get her good old daddy back to normal. If Paul loses his mojo could that mean that any one can walk all over him???

http://www.bbc.co.uk/drama/neighbours/whoswho/characterbiogs/contentimages/img_p146_s13820_txd20050822_v1_f33_999.jpg HAS PAUL LOST HIS MOJO???

bakedbean

16-02-2006, 14:31

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS SAT ON HIS CHAIR HE IS LOOKING NERVOUS, SHARON AND SOPHIE COME FROM DOWN STAIRS READY TO GO OUT.

SHARON: Paul we are going down town do you want to come with us
PAUL: No your all right babe
SHARON: Paul whats up you seem tense
PAUL: Im fine Sharon really just go and have fun
SHARON: Well if you are sure Paul, you coming Sophie
SOPHIE: Yeah you go on i will catch up i wanna speak to dad
SHARON: Ok see you later Paul
PAUL: Yeah see ya

SHARON WALKS OUT SOPHIE WAITS TILL SHE HEARS THE DOOR SHUT AND BEGINS TO TALK TO PAUL.

SOPHIE: Dad what is wrong
PAUL: Nothing i have never felt better

PAUL WALKS INTO THE KITCHEN TRYING TO AVIOD SOPHIE.

SOPHIE: Dad i know something is wrong
PAUL: Sophie i am fine honestley now go and have fun
SOPHIE: Dad you have not been out of the house since the crash, you need to get out
PAUL: No im fine
SOPHIE: Dad if you dont come out soon how are you going to marry Sharon
PAUL: Oh for god sake Sophie will you just go please im fine, now go
SOPHIE: Fine i can see you dont want my help i hope yo have a nice day

SOPHIE STORMS OUT OF THE HOUSE SLAMMING THE DOOR SHUT. PAUL FEELS DIZZY AND HE GRABS ON TO THE SIDE BOARD, PAUL BEGINS TO SWEAT.

bakedbean

16-02-2006, 16:13

VIVS FRONT ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

JILL IS SAT ON THE SEATEE, VIV WALKS IN WITH A TRAY CARRYING BISCUITS AND TWO CUPS OF TEA, VIV SITS DOWN.

VIV: Now you dont seriously think that Malcolm is still alive do you
JILL: They never found his body Viv
VIV: Yes but you heard what the Police said it would be a miracle if he even survived after the fire.
JILL: But who would be so sick and twisted to send this letter Viv
VIV: Well i dont know the attacker

JILL GOES PALE

VIV: Jill, what is it...Jill
JILL: What if Malcolm is still alive and he is the attacker
VIV: Nonsense Jill just rip up that blommin card and forget all about it promise me you will do that...Jill
JILL: Ok i will forget about it
VIV: Promise
JILL: Yes

bakedbean

16-02-2006, 16:21

Exeter is about to get hot and stemey as Amy and Robert become passionate but how will the residents of Exeter Street take it??? Amy and Roberts relationship is about to get even more serious when Robert discovers Amys drug hell and trys to stop her from taking any more pills but will Rob be to little to late???

The wedding of the year is only 3 weeks away and it will be an explosive wedding. Pauls lost his mojo and has got a phobia of going outside will Sophie convince him to go outside or will it be to late for Paul. Could this mean that the wedding of the year is cancelled??? Also someone from Sharons past returns and tries to convince Sharon not to marry Paul will they suceed??

Is there love in the air for Shawn, he gets very close with barmaid Steph could this be the beggining of a new romance?

Vivs cancer is about to get worse and Viv needs the cancer oparation before it is to late!!! Will James convince Viv to have the operation???

And dont forget Paul knows about Vivs cancer what will he do could blackmail be on his list??? That is if he ever recovers from the after effects of the car crash????

The attacker is getting more dangerous by the minute but who is next on there hit list???

bakedbean

17-02-2006, 14:14

The 4th season of Exeter will arrive late april with some new arrivals in store.

Mark grouse- The local Police Inspector will be moving into the street as the new hunk, and one woman will have her eye on him but who will it be???

Mac grouse- Marks brother who does not play by the rules, Macs been inside for the last 2 years for robberey. Macs been kicked out of his home and is moving to Exeter Street to visit his brother. Macs a real casanova and will play dirty!!!

Courtney Klenks- Courtney is a real minipulative bitch and will do anything for the right amount of money. But how far will she go??? Courtney may be the new girl but she has a dark past that will shock evreyone what is she capable of??? And who is Courtney going to get involved with???

Ric Grand- Sharons dad may be only making a brief apperance for the wedding of the year but he will soon be returning when he buys a new house and he has plenty of skelotons in his clorset but will they ever come out???

bakedbean

17-02-2006, 14:24

AMYS LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

THE BEDROOM DOOR IS CLOSED BUT THE LIGHT IS ON, AMY WALKS OUT AND LOOKS TO ROBERT.

AMY: I will be right back

AMY SMILES AS SHE LOOKS THROUGH ONE OF HER DRAWS SHE PULLS OUT THE PACKET OF PILLS AND TAKES ONE. AMY WALKS BACK INTO THE BEDROOM SHUTTING THE DOOR.

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

THE ROOM IS DARK, SOPHIE AND SHARON ARE ASLEEP UPSTAIRS HOWEVER PAUL IS SAT ON HIS CHAIR LOOKING TIRED. SOPHIE COMES FROM UPSTAIRS AND NOTICES HER DAD.

SOPHIE: Dad what are you doing up...its 3am have you even been to bed
PAUL: No not yet
SOPHIE: Dad im worried about you...your acting so strange what is wrong
PAUL: Sophie just go back to bed
SOPHIE: Your not the dad that i used to know
PAUL: Sophie please
SOPHIE: No i will stay up all night with you if i have to until you tell me whats wrong
PAUL: You really want to know
SOPHIE: Yes and i want to help you as well
PAUL: Alright...Im scared Sophie...Im scared for all of us...me you and Sharon...Sophie someone is out to get me and you and Sharon are going to get hurt.
SOPHIE: Dad we are not going to get hurt
PAUL: Oh no well what about the coach crash and the car crash, we were all hurt Sophie...i think that we should call off the wedding
SOPHIE: What no
PAUL: Its for Sharons own good

bakedbean

17-02-2006, 15:51

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

SAME AS EARLIER.

SOPHIE: But dad what about Sharon she will be heartbroken
PAUL: Now hang on a minute you were the one a few months ago who flipped about me and Sharon...you wanted me and your m... im sorry i did not mean that about your mum.
SOPHIE: Dad you can mention her name...im ok about it honestley mum is gone and i know that.
PAUL: Ok, ok
SOPHIE: But you can not cancel the wedding she loves you so much..she cares about you and it would break her heart
PAUL: Alright Sophie explain to me this...how the hell am i supposed to go to the wedding when i have a phobiea of going outside.
SOPHIE: Dad you need to get out your making yourself ill, how about we and see a doctor in the morning
PAUL: Im not going to see a doctor
SOPHIE: Well im going to get my old dad back one way or another

NEXT TIME- Will Sophie think of a cunning plan to get her old dad back???

baileya

17-02-2006, 17:08

OOOOO Paul is starting to come paranoid. I am loving this storyline.

bakedbean

17-02-2006, 18:50

THE COMPLEX EXTERN MORNING

JAMES IS OPENING UP GLASS, HE LOOKS ROUND AND SEES SOPHIE.

JAMES: Where is your darling daddy today
SOPHIE: He is not feeling to good so im filling in for him
JAMES: You dont be so stupid
SOPHIE: You better be careful what you say to me Mr perry we wouldnt want daddy to know about it now becuse we all know what he would do
JAMES: Now you listen to me you little hell raiser your dad may think that he has one over me but he needs me becuse im the one drawing in the most bussiness with my club.

JAMES STORMS INTO HIS CLUB, SOPHIE SMILES AS SHE HAS THOUGHT OF SOMETHING CUNNING.

THE LION CELLAR INTERN MORNING

SHAWN IS CHANGING A BARROLE, STEPH IS ALSO THERE SHE IS LOOKING AT HIS BUM, SHAWN TURNS ROUND NOTICING.

SHAWN: Oy what are you looking at
STEPH; What...oh nothing
SHAWN: Oh yeah your perving on me arent you
STEPH: What...no dont be stupid
SHAWN: Mind you it must be hard not noticing this beutiful body of mine
STEPH: Ha ha very funny
SHAWN: What so you dont find me attractive
STEPH: Of course i do why do you think im fit
SHAWN: You...yeah i suppose
STEPH: Why thankyou
SHAWN: Come on mum will be wondering what we are up to
STEPH: We are up to nothing though are we
SHAWN: My mums got it into her head that we would be good together
STEPH: Oh yeah...well why dont we try it out

STEPH MOVES CLOSER O SHAWN THEY GLARE INTO EACH OTHERS EYES AND KISS PASSIONATLEY.

THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS STILL LOOKING WARN OUT AND TIRED HE IS MAKING SOME TOAST, SOPHIE WALKS IN.

PAUL: I thought you were going to start working at my offices today
SOPHIE; Oh forget that a minute dad
PAUL: Excuse me im giving you an oppotunity and your just...
SOPHIE: Dad its James [CROCADILE TEARS] He...he was being so nasty taking the mick out of our family
PAUL: What well i will show him

PAUL STORMS UP THE STAIRS TO GET DRESSED STEPH SMILES WITH VICTORY.

JAMES OFFICE INTERN MORNING

JAMES IS GOING THROUGH SOME FILES WHEN PAUL STORMS IN.

JAMES: Why Paul what a suprise
PAUL: Shut up James this is the last straw you are going to regret messing with the Ramsay family
JAMES: Excuse me

JAMES STANDS UP AND SLOWLY WALKS UP TO PAUL

PAUL: You heard i would be very careful if i was you
JAMES; Well your not me...and i dont care what you or that bitch for a daughter of yours thinks about me im not going down without a fight.
PAUL: If its a fight you want its a fight you will get...and trust me im going to run you out of bussiness once and for all

JAMES LOOKS SHOCKED FOR A MOMENT AND THEN LAUGHS

JAMES: You...what are you going to do buy me out, what knock this building down you may own the complex but you need a good reason to kick me out of my own propetey, and like a told your little hell raiser earlier this place draws in the most money and getting rid of me would not be good for bussiness now would it
PAUL: You know your right and i have just got an idea that will ruin your bussiness for good.

PAUL LEAVES LAUGHING.

bakedbean

18-02-2006, 11:30

THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL STORMS BACK INTO THE HOUSE, SOPHIE FOLLOWS LOOKING PLEASED.

SOPHIE: So are you going to chuck him out then or what
PAUL: Oh no Sophie thats to easy
SOPHIE: What but...
PAUL: Trust me Sophie what i have planned will rock James world

PAUL SMILES AND SOPHIE LOOKS UNEASY.

THE PARK EXTERN AFTERNOON

SHARON AND RIC ARE SITTING ON THE BENCH FEEDING THE DUCKS.

RIC: And you are sure you are doing the right thing Sharon marrying that Paul
SHARON: Yes dad, i mean i know he has done some bad things in the past but he has changed since we started dating
RIC: Well its what i have been hearing that scares me Sharon now listen to me...i want you to think carefully about who your marrying...Remeber the last time you got involved with a man and look what happened there.
SHARON: Dad i love Paul with all my heart and he loves me he wont do anything to hurt me
RIC: Well if your sure.
SHARON: Im positive

NEXT TIME...What has Paul got planned that will ruin James???

bakedbean

18-02-2006, 20:31

THE COMPLEX FOUNTIN EXTERN MORNING

PAUL AND SOPHIE ARE SITTING AT THE FOUNTIN, JAMES WALKS PAST.

PAUL: Aghh James just the man i was waiting to see
JAMES; What do you want ramsay
SOPHIE: Tell him dad
JAMES; Tell me what
PAUL: James i was listening to you yesterday and what you said about Glass drawing in the public
JAMES: And
PAUL: Well i fancie getting on the bandwagon and well meet your new rival Sophie
JAMES: What are you talking about
SOPHIE: What dads trying to tell you is that im the new owner of that propetey over there [POINTS] Meaning that we are opening a Wine bar
JAMES: What
SOPHIE: And you know...your prices are way to high for my likeing
JAMES: Your going to regret this
PAUL: Oh i dont think so

bakedbean

18-02-2006, 20:42

VIVS LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

JAMES IS PACING AROUND LOOKING FURIOUS VIV IS SITTING DOWN THEY ARE DISSCUSSING THE WINE BAR.

JAMES: Those bloody Ramsays they think they are so clever well i will show them
VIV: James calm down, Glass is bigger and better then there stupid little Wine bar
JAMES: Well im going for a walk cool my self... [JAMES HOLDS ON TO HIS LEFT ARM IN PAIN]
VIV: James what is it are you ok
JAMES: Im fine i just keep getting these sharp pains in my arm
VIV: You should see a doctor
JAMES: Im ok i dont need some quack telling me that its nothing and shove a few pills down my throats.

JAMES LEAVES AND DRIVES OFF IN HIS CAR

THE CHASE EXTERN MORNING

JAMES CAR DRIVES UP, JAMES STEPS OUT AND LOOKS AT THE VIEW. JAMES SMILES UNTIL HE GETS ANOTHER SHARP PAIN IN HIS LEFT ARM. JAMES HOLDS ON TO ITIN AGONY AND FALLS TO THE GROUND...JAMES SLOWLY GETS HIS PHONE OUT OF HIS POCKET AND DIALS 999.

JAMES: Hello...i need...i need an...ambulance...im having a heart attack...yes i know what im having you idiot...The Chase...please hurry

JAMES DROPS THE PHONE AND CLOSES HIS EYS

bakedbean

19-02-2006, 11:03

THE CHASE EXTERN MORNING

JAMES WHO IS STILL LYING ON THE FLOOR IN PAIN SLOWLY GRABS HIS PHONE AND DIALS A NUMBER.

JAMES: Viv...Viv listen...listen to me...before...before i go....i...i just want to let you know that...that i...i love you so...so much...and please...please have the operation...i love you.

VIVS HALLWAY INTERN MORNING

VIV IS ON THE PHONE TO JAMES.

VIV: Hello...James...are you there...James

VIV LOOKS WORRIED AS SHE PUTS THE PHONE DOWN.

THE BOOKIES PAULS OFFICE INTERN MORNING

PAUL: So my little daughter the new bussiness woman, you know if i did not know any better i would have thought you made that all up so you would get me out of the house.

THE PHONE RINGS PAUL PICKS IT UP.

PAUL: Paul Ramsay how can...

THE CHASE EXTERN MORNING

SAME AS BEFORE

JAMES: Paul...Paul...I just want...want to say that...that one day...one day you will pay for what...for what you have done...your...your going to get it soon...i promise...i hope you rot in hell...ARGHHH

JAMES DROPS THE PHONE IN AGONY AND HOLDS HIS LEFT ARM EVEN TIGHTER. THE AMBULANCE CAN BE HEARD IN THE BACKGROUND.

WILL THE AMBULANCE GET TO JAMES IN TIME???

bakedbean

20-02-2006, 16:47

INSIDE THE AMBULANE INTERN AFTERNOON

JAMES IS LAY ON THE BED THE AMBULANCE IS SPEEDING DOWN THE ROAD, JAMES EYES ARE CLOSED. THE HEART MEATER BEIGINS TO GIVE THE WARNING THAT JAMES HEART HAS STOPPED.

PAREMEDIC 1: Damn it we cant lose him
PAREMEDIC 2: We are nearley there

THE PAREMEDIC BEGINS TO RESSUSATATE JAMES, BUT IT IS NOT WORKING.

PAREMEDIC 1: We will need to give him the shock

THE PAREMEDIC SHOCKS JAMES HEART THREE TIMES AND HIS HEART STARTS AGAIN.

2. PAULS OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

SOPHIE AND PAUL ARE TALKING WHEN VIV BURSTS IN.

VIV: I hope your happy with your selves your evil
PAUL: What are you going on about Viv
VIV: James has had a heart attack and i swear if he does not make it you both will pay.
PAUL: You mean he is not dead well thats a shame
VIV: Your evil i dont know how you sleep at night
SOPHIE: Horlicks useually does the trick

VIV SLAPS SOPHIE ACROSS THE FACE

SOPHIE: You will regret that
VIV: Does it look like i am scared, you ramsays may scare evreybody else but not me, not now not ever.

VIV WALKS OUT.

bakedbean

20-02-2006, 16:58

Season 4 is fast approching so here is a few spoilers

Who has Courtney got her eye on???
A shock death will rock the street :crying: :crying:
The attacker is reveled
A wedding shocker but who is it???
Will Robert and Amy get back together???

Coming this April!!!!

big bro fan

20-02-2006, 18:51

PAUL: You mean he is not dead well thats a shame
VIV: Your evil i dont know how you sleep at night
SOPHIE: Horlicks useually does the trick
.

Classic :rotfl: very very funny well done bakedbean.

bakedbean

20-02-2006, 19:27

A BLAST FROM THE PAST FOR TRUDY
Trudy and Alan have been a happily married couple for the last ten years however Trudy is to be shocked by the arrival of her ex husband scottish born Vader.

Vader been in prison for the last 16 years from armed robberey and he has come to Exeter Street to try and win his wife back. However all Alan knows is that he left Trudy with her 2 children many years ago. Vader and Trudy have got a past that will shock evreyone if the truth ever came out!!! Will Vader and Trudy become an item again or will Alan save the day???

COMING NEXT SEASON

big bro fan

20-02-2006, 21:22

cant wait it looks like its gonna rock exeter for the next few months

baileya

20-02-2006, 22:39

Ive just caught up again. Poor James, it looks like Paul is getting back to his old self.

bakedbean

21-02-2006, 16:53

THE HOSPITAL RECEPTION INTERN MORNING

VIV WALKS IN AND WALKS TO THE DESK WHERE THERE IS A RECEPTIONIST.

VIV: Im looking for James perry he came in here yesterday becuse of a heart attack.
RECEPTIONIST: Oh yes certainly just down the corridor and your third left
VIV: Thank you

VIV WALKS DOWN THE CORRIDOR.

THE WINE BAR INTERN MORNING

PAUL AND SOPHIE ARE WALKING AND TALKING, BUILDERS ARE BUSY FIXING UP THE BAR.

SOPHIE: Im not sure if we should open this Wine bar dad i mean James
PAUL: James will be fine, but he should have learned you never mess with a Ramsay.

THE MACKLIN KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

ANDY IS READING THE PAPER AND JENNY IS ON THE PHONE.

JENNY: Is she really, oh and i suppose she looks just like her...oh well...ok...bye.

JENNY PUTS THE PHONE DOWN.

JENNY: That was Moreen
ANDY: Who
JENNY: You know used to work with me in the factory
ANDY: Oh yeah
JENNY: Her sister has just had a baby girl
ANDY: Thats nice
JENNY: Maybe we could try again
ANDY: What
JENNY: A baby...Brooke and Steve are growing up and will be leaving soon
ANDY: No jenny i dont want another child
JENNY: But Andy
ANDY: No and thats the end of it

JAMES ROOM INTERN MORNING

JAMES IS LYING ON THE BED ASLEEP, VIV WALKS IN...SHE STROKES HIS HAIR.

JAMES: Viv
VIV: I did not mean to wake you
JAMES: No i was already awake...and Viv...what i said on the phone yesterday i meant it i love you

bakedbean

21-02-2006, 20:59

JAMES ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON

JAMES IS LYING ON THE BED AND VIV IS STANDING NEXT TO HIM SHE IS LOOKING SHOCKED AT WHAT SHE HAS JUST BEEN TOLD.

VIV: Your not thinking straight...you have just had a heart attack.
JAMES: Then why were you the first person i rang...what i said i mean
VIV: No...no you dont...your winding me up...this is just a joke
JAMES: Why will you not let anybody get close to you for god sake i love you and thats that.
VIV: No...you can not be doing this to me james
JAMES: When i was married to Phillipa the only person i could think about was you and tell me that is not love
VIV: Oh shut up...just shutup
JAMES: Oh come on Viv you have loved me for years, back in the day when me and you were dating i was your one and only.
VIV: And what did you do...you left me...you left me and you did not come back for over 30 years and you call that love.
JAMES: I was young...we both were...and i was confused...i did not know what to think
VIV: Oh here we go
JAMES: We both moved on...i got married had a daughter...you got marr...
VIV: Hold on
JAMES; What
VIV: You had a daughter since when
JAMES: I never said that
VIV: Oh yes you did and you know you did so are you going to tell me what the hell is going on...or will i have to find out for myslef and you know i will.

bakedbean

22-02-2006, 16:58

JAMES ROOM INTERN AFTERNOON
SAME AS BEFORE.

VIV: Well...are you going to tell me or what
JAMES: Alright...i will tell you but your not going to like it... about 21 years ago me and my first wife Sadie had a daughter...her name was Katie...But something happened...It was her 6th birthday and i remeber i had brought her a bike pretty and pink with a little bell and evreything...Me and Sadie had been having problems for a while and well we agreed to split...but we were going to do it after katies birthday...I was so stupid...Katie wanted to ride her bike in the front so i let her outside but i went with her...but then the phone rang and i went to answer it...no one was on the other line...so i walked outside and saw my...my beutiful little baby girl lying...lying in the middle of the road...blood pouring out from her head...her bike was crushed...she was...was not breathing...it was to late she had been run over.
VIV: James im so sorry
JAMES: No you dont...you dont understand
VIV: It was not your fault James
JAMES: But it was my little princess was killed becuse of me...It was a hit and run Viv...My beutiful little girl was killed becuse of me becuse of who i am...She died becuse of me Viv and i can never...ever forgive myself for that...never.

VIV HUGS JAMES FADE OUT.

bakedbean

22-02-2006, 21:24

THE COMPLEX EXTERN AFTERNOON

STACEY IS PUSHING BABY BOBBY AROUND AND IS TALKING TO STEPH.

STEPH: So how is evreything after well you know
STACEY: You mean my dad and brother...dont worry...i am finally accepting it, i figured that well if i continued living like i did Bobby would have got upset and well...

STACEY STOPS SPEAKING WHEN SHE SEES PAUL COMING OUT OF THE BOOKIES. PAUL WALKS ACROSS THE COMPLEX INTO THE STREET.

PAUL: Afternoon ladies
STACEY: How dare you
PAUL: Excuse me
STACEY: How dare you say good afternoon to me after what you did
PAUL: What did i do
STACEY: What did you do...You killed my brother and my dad and i hate you for it.
PAUL: [LAUGHS] Your pathetic

PAUL WALKS OFF

STACEY: He is going to get it...one day he will pay.

baileya

25-02-2006, 13:18

So Paul makes himself more enemies.

bakedbean

26-02-2006, 19:56

THE LION LIVING ROOM INTERN MORNING

LUCY IS MAKING HERSLEF SOME TOAST WHEN CHRISSIE WALKS IN LOOKING TIRED SHE SITS DOWN AT THE TABLE.

LUCY: Morning do you want some toast
CHRISSIE: No im ok thanks

LUCY PUTS HER TOAST ON THE PLATE AND SHE SITS AT THE TABLE EATING HER TOAST.

CHRISSIE: Where is Shawn
LUCY: In bed
CHRISSE: Its not like him he is always first up
LUCY: Well lets just say that he did not get much sleep last night.
CHRISSIE: What him and Steph
LUCY: Oh yes

LUCY CONTINUSE TO EAT HER TOAST AS CHRISSIE LOOKS UNEASY AND MAYBE JUST A LITTLE BIT JEALOUS.

AMYS FRONT ROOM INTERN MORNING

AMY WALKS IN SHE ROOTS THROUGH HER DRAW SHE PICKS OUT HER PILLS AND SWOLLOWS THEM NOT NOTICING ROBERT WATCHING FROM THE BEDROOM.

SO ROBERT KNOWS ABOUT AMYS DRUG TAKING HOW WILL HE HANDLE IT???

bakedbean

27-02-2006, 16:35

AMYS FRONT ROOM MORNING

AMY LOOKS MORE RELAXED AFTER TAKING THE PILLS, ROBERT WALKS IN SEEING WHAT HAS JUST HAPPNED.

ROB: What are those

AMY JUMPS AND DROPS THE TUB OF PILLS ON THE FLOOR THEY ALL SPILL OUT AND AMY TRYS TO PICK UP THE PILLS BUT ROBERT HOLDS HER HANDS AND KNEELS DOWN BESIDE HER.

ROB: Amy what are these
AMY: Nothing, they are nothing.

ROBERT LOOKS AT THE TUB AND READS WHAT IT SAYS ON THE DESCRIPTION.

ROB: There relaxkation pills how many have you taken
AMY: Two or three
ROB; Its says here you are only meant to take 1 a day, amy what is going on
AMY: Nothing...nothing is going on i just use them to help me calm down
ROB: The doctor never gave these to you
AMY: Yes he did
ROB: No becuse one your name is not on the prescription and the doctor was a female. Amy where did you get these from
AMY: No where
ROB: Dont lie to me Amy you have brought these havent you well
AMY: Alright so whats the big deal
ROB: Whats the big deal...for crying out loud you could do yourself some harm...and you have a daughter what is she going to think growing up with a druggie for a mum
AMY: Im not a druggie i just need them now and then
ROB: How long have you been taking these for
AMY: Ever since...ever since your mum kicked me out and after the affair...i could not cope ok...i did not know where my daughter was and i had nothing

baileya

27-02-2006, 20:46

oooooo so its out about amy and the pills. I wonder how Rob will react to that announcement.

bakedbean

01-03-2006, 16:17

Next Week Will Be The Biggest Week In Exeter Histroy When Paul And Sharon Get Married In The Soaps One Year Anniversay Show, But Will Sharon Say I Do Or Will Someone Convince Her Not To Marry Phil.

Next Week

big bro fan

02-03-2006, 22:22

bakedbean

05-03-2006, 17:00

1. THE PARK BUSHES EXTERN MORNING

SOMEONE IS WATCHING FROM THE BUSHES THEY ARE WATCHING THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD BUT WHO IS IT???

2. THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

SHARON IS SITTING ON A CHAIR, VIV IS DOING HER HAIR AND TRUDY IS MAKING TEA.

VIV: Todays the day Sharon are you nervous
SHARON: No im not, well not yet
TRUDY: Oh you will be fine dont you worry
SHARON: I am not worrying
TRUDY: On my first wedding i was so nervous i could barley walk down the aisle mind you when i married Alan i was not nervous
VIV: Yes well you knew that Alan could not and would not hurt a single person but with Frank well
TRUDY: I know
SHARON: What did happen between you two i was always to young to know
TRUDY: Oh just the usual aruments
VIV: Yeah and evreything else
TRUDY: All right so he punched me a few times but what was i supposed to do
VIV: Leave him, i was always here in Exeter Street
TRUDY: Well we did not live in Exeter Street
VIV: You could have rang
TRUDY: Well its over now and me and Alan are happy
SHARON: Paul would never hurt me or anyone else

3. THE BOOKIES PAULS OFFICE INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS BUSY DOING UP HIS TIE WHEN RIC WALKS IN.

PAUL: Ric hi
RIC: Paul now listen to me
PAUL: Ok
RIC: If you mess with my daughter then i will mess with you
PAUL: Ok whatever but let me tell you that i will never hurt Sharon never.

4. THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

SHARON IS LOOKING AT HER HAIR IN THE MIRROR VIV AND TRUDY ARE PUTTING ON THERE COATS.

SHARON: Oh Viv its lovely
VIV: Right well we shall see you in an hour or so in time for the wedding.
SHARON: Ok thanks
TRUDY: Hey Sharon evreything will be fine.

VIV AND TRUDY LEAVE, SHARON LOOKS IN THE MIRROR AS THE KITCHEN DOOR OPENS AND A RUGGED,TIRED AND SMELLY LOOKING PHIL SHARON SEES HIM IN THE MIRROR AND LOOKS SHOCKED

SHARON: Phil

baileya

05-03-2006, 20:28

A fantastic start to a birthday week. Great to see Phil back :cheer:

bakedbean

05-03-2006, 20:48

but for how long will he be back???

bakedbean

06-03-2006, 16:11

1. THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

SHARON LOOKS STUNNED AS SHE SEES PHIL.

PHIL: You look beutiful
SHARON: What are you doing here
PHIL: I have come to see you
SHARON: But Phil im getting married i dont want to see you and if Paul or dad walk in then you are in trouble and i dont want that
PHIL: Sharon listen to me
SHARON: What
PHIL: You cant marry that sleezebag Paul Ramsay
SHARON: Why becuse you dont want me to
PHIL: Becuse if you do you will get hurt i know Paul
SHARON: You dont know Paul
PHIL: I used to work for his dad we got to know each other
SHARON: So you went to work with him big deal
PHIL: Damn it Sharon he will ruin you like he has done evreyone else he will use you and when you have nothing left he will chuck you like evreyone else
SHARON: Your saying that he is using me
PHIL: Im not saying im telling you
SHARON: Dont be so stupid Phil Paul is the most kind hearted person i have ever met
PHIL: For now but a few months down the line he will treat you like dirt and go off with another woman
SHARON: No look i know he has a past but he would not do that not to me
PHIL: Sharon he is a user and a blackmailer he is a bad man
SHARON: I bet he is not a murderer
PHIL: Hey thats not fair i did that for you
SHARON: I know im sorry what happened to your arm
PHIL: I got into a fight, Sharon im leaving this miserable rock named Britan
SHARON: How the hell will you do that
PHIL: I have some freinds and i have got a fake passport and a plane sorted, Sharon im leaving tommorow and i want you to leave with me
SHARON: What
PHIL: Sharon

PHIL ROOTS THROUGH HIS POCKET AND PULLS OUT A RING

PHIL: Sharon marry me

bakedbean

06-03-2006, 18:47

the Birthday Week Is An Exciting Time For The Residents Of Exeter Street As They Are All Preparing For The Wedding Of The Year. However Things Will Soon Turn Nasty When Another Shock Return Decides To Ruin The Happy Day With Major Consiquences!!!!

bakedbean

07-03-2006, 17:52

1. THE RAMSAY KITCHEN INTERN MORNING

SHARON IS LOOKING SHOCKED AND PHIL IS STANDING VERY CLOSE TO HER WITH A RING.

PHIL: Well Sharon
SHARON: No this cant be happening not now this is supposed to be my wedding day damn it
PHIL: Sharon we can leave tonight i can get you a new passport and evreything we coud make a new start a new life in Australia or somewhere you dont need him and you dont need Exeter Street
SHARON: No, but i do, i need Paul and as bad and evil as it has been to me i need Exeter Street, i need Exeter Street becuse no matter what there has always been people here for me and if i leave it i will leave them. So the answer is no but i hope you find someone that will make you happy becuse Phil its not me babe it never will be im sorry
PHIL: Oh ok i understand its obvious we were not meant to be
SHARON: Yeah its for the best
PHIL: Well when Paul Ramsay screws you just ring or whatever and i will deal with him becuse Sharon i wont let anyone hurt you and thats a promise, becuse i love you.
SHARON: [BEGINS TO CRY] Please dont start Phil
PHIL: I will miss you
SHARON: Yeah me to

PHIL AND SHARON HUG AS THEY SHARE A EMOTIONAL MOMENT TOGETHER, THEY SHARE ONE LAST PASSIONATE KISS AS PHIL BEGINS TO LEAVE.

SHARON: Phil
PHIL: Yeah
SHARON: Good luck
PHIL: You to

PHIL TAKES ONE LAST LOOK AT SHARON AS HE LEAVES THROUGH THE BACK KITCHEN LEAVING SHARON AND EXETER STREET BEHINED.

2. THE CHURCH INTERN MORNING

PAUL IS STANDING AT THE FRON WAITING FOR SHARON, ANDY IS STANDING NEXT TO HIM AS EVREYONE BEGINS TO SIT DOWN.

ANDY: You ok mate
PAUL: Yeah just a bit shakey thats all you know with evreything
ANDY: Dont worry about it Sharon is a good woman i have known her all my life and shes fantastic
PAUL: Yeah she is

EVREYONE STANDS AS THE ORGAN BEGINS TO PLAY AND THE CHURCH DOORS OPEN SHARON WALKS IN WITH RIC IN HER ARM THEY SLOWLY WALK DOWN THE AISLE, SHARON LOOKS WORRIED AS SHE WALKS DOWN. SHAWN LOOKS TO HER AND WHISPERS "YOU OK" SHE REPLIES"FINE". SHARON WALKS UP TO PAUL AND SMILES HE SMILES BACK. THE VICAR ASKS IF THEY ARE READY THEY BOTH AGREE.

big bro fan

07-03-2006, 22:18

oh i would love to see phil and sharon back together it would be so good.

bakedbean

08-03-2006, 16:30

OUTSIDE THE CHURCH EXTERN MORNING

THERE IS A BLACK CAR WITH TINTED WINDOWS ACROSS THE ROAD FROM THE CHURCH. EVREYONE WALKS OUT LOOKING HAPPY FOLLOWED BY SHARON AND PAUL WHO KISS PASSIONETLEY. FOCUS BACK ON THE BLACK CAR AND THE TINTED WINDOWS SLOWLY OPEN TO REVEAL THE FACE OF DENNIS HILL. DENNIS WATCHES ON AND SMIRKS.

THE RECEPTION INTERN AFTERNOON

EVREYONE IS ENJOYING THEMSELVES, VIV AND BROOKE ARE ON THE DANCE FLOOR AND JENNY IS DRINKING SOME WINE SHE LOOKS TIPSY. PAUL AND SHARON ARE KISSING WHEN PAULS POHNE RINGS...PAUL TAKES HIS PHONE TO THE CORRIDOR AND ANSWERS IT.

PAUL: Hello...what are you talking about...i dont understand...who is this...what do you mean be careful...hello...hello.

PAUL PUTS THE PHONE DOWN LOOKING SHOCKED NOT KNOWING WHO HAS JUST RANG HIS PHONE.

DJ: And now please leave the dance floor for the bride and grooms wedding dance.

PAUL FORGETS ABOUT THE PHONE CALL AND GOES TO DANCE WITH SHARON. FOCUS ON JENNY AND ANDY WHO ARE ARGUING.

ANDY: My gosh you can not stay off the booze for one minute can you
JENNY: Its a wedding you idiot there is booze evreywhere what do you expect me to do
ANDY: Not get drunk for one day god your showing this family up you really are.
JENNY: Oh get bent

JENNY STORMS INTO THE WOMANS TOILET.

THE MUSIC COMES TO AND END AND SHARON AND PAUL ARE ABOUT TO SHARE A PASSIONATE KISS WHEN SUDDENLY THE STAGE EXPLODES KNOCKING EVREYONE DOWN...THE LIGHTS ALSO EXPLODE.

OUTSIDE THE RECEPTION EXTERN AFTERNOON

THE RECEPTION EXPLODES KNOCKING THE WINDOWS AND THE DOORS OFF. DENNIS HILLS CAR SPEEDS OFF.