Exeter

[big bro fan]

wow what an unexpected twist i wonder if anyone has survived

[bakedbean]

THE RECEPTION EXTERN AFTERNOON.

THE FIRE ALARM IS BLASTING AWAY, THE GUEST ALL RUN OUT AS FAST AS THEY CAN AS THE SMOKE BEGINS TO FILL THE RECEPTION. PAUL WALKS OUT AND LOOKS SHOCKED AT WHAT AS HAPPENED. EVREYONE IS OUTSIDE WAITING FOR THE FIRE ENGINE EXCEPT FOR JENNY. VIV NOTICES THIS.

VIV: Andy where on earth is Jenny
ANDY: Oh no
VIV: What is it
ANDY: She is still inside
VIV: What are we going to do
ANDY: Well im going to have to go in and get her now
VIV: Andy dont do this
ANDY: My wife is trapped inside im going in to get her.

ANDY RUNS IN, VIV LOOKS WORRIED.

VIV: Andy no

THE SMOKE CONTINUES TO POUR OUT OF THE WINDOWS.

LUCY: Viv what is Andy doing
VIV: Its Jenny she is inside
LUCY: Oh no

LUCY AND VIV WATCH ON WORRIED.
TURN TO RIC AND PAUL WHO ARE TALKING QUIETLY IN A CORNER.

RIC: Does this have anything to do with you Paul becuse if it does
PAUL: This has nothing to do with me Ric i promise
RIC: I have warned you already, screw with my daughter and you will regr...

THE RECEPTION EXPLODES KNOCKING EVREYONE TO THE GROUND. VIV LOOKS ON IN SHOCK.

[big bro fan]

wow this storyline is a shocker ive got some planned for season two of down under coming in a few months great work as always baked bean.

[baileya]

wow who saw that coming??? not me. Brilliant

[bakedbean]

THE HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM INTERN MORNING

THE MACKLIN FAMILY EXCEPT JENNY ARE WAITING. BROOKE IS LOOKING OUT OF THE WINDOW AND ANDY IS LOOKING WORRIED. THE DOCTOR WALKS IN.

ANDY: Well how is she
DOCTOR: She inhailed quite a lot of smoke Mr Macklin and she was heavely drunk, but she will be fine.
ANDY: Oh thank god for that
DOCTOR: Mr Macklin may i speak to you in private
ANDY: Sure

THE DOCTOR AND ANDY WALK INTO THE DOCTORS OFFICE.

DOCTORS OFFICE INTERN MORNING

ANDY AND THE DOCTOR BOTH SIT DOWN.

ANDY: Well what is it
DOCTOR: Mr Macklin the fire would not have killed your wife
ANDY: Sorry
DOCTOR: Mr Macklin your wife as i said was heaveley drunk in fact it was the drink that made her collapse not the smoke...if she does not stop drinking Mr Macklin she will die

[baileya]

Wow. How will andy take it. Great stuff!!!!!!!!

[bakedbean]

This week is the final week of the season and get ready for some real shockers!!! One relationship will come to a crashing end!!! A hit and run!!! and a shooting!!! Tommmorow

[big bro fan]

wow i cant wait whens the date for season four.

[bakedbean]

JAMES OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

JAMES IS SPEAKING TO VIV ABOUT EVREYTHING THAT HAS HAPPNED RECENTLEY.

JAMES: Viv you need to tell them before it is to late becuse they are going to find out and it will be best coming from you
VIV: I know, i undersatnd...I will tell them tonight

OUTSIDE JAMES OFFICE INTERN AFTERNOON

PAUL IS LISTENING TO VIV AND JAMES HE SMIRKS

PAUL: Not if i get there first

[bakedbean]

THE LION/BAR EVENING INTERN

THE RESIDENTS OF EXETER STREET ARE ALL ENJOYING THERE DRINKS. PAULS STANDS UP.

PAUL: Ladies and gentlemen i have announcement to make.
LUCY: If its about the wine bar dont bother
PAUL: No...no i propose a toast
ANDY: To what
PAUL: Well it is to do with you
ANDY: Well what possibly could you have to annonce about me
PAUL: I propose a toast to Viv...after all she does have cancer

EVREYONE LOOKS ON IN SHOCK AND PAUL SMIRKS

[big bro fan]

the little oh paul makes me soooooo mad at times :angry: cant wait till tommorow :cheer:

[bakedbean]

1. INSIDE THE LION INTERN NIGHT

EVREYONE IS STOOD OR SAT STILL IN SILENCE ANDY IS STANDING CLOSE TO VIV LOOKING SHOCKED PAUL IS SMIRKING IN THE BACKGROUND AT JAMES.

ANDY: You have cancer
VIV: I was going to tell you later on at home
ANDY: I dont understand how did he [POINTS TO PAUL] know about you having cancer
VIV: I...I dotn know

BROOKE RUNS OUT OF THE PUB CRYING

JENNY: Brooke

JENNY FOLLOWS WITH ANDY BEHINED HER

2. OUTSIDE THE LION EXTERN NIGHT

A CAR IS SPEEDING DOWN THE ROAD, BROOKE DOES NOT SEE THE CAR, ANDY AND JENNY BOTH RUN OUT OF THE LION AS BROOKE STEPS ON TO THE ROAD AND GETS HIT BY THE SPEEDING CAR JENNY SCREAMS AND ANDY LOOKS FURIOUS AS HE WALKS CLOSE TO THE CAR WHICH SPEEDS OFF.

JENNY: BROOKE SPEAK TO ME

JENNY KNEELS DOWN BY BROOKE

ANDY: DONT TOUCH HER
JENNY: IM NOT

VIV,TRUDY AND ALAN BOTH COME RUNNING OUT FOLLOWED BY THE REST OF THE RESIDENTS

VIV: Oh god no
TRUDY: Some one ring an ambulance

PAUL STEPS OUT WITH SHARON PAUL LOOKS GUILTY AS HE SEES WHAT HAS HAPPENED, ANDY LOOKS TO PAUL

ANDY: You see what you have done

ANDY STANDS UP AND SLOWLY WALKS TO PAUL

ANDY: Your evil and im going to make you pay for what you have done
PAUL: I have not done anything
ANDY: I hope you rot in hell

ANDY PUNCHES PAUL WHO FALLS TO THE GROUND, THE AMBULANCE ARRIVES AND THE PAREMEDICS COME OUT TO ASSIT BROOKE

JENNY: Is she going to be ok
PAREMEDIC: She is not in a good state come on lets get her to hospital

THE PAREMEDICS CARRY BROOKE INTO THE AMBULANCE FOLLOWED BY VIV AND JENNY ANDY WALKS TO THE DOOR.

ANDY: I will stay here and wait for Steve
JENNY: Ok

THE AMBULANCE DRIVES OFF

EVREYONE ELSE WALKS BACK INTO THE LION EXCEPT FOR SHARON WHO IS CHECKING PAUL WHO IS SITTING ON THE FLOOR LOOKING DAZED, JAMES IS LOOKING ON.

PAUL: I will get that stupid fool once and for all
SHARON: My god
PAUL: What
SHARON: Listen to your self, Andys daughter could die becuse of your stupid war with him

SHARON POINTS VIOLENTLY TO JAMES

SHARON: Well things have gone too far this time Paul maybe Shawn was right maybe me and you are a mistake
PAUL: What
SHARON: Im leaving Paul and i dont know when i will be back

PAUL STANDS UP AND GRABS ON TO SHARONS ARM

PAUL: Please Sharon dont do this
SHARON: Let go of me your not going to make me change my mind

SHARON RUNS ACROSS TO THE HOUSE, PAUL TRIES TO FOLLOW BUT JAMES STANDS IN HIS WAY

PAUL: Move
JAMES: I would be carfull if i was you after all accidents can happen
PAUL: What are you talking about
JAMES: Just watch your back
PAUL: Get lost

PAUL SLOWLY WALKS TO THE HOUSE JAMES SHOUTS.

JAMES: Dont say i did not warn you

PAUL LOOKS TO JAMES AS HE WALKS BACK INTO THE HOUSE

3. THE RAMSAY LIVING ROOM INTERN NIGHT

SHARON CAMES DOWN THE STAIRS WITH HER SUITCASES PAUL WALKS IN TRYING TO STOP HER FROM LEAVING

PAUL: Sharon please dont do this
SHARON: My taxi will be here in a minute
PAUL: Your taxi
SHARON: Im leaving Paul
PAUL: But your coming back right
SHARON: I dont know, i have lived here all my life and your driving me away
PAUL: I am not doing anything at all
SHARON: Look what you have caused a young girls life is at risk becuse of you

A CAR HORN SOUNDS

SHARON: Thats my taxi
PAUL: Sharon please

4. EXETER STREET EXTERN NIGHT

THE TAXI IS WAITING OUTSIDE THE RAMSAY HOUSEHOLD RAIN BEGINS TO FALL AS THUNDER AND LIGHTINING BEGIN. A WIND PICKS UP SWINING THE LION SIGN TO AND FROW

5. INSIDE THE LION INTERN NIGHT

LUCY AND SHAWN ARE BOTH LOCKING UP

LUCY: Fancie a drink
SHAWN: Yeah why not

LUCY WALKS BEHINED THE BAR AND BEGINS TO PULL SHAWN A PINT WHEN SUDDENLEY THE LIGHTS GO OUT

LUCY: What the
SHAWN: Its probably just the weather
LUCY: Yeah i think we have a storm coming

5. EXETER STREET EXTERN NIGHT

THE RAIN IS FALLING RAPIDLY ON THE STREET AND THE WIND IS PICKING UP SHARON WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE WITH HER SUITCASES AND GETS IN THE TAXI PAUL WALKS OUT OF THE HOUSE ON TO THE ROAD TRYING TO STOP THE TAXI BUT IT SPEEDS OFF, TEARS FALL FROM PAULS EYES AS HE WATCHES THE TAXI LEAVE, PAUL TURNS TO THE PARK WHERE HE SEES SOMEONE PAUL SUDDENLEY LOOKS SHOCKED AS WE HEAR TWO GUN SHOTS PAUL FALLS TO THE GROUND. FADE OUT WITH THE CAMERA LEAVING EXETER STREET WITH THE STORM CONTINUING AND PAUL LYING IN A PUDDLE OF WATER BLEEDING

EXETER WILL RETURN SOON!!!

[Bryan]

fantastic conclusion! could see this happening on screen! great stuff! make sure your back soon! i cant do without my daily intake of Exeter!

[big bro fan]

WOW i have some big competiotion when my season two starts. come back soon :cheer: