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WattsRulee
08-07-2005, 09:23
:angry: ur like soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mean!!! :angry:
:angry:
:angry:
:angry: :crying:

Tamzi
08-07-2005, 13:31
You have to do a sequel. You have to make Chrissie realise. Don't be evil!
xxx

Amber
08-07-2005, 16:08
I couldn't help myself! That wasn't the last part! I just couldn't resist :lol:
But she did say "no" for a reason though as you'll find why in this part :)
It's a good reason too but wrong timings for it to happen aswell!
Here you are..


PART 26
Jake: What?
She fell to the ground clutching her stomach.
Chrissie: The baby's coming.
Jake: WHAT?!?
Chrissie: THE BABY'S COMING!
Jake: Oh my god!
Chrissie: Wait they're only the first contractions. Carry on with the ceremony.
Jake: Chrissie, you are having a baby!
Chrissie: Well I may sound old-fashioned Jake, but I want to be married before I have kids.
Jake: You're the boss.
Chrissie: I most certainly am. Now carry on.
Minister: -Frowning slightly- Ok then. Do you take this man to be your lawfully wedded husband?
Chrissie: I do.
Minister: Rings.
Danny turned his jacket inside out but couldn't find them.
Jake: Oh don't tell me you've gone and forgotten the rings!
Danny: Ok I won't..
Jake: DANNY! I gave you one job and you mucked it up!..-Danny stood looking down at his shoes feeling stupid-..Well go and get them then!
Danny: Oh right!
He ran out and returned in about a minute.
Danny: Here.
Jake put Chrissie's ring on her finger and she did the same with his.
Minister: I pronounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride.
Jake kissed her on the cheek.
The ambulance arrived moments later. Chrissie was carried out on stretchers and put in the back.
Jake: Breathe...Breathe...Bre--
Chrissie: Jake if you say "breathe" one more time, I'm warning you, I'll break your arm!
Jake: Oooh hormones!
Chrissie: JAKE!
Jake: Alright, alright.
He jumped in the back with Chrissie and the ambulance drove off to the hospital..

Yet again, I'm sorry!

Amber
08-07-2005, 16:09
Don't be evil!
But it's in my nature!

Amber
08-07-2005, 16:10
:angry: ur like soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mean!!! :angry:
:angry:
:angry:
:angry: :crying:
I know :D

crumpet
08-07-2005, 16:13
is that the end ?

Amber
08-07-2005, 16:15
is that the end ?
No not yet :)
Just a few more parts!

crumpet
08-07-2005, 16:18
good

EastendersRox
08-07-2005, 16:33
I thought there'd be more, you can't end it like that! Will the last one still be sad?

Amber
08-07-2005, 16:35
I thought there'd be more, you can't end it like that! Will the last one still be sad?
Nah! I was just playing with all of you!

Layne
08-07-2005, 17:43
wow just caught up, tis fab!!! Ickle baby is coming! yeye!!!!!
Hormones haha!!!

Layne
x x x

Tamzi
08-07-2005, 22:35
Amber that was extra mean and I refuse to talk to you............................................... ..................................................
Ok I give up! Yeah Chrissie is having her baby. I you ever play that trick again I will break your arm! lol! More please
xxx

WattsRulee
09-07-2005, 11:44
more more more pleeez!!

Rach33
09-07-2005, 12:17
I have thought long and hard and have forgiven you because you posted more

awwwww baby's on the way awwwww can't wait

crumpet
09-07-2005, 17:37
Amber that was extra mean and I refuse to talk to you............................................... ..................................................
Ok I give up! Yeah Chrissie is having her baby. I you ever play that trick again I will break your arm! lol! More please
xxx :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: :rotfl: HAHAHA!!!, sorry, that is WELL funny :rotfl: :rotfl:

Angeldelight
09-07-2005, 17:41
yey yey yey... there having a baby... a tiny ickle bebe... yey yey yey... a tiny ickle beb... AND they got married... JAKISSIE forever n ever... Amber all is forgiven...

crumpet
09-07-2005, 17:47
Yeah Chrissie is having her baby. I you ever play that trick again I will break your arm! lol! More please
xxx

apart from that
HAHAHA! SO FUNNY!

Layne
09-07-2005, 17:53
yey yey yey... there having a baby... a tiny ickle bebe... yey yey yey... a tiny ickle beb... AND they got married... JAKISSIE forever n ever... Amber all is forgiven...


Look what you have done, you've started her off again! Joking!!!
please post more soon
Layne
x x x

crumpet
09-07-2005, 17:55
apart from that
HAHAHA! SO FUNNY
:( noone notices me :(

Tamzi
09-07-2005, 17:58
I notice you crumpet. I mean it though if she does that again, she should watch out!
xxx

crumpet
09-07-2005, 18:01
thanks

Tamzi
09-07-2005, 18:32
Its ok
xxx

Amber
09-07-2005, 18:42
Thanks for the replies and for forgiving me :)

PART 27
Jake mopped the beads of sweat from Chrissie's forehead. She was in the hospital having the baby.
Dr: Okay now, push.
She squeezed Jake's hand hard as she did this.
Jake: Owwwwwww!
He shook it.
Chrissie: You think that's painful? Well do you wanna have this baby for me?
Jake: No thankyou.
Chrissie pushed again. She screamed in pain.
Dr: It's almost over. Just one more push.
She pushed once more and the pain was over. She'd had the baby.
Dr: It's a girl!
The midwife cleaned the baby and wrapped her in a blanket. She handed her to Chrissie.
Chrissie: She's beautiful Jake.
Jake: She must take after her..
Chrissie: ..Mother?
Jake: Well I was going to say father but whatever suits you.
She hit him gently, holding the baby in the other arm.
Chrissie: Here, you hold her.
He cradled her in his arms. A tear of happiness rolled down his cheek. Chrissie just smiled as she watched him. A nurse came into the room carrying a clipboard.
Nurse: -To doctor- Sir, I think you should see this.
He looked at the clipboard.
Dr: Oh.
Chrissie looked at the doctor, suddenly feeling worried. What if there was something wrong with the baby?
Chrissie: What is it?
Dr: Well..

To be continued...

Tamzi
09-07-2005, 18:56
I feel an arm breaking coming on. hat is on that clipboard? Post more a.s.a.p please. Fabby as usual
xxx

Layne
10-07-2005, 09:34
aww a ickle baby girl, don't let anything be wrong with her!
Fabi, post more soon
luv ya
Layne
x x x

Rach33
10-07-2005, 11:26
awwwwwwwwwwwww da bebe is here awwwwww but what's wrong be nice Amber pleaseeeeeee

melonb
10-07-2005, 15:56
:wub: aww sweet baby!! but whats wrong??!!! :hmm:

Angeldelight
10-07-2005, 16:58
yey yey yey... they have a ickle bebe... a tiny ickle bebe girl... yey yey yey... Jake and Chrissie have a daughter... please don't let anything be wrong... please don't be mean... WE WANT THE BEBE TO BE ALL RIGHT... WE WNAT THE BEBE TO BE ALL RIGHT... i duno whether we could forgive you if the bebe is poorly...

Amber
11-07-2005, 18:41
Thanks for reading it :wub:
This time I'm not lying. It is the end this time.
Just one more thing, do you think I should do a sequel? I have got a few ideas in mind but they're all kinda lame :searchme:
Let me know :bow:

PART 28
Dr: Well the computer got your details and another patient's details mixed up.
Jake: And?
Dr: And there's another baby on the way.
Chrissie: WHAT?!?
Jake: You mean we've got twins?
Dr: Yes.
Chrissie: I can't have another baby. I just can't.
Jake: Chrissie, you can do this. You've just gotta try.
He squeezed her hand reassuringly.
Chrissie: Alright. I'll do it for you, 'cause I love you.
Jake: Well that's good to know but you've got another kid on the way.

Several painful moments later..
Chrissie sat with her little baby boy in her arms. She had just given birth for the second time. She sighed with relief. Jake smiled and looked down at his daughter, Haylie. She was sleeping peacefully.
Jake: I love you.
He kissed Chrissie softly on the lips.
Chrissie: Do you want to hold Adam again?
Jake: Yeah alright then.
She passed him to Jake.
Jake: You know one thing that we've made today?
Chrissie: 2 beautiful little babies? A marriage?
He shook his head.
Jake: A family.
She smiled. Tears fell from her eyes. She had never been happier. It had been the best day of her life.


THE END

Layne
11-07-2005, 20:41
oh my god, wow that was lovely! i'ms o close to tears!!!
Wow!
yes please do a sequel,please
Luv ya
Layne
x x x


I'm really upset that it has finished,but well done was a great script and i loved reading it!
xxx

Angeldelight
12-07-2005, 15:04
awwwwwwwwwwwww... they're a family... yey yey yey... twins... yey TWO tiny ickle bebe's... yey yey yey... i'm on the verge of tears... more more more... you have to do a sequel this one was brill... fantastic... you HAVE to do a sequel... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

crumpet
12-07-2005, 15:45
Sequel!!!!

EastendersRox
12-07-2005, 16:36
Can you do a sequel?????

melonb
12-07-2005, 19:05
awww theyre a family!!! :wub: :wub:
pity its the end!!! sequel?? :searchme: :angel:

Rach33
12-07-2005, 21:09
oh my god that was brillaint I loved it you should defo do a sequel I can't believe she had twins put it this way Amber that's very spooky

It was amazing babes the whole thing hopefully more sooon

Tamzi
16-07-2005, 07:55
aaaaaawwwwwwwww they had twins. A Jakissie family. You really should do a sequel. It was great babes
xxx

di marco
18-07-2005, 08:35
fab! :D just caught up. that was absolutely brill (apart from the bit when i thought it was the end lol!), jake and chrissie have 2 little babies awwwwwwww! :) please do a sequel

Stacy
18-07-2005, 20:20
Just caught up, was brilliant. Definitely have to do a sequel

Jessie Wallace
27-07-2005, 23:11
Excellent, well done.

Amber
02-08-2005, 17:24
Ok! I will post the first part of the sequel soon :)