Brooklyn Road

[big bro fan]

hi guys as promised here is info on new soap basically estate a pub two un used buildings doctors cafe

Characters

Williams
Randy-business man is very fair and is loyal to family and friends wants to be a daddy
Trish-wife of Randy a basically stay at home go shopping women is pregnant but Randy does not know

Barker
Austin-business man like Randy but lost two business's thanks to Randy
Ferlicity-Total oppisite of Trish is totally independant women.

Carter
Fred-has lived on the estate the longest has been married to wife Maria for nearly sixty years
Maria-nows the gossip need info on anyone she can tell you
Sean-is a doctor and the son of Fred and Maria will not be in it from the start is the heart throb and has an eye for the ladys

Robinson
Paul-the alfie moon type guy
Sam-always there for her kids
Brad-Teenager likes the ladys
Saskia-Intellegent complete oppisite of Brad

Wilkinson
Emma-will do anything for money
Violate-tal oppisite of sister
Garry-dad always lookin after his family
Sabrina-A kat slater like girl
Lynn-deffinantly like sabrina
Sadie-Garrys mother in law

these are the main characters there are other characters as well.

Business's
The bear-Randy Williams
Cafe-Paul Robinson
Doctors-Sean Carter

will post first episode soon where the other characters will be introduced :cheer:

[Chloe-Elise]

Cool, it looks really good, can't wait to read it :)

[big bro fan]

Scene 1
The Williams house
[Trish is lieing on the floor in pain Randy can't understand why]

Randy:what's wrong love
Trish:[in pain]call the doctor
Randy:why
Trish:[shouts]just do it
Randy:ok ok[picks up phone]hi Sean my wife is in pain can you come round...see you in a minute[puts phone down]everythings gonna be fine

Scene 2
The bear
[Sean is putting his coat on]

Maria:where you off to
Sean:patient
Fred:make sure you come back after
Sean:will do dad

Scene 3
William house
[Trish is red in the face and breathing heavily]

Randy:where is he
Trish:arrrrrrggggghhhhhhh

Scene 4
Wilkinson house
[All four sisters are in the house]

Sabrina:we need to be a bit more lively
Lynn:i'd be lively if i had a man in me life
Sabrina:well lets talk about that then
Emma:what
Sabrina:men we fancy
Violat:go on then
Sabrina:i always fancied that doctor
Lynn:he can take my temperature anyday
Emma:i bet i could get im in the bedrrom
Violat:no decent man would look at you twice
Sabrina:dont let dad hear you talking like that, you know he wants us all to get along
Violat:i'm just saying she is a tart supprised your not a prostitute
Emma:so is that what you think
Violat:yeah
Emma:i bet i can bed any bloke
Violat:yeah
Emma:you name um i will sleep with them
Violat:Brad Robinson god knows he cant wait to not be a virgin
Emma:deal
Violat:loser pays 200 quid in cash
Emma:your on

Scene 5
Williams house
[Sean is examining Trish]

Randy:is it bad
Sean:your wife is about to give birth
Randy:what
Sean:yeah but it is too late to get her to the hospital we wil have to do it here
Randy:ok fine
Sean:right Trish n the count of three push 1..2..3 PUSH

Scene 6
The bear

Austin:where's Randy it's his pub
Sam:i'm workin tonight
Austin:where's the doc
Sam:how am i supposed to know
Austin:just askin
[Maria overhears]
Maria:Sean is at Randy's house his wife is in a spot of bother
Austin:in pain
Fred:yeah
Austin:[panicked]it can't be time allready[leaves]
Fred:can i have his pint

Scene 7
[Trish has given birth to a girl]

Randy:i'm a daddy
Trish:yeah
Randy:why did'nt you tell me
Trish:i don't know
[there is a knock on the door]
Randy:come in
[Austin walks in]
Randy:what do you want
Austin:to see my baby girl

Next episode up tommorow

[baileya]

very good. Ive found it very boring writing to nobody on my soap at the minute but now I have some competition Im happy again. Very good. Does anyone know where bakedbean is?