Christmas 2005

[diamond1]

this is my script of this years christmas on ee ive even added the wicks it will involve nanas death and alfie/kat dennis/sharon
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A alarm is ringing alfie turns over onto his side to switch it off

Kat:what time is it
alfie:just gone half 8
kat:what?you're joking i gotta go on the stall
Alfie:kat darling just hold on a minute i cant belive we did it after all this time apart we're back
kat:alf..yeah right...look about last night
alfie cuts her off "you know with nana ill and everything i been so down but now if you're with me ill know ill be ok
kat:right....time to get up eh check on nana?

alfie gets up and kat looks guilty

TURPIN ROAD dennis is jogging dot is crossong the road as dennis slips on ice
Dot: ooh i say are you alright dennis?
dennis:yeah fine just this bleedin ice everywhere (laughs as he puls him self up) stupid really jogging on this ice
dot:aww hows sharon
dennis:shes fine dot you know its our first christmas as a couple without den,zoe and the whole baby thing nothing can go wrong
Dot:thats right...got anything planned?
dennis:quiet night in tommorow and then on christmas day we'll go over the vic for the mitchells chrstmas dinner
dot:you and phil in the same room?are you sure
dennis:look all thats in the past i still hate the guy but sharon wants to go and whatever she wants she gets

inside the Vic
"Phil theres someone at the door" peggy shouts
phil:alright mum..jesus bloody christmas (opens door) what?
pauline:charming i just wanted to say that this christmas dinner i want my roast pudding done well with all the trimmings
im putting my faith in you mitchells dont let my family down
phil:bye pauline
peggy: who was that
phil: that dappy fowler never stops bleeting on
peggy:t feels great dont it us the mitchells back in the vic this chrsitmas to think last year sam was being brainwashed
by marcus chrsitie you where on the run and den watts was in charge how things have changed


THE MOONS

"spencer what do u mean u cant come" alfie says down the phone "spence its nans birthday alright and i..we need you there, dannys gone awol round the world jake is still
depressed over chrissie and now youre not gonna show.....spence i need you bruv think about it"
alfie hangs up and sighs
kat walks in room "everything alright"
alfie:yeah darling everythings fine (sighs)actually that was spencer hes not coming
kat:what hes got to with nana being ill
alfie:i know but he dont actually know
kat:why dont he know..you aint told him
alfie:listen darling i dont wanna worry him anyway your'l be here christmas now we're back
kat:alfie i wont last night was a one off i cant hurt little mo anymore than i have and besides you need to spend every minute with nana now shes ill bye alfie
kat walks outside and starts crying

THE WICKS
deano:ere dad you looked at page 3 today?
kevin:aint you got that bird to worry about other than them page 3 girls
deano:stacey top bird and everything but you gotta always be on look out
kevin:dont let your sister hear you say that she'll cut your wotsits off
deano:she aint though is she
kevin:anyway you should looking at the job pages now your unemployed
deano:yeah bout that...
kevin:it was a nice job and you ruined it
deano: the manager was an idiot tho...
kevin:and you didnt have to tell him on a daily basis
deano:i dont need this im off
deano walks out

THE BOOKIES
dennis is going through paper work theres a knock on the door jhonny walks in

dennis:what do you want
jhonny:hear me out yeah
dennis:what?
jhonny:the mitchells they got everything the snooker club the arches the vic and now the cafe they think they own the place well i want to match them i want to
buy the bookies
dennis:you're joking right...no chance its mine and sharons life we live in the flat above here and well no
jhonny:im not a man to say no to dennis now ill ask again..
dennis:ask all you want...doors that way...OUT
jhonny:it will be a shame if you wound up like the previous owner andy hunter who i belive was a friend of your's?
dennis stands up
dennis:is that a threat from walfords answer to ronnie and reggie go on do one
jhonny laughs "you know i know about jack dalton and yourself i also know that you killed him it would be a shame if you happened to get caught
dennis:why you doing this
jhonny:im the top dog round here not those mitchells and im gonna stop their reign at the top and if your not with me your against me
jhonny walks out

next time:CHRISTMAS EVE who puts their life on the line and who turns ill
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[Tamzi]

Very good. Please post more soon
xxx

[Chloe-Elise]

Great,more asap:)

[Stacy]

This is good, post more soon!

[diamond1]

thanks to everyone that replied it means alot

MARKET

stacy:oi deano wait up
deano:busy babe text ya later yeah
stacy stops and looks hurt

Chip shop
jane:ian calm down you did agree to sell the cafe
ian:bullied more like
jane:be thankful they didnt do worse seeing as you did have wellard put down
ian:oh not that again
jane:yeah that again now you got a daughter who wants some money for peters present and you said no
ian:she should get a job like i done when i was her age
jane:cant you get in the chrsitmas sprit at all
deano walks in
deano: bag of chips please mate...you aint got any vacancies have ya?
ian:yeah sales assistant for down here serving chips
deano:nah you got it wrong mate i meant managers postition
ian:you having a laugh?
deano: whats that meant to mean
ian:darren miller would more suitable
deano:fine have it your away by the way forget the chips theyre naff

FLAT ABOVE THE BOOKIES
sharon:what do you want for breakfast
dennis still in bed looks moody
dennis: dont care
sharon:whats wrong since last night you been moody
dennis:nothing this time of year gets on my nerves a bit..anyway gotta get up things to do
dennis's mobile rings
dennis:hello?....fine...ill be there
sharon:who was that
dennis:no one

MARKET
mickey and dawn on market mickeys serving somone
mickey:enjoy your goods bye darling...add £4.50 to our profits
dawn:mickey what do you think dads doing
mickey:most likely watching a documentry on apes that read peoples minds
dawn:huh? mickey i meant OUR dad
mickey:(pauses)most likely conning santa claus out of his sleigh
dawn: i miss him mick
mickey:dont worry you got us now
mickey cuddles dawn

THE MOONS
jake:alfie move you been lounging around all day its nanas birthday tommorow and you got a face like pauline eating sour skittles
alfie:spencers not coming jake
jake:most likely chatting up all those girls that maxwell works with in the studio
alfie:yeah...jake i gotta tell you something nanas il....
nana:OH ALFIE what a lovely show is on today its all about christmas during the war can i watch it
alfie: yeah darling go through there and ill put it on
jake:what do you want to tell me
alfie:nothing dont worry
alfie walks into kitchen jake looks suspcious
alfie:im going out for a bit jake

SCARLETT :
dennis walks in
amy:can i help?
dennis im looking for jhonny
jhonny is sitting behind him in the shadows
jhonny:you found him
dennis:what do you want?
jhonny:thought about my offer
dennis:yeah right along telling you to stick it
jhonny laughs then pauses then punches dennis dennis holds nose
jhonny:not bad for and old man eh?
dennis goes to punch jhonny a big bouncer stops him
jhonny:have you any idea how much sleep ive lost thinking of ways to stop the mitchells ive found a way and it involves the bookies
dennis:listen jhonny ok heres my offer
dennis punches the bouncer then grabs jhonny and throws him down dennis lifts bar stool above jhonnys head
dennis:you ever try this again i will kill you got it?
jhonny:who do you think your talking to?
dennis:an old man who is living in the sixties now get up put your slippers on because im not in the mood to kill another aging gangster
jhonny:you have made a big mistake
dennis stops and walks off

THE QUEEN VIC
alfie:pint of lager please duchess
peggy:whats up darling
alfie:nothing er i was thinking is there well is there a chance i can take over as manager again
peggy:you know alfie i would love to but we are happy here and im sorry you understand right?
jake runs in
jake alfie quick somethings happened to nana
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[crazy_purple]

Great, please post more soon :)

[diamond1]

ok ill post some more tonight

[diamond1]

JHONNY ALLEN'S
jhonny:you know what to do?
man:yeah put the frightners on sharon rickman blonde bit lives round the bookie
jhonny:yes...and do a good job

THE ARCHES:
phil walks in on minty and garry reading magazines
phil:nice to see you two hard at work
garry:sorry boss
dennis walks in
:dennis phil i wanna word
phil:ok,,,you two go home my treat
minty and garry:cheers boss
both men leave
phil:what do you want then?
dennis jhonny allen hes got something in store for you
phil:what?
dennis:dont know but it involves the bookies
phil:hes got in for me
dennis:i know i dont know what hes got in mind for any of you lot but i wanna help
phil:why would you want to do that?
dennnis:lets just say i owe an old freind
phil:ok i think i got an idea but if it works you do know it could be dangerous
dennis:im in

hospitial:
alfie:doctor im looking for victoria moon reception told me to come here
doctor:yes well im afraid victoria is very ill shes in a coma and she may not make it the night the likelyness of her waking up from this coma shes in is very small
jake:i dont belive it how this happened there was nothing wrong before
doctor:well according to her notes she has a very serious condition and was told she has months to live
jake:when was she told this?you're lying...tell them alfie
alfie:jake its true
jake:what and no one told me
alfie: im sorry
jake:all this stuff with chrissie and you had all this on you're plate
alife:jake i was meaning to tell you
jake:whatever alfie
jake walks off little mo walks in
little mo: hi alfie

the rickmans:
knocking on the door
sharon:hang on (she opens door )hello? whoa re you wait stop................................sharon screams

outside jhonny allens
dennis:are you sure
phil:look make sure no ones looking
dennis:cutting his brakes it could kill him
phil:better him than us now shut up whinging and keep a look out

JHONNY ALLENS HOUSE
ruby:dad
jhonny:not now sweetheart
ruby:im just going to stacys
jhonny:no youre staying here
ruby:why
jhonny:so im sure you cant see that thug of a friend of yours
ruby:juley?thug hes a a nice boy
jhonny:i dont care youre staying here end off
ruby:i dont think so
ruby storms out grabbing the keys

THE ARCHES:
phil:think it will work?
dennis:dont care im staying out of this
phil:what?your my albi
dennis;since when
phil:since jhonny allens car is gonna end up smashed against a wall with jhonny allen hopefully in it

HOSPITAL:
little mo:i heard nana is ill
alfie:yeah
little mo:peggys told the sqaure
alfie:does kat know
little mo:shes gone out i wouldnt of thought so
alfie:jakes never gonna talk to me again
little mo:i thought that with kat
alfie:that was diffrent
little mo:i still think about you alfie
alfie:me to
little mo:but i know now it was a mistake and you and kat are meant to be
alfie:i dont get you
little mo:i am giving you my blessing with everything going on you and kat need each other and im getting in the way
alfie:but mo....i dont know what to say
little mo:say nothing alfie say nothing

little mo walks off
little mo:alfie i hope nana gets better

the rickmans
dennis is putting his keys in the door when he feels a thud against the door he pushes through sharons lying there knocked out

the slaters:
knocking on door
stacy:alright hang on
opens door
stacy:rub whats wrong
ruby:he is so controlling he hasnt changed hes still an evil heartless....
stacy:ruby calm down
ruby:and im not taking it no more
stacy:why you got your dads keys?
ruby:im taking his car
stacy:no rub
ruby:you coming or not?
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[mikepemb]

More soon please

[diamond1]

THE RICKMANS
dennis:sharon you gonna tell me what happned
sharon:some big guy attacked me dennis i told you last night
dennis:ill kill him
sharon:forget it yo wont find him now

JHONNY ALLENS:
jhonny looks out window car has gone missing

THE MILLERS
darren:awww cheers demz
demi:thought youd like it
rosie:mikcey heres another card for you
mickey opens card its from his dad

THE QUEEN VIC
phil looking out window
billy:morning
phil looks at him and looks back out the window worried

HOSPTIAL
alfie looks like he has had no sleep jake walks in gives him a coffee as a gesture

QUEEN VIC:phil is on phone
phil:dennis you there? ok his car has gone looks like he has gone out what do you mean sharons been attacked

THE RICKMANS
dennis:dunno looks like one of jhonnys thugs done it for revenge so they took it out on sharon
sharon walks in room without dennis knowing
dennis:yeah i know but if i wouldnt of threratned him sharon wouldnt of got attacked and now it will look suspicius when the poice are looking into jhonnys death
and they find out about all this
sharon:DENNIS????
dennis turns around looking sheepish

THE WICKS:
deano:nice one dad i needed an ipod now all my mates wont laugh at me not having one
kevin:what did you get me then son?
deano:as in present ah about that
kevin you didnt get me one?
deano:i was busy sorry dad maybe next year
deano walks off kevin looks disapointed

THE FOWLERS
sonia:are you sure this is a good idea martin going around the mitchells espcially seeing what today is
pauline:if that phils says anything hes got me to answer to
martin:look mum forget about it
pauline:no i will not forget about it anyway joe should be here in a minute and thenw e head to the vic for chrsitmas dinner

THE MILLERS
in kitchen dawns washing up
mickey:ha never thought id see that my sister washing up
dawn:well better this than listining to keiths theory of how father christmas gets round the world in one nght
mickey:dont be hard on him today of all days
dawn:im not thats why im out here wish dad was here though
mickey:speaking of him i got this through this morning dawn
dawn:what is it (dawn reads it)
mickey:its from dad
dawn:theres no mention of me anywhere
mickey:should i show mum
dawn:better not...hang on whats this "see you soon"
dawn and mickey exchange a look

THE RICKMANS
sharon:YOU CUT HIS BRAKES YOU DO KNOW IT COULD KILL HIM BUT THATS WHAT YOU WANT ISNT IT DENNIS
ANOTHER DEAD GANGSTER TO ADD TO YOUR CV
dennis:sharon i did it for exaclty last night s reasons he hurt you
sharon:and if he survives its gonna get a lot worse for all of us
dennis:look its over with now i promise (stokes her face)
sharon:and what if rubys in the car with him
dennis:well...she wont be
sharon:didnt think of that did you
dennis:you know what ive had enough of this im going out
sharon:and dont come back im sick of the site of you
dennis storms out and slams door

THE WICKS:
kevin:deano
deano:yeah dad
kevin:im going to the vic
deano:hang on then
kevin why?
deano:cause i want you to open this
kevin:a new mobile phone?
deano:i didnt want you to go without dad
kevin:how much was it
deano:errr around £200
kevin:no it didnt
deano:yeah it did
kevin:well how come dodgy dave was selling this exact phone the other day for a fiver
deano:ah well the thing is...thought that counts?

OUTSIDE dennis walks over to a bench and sits down dot walks over to him

dot:merry christmas dennis
dennis:yeah
dot:you ok?
dennis:yeah never been better(sarcastic)
dot:you and sharon had another row
dennis:yeah dot this time its a bad one
dot:well whatver it is youll make it up because you love each other
dennis:cheers dot
dot:dont mention it ive always got time for you dennis your like a son to me now go back home and sort it out with sharon
dennis:gets up cheers dot

he walks back but sees police outside jhonny allens house
he walks over
jhonny:i dont know one minute it was here the next gone
policeman:well we got your deatils we'll keep a lookout
jhonny:thanks
kat comes running over
kat:stacy has rung me shes been involved in a car accident


dennis runs over to vic realizing somethings wrong
dennis:PHIL PHIL (bangs on door)
phil:what?
dennis:stacys knicked jhonny allens car


NEXT TIME who returns

[lil baby tash]

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo who returns me interested do tell or post da next part!!!

[Skits]

this is brilliant. i've just read all of it. please post more.

[diamond1]

CAR SCENE
jhonny walks over to his smashed car and looks at ruby
jhonny:ruby are you ok?
ruby:im sorry dad
jhonny:why? hows did you crash
ruby the car wouldnt stop
jhonny:what do you mean
stacy:the brakes didnt work
jhonny looks angry

THE HOSPITAL
jake walks over to alfie
jake:hows nana
alfie:no diffrent to earlier
jake:its tough ive rung spencer he sends his love i cant get hold of danny
alfie:thanks im sorry jake you know i didnt mean to not tell ....
jake:alfie sometimes it dont matter and right now it dont all can say is you have had no sleep go get some please
aflie:if its all the same ill wait here
jake:want some company?
alfie smiles
ALBERT SQAURE taxi pulls up and jhonny heads straight to scarletts

QUEEN VIC
dennis:i knew it letting a mitchell do anything could only lead to trouble
phil:shut it will ya
dennis:or what?
the two men square up when the doorbell goes
phil:that will be the guests

SCARLETTS
jhonny is putting bullets in the gun

THE MILLERS:
darren:looks like the police are leaving now ...oi...oi a sweet car has just pulled up looks like a roller
keith(not moving to see)son a car is like a apple ripe in the spring forgotten in the winter
darren:yeah whatever
demi:do you two ever shut up im watching a film with aleesha
darren:dont think she will know whats going on demz

doorbell goes
mickey ill get it
dawn:nah im there now
dawn opens up
mickey and dawn: DAD

Mike steps in
mike:merry christmas
rosie steps through and is shocked to see mike

THE RICKMANS sharon is crying on sofa

jhonny heads over to vic and knocks on back door

phil opens:hello?
jhonny hello phil (holds gun to him)lets go for a walk

dennis still upstairs dees jhonny and phil get in phils car and rushes downstairs

INSIDE CAR
jhonny:sorry to use your car phillip but my one isa bit damaged

HOSPITAL:
nanas machine starts bleeping and the doctors rush in all at once alfie grabs jakes hand
alfie:jake its happining shes dying
jake:be strong alfie

peggy opens up the arches for dennis and they get in one of the cars
peggy:you sure you it was phil
dennis:yeah i got a bad feeling about this
they speed off
peggy you know where youre going
dennis i hope so

FOREST
jhonny end of the line phil
holds gun to his head
phil:what do you want me to say just get it over with yeah?
jhonny oh no i want you to suffer first you nealry killed my daughter
phil:how did you know it was me
jhonny who else would phil?
phil:fair point
jhonny:merry christmas mitchell (raises gun and aims at phil)
STOP dennis runs over
dennis:dont do this
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[diamond1]

thanks to everyone who replied only two more parts to go but thanks alot

[crazy_purple]

It's great, more asap please :p

[diamond1]

dennis:you dont want to do that
jhonny:how did you find us
dennis:where else do you shoot people...i shot dalton here
jhonny:well move i got unfinished buisness
dennis:no you wana shoot him you shoot me
phil:what you doing you'll get killed
dennis;shut it phil
phil:No you shut it
jhonny:look at you two like little schoolgirls well fine ill do the both of you
phil:nooooooooo
phil runs at jhonny
dennis:phil stop
jhonny fires gun dennis jumps infront of phil and takes the bullet
jhonnydrops gun and runs
phil:dennis can you hear me
dennis:tell sharon i ..love her........
dennis' s eyes close

HOSPITAL
the bleeping stops the doctor walks out
doctor:mr moon
alfie:shes dead aint she
doctor:no mr moon by some mirracle she has awoken from her coma she is in a very bad way theres not much i feel we can do but i feel you should see her
alfie:jake you coming
jake:no alfie i think you should do this one
alfie walks in
alfie hello darling
nana:ooo alfie i feel very faint
alfie:dont worry nana
nana:im not darling but i know whats happining im dying arnt i
alfie:course not you gonna live a lot longer yet
nana:alfie i want you to know i love you very much
alfie:nana please dont leave me
nana:im ot alfie ill always be there
alfie nana no just hang on a little longer i dont want you to die
nana:alfieim afraid i have to we all do someday and my time has come sweetie dont cry alfie
alfie:nana...
nanas eyes fade the machine starts bleeping alfie breaks down in tears

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[crazy_purple]

Awww poor Nana! :crying:

[Kim]

Poor Nana :crying: :crying: :mad: . More soon please :)

[Chloe-Elise]

Awwwww poor Nana!:crying: Who gets shot?! Great,more asap :)

[diamond1]

(dennis just got shot saving phil he died) cheers for the reply by the way
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FINAL
THE RICKMANS
police knocks on door
sharon opens door
sharon:hello?
police:can i have a word?
sharon:with me...ok

QUEEN VIC
the fowlers/brannings/garry and minty/beales/juley and gus are enjoying their christmas meals laughing and having fun while peggy prepares to deliver the news
about nana and dennis

peggy:can i have everyones attention please
evryone:carries on taking no notice
peggy:hello? i need your attention
still no response
peggy:ALL OF YA SHUT UP
everyone looks around
peggy:i got some bad news
pauline:what?
peggy:well i have had some phone calls one from the hospital nana moon died at 15:44 today
everyone gasps and is in shock
peggy:thats not all....phil is at the poice station he is the witness to a murder of a walford regular
dot:who could you mean?
peggy:dot im sorry you where good friends with him so i apoligize in advance.....dennis was killed im so sorry
dot and the others look shocked

THE RICKMANS
sharon:if this is about last night forget it igot enough to worry about with my husband out there sulking...
policeman:well this about your husband
sharon:is this about jhonny allen look it wasnt dennis who touched his car...
policemem look at each other
policeman:actually mam i think you should sit down...your husband has been found dead
sharon:what (laughs) as if pull the other one now get out i got things to do
policeman:maybe you should sit down and (looks at his collogue)go get a glass of water please mike
the other policeman proceeds to kitchen
sharon breaks down crying
sharon:me and him just had another arguement...how(sobs) how did he die
policeman:(takes his hat off) he was well it seems as if he was shot
sharon:well he was or he wasnt
policeman looks at floor
policeman:i know this is hard to take in but i need to ask you a few questions and well i need to know about jhonny allen and his involvement with your
husband

THE ALLENS
jhonny is looking out window goes back to packing his bags
ruby:dad you gonna watch that film you wanted to see...hang on why you putting things in there whats going on
jhonny:ruby pack your bags
ruby:why?
jhonny: DO IT WILL YA
ruby:no whats going on(she looks out window) theres police out there whats going on DAD
jhonny grabs rubys arm and drags her outside into a waiting taxi and they leave

SAD MUSIC PLAYS AND WE GO TO DIFFRENT SCENES
QUEEN VIC
dot is crying and the others seem very sollum

HOSPTIAL:alfie is crying and jake is staring out window

PRISON CELL:
phil walks in and wipes a tear away

THE RICKMANS
sharon is looking out window at a packed sky full of stars she wipes a tear away and says up to the sky ...forever
eastenders music plays
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[diamond1]

by the way my orgnial idea was kat and alfie would get it togther but i thought if nana died theres no way they would get it on on the same day so sorry just assume afterwards they did

dennis died and sharon moved away to the usa to rebuild her life (again)

phil didnt get sent down just questioned about jhonny allen and he went to be a key witness and jhonny allen went on the run with ruby maybe theres a story to be written from that.

[Stacy]

Awww thats was really good!!!

[Chloe-Elise]

Awwww thats was really good :D, it would be great if you did a sequel :D

[diamond1]

hey what can i say, thank you all so much for replying and saying you liked it to be honest i wasnt gonna write a sequel and even now i can think of a story to follow up if i do i will.