View Full Version : Shannis - The Tears of Den's Meddling
Potato1992
06-11-2005, 14:10
Part 1
Sharon stormed from the pub leaving dennis and zoe inside and unknowingly den. She sat outside on the park bench, only a couple of minutes earlier, she had walked in on dennis and zoe kissing. After Sharon emerged outside, Den appeared from behind the bar of the pub. Dennis jumped over the bar and started punched Den.
Dennis: You planned this didn't you, both of you...you planned this didn't you Zoe, when Sharon came in you were planned to force yourself on me, didn't you.
Zoe: Well you were going to leave with her and i couldn't live without you and Den couldn't live without Sharon, it wouldn't have been right.
Dennis: You're sick both of you...
Meanwhile with tickets to America in her hand, Sharon sat crying in the park bench outside the vic, unsure what to do.
To Be Continued...
Next : Zoe has some news... :searchme:
Chloe-Elise
06-11-2005, 14:30
Great start,please post more soon :D
Potato1992
06-11-2005, 15:21
will post more this evening
Jada-GDR
06-11-2005, 19:02
please do it's great :D
Potato1992
06-11-2005, 19:09
Part 2
Den got up from Dennis' punch and was about to hit him when Sharon entered.
Sharon: Dad, What the hell do you think youre doing.
Den: He is not good enough for you he is scum compared to you.
Sharon: I want an explaination, and i want it now!
Zoe: Dennis was going to leave me pregnant by myself and he is meant to be with me not you, i want him more than you, I LOVE HIM!
Dennis: I Love Sharon, not you Zoe and i will support the baby just not with you...
Den Scoffs
Sharon: What was that for eh answer me Dad!
Den: You say that now but when you get some other girl pregnant it will be different matter!
Dennis: I don't intend to be with anyone else but Sharon! Den
Den: Like she is gonna wanna be with scum like you know after you were caught kissing Zoe, and you've been sleeping with her during the last couple of weeks when you and Zoe were finished and you were with Sharon!
Sharon: What?
Dennis: Its a lie, hes lying, i promise you Sharon!
Sharon: I dunno who to believe...
Sharon runs upstairs
Dennis: Sharon!!!!!
Next Who does Sharon Believe, Did Dennis really cheat on Sharon???
Potato1992
07-11-2005, 18:03
Part 3
Dennis entered the kitchen were Sharon was sitting crying, drinking a cup of tea, he sat at the table and tried to hold her hand, but she snatched it away.
Dennis: I promise you i didn't kiss her when you walked in she forced herself on me, your dad and zoe planned it. I didn't kiss her never mind even sleep with her.
Zoe stormed in followed by Den
Zoe: Yes, you did and im pregnant because of you...
Sharon: What!!!!
Den: Yeh, What
Zoe: Im pregant cause of you..
Dennis: We didn't even sleep together, prove it.
Sharon: I have a pregnancy test in our room.
Zoe: Fine...
Sharon: Right come on then..
Next:
Is Zoe pregnant? What is going to happen to Shannis???
squillyfer
07-11-2005, 18:22
ooh more
xXxJessxXx
07-11-2005, 19:31
Cool, good start! :)
This is great more soon please x
This is really good. Please do more
xxx
Potato1992
09-11-2005, 18:29
Part 4
Dennis, Sharon and Den waited outside for Zoe to come out...
Zoe opened the door
Sharon grabbed the test
Sharon: Its negative!!!!!!
Den: IT CAN'T BE!!!!!!!!!!!
Dennis: See I didn't cheat on you Sharon, I promise!
Zoe storms downstairs
Sharon: Okay, I believe you come here i need to talk to you!
Sharon grabs Dennis' hand and runs with him into the kitchen slamming the door with Den locked outside.
Den: Princess!! OPEN THIS DOOR NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Sharon: NO Dad Go Away
Dennis: Listen, Im Sorry, I didn't do anything with her I Swear!
Sharon: I know, I know im the one who should be sorry for not believing you!
Dennis stroked Sharons face and put his hands around her waist and gently kissed her...
Dennis: You know i Love you so much
Sharon: Yeh
Dennis: Well before Zoe downstairs earlier and that i was gonna ask you....
Den: Open this door now!!!!
Sharon: Ask me, What
Dennis: To Marry me
Sharon: Yes, Yes, Yes
Zoe runs upstairs
Zoe: Did he just say what i think he said!!!
Den: Right, Im going in
Sharon was sitting on Dennis knee kissing him, when the door was bashed down.
Sharon: DAD!!!!!!!!!!!
Next
Something happens that will change life foreva but for who?
You have got to post more soon fab stuff xxxxxx
What happens??????????????? Who's life changes???? They're getting married! more soon
xxx
Potato1992
10-11-2005, 10:04
will be more today
Chloe-Elise
10-11-2005, 20:45
Oooo whats going to happen? Fab,please do more soon:)
Potato1992
12-11-2005, 11:05
Part 5
Den and Zoe enter with looks of anger...
Den: There is no way that you are gonna marry him!
Zoe: Yeah, you are meant to be with me
Dennis: No Im not!
Sharon: Dad, face it Im gonna be with him, i love him and he loves me, dad we are going to get married within the month and then we are going to live in america and you will never see me again!
Den: Sharon, you don't mean that!
Sharon: I hate you and i love dennis
Den: This is all your fault!
Den jumps onto Dennis and starts to punch him
Sharon tries to get Den off Dennis and Sharon screams at Zoe to help
Zoe: No, im not helping him, we were meant to be together but you and him had to ruin everything!
Sharon pulls her dad back but den hits Sharon against a cupboard
Sharon turns around with a cut face
Den: Princess im so sorry i didn't mean to
Dennis quickly gets to his feet and pulls Den away from a scared Sharon
Sharon and Dennis run downstairs
Dennis: Quick BABE
Den: Hes not gonna to get away with this!
Den grabs a Knife
Next
Does someone get hurt?
If so who?
Chloe-Elise
12-11-2005, 12:31
:eek: He hit Sharon! Nasty Den, he better not hurt Dennis or Sharon!:mad: Great update, more soon please :D
Evil Den! Let Den slip and stab himself with the knife lol! More soon
xxx
Potato1992
12-11-2005, 16:50
i will probably post more tomorrow
Potato1992
14-11-2005, 18:34
Part 6
Zoe follows Den running down the stairs
Zoe: Den NOOOOOOO!!!!!! Dennis hes got a knife!!!
Sharon: Oh My God!!!
Dennis jumps over the counter and lifts Sharon over.
Dennis rattles with the locks
Dennis: He's locked them
Den is standing behind the counter with the knife and takes a drink and slowly sips between sentences
Den: Im not gonna let you out of here alive Dennis, Sharon belongs with me not you!
Sharon: Youre wrong Dad i love im and we are going to leave you and i am never gonna let you near us again!
Den grunts and jumps over the counter, Dennis pushes Sharon away from him out of danger and fights with Den, Den drops the knife and it slides across the room out of eithers reach and Sharon and Zoe scream unable to do anything, they move closer to the knife both on the floor reaching for the blade, someone grabs it..........
Next
Who grabs the blade?
Does someone get stabbed and if so Who?
Who's got the knife? This is a really good script, gripping. COme and post more please!
xxx
Chloe-Elise
14-11-2005, 20:23
:eek: Who gets stabbed?!I love this, cant wait to see what happens next :)
Potato1992
15-11-2005, 10:29
post more 2day
Potato1992
15-11-2005, 16:41
Part 7
Suddenly screams rang out and one man got up off the other one leaving someone on the floor, Sharon and Zoe stood by the jukebox shocked.
Sharon: Daddddd!!!!!!!!!!
Sharon ran over to the other side of the bar and knelt down on the floor, she screamed to Zoe to call an ambulance.
Sharon: Dad what have you done! Dennis its gonna be ok, I love you! you are going to be fine!
Den grabbed Zoe and pushed her to the seats near where Sharon was with Dennis on the floor.
Den: Noone is calling an ambulance, he is not going to ruin your life anymore Sharon! We are all going to wait here till...
Sharon: Till what Dad he is dead!
Den: Yes, then we will go get Vicki and move somewhere nice and sunny.
Dennis was bleeding heavily, with a massive stab wound to his stomache!
Dennis: Move me onto the chair where Zoe is sitting a need to sit up!
Zoe and Sharon lifted Dennis up onto a chair and Den got some rope from under the stairs and tied Sharon's and Zoe's hands to the chairs which were attached to the floor
Den: Sorry, Princess but i just can't trust you with him around!
Dennis: Just let us go! It hurts so much Sharon!
Sharon: Its OK baby!
Sharon gently kissed Dennis, while Den jumped over the bar and punched Dennis in the face
Sharon: Dennissss!!!!!
Dennis laid lank and without energy and sloped onto Sharon's shoulder.
Sharon tried to wake him up but he wouldn't awake! She cried holding Dennis in her arms!
Next
What will happen?
Is Sharon going to have to live with Den???
Chloe-Elise
15-11-2005, 19:10
Noooooo Dennis cant die! Love the script,more soon please :D
Dennis better not die! Please post more soon, please
xxx
Potato1992
16-11-2005, 18:18
More soon!
Potato1992
17-11-2005, 19:57
Part 8
Den: Ill be back in half an hour! Don't move!!
Sharon: You killed the love of my life, i hate you dad!!!!!!!!
Den: Youll thank me soon!
Zoe: Youre sick Den!
Den: Whatever you say darling,
Den ripped up a bar towel and gagged Sharon and Zoe, leaving a limp Dennis resting on Sharon's shoulder, Den ran out the back door...
Sharon and Zoe moaned and Sharon checking if Dennis was alive.
Sharon cried scared about life without him when he suddenly coughed and aroused!
Sharon: Dannish
Sharon tried to say Dennis but it came out as danish
Dennis slowly turned grunting in pain and untied Sharon's gag
Sharon kissed him carefully and laid him down on the bar seat and untied Zoe
Zoe and Sharon tried bashing themselves against the locked glass doors and noone even knew they were there, it was 3am everyone was asleep!
Dennis: Get me up the stairs, quick before Den gets back!
Lets hope Den has an accident so he can't get back. Please post more soon
xxx
Potato1992
19-11-2005, 19:36
people please post opinions!!!!!!!!
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