New and Improved EastEnders

[big bro fan]

Ok i promise to stick to this one here is the characters etc

Mitchell
Peggy
Phil
Grant
Sam
Billy

Slater
Charlie
Mo
Little Mo
Kat
Lynn

Fowler
Pauline
Arthur
Mark
Michelle
Martin

Beale
Ian
Kathy
Jane

Jackson
Sonia
Robbie

Butcher
Pat
Ricky
Janine

Peterson
Minty

Hobbs
Garry

Brannings
Jim
Dot

Watts
Den
Chrissie
Sharon
Dennis who is dating Sharon
Vickki

Moon
Alfie

Evans
Pat

Stewart
Tina

Allen
Johnny
Ruby

Johnny and Ruby are not going to be in it straight away people like Millers will be joining

Business's
Archers-Mitchells
Bookies-Dennis watts
Minute Mart-Billy Mitchell
Queen Vic-Mitchells
Cafe-Kathy
Laundrette-Pauline
Angie's den-Watts Family

Hope you enjoy oh there is the market as well. i just wanted some old characters in it first episode up tommorow. :o

[feelingyellow]

sounds good - can't wait :)

[Tamzi]

sounds very good
xxx

[lil baby tash]

cant wait sound very very very very interesting

[lil baby tash]

no jake moon or danny or nana?????:'(

[big bro fan]

Jake will be coming into it as for nanna and danny i'm not sure. but if it was people want then i will see what i can do :D

[lil baby tash]

oh thats good me love jake!!

[big bro fan]

Episode 1

Angie's denn
[A nervous Sharon is cleaning the bar]

Dennis:what's the matter
Sharon:it's dad
Dennis:what about him
Sharon:he does'nt know about us
Dennis: oh well
Sharon:does'nt it worry you that your dad may hate you for dating his adopted daughter
Dennis:no,because as far as i'm concerned he either accepts it or he does'nt i mean it wont effect us
Sharon:i suppose but let's leave it a while he's going to be upset after going to Angie's funeral
Dennis:well dont leave it to long the sooner the better
Sharon:you off to the bookies
Dennis:yeah why do you need a hand
Sharon:no Vickki will be here soon
Dennis:see you later[leaves]

Fowler's house
[Michelle is talking to Vickki]

Michelle:have'nt you got work
Vickki:i'm going in a minute
Michelle:i never thought that my daughter would work for Den Watts
Vickki:i dont work for Den Watts he is my dad the club is a family business
Michelle:better get going dont want to keep Sharon waiting
[Vickki goes to the club,Pauline having conviently heard the coversation comes in with a tea pot]
Pauline:fancy a cuppa
Michelle:i'm allright mum
Pauline:so what's wrong then
Michelle:nothing what give's you that idea
Pauline:because you have been talking to Vickki about Den ever since Angie died and he became single
Michelle:i dont have a thing for Den if that's what your getting at
Pauline:i did'nt say anything but the fact that you assume i think you have a thing for Den convinces me that you do
Michelle:i love Den
Pauline: obviously
Michelle:ever since Vickki was born all i've ever wanted was to be a family
Pauline:well why dont you do something to take your mind off things
Michelle:like what
Pauline:help Martin and Mark with the stall are go see your dad at the allotments
Michelle:what about you
Pauline:well if your that desperate come the laundrette
Michelle:i think i will go for a walk

Queen Vic
[Peggy is serving punters Sam is talking to Garry]

Garry:you never miss something till it's gone
Sam:what do you mean
Garry:a man needs a women to love protect and well you know
Sam:no i dont know tell me
Garry:you know S E X
Sam:[laughs]well you could always go down the club there havin somesort of party tonight
Garry:thanks Sam[finishes his pint and leaves]
Peggy:what you done that for
Sam:what
Peggy:told Garry to go to Angie's Denn when we need customers here
Sam:i dont think it's just Garry that needs a night out
Peggy:what are you implying
Sam:how about we close up early and go over that party
Peggy:awight then

Archers
[Grant Phil and Minty are hard at work]

Minty:you goin that party tonight
Phil:i'm takin Kathy
Minty:love is in the air
Phil:shut it Minty
Grant:i dont think i would last long what with that snot nosed kid Ian
Minty:[laughs]your right there
Phil:look my disagreements with Ian are over that's the only reason Kathy said she would go out with me
Grant:what if you an Ian put your diffrences aside
Phil:yeah but the next time i catch im with anyone in my family like Sam or my future wife
Grant:if there is one
Minty:god help um
Phil:i've had enough i'm havin early lunch
Minty:Phil Phil
Grant:look what we done now
Minty:you started it

Next episode up later

[Chloe-Elise]

Great start :D more soon please:)

[feelingyellow]

good start, next part soon please :cheer:

[Tamzi]

Brilliant start. More soon please
xxx

P.S Please bring Nana and maybe Spencer in. I love them

[Emma-Lou]

The great more soon please

[big bro fan]

allright then i will bring in nanna and spencer but i dont know when next episode up later

[Tamzi]

Thanks so much. Can't wait for the next episode
xxx

[big bro fan]

just want to say sorry for not writing in ages will have loads comin up and i will try post episode a day

[big bro fan]

Episode 2

Cafe
[Ian is busy Phil storms in slams the door behind him and goes behind the counter]

Ian:if your lookin for mum she's not here
Phil:it's not her i'm after
Ian:me what do you want me for
Phil:i am very annoyed at the moment Ian and i happen to know you dont like me
Ian:well your not exactly a nice person
Phil:i know, but your gonna help me out tonight
Ian:how
Phil:your gonna make sure that Grant and Minty stay away from me
Ian:me keep Grant away from you am i expected to come back with my head on my shoulders
Phil:would'nt bother me but if you dont do it then i will tell your mum what you an Sam did
Ian:how do you
Phil:you used my sister now do what i ask an no one gets hurt
Ian:ok

Scene 2
Jackson house

Sonia:we goin this party tonight
Robbie:yeah if you want
Sonia:cool
Robbie:maybe i could jusy hang with you
Sonia:oh i already said i would go with Ricky
Robbie:oh
Sonia:cheer up i'm sure you'll find someone
Robbie:yeah i got to take wellard for a walk

Scene 3
Angie's Den

Sharon:where are you going
Dennis:to see Pauline
Sharon:why
Pauline:she's helping me out with the decorations
[leaves]
Tina:i'm finished Sharon
Sharon:you can knock off early if you want
Tina:thanks
Sharon:feel free to come down later
Tina:thanks will do

Scene 4
Pauline's house

Pauline:so you looking forwards to your dad coming home
Dennis:yeah i really want to make a fresh start of things with him
Pauline:that's good

Scene 5
[Tina is walking out of the minute mart when wellard smells food and goes charging towards Tina]

Tina:woops
Robbie:sorry about that
Tina:ok
[he helps her pick her things up]
Robbie:there you go
Tina:thanks is there anyway i can repay you
Robbie:got a date for tonight
Tina:pick me up at eight

Scene 6
Paulines

Dennis:what time is it
Pauline:nearly six
Dennis:better get going dad will be here soon

Scene 7
Angie's Den

Sharon:where is he
Vickki:calm down
[Dennis comes speeding in]
Dennis:am i late
Sharon:no where's dad
Dennis:stop and breath everything will be fine
Den:hello everyone
Sharon:dad
Den:say hello to Chrissie
[everyones faces drop]

[Kim]

Great:D. Please do more asap.

[big bro fan]

will do as long as you do more harry potter

[the_watts_rule]

Cool Script.

[mikepemb]

More please