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Characters
.the bird i'th hand(pub)- owned by amy johnson and ste johnson.(33 + 34)
.fudge packet(sweet shop)- owned by jack collins and amy collins.(42 + 38)
houses
no.4 common road- jo drury(26)
n0.10 junction lane-steph watson(22)
block of flats - johnny kirk(30), amy singleton and danny singleton(29 + 30), shaun davies(18),paul collymore(20),claire calderbank(53),sam sinster(50).
new ppl 2 town(later in story)-liam(23) and ant(22), amy(26) and sarah(27) and lucy(18).
the storyline is made up but is set in a place called sthelens in merseyside!
1st episode of series
1st scene
in the bird i'th hand.jo is talkin with johnny kirk.
johnny: what do you think then?
jo: ye im up for it, when you want t'go?
johnny:meet up here at 7:00. grab a pint and then go.
jo: cant wait, its great at xenon, some really fit birds.
johnny:i no.. (finishes his dink)... puttin on mt best shirt.
jo: cya tommorow.
johnny: bye
both leave the pub.
2nd scene
down the road from the pub lays the block of flats. on the top floor is where amy and danny singleton live.
amy: what you mean your going out?
danny: off t'pub wiv lads!
amy: ye right you said that last time and i didn't see you 'till mornin.
danny: i've told you before, i got bladdered and kip round at me mates.
amy: ye we know what type of mate your talking about!
danny: but...
amy: just go!
danny storms out.
scene 3
danny walks down the street, past the fudge packet. down the street he meets up with the 'lads'. shaun, danny and paul head off to the pub.
they order a pint and sit down.
shaun: hows it goin?
danny: bad, amy found out about me and you know who.
paul: you mean steph!
danny: SSSHHHHH!
steph walks up to danny and flings her arms round him.
danny: hiya love
steph: (sexy voice) hiya!
shaun and paul: oooohh!
danny: shut up.
steph: fancy comin back to my place?
danny: ok.
roars from shaun and paul are heard when they leave the pub.
paul: wanna follow 'em?
shaun: go on then it'll be a laugh.
they exit the pub.
4th scene
inside the fudge packet, some kids are in the process of nicking some sweets.
amy: put those down! if your not paying for them!
oldest child: why? you going to stop me?
amy: well... erm... yes.
oldest child: ye, old granny. whatever.
the children burst out of the door, pockets full of sweets.
amy: jack, jack get down ere now!
jack comes thundering the staris.
jack: what?
amy:those kids have been nickin our sweets again!
jack: what, ill have those young ruffians next time.
amy: what, will your on your fat ass all day up stairs!
jack grrrrrrr...
scene 5
at no. 10 junction lane- steph and danny are in bed.
steph: i enjoyed that!
danny: me too!
steph: why dont you move in with me?
danny: i might do, me and amy aren't going anywhere!
steph: why dont you go and get your stuff now and we can have an extra special night tonight.
danny: :)
danny gets dressed and leaves.
scene 6
sam sinster is ill and is comforted by an old friend.
sam: thank you for comin round, im not feeling too well.
claire:it's all right, i have nothing better to do.
sam: whats wrong with me?
claire: oh im sure it's just nothing, just a bug
sam: hopefully.
claire: don't woory!
sam drops off to sleep and claire leaves him to rest
scene 7
backstage in the bird i'th hand.
amy: did you hear the gossip before?
ste: what gossip?
amy: about danny cheatin on amy with that steph!
ste: NO!
ste: they seemed happy aswell, then he does that.
jo(in the front of the pub): amy, can i have a pint please love?
amy: ye, jus be a mo!
ste: well i never.
amy: what can i get you?
jo: pint of thwaits please.
amy: there you go.
jo: cheers.
jo goes and sits down in the corner.
scene 8
danny is walking down the road,when paul and shaun catch up with him.
shaun: so what happened then?
danny: oh not much, bit of this and that.
paul:go on, you can tell us!
danny: you really wanna know?
paul and shaun: ye!
danny: she's asked me to move in with her!
paul: what did you say?
danny:yes, im getting my stuff now.
shaun: NO!
danny: YES!
danny walks into his house.
scene 9
in his house, amy is waiting for him.
amy: bin with your tart then
danny: as a matter of fact, yes!
amy:what?
danny: and im moving out!
amy:what?
amy:where to?
danny: wouldn't you like to know.
amy: no, please.
danny: too late, goodbye
danny packs is things and heads for the door.
amy: no you can't do this!
danny: i can and i am.
amy: ple...
danny:no!
danny slams the door in her face and walks towards stephs.
amy slumps down in her chair and starts to cry.
episode 2
scene 1
stephs house. bedroom. steph and danny.
steph: im glad you decided to move in.
danny: so am i, glad to get rid of that bag.
steph: so am i!
danny:what time is it?
steph: 10:30. why?
danny: got t'get to work for 11:00
steph: best get up then.
danny gets up and out of bed with a struggle.he gets changed and ready to set up.
danny: goodbye.
steph: bye huni.
scene 2
inside the fudge packet jack is installing cctv.
jack: that should stop the young ruffians taking our sweets.
amy: so you've finally done something about it. yey!
jack: dont get sarcy!
amy: well you dont do much!
jack: thats enough, this will stop them
children laughing outside at jack.
jack falls off his ladder.
children laugh histerically, then walk away.
jack: oohh ill catch them one day!
amy: come on, calm down have a cuppa.
amy hands him a mug if tea.
jack: cheers.
scene 3
in the pub jo and johnny are discussing tactics for tonights evening at xenon. it is now 8:00 pm.
jo: so you all set for tonight?
johnny: oh yes i got a fool proof plan,u watch!
jo: we'll see.
johnny:we will.
jo: another pint love.
amy: comin right up.
jo: you want one johnny?
johnny: ye i could get another one down me before we go.
amy: there you go.
jo: cheers.
johnny: cheers.
they drink there pints and head off towards xenon.
scene 4
outside the pub. shaun and paul are hanging around.
shaun: where is he?
paul: dunno.
shaun: he should be here!
danny turns up.
paul: where have you been?
shaun: with his bird probably.
danny: oh ye.
they all enter the pub.
danny: i'll get first round in.
shaun and paul sit down.
danny: hiya can i have a 3 pints please love.
amy: sure.
amy: whats this ive been hearing about you and a certain somebody. ay?
danny: it's true.
amy: i'd back down a bit, she's a bit loose if you ask me.
danny: well im not and were happy together.
amy: don't be stupid!
amy: she'll do what you did then you'll have no-one t'go to.
danny: be quiet!
he picks up his pint.
amy: she'll break your heart.
danny: SHUT UP!
danny throws his glass down, the whole pub goes quiet and danny storms out of the pub, shaun and paul follow after him.
scene 5
jo and johnny are at the bar in xenon.
jo and johnny order drinks and go t'dance floor
jo: look at her
johnny: oohh oh ye.
jo: (whistles)
this tall blonde girl comes walking over to him. she grabs his hand and takes him to the middle to her friends.
meanwhile, johnny makes his way t'bar when a bottle is smashed over the back of his head.
jo: so whats your name then?
girl: lucy.
jo: nice to meet you lucy!
lucy: you too.
they carry on dancing until about 2:00 am.
lucy: you want t'go back t'my place?
jo: sure, just wondering where my mate is?
lucy: leave him lets go.
they go back to her house.
scene 6
amy singleton enters the bird i'th hand.
amy c: had your ex-husband in ere earlier.
amy s: i don't want to know.
amy c: i had a go at him that she'll break his heart and he shouldn't have left you!
amy s: i don't want to heat it!
amy c: ok,ok. i don't want another falling out.
amy s: good.
amy s orders a drink and sits down by herself to contemplate her future.
steph walks in to the pub
amy s: YOU,YOU took MY husband off me you SLAG!
steph slapped amy across the face.
amy c: thats enough you two, you are both barred!
amy s: thank you again steph!
amy stormed out, steph left after a minute.
scene 7
in the xenon club, the police are investigating what happened to johnny.
PC plod: well, 'e as been knocked out.
PC topham: well we need t'find out what has happened here.
PC plod: lets ask around for witnesses.
the police look around and asked for witnesses, but couldn't find anyone who saw it.
johnny became concious
PC plod: 'ello, 'ello, what happened ere then.
PC topham: what happened?
johnny: i dont really know, all i remember is going t'floor then getting hit over the back of the head by something sharp...
the_watts_rule
28-10-2005, 08:45
Good
new episode comin soon! ne1 hu reads it can the vote how gud it is plz. thnx
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