alternative eastenders

[lollymay]

i started writing a script ages ago about the caracters in eastenders. would anyone like to read it?

[Tamzi]

Yeah post it, I'll read it
xxx

[lil baby tash]

i would i would

[lollymay]

ill just give some information on it and how it starts.
den is not dead yet, just not in the script - yet
so that means that sam, chrissie and zoe are together again
sharon and dennis havent fallen in love - yet
kat and alfie are still together
mo and alfie never happened

[Tamzi]

yey no Molfie! start this soon please
xxx

[Chloe-Elise]

Cool, that sounds good, but no Sharon and Dennis :( Can't wait to read the first bit :D

[Emma-Lou]

Sounds good can't wait

[kirstienod]

Sounds cool, please post it

[Kim]

Sounds Fab. Please post it asap :)

[lollymay]

ill but some on later tonight for you

[lollymay]

This is the first part - let me know what you think please.

Part 1

“You have half an hour to get my daughter back to me or else Peggy Mitchell” Johnny Allen said down the phone and then slammed it down.
“ Johnny what are you doing threatening Peggy like that” Tina said as she walked into the room.
“You keep you nose out of this if you want to keep it” Johnny snapped
“Johnny I don’t know who you are anymore, first Ruby and now me” Tina said
“Don’t you dare talk to me like that Tina know your place” Johnny shouted in a furious rage and he stormed out of the house.
*
Over at the Mitchell house Peggy was sitting at the kitchen table with her head in her hands. Sam walked into the kitchen just as Ruby came down the stairs.
“ What’s the matter mum?” Sam asked
“Johnny Allen wants Ruby back now or else” Peggy said. Ruby froze halfway down the stairs after hearing her dad’s name.
“Well what’s the matter with that” Sam said. She had been back to Spain for the last few months and knew nothing about Johnny Allen and Ruby as she had just returned this morning.
“Johnny said he’d hurt me to get Ruby. Do me a favour Sam, please go and find Phil and Grant for me I’m so scared.” Peggy said
“Ok mum” Sam said as she left the kitchen. Ruby came down the stairs as the front door slammed.
“ This is all my fault. I should go back to my dad” Ruby said
“No you wont” Peggy said. “You stay here and I’ll see off your dad”
Suddenly there was a knock at the door.
“You stay here Ruby and don’t do anything,” Peggy said
“But what if he shuts your hand in the door again?” Ruby asked
“ He wont don’t you worry” Peggy said
Peggy marched up to the front door and half opened it.
“Let me in Peggy I’ve come to get my daughter” Johnny shouted
“your not coming in my house Johnny Allen” Peggy shouted
“I thought that might be the case,” Johnny shouted and he punched the glass and it shattered all over Peggy.
Ruby and Peggy screamed in unison.
In the next part an unlikely person saves Ruby

[big bro fan]

more more more that is so good

[the_watts_rule]

Very good!

[kirstienod]

brillant! well odne more soon please!

[Tamzi]

This is fab. More please
xxx

[lollymay]

Part 2

Johnny forced the door open on a frightened Peggy. She had small cuts all over her face and hand where the glass had cut her. Ruby opened the kitchen door.
“Are you ok Mrs Mitchell?” Ruby asked
“RUBY” Johnny yelled
“Get back in that kitchen now” Peggy yelled at Ruby. Peggy tried to push Johnny out of her front door but Johnny just laughed in her face.
“Is that all you have got Peggy” Johnny laughed
“No its not Johnny Allen” Peggy said “I’m going to stop you from seeing Ruby again”
“This is your last chance Peggy get out of my way” Johnny shouted
“Not on your life” she replied
Johnny swung his hand round and hit Peggy round the face so hard that it knocked her out. She hit the floor with a sickening thud and landed on top of the glass. Johnny looked up, Ruby had seen it all. Calmly Johnny stepped over Peggy and held out his hand to Ruby.
“ Come home Ruby darling,” he said
“No way” Ruby said and ran through to the kitchen and out through the back door. She ran across the square.
“I’m going to get you back home Ruby and I don’t care how I do it, even if I have to take half of Walford with me.” Johnny yelled
Ruby ran through the market and though the streets. Johnny was close behind her. Suddenly Ruby fell over. Johnny walked up behind her and pulled her up by her hair.
“Get off of her” a voice rang through the streets. Johnny turned round. It was Dawn.
“You can stay out of my business” Johnny said to her
“Yes and you can get off of her” Dawn said. Johnny dropped Ruby and walked up to Dawn.
“You have just made yourself an enemy young lady” Johnny said
“Do I look scared” Dawn retaliated
Johnny stormed off. Dawn walked up to Ruby and helped her off the floor.
“C’mon lets get you cleaned up” Dawn said kindly to Ruby and took her off to the Millers house.

In the next part Ruby makes a new friend

[lollymay]

ill put some more on as soon as i can

[feelingyellow]

aww, wow this is fab so far! psot the next part soon please :D

[Kim]

This is great, please do more asap.

[kirstienod]

brillant! well done more soon please xx

[lollymay]

Part three

Over at the Miller’s house Dawn was trying to calm Ruby down.
“Its all my fault. Its all my fault” Ruby said.
“No its not your fault darling, its your dads fault” Dawn said, “He shouldn’t have picked you up by your hair”
“No you don’t understand Dawn, my dad hit Mrs. Mitchell and she was knocked clean out,” Ruby sobbed.
Dawn gasped, “Are you sure?” she asked ruby. Silently, Ruby nodded with tears streaming down her face. Dawn grabbed the phone and dialed a number.
“Hello Mickey, its Dawn . . . get over to the Mitchell house now . . . I don’t care just do it . . . bye”
“Its ok now, Mickey will sort it all out” Dawn said kindly. Suddenly the front door slammed. Ruby jumped.
“Hello anyone in?” Demi asked
“Yes I'm in here” Dawn said while she tried to sort out the cut on Ruby’s head. Demi walked through to the kitchen with Aleesha on her hip. Demi took one look at Ruby and her cuts and bruises and looked in amazement at Dawn.
“What happened?” Demi asked
“Her father” Dawn said “So why aren’t you in school then.”
“Aleeshas hospital appointment” Demi said
“ Is Aleesha you little sister?” Ruby asked. Dawn and Demi looked at each other.
“No she’s my daughter” Demi said
“Really?” Ruby asked in amazement
“ Yes” Demi said. Aleesha started to cry.
“Dawn can you hold her a minute I need to run upstairs and get her bottle for her please?” Demi asked
“I can’t Dems I’m trying to sort Ruby out” Dawn said “Ruby would you mind holding her for a minute?”
“Ummm sure” Ruby said. Demi gave Aleesha to Ruby and went upstairs to get her bottle. When she came back downstairs Aleesha had stopped crying and ruby was bouncing her up and down on her knee.
“Thanks Ruby” Demi said.

[feelingyellow]

aww! that's so sweet - keep it up :thumbsup:

[lollymay]

ive finally been able to get some more parts of the script up now i'll post some more tonight