EastEnders

[big bro fan]

Hi i know that some people have written there own versions of EastEnders focusing on Leo and Demi but i decided to write the scripts but it focuses on everyone so i hope you like it here is the characters for now will have first episode up tommorow.

Mitchells
Peggy
Phil
Grant
Sam-not in jail
Tiffany-not dead
Courtney

Fowlers
Pauline
Martin
Sonia

Beales
Ian
Jane
Lucy
Peter

Millers
Mickey
Rosie
Demi
Darren
Keith
Dawn
Aleesha

Slaters
Charlie
Mo
Kat-married to Alfie
Little mo
Lynn
Stacey

Watts
Den-not dead
Chrissie
Dennis-not married or dating Sharron yet
Sharon
Vickki

Moons
Alfie
Danny
Jake
Nanna

Truemans
Yolande
Patrick
Paul

Brannings
Dot
Jim

Allens
Johnny
Ruby
Tina

others
Minty peterson
Pat evans
Naomi
Garry hobbs
Gus

Business's
Archers-owned by Mitchells
Scarlett-owned by Johnny
Chip shop-owned by Ian
Queen vic-owned by the mitchells
Cafe-owned by Ian
Laundrette-owned by Pauline and Dot
Market stall owners-Martin Alfie Mickey
Bookies-owned by the Mitchells

Hope you like it :thumbsup:

[Chloe-Elise]

Cool,that soudns good,can't wait to read it :D

[big bro fan]

I should have the first episode up today after i finish planning and writing it :o

[lil baby tash]

what buisnesses do the watts own!!!

[Tamzi]

I was about to say what do the Watts own? This sounds goo though. Yeah Paul's not dead, but you don't have Andy (sorry I liked Andy). This sounds goo though, can't wait for the first bit
xxx

[big bro fan]

Call these spoilers if you want but

the watts are too open a rival club to Johnnys with a bit of a gang war between dens people and Johnnys

also characters from the past like andy hunter ricky butcher janine butcher are going to becoming into it.

[shannisrules]

cool! cant wait to see your script

[Tamzi]

Ok that clears up everything I said. Please post it soon
xxx

[big bro fan]

i promise i will have the first episode up after EastEnders tonight on bbc1

[Tamzi]

Ok I can't wait
xxx

[Emma-Lou]

Sound interesting can not wait

[kirstienod]

Sounds cool, cant wait until first part!

[big bro fan]

i know i said today and i'm really sorry will have first episode up tommorow morning and maybe episode 2 :o

[Kim]

Sounds great. Can't wait for the first part :)

[big bro fan]

I dont know if i am going to bother its pointless as there are so many EastEnders scripts allready i might do something different :o

[princss]

nooo it sounded really good!!! please post it

[Tamzi]

Please post it. We want it. Your public want it
xxx

[big bro fan]

allright then post it later

[Tamzi]

Thank you
xxx

[big bro fan]

Scene 1
Queen Vic
[Sam is serving punters Phil and Grant are talking]

Grant:she needs a new man in her life
Phil:too right
[Sam over hears]
Sam:excuse me you would'nt happen to be talking about me
would you
Grant:no just general conversation between two brothers
Sam:well in general conversation with you Grant i dont need a new man

Scene 2
Monns house
[everyone is gathred at the breakfast table]

Jake:if you like her just ask her out
Alfie:what you's two's going on about
Jake:Danny fancys someone
Alfie:oh yeah, who is it then Pauline Fowler
Danny:no it's Sam Mitchell
Alfie:be careful
Danny:what'd you mean
Alfie:treat her right or you will ave Phil an Grant to answer to and when there done it's Peggy's turn
[Danny looks put off by the thought of Phil and Grant]
Nana:but you'r a good boy Danny i'm sure you'll be fine
Danny:[looks happier]yeah thanks Nana

Scene 3
Brannings
[Dot's making cofffe in the kitchen Jim is about to go out the door]

Dot:Jim Branning if your thinking of going to the bookies today forget it
Jim:I would'nt think of it
Dot:the lord knows gambling is wrong
Jim:well that's his opinion is'nt it
Dot:well just think about it

Scene 4
Market
[Jake and Danny are watching Alfie's stall]

Jake:where is he
Danny:i don't know but he better hurry up
[Johnny spots them and goes over]
Johny:what are you doing
Danny:working
Johnny:well you don't work for Alfie you work for me now over the club and give Billy hand
Danny:yes boss

Scene 5
Queen Vic
[Peggys at the bar Sam come's over to talk]

Sam:you don't think i need a boyfriend do ya mum
Peggy:it's up to you darlin
Sam:do you mind if i go off to lunch early
Peggy:dont bother me
Sam:thanks mum
[Sam leaves Pat comes to the bar]
Peggy:yes Pat
Pat:large gin and tonic please Peggy
Peggy:comin up
Pat:say Peggy you would'nt need any staff would you
Peggy:i don't know but if i do i will give you a call
Pat thanks


I'll put the next part of episode 1 up later

[Tamzi]

That's really good. Post it soon
xxx

[kirstienod]

Thats good. Well done. Please post more soon xx

[Kim]

Thats cool. Please post the next part soon.

[big bro fan]

next part up tommorow

[lil baby tash]

cool next part soon

[kirstienod]

Cool, cant wait!

[big bro fan]

Scene 6
Slaters house
[Lynn looks unhappy kat is worried]

Kat:what is up with you
Lynn:nothing
Kat:has Garry done something
Lynn:no
Kat:i could really use some answers more than one word long
Lynn:i want a baby
Kat:wow that came out of nowhere
Lynn:i know, i love Garry and i want his child
Kat:well your gonna have to get him into bed
Lynn:how am i gonna do that
Kat:in true classic Slater style

Scene 7
Archers
[Garry is helping Grant out with a car]

Grant:you can go home if you want
Garry:cheers Grant
[Minty walks into the garage]
Garry:here Minty fancy a drink down the vic
Minty:yeah why not
Garry:see you later Grant

Scene 8
Minute Mart
[Jim is telling Patrick about Dot]

Jim:she just hates the bookies
Patrick:you have to take a stand Jim
Jim:yeah how do i do that
Patrick:you go up to her and say women this is ma money and i do what i like with it, i do it all the time with Yolande
Yolande:Patrck stp talking and take those papers outside
Patrick:yes Yolande
Jim:what ever happned to taking control[laughs]
Patrick:shut up Jim

Scene 9
Cafe
[Ian sees Phil walk in and he goes into the back]

Jane:Ian i need you out front
Ian:i'm busy
Phil:is he hiding from me
Jane:ever since he told you to get lost and you gave hime the look he wont go anywhere near you
Phil:tell Ian i'll see him later
Jane:he's gone
Ian:dont know why you think i'm scared of him
Jane:he did'nt even do anything to you
Ian:i know
Jane:then stop hiding when ever he comes in
Ian:i can stand up to Phil Mitchell any time i like
[Martin and Sonia over hear]
Martin:prove it then
Ian:i will

Scene 10
Upstairs Queen Vic
[Sam is looking at an old photo of her and Ricky]

Peggy:you miss him dont you
Sam:yeah
Peggy:why did he leave again
Sam:because Janine caught me kissing someone and told Ricky
Peggy:should'nt have kissed im then
Sam:mum i was saying goodbye to Grant
Peggy:oh well in that case we'll get him back

Scene 11
Slaters house
[Lynn is trying on some of Kat's cloths]

Lynn:it's a bit reaveling
Kat:best way to get a man's attention
Lynn:are you sure this will work
Kat:possitive, next time he see's you he wont know what hit im

End

All the other episodes will be longer episode 2 up later today hopefully

[kirstienod]

Brillant! Well done! More soon please

[lil baby tash]

cool do more more more

[Kim]

Fab. Please do the next episode soon :)

[big bro fan]

Next episode up later tonight i need some help with a few things

Sharon is going to fall in love at christmas but i can't decide who it should be
if you could post some suggestions that would be great. i have some in mind

Dennis Grant Phil Paul or maybe somebody from the past like Simon wicks or someone.

[crazy_purple]

Sharon falling in love with Grant would be good. Or what about someone she wouldn't usually, like Johnny or Alfie :D

Great script more asap please! :p

[big bro fan]

its either going to be

shannis-sharon and dennis or
shant-sharon and grant

let me know which you perfer

If shannis the storyline would be them being found out by den etc

If shant storyline would be tiffany cheating on or leaving grant courtney would probably stay and they may get married or something

Next episode up tommorow

[Kim]

I would prefer the shannis storyline. This is great please do more soon :)

[big bro fan]

got a storyline planned which involves grant sharon and dennis which ends with dennis and sharon getting together

[big bro fan]

Scene 1
Slater's
[Lynn is doing her makeup as she is about to go out the door]

Kat:right now you ave the house to yourselfs
Lynn:right
Kat:well what you waiting for go get im
[Lynn walks out the door]

Scene 2
Cafe
[Phil walks in the cafe Ian hides in terror]

Phil:tell Ian i want a word
Jane:Ian Phil wants a word
Phil:tell im its urgent
Jane:says its urgent
Ian:i'm busy
Jane:he's busy
Phil:tell him i'll be back later[leaves]
Martin:clocks ticking
Ian:i know i will stand up to Phil

Scene 3
Upstairs Vic
[Tiffany is sat at the tv bored]

Grant:what's up with you
Tiffany:nothing
Grant:dont lie
Tiffany:i'm sick and tired of being married to you
Grant:why
Tiffany:because we never do anything
Grant:fine then
[walks away Tiffany watches]
Grant:there's the door use it
Tiffany:i will[she turns around and slaps him]it's over
[Grant follows into the bar]
Grant:don't you dare slap me you tart
Tiffany:don't you dare call me a tart
Grant:i know what you've been up to
Tiffany:what's that then
Grant:i know about you and tony
Tiffany:[worried]dont know what your talking about
Grant:last night when you went to see him where was he
Tiffany:i dont know
Grant:in another country because i told him if he showed his face again then he'd get the other arm broken
Tiffany:how could you
Grant:easy
Tiffany:where is he
Grant:Australia
Tiffany:right[she goes upstairs]
[The whole pub is in silence]
Grant:what you all staring at
[Tiffany comes back downstairs]
Tiffany:we are divorced and i'm leaving to go to tony
Grant:good ridance
Tiffany:come on Courtney
Grant:oh no she stays with me
Tiffany:don't make me choose
Grant:tough
Tiffany:then i choose Tony
[she kisses Courtney goodbye and leaves]

next part up soon

[big bro fan]

next episode up later
:cheer:

[Kim]

got a storyline planned which involves grant sharon and dennis which ends with dennis and sharon getting together

Cool :)

[Tamzi]

Nice of tiff just to leave her kid! The shannis/shant storyline sounds good
xxx

[Kim]

next episode up later
:cheer:

This is great :)

Can't wait to read the next episode :thumbsup:

[big bro fan]

Nice of tiff just to leave her kid! The shannis/shant storyline sounds good
xxx

i had to write tiff out of it because it is going to make way for a new storyline she may return i dont know

[big bro fan]

Scene 4
Upstairs vic

Phil:so she left just like that
Grant:yeah, good ridance
Phil:shame she always was good lookin
Grant:your not helpin matters Phil
Phil:i know sorry
[Peggy enters]
Peggy:i know that your upset but your single the whole of walford is availible to you
Grant:except half of them are married
Phil:never stopped you before
Peggy:stop it the pair of you
Phil and Grant:sorry mum
Peggy:i should think so, besides we have got to help Sam out
Phil:why
Peggy:she wants Ricky back
Grant:well find out where he is and i'll take her to get him
Peggy:you goin too Phil
Phil:got my own problems, why can't you go
Peggy:got the vic to run
Phil:i'll run it for you for a few days
Peggy:better start Packin

Scene 5
Car lot
[Den Dennis and Sharon are sat in the office bored]

Den:we need to sell this dump
Sharon:your right
Dennis:who can we sell it to
Den:well thinkin about it we dont need to sell it
Dennis:why not
Den:we knock it down and build a club
Sharon:what about Johnny
Den:bit of competition never hurt no one, besides if i have to i can have im taken out like that
Dennis:unless he gets to you first

Scene 6
Cafe
[Jane is alone]

Jane:we are closed
Phil:i need to talk
Jane:he's not in
Phil:damn
Jane:you can tell me
Phil:i dont know
[Jane looks at him]
Phil:allright but you might want to sit down, might take a while

Scene 7
Market
[Stacey is helping out Kat]

Stacey:dont think much to this
Kat:it will sell
Stacey:they always do
[Women walks past]
Women:excuse me how much
Kat:fiver
[Women pays and walks off]
Kat:told you
[Alfie walks behind Kat]
Alfie:guess who
Kat:Alfie
Alfie:are you availible
Kat:why
Alfie:well one were married and two my house is free all afternoon for a bit of
Kat:Stace do you mind watchin the stall
Stacey;who's gonna help me
Ruby:i'll do it
Kat:there you go, tell nan that i wont be home till tommorw maybe
[they leave]
Ruby:what's all that about
Stacey:don't ask

Scene 8
Cafe

Jane:so your my father in law
Phil:well i will be
Jane:how
Phil:you know Ian's mum
Jane:Kathy
Phil:well when Pete died me an er got together and eventually got married
Jane:wow
Phil;anyway Ian did'nt like it and would'nt leave his mother alone so i told im back off if he knew what was good for him, anyway being cocky he hit me well naturally i hit im back twice as hard
Jane:which is why he is afraid of you
Phil:bingo,anyway Kathy went to South Africa and now she wants to come back and make another go of things possibly get married again an Ian needs to know
Jane:well he'll be back any minute if you want to wait
Phil:thanks

Scene 9
Car lot
[Chrissie has just learnt Den's new idea]

Chriisie:how much money would we make
Den:loads
Chrissie:more shopping
Den:well yes but you'd also be manageress
Chrissie:let's go for it

Scene 10
Outside the Vic
[Grant Sam and Peggy are saying goodbye to Phil]

Peggy:we'll be back in a week
Grant:sure you can andle the archers
Phil:Minty an Garry are capable
Peggy:see you soon
Phil:just make sure you get Ricky back
Peggy:we will
[Phil spots Ian going into the cafe]
Phil:got to go[Hugs Sam and Peggy]
Sam:bye Phil
[Taxi drives off Phil heads for the cafe]

Scene 11
Cafe

Ian:everything allright
Jane:yeah,someone's been after you allday
Ian:who's that then
Phil:me

Next episode up tommorow

[Kim]

This is Great. Can't wait to read the next episode.

[Tamzi]

Can't wait for the next part
xxx

[crazy_purple]

more soon please :p

[princss]

more please it's great

[kirstienod]

wow! more soon please

[big bro fan]

Scene 1
Slaters
[Mo Little Mo Stacey Charlie and Lynn are at the table]

Mo:where's Kat
Stacey:with Alfie
Charlie:well they are married
Mo:well as long as he keeps his trousers on, we dont want another little moon/slater running around
Charlie:give her a break Mo, anyway where's Garry
Mo:not like i to miss breakfast
Lynn:well he's in bed, got the day off spending it with me an well you know
Stacey:i think i'll go open up, the thought of Lynn an Garry makes me heave
Lynn:cheeky

Scene 2
Moon's
[Alfie and Kat are in bed]

Alfie:i love you
Kat:me too...ang on
Alfie:what?
Kat:did you use protection
Alfie:no
Kat:i aint on the pill no more you bloody idiot
Alfie:well hang on a baby would be nice
Kat:suppose
Alfie:why don't we just keep this to ourselfs before we know for sure
Kat:allright, but your makin breakfast

Scene 3
Cafe
[Ian is in the back Jane is serving customers]

Pat:you seen Phil this mornin
[Ian hears the name aand drops all the pans]
Pat:what's wrong there
Jane:nothing i'll bring your coffee over
[She walks into the back]
Jane:you've got to get a grip
Ian:yeah with Phil as your dad Sam your Auntie an Peggy your nan
Jane:we'll deal with it

next part soon going to change layout of script

[big bro fan]

can someone please close this down for me

[crazy_purple]

Noo don't close it down, its really good, please do some more :)

[princss]

nooooo
nobody close it down !!! it's too good

[big bro fan]

allright then i'll do somemore tommorow

[big bro fan]

This is carrying on from the last episode

Queen Vic
[Phil is behind the bar a very suductive Sharon comes into the Vic]

Sharon:White wine please
Phil:coming up
Sharon:where's Grant and Sam
Phil:gone with mum to get Ricky to move back to Walford
Sharon: oh,so how you running three business's at one time
Phil:well Minty and Garry have got the Archers covered an the bookies is closed
Sharon:you got anything planned for tonight
Phil:night in front of the telly
Sharon:do you live here or at the house
Phil:me an mum an Sam live in the house
Sharon:do you want to watch the telly with me
Phil:allright then about eight, i'm staying over here anyway
Sharon:see you at eight
Phil:Tracey can you watch the bar for a bit
Tracey:sure

Archers
[Minty is alone]

Minty:where is Garry

Slaters house
[Garry and Lynn are in bed]

Lynn:does Minty know your not at work today
Garry:no
Lynn:better tell him
Garry:when i could send the whole day in bed with you
Lynn:good point
[There's a knock at the door]
Garry:i'll get it[opens door]Phil
Phil:why aint you at work
Garry:well you see me an Lynn are tryin for a baby an were upstairs
Phil:say no more just be in tommorow
Garry:will do[Closes door and runs upstairs]

Cafe
[Ian is making cups of coffee]

Phil:what i said yesterday about you coming to see me dont come till tommorow
Ian:ok
[Phil leaves]
Jane:what's that about
Ian:i don't know but i'm gonna find out

more soon

[Kim]

Great, Please do more asap.

[big bro fan]

don't panick but i have had a newer better and more improved version of Eastenders which i will post on new thread so i wont be using this no more

[Kim]

Ok, Can't wait to read your other version.