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The Mitchell hype is buzzing at the moment, so here's a daily script saga based around the bunch of slapheads and big gobs that are known as the Mitchells.
IF YOU CAN THINK OF A NAME FOR IT PLEASE TELL ME!
LONDON COURTROOM
The courtroom is a buzz with quiet conversations, in walks the judge, and a sudden silence hits.
CLERK: Will everyone please stand.
MINTY: (whispers) Here it is Bil...
JUDGE: Will the forman of the jury please stand. Have you made a decision of which you are all agreed?
JURY: Yes
JUDGE: On the chrage of armed robbery do you find the defendant, Phillip Mitchell guilty or not guilty?
JURY: Not Guilty.
BILLY & MINTY: Yeeesssss!!!!
A look of hapiness on Phil's face.
JURY: You are free to leave the courtroom Mr Mitchell....
Phil heads out of the courtroom, Billy and Minty go to greet him.
BILLY: Phil! Well done!
MINTY: Congratulations mate...
BILLY: I always knew you'd get off
PHIL: That's becuase i did nothing wrong...
MINTY: Maybe you'll learn to stop these feuds with people from now on...
PHIL: (laughs to self) You having a bird barth Minty? That's what us Mitchells are all about...adds a bit of excitement to life!
BILLY: Well you've certainly got a lot of that in store Phil...
PHIL: Tell me about it, you wait until i get my hands on that Ian Beale, he wont know what's hit him...
BILLY: Oh believe me there's more to do than beat up Beale...
PHIL: Like what?
BILLY: I'll tell you on the way back, but I've got a suprise for you...
PHIL: Oh eh? what is it?
Someone taps Phil on the shoulder, he turns around:
GRANT: ello bruv
Looks good - are you going to have some animosity between them, from the feud??
this is good. when does peggy come into it.
kirstienod
24-10-2005, 15:29
its brill well done
big bro fan
24-10-2005, 15:46
more soon please also cant wait for next devon seas episode :cheer:
This is really good. More soon please
xxx
London
Billy is driving them back to Walford, Phil and Grant are talking.
PHIL: Christ first I'm let off and now you're hear, dont think i can take much more drama at this rate!
GRANT: Yeah well it sounds like Billy boy's got a bit to let us in on, havent you?
BILLY: I'll tell you as long as you promise not to throw me out of the window...
PHIL: Must be bad news then...
GRANT: Donnno, becuase we'd chuck him out of the window just for the crack
BILLY: Ha ha, very funny, jokes aside... Sam's in jail...
PHIL: You what?
GRANT: You're joking us right! He's gotta be lying Minty?
MINTY: No it's the sad truth guys... caught digging up den's body from under the vic...
GRANT: Den?... Den Watts? Sharon's dad? I thought he was...
BILLY: Oh god that's a long story Grant, but let's just say he's dead for real this time...
PHIL: Forget the stiff for a second? Did Sam do it?
BILLY: Of course she didnt!
GRANT: Then who did? And why is she in prison for it...
MINTY: Chrissie Watts ennit? She's framed your Sam good and proper...
PHIL: You watts till i get my hands on her... she needs sortin' out!
MINTY: Then ent half of your problems!
PHIL: Tell me about it theres Ian Beale, i've got to teach that little squeal a lesson once and for all...
MINTY: Oh no worse than that....
GRANT: What?
MINTY: Go on tell him Bil...
BILLY: Well we havent got nothing to our name, no house, no Vic, no arches...no nothing...
PHIL (laughs to self) Good one Billy! You always started to get me worried for a moment...
MINTY: No it's true Phil!
GRANT: You what!!!???
PHIL: But Sam was looking after it all?
BILLY: Marcus....him and Den conned her, told her you needed to money to flee the country, so she sold everything and then he did a runner with the money...
PHIL: I do not believe this! Any other news? Have Pauline fowler gone lesbian? Has Jim had a sex change! I dont think i can take any more shocks today!
GRANT: Why didnt you tell me before now Bill? Christ put ya foot down... we need to get back to Walford!
this is getting better. keep up the good work.
Excellent BB - keep it coming!!
the following parts are an alternative return for the brothers than that shown on the actual show
PAT'S HOUSE
The doorbell rings, Peggy answers the door, in marches Johnny.
PEGGY: Look Johnny i dont want any trouble...
JOHNNY: Neither do I, all i want is my daughter home, if she does so, then there'll be no need for anymore hostility between us...
PEGGY: I dont think's its fair that you blame this all on me... if Ruby dosent want to come home its her choice...
JOHNNY: A choice influenced by that malicious gossip that you've been feeding her since she's been stopping here...
PEGGY: Not a word of it lies...
JOHNNY: I'm not debating the accuracy of what you've told Ruby, my argument is the fact that you had no right to tell her, you've as good as ruined our relationship!
Ruby walks down the stairs
RUBY: Your the one that's done that dad! By doing all those things, all Peggy's done is made me realise how evil you really are!
JOHNNY: Look Ruby i want you back at home, how can we build bridges when we're living at either end of the square? I need chance to explain my actions...
RUBY: How can you explain the things you've done dad? There's no excuse for beating up people, threateing people, pimping people...killing people! It's just evil...
Ruby runs back up the stairs and slams the bedroom door shut.
JOHNNY: (to Peggy) she what you've done Peggy? You've poisoned her against me with your venomous mouth! I'm not going to let this go!
PEGGY: Threatening old ladies, does it give you some peverse kick or something... you need to give Ruby time, she'll come back when she's good and ready, it has nothing to do with me so just leave me alone!
JOHNNY: No chance Peggy, i swear to god... if Ruby never comes home... I'll kill you!
The kitchen door bangs open, and standing in the doorway are Grant and Phil
GRANT: Not if we kill you first.
ive decided on a name for the saga: Geroutta My Script!, can you just imagine the dutchess gobbing that out!
eastenderfan_91
25-10-2005, 13:44
brilliant this is amazing please do more soon GREAT!!! :)
brilliant - keep up the good work
*winks* great name
feelingyellow
25-10-2005, 14:16
this is fab! can't wait for the next part and the title is great! :cheer:
This is fab! I prefer this kinda!!!! Love the title! x
Coming Up...
Phil and Grant take deadly revenge on the Beales.
Sam's Freed, But What About Chrissie?
A former Flame of the Mitchell Brother's Return.
Grant dates a former "dead" Walford lady
Billy's jealous of Little Mo's new man
This is fab! I prefer this kinda!!!! Love the title! x
prefer this to what?
big bro fan
25-10-2005, 14:24
So is this going to become just an EastEnders script then not like just focusing on the Mitchells?
big bro fan
25-10-2005, 14:26
Plus what about Devon Seas
So is this going to become just an EastEnders script then not like just focusing on the Mitchells?
its all Mitchell related, everystoryline contains or has relevance to the Mitchell family
big bro fan
25-10-2005, 14:31
nice
prefer this to what?
the real thing, like that entrance they made!
mikepemb
25-10-2005, 15:27
More soon please
This is looking great bb - keep it going - can't wait for the next part :D :D
PAT'S HOUSE
PEGGY: Boys...
Grant charges towards Johnny and pins him against a wall
PEGGY: Grant dont! He's not worth it!
PHIL: He threatened to kill you!
PEGGY: He's all talk, let him go Grant, Phil stop him!
PHIL: Dont hit him Grant...
Phil fights Grant off, Johnny straightens his tie
PHIL: Let me do it for you
Phil punches Johnny hard in the stomach, he slides down the wall onto the floor. Phil starts kicking Johnny violently
PEGGY: Phillip! Stop it right now! You're hurting him!
GRANT: Phil dont go crazy!
Grant grabs Phil back and clears out of the way. Johnny ctahces his breath and gets up...
JOHNNY: I take it these two are the prodigal sons Peggy... you need to teach them to control that violent temper of there's...
PHIL: You're lucky I haven't killed ya!
JOHNNY: If you think these two are going to scare me Peggy then you're very much mistaken, I've made it clear I want Ruby back, I'll leave you lot to have your family reunion...
Johnny walks out of Pat's house...
GRANT: Who was that chancer mom?
PEGGY: Johnny Allen! He's one of the biggest gangsters in London and you just nearly killed him! You stupid boys!
PHIL: Right that's it...
Grant and Phil start to walk out of Pat's house
PEGGY: Wha...what are doing now?
PHIL: We havent finished with him yet!
They leave Pat's house, Peggy has a look of worry on her face.
This is fab more soon! Go phil! lol!
PEGGY: Phillip! Stop it right now! You're hurting him!
Can't see the rough Phil being called Phillip. It sounds so weird1 This is great bb. More soon
xxx
Chloe-Elise
25-10-2005, 18:33
This is great:D more soon please
Emma-Lou
25-10-2005, 18:49
This is fab more soon please
kirstienod
25-10-2005, 20:02
Brillant! Well done! More soon please
*whistling* MORE MORE MORE PLEASE :D This is great
sarahwelford
26-10-2005, 23:26
brill more soon please
This is great bb, Please do more :)
I'll get another one out today, was busy yesterday what with one thing and another
Albert Square
Johnny is heading back towards his house... Phil and Grant march out of Pat's house.
GRANT: eh Allen! We ent finished with you yet!
JOHNNY: Really? Well I've finished with you...i dont wanna talk...
GRANT: Neither do I... I just wanna knock your bleeding block off!
JOHNNY: And have the police arresting you within an hour of returning to Walford? Dont make me laugh, you know aswell as i do that youve got to get Sam out of Jail, it'll be a miracle if you manage it...beacuse she's as guilty as sin!
PHIL: Never! Samn couldn't even crack a nut never long a blokes skull!
One by one the curtains twitch around Albert Square as the 3 of them argue.
JOHNNY: Well the police obviously think otherwise...besides this argument isnt with me so just leave me alone...
GRANT: You expect us to let you walk home unharmed, after what you said to mom?
JOHNNY: Is violence your only answer? You make me laugh...
PHIL: No we make you scared...
JOHNNY: You two? Your as scary as pinky and perky. Look you know the score if someone disrecpts the family, you give out a bit of verbal, say things you dont mean.... that;s what hapopened with peggy...
PHIL: Your a gangster Johnny! Threats like that have a nasty habbit of actually happening...
JOHNNY: Common... i may be a "gangster" but i have my morals, no women or kids...thats the golden rule...look we havent got off to the best of starts around here, but believe me i dont see the need for a pety feud...
PHIL: No i suppose your right...
GRANT: Dont give into him so easily thats what he wants Phil!
PHIL: Look Grant...we've got enough on our plate as it is...
JOHNNY: Shock horror, it appears that one of you has some common sense, listen to your brother Grant, you'll go far...
PHIL: Common Grant, let's go back inside...
GRANT: I swear Allen! It isnt over!
Great. Please do more asap.
feelingyellow
27-10-2005, 18:34
fab! more soon please! :cheer:
the_watts_rule
28-10-2005, 08:45
Excellent :cheer:
:cheer: brilliant keep going
Albert Square
Peggy walks out into the square:
Peggy: Phil!
Intercut: Ian has a look of horror on his face
Peggy: Grant!
Intercut: A shocked look on Sharon's face.
Peggy: Get in 'ere right now!
Peggy drags Phil and Grant back into Pat's house.
Johnny's House
Tina:Are they who i think they are?
Johnny: Yes
Tina: And what have you done to upset them? Is it Peggy?
Johnny: Leave me alone Tina! I need to make an important phone call...
Tina: But...
Johnny: Just go to bed...
Tina walks out, Johnny picks up the house phone and dials a number.
Queen Vic
A silent vic at midnight, all of a sudden the phone rings. Sharon comes down the staircase...
Sharon: Hello? The Queen Vic?
Johnny: Aww Sharon...its Johnny...Johnny Allen...
Sharon: It's a bit late to call isnt it Johnny?
Johnny: I need to speak to Chrissie, it's urgent....
Sharon calls Chrissie, who rushes down the staircase.
Chrissie: Who is it?
Sharon: Johnny
Chrissie: Alright thanks... go back to bed...
Sharon walks off, Chrissie picsk up the phone and whispers
Chrissie: Hello Johnny...what is it? Is it about the sale?
Johnny: Oh no nothing like that, the sale's still on...
Chrissie: So what is it then?
Johnny: I thought I'd warn you, Peggy Mitchell's boys are back in Walford...
Chrissie: What Phil and Grant? How?
Sharon whos listenting is shocked.
Johnny: I dont know, but it's pretty obvious you'll be top of their wanted list, so stay safe okay?
Chrissie: Oh Johnny.... look, i need to...
Johnny: Goodbye.
Johnny puts the phone down, Chrissie looks worried, Sharon walks down the stairs.
Sharon: Chrissie? What is it?
Chrissie: (worried) it's Phil and Grant...
Sharon: What about them?
Chrissie: .... they're back....
worried faces all around
duff duff duff duff - :cheer: Roll on the next installment :cheer:
This is fab bb, please do more soon.
Pat's House
Peggy, Billy, Grant and Phil are sitting around the kitchen table.
Peggy: Why you had to go and challenge Johhny Allen i do not know...
Billy: I'd have loved to have seen the look on his face!
Phil: Apparantyl he wasnt scared of us...said he dosent want a feud...
Peggy: Good becuase nethier do I...so lets leave it at that shall we?
Grant: Fat chance...
Peggy: Grant! Us Mitchells are capable of anything...but not when youve got 3 jobs to do at once...Johnny is the least of our worries at the moment...
Billy: So then we got a plan?
Grant: I say we go round Walford, beat the hell out of everyone who's in our bad books and get what we want...
Peggy: And end up down the nick... no for once Grant violence is not the answer...
Phil: Mom's right, we need to be clever, not let our fists do the talking... we need to reason with people, get them to see things our way...
Billy: Youve got the reputation, just use that, theres no need to beat someone up, just say that you will...
Grant: Blooming hell, has Billy grown a brain since I've been away...
Peggy: Enough! We've got enough enemies at the moment without fighting amongst ourselves... we've got no time for petty grudges... we need to get my Sam out of Jail...
Phil: Well its obvious this Chrissie bird is the key to that...
Peggy: She's a clever woman Phil... she's covered her tracks well, no one believes Sam, they all think that Chrissie is as innocent as a bleeding nun!
Phil: We need to take the slow game... get her trust...we need a confession out of her... then we can use that to get Sam out of jail, and the Vic back where it belongs...with the Mitchells.
Grant: Sounds like a plan to me...
Billy: Wow....but what about Ian,... and Johnny and er... Marcus...
Phil: They can wait, but they'll wish they've never been born...
:clap: This is getting better by the min BB :cheer:
Chloe-Elise
28-10-2005, 19:50
This is great :D please post more soon
feelingyellow
28-10-2005, 20:51
fab, more soon please :cheer:
well ive spent all day planning out how this story is going to pann out... problem is you'll have a long wait before the mitchells get the vic...but hopefully it will be worth it
yay another great part bb. I dont no how you do it. and im sure it will be worth it.
Pat's House
It's late at night, everyone is asleep, Billy is sleeping on the sofa...in walks Phil who pours himself a drink from the bar. Billy wakes up...
Billy: Phil?...what you doing up?
Phil: oh...couldnt sleep...so i thought id have a drink...
Billy: ent you meant to be cutting down?
Phil: i think i deserve one after the day I've had...
Phil walks towards the sofa and sits down.
Phil: budge up... i doono im gone for a few months and all hell breaks loose...there's never a dull moment in the life of Phil Mitchell...
Billy: I tried to do my best Phil honestly, but i mean theres no way out of our troubles...
Phil: There's always a way Bil' if you Put your mind to it...
Billy: The only thing i can see hapenning is Sam getting out, the rest of it tpugh...its impossible...theres no way you can get back the Vic and all that...
Phil: Trust me i will Billy, that pub belongs to the Mitchells, no exceptions...
Billy: Yeah well its a good job you come when you did, because Johnny's about to buy it...
Phil: Is that a fact?
Billy: For some mystery buyer apparantly... and Chrissie wont sell to the Mitchells, she's made it clear...
Phil: That'll soon change, so then...what's mom done to upset this Johnnny bloke?
Billy: Oh its all over the vic, told the world what hes really like, and his daughter Ruby heard it all, and well theyve had a big barny and he's holding Peggy fully responsible...
Phil: I donno...he dont seem that bad...
Billy: He isn't i mean the night you came back, It was Johnny that gave me money for you to escape...
Phil: Really?
Billy: Yeah, so he ent all bad
Phil: So it seems, looks like he could be of use to us if we want to nail this Chrissie...
phil has a smile on this face as he concocts a plan...
Trust me i will Billy, that pub belongs to the Mitchells, no exceptions...
well thats certainly true.
yay our plan is working lol
Another brilliant eppy - keep going :D
this is better than the real thing.
yay our plan is working lol
Another brilliant eppy - keep going :D
isnt it just...we'll be taking over elstree within six months! :lol:
Pat's House - Morning
Pat, Peggy and Ruby are in the kitchen. Pat is cooking breakfast...
Ruby: What was all that shouting last night?
Peggy: Oh it was my boys: Phil and Grant, they've come back to help me out...
Ruby: What with dad?
Peggy: .... and other things. I donno Pat isnt it great to have my boys back...
Pat: bloomin marvelllous... i am going to be getting any rent off them?
Peggy: no, but think of it as repaying the guilt that comes from stealing this house off us in the first place!
Pat: Peggy....
Phil and Grant walk in just before an argument starts
Peggy: Boys! Morning darlings! How did you sleep?
Grant: Not well kept getting whiffs of cheap perfume...
Peggy: Well it wasnt me i assure you!
Pat gives off a dirty look.
Peggy: You havednt meet Ruby yet have you? Ruby... these are my boys...
Ruby: Hello
Phil: Johnny Allen's girl, what's she doing here?
Peggy: Long story, but shes here for the forseeable future...
Grant: Anyways we're off out Mom...
Peggy: What about breakfast...?
Grant: We'll eat out, we've got a busy day ahead of us...
Peggy: Okay but dont do anything stupid...
Phil: We wont!
Phil and Grant leave...
Ruby: They arent gonna fight with dad are they Peggy?
Peggy: No, my boys wouldnt do such a thing...
Pat chockes on her tea, Peggy gives her a dirty look
Wow! This is really good! More soon :)
Chloe-Elise
29-10-2005, 11:59
Brilliant :D I love it,more soon please
isnt it just...we'll be taking over elstree within six months! :lol:
six months nah...six weeks more like....were've planned out a good 15 years of storylines
six months nah...six weeks more like....were've planned out a good 15 years of storylines
only mitchell related... so far! :rotfl:
Brill, Please do more soon :)
Emma-Lou
29-10-2005, 12:30
It's fabulous you are a really good script writer
Well done bb - another excellent eppy, keep em coming :D
feelingyellow
30-10-2005, 10:37
fab!!! can't wait for the next part - it's great :thumbsup:
Albert Square
Phil and Grant walk out of Pat's house and head off down Bridge Street, faces are shocked to see them back.
Jim: Is that who i think it is?
Dot: Oh I say! Its Grant and Phil!
Phil: Suprise suprise we're the talk of the square...
Grant: Nice to know we're wanted...
Phil: I didnt say that did i?
the pair laugh.
Grant: So then whats on the agenda today?
Phil: You can find something to occupy yourself with for a bit...I'm off to talk to Johnny Allen...
Grant: Johnny!? Well I'll come with you...
Phil: And knock his block off in the process...no i need to sort things out with him... we need his help...
Grant: No we dont, not from him, he's scum...have you got a short term memory, he threatened to kill mom!
Phil: Look Grant we cant do all this on our own, and the Mitchells have made themseleves unpopular around Walford, we need to make some alliances if were gonna get anything sorted...
Grant: Look im not happy about this...
Phil: Well its a good job that you havent gotta get involved, look it'll work out trust me, then afterwards you can do what the hell you like to him? okay?
Grant: Yeah alright
Phil: I'll phone you when i need you...
Grant: Alright bruv...
Phil walks off, Grant heads for the cafe.
Sharon: Grant!
Grant turns around and see's Sharon walking towards him...
Sharon: I'd heard you were back...
Grant: I think we need a talk dont you?
Sharon raises her eyebrow, they head to the cafe
:cheer: This is fantastic - roll on next part.... :cheer:
big bro fan
30-10-2005, 13:46
fantastic as always
:thumbsup:
Scarlets
Amy and Johnny are unloading the delivery.
Amy: So then, you and this Tina, are you serious?
Johnny: Wow, whats this? I cant be doing with questions like this first thing in the morning...
Amy: Why cant answer them?
Johnny: No it's just...
Amy: It's just what?
Phil walks into Scarlets, their conversation stops.
Phil: Johnny...
Johnny: Look Phil i dont want another argument here, its not the time nor the place...
Phil: Well it's just aswell that i ent looking for one then, ennit?
Johnny gets out his wallet and gives Amy some money.
Johnny: Look have the day off, go up west and buy yourself something on me, okay?'
Amy: Not like I've got much of a choice is it...
Amy takes the money and walks off.
Phil: The Latest Squeeze?
Johnny: Look what do you want Phil, I've got a club to run here, so get to the point...
Phil: I've been speaking to Billy...
Johnny: and?
Phil: And he told me what you did for me... when i came back...
Johnny: when you were arrested you mean?
Phil: Yeah...when i was arrested... he told me your raised some funds for me to get out of the country...
Johnny: I only did it to get Billy off my back...look Phil where is this leading?
Phil: Well I'd like to thank you for that, not many people would have helped me out like you did...and well I've come to make the peace...
Johnny: That's very noble of you Phil, something gives me the idea that if that ogre of a brother was with you, the conversation would have ended up in a comeplety different direction...
Phil: (laughs to self) Yeah, well that's Grant for you...
Johnny: Can i get you a drink?
Phil: Yeah go on, and orange juice...
Johnny: A bit light isnt it?
Phil: Yeah well i used to be an alcholic...
Johnny: Oh right, well it can ruin the strongest of men, alcoholism, anyway Phil i cant see you coming all the way down here just to make the peace, I'm sure you have some hidden agenda...?
Phil: we need your help Johnny... we need you to get Sam out of jail...
Fab stuff honey, just caughted up! :)! More soon! x
feelingyellow
30-10-2005, 16:05
fab, post the next part soon please! :cheer:
Cafe
Sharon and Grant are sitting down at a table drinking tea.
Grant: So then, see you've changed, your more glamorous...
Sharon: Thanks...
Grant: Didnt say it was a good thing did i? I preferred the sassy sharon... by all acounts youve changed a lot...
Sharon: Well we cant all live in the past now can we? Look I dont want you here anymore than anyone else, but if you are staying then i dont want a constant reminder of well...ya know...
Grant: What, when you screwed my brother?
Sharon: Dont make it sound so sordid grant!
Grant: Well it was...
Sharon: And youve never made any mistakes? Youve never cheated...i find that hardly unlikely...
Grant: Look Sharon, i didnt come here to argue, i've moved on, believe it or not, whats done is done, we need to move on, and at least be civil for old times sake...
Sharon: Suppose, but I'm not having you or Phil bad mouthing Chrissie...
Grant: Why not? She killed your dad Sharon!
Sharon: Says who? Sam!? Well shes hardly going to admit smashing his skull in now is she...
Grant: Im not asking you to agree with us, im just asking you to leave us be... we need to set our minds at least, see justice is done, and well... if chrissie is innocent then youve got nothing to worry about have you?
Sharon raises her eyebrow in exceptance.
Grant: So then...I've heard rumours that you married your brother?
Sharon: Oh shut up Grant, it isnt like that, it's typical of you to jump to conclusions...
Grant: What's that all about?
Sharon: We're not blood related...
Grant: Oh so that makes it all alright?
Sharon: Look im not going to argue with you Grant, at least Ive settled dwon rather than bedding half of Brazil...
Grant: I have settled down actually
Sharon: Oh?
Grant: She's called Cara, we've been together 4 years, and pefectly happy...
Sharon: Bet you havent stayed faithful...
Grant: Of course not, its me Sharon, not the pope, there's always them...(looks at sharon seductivley) temptations...
big bro fan
01-11-2005, 16:36
brilliant as always
feelingyellow
01-11-2005, 20:49
excellent! loved the last line :cheer:
Scarlets
Johnny and Phil walk into the office.
Johnny: Take a seat...
They sit down...
Johnny: I dont see how i can help you Phil...?
Phil: Chrissie could go tomorrow if she wanted, but shes got to sell the Vic...your her key to that... well if she thought that you were backing out then she'd get worried wouldnt she?
Johnny: Obviously...where is this leading Phil?
Phil: I need her down here, crying her eyes out, begging you for the vic, and well you can get her to confess...
Johnny: Confess to me? That's not going to get Sam out of jail Phil...
Phil: No but a cctv tape of it will...
Johnny: (laughs to self) good plan...only problem is...what do i benefit from this?
Phil: You get to see justice...is that enough?
Johnny: If i was into justice Phil id have been banged up more times a prostiute's...
Phil: Ruby... I'll get her back for you...
Johnny: You make it sound like a game of chess Phil, you checkmate the queen and ill give you the pawn, i will not have my daughter broung into your deals!
Phil: Well do you want her back or not?
Johnny: Of course i do...
Phil: And I'll make it happen...if you help me...so then have we got ourselves a deal?
Johnny: Yes
Chloe-Elise
03-11-2005, 21:26
Brilliant :D I love this,more soon please
Queen Vic
Jake is fixing a large plasma screen televison to the wall. Chrissie is watching him.
Jake: I still dont get why your wasting so much money on a televison, when we're leaving next week...
Chrissie: Becuase we dont know that yet, and this beuty will get the punters in making Johnny want to buy the place...
Jake: Ahhh i see...
Chrissie: See I'm not just a pretty face...
Grant is sitting down drinking a point. Grant's phone rings: it's Phil.
Grant: (into phone) Alright bruv? You what!? Oh ok... tra.
Grant walks over to Chrissie and Jake.
Chrissie: Oh god here he comes...
Jake: Look we dont want no trouble Grant
Grant: Well it's just aswell i dont want to give you any... I'd actually like to make an offer on this place...
Chrissie: Yes well no chance, like i told your mother I'm never gonna sell this pub to a Mitchell...
Grant: Oh, so who you gonna sell it to then? becuase I've just been speaking to Johnny and he's informed me that he's no longer intrested in buying this place...
Chrissie: You what? No your lying....
Grant: Am I? Oh well you dont wanna accept my offer, im off...
Grant smiles and walks out of the Vic. Chrissie is worried
Chrissie: You dont think he was telling the truth do you?
Jake: I dont know, but you'd better go down and find out right now!
Scarlets
Chrissie rushes down the stairs and into Johnny's office.
Johnny: Oh don't bother knocking, I'm not doing anything...
Chrissie: Oh im sorry, it's just...
Johnny: It's just what?
Chrissie: Grant Mitchell's informed me that you arent buying the vic!
Johnny: Yes that's correct...
Chrissie: But Johnny we had a deal!
Johnny: No we didnt Chrissie, you had a deal with the mystery buyer, I was just the middle man...
Chrissie: Let me know who they are, I'll have a word...
Johnny: There's no point, I've told you they dont want to buy your pub...
Chrissie: Johnny im desperate! You know i need to get out of Walford!
Johnny: Why?
Chrissie: You know why...becuase of the Mitchells, they are making my life hell, branding me a murderer to everyone that will hear...
Johnny: Yes well they're telling the truth arent they?
Chrissie: Exactly! But i cant wait aroiund whilst they dig up the truth now can I? They're right, I killed Den, and if the police find out then im done for...
Johnny: If... i was to buy the vic...then i'd want you to tell me what happened that night...
Chrissie: Why dyou want to know?
Johnny: Just curious i suppose, but if im going to give you 500 k, id think you'd do what i say?
Chrissie closes the office door and sits down.
Chrissie: Well...what do you want to know?
Johnny: The details...what did you do....how did you do it?
Chrissie: Pauline fowler's dog doorstop, i bashed him over the head with it... story over...now look Johnny...
Johnny: And Sam?
Chrissie: What about her?
Johnny: Is she innocent?
Chrissie: Yeah, poor cow, she didnt do a thing wrong, but if its her or me...id rather it be her eating lumpy pooridge for the rest of her days...
Johnny laughs at this, Chrissie smiles
Chrissie: So then, we got a deal?
Johnny: Yes, we have...
Chrissie gets out the contract from her handbag and Johnny signs it...
Is it only me that thinks Johnny is up to something? Fab BB more soon please
xxx
feelingyellow
04-11-2005, 21:47
fab! next part soon please :cheer:
Scarlets
Johnny is on the phone to someone, Grant and Phil walk in..
Johnny: Um look Steve, I'll call you back...ok, bye... (puts phone down) boys what can i do for you?
Phil: Did she turn up?
Johnny: Yes she turned up...
Grant: And?
Johnny turns on the tv and the cctv of chrissie's confession plays:
Chrissie: Pauline fowler's dog doorstop, i bashed him over the head with it... story over...now look Johnny...
Johnny: And Sam?
Chrissie: What about her?
Johnny: Is she innocent?
Chrissie: Yeah, poor cow, she didnt do a thing wrong, but if its her or me...id rather it be her eating lumpy pooridge for the rest of her days...
Johnny stops the tape.
Grant: Brilliant!Johnny i could kiss you!
Johnny: (laughs to self) Yesterday you wanted to punch me...
Grant: Yeah well thats all forgotten, i dont know how to repay you for this...
Johnny: By getting my daughter back
Phil: That'll be no problem, I'll have her sent round this evening...
Johnny hands the tape to Phil. They shake hands.
Phil: Thanks for this Johnny
Grant: Right then? If we play our cards right we could blackmail her out of the vic before we send this to the police...
Johnny: Um... that may be a bit of a problem...
Grant: Why?
Johnny: Becuase Chrissie has signed the Vic over to me!
Phil: You what!?
Johnny: Dont worry, it's just to make her think everythings going her way...she's revealing the new owner tonight and then shes off, and well if the police can catch her in the act...
Grant: But the Vic belongs to us!
Johnny: Im not saying it dosent Grant, once the dust is settled I'll give it to you, you'll just have to be patient, Sam should be your first priority now...
Phil: Yeah she is... goodbye Chrissie Watts
feelingyellow
05-11-2005, 13:39
fab :thumbsup: can't wait for the next part!!!
Queen Vic
The Vic is crowded with people: its the unveling night of the new owner. Gary, Minty and co are watching West Ham on the new plasma televison.
Dot: Oh i cant bear the tension a moment longer Pauline...
Pauline: Oh well its no surprises whos going to get it, the mitchell always have everything their own way, oh speka of the devils...
In walk Phil and Grant who go up to the bar.
Chrissie: Phil...Grant...i dont want any trouble tonight, its my last night and i want it to be a memorable one...
Grant: Oh it will be that alright...
Chrissie rings the bell, everyone looks at her.
Chrissie: Ladies and Gentlemen can i have your attention please. As you know, these last few months have been an emotional struggle for me, having to bury by beloved Den... and to keep myself strong when some doubted my innocence... in my 18 months in Walford I've had.... an eventful time, but now its time for me to move on....to pastures new....
Pat: Get on with it! Who's the new owner...
Chrissie: (laughs) Yes yes, i was getting to that... ladies and gentlemen i present to you the new owner of the Queen Victoria Public House....
She opens the curtains to the doorway, and out walks Johnny.
Chrissie... Johnny Allen...
There are shocks all over the room.
Dot: Oh i say!
Phil and Grant have looks of dissapointment on their faces...
Chrissie: For once, it looks like you Mitchells dont get what you want... Ladies and Gentlemen a toast to Johnny Allen!
All: Johnny Allen!
The Vic doors bang open, In marches Peggy, followed closley by Riddick. Chrissie and Jake look worried, they try and leave from the back... phil is there, they tried and leave from the side...Grant is there...
Peggy: Wait right their folks! I've got something to show you
Peggy waves a video tape in her hands, Chrissie gulps and awaits her fait....
:cheer: Keep em coming BB - its great :cheer:
feelingyellow
08-11-2005, 21:28
uh-oh she's gonna get found out ... this is so fab! can't wait for the next part :D
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