Family Ties

[Angeldelight]

Oooh... it's all coming out now... can't wait to see what Jake and Danny do... hehe... please post more... more more more...

[Layne]

Get back here right now and post that last part!!!!
You can't just leave us like that!!!
This is great though!
Luv ya too
Layne
x x x

[Rach33]

FINAL PART so thanks to Layne, Helen, Jake Moon Rox, di marco and all the other readers your all brill thanks alot and ENJOY :wub: :bow:

As they stood by her grave the pain they felt was excruciating burying their sister and her baby wasn’t how they had planned the week
Standing by the trees a familiar face watched them a tear escaping her pale cheeks she had to see them make sure they were ok
Danny looked over his shoulder and caught of glimpse of the figure he did a double take but the second time he looked she’d gone
It had all gone and it was all over, the Family Ties had been broken
Jake and Danny stepped away from the grave Danny headed over to Alfie and Nana whilst Jake turned to the presence beside him
Chrissie- come on I’ll drive you home
Jake- Danny
Chrissie- Danny will be fine you need a bit of time too
She took his hand in hers and led him towards the waiting car
Jake stopped her
Jake- I love you
Chrissie smiled
Chrissie- what brought this on
Jake- Tara did look where she is life’s too short
Chrissie lent towards him and kissed him
Chrissie- life is too short your right
Jake placed an arm around her waist as they walked to the car
Chrissie- by the way in case you were wondering I love you too
Jake opened the passenger door smiling and he climbed in
Chrissie turned on the engine and they left then cemetery
The figure stood by the tree once more staring after the car it was time to go
When one life ends another begins, when one door closes another opens, when you have the feeling all is lost there is always someone there to give you something to believe in,
It is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.

Lyrics Used

Celine Dion - (If There Was) Any Other Way
Oasis - Don't Look Back In Anger

[Layne]

WOW wow wow wow wow!!
That was a truly amaing end to your truly amazing script!!
Very sad though, with tara and everything, but good the whole JC thing!
I loved that, every single part was amizingly written and was very enjoyable to read
so thank you and well done
:cheer:
Even though i'm sad that its finished!

luv ya
Layne
x x x

[Rain_]

That was probably the most spectacular piece of fiction i have ever read. One question....who was watching from the trees?

[Rach33]

That was probably the most spectacular piece of fiction i have ever read. One question....who was watching from the trees?

Oh my god thankyou so much that's the nicest thing anyone ever said to me awwww you made my day I'm glad you enjoyed it

Tara was watching them making sure they were ok

[Tamzi]

That was a brilliant script. If ee could write something like this they would win every award. The bit with Tara watching was so sad, but the Jc bit was great. I am so sad that ended but it was amazing. cant wait for more of your work.
xxx

[Layne]

Tara was watching them making sure they were ok

Might sound stuipd but i thoiugh she was dead?

[Angeldelight]

Oh My God... WOW... WOW... WOW... i have loved this script since your started writing it... but WOW... that was an amazing ending... fabulous... fantastic... i'm lost for words... WOW... it was so sweet they way she was watching them... i'm in floods of tears... the JC bit was really good... awwwwwwwwwwwww... who oh why did this have to end... WOW... you better be really proud of yourself... it's amazing babe... well done...

[Rach33]

Might sound stuipd but i thoiugh she was dead?

She is she was just checking a sort of visit from the grave

[Layne]

She is she was just checking a sort of visit from the grave

Oh ok, i get it!!! Grweat!!xxxx

[di marco]

brill! :D wow that was great! it was so sad though im almost crying! loved reading it! :)