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eastenderfan_91
27-08-2005, 15:42
Please post your comments hope you like it
It was the beginning of the new school term and Demi was dreading going to school, she was dumped by her boyfriend at the end of the last school term and it was said that they would be in the same class as each other this term, she hated him
Demi: Mum I don't want to go back to school
Rosie: Sure you do see all your mates again
Darren: Its only coz she is in the same class as Dean
Rosie: He aint worth it babe just forget bout him
Demi still didnt want to go but then she thought that he werent going to stop her so she collected her school things kissed her mum and dad goodbye and closed the door behind her
Rosie: That's my girl
It was registration and all the classes had been changed around and everyone was split up. It turnt out that Dean was not in Demis class after all she was so happy
Teacher: Your late Leo
Demi looked round and saw Leo Taylor at the door she couldn't believe it he was in her class she looked to the seat next to her and saw it was empty
Teacher: Leo sit over there next to that girl please
He pointed at Demi, Demi had fancied Leo for a long time and couldn't believe he was in her new class and sitting next to her
Teacher: Ok class don't make to much noise I won't be long just going to the headmasters office, the headmasters office was miles away from their class so they would be on their own for quite a long time
Leo: Hiya im Leo who are you?
Demi: Im Demi
Leo: I like your name Demi, i don't know anyone in this class really part from mates of mates what bout you
Demi: Don't know anyone
Leo: O ok well you know me
Leo was smiling at Demi and Demi was smiling back
Leo: Your really nice you know
Demi: Yer your nice too
It was the end of the first day and she had loved every minute with being with Leo
Leo: Ok well O will see you tomorrow yer
Demi: Yer i have loved every minute
Leo: Me too
Just then Dean walked by, dean was gorgeous he had blue eyes and blonde spiked hair
Dean: Hi Dems can i talk to you
Demi: Go away Dean
Dean: I need to talk to you babe
Demi: Don't call me babe
Leo: Yer don't call her babe
Demi looked at Leo in disbelief
Dean: Who are you?
Leo: Im Demis new boyfriend so get out of here
Leo took Demis hand and Demi held on tight then Leo kissed her passionately right in front of Dean
Dean: But Dems I want you back
Demi: Dean i really like Leo, i have liked him a long time and if you liked me you shouldnt have dumped me i am sorry but no i dont want you back
Leo was in such disbelief but he was so happy as he felt the same for her all he did when Dean left was keep kissing Demi
hope you liked it please post your comments after you have read it thank you
xXxJessxXx
27-08-2005, 16:48
awwwww so sweet, i love reading these Demi and Leo storys. do more soon , so sweet :)
charz 4 eva
27-08-2005, 19:30
rele good well done
Leo_in_ee_rules
27-08-2005, 19:56
Its great carry on, i love reading demi and leo scripts!!!
kirstienod
28-08-2005, 10:52
great! carry on soon
eastenderfan_91
28-08-2005, 12:40
thank you for posting all your comments!
It was 6 o clock and Demi was getting ready to go out and see her friends on her estate, she didnt know were Leo lived but she thought it was some where near
Keira: Hey Dems
Demi: Hiya
Keira: Did ya have a good day at school?
Demi: Yer thanks it was great and i also have a boyfriend
Just then Dean walked passed them and looked at Demi he smiled at her
Dean: Demi can i talk to you
Keira: It aint him is it!
Demi: Na it aint if i talk to you it will only be 5 minutes
Dean: Yer great
Demi: Ok
Dean took Demi to the side and began telling her how much he loved her and wanted her back
Dean: I really love you Demi don't go out with Leo go out with me
Demi: Dean I really loved you and you broke my heart i aint going to take you back
Dean was getting angry he started to pull her to a quite place she began to panic he was shouting at her she couldn't see her friends anymore
Leo saw some of Demis friends
Leo: Where is Demi
Keira: Why do you wanna know?
Leo: Coz im her boyfriend
Keira: Oh ok
Keira looked around she couldn't see her
Keira: Well she was here
Leo: What so where is she now?
Keira: Deans got her
Leo: What her ex
Demi screamed
Leo: Dems where are you
Keira: Leo Dean isn't a nice boy he is really violent
Dean was holding Demis mouth shout and shouting at her to get back with him
Leo: Boys!
All Leos mates come running over to him
Leo: Boys Deans got my girl keira you come to
Demi managed to break free
Demi: Help! Help!
Demi saw a group of boys running towards her and Dean was running after her
Leos mate: Oi Leo here
Leos mate ran up to Demi she was crying she knew Leos mate and she hugged him
Demi: He's gunna kill me
Leos mate: No he aint we aint gunna let him
Leo came running over
Leos mate: Leo she pretty scared
Leo took Demi of his mate
Leo: Dems you ok
Demi: Hes gunna kill me
Leo: Dems i aint gunna let him
Leo saw Dean he was in site he told Demi to go with Keira whist he dealt with Dean
Dean: Let me see her Leo
Leo: You just scared my girl i aint letting you no where near her, now get this into your thick head ok shes mine now and i don't want you anywhere near her you do and you'll be sorry
please post your comments
xcutiekatiex
28-08-2005, 15:29
well good more soon please!
charz 4 eva
28-08-2005, 16:01
brilliant story keep going
Leo_in_ee_rules
29-08-2005, 20:11
Its great please carry on
kirstienod
12-09-2005, 18:47
great! please carry it on
Chloe-Elise
12-09-2005, 19:31
Its great please do some more soon :)
Leo_in_ee_rules
12-09-2005, 20:25
Yer, please carry on
kirstienod
20-09-2005, 18:11
Brilliant, more soon!
charz 4 eva
20-09-2005, 20:59
this story is good do more soon
kirstienod
21-09-2005, 16:36
great, more soon.Im addicted!
i_luv_dennis
21-09-2005, 16:38
this story is good do more soon
i agree :thumbsup:
kirstienod
27-09-2005, 17:27
its brill! carry on
kirstienod
02-10-2005, 18:57
:D
kirstienod
11-10-2005, 18:42
More soon!
kirstienod
12-10-2005, 16:18
It's a great story, please continue
kirstienod
15-10-2005, 08:36
More soon!
big bro fan
17-10-2005, 16:30
Its really good
big bro fan
17-10-2005, 16:31
I forgot to say i cant wait to see what happnes next
kirstienod
19-10-2005, 17:33
Hello? Lol
kirstienod
22-10-2005, 09:17
More soon xx
shannisrules
22-10-2005, 16:54
its great are you continuing with this story ?
Jada-GDR
22-10-2005, 17:05
aawww that was really sweet! you should write more stuff like that
kirstienod
23-10-2005, 18:39
awww! more soon
shannisrules
23-10-2005, 20:33
more soon i hope?
kirstienod
24-10-2005, 14:47
Brillant! More soon hopefully xx
kirstienod
24-10-2005, 15:14
Well done!
kirstienod
31-10-2005, 14:22
more soon please xx
kirstienod
04-11-2005, 17:34
i cant wait for next part more soon please
Potato1992
05-11-2005, 15:09
please post soon
kirstienod
06-11-2005, 10:29
Yeh, more soon please
kirstienod
10-11-2005, 17:55
its brillant! you havent done some for ages! please do more soon! keep up the good work
kirstienod
20-11-2005, 18:56
more soon please
kirstienod
09-12-2005, 07:05
this story is brillant! pleas post more soon
kirstienod
18-12-2005, 18:28
do more soon please
kirstienod
30-12-2005, 12:28
more soon pleaseeeeeeeeee
kirstienod
03-01-2006, 16:31
please do more soon
kirstienod
05-01-2006, 07:34
please post more soon i cant live without it lol
eastenderfan_91
26-01-2006, 20:38
Sorry i have taken so long
It was the morning after the night before and demi was shaken up, leo arrived at demis house she was still asleep
Rosie: Oh hi who are you?
Leo: My name is Leo and i am Demis boyfriend
Rosie: Oh she never said
Leo: It was only yesterday we started going out
Rosie: Oh ok love well i dont know if she is awake she has been in her room all day
Leo: Ok thanks what room is it
Rosie: First on the right
Leo: Thank you
Leo knocked on the door, there was no answer, Leo opened the door and peered round the door
Leo: Demi
Demi burst into tears, Leo ran over to her
Demi: I thought he was going to kill me he started coming on to me he kissed me im so sorry i tried to get him off me but he had me on the ground
Leo: Im gunna kill him
Demi: Do you still wanna go out with me im so so sorry
Leo: I would never not go out with you Demi i love you
Demi: Leo I love you too you mean everything to me
Leo kissed her passionately
Leo: Ok babes i need to go and sort something out but can you meet me at 12 by the shops downstairs
Demi: Ok but what are you going to do
Leo: Yer ok nd just something
Demi: Leo
Leo: Ok i am going to see Dean I aint gunna let him off kissing my girl and and scaring you like this hes got to pay and I am sorry babe but i love you so much i cant leave it
Leo kissed Demis head and walked out the door the front door closed soon after
Leo met up with about 15 of his mates they were just hanging around on the estate it was 11 o clock and they were sittin on the wall Dean walked past
Leo: Oi Dean
Dean: Go away div
Leo: You what
All of Leos mates didnt like him calling Leo a div so they started to walk near him
Dan: What you just call him mate
Dean: I aint your mate
Dan: You wot!
Leo: Dan calm it yer
Dan was Leos best mate since they were babies
Leo: I warned you last night yer but i found out you pinned her to the floor and came on to her
Dan: You wot!
Leo: Dan! dean i dont like what you done to her and I cant let it go yer you going to wish you had never touched her i swear
Dean: Yer what you going to do bout it
Dan: More like what am i going to do about it you jerk
Dean: Come on then
Dan: I will give you come on
Dan became very angry at this point he began to punch and kick dean all of his mates joined in but Leo didnt feel it was rite demi came racing down the stairs
Demi: Stop Stop!
Leo: Babe I cant stop em
Demi: You got to please babe please
Leo: BOYS STOOOP
One by one each boy stopped Dan was left the last one beating, Leo ran up to him
Leo: Dan what are you doing
Dean was laying on the floor he was battered and bruised but he was still concious
Leo: Leave him he aint worth it
Dan: Yer I no
Dan spat on him he was so angry
Post your comments
kirstienod
26-01-2006, 20:47
its brill well done more soon please
kirstienod
09-02-2006, 20:14
post more very soon please. you havent done some for ages!
eastenderfan_91
07-05-2006, 13:55
sorry i havent written for so long x
an hour had passed and the boys had moved on and went to the park demi had gone home but was coming back later
Leo: Dan you shouldnt have gone that mad
Dan: I aint being funny leo but your like my lil brother i would do anything for ya and if that time waster needs showing that he cant mess with you then that is what i am going to do, you have always been there for me and it is my duty to look after you and do what you have done for me
Leo: cheerz mate
The two boys hugged, just then demi and lisa (dan's girlfriend) arrived
Lisa: Awww look at you two boys what have you been talking about?
Dan: Nothing babes boys stuff
Demi: Oh ok
Leo: Nothing for you to worry about
Leo grabbed demi and held her close they went and sat on the bench
Leo: I am sorry about to day babes
Demi: It aint your fault
Leo: Dont blame dan though yer he only wants to protect me he cant help it
Demi: nah i dont blame him i blame dean i swear he such a jerk!
Leo: forget about him
Leo gave demi a gentle kiss on the lips
Demi: i really love you leo dont ever forget that ok
Leo: i just wish i could show you hw much i loved you i cant explain it its so much
Demi kissed Leo
more to come soon x
Very good,can't wait for more!
kirstienod
07-05-2006, 16:31
yay! its very good cant wait for more soon!
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