Help!!!!

[Bryan]

I have to apply for my writing workshops soon and have to submit an idea for a play i have a few in my head:

Midlands Mobsters - a comedy about a midlands mafia that terroise the zoo keeper at dudly zoo, it was them that arranged for the wallabees to be beaten to death

Dressed In White - 3 best friends since secondary schooll, one is getting married, anotehr is on the brink of divorce, and one is pregnant with a guy she dosent like...and they all bed hop with each others partners along the way

Death Of A Dancing Queen - Story of an Abba Tribute band, who's life is filled with many problems the main one being one of the female's becoming pregnant with one of the married males in the group

which one do you think is the best for me to submit???

[Abi]

Midlands Mobster sounds funny

[Treacle]

Dressed in White.

[Bryan]

its so hard to choose...i have until september to choose tough!!!

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[Luna]

Dressed in white!!!

[Katy]

Dressed in White sounds good. Whatever you choose i expect it will be good as all your scripts are great.

[Trinity]

I think that Dressed in White sounds a little like that Asian drama that was on recently. The Abba one sounds like a laugh!
I think that the Midland Mobsters sounds the most original

[Layne]

I think dressed in white!
But too be honest they are all fab, so it won't matter which one you pick!
layne
x x x

[Bryan]

i would love to do the midlands mobster one...but that one i hvaent got a storyline for...the other 2 i have

but if i want a challenge i should choose the midlands mobster one, the last 2 i have done were challenges and they ahve turned out to be sucessful plays!!!

[willow]

midlands mobsters sounds the best

[Bryan]

i think ive choose dressed in white:

Bex, Lisa and Marie always dreamed of having the perfect white wedding with Mr Right… but that’s all it was… a dream.20 years later, Marie’s marriage seems to be the only one going to plan… there’s a month to go before she marries Paul, the man of her dreams. But the course of love never runs smoothly.
Lisa is pregnant within two months of dating Steve, Paul’s younger brother, who she hardly knows, their relationship is purely based on sex and nothing else, and when he proposes to her she cant help feeling she is being forced into a life with a man that she doesn’t want.
Bex has been married for five years, at the time it was so right but in hindsight it is a decision that she is now regretting, there is no spark her and husband John and is contemplating an affair or calling it a day with their marriage.
As Marie’s wedding day approaches the three friends begin to asses their situations and make harsh decisions to change their futures. Affairs, divorces and fireworks are the wedding presents delivered on the day with all three women’s lives never being the same again.

that is the summary of it, can anyone think of god name for the play? as dressed in white dosetn really do it for me

[Luna]

Love the summary, sounds really good, cant think of another name though i think dressed in white is alright

[Bryan]

right wedding? instead of white wedding...as it is about people questioning their marraiges and relationships

[Trinity]

White wedding, wrong groom?

[Luna]

White wedding, wrong groom?

Oh thats a good one

[Bryan]

decided today that i will do death of a dancing queen as i can easily see where it is going, and ive just done the picture for the first page:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/bondboffin/doadq.bmp