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Long, long ago there lived a rabbit
Who had a really bad habit
of eating carrots galore
but which was such a tasteless bore
I want to taste something new, he said
as he nicked a loaf of bread
on the loaf he spread some jam
and a tasty piece of smoked ham
with a touch of lime
hmmmm! that was really fine
as mrs rabbit walked up the garden path
poor mr rabbit had to face her wrath
Mrs Rabbit was so cross
She sat on Mr Rabbit
Just to show who was boss
fortunately mrs rabbit was the forgiving sought
after flowers and chocolates mr rabbit had bought
but katy the killer fox was on the prowl
and she made the rabbits howl
"oh no i'm afraid,' Mrs Rabbit said
as they scurried off to their cotton wool bed
quietly they waited inside
until hunger got the better of them, they sighed
"this katy is indeed a pain"
"we need to put an end to her game"
what can we do? they thought?'
'we need something in which she can be caught'
Rene Descartes
16-03-2005, 18:19
she you say? its a sheep in wolfs clothing
devious indeed, but what is behind this choosing
them scandalous rabits have gazumped her offer
she'll get them back good and proper
starve them out of their pretty little burrow
i'll show them fools
who's boss, who rules
but then there was wily mr fox
who had his eyes
on a feast not too far
alas, poor mr and mrs rabbit
but katy thought it was not on
so out came the knife and poor old mr fox was gone
dead as den
but who knows, he might be back again
buried 6ft under
or so we thought
something to ponder
dear katy
back to the poor rabbits
but what can they do
to stop themselves becoming part of the stew
there's a storm
brewin ahead
lets hope
mr and mrs rabbit are in bed
how to build a trap
to catch a smart fox
it'll have to be more than just a stick and cardboard box
www.howtocatchafox.com they typed on their PC
and to their surprise there was the perfect contraption
to catch katy in action
hunting foxes is banned, mr rabbit thought.
what if we get caught
"who cares!" said mrs rabbit
out with your credit card
and buy in now
otherwise I'll start another row
dont u dare start a row,
or ill give u a swollen brow
Poor rabbits no where to run
but wait what's that I hear
It sounds like a hunting horn my dear
thank god, we have been saved
now its mr fox, who has to be brave
They watch i amazement as "Katy the Killer fox" slips out of her skin
Out came Dolly the Sheep and jumped strainght in to a bin
feel the floor tremble, as the hounds come charging,
will they find katy, who is hiding
sniff sniff here
and a sniff sniff there
basil brush was no where
dragoneye454
21-04-2005, 13:43
but old mr dave came rushing on by
and basil couldn't escape though he did try
Along happened to pass a binman
and tipped dolly in to the big van
charliedark
24-04-2005, 23:26
"help, help, get me out!"
but the binman never heard her shout!
RIP katy my dear
the rabiits have nothing to fear
except for the hounds
that are now flooding the grounds
no, wait!
surely that was some bait
don't forget cain and abel
lonely is the only way
RealityGap
04-05-2005, 15:53
to Amerillo
everynight I've been hugging my pillow....
go away you hunters and hounds
theres nothing else here, to be found
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