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    First Date
    Part One

    ‘In the car, I just can’t wait
    To pick you up on our very first date
    Is it cool if I hold your hand?’


    Chrissie stood in her bedroom in front of the full-length mirror, with little over two hours to get ready and she was all ready in a tizz. She’d decided the night before what she was going to wear, or thought she’d want to wear. But this morning when she had awakened and opened her eyes she seen the outfit hanging on the wardrobe and had disliked it immediately. It was too formal, she wasn’t sure where they were going, but she didn’t want to look as if she was trying to hard, or not hard enough she wasn’t interested.
    She took a deep cleansing breath then another; it was just a date, a harmless date where she would enjoy his company and have a little fun. It was just a date, she told herself, she’d been on them before, it would be fine.
    She sat on the small white stool of her dressing table and told herself to just relax, the tension to drain from her body. But her stomach began to flutter; the butterflies that had lain dormant all day were awake and had begun to flutter their little wings. It was a giddy feeling, a giddy exciting feeling she hadn’t felt in so long it was good, it felt good and that’s all that mattered.
    Little Mo- Chrissie
    Chrissie looked away from her image in the mirror, yes Mo
    Little Mo- we’re out of salt and vinegar crisps
    Chrissie- there’s a box in the cellar
    Little Mo smiled, good luck for tonight
    Chrissie smiled back and felt the butterflies beat their wings again

    Jake was standing at the bar in Scarlet going over orders, or that was what he was suppose to be doing. But he was thinking of Chrissie and his imagination was in overdrive as it always was when he thought about her. He shook his head as if the clear the thoughts about what could happened this evening from his mind, he had a job too do here then he’d be with her.
    He stared down at the order forms spread over the bar and just grinned, he went over his plans for the evening in head, he wanted everything to be perfect. She deserved perfection after what she’d been through lately and he was going to make sure it happened.
    Johnny walked out of the office and laughed when he saw Jake standing at the bar looking into space grinning to himself. Jake?
    Jake- oh Johnny?
    Johnny- sorry to interrupt
    Jake- no it’s ok, just doing these orders?
    Johnny laughed, really? Well take off when you’ve finished I know you’ve got that big date tonight
    Jake smiled, thanks Johnny
    Jake turned from Johnny and looked down at the papers in front of him on the bar and felt something, a strange giddy feeling ran through his body, he laughed, he was nervous and it felt good.

    ‘Do you like my stupid hair?
    Would you guess that I didn’t know what to wear?
    I’m just scared of what you think’
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    Jake/Chrissie! *squee* They're so cute and nervous and adorable...

    Aw, I love this.

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    Wow, that is really sweet. Its is so cute they are so nervous. It is really fab babe. You have to post more
    xxx
    Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
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    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Please with a little Cherry on top!!
    This is wow!!! Jake and Chrissie yey!!!!!!!!! please *ohhhhh\* wow just please write more love it already very happy now!!!!

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    Aw its so sweet that they're nervous, bless them! Post more please

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    Told it was fabby babes JC forever and ever babes
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    Wink

    First Date
    Part Two

    ‘Lets go don’t wait, this night’s almost over
    Honest, lets make this night last forever’


    Chrissie stepped out of the bathroom with a pale pink towel wrapped around her body and a smaller darker one wrapped around her hair. She walked along the hall to her bedroom and saw the dress she’d finally decided on was hanging on the wardrobe, a feline smile spread across her face; his eyes would pop out when he saw her.
    She sat on the bed and reached over and pulled a small pot of moisturiser from her bedside table. She opened it and sniffed then smiled, she dipped her hand in the pot and began to rub it along her legs and arms. She stood up removing the towel and slipped into the under wear she’d picked out to go under the dress. She turned and picked up the comb on her dressing table and began to slowly run the comb through her tangled wet locks.

    Jake stood in front of the small cabinet mirror in the bathroom and stared at himself. He’d wrapped a towel around his waist after drying himself off. The water in the sink was clear and showed him his reflection if he looked in to it. He opened the cabinet door and pulled out his razor and Shaving foam, with them still in his hand he thought about the nerves he’d felt since he’d spoken with Johnny. Why was he nervous he’d been looking forward to tonight all week, he’d been over the moon when she’d said yes to his idea of a date, so why the nervous?

    Chrissie sat at her white dressing table and smiled and her reflection, she’d dried her curly hair and scooped it back from her face so she could apply her make up. She could she the reflection of the long bold blue dress she’d be wearing to make Jake’s pulse spike and his heart pound. She dipped her fingers in to the golden foundation and gently blended it on to her face.

    Jake stood in his bedroom looking at the suit and shirt he’d chosen for this night in particular. The suit jacket and trousers were a simple but flattering black and the shirt was white with thick bold blue strips running from the collar to the hem. He’d checked his reflection in the mirror twice all ready and slowly picked up the shirt, the butterflies were back he could feel their wings beating in his flat stomach. He took a deep breathe and put on the shirt doing up the buttons with jittery hands.

    ‘Forever and ever
    Lets make this last forever
    Forever and ever
    Lets make this last forever’
    Dennis Rickman 28/08/1974 - 31/12/2005

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    WOW!!! Great babes!!! Jake in a towel Yummy
    Post more soon
    JC 4eva!
    Luv ya
    Layne
    x x x

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    Fab. That is so good. As layne said, Jake in a towel! Thsi is really good. more more more
    xxx
    Hiro: ...but you flying man! WHOOOOSSSHHH!
    Nathan: Would you keep it down?
    Hiro: ...whooooosh.

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    Jake Towel Rachel's imagination yummee he he this is wkd babes as per
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